arnoldusj wrote:

Aniki
00:05:286 (1,5,6) - the distance is not appropriate
00:16:433 (3,1) - equated the distance
The only course I post

XxSeonxX wrote:

Hello, from my queue

Insane
00:13:155 (1,2) - make these sliders similar Done!
00:37:833 - putting a slider here until 00:37:915 is better since there's 2 beats at those 2 timing I'm not sure how would it work

Hard
00:06:597 (1,1) - copy paste these sliders done!
00:22:007 (4,1) - gap between these are quite big I think it's fine
00:28:899 (1,2) - flow between these 2 are bad
00:34:637 (2,3) - ^
reworked these fragments!

MrDorian's Normal
00:22:342 (1,2) - I don't think having 2 short sliders here are good since there's no beat for a reason to have 2 sliders without these sliders sounds awfully, please
00:27:587 (1,2,3) - same reason as above ^
00:32:833 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:41:194 (2,3) - I don't really want to comment on blankets but there are way off it isn't a blanket pls

As stated in my queue, I can't mod anything higher than Insane, good luck

Flanchan wrote:

Hi! from queue.

As you asked Gay Bar, Aniki, Extra and Easy

Gay Bar

00:11:270 (5,6) - Stack these on the end of 00:10:532 (1) ? Of course!
00:13:647 (4,2) - Stack these? Yes!
00:19:712 (1) - ^ ^
00:27:587 (1) - Is NC necessary here? Of course not!
00:29:882 (1) - ^ sure!
00:32:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make the jumps between the streams the same distance apart? Used 2,6x DS!
00:35:374 (8,1) - Maybe move the slider closer to 00:35:374 (8), this jump seems really large compared to the others before it I would, but I don't know how to place it right :<

Aniki

00:05:286 (1,5,6) - Stack these? Aren't these stacked?
00:34:801 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why is this stream different to the others? It looks cool, at least for me :<
00:41:685 (7,5) - Stack these? Done!

Extra

00:06:106 (7,2) - Stack these? Of course!
00:21:515 (1) - Remove NC? Yes!
00:28:571 (5,3) - Stack these? Done!
00:28:899 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a perfect square How? ._.
00:36:112 (3,1) - Stack these Done!

Easy

00:36:112 (2) - This seems a little lopsided, maybe try and centre the red point more? "Denied"

GL on getting ranked!

-Nya- wrote:

Take note that this hitsound mod is based only on your Insane and that these hitsound suggestions are my own and that some modders may not agree.

1. Change default to soft instead (Normal sounds too loud and chaotic to me.) but in kiai you can use Normal again since the kiai is louder.
2. Use this http://puu.sh/mqr3a/bfe5227f83.wav on these beats: 00:01:352 - 00:02:007 - 00:02:663 - 00:03:319 - 00:03:974 - 00:04:630 – etc. Remember that you have to be consistent so continue with this rhythm.
3. 00:05:532 – and 00:05:614 – and 00:05:778 – and 00:05:860 – and 00:06:024 – and 00:06:106 – and 00:06:270 – and 00:06:433 – For these beats you can use the default drum. Just change sampleset and additions to “drum”.
   
   Picture

   
4. 00:10:696 - 00:10:862 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –Follow the same hitsound suggestions as above. (The drum)
5. 00:17:089 - 00:18:401 - 00:19:712 - 00:21:024 – For these louder beats, you can use this: http://puu.sh/mqDw9/faa651c6fd.wav
6. Since the kiai is much louder, you can use this: http://puu.sh/mqDz1/652a43529b.wav on beats like: 00:22:997 - 00:23:653 - 00:23:981 - 00:24:309 - 00:24:964 – etc. You just have to listen where the strong beats are in the kiai. You don’t have to use this hitsound for the kiai only. You can also place it on beats that you feel is quite loud.
7. Finishes is also very nice. You can place it on beats like: 00:22:342 - 00:27:587 – Your choice though.
8. Remember to raise the volume quite a bit so that the hitsounds can be heard.

If you have any questions about this mod or don’t understand something, feel free to message me in-game.

