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Rivals_7

-BANGKE- wrote:

hi valz, another pony hmm, nm req from t/388270&start=0

tavvur boz
mapnya udah bagus, dan juga lu udh pernah bikin yg tv size dan rank, hmm little suggestion

1|2|3|4

hard
00:59:011 (59011|0,59011|2,59185|1,59358|1,59358|0,59531|2,59705|3,59705|0,59878|1) - hmm try this http://puu.sh/lxDOB/4e922016e0.jpg
01:00:572 (60572|1,60745|2) - hmm, move it to 1|3 Keep
01:54:763 (114763|3) - move to 3 Same Pitch, Keep

ponytail
00:28:838 - hmm, add 1? for cymbal Keep
00:34:387 - same ^ ^
00:39:936 - ^ ^
00:49:820 (49820|2) - move to 2
01:12:190 (72190|1) - move to 3
01:54:763 (114763|0) - move to 2 Same Pitch, Keep
02:49:994 (169994|0) - move to 2? ^
03:00:572 (180572|2) - hmm, move to 2? keep

dont give kds if my mod doesnt helping, good luck have fun
Thx for mod :3
Verniy_Chan
Sbelum sy mod
coba cek AiMod, tolong perbaiki note dan timing yang tidak snap -_-
setelah itu, saya akan mod
Topic Starter
Rivals_7
Lel, baru nyadar :v

Unsnapping Fixed :3
Verniy_Chan

Hi Rival

Mod Via ★☭ Верный Mania Queue ★☭

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. Seem nothing issue
Normal

OD : 7
HP : 7
  1. 00:46:526 - add note for consistency mapping snare drum sounds & if you didn't mapping sound like that, it will be empty pattern 1/1 snap + pitch like 00:40:977 (40977|1) - & 00:55:543 (55543|3) - also check here :
    00:47:913 -
    00:49:300 -
    00:52:075 -
    00:53:462 -
    01:43:404 -
    01:44:791 -
    01:46:179 -
    01:48:953 -
    01:50:341 -
    02:41:669 -
    02:43:056 -
  2. 01:00:745 - still hear cimbal here, i think pitch like 01:02:133 - and you mapping sound like that here 02:11:497 - same reason like :
    01:09:069 -
    01:11:844 -
    01:18:780 -
    02:05:948 -
    02:08:722 -
    02:48:779 -
    02:50:340 -
    02:51:727 -
    02:52:074 -
    02:52:421 -
    02:52:767 -
    02:53:114 -
  3. 01:34:387 (94387|2) - missing LR3_Hat_CRS here for hat synth sounds like 01:33:693 (93693|0) -
  4. 01:54:676 (114676|0) - move to 4, then 01:54:763 (114763|3) - move to 1, pattern easy/enjoyable R-L-R hand
  5. 02:03:000 (123000|2) - missing LR_Hat Synth here, pitch like 02:01:265 (121265|0,121612|2,121959|1,122306|3) -
  6. 02:17:046 - no need 2 note, pitch still low
  7. 02:18:896 (138896|2,138953|0,139040|1,139127|2,139213|3,139300|0,139387|1,139474|2) - are you sure with pattern like this? pattern too hard for easy diff, full stair pattern 1/3 & 1/4. And you didn't mapping sound like that here 02:23:028 - 02:23:201 - xD
  8. 02:46:871 (166871|3) - move to 1, for pitch relevancy, pattern like 01:53:635 (113635|0,113809|1,113982|2,114156|3) -
  9. 03:20:860 (200860|3) - you make LN here, it mean you following long synth, change LR_Drum Rpd x2 to LR_FxSVRc like 03:21:900 (201900|0,201900|1) -
Hard

OD : 7,5
HP : 7,5
  1. 00:53:462 (53462|1) - move to 4 for hand & pattern balance
  2. 01:15:832 (75832|3) - move to 2, 01:16:005 (76005|1,76005|0) - move to right 3-4, 01:16:179 (76179|2) - move to 1 for pattern balance, so many note in collum 4
  3. 01:18:953 (78953|2,79127|2,79127|1,79300|1) - better arrange this pattern, i don't like this ;w; sorry
  4. 01:29:358 (89358|0,89445|1,89531|3,89531|2,89705|0,89792|1,89878|2,89878|3) - need to change pattern, because different rhytim
  5. 01:31:265 - add note for cimbal sounds
  6. 01:34:387 (94387|3) - missing LR3_Hat_CRS here too
  7. 01:50:341 (110341|2) - move to 1 for hand & pattern balance
  8. 02:03:000 (123000|2) - missing LR_Hat Synth here too
  9. 02:23:808 - seem add note for pitch still stronnkk, also check here :
    02:44:790 -
  10. 02:43:056 (163056|1) - move to 4 for hand & pattern balance
  11. 03:04:733 (184733|3,185079|3,185426|3) - i feel dejavu here xD
  12. 03:18:952 (198952|3,199039|2,199126|0,199126|1,199299|3,199386|2,199473|1,199473|0) - ^
Pony


OD : 8
HP : 8
  1. 01:34:387 (94387|3) - missing LR3_Hat_CRS here
  2. 02:03:000 - missing LR_Hat Synth here
  3. 02:54:328 - missing hitsounds here maybe like 02:53:114 -
  4. 03:21:900 (201900|2) - move to 2, make different from Hard diff, xD
  5. Really tired 3min+ x 3diff ;w; sorry

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating
84,75

(1-100)

please ignore it, just for fun only
Хорошо~Good Luck..
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi Rival

Mod Via ★☭ Верный Mania Queue ★☭

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. Seem nothing issue
Normal

OD : 7
HP : 7
  1. 00:46:526 - add note for consistency mapping snare drum sounds & if you didn't mapping sound like that, it will be empty pattern 1/1 snap + pitch like 00:40:977 (40977|1) - & 00:55:543 (55543|3) - also check here :
    00:47:913 -
    00:49:300 -
    00:52:075 -
    00:53:462 -
    01:43:404 -
    01:44:791 -
    01:46:179 -
    01:48:953 -
    01:50:341 -
    02:41:669 -
    02:43:056 -
    ^All of this break was Intended, and I believe all the novice players can still recognize what sound that will be followed since the doubles that will come is on 1/2
  2. 01:00:745 - still hear cimbal here, i think pitch like 01:02:133 - and you mapping sound like that here 02:11:497 - same reason like :
    01:09:069 -
    01:11:844 -
    01:18:780 -
    02:05:948 -
    02:08:722 -
    02:48:779 -
    02:50:340 -
    ---------------------------------------------------
    02:51:727 -
    02:52:074 -
    02:52:421 -
    02:52:767 -
    02:53:114 -
    ------------------^Not for this, The music is like the first part of the song
  3. 01:34:387 (94387|2) - missing LR3_Hat_CRS here for hat synth sounds like 01:33:693 (93693|0) -
  4. 01:54:676 (114676|0) - move to 4, then 01:54:763 (114763|3) - move to 1, pattern easy/enjoyable R-L-R hand
  5. 02:03:000 (123000|2) - missing LR_Hat Synth here, pitch like 02:01:265 (121265|0,121612|2,121959|1,122306|3) -
  6. 02:17:046 - no need 2 note, pitch still low
  7. 02:18:896 (138896|2,138953|0,139040|1,139127|2,139213|3,139300|0,139387|1,139474|2) - are you sure with pattern like this? pattern too hard for easy diff, full stair pattern 1/3 & 1/4. And you didn't mapping sound like that here 02:23:028 - 02:23:201 - xD Intended for SR? maybe, for now I keep this
  8. 02:46:871 (166871|3) - move to 1, for pitch relevancy, pattern like 01:53:635 (113635|0,113809|1,113982|2,114156|3) -
  9. 03:20:860 (200860|3) - you make LN here, it mean you following long synth, change LR_Drum Rpd x2 to LR_FxSVRc like 03:21:900 (201900|0,201900|1) -
Hard

OD : 7,5
HP : 7,5
  1. 00:53:462 (53462|1) - move to 4 for hand & pattern balance
  2. 01:15:832 (75832|3) - move to 2, 01:16:005 (76005|1,76005|0) - move to right 3-4, 01:16:179 (76179|2) - move to 1 for pattern balance, so many note in collum 4
  3. 01:18:953 (78953|2,79127|2,79127|1,79300|1) - better arrange this pattern, i don't like this ;w; sorry
  4. 01:29:358 (89358|0,89445|1,89531|3,89531|2,89705|0,89792|1,89878|2,89878|3) - need to change pattern, because different rhytim
  5. 01:31:265 - add note for cimbal sounds Weak cymbal doesn't need for two notes
  6. 01:34:387 (94387|3) - missing LR3_Hat_CRS here too
  7. 01:50:341 (110341|2) - move to 1 for hand & pattern balance
  8. 02:03:000 (123000|2) - missing LR_Hat Synth here too
  9. 02:23:808 - seem add note for pitch still stronnkk, also check here :
    02:44:790 -
  10. 02:43:056 (163056|1) - move to 4 for hand & pattern balance
  11. 03:04:733 (184733|3,185079|3,185426|3) - i feel dejavu here xD
  12. 03:18:952 (198952|3,199039|2,199126|0,199126|1,199299|3,199386|2,199473|1,199473|0) - ^
Pony


OD : 8
HP : 8
  1. 01:34:387 (94387|3) - missing LR3_Hat_CRS here
  2. 02:03:000 - missing LR_Hat Synth here
  3. 02:54:328 - missing hitsounds here maybe like 02:53:114 -
  4. 03:21:900 (201900|2) - move to 2, make different from Hard diff, xD
  5. Really tired 3min+ x 3diff ;w; sorrywkwkw oke (y)

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating
84,75

(1-100)

please ignore it, just for fun only
Хорошо~Good Luck..
Fixed :) Missing HS and HS Suggestion will be putted in Hitsound diff :D
Thx for mod :)
sherrysina
hi, rivals~ request from queue (lol, kuhaku and bangke's queue)

Mod
[Normal]
02:09:589 (129589|1,129763|0) - swap collumn? for a better flow
02:17:046 - kayanya salah satu note enak dijadikan LN
02:47:045 (167045|1) - move to 4. for comfortable

[Hard]
00:04:560 (4560|3,4907|2) - ctrl+J? for a better flow
00:06:121 (6121|2) - move to 1, ^
01:04:734 (64734|0,65081|0,65427|0) - balance this please..
01:54:763 (114763|3) - move to 3
02:01:612 (121612|3,121959|3,122306|3) - balance this too

maaf kalo nggak membantu ;w;
good luck!
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

sherrysina wrote:

hi, rivals~ request from queue (lol, kuhaku and bangke's queue)

Mod
[Normal]
02:09:589 (129589|1,129763|0) - swap collumn? for a better flow
02:17:046 - kayanya salah satu note enak dijadikan LN Gini aja cukup kok :>
02:47:045 (167045|1) - move to 4. for comfortable

[Hard]
00:04:560 (4560|3,4907|2) - ctrl+J? for a better flow Keep for now
00:06:121 (6121|2) - move to 1, ^ Keep, to give player some "drum feeling"
01:04:734 (64734|0,65081|0,65427|0) - balance this please..
01:54:763 (114763|3) - move to 3 Keep, same pitch as - 01:54:676 (114676|3) - and hit-able
02:01:612 (121612|3,121959|3,122306|3) - balance this too

maaf kalo nggak membantu ;w;
good luck!
Thanks for mod :)
-SoraGami-
Hi Rivalss!~~

here's my mod
"more ponies" xD

just a quick look

Column = 1|2|3|4


[General]
BG : OK, just ponies xD
Audio : consider lowering the volume in this kinds of sounds 00:09:763 because it is too loud
Timing : OK
Spread : OK
Etc. : OK

[Normal]
- 00:02:306 (2306|2) - maybe move this in 4? so that it feels like the pitch goes high after 00:01:786 (1786|2) and then 00:04:560 (4560|3) move this to 3 so that the flow goes down as the pitch goes down also and same pitch with 00:01:786
- 00:21:208 - pattern suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4053569 , a mirror pattern for this one 00:20:514 is good i think and from here 00:21:901 just accordance to the pitch, but it's up to you
- 01:57:624 - add note for consistency, cuz you added note here 01:00:745
- 03:01:438 - same case with ^
[Hard]
- 00:22:248 (22248|3,22248|2) - move to left? to have some flow, making it jack is not fitting i guess
- 01:01:786 (61786|3,61959|2,62046|3) - move to 3,4,3 for some balance and comfortable flow
- 01:01:959 - why did you make a 1/4 here while 01:13:057 - is not?
- 01:19:300 (79300|3,79474|2,79647|3,79734|2,79820|1) - move to 3,4,2,3,4 so that some plyers in this level can hit this section more accurately, because here 01:19:820 in this cutted 1/4 flow they both end and started at the left hand, and some players might just stair it
- 01:23:982 (83982|1) - move to 1 for some balnce, because the flow has some right-sided
- 01:30:225 (90225|0,90225|1) - put it in the middle like my reason in the 1st one?
- 01:54:763 (114763|3) - move to 3, because that 1/4 jack is too sudden for the middle part, cuz you dont have it before
- 01:58:664 (118664|0,118838|1,118924|0) - move to 1,2,1 for more comfortable flow
- 02:10:023 - and 03:02:738 - add like 01:01:959
- 02:16:352 (136352|1,136526|0,136612|1,136699|2,136872|3) - move to 1,2,3,4,3 like i was said before about cutted stairs that started and ended in both hands
- 03:13:577 (193577|2) - move to 4? for balance
- 03:19:819 (199819|3,199819|2,199993|0,199993|1) - move to [23][14] for some impact?
[Pony pony~~~ PONY]
- 01:08:029 (68029|0,68202|1) - swap columns for equal number of jcks and blance flow
- 01:16:699 (76699|1) - move to 1 for balance and comfortability hard to [24] it cuz of 01:16:352 (76352|1,76526|1,76699|1)
- 01:54:763 - move to 2? ummm... maybe it is just good if you didnt make it a jack????
- 02:00:225 (120225|0,120312|1,120398|0) - move to 2,1,3 for more good flow and balance
- 02:04:734 (124734|3) - move to 1 for a sweet balance xD
- 02:13:578 (133578|2) - move to 4, cuz of 02:13:231 (133231|2,133404|2,133578|2) hard to [24] it...
- 03:01:785 (181785|2) - move to 2
- i hear some loud hs.... maybe made it lower...
also i hear some extremely loud hs but i dont know where it came from... maybe it is just my editor xD

Nice map rivals~
Good Luck on your ponies!
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

-SoraGami- wrote:

Hi Rivalss!~~

here's my mod
"more ponies" xD

just a quick look

Column = 1|2|3|4


[General]
BG : OK, just ponies xD
Audio : consider lowering the volume in this kinds of sounds 00:09:763 because it is too loud
Timing : OK
Spread : OK
Etc. : OK

[Normal]
- 00:02:306 (2306|2) - maybe move this in 4? so that it feels like the pitch goes high after 00:01:786 (1786|2) and then 00:04:560 (4560|3) move this to 3 so that the flow goes down as the pitch goes down also and same pitch with 00:01:786
- 00:21:208 - pattern suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4053569 , a mirror pattern for this one 00:20:514 is good i think and from here 00:21:901 just accordance to the pitch, but it's up to you Hmm I'll keep this :3
- 01:57:624 - add note for consistency, cuz you added note here 01:00:745
- 03:01:438 - same case with ^
[Hard]
- 00:22:248 (22248|3,22248|2) - move to left? to have some flow, making it jack is not fitting i guess This was following the kick and it's on the same pitch.Also this will made a "double-minijack-in-different-hand" pattern which is I don't really like to use it here
- 01:01:786 (61786|3,61959|2,62046|3) - move to 3,4,3 for some balance and comfortable flow
- 01:01:959 - why did you make a 1/4 here while 01:13:057 - is not?
- 01:19:300 (79300|3,79474|2,79647|3,79734|2,79820|1) - move to 3,4,2,3,4 so that some plyers in this level can hit this section more accurately, because here 01:19:820 in this cutted 1/4 flow they both end and started at the left hand, and some players might just stair it
- 01:23:982 (83982|1) - move to 1 for some balnce, because the flow has some right-sided
- 01:30:225 (90225|0,90225|1) - put it in the middle like my reason in the 1st one? same as my first red note then
- 01:54:763 (114763|3) - move to 3, because that 1/4 jack is too sudden for the middle part, cuz you dont have it before It's relevant to the kick noise, and they're also on the same pitch
- 01:58:664 (118664|0,118838|1,118924|0) - move to 1,2,1 for more comfortable flow
- 02:10:023 - and 03:02:738 - add like 01:01:959
- 02:16:352 (136352|1,136526|0,136612|1,136699|2,136872|3) - move to 1,2,3,4,3 like i was said before about cutted stairs that started and ended in both hands
- 03:13:577 (193577|2) - move to 4? for balance
- 03:19:819 (199819|3,199819|2,199993|0,199993|1) - move to [23][14] for some impact? Nope, I'll just make it consistent
[Pony pony~~~ PONY]
- 01:08:029 (68029|0,68202|1) - swap columns for equal number of jcks and blance flow
- 01:16:699 (76699|1) - move to 1 for balance and comfortability hard to [24] it cuz of 01:16:352 (76352|1,76526|1,76699|1)
- 01:54:763 - move to 2? ummm... maybe it is just good if you didnt make it a jack???? Acceptable because of the same pitch
- 02:00:225 (120225|0,120312|1,120398|0) - move to 2,1,3 for more good flow and balance
- 02:04:734 (124734|3) - move to 1 for a sweet balance xD It seems like nothing change to me :/
- 02:13:578 (133578|2) - move to 4, cuz of 02:13:231 (133231|2,133404|2,133578|2) hard to [24] it...
- 03:01:785 (181785|2) - move to 2
- i hear some loud hs.... maybe made it lower...
also i hear some extremely loud hs but i dont know where it came from... maybe it is just my editor xD

Nice map rivals~
Good Luck on your ponies!

Thanks For Mod :3 It was really helpful :D
Mei-chan_old_1
Cancelled sorry because i'm too busy with school i don't have enough time to do it T.T
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Mei-chan wrote:

Cancelled sorry because i'm too busy with school i don't have enough time to do it T.T
Ah okey then no prob ;)
[ A v a l o n ]
Hi Rivals_7 ;)
Here is my mod as requested from

|1|2|3|4|


mod inside

  • all general stuff was fine :'D
  1. 00:00:745 (745|3) - would be nice if you change this note into LN, according on long sound in this time
  2. 00:05:254 (5254|1,5601|2,5948|3,6294|1) - move this LN to 4 2 3 1 . . . it's more fit with the song itself
  3. 00:06:641 (6641|2,6988|3) - Ctrl G, more better imo
  4. 00:07:335 (7335|0,7682|0) - 00:08:029 (8029|1,8375|1) - i can't understand this note, not realted to any pitch imo @_@
  5. 00:09:069 (9069|2,9069|0) - delete this note ? and make 1 or 2 LN here for expressing the drum roll start here 00:08:896 -
  6. 00:14:618 (14618|1,14965|1) - 00:15:312 (15312|2,15659|2) - what the purpose of this note ? . . . well i think this pattern is better 00:12:190 (12190|1,12537|1,12537|0) - hear the sound carefully
  7. 00:18:086 (18086|3,18433|3) - etc, same reason as above . . . maybe try this http://puu.sh/lSFak/07ee1ea7c9.jpg it can be applied start on here 00:18:086 -
  8. 00:23:289 (23289|0,23289|2) - move to 1 and 4 after that^ (swictch LN)
  9. 00:32:826 (32826|1,32826|3,33173|0,33173|2,33520|3,33520|1) - make it into 12 34 12 column
  10. 00:33:867 - & 00:34:214 - you've missing intrument sound here . . . add note
  11. 00:46:179 (46179|1) - why no LN here ? it's exactly same sound as 00:45:485 (45485|3) -
  12. 00:48:953 - & 00:51:728 - same reason as above^
  13. 00:49:647 (49647|3,49647|0,49820|1,49820|2) - Ctrl G . . . fits perfectly with vocal and impact sound
  14. 01:11:670 - still have clear sound here, suggest to add note
  15. 01:19:734 - add a note here if you following kick in this part (but i suggest you to following vocal here, its more easy to hit)
  16. 01:36:294 - & 01:36:641 - please add note here, you've missing instrument sound here
  17. 01:41:844 - & 01:42:190 - same reason as ^
  18. 02:08:563 - still have clear sound here, suggest to add note
  19. 02:18:780 (138780|3) - low sound, and very hard to hit newbie player . . . i suggest you to delete that, and move this 02:18:896 (138896|2) - to 4
  20. 03:12:189 (192189|1,192536|1) - & 03:12:883 (192883|2,193230|2) - what the purpose of this pattern ? i don't understand . . . pls make another form if you want
  21. 03:15:657 (195657|3,196004|3) - 03:16:351 (196351|1,196698|1) - 03:17:045 (197045|2,197392|2) - not fits perfectly with music and play feels . . . try to re-arrange that

    [Hard]
  22. 00:08:896 (8896|2,9069|3,9069|1,9242|2) - better to remove this, and make a LN for exchange drum roll here . . . example http://puu.sh/lSFJC/65c87338d2.jpg
  23. 00:09:763 (9763|1,10456|2) - move to 4 and 1 for better balance
  24. 00:10:630 (10630|3,10716|2,10803|1) - arrange to 3 2 4 . . . its more fit i think
  25. 00:12:017 - add a note for kick sound here, you've missing that
  26. 00:14:705 - have same sound with 00:14:878 (14878|1) - well i suggest to add note here (on 3rd column)
  27. 00:20:601 - 00:21:294 - can you hear drum roll is still exist here ? . . . here is my suggestion for your pattern http://puu.sh/lSG1E/13827ecfe6.jpg neat and more fit with the sound
  28. 00:22:075 (22075|2,22075|3,22248|3,22248|2,22422|1,22422|0) - according on jack sound on this part, try this ? http://puu.sh/lSG59/b1a105e1a0.jpg
  29. 00:24:936 (24936|1) - move to 3, fits perfectly when you play it
  30. 00:27:277 (27277|2) - what is this ? make it short is more better imo . . . because there is no long sound reached more than 1 beat here
  31. 00:43:925 (43925|0) - cut this LN to 00:44:271 - this sound is no more longer on that timing
  32. 00:44:618 - where is the LN ? pls do a consistency like LN on this part 00:44:271 (44271|1) -
  33. 00:50:688 (50688|2) - wrong snapped . . . here is my fix http://puu.sh/lSGhm/400fb495af.jpg actually LN start here 00:50:514 -
  34. 00:53:809 (53809|0,53809|1,53809|3,53982|2,54156|0,54329|1,54503|3,54676|1,54849|2,55023|0) - WTF this LN . . pls change that into single note only, no long sound on this part . . . but you can start LN invasion on here 00:55:196 - because it's correct long sound (which yours is right)
  35. 01:00:572 (60572|1) - actually you can make a jack on first column, because of kick sound (hear it carefully) OR you can just add note on that because of kick sound
  36. 01:03:693 (63693|2,63867|2) - this jack is not fit with music itself, move it to 4th column . . . works great (hear the sound carefully)
  37. 01:04:907 (64907|2,65081|2) - hmmmm, this jack is not really fit too, try to move that to 4th column ? because i can hear 01:05:254 (65254|3) - is same synth sound
  38. 01:12:797 - add note, you've missing a note for drum here . . . do like 01:13:144 (73144|1) -
  39. 01:14:531 (74531|1) - delete this, because you didn't following any drum roll in this part
  40. 01:16:612 - 01:16:959 - 01:17:306 - add note for drum sound . . . here is my suggestion http://puu.sh/lSGGD/627affd195.jpg it can be applied start on here 01:16:179 -
  41. 01:22:682 - add a note on 2nd column,s till have synth sound like others
  42. 01:28:144 - start on that, same as my suggestion on this part 00:19:994 -
  43. 01:50:687 (110687|2,110861|1,111034|3,111208|2,111381|0,111554|2,111728|1,111901|3) - better to change that mini LN with single note, same reason as this part 00:53:809 -
  44. the rest seems same . . . you can check it by yourself :v

OK mod end huehue
good luck ;)

oh i almost forgot, plz mod this map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/381397 :v
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Rivals_7 ;)
Here is my mod as requested from

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mod inside

  • all general stuff was fine :'D

    edit: "Normal" he said
  1. 00:00:745 (745|3) - would be nice if you change this note into LN, according on long sound in this time
  2. 00:05:254 (5254|1,5601|2,5948|3,6294|1) - move this LN to 4 2 3 1 . . . it's more fit with the song itself
  3. 00:06:641 (6641|2,6988|3) - Ctrl G, more better imo
  4. 00:07:335 (7335|0,7682|0) - 00:08:029 (8029|1,8375|1) - i can't understand this note, not realted to any pitch imo @_@ It's a kick, not following any pitch here. I'm mostly following on beats, as long as they're playable, there will be no issues.
  5. 00:09:069 (9069|2,9069|0) - delete this note ? and make 1 or 2 LN here for expressing the drum roll start here 00:08:896 -
  6. 00:14:618 (14618|1,14965|1) - 00:15:312 (15312|2,15659|2) - what the purpose of this note ? . . . well i think this pattern is better 00:12:190 (12190|1,12537|1,12537|0) - hear the sound carefully same reason as above
  7. 00:18:086 (18086|3,18433|3) - etc, same reason as above . . . maybe try this http://puu.sh/lSFak/07ee1ea7c9.jpg it can be applied start on here 00:18:086 -
  8. 00:23:289 (23289|0,23289|2) - move to 1 and 4 after that^ (swictch LN)
  9. 00:32:826 (32826|1,32826|3,33173|0,33173|2,33520|3,33520|1) - make it into 12 34 12 column Mope, too monotonous for me
  10. 00:33:867 - & 00:34:214 - you've missing intrument sound here . . . add note
  11. 00:46:179 (46179|1) - why no LN here ? it's exactly same sound as 00:45:485 (45485|3) -
  12. 00:48:953 - & 00:51:728 - same reason as above^
  13. 00:49:647 (49647|3,49647|0,49820|1,49820|2) - Ctrl G . . . fits perfectly with vocal and impact sound Accepting your suggest about adding an LN here - 00:48:953 - . If I ctrl+g this, it'll be overlapped
  14. 01:11:670 - still have clear sound here, suggest to add note
  15. 01:19:734 - add a note here if you following kick in this part (but i suggest you to following vocal here, its more easy to hit) In purpose for easier readability to newbies
  16. 01:36:294 - & 01:36:641 - please add note here, you've missing instrument sound here
  17. 01:41:844 - & 01:42:190 - same reason as ^
  18. 02:08:563 - still have clear sound here, suggest to add note
  19. 02:18:780 (138780|3) - low sound, and very hard to hit newbie player . . . i suggest you to delete that, and move this 02:18:896 (138896|2) - to 4
  20. 03:12:189 (192189|1,192536|1) - & 03:12:883 (192883|2,193230|2) - what the purpose of this pattern ? i don't understand . . . pls make another form if you want
  21. 03:15:657 (195657|3,196004|3) - 03:16:351 (196351|1,196698|1) - 03:17:045 (197045|2,197392|2) - not fits perfectly with music and play feels . . . try to re-arrange that Same concern as above

