M4M is coming ~
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[Easy]
About 00:04:325 (1) - 00:06:261 (3)
Plan 1: Make the slider (1) become more smoothly. How about this?
64,304,4325,6,0,P|112:336|168:272,2,140
88,208,5777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,6261,2,0,L|344:184,2,140
Plan 2: move 00:05:777 (2) to x:104 y:216; 00:06:261 (3) move to x:184 y:160 makes it have a better flow.
00:15:938 (1) - I prefer to move to x:120 y:192, and also move 00:16:664 (2,3) to x:312 y:200.
00:17:390 (4) - move to x:404 y:164 ; 00:17:874 (5) - move to x:448 y:248.(For make a connection with 00:19:809 (1))
00:21:503 (3) - how about delete this note? :3 and keep 0.7x for every distance.
If you fixed ^ you can move 00:21:745 (1) to x:252 y:164
00:22:229 (2) - move to x:300 y:76
00:22:713 (3) - how about make it more smoothly?
380,64,22713,2,2,P|428:80|464:124,2,105
00:23:680 (1,2,3) - how about make a same rhythm with 00:19:809 (1,2,3)
Example:376,112,23680,6,0,L|224:140,1,140
164,256,24648,2,0,L|304:288,1,140
396,308,25616,5,0,0:0:0:0:
If you changed ^, you can move 00:26:100 (2) to x:388 y:212
00:26:584 (3,4) - move to x:308 y:156
00:29:487 (1) - nc?
00:50:777 (1,2,1) - how about change like this?
389,190,50777,6,0,B|256:136|256:256|120:192,2,280,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,190,53680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,190,54648,6,0,B|253:254|253:134|120:188,2,280,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:06:261 (1) - make a better slider?
208,56,66261,6,6,B|140:156|280:200|216:328,2,280
And I also have some suggestion for the pattern with 01:06:261 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3)
208,56,66261,6,6,B|140:156|280:200|216:328,2,280
404,56,69164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,108,69648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,204,70132,6,6,B|241:273|194:134|67:200,2,280
76,300,73035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,224,73519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,172,74003,6,6,B|176:236|260:120|368:192,2,280
32,100,76422,1,4,0:0:0:0:
112,44,76906,1,4,0:0:0:0:
[Normal]
How about cs3? cs4 is too small for me.00:15:938 (1) - make it curve like this
464,280,15938,6,0,P|408:328|332:300,1,160
00:21:745 (1) - ds problem
00:25:132 (3,4) - move it a little bit left. (3)-x:140 y:344 ;(4)-x:64 y:316
00:26:584 (2,3,4) - same problem with ^, make a small space between every object.
00:47:632 (2) - move it up a little bit, x:452 y:348
00:48:358 (3,4) - move to x:416 y:116
00:51:503 (2,3) - ds problem
00:58:519 (1) - move to x:404 y:88
00:59:245 (2,3) - ds probelm
01:03:116 (2,3) - how about repeatedly slider? and delete 01:03:842 (3).
01:06:987 (2,3) - ds problem
01:21:745 (1,2,1,2,3) - I make it looks more neat.
348,60,81745,6,2,L|336:180,2,120
424,88,82713,2,2,L|412:208,2,120
424,88,83801,6,2,P|376:64|344:64,1,80
308,72,84164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,84406,2,0,L|264:200,1,40,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Hard]
00:42:067 (1) - x:340 y:212
00:42:309 (2) - x:380 y:76
00:42:551 (3) - x:500 y:156
00:52:954 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - how about this?
432,336,53317,2,0,L|392:340,1,40,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,348,53680,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,232,53922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,164,54043,2,2,P|176:116|176:84,2,80,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,220,54648,6,0,L|56:212,1,160,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:59:245 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I make it looks more neat.
108,44,59245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,56,59366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,112,59487,6,0,L|144:120,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,156,59850,2,0,L|312:164,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,168,60213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,212,60334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,280,60454,5,6,0:0:0:0:
320,364,60696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,224,60938,1,6,0:0:0:0:
400,364,61180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,276,61422,2,0,L|196:284,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:02:753 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^
64,48,62753,2,2,L|176:40,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,63116,2,0,L|288:48,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,104,63479,2,0,L|408:132,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,160,63842,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,292,64084,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,304,64325,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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Nice rhythm Good luck