Cagrux wrote:

Hi from my queue

MrDorian's Normal

1. Many blankets could be improved
2. 00:01:352 (1) - Would recommend flipping this vertically. Flow is not so good with that one
3. 00:03:319 (2,3) - Fix overlap
4. 00:06:597 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:11:843 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:17:745 (2,1) - This pattern is kinda confusing for beginners because some of them might click the sliderend instead
7. 00:26:112 (4,1) - I think you could make this look neater. Would move 00:26:276 (1) - down because overlap looks a bit weird
8. 00:28:899 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern is hard to read for beginners too as there is an array of notes and you made some of them overlap and go back near to its starting position(hope you can understand what I'm saying lol)
9. 00:41:358 (3) - Move this up a bit

Hard

1. 00:34:145 (1,2,3) - Try spacing them consistently

feex'd!

Insane

1. 00:01:352 (1,2,3) - Space them consistently feex'd!
2. 00:11:843 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
3. 00:12:499 (3,4,1) - Why is the spacing so different? coz Billy Herrington starts talking here
4. 00:17:745 (3,1) - Stack Stacked!
5. 00:19:712 (1) - Small curve at the end looks kinda weird reworked slider
6. 00:35:456 (1,3,1) - This overlap is very confusing to play. Please fix tried something with that
7. 00:42:669 (6) - Remove NC

I don't think so :/

Aniki

1. 00:23:653 (6) - NC Thanks!
2. 00:41:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Changing 'lines' with three notes in each 'lines' feels awkward to play. Recommend changing to regular stream

streamed!

And that's all!
Hope this helps in any way and gl for ranked!
btw I don't know if you already knew this but the japanese writing doesn't really translate to 'International Wrestling Festival'. It's something that's.... kinda weird Maybe, I just rewrote symbols from background image :^)

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Hi! From My Queue!

Easyi

[General]
lol
[Modding Itself]
00:35:456 (1,2) - These don't look necessary. I think I'll left them

Maakkeli wrote:

hei

why do you need that second red point? the bpm doesn't change and the time signature doesn't change bpm changes by a ~6 offset

xvoirsahgah's really gay diff
why would you put your name in the diff too? just name it gay bar asd ok, finally changed to Gay Bar
get that ar9.6 outta here ---> ar9.3 feels much better not sure
dis od is too damn high you're not mapping some 220 bpm 6 star streams here I think that it fit, for a hardest diff
00:05:286 (1,7) - imo these would emphasize better as circles done!
00:10:532 (1,7) - ^ done!
00:19:712 (1,3) - it's only gay if they touch and now it's slightly gay now slightly gay
00:33:407 (8,1) - these god damn streamjumps make the map feel soooo damn forced. i don't even understand why you would map streams here nerfed, mapped to vocals somehow
i think the kiai could use a higher sv used 1.25x
get rid of those cs6 streamjumps nerfed

aniki is gay
ar9.2 or sumthing pls 9,3
dis od is too damn high lowered to 8,6
00:05:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you hitsounded these differently here. that's like really inconsistent. also those 1/2 sliders ---> circles fixed
00:10:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ehhhh... you should know what i mean yes
00:12:335 (2,5) - gay fixed
00:17:909 (4,1) - ^ fixed
higher sv for kiai Done

exträ
ar9 would work here made it ar9.1
00:03:155 (2,4) - gay fixd
00:06:597 (1,3) - stack (3) sliderend to (1) fixd
00:07:909 (1) - ctrl+g? fixd
00:14:138 (6) - change to two circles i just can't get it to work lol
00:15:286 (4) - you just decided to end this slider on a sound fixd
00:36:768 (1) - make this match 00:36:112 (3) - slidershape fixd
higher sv for kiai asd fixd

hmmm... idk it feels like i have a lot to say but don't know the way to say it. you definitely have the potential to rank this but stop forcing difficulty with streamjumps that aren't supported by the song, fix your blankets and try to get rid of some bad overlaps (too lazy to point out these you can find them yourself). Cleaning up your style will make this definitely look and maybe even play better. You definitely know what flows and what doesn't

Good luck with the set!

