i hate pp wrote:

Hello

What the fuck man

Aniki

00:09:220 (1) - This slider doesnt need to be this complex Kk, left only red one dot. (idk why I did this slider that way but k)
00:19:712 (1) - Why the sudden change in SV? Why so many points? Because of that scream (AHHH), also second slider is faster by 0.25x, so you know)
00:34:801 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Lower the spacing Nerfed that part of a stream, rip 5,44*
00:40:210 (5,6,1) - Make this flow better Done
00:41:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Decrease spacing a bit Moved it a bit closer
00:42:177 (2,3,4) - Curve this a bit more Done

That's it.

I really wish I didnt experience this gaćmuć 4 lyfe

God help you Already too late :^)

MrDorian wrote:

Cześć, geju!

Mój diff :^)

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Ok dodan!!
A teraz mod!

Hard

00:19:712 (1)- weź to ładniej wyrównaj (np. http://puu.sh/mdAhb/0d4f4a399c.jpg ) ;; Ok!
00:28:899 (1,2,3,4,5)- nie uważasz, że trochę za duże odstępy pomiędzy 1,2 a 3,4 i 5? zamienione na slidery!

Insane

00:32:833 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2)- może zrób tutaj reverse slider>4kółka>reverse slider>4kółka i tak dalej i tak dalej? na tym bpm 8 kółek pod rząd może być trudne do zagrania ok zrobiłem coś z tym, teraz można zrobić HDDTHR FC 4k pp play

Extra

00:19:712 (1)- to samo co w Hardzie Całkowicie nowy slider!
00;32:833- moim skromnym i nic nie znaczącym zdaniem powinieneś wcisnąć tam jakąś małą przerwę od klikania streama w postaci jumpowych 1/4 sliderów czy cuś ;; Nie wiem, jak jeszcze komuś to będzie przeszkadzać jakoś to spróbuję to zmienić

Wsjo, teraz chodźmy założyć Gay Bar :^) AHHH

Difficulties

Dono027 wrote:

Extra

00:05:778 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make a stream & delete slider 7 I'm not sure why I need to delete slider... Also made a stream.

00:11:106 (3,4,5,6) - Same ^

Insane

00:09:876 (2,3) - Fix Blanket K

Hard

00:15:778 (1,2) - Blanket ok!

00:27:096 (4,1) - Reverse of slider 4 + sliderr 1 = Blanket Smoothed it a bit.

Problem with kiai. Yea, I forgot about it here. :/

Alphabet wrote:

Hey, from our mod queue.

General

1. Hitsounds are too loud, I can barely hear the music. Especially at the last part of the kiai, what you mapped was pretty quiet and I sometimes got confused to whether you mapped it over anything at all. I'd say turn it down to 50% or 60% at the most. Made it ~65%, for me both 50% and 60% are too quiet :l
2. Hard difficulty has a shorter Kiai time and conflicts with the rest of the diffs. ye, fixed that

Difficulties

Hard

1. 00:16:761 (3,4,5) - This triple is faster then the music, it should be a 1/3 slider.
   
   Oh, that's true. How could I miss that this is 1/3 :c
2. 00:22:342 (1) - From here, I'd suggest a faster slider velocity. It's the highlight of the song and nothing really changes here. Changed to 1,2x and also fix'd sliders right now.
3. 00:23:653 (1) - I was testing with the rhythm and I found that this sounds better than the 4 tick slider that you currently have. um, I think you've highlighted there wrong slider
   
   
   [box=]
4. 00:26:768 - There could be a note here because it fits in with the music. Kk, added. I think I'll had to nerf it later but...
5. 00:26:932 (2,3,4) - Why a triple here? There is nothing in the music to add a triple. Welp, that triple was a bit too early. But now it's deleted. RIP Triple
6. 00:34:800 (3) - NC? Aw, I forgot.

Insane

1. 00:04:630 (3) - Make this blanket with 00:03:974 (1) - K, tried.
2. 00:09:220 (1,2) - Add a note inbetween these two notes? The flow of the map breaks here. Replaced with two sliders
3. 00:13:483 (2) - Overlap with the slider is it almost stacked on? It just looks neater to me. Moved!
4. 00:15:122 (3,4) - The flow suddenly stops here again, how about something like this?
   
   
   Welp, we'll see how it'll work!
   00:35:456 (1,2,3,4) - Silence the sliderends

K!

Extra

I think AR9.3 is too fast for a 5 star, sure the map is fast but I don't think it is fast enough, AR9.1 looks better. I'm not sure, gonna try AR9,2 <wish there was ar9,15>

1. 00:02:663 (1) - Overlap with 00:01:352 (1) - ? It looks neater. ok!
2. 00:04:630 (3) - Blanket with 00:03:974 (1) - ye, fixed it
3. 00:07:253 (3,4) - Ctrl + D 00:07:253 (3) - and Ctrl + H + J? (Move it to the position where 00:07:581 (4) - is.) Actually I don't know how to make it work so... ._.
4. 00:35:456 (1,2,3,4) - Silence sliderends Ok! I will do it also in harder diffs!
5. 00:43:243 (8,1) - Distance snapping of these two notes is v e r y f a r apart and could cause some serious choking. It is pretty unfair to hr players too. Please join this with the rest of the stream? I wanted to make it like an EPIC ENDING!!!1, but k :<

(I can't play the two harder diffs and I can't map normals / easies so it'd be pretty weird to mod these diffs when I know nothing about them.)

Good luck with your map I'll need it!

Rendyindo wrote:

From my modding queue (Sorry for late )

Easy

00:37:751 - Add a circle "nah not adding, the notes were meant to follow the synth, not the voice"

normal

00:31:522 (1,3) - it's not fully stacked, stack these Done!

Insane

00:25:456 (3,5) - stack these (maybe) Fixed it abit
00:35:456 (1,3) - ^ Copied previous slider and ctrlG+H'd him!

XyloDG wrote:

Gay Bar, because noone touched it

00:03:155 (2) - in my view, this slider doesn't fit the music, but if you make it reverse slider it's all good Let's try it...
00:31:932 (2,3) - rather make a triple, double doesn't fit the music K, added Time Freeze alike slider!

Seems like everything to me, but there might be more stuff to get modded, as I am not really experienced.

MrDorian's Norrmal

00:01:352 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this pattern seemed kinda weird to play, I couldn't get what sounds did you want to follow, so I redone it like this - http://puu.sh/meG9g/ac392fa142.jpg (seems more new player friendly too) "Odpisz dla tego kolesia, że ten pattern jest dobry i jest łatwy do grania. :VVV"

Term Akatski wrote:

from my queue (late due to oversleeping and forgeting :v)
p.s blankets are also important in mapping

Easy
00:07:909 (3,1) - blanket "not meant to blanket"
00:09:876 (2,3) - blanket (into something like THIS ) "this makes no sense"

Normal
00:05:286 (2,3) - blanket http://puu.sh/meKlF/e1a84b8c06.jpg k
00:06:433 (5) - remove "nope"
00:21:024 (1) - remove so that players has enough recovery time k

Hard
00:13:483 (2,3) - blanket k
00:26:276 (1,3) - fix blanket k
remove the timing point on 00:27:593
00:32:833 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is hard diff so please DONT OVERMAP Tbh, that's the only hard part in this map, I'll left it for now...

Insane
00:03:319 (3,4) - blanket k
00:18:401 (1,4) - fix blanket k
00:21:024 (1,2) - fix blanket k


Extra
00:02:499 (6,1) - blanket k
00:11:843 (1) - put this under 00:11:351 (7) then blanket these two 00:11:843 (1,2) k
00:40:373 (1) - remove NC k


Good luck on ranking it Thanks!

bryjow123 wrote:

From my queue:

SPOILER

Easy:

00:16:761 (4,1) - This slider transition seems a little hard for newer players to hit without slider breaking one or the other. I think ctrl-g on (4) and removing the reverse would make it a bit easier. done

00:43:325- Add a spinner to the end? nah

Normal:

00:06:270 (4,5) - These two ghost notes are really hard to read. Consider removing them. nope

00:17:089 (1,2), 00:18:401 (1,2) - These slider combos should be the opposite: 1 should be a full beat, 2 should be the 1.5 beat. The transition as it is feels off-time. I think now it'll be better

00:27:587 (1,2) - Consider removing (2) and making (1) a full beat. nope

00:31:522 (1,2,3,4) - This combo is a little messy. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/mfd2I/f98039803b.jpg changed to something like yours

Hard:

00:32:833 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I agree with Term Akatski here, this is definitely overmapped for this difficulty. Nothing in the music really suggests this so it's hard to read. Mapping this part without ghost notes will still make this diff hard enough imo. Meh, changed it to regular sliders. (btw it was mapped to these fast vocals)

00:43:325- spinner on the end? Nah, there isn't any sound that would work as a spinner end

Good luck!

1. 00:03:647 (3,4,1) - That DS is not really nice to the eye, something more equal is better, I'd suggest increasing the spacing as well, won'thurt anyone.
2. 00:06:024 (5) - - 2 circle pattern just like at 00:11:024 (3,4,5,6) - is preferable, I think the slider is just misleading.
3. 00:11:270 (5,6) - Moving this to around x156 y172 would be better, irregular spacing with such rhythm is not that fun.
4. 00:14:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - It kinda feels like this is just mapped randomly to a 183 bpm song, try this pattern for example - http://puu.sh/mgT5B/653212cd5d.jpg
5. 00:16:761 (4,5,6,7,1) - Snapped incorrectly, it's 1/3 (didn't check other diffs, but you should.)
6. 00:19:712 (1,1) - I wouldn't mind this if the first slider stopped at 00:20:942 but now there's an awkward gap with an unneeded anti-jump.
7. 00:23:653 (1,2,3) - Egh?.. If you started this pattern with a slider, why not have three 1/2 sliders? it'll fit much better with the music.
8. 00:31:522 (1) - 1/2 is definitely better here, the sliderend is really emphasized in the music but yet you can't press it.
9. I don't really like the non-slider stream jumps from here so commenting on them is mostly pointless, if you wish to keep them, a QAT will lay the final word anyway.
10. 00:41:932 (7,1) - That's really misleading, either increase the spacing or don't have a slider at the end, it looks like one stream.

