Feerum wrote:

I really like your style here and i think this Map is ready for Rank. You should contact a Beatmap Nominator!

Feerum wrote:

Random Mod


Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
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Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
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Hello DixonBlackwing! Mod like requested. I like this Song and i really like this Picture. Who is this Girl? Or is this just Fanart
Please tell meee :c I found this randomly actually, but this is Ruri gokou from oreimo >w</ http://oreimo.wikia.com/wiki/Ruri_Gokou

General

Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: Right
Tags: Optional: You could Add the Tag "bell" because cloche is french for bell. Also its Winter related so.. why not c: ok, added
AiMod: Right
Background: Right // i LOVE this Background. I know i saw this Girl somewhere... >w< Oreimo o/
BPM/Offset: Right
Other: --

EZ

00:14:972 - I suggest you to add here a Note. I hear what you follow here but all these notes 00:14:807 you're correct. I forget about it o.o added.(14807|0,15137|1,15302|3,15466|0,15631|2,15796|1) - are connected in the Melody, also you should connect them with your Pattern for better feeling. I will try to repattern this, hope it's better
01:28:653 - Why not add here a note on 2? Very audible music here and follows great the 1/1 Beat! hmm, ok added :3
Awesome diff. Nothing else found

NM

00:30:631 - How about this? It fir really great for Pitch

Screen

nice pattern, followed.
00:36:730 - Add note for Consistency with 00:42:005 (42005|2) - ? same sound. Different pattern. i delete 00:42:005 (42005|2) - . since i don't follow the clap.
00:52:554 (52554|2,52719|3) - CTRL + G for nice pitch catch? :3 kinda hesitate on this at first, but changed because it makes the symettrical pattern with 00:53:763 (53763|1,54203|1) -
Oh my.. again not much. Also a awesome diff! Great Job!

HD

01:31:950 - here you have Chord while LN for Drum but here not 01:16:126 - just mention this you could fix this for consistency c: ok, i delete it.

That was a really short Mod q_q I'm so sorry..
But your Map is awesome. I really like your style here and i think this Map is ready for Rank. You should contact a Beatmap Nominator!
Good luck!

Dellvangel wrote:

Feerum wrote:

I really like your style here and i think this Map is ready for Rank. You should contact a Beatmap Nominator!

Just call Julie and bubble this, Dixon, go go! *throw 1 star again >w<

hikikuman wrote:

Column: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

EZ

No mod here. Your diff is good enough for me:3

NM

00:34:917 (34917|0) - move to 2 nope, it would be too much on column 2 bcause of 00:34:258 (34258|1,35412|1) -
00:40:192 (40192|1) - move to 4 it's actually a bit different with 00:39:532 (39532|2,39532|3) - , hence why i put it in different column.
01:18:434 (78434|0) - move to 3 nope, for balance.
01:18:763 (78763|1,78763|2,79093|0,79093|3) - ctrl J no, because i reject former suggestion.
01:19:423 (79423|1) - move to 1 ^
01:19:587 (79587|3,79752|2) - ctrl J ^
01:19:752 (79752|2,79917|1) - ^ sorry, it would change my ideal flow if it changed.
01:20:082 (80082|2) - move to 1 too close to LN, no.
01:20:247 (80247|0,80412|1) - move 1 to right would be jack with 01:20:741 (80741|2,81071|2) - , so no.
01:25:686 (85686|3) - move to 2 will consider.
01:44:807 (104807|2) - move to 1 no, don't wanna make the doubles in the same column as the previous one.
01:45:137 (105137|3) - move to 3 nope.
01:45:466 (105466|1) - move to 1 i don't wanna jack

HD

00:45:796 (45796|3) - move to 1
00:45:879 (45879|0) - move to 2 it's not a bad idea, might consider it.
00:51:071 (51071|0) - move to 4 ^
00:51:153 (51153|3) - move to 3 ^
01:32:115 (92115|3) - delete. make it looks like 01:26:840 (86840|0,86923|1,87005|2,87087|1,87170|0,87170|2) - This one has a clap sound that i use for doubles.
01:42:664 (102664|2,102664|1,102747|0,102912|2,102994|1,102994|0) - ctrl J very nice! accepted.

Good Luck :3

Dellvangel wrote:

Just call Julie and bubble this, Dixon, go go! *throw 1 star again >w<

Julie wrote:

The day I saw that post, few minutes later I see dixon pm me!! So nice timing haha xD!!!

