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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on tirsdag 19. desember 2017 at 17:33:27

Artist: Odd Nordstoga
Title: Jul i Svingen
Source: Jul i Svingen
Tags: Advent Calendar TV Show nrk Norsk Rikskringkasting christmas xmas snow norwegian winter bennybananas benny
BPM: 140,25
Filesize: 2293kb
Play Time: 00:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Cup (1,22 stars, 39 notes)
  2. Platter (2,57 stars, 64 notes)
  3. Salad (1,61 stars, 50 notes)


Download: Odd Nordstoga - Jul i Svingen
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merry christmas~

totally related BG

can it at least be ranked in december :(
posted
I need some kudosu to prioritize your maps, so hopefully you will find something of value under here. :3
General

Difficulty settings: Why does the Cup have Salad settings and Salad have Cup settings?
Timing: A lot of notes aren't snapped and neither is Kiai time.
Kiai: What's with the 0.2 second long Kiai times? xD I don't know if I like them or not.

Also, disable widescreen support for cup and salad, or enable it for platter. I'm not sure how the rules are on this though.
Platter

00:33:248 (2) - Remove. I can't hear it in the song
It's not much, but then again, I'm not dedicated enough to spot all the things here, and I don't want to give any replacement suggestions either as I already like the set. Good luck. :)
posted

Armneidin wrote:

I need some kudosu to prioritize your maps, so hopefully you will find something of value under here. :3
General

Difficulty settings: Why does the Cup have Salad settings and Salad have Cup settings? - Must've somehow messed it up lol
Timing: A lot of notes aren't snapped and neither is Kiai time. - Fixed
Kiai: What's with the 0.2 second long Kiai times? xD I don't know if I like them or not. - It's because when kiai hits, there is a fountain of stars coming into the screen and it has a nice effect :3

Also, disable widescreen support for cup and salad, or enable it for platter. I'm not sure how the rules are on this though. - Disabled
Platter

00:33:248 (2) - Remove. I can't hear it in the song - Done


It's not much, but then again, I'm not dedicated enough to spot all the things here, and I don't want to give any replacement suggestions either as I already like the set. Good luck. :)


Tusen hjertelig takk <3
posted
Free mod!

Cup
Opening Thoughts: This map plays really well. Good job. Nothing much I can say needs changing. Maybe reduce drain rate to 3 as 4 is a bit much.

00:24:133 (4) - x:352 to make this feel a bit better imo.
Salad
Opening Thoughts: plays well like the cup. Timeline seems a bit weird to me but it's nice.
00:25:848 (4) - Reduce the jump to this a bit. Seems too tight for a salad diff
00:31:023 (2) - would reduce the dash to this a bit for a similar reason stated before. seems too hard for a salad diff
00:31:467 (1) - Bring this closer to the previous note to allow more room for error because this is a salad and dashing should be as simple as possible.

I would reduce the dashing to be easier as it feels overall too tight for a salad but nice job.
Platter
Opening Thoughts: I really like this :D

Reduce Hp drain to 5 for a cup=3,Salad=4,platter=5,build over the spread of difficulties.


Seems like a nice set overall. I hope I helped. /.\ If you have questions ask me in-game or on forum.
posted

Tyrell wrote:

Free mod!

Cup
Opening Thoughts: This map plays really well. Good job. Nothing much I can say needs changing. Maybe reduce drain rate to 3 as 4 is a bit much.

00:24:133 (4) - x:352 to make this feel a bit better imo.
Salad
Opening Thoughts: plays well like the cup. Timeline seems a bit weird to me but it's nice.
00:25:848 (4) - Reduce the jump to this a bit. Seems too tight for a salad diff
00:31:023 (2) - would reduce the dash to this a bit for a similar reason stated before. seems too hard for a salad diff
00:31:467 (1) - Bring this closer to the previous note to allow more room for error because this is a salad and dashing should be as simple as possible.

I would reduce the dashing to be easier as it feels overall too tight for a salad but nice job.
Platter
Opening Thoughts: I really like this :D

Reduce Hp drain to 5 for a cup=3,Salad=4,platter=5,build over the spread of difficulties.


Seems like a nice set overall. I hope I helped. /.\ If you have questions ask me in-game or on forum.


