Kaine wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4260000

put me in the description

main mod

00:44:439 (1) - spinners must have a new combo!!!!! ok

00:52:439 (8) - މި ސްލައިޑަރ 1/6 ޓިކް ގަ ދާ ކޮޅު ބަދަލު ކޮއްބަ. މި ގޮތަށް؛ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4276336 sadasd

00:55:328 (7,1) - ރަނގަޅަށް ސްޓެކް ނުކޮށް fixed

00:58:884 (7) - ކޮންޓްރޯލް-ޖީ؟ nah

01:05:773 (5,6) - ކޮންޓްރޯލް-ޖީ؟ nah

02:11:995 (1,2,3) - މީތި ބެކް-އެންޑް-ފޯރތް ވީމަ އެހެން ކުޑަ ޖަމްޕް ތައްވެސް ބެކް-އެންޑް-ފޯރތެއް ގޮތަށް ހުރިއްޔާ ކޮލިވާނީ، ކިޔާ އެއްޗެއް އެނގިއްޖެތަ؟ (ނޫނީ މިީތި ބެކް-އެންޑް-ފޯރތް ނުކުރެވިދާނެ. އެކަމް އެއް އަޑެއް ދެ ގޮތަކަށް މެޕްކޮށްފަ ހުރީމަ <_<) It doesnt really affect gameplay, so imma keep it as it is

02:18:661 (1) - ކްރެއިގަސްމް

02:30:884 (5) - ok fuck dhivehi, moving this to x 316 y 108 would make it flow better (change the shape accordingly so that it points to 6 as well) But it feels very awkward to me.......

02:55:995 (3) - missing note? not really, but i still added a note there anyway

02:57:328 (6) - ending slider on a downbeat... :/ (making a really strong sound be mapped to a passive element like a sliderend is like a really badass sports car not being able to drive more than 25 kmph) deal with it!! jk, I will see what I can do about that

03:11:995 (7) - sound changes on 1/4 tick here, PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS change it so that it changes direction on the 1/4 tick as well (i know it looks somewhat uglier BUT IT'S SO SATISFYING TO PLAY SLIDERS LIKE THAT) adwqeqw

03:29:550 (5) - ކޮންޓްރޯލް-ޖީ؟ ok

04:17:773 (2) - switch nc to this plz, nc should be on big white line imo done

04:28:439 (1) - shouldnt this slider have a similar hitsound as 02:04:440 (1) - ? nah, they sound different

04:41:328 (1,2,3) - 04:42:217 (1,2,3) - 04:43:106 (1,2,3) - 04:43:995 (1,2,3) - CONSISTENCY WHEN MAPPING SIMILAR SOUNDS IS IMPORTANT. IF THE SAME SOUNDS ARE MAPPED TWICE OR MORE, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE THEM APPROXIMATELY THE SAME PATTERN ok done

extremely lenient blanket mod

01:25:995 (3) -
02:22:661 (2) - this to 02:22:217 (1) - 's head
01:03:995 (1) -
01:15:995 (8,9) -
02:13:328 (1) -
02:23:995 (1) -
04:37:773 (2) -
05:48:439 (1) -

all fixed here

general; add "chillstep" and "angel" (ep name) to tags and "kaineisverygood" as well

dytedy wrote:

Suggestions:

-00:05:106 why not a circle here? K done
-02:21:180 (6) - more closer to the previous note ( x:216 y:200 maybe ) I think its ok
-02:03:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6) this a little bit closer down Nah

please consider all the jumps in the map, just my opinion (a bit closer) Would consider that



nice map

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Ambient wrote:

Hey man nice map, incredibly fun to play and all around nicely mapped. I'd just like to make a couple of suggestions if i may:

00:44:439 (1) - Try adding a note behind the slider and moving the slider 1 tick forward, i feel it flows better. Done
01:57:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - These jumps here feel pretty clumped in the corner and make it hard to uncomfortable to move onto the next note, try to space them more freely or move them further to the left. Done

nice jumps, GL

take six wrote:

A. you might want to consider changing one of the combo colours. currently you have grey and, well, a different kind of grey. Its pretty difficult to notice when the combos change, at least for me. I will think about it

B. 01:09:773 (7) - In general, you have some slight inconsistencies with combos. I think you should come up with a few rules to how you combo - it just feels to me that you comboed different parts of the songs differently, while the parts are pretty similar. this circle where (i think) you didnt combo, but comboed someplace else which was pretty much the same. Its also pretty late here, so i might be wrong, just mostly go through the combos that go up to 9 or 8 (or more) and think if you do them consistenly.

