1. EZ - 4Key (1.34 stars, 317 notes)
2. HD - 4Key (2.79 stars, 880 notes)
3. NM - 4Key (2.07 stars, 576 notes)

AND by
Kawawa X Julie

Mapset list
EZ By me
NM By me
HD By me

NlHIL wrote:

[HD]
00:21:895 - add LN as 00:54:038 (54038|1,54038|2) - ? 00:54:038 - is different sound, so no.
00:42:994 - to 00:43:653 - add a LN?Ok.
01:31:785 - to 01:32:445 - ^
00:53:873 - add? No, Not following that sound.
01:03:269 (63269|3) - end at 01:06:071 - No, the sound clearly stop at 01:05:412 - ..
01:15:137 (75137|3) - ^ 01:16:620 - ?end at 01:16:291 - instead.

Eternalie wrote:

Nyaho

mod desu~
only suggestion feel free to ignore


[box=nyah]Collumn 4K= 1/2/3/4
[HD]00:41:510 (41510|0) - Should be two notes according to previous patterns same sound as 00:40:192 (40192|0,40192|2) - Done
00:49:423 (49423|3) - ^ same suggestion (note that ,you may consider not changing if it breaks the map's flow) ^, and repattern a bit.
00:56:016 (56016|3,56016|2) - this one only need 1 note imo will consider
01:02:609 (62609|1) - (optional) add a note to 2 no sound, so no.
[NM]
00:10:521 (10521|1) - add a note to 2 (for the emphasis) also you did here : 00:05:247 (5247|3,5247|2) - agree
00:56:346 (56346|3) - this should looks more like this one imo : 00:58:983 (58983|2,58983|0,59313|3) - rearrange
01:02:609 - add note to 3 sure :3
01:03:104 - add note to 3 ^
[EZ]
00:18:269 (18269|3) - add note to 4 like you did here : 00:12:994 (12994|3) - nice ^^
01:14:477 - add note i will consider this.
01:14:642 - add note , thoose two follow the instrument you were following before : 01:09:532 (69532|1,69697|2) - ok
01:37:060 (97060|0) - this Ln should start here : 01:37:142 - and this one 01:36:236 (96236|2) - should ene here : 01:37:142 - but i heard the rising sound started at 01:37:060 (97060|0) - ;_; will look for more opinion about this.



Good Luck , have a nice day ^^/

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Hi Dixon! Mod from your request!

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[General]

▶BG: No problem
▶MP3: Your mp3 kbps has been overed 192 kbps. You should change in 128~192 Will change it :3
▶Spread: No problem
▶AI mod: Also AI mod catched about your mp3. Please change this. ^
▶Audio and Hitsound: Told me I didn't add hitsound yet.
▶Timing: wtf I know it's 180BPM on reflec beat lol but seems No problem
▶Etc: on your EZ and NM. Your OD and HP is too low. I just recommend it.
EZ : OD=7 / HP=7 or 6 Keep, wanna make different OD and HP with NM
NM : OD=7 or 7.5 / HP=7 or 7.5Keep for a while.
HD : OD=8 / HP=8^

[EZ]

• 00:17:280 (17280|3) - I suggest to move to 1 column this guy.Move to 2 instead and if you follow this. 00:17:609 (17609|1) -Sure. Move to 3. 00:15:796 (15796|2) - This LN is on right hand. and there has a note on 4 column. It also use right hand. It can be hard to some EZ players. so I suggest this for balance. Actually. LN start point + Note is fine like this 00:21:071 (21071|0,21071|1) - It's not hard. but LN finish point + Note is hard for judge and balance. make the pattern similar with 00:21:071 (21071|0,21071|1) -
  
  00:23:543 (23543|2) - How about move to 2 this note? Seems column 2 empty too long time. also column 3 has two notes on close point. 00:22:554 (22554|2)Moved.
  
  00:26:346 (26346|1) - Move to 1 and 00:27:829 (27829|0) - Move to 3. It also for balance as I said on 00:17:280 - This timing point. maybe I don't have to explain twice XDMoved, and repattern a bit.
  
  00:50:576 (50576|1,51236|2) - Ctrl + J. It's just for more comfortable for playing. For make some distance with this notes. 00:48:928 (48928|1) - 00:52:554 (52554|2) - Moved.
  