Got it dixon, good job for not rushing thing, being patient, helping other, kawa and me will reserve icon spot here and help you out! !!! So don't need to search BN >w<.

Julie wrote:

Dellvangel wrote:

Just call Julie and bubble this, Dixon, go go! *throw 1 star again >w<

The day I saw that post, few minutes later I see dixon pm me!! So nice timing haha xD!!!

Got it dixon, good job for not rushing thing, being patient, helping other, kawa and me will reserve icon spot here and help you out! !!! So don't need to search BN >w<.

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Dixon hai

Mod Via ★☭ Верный Mania Queue ★☭

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. Check Red & Green Timing Volume each diff is different, Make sure you fix that :
   EZ
   NM
   HD

EZ

OD : 7
HP : 6

1. For Hitsounds Mod, don't forget apply to all diff
2. 00:14:642 (14642|1) - Missing F here for high bell sound or sound like Hat synth/cimbal, also check here :
   00:30:466 (30466|2) -
   01:19:258 (79258|0) -
   01:24:532 (84532|3) -
3. 00:17:939 (17939|3) - wrong hitsound, i can't hear clap here, C must here 00:18:269 (18269|2) - , same reason like :
   00:31:126 (31126|1,31456|0) -
4. 00:21:071 (21071|1,22554|1) - seem pattern a bit hard for hand balance, since LN + normal note start with left hand and finish with left hand too, try to arrange note to collum 3 or 4, make it different
5. 00:34:752 (34752|2) - move to 4, 00:34:917 (34917|3) - move to 2, and 00:35:412 (35412|1) - move to 3, for pattern balance and variety pattern like 00:45:137 (45137|2,45302|0,45466|3,45961|1) -
6. 00:56:016 (56016|2) - i think better delete it, since you only focus kick sounds and not piano sound like this for consistency rhytim
7. 00:57:994 (57994|2) - remove F, can't hear cimbal or maybe still low pitch. since only hear kick sounds here
8. 00:58:983 (58983|0) - add F for cimbal sound, same reason like
   01:40:192 (100192|0) -
9. 01:06:071 (66071|0) - move to 3, then 01:06:730 (66730|2) - move to 2 for hand and pattern balance
10. 01:18:928 (78928|3) - missing Clap here, also check here :
    01:24:203 (84203|0) -
    01:32:115 (92115|3) -
    01:35:412 (95412|0) -
11. 01:41:840 (101840|1,102005|2) - Ctrl + G for variety pattern and look good for hand play
12. 01:46:785 (106785|3) - better change into normal note, make it different & easy to play
13. 01:46:785 (106785|0,106785|3) - no need 2 soft-hitwhistle here, change 1 note to F for cimbal sounds accepted all.

NM

OD : 7
HP : 7

1. 00:20:906 (20906|2,21071|1) - Ctrl + H for pattern balance and variety
2. 01:09:203 (69203|2) - move to 1, then 01:09:532 (69532|0) - move to 2 for pitch also accepted all.

HD

OD : 8
HP : 8

1. 00:36:730 - missing clap here but already add here before.
2. 00:45:796 - until 00:46:456 - try like this for variety and pitch :
   hmm, ok, followed.. still like the previous one though ;w;
   I'am sure, pattern will be fun like this, also you can try in here 00:51:071 - 00:51:730 -
3. 00:54:038 - still hear piano sounds here isn't it more like synth? and i decide to ignore that.
4. 00:57:664 (57664|1,57829|1) - this 1/2 jack, i think not suitable for pitch, try re;arrange pattern already did, hope it's better
5. 00:58:983 - add F here for cimbal sounds, same reason like :
   01:41:675 (101675|0) - ok.
6. 01:05:741 (65741|0,65824|1,65906|2,65988|3) - add soft-hitwhistle? since you also put in EZ diff, also check here :
   01:29:807 (89807|3,90302|1,90961|0) -
   01:35:082 (95082|1,95576|0) - nice
7. 01:18:763 (78763|2,78763|3,78928|0,78928|1,79093|1,79093|0,79258|3,79258|2) - seem pattern look awkward, my reason : 01:18:763 (78763|3,78763|2,79093|0,79093|1) - same pitch, but you sync with 01:18:928 (78928|0,78928|1,79093|1,79093|0) - try arrange pattern, maybe simmiliar like this 01:24:038 (84038|1,84038|3,84203|2,84203|0,84368|2,84368|1,84532|3,84532|0) - Don't have any idea for this ;w;
8. 01:26:675 (86675|0,86840|0) - avoid this pattern, because different pitch moved.
9. 01:37:225 (97225|3,97390|3,97554|3) - ??? isn't it same pitch? i always think it like that, kinda confusing for me ;w;
10. 01:41:840 (101840|2,102170|2,102335|2) - unbalanced hand ;w; can't think of pattern, and it seems there's nothing i can do considering moving it will just result in more unbalance hand ;w;

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating

86,25

(1-100)

please ignore it, just for fun only

Хорошо~Good Luck..