Applied everything :D Thanks for modding ^_^
posted
Not much to say! :)
Cup
00:17:490 (4) - Move to x=224?
00:24:133 (4) - I don't hear this note in the music, consider deleting?
00:34:046 (4) - Personal opinion: NC?

Salad
00:21:026 - Hitcircle here to match music?
00:30:562 (1,2) - Make this a 1/1 slider with more SV?

Platter
00:08:295 (7) - NC here for the new phrase?
00:16:419 (6) - NC here?
00:24:455 (9,1) - Hyper here for the strong accent?

Hope
This mod helped!

Christmas
posted

Absolute Zero wrote:

Not much to say! :)
Cup
00:17:490 (4) - Move to x=224? - Moved (3) and (4) a little closer
00:24:133 (4) - I don't hear this note in the music, consider deleting? - Done
00:34:046 (4) - Personal opinion: NC? - Sure

Salad
00:21:026 - Hitcircle here to match music? - Done
00:30:562 (1,2) - Make this a 1/1 slider with more SV? - Nah, feels better like this :3

Platter
00:08:295 (7) - NC here for the new phrase? - Done
00:16:419 (6) - NC here? - Done
00:24:455 (9,1) - Hyper here for the strong accent? Aren't 1/4 hypers unrankable in platters?

Hope
This mod helped!

Christmas


Thank you for modding! ^_^
posted
General
  1. Consider add "Snow" in Tags simply because in most of the bg and it would be an easy way to recognize.
  2. Why you use Preview point 00:24:540 here? if you did this for the sound in 00:24:562 - be more lisenable, I assure you there is no difference if you change to 00:24:562 - .
  3. Why these dark Combocolours? nuuuu this song and bg is soo cutie, I recommend using more vibrant colors!
Cup
  1. 00:04:039 (1) - This Spinner should start in 00:04:465 - because here is where the violin really begins, if you cant hear, just volume 100% and listen in x0.25 (:
  2. 00:06:167 (1,2,3) - The sound in (3) is less strong than (2), and this is less than (1), but you used higher distance to (3), so, just 00:07:444 (2) - x: 240 to fit with these sounds.
  3. 00:10:422 (2,3,1) - Other case of distances (okay, is the most common in cups), put 00:10:848 (1) - a biiiit to the left, because is a more loud! (:
  4. 00:12:133 (2) - The sound here is so strong, in my opinion this slider almost without movement is not the best option, you can make this more horizontal and then 00:12:990 (3) - more vertical, this last is tooo low.
  5. 00:15:562 (1) - nc here nnnot fit, with so few sounds and a regular bpm you not need add as many nc.
  6. 00:16:848 (3,4,1) - Again, same distances but 00:17:705 (1) - is strong! this last a biit to the right.
  7. 00:16:848 (3) - Why not clap here? you are breaking the consistency, all other sounds same to this have clap! for example 00:15:562 (1) - 00:13:848 (4) - 00:18:562 (2) - .
  8. 00:19:848 (3,4,5) - Ohh come on, same distances... really (5) deserves the same? i think no, aaand 00:20:705 (5,6,1) - here you you less distance to 00:21:133 (1) - , mhhh, try with just 00:20:705 (5) - x 400 to fix these problems ~
  9. 00:22:848 (1) - Nope nope~ this nc is not neccesary.
  10. 00:23:705 (3,1) - Joooo? Why this short distance, hee! You should add more, is boring ): (aaand the sound in (1) definitely deserves more distance)
