Hi, from M4M~
The song's chorus is so awesome <3
Julie's Kantan
00:02:400 - I'd recommend using a lowered audio volume, especially at the beginning. They're very loud atm.
00:05:888 (5) - Perhaps change to k? The pitch is lower at 00:06:586 (6). Works either way tho.
00:16:353 (17) - I personally feel like there could be finishers on this hit and ones similar to it in future kiais. Another example would be 00:21:934 (24). It sounds strong, has the cymbal sound, and the melody itself is the same as the previous two hits.
00:35:539 - It wouldn't hurt to add a hit for a transition into the next section.
00:46:353 (55) - You can add a finisher on this hit for the cymbal sound. You may want to change 00:46:004 (54) to k if you decide to do this.
00:48:446 - You need a 4/1 rest moment somewhere in this rhythm up to the spinner. You could delete 00:53:330 (67). An alternative could be 00:50:539 (61).
00:58:213 - You also need 4/1 rest moments in the whole kiai; it is too difficult. The way you created the first kiai was beautiful
You could build on that for difficulty, but make sure to include a good amount of 4/1 rest moments, or else this is quite difficult (if not unrankable). I see Flying Pan mentioned this in his mod, but I suppose the difficulty curve issue isn't as significant since this is a GD, so you'd expect different mapping styles and other things that may cause discrepancies in the difficulty curve. Rhythms like this could work:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4540845
01:14:260 (32,33) - If you changed these to d, I think you could capture more contrast on 01:14:958 (34). Same at 01:56:120 (81,82).
01:23:330 (44) - How about a spinner up to 01:24:725? I think it'd sound nice.
01:43:562 (57) - You can change this to d, since the pitch of the melody is lower than the surrounding hits.
01:45:655 - Similar to the second kiai, you're lacking 4/1 rest moments. Please create some.
Futsuu
00:21:934 (38) - You seem to be missing a finisher here, after having one on 00:16:353 (26).
00:25:074 (46,47) - Change to ks? I think this would sound nice with the instrumental beats, like you did at 00:27:865 (53,54).
00:33:795 (66) - This seems like it could use a finisher imo, sounding similar to 00:33:097 (64).
00:36:237 (71) - I think it'd be more effective to move this hit to 00:35:539 and change to d. There's no sound at 00:36:237, while there is one at 00:35:539. It'll also help emphasize the finisher on 00:35:888 (70).
00:41:469 (83,84,85,86,87) - Just going to mention that this rhythm is very difficult for a Futsuu. The fact that it is two 1.5/1 rhythms with finishers makes this quite challenging.
00:42:516 (85,86) - Seems to me like you're matching to the pitch of the flute, so Ctrl + G would match the pitch better. It'll also get the K to be matched to the drum-like sound.
00:46:004 (94) - Change to k. It'll provide more emphasis on the next finisher.
00:47:051 - This rhythm is slightly long without a 2/1 break. Perhaps remove 00:50:190 (106)?
01:09:725 - The second half of the kiai seems to get substantially easier. Perhaps add some hits.
01:19:318 (28) - Change to k? There is a drum sound different from the last hit. Same at 02:01:179 (118).
01:20:539 (32) - Change to K. The hit will be more emphasized, while also matching to the pitch of the melody. Same at 02:02:400 (122).
01:29:958 (47) - Remove? You didn't have a hit at 01:31:353 or 01:32:748.
01:50:190 (89,90) - This is an odd gap that you've created here. I think you should modify the rhythm so the gap is either on the second or fourth beat of the measure.
02:04:842 (128) - You can change this to k. Just a personal preference.
Charlotte's Muzukashii
00:24:725 - ここから気合タイムまでの Finish の使い方がよくわからなかったです。例えば、00:24:725 (68) はシンバルの音が聞こえるのに finish はないけど、似たような場所の00:38:679 (111) はあります。この他にもFinish を追加できると思います。
00:53:853 (169) - k に変更？インストの音が聞こえます。
00:54:027 (170,171,172) - ここの finish はあまりいらないと思います。00:55:423 (177,178,179,180,181) ほど音が強くないし、少しリズムが難しすぎるかもしれません。
00:58:213 - 気合タイムめっちゃ好き <3
01:15:655 (256,257,258) - Ctrl + G? 01:15:655 (256) のインスト音の音取ができます。メロディーの音調にも合うと思います。01:57:516 (381,382,383) も同じく。
01:16:702 (259,260) - ^ 01:58:563 (384,385) も同じく。
01:20:539 (271) - Finish を追加したらどうですか？シンバルの音が聞こえます。
01:40:772 (316) - kに変更？ d の四連続はつまらないと思います。
aabc's Oni
00:38:679 (1) - I think you could add a finisher on this hit for the cymbal.
00:53:853 (2) - You really like to match to the pitch of the melody, but I think this could be changed to a k to match the instrumental sound and to contrast with 00:54:027 (3).
02:04:318 (1) - Since you've matched to the melody for most of the song, why not delete this? I don't think there's a sound for the melody or in the instrumental background.