These are just weird places you might wanna consider

01:35:550 (7) - maybe combo this I think its alright as it is

01:55:550 (5) - Also think of comboing. Done

02:58:217 (8) - consider Done

03:05:328 (4) - same as above Nah

03:11:995 (7) - same Done

03:22:439 (1) - This ones a bit weird, since it ends at the start of the next bar but starts before it, you can possibly remove the combo there and have 03:22:884 (2) - combo instead Done

03:47:995 (8) - consider Nah

04:01:106 (6) - since its the same type of sliders as the combo right afterwards, consider placing the combo there instead, though it would fit a bit less with the music. Done

04:15:773 (7) - this should probably be the combo instead of the one right after Fixed

05:53:773 (5) - same as above. Fixed

1. What does the diffname Huvafen mean? It seemingly has no relation to the song at all, consider changing it.
2. AR 9.5 is a bit high, even if it does have 1/3rd 135 BPM jumps, I'd consider 9.3 or 9.4 instead.
3. OD 8 is really low for a jump map, OD 8.5 (or be Monstrata with 8.7)
4. HP 6 may also be a bit too low, but I wouldn't change it yet (wait for more feedback).
5. Your Color Combos make no sense to me, specifically 5 and 8. Also, 1 may be too close to white to be rankable.
6. You don't need the epilepsy warning, this map has no storyboard.
7. Those kiai times may need to be connected, I'd talk to a BN about that one.

1. 00:01:773 (1) - I'm not sure if I like blocking out this really small sweet melody with a spinner, I'd consider mapping the sounds rather than just overlaying the spinner.
2. 00:11:106 (1) - This is a bit... wrong. Its actually 1/8ths, like this.
3. Starting here, 00:33:773 (1) - I think it may be better to make each note a NC. Not quite sure about this one, as it plays the same to me both ways...
4. 01:11:106 (1,2,3) - So I understood having the rhythm like this in previous parts, because the bass helped emphasize it - but the bass isn't present in this part, at least not the sound I'm referring to. It still plays fine, but I may suggest mapping it differently since it is in fact a bit different.
5. Starting 01:20:661 (1) - and ending 01:23:328 (4) - you're a bit too cramped up on the right side, see if you can pull it out into the center a bit from time to time.
6. 01:46:661 (1) - Same thing I mentioned earlier, consider NCs - may not be necessary.
7. Starting 01:57:328 (1) - and ending 02:00:439 (1) - you're way too cramped on the right side again. You could honestly just flip the entire combo left and drag some bits of it up again, but this map clearly is right-side heavy.
8. 02:08:440 (2) - This is actually the same kind of beat you're mapping your jumps to. I don't like the fact you cover it up with a slider either. Past 5.3*, I think you can have sudden rhythm changes (1/2 to 1/3) and not have to give much warning, they should be able to hear and read it at this point. Definitely consider remapping these sliders to better emphasize the two huge beats Crywolf has placed here. Also, at around 02:08:439 - Kiai time should start here, as this is where the song picks back up.
9. 02:10:217 (2) - ^
10. 02:18:661 (1) - Make this slider go on to the blue tick, as it sounds better that way (or soften the slider end!)
11. 02:22:661 (2) - ^
12. 02:24:439 (2) - ^
13. 02:35:106 (1) - Same thing I mentioned in the last place you did it, this is actually a 1/4th and three 1/8ths
14. 02:41:439 (4) - This slider shouldn't be like the last one, as where this slider begins theres no actual note.
15. 02:49:328 (1) - ^
16. 02:50:884 (2) - Starting at the end of this slider, theres actually a 1/8th stream of vocals or a more predominant 1/4th stream of bass that you should map, considering you've been mapping those in other places. Both of those end at the end of this slider, where the large bass hits 02:51:328 (1) - .
17. 02:56:106 - Theres a beat here you could be mapping.
18. 04:23:106 (1) - The section starting here I hate. This is the only part of the map I dislike as I think you've seriously done injustice to the song. So this next little bit will be a rant on how to fix it. First, 04:23:106 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - All of these should be circles. You should use a circle to emphasize the voice on each beat, make each bit of the voice clickable. Second, a stream starts here 04:26:661 (1) - that you haven't mapped at all - which is definitely a cop out past a 4.5*. Finally, these kicksliders: 04:27:995 (1,2) - just feel so anticlimatic after such a huge build up. I mean, you work your way to what you know will be the hardest part of the song, then thwump thwump, you're presented with two measly kick sliders. Increase the SV or make the DS between them larger or something, it just feels so much like a let down. (I do like their placement in accord to the next slider though.)
19. 04:28:439 (1) - At the end of this slider, a high pitched raising voice is present, I'd kind of like it if you mapped that and shortened this slider slightly like you've done in some parts before this.
20. 04:33:773 (1) - Theres a note you're covering up inside the slider, while I don't mind that, you mapped it here 04:30:217 (1,2) - and consistency is key.
21. 04:37:773 (2) - I've talked about this before.
22. 04:39:550 (2) - Same for this
23. 04:47:995 (1) - I heard more noises inside the slider again. I may have missed this during the first chorus, and if thats the case (I don't feel like going back to check because this is a NM after all) then just decide on whether to map it or not map. If you decide to not map it, change the way you maped it at 04:30:217.
24. 04:51:995 (2) - eh
25. 04:53:773 (2) - ^
26. 05:06:217 (2) - ^
27. 05:07:995 (2) - ^
28. 05:32:884 (3) - eh 2.0
29. 05:39:217 (4) - eh 3.0
30. 05:47:106 (1) - refer to eh 2.0
31. 05:53:439 (4) - refer to eh 3.0
32. Consider cutting the song or mapping the ending with relaxing slider art.
    
