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KEYTALK - STARRING STAR

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Kagetsu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 10 de enero de 2016 at 22:16:18

Artist: KEYTALK
Title: STARRING STAR
Source: ドラゴンボール超
Tags: Marianna HappyRocket88 Dragon Ball Super Akira Toriyama Toei Animation NARASAKI
BPM: 146
Filesize: 5134kb
Play Time: 00:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,44 stars, 71 notes)
  2. Insane (3,86 stars, 203 notes)
  3. Marianna's Hard (3,14 stars, 140 notes)
  4. Rocket's Normal (1,99 stars, 85 notes)


Download: KEYTALK - STARRING STAR
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Dragon Ball Super ending 2


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HappyRocket88
Topic Starter
Kagetsu

HappyRocket88 wrote:

I'm a normal diff.
thx <3
-Sh1n1-

STD Mod

General

  1. Por que parar el kiai en 00:46:185 - ? no deberia acabar el kiai en 00:52:760 - ?
  2. Uncheck Widescreen support
  3. AudioLeadIn: 2000, esto porque tu cancion empieza muy rapido y muchos jugadores pueden fallar, al aumentarle 2000, tu mapa empezara con 2 segundos de descanso cada vez que la quieras jugar, esto lo encuentras siguiendo los siguientes pasos: Archivo -> Abrir el .osu en bloc de notas -> General

Easy

  1. 00:00:158 (1,2) - me sorprende que no sea un largo y una nota como 00:03:445 (1,2) -, ya que siempre el inicio de una cancion deberia ser mas facil, creo que clickear slider largo con nota es mas facil que dos sliders.
  2. 00:01:802 (3,4) - No hay un buen blanquet entre estos sliders. trata de mejorarlo.
  3. 00:10:021 (1) - como te dije por chat, esto es un DQ seguro, porque puede ser confuso para un jugador nuevo, trata de hacerlo mas simple.
  4. 00:12:487 (4,1) - No me gusta que 00:13:308 (1) - le de la espalda ha 00:12:487 (4) -
  5. 00:20:706 (2,3) - mal blanquet, hazle mas curva al slider para poder arreglar eso
  6. que paso con el espaciado entre 00:21:528 (3,4) - ? la distancia actual es de 0.95x y tu estas usando 1.00x, en easy y normal debes respetar eso demasiado.
  7. 00:28:925 (5) - un cuadradito mas abajo seria genial, ya que la cabeza del slider actualmente esta chocando con 00:27:281 (2) -
  8. 00:31:391 (3,1) - nope nope, esto es demasiado confuso para easy, normalmente el slider debe mirar hacia donde va la siguiente nota. porque hicistes lo contrario?
  9. 00:33:856 (2,4) - no hay un buen blanquet, mismo problema en 00:37:144 (2,3) -
  10. 00:50:294 (6,1) - break forzado, deberias agregar notas en el medio

Rocket's Normal

  1. 00:10:021 (1) - 00:37:966 (3) - xD que slider mas feo u.u
  2. 00:17:829 - te comistes una nota ahi, a mi parecer es un beat importante, pero no te aconsejaria que pongas 3 notas apiladas porque se veria mal para ser Normal diff, derrepente una nota + un slider de 1/2 podria verse mas bonito :3
  3. 00:34:678 (4,5) - cuidado con la distancia entre estas notas, se te paso :P
  4. 00:40:226 (2,3) - fixea ese blanquet please
  5. 00:47:007 (2,3) - de nuevo mal blanquet pero esta vez adicionalmente deberias hacer que el slider en 00:47:829 (3) - sea mas fino, me refiero a que se veria mas bonito si la cabeza y la cola estuvieran en el mismo eje de x.
  6. 00:51:938 (4,5,1) - awwww, bonito final pero la distancia entre notas es demasiado inconsistente, 00:51:938 (4,5) - 1.45, 00:52:349 (5,1) - 1.38, ambos andan mal xd