Avishay wrote:

Hi.

[AHHH MY BUTTHO-]

1. 00:03:647 (3,4,1) - That DS is not really nice to the eye, something more equal is better, I'd suggest increasing the spacing as well, won'thurt anyone. Increased it!
2. 00:06:024 (5) - - 2 circle pattern just like at 00:11:024 (3,4,5,6) - is preferable, I think the slider is just misleading. Done
3. 00:11:270 (5,6) - Moving this to around x156 y172 would be better, irregular spacing with such rhythm is not that fun. something like that done
4. 00:14:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - It kinda feels like this is just mapped randomly to a 183 bpm song, try this pattern for example - http://puu.sh/mgT5B/653212cd5d.jpg did something like that
5. 00:16:761 (4,5,6,7,1) - Snapped incorrectly, it's 1/3 (didn't check other diffs, but you should.) oh
6. 00:19:712 (1,1) - I wouldn't mind this if the first slider stopped at 00:20:942 but now there's an awkward gap with an unneeded anti-jump. done
7. 00:23:653 (1,2,3) - Egh?.. If you started this pattern with a slider, why not have three 1/2 sliders? it'll fit much better with the music. that's right!
8. 00:31:522 (1) - 1/2 is definitely better here, the sliderend is really emphasized in the music but yet you can't press it. Done
9. I don't really like the non-slider stream jumps from here so commenting on them is mostly pointless, if you wish to keep them, a QAT will lay the final word anyway. We'll see, actually it's the only thing that different Gay Bar from Aniki and Extra :v
10. 00:41:932 (7,1) - That's really misleading, either increase the spacing or don't have a slider at the end, it looks like one stream. done!

glz

Buretsu wrote:

hOi~
From my queue.

ANIKI

00:12:827 (5) - Hits HP bar. Fix pls. fixed

00:14:466 (3,4) - Move to X: 280, Y: 224 moved

00:25:620 (5,2) - Stack stacked

End of 00:27:915 (2) stack with 00:27:177 (4) tried

00:32:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It's really overmapped. Fix pls. i'll leave as it is, if QATs or something will "deny" these streams, then I'll change them to something else

00:43:325 (1) Move to X: 264, Y: 216 Moved

Good luck. <3

1. Recommended BG size should be either 1024*768 or 1366*768.
2. Set combo colours please, at least I think the green one doesn't look fit with the background.
3. Uncheck "Letterbox during break" in the song setup since you didn't have a break in the song, also that countdown thing if you feel it isn't needed.

1. 00:28:243 (2,4) - They're kinda close imo, if they were spaced more(visually) it would be neater.

1. I would increase AR since the objects look pretty dense.
2. 00:05:286 (2,3,4) - Spacing error.
3. Some overlaps are looking fine, but some overlaps aren't looking neat, like 00:11:843 (1,2) or 00:35:456 (1,2) for example, while some patterns like this 00:13:811 (4,5,1) or 00:25:620 (3,4,1) are pretty misleading, these patterns can cause players to confuse whether which object they should be clicking next, mainly the cause here because the flow isn't obvious enough.

1. 00:02:335 (3) - I think a 1/2 slider would emphasize that strong sound better.
2. 00:27:096 (4,1) - Looks weird lol, feels like they didn't blanket each other.
3. 00:29:391 (2) - I think if this slider starts 00:29:555 here it would fit better.
4. 00:30:866 (3,6) - Hmmm, have them stacked maybe?
5. 00:43:325 - Well, since it's a finish so I would prefer something clickable.

1. 00:01:352 (1,2,3) - I would have the spacing here 00:01:352 (1,2) smaller than 00:01:843 (2,3) to emphasize 00:02:007 (3) better. Same applies to 00:11:843 (1,2,3) .
2. 00:04:466 (2,3) - Weird flow imo. Same applies to 00:19:056 (3,4) -
3. 00:06:024 (5) - There's no reason to do a triplet here because nothing in the music lands here.
4. 00:11:188 - There's a strong sound here and you shouldn't skip it, also 00:11:024 (3,4,5,6) gives off a weird feeling for some reason.
5. 00:12:499 (3,4) - This shouldn't be a jump imo, if you're intended of making a jump, it should be between 00:12:991 (4,1) instead.
6. 00:30:866 (4,1,2) - You probably didn't intend to overlap these but it looks weird lol.
7. 00:35:456 (1,3,1) - Maybe it's just me, but they're so hard to read that you should do sth about this.

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~ Sorry for a late mod because I was kinda inactive recently.

[General]

1. Recommended BG size should be either 1024*768 or 1366*768. upscaled
2. Set combo colours please, at least I think the green one doesn't look fit with the background. not sure if it works right now
3. Uncheck "Letterbox during break" in the song setup since you didn't have a break in the song, also that countdown thing if you feel it isn't needed. oh, I forgot about these options ,_,

[Easy]

1. 00:28:243 (2,4) - They're kinda close imo, if they were spaced more(visually) it would be neater.

[Normal]

1. I would increase AR since the objects look pretty dense.
2. 00:05:286 (2,3,4) - Spacing error.
3. Some overlaps are looking fine, but some overlaps aren't looking neat, like 00:11:843 (1,2) or 00:35:456 (1,2) for example, while some patterns like this 00:13:811 (4,5,1) or 00:25:620 (3,4,1) are pretty misleading, these patterns can cause players to confuse whether which object they should be clicking next, mainly the cause here because the flow isn't obvious enough.

[Hard]

1. 00:02:335 (3) - I think a 1/2 slider would emphasize that strong sound better. done
2. 00:27:096 (4,1) - Looks weird lol, feels like they didn't blanket each other. tried to do somethingi with it
3. 00:29:391 (2) - I think if this slider starts 00:29:555 here it would fit better. I'm not sure
4. 00:30:866 (3,6) - Hmmm, have them stacked maybe? stack'd
5. 00:43:325 - Well, since it's a finish so I would prefer something clickable. done, i'll try to move it later

[Insane]

1. 00:01:352 (1,2,3) - I would have the spacing here 00:01:352 (1,2) smaller than 00:01:843 (2,3) to emphasize 00:02:007 (3) better. Same applies to 00:11:843 (1,2,3) . done
2. 00:04:466 (2,3) - Weird flow imo. Same applies to 00:19:056 (3,4) - tried to work on it, not sure if it's fine right now
3. 00:06:024 (5) - There's no reason to do a triplet here because nothing in the music lands here. made two doubles
4. 00:11:188 - There's a strong sound here and you shouldn't skip it, also 00:11:024 (3,4,5,6) gives off a weird feeling for some reason. fixed
5. 00:12:499 (3,4) - This shouldn't be a jump imo, if you're intended of making a jump, it should be between 00:12:991 (4,1) instead. changed it a bit
6. 00:30:866 (4,1,2) - You probably didn't intend to overlap these but it looks weird lol. lol tbh idk what to do with this
7. 00:35:456 (1,3,1) - Maybe it's just me, but they're so hard to read that you should do sth about this. oh well, for me it's readable

LOL, again, sorry for a late mod and hope my mod helped somehow.
Good luck~

1. I would increase AR since the objects look pretty dense. increased to 5.3
2. 00:05:286 (2,3,4) - Spacing error. changed
3. Some overlaps are looking fine, but some overlaps aren't looking neat, like 00:11:843 (1,2) or 00:35:456 (1,2) for example, while some patterns like this 00:13:811 (4,5,1) or 00:25:620 (3,4,1) are pretty misleading, these patterns can cause players to confuse whether which object they should be clicking next, mainly the cause here because the flow isn't obvious enough. I do not really know, what to do with these misleading patterns, because they look OK for me. I won't change it. If someone either will be talking about it, I'll try to change it.

1. 00:01:352 (1,2) - Overlaps like this don't look that nice.
2. 00:14:466 (1,2) - Same here.
3. 00:17:089 (1,2) - Again, but also change the length of the sliders to match the ones starting at 00:18:401 (1,2) - It makes for a better flow.
   
   Fix the remaining overlaps.

1. 00:32:669 (6) - I think it would be better here if you just continued to follow the rythym like you were orginially. There's nothing really in this part of the song that the stream emphasizes.
   
   Overall, this is a pretty nice mapset so far. Good luck!

1. 00:01:352 (1,2) - Overlaps like this don't look that nice.
2. 00:14:466 (1,2) - Same here.
3. 00:17:089 (1,2) - Again, but also change the length of the sliders to match the ones starting at 00:18:401 (1,2) - It makes for a better flow. I dunno, what do you mean xd
   
   Fix the remaining overlaps. fixed

TequilaWolf wrote:

these are all just suggestions.

