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KillerBlood - The Black Case

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Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
3,089 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nao Tomori
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, May 11, 2017 at 12:44:14 PM

Artist: KillerBlood
Title: The Black Case
Source: Cytus
Tags: rhythm game mobile trick box davided
BPM: 156.01
Filesize: 2402kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. DavidEd's Level 5 (4.25 stars, 352 notes)
  2. Level 1 (1.64 stars, 53 notes)
  3. Level 2 (2.29 stars, 204 notes)
  4. Level 3 (3.64 stars, 299 notes)
  5. Level 4 (4.35 stars, 388 notes)
Download: KillerBlood - The Black Case
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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remap soon w

dt farm
Last edited by Nao Tomori , edited 53 times in total.
HaibokuShounen
74 posts
Joined July 2014
HaibokuShounen
this is a pretty good map but I do have a few general things
the pattern is a bit tricky to play,
I can see no re occouring pattern, and if I see a start of one it is not completed (though this may be because I like ctb and mania.)

the time selections need to be a bit more on the beat, they are not placed appropriately period

the combo gets a bit long eh

Insane,
really I just see the need for a more fluid pattern and not so much random jumps

Hard
22:627
note off grid

43:152
half the note is off the grid

51:665
pattern recommendation


1:19:550-1:20:896
pattern recommendation


Less hard

28:973
slider off grid

43:589
slider ends off grid

58:973-59:550
a more symmetrical shape is recommended

Normal

please make the sliders slower as the people that play normal diff's are generally not the best of players and a fast slider might be harder for them I recommend a 1.00 speed - a 1.40 speed

also as for the same reason as above please use distance snap 75% of the time as it is hard for the newer players to do the jumps that are required in this

4:165-8:012
recommended fluid pattern


11:473-16:665
fluid motions and keep sliders away from timing selections

17:242
slider off timing selection

18:396-22:627
sliders need to be more fluid in motion
36:437
hidden note may be a bit hard for newer players to see please mov3e it to a more visible area

1:09:850-1:10:127
please revise this streams are hard to do for newer players
lemountain
514 posts
Joined February 2015
lemountain
Hello from Queue!

General
You need different instruments, Don't stick with the normal one without anything, it's irritating to the ears

Normal
Kinda would make sense if HP Drain rate would be 3, optional
00:22:242 (9) - This slider is overlapping 2 notes, you may want to avoid that.
00:26:089 (3) - Same with this note
00:29:935 (8) - Extend this Slider to 00:30:319 -
00:31:665 (1) - Avoid Overlap
01:35:127 (1) - Change sample to soft

Less Hard
Make HP Drain 5
Make Overall Difficulty 5, optional
00:56:665 (4) - Extend this repeat slider, add another repeat.

Hard
optional Make a combo start here 00:55:512 (11) - Instead of here 00:56:281 (1) -

Insano
Looks ok to me

That's it!
Chibi Maruko
857 posts
Joined January 2015
Chibi Maruko
Hai! From Modding Queue
Sorry for late to mod ur map because I had problem my computer

Hard
  • 00:02:628 (2) - Add Finish
    00:18:012 (6) - NC
    00:21:089 (7) - ^
    00:58:012 - Why is this are ignore to 00:58:781?
    01:01:089 (2) - Add Finish
    01:18:012 (1) - Blanket
Insanao
  • 00:02:627 (3) - Add Finish
    00:08:781 (8) - ^
    00:14:935 (4) - NC
    00:30:319 (4) - ^
    00:36:473 (4) - ^
    00:37:050 (5) - Blanket
    00:54:935 (8) - NC
    01:10:319 (6) - Add whistle
    01:13:396 (7) - NC
    01:35:127 (1) - Stop kiai at this time
Bai
Exile-
Elite Storyboarder
449 posts
Joined April 2013
Exile-
From our modding queue!

[General]

01:39:742 - You can silence spinner's end
I think you should decrease volume to about 70%, also set different volume levels to slower parts and kiai.

[Insanao]

00:06:281 (6) - I would turn it into a 1/2 slider
00:06:665 (1,3) - overlap
00:21:089 (1) - Please fix this shape ;-;
NC 00:30:319 (4) - here insted of 00:29:935 (1) -
00:14:935 (4) - ^
00:30:319 (4) - ^
00:16:665 (8) - This slider seems a bit off-beat. I would end it 00:17:050 - here and place a note 00:17:242 - here. (You can even silence slider's end)
00:26:473 (9,10) - blanket
You can shorten some combos by placing new ones, for example: 00:22:435 (5) - 00:25:704 (5) - 00:28:589 (8) - (this also applies to other diffs)
00:58:204 (9) - blanket
01:19:358 (1,2,3,4) - Constant DS here!
01:21:858 (1) - blanket
01:27:627 (8,10) - I dont like this overlap

[Hard]

00:05:319 (1) - blanket
00:07:050 (1) - ^
00:10:127 (2) - Turn it into a 1/2 slider
00:56:281 (1) - ^
00:13:012 (9,10) - make them parallel
00:15:512 (2,3) - unnecessary overlap
00:19:742 (2,3,4,5,6) - this part is so messy and hard to read mostly because of overlap >.<
00:41:473 (5) - I think you can delete this note
01:00:704 (1) - blanket
01:05:896 (1) - ^
01:16:473 (1) - ^
01:17:819 (5) - Place it further
01:19:550 (1,2,3,4) - Constant DS here! Also you should copy sliders instead of trying to make them similar
01:32:627 (6,7) - Trun it into a blanket

[Less Hard]

00:10:127 (2) - Make this shape smoother
00:27:242 (3) - ^
00:12:819 - missing note
00:14:935 (1) - This spinner should end 00:16:281 - here. You can also end it 00:16:089 - here and palce a note on 00:16:281 - .
00:18:012 (1,2,3) - overlap x.x
00:22:050 - missing note,
00:22:242 (1) - Turn it into a 1/2 slider
00:26:858 (2) - Blanket
00:42:050 (8,2) - What about stacking them?