Marianna's Hard

  1. mueve 00:05:911 (6) - hacia x:244 y:28 para hacer una figura mas perfecta en forma de triangulo con 00:04:884 (4,5,6) - , de paso si puedes hacer que salga un blanquet entre 00:04:884 (4,6) - seria perfecto *-*/
  2. 00:08:377 (1,2) - no me parece que dejes de seguir voz aqui porque se siente como que rompes consistencia con tus patrones anteriores, creo que lo puedes cambiar por un slider mas largo con nota, algo asi como 00:07:555 (3,4) - o 00:09:199 (3,4) - etc.
  3. 00:13:925 (2,3) - si bien es cierto estas siguiendo un sonido de piano? bueno lo que importa esque estas dejando un vacio en 00:15:157 - que se ve y se juega realmente horrible, en estos casos es mejor seguir la voz porque tiene mas enfasis que los sonidos instrumentales, cambia 00:13:925 (2) - por una nota mas un slider de 1/2, luego 00:14:541 (3) - reemplazalo por dos notas en 00:14:541 - y en 00:14:747 -, finalmente para no dejar ese vacio mencionado al principio y para guardar consistencia con tus patrones previos, agrega un slider de 1/2 como 00:15:363 (4) - en 00:14:952 -, no olvides que de seguir mi consejo, pongas un NC en 00:14:952 -
  4. 00:21:527 (1,2) - no entiendo que pudiste haber escuchado para hacer esas notas, ya que la voz aca tiene mucha notoriedad, 00:21:527 (1) - deberia acabar en 00:21:938 - y agregar una nota en 00:22:144 -
  5. 00:37:555 (4,1) - creo que el blanquet entre esas notas podria ser mejorado.
  6. creo que tu nuevo NC es en 00:41:253 - no en 00:42:075 - , manten consistencia con 00:26:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) -

Insane

  1. 00:05:090 (5,6) - esto no es al revez? primero es el slider y luego la nota, suena mejor imo.
  2. pudiste haber hecho una mejor figura con 00:23:788 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - por ejemplo si mueves 00:24:404 (5) - a x:360y:60 y 00:24:815 (7) - a x:392y:212
  3. 00:28:925 (8,9) - porque lo hicistes tan simple, hazlo como hicistes en 00:42:076 (7,8,9,10,11) - por consistencia y porque ayudaria a mejorar un poco mas el spread
  4. la distancia entre 00:51:117 (5,6) - me gusta, pero no crees que pudistes haberle puesto la misma distancia a 00:50:706 (4,5) - ?
  5. NC en 00:01:390 -
  6. Nuevo Combo en 00:09:199 - no en 00:10:021 -, de ahi agregas nuevo combo en 00:11:253 - tambien.
  7. 00:25:637 (13) - Nuevo combo ahi tambien
  8. 00:44:541 - igual NC
    Buena diff

Mucha suerte y espero que rankees este mapa muy pronto.
Topic Starter
Kagetsu

-Sh1n1- wrote:

STD Mod

General

  1. Por que parar el kiai en 00:46:185 - ? no deberia acabar el kiai en 00:52:760 - ?✓ ahora termina ahi xD
  2. Uncheck Widescreen support
  3. AudioLeadIn: 2000, esto porque tu cancion empieza muy rapido y muchos jugadores pueden fallar, al aumentarle 2000, tu mapa empezara con 2 segundos de descanso cada vez que la quieras jugar, esto lo encuentras siguiendo los siguientes pasos: Archivo -> Abrir el .osu en bloc de notas -> General

Easy

  1. 00:00:158 (1,2) - me sorprende que no sea un largo y una nota como 00:03:445 (1,2) -, ya que siempre el inicio de una cancion deberia ser mas facil, creo que clickear slider largo con nota es mas facil que dos sliders.✓ ahora es un slider largo
  2. 00:01:802 (3,4) - No hay un buen blanquet entre estos sliders. trata de mejorarlo.✓ se debería ver mejor ahora
  3. 00:10:021 (1) - como te dije por chat, esto es un DQ seguro, porque puede ser confuso para un jugador nuevo, trata de hacerlo mas simple.✓ arreglado
  4. 00:12:487 (4,1) - No me gusta que 00:13:308 (1) - le de la espalda ha 00:12:487 (4) - ? no entiendoD: a mi parecer esta bien, quizas si hubieses posteado alguna imagen para entender xd
  5. 00:20:706 (2,3) - mal blanquet, hazle mas curva al slider para poder arreglar eso
  6. que paso con el espaciado entre 00:21:528 (3,4) - ? la distancia actual es de 0.95x y tu estas usando 1.00x, en easy y normal debes respetar eso demasiado. ✓ se supone que lo arregle xD
  7. 00:28:925 (5) - un cuadradito mas abajo seria genial, ya que la cabeza del slider actualmente esta chocando con 00:27:281 (2) -
  8. 00:31:391 (3,1) - nope nope, esto es demasiado confuso para easy, normalmente el slider debe mirar hacia donde va la siguiente nota. porque hicistes lo contrario?✓ hmm, movi el slider... ahora apunta un poco mas hacia el siguiente
  9. 00:33:856 (2,4) - no hay un buen blanquet, mismo problema en 00:37:144 (2,3) -
  10. 00:50:294 (6,1) - break forzado, deberias agregar notas en el medio✘ no quise agregar notas, por el spinner xd (aunque no se, quizas termine agregando algunas)