    As a side note, I'm more than happy to come back and mod this after more work has been done to it, and when I do it then I'll focus more on note placement, DS, and blankets rather than just the general hand-waving I did with this mod. Regardless, I love this song and I hope you get it ranked.

CrypticMech wrote:

What does the diffname Huvafen mean? It seemingly has no relation to the song at all, consider changing it.

Kaine wrote:

CrypticMech wrote:

What does the diffname Huvafen mean? It seemingly has no relation to the song at all, consider changing it.

I can shed some light on this; Huvafen means "Dream" in our language

CrypticMech wrote:

Heyo, saw this is #modreqs and I absolutely loved the song (also found an artist I want to try to map from)

[General]

1. What does the diffname Huvafen mean? It seemingly has no relation to the song at all, consider changing it.
2. AR 9.5 is a bit high, even if it does have 1/3rd 135 BPM jumps, I'd consider 9.3 or 9.4 instead. Lowered it 9.4
3. OD 8 is really low for a jump map, OD 8.5 (or be Monstrata with 8.7) Ok
4. HP 6 may also be a bit too low, but I wouldn't change it yet (wait for more feedback).
5. Your Color Combos make no sense to me, specifically 5 and 8. Also, 1 may be too close to white to be rankable. Yeah, I will see what I can do about those
6. You don't need the epilepsy warning, this map has no storyboard.Those are for the kiai spams
7. Those kiai times may need to be connected, I'd talk to a BN about that one.

[Huvafen]

