1. 00:03:647 (3,4,1) - That DS is not really nice to the eye, something more equal is better, I'd suggest increasing the spacing as well, won'thurt anyone.
2. 00:06:024 (5) - - 2 circle pattern just like at 00:11:024 (3,4,5,6) - is preferable, I think the slider is just misleading.
3. 00:11:270 (5,6) - Moving this to around x156 y172 would be better, irregular spacing with such rhythm is not that fun.
4. 00:14:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - It kinda feels like this is just mapped randomly to a 183 bpm song, try this pattern for example - http://puu.sh/mgT5B/653212cd5d.jpg
5. 00:16:761 (4,5,6,7,1) - Snapped incorrectly, it's 1/3 (didn't check other diffs, but you should.)
6. 00:19:712 (1,1) - I wouldn't mind this if the first slider stopped at 00:20:942 but now there's an awkward gap with an unneeded anti-jump.
7. 00:23:653 (1,2,3) - Egh?.. If you started this pattern with a slider, why not have three 1/2 sliders? it'll fit much better with the music.
8. 00:31:522 (1) - 1/2 is definitely better here, the sliderend is really emphasized in the music but yet you can't press it.
9. I don't really like the non-slider stream jumps from here so commenting on them is mostly pointless, if you wish to keep them, a QAT will lay the final word anyway.
10. 00:41:932 (7,1) - That's really misleading, either increase the spacing or don't have a slider at the end, it looks like one stream.

Avishay wrote:

Hi.

[AHHH MY BUTTHO-]

1. 00:03:647 (3,4,1) - That DS is not really nice to the eye, something more equal is better, I'd suggest increasing the spacing as well, won'thurt anyone. Increased it!
2. 00:06:024 (5) - - 2 circle pattern just like at 00:11:024 (3,4,5,6) - is preferable, I think the slider is just misleading. Done
3. 00:11:270 (5,6) - Moving this to around x156 y172 would be better, irregular spacing with such rhythm is not that fun. something like that done
4. 00:14:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - It kinda feels like this is just mapped randomly to a 183 bpm song, try this pattern for example - http://puu.sh/mgT5B/653212cd5d.jpg did something like that
5. 00:16:761 (4,5,6,7,1) - Snapped incorrectly, it's 1/3 (didn't check other diffs, but you should.) oh
6. 00:19:712 (1,1) - I wouldn't mind this if the first slider stopped at 00:20:942 but now there's an awkward gap with an unneeded anti-jump. done
7. 00:23:653 (1,2,3) - Egh?.. If you started this pattern with a slider, why not have three 1/2 sliders? it'll fit much better with the music. that's right!
8. 00:31:522 (1) - 1/2 is definitely better here, the sliderend is really emphasized in the music but yet you can't press it. Done
9. I don't really like the non-slider stream jumps from here so commenting on them is mostly pointless, if you wish to keep them, a QAT will lay the final word anyway. We'll see, actually it's the only thing that different Gay Bar from Aniki and Extra :v
10. 00:41:932 (7,1) - That's really misleading, either increase the spacing or don't have a slider at the end, it looks like one stream. done!

glz

Buretsu wrote:

hOi~
From my queue.

ANIKI

00:12:827 (5) - Hits HP bar. Fix pls. fixed

00:14:466 (3,4) - Move to X: 280, Y: 224 moved

00:25:620 (5,2) - Stack stacked

End of 00:27:915 (2) stack with 00:27:177 (4) tried

00:32:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It's really overmapped. Fix pls. i'll leave as it is, if QATs or something will "deny" these streams, then I'll change them to something else

00:43:325 (1) Move to X: 264, Y: 216 Moved

Good luck. <3

1. Recommended BG size should be either 1024*768 or 1366*768.
2. Set combo colours please, at least I think the green one doesn't look fit with the background.
3. Uncheck "Letterbox during break" in the song setup since you didn't have a break in the song, also that countdown thing if you feel it isn't needed.

1. 00:28:243 (2,4) - They're kinda close imo, if they were spaced more(visually) it would be neater.

1. I would increase AR since the objects look pretty dense.
2. 00:05:286 (2,3,4) - Spacing error.
3. Some overlaps are looking fine, but some overlaps aren't looking neat, like 00:11:843 (1,2) or 00:35:456 (1,2) for example, while some patterns like this 00:13:811 (4,5,1) or 00:25:620 (3,4,1) are pretty misleading, these patterns can cause players to confuse whether which object they should be clicking next, mainly the cause here because the flow isn't obvious enough.