  01:02:445 (62445|0) - How about move to 2 this guy and 01:03:104 (63104|1) - Move to 1? For more comfortable for playing.Moved.
  
  01:05:741 (65741|1) - Recommend to remove this long note. I know it has some starry sound. But it's too awkward due to hitsound. It has not accurate sound. If you fine something good hitsound. It can use I guess but it's too awkward and seems unnecessary for now. But not add anything until the next notes would be also too awkward for me ;w; I will Consider.
  
  01:14:807 (74807|2) - Move to 2.Done. 01:14:313 (74313|2,75137|2) - Is it too close right? :>It would change the balance if i moved it, keep for now.
  
  01:37:060 (97060|0) - If you want use this long note. You have to make more longer this note 01:36:236 (96236|2) - until 01:37:719 - Here. It's not new melody. just added a new melody with 01:36:236 (96236|2) - What sound you are following this note. If you follow it. 01:37:719 (97719|2,98049|3) - Please re-arrange this.Rearrange, didn't realize it is still one melody, how baka of me ;w;
  
  01:44:313 - Here has some kick sound also drum symbol sounds. Is it intention? I suggest to add a note in here.added.

[NM]

• 00:15:796 (15796|2) - How about move to 4? For make some distance with this notes. 00:15:466 (15466|2,16620|2) - moved.
  
  00:22:060 (22060|2,22390|2) - Isn't it too hard...? How about this?
  
  This

  
  Nice
  
  00:35:247 (35247|1,35412|2) - Ctrl + H for balance. Maybe you can feel if you try this :>Ctrl+H'ed
  
  00:53:543 (53543|3) - This note is too unnecessary. First. You can see your HD diff. HD diff doesn't have any notes on this timing also HD diff has notes in 00:54:038 - This timing. I just want to recommend it. 00:52:719 (52719|0) - Change your start point until 00:54:203 - Here and 00:53:543 (53543|3) - Remove this.That LN is for the rising sound, if i remove it, i have to remove all the LN that have those rising sound, keep.
  
  00:56:346 (56346|3,56675|1) - I want to something to tell about this long notes.
  First. HD diff doesn't use any long note in this timing also seems following same sounds NM also HD. and actually this two sounds should finish in here 00:56:840 - both of us. Change your finish timing points or remove these. and If you remove this notes. 00:56:510 - 00:56:675 - You can add the notes on this timing points too. Hmm, ok, removed, and add additional notes.
  
  00:58:983 (58983|0,59313|3) - Same as above. Don't have to explain same stuff twice right? <: ^
  
  01:00:796 - ~ 01:02:115 - Explain for this pattern.
  Maybe you make this pattern for consistency with this pattern (00:55:357 - ~ 00:56:016) but. It's different sounds. 00:55:357 - This pattern surely have accurate 1/1 powerful sound. But 01:00:796 - It isn't. Just recommend it like 00:59:477 - ~ 01:00:466 - This pattern. It will be more good for playing and will improve your pattern more good quality.repatterned.
  
  01:16:126 (76126|0) - Move to 4 more good hand balance. Please don't make weight to only a hand.ok.

[HD]

• 
  00:08:873 - 00:09:203 - I recommend to add the notes in this timings. well... in my point of view. You're using two note in powerful kick sound or powerful melody like these. Powerful kick sound: 00:08:049 - / Powerful melody: 00:07:884 - So I suggest add the notes because there have some powerful melody. For consistency your pattern.Added.
  
  00:19:093 (19093|2) - Move to 2. 00:18:763 (18763|2,18928|2,19093|2) - It's kinda heavy in my opinion. and if you move to 2. It can be a good pattern! for more balance and some pitch.Very nice :3
  
  00:21:895 - I didn't say about this part on NM. NM has a long note from 00:21:895 - until 00:22:554 - Here. Why you're using long note on NM. I guess for 1/4 sounds. 1/4 can be hard on NM but HD isn't it because you're using a lot of 1/4 patterns on HD but didn't use on NM diff. so... I recommend it! 00:22:060 - ~ 00:22:390 - Add 1/4 pattern as you wish. Here have 1/4 sound. It would be fun and good for spread balance.add many notes for them! I didn't realize that 1/4 bell sound until you mentioned it! thank you
  
  00:25:192 (25192|2,26346|1) - Why Did you use only finish hitsound only this notes...?ngghh, i accidentally add it ;w;
  
  00:32:527 (32527|3) - I want to tell this snap. First. you can see the snap on your NM diff. It's different right? that means the snap is wrong one of the two.
  I think more correct snap is here. 00:32:527 - But it's not accurate sound. I just want tell this. 'Follow the main snap if snap is not sure.' so I recommend to move to 00:32:445 - This timing. moved.
  