    [Hard]
  22. 00:08:896 (8896|2,9069|3,9069|1,9242|2) - better to remove this, and make a LN for exchange drum roll here . . . example http://puu.sh/lSFJC/65c87338d2.jpg
  23. 00:09:763 (9763|1,10456|2) - move to 4 and 1 for better balance
  24. 00:10:630 (10630|3,10716|2,10803|1) - arrange to 3 2 4 . . . its more fit i think
  25. 00:12:017 - add a note for kick sound here, you've missing that Ignored on purpose, you see i'm doing the same thing here - 00:11:323 - and - 00:11:670 -
  26. 00:14:705 - have same sound with 00:14:878 (14878|1) - well i suggest to add note here (on 3rd column)
  27. 00:20:601 - 00:21:294 - can you hear drum roll is still exist here ? . . . here is my suggestion for your pattern http://puu.sh/lSG1E/13827ecfe6.jpg neat and more fit with the sound
  28. 00:22:075 (22075|2,22075|3,22248|3,22248|2,22422|1,22422|0) - according on jack sound on this part, try this ? http://puu.sh/lSG59/b1a105e1a0.jpg
    - 00:21:901 (21901|1,21901|0) - These are low pitch -> - 00:22:075 (22075|3,22075|2) - These are high pitch -> - 00:22:248 (22248|3,22248|2) - These are more higher pitch (but I put in the same column because of column limit) -> and this - 00:22:422 (22422|1,22422|0) - are low pitch. same as - 00:21:901 (21901|1,21901|0) - . It's more fit this way.
  29. 00:24:936 (24936|1) - move to 3, fits perfectly when you play it
  30. 00:27:277 (27277|2) - what is this ? make it short is more better imo . . . because there is no long sound reached more than 1 beat here I don't think this is a really big deal, I copied this from ranked TV Size one, And it feels like I have to do this for uniqueness sake (?). When I change to SN, it's just feel...... Monotonous :/
  31. 00:43:925 (43925|0) - cut this LN to 00:44:271 - this sound is no more longer on that timing Lemme just say that this is my style of LN here(somewhat similar like yoshilove did in a map like "Gotou mai - Funwari Fuwari" (see the thread)). Extending the LN (even though the pitch are changing) is still acceptable as long as they playable (See TV Size version of this map. I using this kind of pattern too).
  32. 00:44:618 - where is the LN ? pls do a consistency like LN on this part 00:44:271 (44271|1) - Added an LN on 4
  33. 00:50:688 (50688|2) - wrong snapped . . . here is my fix http://puu.sh/lSGhm/400fb495af.jpg actually LN start here 00:50:514 - Extending the LN but I'm not adding any note here - 00:50:688 - For easier readability
  34. 00:53:809 (53809|0,53809|1,53809|3,53982|2,54156|0,54329|1,54503|3,54676|1,54849|2,55023|0) - WTF this LN . . pls change that into single note only, no long sound on this part . . . but you can start LN invasion on here 00:55:196 - because it's correct long sound (which yours is right) Ah this..... I following a buildup noises (heard at 25%) and the pitch are changing every 1/2 . I think this "LN Invasion" starting from here is more fit
  35. 01:00:572 (60572|1) - actually you can make a jack on first column, because of kick sound (hear it carefully) OR you can just add note on that because of kick sound Umm... keep this. I just don't want snare and hat noises in the same column
  36. 01:03:693 (63693|2,63867|2) - this jack is not fit with music itself, move it to 4th column . . . works great (hear the sound carefully)
  37. 01:04:907 (64907|2,65081|2) - hmmmm, this jack is not really fit too, try to move that to 4th column ? because i can hear 01:05:254 (65254|3) - is same synth sound Rearranged this section
  38. 01:12:797 - add note, you've missing a note for drum here . . . do like 01:13:144 (73144|1) - Ignored on purpose for easier readabilty sake. Just as the same thing i do here - 01:01:699 -
  39. 01:14:531 (74531|1) - delete this, because you didn't following any drum roll in this part It is, because that is the tom sound. xD
  40. 01:16:612 - 01:16:959 - 01:17:306 - add note for drum sound . . . here is my suggestion http://puu.sh/lSGGD/627affd195.jpg it can be applied start on here 01:16:179 - 0-0 Too dense, Let the "Pony" diff do this instead. tbh Drumroll is not the focus of this diff
  41. 01:22:682 - add a note on 2nd column,s till have synth sound like others
  42. 01:28:144 - start on that, same as my suggestion on this part 00:19:994 -
  43. 01:50:687 (110687|2,110861|1,111034|3,111208|2,111381|0,111554|2,111728|1,111901|3) - better to change that mini LN with single note, same reason as this part 00:53:809 - Same reason as above
  44. the rest seems same . . . you can check it by yourself :v K :v

OK mod end huehue
good luck ;)

oh i almost forgot, plz mod this map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/381397 :v
K wil mod yours soon xD
Thx :D
Fuuyu


Nyahallo~ Riva-chii

Requested via 「Kafuuchii's Reservation Queue. Poi~」

Requested as Reserved~


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I'll just check the pattern and notes, okie? Hue.
- Normal
  1. 01:19:300 (79300|1,79474|0) - just mirror with this part 01:19:820 (79820|2,79994|1,80167|0) - soo...01:19:300 (79300|1,79474|0) - move one col. to the right.
  2. 01:27:104 (87104|1) - to col. 2
  3. 01:35:254 (95254|3,95601|2) - ctrl + j
  4. 01:40:456 (100456|0,100630|1) - ^
  5. 01:54:416 (114416|1) - to col. 0 then stair this part 01:54:763 (114763|0) - to col. 2 01:54:849 (114849|2) - to col. 3
  6. 02:26:930 (146930|0) - to col. 3?
  7. 02:30:571 (150571|0,150745|1) - ctrl + j?
  8. 02:32:912 (152912|2,152912|1) - move to 02:32:826 - i think?

- Hard
  1. 00:00:572 (572|2,659|1) - one col. to the left?
  2. 00:27:277 (27277|2) - end LN at 00:27:797 -
  3. 01:19:820 - add note to col. 1
  4. 02:32:999 - add note? practically the same sound with 02:32:826 -
  5. 03:20:860 (200860|2,200860|1,201380|1,201380|2) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/lWpA8/11af52c290.png

RIP my mods are so short now and I can't do Pony... That's all I can point out to ;-; Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

- Kafuuchii - wrote:



Nyahallo~ Riva-chii

Requested via 「Kafuuchii's Reservation Queue. Poi~」

Requested as Reserved~


0 | 1 | 2 | 3



I'll just check the pattern and notes, okie? Hue. [/color]
- Normal
  1. 01:19:300 (79300|1,79474|0) - just mirror with this part 01:19:820 (79820|2,79994|1,80167|0) - soo...01:19:300 (79300|1,79474|0) - move one col. to the right.
  2. 01:27:104 (87104|1) - to col. 2
  3. 01:35:254 (95254|3,95601|2) - ctrl + j
  4. 01:40:456 (100456|0,100630|1) - ^ I think i'll keep this
  5. 01:54:416 (114416|1) - to col. 0 then stair this part 01:54:763 (114763|0) - to col. 2 01:54:849 (114849|2) - to col. 3 Keep this for now, just wanna make this part quite unique
  6. 02:26:930 (146930|0) - to col. 3? Col 1 instead
  7. 02:30:571 (150571|0,150745|1) - ctrl + j? Nope
  8. 02:32:912 (152912|2,152912|1) - move to 02:32:826 - i think?

- Hard
  1. 00:00:572 (572|2,659|1) - one col. to the left? It's fine I think
  2. 00:27:277 (27277|2) - end LN at 00:27:797 - Nope, it's more comfortable to release the LN at - 00:27:971 -
  3. 01:19:820 - add note to col. 1 On purpose to reduce diff spike xD
  4. 02:32:999 - add note? practically the same sound with 02:32:826 -
  5. 03:20:860 (200860|2,200860|1,201380|1,201380|2) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/lWpA8/11af52c290.png Not bad tho, but it could occurs an accuracy issues. Change it for now tho. xD

RIP my mods are so short now and I can't do Pony... That's all I can point out to ;-; Good Luck~
Thx :)
Takeshi Hiroshi
hi~

here my mod :v

Normal
02:18:896 (138896|3) - I think you should remove

Hard
03:16:178 (196178|1) - This should end 03:16:351 -

Pony
03:16:178 (196178|3) - This should end 03:16:351 -

*I'm no speak english... use Google translator
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Takeshi Hiroshi wrote:

hi~

here my mod :v Where the heck are you come from xD

Normal
02:18:896 (138896|3) - I think you should remove I dont think so

Hard
03:16:178 (196178|1) - This should end 03:16:351 -

Pony
03:16:178 (196178|3) - This should end 03:16:351 -

*I'm no speak english... use Google translator
Everything else are applied

Thank you xD
Skalim
Sorry dude, i tried to mod it, but i can´t find any issue in the diff, maybe my kudos can help you for rank ^^ is better than nothing
Topic Starter
Rivals_7
(GG I forgot to reply)

That's okay :) And thank you for star Skalim :D
Shinzo-

MOD READY


Mod by Request on



7K

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Mod Inside
[General]

Timing
  1. offset kinda late try 1103

[Pony]
00:06:641 - consider adding 1 more note for impact/cymbal
00:08:722 - 00:09:069 - i though it was same with 00:08:375 (8375|1,8375|3) - but if you want to make this playable then i can understand
00:09:763 - 00:10:456 - you can add 1 more note here, the sound is kinda loud and like a impact (just like 00:20:861 - 00:21:555 - ), it's ok if not, i just recomend adding note there
00:14:965 (14965|3,15312|0) - those sound are end on 00:15:225 - 00:15:572 - please hear it carefully. 00:15:659 (15659|3) - this one is right since you can hear a new synt on 00:15:832 (15832|0) -
00:17:479 - actually this should be counted as Missing note since you layer it on 00:17:566 (17566|2,17653|1) - just like you do on 01:14:358 -
00:22:248 (22248|1,22422|2) - Ctrl H for pitch ? it's up to you
00:22:768 - consider adding 1 more note for the loud snare
00:27:971 (27971|0) - the sound is end on 00:28:318 - so please end the LN on there too
00:33:346 - maybe add 1 more note for the synt
00:33:520 (33520|3) - same like i mentioned before, it ends 00:33:867 -
00:34:387 - consider add one more note for cymbal/impact and i hear come tiiing
00:39:069 (39069|0) - same like before, it should be end on 00:39:416 -
00:44:445 - add note just like i mentioned before
00:44:618 (44618|0) - end the LN on 00:44:965 - according to the sound
00:56:497 - add note on 4th collumn since as you can hear theres a synt and kick
00:56:757 - try something like http://puu.sh/meHSv/b9f51d6b56.png for the pitch
01:03:260 (63260|1) - maybe delete since it just an echo
01:24:069 - missing note for the synt
01:25:456 - missing note for the drum you must layer it bcs you layer it on 01:25:543 (85543|1,85630|2) -
01:27:624 (87624|0) - consider delete this because 01:27:624 (87624|3,87624|0) - the sound is not loud as 01:27:450 (87450|2,87450|0) -
01:35:948 (95948|0) - should end on 01:36:294 - according to the sound
01:36:728 (96728|1) - better to move to 01:36:641 - since 01:36:641 - the sound is same like 01:36:294 (96294|2,96294|3) - also i almost hear nothing on 01:36:728 -
01:41:323 - add note for the synt ? and 01:41:497 (101497|0) - end the LN on 01:41:844 -
01:44:098 (104098|2,104098|1,104445|1,104965|2,105138|1) - consider Ctrl H this for the pitch
01:47:739 (107739|0) - delete, the sound is not loud enough to be 2 note
01:53:375 - add 1 more note cause there's a kick
01:53:809 (113809|0) - move to 2 and 01:54:156 (114156|3) - move to 3 for pitch
01:57:537 - consider adding note here for the synt
02:20:398 - 02:20:456 - actually you must add note here since you layer those sound since the begining of this part 02:18:953 (138953|0,139040|1,139127|2,139213|3,139300|0,139387|1,139474|2) -
02:23:028 - 02:23:201 - add note for a same reason as above
02:46:091 - add note for the kick
02:46:525 (166525|2,166871|1) - Ctrl H for pitch
03:12:536 (192536|3,192883|0) - same like i said before they should be end on 03:12:883 - and 03:13:230 - according to the sound
03:13:663 - misssing note, you can't suddenly stop following this sound

Good Luck and Happy New Year !
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Shinzo- wrote:

MOD READY


Mod by Request on



7K

[1|2|3|4|5|6|7]


Mod Inside
[General]

Timing
  1. offset kinda late try 1103
    The beat was on 1093. 1103 is just an emphasize (though it sounds bigger)

[Pony]
00:06:641 - consider adding 1 more note for impact/cymbal But the song doesn't have cymbal on it
00:08:722 - 00:09:069 - i though it was same with 00:08:375 (8375|1,8375|3) - but if you want to make this playable then i can understand
00:09:763 - 00:10:456 - you can add 1 more note here, the sound is kinda loud and like a impact (just like 00:20:861 - 00:21:555 - ), it's ok if not, i just recomend adding note there
00:14:965 (14965|3,15312|0) - those sound are end on 00:15:225 - 00:15:572 - please hear it carefully. 00:15:659 (15659|3) - this one is right since you can hear a new synt on 00:15:832 (15832|0) -
00:17:479 - actually this should be counted as Missing note since you layer it on 00:17:566 (17566|2,17653|1) - just like you do on 01:14:358 - - 01:14:358 - has a drum noise but not as intense as - 00:17:479 -. Can't be hearded clearly at 25% becuase the drum noise is fast, you can heard it at 75%
00:22:248 (22248|1,22422|2) - Ctrl H for pitch ? it's up to you Okay
00:22:768 - consider adding 1 more note for the loud snare Nope, giving the hand more drum feeling by using just one note.
00:27:971 (27971|0) - the sound is end on 00:28:318 - so please end the LN on there too The guitar is less intense there (even tho its almost not noticeable) also for consistencies with 2 LN before See TV Size ver :v
00:33:346 - maybe add 1 more note for the synt
00:33:520 (33520|3) - same like i mentioned before, it ends 00:33:867 - ^
00:34:387 - consider add one more note for cymbal/impact and i hear come tiiing
00:39:069 (39069|0) - same like before, it should be end on 00:39:416 - ^
00:44:445 - add note just like i mentioned before
00:44:618 (44618|0) - end the LN on 00:44:965 - according to the sound ^
00:56:497 - add note on 4th collumn since as you can hear theres a synt and kick
00:56:757 - try something like http://puu.sh/meHSv/b9f51d6b56.png for the pitch Oh I don't like that "double Triple stack"
01:03:260 (63260|1) - maybe delete since it just an echo
01:24:069 - missing note for the synt Intended to avoi minijack, just like I'm doing here - 00:16:092 -
01:25:456 - missing note for the drum you must layer it bcs you layer it on 01:25:543 (85543|1,85630|2) -
01:27:624 (87624|0) - consider delete this because 01:27:624 (87624|3,87624|0) - the sound is not loud as 01:27:450 (87450|2,87450|0) - Its for BG Noise that also blended with guitar. and to make pattern less awkward
01:35:948 (95948|0) - should end on 01:36:294 - according to the sound Same reason Up there
01:36:728 (96728|1) - better to move to 01:36:641 - since 01:36:641 - the sound is same like 01:36:294 (96294|2,96294|3) - also i almost hear nothing on 01:36:728 - lel there's a noise obviously, if you cant sure try to hear this at 0% FX sound
01:41:323 - add note for the synt ? and 01:41:497 (101497|0) - end the LN on 01:41:844 - Nope for that LN
01:44:098 (104098|2,104098|1,104445|1,104965|2,105138|1) - consider Ctrl H this for the pitch Oke
01:47:739 (107739|0) - delete, the sound is not loud enough to be 2 note
01:53:375 - add 1 more note cause there's a kick
01:53:809 (113809|0) - move to 2 and 01:54:156 (114156|3) - move to 3 for pitch It'll make triple stack ;w;
01:57:537 - consider adding note here for the synt Too faint imo
02:20:398 - 02:20:456 - actually you must add note here since you layer those sound since the begining of this part 02:18:953 (138953|0,139040|1,139127|2,139213|3,139300|0,139387|1,139474|2) - I'm not meant to layer the electric noises anymore.
02:23:028 - 02:23:201 - add note for a same reason as above ^ Though I will consider both parts
02:46:091 - add note for the kick
02:46:525 (166525|2,166871|1) - Ctrl H for pitch
03:12:536 (192536|3,192883|0) - same like i said before they should be end on 03:12:883 - and 03:13:230 - according to the sound Up there
03:13:663 - misssing note, you can't suddenly stop following this sound

Good Luck and Happy New Year !
Thanks for mod Shin :D
HNY!
Gravey-
[Normal MOD]

[General]
Background
Timing
Song Setup
Metadata
Misc. . .
|1|2|3|4|
[Normal]
00:13:231 (13231|0) - Move to |3| for pattern consistency

00:23:289 (23289|2,23809|1) - Move to |4| - |3| and 00:24:329 (24329|2) - Move to |2| It gives more comfort-ability for the hand and based on your previous pattern 00:28:838

00:25:716 (25716|3,25890|2,26063|1) - Move to the left side by 1 column notice this part 00:31:266 they are the same rhythm as. .

00:34:907 (34907|2,35427|1) - Ctrl + H

00:35:774 (35774|2,36294|1) - Move to the right by 1 column

00:36:815 (36815|3,36988|2,37162|1) - Move to the left by 1 column

01:28:144 (88144|1) - Move to |3| then 01:28:491 (88491|0,88664|1) - Move to |2| - |3| then 01:28:838 (88838|2) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency

02:16:179 (136179|2,136352|3) - Move to the left by 1 column for better transition and based on the rhythm like ladder pattern

02:26:409 Add a note in |2| here

02:53:114 (173114|2) - Move to |4|

03:08:894 (188894|1,189068|0) - Move to the right by 1 column just like the other one before (for better transition and based on the rhythm like ladder pattern)

[Hard]
00:20:167 (20167|0) - Move to |3|

01:00:572 (60572|1,60745|2) - Move to |3| - |1| for pattern consistency

01:28:578 Add note to |3| then 01:29:185 (89185|0) - Move to |3| then 01:29:271 Add note to |2| then 01:29:358 (89358|2) - Move to |1| as you will notice here 00:20:514

01:47:913 (107913|3) - Why this part becomes 2 SN? Remove 1 SN?

02:40:629 (160629|0) - ^

[Pony]
00:06:641 Add note to |3|

00:09:763 Add note to |2| for impact then 00:10:196 (10196|2,10283|1,10370|0) - arrange in |2| - |3| - |2| pattern then 00:10:456 Add note to |1| for impact and pattern consistency

00:33:173 (33173|1,33173|2) - Move to the right by 1 column for pattern consistency just like you did with the others alternate same pattern as you will notice patterns like this 00:38:375

00:43:664 (43664|0,43751|1,43838|2,43925|1) - For consistency and pattern arrangement

01:01:959 (61959|1) - Move to |4|

01:09:069 Add note to |2|

01:40:803 (100803|3) - Move to |3| then 01:40:543 (100543|0,100630|1,100716|2) - Move to the right by 1 column for pattern consistency

02:05:948 Add note to |3|

02:51:553 (171553|2,171727|1) - Ctrl + H

That's all thank you very much for requesting on my queue and feel free to reject everything! Good luck! >w<)b
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Gravey- wrote:

[Normal MOD]

[General]
Background
Timing
Song Setup
Metadata
Misc. . .
|1|2|3|4|
[Normal]
00:13:231 (13231|0) - Move to |3| for pattern consistency

00:23:289 (23289|2,23809|1) - Move to |4| - |3| and 00:24:329 (24329|2) - Move to |2| It gives more comfort-ability for the hand and based on your previous pattern 00:28:838

00:25:716 (25716|3,25890|2,26063|1) - Move to the left side by 1 column notice this part 00:31:266 they are the same rhythm as. .

00:34:907 (34907|2,35427|1) - Ctrl + H

00:35:774 (35774|2,36294|1) - Move to the right by 1 column

00:36:815 (36815|3,36988|2,37162|1) - Move to the left by 1 column

01:28:144 (88144|1) - Move to |3| then 01:28:491 (88491|0,88664|1) - Move to |2| - |3| then 01:28:838 (88838|2) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency

02:16:179 (136179|2,136352|3) - Move to the left by 1 column for better transition and based on the rhythm like ladder pattern

02:26:409 Add a note in |2| here

02:53:114 (173114|2) - Move to |4|

03:08:894 (188894|1,189068|0) - Move to the right by 1 column just like the other one before (for better transition and based on the rhythm like ladder pattern)

[Hard]
00:20:167 (20167|0) - Move to |3|

01:00:572 (60572|1,60745|2) - Move to |3| - |1| for pattern consistency

01:28:578 Add note to |3| then 01:29:185 (89185|0) - Move to |3| then 01:29:271 Add note to |2| then 01:29:358 (89358|2) - Move to |1| as you will notice here 00:20:514

01:47:913 (107913|3) - Why this part becomes 2 SN? Remove 1 SN?

02:40:629 (160629|0) - ^

[Pony]
00:06:641 Add note to |3|

00:09:763 Add note to |2| for impact then 00:10:196 (10196|2,10283|1,10370|0) - arrange in |2| - |3| - |2| pattern then 00:10:456 Add note to |1| for impact and pattern consistency

00:33:173 (33173|1,33173|2) - Move to the right by 1 column for pattern consistency just like you did with the others alternate same pattern as you will notice patterns like this 00:38:375

00:43:664 (43664|0,43751|1,43838|2,43925|1) - For consistency and pattern arrangement

01:01:959 (61959|1) - Move to |4| Hmm I dont really like double anchoring :/

01:09:069 Add note to |2|

01:40:803 (100803|3) - Move to |3| then 01:40:543 (100543|0,100630|1,100716|2) - Move to the right by 1 column for pattern consistency

02:05:948 Add note to |3|

02:51:553 (171553|2,171727|1) - Ctrl + H

That's all thank you very much for requesting on my queue and feel free to reject everything! Good luck! >w<)b
So much Thanks for the mod Gravey- >w<
Feerum
Requested Mod



Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello Rivals_7. Thank you for requesting to Feru's Mania Modding
Here is my Mod for you.

General


Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: Right
Tags: Remove "pony" from Tags, because its already in the Source.
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Please let the 2nd and 3rd BPM Timign Recheck. I think they are slightly to early
Other: -

Normal

00:22:422 (22422|2) - A bit confused. Here you didn't map the Guitar drop buuut 00:03:867 (3867|0) - here you did. Here the Drop starts 00:04:907 -
00:39:416 (39416|0,39589|2,39763|0,39936|2) - i think a 2-3-2-3 trill would fit here well better. It emphasize the drum much more and gives better feeling what you actually play.
01:30:225 (90225|1,90398|0) - Swap collumns for Pitch.
02:18:896 (138896|3) - Wrong Snapped. Move to the last 1/4 line or delete. Its better just to follow the Stair sound here.
02:32:609 (152609|3,152609|2) - I think these notes are wrong snapped. They should be at the 1/3 Beatline
02:56:236 (176236|2) - Hitsound has diffrent volume then the next ones.
02:59:184 - Add note. According to 00:58:144 - , 01:09:242 - etc. Keep consistency.
03:19:819 (199819|1,199993|0) - Swap Collumns for Pitch.
03:20:860 (200860|3,201380|3) - These LN's should be 1/4 beat longer to follow correctly to the guitar

Hard

00:03:347 (3347|0,3520|1) - these notes play really strange. You follow clearly the vocal and suddenly there two more notes. I can hear which sound they are follow but i think it would be enough to keep the Vocal mapped.
00:19:647 (19647|0) - Suggest to extend the LN here to 00:20:167 - . The Long Guitar sound ends actually here.
00:22:075 (22075|2,22075|3) - Move both one col to the left. It fit more to the music. 00:22:075 (22075|3,22075|2,22248|2,22248|3) - these have audible different pitch and shouldn't be mapped on the same column. Plays weird.
00:27:277 (27277|2) - what do you follow with this LN? o.o There is no Sound that is so long. The guitar ends 00:27:451 - and the vocal ends 00:27:537 - so .. explain this please o.o.
00:32:826 (32826|3) - Same like above. Do Not extend LN's by yourself. LN's need a sound to be played correctly. This is a Rhythm game. Silence has no rhythm.
00:43:751 (43751|2,43838|3) - By CTRL + G these your Pattern would have much more flow. These 1-2 4-3 and then a 1-2 Chord is much better to play.
00:43:925 (43925|0) - same thing with LN.. i will stop to Mention this now should this happend again.
01:26:237 (86237|0) - Make this LN to Singlenote and add 01:26:323 - a note to follow guitar correctly.
01:30:052 (90052|1,90052|0) - Move on col to the right to follow pitch much better.
01:40:630 (100630|1,100716|0) - CTRL + G for more comfortable play.
01:53:635 (113635|3,113635|0,113809|3,113809|0,113982|1,113982|2,114156|1,114156|2) - these Jack chords doesn't fit in any way. they all have different pitch.
02:21:727 (141727|1) - you should make this to a 1/1 LN to follow your Pattern here. Long Songs with LN.
02:32:609 (152609|1) - Wrong Snapped LN. It should beginn 02:32:594 - . Also the last LN should end here.
02:49:819 (169819|3,169993|2) - Like i mention at the beginning. Don't confuse the player with your pattern.

Pony

I i don't know how to mod this diff o.o
I think you overuse the Chords here.. i will try it but .. idk..
00:23:549 (23549|3,23549|2,23636|0,23636|1) - i think all these pattern would play much better when you used 1 Note for the 1st 1/4 and a Chord for the 2nd One. It plays way more comfortable and don't let your song look so overnoted..
00:27:971 (27971|0) - This LN Should end 00:28:318 - . Guitar and Vocal ends here.
00:33:520 (33520|3) - This LN should end 00:33:867 - . Guitar and Vocal ends here.
00:39:069 (39069|0) - You probably know.
00:44:618 (44618|0) - ^
00:56:757 - Something like this would fit more to the music:
Sorry to say that. But your Kiai is absolute overmapped.
You used two noted chord like a normal note. In a song that is 3,4* hard. 3 Noted Chords okay. But Do not overuse your 2-Noted Chords here.
Its more then enough to use them for the drums like 00:58:664 (58664|0,59358|2,60052|0) - . But not for a hihat like 00:58:144 (58144|1,58491|1,58838|2,59185|2,59531|1,59878|1,60225|2) - . Do you tried to push the starrating up? If yes. Don't do that. This is just ridiculous.
Never try to push the Starrating unneded. I'm sure you want that your Map makes fun and is nice to play for other right? Then never. Really never overuse the Chords.
02:32:609 (152609|1,152609|0) - These Notes are Wrong Snapped. They should beginn 02:32:594 - also the previous LN's should end here.

