Crywolf - Eyes Half Closed

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take six
Test runned this and gave some places to change(through #modhelp and client), a few combos here and there. can you use this for some priority stars? IDK how ranking system works tho :[
MoonlightElegy
Hellow, here is my Mod!

Huvafen

00:47:995 (1) - I would change the Hit Sound from Normal to Soft there, it doesn´t fit in the Music there in my Opinion, untill 01:18:217 (1) - :D


I also Recommend to do an Easy Diff/Normal Diff or ask someone for an Guest Diff! :)

All in All, a Genius Map!!!! Keep the hard Work up!
take six
A. you might want to consider changing one of the combo colours. currently you have grey and, well, a different kind of grey. Its pretty difficult to notice when the combos change, at least for me.

B. 01:09:773 (7) - In general, you have some slight inconsistencies with combos. I think you should come up with a few rules to how you combo - it just feels to me that you comboed different parts of the songs differently, while the parts are pretty similar. this circle where (i think) you didnt combo, but comboed someplace else which was pretty much the same. Its also pretty late here, so i might be wrong, just mostly go through the combos that go up to 9 or 8 (or more) and think if you do them consistenly.

These are just weird places you might wanna consider

01:35:550 (7) - maybe combo this

01:55:550 (5) - Also think of comboing.

02:58:217 (8) - consider

03:05:328 (4) - same as above

03:11:995 (7) - same

03:22:439 (1) - This ones a bit weird, since it ends at the start of the next bar but starts before it, you can possibly remove the combo there and have 03:22:884 (2) - combo instead

03:47:995 (8) - consider

04:01:106 (6) - since its the same type of sliders as the combo right afterwards, consider placing the combo there instead, though it would fit a bit less with the music.

04:15:773 (7) - this should probably be the combo instead of the one right after

05:53:773 (5) - same as above.
Topic Starter
Truzon

take six wrote:

A. you might want to consider changing one of the combo colours. currently you have grey and, well, a different kind of grey. Its pretty difficult to notice when the combos change, at least for me. I will think about it

B. 01:09:773 (7) - In general, you have some slight inconsistencies with combos. I think you should come up with a few rules to how you combo - it just feels to me that you comboed different parts of the songs differently, while the parts are pretty similar. this circle where (i think) you didnt combo, but comboed someplace else which was pretty much the same. Its also pretty late here, so i might be wrong, just mostly go through the combos that go up to 9 or 8 (or more) and think if you do them consistenly.

These are just weird places you might wanna consider

01:35:550 (7) - maybe combo this I think its alright as it is

01:55:550 (5) - Also think of comboing. Done

02:58:217 (8) - consider Done

03:05:328 (4) - same as above Nah

03:11:995 (7) - same Done

03:22:439 (1) - This ones a bit weird, since it ends at the start of the next bar but starts before it, you can possibly remove the combo there and have 03:22:884 (2) - combo instead Done

03:47:995 (8) - consider Nah

04:01:106 (6) - since its the same type of sliders as the combo right afterwards, consider placing the combo there instead, though it would fit a bit less with the music. Done

04:15:773 (7) - this should probably be the combo instead of the one right after Fixed

05:53:773 (5) - same as above. Fixed
Applied pretty much all of them. Thanks for the suggestions :)
Cryptic
Heyo, saw this is #modreqs and I absolutely loved the song (also found an artist I want to try to map from)

[General]
  1. What does the diffname Huvafen mean? It seemingly has no relation to the song at all, consider changing it.
  2. AR 9.5 is a bit high, even if it does have 1/3rd 135 BPM jumps, I'd consider 9.3 or 9.4 instead.
  3. OD 8 is really low for a jump map, OD 8.5 (or be Monstrata with 8.7)
  4. HP 6 may also be a bit too low, but I wouldn't change it yet (wait for more feedback).
  5. Your Color Combos make no sense to me, specifically 5 and 8. Also, 1 may be too close to white to be rankable.
  6. You don't need the epilepsy warning, this map has no storyboard.
  7. Those kiai times may need to be connected, I'd talk to a BN about that one.


