yongtw123 wrote:

Hi hi~ yo yo~

Timing: BPM 121.02 (yes, 0.02 is critical here), Offset 306 oke~
When resnapping use Snap Divisor of 1/6 (Triple Timing), and make sure to recheck all notes (especially near the end).
Fix timing BEFORE advancing to mods below!

[Easy]
00:47:892 (1,1) - the two breaks are not needed IMO removed
02:28:553 (5) - make this curved shall we? lol heh, right
03:29:545 (3,5) - align these better k

I find the hitsounds very pleasing to ear! Good one.

[Normal]
01:34:503 (5) - a tad far from (4) yup
02:23:098 (1) - I'd try to make this circle around 02:22:603 (2) better mmh kay
03:24:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hmm, straighten or curve them, your pick curved
03:31:198 (1) - maybe start spinner at 03:31:528? k
03:34:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd try snapping these with 1/6 timing yup

[Hard]
02:26:093 (9) - new combo? kay
03:32:751 (1) - I'd replace this with a slider me2^^
03:34:403 (1) - rhythm is off here, try this: fix'd

I like this song! Very relaxing! =3
I believe you can get a MAT to mod pretty soon enough!

Star~

NatsumeRin wrote:

sorry for the very late orz... Np! =3

emm... for the hitsounds, i took [Hard] as example, changed some of them, also tried custom sounds but didn't find sth really fits it... so i guess just normal/clap... for now. glady added your hitsounds www

[Hard]
00:10:552 (1,2,3) - by the way, not to stack notes when it should be "moving" = = a break feeling... fix'd

kanpakyin wrote:

Hey,mod
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Red=I think you must fix this
BluE=Just a suggestion
=I can't understand
=Some important thing
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[Easy]
00:08:238(x)It's better to remove Kiai time? hm..no .. :/
00:38:977(2)Remove clap? ok
00:49:884(1)Remove his note and map something here? k
01:56:319(5)down 1 grid(LV3) kay xD
03:26:552(1)add finish no


[Normal]
00:22:451(1)hairlike spacing fixd
01:10:046(3-7)It's to hard for normal rly ?... fix'D ^^
01:27:564(2)up 3 grid? hmm i like it the way it is^^
01:33:844(1-5)It's to hard for normal no way I'll think about it orz
01:55:989(x)The spinner should start from 01;56:319? k

[Hard]
00:39:473(7)remove clap? nope
01:19:631(1)left 1 grid(LV3) eh? ok^^
01:21;119(2)overlap on (1)
01:21:614(3)Horizontally with (1) somehow i don'T rly understand...sry ><
01:29:877(6)New combo k
02:07:227(7)ugly slider but...but...."orz...

-3-
That all

Leorda wrote:

Hi yo o/

Your timing at ending is off Oh, I'll ask someone to fix it :S

[Easy]
00:12:204 (6) - New combo? k
00:13:692 (1) - Remove new combo? k
00:44:430 (1) - Make symetric? aye
01:09:220 (1) - Remove new combo? oke
01:56:319 (5) - Remove clap at end? kay
01:57:807 (1) - Clap? mmh no sry >~<
01:58:303 (2) - Remove clap?^
01:58:798 (3) - Clap?^
01:59:294 (4) - Remove clap? there is no clap?^^

[Normal]
Why this diff letterbox is enabled during breaks? oops^^

00:17:658 (3) - Remove finish? It's kinda awkward with those finish haha ok^^
01:07:732 (1) - Move 1 grid up? k
01:10:212 (5) - Clap? aaaye~
01:10:377 (6) - ^^
01:11:203 (10) - ^^
01:17:318 (5) - ^^
01:34:174 (3) - ^^
03:12:175 (7) - Clap at start? okay

[Hard]
Fine

Nice song yup
STAR

• - 1. Offset: 296ms BPM: 121.02 (I'm not sure of this one)
  - 2. Offset: 206,547ms BPM: 119.00
  Resnap your notes once with 1/6 beat snap divisor and check your timing sections

• 00:15:179 (5,1) - distance is too far
  00:16:666 (1,2,3) - spacing error between these notes
  01:23:102 (1) - clap?
  01:24:589 - clap
  01:30:043 (4) - clap?
  02:00:286 (1,2,3) - clap none finish
  02:02:269 - clap
  02:11:193 (1) - use finish instead?
  02:22:596 (5) - remove finish
  02:23:092 (1) - use finish instead?
  02:29:537 (1) - spacing error? move it closer to (5)
  02:35:982 ~ 02:37:470 - this part was empty o.o? I suggest to add a circle at 02:36:974 -
  03:12:670 - remove clap?
  03:30:601 (4) - should it be 1/6 beats later?
  