  00:35:576 - Why empty? Here should have a sound what you're following the sounds.added.
  
  00:54:038 - As I said on NM. Choose your self.For this, i follow the continuous some kind of drum sound, not the rising sound.
  
  00:59:642 (59642|2) - Move to 4 for balance. It's too heavy on column 3 also column 4 seems lonely right?moved.
  
  01:02:280 (62280|3) - Same as above. move to 3. moved.
  
  01:15:961 - For suggest spread with your NM diff.
  You're using a long note on NM diff. also using long note + some notes which are following main melody. I think you don't reference other diffs when you was making diffs. and if you think like this. 'LN + 1/4 snap is too hard'. check again your HD diff. 01:11:016 - A lot of patterns are using long note + 1/4 snap. It's not all. so I suggest this. 01:15:961 - Make a LN until 01:16:620 - Here and 01:16:126 (76126|2,76291|0,76373|1,76456|2,76456|0,76538|3) - Re-arrange this notes. Rearranged it a bit.
  
  01:20:412 (80412|3) - It have to finish here 01:21:236 - and make other long note if you want to keep long note + normal notes pattern.also rearranged, and try to construct all the similar sound with this.

Before finish my mod. I want to tell you what I'm thinking.
Please consider about consistency on your HD and NM diffs.
Seems following other sounds but long notes are too incorrect.
Too difference inconsistency pattern can make unrankable issue.
You can use this on your editing
File -> Open Difficulty -> For Reference ◀ If you use this. You can improve more your spread!Great, Thank you

Good luck with your beat map! :> Thank you!

Steins wrote:

General* Timing : --
* Kiai : 63269 -> move here 63434 maybe Nope, Too awkward.
* AImod : ctrl+shift+a open this (ergg) I will change the MP3 XD..
* BG/Audio : --
* Metada: Jubeat copious APPEND, Jukebeat in tag Nice.
* Diffspread : --
* OD/HP : 7/7 at EZ, 7/7 at NM (F_C noticed also this damnn) nghhh.. okk.. will change it then.

Other* Column : 0|1|2|3

EZ(old vers i think)

1. 00:01:456 (1456|2) - move to 3 ? no.
2. 00:05:247 (5247|2) - move to 1 ? yes
3. 00:06:730 (6730|1) - move to 0 ? no.
4. 00:07:060 (7060|0) - move to 2 ? nope.
   try to make perfect balance hands with your patterns
5. 00:10:357 (10357|3,10521|1) - ctrl + h ? no, The LN will get jacked ;w;
6. 00:14:807 (14807|2) - add note pitch added.
7. 00:14:972 (14972|3) - add note, drum ~ But i already add this one ..
8. 00:15:302 (15302|2) - ^added, and i delete 00:15:466 -
9. 00:20:082 (20082|0) - / 00:20:576 (20576|0) - same thing as before move to this 00:19:917 - , done.
10. 00:20:906 (20906|2,21071|1) - move to 3|2 No.
11. 00:22:554 (22554|2,22884|3) - ctrl + h ? No, jack column again if i do that.
12. 00:22:554 (22554|3) - at this part try to focus sounds on red line ~
13. 00:27:829 (27829|0) - ^nah, too awkward in red snap, so no.
14. 00:34:093 (34093|3) - you try to focus high sound like here consider. but i don't want to add double notes on that.
15. 00:36:730 (36730|1) - move to 0 ?Will consider.
16. 00:36:895 (36895|3) - finish here 00:38:708 (38708|1) - I don't know... isn't it only the echo?
17. 00:39:368 (39368|2) - same thing here you have sound 00:39:532 (39532|0) - / 00:39:862 (39862|1) - I already add on this timing before.
18. 01:29:313 (89313|3) - here like this Image error.
19. use playback rating 50% for fix LN

try to refix this diff with my advices ~ also don't skip drum even if it's EZ diff you should notice drum "sometimes"Will reconstruct this.