Aniki-

00:02:171 (4) - maybe rotate this so that it's facing top-right? and move it to the center, if you do decide to keep the positioning you can try moving 00:02:663 (1) - further away moved 00:02:663 (1) away
00:05:778 (3,4) - better if you use 1/4 slider here as well o: ok, changed next 1/4 slider to double!
00:13:811 (3) - move nearer moved a bit closer, hopefully it won't overlap
00:15:122 (5) - move this down down down, creates a better jumpy effect? played with this, I believe it'll work!
00:16:761 (1) - this repeater looks a little off, maybe use 0.75 SV here and make it repeat 3 times instead? with 1/6 snap I'm not sure how would it work, I'll left it
00:19:712 (1) - boring o: might want to try this http://puu.sh/ml0BZ/614433650a.jpg with lower volume on 8 or something I really want to leave this long slider, just for this scream!
00:22:833 (3,4,5) - you can try to make some streams fully straight lines instead like this one xD and this 00:24:144 (3,4,5) - I think that it's fine right now, curved triples are the best! :^)
00:34:801 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm sure you can make this look better don't overestimate me m8! :^) Also, changed
00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - a little too hard to hit without getting 100s I don't think so
00:37:915 (6,7,8) - maybe ctrl+g Ok, let's try it!
00:42:177 (2,3,4) - I tried using 1.0 DS and making it a straight line, feels better o: lol that's right
00:43:242 (8,1) - ...really hard to hit (or SS) actually especially considering this is your most spaced stream yet moved it a bit closer

XVoIR's Gay Bar-

In this diff again you could make your triplets a little more spaced o:

00:16:761 (4) - same story as aniki, the slider just looks too long xD made it shorter
00:19:712 (1) - ya you don't wanna let the player do nothing for so long and then introduce them to a jumpstream right after somehow merged this jumpstream, but it's still jumpy :^)
00:32:669 (6,1) - here onwards is incredibly difficult on cs6. move 1 nearer to 6 tried to do something with it
00:33:325 (7,8) - fix
00:33:407 (8,1) - wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too huge. nerf. very very hard along with 00:34:063 (8,1) - and 00:34:719 (8,1) - nerfed into 5,91*, rip 6* diff :/

gl c:

_vanity wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue. o/ You didn't specify which difficulties you wanted me to mod, so I guess I'll go over whatever I can.
[Insane]

1. 00:32:669 (6) - I think it would be better here if you just continued to follow the rythym like you were orginially. There's nothing really in this part of the song that the stream emphasizes. I want to keep it somehow connected with this part
   
   Overall, this is a pretty nice mapset so far. Good luck!

Cheonshi wrote:

From Q:

[Gay Bar]

• 00:25:292 (2,3) - once u use then then in same combo 00:25:948 (5,6,7) - this - decide for one i dont think a triple is in the music mb decide for first one worked somehow

• 00:32:014 (4) - that slider is not so nice to play how about just putting a circle 00:32:096 - and having no sound here i dont think its necessary to have one circle here i also think this gives a little more flow oh

• 00:32:587 - and instead i would keep the stream going here and not having a blanket here

• 00:33:407 (8,1) - 00:34:063 (8,1) - 00:34:719 (8,1) - okay ._. dw it's nerfed already

• 00:38:899 (6) - one kick less mb ? I'll leave this as it is right now

• 00:43:325 (1) - mb a spinner after that It won't work tbh

why is everyone mapping cancer at the moment lmao you can't get cancer in Gay Bar, sorry :/

1. Hard w ogóle nie ma dodanych kolorów, proszę je dodać lol.
2. Dalej nie rozumiem dlaczego nazwałeś ostatni diff swoją nazwą? Skoro stworzyłeś tą mapę nie powinnieneś tego robić.
3. Zero customowych hitsoundów? Smutno trochę :c

1. 00:19:712 - This green line is unnessesary.
2. 00:40:702 (1,2) - Spacing issue found. Please ds it.
3. Also change OD to 2 since you did it with HP tho.
4. Pretty ok diff.

1. Dla mnie, lepiej by brzmiał ten diff, jakby nazywał się "Dorian's Normal".
2. Statystyki są dziwne. Najlepsze jakie pasowały by do Normala to : CS 3,5 | AR 5 | OD 4 | HP 4
3. 00:01:352 (1,2) - To się bardzo dziwnie gra, a tak w ogóle to odległość jest za duża. Preferuję to zreworkować trochę.
4. 00:10:204 (3,1) - Napraw blanket, wygląda trochę tragicznie, ale da się to zrobić łatwo.
5. 00:19:712 (1) - Och to jest unrankable.. W normalu spinnery powinny kończyć się o dwa white beaty przed obiektami. W tym przypadku powinnien skończyć się na 00:21:679 -
6. 00:28:735 (5,1) - Te overlappy są okropne.. powinnieneś coś zrobić w tym miejscu nooo.

1. 00:39:063 (3) - Nie zesnappowany obiekt. Snapnij go lol.

1. 00:16:761 (1) - Nie potrzebne NC.
2. 00:21:761 (4,6,8) - Te obiekty są overmapped. Przysłuchałem się ich z 3 razy i stwierdzam fakt. Zmień to na jakiś jump pattern.
3. 00:22:915 (4,4) - ^ Te również są overmapped.
4. Dobra nie będe dalej wymieniał ich, ale wiedz że masz ich ogromną ilość i wypadałoby je naprawić.

Kalibe wrote:

Nie każ mi tego modować ;w;

1. Hard w ogóle nie ma dodanych kolorów, proszę je dodać lol. sorry missclick
2. Dalej nie rozumiem dlaczego nazwałeś ostatni diff swoją nazwą? Skoro stworzyłeś tą mapę nie powinnieneś tego robić. Bo to mój własny Gay Bar :v
3. Zero customowych hitsoundów? Smutno trochę :c Nie wiem jakie by tutaj działały, serio xD

estellia-'s Easy :

1. 00:19:712 - This green line is unnessesary.
2. 00:40:702 (1,2) - Spacing issue found. Please ds it.
3. Also change OD to 2 since you did it with HP tho.
4. Pretty ok diff.

MrDorian's Normal :

1. Dla mnie, lepiej by brzmiał ten diff, jakby nazywał się "Dorian's Normal".
2. Statystyki są dziwne. Najlepsze jakie pasowały by do Normala to : CS 3,5 | AR 5 | OD 4 | HP 4
3. 00:01:352 (1,2) - To się bardzo dziwnie gra, a tak w ogóle to odległość jest za duża. Preferuję to zreworkować trochę.
4. 00:10:204 (3,1) - Napraw blanket, wygląda trochę tragicznie, ale da się to zrobić łatwo.
5. 00:19:712 (1) - Och to jest unrankable.. W normalu spinnery powinny kończyć się o dwa white beaty przed obiektami. W tym przypadku powinnien skończyć się na 00:21:679 -
6. 00:28:735 (5,1) - Te overlappy są okropne.. powinnieneś coś zrobić w tym miejscu nooo.

Insane :

1. 00:39:063 (3) - Nie zesnappowany obiekt. Snapnij go lol. lol faktycznie

Aniki :

1. 00:16:761 (1) - Nie potrzebne NC. naprawione, będę musiał w innych też
2. 00:21:761 (4,6,8) - Te obiekty są overmapped. Przysłuchałem się ich z 3 razy i stwierdzam fakt. Zmień to na jakiś jump pattern.
3. 00:22:915 (4,4) - ^ Te również są overmapped.
4. Dobra nie będe dalej wymieniał ich, ale wiedz że masz ich ogromną ilość i wypadałoby je naprawić. Może później to zmienię, teraz mi jakoś za bardzo do muzyki pasują :<

Ok, to tyle. Gut luck !

1. Dla mnie, lepiej by brzmiał ten diff, jakby nazywał się "Dorian's Normal". dla ciebie
2. Statystyki są dziwne. Najlepsze jakie pasowały by do Normala to : CS 3,5 | AR 5 | OD 4 | HP 4 takiego AR nie mogę dać, ponieważ jest nawał obiektów na ekranie
3. 00:01:352 (1,2) - To się bardzo dziwnie gra, a tak w ogóle to odległość jest za duża. Preferuję to zreworkować trochę. odległość troszkę zmniejszyłem, a początku nie gra się dziwnie, wręcz mnie jest lepsze od nudnych reverse sliderów
4. 00:10:204 (3,1) - Napraw blanket, wygląda trochę tragicznie, ale da się to zrobić łatwo. naprawione
5. 00:19:712 (1) - Och to jest unrankable.. W normalu spinnery powinny kończyć się o dwa white beaty przed obiektami. W tym przypadku powinnien skończyć się na 00:21:679 - też naprawione
6. 00:28:735 (5,1) - Te overlappy są okropne.. powinnieneś coś zrobić w tym miejscu nooo.naprawione?

arnoldusj wrote:

Aniki
00:05:286 (1,5,6) - the distance is not appropriate
00:16:433 (3,1) - equated the distance
The only course I post

XxSeonxX wrote:

Hello, from my queue

Insane
00:13:155 (1,2) - make these sliders similar Done!
00:37:833 - putting a slider here until 00:37:915 is better since there's 2 beats at those 2 timing I'm not sure how would it work

Hard
00:06:597 (1,1) - copy paste these sliders done!
00:22:007 (4,1) - gap between these are quite big I think it's fine
00:28:899 (1,2) - flow between these 2 are bad
00:34:637 (2,3) - ^
reworked these fragments!

MrDorian's Normal
00:22:342 (1,2) - I don't think having 2 short sliders here are good since there's no beat for a reason to have 2 sliders without these sliders sounds awfully, please
00:27:587 (1,2,3) - same reason as above ^
00:32:833 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:41:194 (2,3) - I don't really want to comment on blankets but there are way off it isn't a blanket pls

As stated in my queue, I can't mod anything higher than Insane, good luck

Flanchan wrote:

Hi! from queue.