1. 00:02:335 (3) - I think a 1/2 slider would emphasize that strong sound better.
2. 00:27:096 (4,1) - Looks weird lol, feels like they didn't blanket each other.
3. 00:29:391 (2) - I think if this slider starts 00:29:555 here it would fit better.
4. 00:30:866 (3,6) - Hmmm, have them stacked maybe?
5. 00:43:325 - Well, since it's a finish so I would prefer something clickable.

1. 00:01:352 (1,2,3) - I would have the spacing here 00:01:352 (1,2) smaller than 00:01:843 (2,3) to emphasize 00:02:007 (3) better. Same applies to 00:11:843 (1,2,3) .
2. 00:04:466 (2,3) - Weird flow imo. Same applies to 00:19:056 (3,4) -
3. 00:06:024 (5) - There's no reason to do a triplet here because nothing in the music lands here.
4. 00:11:188 - There's a strong sound here and you shouldn't skip it, also 00:11:024 (3,4,5,6) gives off a weird feeling for some reason.
5. 00:12:499 (3,4) - This shouldn't be a jump imo, if you're intended of making a jump, it should be between 00:12:991 (4,1) instead.
6. 00:30:866 (4,1,2) - You probably didn't intend to overlap these but it looks weird lol.
7. 00:35:456 (1,3,1) - Maybe it's just me, but they're so hard to read that you should do sth about this.

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~ Sorry for a late mod because I was kinda inactive recently.

[General]

1. Recommended BG size should be either 1024*768 or 1366*768. upscaled
2. Set combo colours please, at least I think the green one doesn't look fit with the background. not sure if it works right now
3. Uncheck "Letterbox during break" in the song setup since you didn't have a break in the song, also that countdown thing if you feel it isn't needed. oh, I forgot about these options ,_,

[Easy]

1. 00:28:243 (2,4) - They're kinda close imo, if they were spaced more(visually) it would be neater.

[Normal]

1. I would increase AR since the objects look pretty dense.
2. 00:05:286 (2,3,4) - Spacing error.
3. Some overlaps are looking fine, but some overlaps aren't looking neat, like 00:11:843 (1,2) or 00:35:456 (1,2) for example, while some patterns like this 00:13:811 (4,5,1) or 00:25:620 (3,4,1) are pretty misleading, these patterns can cause players to confuse whether which object they should be clicking next, mainly the cause here because the flow isn't obvious enough.

[Hard]

1. 00:02:335 (3) - I think a 1/2 slider would emphasize that strong sound better. done
2. 00:27:096 (4,1) - Looks weird lol, feels like they didn't blanket each other. tried to do somethingi with it
3. 00:29:391 (2) - I think if this slider starts 00:29:555 here it would fit better. I'm not sure
4. 00:30:866 (3,6) - Hmmm, have them stacked maybe? stack'd
5. 00:43:325 - Well, since it's a finish so I would prefer something clickable. done, i'll try to move it later

[Insane]

1. 00:01:352 (1,2,3) - I would have the spacing here 00:01:352 (1,2) smaller than 00:01:843 (2,3) to emphasize 00:02:007 (3) better. Same applies to 00:11:843 (1,2,3) . done
2. 00:04:466 (2,3) - Weird flow imo. Same applies to 00:19:056 (3,4) - tried to work on it, not sure if it's fine right now
3. 00:06:024 (5) - There's no reason to do a triplet here because nothing in the music lands here. made two doubles
4. 00:11:188 - There's a strong sound here and you shouldn't skip it, also 00:11:024 (3,4,5,6) gives off a weird feeling for some reason. fixed
5. 00:12:499 (3,4) - This shouldn't be a jump imo, if you're intended of making a jump, it should be between 00:12:991 (4,1) instead. changed it a bit
6. 00:30:866 (4,1,2) - You probably didn't intend to overlap these but it looks weird lol. lol tbh idk what to do with this
7. 00:35:456 (1,3,1) - Maybe it's just me, but they're so hard to read that you should do sth about this. oh well, for me it's readable

LOL, again, sorry for a late mod and hope my mod helped somehow.
Good luck~

1. I would increase AR since the objects look pretty dense. increased to 5.3
2. 00:05:286 (2,3,4) - Spacing error. changed
3. Some overlaps are looking fine, but some overlaps aren't looking neat, like 00:11:843 (1,2) or 00:35:456 (1,2) for example, while some patterns like this 00:13:811 (4,5,1) or 00:25:620 (3,4,1) are pretty misleading, these patterns can cause players to confuse whether which object they should be clicking next, mainly the cause here because the flow isn't obvious enough. I do not really know, what to do with these misleading patterns, because they look OK for me. I won't change it. If someone either will be talking about it, I'll try to change it.