[Huvafen]
  1. 00:01:773 (1) - I'm not sure if I like blocking out this really small sweet melody with a spinner, I'd consider mapping the sounds rather than just overlaying the spinner.
  2. 00:11:106 (1) - This is a bit... wrong. Its actually 1/8ths, like this.
  3. Starting here, 00:33:773 (1) - I think it may be better to make each note a NC. Not quite sure about this one, as it plays the same to me both ways...
  4. 01:11:106 (1,2,3) - So I understood having the rhythm like this in previous parts, because the bass helped emphasize it - but the bass isn't present in this part, at least not the sound I'm referring to. It still plays fine, but I may suggest mapping it differently since it is in fact a bit different.
  5. Starting 01:20:661 (1) - and ending 01:23:328 (4) - you're a bit too cramped up on the right side, see if you can pull it out into the center a bit from time to time.
  6. 01:46:661 (1) - Same thing I mentioned earlier, consider NCs - may not be necessary.
  7. Starting 01:57:328 (1) - and ending 02:00:439 (1) - you're way too cramped on the right side again. You could honestly just flip the entire combo left and drag some bits of it up again, but this map clearly is right-side heavy.
  8. 02:08:440 (2) - This is actually the same kind of beat you're mapping your jumps to. I don't like the fact you cover it up with a slider either. Past 5.3*, I think you can have sudden rhythm changes (1/2 to 1/3) and not have to give much warning, they should be able to hear and read it at this point. Definitely consider remapping these sliders to better emphasize the two huge beats Crywolf has placed here. Also, at around 02:08:439 - Kiai time should start here, as this is where the song picks back up.
  9. 02:10:217 (2) - ^
  10. 02:18:661 (1) - Make this slider go on to the blue tick, as it sounds better that way (or soften the slider end!)
  11. 02:22:661 (2) - ^
  12. 02:24:439 (2) - ^
  13. 02:35:106 (1) - Same thing I mentioned in the last place you did it, this is actually a 1/4th and three 1/8ths
  14. 02:41:439 (4) - This slider shouldn't be like the last one, as where this slider begins theres no actual note.
  15. 02:49:328 (1) - ^
  16. 02:50:884 (2) - Starting at the end of this slider, theres actually a 1/8th stream of vocals or a more predominant 1/4th stream of bass that you should map, considering you've been mapping those in other places. Both of those end at the end of this slider, where the large bass hits 02:51:328 (1) - .
  17. 02:56:106 - Theres a beat here you could be mapping.
  18. 04:23:106 (1) - The section starting here I hate. This is the only part of the map I dislike as I think you've seriously done injustice to the song. So this next little bit will be a rant on how to fix it. First, 04:23:106 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - All of these should be circles. You should use a circle to emphasize the voice on each beat, make each bit of the voice clickable. Second, a stream starts here 04:26:661 (1) - that you haven't mapped at all - which is definitely a cop out past a 4.5*. Finally, these kicksliders: 04:27:995 (1,2) - just feel so anticlimatic after such a huge build up. I mean, you work your way to what you know will be the hardest part of the song, then thwump thwump, you're presented with two measly kick sliders. Increase the SV or make the DS between them larger or something, it just feels so much like a let down. (I do like their placement in accord to the next slider though.)
  19. 04:28:439 (1) - At the end of this slider, a high pitched raising voice is present, I'd kind of like it if you mapped that and shortened this slider slightly like you've done in some parts before this.
  20. 04:33:773 (1) - Theres a note you're covering up inside the slider, while I don't mind that, you mapped it here 04:30:217 (1,2) - and consistency is key.
  21. 04:37:773 (2) - I've talked about this before.
  22. 04:39:550 (2) - Same for this
  23. 04:47:995 (1) - I heard more noises inside the slider again. I may have missed this during the first chorus, and if thats the case (I don't feel like going back to check because this is a NM after all) then just decide on whether to map it or not map. If you decide to not map it, change the way you maped it at 04:30:217.
  24. 04:51:995 (2) - eh
  25. 04:53:773 (2) - ^
  26. 05:06:217 (2) - ^
  27. 05:07:995 (2) - ^
  28. 05:32:884 (3) - eh 2.0
  29. 05:39:217 (4) - eh 3.0
  30. 05:47:106 (1) - refer to eh 2.0
  31. 05:53:439 (4) - refer to eh 3.0
  32. Consider cutting the song or mapping the ending with relaxing slider art.