KawaEE wrote:

Mod

4K ｜1｜2｜3｜4｜

※ I recommend this
EZ HP 6 -> 7
NM HP 7 -> 7.5, OD 7 -> 7.5 actually, because there's many EZ that have 6 HP or even lower in the past BM, i thought that the HP rate is allowed, but ok, changed.

※ Please disable this ▽ in soft-hitwhistle applied note.(like these note 00:10:521 (10521|3) - 00:15:796 (15796|0) - on "NM")
like :: http://puu.sh/lA8Uw/3e309ca298.jpg, http://puu.sh/lA90U/69adcdd119.jpg
It does not provide the multi sound. so it's no need option. Please re-check and fix it! all diff.
all should be :: like http://puu.sh/lA8WA/3a422bb757.jpg Already disable that.


※ Please re-check once again about the hitsound relevancy.
We had a modding about this, but you need to check again.

[EZ]
00:10:521 (10521|1) - Hitsound missing "F" added
you can compare with "NM, HD diff" or like 00:15:796 (15796|2) - 00:21:071 (21071|2) -

00:30:796 (30796|3) - Hitsound change F -> C added
you can compare with 00:25:192 (25192|2,25521|1) - 00:19:917 (19917|2,20247|1) - 00:14:642 (14642|1,14972|0) -
I could see Hitsound relation from this

00:36:895 (36895|1) - Hitsound missing "F" same modding with above 00:10:521 (10521|1) - Hitsound missing "F" added.

[NM]
00:27:499 - add at 1. I could feel beat rhythm at here. there is a string sound.
If add at here, will be more smooth pattern for playable. hmm, ok, added.
yes. you can compare with 00:38:049 (38049|0) -
but 00:27:499 - there is no clap sound. so you don't need add the hitsound.

00:37:390 - I recommend you that add at 3 for clap. here is end part of drum. so keeping beat rhthm.
and If you add it, should be put in hitsound "C" i need to talk to you regarding this.

00:42:664 - 00:43:324 - add a note. for clap sound. there is need a note.(and hitsound should be C)
here is a bit empty feeling than EZ diff pattern. compare with your "EZ diff" ^

00:47:939 - add a note. same reason with this modding reason 00:27:499 - ^

01:03:269 (63269|3) - Hit sound missing "F" compare with EZ diff. added.

01:32:115 - add a note for clap. you had to note on EZ DIFF ^
01:35:412 - add a note for clap. same reason with above ^
01:35:906 (95906|0) - move to 4 and 01:36:071 - add at 1 for clap. same reason with above ^

Good luck !

Julie wrote:

Mod

4K ｜1｜2｜3｜4｜

[HD]

00:05:247 (5247|0) - 00:10:521 (10521|3) - 00:15:796 (15796|0) - 00:21:071 (21071|0) - 00:26:346 (26346|3) - 00:31:620 (31620|1) - 00:52:719 (52719|3) - 01:03:269 (63269|1) - 01:15:137 (75137|3) - 01:18:763 (78763|2) - Remove these icon on the left please http://puu.sh/lA95S.jpg . Since mania is a bit of a special case on hitsound. The thing is those note currently have a sample hitsound, and those cannot be stack, but the note have only one specific sound in play. Mania is a bit special, since usually when people want to add more sample hitsound, but don't have enough note, they have to put it in the sample side instead of the note.
If you listen closely, you won't be able to hear those hitsound you try to add on top of your sample hitsound. Example, keysound map that is all keysounded with sample hitsound (not clap, whistle or finish), they don't have any hitnormal hitsound on them, because each note have one sample hitsound, and those sample hitsound cannot stack, unlike the standard one (clap, whistle and finish). sorry for that, changed all ;w;

00:37:719 - Hmm no more the long LN like these 00:16:620 (16620|3) - 00:27:170 (27170|0) - ? it's actually the same as 00:22:060 (22060|3,22060|0,22142|2,22225|1,22307|3,22390|0,22390|2,22472|1,22554|3,22554|0) - , i intended make it that way because it contain more doubles compares to the timing that you mentioned.

