1. Easy (2.54 stars, 170 notes)
2. Insane (4.9 stars, 543 notes)
3. S i R i R u's Hard (4.84 stars, 450 notes)
4. Shinki's Normal (4.05 stars, 258 notes)

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

[Easy]:
00:24:469 (1) - Suggestion: Remove new combo here and add a new combo over here at 00:25:732 (2) - ?checked
00:43:416 (1) - You should probably extend this spinner by 1/1 so it'll end at 00:45:942. checked
02:14:363 (1) - Suggestion: Remove new combo here and add a new combo over here at 02:15:626 (2) - ? checked
02:33:310 (1) - You should probably extend this spinner by 1/1 to 02:35:837. checked

[Easy]'s definitely a simple one here. I think you'd be able to raise the HP Drain, Approach Rate, and Overall Difficulty by a small number of ticks( checked) without causing any trouble. That's up to you though!

[Normal]:
01:20:047 (3) - Jump intentional? checked
01:26:047 (1) - You can extend this spinner by 1/1 so it'll end at 01:27:626. checked

Nice! [Normal] seems pretty nicely developed. I'd have to say though, around the end, you seem to have no hitsounds( checked). This seems to contrast the beginning...It'd be best if you added hitsounds after the last break here. I also think you can increase the HP Drain and Overall Difficulty by a small number of ticks as well. checked

[Okamiroy's Hard]:
Hmm...This is a real interesting one here. I like your idea with the spacing and all, though inside it really feels fishy. Sometimes the spacing does indeed get inconsistent. But I don't really know if it's THAT bad, since I seemed to have gotten it myself. It might just be the map is naturally intuitive or my instincts are that good, but I'm unsure. XD

Another thing I'm pretty concerned about is the unbalanced nature of breaks. There's just the whole song with only one break, and that's 30 seconds long. ...That's a pretty long break. I guess it does make sense though, what being the solo and all, but a break that long kills some of the excitement.

Also, why is this difficulty shorter than the others? Do you think you can map all the way to the end? checked,and mostly remap....

[sumisola's insane]:
00:45:940 (1,1) - This jump is uncomfortable, nya. You have a repeat arrow slider ending at the top, so the jump is kind of awkward, sudden, and really icky. Maybe find some other way to make it sensible? checked
00:48:705 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't understand the 1/4 notes here. They seem like they're just...there. it follows the lyrics,as the vocal singing "ichi ni san" (one two three"
01:23:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Yeah, somewhat the same as above here... it follows the lyrics,as the vocal singing "ichi ni san" (one two three"
02:00:942 (2,3) - Spacing from here to here seems a little cramped, and not just because of any speed changes or anything. It just felt like that. I think you need a note in between. checked
02:35:837 (1) - Make this spinner longer (1/1 or all the way before the next note)? checked
02:43:416 (8) - New combo. checked
02:51:232 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't understand the 1/4 notes here. They seem like they're just...there. it follows the lyrics,as the vocal singing "ichi ni san" (one two three"
02:52:101 (8,9,10) - This spacing is nutty. xwx checked

Wow! You put your effort here. Pretty cool. Some parts seem totally random...I think I got a bunch of them in my mod up there. I don't really have much else to specify, but I'd like to see this much polish also be put to the easier difficulties as well! checked,It have been a hard work.....haha

The countdown doesn't fit in this difficulty. Do you mind removing it? checked

This also might be a little nazi, but what if you capitalize the i in insane? checked.....hehe

[[Angel_Beats]'s Insane]:
00:35:836 (10) - New combo. checked
00:56:047 (8) - New combo. checked
01:16:256 (5) - New combo~ checked
01:27:941 (10) - Remove this note. XD The previous note should pretty much be your ending beat. Speaking of which, because of that, checked 01:27:625 (9) - should have a Finish. checked
01:56:678 (1,1,1,1) - Ahh!~ You can't have Spinners that Auto gives less than 2000 bonus to now...Sorry. You have to fix these spinners to give at least 2000 bonus from Auto, remove some of them, or think of another creative pattern. checked

Crazy ~ I don't know what else to say too. XD

I'm a little concerned for how the breaks are placed. The players' grips might suffer! However, this is a pretty cool first map.

wmfchris wrote:

[AB's insane]
0:17:995 (1) up 1 grid checked
0:45:942 (1,2,3,4) irregular shape, (3) left 1 grid+up 1 grid, (4) left 1 grid checked
0:52:416 (2,3,6) ^, down 1 grid checked
1:40:732 (x) slider should start here, or add notes? checked
1:56:679 (1,1,1,1) spinner too short checked
2:16:416 (8,9,10) uneven spacing checked

[Insane]
1:15:942 (7,8) down 1 grid? checked
2:10:100 (1,2) right 1 grid checked

[Hard]
0:29:521 (1~8) spacing of (2,3), (4,5) and (6,7) should be the same checked
1:07:732 (1,2,3) uneven spacing checked
break: that's too long. : < checked
2:32:837 (1~5) uneven spacing checked
Points to note:
The playable length should be same as other difficulties, either same as normal or same as insane checked

[Normal] HP drain rate and OD+2 at least imo checked
0:41:363 (3) left 1 grid checked
0:45:942 (1~8) fix their spacing to ~ 1.0x? checked
1:16:574 (2) left 1 grid + up 1 or 2 grid checked
1:18:469 (5,6,1) uneven spacing checked
-The later part of the diff is mostly likely unsnapped
-hitsound? checked

[easy]fix what kirby suggest would be fine~ checked

Agreed with kirby that the break arrangement is unbalanced, try to unique them.