1. 00:01:352 (1,2) - Overlaps like this don't look that nice.
2. 00:14:466 (1,2) - Same here.
3. 00:17:089 (1,2) - Again, but also change the length of the sliders to match the ones starting at 00:18:401 (1,2) - It makes for a better flow.
   
   Fix the remaining overlaps.

1. 00:32:669 (6) - I think it would be better here if you just continued to follow the rythym like you were orginially. There's nothing really in this part of the song that the stream emphasizes.
   
   Overall, this is a pretty nice mapset so far. Good luck!

1. 00:01:352 (1,2) - Overlaps like this don't look that nice.
2. 00:14:466 (1,2) - Same here.
3. 00:17:089 (1,2) - Again, but also change the length of the sliders to match the ones starting at 00:18:401 (1,2) - It makes for a better flow. I dunno, what do you mean xd
   
   Fix the remaining overlaps. fixed

TequilaWolf wrote:

these are all just suggestions.

Aniki-

00:02:171 (4) - maybe rotate this so that it's facing top-right? and move it to the center, if you do decide to keep the positioning you can try moving 00:02:663 (1) - further away moved 00:02:663 (1) away
00:05:778 (3,4) - better if you use 1/4 slider here as well o: ok, changed next 1/4 slider to double!
00:13:811 (3) - move nearer moved a bit closer, hopefully it won't overlap
00:15:122 (5) - move this down down down, creates a better jumpy effect? played with this, I believe it'll work!
00:16:761 (1) - this repeater looks a little off, maybe use 0.75 SV here and make it repeat 3 times instead? with 1/6 snap I'm not sure how would it work, I'll left it
00:19:712 (1) - boring o: might want to try this http://puu.sh/ml0BZ/614433650a.jpg with lower volume on 8 or something I really want to leave this long slider, just for this scream!
00:22:833 (3,4,5) - you can try to make some streams fully straight lines instead like this one xD and this 00:24:144 (3,4,5) - I think that it's fine right now, curved triples are the best! :^)
00:34:801 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm sure you can make this look better don't overestimate me m8! :^) Also, changed
00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - a little too hard to hit without getting 100s I don't think so
00:37:915 (6,7,8) - maybe ctrl+g Ok, let's try it!
00:42:177 (2,3,4) - I tried using 1.0 DS and making it a straight line, feels better o: lol that's right
00:43:242 (8,1) - ...really hard to hit (or SS) actually especially considering this is your most spaced stream yet moved it a bit closer

XVoIR's Gay Bar-

In this diff again you could make your triplets a little more spaced o:

00:16:761 (4) - same story as aniki, the slider just looks too long xD made it shorter
00:19:712 (1) - ya you don't wanna let the player do nothing for so long and then introduce them to a jumpstream right after somehow merged this jumpstream, but it's still jumpy :^)
00:32:669 (6,1) - here onwards is incredibly difficult on cs6. move 1 nearer to 6 tried to do something with it
00:33:325 (7,8) - fix
00:33:407 (8,1) - wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too huge. nerf. very very hard along with 00:34:063 (8,1) - and 00:34:719 (8,1) - nerfed into 5,91*, rip 6* diff :/

gl c:

_vanity wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue. o/ You didn't specify which difficulties you wanted me to mod, so I guess I'll go over whatever I can.
[Insane]

1. 00:32:669 (6) - I think it would be better here if you just continued to follow the rythym like you were orginially. There's nothing really in this part of the song that the stream emphasizes. I want to keep it somehow connected with this part
   
   Overall, this is a pretty nice mapset so far. Good luck!

