1. Easy (2,2 stars, 207 notes)
2. Hard (4,5 stars, 400 notes)
3. Normal (3,04 stars, 278 notes)

Lilyphilia wrote:

Hey Hey Here's your Star,
Keep up the good work, your map is smooth! IRC modded <- hey you forgot that ;p

-Xero- wrote:

:!: LEISERE HITSOUNDS!! kk xD
Offset -10 ms aye


Gute Map, allerdings solltest du ein paar Slider etwas verändern. Das sieht teilweise nicht sehr gut aus ^^. Ich habe ein paar Beispiele rausgenommen. Ansonsten könnte ich jetzt noch viel Nazi Modding machen aber das lasse ich jetzt mal.
Ach ja, ich kann Combo Placement nicht modden, aber bei dir sieht das manchmal etwas zufällig aus.

Normal


01:23:606 (1,3) - Das sieht nicht sehr schön aus... fixed
Vorschlag:
Copy Paste diesen Slider für die 3
01:59:309 (2,4) - fixed
Vorschlag:
Und wieder das selbe wie oben.
Ja ich mach das gerne xD
02:10:218 (1,2,3) -
02:58:318 (4) - Offscreen fix
03:08:401 (1) - Platzier den direkt hinter dem Circle, sprich 1/6 dahinter und nich 2/6. fix
03:13:194 (1) - Offscreen (die Slider sind halb, oder zum Teil in der HP Bar drinnen) fix
03:32:534 (x) - Hier einen Circle platzieren sonst wirkt das ein bisschen komisch. Außerdem den Spinner wieder direkt hinter den Circle platzieren. mh k

Insane

00:19:473 (1,2) - Zu schwer wenn du mich fragst für mich nicht = ='
01:23:606 (1,3,...,2) - Die sind gar nicht schön... Vor allem der letzte. XD hab die schnecke aber da gelassen
02:17:657 (1,2,3,4) - Der plötzliche Jump von 3 zu 4 passt überhaupt nicht und verwirrt nur... pöh =3=
01:07:077 (1,2) - Siehe 00:19:473 Siehe 00:19:473
01:57:822 (8) - orz...

Viel Glück!

wmfchris wrote:

[insane]
0:18:812 (8,9) spacing not enough fix
0:22:944 (3,4) make an equilateral triangle, up 2 grids ok
0:50:879 (1,2,3,4) spacing not enough? oh yeah
1:03:110 (8,1,2,3,4) imo (8,1) can be larger spacing like (1,2,3,4). naah, i made it that way intentionally
1:07:077 (4,5) this jump is too hentai? though fine for me~ for me too^^
1:42:945 (1,2,3,4) suggestion: eqiudistance among (1,2,3,4)? maybe (2) left 4 grids? fixed in a triangle-way
1:47:904 (2) left 1 grid k
2:18:318 (1,2) no need to put a sudden jump here uh ...i thought i already fixed that :S
2:38:483 (5,6) (5) left 1 grid, (6,7) down a bit so that on the same level with (4) ok~

[Normal+]
1:10:042 (6~10) make a smoother curve, or at least symmetrical to (1~5)? k^^
basically no spacing errors, but try to make smoother chains in 1/2 streams uuh...tried to find all "strange" curves and make them better^^

At last you'll need an easier diff as stated in the ranking criteria. There will come an [Easy] by La_Cataline

star~

Firo Prochainezo wrote:

Normal+:
In my opinion this one should be changed to Hard. normal+ IMO since this is only clickingfrenzy and there aren't many pattern or jumps^^
There are 12 spacing problems, try to fix them! mmh i think i know what you meant with these 12, but they were set intentionally
02:57:812: These claps are bugging me. Maybe remove hitclap from (3)? ok

Insane:
There are 49 spacing problems, try to fix them! same as normal+
00:39:969: (4) add hitfinish? k
01:51:375: (5) ^ ^
02:03:028 to 02:04:268: This part is bugging me a lot >< try to fix it or remove it. remade

Very nice song and map, have a star.

noneed wrote:

Hattest spaß meinen modding queue zu entjungfern? nishishishishi~

Normal+:
Preview Point 01:03:596 k und
00:08:223 (1) - kiai anfang hier.schaut gut aus wenn die sterne mit nem klick kommen ^^ k
00:43:926 (1) - hm, ich wäre für clap am ende und nicht am anfang ok
00:44:918 (2) - end->clap aye
01:03:183 (x) - kiai startet schlampig.ich wäre für 01:03:596 (1) - XD gut
01:06:075 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm, solche passagen hast du selten verwendet obwohl die bei soner map ganz gut spielbar sind.vll noch ein paar mal mehr adden? hmmm, hab ein zwei mehr davon gemacht^^
01:08:555 (4) - hm, ich finde dass dieser slider den etwas den flow zerstört.ich wäre für zwei circles.. der flow, yo ne spaß beiseite, gefixed xD
01:17:976 (1,2,3,4,5) - hitsounds? ups
01:25:084 (6) - platzier das dort wo 4 war k
01:27:067 (8) - ^ ^
03:03:267 (2) - align mit 1? ist doch schon?^^

Insane:
wenn du HP und OD+1 machen würdest wäre es ein 5 sterniges Insane ne du, schon ok
00:38:482 (1) - new combo k
01:16:499 (3) - ein ganz gerader slider passt da besser ups^^
01:31:540 (1) - urgh sry solche sliders schaun echt hässlich aus D: mach es ungefähr so pfff =3= geänder ja, aber nicht so wie im screenshot^^
01:43:111 (2) - platziere es da wo (4) war... k
02:46:252 (6,7) - etwas zu weit von 5 weg find ich nicht, aber extra für dich auf die X-achse gelegt

Viel Glück!(pm mich wenn easy fertig ist.will ich mir auch anschaun)

IceBeam wrote:

[Normal+]
Rename to Hard? ..but.............................................................k...
01:23:596 (5) - Finish. not there, but added finishes to the slides = =
01:27:563 (1) - ^ k
01:47:894 - Add a note? k
02:11:200 (3) - Finish. k
02:15:167 (1) - ^ ^
02:27:068 - ^ ^
03:08:308 (1) - Finish this spinner at 03:10:209? ok
03:37:482 - Add a note? kay
03:39:218 (1) - Maybe finish it at 03:42:689? k

[Insane]
00:52:522 (2) - Move this note to 00:52:687. have to refuse...sounds too strange for me :S
01:20:125 (4) - Clap. k
01:21:117 - ^ ^
01:26:076 (4) - ^^
01:28:555 (5) - ^^
01:44:423 (1) - ^^
01:58:307 - Finish? k
02:05:250 (4) - Clap. aye
02:06:241 (3) - ^^
02:24:589 - ^^
02:25:581 (3) - ^^
03:00:788 (4) - Finish. ok
03:39:218 (1) - Maybe finish it at 03:42:689? got it

Nice music,star~

NotShinta wrote:

Overall:
The BG says 'The' Boondock Saints, but the artist says just Boondock Saints. Which is right? betwixt and between, fixed
Insane
00:19:463 (1,2) - Nothing in the music fits this jump... I heard something but changed...
00:22:769 (2,3,4) - Random, confusing spacing. fixed
03:21:945 (6) - Confusing anti-jump. fixed
Actually, the spacing changes a lot in this map. Be more consistent in your mapping.

Hard looks fine, may mod again when easier diffs are done.

wmfchris wrote:

requested for recheck normal.


ammm, no spacing problem.
0:17:149 (2,1) down 1 grid so that it's symmetrical along the mid-pt of sliders? correspondingly (2,3,4) down 1 grids too... aye

^one and only suggestion.

pink star. thank you very much <3

NatsumeRin wrote:

BPM:121.008, offset:305.

i could believe current timing is a little wrong. now players will hit about 15ms late at the beginning and about 10ms early at the end.

Normal is not easy enough to be the easiest difficulty.

...for now. Easy coming

Sakura Hana wrote:

Some tags would be nice. but i don't know what to fill in...orz
Combo color 2 and 3 are kind of similar, consider changing or removing either. fix'd
Your sliders could use some improvement. hehe ^^'

[Insane]
I don't really agree with those 2x Sections, looks like they are more like to make the map harder than make the map fun, specially during endless clicking streams.
00:21:460 (1,2,3) - Triplet breaks the rythm, either remove this triplet or add triplets in similar sections before this one. removed
01:33:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm not really fond of theese kind of spacing acceleration, doesnt really look good imo mmh ok fixed
02:00:296 (1,2) - I dont agree with this full screen jump at all, it doesn't even fit the music. fixed
02:15:832 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - This is too tiring... accepted and fixed, i actually thought i already changed it LOL
02:25:253 (2,3) - Spacing too far fix
02:40:960 ~ 02:44:921 - Everything here looks like randomly positioned since you're using 2x speed so the spacing is doubled and the notes are 1/1 apart so the spacing is really big that you will just end up positioning them in a random spot. :/
03:04:755 (1,2,3) - Anti-jump?fixd
03:23:927 (4,5,6,7,8) - I dont really like such big spacings... changed
03:36:488 (1) - Awkward slider tick. whoops^^