NM (old vers i think)

1. 00:05:247 (5247|3) - fnish here 00:06:236 (6236|2) -
2. 00:06:071 (6071|0) - start here 00:06:236 (6236|1) - ^ and this, It's clear the rising sound started from 00:06:071 -
3. 00:10:521 (10521|3,11346|0) - ^
4. 00:12:005 (12005|2) - move to 1 ? Ok.
5. 00:14:477 (14477|0) - move to 1 ? Nice.
6. 00:14:807 (14807|1,14972|2) - why not ctrl + h ? seems more fun >.< will break the pattern ;w;
7. 00:21:071 (21071|1) - move to 2? sure.
8. 00:22:060 (22060|2,22390|2) - i don't think it's a good pattern, seems like AC (auto-convert) pattern, so maybe move to 1 ? already moved by F_C's mod.
9. 00:35:247 (35247|1,35412|2) - ctrl + h ? already did this in F_C Mod.
10. 00:45:796 (45796|3,46291|0,46291|2) - ctrl + h ? and move 00:46:456 (46456|1) - to 2 ? Nice, Ctrl+H'd for variation.
11. 00:49:423 (49423|2,49423|0) - high sound is here 00:49:587 (49587|1) - Repatterned.
12. 00:51:071 (51071|3) - i think notes will be better at this place
13. 00:52:060 (52060|1,52060|2) - delete and add note here 00:52:225 (52225|0) - ?Nope.
14. 00:54:697 (54697|0) - remove ? sound a bit too much here Nope.
15. 00:56:346 (56346|2,56346|3) - remove and add just pitch here 00:56:510 (56510|2) - Nope, but i repatterned it a bit.
16. 00:57:664 (57664|1) - delete ?No.
17. 00:59:972 (59972|1) - ^ ? ^
18. 01:00:631 (60631|2) - you have the same sound than 01:00:302 (60302|2) - at this place No change.
19. 01:05:741 (65741|1) - delete ? Keep, for consistency.
20. 01:10:192 (70192|1) - delete high sound start here 01:10:357 (70357|3) - this note is for melody.
21. 01:10:851 (70851|2) - ^ 01:11:016 (71016|1) - ^
22. 01:15:137 (75137|1) - move to 0 ? Nope.
23. 01:16:126 (76126|0) - move to 3 ? already at 3 o.o
24. 01:27:335 (87335|1) - same sound than 01:27:499 (87499|1) - no sound here.
25. 01:31:785 (91785|3) - remove and add just one note here 01:31:785 (91785|2) - ? I can't do that.
26. 01:35:906 (95906|2) - move to 3 ~ Will consider.
27. 01:37:060 (97060|0) - LN will be better if you start here 01:37:390 (97390|1) - The rising sound already started far before that.
28. 01:39:038 (99038|3) - high sound start here 01:39:203 (99203|1) - so maybe delete ~ also you can add note 01:39:120 (99120|2) - Nope./
29. 01:43:159 (103159|1) - move to 2 ? Yes, and rearrange some parts.