  11. 00:31:467 (1,2,3) - if you rely on the violin here, then definitely should reduce the distance to 00:32:736 (3) - ! Lllistenn houhouhou.
  12. 00:33:394 (2) - This sound is not entirely clear, I think it's best to replace 00:33:177 (1,2,3) - with a slider, aaand because is also better to reduce the density of notes in this final.
  13. 00:34:481 (1) - Is complicated marking an end of this spinner hoooo, in my opinion should finish in 00:36:220 - because from here these sounds they are extremely low, plus some different sounds begin of the... triangle?
Salad
  1. 00:04:039 (1) - Same as Cup.
  2. 00:07:656 (4) - if you listen well, actually here there is no sound, it is a little earlier, I not suggest you continue this instrument, I notice that you have several mistakes with the bpm, not that you did wrong, is the song, delete this note.
  3. 00:10:422 (2,1) - The density of notes here is less than the Cup! you need add note 00:10:635 - here. Aaaand not forget add dash to 00:10:848 (1) - to highlight the real beggining of the song.
  4. 00:12:133 (1,2,3) - Again, same distances, but (3) is less strong, just this last a bit to the left.
  5. 00:13:419 (3,4,1) - Aaaand... Again xD, make an obvious dash between 00:13:848 (4,1) - (yeah, just more distance).
  6. 00:17:705 (1,2) - Why this shooort distance and then 00:18:348 (2,1) - this too strooonngg and eeeviill distance? noo please! ): add distance to (2) and reduce to (1) to not make uncomfortable movement.
  7. 00:20:276 (6,1) - Really deserves this distance? ohu ohu, nope, try with 00:20:705 (1) - x 336.
  8. 00:20:919 (2,3,4) - Sorry, im irritant, i know, 00:20:919 (2,3,4) - same as cup, s biit more distance to 00:21:133 (4) - because is more strong.
  9. 00:25:633 (3,4) - Ohhhh, you should reduce this distance, reallllly hard, too!
  10. 00:34:263 (1) - Same as Cup.
Platter
  1. 00:04:039 (1) - Same as Cup.
  2. 00:06:167 (1,2,3) - Oh come on, the density of notes here is the same as Salad, why not reverse in 00:06:805 - ?
  3. 00:07:656 (5) - Same as Salad.
  4. 00:10:422 (2) - Try ctrl+g to add really good HDash, fit perfect to highlight the "real" beggining of the song~ Other option is just change the distances, if you not like these above suggestion.
  5. 00:14:276 (1,2,3,4,5) - HDash here? nuu, this part of the song is relax, maybe fit with the consistency and individual sound, but it's most important to be as fluid as the song goes!
  6. 00:18:990 (1,2,3) - If you put 00:18:990 (1) - in x 64 you create a better pattern and fit with the song (:
  7. 00:20:705 (1,4) - nc should be in (4), not in 00:20:705 .
  8. 00:25:848 (4,5) - Reaaaly is good song to HDash? In my opinion no! And there are many dash near here, you should remove this.
  9. 00:29:705 (5,1) - Again, exchange nc, not forget be consistent with the nc and hitsounds regarding to other difficulties!
  10. 00:29:705 (5,6,1,2) - Feels a bit weird and uncomfortable, because is "jump... no movement... jump", mhmhhh... try with 00:30:562 (1) - x 336.
  11. 00:34:263 (1) - Same as Cup.
Good luck :P ccchhrriissmasssss!
posted