Cheesecake wrote:

Hi, from modding queue

[Aniki]

00:02:007 (3) - I would move this to X:234 Y:185, then it's less spacing than the second pattern and it feels more like the map is winding up at the beginning. done
00:05:614 (2) - Either move this so that it's underneath the slider head of 00:04:794 (3) - or so that it blankets that slider tried to blanket it
00:06:024 (5,6,1) - This overlap is hmmmm actually I changed this pattern before your mod so lol
00:06:270 (7,2) - ^
00:07:417 (4,2) - ^
00:09:220 (1) - Move the red anchor point to X:397 Y:62 such that it is the exact middle of the slider, it looks a little messy as it is right now because it's slightly off done!
00:12:335 (2,5) - Overlap done
00:13:155 (1,3) - Space these a liiiittle bit more so that the hitcircle borders aren't overlapping done
00:18:401 (1,3) - Overlap done before
00:19:712 (1) - ^ Also, this slider is pretty overdone IMO, something simpler like in Gay Bar would be better changed, i can't into slider art :/
00:19:712 (1,3) - More ugly overlaps with the same slider aaaaaaa i think it's not longer revelant
00:19:712 (1,1) - I'm hoping you change that slider anyway but this spacing is too little when everything else is so spaced
00:22:341 (1,4) - Veeery slight overlap done
00:23:653 (1,5,6,7) - Overlap done
00:25:784 (6) - Move to X:77 Y:123 so that it blankets the triplet done
00:28:407 (4) - Move a tiny bit over to the right so that it's completely underneath the slider moved!
00:28:243 (3,1) - Ugly overlap
00:28:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is an acceptable form of overlap since it's an expanding triangle (don't change)
00:30:866 (5,1) - Aaaand back to bad overlaps
00:35:456 (1,2,1,2,1) - ^
fixed these overlaps


[XVoIR's Gay Bar]

Shouldn't this just be called "Gay Bar"? XVoIR is you so you don't need to make it look like a guest difficulty. Changed, rip my own gay bar

00:06:597 (1,3) - Space these a bit further apart so that the borders aren't so close, where everything else in the map is so spaced, this looks really cramped moved (1) a bit to up
00:19:712 (1,3) - ^ not sure if still revelant
00:21:679 (6,7) - Make these sliders identical done
00:23:325 (6,2) - Bad overlap Fixed
00:29:063 (2,2) - Same thing with spacing as before tried to space them
00:30:538 (2,5) - ^ tried to space them
00:31:522 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - Make the quintet catch onto something on the slider to make this overlap better now merged into slider start
00:35:784 (2,2) - Make these two have the same spacing between them as 00:35:456 (1,1) - , it looks visually better that way https://ask.fm/sukiNathan/answers/133756425236 done!
00:36:768 (1,1) - Hitori Tori - Cramped again (yambabom remix) I don't get it :/
00:42:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - If you're trying to blanket this, turn the AR to 0 and try again so you can see it better thanks for suggestion! jeez, mine approach circles looks horrible

I looked at Extra and Insane as well but they both had the same issues that I've mentioned in these two will clean up all diffs soon :^)


[MrDorian's Normal]

Oh my this is all one big overlap, try and space everything more

00:06:597 (1,2) - Also try to avoid these kinds of overlap, it happens several times throughout the map

[estellia-'s Easy]

00:07:909 (3,1) - This blanket is pretty ugly, and this diff is low enough AR for it to stand out to people
00:21:024 (1) - Move the second to last node down a bit so that the sliderborder of this slider is equidistant to the heads of (1) and (2)


Good luck

1. Many blankets could be improved
2. 00:01:352 (1) - Would recommend flipping this vertically. Flow is not so good with that one wow thanks
3. 00:03:319 (2,3) - Fix overlap
4. 00:06:597 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:11:843 (1,2) - ^ fixed?
6. 00:17:745 (2,1) - This pattern is kinda confusing for beginners because some of them might click the sliderend instead ^
7. 00:26:112 (4,1) - I think you could make this look neater. Would move 00:26:276 (1) - down because overlap looks a bit weird ^
8. 00:28:899 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern is hard to read for beginners too as there is an array of notes and you made some of them overlap and go back near to its starting position(hope you can understand what I'm saying lol) wow, i think i understood
9. 00:41:358 (3) - Move this up a bit k

Tatsumaki wrote:

bless you for making this

Reana wrote:

[General]
I have no idea why did you finished kiai at 00:35:456 - . I strongly recommend to delete kiai or make it longer.~made it longer

[Extra]
00:02:007 (4) - more rounder feex'd

[Gay bar]
00:03:155 (2,3) - distance is too large. compare with 00:12:827 (4,1) - . fixed, thanks!
00:14:138 (1) - delete NC
00:14:466 (2) - NC
00:29:391 (1) - delete NC
00:32:178 (1) - ^
00:37:423 - ^
00:41:194 - how about this?

everything is fixed

short modding

WISPG_G wrote:

hi \o, mod is here ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

Normal

Dont like patterns of all map looks weird =(

Hard

00:19:712 (1) - make this slider more creative
00:27:587 (1) - move a bit end of slider for fix blanket Done!