Insane

  1. 00:05:090 (5,6) - esto no es al revez? primero es el slider y luego la nota, suena mejor imo.✘creo que suena bien asi D: además tendria que modificar el patron si lo cambio x.x
  2. pudiste haber hecho una mejor figura con 00:23:788 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - por ejemplo si mueves 00:24:404 (5) - a x:360y:60 y 00:24:815 (7) - a x:392y:212✓ hice exactamente lo que dijiste xd
  3. 00:28:925 (8,9) - porque lo hicistes tan simple, hazlo como hicistes en 00:42:076 (7,8,9,10,11) - por consistencia y porque ayudaria a mejorar un poco mas el spread✓ ok
  4. la distancia entre 00:51:117 (5,6) - me gusta, pero no crees que pudistes haberle puesto la misma distancia a 00:50:706 (4,5) - ? ✓ probablemente lo haga... pero tengo que pensar otro patron primero
  5. NC en 00:01:390 -
  6. Nuevo Combo en 00:09:199 - no en 00:10:021 -, de ahi agregas nuevo combo en 00:11:253 - tambien.
  7. 00:25:637 (13) - Nuevo combo ahi tambien
  8. 00:44:541 - igual NC
    Buena diff gracias :D

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Mucha suerte y espero que rankees este mapa muy pronto.
Gracias por el mod y por la buena suerte :)
-Sh1n1-
Verdad, había olvidado darte una estrella :3 go go
Marianna
The only one that I accepted was to NC ^^

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 25637
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TitleUnicode:Starring Star
Artist:KEYTALK
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Creator:Kagetsu
Version:Marianna's Hard
Source:
Tags:Marianna HappyRocket88
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HappyRocket88

-Sh1n1- wrote:

  1. AudioLeadIn: 2000, esto porque tu cancion empieza muy rapido y muchos jugadores pueden fallar, al aumentarle 2000, tu mapa empezara con 2 segundos de descanso cada vez que la quieras jugar, esto lo encuentras siguiendo los siguientes pasos: Archivo -> Abrir el .osu en bloc de notas -> General

Hola Sh1n1, esto no es realmente necesario porque gracias al nuevo update del juego, el audio leadin se configura solo de acuerdo a la canción así tal cuál como se especifica arriba.
IMPORTANTE: No debes de modear una dificultad en tu idioma nativo.
Marianna es PLZZZ xd. Tuvo que usar el traductor oshe :cry:

Rocket's Normal

  1. 00:10:021 (1) - 00:37:966 (3) - xD que slider mas feo u.u XD ¿Se te ocurre algo mejor?
  2. 00:17:829 - te comistes una nota ahi, a mi parecer es un beat importante, pero no te aconsejaria que pongas 3 notas apiladas porque se veria mal para ser Normal diff, derrepente una nota + un slider de 1/2 podria verse mas bonito :3 OHHHHH! Génial! <3
  3. 00:34:678 (4,5) - cuidado con la distancia entre estas notas, se te paso :PAYYY, pero el stack se ve bien. /u\ No creo que sea tan peligroso para que le hagan DQ
  4. 00:40:226 (2,3) - fixea ese blanquet please. Fixed babe.
  5. 00:47:007 (2,3) - de nuevo mal blanquet pero esta vez adicionalmente deberias hacer que el slider en 00:47:829 (3) - sea mas fino, me refiero a que se veria mas bonito si la cabeza y la cola estuvieran en el mismo eje de x. Seguro. Ahura son dos sliders kawaii desu poi NE
  6. 00:51:938 (4,5,1) - awwww, bonito final pero la distancia entre notas es demasiado inconsistente, 00:51:938 (4,5) - 1.45, 00:52:349 (5,1) - 1.38, ambos andan mal xd Sep. Corregido con cerveza águila.
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: KEYTALK - Starring Star.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 25637
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 57281
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Starring Star
TitleUnicode:Starring Star
Artist:KEYTALK
ArtistUnicode:KEYTALK
Creator:Kagetsu
Version:Rocket's Normal
Source:
Tags:Marianna HappyRocket88
BeatmapID:838803
BeatmapSetID:378596