koliron wrote:

General
  1. Consider add "Snow" in Tags simply because in most of the bg and it would be an easy way to recognise. - Sure!
  2. Why you use Preview point 00:24:540 here? if you did this for the sound in 00:24:562 - be more lisenable, I assure you there is no difference if you change to 00:24:562 - . - Changed offset and stuff, forgot to move preview point >.<
  3. Why these dark Combocolours? nuuuu this song and bg is soo cutie, I recommend using more vibrant colors! - Okie
Cup
  1. 00:04:039 (1) - This Spinner should start in 00:04:465 - because here is where the violin really begins, if you cant hear, just volume 100% and listen in x0.25 (: - Done
  2. 00:06:167 (1,2,3) - The sound in (3) is less strong than (2), and this is less than (1), but you used higher distance to (3), so, just 00:07:444 (2) - x: 240 to fit with these sounds. - Done
  3. 00:10:422 (2,3,1) - Other case of distances (okay, is the most common in cups), put 00:10:848 (1) - a biiiit to the left, because is a more loud! (: - Done
  4. 00:12:133 (2) - The sound here is so strong, in my opinion this slider almost without movement is not the best option, you can make this more horizontal and then 00:12:990 (3) - more vertical, this last is tooo low. - Done
  5. 00:15:562 (1) - nc here nnnot fit, with so few sounds and a regular bpm you not need add as many nc. - Done
  6. 00:16:848 (3,4,1) - Again, same distances but 00:17:705 (1) - is strong! this last a biit to the right. - Done
  7. 00:16:848 (3) - Why not clap here? you are breaking the consistency, all other sounds same to this have clap! for example 00:15:562 (1) - 00:13:848 (4) - 00:18:562 (2) - . - Supposed to be clap lol
  8. 00:19:848 (3,4,5) - Ohh come on, same distances... really (5) deserves the same? i think no, aaand 00:20:705 (5,6,1) - here you you less distance to 00:21:133 (1) - , mhhh, try with just 00:20:705 (5) - x 400 to fix these problems ~ - Changed differently
  9. 00:22:848 (1) - Nope nope~ this nc is not necessary. - okie
  10. 00:23:705 (3,1) - Joooo? Why this short distance, hee! You should add more, is boring ): (aaand the sound in (1) definitely deserves more distance) - Done
  11. 00:31:467 (1,2,3) - if you rely on the violin here, then definitely should reduce the distance to 00:32:736 (3) - ! Lllistenn houhouhou. - I don't really see why :P
  12. 00:33:394 (2) - This sound is not entirely clear, I think it's best to replace 00:33:177 (1,2,3) - with a slider, aaand because is also better to reduce the density of notes in this final.- Done
  13. 00:34:481 (1) - Is complicated marking an end of this spinner hoooo, in my opinion should finish in 00:36:220 - because from here these sounds they are extremely low, plus some different sounds begin of the... triangle? - I need 30 seconds drain time, so no
Salad
  1. 00:04:039 (1) - Same as Cup. - Done
  2. 00:07:656 (4) - if you listen well, actually here there is no sound, it is a little earlier, I not suggest you continue this instrument, I notice that you have several mistakes with the bpm, not that you did wrong, is the song, delete this note. - Not gonna delete the note, and JBH helped me with the BPM
  3. 00:10:422 (2,1) - The density of notes here is less than the Cup! you need add note 00:10:635 - here. Aaaand not forget add dash to 00:10:848 (1) - to highlight the real beggining of the song. - No need to make a big deal out of it xD Done
  4. 00:12:133 (1,2,3) - Again, same distances, but (3) is less strong, just this last a bit to the left. - nah, feel it's better like this
  5. 00:13:419 (3,4,1) - Aaaand... Again xD, make an obvious dash between 00:13:848 (4,1) - (yeah, just more distance). - Done
  6. 00:17:705 (1,2) - Why this shooort distance and then 00:18:348 (2,1) - this too strooonngg and eeeviill distance? noo please! ): add distance to (2) and reduce to (1) to not make uncomfortable movement. - The jumps does follow the music lol, but I changed this part
  7. 00:20:276 (6,1) - Really deserves this distance? ohu ohu, nope, try with 00:20:705 (1) - x 336. - Changed it
  8. 00:20:919 (2,3,4) - Sorry, im irritant, i know, 00:20:919 (2,3,4) - same as cup, s biit more distance to 00:21:133 (4) - because is more strong. - Changed it
  9. 00:25:633 (3,4) - Ohhhh, you should reduce this distance, reallllly hard, too! - Done
  10. 00:34:263 (1) - Same as Cup. - Same as cup
Platter
  1. 00:04:039 (1) - Same as Cup. - Done
  2. 00:06:167 (1,2,3) - Oh come on, the density of notes here is the same as Salad, why not reverse in 00:06:805 - ? - oh come on, can you talk normal? Done. Jeez.
  3. 00:07:656 (5) - Same as Salad. - Same as in Salad.
  4. 00:10:422 (2) - Try ctrl+g to add really good HDash, fit perfect to highlight the "real" beggining of the song~ Other option is just change the distances, if you not like these above suggestion. - Done
  5. 00:14:276 (1,2,3,4,5) - HDash here? nuu, this part of the song is relax, maybe fit with the consistency and individual sound, but it's most important to be as fluid as the song goes! - Pretty sure it's impossible to make this hyper considering the long distance between the notes
  6. 00:18:990 (1,2,3) - If you put 00:18:990 (1) - in x 64 you create a better pattern and fit with the song (: - Done
  7. 00:20:705 (1,4) - nc should be in (4), not in 00:20:705 . - Done
  8. 00:25:848 (4,5) - Reaaaly is good song to HDash? In my opinion no! And there are many dash near here, you should remove this. - Well, it is the kiai, I don't really see what's bad with it.
  9. 00:29:705 (5,1) - Again, exchange nc, not forget be consistent with the nc and hitsounds regarding to other difficulties! - Done
  10. 00:29:705 (5,6,1,2) - Feels a bit weird and uncomfortable, because is "jump... no movement... jump", mhmhhh... try with 00:30:562 (1) - x 336. - Sure
  11. 00:34:263 (1) - Same as Cup. - Same as cup
Good luck :P ccchhrriissmasssss!