Aniki

00:05:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - random spacing? Fixed somehow
00:37:915 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - dont like this flow seems random Tried to work with this

Gay Bar

00:19:712 (1) - in all diffs this slider looks boring, try make it more creative please I can't into slider art

Meh, cant find anything here for mod sorry, i did what i can =( good luck
P.S. Dat crazy song and more crazy map

TitaN7 wrote:

From my queue o/

Hard

00:10:450 (2) - Remove this hitcircle, it does not work well here. done

00:40:374 (1,2) - Put these two aside, do not pile up it with the slider. done, will work on this tho

00:42:259 (2) - I suggest you to remove this hitcicle. This stack it is a headache for this diff here. done

Insane

00:05:778 (4,5) - Give some fluency to this part putting sliders, and remove that hitcircles, try this http://puu.sh/mPnbl/c84cb7e223.jpg ^

00:11:269 (6,7) - I Suggest that you should eliminate these last three hitcircles and should put a slider with reverse. Remember that this is a diff with 4,3* only, = http://puu.sh/mPsgT/8735d12389.jpg ^

00:19:220 (4) - More fluidity to this, test giving reverse to this slider and put it in this way http://puu.sh/mPo6z/81d80d76a2.jpg ^

00:36:440 (4) - A NC works better than a followarrow here ^

00:36:768 (1) - Remove NC, then NC 00:38:571 (1) ^

pay attention to this part..

00:37:915 (6) - NC ^

00:38:079 (1) - Remove NC ^

00:38:571 (5) - Stack this with the following hit circle ^

00:38:735 (1) - Remove NC ^

00:38:899 (7) - NC ^

= http://puu.sh/mPrx3/53150168b7.jpg


Extra

00:07:581 (2) - Bend this and make a good pattern, like this = http://puu.sh/mPq2g/ac4a58844e.jpg ^

00:15:778 (1) - Bend this, improve flow. also done

00:21:679 (3) - ^ ...i suggest = http://puu.sh/mPqsW/4b7ea4926a.jpg also done

00:29:882 (1) - Bend this. aaaand here done!

Done. Good luck.

WISPG_G wrote:

hi \o, mod is here ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

Normal

Dont like patterns of all map looks weird =(

Chibi Maruko wrote:

Hi. From my queue

Extra

1. 00:27:423 (6,7,1) - Maybe stack triple is fine but it is not important for u O.o coz u like straight triple let's try this!
2. 00:36:112 (3) - NC here fixed

Aniki

1. 00:02:007 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4453479 kinda look slanting. fix it. mb fixed
2. 00:14:958 (4) - Delete this circle and move next slider to red tick coz mute end idk how should it work D:
3. 00:16:761 (5) - NC because u should follow highest diff fixed
4. 00:38:079 (8) - NC here because big white tick is most important to make a new nc fixed
5. 00:40:374 (1) - Delete NC and move new NC at 00:40:702 (2) coz look at above my comment fixed

Gay Bar fuk this name lol as you wish :^)

1. 00:14:138 (1) - Why new combo. It is confusing when mapper see this fixed
2. 00:19:712 (1) The overlap doesn't look nice dude. Blanket or sliderwave or something tried moving a bit to up
3. 00:21:024 (2,3,4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4453470 maybe all circle kinda look weird slanting. fix it. fixed. maybe, idk
4. 00:32:178 (5) - Should NC here fixed
5. 00:43:325 (1) - Please make this circle too close at stream because player can't aim and miss LOL. fix if u want (bad english D:) actually it's not that hard, I'll leave this

Ok, gl with ur map \:D/
sorry /me run away

1. 00:43:325 (1) - whats up with the spacing of this note? its not conisistent with the rest - if this is intentional then at least make it more spaced so its noticeable.