Cheonshi wrote:

From Q:

[Gay Bar]

• 00:25:292 (2,3) - once u use then then in same combo 00:25:948 (5,6,7) - this - decide for one i dont think a triple is in the music mb decide for first one worked somehow

• 00:32:014 (4) - that slider is not so nice to play how about just putting a circle 00:32:096 - and having no sound here i dont think its necessary to have one circle here i also think this gives a little more flow oh

• 00:32:587 - and instead i would keep the stream going here and not having a blanket here

• 00:33:407 (8,1) - 00:34:063 (8,1) - 00:34:719 (8,1) - okay ._. dw it's nerfed already

• 00:38:899 (6) - one kick less mb ? I'll leave this as it is right now

• 00:43:325 (1) - mb a spinner after that It won't work tbh

why is everyone mapping cancer at the moment lmao you can't get cancer in Gay Bar, sorry :/

1. Hard w ogóle nie ma dodanych kolorów, proszę je dodać lol.
2. Dalej nie rozumiem dlaczego nazwałeś ostatni diff swoją nazwą? Skoro stworzyłeś tą mapę nie powinnieneś tego robić.
3. Zero customowych hitsoundów? Smutno trochę :c

1. 00:19:712 - This green line is unnessesary.
2. 00:40:702 (1,2) - Spacing issue found. Please ds it.
3. Also change OD to 2 since you did it with HP tho.
4. Pretty ok diff.

1. Dla mnie, lepiej by brzmiał ten diff, jakby nazywał się "Dorian's Normal".
2. Statystyki są dziwne. Najlepsze jakie pasowały by do Normala to : CS 3,5 | AR 5 | OD 4 | HP 4
3. 00:01:352 (1,2) - To się bardzo dziwnie gra, a tak w ogóle to odległość jest za duża. Preferuję to zreworkować trochę.
4. 00:10:204 (3,1) - Napraw blanket, wygląda trochę tragicznie, ale da się to zrobić łatwo.
5. 00:19:712 (1) - Och to jest unrankable.. W normalu spinnery powinny kończyć się o dwa white beaty przed obiektami. W tym przypadku powinnien skończyć się na 00:21:679 -
6. 00:28:735 (5,1) - Te overlappy są okropne.. powinnieneś coś zrobić w tym miejscu nooo.

1. 00:39:063 (3) - Nie zesnappowany obiekt. Snapnij go lol.

1. 00:16:761 (1) - Nie potrzebne NC.
2. 00:21:761 (4,6,8) - Te obiekty są overmapped. Przysłuchałem się ich z 3 razy i stwierdzam fakt. Zmień to na jakiś jump pattern.
3. 00:22:915 (4,4) - ^ Te również są overmapped.
4. Dobra nie będe dalej wymieniał ich, ale wiedz że masz ich ogromną ilość i wypadałoby je naprawić.

Kalibe wrote:

Nie każ mi tego modować ;w;

1. Hard w ogóle nie ma dodanych kolorów, proszę je dodać lol. sorry missclick
2. Dalej nie rozumiem dlaczego nazwałeś ostatni diff swoją nazwą? Skoro stworzyłeś tą mapę nie powinnieneś tego robić. Bo to mój własny Gay Bar :v
3. Zero customowych hitsoundów? Smutno trochę :c Nie wiem jakie by tutaj działały, serio xD

estellia-'s Easy :

1. 00:19:712 - This green line is unnessesary.
2. 00:40:702 (1,2) - Spacing issue found. Please ds it.
3. Also change OD to 2 since you did it with HP tho.
4. Pretty ok diff.

MrDorian's Normal :

1. Dla mnie, lepiej by brzmiał ten diff, jakby nazywał się "Dorian's Normal".
2. Statystyki są dziwne. Najlepsze jakie pasowały by do Normala to : CS 3,5 | AR 5 | OD 4 | HP 4
3. 00:01:352 (1,2) - To się bardzo dziwnie gra, a tak w ogóle to odległość jest za duża. Preferuję to zreworkować trochę.
4. 00:10:204 (3,1) - Napraw blanket, wygląda trochę tragicznie, ale da się to zrobić łatwo.
5. 00:19:712 (1) - Och to jest unrankable.. W normalu spinnery powinny kończyć się o dwa white beaty przed obiektami. W tym przypadku powinnien skończyć się na 00:21:679 -
6. 00:28:735 (5,1) - Te overlappy są okropne.. powinnieneś coś zrobić w tym miejscu nooo.