Thanks for modding ! :3
posted
ALL SUGGESTIONS

[generaaaal]
last red line seems to be wrong IMO. you can clearly hear that the last note hits way too late. the last red line should be imo 148bpm. sounds way better, but you should check for yourself and maybe ask around more people.

[plattarrgh]
00:19:848 (4,5,6) - idk why but the distance to the previous pattern is so weird. i just feel like there could be more movement, maybe ctrl+h something or idk.
00:33:394 (2,3,4) - all other triplets look pretty linear, while this seems like the only one to be kinda curvy. imo weird but i'm just nazi about it.
00:34:046 (5) - i feel like as the last note it could be spaced even further? cause right now you kinda have to stop the dash right before you hit the note and it's kinda anti-climatic idkkkkk

[saladderino]
00:17:705 (1,2) - this sounds rhythmically weird, cause there's quite a dominant sound on the white tick of 00:18:348 (2) - . i think deleting the second slider and instead repeating the first one would be better. (of course change position etc if you apply)
00:22:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - that was kinda rhythmically weird as well, but not as muich as the last thing i mentioned. it feels like 00:23:490 - is missing a note to me, but i'm not even sure either.
00:34:046 (4) - maybe space this even further as well? (just like in platter)

[Cuppa]
i don't really have anything to say, sorry xD

hope this is helpful. if not it's ok, cause it didn't really take a lot of time as it's only 30 seconds long and three diffs LOL
posted

Alumetorz wrote:

ALL SUGGESTIONS

[generaaaal]
last red line seems to be wrong IMO. you can clearly hear that the last note hits way too late. the last red line should be imo 148bpm. sounds way better, but you should check for yourself and maybe ask around more people. - 148bpm sounds good

[plattarrgh]
00:19:848 (4,5,6) - idk why but the distance to the previous pattern is so weird. i just feel like there could be more movement, maybe ctrl+h something or idk. - Good idea! Done!
00:33:394 (2,3,4) - all other triplets look pretty linear, while this seems like the only one to be kinda curvy. imo weird but i'm just nazi about it. - Done!
00:34:046 (5) - i feel like as the last note it could be spaced even further? cause right now you kinda have to stop the dash right before you hit the note and it's kinda anti-climatic idkkkkk - Sure!

[saladderino]
00:17:705 (1,2) - this sounds rhythmically weird, cause there's quite a dominant sound on the white tick of 00:18:348 (2) - . i think deleting the second slider and instead repeating the first one would be better. (of course change position etc if you apply) - Shortened (2) instead
00:22:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - that was kinda rhythmically weird as well, but not as muich as the last thing i mentioned. it feels like 00:23:490 - is missing a note to me, but i'm not even sure either. - I think I fixed it
00:34:046 (4) - maybe space this even further as well? (just like in platter) - Sure!

[Cuppa]
i don't really have anything to say, sorry xD

hope this is helpful. if not it's ok, cause it didn't really take a lot of time as it's only 30 seconds long and three diffs LOL


Thanks! :D <3
posted
Requested mod \o/ (Hi, this is my first CtB mod ever, so my suggestions might not be that well^^)

[General]
♫♪Hitsounds: I'd suggest changing the volume to 60-80%, since I feel like the hitsounds are way too loud. (It might just be me o)

[Cup]
  1. 00:26:705 (3,4,1) - You are using the same distance for 3 to 4 and 4 to 1, even though 4 to 1 is much stronger (I hope it isn't confusing) move 00:27:990 (1) - to x:288 ? If you do so, I'd suggest moving 00:28:848 (2,3) - one grid to the left, because I think 00:29:705 (4) - could use more distance too.
  2. 00:30:562 (5) - I think this isn't really a strong beat to use that much distance, maybe move it to x:320 ?