[Angel_Beats] wrote:

Thanks for mod this map's people...

sumisola wrote:

[Angel_Beats] wrote:

Thanks for mod this map's people...

AB我想吐槽你的英文~

S i R i R u wrote:

ehhh where is TAG ? (ﾟДﾟ)

i'm not good for MOD skill >x< dunno how to mod after good modder modded.

☆

karenying wrote:

暫時不要看啦

General
'background.jpg' 的大小是1023*768,把這個弄成1024*768
刪掉.osb 然後 full sub. checked

Easy
hitsound太少
00:15:626(1) - add finish,可以調低音量
00:19:416(4) - ^
00:21:311(1) - add whistle
00:23:837(1) - ^
01:01:100(1) - add finish,可以調低音量
01:04:890(4) - add finish
01:16:258(1,1) - 對於Easy來說,這兩個spinner太短
01:21:311(1) - add finish,可以調低音量
01:25:100(1) - 加長一倍
01:37:574(1,1,1,1) - 好多spinner...先不說spinner的長度,不斷轉手會疼的
02:05:521(1,4) - add finish
02:11:205(1) - add whistle
02:13:732(1) - ^
02:23:205(1) - add finish
02:28:258(1) - ^
02:48:469(1) - spinner太短
02:53:521(1,2) - 分開
03:03:626(3) - add finish

All checked,EZ基本remap，包括埋hitsound

吃飯,回來再看

karenying wrote:

Normal
01:37:732(1,1,1,1) - D: ...這三個轉轉吧...咋都一樣,很悶的 checked
02:12:153(1) - ugly checked
02:35:521(1) - 加長到02:38:363 checked

Hard
兩條綠線沒用,刪掉
在setup>Audio>soft>OK
00:20:679(1) - ugly
前段hitsounds不夠
hard嘅hitsound 全部重新加过.....

Insane
刪掉沒用的綠線 checked

Thanks，辛苦晒~~~

no kd this post

Ballance wrote:

star

xierbaliti wrote:

-如果你想把这图弄得更好的话 我还是建议你去多叫些modding过来. 我并没有歧视新手,不过现在让我看 我实在无法认同这是张好图,抱歉. 现在的话,我不能给泡.
说一下卡比的mod 卡比是在鼓励你 并不是说图很完美不需要改动 或许你没有意识到这点. 我本应该和卡比一样扮白脸 不过你找到了我 而且是反复找了几次 我也实在不好意思敷衍你:< 所以这些必须要说明白. 卡比提出的东西很基本 我想你应该听取他说的那些.
比如Insane的00:48:784 (2,3,4,5,6) - osu!是一个节奏游戏 不是歌词游戏,你懂的. 一般是应该以节奏为主 用歌词辅助节奏. 这样才会舒服.你也是玩家 图的好坏想必你比我更清楚.
还有一点非常重要 图里的随机性太强了 有些地方真的是不好读
现在如果是说"对"和"错" 的话 也许图并没有什么错误 不过"对"和"好"的差别是太大了 一张图 难也好 简单也好 让人打着舒服,或者很爽 那这张图就成功了 这就是为什么有的图能够让人送出10分 有的图直接甩1分的原因 如果你执意保持原样的话 我建议你去多找些人打打看 @w@ 玩家的意见也是很重要的

还有 刚起步的话学一学基本的排列 花样什么的可以等到熟练之后再去运用嘛.
节奏是很重要的 不要一味的去对歌词 这很傻. 去仔细听背景音 听音乐的节奏 先找到节奏 然后根据节奏考虑排列

最后,
做成这样对于新手来说确实不错 不要被我的话打击 这图很有潜力 又是热门歌 再改进一下的话会更好的
作为鼓励 *star*

希望在今后能看到你的进步.[/spoilerbox]

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

More things I noticed that I didn't see the first time oxo!!

[Normal]:
All the difficulties are mapped to ~3:05 except this one, where the last thirty seconds are blank. I really think this feels kind of strange and random. If you have the time to map the whole thing, I would highly suggest doing so. checked

[Insane]:
01:21:311 (3) - Consider a New Combo here? checked


[[Angel_Beats]'s Insane]:
01:27:941 (1) - Remove this beat? It'll make a nice transition into the break. checked
01:56:679 (1) - It was kind of difficult to notice this was a 2x slider. I didn't break combo, I don't know if it was from natural intuitiveness or the pattern is actually identifiable as a 2x slider, but I'm a bit concerned. Hmm...How about flipping 01:54:783 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? That'll make it so (5) is a little bit farther away to the next (1), perhaps making things at least a little less awkward or sudden. Just a suggestion. checked

You should probably remove HTT from the tags, since it's already in the Artist field. checked

Hmm...Do you think (Full ver.) is unneeded? We can always change the title to just "Gohan wa Okazu". If there's a short version, that can be simply be (TV Size). People would understand the difference. Thoughts? o: checked

As xierbaliti mentioned earlier, please set a Preview Time for all the difficulties. It should be the same area. To set a Preview Time, go to Timing > Set Current Position as Preview Time. It's the last option; you can't miss it! checked

If you're changing the Song Title, follow this procedure: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443

If you have any questions, contact me.