As you asked Gay Bar, Aniki, Extra and Easy

Gay Bar

00:11:270 (5,6) - Stack these on the end of 00:10:532 (1) ? Of course!
00:13:647 (4,2) - Stack these? Yes!
00:19:712 (1) - ^ ^
00:27:587 (1) - Is NC necessary here? Of course not!
00:29:882 (1) - ^ sure!
00:32:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make the jumps between the streams the same distance apart? Used 2,6x DS!
00:35:374 (8,1) - Maybe move the slider closer to 00:35:374 (8), this jump seems really large compared to the others before it I would, but I don't know how to place it right :<

Aniki

00:05:286 (1,5,6) - Stack these? Aren't these stacked?
00:34:801 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why is this stream different to the others? It looks cool, at least for me :<
00:41:685 (7,5) - Stack these? Done!

Extra

00:06:106 (7,2) - Stack these? Of course!
00:21:515 (1) - Remove NC? Yes!
00:28:571 (5,3) - Stack these? Done!
00:28:899 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a perfect square How? ._.
00:36:112 (3,1) - Stack these Done!

Easy

00:36:112 (2) - This seems a little lopsided, maybe try and centre the red point more? "Denied"

GL on getting ranked!

-Nya- wrote:

Take note that this hitsound mod is based only on your Insane and that these hitsound suggestions are my own and that some modders may not agree.

1. Change default to soft instead (Normal sounds too loud and chaotic to me.) but in kiai you can use Normal again since the kiai is louder.
2. Use this http://puu.sh/mqr3a/bfe5227f83.wav on these beats: 00:01:352 - 00:02:007 - 00:02:663 - 00:03:319 - 00:03:974 - 00:04:630 – etc. Remember that you have to be consistent so continue with this rhythm.
3. 00:05:532 – and 00:05:614 – and 00:05:778 – and 00:05:860 – and 00:06:024 – and 00:06:106 – and 00:06:270 – and 00:06:433 – For these beats you can use the default drum. Just change sampleset and additions to “drum”.
   
   Picture

   
4. 00:10:696 - 00:10:862 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –Follow the same hitsound suggestions as above. (The drum)
5. 00:17:089 - 00:18:401 - 00:19:712 - 00:21:024 – For these louder beats, you can use this: http://puu.sh/mqDw9/faa651c6fd.wav
6. Since the kiai is much louder, you can use this: http://puu.sh/mqDz1/652a43529b.wav on beats like: 00:22:997 - 00:23:653 - 00:23:981 - 00:24:309 - 00:24:964 – etc. You just have to listen where the strong beats are in the kiai. You don’t have to use this hitsound for the kiai only. You can also place it on beats that you feel is quite loud.
7. Finishes is also very nice. You can place it on beats like: 00:22:342 - 00:27:587 – Your choice though.
8. Remember to raise the volume quite a bit so that the hitsounds can be heard.

If you have any questions about this mod or don’t understand something, feel free to message me in-game.

Cagrux wrote:

Hi from my queue

MrDorian's Normal

1. Many blankets could be improved
2. 00:01:352 (1) - Would recommend flipping this vertically. Flow is not so good with that one
3. 00:03:319 (2,3) - Fix overlap
4. 00:06:597 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:11:843 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:17:745 (2,1) - This pattern is kinda confusing for beginners because some of them might click the sliderend instead
7. 00:26:112 (4,1) - I think you could make this look neater. Would move 00:26:276 (1) - down because overlap looks a bit weird
8. 00:28:899 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern is hard to read for beginners too as there is an array of notes and you made some of them overlap and go back near to its starting position(hope you can understand what I'm saying lol)
9. 00:41:358 (3) - Move this up a bit

Hard

1. 00:34:145 (1,2,3) - Try spacing them consistently

feex'd!

Insane

1. 00:01:352 (1,2,3) - Space them consistently feex'd!
2. 00:11:843 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
3. 00:12:499 (3,4,1) - Why is the spacing so different? coz Billy Herrington starts talking here
4. 00:17:745 (3,1) - Stack Stacked!
5. 00:19:712 (1) - Small curve at the end looks kinda weird reworked slider
6. 00:35:456 (1,3,1) - This overlap is very confusing to play. Please fix tried something with that
7. 00:42:669 (6) - Remove NC

I don't think so :/

Aniki

1. 00:23:653 (6) - NC Thanks!
2. 00:41:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Changing 'lines' with three notes in each 'lines' feels awkward to play. Recommend changing to regular stream

streamed!

And that's all!
Hope this helps in any way and gl for ranked!
btw I don't know if you already knew this but the japanese writing doesn't really translate to 'International Wrestling Festival'. It's something that's.... kinda weird Maybe, I just rewrote symbols from background image :^)

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Hi! From My Queue!

Easyi

[General]
lol
[Modding Itself]
00:35:456 (1,2) - These don't look necessary. I think I'll left them

Maakkeli wrote:

hei

why do you need that second red point? the bpm doesn't change and the time signature doesn't change bpm changes by a ~6 offset

xvoirsahgah's really gay diff
why would you put your name in the diff too? just name it gay bar asd ok, finally changed to Gay Bar
get that ar9.6 outta here ---> ar9.3 feels much better not sure
dis od is too damn high you're not mapping some 220 bpm 6 star streams here I think that it fit, for a hardest diff
00:05:286 (1,7) - imo these would emphasize better as circles done!
00:10:532 (1,7) - ^ done!
00:19:712 (1,3) - it's only gay if they touch and now it's slightly gay now slightly gay
00:33:407 (8,1) - these god damn streamjumps make the map feel soooo damn forced. i don't even understand why you would map streams here nerfed, mapped to vocals somehow
i think the kiai could use a higher sv used 1.25x
get rid of those cs6 streamjumps nerfed

aniki is gay
ar9.2 or sumthing pls 9,3
dis od is too damn high lowered to 8,6
00:05:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you hitsounded these differently here. that's like really inconsistent. also those 1/2 sliders ---> circles fixed
00:10:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ehhhh... you should know what i mean yes
00:12:335 (2,5) - gay fixed
00:17:909 (4,1) - ^ fixed
higher sv for kiai Done

exträ
ar9 would work here made it ar9.1
00:03:155 (2,4) - gay fixd
00:06:597 (1,3) - stack (3) sliderend to (1) fixd
00:07:909 (1) - ctrl+g? fixd
00:14:138 (6) - change to two circles i just can't get it to work lol
00:15:286 (4) - you just decided to end this slider on a sound fixd
00:36:768 (1) - make this match 00:36:112 (3) - slidershape fixd
higher sv for kiai asd fixd

hmmm... idk it feels like i have a lot to say but don't know the way to say it. you definitely have the potential to rank this but stop forcing difficulty with streamjumps that aren't supported by the song, fix your blankets and try to get rid of some bad overlaps (too lazy to point out these you can find them yourself). Cleaning up your style will make this definitely look and maybe even play better. You definitely know what flows and what doesn't

Good luck with the set!

Cheesecake wrote:

Hi, from modding queue

[Aniki]

00:02:007 (3) - I would move this to X:234 Y:185, then it's less spacing than the second pattern and it feels more like the map is winding up at the beginning. done
00:05:614 (2) - Either move this so that it's underneath the slider head of 00:04:794 (3) - or so that it blankets that slider tried to blanket it
00:06:024 (5,6,1) - This overlap is hmmmm actually I changed this pattern before your mod so lol
00:06:270 (7,2) - ^
00:07:417 (4,2) - ^
00:09:220 (1) - Move the red anchor point to X:397 Y:62 such that it is the exact middle of the slider, it looks a little messy as it is right now because it's slightly off done!
00:12:335 (2,5) - Overlap done
00:13:155 (1,3) - Space these a liiiittle bit more so that the hitcircle borders aren't overlapping done
00:18:401 (1,3) - Overlap done before
00:19:712 (1) - ^ Also, this slider is pretty overdone IMO, something simpler like in Gay Bar would be better changed, i can't into slider art :/
00:19:712 (1,3) - More ugly overlaps with the same slider aaaaaaa i think it's not longer revelant
00:19:712 (1,1) - I'm hoping you change that slider anyway but this spacing is too little when everything else is so spaced
00:22:341 (1,4) - Veeery slight overlap done
00:23:653 (1,5,6,7) - Overlap done
00:25:784 (6) - Move to X:77 Y:123 so that it blankets the triplet done
00:28:407 (4) - Move a tiny bit over to the right so that it's completely underneath the slider moved!
00:28:243 (3,1) - Ugly overlap
00:28:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is an acceptable form of overlap since it's an expanding triangle (don't change)
00:30:866 (5,1) - Aaaand back to bad overlaps
00:35:456 (1,2,1,2,1) - ^
fixed these overlaps


[XVoIR's Gay Bar]

Shouldn't this just be called "Gay Bar"? XVoIR is you so you don't need to make it look like a guest difficulty. Changed, rip my own gay bar

00:06:597 (1,3) - Space these a bit further apart so that the borders aren't so close, where everything else in the map is so spaced, this looks really cramped moved (1) a bit to up
00:19:712 (1,3) - ^ not sure if still revelant
00:21:679 (6,7) - Make these sliders identical done
00:23:325 (6,2) - Bad overlap Fixed
00:29:063 (2,2) - Same thing with spacing as before tried to space them
00:30:538 (2,5) - ^ tried to space them
00:31:522 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - Make the quintet catch onto something on the slider to make this overlap better now merged into slider start
00:35:784 (2,2) - Make these two have the same spacing between them as 00:35:456 (1,1) - , it looks visually better that way https://ask.fm/sukiNathan/answers/133756425236 done!
00:36:768 (1,1) - Hitori Tori - Cramped again (yambabom remix) I don't get it :/
00:42:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - If you're trying to blanket this, turn the AR to 0 and try again so you can see it better thanks for suggestion! jeez, mine approach circles looks horrible