    As a side note, I'm more than happy to come back and mod this after more work has been done to it, and when I do it then I'll focus more on note placement, DS, and blankets rather than just the general hand-waving I did with this mod. Regardless, I love this song and I hope you get it ranked.


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Good luck!
Raja

CrypticMech wrote:

What does the diffname Huvafen mean? It seemingly has no relation to the song at all, consider changing it.
I can shed some light on this; Huvafen means "Dream" in our language
Topic Starter
Truzon

Kaine wrote:

CrypticMech wrote:

What does the diffname Huvafen mean? It seemingly has no relation to the song at all, consider changing it.
I can shed some light on this; Huvafen means "Dream" in our language
Well there is your answer about that.
Topic Starter
Truzon

CrypticMech wrote:

Heyo, saw this is #modreqs and I absolutely loved the song (also found an artist I want to try to map from)

[General]
  1. What does the diffname Huvafen mean? It seemingly has no relation to the song at all, consider changing it.
  2. AR 9.5 is a bit high, even if it does have 1/3rd 135 BPM jumps, I'd consider 9.3 or 9.4 instead. Lowered it 9.4
  3. OD 8 is really low for a jump map, OD 8.5 (or be Monstrata with 8.7) Ok
  4. HP 6 may also be a bit too low, but I wouldn't change it yet (wait for more feedback).
  5. Your Color Combos make no sense to me, specifically 5 and 8. Also, 1 may be too close to white to be rankable. Yeah, I will see what I can do about those
  6. You don't need the epilepsy warning, this map has no storyboard.Those are for the kiai spams
  7. Those kiai times may need to be connected, I'd talk to a BN about that one.


[Huvafen]
  1. 00:01:773 (1) - I'm not sure if I like blocking out this really small sweet melody with a spinner, I'd consider mapping the sounds rather than just overlaying the spinner. Both ways are good in imo, but im gonna stick with spinners for now
  2. 00:11:106 (1) - This is a bit... wrong. Its actually 1/8ths, like this. Ah!Finally It sounds better, I knew something felt off there
  3. Starting here, 00:33:773 (1) - I think it may be better to make each note a NC. Not quite sure about this one, as it plays the same to me both ways... Done
  4. 01:11:106 (1,2,3) - So I understood having the rhythm like this in previous parts, because the bass helped emphasize it - but the bass isn't present in this part, at least not the sound I'm referring to. It still plays fine, but I may suggest mapping it differently since it is in fact a bit different. Followed the vocals there
  5. Starting 01:20:661 (1) - and ending 01:23:328 (4) - you're a bit too cramped up on the right side, see if you can pull it out into the center a bit from time to time. I will see what I can do about it
  6. 01:46:661 (1) - Same thing I mentioned earlier, consider NCs - may not be necessary. I think its ok as it now
  7. Starting 01:57:328 (1) - and ending 02:00:439 (1) - you're way too cramped on the right side again. You could honestly just flip the entire combo left and drag some bits of it up again, but this map clearly is right-side heavy. Changed it, Its ok now....I think
  8. 02:08:440 (2) - This is actually the same kind of beat you're mapping your jumps to. I don't like the fact you cover it up with a slider either. Past 5.3*, I think you can have sudden rhythm changes (1/2 to 1/3) and not have to give much warning, they should be able to hear and read it at this point. Definitely consider remapping these sliders to better emphasize the two huge beats Crywolf has placed here. Also, at around 02:08:439 - Kiai time should start here, as this is where the song picks back up. Will see what I can do about that
  9. 02:10:217 (2) - ^
  10. 02:18:661 (1) - Make this slider go on to the blue tick, as it sounds better that way (or soften the slider end!) Done
  11. 02:22:661 (2) - ^
  12. 02:24:439 (2) - ^
  13. 02:35:106 (1) - Same thing I mentioned in the last place you did it, this is actually a 1/4th and three 1/8ths Fixed
  14. 02:41:439 (4) - This slider shouldn't be like the last one, as where this slider begins theres no actual note. I think its fine as it is
  15. 02:49:328 (1) - ^
  16. 02:50:884 (2) - Starting at the end of this slider, theres actually a 1/8th stream of vocals or a more predominant 1/4th stream of bass that you should map, considering you've been mapping those in other places. Both of those end at the end of this slider, where the large bass hits 02:51:328 (1) - . I didnt notice that, fixed
  17. 02:56:106 - Theres a beat here you could be mapping. Isnt it already mapped?
  18. 04:23:106 (1) - The section starting here I hate. This is the only part of the map I dislike as I think you've seriously done injustice to the song. So this next little bit will be a rant on how to fix it. First, 04:23:106 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - All of these should be circles. You should use a circle to emphasize the voice on each beat, make each bit of the voice clickable. Second, a stream starts here 04:26:661 (1) - that you haven't mapped at all - which is definitely a cop out past a 4.5*. Finally, these kicksliders: 04:27:995 (1,2) - just feel so anticlimatic after such a huge build up. I mean, you work your way to what you know will be the hardest part of the song, then thwump thwump, you're presented with two measly kick sliders. Increase the SV or make the DS between them larger or something, it just feels so much like a let down. (I do like their placement in accord to the next slider though.) Ok, gonna remap that part
  19. 04:28:439 (1) - At the end of this slider, a high pitched raising voice is present, I'd kind of like it if you mapped that and shortened this slider slightly like you've done in some parts before this. hmmm, that seems kinda cool
  20. 04:33:773 (1) - Theres a note you're covering up inside the slider, while I don't mind that, you mapped it here 04:30:217 (1,2) - and consistency is key. nah, I think its fine as it is
  21. 04:37:773 (2) - I've talked about this before.
  22. 04:39:550 (2) - Same for this
  23. 04:47:995 (1) - I heard more noises inside the slider again. I may have missed this during the first chorus, and if thats the case (I don't feel like going back to check because this is a NM after all) then just decide on whether to map it or not map. If you decide to not map it, change the way you maped it at 04:30:217.
  24. 04:51:995 (2) - eh
  25. 04:53:773 (2) - ^
  26. 05:06:217 (2) - ^
  27. 05:07:995 (2) - ^
  28. 05:32:884 (3) - eh 2.0
  29. 05:39:217 (4) - eh 3.0
  30. 05:47:106 (1) - refer to eh 2.0
  31. 05:53:439 (4) - refer to eh 3.0
  32. Consider cutting the song or mapping the ending with relaxing slider art.