00:42:664 (42664|0,42664|3,42994|0,42994|3) - Try to avoid same column here xD, still have enought spot, and they should feel different tapping spot. ok, changed.

00:46:043 (46043|3) - Shouldn't this sound follow these 00:45:796 (45796|3,45879|2,45961|0,45961|1) - . You should try making a stair here 00:45:796 - to 00:46:043 - , instead of 00:45:796 - to 00:46:043 - if you listen to the song more closely x3. didn't realize that, changed xd

00:51:318 (51318|0) - Same reason as 00:46:043 (46043|3) -, can hear it clear, even if it might look fast. same as above.

01:36:730 - Map this sound, since is supose to follow this sound 01:36:565 - , and this sound 01:36:895 - should follow this 01:36:730 - . Just like this part 01:37:225 (97225|3,97390|3,97554|3) - nggh, is it the right timing? because i really can't hear anything on that timing.

01:37:225 (97225|3,97390|3,97554|3) - Hmm why is there suddendly like 3 note in the same column? The instrument might be the same, but the pitch is clearly different for 01:37:225 (97225|3,97390|3) - xD. These 2 01:37:390 (97390|3,97554|3) - can stay in the same column. ok, changed.

01:39:532 (99532|3,99697|0,99697|2) - This is a bit weird, 01:39:532 - this should have more note then this 01:39:697 - . Is way more important as well. actually, 01:39:532 - doesn't have "hard beat" that i use for double notes, while 01:39:697 (99697|2,99697|0,99862|3,99862|1,100192|1,100192|2,100357|3,100357|0) - does have that "hard" beat. if i use double notes for the bell, i would only make doubles on 01:39:862 (99862|1,99862|3,100192|1,100192|2) - instead, but i'm not.

01:46:620 (106620|0) - Hmm forgot your clap here? XD added.

Good luck !

Raediaufar wrote:

I just realised that the bg changed again lol.

Ambil bintangnya chuuu~~

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Eeh wait, should be the source is jubeat copious APPEND ?

Confirmed by these source
http://www26.atwiki.jp/jubeat/pages/546.html
http://www.konamistyle.jp/sp/jubeat_cop ... index.html

But you should recheck these again and maybe talked with the bns, good luck

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Raediaufar wrote:

I just realised that the bg changed again lol.

Ambil bintangnya chuuu~~

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Eeh wait, should be the source is jubeat copious APPEND ?

Confirmed by these source
http://www26.atwiki.jp/jubeat/pages/546.html
http://www.konamistyle.jp/sp/jubeat_cop ... index.html

But you should recheck these again and maybe talked with the bns, good luck

Before i reply...

Thank youuuu for the 4 stars.... ;w;
you're insane dudeeee :3

and, as for the source, according to what kwan said to me, https://puu.sh/lChy6/dda91c5466.png , it's better if i put jubeat copious as source instead.
I asked julie earlier, and he said that i have 4 choices for the metadata source, so i think i will stick with this ;w;

Raediaufar wrote:

Ahh ok, since this song is also available in lot of games and metadata now is a really sensitive thing, so I post it here to avoid dq because of metadata. Like I said before that you should recheck this again to make sure is your source is right, or me. I have also search to make sure that this song is also available of jubeat copious but from all I web that I check this song is only available on APPEND and reflect beat limelight x.x

and julie is a girl lol

Julie wrote:

Next Check

4K ｜1｜2｜3｜4｜

[General]

Metadata : Yeah like I told you, you can either put the jubeat name like people putting beatmania IIDX, without putting the version of IIDX. So yeah, like I told you APPEND was fine x3. Don't forget to fix it. already fixed <3

[NM]

00:09:038 - Keep it one note like you did here 00:07:060 - 00:09:697 - . Also because to give way more impact hitting this 00:09:368 - . Done.

00:12:664 - Keep this part one note, it should be like 00:15:302 - add note at 00:15:302 - . because i also add 2 notes at 00:20:576 -

01:28:983 - and 01:31:785 (91785|3) - Isn't this supose to be 2 notes due to that drum sound being kinda loud. add at 01:28:983 - not add at 01:31:785 (91785|3) - , only hear a faint melody here, and at this part i don't think it worth a note.