Reditum wrote:

can't believe I'm modding a fucking map submitted in december in a mod queue that's meant for old maps hehe

Overall:
If there's a video I'd really like to have it in here. A lot of songs like this are no fun without an accompanying video. I'll try to make it work, I tried to do it earlier, but after 2 hours of fking with video I gave up screw this nothing works idk what's wrong

Gay:
fuck is this irreversible or
00:32:833 - It would be extra cool to have whistles or something that match up with the melody. whistles are already taken by some other hitsounds lol
yeah your circle size also sucks and I wish you'd change it then it won't be special :/

Aniki:
00:16:761 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this is so frighteningly similar to Gay Bar I'm scared. Not accusing you of copy-pasting between diffs but it's so similar that I'm just like "am I in the wrnog dif" actually it's not copied, it just happened to be similiar, somehow
00:32:833 - It would be extra cool to have whistles or something that match up with the melody. same as above
A lot more than the part that I pointed out before seem really similar to Gay Bar. It's a little scary actually. I'd hope that if there are two separate diffs, that I'm getting 2 separate interpretations of the song same as above

Extra:
fine

Insane:
ya

Hard:
00:03:974 (1) - Would prefer this to curve more. Right now it's super narrow and doesn't look that nice

fixed

Normal:
00:01:352 (1) - 2 things. One, you should flip (1) vertically so it goes straight into 2. Also, overlapping sliderheads generally don't look that nice.
00:02:335 (3) - The hardest thing is when it's literally like, it's only barely touching. It's nothing that a +0.1 in the spacing or sliderspeed can't fix. Apply to all similar patterns.

easy:
nice

So yeah it's mostly good but normal is just like mega ugly so fix that pls

NucleaRaven wrote:

Hi from my queue o/

[Extra]

1. 00:43:325 (1) - whats up with the spacing of this note? its not conisistent with the rest - if this is intentional then at least make it more spaced so its noticeable. it was spaced af, but nerfed it, I guess too much. Moved it further

thats literally the only thing i was iffy about out of every diff so well done .
GL!

No kds for this as it would get denied.

Namki wrote:

yo hOI

[General]
Delete or make the combo4 more orange. imo looks better
And maybe combo3 a little brighter. fixed both

[Easy]
00:40:046 (4) - I really don't like this whistle, maybe do clap as you did 00:29:882 (4) - here. since i'm working on hitsounds, fixed!
Great diff.

[Normal]
00:01:352 (1,2) - these overlaps aren't okay in normal.
I think you need to increase the spacing and do the rhythm easier.
00:24:964 (1,2,3,4,1) - a lot of 1/2.
00:27:587 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - same here.
This diff looks like advanced with small spacing imo.

[Hard]
00:09:876 (2,1) - a random jump. fixed
00:21:351 (2,3) - do spacing between them 1.9x for better consistency. done
00:22:007 (4,1) - really big jump. Works as "introduction" to kiai
00:30:210 (2,3) - DS this thing. done
00:31:522 (4,5,6) - why did you use 1.3x here, it's 1.2x for the kiai part. fixed
00:35:456 (1,2,3) - random spacing changes. fixed
Watch over your spacing.

Good luck~

Lumin wrote:

Somekind of Nmod from queue

I only modded diffs that I find more than one problem

Aniki

00:05:450 (2,6,7,1) - Blanket? done!
00:16:597 (4,2) - stack? done!
00:21:024 (1,4) - Overlap, avoid or stack stacked
00:24:472 (5,1) - overlap don't want to stack this, so spaced it more
00:30:210 (2) - Should end at white spike, not blue it was slider velocity speed problem, fixed
00:34:637 (7,1) - Maybe a little too big jump I'd say compared with others, it's not that big

Gay Bar

00:05:778 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe turn these to sliders? I prefer them as doubles
00:11:024 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:07:253 (3) - this to x:288 y:328, looks better with 00:07:909 (1) - moved!
00:11:270 (6,7,1) - Avoidable overlap moved!
00:22:997 (5) - x:224 y:240 moved!
00:26:932 (5) - NC? Not sure tho
00:33:407 (8,1) - Horrible jump even though there isn't blank space in stream, same thing for rest of stream jumps idk what to do here, but fixed this!
00:36:112 (1,1) - disturbing overlap moved!