[Hard]
00:10:538 (1,2,3,4) - This double here feels more like a "woops i ran out of space" than "This double fits the music" when i mapped this part, i made that double intentionally, but if i look at it now it really could be mistaken for a ran-out-of-space-issue[it isn't for me]... and somehow I am rly hearing sth in music that fits? ö.O recheck..orz..
00:17:480 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^^

[Normal]
00:22:439 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1/3 streams arent fit for a Normal. fix'd
01:09:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^^
03:24:920 (1,2,3,4,5) - zig zag 1/3 stream isn't fit for a Normal. k

Insane still needs a lot of work, Good Luck!~ I think I will give up on that Insane anyway ... /sigh

Famfrit wrote:

What a melodious song. So..so beautiful Yeah *w*

Modding:

General:
- I would have reduced the stack (4/9)

Timing:
Good!

Easy:
00:12:190 (6) - the place is empty. add a circle
(??:??:??) - I do not know how to explain it. picture:

SPOILER

03:32:441 (6) - shortened slider. finished on 03:32:606
03:39:218 (spinner) - start spinner on 03:39:466. finished on 03:42:689
<Sound>
W - Whostle. E - Finish. R - Clap
Time (00:00:00) - exact time of bit
01:02:274 - R
01:02:770 - delete R
01:03:761 - E+R
01:35:497 - E+R
02:15:663 - R
02:17:647 - R
02:32:523 - R
02:38:473 - R
02:52:854 - R
03:10:705 - E+R
03:12:689 - E+R
03:21:614 - R
03:24:094 - delete R
03:24:590 - E

Normal:
02:46:903 - move break time how there: "(??:??:??) - I do not know how to explain it. picture"
03:34:672 (2) - start slider on 03:34:590
03:35:664 (3) - stert slider on 03:35:581
<Sound>
00:34:009 - delete R, put E
01:14:175 (6) - this slider. 01:14:175 - R, 01:14:340 - R, 01:14:505 - delete R, 01:14:671 - R
02:12:192 - delete R
02:12:688 - R
02:53:845 - R

Hard:
- HP Drain +1
------
00:24:091 - move break time how there: "(??:??:??) - I do not know how to explain it. picture"
02:46:903 - move break time how there: "(??:??:??) - I do not know how to explain it. picture"
<Sound>
03:00:788 - delete R, put E
01:38:473 - delete R, put E
03:06:242 - R?, 03:07:234 - R?
I don't see errors

Awesome. Big Star!

fartownik wrote:

Meh, I regret that so nice song like this will not have an Insane difficulty. i suck at mapping insane, sry ><

The hitsounds kinda sucks, on all diffs. This is your the biggest problem, you should work on them. i'll remake all the hitsounds if i got time

[Hard]

Too much new combos. They're placed unnaturally and in weird places, just makes no sense. Reduce their number a bit. k

Put kiai at final chorus. k

00:49:877 (4) - Curve prettier?k
01:25:580 (7) - Center it and move down. It overlaps the progress bar. ok
00:53:348 (2) - Curve prettier? kay
02:04:754 (4) - This also is not well curved. ^^ fix'd
02:11:200 (3) - ^^
02:19:134 (3) - ^^
02:37:482 (1) - ^^
03:01:779 (1) - ^^
03:08:308 (1) - Place the spinner at the blue tick. ok
03:32:358 (1,2) - Why these notes are 1/6 snapped? Snap them with 1/4 snap divisor. uuh fixed
03:32:606 (1) - Place the spinner at the blue tick. ok


[Normal]

01:55:993 (1) - Place on the blue tick (unsnapped). kay
03:31:119 (1) - ^^


[Easy]

03:39:548 (1) - Place this spinner as in other diffs. oh..fixed

Good. The map looks fine, I love the song.
+star

shabao_pig wrote:

hi

I think it's the best for us that I mod in English ^^


Hard

00:10:703(2,3) why do you stack them here? if there aren't enough room for slider 5 I suggest you stack (1,2) naah i like it my way more ...
01:33:514(3) & 01:33:844(1) make them farther apart ok
03:39:218 spinner is too close to the slider in timeline k

Normal

00:22:108(7) & 00:22:439(1) too close to each other fixd
01:03:761(4) & 01:04:092(1) ^^
01:10:208(4) this slider in this stream seems unfriendly... =D
01:12:522(2,3) make them farther apart ok
01:15:166(1) & 01:15:662(1) ^^
01:34:175(3) unfriendly slider >< ^^
03:26:573(1,2) make them closer i made it a little bit close, but i still want the cross

Easy

slider velocity is a little fast for this diff.. I think it's ok :S

others are fine


star

1. disable the letterbox during break, may seem better.