    As a side note, I'm more than happy to come back and mod this after more work has been done to it, and when I do it then I'll focus more on note placement, DS, and blankets rather than just the general hand-waving I did with this mod. Regardless, I love this song and I hope you get it ranked.


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Good luck!
Havent fully applied the mod, I will pick this up later. Too tired atm (and lazy) Yay done! thank you for the mod :)
Cryptic

Truzon wrote:

Kaine wrote:

I can shed some light on this; Huvafen means "Dream" in our language
Well there is your answer about that.
Cool cool, I suggest you probably add a tidbit about that in the beatmap description then, because that name totally works for the song - but it needs to be clarified for the English speakers :p
Bearizm
When you revive this... On Huvafen not 2.0 (which i'm guessing the 2.0 is the final one but oh well i did it before realizing lol but some of this may apply to your either one of the difficulties anyways.)

02:07:995 (1) - move this to x208y384 to prevent the overlap. it's really ugly imo.

04:36:735 (3) - stack this with 04:35:254 (5) -

fix the blanket at 05:14:217 (1,1) -

05:09:328 (1) - is the finish on the slider end intentional? I hear nothing there o:

05:19:328 - could use a circle here. it's gonna be painful to play out but a hitsound there would be nice. I'm not sure if there is a similar part in the song but in case there are, do the same thing for that if you're applying this.

05:38:995 (3,4) - these sliders starts at blue tick.. change this and the other same parts.

Good map. Could have less overlaps such as:
02:08:440 (2,2) -
02:25:773 (1) - and 02:26:661 (1) -
04:44:884 (2) - and 04:45:624 (3) -
04:58:661 (1,2) -
05:51:550 (2,2) -

but overall, good stuff. Made me wish I know this song earlier.
Don't kd this if u don't find this that useful.
raycoN
Man that shit is fucking beautiful
Raja

raycoN wrote:

Man that shit is fucking beautiful
Told u so
Secretpipe
tfw diff spike is maybe 2much
semaphore
where the fuck do you and aiceo get your BGs theyre so good wtf
Topic Starter
Truzon
Nanomortis.
Whats Skill
really like these maps :)
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Joe Castle
go for loved pls
Norbi0001
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