Insane :

1. 00:39:063 (3) - Nie zesnappowany obiekt. Snapnij go lol. lol faktycznie

Aniki :

1. 00:16:761 (1) - Nie potrzebne NC. naprawione, będę musiał w innych też
2. 00:21:761 (4,6,8) - Te obiekty są overmapped. Przysłuchałem się ich z 3 razy i stwierdzam fakt. Zmień to na jakiś jump pattern.
3. 00:22:915 (4,4) - ^ Te również są overmapped.
4. Dobra nie będe dalej wymieniał ich, ale wiedz że masz ich ogromną ilość i wypadałoby je naprawić. Może później to zmienię, teraz mi jakoś za bardzo do muzyki pasują :<

Ok, to tyle. Gut luck !

1. Dla mnie, lepiej by brzmiał ten diff, jakby nazywał się "Dorian's Normal". dla ciebie
2. Statystyki są dziwne. Najlepsze jakie pasowały by do Normala to : CS 3,5 | AR 5 | OD 4 | HP 4 takiego AR nie mogę dać, ponieważ jest nawał obiektów na ekranie
3. 00:01:352 (1,2) - To się bardzo dziwnie gra, a tak w ogóle to odległość jest za duża. Preferuję to zreworkować trochę. odległość troszkę zmniejszyłem, a początku nie gra się dziwnie, wręcz mnie jest lepsze od nudnych reverse sliderów
4. 00:10:204 (3,1) - Napraw blanket, wygląda trochę tragicznie, ale da się to zrobić łatwo. naprawione
5. 00:19:712 (1) - Och to jest unrankable.. W normalu spinnery powinny kończyć się o dwa white beaty przed obiektami. W tym przypadku powinnien skończyć się na 00:21:679 - też naprawione
6. 00:28:735 (5,1) - Te overlappy są okropne.. powinnieneś coś zrobić w tym miejscu nooo.naprawione?

arnoldusj wrote:

Aniki
00:05:286 (1,5,6) - the distance is not appropriate
00:16:433 (3,1) - equated the distance
The only course I post

XxSeonxX wrote:

Hello, from my queue

Insane
00:13:155 (1,2) - make these sliders similar Done!
00:37:833 - putting a slider here until 00:37:915 is better since there's 2 beats at those 2 timing I'm not sure how would it work

Hard
00:06:597 (1,1) - copy paste these sliders done!
00:22:007 (4,1) - gap between these are quite big I think it's fine
00:28:899 (1,2) - flow between these 2 are bad
00:34:637 (2,3) - ^
reworked these fragments!

MrDorian's Normal
00:22:342 (1,2) - I don't think having 2 short sliders here are good since there's no beat for a reason to have 2 sliders without these sliders sounds awfully, please
00:27:587 (1,2,3) - same reason as above ^
00:32:833 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:41:194 (2,3) - I don't really want to comment on blankets but there are way off it isn't a blanket pls

As stated in my queue, I can't mod anything higher than Insane, good luck

Flanchan wrote:

Hi! from queue.

As you asked Gay Bar, Aniki, Extra and Easy

Gay Bar

00:11:270 (5,6) - Stack these on the end of 00:10:532 (1) ? Of course!
00:13:647 (4,2) - Stack these? Yes!
00:19:712 (1) - ^ ^
00:27:587 (1) - Is NC necessary here? Of course not!
00:29:882 (1) - ^ sure!
00:32:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make the jumps between the streams the same distance apart? Used 2,6x DS!
00:35:374 (8,1) - Maybe move the slider closer to 00:35:374 (8), this jump seems really large compared to the others before it I would, but I don't know how to place it right :<

Aniki

00:05:286 (1,5,6) - Stack these? Aren't these stacked?
00:34:801 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why is this stream different to the others? It looks cool, at least for me :<
00:41:685 (7,5) - Stack these? Done!

Extra

00:06:106 (7,2) - Stack these? Of course!
00:21:515 (1) - Remove NC? Yes!
00:28:571 (5,3) - Stack these? Done!
00:28:899 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a perfect square How? ._.
00:36:112 (3,1) - Stack these Done!

Easy

00:36:112 (2) - This seems a little lopsided, maybe try and centre the red point more? "Denied"

GL on getting ranked!

-Nya- wrote:

Take note that this hitsound mod is based only on your Insane and that these hitsound suggestions are my own and that some modders may not agree.

