cHelli wrote:

NM as requested~

General

1. All diff should have same Widescreen Support, it is allowed in Advanced and Insane while disallowed in Easy and Hard. Fixed, it wasn't supposed to have widescreen support
2. I guess there might be some problems in timing? Because I have tried to use 1/8 to follow the beats in some parts of Insane. I am not sure, you'd better check it. I'll get a recheck on the timing
3. I think some parts of this song is suitable to use parallel sliders to show the music (like you do in some parts.) fixed some instances
4. Some similar problems may be ignored but they do exist.

Easy

1. Use more blanket, it can make map looks more interesting. My style in the lower diffs most focus on the things usually leading to each other, that's basically it, my lower diffs are pretty basic
2. 00:35:525 (2,3) - It‘s better to repeat these(a single tap and a slider or something like this)three times in these part to make it regular(I think it can make easy diff more interesting). It's same in parts like this. I feel like the current pattern follows the thing better, and the other things after this are just for the sake of variety .3.
   
   3-4 (5-6 7-8 repeat)

Advanced

1. More blanket. Same explanation, I mean I could try but that would break some of the flow that I was going for, maybe in the future
2. I don't like this, I think it is to difficult for a 2 stars newbie. Maybe change it to something easier? It's advanced, since like it's a pretty hard normal but it isn't exactly hard
   00:01:422 (4,5,6) -

Hard

1. If you want to make blanket, why don't you make it tasteful? (Like what you do in extra) Kinda don't get what you're trying to say here, all I can say is that I mostly focus of like flowing things in lower diffs
2. 00:12:471 (2) - The slider not fit the music well. I think it fits very well with the music since it goes "do-do-do-doooo-etc."
3. 00:29:932 (2) - The same reason, I think you can use 1/2 single tap to make a change. ^
4. 01:57:236 (2) - a short slider is better, like 01:56:827 (1) - ^
5. 02:14:697 (2) - same reason ^
   

Insane

1. 00:05:514 (1,2,3,4) - Why don't you move 1,2 near 3,4, like what you do in 00:04:423 (1,2,3,4) - . It can be better.
2. 00:21:884 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same reason
3. 00:30:614 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same
4. 00:54:623 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part is what I mean, why don't you make these all like this?
5. 01:49:188 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same
6. 02:15:379 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
   I can just bunch all those ^^ in one reply, changes like two into the patten like the one pointed out, kept the others
7. 00:27:886 (4) - change the slider to two single tap like 00:27:340 (1,2) -
8. 00:36:480 (2) - I guess this is a blanket? It can be better.
9. 00:51:895 (1) - what about make this slider another 3/4 beat（to the red line) This is already a 3/4 beat lol, if you're talking about the one right after it, 00:52:167 (1) - , it's like that so it can easily lead to the single taps after it
10. 01:01:716 (3) - blanket or more space I think the spacing here is fine, I like the way it looks
11. 01:08:810 (1,2,3,4) - I think three sliders here is good too
    
12. 01:29:545 (1,2) - not fit rhythm well, I think might be like this
    
13. 01:31:045 (2,1) - I don't like these I like them, they follow the rhythm and aren't too hard to play
14. 01:34:455 (3) - this might be a 1/4 slider naw, it isn't
15. 01:36:638 (3,4) - what about this If I did that, players wouldn't be able to click the white tick The note itself isn't too strong but like it's kinda weird to just break the pattern so suddenly imo
    
16. 01:38:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - 2 is redundant I feel like it matters enought to be clicked , if another person mentions it I can just move the 1 in the gap between the burst stream and the 5
17. 01:40:867 (4,5,6) - what about this I still like the current pattern
    
18. 01:42:640 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I tried to use 1/8 beat here and I this it should be like this. I just check some parts and feel timing might have some problems. It seems like some parts are 1/8 late (01:32:819 (1,2,3,4,5) - like this part, I think this is a little late). I'm not sure about this, ask experienced mapper to check the timing if possible. Ye, I'll try to get a check on the timing, this is supposed to be green but oh well, it was green in the title
    
19. 01:57:236 (4) - try to make a change in another way it still follows the pattern that I'm not gonna type again lol
20. 02:14:697 (2) - same reason ^
21. 02:36:114 (1,2,1,2,1) - look not so delicious more tilted now
    

Good luck~

Fort wrote:

hello, this song sounds like circus remix ya

[All proceeds go to REAL spiders]

1. meme diffname i think
2. 00:04:694 (2,4) - so i guess you need to fix this slider, make it same with 00:04:421 (1,3) - or just in opposite (it can improve visual better)
3. 00:08:650 (5) - almost unadible, this notes should be hitsounded, yeah i think put whistle on that circle can make hitsounding more fun (same case like 00:17:380 (5) - , 00:26:110 (5) - , 01:53:415 (5) - , 02:02:145 (5) - , 02:10:876 (5) - .)
4. 00:10:423 (4,5,6) - i guess this jump can be sharp for pattern music like this, i suggesting you to change this slider 00:10:696 (6) - same as 00:10:969 (1) - and you can blanket it with 00:10:423 (4) -. Yeah this one kinda needs some rotating slider a bit
5. 00:44:594 (5,6,7,1) - the kind of overmapping (i noticed this flow 00:44:799 (1,2) - kinda forcing players to move more with more stamina at aim (but yeah it can be hard if you want to keep that pattern like that, so maybe you can move 00:45:072 (3) - to 152|304 to stabilize jumps on 00:44:799 (1,2) - , it'll make aim more stable)
6. 01:07:989 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - i think this tapping part kinda awkward, this should be mapped with slider and with less jumps please
7. 01:09:081 (1) - are you sure you want make 7/8 as slider end? but i think 3/4 slider is enough for this whoops, dunno how that happened
8. 01:31:384 (9,1) - ummm this jump kinda shocking because this the first stream pattern, im really suggesting you to not put some sudden direction stream pattern yet, maybe like this http://puu.sh/lbjan/db81ab4e31.jpg can make this pattern feel better with smooth stream flow
9. 01:39:637 (2,3,4,5,6) - why dont you map a stream like 01:31:043 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1) - ? it's really questionable enough i think
10. 01:57:848 - looks this can be mapped with a circle (yeah triplet on ending stanza sounds weird without them i think, but you mapped a lot of this pattern on other part same like this, maybe you can decide what you want)
11. Additional Notes: i think on this diff, the volume on soft sampleset can be higher because when it has no additional hitsound on them it feels like no feedback sounds there (almost inaudible), put 60-70% volume can help this problem
12. 00:00:056 - look at timing points and inheritted timing points, the sampleset and kiai setting is different, you can fixed that thing by add kiai time and add same sampleset on timing points
13. end of mod.

see ya later, i hope my mod can help you o/