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.20000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Topic Starter
Kagetsu
updated
KASUM1
Because you asked me to do that >//<

easy

  1. 00:01:802 (3) - this kinda like breaking the flow and hard to react for beginners here's the reason why http://puu.sh/lGP2E/763f716ed4.PNG
  2. 00:01:802 (3,1) - these 2 borders are touching each other and making bad overlap , I don't think this is intentional
  3. 00:05:089 (3) - same reason as above , hard to react
  4. 00:27:281 (2,3) - ctrl+g for better pattern and easy to read
  5. 00:29:747 (1) - maybe curve a bit down for easy react to 00:30:980 (2) -
  6. 00:31:391 (3) - another breaking flow >w<
  7. 00:33:856 (2,4) - if you're going for a blanket , please fix it
  8. 00:42:897 (1,2) - curve (1) for easier reading
  9. 00:44:541 (4) - curve this to the right (more)

normal

  1. 00:06:322 (5,1) - don't you think this is a bit hard for normal? like hard to react ? I don't mean the spacing but the flow
  2. 00:11:664 (3) - curve this with -30 degree for better flow (maybe reduce it a little bit if you don't like it )
  3. 00:21:527 (3) - ctrl+g and 00:22:760 (4) - ctrl+j , better flow something like this http://puu.sh/lGQ6W/109e37797d.jpg
  4. 00:26:048 (5,1) - mentioned this before >w<
  5. 00:27:075 (2,3) - any reason for them touching? I think it's because of the spacing to fix that ctrl+h for 00:27:281 (3) -
  6. HappyRocket88 gay forever with gay sliders and gay difficulties

hard

  1. 00:06:322 - this should be clickable , more nice to play
  2. 00:09:610 - same as above
  3. 00:13:925 (2,3) - I can't hear and rhythm for these 2 sliders ? something like this works too http://puu.sh/lGQzd/ed69641cb4.jpg

insane

  1. 00:01:802 (2,3) - move these down for better flow http://puu.sh/lGQF9/b344d81a1c.jpg
  2. 00:05:089 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better rhythm
  3. 00:07:556 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/lGQLt/d8505f5e90.jpg maybe better pattern
  4. 00:09:610 (2) - rotate this with -77 degree better flow
  5. 00:10:021 (3,4) - same shape please
  6. 00:14:952 (8) - NC here
  7. 00:15:774 (10,11,12) - this is completely weird http://puu.sh/lGQWI/be608f95f9.jpg
  8. 00:21:322 (5) - x:333 y:21
  9. 00:22:144 (7,8) - ctrl+g since this is insane so it should be a bit harder
  10. 00:24:610 (6) - this one breaks the flow http://puu.sh/lGRao/1428e936d7.PNG you were going for a star and suddenly changed the pattern
  11. 00:24:815 (7) - NC? the stream combo are too long
  12. 00:25:637 (13) - NC here too
  13. 00:34:678 (8) - ^
  14. 00:35:911 (13) - x:129 y:90
  15. 00:37:966 (6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/lGRm1/98ced5459f.jpg
  16. 00:38:787 (10) - NC
  17. 00:41:254 (5) - ctrl+g better flow
  18. 00:42:487 (10,11) - spacing a bit high?
  19. 00:51:939 (7) - NC

good luck!
Marianna

KASUM1 wrote:

hard

  1. 00:06:322 - this should be clickable , more nice to play I think there are more important things to be mentioned
  2. 00:09:610 - same as above
  3. 00:13:925 (2,3) - I can't hear and rhythm for these 2 sliders ? something like this works too http://puu.sh/lGQzd/ed69641cb4.jpgThe rhythm is in the piano


good luck! Thank You ♥
KASUM1

Marianna wrote:

KASUM1 wrote:

hard

  1. 00:06:322 - this should be clickable , more nice to play I think there are more important things to be mentioned
  2. 00:09:610 - same as above
  3. 00:13:925 (2,3) - I can't hear and rhythm for these 2 sliders ? something like this works too http://puu.sh/lGQzd/ed69641cb4.jpgThe rhythm is in the piano


good luck! Thank You ♥
umm.... what do you mean by "I think there are more important things to be mentioned"

If I could find something important I would mention it , and that means you know that there's something important should be fixed and what I mentioned is not that bad you know. atleast better than (blanket mod)?


Nice pink hot avatar too ♥
Marianna

KASUM1 wrote:

umm.... what do you mean by "I think there are more important things to be mentioned"

If I could find something important I would mention it , and that means you know that there's something important should be fixed and what I mentioned is not that bad you know. atleast better than (blanket mod)?


Nice pink hot avatar too ♥
I mean it does not make much difference in-game

♥ thanks ♥ the avatar is a Couple with MkGuh
Topic Starter
Kagetsu

KASUM1 wrote:

easy

  1. 00:01:802 (3) - this kinda like breaking the flow and hard to react for beginners here's the reason why http://puu.sh/lGP2E/763f716ed4.PNGyeah... but i think is not that serious, i mean i'm doing a blanket
  2. 00:01:802 (3,1) - these 2 borders are touching each other and making bad overlap , I don't think this is intentional Fixed.
  3. 00:05:089 (3) - same reason as above , hard to react I changed that part, also, i curved 00:03:445 (1) - for better flow
  4. 00:27:281 (2,3) - ctrl+g for better pattern and easy to readDone
  5. 00:29:747 (1) - maybe curve a bit down for easy react to 00:30:980 (2) - Done
  6. 00:31:391 (3) - another breaking flow >w<Fixed (?)
  7. 00:33:856 (2,4) - if you're going for a blanket , please fix it it's a blanket,u didn't see it because it's hidden in the bottom of your heartHidden blanket
  8. 00:42:897 (1,2) - curve (1) for easier reading Done
  9. 00:44:541 (4) - curve this to the right (more)Done

insane

  1. 00:01:802 (2,3) - move these down for better flow http://puu.sh/lGQF9/b344d81a1c.jpg Done
  2. 00:05:089 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better rhythm Done
  3. 00:07:556 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/lGQLt/d8505f5e90.jpg maybe better pattern I changed the pattern, not exactly like yours but i took some things
  4. 00:09:610 (2) - rotate this with -77 degree better flowdon't need to do that because of the new pattern
  5. 00:10:021 (3,4) - same shape pleaseFixed
  6. 00:14:952 (8) - NC hereAll NC has been applied
  7. 00:15:774 (10,11,12) - this is completely weird http://puu.sh/lGQWI/be608f95f9.jpgI really like how is it :(
  8. 00:21:322 (5) - x:333 y:21This is a little nazi xD, plus the flow would be too linear
  9. 00:22:144 (7,8) - ctrl+g since this is insane so it should be a bit harderIt breaks the flow
  10. 00:24:610 (6) - this one breaks the flow http://puu.sh/lGRao/1428e936d7.PNG you were going for a star and suddenly changed the patternthey are 2 triangles separately, not a star D:
  11. 00:24:815 (7) - NC? the stream combo are too long
  12. 00:25:637 (13) - NC here too
  13. 00:34:678 (8) - ^
  14. 00:35:911 (13) - x:129 y:90Done
  15. 00:37:966 (6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/lGRm1/98ced5459f.jpgnah, it's like the previus one, i really like this style
  16. 00:38:787 (10) - NC
  17. 00:41:254 (5) - ctrl+g better flow hmm... idk, the flow is good here imo
  18. 00:42:487 (10,11) - spacing a bit high? Yea... nerfed that jump
  19. 00:51:939 (7) - NC

good luck! thanks for the mod!, it was really helpful
-Sh1n1-

HappyRocket88 wrote:

-Sh1n1- wrote:

  1. AudioLeadIn: 2000, esto porque tu cancion empieza muy rapido y muchos jugadores pueden fallar, al aumentarle 2000, tu mapa empezara con 2 segundos de descanso cada vez que la quieras jugar, esto lo encuentras siguiendo los siguientes pasos: Archivo -> Abrir el .osu en bloc de notas -> General

Hola Sh1n1, esto no es realmente necesario porque gracias al nuevo update del juego, el audio leadin se configura solo de acuerdo a la canción así tal cuál como se especifica arriba.