1. Change default to soft instead (Normal sounds too loud and chaotic to me.) but in kiai you can use Normal again since the kiai is louder.
2. Use this http://puu.sh/mqr3a/bfe5227f83.wav on these beats: 00:01:352 - 00:02:007 - 00:02:663 - 00:03:319 - 00:03:974 - 00:04:630 – etc. Remember that you have to be consistent so continue with this rhythm.
3. 00:05:532 – and 00:05:614 – and 00:05:778 – and 00:05:860 – and 00:06:024 – and 00:06:106 – and 00:06:270 – and 00:06:433 – For these beats you can use the default drum. Just change sampleset and additions to “drum”.
   
   Picture

   
4. 00:10:696 - 00:10:862 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –Follow the same hitsound suggestions as above. (The drum)
5. 00:17:089 - 00:18:401 - 00:19:712 - 00:21:024 – For these louder beats, you can use this: http://puu.sh/mqDw9/faa651c6fd.wav
6. Since the kiai is much louder, you can use this: http://puu.sh/mqDz1/652a43529b.wav on beats like: 00:22:997 - 00:23:653 - 00:23:981 - 00:24:309 - 00:24:964 – etc. You just have to listen where the strong beats are in the kiai. You don’t have to use this hitsound for the kiai only. You can also place it on beats that you feel is quite loud.
7. Finishes is also very nice. You can place it on beats like: 00:22:342 - 00:27:587 – Your choice though.
8. Remember to raise the volume quite a bit so that the hitsounds can be heard.

If you have any questions about this mod or don’t understand something, feel free to message me in-game.

Cagrux wrote:

Hi from my queue

MrDorian's Normal

1. Many blankets could be improved
2. 00:01:352 (1) - Would recommend flipping this vertically. Flow is not so good with that one
3. 00:03:319 (2,3) - Fix overlap
4. 00:06:597 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:11:843 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:17:745 (2,1) - This pattern is kinda confusing for beginners because some of them might click the sliderend instead
7. 00:26:112 (4,1) - I think you could make this look neater. Would move 00:26:276 (1) - down because overlap looks a bit weird
8. 00:28:899 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern is hard to read for beginners too as there is an array of notes and you made some of them overlap and go back near to its starting position(hope you can understand what I'm saying lol)
9. 00:41:358 (3) - Move this up a bit

Hard

1. 00:34:145 (1,2,3) - Try spacing them consistently

feex'd!

Insane

1. 00:01:352 (1,2,3) - Space them consistently feex'd!
2. 00:11:843 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
3. 00:12:499 (3,4,1) - Why is the spacing so different? coz Billy Herrington starts talking here
4. 00:17:745 (3,1) - Stack Stacked!
5. 00:19:712 (1) - Small curve at the end looks kinda weird reworked slider
6. 00:35:456 (1,3,1) - This overlap is very confusing to play. Please fix tried something with that
7. 00:42:669 (6) - Remove NC

I don't think so :/

Aniki

1. 00:23:653 (6) - NC Thanks!
2. 00:41:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Changing 'lines' with three notes in each 'lines' feels awkward to play. Recommend changing to regular stream

streamed!

And that's all!
Hope this helps in any way and gl for ranked!
btw I don't know if you already knew this but the japanese writing doesn't really translate to 'International Wrestling Festival'. It's something that's.... kinda weird Maybe, I just rewrote symbols from background image :^)

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Hi! From My Queue!

Easyi

[General]
lol
[Modding Itself]
00:35:456 (1,2) - These don't look necessary. I think I'll left them

Maakkeli wrote:

hei

why do you need that second red point? the bpm doesn't change and the time signature doesn't change bpm changes by a ~6 offset

xvoirsahgah's really gay diff
why would you put your name in the diff too? just name it gay bar asd ok, finally changed to Gay Bar
get that ar9.6 outta here ---> ar9.3 feels much better not sure
dis od is too damn high you're not mapping some 220 bpm 6 star streams here I think that it fit, for a hardest diff
00:05:286 (1,7) - imo these would emphasize better as circles done!
00:10:532 (1,7) - ^ done!
00:19:712 (1,3) - it's only gay if they touch and now it's slightly gay now slightly gay
00:33:407 (8,1) - these god damn streamjumps make the map feel soooo damn forced. i don't even understand why you would map streams here nerfed, mapped to vocals somehow
i think the kiai could use a higher sv used 1.25x
get rid of those cs6 streamjumps nerfed