Yeah thats all from my side :P
Good luck furterway!
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Feerum wrote:

Requested Mod



Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello Rivals_7. Thank you for requesting to Feru's Mania Modding
Here is my Mod for you.

General


Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: Right
Tags: Remove "pony" from Tags, because its already in the Source. Actually its "Pony Canyon". The corporation who develop this cartoon in Japan
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Please let the 2nd and 3rd BPM Timign Recheck. I think they are slightly to early uh.... i cant really understand what you mean here :/
Other: -

Normal

00:22:422 (22422|2) - A bit confused. Here you didn't map the Guitar drop buuut 00:03:867 (3867|0) - here you did. Here the Drop starts 00:04:907 - The first one you mentioned are on different section and its actually ended there for sure. The second and third one you've mentioned is quite different.
00:39:416 (39416|0,39589|2,39763|0,39936|2) - i think a 2-3-2-3 trill would fit here well better. It emphasize the drum much more and gives better feeling what you actually play.
01:30:225 (90225|1,90398|0) - Swap collumns for Pitch.
02:18:896 (138896|3) - Wrong Snapped. Move to the last 1/4 line or delete. Its better just to follow the Stair sound here.
02:32:609 (152609|3,152609|2) - I think these notes are wrong snapped. They should be at the 1/3 Beatline
02:56:236 (176236|2) - Hitsound has diffrent volume then the next ones. I'll talk about this with raika since he is making the HS xD
02:59:184 - Add note. According to 00:58:144 - , 01:09:242 - etc. Keep consistency. That one doesnt have synth, the others you mentioned have it
03:19:819 (199819|1,199993|0) - Swap Collumns for Pitch.
03:20:860 (200860|3,201380|3) - These LN's should be 1/4 beat longer to follow correctly to the guitar

Hard

00:03:347 (3347|0,3520|1) - these notes play really strange. You follow clearly the vocal and suddenly there two more notes. I can hear which sound they are follow but i think it would be enough to keep the Vocal mapped. Actually I follow the bell noise (or whatever instrument there, i dunno the name) but its blended with vocal. The other 2 notes follow fx that sounds like "pew pew" or something
00:19:647 (19647|0) - Suggest to extend the LN here to 00:20:167 - . The Long Guitar sound ends actually here.
00:22:075 (22075|2,22075|3) - Move both one col to the left. It fit more to the music. 00:22:075 (22075|3,22075|2,22248|2,22248|3) - these have audible different pitch and shouldn't be mapped on the same column. Plays weird.
00:27:277 (27277|2) - what do you follow with this LN? o.o There is no Sound that is so long. The guitar ends 00:27:451 - and the vocal ends 00:27:537 - so .. explain this please o.o. Its quite weird if I end the LN there and since there's no any additional instrument at the end of the LN (for HD Players, which is most of them are still intermediate players and not really familiar with this kind of pattern,) I think extending are acceptable as long as they're playable
00:32:826 (32826|3) - Same like above. Do Not extend LN's by yourself. LN's need a sound to be played correctly. This is a Rhythm game. Silence has no rhythm. Extending LN map thingy like this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/333217 could be ranked. why this not? Also I have no issues for having this pattern when I mapping TV Size
00:43:751 (43751|2,43838|3) - By CTRL + G these your Pattern would have much more flow. These 1-2 4-3 and then a 1-2 Chord is much better to play.
00:43:925 (43925|0) - same thing with LN.. i will stop to Mention this now should this happend again. ^
01:26:237 (86237|0) - Make this LN to Singlenote and add 01:26:323 - a note to follow guitar correctly.
01:30:052 (90052|1,90052|0) - Move on col to the right to follow pitch much better.
01:40:630 (100630|1,100716|0) - CTRL + G for more comfortable play.
01:53:635 (113635|3,113635|0,113809|3,113809|0,113982|1,113982|2,114156|1,114156|2) - these Jack chords doesn't fit in any way. they all have different pitch.
02:21:727 (141727|1) - you should make this to a 1/1 LN to follow your Pattern here. Long Songs with LN.
02:32:609 (152609|1) - Wrong Snapped LN. It should beginn 02:32:594 - . Also the last LN should end here.
02:49:819 (169819|3,169993|2) - Like i mention at the beginning. Don't confuse the player with your pattern.same explanation

Pony

I i don't know how to mod this diff o.o
I think you overuse the Chords here.. i will try it but .. idk..
00:23:549 (23549|3,23549|2,23636|0,23636|1) - i think all these pattern would play much better when you used 1 Note for the 1st 1/4 and a Chord for the 2nd One. It plays way more comfortable and don't let your song look so overnoted.. Since 1st 1/4 has Beat, I think is not really suitable to have just one note, but I treat both of them as they have a loud beat
00:27:971 (27971|0) - This LN Should end 00:28:318 - . Guitar and Vocal ends here.
00:33:520 (33520|3) - This LN should end 00:33:867 - . Guitar and Vocal ends here.
00:39:069 (39069|0) - You probably know.
00:44:618 (44618|0) - ^
00:56:757 - Something like this would fit more to the music:
Sorry to say that. But your Kiai is absolute overmapped.
You used two noted chord like a normal note. In a song that is 3,4* hard. 3 Noted Chords okay. But Do not overuse your 2-Noted Chords here.
Its more then enough to use them for the drums like 00:58:664 (58664|0,59358|2,60052|0) - . But not for a hihat like 00:58:144 (58144|1,58491|1,58838|2,59185|2,59531|1,59878|1,60225|2) - . Do you tried to push the starrating up? If yes. Don't do that. This is just ridiculous.
Never try to push the Starrating unneded. I'm sure you want that your Map makes fun and is nice to play for other right? Then never. Really never overuse the Chords. Welp okay then..... I wonder this issues never came to my ranked TV Size mapset. Otherwise I keep some Hat+synth noise as double. They're still reasonable
02:32:609 (152609|1,152609|0) - These Notes are Wrong Snapped. They should beginn 02:32:594 - also the previous LN's should end here.

Yeah thats all from my side :P
Good luck furterway!
Thank you for mod :D No reply means fixed :)
[Emiria]
Pony
00:33:346 - add a note
00:38:896 - ^
00:49:820 (49820|0,50167|1) - i feel delete is better and 00:50:514 - change one note to LN is better
00:58:491 (58491|1,58491|3) - one note is just ok
00:59:531 (59531|1,59531|0) - ^
01:07:855 (67855|0,67855|1) - ^
01:26:930 (86930|1) - stop at 01:27:277 -
01:35:774 - add a note
01:54:416 - add a ln for piano ?


Hard
00:57:451 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4332986
01:42:711 (102711|2,103578|1) - drum for single note so delete these
01:58:578 - add a note for drum


Normal
00:05:254 (5254|3,5601|1,5948|2,6294|0) - feel double note is much better
00:08:896 (8896|0) - delete 00:09:069 - and add one at here
00:12:190 - main instrument is better
00:47:913 - add a note
00:53:462 - add a note
00:57:971 - start here feel map drum is better
01:20:167 - like 00:12:190 - what i suggest



thats all good luck
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

victorica_db wrote:

Pony
00:33:346 - add a note
00:38:896 - ^
00:49:820 (49820|0,50167|1) - i feel delete is better and 00:50:514 - change one note to LN is better
00:58:491 (58491|1,58491|3) - one note is just ok
00:59:531 (59531|1,59531|0) - ^
01:07:855 (67855|0,67855|1) - ^
01:26:930 (86930|1) - stop at 01:27:277 - Nope, guitar still exist
01:35:774 - add a note
01:54:416 - add a ln for piano ? I dont think thats fit


Hard
00:57:451 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4332986 I dont think thats comfortable
01:42:711 (102711|2,103578|1) - drum for single note so delete these
01:58:578 - add a note for drum


Normal
00:05:254 (5254|3,5601|1,5948|2,6294|0) - feel double note is much better
00:08:896 (8896|0) - delete 00:09:069 - and add one at here Nope, that LN is for drumroll.
00:12:190 - main instrument is better
00:47:913 - add a note
00:53:462 - add a note
00:57:971 - start here feel map drum is better Thats reduce the SR quite much tho. i'll keep this
01:20:167 - like 00:12:190 - what i suggest Nope for variasion imo



thats all good luck
Thanks for mod :) No reply means fixed
FrenzyLi
Here is the response from FrenzyLi's osu!mania Instrumental Queue!
General
💬 Comment
  • column convention - | 0 | 1 | ... | 3 |

    H/R - hold/release
My2Cents
  • 🔍 Beatmap Metadata / Options
    Looks good!

    🕐 Timing Sections
    Would you like to move the uninherited time point from 139647 to 138260 ?
Storyboard
💬 Comment
BG resolution: 1366 x 768 is correct!
Pony (4K)
💬 Comment
I like how you try to mix vocal notes with kick/drum notes. The flow of this map is pretty good, but needs closer inspection to make sure you've mapped everything.

My2Cents
[list:1337]Difficulty Settings
HP: 8.0 (OK)
OD: 8.0 (OK)

💊 Note Placement
  1. 00:09:069 - Add note on 1 because you put jumps on places such as 00:08:375 and 00:07:682 regardless of there being vocal or not.
    (^IF ACCEPTED) 00:09:156 (9156|1,9242|2) - Move to 2,3.
  2. 00:14:965 (14965|3,15312|0) - Wrong snap. Both start to decay at 3/4 beat long. Listen closely at 25% speed.
    00:16:092 - Add note on 1 due to missing note here. Keep in mind that you have mapped the same instrument here 00:15:659 (15659|3)
    00:16:179 (16179|1,16266|2,16352|3) - Move to 2,3,2.
    00:16:699 (16699|2,16873|1) - Move to 1,2. After this change, I think 00:16:873 (16873|2,17046|2) is fine because of these two: 00:17:219 (17219|1,17393|1,17566|2,17740|2)
  3. 00:49:820 (49820|1) - How about moving to 2 to make things easier to hit?
  4. 00:53:635 - No vocal here?
  5. 01:19:647 (79647|3) - Consider moving to 0 to form 0,1,0 or 0,1,0H. Then:
    01:19:820 (79820|3,79820|0) - Ctrl+H to form rising LN with 01:18:780 (78780|0,79127|1,79474|2)
  6. 01:22:942 (82942|0,83289|3) - Snap these two LN at 3/4 beat long.
    01:24:069 - Might consider adding a note just like at my previous mod at 00:16:092
  7. 01:41:323 - Missing vocal?
  8. 01:43:404 (103404|2,103404|3) - Weak sound, I think one note is good here.
  9. 01:46:699 (106699|2) - Suggest putting on 1 to make things easier to hit.
  10. 01:50:341 (110341|0,110341|1) - Weak sound.
  11. 01:54:676 (114676|3,114763|3) - Remove the jack.
  12. 01:54:849 - 02:17:046 This section is rather inconsistent in terms of using 1 note or 2 notes. Please double check.
    01:57:104 (117104|2,117104|1) - Should be one note just like 01:57:797 (117797|1)
  13. 02:00:572 (120572|2,120572|1) - Move to 01.
  14. 02:08:722 (128722|0,128722|1,128896|1,129069|2,129069|3,129069|0) - Kind of weird.
  15. 02:16:526 (136526|0,136699|0,136699|3) - Ctrl+H.
  16. 02:17:046 (137046|0,137046|3) - The falling sound the double LN corresponds to actually ends at 02:19:647 while an extra falling sound happens at 02:18:780 so think about this part. You can consider rearranging. (click here for an example)
  17. 02:19:993 (139993|0,140340|3,140687|0,141381|2,141727|2,142768|1) - Remove.
    02:23:115 (143115|1,143115|2) - Remove.
    02:23:028 - Add 2.
    02:23:115 - Add 1.
    02:23:201 - Add 0.
    02:23:288 (143288|0) - Move to 3.
    02:23:635 (143635|3) - Remove.
    02:23:548 (143548|2,143635|1,143722|0,143808|2) - Move to 3,2,1,0.
    02:23:808 (143808|1) - Move to 2.
    02:24:155 (144155|1,144155|0) - Switch these two.
  18. 02:27:710 (147710|2,147883|1) - These are inaudible. Are you sure there are notes here?
    02:28:144 (148144|2,148404|2) - And, do something about this.
  19. 02:32:826 - 02:32:999 - only one LN is here but from 02:32:305 - 02:32:826 and 02:32:999 - 02:34:993 each has double LN in the section.
  20. 02:36:293 (156293|3,156467|2,156640|1,156814|2) - Move to 2,3,2,1?
  21. 02:51:207 - Missing vocal?
  22. 02:55:542 - Add note on 1 and adjust from this point to 02:56:236
    Use 00:16:092 as a reference.
  23. 02:59:184 - Vocal? Reference 03:01:958
  24. 03:04:733 (184733|3) - Move to 2? You have 03:05:079 (185079|3,185253|3) already.
  25. 03:09:241 (189241|0,189415|3,189415|0) - Ctrl+H?
  26. 03:12:536 (192536|3,192883|0) - Snap at 3/4 beat.
  27. 03:13:663 - Add note due to same instrument with 03:13:230 (193230|3)
    03:13:750 (193750|1,193837|2,193923|3,194270|2,194444|1) - Move to 2,3,2,1,2
  28. 03:17:218 (197218|3,197305|2,197392|1) - Move to 1,3,2?
    03:17:565 (197565|2,197738|1) - Ctrl+H?
MagiCopy Hitsounding
Download the newest build of osu!MagiCopy here!
💬 Comment
Thank you Rivals for helping me and Raika test out how this hitsounding scheme works! This box will be updated soon once I complete the verification of Raika's hitsounds including hitsound files, hitsound placement and hitsound volume. Stay tuned!

My2Cents
  • 📂 Hitsound Check
    (-- Updated soon --)

    🔔 Hitsounding
  1. How to remove hitsound from diff? Please repeat this step for all your difficulties (Pony, Hard, Normal)
    DO NOT DO THIS FOR HITSOUND DIFF! (Backup before you do this if you do this for the first time!)
    Open diff in editor
    Select all notes (CTRL+A)
    Edit -> Reset selected objects' samples
    File -> Open .osu in Notepad
    Exit diff in osu!editor
    In the notepad just opened, Find "//Storyboard Sound Samples"
    Remove everything between "//Storyboard Sound Samples" and "[TimingPoints]" but keep both of these quoted lines.
    Save notepad.
    Close notepad.
  2. The above steps remove all of the sample hitsounds in the notes as well as the storyboard.
Final Notes:
  1. To future modders:
    Please mod with effect volume set to 0%. Raika and I are perfecting the hitsounds. Right now, the hitsounds may not be perfect-- we might have ghost hitsounds and missing hitsounds, so you need to mod at 0% to make sure you are not misled by the incorrect hitsounds.
  2. To Rivals~~~
    Poke me when you finish modding and I'll teach you to use osu!MagiCopy so that you can copy the hitsounds yourself.
Ripball
From my queue
This will a short mod, because some are fixed in some mods recently.
Ponies/kiai time FTW.
A free test play, 98.08% HD and 96.34% NC. A solid map, I didn't expect to get more than 95% with NC.

Pony
00:11:323 (11323|0) - move to 3?
00:11:670 (11670|2) - move to 2?
00:24:936 (24936|3,24936|2,25023|0,25023|1) - ctrl+h?
00:52:248 (52248|2) - remove? (after played at 50% I didnt hear a sound)
01:21:555 (81555|3) - move to 2?
01:21:728 (81728|1) - move to 3?
02:40:282 (160282|3,160282|2,160455|1,160455|0) - change to single note? (sound is not too strong to be a double).


This take it as suggestion
02:22:768 (142768|1) - move to 2
02:22:941 (142941|3,142941|0) - change to 0,1
02:23:288 (143288|3,143288|0) - change to 0,1
or
02:23:028 (143028|1,143115|3,143201|1) - use this.
02:56:236 (176236|0,176929|3) - remove both LN, because you don't use it before (in the same sound of the song).
I think is too many kiai time.
Good luck :) you feel free to reject everything btw, (I would give a star if I had one, for song choice).
Topic Starter
Rivals_7
FrenzyLi=BBCode master

FrenzyLi wrote:

Here is the response from FrenzyLi's osu!mania Instrumental Queue!
General
💬 Comment
  • column convention - | 0 | 1 | ... | 3 |

    H/R - hold/release
My2Cents
  • 🔍 Beatmap Metadata / Options
    Looks good!

    🕐 Timing Sections
    Would you like to move the uninherited time point from 139647 to 138260 ? More fit on there imo
Storyboard
💬 Comment
BG resolution: 1366 x 768 is correct!
Pony (4K)
💬 Comment
I like how you try to mix vocal notes with kick/drum notes. The flow of this map is pretty good, but needs closer inspection to make sure you've mapped everything.

My2Cents
[list:1337]Difficulty Settings
HP: 8.0 (OK)
OD: 8.0 (OK)

💊 Note Placement
  1. 00:09:069 - Add note on 1 because you put jumps on places such as 00:08:375 and 00:07:682 regardless of there being vocal or not.
    (^IF ACCEPTED) 00:09:156 (9156|1,9242|2) - Move to 2,3.
  2. 00:14:965 (14965|3,15312|0) - Wrong snap. Both start to decay at 3/4 beat long. Listen closely at 25% speed. Intended, because if I do that, it makes quite weird transition for the triple key presses in the next line which is only have 1/4 distance only, and its too close
    00:16:092 - Add note on 1 due to missing note here. Keep in mind that you have mapped the same instrument here 00:15:659 (15659|3)
    00:16:179 (16179|1,16266|2,16352|3) - Move to 2,3,2.
    00:16:699 (16699|2,16873|1) - Move to 1,2. After this change, I think 00:16:873 (16873|2,17046|2) is fine because of these two: 00:17:219 (17219|1,17393|1,17566|2,17740|2)I dont really think so, they're on the same column due to they have continued 1/4 noise, which is the drum
  3. 00:49:820 (49820|1) - How about moving to 2 to make things easier to hit? Nope, it'll made triple stack
  4. 00:53:635 - No vocal here? Weird transition because I dont follow vocal in this measure
  5. 01:19:647 (79647|3) - Consider moving to 0 to form 0,1,0 or 0,1,0H. Then:
    01:19:820 (79820|3,79820|0) - Ctrl+H to form rising LN with 01:18:780 (78780|0,79127|1,79474|2) Triple stack are formed in the left middle finger (col 0) which is uncomfortable. So i think this is necessary to dont follow the pitch as the LN itself doesnt on 1/1 length
  6. 01:22:942 (82942|0,83289|3) - Snap these two LN at 3/4 beat long. same thing above
    01:24:069 - Might consider adding a note just like at my previous mod at 00:16:092
  7. 01:41:323 - Missing vocal?
  8. 01:43:404 (103404|2,103404|3) - Weak sound, I think one note is good here. eh... its quite a loud clap there
  9. 01:46:699 (106699|2) - Suggest putting on 1 to make things easier to hit. Triple stacked
  10. 01:50:341 (110341|0,110341|1) - Weak sound. Deep drum noise
  11. 01:54:676 (114676|3,114763|3) - Remove the jack. They same instrument on a same pitch, so yea this is intended
  12. 01:54:849 - 02:17:046 This section is rather inconsistent in terms of using 1 note or 2 notes. Please double check. I miss some, thx for pointing
    01:57:104 (117104|2,117104|1) - Should be one note just like 01:57:797 (117797|1) If you hear closely, there's some additional FX noise, thats why i made it double
  13. 02:00:572 (120572|2,120572|1) - Move to 01.
  14. 02:08:722 (128722|0,128722|1,128896|1,129069|2,129069|3,129069|0) - Kind of weird.
  15. 02:16:526 (136526|0,136699|0,136699|3) - Ctrl+H. Same explanation above
  16. 02:17:046 (137046|0,137046|3) - The falling sound the double LN corresponds to actually ends at 02:19:647 while an extra falling sound happens at 02:18:780 so think about this part. You can consider rearranging. (click here for an example) seems really rushy there, also the Double LN is to represent the deep BG noise, which is contain the same noise like LN on the final part of this song. and I intend to ignore that "extra falling sound" for transition
  17. 02:19:993 (139993|0,140340|3,140687|0,141381|2,141727|2,142768|1) - Remove.
    02:23:115 (143115|1,143115|2) - Remove.
    02:23:028 - Add 2.
    02:23:115 - Add 1.
    02:23:201 - Add 0.
    02:23:288 (143288|0) - Move to 3.
    02:23:635 (143635|3) - Remove.
    02:23:548 (143548|2,143635|1,143722|0,143808|2) - Move to 3,2,1,0.
    02:23:808 (143808|1) - Move to 2.
    02:24:155 (144155|1,144155|0) - Switch these two. Rearranged this section
  18. 02:27:710 (147710|2,147883|1) - These are inaudible. Are you sure there are notes here? wut? they're audible
    02:28:144 (148144|2,148404|2) - And, do something about this. rearranged
  19. 02:32:826 - 02:32:999 - only one LN is here but from 02:32:305 - 02:32:826 and 02:32:999 - 02:34:993 each has double LN in the section. rearranged,but due to the 4 key limitation, I cant think any pattern that fit this
  20. 02:36:293 (156293|3,156467|2,156640|1,156814|2) - Move to 2,3,2,1? emm... nope
  21. 02:51:207 - Missing vocal?
  22. 02:55:542 - Add note on 1 and adjust from this point to 02:56:236
    Use 00:16:092 as a reference.
  23. 02:59:184 - Vocal? Reference 03:01:958 Nope, this is the transition for instrument not vocal
  24. 03:04:733 (184733|3) - Move to 2? You have 03:05:079 (185079|3,185253|3) already.
  25. 03:09:241 (189241|0,189415|3,189415|0) - Ctrl+H? above explanation
  26. 03:12:536 (192536|3,192883|0) - Snap at 3/4 beat. above explanation
  27. 03:13:663 - Add note due to same instrument with 03:13:230 (193230|3)
    03:13:750 (193750|1,193837|2,193923|3,194270|2,194444|1) - Move to 2,3,2,1,2
  28. 03:17:218 (197218|3,197305|2,197392|1) - Move to 1,3,2?
    03:17:565 (197565|2,197738|1) - Ctrl+H?
MagiCopy Hitsounding
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💬 Comment
Thank you Rivals for helping me and Raika test out how this hitsounding scheme works! This box will be updated soon once I complete the verification of Raika's hitsounds including hitsound files, hitsound placement and hitsound volume. Stay tuned!

My2Cents
  • 📂 Hitsound Check
    (-- Updated soon --)

    🔔 Hitsounding
  1. How to remove hitsound from diff? Please repeat this step for all your difficulties (Pony, Hard, Normal)
    DO NOT DO THIS FOR HITSOUND DIFF! (Backup before you do this if you do this for the first time!)
    Open diff in editor
    Select all notes (CTRL+A)
    Edit -> Reset selected objects' samples
    File -> Open .osu in Notepad
    Exit diff in osu!editor
    In the notepad just opened, Find "//Storyboard Sound Samples"
    Remove everything between "//Storyboard Sound Samples" and "[TimingPoints]" but keep both of these quoted lines.
    Save notepad.
    Close notepad.
  2. The above steps remove all of the sample hitsounds in the notes as well as the storyboard.
Final Notes:
  1. To future modders:
    Please mod with effect volume set to 0%. Raika and I are perfecting the hitsounds. Right now, the hitsounds may not be perfect-- we might have ghost hitsounds and missing hitsounds, so you need to mod at 0% to make sure you are not misled by the incorrect hitsounds.
  2. To Rivals~~~
    Poke me when you finish modding and I'll teach you to use osu!MagiCopy so that you can copy the hitsounds yourself.

DkAngelS wrote:

From my queue
This will a short mod, because some are fixed in some mods recently.
Ponies/kiai time FTW.
A free test play, 98.08% HD and 96.34% NC. A solid map, I didn't expect to get more than 95% with NC.