I looked at Extra and Insane as well but they both had the same issues that I've mentioned in these two will clean up all diffs soon :^)


[MrDorian's Normal]

Oh my this is all one big overlap, try and space everything more

00:06:597 (1,2) - Also try to avoid these kinds of overlap, it happens several times throughout the map

[estellia-'s Easy]

00:07:909 (3,1) - This blanket is pretty ugly, and this diff is low enough AR for it to stand out to people
00:21:024 (1) - Move the second to last node down a bit so that the sliderborder of this slider is equidistant to the heads of (1) and (2)


Good luck

1. Many blankets could be improved
2. 00:01:352 (1) - Would recommend flipping this vertically. Flow is not so good with that one wow thanks
3. 00:03:319 (2,3) - Fix overlap
4. 00:06:597 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:11:843 (1,2) - ^ fixed?
6. 00:17:745 (2,1) - This pattern is kinda confusing for beginners because some of them might click the sliderend instead ^
7. 00:26:112 (4,1) - I think you could make this look neater. Would move 00:26:276 (1) - down because overlap looks a bit weird ^
8. 00:28:899 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern is hard to read for beginners too as there is an array of notes and you made some of them overlap and go back near to its starting position(hope you can understand what I'm saying lol) wow, i think i understood
9. 00:41:358 (3) - Move this up a bit k

Tatsumaki wrote:

bless you for making this

Reana wrote:

[General]
I have no idea why did you finished kiai at 00:35:456 - . I strongly recommend to delete kiai or make it longer.~made it longer

[Extra]
00:02:007 (4) - more rounder feex'd

[Gay bar]
00:03:155 (2,3) - distance is too large. compare with 00:12:827 (4,1) - . fixed, thanks!
00:14:138 (1) - delete NC
00:14:466 (2) - NC
00:29:391 (1) - delete NC
00:32:178 (1) - ^
00:37:423 - ^
00:41:194 - how about this?

everything is fixed

short modding

WISPG_G wrote:

hi \o, mod is here ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

Normal

Dont like patterns of all map looks weird =(

Hard

00:19:712 (1) - make this slider more creative
00:27:587 (1) - move a bit end of slider for fix blanket Done!

Aniki

00:05:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - random spacing? Fixed somehow
00:37:915 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - dont like this flow seems random Tried to work with this

Gay Bar

00:19:712 (1) - in all diffs this slider looks boring, try make it more creative please I can't into slider art

Meh, cant find anything here for mod sorry, i did what i can =( good luck
P.S. Dat crazy song and more crazy map

TitaN7 wrote:

From my queue o/

Hard

00:10:450 (2) - Remove this hitcircle, it does not work well here. done

00:40:374 (1,2) - Put these two aside, do not pile up it with the slider. done, will work on this tho

00:42:259 (2) - I suggest you to remove this hitcicle. This stack it is a headache for this diff here. done

Insane

00:05:778 (4,5) - Give some fluency to this part putting sliders, and remove that hitcircles, try this http://puu.sh/mPnbl/c84cb7e223.jpg ^

00:11:269 (6,7) - I Suggest that you should eliminate these last three hitcircles and should put a slider with reverse. Remember that this is a diff with 4,3* only, = http://puu.sh/mPsgT/8735d12389.jpg ^

00:19:220 (4) - More fluidity to this, test giving reverse to this slider and put it in this way http://puu.sh/mPo6z/81d80d76a2.jpg ^

00:36:440 (4) - A NC works better than a followarrow here ^

00:36:768 (1) - Remove NC, then NC 00:38:571 (1) ^

pay attention to this part..

00:37:915 (6) - NC ^

00:38:079 (1) - Remove NC ^

00:38:571 (5) - Stack this with the following hit circle ^

00:38:735 (1) - Remove NC ^

00:38:899 (7) - NC ^

= http://puu.sh/mPrx3/53150168b7.jpg


Extra

00:07:581 (2) - Bend this and make a good pattern, like this = http://puu.sh/mPq2g/ac4a58844e.jpg ^

00:15:778 (1) - Bend this, improve flow. also done

00:21:679 (3) - ^ ...i suggest = http://puu.sh/mPqsW/4b7ea4926a.jpg also done

00:29:882 (1) - Bend this. aaaand here done!

Done. Good luck.

WISPG_G wrote:

hi \o, mod is here ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

Normal

Dont like patterns of all map looks weird =(

Chibi Maruko wrote:

Hi. From my queue

Extra

1. 00:27:423 (6,7,1) - Maybe stack triple is fine but it is not important for u O.o coz u like straight triple let's try this!
2. 00:36:112 (3) - NC here fixed

Aniki

1. 00:02:007 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4453479 kinda look slanting. fix it. mb fixed
2. 00:14:958 (4) - Delete this circle and move next slider to red tick coz mute end idk how should it work D:
3. 00:16:761 (5) - NC because u should follow highest diff fixed
4. 00:38:079 (8) - NC here because big white tick is most important to make a new nc fixed
5. 00:40:374 (1) - Delete NC and move new NC at 00:40:702 (2) coz look at above my comment fixed

Gay Bar fuk this name lol as you wish :^)

1. 00:14:138 (1) - Why new combo. It is confusing when mapper see this fixed
2. 00:19:712 (1) The overlap doesn't look nice dude. Blanket or sliderwave or something tried moving a bit to up
3. 00:21:024 (2,3,4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4453470 maybe all circle kinda look weird slanting. fix it. fixed. maybe, idk
4. 00:32:178 (5) - Should NC here fixed
5. 00:43:325 (1) - Please make this circle too close at stream because player can't aim and miss LOL. fix if u want (bad english D:) actually it's not that hard, I'll leave this

Ok, gl with ur map \:D/
sorry /me run away

1. 00:43:325 (1) - whats up with the spacing of this note? its not conisistent with the rest - if this is intentional then at least make it more spaced so its noticeable.

Reditum wrote:

can't believe I'm modding a fucking map submitted in december in a mod queue that's meant for old maps hehe

Overall:
If there's a video I'd really like to have it in here. A lot of songs like this are no fun without an accompanying video. I'll try to make it work, I tried to do it earlier, but after 2 hours of fking with video I gave up screw this nothing works idk what's wrong

Gay:
fuck is this irreversible or
00:32:833 - It would be extra cool to have whistles or something that match up with the melody. whistles are already taken by some other hitsounds lol
yeah your circle size also sucks and I wish you'd change it then it won't be special :/

Aniki:
00:16:761 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this is so frighteningly similar to Gay Bar I'm scared. Not accusing you of copy-pasting between diffs but it's so similar that I'm just like "am I in the wrnog dif" actually it's not copied, it just happened to be similiar, somehow
00:32:833 - It would be extra cool to have whistles or something that match up with the melody. same as above
A lot more than the part that I pointed out before seem really similar to Gay Bar. It's a little scary actually. I'd hope that if there are two separate diffs, that I'm getting 2 separate interpretations of the song same as above

Extra:
fine

Insane:
ya

Hard:
00:03:974 (1) - Would prefer this to curve more. Right now it's super narrow and doesn't look that nice

fixed

Normal:
00:01:352 (1) - 2 things. One, you should flip (1) vertically so it goes straight into 2. Also, overlapping sliderheads generally don't look that nice.
00:02:335 (3) - The hardest thing is when it's literally like, it's only barely touching. It's nothing that a +0.1 in the spacing or sliderspeed can't fix. Apply to all similar patterns.

easy:
nice

So yeah it's mostly good but normal is just like mega ugly so fix that pls

NucleaRaven wrote:

Hi from my queue o/

[Extra]

1. 00:43:325 (1) - whats up with the spacing of this note? its not conisistent with the rest - if this is intentional then at least make it more spaced so its noticeable. it was spaced af, but nerfed it, I guess too much. Moved it further

thats literally the only thing i was iffy about out of every diff so well done .
GL!

No kds for this as it would get denied.

Namki wrote:

yo hOI

[General]
Delete or make the combo4 more orange. imo looks better
And maybe combo3 a little brighter. fixed both

[Easy]
00:40:046 (4) - I really don't like this whistle, maybe do clap as you did 00:29:882 (4) - here. since i'm working on hitsounds, fixed!
Great diff.

[Normal]
00:01:352 (1,2) - these overlaps aren't okay in normal.
I think you need to increase the spacing and do the rhythm easier.
00:24:964 (1,2,3,4,1) - a lot of 1/2.
00:27:587 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - same here.
This diff looks like advanced with small spacing imo.

[Hard]
00:09:876 (2,1) - a random jump. fixed
00:21:351 (2,3) - do spacing between them 1.9x for better consistency. done
00:22:007 (4,1) - really big jump. Works as "introduction" to kiai
00:30:210 (2,3) - DS this thing. done
00:31:522 (4,5,6) - why did you use 1.3x here, it's 1.2x for the kiai part. fixed
00:35:456 (1,2,3) - random spacing changes. fixed
Watch over your spacing.