Hope this helps

Hello- wrote:

♂Hi man♂
My modding is not good.. sorry D:

[General]
hitsound so big. kiai~(setted N:C2) some reduce sound 75>60? ii don't think so :/

[Insane]
00:02:007 (3) - 1.4? if you ok, 200/288
00:04:958 (4) - some cunfuse suddeny high-jump imo. how about some reduce DS? somehow nerfed
00:10:450 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - try change same before's rhythm? (00:05:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) i think better before rhythm! done!
00:18:401 (1,2,3,4) - (all grab) stack (1) slider 00:17:909 - ? not sure what to do tho
00:19:220 (4) - you can makes spacing here (00:19:548 - ). looks like 00:18:073 (4) - off repeat? seems better to rhythm. cuz 00:19:548 - no hear sounds. it flows better imo
00:32:833 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - most difficult to insane diff. hmm.. maybe seems bad spread.. i compared 00:22:342 - and here... uhh, well? try change more easier? Nah, I want to leave this stream as it is
00:36:440 (2) - reduce 1/2 slider. for good flow to next slider. not sure tho
00:38:079 (3) - set DS same before circles? (0.5) fixed!

[Hard]
00:01:843 (2) - set DS 1.4? i think more good flow. fixed, i don't know why I left it this way, but nice catch1
00:11:188 - hmmm here... set Hard drum-clap/insane drum-whistle/extra only drum(sampleset) no set hitsound. worked with this
00:21:351 (2) - NC done
00:22:342 (1) - try blanket 00:21:679 (3) - body? done
00:27:096 (4,1) - (all grab) maybe set DS 1.2 more good(maybe looks like 00:33:653 (4,1) - ?). if you ok, move 272/176?
00:29:227 (2) - same ^
00:32:423 (2) - some difficult this pattern (3 stream) in hard. you can delete it.
00:40:374 (1) - no need NC
actually i'm to lazy to note every thing but changed Hard somehow
Good♂Luck!

Cooldue7 wrote:

Wtf is this song haha From my queue

estellia-'s Easy

00:01:352 (1,2) - really weird
00:03:647 (4,1) - ^
00:07:909 (3,1) - blanket

MrDorian's Normal

00:05:286 (2,3) - really awkward, its so cramped
00:06:597 (1,2) - overlap
00:10:204 (3,1) - really cramped
00:11:843 (1,2) - awkward overlap
00:16:761 (3,1) - ^
00:41:194 (2,3) - cramped
Overall imo the map seems really cramped even for a normal :/ i would suggest remapping some parts

tbh nie za bardzo wiem co się z nim dzieje :v

Hard

00:01:352 (1,2) - pretty random imo try to blanket that zrobion

Insane

00:03:155 (2,1) - overlap
00:07:253 (3,1) - ^
nie wiem czy warto tu stackować, psuje mi się wtedy trochę spacing

Extra

00:02:007 (4,1) - blanket maybe zrobion
00:02:499 (6,3) - awkward overlap naprawione
00:27:013 (2,2) - ^naprawione

Aniki

00:11:515 (7,2) - overlap poprawione
00:22:833 (3,1) - ^ zestackowałem (1) i (4) a (3) dałem w dól lekko

Gay Bar

man nerf the OD to like 8-7 since its a cs 6 :/and the HP to 6 (i know why its 6.9 but cmon dude its a gay bar :3) no ale m e m y, cs6ar9.6od9hp6.9
00:12:335 (2,1) - kinda awkward overlap zestackowane
00:13:155 (1,6) - ^ jak wyżej
00:14:138 (6,2) - ^ just makes your map look untidy imo poprawione
00:17:745 (3,1) - ^ poprawione!
00:38:899 (6) - x:200 y:64 ruszone!

Good luck man hope i helped (potem sie skaplem ze Polak haha jak bys chcial tego moda po polsku to napisz chetnie przemienie )

monstrata wrote:

NC (New Combo) Pattern Issues

This is a general issue. Once you've mastered how to do NC's, you'll know them for life!
NC's should be placed on the downbeat because that is the start of a new measure in a song. Lets look at the timeline: The large white ticks are the downbeats. Always try to have a New combo there. For easier difficulties, you may choose to NC every second downbeat, but make sure your pattern is consistent! If you NC every downbeat, don't randomly switch to every two downbeats. Only do so if the music shifts (for example, during a calm section or a slow-down).