Pony
00:11:323 (11323|0) - move to 3? Nope, refer this - 00:11:497 (11497|3,12017|3) -
00:11:670 (11670|2) - move to 2? nope, stacked
00:24:936 (24936|3,24936|2,25023|0,25023|1) - ctrl+h? I think its fine
00:52:248 (52248|2) - remove? (after played at 50% I didnt hear a sound) wha? its a synth @@
01:21:555 (81555|3) - move to 2? Triple stacked
01:21:728 (81728|1) - move to 3? Nope, hand balance. if I move that, too much notes in the right hand
02:40:282 (160282|3,160282|2,160455|1,160455|0) - change to single note? (sound is not too strong to be a double). remapped


This take it as suggestion
02:22:768 (142768|1) - move to 2
02:22:941 (142941|3,142941|0) - change to 0,1
02:23:288 (143288|3,143288|0) - change to 0,1
or
02:23:028 (143028|1,143115|3,143201|1) - use this.
02:56:236 (176236|0,176929|3) - remove both LN, because you don't use it before (in the same sound of the song).All has been rearranged form the mod above
I think is too many kiai time. Nah, its fine xD
Good luck :) you feel free to reject everything btw, (I would give a star if I had one, for song choice).
Thanks frenzy and DK for the mod :D
I'll update once i remove all the Hitsounds
Topic Starter
Rivals_7
Updated :D
Raediaufar
General
00:00:572 - tambah red line disini

Pony
00:00:919 (919|2,1005|3,1092|1,1092|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4393597

00:13:404 (13404|2,13404|3) - buat triplet, suaranya kencang (kalo gue ngemap 4 not ini mah :3)

00:14:965 - add note, sama aja alesannya kek diatas

00:32:740 (32740|2) - move ke 1

00:32:826 (32826|1,32826|0) - move jadi 23

00:49:820 - tiga not disini bioar sama kek sebelumnya

00:56:583 - add note, ada suaranya

00:56:757 (56757|1,56757|2,56930|2,56930|3,57104|0,57104|1,57277|1,57277|2) - sedih kenapa hanya dua not, tiga not biar jadi tavvuran :UVUUUUUUU

01:04:734 (64734|0,64734|1) - tiga not

01:22:942 - add note

01:23:289 (83289|1) - delete

01:26:930 - add note, mayan kencang disitu

01:31:265 - kasih slowjam disni biar mampozzz :UVUVUUUUU ampe sini 01:35:254 -

01:46:699 - add note

01:53:462 - add note di 1

01:53:635 (113635|0,113635|1,113809|2,113809|0,113982|3,113982|1,114156|2,114156|3) - tiga not aja ini

01:54:676 (114676|3,114763|3) - ngejacknya double 34 dong asik huehue =w=

01:56:063 - tiga not
02:01:612 - ^
02:08:722 - ^
02:12:711 - ^

02:23:462 - jumpstreamnya faan ini ga asik ccd lah D: nih coba 02:23:548 (143548|3,143635|2) - ctrl + G

02:25:889 (145889|0,145889|1,146583|2,146583|3,147277|0,147277|2) - add single note di masing masing LN part, loud sound sama nanggung bener, dua not gak berasa padahal suaranya kencang

02:28:664 - sama disini dst. nya juga, pokoknya dibagian LN dua itu kasih note lagi

02:45:658 - jumpstream ccd lagi hh, gini deh http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4393683

02:46:525 (166525|0,166525|2) - buat 23

02:46:871 (166871|1,166871|3) - buat 34, pitch bruh

02:59:877 - tiga not
03:04:212 - ^
03:05:426 - ^

03:12:536 - add note

03:12:883 (192883|2) - delete

Normal
ketauan pake hitsound copier haha, buka file .osu nya terus delete segala hitsound dibawah "//Storyboard Sound Samples"
sama aja itu kek lu nambahin ghost hs dimana not nya aja gaada, harusnya kan ada not baru ada hs nya =w=

00:04:907 - add note

ah udah lah capek gue gak suka lagunya =3=

+1 memperingati kudosu gue yg ke 100 :')
Harbyter
y u map the full version too xd


btw waiting for Raediaufar mod to be checked before modding
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Raediaufar wrote:

General
00:00:572 - tambah red line disini gak terlalu ngaruh sih tapi y wis lah =3=

Pony
00:00:919 (919|2,1005|3,1092|1,1092|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4393597

00:13:404 (13404|2,13404|3) - buat triplet, suaranya kencang (kalo gue ngemap 4 not ini mah :3) iye sih tpi gk ada beatnya

00:14:965 - add note, sama aja alesannya kek diatas different drum noise with - 00:15:312 (15312|1,15312|2) -

00:32:740 (32740|2) - move ke 1

00:32:826 (32826|1,32826|0) - move jadi 23

00:49:820 - tiga not disini bioar sama kek sebelumnya

00:56:583 - add note, ada suaranya

00:56:757 (56757|1,56757|2,56930|2,56930|3,57104|0,57104|1,57277|1,57277|2) - sedih kenapa hanya dua not, tiga not biar jadi tavvuran :UVUUUUUUU yha aja mz

01:04:734 (64734|0,64734|1) - tiga not Dude, density is shiet :v

01:22:942 - add note nein

01:23:289 (83289|1) - delete Sama kayak ini mz - 00:15:312 (15312|2) -

01:26:930 - add note, mayan kencang disitu Nu :<

01:31:265 - kasih slowjam disni biar mampozzz :UVUVUUUUU ampe sini 01:35:254 - Si tay

01:46:699 - add note Cukup 3 presses aja mz, suaranya sama kayak pattern selanjutnya

01:53:462 - add note di 1

01:53:635 (113635|0,113635|1,113809|2,113809|0,113982|3,113982|1,114156|2,114156|3) - tiga not aja ini Si anjeg, seneng banget triplet ente. Overmap mz :v

01:54:676 (114676|3,114763|3) - ngejacknya double 34 dong asik huehue =w= Coba deh :v

01:56:063 - tiga not
02:01:612 - ^
02:08:722 - ^
02:12:711 - ^ No drum, m8 pls

02:23:462 - jumpstreamnya faan ini ga asik ccd lah D: nih coba 02:23:548 (143548|3,143635|2) - ctrl + G Males ah. Dulu perasaan pake pattern ini :v

02:25:889 (145889|0,145889|1,146583|2,146583|3,147277|0,147277|2) - add single note di masing masing LN part, loud sound sama nanggung bener, dua not gak berasa padahal suaranya kencang

02:28:664 - sama disini dst. nya juga, pokoknya dibagian LN dua itu kasih note lagi rearranged both

02:45:658 - jumpstream ccd lagi hh, gini deh http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4393683 Gk jauh beda ea

02:46:525 (166525|0,166525|2) - buat 23

02:46:871 (166871|1,166871|3) - buat 34, pitch bruh

02:59:877 - tiga not
03:04:212 - ^
03:05:426 - ^ pls

03:12:536 - add note

03:12:883 (192883|2) - delete Nope to both :<

Normal
ketauan pake hitsound copier haha, buka file .osu nya terus delete segala hitsound dibawah "//Storyboard Sound Samples"
sama aja itu kek lu nambahin ghost hs dimana not nya aja gaada, harusnya kan ada not baru ada hs nya =w= Anjay, perasaan udh dihapus. ampassss :v

00:04:907 - add note

ah udah lah capek gue gak suka lagunya =3= C A N C E R

+1 memperingati kudosu gue yg ke 100 :')
Okeh thx mz xD

UPDATED! HS will be added later

Harbyter wrote:

y u map the full version too xd
For Cancer fun :D
Raediaufar
Si anjeg

Yg add red line itu berpengaruh pas main. Not pertama harus ada di garis putih itu (coba test pake red line itu sama nggak pake deh)

Kirain lu suka triplet kek di Help is On the Way makanya mod gue gini uwu

Btw hi harby :3/
Topic Starter
Rivals_7
Ini map genrenya bukan rock mz, yha :v
Lude
Interlude's 4K Mania Modding Queue
1/2/3/4

Mod | Pony
00:19:994 - Why not add another note here
00:21:208 - Same here
00:21:728 - Too much of these patterns :/ You could variate it into 2 -> 1 -> 2-3-4 Something like this
00:28:838 - Add a note
01:08:549 - Same here, variate patterns
01:22:942 - Add a note?
01:23:635 - Add a note?
02:08:202 - Add a note?
02:21:034 - 02:25:889 - 02:26:583 - 02:27:277 - 02:28:664 - 02:29:357 - 02:30:051 - 02:30:745 - Add notes for impact, Highlight part of the song
02:38:201 - Add a note?
02:47:565 - Why not follow the vocal here[/notice]

If you got time, please mod my map as well ! :)
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/410466
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Interlude- wrote:

Interlude's 4K Mania Modding Queue
1/2/3/4

Mod | Pony
00:19:994 - Why not add another note here
00:21:208 - Same here
00:21:728 - Too much of these patterns :/ You could variate it into 2 -> 1 -> 2-3-4 Something like this
00:28:838 - Add a note
01:08:549 - Same here, variate patterns
01:22:942 - Add a note?
01:23:635 - Add a note?
02:08:202 - Add a note?
02:21:034 - 02:25:889 - 02:26:583 - 02:27:277 - 02:28:664 - 02:29:357 - 02:30:051 - 02:30:745 - Add notes for impact, Highlight part of the song
02:38:201 - Add a note?
02:47:565 - Why not follow the vocal here[/notice]

If you got time, please mod my map as well ! :)
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/410466
well, maybe? xDD


Thanks for mod, fixed most part :)
Mia_Rose
Normal
  1. In the begining you have 2 uninherited time sections, delete one since the ranked criteria says that you shouldn´t use uninherited sections unless the bpm changes
  2. 03:18:779 (198779|2,198952|1,199126|0,199126|2) - I would invert this pattern so you have an increase of variety, you play this pattern 2 times in a row, 2 times exact the same would be kind of boring tho :D
Nice and smoothly to play, this one is ready for ranked

Hard
  1. Here the same thing with uninherited time sections, try to use only 1 since there is no bpm change
  2. 00:00:659 (659|1) - AiMod says this note isn´t aligned to the beat, it could has been caused duo the uninherited time sections
Hitsound
  1. here AIMid shows up a ton of notes that aren´t aligned to the beat, this cause might be still the different uninherited time sections, you really have to change that :D
  2. 00:04:907 (4907|2,4994|2) - i placed that pattern through the whole map, it feels really weird hammering 2 times that fast duo the beat, it´s doesn´t fit very well

As conclusion, nice song with a nice beat, I enjoyed playing it, fix the problem with the notes unaligned on the beat and it should be ready for ranked
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Mia_Rose wrote:

Normal
  1. In the begining you have 2 uninherited time sections, delete one since the ranked criteria says that you shouldn´t use uninherited sections unless the bpm changes I think this isnt a big deal. I place that Uninherited timing to place the beat exactly as it have to be, while the change is sliightly little but might occur some issues for the players who love 300g score
  2. 03:18:779 (198779|2,198952|1,199126|0,199126|2) - I would invert this pattern so you have an increase of variety, you play this pattern 2 times in a row, 2 times exact the same would be kind of boring tho :D
Nice and smoothly to play, this one is ready for ranked

Hard
  1. Here the same thing with uninherited time sections, try to use only 1 since there is no bpm change
  2. 00:00:659 (659|1) - AiMod says this note isn´t aligned to the beat, it could has been caused duo the uninherited time sections
Hitsound
  1. here AIMid shows up a ton of notes that aren´t aligned to the beat, this cause might be still the different uninherited time sections, you really have to change that :D
  2. 00:04:907 (4907|2,4994|2) - i placed that pattern through the whole map, it feels really weird hammering 2 times that fast duo the beat, it´s doesn´t fit very well
this diff wasn't meant to be modded tho :3

As conclusion, nice song with a nice beat, I enjoyed playing it, fix the problem with the notes unaligned on the beat and it should be ready for ranked
Everything applied, Thanks for mod :3
Shoegazer
Hello, I will be speaking for the Mania Modding Team.

Unfortunately, we have decided to reject your mapset. There are a few reasons for this, but instead of giving the reasons explicitly, you can take this as a general mod as to what to improve on.

[General]
The main reason why we rejected the mapset is the song choice. Preferences aside, the song just doesn't provide much room for creativity to begin with. The hardest difficulty (Pony) had a couple of issues, but these issues are minor and there is not much that we can contribute to improve your mapset further.

I'll try to point out certain things about the mapset regardless, though you shouldn't expect too much because of the song itself. You also seem to have most of the bigger problems like layering down anyway.

[Pony]
Main issue with this chart is the underemphasis (and occasionally overemphasis, or simply lack of) on certain instrumentation.
I'll give you examples, I think a full mod would be excessive:
00:04:907 - These three notes should be doubles, especially if the sounds you've layered before it as singles are much fainter.
00:06:121 - I think these should be doubles as well. If you don't agree with this point (and maybe the point above), it's fine. I do want you to give the next point some thought though.
00:06:468 - These three sounds are distinctively different from 00:06:121 - , it's much softer and I don't think you can really use the same type of patterning for 6.468 and 6.121. You can use a one hand minitrill if you're not using doubles, perhaps? A one hand trill creates less emphasis than a two hand trill from my experience.
00:15:312 - This sound is very similar to 00:14:965 - . I think it would be better to capture that by moving this to [234] or [134] instead. Move 00:15:659 - to [12], for similar reasoning. It's distinctively different from the sound in 14.965.
00:17:046 - This shouldn't be the same chord as 00:16:699 - , the two sounds are very different. Try to use pitch relevancy for this, the latter sound is noticeably higher. This is also true for 00:17:393 - and 00:17:740 - .
00:20:601 - You have a roll pattern for this and 00:21:294 - . There's nothing necessarily wrong with it per se, but the drum sounds in 20.601 are noticeably more audible than the ones in 21.294. You can capture this by making 20.601 something like this for example. Just make sure that there is a noticeable pattern difference between 00:20:514 - and 00:21:294 - .
00:22:248 - Move this to [123], for pitch relevancy purposes.
00:57:451 - This piano roll is fine, but I do wonder why you decided to layer the piano roll now if you didn't layer the piano roll before. I don't think it would've made the patterns very congested (not to mention since the piano roll is so prominent whenever it occurs, it's usually better to capture it), so maybe try to layer the piano roll? It's fine if you don't to, though.
01:07:335 - Should be a double I think. The sound here is softer than 01:06:641 - , and the syllable in 01:06:641 - is more profound than the one in 01:07:335 - .
01:50:687 - Long notes are really unnecessary here, considering that the long notes in 01:46:699 - are so much more audible.
02:17:046 - Long notes are also unnecessary here, I think it's better to capture the vocals instead.
02:24:849 - This pattern is so clean considering how messy sounding the guitar is. Something like this would be nicer, I'd say.

These are just examples anyway, there's a good number of issues like this in the entire chart.

[Other comments]
The Hard difficulty is nice. You should pay more attention to pitch relevancy though. You tend to capture it at some points, but not in some others (e.g. 01:24:329 - ). The main complaint would probably be the LN layering in 01:50:687 - (similar to one of the points in the hardest difficulty) and the fact that you didn't capture the 1/4 gallops in 01:52:422 - and similar sections.

Hope this helps, and best of luck with your map!

Also in regards to your Ano Hana ED map not being in the Special List, it's mainly because we felt that there's not much other people can really add on to the chart to improve it substantially. Hope this clears some confusion.
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Shoegazer wrote:

Hello, I will be speaking for the Mania Modding Team.

Unfortunately, we have decided to reject your mapset. There are a few reasons for this, but instead of giving the reasons explicitly, you can take this as a general mod as to what to improve on.

[General]
The main reason why we rejected the mapset is the song choice. Preferences aside, the song just doesn't provide much room for creativity to begin with. The hardest difficulty (Pony) had a couple of issues, but these issues are minor and there is not much that we can contribute to improve your mapset further.

I'll try to point out certain things about the mapset regardless, though you shouldn't expect too much because of the song itself. You also seem to have most of the bigger problems like layering down anyway.

[Pony]
Main issue with this chart is the underemphasis (and occasionally overemphasis, or simply lack of) on certain instrumentation.
I'll give you examples, I think a full mod would be excessive:
00:04:907 - These three notes should be doubles, especially if the sounds you've layered before it as singles are much fainter. I only made the last note double, others i keep it single. also, the SN you've mentioned wasn't meant to follow the sounds. i was following vocal there
00:06:121 - I think these should be doubles as well. If you don't agree with this point (and maybe the point above), it's fine. I do want you to give the next point some thought though. I'll made this double for now
00:06:468 - These three sounds are distinctively different from 00:06:121 - , it's much softer and I don't think you can really use the same type of patterning for 6.468 and 6.121. You can use a one hand minitrill if you're not using doubles, perhaps? A one hand trill creates less emphasis than a two hand trill from my experience. Kinda vague on this point tho. I was trying to avoid "rapid stacked notes". For instance, if I move this - 00:06:468 (6468|2) - to one, it'll made 5 stacks with the pattern before. Makes it really hard for 3,4 stars diff. also quite heavy for left hand. This diff are for players which have intermediate skill. The current pattern already give nice drum emphasis (imo), This - 00:06:468 (6468|2,6555|1,6641|3,6641|2) - having the exact kind of noise like - 00:22:768 (22768|2,22855|1,22942|3,22942|2) -
00:15:312 - This sound is very similar to 00:14:965 - . I think it would be better to capture that by moving this to [234] or [134] instead. Move 00:15:659 - to [12], for similar reasoning. It's distinctively different from the sound in 14.965. Rearranging all those 3 LNs and the SNs nearby. should be better for PR now
00:17:046 - This shouldn't be the same chord as 00:16:699 - , the two sounds are very different. Try to use pitch relevancy for this, the latter sound is noticeably higher. This is also true for 00:17:393 - and 00:17:740 - . Consider this,
00:20:601 - You have a roll pattern for this and 00:21:294 - . There's nothing necessarily wrong with it per se, but the drum sounds in 20.601 are noticeably more audible than the ones in 21.294. You can capture this by making 20.601 something like this for example. Just make sure that there is a noticeable pattern difference between 00:20:514 - and 00:21:294 - .
00:22:248 - Move this to [123], for pitch relevancy purposes.
00:57:451 - This piano roll is fine, but I do wonder why you decided to layer the piano roll now if you didn't layer the piano roll before. I don't think it would've made the patterns very congested (not to mention since the piano roll is so prominent whenever it occurs, it's usually better to capture it), so maybe try to layer the piano roll? It's fine if you don't to, though. Are you pointing the piano roll that comes from before the 1st kiai? If its so I disagree, This section you mentioned also have drum roll. The piano noise could actually mapped in 1/8 but it is too hard so i decided to map the drum roll instead
01:07:335 - Should be a double I think. The sound here is softer than 01:06:641 - , and the syllable in 01:06:641 - is more profound than the one in 01:07:335 - . Consider this, both section you mentioned having the same amount of instrument even though the vocal is more softer but that wasn't a big deal, right?
01:50:687 - Long notes are really unnecessary here, considering that the long notes in 01:46:699 - are so much more audible. Technically - 01:50:687 - LN are audible in 100% playback as BG guitar, it doesn't audible in lower playback because the noise are "Fragmented to pieces"
02:17:046 - Long notes are also unnecessary here, I think it's better to capture the vocals instead.
02:24:849 - This pattern is so clean considering how messy sounding the guitar is. Something like this would be nicer, I'd say.

These are just examples anyway, there's a good number of issues like this in the entire chart.

[Other comments]
The Hard difficulty is nice. You should pay more attention to pitch relevancy though. You tend to capture it at some points, but not in some others (e.g. 01:24:329 - ). The main complaint would probably be the LN layering in 01:50:687 - (similar to one of the points in the hardest difficulty) and the fact that you didn't capture the 1/4 gallops in 01:52:422 - and similar sections.

Hope this helps, and best of luck with your map!

Also in regards to your Ano Hana ED map not being in the Special List, it's mainly because we felt that there's not much other people can really add on to the chart to improve it substantially. Hope this clears some confusion.
Thanks for your input, really appreciated :)
FelipeLink
Hi!, Mod from BRMMT(t/416134)

Difficult: Pony

Mod
Using 1,2,3,4
00:00:572 (572|1,572|0) - until 00:01:092 - 00:01:092 - Remap? you could map the piano in 1/6 (:
00:03:347 - Remap to a LN maybe? until 00:03:520 -
00:03:520 - Same thing, Remap to a LN? until 00:03:693 -
00:04:734 (4734|3) - ^ until 00:04:907 -
00:05:124 - Missing note in 1/8 (Drum sound) {SOMETIMES, I HEAR A SOUND AND HE BANGS IN MY HEAD UNTIL I MOD DUDE, shadowsnoop 2016}
00:05:254 - Should be a LN until 00:05:485 - (1/3) {Hear the sound in 50% its cleary a LN)
00:05:601 - until 00:05:832 - ^^^^^
00:05:948 - until 00:06:121 - ^^^^^ {In this case, you could maybe do a undermap and do only 2 LNS instead of 3 or just let be 3 ;3}
00:06:294 - until 00:06:468 - ^^^^^ { Same case, you could do a undermap or just let be 3 ;3}
00:06:641 - Until 00:07:855 - Why not mapping the 1/4 stream sound? Its only 173bpm and this is the hardest diff..
00:07:855 - Until 00:08:722 - ^ same thing
00:07:335 (7335|1) - Add a note? Should be a jump
00:09:589 (9589|3) - Move to 2? its kinda makes more sense
00:09:589 - If you accept ^^^^^ move to 4 like this >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4484288
00:12:884 - Why is this a Jump, if you're mapping hands in 1/1
00:13:578 - Same thing ^^
00:14:705 (14705|2,14792|1,14878|0) - Change to LN in 1/4 ?
00:18:953 (18953|2) - Made a second LN here? its a guitar chord
00:21:034 - Missing Note
00:22:422 (22422|3) - should be a LN(1 column at least) until 00:22:422 (22422|3) -
00:22:942 - Should be a LN until 00:23:115 -
00:22:595 - Missing Note
00:27:797 - Add note? should be a jump
00:33:346 - ^
00:38:896 - ^
00:44:445 - ^
01:23:462 - Missing sound(try to hear in 50%)
01:25:456 - ^
01:31:265 - Until 01:32:133 - add notes on missing lines? i can clearly hear a 1/4 stream
01:32:826 - Until 01:33:693 - Same thing ^^^^
01:36:815 (96815|3,96815|0,98202|3,98202|2,99589|2,99589|0,120398|3,120398|2,121612|3,121612|2,127161|1,127161|0,131497|2,131497|3,184212|3,184212|2) - See all this section(Its highlight the whole map the being the first point at 1:36) All these section would be way better if you put as a Hand.

Sorry for not so a complex mod, and mod only 1 diff, me and shadow dont liked very much the ''song'', but we made the possible.
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

FelipeLink wrote:

Hi!, Mod from BRMMT(t/416134)

Difficult: Pony

Mod
Using 1,2,3,4
00:00:572 (572|1,572|0) - until 00:01:092 - 00:01:092 - Remap? you could map the piano in 1/6 (: Not a good idea i think
00:03:347 - Remap to a LN maybe? until 00:03:520 - Keep, i'm focusing the foregroun noise
00:03:520 - Same thing, Remap to a LN? until 00:03:693 - ^
00:04:734 (4734|3) - ^ until 00:04:907 - ^
00:05:124 - Missing note in 1/8 (Drum sound) {SOMETIMES, I HEAR A SOUND AND HE BANGS IN MY HEAD UNTIL I MOD DUDE, shadowsnoop 2016} uh...... I didn't hear anything :/
00:05:254 - Should be a LN until 00:05:485 - (1/3) {Hear the sound in 50% its cleary a LN) Nope, Triple are enough to represent loud beat as they're the most obvious noise here
00:05:601 - until 00:05:832 - ^^^^^ ^
00:05:948 - until 00:06:121 - ^^^^^ {In this case, you could maybe do a undermap and do only 2 LNS instead of 3 or just let be 3 ;3} ^
00:06:294 - until 00:06:468 - ^^^^^ { Same case, you could do a undermap or just let be 3 ;3} ^
00:06:641 - Until 00:07:855 - Why not mapping the 1/4 stream sound? Its only 173bpm and this is the hardest diff.. There's no relevant noises that could be mapped in 1/4
00:07:855 - Until 00:08:722 - ^ same thing ^
00:07:335 (7335|1) - Add a note? Should be a jump
00:09:589 (9589|3) - Move to 2? its kinda makes more sense
00:09:589 - If you accept ^^^^^ move to 4 like this >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4484288 I dont want to put any more stacking notes in col 4
00:12:884 - Why is this a Jump, if you're mapping hands in 1/1 Because drum
00:13:578 - Same thing ^^ ^
00:14:705 (14705|2,14792|1,14878|0) - Change to LN in 1/4 ? Hardest diff should be hard right :> xD
00:18:953 (18953|2) - Made a second LN here? its a guitar chord Too much becuz i have to put some single notes as well to match the beat
00:21:034 - Missing Note Uh..... no it isn't
00:22:422 (22422|3) - should be a LN(1 column at least) until 00:22:422 (22422|3) - Necessary, to made a break time for players. mapping all section with guitar is over kill imo
00:22:942 - Should be a LN until 00:23:115 - ^
00:22:595 - Missing Note ^
00:27:797 - Add note? should be a jump Nope, too faint.
00:33:346 - ^ ^
00:38:896 - ^ ^
00:44:445 - ^^
01:23:462 - Missing sound(try to hear in 50%) Nope, i'm mapping the lead noise. refer this - 00:15:485 -
01:25:456 - ^ The problem is, I cant find place to add note. Every column i put it will made uncomfortableness (is that even a word xD)
01:31:265 - Until 01:32:133 - add notes on missing lines? i can clearly hear a 1/4 stream The melody is pretty much calm here, making it stream is just abusing star rating
01:32:826 - Until 01:33:693 - Same thing ^^^^ ^
01:36:815 (96815|3,96815|0,98202|3,98202|2,99589|2,99589|0,120398|3,120398|2,121612|3,121612|2,127161|1,127161|0,131497|2,131497|3,184212|3,184212|2) - See all this section(Its highlight the whole map the being the first point at 1:36) All these section would be way better if you put as a Hand. Those have the drum and kick. will be too monotonous if its just SN

Sorry for not so a complex mod, and mod only 1 diff, me and shadow dont liked very much the ''song'', but we made the possible.
Thx for mod :)
lenpai
Check mod before giving kds

pone but animu pone


pone
rara

pone
pone

pone
pone diff
00:06:988 (6988|1,7162|0) - swap col
00:49:994 - intentional miss?
01:30:225 (90225|0,90398|3) - maybe move to 2 and 3 respectively + 01:30:398 (90398|0) - not sure if 1/1 LN would work
02:23:635 (143635|1,143722|0,143808|1) - swap col
02:39:588 - another missed note
02:58:403 - i swear there is a sound here
03:19:819 (199819|0,199993|3) - to 2 and 3 respectively

My homework made me brain dead so my mod might not be as good as usual :(
Good luck! *throws star due to soupy brain
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Lenfried- wrote:

Check mod before giving kds

pone but animu pone

pone
Da heck lol :V

pone
rara

pone
pone

pone
pone diff
00:06:988 (6988|1,7162|0) - swap col
00:49:994 - intentional miss? Yep, for making a break interval between foreground instrument
01:30:225 (90225|0,90398|3) - maybe move to 2 and 3 respectively + 01:30:398 (90398|0) - not sure if 1/1 LN would work Change it other way
02:23:635 (143635|1,143722|0,143808|1) - swap col
02:39:588 - another missed note ^
02:58:403 - i swear there is a sound here Repattern
03:19:819 (199819|0,199993|3) - to 2 and 3 respectively Change it other way

My homework made me brain dead so my mod might not be as good as usual :(
Good luck! *throws star due to soupy brain
Thx for mod and star :3
Amids
Yo Rivals (~'o')~ request from from

General
Check AiMod masih ada warning :3

Col 1 | 2 | 3 | 4
Hard

00:26:583 (26583|1) - move to 3
00:26:757 (26757|3) - move to 2
00:46:526 - suggest ini kalo dijadiin double note enak juga, ngambil dari nada snare apa itu yang "ckkk" kalo yg ini dijadiin double note berarti note selanjutnya juga sama
00:48:607 - ^ double note di col 1 & 3 * *biar gak ngancurin pattern cuma suggest aja sih :3
00:49:300 - ^ 2 & 4
00:52:075 - ^ 2 & 4
01:43:404 - ^ 3 & 4
01:43:578 - add 1 note on col 2
01:45:485 - double note di col 2 & 4
01:46:179 - ^ 1 & 3
01:48:953 - ^ 1 & 3

buat Normal sama Insane gak nemu :' soalnya udah rapih + banyak yg mod jadi cuma bisa ngasih suggest aja, maaf :'

Patternnya mantap rapih banget ditambah mapnya Suzuko Mimori waaa fav banget >< Shoot Star deh ^^/
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Hamids- wrote:

Yo Rivals (~'o')~ request from from

General
Check AiMod masih ada warning :3 nah..... its fine. Itu cuma berlaku buat STD doang

Col 1 | 2 | 3 | 4
Hard

00:26:583 (26583|1) - move to 3 Uh nope, buat hand balance
00:26:757 (26757|3) - move to 2 ^
00:46:526 - suggest ini kalo dijadiin double note enak juga, ngambil dari nada snare apa itu yang "ckkk" kalo yg ini dijadiin double note berarti note selanjutnya juga sama Too dense for hard diff, emang udh niat patternnya begitu sih. sama comfrtabilty
00:48:607 - ^ double note di col 1 & 3 * *biar gak ngancurin pattern cuma suggest aja sih :3
00:49:300 - ^ 2 & 4 ^
00:52:075 - ^ 2 & 4 ^
01:43:404 - ^ 3 & 4 ^
01:43:578 - add 1 note on col 2
01:45:485 - double note di col 2 & 4 Same explanation above
01:46:179 - ^ 1 & 3 ^
01:48:953 - ^ 1 & 3 ^


buat Normal sama Insane gak nemu :' soalnya udah rapih + banyak yg mod jadi cuma bisa ngasih suggest aja, maaf :'

Patternnya mantap rapih banget ditambah mapnya Suzuko Mimori waaa fav banget >< Shoot Star deh ^^/
Thx for mod sama starnya :)
Protastic101
Hello~ From my queue. So sorry it took this long to get to your map.