aniki is gay
ar9.2 or sumthing pls 9,3
dis od is too damn high lowered to 8,6
00:05:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you hitsounded these differently here. that's like really inconsistent. also those 1/2 sliders ---> circles fixed
00:10:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ehhhh... you should know what i mean yes
00:12:335 (2,5) - gay fixed
00:17:909 (4,1) - ^ fixed
higher sv for kiai Done

exträ
ar9 would work here made it ar9.1
00:03:155 (2,4) - gay fixd
00:06:597 (1,3) - stack (3) sliderend to (1) fixd
00:07:909 (1) - ctrl+g? fixd
00:14:138 (6) - change to two circles i just can't get it to work lol
00:15:286 (4) - you just decided to end this slider on a sound fixd
00:36:768 (1) - make this match 00:36:112 (3) - slidershape fixd
higher sv for kiai asd fixd

hmmm... idk it feels like i have a lot to say but don't know the way to say it. you definitely have the potential to rank this but stop forcing difficulty with streamjumps that aren't supported by the song, fix your blankets and try to get rid of some bad overlaps (too lazy to point out these you can find them yourself). Cleaning up your style will make this definitely look and maybe even play better. You definitely know what flows and what doesn't

Good luck with the set!

Cheesecake wrote:

Hi, from modding queue

[Aniki]

00:02:007 (3) - I would move this to X:234 Y:185, then it's less spacing than the second pattern and it feels more like the map is winding up at the beginning. done
00:05:614 (2) - Either move this so that it's underneath the slider head of 00:04:794 (3) - or so that it blankets that slider tried to blanket it
00:06:024 (5,6,1) - This overlap is hmmmm actually I changed this pattern before your mod so lol
00:06:270 (7,2) - ^
00:07:417 (4,2) - ^
00:09:220 (1) - Move the red anchor point to X:397 Y:62 such that it is the exact middle of the slider, it looks a little messy as it is right now because it's slightly off done!
00:12:335 (2,5) - Overlap done
00:13:155 (1,3) - Space these a liiiittle bit more so that the hitcircle borders aren't overlapping done
00:18:401 (1,3) - Overlap done before
00:19:712 (1) - ^ Also, this slider is pretty overdone IMO, something simpler like in Gay Bar would be better changed, i can't into slider art :/
00:19:712 (1,3) - More ugly overlaps with the same slider aaaaaaa i think it's not longer revelant
00:19:712 (1,1) - I'm hoping you change that slider anyway but this spacing is too little when everything else is so spaced
00:22:341 (1,4) - Veeery slight overlap done
00:23:653 (1,5,6,7) - Overlap done
00:25:784 (6) - Move to X:77 Y:123 so that it blankets the triplet done
00:28:407 (4) - Move a tiny bit over to the right so that it's completely underneath the slider moved!
00:28:243 (3,1) - Ugly overlap
00:28:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is an acceptable form of overlap since it's an expanding triangle (don't change)
00:30:866 (5,1) - Aaaand back to bad overlaps
00:35:456 (1,2,1,2,1) - ^
fixed these overlaps


[XVoIR's Gay Bar]

Shouldn't this just be called "Gay Bar"? XVoIR is you so you don't need to make it look like a guest difficulty. Changed, rip my own gay bar

00:06:597 (1,3) - Space these a bit further apart so that the borders aren't so close, where everything else in the map is so spaced, this looks really cramped moved (1) a bit to up
00:19:712 (1,3) - ^ not sure if still revelant
00:21:679 (6,7) - Make these sliders identical done
00:23:325 (6,2) - Bad overlap Fixed
00:29:063 (2,2) - Same thing with spacing as before tried to space them
00:30:538 (2,5) - ^ tried to space them
00:31:522 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - Make the quintet catch onto something on the slider to make this overlap better now merged into slider start
00:35:784 (2,2) - Make these two have the same spacing between them as 00:35:456 (1,1) - , it looks visually better that way https://ask.fm/sukiNathan/answers/133756425236 done!
00:36:768 (1,1) - Hitori Tori - Cramped again (yambabom remix) I don't get it :/
00:42:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - If you're trying to blanket this, turn the AR to 0 and try again so you can see it better thanks for suggestion! jeez, mine approach circles looks horrible