[Salad]
  1. 00:24:133 (6,7) - Whoa! I think that's way too much, it's almost a HDash ! 00:24:348 (8,9,1) - Select all and move to x: 272 ?


[Platter]
Everything looks fine for me !

Good Luck ! Aight I feel like it's bad xd
Lmao you just updated right after I finished my mod, making my mod useless o.o Only give me kudosu if something was still useful
posted

P i k u wrote:

Requested mod \o/ (Hi, this is my first CtB mod ever, so my suggestions might not be that well^^)

[General]
♫♪Hitsounds: I'd suggest changing the volume to 60-80%, since I feel like the hitsounds are way too loud. (It might just be me o) - Done!

[Cup]
  1. 00:26:705 (3,4,1) - You are using the same distance for 3 to 4 and 4 to 1, even though 4 to 1 is much stronger (I hope it isn't confusing) move 00:27:990 (1) - to x:288 ? If you do so, I'd suggest moving 00:28:848 (2,3) - one grid to the left, because I think 00:29:705 (4) - could use more distance too. - Done!
  2. 00:30:562 (5) - I think this isn't really a strong beat to use that much distance, maybe move it to x:320 ? - Done!


[Salad]
  1. 00:24:133 (6,7) - Whoa! I think that's way too much, it's almost a HDash ! 00:24:348 (8,9,1) - Select all and move to x: 272 ? - Done!


[Platter]
Everything looks fine for me !

Good Luck ! Aight I feel like it's bad xd
Lmao you just updated right after I finished my mod, making my mod useless o.o Only give me kudosu if something was still useful - It's not useless <3


Thank you for modding ^_^
posted
Requested in my queue.

[General]

This is probably intentional, but just thought I'd mention it in case, is the source supposed to be the same as the song title?
Maybe some unsnapped lines around when bpm of one section changed to 148, make sure to resnap.
Quick note, moving that spinner the way kolrion said wouldn't make the drain time below 30 seconds (for some reason spinner isn't shown by drain time but it would still be over 30 seconds if you ended it there, and this is fine as shown in maps like Pupa, and Opening). However if you have other reasons for not changing it, feel free to leave it.

[Cup]

Check AiMod, there's an unsnapped note.

00:12:990 (3) - Maybe x:304? The distance to this feels a tiny bit strong how it is now, in my opinion.
00:33:177 (1,1) - Maybe move this part to the left one more grid space, I feel the strength of the note here is strong enough to suggest more distance to the first 1 here.

Nicely made cup overall.

[Salad]

00:06:593 (2) - Maybe move this to x:96, and avoid using high distances like this until the kiai? I feel it would better help ease the player into the map.
00:10:635 (3) - x:192 would feel nicer here in the double, and also make the dash afterwards feel better as it's more emphasised, and so better recognised as a dash to newer players.
00:12:133 (1) - Move this one grid space to the left to better emphasise it as a dash?
00:16:848 (6) - x:128 makes the distances feel more natural in the triple like pattern here.
00:20:705 (1) - I don't feel like a dash to this really fits, there's been similar sounds throughout the song which you haven't made dashes to. Try x:448 instead.
00:22:419 (6) - x:272, to better emphasise the dash.
00:27:562 (6) - I feel this plays better if you move it to x:352, dash feels a bit weird here to me.

[Platter]