Normal
01:39:416 (99416|2) - Either remove because the sound is too faint or add a note at 01:38:028 for consistency?
01:44:791 - Suggest adding note here for the sound.
01:50:341 - Same thing as above.
Hard
00:32:653 (32653|2) - Remove, I can't hear anything that would warrant a double.
01:36:728 (96728|2) - Remove, I think this is a ghost note.
Pony
00:31:439 (31439|0) - Remove, the sound is too small to have a double.
01:36:728 (96728|1) - Remove, I think the sound is too quiet here.
02:20:398 and 02:20:456 - Add notes to represent the guitar sound? (1/6 snap)
03:06:553 (186553|2) - Remove, I'm pretty sure this is a ghost note.
Hope this was somewhat helpful. No kudosu if you reject a lot of it.
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Protastic101 wrote:

Hello~ From my queue. So sorry it took this long to get to your map.

Normal
01:39:416 (99416|2) - Either remove because the sound is too faint or add a note at 01:38:028 for consistency?
01:44:791 - Suggest adding note here for the sound. It'll be quite unexpected for newbie, keep
01:50:341 - Same thing as above. ^
Hard
00:32:653 (32653|2) - Remove, I can't hear anything that would warrant a double. Its a quite loud clap there
01:36:728 (96728|2) - Remove, I think this is a ghost note. a tom roll
Pony
00:31:439 (31439|0) - Remove, the sound is too small to have a double. Delete altogether
01:36:728 (96728|1) - Remove, I think the sound is too quiet here. a tom roll
02:20:398 and 02:20:456 - Add notes to represent the guitar sound? (1/6 snap) Nope. i'll stick to the main percussion for more predictable pattern
03:06:553 (186553|2) - Remove, I'm pretty sure this is a ghost note. I hear a drum here, so uhh.. no
Hope this was somewhat helpful. No kudosu if you reject a lot of it. Every little mod helps :)
Thx for mod :D
Dellvangel
Hai, here is my mod >w<
M4M

Mimori suzuko, hmm, cuma kebayang Sonoda Umi nya Love Live doang lel

1|2|3|4
[Normal]
00:08:029 (8029|1) - move to col 4, mirror with 00:07:335 (7335|0) - for better flow.
00:14:618 (14618|1,14965|1) - jack ini ga cocok imo, flow nya aneh, saran coba di buat mirror dari 00:12:884 (12884|1,13231|3,13231|2,13578|1) - , jadi 00:14:965 (14965|1) - ke col 3 gitu, kalo apply re-arrange note di atasnya.
00:29:705 - add note, coba liat balik ke 00:28:318 (28318|1) - , saran, mending semua yg pitch nya gini di kasih 1 note, for example 00:24:156 - , 00:25:543 - , etc, lebih berasa nyaman di main.
00:33:867 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4666272 better flow.
00:44:965 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4666286 better flow, sekalian supaya beda sama pattern di atas, kalo di apply mod sebelumnya.
01:16:526 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4666323 better flow.
02:18:953 (138953|0,139040|1,139127|2,139213|3,139300|0,139387|1,139474|2) - terlalu susah buat diff normal imo, cover pake LN aja.
02:28:144 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4666372 better flow, sorry kalo screenshoot nya terlalu rapat, males misahin jadi 2 image.
03:03:866 (183866|3,184212|3,184559|3) - terlalu berat di col 4, re-arrange?

[Hard]
00:14:965 (14965|3) - move to col 2 for balance.
00:20:861 (20861|2) - ^
00:21:555 (21555|1) - ^ to col 3.
00:30:919 (30919|3) - move to col 3, look dis 00:29:185 (29185|1,29531|1) - then, look dis 00:30:572 (30572|2) - .
00:42:711 (42711|1,42711|2,43231|2) - ctrl+h, avoid same pattern with 00:41:323 (41323|1,41323|2,41583|0,41670|3,41844|2) - .
00:55:370 (55370|3,55543|3,55716|3,55890|3,56063|3) - lol, may be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4666441 .
01:22:942 (82942|0) - move to 3 for balance.
01:39:589 (99589|2,99589|1,100109|1) - ctrl+h, avoid same pattern with previous pattern.
01:52:075 (112075|0,112248|0,112422|0,112595|0) - hmm ...
02:44:790 (164790|3,164964|3,165137|3,165311|3,165484|3) - ^
02:56:236 (176236|1) - move to 1 for balance.
02:56:929 (176929|2) - move to 4 for balance.
03:12:536 (192536|3) - move to 2 for balance.
03:18:432 (198432|2) - ^
03:19:126 (199126|1) - ^ to 3.

This song is to looonnngg, call me back if you want me to mod other diff too.
Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Dellvangel wrote:

Hai, here is my mod >w<
M4M

Mimori suzuko, hmm, cuma kebayang Sonoda Umi nya Love Live doang lel Yha elah wkwkwk

1|2|3|4
[Normal]
00:08:029 (8029|1) - move to col 4, mirror with 00:07:335 (7335|0) - for better flow.
00:14:618 (14618|1,14965|1) - jack ini ga cocok imo, flow nya aneh, saran coba di buat mirror dari 00:12:884 (12884|1,13231|3,13231|2,13578|1) - , jadi 00:14:965 (14965|1) - ke col 3 gitu, kalo apply re-arrange note di atasnya.
00:29:705 - add note, coba liat balik ke 00:28:318 (28318|1) - , saran, mending semua yg pitch nya gini di kasih 1 note, for example 00:24:156 - , 00:25:543 - , etc, lebih berasa nyaman di main.
00:33:867 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4666272 better flow.
00:44:965 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4666286 better flow, sekalian supaya beda sama pattern di atas, kalo di apply mod sebelumnya.
01:16:526 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4666323 better flow. Rearranged all above, ada beberapa yg g terlalu ngikutin persis sih
02:18:953 (138953|0,139040|1,139127|2,139213|3,139300|0,139387|1,139474|2) - terlalu susah buat diff normal imo, cover pake LN aja. diganti pake double mash, soalnya kalo pake LN agak bingung soalnya gitar pitchnya beda
02:28:144 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4666372 better flow, sorry kalo screenshoot nya terlalu rapat, males misahin jadi 2 image. Hmm agak bedain dikit
03:03:866 (183866|3,184212|3,184559|3) - terlalu berat di col 4, re-arrange?

[Hard]
00:14:965 (14965|3) - move to col 2 for balance.
00:20:861 (20861|2) - ^ Hmm yg ini g deh, lebih enak kalo nge mash pake satu tangan soalnya =3=
00:21:555 (21555|1) - ^ to col 3. ^
00:30:919 (30919|3) - move to col 3, look dis 00:29:185 (29185|1,29531|1) - then, look dis 00:30:572 (30572|2) - . I dont really get it but I agree
00:42:711 (42711|1,42711|2,43231|2) - ctrl+h, avoid same pattern with 00:41:323 (41323|1,41323|2,41583|0,41670|3,41844|2) - . Rearranged other way
00:55:370 (55370|3,55543|3,55716|3,55890|3,56063|3) - lol, may be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4666441 . Intended anchor, tbh its easy to hit, try to play it yourself. I tried the stairs before. not really comfy
01:22:942 (82942|0) - move to 3 for balance.
01:39:589 (99589|2,99589|1,100109|1) - ctrl+h, avoid same pattern with previous pattern.
01:52:075 (112075|0,112248|0,112422|0,112595|0) - hmm ... I'll keep this until some BN/QAT or other people mentioning more about this
02:44:790 (164790|3,164964|3,165137|3,165311|3,165484|3) - ^ ^ its fun tho :v
02:56:236 (176236|1) - move to 1 for balance. change it other way
02:56:929 (176929|2) - move to 4 for balance. ^
03:12:536 (192536|3) - move to 2 for balance. ^
03:18:432 (198432|2) - ^ Uhh nope
03:19:126 (199126|1) - ^ to 3. ^

This song is to looonnngg, call me back if you want me to mod other diff too. Nah..... kalo udh capek gk usah maksain mz :^)
Good luck! :)
Okeh, Sangkyu for le mod :D
Raveille


I will admit, this map is difficult to mod XD So many modders have already modded, soooooooo feel free to reject these mods cause I don't know if it can help anymore XD

Normal
01:07:008 (67008|2,67355|3,67355|0) - this can maybe be like: 01:06:315 (66315|3,66662|1,66662|0) - but inverted?
i say that ^ because you did the same for 01:17:413 - and 01:18:107 -
02:03:887 (123887|1,124234|3,124234|0) - same here, can be like 02:03:193 (123193|0,123540|3,123540|2) - but inverted
02:17:066 - hold note...?
03:20:881 - could have extra note here, maybe col 1
03:21:401 - same here ^

Hard
00:55:390 (55390|3,55563|3,55737|3,55910|3,56084|3) - switch some notes in col 4 to other cols
omg i can't find anything else :o

Pony
00:55:216 (55216|0,55390|0,55563|0,55737|0,55910|0,56084|0) - switch some notes in column 1 to other columns
01:19:494 - to 01:20:188 - there is a piano sound, maybe map 1/4 all the way?
01:26:257 - to 4
01:26:344 - to 3
01:26:430 - hold note to 2, tap note to 1
01:26:604 - hold to 3
01:26:777 - hold to 4, tap to 1
01:52:095 (112095|3,112268|3,112442|3,112615|3,112789|3,112962|3) - again, maybe switch some notes in col 4 to other cols.

rip XD good luck Rivals :P

shit now my little pony is stuck in my head i blame you rivals
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Raveille wrote:



I will admit, this map is difficult to mod XD So many modders have already modded, soooooooo feel free to reject these mods cause I don't know if it can help anymore XD

Normal
01:07:008 (67008|2,67355|3,67355|0) - this can maybe be like: 01:06:315 (66315|3,66662|1,66662|0) - but inverted?
i say that ^ because you did the same for 01:17:413 - and 01:18:107 -
02:03:887 (123887|1,124234|3,124234|0) - same here, can be like 02:03:193 (123193|0,123540|3,123540|2) - but inverted Fair point, fixed But a lil' bit different for pattern variation purpose
02:17:066 - hold note...? emm nope, it was in purposesd
03:20:881 - could have extra note here, maybe col 1
03:21:401 - same here ^ seems to be fine, fix both

Hard
00:55:390 (55390|3,55563|3,55737|3,55910|3,56084|3) - switch some notes in col 4 to other cols tbh the drum roll is much more comfy like this rather than stair-like pattern style.
omg i can't find anything else :o

Pony
00:55:216 (55216|0,55390|0,55563|0,55737|0,55910|0,56084|0) - switch some notes in column 1 to other columns Same reason as hard diff
01:19:494 - to 01:20:188 - there is a piano sound, maybe map 1/4 all the way? Nope, because there is already an LN to follow foreground instrument pitch
01:26:257 - to 4 Nope, it'll be stacking with short notes below and Long Notes above it, not comfy
01:26:344 - to 3 Nope to this too
01:26:430 - hold note to 2, tap note to 1 Nope, I prefer placing both those LN and SN in that way. Giving hands more wide-er gameplay
01:26:604 - hold to 3 Its already on |3| wha... @.@
01:26:777 - hold to 4, tap to 1 Intended for more wide-er gameplay
01:52:095 (112095|3,112268|3,112442|3,112615|3,112789|3,112962|3) - again, maybe switch some notes in col 4 to other cols. Same explanation as hard diff

rip XD good luck Rivals :P

shit now my little pony is stuck in my head i blame you rivals Ayy xD
Thx for mod :D
Amethyst507
So...
I have not much to say about Normal
But I should remind you that to make the gameplay better, try to look out for more 1 1 1 2 note streams.
You have done these 1 1 1 2 notes and its great but these are some that are missing. Just follow like your Hard difficulty, but don't make it really stacky, All you need do is add an extra notes for the stronger beat thats it.

Do you understand? I'm afraid I talked really strange or confusing.
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Amethyst507 wrote:

So...
I have not much to say about Normal
But I should remind you that to make the gameplay better, try to look out for more 1 1 1 2 note streams.
You have done these 1 1 1 2 notes and its great but these are some that are missing. Just follow like your Hard difficulty, but don't make it really stacky, All you need do is add an extra notes for the stronger beat thats it.

Do you understand? I'm afraid I talked really strange or confusing.
I should reply to this few days ago lol, I've been away from my laptop

Some of the section has weak synth which is i dont feel really worthy yo be mapped (thats why some parts are missing) for examples is - 01:12:037 - and - 01:12:384 - , while in hard i tend to map that noise for consistency in kiai part.

imo it doesnt really break the flow so bad, some players still can perfectly catch the rhythm tho. (as can be seen in my ranked tv size map which is have the similar pattern like this)
Nivrad00
From Nivrad00's Mania Queue

Timing:
00:00:593 - I don't think you need a timing point here. You're allowed to put notes before the first uninherited timing point if it makes sense
02:19:667 - there's no actual offset change here, just a syncopated rhythm. Uninherited timing points aren't really appropriate ;n;

Normal
02:32:587 - seems offsync, I think the chord should go here instead of 02:32:615 -

Hard
00:56:604 - not really a sound here
02:18:887 - sounds offsync to me, try 1/4 snap
02:32:587 - offsync, same as Normal
02:46:199 - no sound

Pony
00:56:604 - no sound
02:18:887 - offsync, same as Hard
02:32:587 - offsync, same as Normal
02:46:199 - no sound

There are several places, especially in Pony, where I couldn't hear the sound that you were mapping. I didn't point them out because it seemed like it was on purpose. Most likely it's a really quiet sound that I can't hear... but it's important to keep in mind that if one layer is much louder than the other, it might not be intuitive for the player if you map both layers.

Short check, but I don't have much 4k experience. Seems a simple but competent map with plenty of mods already. o/

ponies4life
Arta
Hi! Here are some mods.

You may or may not choose to listen to me, my mods are 100% suggestions, no hard feelings.

  • Overall : Adjust HS volume as they are a bit too loud.

    Pony
    1. 01:40:823 (100823|0,101170|0,101170|2,101170|3,101344|1,101517|3,101517|0,101517|2) - When the vocal says Wa ka ra nai, the LN should follow and match
    2. 02:32:933 (152933|3) - This note technically does not exist in the song, so replacing it with a single note, or a shorter LN would be good

  • BG Check please
    :)Other than those I suggested, it sounds and seems pretty nice.
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Nivrad00 wrote:

From Nivrad00's Mania Queue

Timing:
00:00:593 - I don't think you need a timing point here. You're allowed to put notes before the first uninherited timing point if it makes sense
02:19:667 - there's no actual offset change here, just a syncopated rhythm. Uninherited timing points aren't really appropriate ;n;

Normal
02:32:587 - seems offsync, I think the chord should go here instead of 02:32:615 -

Hard
00:56:604 - not really a sound here
02:18:887 - sounds offsync to me, try 1/4 snap emm... nope, its really there imo
02:32:587 - offsync, same as Normal
02:46:199 - no sound

Pony
00:56:604 - no sound
02:18:887 - offsync, same as Hard ^
02:32:587 - offsync, same as Normal
02:46:199 - no sound

There are several places, especially in Pony, where I couldn't hear the sound that you were mapping. I didn't point them out because it seemed like it was on purpose. Most likely it's a really quiet sound that I can't hear... but it's important to keep in mind that if one layer is much louder than the other, it might not be intuitive for the player if you map both layers.

Short check, but I don't have much 4k experience. Seems a simple but competent map with plenty of mods already. o/

ponies4life
No reply=fixed. Thanks :D

Arta wrote:

Hi! Here are some mods.

You may or may not choose to listen to me, my mods are 100% suggestions, no hard feelings.

  • Overall : Adjust HS volume as they are a bit too loud. I'll try to ask this with the hitsound-er

    Pony
    1. 01:40:823 (100823|0,101170|0,101170|2,101170|3,101344|1,101517|3,101517|0,101517|2) - When the vocal says Wa ka ra nai, the LN should follow and match At the first time i mapped this section, i wasnt mean to follow vocal at all, as they're already mapped as SN( - 01:40:823 (100823|2,100823|1,101170|0,101170|2,101344|1,101517|2,101517|3) - ) as for the LN itself, it follows the guitar background
    2. 02:32:933 (152933|3) - This note technically does not exist in the song, so replacing it with a single note, or a shorter LN would be good This LN still represent the guitar, the additional LN on the left side is to represent the guitar noise is more louder here. I have no idea how to make it shorter because the guitar is clearly end at - 02:35:014 -

  • BG Check please
    :) uhh.... this wasnt mean to be modded anyways, I forget to mention it xDOther than those I suggested, it sounds and seems pretty nice.
Thx for mod anyways c:
-[ AmiShici ]-
Hiii

SPOILER
[Pony]00:06:488 (6488|2,6575|1) - make it double note like as 00:06:141 (6141|1,6141|0,6228|3,6228|2) -
00:22:442 (22442|0) - ke 2 avoid 4 jack 00:21:922 (21922|0,22095|0,22269|0,22442|0) -
00:25:910 (25910|1,25910|0) - delete better kalo ngga ya 1 ja cukup. orang ga loud jg.. kayak ini 00:42:558 (42558|1) -
00:49:494 (49494|2) - ini ada lah ini 00:49:147 - diabaikan. itu di red line ada hithat hampir disemua tempat lho :3
00:50:014 - kick
00:58:164 (58164|1,58164|2) - ga loud pls
00:58:858 (58858|3,58858|1) - 00:59:899 (59899|1,59899|3,60245|2,60245|1) - ^ dkk
01:08:222 (68222|2,68222|0) - double, 01:08:569 (68569|2) - single
02:22:269 - add
02:40:476 (160476|0,160476|1) - why double?
02:46:112 (166112|1) - double bisa lho :3
02:46:199 (166199|2) - no sound keknya
03:03:973 (183973|2) - no sound

semoga beruntung~
Muu-chan
haloo
semua disini cmn saran

1 ~ 4
General
* Menurut aku suara hs (terutama simbal)nya kenceng bgt @100% / 40% volume jadinya nyaingin suara lagunya itu sendiri u.u ntah karena banyak hs yg di pake dan dalam 1 garis atau apa.. Jadi aku saranin di kecilin semua / di sama ratain semua suaranya
(CTRL+A > CTRL+SHIFT+I > klik none > check 'Use basic sample' > turunin volumenya 10/15 > Apply)

wip mod
Staravia
Pony Diff:
(From my 20min modding queue)

Overall: I think the difficulty is too constant, there's not a huge contrast between the easiest and hardest parts of the song. I would either make the kiai harder and other parts easier. Overall it does not really engage the player that much, compared to adding more contrast, but other than that, I found the map pretty fun to play.
I spent more than 20 mins modding this diff, so I might mod the other difficulties once I get the chance :)

00:14:985 (14985|2) - I think slider should stop at 00:15:332 or 1/4 beats before
And also if you have a slider there, you might as well add them here 00:12:211 and 01:20:188
00:14:725 (14725|2,14812|3,14899|1) - doesn't play well as a staircase, try 2 3 1 (0 being left)
01:22:702 (82702|1,82789|2,82875|3) - ^
00:15:679 (15679|3) - either remove this or add another slider 1/2 beat long at 00:15:852
01:50:708 - check here as well
00:49:667 - remove 1
00:51:748 - ^
00:53:829 (53829|1) - plays better 1/2 a beat longer
00:54:349 (54349|1) - ^
00:54:003 (54003|2) - doesn't go with music, might remove
00:54:523 (54523|3) - ^
00:55:216 - 00:55:910 - I would change, broken staircase pattern is better (like at 00:55:910)
move 01:26:257 (86257|2) - to 1 and 01:26:344 (86344|1) - to 2
01:29:899 - 01:30:419 -try an ABAB (or ABAC) pattern instead of AABB
01:32:500 (92500|2) - instead of staircase pattern, move to 0
01:32:673 - add note
01:53:829 (113829|2) - move to 1
01:54:176 (114176|1) - move to 2
I would check any other similar parts of the map to make sure it's consistent with the notes above. ^
02:24:176 (144176|1) - move to 2
02:32:847 - add note at 3
02:32:933 (152933|3) - make sure it ends and starts at same time with 02:33:020 (153020|0)
make 02:35:101 - 02:39:262 - more easier
02:38:569 (158569|1) - move to either 0 or 3 and it has to start way earlier at 02:36:835
I might remove it, or add a slider that starts at 02:36:835 and ends at 02:38:569 and keep both of them.
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hiii

SPOILER
[Pony]00:06:488 (6488|2,6575|1) - make it double note like as 00:06:141 (6141|1,6141|0,6228|3,6228|2) -
00:22:442 (22442|0) - ke 2 avoid 4 jack 00:21:922 (21922|0,22095|0,22269|0,22442|0) - emm nope, tapi rearrange yg lain
00:25:910 (25910|1,25910|0) - delete better kalo ngga ya 1 ja cukup. orang ga loud jg.. kayak ini 00:42:558 (42558|1) - Iye juga wkwk =3=. ambigu gue disini.
00:49:494 (49494|2) - ini ada lah ini 00:49:147 - diabaikan. itu di red line ada hithat hampir disemua tempat lho :3 emm Overmapped imo, btw yg kamu highlighted itu faint kick :3
00:50:014 - kick g deh, pengen fokus foreground melody aja dulu disini
00:58:164 (58164|1,58164|2) - ga loud pls
00:58:858 (58858|3,58858|1) - 00:59:899 (59899|1,59899|3,60245|2,60245|1) - ^ dkk
01:08:222 (68222|2,68222|0) - double, 01:08:569 (68569|2) - single
02:22:269 - add
02:40:476 (160476|0,160476|1) - why double?
02:46:112 (166112|1) - double bisa lho :3
02:46:199 (166199|2) - no sound keknya
03:03:973 (183973|2) - no sound

semoga beruntung~
yg lain di apply, Thx for mod :3

@Muu: okii, Nanti ane re apply dulu semua HS nya baru kecilin :3
@Staravia will check your mod later :D

edit:

Staravia wrote:

Pony Diff:
(From my 20min modding queue)

Overall: I think the difficulty is too constant, there's not a huge contrast between the easiest and hardest parts of the song. I would either make the kiai harder and other parts easier. Overall it does not really engage the player that much, compared to adding more contrast, but other than that, I found the map pretty fun to play.
I spent more than 20 mins modding this diff, so I might mod the other difficulties once I get the chance :)

00:14:985 (14985|2) - I think slider should stop at 00:15:332 or 1/4 beats before emm nope, the real is exist only about 2/4 while the rest of it just an emphasize
And also if you have a slider there, you might as well add them here 00:12:211 and 01:20:188 maybe its just my personal feeling but i feel it just doesnt right to put LN (Slider) there
00:14:725 (14725|2,14812|3,14899|1) - doesn't play well as a staircase, try 2 3 1 (0 being left) (Just a point when you modding, do not move the actual notes on your own, the notes will not automatically moved on my view when I click it) Its still playable for me tho. also a lil bit uncomfortable to play for the right hand
01:22:702 (82702|1,82789|2,82875|3) - ^ I dont see a reason why i should do that
00:15:679 (15679|3) - either remove this or add another slider 1/2 beat long at 00:15:852 Already full with single notes for a synth roll, Idk where i should put it
01:50:708 - check here as well there's sliders everywhere tho
00:49:667 - remove 1 Crash noise
00:51:748 - ^ Loud kick
00:53:829 (53829|1) - plays better 1/2 a beat longer Buildup noise is obviously 1/4 per measures
00:54:349 (54349|1) - ^ ^
00:54:003 (54003|2) - doesn't go with music, might remove It does follow on my view :/
00:54:523 (54523|3) - ^ ^
00:55:216 - 00:55:910 - I would change, broken staircase pattern is better (like at 00:55:910) Not a fan of a broken stairs tbh, i saw Alternate pattern like this goes better
move 01:26:257 (86257|2) - to 1 and 01:26:344 (86344|1) - to 2 Nope. it'll stacked with - 01:26:084 (86084|1) - . which is not comfy to hit
01:29:899 - 01:30:419 -try an ABAB (or ABAC) pattern instead of AABB
01:32:500 (92500|2) - instead of staircase pattern, move to 0 i saw one hand thrill is not comfy. could lead to a broken accuracy while played
01:32:673 - add note uhh I'll consider
01:53:829 (113829|2) - move to 1
01:54:176 (114176|1) - move to 2 nope, for the pitch relevancy
I would check any other similar parts of the map to make sure it's consistent with the notes above. ^
02:24:176 (144176|1) - move to 2 There's already a short note there
02:32:847 - add note at 3 Too close with the Slider above
02:32:933 (152933|3) - make sure it ends and starts at same time with 02:33:020 (153020|0) Intended, listen closely that these Sliders are following a separate noise
make 02:35:101 - 02:39:262 - more easier Why should I? this is the hardest diff after all
02:38:569 (158569|1) - move to either 0 or 3 and it has to start way earlier at 02:36:835 Move to 0 but Keep the start of the slider there. It was following a piano
I might remove it, or add a slider that starts at 02:36:835 and ends at 02:38:569 and keep both of them. emm keep this
Thx for mod :D

Muu-chan wrote:

haloo
semua disini cmn saran

1 ~ 4
General
* Menurut aku suara hs (terutama simbal)nya kenceng bgt @100% / 40% volume jadinya nyaingin suara lagunya itu sendiri u.u ntah karena banyak hs yg di pake dan dalam 1 garis atau apa.. Jadi aku saranin di kecilin semua / di sama ratain semua suaranya
(CTRL+A > CTRL+SHIFT+I > klik none > check 'Use basic sample' > turunin volumenya 10/15 > Apply)

wip mod
ya emang byk sih xD (soalnya bukan saia yg bikin HS nya xD) nanti ane bicarain sm lordraika aja deh. btw caramu itu udh gue apply di "Pony" dulu, diff lain nanti dulu soalnya kedengerannya malah agak aneh xD
Kernaus
Hello from my modding queue !