Essentially, you want every downbeat to be the beginning of a New Combo, as such:



Another reason to NC may be because you are using a different slider-velocity. NC'ing the slider gives the player a better visual cue that the slider may be faster, or slower, and because of your NC, they will have more time to prepare.

mulraf wrote:

Hoy from my queue! o/

General:
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- That bg looks very bright. You might want to consider just turning the brightness down a little. (If you want me to i can also do that) if you want, then feel free :^)
- There's a guideline that suggests putting at least 1 spinner into every difficulty to have a better spread in the scoreboard. just a guideline, not a rule though. but give it a thought. i don't think it would fit tho

Easy:
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- This technically isn't considered easy 1,51* > 1,5* -> not easy just being picky here tho shhh
- 00:42:014 (1) - remove nc? (different to the rest of your scheme and song doesn't change)

Hard:
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- 00:10:532 (2) - NC here instead of the hitcircle before moved
- 00:30:210 (2) - ^ ^
- 00:31:522 (4) - NC ^
- 00:32:341 (1) - Remove NC ^
- 00:32:833 (1) - NC done
(not trying to be a NC nazi here. but since you used that pattern the whole rest of the song i think you should just keep NC'ing every downbeat)
- 00:40:374 (2,3,1) - I recommend a bigger spacing here (just a little bit) since it's also what you used before at a similar part fixed somehow

Insane:
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- 00:11:024 (3,4) - Short slider instead of double as well : ? I think it works fine now
- 00:26:932 (3) - NC? it is NC'd
- 00:30:210 (2) - NC here instead of last note NC'd
- 00:32:177 (1) - Undo NC? not sure
- 00:38:899 (1) - ^ done
- 00:40:702 (2) - NC here instead of last note idk probably NCd but i don't remember
- 00:42:669 (6) - Undo NC? nah
(? = reasonable to keep it though)

oh well, i really mostly point out NC things. this is what i usually go for:

monstrata wrote:

NC (New Combo) Pattern Issues

This is a general issue. Once you've mastered how to do NC's, you'll know them for life!
NC's should be placed on the downbeat because that is the start of a new measure in a song. Lets look at the timeline: The large white ticks are the downbeats. Always try to have a New combo there. For easier difficulties, you may choose to NC every second downbeat, but make sure your pattern is consistent! If you NC every downbeat, don't randomly switch to every two downbeats. Only do so if the music shifts (for example, during a calm section or a slow-down).



Essentially, you want every downbeat to be the beginning of a New Combo, as such:



Another reason to NC may be because you are using a different slider-velocity. NC'ing the slider gives the player a better visual cue that the slider may be faster, or slower, and because of your NC, they will have more time to prepare.

of course you don't have to do it exactly like this. but sometimes it's just bugging me when you use that exact scheme for the whole song and then suddenly it switches up

other than those i also don't have anything against the extra diff and the aniki & gay bar diff are too hard for me
but for the aniki diff: 00:32:178 (1) - wow. those spaces after the streams look REALLY hard, even for a 5,43* diff. maybe that's fine for the gay bar diff but i'd recommend staying away from that in aniki. maybe some smaller jumps but those seem really intense nerfed the highest one!

well, good luck with your map! it's really nice (and weird ) so far. +the gay bar diff kinda reminded me of irre with that small cs + high slider velocity

Reditum wrote:

Normal:
00:01:352 (1) - 2 things. One, you should flip (1) vertically so it goes straight into 2. Also, overlapping sliderheads generally don't look that nice. done?
00:02:335 (3) - The hardest thing is when it's literally like, it's only barely touching. It's nothing that a +0.1 in the spacing or sliderspeed can't fix. Apply to all similar patterns. done too

Namki wrote:

[Normal]
00:01:352 (1,2) - these overlaps aren't okay in normal. why?
I think you need to increase the spacing and do the rhythm easier. increased spacing, but will leave rhythm, because it will be boring as f...
00:24:964 (1,2,3,4,1) - a lot of 1/2. won't change it, because there are sliders
00:27:587 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - same here. ^
This diff looks like advanced with small spacing imo.I can make it Normal+, but XVoiR must agree

Cooldue7 wrote:

MrDorian's Normal

00:05:286 (2,3) - really awkward, its so cramped zmieniłę
00:06:597 (1,2) - overlap naprawiłę?
00:10:204 (3,1) - really cramped zrobione
00:11:843 (1,2) - awkward overlap zrobione? w
00:16:761 (3,1) - ^ ohnoplz
00:41:194 (2,3) - cramped poprawiłę
Overall imo the map seems really cramped even for a normal :/ i would suggest remapping some parts