celerih wrote:

Meyri Krismaàçe Baynydash (aka BaynyBanahnàs)

Nice custom skin!
Okay so the timing in this is very very off. 00:19:205 (5) - 00:20:062 (2) - 00:20:919 (4) - The song is unquantatized meaning it does't follow a metronome. The only solution for this is a redline on every sound, which is extremely annoying to do. help

Hitsound volumes are quite loud. From the start to 00:07:854 - I'd say have it at 40, while the rest (excluding the ending) should be at around 50% done

You could add "Advent Calendar TV Show" to the tags also added odd nordstoga since he made the original song :^)

[ Cup]

1. Same suggestion as the platter for the spinner
2. 00:06:603 (2,3) - Make this walk a little less strong. Giving it be the same as 00:07:426 (3,1) - doesn't fit with the intensity of the song
3. 00:07:426 (3,1) - Also because of the very low movement on 00:07:426 (3) - increasing the distance here would flow much better
4. That's all I've got to say, nice cup!

[ Salad]

1. Same suggestion as the platter for the spinner
2. 00:07:426 (4) - Give this a more pronounced curve, right now it end up being a straight line
3. 00:15:133 (2,3,4) - I'd make this more similar to 00:11:704 (2,3,4) - by either giving 00:15:133 (2,3) - less angle or moving 00:15:562 (4) - apart more
4. 00:15:562 (4,1) - also distance here is quite ambiguous for if it's a walk or dash
5. 00:17:490 (4,1) - Dash here would work very well with the song. If you do change this tho remove the dash on 00:17:705 (1,2) - since it's weaker and has a very ambiguous dash distance agin

[ Platter]

1. 00:04:460 (1) - The spinner starts a bit early. Starting on 00:04:674 - fits better
2. 00:12:562 (1,2) - Increase walk here, it's quite weak and breaks the flow
3. 00:14:919 (2,3) - Put a dash here, because 2 is very faint while 3 is pretty strong
4. 00:20:276 (3,4) - Move these two to the right more so 00:20:919 (4) - isn't so close to the wall and 00:20:062 (2,3) - is a stronger dash
5. 00:20:919 (4) - Another thing you can do here is have a 1/4 slider here, since it's a rare instance where the 1/4 is kinda not super off. Just make sure it doesn't become a 1/4 hyper I want this a hyper so can't add a note ):
6. 00:22:848 (1,2,3,4) - Give this section less movement so there's more of a buildup in the map like there is in the song I think it's okay as it is ><

Good luck with this map. it's quite nice! (:

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Yahallo~~ merry Xmas benny-chan~~ sorry for loooooong delay uwu

General

1. Can you swap the name of your fruit-bananas.png and fruit-bananas-overlay.png, weird that they are the opposite of the rest of the skin, also where is fruit-drop.png and fruit-drop-overlay.png If I swap them around, the color of the bananas become yellow and I wanted them white to contrast the colors of the rest of the skin :/
2. change combo colour 3 into light brown and 4 into gray cause green and fuchsia aren't related with BG Yeah, but I changed them to different shades of blue instead because of the skin, looks shitty with colored snow
3. add green lines at 00:35:769 - with 20% of volume and 00:36:678 - with 10% of volume, also 00:34:860 - should be 30% to decreasse the volume progressively, fits better imo. done
4. remove kiais on your map, the whole song is kiai literally. added kiai flashes instead

Cup

1. 00:33:170 (4) - quite hard for cup, Rotate (4) by 180º selection center Made it nicer with less angle
2. nothing wrong but movements are quite repetitive, for example at 00:21:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - is a good place to add something new (keeping your current distances) 00:21:133 (1,2,3) -> https://puu.sh/yyPLu/e2fb42ca02.jpg / 00:22:848 (4,5) -> https://puu.sh/yyPPq/36fb1c7a2d.jpg

Salad

1. 00:06:174 (1,2) - I quite understand the possition of these objects cause the last banana on the spin is on the left, but you should consider that there are many people (like me) who sucks at spinning lol, in that case they will start from the centre and trying to catch 00:06:174 (1,2) - will be with an antiflow movement, to be fair, I recommend you to do something like 00:25:419 (2,3,4) - to avoid this kind of problems. I dont understand the problem of it, theres a 1/1 distance between note/spin for that exact reason, so people can recover. And the fact that the notes start where the spinner ends and is fairly close to the middle, I think it's ok as it is
2. 00:06:603 (2,3,4) - you can swap the distances to create a build-up pattern, I mean more distance between 00:07:031 (3,4) - than 00:06:603 (2,3) - but the song is lowering uwu
3. 00:19:419 - NC missing not anymore!
4. 00:22:848 - rhythm change so a NC will fit better this part, also consistency with previous combos. ok
5. 00:29:705 - same as above yes
6. 00:33:170 (1) - don't you think slider with reverse in 1/4 will fit better? im gonna assume you meant 1/2 but done
7. rest is fine but I have a suggestion in general, e.g: distances like 00:10:426 (2,1) - 00:17:490 (4,1) - 00:19:205 (3,4) - etc, which are supposed to be dashes, deserve more distance, around +0.20x of distance cause currently they are catchable w/o pressing the dash buttom. fixed them i think!

Platter

1. 00:15:990 - missing finish as your lower diffs. fix
2. 00:18:348 (2,3) - remove hyperdash, consistency with 00:20:062 (2,3) - eh, 00:18:348 (2,3) - is becoming higher pitch and building up while 00:20:062 (2,3) - is lower pitch, won't change!
3. 00:30:580 (3,4) - change into 1 slider, intensity is decreasing. yes
4. cool too but same as I said on salad, some jumps are catchable w/o pressing dash buttom, 00:13:205 (2,3) - 00:16:633 (2,3) - etc... around 2.20x could be a good option. tried fixing a bit

Call me back >.<

1. You need to add the following files
   - fruit-drop.png
   - fruit-drop-overlay.png
2. Bananas must have a different design than the other elements, and should always be yellow. Change your file names so that the bananas are stars. They are more unique than the variations on snowflakes, and stars can be yellow.
3. Apple, grapes, orange, and pear should be adjusted so they take up the full 128x128 area (or at least the width). Banana does this correctly. Example

1. Added Asherz007's timing
2. Added fruit-drop and overlay
3. Fixed the snowflakes so they fill the width instead of the height
4. Removed the stars and made Pear/Apple and Orange/Grapes the same snowflake. Now the skin is snowflakes only and no stars. It wasn't supposed to be stars.
5. Fixed the two things Sinnoh pointed out in Salad/Platter

Sinnoh wrote:

Check ai mod on normal + cup done
Combo colour 3 is too bright disagree
Are you applying the overlays? nope, i explained why pretty well in pm so please don't enforce that on me

Sinnoh wrote:

rank winterbells

Benny- wrote:

Fixed the BG to 1920x1080 and removed a dash in Salad as -Sh1n1- suggested. Benny ninja'd me