Pony :


4k collumns : 1|2|3|4
drum notes : s (snare) k (kick) c (crash) t (toms)


SPOILER
  1. 00:12:211 is this kiai really necessary?
  2. 00:18:280 did you map the guitar notes here? if you did, pitch relevancy is not right. i suggest putting 1/4 mini LNs on 3 and 2
  3. 00:23:569 the first jump here is too much imo, this is not supposed to be ss but ks (repeat on later appearances of this pattern)
  4. 00:46:026 - 00:46:199 - 00:48:280 - 00:48:800 - 00:48:974 same here, the note here is a k, not a s, i don't think it's necessary to put jumps here (repeat on later appearances of this pattern)
  5. 03:21:054 the trill here feels really awkward to play imo
  6. 03:21:054 ^


That's all i was able to find for now and unfortunately i have to go to work orz i'll come back and edit this post with the other diffs and other points that need to be fixed, in the mean time, i hope you found this mini mod helpful o/
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Kernaus wrote:

Hello from my modding queue !

Pony :


4k collumns : 1|2|3|4
drum notes : s (snare) k (kick) c (crash) t (toms)


SPOILER
  1. 00:12:211 is this kiai really necessary? as long as it isn't broke the Ranking Criteria rules, its fine
  2. 00:18:280 did you map the guitar notes here? if you did, pitch relevancy is not right. i suggest putting 1/4 mini LNs on 3 and 2 uh it is? 00:18:454 (18454|0,18627|1) - this pitch are right imo, idk where am i suppose to move
  3. 00:23:569 the first jump here is too much imo, this is not supposed to be ss but ks (repeat on later appearances of this pattern) I was intended to treat both loud kick and loud snare as jumps
  4. 00:46:026 - 00:46:199 - 00:48:280 - 00:48:800 - 00:48:974 same here, the note here is a k, not a s, i don't think it's necessary to put jumps here (repeat on later appearances of this pattern) k is double, for my point of view
  5. 03:21:054 the trill here feels really awkward to play imo I'll consider, but this still the best pattern i can think of now.
  6. 03:21:054 ^


That's all i was able to find for now and unfortunately i have to go to work orz i'll come back and edit this post with the other diffs and other points that need to be fixed, in the mean time, i hope you found this mini mod helpful o/
Thx, but none applied (for now). Feel free to mod another 2 diff tho if you still willing to :)
arcwinolivirus
"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.


Song: Mimori Suzuko - Yumemiru! Shinjiru! Mirai Kanaete! (Rivals_7)
Number of difficulties modded in my map: 4


Note:
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• Kiai More than 1/3 consider reducing this suggested by the AiMod. Which I suggest you the same to actually reduce kiai time in your map. Well you still the one to decide though.

If I were to remove:
SPOILER
00:12:211 - This not seems chorus-like for me and its quite awkward. Just an opening phase for the song.
01:20:188 - ^ same reason, more on instrumental, and the vocal chorus just finished before this part.
03:09:783 - ^ same reason as well.

Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:08:743 (8743|2,8916|0) - too awkward, and what's the LN-for? I assume its for the drum roll but it starts at 00:09:089 - or maybe the synth sfx but started at 00:08:743 (8743|2) - In this case, I suggest something like this to distinguish the synth-like sound and the drumroll: http://puu.sh/o4Bdu/4e41ce004c.jpg

00:41:344 (41344|2,41864|1) - is this intentional? seems like the strong snare occured here at 00:41:690 - and its quite waste without mapping it. Also it differs from the same sound of 00:42:731 (42731|1,43078|3) - which you mapped the snare

00:45:159 (45159|2,45332|1) - ctrl H feels more comfortable in this part. Like you did at 01:42:037 (102037|1,102211|2) -

01:19:667 (79667|0) - add note to 1 as the snare sound here is quite consistent and feels empty without the note.

00:09:089 (9089|2,45159|1,45332|2,98222|2,98742|1) - same as mentioned before which should it be differ than 01:39:610 (99610|1,99956|3) - ?

01:44:812 - add note to 1 for that important snare sound. It is the same as you did at 00:47:933 (47933|0) -

01:50:361 (110361|2) - ^

01:54:870 (114870|2) - move to 4 for more comfortable and newbie friendly triplet.

02:17:066 (137066|3,137066|0) - suggesting to reduce to 1-noter and make it long note like you did in Hard because it fits better. Applying this will make you to remove this 02:18:280 (138280|3) - which quite not consistent despite being the drumroll LN.

02:38:569 (158569|0) - add note to 4 since the sound is similar to before ones like 02:37:875 (157875|1,157875|0) - not to mention, it has with the raising sound effect.

02:43:077 (163077|2) - add note for the snare?

03:18:800 - Suggesting this for better pattern after the 03:18:106 (198106|2,198280|1,198453|0) - guitar-pitch: http://puu.sh/o4BZc/cb7866e6ff.jpg

03:20:881 (200881|3,201401|3) - reduce the length of these long notes similar to your Pony difficulty.

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:00:766 (766|3) - how about change this to LN until 00:01:113 - because of its low-pitch sound effect?

00:07:875 (7875|0) - add note to 2 since its a snare sound with the long sound and far stronger than 00:06:662 (6662|2,6662|3) -

00:20:881 (20881|2) - move to 2 to avoid stack with 00:20:708 (20708|2) - and its more comfortable to hit.

00:21:575 (21575|1) - ^ to 3

00:23:309 (23309|0) - I assume this is for the guitar? it should at the next 1/1 or the white line: 00:23:656 - listen at 25% playback rate. If this is applied, you might want to apply it to all the similar LNs.

00:27:297 (27297|2,27644|0) - reduce the length of these long notes as they are inconsistent with the song. You might want to check your pony difficulty and change it like that.

00:27:991 (27991|3) - after applying above, you might want to make this long note also. until red line.

00:55:390 (55390|3,55563|3,55737|3,55910|3,56084|3) - too much stacks here. Suggesting: http://puu.sh/o4Cz6/d4d55e5b08.jpg

01:30:072 (90072|2,90072|1,90245|1,90245|0) - ctrl J to avoid the 3 note stack at 01:29:725 (89725|2,89899|2,90072|2) - and it fits better in the song pitch.

01:30:766 (90766|0) - move to 4, comfortable.

01:52:095 (112095|0,112268|0,112442|0,112615|0) - same as previous, avoid these 4 note stacks, rearrange it like the previous I mentioned.

01:54:783 (114783|3) - since this is only Hard difficulty, might want to move it 3 for comfortability.

02:27:818 (147818|1) - move to 1

02:44:291 (164291|1,164465|3) - move to 3 and 2 respectively.

02:44:811 (164811|3,164985|3,165158|3,165332|3,165505|3) - rearrange just like before.

02:47:326 (167326|0) - move to 4 for better execution of drum rolls.

02:56:257 (176257|1,176950|2) - move to 3 and 2

03:20:881 (200881|2,201401|1) - reduce or change to single notes, because it doesn't represent any instrument for long sound.

[Hitsound]
SPOILER
Hitsound cool

00:04:928 (4928|2) - move to 2 for comfortability

00:06:141 (6141|2) - move to 4

00:08:916 (8916|1) - suggesting this: http://puu.sh/o4CXu/d9a23b49ca.png for better execution of drum rolls and to avoid that fun-killer one hand trills.

00:10:130 (10130|2,10217|3) - move to 1 and 2

00:15:852 (15852|2,16199|2) - move to 2 and 4

00:17:240 (17240|2) - move to 4

00:20:881 (20881|0,21575|0) - add more notes beside these notes as they are strong sound. Just like you did at 00:09:783 (9783|3,9783|1,9783|0,10477|1,10477|0,10477|2) -
apply to all similar sounds in the whole difficulty.

00:22:789 (22789|1) - move to 1

00:43:945 (43945|3) - move to 2

00:57:904 (57904|3) - move to 3

01:02:153 (62153|1) - add note same sound as 01:02:847 (62847|0,62847|1) -

01:02:500 (62500|1) - add note to 3 or 4

01:04:581 (64581|3) - move to 2

and so on it gets repetitive in patterns, just apply the similar mods I mentioned at the first~

01:31:633 - until 01:34:581 (94581|1) - All left hands? spread it out as it turns to be too focused on left hand. We have 4 columns :v

Seems the difficulty's note density is quite weird despite being keysounded. Make it more consistent like you did at Hard difficulty. Also, is it possible to have a custom name difficulty beside the hardest difficulty? confirm it to BNs/QATs :v

[Pony]
SPOILER
00:06:315 (6315|3,6662|0) - you might want to remove these notes as it is followed by 1/4 double note. I understand being triple of this part but some players hate this kind of pattern especially when at fast phase or streamy parts. If accepted, apply to all similar sounds in the difficulty.

00:12:211 (12211|1) - add note to 4 like other sounds 00:12:558 (12558|0,12558|2,12558|3) -

00:18:627 (18627|1) - add note to 3 for long sound + hihat

00:55:216 (55216|0,55390|0,55563|0,55737|0,55910|0,56084|0) - stacks too much, suggesting to rearrange like this: http://puu.sh/o4DEp/5357b629be.jpg which no more 3+ stacks there and much comfortable to execute. Apply to similar patterns/sounds in the later parts.

01:08:569 (68569|2) - add note to 4 snares.

02:18:800 (138800|3,138974|3,139147|3,139320|3) - and 02:18:916 (138916|0,139147|0,139407|0,139581|0) - rearrange pattern for comfortability.

02:21:922 (141922|0) - move to 2


02:28:165 (148165|3,148165|2,148685|2,148685|3) - how about changing these notes as equal to 02:29:378 (149378|1,149378|0,149639|2,149725|3,149812|1,149899|2,149985|0,150072|3,150072|1,150419|0,150419|2) - for consistency?

02:32:933 (152933|3,153020|0) - extend until red line because it is the sound ends. you will be moving 02:35:101 (155101|0,155101|3) - to 2 and 3 if applied.

02:52:442 (172442|0,172442|2,172442|3,172615|1,172615|0,172702|3,172702|2,172788|1,172788|0,172788|3,172962|3,172962|2,173048|1,173048|0) - This part is overlayered. You might want to remove the Mini-holds or reduce some triples there.
[Overall]
Is this really Little Pony song? very cool its like an anime or visual novel song LOL! Keep it up, goodluck and thank you for the contract ^o^)/

~end of contract~
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.


Song: Mimori Suzuko - Yumemiru! Shinjiru! Mirai Kanaete! (Rivals_7)
Number of difficulties modded in my map: 4


Note:
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• Kiai More than 1/3 consider reducing this suggested by the AiMod. Which I suggest you the same to actually reduce kiai time in your map. Well you still the one to decide though. will think about this later

If I were to remove:
SPOILER
00:12:211 - This not seems chorus-like for me and its quite awkward. Just an opening phase for the song.
01:20:188 - ^ same reason, more on instrumental, and the vocal chorus just finished before this part.
03:09:783 - ^ same reason as well.

Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:08:743 (8743|2,8916|0) - too awkward, and what's the LN-for? I assume its for the drum roll but it starts at 00:09:089 - or maybe the synth sfx but started at 00:08:743 (8743|2) - In this case, I suggest something like this to distinguish the synth-like sound and the drumroll: http://puu.sh/o4Bdu/4e41ce004c.jpg Oh i made a mistake here xD, the LN on col 1 should be 4/4 instead 6/4 xD. Fix this part

00:41:344 (41344|2,41864|1) - is this intentional? seems like the strong snare occured here at 00:41:690 - and its quite waste without mapping it. Also it differs from the same sound of 00:42:731 (42731|1,43078|3) - which you mapped the snare Intentional for this section only, the other 3 section before doesnt. Take a look at - 00:41:864 (41864|1,42211|0) -. The distance between it is 4/4. The 4th section you mentioned above was done like that because - 00:43:598 (43598|0,43771|1,43945|2,43945|3) - this pattern was done in 3 noise sequence, while - 00:42:211 (42211|0,42384|3,42558|2,42731|1,42731|0) - has done in 4 noise sequence. (dunno how to make everything simpler to explain)

00:45:159 (45159|2,45332|1) - ctrl H feels more comfortable in this part. Like you did at 01:42:037 (102037|1,102211|2) - Oki

01:19:667 (79667|0) - add note to 1 as the snare sound here is quite consistent and feels empty without the note. Actually its similar to - 01:19:147 (79147|3,79321|2,79494|1) - i think NM diff like this shouldnt be too restrict with some loud snare :^), also already made a really good sense to the players

00:09:089 (9089|2,45159|1,45332|2,98222|2,98742|1) - same as mentioned before which should it be differ than 01:39:610 (99610|1,99956|3) - ?eeehhh i dont really get it, those section you highlighted was different

01:44:812 - add note to 1 for that important snare sound. It is the same as you did at 00:47:933 (47933|0) - Allrighty

01:50:361 (110361|2) - ^ Oki doki

01:54:870 (114870|2) - move to 4 for more comfortable and newbie friendly triplet. Ok

02:17:066 (137066|3,137066|0) - suggesting to reduce to 1-noter and make it long note like you did in Hard because it fits better. Applying this will make you to remove this 02:18:280 (138280|3) - which quite not consistent despite being the drumroll LN.

02:38:569 (158569|0) - add note to 4 since the sound is similar to before ones like 02:37:875 (157875|1,157875|0) - not to mention, it has with the raising sound effect.

02:43:077 (163077|2) - add note for the snare? emm i dont think so

03:18:800 - Suggesting this for better pattern after the 03:18:106 (198106|2,198280|1,198453|0) - guitar-pitch: http://puu.sh/o4BZc/cb7866e6ff.jpg

03:20:881 (200881|3,201401|3) - reduce the length of these long notes similar to your Pony difficulty. Fix it differently, the length is now the same with "Hard"

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:00:766 (766|3) - how about change this to LN until 00:01:113 - because of its low-pitch sound effect? nope, sounds quite awkward to me

00:07:875 (7875|0) - add note to 2 since its a snare sound with the long sound and far stronger than 00:06:662 (6662|2,6662|3) - nope to this, i dont want to surprise player by a sudden SN because the distance is just 2/4

00:20:881 (20881|2) - move to 2 to avoid stack with 00:20:708 (20708|2) - and its more comfortable to hit.

00:21:575 (21575|1) - ^ to 3

00:23:309 (23309|0) - I assume this is for the guitar? it should at the next 1/1 or the white line: 00:23:656 - listen at 25% playback rate. If this is applied, you might want to apply it to all the similar LNs. Avtually its vocal, it cover 2 syllables, except for the last LN on each phase of the similar tone like - 00:26:084 (26084|0) - which is literally not cover 2 syllables but to keep the pattern consistent throughout the song

00:27:297 (27297|2,27644|0) - reduce the length of these long notes as they are inconsistent with the song. You might want to check your pony difficulty and change it like that. I think its fine to extend the LN as long as they're still sense-able to hit (similar case to yoshilove's LN Style map, iirc)

00:27:991 (27991|3) - after applying above, you might want to make this long note also. until red line. Intended, for an impact to the new phase of the song

00:55:390 (55390|3,55563|3,55737|3,55910|3,56084|3) - too much stacks here. Suggesting: http://puu.sh/o4Cz6/d4d55e5b08.jpg

01:30:072 (90072|2,90072|1,90245|1,90245|0) - ctrl J to avoid the 3 note stack at 01:29:725 (89725|2,89899|2,90072|2) - and it fits better in the song pitch.

01:30:766 (90766|0) - move to 4, comfortable.

01:52:095 (112095|0,112268|0,112442|0,112615|0) - same as previous, avoid these 4 note stacks, rearrange it like the previous I mentioned.

01:54:783 (114783|3) - since this is only Hard difficulty, might want to move it 3 for comfortability. Nope for this

02:27:818 (147818|1) - move to 1

02:44:291 (164291|1,164465|3) - move to 3 and 2 respectively.

02:44:811 (164811|3,164985|3,165158|3,165332|3,165505|3) - rearrange just like before.

02:47:326 (167326|0) - move to 4 for better execution of drum rolls.

02:56:257 (176257|1,176950|2) - move to 3 and 2

03:20:881 (200881|2,201401|1) - reduce or change to single notes, because it doesn't represent any instrument for long sound. E-guitar

[Hitsound]
SPOILER
Hitsound cool

00:04:928 (4928|2) - move to 2 for comfortability

00:06:141 (6141|2) - move to 4

00:08:916 (8916|1) - suggesting this: http://puu.sh/o4CXu/d9a23b49ca.png for better execution of drum rolls and to avoid that fun-killer one hand trills.

00:10:130 (10130|2,10217|3) - move to 1 and 2

00:15:852 (15852|2,16199|2) - move to 2 and 4

00:17:240 (17240|2) - move to 4

00:20:881 (20881|0,21575|0) - add more notes beside these notes as they are strong sound. Just like you did at 00:09:783 (9783|3,9783|1,9783|0,10477|1,10477|0,10477|2) -
apply to all similar sounds in the whole difficulty.

00:22:789 (22789|1) - move to 1

00:43:945 (43945|3) - move to 2

00:57:904 (57904|3) - move to 3

01:02:153 (62153|1) - add note same sound as 01:02:847 (62847|0,62847|1) -

01:02:500 (62500|1) - add note to 3 or 4

01:04:581 (64581|3) - move to 2

and so on it gets repetitive in patterns, just apply the similar mods I mentioned at the first~

01:31:633 - until 01:34:581 (94581|1) - All left hands? spread it out as it turns to be too focused on left hand. We have 4 columns :v

Seems the difficulty's note density is quite weird despite being keysounded. Make it more consistent like you did at Hard difficulty. Also, is it possible to have a custom name difficulty beside the hardest difficulty? confirm it to BNs/QATs :v

[Pony]
SPOILER
00:06:315 (6315|3,6662|0) - you might want to remove these notes as it is followed by 1/4 double note. I understand being triple of this part but some players hate this kind of pattern especially when at fast phase or streamy parts. If accepted, apply to all similar sounds in the difficulty.

00:12:211 (12211|1) - add note to 4 like other sounds 00:12:558 (12558|0,12558|2,12558|3) - I dont want to stack it with - 00:12:037 (12037|3) - seems uncomfortable

00:18:627 (18627|1) - add note to 3 for long sound + hihat

00:55:216 (55216|0,55390|0,55563|0,55737|0,55910|0,56084|0) - stacks too much, suggesting to rearrange like this: http://puu.sh/o4DEp/5357b629be.jpg which no more 3+ stacks there and much comfortable to execute. Apply to similar patterns/sounds in the later parts.
rearranged different way

01:08:569 (68569|2) - add note to 4 snares.

02:18:800 (138800|3,138974|3,139147|3,139320|3) - and 02:18:916 (138916|0,139147|0,139407|0,139581|0) - rearrange pattern for comfortability.

02:21:922 (141922|0) - move to 2


02:28:165 (148165|3,148165|2,148685|2,148685|3) - how about changing these notes as equal to 02:29:378 (149378|1,149378|0,149639|2,149725|3,149812|1,149899|2,149985|0,150072|3,150072|1,150419|0,150419|2) - for consistency? I cant tink of better pattern becuz drumroll are present

02:32:933 (152933|3,153020|0) - extend until red line because it is the sound ends. you will be moving 02:35:101 (155101|0,155101|3) - to 2 and 3 if applied.

02:52:442 (172442|0,172442|2,172442|3,172615|1,172615|0,172702|3,172702|2,172788|1,172788|0,172788|3,172962|3,172962|2,173048|1,173048|0) - This part is overlayered. You might want to remove the Mini-holds or reduce some triples there.
[Overall]
Is this really Little Pony song? very cool its like an anime or visual novel song LOL! Keep it up, goodluck and thank you for the contract ^o^)/

~end of contract~
No reply=accepted except for the Hitsound diff, it wasnt meant to be modded xD
Thx for a very helpful mod :D
[ Kan-chan ]
Hi Rivals_7 :)

here is mod as ur requested from Wonki's queue


i didn't find that strange notes in your maps

ur note is so nice. to cheer ranked map :)


U heard 'LR_Tom Hit' ? this sound is leaning right side.

also do not overwrite the hit sound.
beacause we are not metronome.
clearly tempo missed, so the song will be destroyed.

but this map is seems ur effort :)

i'll shoot the star ><

GOOD LUCK !


AH !! P.s 'Antylavyx Fix' this files very bigger 1.56mb. i recommend not PNG. changing the JPG :)
Dellvangel
p/5072996 perasaan w pernah mod ini map deh, nanti lah w lanjutin mod yg dulu kalo gitu. mark for mod.
Frizu

Frizu's Modding Notice

*From Frizu's Mania Modding Queue


Your request was accepted prior to my queue. These following mods are just suggestions but mostly are recommended. If you reject some (all) of my mods, kindly explain it so I can understand. My apologies for late post.

1|2|3|4

Metadata
  1. Kiai Time: 00:00:593 Just because it is where the first beat starts it doesn't always mean that it's where timing point starts. This section is called pre-length (beats before the first 16 beats, which is 00:01:113 ) so suggest to delete this.
  2. 00:12:211 This section is only the interlude of the song (post-chorus). It's not the chorus-like music so suggest to delete this kiai time. Also consider this on 01:20:188 and 03:09:783
  3. 01:08:742 and 01:09:089 Cut because of AiMod? For me, it's senseless because both has only 2 lengths in one kiai time. In a chorus, there are approximate 4 lengths so suggest to delete these both. These methods is only used if the chorus has more than 4 lengths. Also consider this on 02:05:621 and 02:05:968
  4. 02:38:569 What's the use of this timing point? I saw audio and hitsounds are the same.
  5. 02:59:031 Supposedly this must be on 02:58:684 (or 02:53:135) Vocals is part of the length, else it will be length-short. Like said, just because it is where the first beat starts it doesn't always mean that it's where the timing point starts.
I think it will be an issue if qualified.

Normal
  1. 00:27:297 (27297|2,27644|3,27991|2) - Suggest to switch columns. 1 3 2 4 pattern here 00:26:777 (26777|0,26951|2,27124|1) for hand balance. Notice of changing your patterns on it's symmetrical lengths.
  2. 01:54:696 (114696|3,114870|3) - Move both to 3, NM players will confuse on 01:54:696 (114696|3,114783|0,114870|3,115043|0) to hit the notes in the right time. Probably they will get 100's here.
Everything else here is fine.

Hard
  1. 02:45:852 Add a note here, for balanced difficulty curve and note density.

Pony
  1. 00:56:777 Repattern as you did in 01:53:656 since in HD diff, it's the same pattern. Try to increase note difficulty. Also consider this on 02:46:372
  2. 01:53:396 (113396|1,113482|2,113656|3) - Move to 3 2 and 3 respectively, for hand balance. Also it equally distributes the note-stacks.
  3. 00:57:991 Add to 4, for diff curve.

Kindly reply as soon as possible prior to my mod post above. If there are any questions related to this post, just ask. Happy Modding =w=)b
Dellvangel
My previous mod: p/4944833
No kds for this post.

1|2|3|4
[Pony]
00:26:344 (26344|3,26344|0,26430|2,26430|1) - ctrl+g, more comfortable for play when i testplay it, be carefull with your HS.
00:36:055 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5051514 for note variation, you already use too much 1/4 beat 12 34 pattern, for example 00:34:667 (34667|1,34667|0,34754|3,34754|2) - and 00:37:442 (37442|0,37442|1,37529|3,37529|2) - .
02:39:609 - add note, i can hear something here.

solid diff.
thats all, good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Rivals_7
This happen when i got no email notification on this thread lol

@dell mod 2 kali gpp toh :v
Topic Starter
Rivals_7
Late reply to mods, sorry for delay :'D

[ Kan-chan ] wrote:

Hi Rivals_7 :)

here is mod as ur requested from Wonki's queue


i didn't find that strange notes in your maps

ur note is so nice. to cheer ranked map :)


U heard 'LR_Tom Hit' ? this sound is leaning right side.

also do not overwrite the hit sound.
beacause we are not metronome.
clearly tempo missed, so the song will be destroyed.

but this map is seems ur effort :)

i'll shoot the star ><

GOOD LUCK !


AH !! P.s 'Antylavyx Fix' this files very bigger 1.56mb. i recommend not PNG. changing the JPG :)
HS has been fixed and that BG has been changed to jpg. now its only 300 KB xD. Thx for pointing out :D

Frizu wrote:

Frizu's Modding Notice

*From Frizu's Mania Modding Queue


Your request was accepted prior to my queue. These following mods are just suggestions but mostly are recommended. If you reject some (all) of my mods, kindly explain it so I can understand. My apologies for late post.

1|2|3|4

Metadata
  1. Kiai Time: 00:00:593 Just because it is where the first beat starts it doesn't always mean that it's where timing point starts. This section is called pre-length (beats before the first 16 beats, which is 00:01:113 so suggest to delete this. Not sure tho, i'll confirm it with BN/QAT later
  2. 00:12:211 This section is only the interlude of the song (post-chorus). It's not the chorus-like music so suggest to delete this kiai time. Also consider this on 01:20:188 and 03:09:783
  3. 01:08:742 and 01:09:089 Cut because of AiMod? For me, it's senseless because both has only 2 lengths in one kiai time. In a chorus, there are approximate 4 lengths so suggest to delete these both. These methods is only used if the chorus has more than 4 lengths. Also consider this on 02:05:621 and 02:05:968 kiai is where the song getting at "Excited" part, this was intended for getting a moment of "star burst" which was appear at the beggining of kiai. (i'm not rly sure how to worded it) but no change on this
  4. 02:38:569 What's the use of this timing point? I saw audio and hitsounds are the same. If you notice the green line before this line has 0,8x SV. this line is to normalize it back to 1x SV
  5. 02:59:031 Supposedly this must be on 02:58:684 (or 02:53:135) Vocals is part of the length, else it will be length-short. Like said, just because it is where the first beat starts it doesn't always mean that it's where the timing point starts.The "Crash" Part is there. its quite awkward to put it on your suggestion.
I think it will be an issue if qualified.

Normal
  1. 00:27:297 (27297|2,27644|3,27991|2) - Suggest to switch columns. 1 3 2 4 pattern here 00:26:777 (26777|0,26951|2,27124|1) for hand balance. Notice of changing your patterns on it's symmetrical lengths.Its quite subjective tho, i dont see it will change much. in fact, the pattern will be boring
  2. 01:54:696 (114696|3,114870|3) - Move both to 3, NM players will confuse on 01:54:696 (114696|3,114783|0,114870|3,115043|0) to hit the notes in the right time. Probably they will get 100's here. Rearranged other way
Everything else here is fine.

Hard
  1. 02:45:852 Add a note here, for balanced difficulty curve and note density. Intended. i know there's a drum but if i do that, that i should made the double at the others which is will be like on "Pony" diff.

Pony
  1. 00:56:777 Repattern as you did in 01:53:656 since in HD diff, it's the same pattern. Try to increase note difficulty. Also consider this on 02:46:372 Not sure if i can add more notes. otherwise it'll make it overmapped
  2. 01:53:396 (113396|1,113482|2,113656|3) - Move to 3 2 and 3 respectively, for hand balance. Also it equally distributes the note-stacks.
  3. 00:57:991 Add to 4, for diff curve. Consider this

Kindly reply as soon as possible prior to my mod post above. If there are any questions related to this post, just ask. Happy Modding =w=)b
Thx For mod :)

Dellvangel wrote:

My previous mod: p/4944833
No kds for this post.