Good luck~

Lumin wrote:

Somekind of Nmod from queue

I only modded diffs that I find more than one problem

Aniki

00:05:450 (2,6,7,1) - Blanket? done!
00:16:597 (4,2) - stack? done!
00:21:024 (1,4) - Overlap, avoid or stack stacked
00:24:472 (5,1) - overlap don't want to stack this, so spaced it more
00:30:210 (2) - Should end at white spike, not blue it was slider velocity speed problem, fixed
00:34:637 (7,1) - Maybe a little too big jump I'd say compared with others, it's not that big

Gay Bar

00:05:778 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe turn these to sliders? I prefer them as doubles
00:11:024 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:07:253 (3) - this to x:288 y:328, looks better with 00:07:909 (1) - moved!
00:11:270 (6,7,1) - Avoidable overlap moved!
00:22:997 (5) - x:224 y:240 moved!
00:26:932 (5) - NC? Not sure tho
00:33:407 (8,1) - Horrible jump even though there isn't blank space in stream, same thing for rest of stream jumps idk what to do here, but fixed this!
00:36:112 (1,1) - disturbing overlap moved!

Hope this helps

Hello- wrote:

♂Hi man♂
My modding is not good.. sorry D:

[General]
hitsound so big. kiai~(setted N:C2) some reduce sound 75>60? ii don't think so :/

[Insane]
00:02:007 (3) - 1.4? if you ok, 200/288
00:04:958 (4) - some cunfuse suddeny high-jump imo. how about some reduce DS? somehow nerfed
00:10:450 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - try change same before's rhythm? (00:05:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) i think better before rhythm! done!
00:18:401 (1,2,3,4) - (all grab) stack (1) slider 00:17:909 - ? not sure what to do tho
00:19:220 (4) - you can makes spacing here (00:19:548 - ). looks like 00:18:073 (4) - off repeat? seems better to rhythm. cuz 00:19:548 - no hear sounds. it flows better imo
00:32:833 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - most difficult to insane diff. hmm.. maybe seems bad spread.. i compared 00:22:342 - and here... uhh, well? try change more easier? Nah, I want to leave this stream as it is
00:36:440 (2) - reduce 1/2 slider. for good flow to next slider. not sure tho
00:38:079 (3) - set DS same before circles? (0.5) fixed!

[Hard]
00:01:843 (2) - set DS 1.4? i think more good flow. fixed, i don't know why I left it this way, but nice catch1
00:11:188 - hmmm here... set Hard drum-clap/insane drum-whistle/extra only drum(sampleset) no set hitsound. worked with this
00:21:351 (2) - NC done
00:22:342 (1) - try blanket 00:21:679 (3) - body? done
00:27:096 (4,1) - (all grab) maybe set DS 1.2 more good(maybe looks like 00:33:653 (4,1) - ?). if you ok, move 272/176?
00:29:227 (2) - same ^
00:32:423 (2) - some difficult this pattern (3 stream) in hard. you can delete it.
00:40:374 (1) - no need NC
actually i'm to lazy to note every thing but changed Hard somehow
Good♂Luck!

Cooldue7 wrote:

Wtf is this song haha From my queue

estellia-'s Easy

00:01:352 (1,2) - really weird
00:03:647 (4,1) - ^
00:07:909 (3,1) - blanket

MrDorian's Normal

00:05:286 (2,3) - really awkward, its so cramped
00:06:597 (1,2) - overlap
00:10:204 (3,1) - really cramped
00:11:843 (1,2) - awkward overlap
00:16:761 (3,1) - ^
00:41:194 (2,3) - cramped
Overall imo the map seems really cramped even for a normal :/ i would suggest remapping some parts

tbh nie za bardzo wiem co się z nim dzieje :v

Hard

00:01:352 (1,2) - pretty random imo try to blanket that zrobion

Insane

00:03:155 (2,1) - overlap
00:07:253 (3,1) - ^
nie wiem czy warto tu stackować, psuje mi się wtedy trochę spacing

Extra

00:02:007 (4,1) - blanket maybe zrobion
00:02:499 (6,3) - awkward overlap naprawione
00:27:013 (2,2) - ^naprawione

Aniki

00:11:515 (7,2) - overlap poprawione
00:22:833 (3,1) - ^ zestackowałem (1) i (4) a (3) dałem w dól lekko

Gay Bar

man nerf the OD to like 8-7 since its a cs 6 :/and the HP to 6 (i know why its 6.9 but cmon dude its a gay bar :3) no ale m e m y, cs6ar9.6od9hp6.9
00:12:335 (2,1) - kinda awkward overlap zestackowane
00:13:155 (1,6) - ^ jak wyżej
00:14:138 (6,2) - ^ just makes your map look untidy imo poprawione
00:17:745 (3,1) - ^ poprawione!
00:38:899 (6) - x:200 y:64 ruszone!

Good luck man hope i helped (potem sie skaplem ze Polak haha jak bys chcial tego moda po polsku to napisz chetnie przemienie )

monstrata wrote:

NC (New Combo) Pattern Issues

This is a general issue. Once you've mastered how to do NC's, you'll know them for life!
NC's should be placed on the downbeat because that is the start of a new measure in a song. Lets look at the timeline: The large white ticks are the downbeats. Always try to have a New combo there. For easier difficulties, you may choose to NC every second downbeat, but make sure your pattern is consistent! If you NC every downbeat, don't randomly switch to every two downbeats. Only do so if the music shifts (for example, during a calm section or a slow-down).



Essentially, you want every downbeat to be the beginning of a New Combo, as such:



Another reason to NC may be because you are using a different slider-velocity. NC'ing the slider gives the player a better visual cue that the slider may be faster, or slower, and because of your NC, they will have more time to prepare.

mulraf wrote:

Hoy from my queue! o/

General:
_________________________________________________________
- That bg looks very bright. You might want to consider just turning the brightness down a little. (If you want me to i can also do that) if you want, then feel free :^)
- There's a guideline that suggests putting at least 1 spinner into every difficulty to have a better spread in the scoreboard. just a guideline, not a rule though. but give it a thought. i don't think it would fit tho

Easy:
_________________________________________________________
- This technically isn't considered easy 1,51* > 1,5* -> not easy just being picky here tho shhh
- 00:42:014 (1) - remove nc? (different to the rest of your scheme and song doesn't change)

Hard:
_________________________________________________________
- 00:10:532 (2) - NC here instead of the hitcircle before moved
- 00:30:210 (2) - ^ ^
- 00:31:522 (4) - NC ^
- 00:32:341 (1) - Remove NC ^
- 00:32:833 (1) - NC done
(not trying to be a NC nazi here. but since you used that pattern the whole rest of the song i think you should just keep NC'ing every downbeat)
- 00:40:374 (2,3,1) - I recommend a bigger spacing here (just a little bit) since it's also what you used before at a similar part fixed somehow

Insane:
_________________________________________________________
- 00:11:024 (3,4) - Short slider instead of double as well : ? I think it works fine now
- 00:26:932 (3) - NC? it is NC'd
- 00:30:210 (2) - NC here instead of last note NC'd
- 00:32:177 (1) - Undo NC? not sure
- 00:38:899 (1) - ^ done
- 00:40:702 (2) - NC here instead of last note idk probably NCd but i don't remember
- 00:42:669 (6) - Undo NC? nah
(? = reasonable to keep it though)

oh well, i really mostly point out NC things. this is what i usually go for:

monstrata wrote:

NC (New Combo) Pattern Issues

This is a general issue. Once you've mastered how to do NC's, you'll know them for life!
NC's should be placed on the downbeat because that is the start of a new measure in a song. Lets look at the timeline: The large white ticks are the downbeats. Always try to have a New combo there. For easier difficulties, you may choose to NC every second downbeat, but make sure your pattern is consistent! If you NC every downbeat, don't randomly switch to every two downbeats. Only do so if the music shifts (for example, during a calm section or a slow-down).



Essentially, you want every downbeat to be the beginning of a New Combo, as such:



Another reason to NC may be because you are using a different slider-velocity. NC'ing the slider gives the player a better visual cue that the slider may be faster, or slower, and because of your NC, they will have more time to prepare.

of course you don't have to do it exactly like this. but sometimes it's just bugging me when you use that exact scheme for the whole song and then suddenly it switches up

other than those i also don't have anything against the extra diff and the aniki & gay bar diff are too hard for me
but for the aniki diff: 00:32:178 (1) - wow. those spaces after the streams look REALLY hard, even for a 5,43* diff. maybe that's fine for the gay bar diff but i'd recommend staying away from that in aniki. maybe some smaller jumps but those seem really intense nerfed the highest one!

well, good luck with your map! it's really nice (and weird ) so far. +the gay bar diff kinda reminded me of irre with that small cs + high slider velocity

Reditum wrote:

Normal:
00:01:352 (1) - 2 things. One, you should flip (1) vertically so it goes straight into 2. Also, overlapping sliderheads generally don't look that nice. done?
00:02:335 (3) - The hardest thing is when it's literally like, it's only barely touching. It's nothing that a +0.1 in the spacing or sliderspeed can't fix. Apply to all similar patterns. done too

Namki wrote:

[Normal]
00:01:352 (1,2) - these overlaps aren't okay in normal. why?
I think you need to increase the spacing and do the rhythm easier. increased spacing, but will leave rhythm, because it will be boring as f...
00:24:964 (1,2,3,4,1) - a lot of 1/2. won't change it, because there are sliders
00:27:587 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - same here. ^
This diff looks like advanced with small spacing imo.I can make it Normal+, but XVoiR must agree

Cooldue7 wrote:

MrDorian's Normal

00:05:286 (2,3) - really awkward, its so cramped zmieniłę
00:06:597 (1,2) - overlap naprawiłę?
00:10:204 (3,1) - really cramped zrobione
00:11:843 (1,2) - awkward overlap zrobione? w
00:16:761 (3,1) - ^ ohnoplz
00:41:194 (2,3) - cramped poprawiłę
Overall imo the map seems really cramped even for a normal :/ i would suggest remapping some parts