00:06:593 (3) - In this difficulty, a dash here would be nice for the strong note, the way you originally put a dash into the salad.
00:12:133 (1,2,3) - Move this section to x:64, weakens the hyper slightly to keep nicer flow, as HDash followed by movement in the opposite direction could be too much at this speed.
00:13:848 (5) - x:464 could be nice, for a slightly easier beat to hit without dashing.
00:14:276 (1) - The way this is emphasised with a finish makes me think this'd work better as a dash. Maybe ctrl+H and move it to x:144? That feels nice to play in my opinion.
00:16:633 (2,3,4) - Dash to this sounds weird to me, 2 doesn't feel like a particularly strong sound. Move this section to x:448, removes this dash but keeps the one afterwards.
00:19:419 (3) - x:16, the extra distance here feels nice with the pitches, I feel.
00:20:276 (7) - NC.
00:21:133 (1) - x:192, a dash would be nice here, strong sound.
00:22:848 (1,2,3,4) - Move this section to x:224, to stop the player from having to dash to this curve currently, I feel the sound is not strong enough at this point.
00:23:705 (5,6,7) - I don't feel like a HDash is really needed here, this sound isn't that strong, a normal dash would emphasise it enough. Try moving this section to x:272.
00:25:848 (4) - x:448 please, weakening this hyper works a lot better with the antiflow movement of the slider.
00:26:919 (5) - This sound doesn't really feel strong enough for a HDash, to my ears. Try moving this to x:240, instead?
00:28:848 (3) - x:336, an increased distance at this point would be nice to emphasise the pitch change better.
00:30:133 (2) - x:304, a dash doesn't really fit here, this sound isn't that strong, and you've not had hypers on the other drum sounds similar to this.
00:31:023 (4) - x:176, ^.
00:31:467 (1) - This should really have higher distance, for a note that is even emphasised with the kiai it's quite low. Try x:384.
00:32:295 (3) - Ctrl+H this and move it to x:304, feels better emphasised by the antiflow movement, and a jump like this to the next note would be good as that is a very strong note in terms of the main instrument.
00:33:987 (5) - Move this to x:464, the current distance is a tiny bit too big, leading to an awkward jump.


Alright, done ;)
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- Magic Bomb - wrote:

Requested in my queue.

[General]

This is probably intentional, but just thought I'd mention it in case, is the source supposed to be the same as the song title? - It's an intro from a Norwegian christmas series called Jul i svingen, so yeah I guess.
Maybe some unsnapped lines around when bpm of one section changed to 148, make sure to reshape. - I think I fixed all
Quick note, moving that spinner the way kolrion said wouldn't make the drain time below 30 seconds (for some reason spinner isn't shown by drain time but it would still be over 30 seconds if you ended it there, and this is fine as shown in maps like Pupa, and Opening). However if you have other reasons for not changing it, feel free to leave it. - Okie

[Cup]

Check AiMod, there's an unsnapped note. - Fixed

00:12:990 (3) - Maybe x:304? The distance to this feels a tiny bit strong how it is now, in my opinion. - Done
00:33:177 (1,1) - Maybe move this part to the left one more grid space, I feel the strength of the note here is strong enough to suggest more distance to the first 1 here. - Done

Nicely made cup overall. - Thanks! <3

[Salad]

00:06:593 (2) - Maybe move this to x:96, and avoid using high distances like this until the kiai? I feel it would better help ease the player into the map. - Done
00:10:635 (3) - x:192 would feel nicer here in the double, and also make the dash afterwards feel better as it's more emphasised, and so better recognised as a dash to newer players. - Done
00:12:133 (1) - Move this one grid space to the left to better emphasise it as a dash? - Moved the notes before one grid to the right instead
00:16:848 (6) - x:128 makes the distances feel more natural in the triple like pattern here. - Done
00:20:705 (1) - I don't feel like a dash to this really fits, there's been similar sounds throughout the song which you haven't made dashes to. Try x:448 instead. - Done
00:22:419 (6) - x:272, to better emphasise the dash. - Done
00:27:562 (6) - I feel this plays better if you move it to x:352, dash feels a bit weird here to me. - Done

[Platter]