1. 00:01:773 (1) - I'm not sure if I like blocking out this really small sweet melody with a spinner, I'd consider mapping the sounds rather than just overlaying the spinner. Both ways are good in imo, but im gonna stick with spinners for now
2. 00:11:106 (1) - This is a bit... wrong. Its actually 1/8ths, like this. Ah!Finally It sounds better, I knew something felt off there
3. Starting here, 00:33:773 (1) - I think it may be better to make each note a NC. Not quite sure about this one, as it plays the same to me both ways... Done
4. 01:11:106 (1,2,3) - So I understood having the rhythm like this in previous parts, because the bass helped emphasize it - but the bass isn't present in this part, at least not the sound I'm referring to. It still plays fine, but I may suggest mapping it differently since it is in fact a bit different. Followed the vocals there
5. Starting 01:20:661 (1) - and ending 01:23:328 (4) - you're a bit too cramped up on the right side, see if you can pull it out into the center a bit from time to time. I will see what I can do about it
6. 01:46:661 (1) - Same thing I mentioned earlier, consider NCs - may not be necessary. I think its ok as it now
7. Starting 01:57:328 (1) - and ending 02:00:439 (1) - you're way too cramped on the right side again. You could honestly just flip the entire combo left and drag some bits of it up again, but this map clearly is right-side heavy. Changed it, Its ok now....I think
8. 02:08:440 (2) - This is actually the same kind of beat you're mapping your jumps to. I don't like the fact you cover it up with a slider either. Past 5.3*, I think you can have sudden rhythm changes (1/2 to 1/3) and not have to give much warning, they should be able to hear and read it at this point. Definitely consider remapping these sliders to better emphasize the two huge beats Crywolf has placed here. Also, at around 02:08:439 - Kiai time should start here, as this is where the song picks back up. Will see what I can do about that
9. 02:10:217 (2) - ^
10. 02:18:661 (1) - Make this slider go on to the blue tick, as it sounds better that way (or soften the slider end!) Done
11. 02:22:661 (2) - ^
12. 02:24:439 (2) - ^
13. 02:35:106 (1) - Same thing I mentioned in the last place you did it, this is actually a 1/4th and three 1/8ths Fixed
14. 02:41:439 (4) - This slider shouldn't be like the last one, as where this slider begins theres no actual note. I think its fine as it is
15. 02:49:328 (1) - ^
16. 02:50:884 (2) - Starting at the end of this slider, theres actually a 1/8th stream of vocals or a more predominant 1/4th stream of bass that you should map, considering you've been mapping those in other places. Both of those end at the end of this slider, where the large bass hits 02:51:328 (1) - . I didnt notice that, fixed
17. 02:56:106 - Theres a beat here you could be mapping. Isnt it already mapped?
18. 04:23:106 (1) - The section starting here I hate. This is the only part of the map I dislike as I think you've seriously done injustice to the song. So this next little bit will be a rant on how to fix it. First, 04:23:106 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - All of these should be circles. You should use a circle to emphasize the voice on each beat, make each bit of the voice clickable. Second, a stream starts here 04:26:661 (1) - that you haven't mapped at all - which is definitely a cop out past a 4.5*. Finally, these kicksliders: 04:27:995 (1,2) - just feel so anticlimatic after such a huge build up. I mean, you work your way to what you know will be the hardest part of the song, then thwump thwump, you're presented with two measly kick sliders. Increase the SV or make the DS between them larger or something, it just feels so much like a let down. (I do like their placement in accord to the next slider though.) Ok, gonna remap that part
19. 04:28:439 (1) - At the end of this slider, a high pitched raising voice is present, I'd kind of like it if you mapped that and shortened this slider slightly like you've done in some parts before this. hmmm, that seems kinda cool
20. 04:33:773 (1) - Theres a note you're covering up inside the slider, while I don't mind that, you mapped it here 04:30:217 (1,2) - and consistency is key. nah, I think its fine as it is
21. 04:37:773 (2) - I've talked about this before.
22. 04:39:550 (2) - Same for this
23. 04:47:995 (1) - I heard more noises inside the slider again. I may have missed this during the first chorus, and if thats the case (I don't feel like going back to check because this is a NM after all) then just decide on whether to map it or not map. If you decide to not map it, change the way you maped it at 04:30:217.
24. 04:51:995 (2) - eh
25. 04:53:773 (2) - ^
26. 05:06:217 (2) - ^
27. 05:07:995 (2) - ^
28. 05:32:884 (3) - eh 2.0
29. 05:39:217 (4) - eh 3.0
30. 05:47:106 (1) - refer to eh 2.0
31. 05:53:439 (4) - refer to eh 3.0
32. Consider cutting the song or mapping the ending with relaxing slider art.
    
    As a side note, I'm more than happy to come back and mod this after more work has been done to it, and when I do it then I'll focus more on note placement, DS, and blankets rather than just the general hand-waving I did with this mod. Regardless, I love this song and I hope you get it ranked.

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Good luck!

Truzon wrote:

Kaine wrote:

I can shed some light on this; Huvafen means "Dream" in our language

Well there is your answer about that.

raycoN wrote:

Man that shit is fucking beautiful