HD

1. 00:06:153 (6153|1) - LN here ~ Nope ~
2. 00:08:379 (8379|0,8379|2) - delete one note, if you try follow drum and high sound, you should notice "finish" drum first~ It is for the kick.
3. 00:10:521 (10521|3,11346|1) - ^ 00:11:428 (11428|2) - The first one is for the bell, and the second, I didn't add anything.
4. 00:17:197 (17197|1) - delete ~ It's for the 1/4 starry sound, not the main melody.
5. 00:18:598 (18598|1) - ^ Will consider.
6. 00:18:928 (18928|1,18928|2) - ^ It's for the kick.
7. 00:19:423 (19423|1,19423|2) - ^ loud drum beat here ;w;
8. between 00:22:884 (22884|2,22884|3) - / 00:25:851 (25851|2,25851|0) - this don't follow the rythme, it's a bit strange imo But all of them follow the sounds that I focused on.
9. 00:27:499 (27499|3,27582|1) - i heard anything here so delete ~It's a loud starry sound ;w;
10. 00:32:527 (32527|1) - LN here ? added at 00:32:445 - instead.
11. 00:38:049 (38049|2) - delete follow only 1 sound at this part wanna keep it consistent.
12. 00:44:148 (44148|2) - i think just one note here will be good can't do that.
13. 00:48:269 (48269|0) - my advice here is, remove LN and make your stair properly Nope.
14. 00:53:296 (53296|2,53791|1) - a bit strange you have main another sound than this It's actually the similar sound with the starry sound in the 1/4 stream that i make in conjunction with LN.
15. 00:55:851 (55851|1,55851|0,56016|2,56016|3) - same pattern for different sound ? Will try to repattern some part.
16. 00:57:994 (57994|3,57994|2) - ^ ^
17. 01:03:269 (63269|3) - start here 01:03:434 (63434|1) - ? Nope.
18. 01:06:236 (66236|1,66401|1,66401|3,66565|0,66730|3,66730|2) - hard to understand wich sound you focus one note is for the melody, and two notes are for the kick or drum beat.
19. 01:08:708 (68708|3,68708|0,68873|1) - ^
20. 01:10:192 (70192|1) - high sound start here 01:10:357 (70357|3) - Repattern.
21. 01:13:571 (73571|2) - / 01:13:901 (73901|2) - like here, i think you can add note I only hear the echo on that part, so no.
22. 01:15:961 (75961|0) - remove and 01:15:137 (75137|3) - finish here 01:16:126 (76126|2) - Nope.
23. 01:18:598 (78598|2) - delete ~ It's pretty loud ;w;
24. 01:25:686 (85686|0,86510|3) - here 01:26:593 (86593|1) - Already discussed that with F_C before, and decided to snap it on white line to prevent confusion because of unclear sound.
25. 01:31:456 (91456|1) - add note and LN 01:31:456 (91456|0) - start here 01:31:620 (91620|1) - nope.

it's not bad but, you should use sometimes playback rating 25% for LN or something else, also try to keep same pattern for each sounds, it's a good mapset but can be better good luck ~

Dellvangel wrote:

Mark for mod, poke me after you apply all previous mod >w<b

Here is my mod
M4M

Click here

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[EZ]
* 00:06:730 (6730|2,7060|0) - swap the col, because 00:06:730 - is loud sound, for better flow.
* 00:07:719 (7719|1,8049|3) - swap this too for better flow and balance.
* 00:12:005 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3820445 for better flow and balance.
* 00:20:247 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3820464 ^.
* 00:22:554 (22554|2,23543|1) - if you applied above, swap the col.
* 00:24:203 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3820478 for balance and flow.
* 00:27:829 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3820494 ^.
* 00:34:917 (34917|1) - move to col 4? for balance.
* 00:36:895 (36895|2,37390|0) - swap the col? for note variation, see this 00:36:071 (36071|1,36236|2) - .
* 00:46:620 (46620|2,46785|3,47280|1,47445|2,47445|3) - not balance, do something. Fixed.
* 00:58:324 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3820547 balance and better flow.
* 01:14:807 (74807|2) - move to col 2 for balance.
* 01:19:258 (79258|1,79917|0,80247|1) - swap the col for better flow and balance.
* 01:24:368 (84368|1) - to col 4, 01:24:532 (84532|3) - to col 1, for better flow.
* 01:25:274 (85274|2) - blue line? really? It's accidentally placed XD.. thx for pointing it out.
* 01:27:499 (87499|1) - move to col 2 for balance.
* 01:33:269 (93269|0,93434|1,93598|3,94093|0,94587|2,94752|1) - ctrl + h for balance and better flow.
* 01:39:368 (99368|2,99862|2,100357|2) - hmm, do something. Already did
* 01:45:466 (105466|1) - move to col 4? for balance.
All Applied! Very helpful mod!

[NM]
* 00:07:060 (7060|2,7884|1) - swap col, for balance.
* 00:09:862 (9862|1) - to col 1, 00:10:192 (10192|0) - to col 3.
* 00:11:346 (11346|0,12170|0) - too hard for play, try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3820629 .
* 00:18:434 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3820637 for better flow.
* 00:26:016 (26016|1,26181|2) - swap col for better flow.
* 00:36:071 (36071|1,36401|1,36730|1) - do something about this. Already did
* 00:46:950 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3820683 for better flow.
* 00:57:005 (57005|1,57335|1,57664|1,57994|1) - do something. It's intentional because of melody.
* 01:02:445 (62445|0) - move to col 2, 01:02:774 (62774|0,62939|3,63104|2) - ctrl + h, 01:02:774 (62774|1) - to col 3.
* 01:15:961 (75961|1,76785|1) - too hard for play, try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3820716 .
* 01:30:631 (90631|2,90961|3) - swap col? easier for play.Applied all beside the red noted one.
* ..... to be continue ...

i'll finish this mod tomorrow ..