00:06:593 (3) - In this difficulty, a dash here would be nice for the strong note, the way you originally put a dash into the salad. - Done
00:12:133 (1,2,3) - Move this section to x:64, weakens the hyper slightly to keep nicer flow, as HDash followed by movement in the opposite direction could be too much at this speed. - Done
00:13:848 (5) - x:464 could be nice, for a slightly easier beat to hit without dashing. - Done
00:14:276 (1) - The way this is emphasised with a finish makes me think this'd work better as a dash. Maybe ctrl+H and move it to x:144? That feels nice to play in my opinion. - Done
00:16:633 (2,3,4) - Dash to this sounds weird to me, 2 doesn't feel like a particularly strong sound. Move this section to x:448, removes this dash but keeps the one afterwards. - Done
00:19:419 (3) - x:16, the extra distance here feels nice with the pitches, I feel. - Done
00:20:276 (7) - NC. - Done
00:21:133 (1) - x:192, a dash would be nice here, strong sound. - Done
00:22:848 (1,2,3,4) - Move this section to x:224, to stop the player from having to dash to this curve currently, I feel the sound is not strong enough at this point. - Done
00:23:705 (5,6,7) - I don't feel like a HDash is really needed here, this sound isn't that strong, a normal dash would emphasise it enough. Try moving this section to x:272. - Done
00:25:848 (4) - x:448 please, weakening this hyper works a lot better with the antiflow movement of the slider. - Done
00:26:919 (5) - This sound doesn't really feel strong enough for a HDash, to my ears. Try moving this to x:240, instead? - Done
00:28:848 (3) - x:336, an increased distance at this point would be nice to emphasise the pitch change better. - Done
00:30:133 (2) - x:304, a dash doesn't really fit here, this sound isn't that strong, and you've not had hypers on the other drum sounds similar to this. - Done
00:31:023 (4) - x:176, ^. - Done
00:31:467 (1) - This should really have higher distance, for a note that is even emphasised with the kiai it's quite low. Try x:384. - Done
00:32:295 (3) - Ctrl+H this and move it to x:304, feels better emphasised by the antiflow movement, and a jump like this to the next note would be good as that is a very strong note in terms of the main instrument. - Done
00:33:987 (5) - Move this to x:464, the current distance is a tiny bit too big, leading to an awkward jump. - Done


Alright, done ;)


Thanks for modding ^_^
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[Cup]
00:08:295 (1) - Big jump to this
00:12:133 (2) - x320?
00:14:276 (1) - Big jump to this aswell.
00:15:562 (3) - ^
00:18:562 (2) - x272?
00:22:848 (3,4,5) - 3-4 snaps to the left.
00:27:990 (1) - Maybe consider moving this one slightly to the right.
00:30:562 (5) - x336
00:31:467 (1,2,3) - 1 snap to the right.
00:33:177 (1,1) - 5 snaps to the right.

[Salad]
00:10:848 (1) - Kind of big and awkward to move to move it close to these 00:10:422 (2,3) -

[Platter]
Some parts could be slightly buffed, feels like a salad at some parts. Otherwise perfect.
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Negri_sk wrote:

[Cup]
00:08:295 (1) - Big jump to this - Feels better where it is because it's a strong note
00:12:133 (2) - x320? - ^
00:14:276 (1) - Big jump to this aswell. - ^
00:15:562 (3) - ^ - Moved it a bit closer
00:18:562 (2) - x272? - Done
00:22:848 (3,4,5) - 3-4 snaps to the left. - Moved 1 snap left
00:27:990 (1) - Maybe consider moving this one slightly to the right. - Pretty strong note, no change
00:30:562 (5) - x336 - Done
00:31:467 (1,2,3) - 1 snap to the right. - Done
00:33:177 (1,1) - 5 snaps to the right. - Moved 1 snap right

[Salad]
00:10:848 (1) - Kind of big and awkward to move to move it close to these 00:10:422 (2,3) - - MB just made me put it like that lmao

[Platter]
Some parts could be slightly buffed, feels like a salad at some parts. Otherwise perfect. - Thanksies <3


Thankyouformod <3 *.*
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Hi! I made some adjustments to your timing, as you requested:



Hope it helps!
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Deif wrote:

Hi! I made some adjustments to your timing, as you requested:



Hope it helps!


Thanks! :3
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As requested from my queue

[Cup]
Would feel better with CS:2 and AR4
  1. 00:10:426 (2,3,1) - make these equally distanced. feels/looks better that way
  2. 00:16:848 (5,6,1) - ^
  3. 00:20:705 (5,6,1) - ^
  4. 00:32:741 (3,1,1) - bring those closer together, they feel slightly too far.


[Salad]
CS:3 and AR:6 instead?
  1. 00:08:283 (1) - stretch the end of this slider more to the right just so there's not this stop of movement at the end.
  2. 00:13:848 (4,1) - too far and awkward from eachother in my opinion, bring those closer by like 1 square.
  3. 00:20:919 (2,3,4) - make those equally distanced. looks/ feels better.
  4. 00:22:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - long and boring stretch of notes, make something interesting there! Also (8,9) from the same combo is a little too far from the rest of the notes.
  5. 00:25:419 (2,3,4) - move the 4 a square or 2 closer to the rest.


That's all i have to say, good luck with ranking! and happy holidays!
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