HighTec wrote:

hOI! hOI
NM from da qUEUE!

o god this sounds so weird

Don't have much to say overall but what do you expect from only 40sec amiright

Extra
00:06:270 (8) - not sure whether this is the right angle for the slider, I'd make it face towards 00:06:597 (1) - more rotated by 45 degrees
00:13:155 (1,5) - overlap? fixed
00:16:761 (1) - this may be flipped vertically and may be further away from 00:17:089 (1) - done somehow!!
00:17:089 (1,2) - blanket gone wrong? like my entire life
00:24:145 (4,8) - overlap i like how it is in middle
00:27:259 (5) - make this a kickslider so that the 5tap and triple are connected, it looks fine to me i guess done
00:32:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the sudden length is unneeded, maybe put in some kicksliders with a small jump? it's only 183 bpm ok
00:43:325 (1) - this could maybe be even further away, most of the times it flows fine moved tho

Alaki
Some of the suggestions given at the Extra diff can be implemented here too

HP7 maybe? 7,5 is overkill lmao changed
00:01:352 (1,3) - blanket? moved slider few pixels upper
00:05:778 (4,5,6,7) - why not a 5tap? at first i was wondering what is Stap but | not sure tho
00:11:024 (3,4,5,6) - ^^ em
00:12:663 (4,1) - pixel overlap is wrong ;w; should be gut right now
00:16:761 (1) - you may put this further away from 00:17:089 (1) - , i promise it doesnt play bad i hope
00:27:259 (5) - kickslider? not sure there
00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - isn't this a little too big for 1/4 jumps? it just makes you sliderbreak only idk i can hit them on mouse so it's not that hard

#NoHomo Bar
this is meant to murder people who are used to cs4, or am i wrong xd let's use the formal version one - to have something challenging and unusual™
00:05:778 (4,5,6,7) - 5taps ;w; idk might change on easier diffs but not sure
00:11:024 (4,5,6,7) - ^^^
00:11:024 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe make this a square instead of a rectangle it won't work i think
00:16:761 (1) - same as with the other diffs done
00:15:778 (1) - put this a little lower, maybe to y:320 ^
00:19:712 (1) - if this could be a little faster, this is just too slow ahhh
00:27:259 (9) - you know the deal ye
00:28:079 (3,5) - blanket? i don't want to curve this slider
00:33:407 (8,1) - please no
00:34:719 (8,1) - this is just bullying
00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - again too much of a good thing geeettttttt dunked on!!!

w0w the song is just so weird I can't take it anymore
are the drum hitsounds in the beginning really needed? it sounds strange to me for me its better
Good luck on ranking this, would be funny to see it ranked
Is there no video??

HighTec wrote:

here, have a play of me choking gay bar diff

http://puu.sh/nr60b/aba5833839.osr

XVoIR wrote:

HighTec wrote:

here, have a play of me choking gay bar diff

http://puu.sh/nr60b/aba5833839.osr

tbh i can't even get 200x on Extra/Aniki/Gay Bar lmao

1. 00:03:974 (3) - shouldnt the NC start here?
2. 00:06:597 (9) - ^
3. 00:09:220 (3) - ^
4. 00:11:843 (9) - ^ (i have a feeling this is gonna go on throughout the map so ill just leave them and hope youll fix all of them it didnt)
   00:16:761 (10,11,12,13,14) - Dude.. you need to rework this -- its a 1/3 pattern not a 1/4 pattern. Slow down to 25% and youll hear. Pls fix -- also NC the last note.
5. 00:20:368 (1) - this is optional but a NC here might be ok
6. 00:42:915 (8,9) - incorrect spacing here. Like im fine with spaced streams and all, but this particular part is just bad. Keep it at the same DS (0.7x) for this. Highlight 00:42:997 (9,10,11,12,13) - then make sure your ds is 0.7x , then just simply move them all down with distance snap on and the problem will be fixed!

HighTec wrote:

ok small mod right now

doing as requested

i cant fc this

I dont feel like I deserve KD but if you really intend to

CRN's GOLD FINGER
To keep up with the other diffs

why gold finger and not golden finger? some1 please explain

OD 9? (as the gay bar diff also has high OD)

00:06:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part felt really undermapped for some reason, you may map more here no change
00:11:352 (6,7) - increase the spacing between those 2, makes reading easier fixed
00:16:761 (10,11,12,13,14) - wouldn't it be better if you had 1/3 on this?fixed
00:17:417 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this also feels undermapped, cmon you can map those jumps and I know no change
00:22:833 (2) - sounds weird with the hitsounds + awkward to play, maybe consider changing this slider to circles fixed
00:32:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe make kicksliders of em because there has to be some kind of stream here no change
00:35:784 (1) - feels out of place, maybe make the slider longer no change
00:41:358 (3) - put this down a few placesno change
00:42:669 (5) - NCfixed
00:43:325 (13) - may be further away from the other notesno change

looking good! finally a diff I cant FC wait wat no pp?!?!?@

NucleaRaven wrote:

Hi from my queue o/ (again)
I was told to mod CRN's Gold finger diff.

[CRN's GOLD FINGER]

1. 00:03:974 (3) - shouldnt the NC start here?no change
2. 00:06:597 (9) - ^no change
3. 00:09:220 (3) - ^no change
4. 00:11:843 (9) - ^ (i have a feeling this is gonna go on throughout the map so ill just leave them and hope youll fix all of them it didnt)no change
   
   00:16:761 (10,11,12,13,14) - Dude.. you need to rework this -- its a 1/3 pattern not a 1/4 pattern. Slow down to 25% and youll hear. Pls fix -- also NC the last note. fixed
5. 00:20:368 (1) - this is optional but a NC here might be okno change
6. 00:42:915 (8,9) - incorrect spacing here. Like im fine with spaced streams and all, but this particular part is just bad. Keep it at the same DS (0.7x) for this. Highlight 00:42:997 (9,10,11,12,13) - then make sure your ds is 0.7x , then just simply move them all down with distance snap on and the problem will be fixed!fixed

Gl!

deadpon3 wrote:

From my queue: p/4941900

Hi caren!

CRN's GOLD FINGER:
00:03:974 (3,4) - You can try to curve 4 and blanket it with 3, it would look more natural imo.fixed
00:16:761 (10,11) - This part is unreadable, stack 10 with the rest of the stream.fixed
00:22:171 (6,1) - Fix blanket here.fixed

Not much to mod, it's full of jumpy circles and these jumpy-circles sections look flawless.
Good luck!

1. 00:07:089 (2,3) - Try to make it less curvy. It'd look better with the next pattern. http://puu.sh/nCNOK/067f93f824.jpg

1. I find your rhythm really cool But I sincerly think you could improve the placement of your objects. For example. 00:28:243 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Nothing to say about the rhythm it's just great. The flow is cool too. But hey, the fact that 00:30:046 (4) - touch this slider 00:28:899 (1) - and isn't stacked with 00:28:735 (4) - doesn't feel neat in my point of view. I don't what you think about it though.
2. 00:06:270 (4) - Would be cool if you stack properly with the end of 00:03:974 (1) - It's totally visible and kill the neat.
3. 00:07:909 (2) - The random overlap with 00:06:597 (1) - doesn't feel that neat
4. 00:10:532 (1) - Stack properly with 00:09:220 (1) -
5. 00:31:522 (1) - stack with 00:30:210 (1) - or just don't overlap
6. 00:40:046 (2) - ^

1. 00:11:188 (3) - Move the point of the tail around x460y148 to make a nice blanket.
2. 00:14:958 (2) - ^ x372y164
3. 00:22:997 (3) - Try something like that? http://puu.sh/nCP7R/73566fe81f.jpg 00:23:489 (4) - would look a bit less randomly positionned. Then adjust 00:23:653 (1) -
4. 00:32:178 (3) - It would look neater if you stack properly with the end of 00:30:866 (2) -
5. 00:33:653 (4) - Move it around x260y180 for blanket
6. 00:34:145 (1) - x351y242 and the point of the tail around x272y356 then 00:34:637 (2) - I'd say x240y247 and you could probably let the jump to 00:34:801 (3) -
7. 00:36:768 (1) - x184 y256 so 00:36:112 (2,3,1) - will be an actual triangle and I think it would go along better with 00:35:456 (1) -
8. 00:40:702 (1) - x143y320
9. 00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - I would really remove the claps on the end, sounds so bad :c

1. The map is overall cool, but I have the same remarks to make than in Hard... I don't know if you will agree with those so this is a bit awkward..
2. 00:03:811 (4) - Try at least to fix those blankets... You just have to move it around x340y68
3. 00:19:220 (4) - It would flow better if you Ctrl+J the slider I think.
4. 00:27:587 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/nCPxU/fe15c20fa3.jpg
5. 00:43:325 (1) - I find the spacing really confusing tbh try to move it around x260y32 to at least keep the same flow
6. 00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - I'd remove the claps on the end
7. 00:43:325 (1) - x384y80 would have the same effect in gameplay but it would be smoother to play especially because of better reading

1. 00:19:712 (1) - Try to put this shape or something to flow better with the next slider. http://puu.sh/nCPVZ/62cdf79097.jpg
2. 00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - Remove clap on the end, it's sooo loud :c
3. 00:41:276 (2) - I would remove to make more sense with your previous stream. Then I would remove NC here 00:41:194 (1) - and add it here 00:41:357 (3) - instead. Like this : http://puu.sh/nCQ2b/0abc224cbf.jpg

1. 00:05:450 (2) - Stack properly with 00:04:794 (5) - ? It would look neater.
2. 00:17:581 (2) - I would move it to x400 y176 and 00:17:745 (3) - to x300y140. It looks better overall in my point of view.
3. 00:21:024 (2) - NC, totally different rhythm + speed up comapred to the previous slider.
4. 00:33:489 (1) - Add finish
5. 00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - Remove clap at the end please, so loud

1. 00:35:456 (1,1,1,1,1) - So cool!
2. 00:37:423 (5,6) - I think it would sound better if you would add soft sampleset at the tails.
3. 00:38:899 (7) - It's 1/8!
4. 00:42:997 (5) - NC? To prevent the new spacing OR nc here 00:43:325 (5) - cause new sound. Other diffs did it imo!
5. Really fun diff!!