01:44:313 - Should be the same amount of note as here 01:41:675 - . okay, also delete at 01:39:038 - to keep it consistent.

Good luck! o.O

Kawawa wrote:

Next Check

4K ｜1｜2｜3｜4｜

[HD]
00:05:247 (5247|0) - http://puu.sh/lDuHw/88231c36c8.jpg Please disable this. fixed, i missed this.

01:44:642 - ~ 01:45:631 - I think that this part requires a more obvious expression.
01:44:972 - remove one, one is enough. when I saw around pattern, here only has a wek strcture(not clap sounds and not string)
so You can consider like this this :: http://puu.sh/lDzJE/8e9d1f95ff.jpg
explaination △ each focus on.. col 1,2 chord is clap and base beat. col 3,4 chord is string sounds. apply your suggestion at 01:39:532 - 01:40:357 - , and i reverse it at 01:44:642 - ~ 01:45:631 - , i do not move doubles at 01:39:368 - 01:44:642 - , because it has different melody compares to the doubles after those timing, so i want to make it different.

Good luck! O.o

Gamu wrote:

Hello. As per your request: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/393945

1. Artist: Qrispy Joybox
2. Title: cloche
3. Source: jubeat copious
   "APPEND" is part of album name.

<Reference>

1. http://puu.sh/lSmb2/73ee531e71.png
2. http://www.konami.jp/bemani/jubeat/copious/
3. http://www.konamistyle.jp/sp/jubeat_copious_ap/index.html?style=DB

Good luck~ :3

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Thank you for the check Gamu!
EDIT: Oh, so better put APPEND on tags? o.o
Oh well, since kwan also said so, will change it later.

Gamu wrote:

Hello. As per your request: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/393945

1. Artist: Qrispy Joybox
2. Title: cloche
3. Source: jubeat copious
   "APPEND" is part of album name and it is not included in the game name.

<Reference>

1. http://puu.sh/lSmb2/73ee531e71.png
2. http://puu.sh/lSmCj/ef4ea5f67e.png
3. http://www.konami.jp/bemani/jubeat/copious/
4. http://www.konamistyle.jp/sp/jubeat_copious_ap/index.html?style=DB

Good luck~ :3

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Acordding to the post aboved
This map's source should be: jubeat copious APPEND or REFLECT BEAT limelight
It does explained well by Spy
More: it's an unofficial website (https://remywiki.com/Cloche) But it does correct
Anyway, good luck!

sherrysina wrote:

i think it's REFLEC BEAT, not reflect .w.

Gamu wrote:

I deeply apologize for mistaking that source. Spy is right: p/4732048
Source must be jubeat copious APPEND or jubeat

I rechecked about source in some sites.
jubeat copious was released in September 15, 2011.
jubeat copious APPEND was released in March 14, 2012.
So, jubeat copious APPEND is actually exist, not part of album name. I was wrong.




The following links are all unofficial site, but they are reliable source because all information are the same.
・http://am-net.xtr.jp/game/profile.cgi?_v=1321927277
・http://www26.atwiki.jp/jubeat/pages/544.html
・https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jubeat
・https://remywiki.com/Jubeat_copious_APPEND

feel free to call me for rebubble/requalify if you need me.

Raediaufar wrote:

Aww well, I've told you earlier :c

Dellvangel wrote:

Gratz, Dixon! >w<b
RIP my map, too many things happened to my map orz

Feerum wrote:

Congratulations. You deserve it

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Your first qualified map, Congratulations !
i hope this can be ranked

nice song and beatmap
<3 dat bungaku shoujo bg XD

kbtulan ktmu, dan ane suka

sherrysina wrote:

qualify! hyyype!
congratulations! >w<

Critical_Star wrote:

Grats!

ExUsagi wrote:

woh good luck on qualification..

also some sauce : as for HD diff, in the main part of this song, you could just simply layer the synthesizer with different structure rather than repeating same structure everywhere, good thing some ln for last 3-4 beat make it vary, though it doesn't feels vary enough.. just in my opinion ;3

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

wow so fast

Congru senpi >w<)b

ExUsagi wrote:

Woh fast.. The ln was fine in the 1st place, but the generic 2121212121 pattern in main part could be better.. dang shoulda point out before requlifu.. Q.Q