Dellvangel wrote:

Part 2, no kds.

Click here

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[NM]
* 00:08:214 (8214|3) - move to 2, for balance.
* 01:16:126 (76126|3) - move to 1, for balance.
Applied all!
[HD]
* 00:04:587 (4587|2,4917|3,5247|2) - swap col, 3 to 4, 4 to 3 for balance and better flow imo.
* 00:06:730 (6730|0) - move to 2? for balance.
* 00:08:873 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3823674 for better flow.
* 00:39:038 (39038|1) - move to 1, for balance.
* 00:41:510 (41510|2,41675|1) - swap the col, 00:41:840 (41840|3) - move to col 2.
* 00:44:477 (44477|1) - move to 1 for balance.
* 00:56:675 (56675|2,56840|3) - swap the col for balance and better flow.
* 01:06:071 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3823709 .
* 01:07:719 (67719|2) - move to 4, 01:07:884 (67884|3) - move to 3 .
* 01:08:708 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3823719 for balance and better flow.
* 01:11:346 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3823727 . For this, I rearrange it in my own way because i change the LN before this pattern.
* 01:16:785 (76785|1) - move to 3 for balance.
* 01:17:609 (77609|0) - move to 3, 01:17:774 (77774|2) - move to 4, 01:17:939 (77939|3) - move to 3.
* 01:18:763 (78763|0,78928|1) - move to right side 1x.
* 01:38:379 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3823741 1/2 thrill for better flow.
* 01:41:016 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3823746 .
* 01:42:170 (102170|1,102335|2) - if you applied above, swap the col.
* 01:43:653 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3823758 .
* 01:45:466 (105466|2,105631|2,105796|3,105961|3,106126|1,106291|1,106456|2,106620|2) - hmm, do something. Changed.All Applied!

Good luck!

erlinadewi- wrote:

Hi

Mod Requested from Queue

AiMod > change bitrate mp3 to 192 Already change.

4K Coloum |1|2|3|4|

EZ

00:20:906 (20906|2,21071|3) - ctrl j Alright.
00:27:829 (27829|2) - move to 4 ok..
00:36:730 (36730|2,36895|1) - ctrl j No, for variation
00:55:027 (55027|2,55192|3) - ^ ok.

NM

00:03:928 (3928|0) - move to 3 No, for balance.
00:08:873 (8873|3) - http://puu.sh/kNuuZ/74803d967a.png Middle column would be too empty then.
00:20:247 (20247|3) - move to 2 no.
00:20:412 (20412|0) - move to 4 no.
00:24:038 (24038|1) - move to 2 It is already at 2.
01:02:445 - why not double? opps, missed. ok. added.
01:03:104 - ^ ^

HD

00:02:939 (2939|2,3269|1) - ctrl j boleh juga.
00:17:774 (17774|1,17939|2) - ^ ^
00:22:554 (22554|0) - move to 4 jangan.
00:37:719 (37719|2) - move to 4 ok.
01:05:741 (65741|0) - ^ ini ga,
01:19:752 (79752|0,79917|1) - ctrl j Nice.
01:27:499 (87499|0,87499|3) - jadikan 1 note aja. suaranya gak keras Ane pertimbangin lagi.

just my suggest. So, feel free to reject ya
Makasih yaa
GoodLuck >w<)9

Layout:

4ki: |0|1|2|3|

Frim4503 wrote:

Col : 1,2,3,4,5,6,7
m4m (maybe)

[General]
-BG : ok
-Mp3 : ok
-Hitsound : no hs Will add soon.
-Difficulty : ok
-AI Mod : ok
-Comments : relax...~

NM

00:03:269 (3269|2) - make double. high pitch Nice.
00:25:192 - add note for cymbal Ok..
00:34:258 - http://puu.sh/kOJJM/addcd644d7.png. try this or rearange. first double and last double notes is differ sound Rearrange it in my own way.
01:39:532 (99532|3,99862|0,100192|2) - make double. cymbal+high picth Ok.
01:44:807 (104807|3,105137|2,105466|1) - same ^

other diff are fine
good luck Thank you

Xenophilius wrote:

Hi! From M4M from Kama x Findus' modding queue.