Yales wrote:

Hello! crn request :3
[General]
Epilepsy warning is a must. Also check Aimod there's some tag conflicts with Gay Bar lol done and lol i forgot about tags here
[Hard]

1. 00:11:188 (3) - Move the point of the tail around x460y148 to make a nice blanket. fixed
2. 00:14:958 (2) - ^ x372y164 ^
3. 00:22:997 (3) - Try something like that? http://puu.sh/nCP7R/73566fe81f.jpg 00:23:489 (4) - would look a bit less randomly positionned. Then adjust 00:23:653 (1) - i hope i did it fine
4. 00:32:178 (3) - It would look neater if you stack properly with the end of 00:30:866 (2) - done!
5. 00:33:653 (4) - Move it around x260y180 for blanket
6. 00:34:145 (1) - x351y242 and the point of the tail around x272y356 then 00:34:637 (2) - I'd say x240y247 and you could probably let the jump to 00:34:801 (3) - somehow done
7. 00:36:768 (1) - x184 y256 so 00:36:112 (2,3,1) - will be an actual triangle and I think it would go along better with 00:35:456 (1) - lol good idea
8. 00:40:702 (1) - x143y320 done!
9. 00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - I would really remove the claps on the end, sounds so bad :c i guess done

[Insane]

1. The map is overall cool, but I have the same remarks to make than in Hard... I don't know if you will agree with those so this is a bit awkward..
2. 00:03:811 (4) - Try at least to fix those blankets... You just have to move it around x340y68 moved
3. 00:19:220 (4) - It would flow better if you Ctrl+J the slider I think. let's try
4. 00:27:587 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/nCPxU/fe15c20fa3.jpg done
5. 00:43:325 (1) - I find the spacing really confusing tbh try to move it around x260y32 to at least keep the same flow done
6. 00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - I'd remove the claps on the end removed
7. 00:43:325 (1) - x384y80 would have the same effect in gameplay but it would be smoother to play especially because of better reading em, so x260y32 or x384y80?

[Aniki]

1. 00:19:712 (1) - Try to put this shape or something to flow better with the next slider. http://puu.sh/nCPVZ/62cdf79097.jpg done!
2. 00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - Remove clap on the end, it's sooo loud :c remooooved
3. 00:41:276 (2) - I would remove to make more sense with your previous stream. Then I would remove NC here 00:41:194 (1) - and add it here 00:41:357 (3) - instead. Like this : http://puu.sh/nCQ2b/0abc224cbf.jpg

done!
[Gay Bar]

1. 00:05:450 (2) - Stack properly with 00:04:794 (5) - ? It would look neater. stacked (5) with (2) ;]
2. 00:17:581 (2) - I would move it to x400 y176 and 00:17:745 (3) - to x300y140. It looks better overall in my point of view. definitely better
3. 00:21:024 (2) - NC, totally different rhythm + speed up comapred to the previous slider.
4. 00:33:489 (1) - Add finish not sure why
5. 00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - Remove clap at the end please, so loud again done!

Fun set :p
Good luck! i'll need it

Yales wrote:

[MrDorian's Normal+]

1. I find your rhythm really cool But I sincerly think you could improve the placement of your objects. For example. 00:28:243 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Nothing to say about the rhythm it's just great. The flow is cool too. But hey, the fact that 00:30:046 (4) - touch this slider 00:28:899 (1) - and isn't stacked with 00:28:735 (4) - doesn't feel neat in my point of view. I don't what you think about it though. I stacked it, i think now it'll be good
2. 00:06:270 (4) - Would be cool if you stack properly with the end of 00:03:974 (1) - It's totally visible and kill the neat. repaired
3. 00:07:909 (2) - The random overlap with 00:06:597 (1) - doesn't feel that neat ???
4. 00:10:532 (1) - Stack properly with 00:09:220 (1) - done
5. 00:31:522 (1) - stack with 00:30:210 (1) - or just don't overlap stacked
6. 00:40:046 (2) - ^ ???

• 
  OD8 for last diff? maybe 9?

1. 00:32:835 -unnecessary longstream(its very good at insane diff only because sliders is realy good for rhythm)

1. 00:01:356 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - overlap looks ugly
2. 00:11:847 (1,2) - same

1. Now, you're going to want to use Distance Snap for most of an Easy.(c) wiki.
   You need regular DS at this diff

Testo wrote:

From my queue:)
[General]

• 
  OD8 for last diff? maybe 9?

[extra]

1. 00:32:835 -unnecessary longstream(its very good at insane diff only because sliders is realy good for rhythm) nerfed ending of this stream

[MrDorian's Normal+]

1. 00:01:356 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - overlap looks ugly
2. 00:11:847 (1,2) - same

[estellia-'s Easy]

1. Now, you're going to want to use Distance Snap for most of an Easy.(c) wiki.
   You need regular DS at this diff

Общий комментарий о сложности/карте

LeQuack wrote:

From my NM Queue

Hard

00:02:339 (3) - Change this to a note no
00:10:372 (3) - Unnecessary note welp, there should be smth 1/8 but it's hard
00:24:966 (1) - I think this would do better as a repeat slider that goes to the red tick and repeats once it'd break distance too much
00:35:458 (1) - I think this would do well as two notes to be similar with the next part which is the same in the song somehow fixed
00:43:327 (1) - It would make sense for a spinner to go from here until 00:44:639 I don't want endin' spinners there

Insane

00:03:815 (4) - Unnecessary note nah, there's definitely a sound
00:10:372 (4,1) - Swap this so the 4 has NC and the 1 does not not sure
00:11:028 (3) - NC
00:27:425 (5,1) - Same as ^^
00:32:671 (6,1) - Also same ^
00:36:770 (3) - NC so the previous section is emphasized more done
00:38:245 (4) - NC fixed NC
00:39:311 (9,1) - Swap so 9 is NC and 1 is not
00:43:327 (1) - Like in previous diff a spinner would fit well here (Same length as previous difficulty) same

Cool map

Exile- wrote:

[General]

Why Storyboard and the video in the same map? You can't watch both at once.
"oh god.jpg" should scale from 0.639322916, not 1. niedługo usunę storyboard ok?

[Gay Bar]

00:03:159 (2) - Wyprostuj go tak jak 00:02:667 (1) - chyba fixed
00:03:651 (3,4) - Ctrl + G aby kontynuować ruch obrotowy. Dopasuj oczywiście spacing. zrobion
00:14:306 - Wystepuje tutaj mocny dźwięk który powinien być clickable. Pozatym 00:13:815 (5,6) - te slidery są bardzo podobne mimo że drugi jest o wiele mocniejszy. Zamień na dwa kółka zrobiłem super pięciokąt (?)
00:19:716 (1) - Moze cos takiego? też fixed

SPOILER

00:24:639 (5) - Proste lub górne uwypuklenie. fixed
00:31:852 (2,3,4) - Ten triple jest malo slyszalny. ogólnie 00:31:524 (1,2,3,4) - zrobilbym z tego patterna same jumpy na 1/2
00:33:327 (7,8) - 00:34:639 (7,8) - Czemu by tu nie zrobic sliderów? bo to ma być element trudności
00:35:786 (2,1,2) - Zrób je coraz szybsze zwiększyłem SV na słowie FUCk

[Aniki]

00:05:126 (4,1,2) - Flow jest zbyt liniowy, zwłaszcza że w środku postawiłeś NC przeniosłem kulkajn
00:02:175 (4) - Taki troche offbeat. Przy koncowce jest bardzo wyrazny dzwiek a poczatek slidera zaczyna sie od upbeatu poprzestawiałem wszystko co sie dało lol
00:05:454 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Imo troche zbyt ekstremalne jak na poczatek. W kiai nie ma nawet takich jumpow. 00:05:454 (2,6,7) - Chyba tu zapomniales zestackowac NERF
00:36:770 (1) - Zbyt podobne do poprzedniego patternu a ten slider rozpoczyna nową sekcje zostawię to tak

[Extra]

00:16:765 (1) - Ctrl + G? ok
00:31:852 (2,3) - To powinno być sliderem jeśli zrobiles tak z 00:31:524 (1,4) - tbh nie wiem o co chodzi z tym :/

[Insane]

00:11:274 (5) - Skoro ten double już połączyłeś to czemu nie 00:11:028 (3,4) - ? em już
00:31:524 (1,2,1) - Większy spacing! zwiększon!!
00:38:573 (3,4) - Damn! Nie mozesz tak stackowac upbeatu przed downbeatem. Postaw 00:38:573 (3) - blizej 00:38:245 (2) - już
00:43:327 (1) - W poprzednich diffach stawiales to o wiele dalej. Czemu tutaj jest to tak blisko? już!