I looked at Extra and Insane as well but they both had the same issues that I've mentioned in these two will clean up all diffs soon :^)


[MrDorian's Normal]

Oh my this is all one big overlap, try and space everything more

00:06:597 (1,2) - Also try to avoid these kinds of overlap, it happens several times throughout the map

[estellia-'s Easy]

00:07:909 (3,1) - This blanket is pretty ugly, and this diff is low enough AR for it to stand out to people
00:21:024 (1) - Move the second to last node down a bit so that the sliderborder of this slider is equidistant to the heads of (1) and (2)


Good luck

1. Many blankets could be improved
2. 00:01:352 (1) - Would recommend flipping this vertically. Flow is not so good with that one wow thanks
3. 00:03:319 (2,3) - Fix overlap
4. 00:06:597 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:11:843 (1,2) - ^ fixed?
6. 00:17:745 (2,1) - This pattern is kinda confusing for beginners because some of them might click the sliderend instead ^
7. 00:26:112 (4,1) - I think you could make this look neater. Would move 00:26:276 (1) - down because overlap looks a bit weird ^
8. 00:28:899 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern is hard to read for beginners too as there is an array of notes and you made some of them overlap and go back near to its starting position(hope you can understand what I'm saying lol) wow, i think i understood
9. 00:41:358 (3) - Move this up a bit k

Tatsumaki wrote:

bless you for making this

Reana wrote:

[General]
I have no idea why did you finished kiai at 00:35:456 - . I strongly recommend to delete kiai or make it longer.~made it longer

[Extra]
00:02:007 (4) - more rounder feex'd

[Gay bar]
00:03:155 (2,3) - distance is too large. compare with 00:12:827 (4,1) - . fixed, thanks!
00:14:138 (1) - delete NC
00:14:466 (2) - NC
00:29:391 (1) - delete NC
00:32:178 (1) - ^
00:37:423 - ^
00:41:194 - how about this?

everything is fixed

short modding

WISPG_G wrote:

hi \o, mod is here ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

Normal

Dont like patterns of all map looks weird =(

Hard

00:19:712 (1) - make this slider more creative
00:27:587 (1) - move a bit end of slider for fix blanket Done!

Aniki

00:05:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - random spacing? Fixed somehow
00:37:915 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - dont like this flow seems random Tried to work with this

Gay Bar

00:19:712 (1) - in all diffs this slider looks boring, try make it more creative please I can't into slider art

Meh, cant find anything here for mod sorry, i did what i can =( good luck
P.S. Dat crazy song and more crazy map

TitaN7 wrote:

From my queue o/

Hard

00:10:450 (2) - Remove this hitcircle, it does not work well here. done

00:40:374 (1,2) - Put these two aside, do not pile up it with the slider. done, will work on this tho

00:42:259 (2) - I suggest you to remove this hitcicle. This stack it is a headache for this diff here. done

Insane

00:05:778 (4,5) - Give some fluency to this part putting sliders, and remove that hitcircles, try this http://puu.sh/mPnbl/c84cb7e223.jpg ^

00:11:269 (6,7) - I Suggest that you should eliminate these last three hitcircles and should put a slider with reverse. Remember that this is a diff with 4,3* only, = http://puu.sh/mPsgT/8735d12389.jpg ^

00:19:220 (4) - More fluidity to this, test giving reverse to this slider and put it in this way http://puu.sh/mPo6z/81d80d76a2.jpg ^

00:36:440 (4) - A NC works better than a followarrow here ^

00:36:768 (1) - Remove NC, then NC 00:38:571 (1) ^

pay attention to this part..

00:37:915 (6) - NC ^

00:38:079 (1) - Remove NC ^

00:38:571 (5) - Stack this with the following hit circle ^

00:38:735 (1) - Remove NC ^

00:38:899 (7) - NC ^

= http://puu.sh/mPrx3/53150168b7.jpg


Extra

00:07:581 (2) - Bend this and make a good pattern, like this = http://puu.sh/mPq2g/ac4a58844e.jpg ^

00:15:778 (1) - Bend this, improve flow. also done

00:21:679 (3) - ^ ...i suggest = http://puu.sh/mPqsW/4b7ea4926a.jpg also done

00:29:882 (1) - Bend this. aaaand here done!

Done. Good luck.

WISPG_G wrote:

hi \o, mod is here ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

Normal

Dont like patterns of all map looks weird =(