02:04:841 (1) - I'd personally change this to k for more contrast with the next hit, while still matching to the instrumental background and melodic pitch.
Nice diff
Inner Oni
I personally feel OD 7 is too high for the song's feel and BPM.
00:12:167 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - Idk, but I feel this usage of finishers is unnecessary, and confusing (who likes playing finishers
). Well, not telling you to change this, but I suppose you could put a finisher on 00:13:388 (38) too, just for easier playing since having small and big hits in a row makes it rather confusing to hit properly. Also, the emphasis is pretty similar to 00:13:213 (37) imo, compared to the other non-finisher in this sequence at 00:12:341 (32) is much better audibly justified with the quiet sound.
00:14:086 - Either add a hit here or at 00:13:737, or even both. This is an Inner Oni, so I'd expect a full match to the melody; adding a hit at 00:13:737 isn't as necessary if you want to preserve emphasis on the finisher at 00:13:562 (39) and upcoming finishers. Another reason to do this could be so that you don't have this massive difficulty jump in the kiai with 00:17:051 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65). Do this for any similar spots.
00:28:388 (110,111) - You can change these to d since the pitch of the melody is going down and for hit variety.
00:28:737 (113) - ^
00:33:795 (139,140,141,142,143) - I personally don't feel like all these finishers are necessary either, but do what you want ^^
00:36:411 - You may add a hit here.
00:45:132 (177) - Change to k for a better hit variety and pitch match.
00:46:004 (181) - ^
00:59:434 (20) - ^ For a better contrast with the next finisher and hit variety.
01:02:225 (39) - ^ Also to match the drum sound.
01:09:202 (88) - ^ To match the drum sound.
01:16:004 (126) - ^ If you're matching to the pitch of the melody. Same at 01:57:865 (4).
01:21:237 (150) - ^ To match the drum sound. Same at 02:03:098 (28).
01:23:330 (159) - Change to d? I suppose the flute sound is high, but I feel like transitioning into a quiet section and to contrast against the drum-matched k sounds would make d a better choice.
01:27:865 (164) - Change to k if you want to match to the melodic pitch precisely.
01:32:748 (175) - ^
01:33:097 (176) - ^ More optional.
01:40:772 (195) - ^ Also to match that sound in the background.
02:04:143 (32) - Change to d? I feel like you could emphasize the highest point in the melody at 02:04:493 (33) like this, and it'll also give more hit variety.
That's all. Sorry I was kinda lazy with this mod altho the song was great
Good luck on rank~
The song's chorus is so awesome <3
Julie's Kantan
00:02:400 - I'd recommend using a lowered audio volume, especially at the beginning. They're very loud atm.
00:05:888 (5) - Perhaps change to k? The pitch is lower at 00:06:586 (6). Works either way tho.
00:16:353 (17) - I personally feel like there could be finishers on this hit and ones similar to it in future kiais. Another example would be 00:21:934 (24). It sounds strong, has the cymbal sound, and the melody itself is the same as the previous two hits.
00:35:539 - It wouldn't hurt to add a hit for a transition into the next section.
00:46:353 (55) - You can add a finisher on this hit for the cymbal sound. You may want to change 00:46:004 (54) to k if you decide to do this.
00:48:446 - You need a 4/1 rest moment somewhere in this rhythm up to the spinner. You could delete 00:53:330 (67). An alternative could be 00:50:539 (61).
00:58:213 - You also need 4/1 rest moments in the whole kiai; it is too difficult. The way you created the first kiai was beautiful
You could build on that for difficulty, but make sure to include a good amount of 4/1 rest moments, or else this is quite difficult (if not unrankable). I see Flying Pan mentioned this in his mod, but I suppose the difficulty curve issue isn't as significant since this is a GD, so you'd expect different mapping styles and other things that may cause discrepancies in the difficulty curve. Rhythms like this could work:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4540845
01:14:260 (32,33) - If you changed these to d, I think you could capture more contrast on 01:14:958 (34). Same at 01:56:120 (81,82).
01:23:330 (44) - How about a spinner up to 01:24:725? I think it'd sound nice.
01:43:562 (57) - You can change this to d, since the pitch of the melody is lower than the surrounding hits.
01:45:655 - Similar to the second kiai, you're lacking 4/1 rest moments. Please create some.
Futsuu
00:21:934 (38) - You seem to be missing a finisher here, after having one on 00:16:353 (26).
00:25:074 (46,47) - Change to ks? I think this would sound nice with the instrumental beats, like you did at 00:27:865 (53,54).
00:33:795 (66) - This seems like it could use a finisher imo, sounding similar to 00:33:097 (64).
00:36:237 (71) - I think it'd be more effective to move this hit to 00:35:539 and change to d. There's no sound at 00:36:237, while there is one at 00:35:539. It'll also help emphasize the finisher on 00:35:888 (70).
00:41:469 (83,84,85,86,87) - Just going to mention that this rhythm is very difficult for a Futsuu. The fact that it is two 1.5/1 rhythms with finishers makes this quite challenging.