  
  
  Normal
  [list:8a14f]

• 02:03:012 (1) - 1/6 forward
  
  nice hitsounds
  
  
  
  
  [list:8a14f]

Pokie wrote:

General

• - 1. Offset: 296ms BPM: 121.02 (I'm not sure of this one)
  - 2. Offset: 206,547ms BPM: 119.00
  Resnap your notes once with 1/6 beat snap divisor and check your timing sections okay fixed

Easy

• 00:15:179 (5,1) - distance is too far fixd
  00:16:666 (1,2,3) - spacing error between these notes oh, fixed
  01:23:102 (1) - clap? kay
  01:24:589 - clap^
  01:30:043 (4) - clap?^
  02:00:286 (1,2,3) - clap none finish naah, I'll have to disagree :/
  02:02:269 - clap k
  02:11:193 (1) - use finish instead? oke~
  02:22:596 (5) - remove finish aye
  02:23:092 (1) - use finish instead? kay
  02:29:537 (1) - spacing error? move it closer to (5) fix'd
  02:35:982 ~ 02:37:470 - this part was empty o.o? I suggest to add a circle at 02:36:974 - sry, I want it that way...
  03:12:670 - remove clap? oh yeah^^
  03:30:601 (4) - should it be 1/6 beats later? you're right! = =
  
  
  
  Normal
  [list:49064]

01:14:012 (5) - new combo? k
01:02:775 (1,2,3,4) - clap none none clap finish good^^



Hard

• 02:03:012 (1) - 1/6 forward ok
  
  nice hitsounds <- they are from Rin after all
  
  
  
  
  [list:49064]

I don't like n-finishes ;_; =(
Nice, star

ErufenRito wrote:

Hard:

00:09:560 (6) - Consider starting this this slider at 00:09:725. And then add a circle at 00:09:560 - ok
00:11:213 (5) - Is this supposed to end in a blue tick? Cause if it is, then ill suggest you to end it at 00:11:543 - yup, it's right the way it is
00:19:476 (6) - I guess the same as 00:09:560 (6). Start the slider at 00:19:641. And then add a circle at 00:19:476 - naah :/
00:23:112 (5) - End this slider at 00:23:442. And the add a circle at 00:23:607 - kay
02:15:820 - Add a circle here good
Hmm, all said above is to make it sound better.

Normal:

I don't aprove of these things:
00:22:451 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:10:046 (4,5,6,7,8) - this one shouldn't be a problem though?
03:24:900 (1,2,3,4,5) -
etc etc etc etc
Reason: They are too long for a normal. Specially since they are circles, and you gotta hit them fast. oke

00:22:120 (7,1) - Consider adding finish hitsounds to both of them :l (7) yes, (1) no
03:26:547 (1,2) - They overlaps each other and other objects badly. You should reposition them to make it look better. fix'd

Easy:

00:16:161 - You should seriously consider ina dding a circle here :l :( ...
02:36:964 - And here too here not =3=

Map overall is good. You just need to polish your patterns to make them look better. Tip: just because the combo ended, it doesn't mean that you shouldn't consider for your next pattern. What i mean is that you should try to make your pattern flow better, spatially. I will think about everything and fix where I think it's strange

Magicphoenix wrote:

Normal:

I don't aprove of these things:
01:10:046 (4,5,6,7,8) - this one shouldn't be a problem though?

Magicphoenix wrote:

Map overall is good. You just need to polish your patterns to make them look better. Tip: just because the combo ended, it doesn't mean that you shouldn't consider for your next pattern. What i mean is that you should try to make your pattern flow better, spatially. I will think about everything and fix where I think it's strange

ErufenRito wrote:

Magicphoenix wrote:

Normal:

I don't aprove of these things:
01:10:046 (4,5,6,7,8) - this one shouldn't be a problem though? -lol...i mistook it for another part = ='

They all are the problem cause they are just too long.

Magicphoenix wrote:

Map overall is good. You just need to polish your patterns to make them look better. Tip: just because the combo ended, it doesn't mean that you shouldn't consider for your next pattern. What i mean is that you should try to make your pattern flow better, spatially. I will think about everything and fix where I think it's strange

Noooo, i meant it as a suggestion for your future maps. Making drastic changes to your map at this stage would mean to find new modders for the new patterns and that's pointless.

Roddie wrote:

Hi

Sorry for the delay. My computer was wasn't working for a couple of days but now its okay....I hope. ~

Easy:
00:08:238 (1)-Add a finish? k
00:55:328 (5)-Add a finish on the end of that slider? No, I want to use finishes only on chorus-part

Normal:
00:08:238 (1)-Add a finish? aye
00:55:834 (6)-Add a finish? same like [Easy] 00:55:328 (5)

Hard:
00:08:238 (1)-Add a finish? kay
00:11:461 (5)-Was this left intentional or by mistake? If it was by mistake, then correctly place the end of that slider on 00:11:543 (Move back one tick in the time-line). fixd
02:23:092 (1)-Fix the spacing on this. fix'd
03:39:320 (1)-Extend the end of that slider on 03:42:681 (Move one tick to the right in the time-line). oh ^^

Nicely done.