Layout:

4ki: |0|1|2|3|

HD

1. I think hitsound volume is relly loud. Suggest to make it something like 20~18% ok, changed.
2. 00:03:598 (3598|0,3763|1,3928|3) - For pitcch I suggest:
   00:03:928 (3928|3) - to 2
   00:03:598 (3598|0,3763|1,3928|3) - Ctrl + H 3 notes
   00:04:093 (4093|2,4093|0) - Move 1 column to rightand 00:04:423 (4423|1) - by 1 column to right to not jack Sorry, keep for now
3. 00:09:368 - Add in 2, there is an extra sound here. The stong bell. Ok.
4. 00:14:148 (14148|2,14313|2) - This jack is not good. Remove by moving
   00:14:313 (14313|2) - to 3
   00:14:477 (14477|3) - to 2 Done.
5. 00:18:763 (18763|2,18928|1,18928|2,19093|1) - Same, don't jack i.n this way. Choose:
   1) Don't jack and make pattern like (02)(13)(02) <- better imo since this is an HD
   2) Jack all since they represent the same instrument. Some of the jack are unavoidable, i would rather leave it as is so the pattern can flow naturally and without have to repeat the same pattern over and over just for the sake of it.
6. 00:19:423 (19423|2,19587|2) - Same, jack. For this, i rearrange.
7. 00:27:499 (27499|3,27582|1,27664|2) - I suggest 00:27:582 (27582|1,27664|2) - Ctrl + H. I will be more confortable to read. Ctrl +H "D.
8. 00:29:807 (29807|2,29972|2) - Jack. ^
9. 00:30:796 (30796|2,30961|2,31126|1,31291|1) - Jack, I suggest:
   00:30:796 (30796|2) - to 3
   00:31:291 (31291|1) - to 0 It was firstly intentional, but alright, repattern.
10. 00:34:587 (34587|3,34752|3) - Jack repattern, this time it can actually come out nicely o.o
11. 01:05:741 (65741|0,65824|2,65906|1,65988|2,66071|3) - Not good pattern my suggestions are:
    1) 01:05:741 (65741|0) - to 3
    2) 01:05:824 (65824|2) - to 1
    01:05:906 (65906|1,65988|2) - 1 column to right
    01:06:071 (66071|3) - to 2 Not nice for me. but rearrange.
12. 01:08:049 (68049|2,68214|2) - jack This time, i keep it for variation.
13. 01:13:324 (73324|1,73488|1) - ^
14. 01:13:818 (73818|3,73983|3) - ^ ^ and this, there's a pattern that i intend to make here.
15. 01:23:873 (83873|2,84038|2) - Same.
16. 01:32:115 - Why not this? Forgot to pattern that 1/4 notes, add many notes and repattern it.
17. 01:33:434 (93434|1) - Remove, not as load as 01:33:269 (93269|0,93269|3,93598|1,93598|0) - It's a kick sound, would be inconsistent if i remove it.
18. 01:34:093 (94093|2,94258|2) - Jack ^
19. 01:36:071 (96071|2) - remove, this is less louder than 01:35:906 (95906|1,95906|2) - , also move 01:36:236 (96236|0) - to 2. also the kick sound, and it is really loud for me.
20. 01:46:620 (106620|2) - Move to 01:46:785 - This will create a cool pattern (0-3-1-2) with 01:46:291 (106291|0,106456|3,106620|1,106620|2) - and also give 01:46:785 (106785|0,106785|3) - the note it need for cymbal. 2 LN already enough to emphasize the last melody.

Ok, that's all, I've checked only HD bbecause other diffs seems fine to me.

Anima_Alumi-47 wrote:

Hi! M4M

4K 1|2|3|4|

[HD]
00:35:247 add note
01:08:049 Change?? 3 4 ok.
01:13:488 Change?? 2 3
01:24:038 Change?? 3 4

Not reply= reject.
sorry little mod.
Good luck