1. 00:11:199 (5) - 1/4 shorter and add a note at 00:11:695 with clap
2. 00:16:488 (1) - clap at the end
3. 00:24:091 (T) - how about end the KIAI here?
4. 00:51:860 (6) - place it at the same place with (5)?
5. 01:03:761 (T) - start KIAI here
6. 01:17:976 (11) - new combo
7. 01:34:506 (8) - clap
8. 01:35:001 (2) - clap at the beginning
9. 01:56:324 (T) - a note here, make the spinner 1/4 later but end at the original place.
10. 02:22:771 (10) - clap on both circles
11. 02:35:002 (1) - 1/4 shorter and add a note at 02:35:498 with clap
12. 02:46:903 (T) - end KIAI here?
13. 03:26:573 (T) - ^
14. 03:38:639 (3) - grid snap it

1. same KIAI issues with Hard
2. 00:15:662 (6) - clap
3. 01:09:216 (2) - clap on the first and the last circle
4. 01:34:506 (5) - clap
5. 01:35:001 (7) - clap at the beginning
6. 02:46:903 (T) - add a note here and don't forget the KIAI
7. 03:26:325 (T) - remove all the claps after this section, use whistile to hitsound this part
8. 03:39:342 (1) - end this at 03:42:689

1. same KIAI issues with Hard
2. 03:39:342 (1) - end this at 03:42:689

Colin Hou wrote:

wow, Irish bagpipes and flute! I like this

the following are all my suggestions, skip anything if you don't like.

[General]:

1. disable the letterbox during break, may seem better.

[Hard]:

1. 00:11:199 (5) - 1/4 shorter and add a note at 00:11:695 with clap
2. 00:16:488 (1) - clap at the end
3. 00:24:091 (T) - how about end the KIAI here?
4. 00:51:860 (6) - place it at the same place with (5)?
5. 01:03:761 (T) - start KIAI here
6. 01:17:976 (11) - new combo
7. 01:34:506 (8) - clap
8. 01:35:001 (2) - clap at the beginning
9. 01:56:324 (T) - a note here, make the spinner 1/4 later but end at the original place.
10. 02:22:771 (10) - clap on both circles
11. 02:35:002 (1) - 1/4 shorter and add a note at 02:35:498 with clap
12. 02:46:903 (T) - end KIAI here?
13. 03:26:573 (T) - ^
14. 03:38:639 (3) - grid snap it

[Normal]:

1. same KIAI issues with Hard
2. 00:15:662 (6) - clap
3. 01:09:216 (2) - clap on the first and the last circle
4. 01:34:506 (5) - clap
5. 01:35:001 (7) - clap at the beginning
6. 02:46:903 (T) - add a note here and don't forget the KIAI
7. 03:26:325 (T) - remove all the claps after this section, use whistile to hitsound this part
8. 03:39:342 (1) - end this at 03:42:689

[Easy]:

1. same KIAI issues with Hard
2. 03:39:342 (1) - end this at 03:42:689

star~

Nivalis wrote:

Random mod cool haha

[General]
-> I think there's no need to set the BPM to 120.999. 121.000 BPM is preferred (offset = 289) ok
-> The kiai at beginning blinds me... but you don't have to change this. it's the chorus

[Easy]
00:11:199 (5) - Add clap or soft-hitfinish at end? ok
00:37:976 (1,2,3) - Turn off grid snap and put (2) perfectly in the center:

SPOILER

[attachment=2:a0201]gunungbunder.png[/attachment:a0201]

fixed
01:49:382 (1) - Wave it better? kay
02:21:118 (4,5,1) - Remove finish from (4), add clap to (5), and change (1)'s hitsound to finish? changed it but not excatly as you suggested...
03:29:548 (3,4) - Add whistle at (3)'s start and add finish to (4)? i want that part w/o hitsounds sry^^

[Normal]
00:55:827 (6) - Add finish? k
01:47:398 (1,3) - They're ugly if overlapping each other ^^'

[Hard]
00:11:199 (5) - Put the left waypoint two grids up k
00:53:348 (2) - Ugly slider shape, perhaps try something like this:

SPOILER

[attachment=1:a0201]tr.png[/attachment:a0201]

mmh okay
01:42:440 (8) - Rather than using four-waypoints slider wave technique, I prefer doing this for that kind of slider:

SPOILER

[attachment=0:a0201]mendahului.png[/attachment:a0201]

sry, i like it the way it is
03:28:061 (2,4) - Add whistle? oke~

osu! needs more songs like this <3
Star!

lepidopodus wrote:

Overall
- I just thought that 1st kiai part is too quiet for kiai. oh you are right
- Seems BPM goes down since 03:26:569. Please find and get checked by some timing experts. fix'd
- Seems you didn't use grid snap? ^^'

Easy
00:11:198 (5) - I think clap in the start and normal in the end would be better. k
00:12:685 (7,1) - ^^
00:16:156 (X) - Add a circle or so naah :/
00:49:875 (2) - Remove finish? k
01:08:222 (2,3,1) - How about moving these about one grid down? ok
02:22:603 (5) - Remove finish or replace to something? mmmh ,no...

Normal
00:08:222~00:22:107 - Using somewhat regular hitsound would be better. ahaha k^^
01:34:338 (4,5) - Distance between these circles seems slightly longer than distances bewteen 01:33:842 (1,2,3,4). I want it that way and i think it's ok :S
02:33:016 (3) - How about moving the end of the slider slightly down, to match with 02:31:032 (1)? no sry
03:09:710 (1) - How about Deleting New combo...
03:10:702 (3) - ...and put New combo here...
03:11:032 (1) - ...and delete New combo here...
03:13:181 (2) - ...and put New combo here...
03:13:677 (1) - ...and remove New combeo from here? Fixed all combos
03:26:569 (1,2) - How about removing whistle from slider body? ok

Hard
00:14:669 (2,3,4,5) - How about moving these slightly down? k^^
00:38:470 (4~10) - Considering what happens with stacking, I think it would be better to change the formation of this thing... aye
01:12:520 (3) - Remove clap from the end of the slider? k
02:40:950 (4) - How about moving the first middle point of the slider a few grids right? ok

I think this is nice already...

Joon wrote:

hi yo o/

my modding

[Easy]
00:39:462 (3) - End notes remove clap
00:51:859 (1) - Start Notes remove clap and End Notes add clap
01:02:768 (3) - End Notes remove clap
01:14:669 (4) - ^
01:35:495 (6) - remove clap
01:59:297 (4) - ^
02:06:735 (2) - End notes change finish
02:51:859 (6) - add clap
03:10:702 (3) - Start Notes remove clap

[Normal]
00:21:611 (6) - add clap
01:19:627 (3) - remove clap
01:27:561 (2) - add finish
02:07:231 (3) - change finish
02:14:669 (6) - End Notes add finish
02:23:098 (1) - Start Notes change finish
02:46:900 (9) - add finish
03:10:702 (3) - change finish
03:18:636 (3) - Start Notes remove clap

[Hard]
00:55:826 (1) - add finish
01:03:760 (2) - change finish
02:07:231 (7) - Start Notes change finish


GL

yongtw123 wrote:

Hi hi~ yo yo~

Timing: BPM 121.02 (yes, 0.02 is critical here), Offset 306 oke~
When resnapping use Snap Divisor of 1/6 (Triple Timing), and make sure to recheck all notes (especially near the end).
Fix timing BEFORE advancing to mods below!

[Easy]
00:47:892 (1,1) - the two breaks are not needed IMO removed
02:28:553 (5) - make this curved shall we? lol heh, right
03:29:545 (3,5) - align these better k

I find the hitsounds very pleasing to ear! Good one.

[Normal]
01:34:503 (5) - a tad far from (4) yup
02:23:098 (1) - I'd try to make this circle around 02:22:603 (2) better mmh kay
03:24:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hmm, straighten or curve them, your pick curved
03:31:198 (1) - maybe start spinner at 03:31:528? k
03:34:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd try snapping these with 1/6 timing yup

[Hard]
02:26:093 (9) - new combo? kay
03:32:751 (1) - I'd replace this with a slider me2^^
03:34:403 (1) - rhythm is off here, try this: fix'd

I like this song! Very relaxing! =3
I believe you can get a MAT to mod pretty soon enough!

Star~

NatsumeRin wrote:

sorry for the very late orz... Np! =3

emm... for the hitsounds, i took [Hard] as example, changed some of them, also tried custom sounds but didn't find sth really fits it... so i guess just normal/clap... for now. glady added your hitsounds www

[Hard]
00:10:552 (1,2,3) - by the way, not to stack notes when it should be "moving" = = a break feeling... fix'd