I remember when I watched The Boondock Saints. It was a great movie. Yeah it was indeed ;P

Anyway, good luck getting this ranked!

Star!

KuraiPettan wrote:

[General]
Why there are kiai time at the beginning of the map ? D: 'Cuz there is the chorus =3=

[Easy]
00:16:656 (1) - Bad spacing :/
01:58:293 (2) - Remove clap
01:58:788 (3) - Add clap
02:50:846 (5) - New combo
03:32:345 (6) - New combo

[Normal]
01:08:228 (3,1,2,3,4) - Hu... This part is really hard to read :/
03:28:059 (2) - It sounds off to me, I suggest you to do something like
03:31:504 (1) - Move 1/6 later and end it at the same spot it was

[Hard]
00:24:103 (7) - New combo
00:58:808 (7) - New combo
02:46:890 (11) - New combo
03:19:611 (6) - Too close to the top border


That's it, Star~

Combo1 : 95,43,33
Combo2 : 205,198,50
Combo3 : 151,117,36
Combo4 : 192,101,39

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Use these colors ??

Combo1 : 95,43,33
Combo2 : 205,198,50
Combo3 : 151,117,36
Combo4 : 192,101,39

no sry :[
Easy;
- 00:16:171 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note ok
- 02:25:075 >> ^ and also, add finish aye

Normal;
- Stacks look weird, stack leniency -2 ?? what...use...
- 02:46:890 >> Kiai time ends here ya right

Hard;
- 03:10:687 >> Timing section is not well align it doenst really stand out owo
- 03:22:090 >> Too curved ;w; ><

* Star ~ (ﾉ>w<)ﾉ★

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Easy]

01:03:777 (x) - Replace that green line correctly so the kiai starts at the correct moment. Do the same on the other difficulties as well.
02:31:049 (x) - ^
03:10:719 (x) - ^
03:09:231 (1) ~ 03:24:107 (5) - This part sounds a bit off to me. Maybe there's the need of a new offset here.

[Normal]

[color=#FF0000]00:37:991 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't you think this is way too hard even for a Normal? Change it.
00:48:901 (4) - New combo.
01:06:091 (7) - ^
01:07:744 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:15:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 00:37:991.
02:20:636 (4) - New combo.
02:22:124 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:08:735 (4) ~ 03:26:091 (7) - Same as Easy. Timing sounds off!

[Hard]

02:35:016 (1) - This slider end doesn't sound fine to me.
03:08:735 (1) ~ 03:26:091 (4) - Timing off here as well!

You should ask someone expert with the timing, really nice song choice though.

xierbaliti wrote:

-hitsounds-
how about using taiko hitsounds? you can find them in my post. coooool ideaaaa ~~~ thanks XD

-Easy-
too hard as an Easy diff <_< rename to "Normal"? i think it's okay like that

-Normal-
it should be renamed "Normal+" imo. same like Easy
01:10:058 (3) - 3 grid up (lv3) , don't jump here >_> fix'd

-Hard-
seems fine.

ohh i really like this music. nice work you did

+star

Xgor wrote:

[Easy]
Well... can't find anything. Not bad but nothing noteworthy.

[Normal]
I think you should do so there is no short 1/3 stream (Like 3-4 1/3 in a row)

00:35:026 (4) - New combo.
03:23:125 (4) - New combo?

[Hard]
Why does this have totally different break times than the other difficulties 'cause i think it's c-cool that way +_+

Please raise the stacking latency. so some of the stacks looks much better (You have to change this pattern a bit though 01:59:322 (2,3,4))

01:19:653 (1,3) - I would prefer if you made it so these sliders didn't touch the HP bar.
01:45:438 (4) - Also touching HP bar

Not bad, only thing that bugs me so much is the stacking latency on Hard otherwise it's not bad. Liked Hard and thought Normal and Easy was ok.
*star*

jericho2442 wrote:

Please do Dooms timing on the first section

BPM: 121.020, Offset: 316

atm you have it a straight 121 and it really goes out by the end half of this section

Easy
(suggestion) 03:33:116 - add a note here to help flow

Normal
the timing change will hurt a lot of this map, make sure to go through and recheck every single slider

(suggestion) 03:31:099 (1) - remove this new combo, seems rather pointless

Hard

again the timing change will hurt this map quite abit, so remember to recheck every notes timing and all the sliders

remember the times will be abit different once you have fixed the timing, so these points i post up might not be ms perfect to what they are in the fixed map

00:19:489 (6) - ok it this note is spaced abit too far, move abit closer to the (5), or you could remake this with a timing like this, which to me flows epicly better


00:51:823 (6) - onto the white tick, not the yellow ;p
01:42:463 (8,1) - start this combo on the (8)
(suggestion) 02:17:503 - maybe add a note to this purple tick


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<33 the 1/3 just fix that timing

Colin Hou wrote:

ahaha I forget to recheck this :P

Charles445 wrote:

Stupid rating trolls, this map was fun