1|2|3|4
[Pony]
00:26:344 (26344|3,26344|0,26430|2,26430|1) - ctrl+g, more comfortable for play when i testplay it, be carefull with your HS.
00:36:055 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5051514 for note variation, you already use too much 1/4 beat 12 34 pattern, for example 00:34:667 (34667|1,34667|0,34754|3,34754|2) - and 00:37:442 (37442|0,37442|1,37529|3,37529|2) - .
02:39:609 - add note, i can hear something here. emm nope. main melody is louder here.

solid diff.
thats all, good luck! :)
Thx for mod mz :)
Ochasan
hi~ Rivals_7

maap ye~ kelamaan soalnya ini menjelang ulangan (lmao)

langsung ke intinya aja~

bukan bermaksud mengabaikan mod, tapi sejauh ini mod nya sangat sempurna bahkan modder terkenal sudah membenarkan map kamu <3
ini adalah imo saya tentang map anda. silahkan disimak :D

Normal :
cukup bagus, sudah sangat sempurna. memang kebanyakan map lain kalau normal gk ada jack kecil :D (lah :v ) tapi map ini yang pertama gw liat ada jack dadakan pas di dt

Hard
bilang apa ya~ -_- cukup mengesankan 1/4 nya, buat gw sih ini mungkin perlu di beri jack kecil sedikit (digaramin mz~ )

Pony
nah disini ada yg kurang buat saya, hampir fc tapi untung ada jack buat ngehalangin, bisa dibilang buat belajar improve jack 1/4
kurang nya di awal lagu itu ditambahin note nya buat jack, jgn pas di 1/4 nya aja
cukup sekian IMO saya~

saya harap anda mengerti perkataan saya walaupun saya gak ngemod in, sekian~
Adinata28
ayy Ponies xd
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Ochasan wrote:

hi~ Rivals_7

maap ye~ kelamaan soalnya ini menjelang ulangan (lmao)

langsung ke intinya aja~

bukan bermaksud mengabaikan mod, tapi sejauh ini mod nya sangat sempurna bahkan modder terkenal sudah membenarkan map kamu <3
ini adalah imo saya tentang map anda. silahkan disimak :D

Normal :
cukup bagus, sudah sangat sempurna. memang kebanyakan map lain kalau normal gk ada jack kecil :D (lah :v ) tapi map ini yang pertama gw liat ada jack dadakan pas di dt

Hard
bilang apa ya~ -_- cukup mengesankan 1/4 nya, buat gw sih ini mungkin perlu di beri jack kecil sedikit (digaramin mz~ ) jgn la, nanti overmap :>

Pony
nah disini ada yg kurang buat saya, hampir fc tapi untung ada jack buat ngehalangin, bisa dibilang buat belajar improve jack 1/4
kurang nya di awal lagu itu ditambahin note nya buat jack, jgn pas di 1/4 nya aja Kebanyakan jack g bagus ._.
cukup sekian IMO saya~

saya harap anda mengerti perkataan saya walaupun saya gak ngemod in, sekian~
thx testpleynya wkwkw, (Padahal minta mod :v)

Adinata28 wrote:

ayy Ponies xd
Ponay, mod pls :v
Adinata28
ayy Ponies xd


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4K = |1|2|3|4|



Normal

  1. 00:00:593 - Kalo kamu ngikut drum disini artinya di 00:00:939 - juga enaknya ngikut drum jg. walau suaranya agak kecil sih.

  2. 00:01:113 - sampe 00:05:274 - ngikutin vokal lebih enak. imo. dan itupun jg gak susah susah amat untuk normal player.


  3. 00:06:662 - welp, disini bisa ditambahin note buat finisher. worth lah

  4. 00:22:442 (22442|2) - rasanya ini suara gitar sampai di white line selanjutnya dah ;w; welp, walaupun suaranya nurun sih.

  5. 01:03:540 - worth of double

  6. 01:17:066 (77066|2,77240|0) - Ctrl+G

  7. 01:24:349 - entah kenapa, pattern ini cocok buat pitchnya. walaupun kamu harus add note di 01:25:737 - (well its worth for finisher)

  8. 01:31:286 - welp, good start with double ;w;

  9. 02:13:945 (133945|1,134118|3) - Ctrl+G

  10. 02:47:586 - dari sini jg sama, ngikutin vokal lebih enak ;w;

  11. 02:53:135 - 03:15:332 - Double for Finisher

  12. 02:28:511 (148511|2,148685|0,148685|3,149205|1,149378|2,149378|3,149725|0,150072|3,150072|2) - bukannya sama dengan 02:25:737 (145737|3,145910|1,145910|0,146257|2,146430|1,146604|3,146604|2,146951|1,147124|2,147298|1,147298|0) - (?)

  13. 02:41:343 - add. kinda heavy piano.

Hard

  1. 00:00:593 - same with Normal

  2. 00:08:222 - missing? kedengeran suara kick

  3. 00:09:003 (9003|2) - ghost kah ? welp drum nya bisa diikutin dari 00:09:089 - di diff hard di tambah mini stream 1/4+LN gapapa lah. ketimbang cuma LN aja.

  4. 00:11:691 - dari sini juga. jelas ada kick di 00:11:691 - dan 00:11:777 - . bisa di map. Dan juga 00:12:037 - dan 00:12:124 - bisa di map juga biar 'flow'nya (ngikutin) enak ;w;

  5. 00:14:638 (14638|2,14638|3,14725|1,14812|3,14899|0,14985|2,14985|1) - more be better like
    tapi 00:14:292 (14292|2,14465|1) - di Ctrl+G biar lebih nyambung.
    Kalo kamu ngikutin, maka 00:14:985 (14985|0,14985|1) - akan membuat pattern sesudahnya jadi lebih menarik. be like
    Worth it ;w;

  6. 00:14:985 (14985|1,14985|0) - welp, why double?

  7. 00:17:760 (17760|0) - ini LN agak kontroversial. ;w; soalnya startnya kemungkinan di 00:17:760 (17760|0) - agak samar jg.

  8. 00:18:280 (18280|3) - ini gak ngikutin gitar nya kan ? seperti 01:26:257 -

  9. 00:26:084 (26084|0) - 00:31:633 (31633|0) - 00:37:182 (37182|0) - 00:42:731 (42731|1) - conflict dengan Normal. well. panjang pendek ;w;

  10. 01:08:655 - dan 01:09:003 - gak diikutin suara kicknya?

  11. 01:22:615 - bisa kayak usulan ane tadi yg diatas jg.

  12. 01:24:089 - synth?

  13. 01:40:650 (100650|1,100737|0) - di CTRL+G enak kayaknya

  14. 02:05:534 - dan 02:05:881 - kick, 02:09:696 - dan 02:10:043 - kick juga, 02:13:511 - kick, 02:15:592 - kick. b.b.k.k.b.k.k ayy ;w;

  15. 02:19:147 - welp, double. like 02:18:627 -

  16. 02:32:326 - dan 02:32:587 - cocok ditambah 1 note lagi deh. pretty loud.

  17. 02:46:372 - entah kenapa ane lebih enakan sama pattern yang ini *liat gambar. karena pitch nya yang juga naik.

  18. 02:55:389 - sama seperti saran ane sebelumnya. di 00:09:089 -

  19. 02:57:817 - 02:58:164 - 02:58:251 - 02:58:511 - 02:58:598 - 02:58:684 (178684|2,178684|3) - ada kick sih, tapi kalo mau pure vocal gpp jg.

  20. 03:02:413 - 03:06:228 - #something

  21. 03:08:309 - berasa kedengeran suara. semacam suara yang kamu ikutin untuk 03:07:702 (187702|0,187788|1,187875|2,187962|3) - well. ga tau jg sih ;w;

  22. 03:09:696 - worth untuk di map.

  23. 03:12:210 (192210|2,192210|3,192297|1,192384|3,192470|0,192557|2,192557|1) - sama sih seperti sebelumnya. tapi dibiarin aja kali ya, pake variasi ;w;

  24. 03:14:465 - welp, why double?


Pony

  1. 00:09:003 (9003|2) - ini ghost?

  2. 00:17:500 - add. hear something

  3. 00:43:425 - delete 1 note. ataukah ini double buat vokal ?

  4. 00:46:893 (46893|0,47240|1,47586|2) - tbh, pitchnya naik-turun-naik. kalo di map 1-2-3 rasanya aneh ;w;. reaarange coba.

  5. 00:56:777 (56777|0,56777|1,56951|2,56951|3,57124|1,57124|0,57297|3,57297|2) - pitch nya naik. ketimbang map 12 34 terus, mendingan sama kayak mod ane di hard. well. part yang sama dengan ini bisa dibegitukan jg

  6. 01:04:754 - 01:15:852 - add ? kinda loud. like 01:10:303 -

  7. 01:22:962 - add? like 01:23:309 -

  8. 01:31:286 - add. for finisher

  9. 01:43:771 (103771|3,104118|2,104465|1) - just like before.

  10. 01:52:095 (112095|2,112182|1) - CTRL+G this ?

  11. 02:07:182 - 02:12:731 - add. you know why.

  12. 02:08:742 - add. impact

  13. 03:12:557 - add. like 03:12:904 -

Late. orz. Sorry.
Good Luck, Rivals~
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Adinata28 wrote:

ayy Ponies xd


Mod Via ♡ Верный Mania Queue ♡

4K = |1|2|3|4|



Normal

  1. 00:00:593 - Kalo kamu ngikut drum disini artinya di 00:00:939 - juga enaknya ngikut drum jg. walau suaranya agak kecil sih. ndak deh :>, prefer ngikutin piano. kan lebih kedengeran

  2. 00:01:113 - sampe 00:05:274 - ngikutin vokal lebih enak. imo. dan itupun jg gak susah susah amat untuk normal player. g deh. instrumen kan lebih kedengeran disini dan pastinya labih gampang di recognize daripada vocal


  3. 00:06:662 - welp, disini bisa ditambahin note buat finisher. worth lah ng.... cuma suara "tom"(?) kok ._.. kayaknya g deh....

  4. 00:22:442 (22442|2) - rasanya ini suara gitar sampai di white line selanjutnya dah ;w; welp, walaupun suaranya nurun sih. yep beda pitch, ngikutin salah satunya aja :>

  5. 01:03:540 - worth of double

  6. 01:17:066 (77066|2,77240|0) - Ctrl+G

  7. 01:24:349 - entah kenapa, pattern ini cocok buat pitchnya. oki walaupun kamu harus add note di 01:25:737 - (well its worth for finisher) tapi gk untuk yg ini. supaya konsisten aja sama pattern kedepannya

  8. 01:31:286 - welp, good start with double ;w;

  9. 02:13:945 (133945|1,134118|3) - Ctrl+G

  10. 02:47:586 - dari sini jg sama, ngikutin vokal lebih enak ;w; Nuh uh ;w; alasan sama kayak yg diatas

  11. 02:53:135 - 03:15:332 - Double for Finisher no change, sorry ;w;

  12. 02:28:511 (148511|2,148685|0,148685|3,149205|1,149378|2,149378|3,149725|0,150072|3,150072|2) - bukannya sama dengan 02:25:737 (145737|3,145910|1,145910|0,146257|2,146430|1,146604|3,146604|2,146951|1,147124|2,147298|1,147298|0) - (?)
    Yg pertama kamu sebut itu ada 3 pitch change, yang kedua yg kamu sebut ada 2 pitch change karena sblmnya ada suara drumroll

  13. 02:41:343 - add. kinda heavy piano.

Hard

  1. 00:00:593 - same with Normal kalo yg ini, yaa karena drumroll yg keduanya gk terlalu kedengeran... jadi y enakan gini imo

  2. 00:08:222 - missing? kedengeran suara kick

  3. 00:09:003 (9003|2) - ghost kah ? welp drum nya bisa diikutin dari 00:09:089 - di diff hard di tambah mini stream 1/4+LN gapapa lah. ketimbang cuma LN aja. sebenernya itu juga drumroll, emang yg terakhirnya sengaja pake LNbiar lebih gampang diikutin aja :>

  4. 00:11:691 - dari sini juga. jelas ada kick di 00:11:691 - dan 00:11:777 - . bisa di map. Dan juga 00:12:037 - dan 00:12:124 - bisa di map juga biar 'flow'nya (ngikutin) enak ;w; ini juga ngikutin flow lo mz :3 coba kasih attention ke Background instrument nya :3

  5. 00:14:638 (14638|2,14638|3,14725|1,14812|3,14899|0,14985|2,14985|1) - more be better like
    tapi 00:14:292 (14292|2,14465|1) - di Ctrl+G biar lebih nyambung.
    Kalo kamu ngikutin, maka 00:14:985 (14985|0,14985|1) - akan membuat pattern sesudahnya jadi lebih menarik. be like
    Worth it ;w; Leh ugha (y)

  6. 00:14:985 (14985|1,14985|0) - welp, why double? well... dont you notice i mapped double on every white tick (1/4) :P

  7. 00:17:760 (17760|0) - ini LN agak kontroversial. ;w; soalnya startnya kemungkinan di 00:17:760 (17760|0) - agak samar jg. Timestampnya tolong :v

  8. 00:18:280 (18280|3) - ini gak ngikutin gitar nya kan ? seperti 01:26:257 - oke baru nyadar ini LN ada 2 pitch www. ubah dikit

  9. 00:26:084 (26084|0) - 00:31:633 (31633|0) - 00:37:182 (37182|0) - 00:42:731 (42731|1) - conflict dengan Normal. well. panjang pendek ;w; kalo di normal ngikutin vokal (tapi cuma LN yg ketiga dari setiap phasenya) krn yah kebanyakan player yg biasanya maen mania di bwh 2* gk bisa neken LN sama pijit SN dalam satu waktu, mungkin krn finger independencenya kurang :3. kalo disini ngikutin gitar yg kedengeran jelas

  10. 01:08:655 - dan 01:09:003 - gak diikutin suara kicknya? prefer ngikutin drum-tom drum-tom sequence aja :3

  11. 01:22:615 - bisa kayak usulan ane tadi yg diatas jg.

  12. 01:24:089 - synth? focusing on drum here

  13. 01:40:650 (100650|1,100737|0) - di CTRL+G enak kayaknya

  14. 02:05:534 - dan 02:05:881 - kick, 02:09:696 - dan 02:10:043 - kick juga, 02:13:511 - kick, 02:15:592 - kick. b.b.k.k.b.k.k ayy ;w; O-oooooooooo AAAAE-A-A-I-A-U- JO-oooooooooooo AAE-eh... yha alasan similar kayak diatas :>


  15. 02:19:147 - welp, double. like 02:18:627 - ini lagi ngikutin melody "apalah" itu pokoknya

  16. 02:32:326 - dan 02:32:587 - cocok ditambah 1 note lagi deh. pretty loud.

  17. 02:46:372 - entah kenapa ane lebih enakan sama pattern yang ini *liat gambar. karena pitch nya yang juga naik.

  18. 02:55:389 - sama seperti saran ane sebelumnya. di 00:09:089 -

  19. 02:57:817 - 02:58:164 - 02:58:251 - 02:58:511 - 02:58:598 - 02:58:684 (178684|2,178684|3) - ada kick sih, tapi kalo mau pure vocal gpp jg.

  20. 03:02:413 - 03:06:228 - #something #1 nope #2 consider

  21. 03:08:309 - berasa kedengeran suara. semacam suara yang kamu ikutin untuk 03:07:702 (187702|0,187788|1,187875|2,187962|3) - well. ga tau jg sih ;w; enakan gini rythmnya tau :u

  22. 03:09:696 - worth untuk di map. agak gk terlalu kedenger di 100%, leave it to "Pony"

  23. 03:12:210 (192210|2,192210|3,192297|1,192384|3,192470|0,192557|2,192557|1) - sama sih seperti sebelumnya. tapi dibiarin aja kali ya, pake variasi ;w;

  24. 03:14:465 - welp, why double? well... deep drum (?)


Pony

  1. 00:09:003 (9003|2) - ini ghost? ada mz :>

  2. 00:17:500 - add. hear something wadoo gk ada tempat

  3. 00:43:425 - delete 1 note. ataukah ini double buat vokal ? wups.. ubah dikit

  4. 00:46:893 (46893|0,47240|1,47586|2) - tbh, pitchnya naik-turun-naik. kalo di map 1-2-3 rasanya aneh ;w;. reaarange coba.

  5. 00:56:777 (56777|0,56777|1,56951|2,56951|3,57124|1,57124|0,57297|3,57297|2) - pitch nya naik. ketimbang map 12 34 terus, mendingan sama kayak mod ane di hard. well. part yang sama dengan ini bisa dibegitukan jg

  6. 01:04:754 - 01:15:852 - add ? kinda loud. like 01:10:303 - ah, yg di 01:10 harusnya bukan 2 note :> ubah dikit

  7. 01:22:962 - add? like 01:23:309 - Kick < Clap

  8. 01:31:286 - add. for finisher

  9. 01:43:771 (103771|3,104118|2,104465|1) - just like before. prefer keep

  10. 01:52:095 (112095|2,112182|1) - CTRL+G this ? nah i dont think so

  11. 02:07:182 - 02:12:731 - add. you know why.

  12. 02:08:742 - add. impact segini cukup :>

  13. 03:12:557 - add. like 03:12:904 - same reason above

Late. orz. Sorry.
Good Luck, Rivals~
Thx modnya mz :D
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PONEHH :v
00:53:656 - Miss note?
02:20:361 (140361|1,140535|0,140535|3) - tambahin note. dengerin tuh suara kayak gitar. kalo bisa 1/6 ajah. *recomend
02:20:881 - tambahin LN ampe LN berikutnya itu. ampe garis putih.

Diff laen menurut ane dh bagus. ._.
Maap cuman dikit. soalnya bagus banget :V
Makasih.
Punya 2 kesempatan buat Kirim lagi di forum ane untuk Mod lagi yah!
AyeAries
Hello there! NM request from my queue and sorry for almost 1 month delay!

Here we go!

4k P A T T E R N - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Pony]

  1. 01:42:731 (102731|0) - this one is more likely ghost note but you're using hitsound so i recommend you to use this hitsound 01:45:505 (105505|3) at the ghost notes that i mentioned for consistency.
  2. 01:48:280 (108280|0) - this one too..^
  3. omg many ghost notes, please put this hisounds the following i mentioned for consistency of this diff - 00:01:459 (1459|1) - 00:01:980 (1980|1) - 00:02:673 (2673|1,3020|1) - 00:03:367 (3367|0,3540|1) - 00:04:234 (4234|1) - 03:09:956 (189956|1) - 03:10:650 (190650|2) - 03:11:343 (191343|2) - 03:12:037 (192037|2)
Please update your post threat in my mod queue after you check my mod.

feel to reject my suggestions and sorry for short modding because i'm too busy for now...btw nice map and hitsound so...shoot a star :D goodluck on ranking and to your map :)
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

REUSE-ABLE wrote:

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Request Type: NM


PONEHH :v
00:53:656 - Miss note?ng.... g sih. emang sengaja. kasih ruang biar player bisa notice patternnya
02:20:361 (140361|1,140535|0,140535|3) - tambahin note. dengerin tuh suara kayak gitar. kalo bisa 1/6 ajah. *recomend boleh juga sih :3
02:20:881 - tambahin LN ampe LN berikutnya itu. ampe garis putih. gk ada tempat :>

Diff laen menurut ane dh bagus. ._.
Maap cuman dikit. soalnya bagus banget :V
Makasih.
Punya 2 kesempatan buat Kirim lagi di forum ane untuk Mod lagi yah!
Thx for mod xD

Shiro-neechan wrote:

Hello there! NM request from my queue and sorry for almost 1 month delay!

Here we go!

4k P A T T E R N - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Pony]

  1. 01:42:731 (102731|0) - this one is more likely ghost note but you're using hitsound so i recommend you to use this hitsound 01:45:505 (105505|3) at the ghost notes that i mentioned for consistency.
  2. 01:48:280 (108280|0) - this one too..^ I see your point, change a little bit
  3. omg many ghost notes, please put this hisounds the following i mentioned for consistency of this diff :arrow: - 00:01:459 (1459|1) - 00:01:980 (1980|1) - 00:02:673 (2673|1,3020|1) - <- This is Vocal - 00:03:367 (3367|0,3540|1) <- fx noise (dunno the name) - 00:04:234 (4234|1) - 03:09:956 (189956|1) - 03:10:650 (190650|2) - 03:11:343 (191343|2) - 03:12:037 (192037|2) <- and the rest is synth
Please update your post threat in my mod queue after you check my mod.

feel to reject my suggestions and sorry for short modding because i'm too busy for now...btw nice map and hitsound so...shoot a star :D goodluck on ranking and to your map :)
Thx for mod and the star :D
Hotaru-


Hotaru's Mania Modding KueKue


Hii Rivals >w<
Nice Song BTW owo And also Nice Pony Too
Modnya bakal Dikit Karna mapnya Bagus Banget ;w; aku gabisa bantu terlalu banyak
maaf telat ;w; Mata ku kemasukan sabun

Kolom
1|2|3|4


[General]
Semuanya baik" saja~



[Normal]
00:26:951 (26951|2) - ahh... Move ke 4.. lebih ballance
00:39:436 (39436|1) - maybe move ke 1??
01:23:829 - hmm.. add note?? buat nutupin suara drumnya

[Hard]
00:04:928 (4928|2,5014|1,5101|2) - ahh... gak ballance menurut ku :< mending di buat |4|,|3|,|2|(bisa sebaliknya) atau engga |4|,|3|,|1|
00:55:737 - sugest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5378047

aaaa Aku Gabisa Nemukan apa" Di diff Pony ;w;
Sorry Modnya pendek ;w;
Overall terlihat keren >w< dan Banyak Kuda Ponynya :^
Good Luck! owo)/
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

-[Hotaru]- wrote:



Hotaru's Mania Modding KueKue


Hii Rivals >w<
Nice Song BTW owo And also Nice Pony Too
Modnya bakal Dikit Karna mapnya Bagus Banget ;w; aku gabisa bantu terlalu banyak
maaf telat ;w; Mata ku kemasukan sabun

Kolom
1|2|3|4


[General]
Semuanya baik" saja~



[Normal]
00:26:951 (26951|2) - ahh... Move ke 4.. lebih ballance
00:39:436 (39436|1) - maybe move ke 1?? gk deh. stacking sama bawahnya :>
01:23:829 - hmm.. add note?? buat nutupin suara drumnya nope, biar konsisten sama yg lain

[Hard]
00:04:928 (4928|2,5014|1,5101|2) - ahh... gak ballance menurut ku :< mending di buat |4|,|3|,|2|(bisa sebaliknya) atau engga |4|,|3|,|1| uhmm no change, gue sih sebisa mungkin minimalisir stacking :3
00:55:737 - sugest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5378047 lebih comfy begini menurut saia :>

aaaa Aku Gabisa Nemukan apa" Di diff Pony ;w;
Sorry Modnya pendek ;w;
Overall terlihat keren >w< dan Banyak Kuda Ponynya :^
Good Luck! owo)/
Wokeh, thx modnya :D
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Btw Love the song >///<
Topic Starter
Rivals_7
Action{revive}(Hello.world);
Kawawa
Hello! :)
[General]
Some hitsounds are delayed(3ms nearly)
It is not unrankable issue(5ms), but better to fix in case.
"LR_Drum Rpd x2.wav"
"LR_Tom Hit.wav"

Fixed ▽
http://puu.sh/so8nS/e050205ce7.wav
http://puu.sh/so8nv/1c82a9b423.wav

[Normal]
02:55:043 - 02:55:389 - 02:55:736 - Add a note.
There is a drum roll. This gives me a feeling of 2snap for Normal diffs. All up to you anyway.

※ Hitsound
01:06:141 (66141|1) - 01:17:240 (77240|2) - 02:14:118 (134118|1) - 03:06:835 (186835|0) - If I was wrong, It seems missing.
Add a Hitsound "LR_Hatsynth". I saw the same of sturucture with 02:03:020 (123020|2) -

02:19:667 (139667|3,139667|0) - If you can add some hitsound here(like cymbal), It will better.

If you applied this, you also must be fixed on All the difficulties.

[Hard]
00:31:633 (31633|0) - Reduce the LN till 00:31:980 - It different with Easy diff.
If you can make same with "Easy", It will be consitency as intention. make sure for vocal LN.
Feed back :: http://puu.sh/so6mI/0582bbfd21.jpg

00:37:182 (37182|0) - Same with above.
00:42:731 (42731|1) - Same with above.

01:39:610 (99610|1) - Same with above.

01:03:107 - 01:03:280 - You did not put a note here, because of LN.
but This drum is important for the rhythm than your thinking. It makes me weird when I played the song.
Feed back :: http://puu.sh/so6yU/65ab80ec60.jpg

01:14:205 - 01:14:378 - Same with above.

01:59:812 - 02:00:159 - Same with above.
02:11:083 - 02:11:257 - Same with above.
03:03:800 - 03:03:973 - Same with above.

01:27:297 - There is a guitar chord. If you did not bundle it as one LN only, It needs to express.
01:26:257 - ~ 01:27:644 - Feedback :: http://puu.sh/so6V0/09095e4430.jpg

00:19:321 - I forgot to mention about it. Same with above.

02:17:066 (137066|1,137066|0) - End of LN should be snapped here 02:18:280 -
If you did not use the "shiled LN", It's better to hold on next chord section for readable.
don't worry. It will not be make hard to play.

02:18:916 (138916|0) - It is 4snap. here 02:18:887 -
looks delayed a bit, but It still that structure of 4snap surely.

03:02:413 - Add a note for drum. Just a suggestion. but I recommend it.

03:20:881 - ~ 03:21:748 - There is a big gap with pony difficulties.
And It does not have a gap with easy difficulties. You can make some notes for that.
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/so7pG/e16b44a455.jpg

[Pony]
00:19:321 - There is a guitar.... blahblah same mod with Normal.

01:27:297 - Same with above.

00:53:656 - Add a note. If you can add a note here, That's good for vocal rhythm.

01:50:534 - Same with above.

01:06:141 (66141|3,66141|1,66228|2) - hmm, Seems something missing on hitsound.
I feel not good about them. It can be improved at least.

01:17:240 (77240|2,77240|3,77326|1,77326|0) - Same with above.
02:14:118 (134118|0,134118|1,134205|2,134205|3) - Same with above.
03:06:835 (186835|0,186835|2,186921|1) - Same with above.

01:10:303 - You can add a note. There is a snare And Highlight Synth. like 03:10:996 -
It depends on you.

01:34:754 - Add a note(col3). Hard diff used 2note here.

02:17:066 (137066|1,137066|0) - end of LN... blahblah. Same mod with Normal.
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/so7Yt/5661fcb243.jpg

02:18:916 (138916|1,138916|0) - It is 4snap. Same with Normal 02:18:887 -

03:21:921 - Add a LN(col3) Let's highlight for endling.

Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Kawawa wrote:

Hello! :)
[General]
Some hitsounds are delayed(3ms nearly)
It is not unrankable issue(5ms), but better to fix in case.
"LR_Drum Rpd x2.wav"
"LR_Tom Hit.wav"

Fixed ▽
http://puu.sh/so8nS/e050205ce7.wav
http://puu.sh/so8nv/1c82a9b423.wav Oki :D

[Normal]
02:55:043 - 02:55:389 - 02:55:736 - Add a note.
There is a drum roll. This gives me a feeling of 2snap for Normal diffs. All up to you anyway.

I tink i'll keep this for 1/2 consistency between Singles and Doubles

※ Hitsound
01:06:141 (66141|1) - 01:17:240 (77240|2) - 02:14:118 (134118|1) - 03:06:835 (186835|0) - If I was wrong, It seems missing.
Add a Hitsound "LR_Hatsynth". I saw the same of sturucture with 02:03:020 (123020|2) -

02:19:667 (139667|3,139667|0) - If you can add some hitsound here(like cymbal), It will better. Heard this over and over, i dont think cymbals fit here. literally same as - 02:21:055 -

If you applied this, you also must be fixed on All the difficulties.

[Hard]
00:31:633 (31633|0) - Reduce the LN till 00:31:980 - It different with Easy diff.
If you can make same with "Easy", It will be consitency as intention. make sure for vocal LN.
Feed back :: http://puu.sh/so6mI/0582bbfd21.jpg

00:37:182 (37182|0) - Same with above.
00:42:731 (42731|1) - Same with above.

01:39:610 (99610|1) - Same with above.

01:03:107 - 01:03:280 - You did not put a note here, because of LN.
but This drum is important for the rhythm than your thinking. It makes me weird when I played the song.
Feed back :: http://puu.sh/so6yU/65ab80ec60.jpg

01:14:205 - 01:14:378 - Same with above.

01:59:812 - 02:00:159 - Same with above.
02:11:083 - 02:11:257 - Same with above.
03:03:800 - 03:03:973 - Same with above.

01:27:297 - There is a guitar chord. If you did not bundle it as one LN only, It needs to express.
01:26:257 - ~ 01:27:644 - Feedback :: http://puu.sh/so6V0/09095e4430.jpg

00:19:321 - I forgot to mention about it. Same with above.

02:17:066 (137066|1,137066|0) - End of LN should be snapped here 02:18:280 -
If you did not use the "shiled LN", It's better to hold on next chord section for readable.
don't worry. It will not be make hard to play.

02:18:916 (138916|0) - It is 4snap. here 02:18:887 -
looks delayed a bit, but It still that structure of 4snap surely.

03:02:413 - Add a note for drum. Just a suggestion. but I recommend it.

03:20:881 - ~ 03:21:748 - There is a big gap with pony difficulties.
And It does not have a gap with easy difficulties. You can make some notes for that.
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/so7pG/e16b44a455.jpg

[Pony]
00:19:321 - There is a guitar.... blahblah same mod with Normal.

01:27:297 - Same with above.

00:53:656 - Add a note. If you can add a note here, That's good for vocal rhythm. I dont think so. i think i'll stick with the instrument

01:50:534 - Same with above.

01:06:141 (66141|3,66141|1,66228|2) - hmm, Seems something missing on hitsound.
I feel not good about them. It can be improved at least.

01:17:240 (77240|2,77240|3,77326|1,77326|0) - Same with above.
02:14:118 (134118|0,134118|1,134205|2,134205|3) - Same with above.
03:06:835 (186835|0,186835|2,186921|1) - Same with above.

01:10:303 - You can add a note. There is a snare And Highlight Synth. like 03:10:996 -
It depends on you. That goes in the different pace song. That is same as - 01:21:401 (81401|0,81401|1) -

01:34:754 - Add a note(col3). Hard diff used 2note here.

02:17:066 (137066|1,137066|0) - end of LN... blahblah. Same mod with Normal.
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/so7Yt/5661fcb243.jpg

02:18:916 (138916|1,138916|0) - It is 4snap. Same with Normal 02:18:887 -

03:21:921 - Add a LN(col3) Let's highlight for endling.

Good luck! :)
No reply = fix xD
Thanks for the check :)
Kawawa
Bubbled!

Good luck for qualify!
Topic Starter
Rivals_7
<3 Thanks :)
AchsanLovers
wat, top topic in pending map
Topic Starter
Rivals_7
Dellvangel

Rivals_7 wrote:

@dell mod 2 kali gpp toh :v
Ini yang ketiga kali kalo gitu, no kds.

[General]
  1. 02:38:569 - in Normal and Hard diff, the inherited point here is useless, remove it.
1|2|3|4

[Pony]
  1. 00:19:321 - maybe try this pattern http://puu.sh/tcZch/4b8037d9c3.jpg seems more neat and balance for me and also has simple reversed shield like you did at 00:18:627 (18627|1,18974|1) - .
  2. 00:29:552 - start here, how about to change it like this? http://puu.sh/tcZKv/a2dafc33f3.png , since you mapped 00:23:569 (23569|2,23569|3,23656|1,23656|0) - and 00:24:956 (24956|2,24956|3,25043|0,25043|1) - with same pattern, then could be better if you map 00:29:118 - and 00:30:506 - with same pattern too.
  3. 00:36:055 (36055|0,36055|1,36141|3,36141|2) - ctrl+h this to give same feeling when play this part with 00:34:407 (34407|0,34407|1,34667|0,34667|1) - , i believe you know what i mean.
  4. 00:40:217 - and 00:41:604 - idk, feel kinda boring to play since you already use this kind of pattern (and the mirrored pattern of this) too much in previous part, could be better if you make a variation like [14][23] or [23][14] or [13][24], etc here.
  5. 00:43:685 (43685|1,43771|0,43858|1,43945|0) - personally don't really like this pattern, start from 00:43:251 - you can try this pattern http://puu.sh/td06h/39cfc85c85.jpg , mirrored thrill pattern with 00:32:500 - , or http://puu.sh/td0eM/9a0fec5de1.jpg if you dont want this part has same pattern with 00:38:396 - .
  6. 00:48:974 - i believe this part should be same with 00:46:199 - and 00:51:748 - both note amount and hitsound.
  7. 00:53:656 - add note here, should be same with 00:48:107 - .
  8. 01:04:060 (64060|3) - shoud be mapped with same column with at least one of 01:03:887 (63887|1,63887|2,63887|0) - like you did at 02:00:766 (120766|2,120939|2) - since those part should be same each other.
  9. 01:14:812 (74812|1) - should be jacked with one of 01:14:638 (74638|0,74638|3) - like you did at 01:03:540 (63540|3,63714|3) - .
  10. 01:24:176 (84176|1,84263|0,84349|1) - same with my previous suggestion, just swap the column here, 1 to 2 , and 2 to 1 should help the pattern to follow the flow and balance better.
  11. 01:45:852 - the hitsound should be same with 01:43:078 - and 01:48:627 - .
  12. 01:50:534 - add note here, should be same with 01:44:985 - .
  13. 01:58:858 (118858|1) - actually you can move this to column 4, so it has same column with 01:59:031 (119031|3) - if you aim to have 2 column with same pattern like 01:58:511 (118511|1,118511|2,118685|1,118685|2) - .
  14. 02:23:829 - add one more note at column 1 here? should be same with 02:24:176 - imo, have same kick and electronic sound (maybe piano, idk) although the pitch are different.
  15. 02:59:205 - add a note here, probably at column 4, since it should be same with 00:58:164 - , 01:55:043 - , etc.
  16. 03:04:407 (184407|2) - should be jacked with one of 03:04:233 (184233|1,184233|0) - at least, same reason as previous mod, i think you already got what i mean.
  17. 03:07:788 (187788|0,187875|1,187962|2,188048|3) - eh, the flow feels kinda off since it has same pattern with 03:07:095 (187095|0,187181|1,187268|2,187355|3) - , start 03:07:702 - you can try this pattern http://puu.sh/td1Cx/0fbcceeba9.png .
  18. 03:16:372 - could be better if you add one more note here with the normal-hitclap hitsound here, because it should be same hitsound with 01:26:777 - and the real sound (without hitsound) is decent to be emphasized with double.
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:893 - maybe delete one note here since Pony diff only use 1 note http://puu.sh/tePot/371b5c7c02.jpg , or add one more note in Pony diff? It's up to you.
  2. 00:18:280 (18280|2,18367|3,18454|2) - uhh, personally kinda don't like this kind of pattern, probably move 00:18:367 (18367|3) - to column 2, looks more neat and balance for me.
  3. 00:22:442 (22442|1) - move this to column 4? instead of using [12] to emphasize this part, also to make the jack consistent with 00:21:922 (21922|1,22095|1,22095|2,22269|2) - .
  4. 00:26:084 (26084|0) - eh, if you follow the guitar sound, the LN should be end at 00:26:430 - , like 00:31:633 (31633|0) - .
  5. 00:27:297 (27297|2,27644|0) - what sound that you are follow with those LNs? Could be better if you follow the guitar sound here like you did at 00:26:084 (26084|0) - , 00:24:696 (24696|3) - , etc. More or less the LN would become same with Pony diffs i guess, should be more fun to play.
    00:32:847 (32847|3,33193|2) - ^
    00:38:396 (38396|3,38743|0) - ^
    01:35:274 (95274|0,95621|3) - ^
    ... etc i believe you know which part that similar with these.
  6. 00:45:852 - add note here and LR_Hat Synth hitsound here, like 00:51:401 (51401|0) - .
  7. 00:48:974 - the hitsound should be same with 00:46:199 - and 00:51:748 - .
  8. 00:53:656 - add a note here, should be same like 00:48:107 - .
  9. 01:02:847 (62847|0,62847|2) - delete one of these, should be same note amount with 01:13:945 - .
  10. 01:02:933 (62933|1) - delete this, seems like a ghost note to me, also i noticed that Pony diff didn't have a note at this part.
  11. 01:12:818 - add a note here, should be same with 01:01:719 (61719|2) - , the hitsound too.
  12. 01:24:870 (84870|0,84870|1) - delete one of them, not that loud to be mapped as double and since i saw Pony diff only has 1 note here.
  13. 01:42:731 - add a note and LR_Hat Synth like 01:48:280 (108280|3) - .
  14. 01:45:852 - the hitsound should be same with 01:43:078 - and 01:48:627 - .
  15. 01:50:534 - add a note, for consistency with 01:44:985 (104985|2) - .
  16. 02:00:592 (120592|1) - uhh, should be jacked with one of 02:00:419 (120419|2,120419|3) - like you did at 01:03:540 (63540|3,63714|3) - .
  17. 02:16:893 (136893|2) - move to column 4 for hand balance.
  18. 02:28:685 (148685|2,148685|1) - aren't these should be same with 02:28:165 (148165|3,148165|0) - ? The 1/4s too, also, if you compare it with Pony diff http://puu.sh/teS70/483b878fc2.jpg seems like simplify the pattern around 02:28:165 - is better for diff curve.
  19. 02:31:633 - maybe try this pattern? http://puu.sh/teSiB/14090e0791.png should be better for hand balance.
  20. 02:43:251 - maybe add a note here? feels too empty for me if you keep this blank.
  21. 03:02:413 - add a note here, same 1/4 sound with 03:02:759 (182759|1) - , don't forget the hitsound too.
  22. 03:16:372 - add one more note here with normal-hitclap too, loud enough to be mapped as double imo and for consistency with 03:17:759 (197759|0,197759|3) - .
  23. 03:19:494 - the flow here kinda weird imo, maybe try http://puu.sh/teSTC/65de98484c.jpg the flow should be better if you follow the bass sound.
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:985 - uhh, imo this one should be same not amount and hitsound with 00:12:211 - At least you could break the 1-2-1-2 generic pattern if add one more note here.
  2. 00:32:326 - maybe try this pattern http://puu.sh/tivBc/83775d04f7.png for hand balance and actually a mirror pattern from 00:26:777 - .
  3. 00:39:436 - http://puu.sh/tivFm/56fe87bc66.png should be better for hand balance and pattern variation.
  4. 01:22:962 - this one too, should be same with 01:20:188 - both note amount and hitsound, same reason like before.
  5. 01:23:309 - testplayed the pattern and this part is kinda noticeable has same pattern with 01:21:922 - and 01:24:003 - , suggest to map with with different pattern so the patterns would not feel that boring.
  6. 01:29:899 - the pattern here, umm i didn't really feel it got emphasized enough and the flow felt a bit weird imo with this kind of pattern, maybe try this http://puu.sh/tiw6m/c9ffe434b2.png ?
  7. 01:34:754 (94754|3) - i assume that you cover the vocal sound with this LN, i would rather to cover the piano sound which should be end at 01:35:274 - , feel much better imo.
  8. 01:47:933 (107933|3) - move this to column 3, since you placed 01:45:159 (105159|1) - on column 2 and vice versa. Also if you accept this, move 01:48:627 (108627|2) - to column 4 to make the pattern balance and not overlapping.
  9. 01:50:361 - you missed a note here, should be same with 00:53:482 - , don't forget the hitsound too.
  10. 01:51:055 - start here, uhh, is this a copy paste pattern from 00:54:176 - ? Not a big problem but you can make some variation actually, for example http://puu.sh/tiwAK/339a374167.png or something else.
  11. 02:03:540 (123540|2) - move to column 2, since the column 2 at this part is actually kinda empty.
  12. 02:21:055 (141055|2) - maybe move this to column 1 for hand balance? Since 02:20:881 (140881|3,141055|2,141055|1,141402|3) - looks kinda unbalance for me.
  13. 02:33:020 - are you sure don't want to map one of these notes as a LN for the guitar sound? it would be more fun for play though. If you accept this, the LN should be end at 02:35:101 - .
  14. 02:47:066 (167066|3,167066|2) - i know you want to emphisize this part, but however imo this part isn't really that different with 00:57:471 - and doesn't really worth to be emphasized with 2 LNs, so i would rather map this part with one LN instead for consistency.
  15. 02:50:361 (170361|0) - the LN end is different with Hard and Pony diff, so could be better if you make it like this http://puu.sh/tixhe/ef62f505ee.jpg the 1/2 beat notes are for the drum and the LN become consistent too with other diffs.
  16. 03:12:557 - same like before, should be same note amount and hitsound with 03:09:783 - .
  17. 03:12:557 (192557|3,192904|1,192904|2,193251|3) - could be better if you try to do some re-arrange here to balance this pattern.
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

Dellvangel wrote:

Rivals_7 wrote:

@dell mod 2 kali gpp toh :v
Ini yang ketiga kali kalo gitu, no kds.

[General]
  1. 02:38:569 - in Normal and Hard diff, the inherited point here is useless, remove it.
1|2|3|4

[Pony]
  1. 00:19:321 - maybe try this pattern http://puu.sh/tcZch/4b8037d9c3.jpg seems more neat and balance for me and also has simple reversed shield like you did at 00:18:627 (18627|1,18974|1) - .
  2. 00:29:552 - start here, how about to change it like this? http://puu.sh/tcZKv/a2dafc33f3.png , since you mapped 00:23:569 (23569|2,23569|3,23656|1,23656|0) - and 00:24:956 (24956|2,24956|3,25043|0,25043|1) - with same pattern, then could be better if you map 00:29:118 - and 00:30:506 - with same pattern too. I believe there's should be no biggie here. repetitiveness is actually acceptable enough since the songs nature remain constant
  3. 00:36:055 (36055|0,36055|1,36141|3,36141|2) - ctrl+h this to give same feeling when play this part with 00:34:407 (34407|0,34407|1,34667|0,34667|1) - , i believe you know what i mean. those melody you've pointed is actually on different places. thats why its different
  4. 00:40:217 - and 00:41:604 - idk, feel kinda boring to play since you already use this kind of pattern (and the mirrored pattern of this) too much in previous part, could be better if you make a variation like [14][23] or [23][14] or [13][24], etc here. boring is pretty much subjective thing surely. the thing is that I want to avoid jack in this part so there's that. anyways change something tho
  5. 00:43:685 (43685|1,43771|0,43858|1,43945|0) - personally don't really like this pattern, start from 00:43:251 - you can try this pattern http://puu.sh/td06h/39cfc85c85.jpg , mirrored thrill pattern with 00:32:500 - , or http://puu.sh/td0eM/9a0fec5de1.jpg if you dont want this part has same pattern with 00:38:396 - . i'll do mirror then
  6. 00:48:974 - i believe this part should be same with 00:46:199 - and 00:51:748 - both note amount and hitsound. Changed in all diff
  7. 00:53:656 - add note here, should be same with 00:48:107 - . nope. the emphasize was different and there's no synth there
  8. 01:04:060 (64060|3) - shoud be mapped with same column with at least one of 01:03:887 (63887|1,63887|2,63887|0) - like you did at 02:00:766 (120766|2,120939|2) - since those part should be same each other.
  9. 01:14:812 (74812|1) - should be jacked with one of 01:14:638 (74638|0,74638|3) - like you did at 01:03:540 (63540|3,63714|3) - .
  10. 01:24:176 (84176|1,84263|0,84349|1) - same with my previous suggestion, just swap the column here, 1 to 2 , and 2 to 1 should help the pattern to follow the flow and balance better.
  11. 01:45:852 - the hitsound should be same with 01:43:078 - and 01:48:627 - . Done in all diff
  12. 01:50:534 - add note here, should be same with 01:44:985 - . same comment
  13. 01:58:858 (118858|1) - actually you can move this to column 4, so it has same column with 01:59:031 (119031|3) - if you aim to have 2 column with same pattern like 01:58:511 (118511|1,118511|2,118685|1,118685|2) - .
  14. 02:23:829 - add one more note at column 1 here? should be same with 02:24:176 - imo, have same kick and electronic sound (maybe piano, idk) although the pitch are different. There's no additional kick here actually
  15. 02:59:205 - add a note here, probably at column 4, since it should be same with 00:58:164 - , 01:55:043 - , etc. was intendedly ignored so the emphasize got more feel
  16. 03:04:407 (184407|2) - should be jacked with one of 03:04:233 (184233|1,184233|0) - at least, same reason as previous mod, i think you already got what i mean. yea i did somethin'
  17. 03:07:788 (187788|0,187875|1,187962|2,188048|3) - eh, the flow feels kinda off since it has same pattern with 03:07:095 (187095|0,187181|1,187268|2,187355|3) - , start 03:07:702 - you can try this pattern http://puu.sh/td1Cx/0fbcceeba9.png .
  18. 03:16:372 - could be better if you add one more note here with the normal-hitclap hitsound here, because it should be same hitsound with 01:26:777 - and the real sound (without hitsound) is decent to be emphasized with double.
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:893 - maybe delete one note here since Pony diff only use 1 note http://puu.sh/tePot/371b5c7c02.jpg , or add one more note in Pony diff? It's up to you.
  2. 00:18:280 (18280|2,18367|3,18454|2) - uhh, personally kinda don't like this kind of pattern, probably move 00:18:367 (18367|3) - to column 2, looks more neat and balance for me. that strangely similar in movement so i'll just keep it i think
  3. 00:22:442 (22442|1) - move this to column 4? instead of using [12] to emphasize this part, also to make the jack consistent with 00:21:922 (21922|1,22095|1,22095|2,22269|2) - . [12] is actually on low pitch. also the suggestion will make it a lil' heavy on the right side
  4. 00:26:084 (26084|0) - eh, if you follow the guitar sound, the LN should be end at 00:26:430 - , like 00:31:633 (31633|0) - . it's vocal actually not guitar
  5. 00:27:297 (27297|2,27644|0) - what sound that you are follow with those LNs? Could be better if you follow the guitar sound here like you did at 00:26:084 (26084|0) - , 00:24:696 (24696|3) - , etc. More or less the LN would become same with Pony diffs i guess, should be more fun to play.
    00:32:847 (32847|3,33193|2) - ^
    00:38:396 (38396|3,38743|0) - ^
    01:35:274 (95274|0,95621|3) - ^
    ... etc i believe you know which part that similar with these. This is more simple to hit, while still keeping the diff curve not too far with "Pony". if i made it into a 1/4 staccato LNs like Pony does, would be quite hard for those who still not used to it. alternatively i could use 1/2 LNs on each of them but its still being too bland too play so i decided to made this. if you also notice that those section also had a lil noise of continuous noise like cymbal(?) so its actually relevant enough
  6. 00:45:852 - add note here and LR_Hat Synth hitsound here, like 00:51:401 (51401|0) - .
  7. 00:48:974 - the hitsound should be same with 00:46:199 - and 00:51:748 - .
  8. 00:53:656 - add a note here, should be same like 00:48:107 - . same comment i guess
  9. 01:02:847 (62847|0,62847|2) - delete one of these, should be same note amount with 01:13:945 - .
  10. 01:02:933 (62933|1) - delete this, seems like a ghost note to me, also i noticed that Pony diff didn't have a note at this part.
  11. 01:12:818 - add a note here, should be same with 01:01:719 (61719|2) - , the hitsound too.
  12. 01:24:870 (84870|0,84870|1) - delete one of them, not that loud to be mapped as double and since i saw Pony diff only has 1 note here.
  13. 01:42:731 - add a note and LR_Hat Synth like 01:48:280 (108280|3) - .
  14. 01:45:852 - the hitsound should be same with 01:43:078 - and 01:48:627 - .
  15. 01:50:534 - add a note, for consistency with 01:44:985 (104985|2) - . same
  16. 02:00:592 (120592|1) - uhh, should be jacked with one of 02:00:419 (120419|2,120419|3) - like you did at 01:03:540 (63540|3,63714|3) - .
  17. 02:16:893 (136893|2) - move to column 4 for hand balance.
  18. 02:28:685 (148685|2,148685|1) - aren't these should be same with 02:28:165 (148165|3,148165|0) - ? The 1/4s too, also, if you compare it with Pony diff http://puu.sh/teS70/483b878fc2.jpg seems like simplify the pattern around 02:28:165 - is better for diff curve.
  19. 02:31:633 - maybe try this pattern? http://puu.sh/teSiB/14090e0791.png should be better for hand balance. alternation was intended here
  20. 02:43:251 - maybe add a note here? feels too empty for me if you keep this blank.
  21. 03:02:413 - add a note here, same 1/4 sound with 03:02:759 (182759|1) - , don't forget the hitsound too.
  22. 03:16:372 - add one more note here with normal-hitclap too, loud enough to be mapped as double imo and for consistency with 03:17:759 (197759|0,197759|3) - .
  23. 03:19:494 - the flow here kinda weird imo, maybe try http://puu.sh/teSTC/65de98484c.jpg the flow should be better if you follow the bass sound. I'll done this differently
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  1. 00:14:985 - uhh, imo this one should be same not amount and hitsound with 00:12:211 - At least you could break the 1-2-1-2 generic pattern if add one more note here. uh its somehow different in my eye so i'll just keep it for simplicity
  2. 00:32:326 - maybe try this pattern http://puu.sh/tivBc/83775d04f7.png for hand balance and actually a mirror pattern from 00:26:777 - .
  3. 00:39:436 - http://puu.sh/tivFm/56fe87bc66.png should be better for hand balance and pattern variation.
  4. 01:22:962 - this one too, should be same with 01:20:188 - both note amount and hitsound, same reason like before.
  5. 01:23:309 - testplayed the pattern and this part is kinda noticeable has same pattern with 01:21:922 - and 01:24:003 - , suggest to map with with different pattern so the patterns would not feel that boring.
  6. 01:29:899 - the pattern here, umm i didn't really feel it got emphasized enough and the flow felt a bit weird imo with this kind of pattern, maybe try this http://puu.sh/tiw6m/c9ffe434b2.png ?
  7. 01:34:754 (94754|3) - i assume that you cover the vocal sound with this LN, i would rather to cover the piano sound which should be end at 01:35:274 - , feel much better imo.
  8. 01:47:933 (107933|3) - move this to column 3, since you placed 01:45:159 (105159|1) - on column 2 and vice versa. Also if you accept this, move 01:48:627 (108627|2) - to column 4 to make the pattern balance and not overlapping.
  9. 01:50:361 - you missed a note here, should be same with 00:53:482 - , don't forget the hitsound too.
  10. 01:51:055 - start here, uhh, is this a copy paste pattern from 00:54:176 - ? Not a big problem but you can make some variation actually, for example http://puu.sh/tiwAK/339a374167.png or something else.
  11. 02:03:540 (123540|2) - move to column 2, since the column 2 at this part is actually kinda empty.
  12. 02:21:055 (141055|2) - maybe move this to column 1 for hand balance? Since 02:20:881 (140881|3,141055|2,141055|1,141402|3) - looks kinda unbalance for me.
  13. 02:33:020 - are you sure don't want to map one of these notes as a LN for the guitar sound? it would be more fun for play though. If you accept this, the LN should be end at 02:35:101 - .
  14. 02:47:066 (167066|3,167066|2) - i know you want to emphisize this part, but however imo this part isn't really that different with 00:57:471 - and doesn't really worth to be emphasized with 2 LNs, so i would rather map this part with one LN instead for consistency.
  15. 02:50:361 (170361|0) - the LN end is different with Hard and Pony diff, so could be better if you make it like this http://puu.sh/tixhe/ef62f505ee.jpg the 1/2 beat notes are for the drum and the LN become consistent too with other diffs.
  16. 03:12:557 - same like before, should be same note amount and hitsound with 03:09:783 - .
  17. 03:12:557 (192557|3,192904|1,192904|2,193251|3) - could be better if you try to do some re-arrange here to balance this pattern.
well the rest done on my own way/accept except those mentioned on red xd
tfw third mod is actually longer

not updated ISP sucks. wait a min
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Dellvangel
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Rivals_7
Thanks mz owo

PONEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
IamKwaN
Please provide me a metadata reference for the Source.
helltrot
Thanks.
Topic Starter
Rivals_7

IamKwaN wrote:

Please provide me a metadata reference for the Source.
this is all i could find actually
Official mimori suzuko's page -> http://mimorin.com/discography/disco11/ (list no 2)


and from wikia cuz i cant find something more official than above: http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/My_Little_Pon ... se_version
Lanturn
Pretty sure the source should be "マイリトルポニー ~トモダチは魔法~"



This is why KwaN brought the source field into question here. I honestly haven't found "My Little Pony ~トモダチは魔法~" as a source anywhere myself either.
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Rivals_7
Well the katakana "My Little Pony" is just for the japanese people pronounciation apparently. They also have an official made logo too with "My little pony" being not katakana-ed

Check the official video OP in the tv size (you may search on youtube or see the video in my tv size map. link in desc)

Oh one more thing to note. The show itself is originally not from japanese, its from America (pretty sure you know already) therefore translating "My Little Pony" is just weird since it'll be different with the original imo

I'm on phone currently. I'll try providing more explanation (maybe?) And try to find more valuable source after i'm back with my laptop
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