Ohh no estaba al tanto, pero no pasa nada si le pones 2000 ya que cuando yo lo testie empezo rapido, fue por eso que lo postie

IMPORTANTE: No debes de modear una dificultad en tu idioma nativo.
Marianna es PLZZZ xd. Tuvo que usar el traductor oshe :cry:

Jajaja si me di cuenta despues de que postie xd esque Kagetsu me agarro sin internet xd e hice mi mod offline, lo postie desde mi celu y despues vi y dije :O ya fue *-*/
meii18
oops double post
meii18
Hello! As your request

  1. Artist: KEYTALK official web
  2. Title: スターリングスター
  3. Romanised Title:STARRING STAR
  4. Source:ドラゴンボール超(スーパー

    Add to tags: Dragon Ball Super as the alternative title,NARASAKI (lyrics I guess)

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Kagetsu

ByBy13 wrote:

Hello! As your request

  1. Artist: KEYTALK official web
  2. Title: スターリングスター
  3. Romanised Title:STARRING STAR
  4. Source:ドラゴンボール超(スーパー

    Add to tags: Dragon Ball Super as the alternative title,NARASAKI (lyrics I guess)

Good Luck!
thx u <3
HappyRocket88
Thanks for mod, KASUM1 applied almost everything. xd

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: KEYTALK - Starring Star.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 25637
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 57281
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:STARRING STAR
TitleUnicode:スターリングスター
Artist:KEYTALK
ArtistUnicode:KEYTALK
Creator:Kagetsu
Version:Rocket's Normal
Source:ドラゴンボール超(スーパー
Tags:Marianna HappyRocket88 Dragon Ball Super Akira Toriyama Toei Animation
BeatmapID:838803
BeatmapSetID:378596

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.20000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Yuthuil
From M4M - U got weird bg dimensions

Easy:

- 00:01:390 (2,3) - I feel annoying to put a blanket mod first thing first but blanket properly and that way it looks more identical to the following slider

- 00:26:459 (1) - imo i think a different shape would be nice for this slider to emphasize a new part in the song

- 00:38:788 (4,5) - idk why but the hitsounds here sound kinda weird

- 00:50:294 (6) - I think the end of this slider should be clickable or draggable because its such a strong beat and to let the slider tail finish it off plays weird

- 00:51:527 from here to the spinner feels quite lonely, idk maybe add one circle or something

Rocket's Normal:

- 00:00:158 (1,3) - maybe copy 1 of 2 they're both different atm and it bugs me so badly :/

- 00:12:692 (4,5) - This rhythm is slightly hard for a normal, try ctrl + g 4, remove 5 and add a repeat on 4, then re-ds

- 00:27:075 (2,3) - since this is the only overlap you have in the whole diff it feels out of place

- 00:37:966 (3,1) - maybe blanket these two? I know ds doesnt allow it but it hardly changes anything if you remove it, we can be naughty sometimes ;)

Marianna's Hard:

- 00:08:171 (4,2) - 2's tail is so close to 4, how about changing it so it looks like this ---> http://puu.sh/lKa6X/c3f4b6083d.jpg

- 00:18:856 (2,3) - line up properly

Insane:

- 00:15:774 (3,4,5) - perhaps space 4 and 5 more or less because atm the tiny overlap looks disturbing

- 00:18:034 (6) - this plays extremely weird I really really think you shouldn't skip the strong beat in the middle of the slider and his vocals are weird here as well so if you place a slider on the red tick it plays weird anyway, so perhaps change this to a circle then add a slider or whatever on the large tick

- 00:34:678 (1,3,4,5) - stack properly

Overally nice map didnt have much to say about it hope u dont mind
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