00:42:516 (85,86) - Seems to me like you're matching to the pitch of the flute, so Ctrl + G would match the pitch better. It'll also get the K to be matched to the drum-like sound.
00:46:004 (94) - Change to k. It'll provide more emphasis on the next finisher.
00:47:051 - This rhythm is slightly long without a 2/1 break. Perhaps remove 00:50:190 (106)?
01:09:725 - The second half of the kiai seems to get substantially easier. Perhaps add some hits.
01:19:318 (28) - Change to k? There is a drum sound different from the last hit. Same at 02:01:179 (118).
01:20:539 (32) - Change to K. The hit will be more emphasized, while also matching to the pitch of the melody. Same at 02:02:400 (122).
01:29:958 (47) - Remove? You didn't have a hit at 01:31:353 or 01:32:748.
01:50:190 (89,90) - This is an odd gap that you've created here. I think you should modify the rhythm so the gap is either on the second or fourth beat of the measure.
02:04:842 (128) - You can change this to k. Just a personal preference.
Charlotte's Muzukashii
00:24:725 - ここから気合タイムまでの Finish の使い方がよくわからなかったです。例えば、00:24:725 (68) はシンバルの音が聞こえるのに finish はないけど、似たような場所の00:38:679 (111) はあります。この他にもFinish を追加できると思います。
00:53:853 (169) - k に変更？インストの音が聞こえます。
00:54:027 (170,171,172) - ここの finish はあまりいらないと思います。00:55:423 (177,178,179,180,181) ほど音が強くないし、少しリズムが難しすぎるかもしれません。
00:58:213 - 気合タイムめっちゃ好き <3
01:15:655 (256,257,258) - Ctrl + G? 01:15:655 (256) のインスト音の音取ができます。メロディーの音調にも合うと思います。01:57:516 (381,382,383) も同じく。
01:16:702 (259,260) - ^ 01:58:563 (384,385) も同じく。
01:20:539 (271) - Finish を追加したらどうですか？シンバルの音が聞こえます。
01:40:772 (316) - kに変更？ d の四連続はつまらないと思います。
aabc's Oni
00:38:679 (1) - I think you could add a finisher on this hit for the cymbal.
00:53:853 (2) - You really like to match to the pitch of the melody, but I think this could be changed to a k to match the instrumental sound and to contrast with 00:54:027 (3).
02:04:318 (1) - Since you've matched to the melody for most of the song, why not delete this? I don't think there's a sound for the melody or in the instrumental background.
02:04:841 (1) - I'd personally change this to k for more contrast with the next hit, while still matching to the instrumental background and melodic pitch.
Nice diff
Inner Oni
I personally feel OD 7 is too high for the song's feel and BPM.
00:12:167 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - Idk, but I feel this usage of finishers is unnecessary, and confusing (who likes playing finishers
). Well, not telling you to change this, but I suppose you could put a finisher on 00:13:388 (38) too, just for easier playing since having small and big hits in a row makes it rather confusing to hit properly. Also, the emphasis is pretty similar to 00:13:213 (37) imo, compared to the other non-finisher in this sequence at 00:12:341 (32) is much better audibly justified with the quiet sound. 00:14:086 - Either add a hit here or at 00:13:737, or even both. This is an Inner Oni, so I'd expect a full match to the melody; adding a hit at 00:13:737 isn't as necessary if you want to preserve emphasis on the finisher at 00:13:562 (39) and upcoming finishers. Another reason to do this could be so that you don't have this massive difficulty jump in the kiai with 00:17:051 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65). Do this for any similar spots.
00:28:388 (110,111) - You can change these to d since the pitch of the melody is going down and for hit variety.
00:28:737 (113) - ^
00:33:795 (139,140,141,142,143) - I personally don't feel like all these finishers are necessary either, but do what you want ^^
00:36:411 - You may add a hit here.
00:45:132 (177) - Change to k for a better hit variety and pitch match.
00:46:004 (181) - ^
00:59:434 (20) - ^ For a better contrast with the next finisher and hit variety.
01:02:225 (39) - ^ Also to match the drum sound.
01:09:202 (88) - ^ To match the drum sound.
01:16:004 (126) - ^ If you're matching to the pitch of the melody. Same at 01:57:865 (4).
01:21:237 (150) - ^ To match the drum sound. Same at 02:03:098 (28).
01:23:330 (159) - Change to d? I suppose the flute sound is high, but I feel like transitioning into a quiet section and to contrast against the drum-matched k sounds would make d a better choice.
01:27:865 (164) - Change to k if you want to match to the melodic pitch precisely.
01:32:748 (175) - ^
01:33:097 (176) - ^ More optional.
01:40:772 (195) - ^ Also to match that sound in the background.
02:04:143 (32) - Change to d? I feel like you could emphasize the highest point in the melody at 02:04:493 (33) like this, and it'll also give more hit variety.
That's all. Sorry I was kinda lazy with this mod altho the song was great
Good luck on rank~
