[Happy Oni]
00:00:710 - Piano's sound was a bit high for me, maybe you can use k (include the cymbal by drum)
00:05:510 - Current pattern isn't bad at all but you may change to k because there is no ryhme at all that really low
00:38:424 - there is a sound here. Add a k here to make some flow on the map
00:51:967 - most comfortable sound is mapped (like 00:50:596 -)
01:22:139 - the pattern is fine but there is no sound at the next white line. so remove it to increase the flow.
01:27:624 - to make a different pattern, delete the first red line.
2nd kiai - the first part after kiai - i didn't feel the flow, very very bad flow .w.
03:09:796 - 03:31:653 - no variation? Also there is some of finishers that isn't good. Check more carefully to add the finishers.
[General]
Much of the green lines is unused well. Please remove it.
this is first verse. Not my full mod.
00:00:710 - Piano's sound was a bit high for me, maybe you can use k (include the cymbal by drum)
00:05:510 - Current pattern isn't bad at all but you may change to k because there is no ryhme at all that really low
00:38:424 - there is a sound here. Add a k here to make some flow on the map
00:51:967 - most comfortable sound is mapped (like 00:50:596 -)
01:22:139 - the pattern is fine but there is no sound at the next white line. so remove it to increase the flow.
01:27:624 - to make a different pattern, delete the first red line.
2nd kiai - the first part after kiai - i didn't feel the flow, very very bad flow .w.
03:09:796 - 03:31:653 - no variation? Also there is some of finishers that isn't good. Check more carefully to add the finishers.
[General]
Much of the green lines is unused well. Please remove it.
this is first verse. Not my full mod.