[Normal]

00:05:704 (3) - this slider should end 00:06:665 - here
00:07:242 (4) - And this one should start from 00:07:050 -
00:11:473 (1,3,5) - Avoid overlaps like these on Normal. This may be confusing to beginners.
00:24:550 (1,3) - ^ (I hope you can spot the rest)
01:05:127 (6,7) - These should be parallel
01:28:781 (2) - Why this slider ends on a blue tick?

[Trick Box's Easy]

00:16:089 (6,7,1) - You can do something like this:
01:08:396 (1,2,1) - ^
00:58:012 (6) - This blanket is a little bit off
01:03:781 (5,6) - Make them parallel
Pretty nice diff ^^


Good luck~
Electoz
1,886 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
Hi, from my modding queue~ There's a lot of things going on here, you can catch me in game if there's anything you don't understand~ Because it will be a long~ way down here.

[General]

  1. You should delete .osb file in the song folder since this song doesn't have a storyboard.
  2. Not sure if your "Enable Countdown" is intentional, but most maps didn't have it nowadays.
  3. Put sth into tags please.
  4. Change combo colours please.
  5. Insanao had "Widescreen Support" unchecked while other diffs had it checked.
  6. You put some tags and disabled countdown in Normal, make sure everything is the same across all diffs.
  7. You have to set audio preview time in every diffs.
[Hitsounding - make sure to apply these across all diffs]

  1. You should have your own hitsounds for this map, using a normal sampleset throughout the song isn't a good idea.
  2. The volume in timing section shouldn't be 100% because it's irritating. [Tips : Decrease volume to 50% and increase your volume more on kiai about 10-20% so it'll be like 50% in most parts and 60-70% on kiai, so kiai will become more emphasized]
  3. You really need a lot of work here on hitsounding, feel free to catch me in game so I can teach you about hitsound basics.
[Tips]

  1. You can decrease SV at slider velocity tab here > http://puu.sh/lHjMw/3ba8c7bdda.jpg not in the timing setup panel.
[Easy]

  1. Some DS issues here > http://puu.sh/lHk20/6140ec2c1a.png
  2. Try not to stack objects in Easy, it's very difficult for beginners
  3. Sliders with 2 kicks or more e.g.00:50:704 (2) - 01:03:781 (5) are deemed as unrankable in Easy diff.
[Normal]

  1. You need to use Distance Snap in Easy and Normal diff at all times. Because beginners needs a consistent spacing as it will become much easier for them to read the objects.
  2. Use AImod > check distance snap so you can check whether your spacing through out the song is correct or not > http://puu.sh/lHkm0/64f80d622e.jpg
I'll stop here for now lol, catch me in game or PM if you need a mod for Less Hard and Hard, but it's strongly recommended that you fix the issues above first. Also, I didn't do anything much in Easy & Normal, all I did is just a quick mod. I'll give you a detailed mod later once you fixed all these.

This map's still a long way to go, but don't give up yet. Good luck!
_handholding
3,109 posts
Joined April 2014
_handholding
hi from my modding queue

[easy]
00:03:396 (4) - I think this would be a better rhythm
00:07:242 (1) - ^
Anyways because that the string instrument starts on the downbeat it would be better to have a clickable object on the downbeat as well imo
00:12:627 (1,3) - 2/1 sliders seem to break up the flow. Use 1/1 rhythm instead?
00:16:858 (1) - start at 00:16:473 and finish at 00:18:012
00:44:935 (2) -
01:00:704 - add a ntoe here
01:02:242 (3) - delete this note
01:03:781 (5) - this many reverses in a slider doesnt play well
01:19:165 (4) - Dont stack this note behind a slider in an easy diff
01:25:319 (4,5) - swap these ntoes around on the timline
01:35:127 (1) - extend to 01:39:742 and add a timing point with soft hitsounds and 5% audio as shown in the box below


[normal]
00:05:319 (3) - add a note
00:05:704 (3) - extend to 00:06:665
00:08:396 (5) - add a note
00:29:165 (7,8) - hiding these sliders behind others doesnt look pretty
00:45:319 (4) - add a note
01:11:858 - All the gaps past this point really disrupt the flow, Consider add more notes.

In general I think your histounds should be lowered, theyre kinda overpowering in contrast to the song. I also think you should change your comob solours so they look prettier.
Well tthats all from me. I hope this mod was helpful. GL!
Prismetical
274 posts
Joined October 2015
Prismetical
Guten Tag! :P

Easy
00:18:204 - really? a break in a 1.41min map? wasted space... :P
00:52:627 (5) - shape it better to (4)
01:01:858 (2,3) - remove stack
01:15:319 (3,2) - move them onto each other correctly (stack them better)

Normal
- slider velocity too fast
- check distance snap
00:15:319 (7,8,9,10) - too crowded
00:29:935 (8) - slider end is placed wrong

Good luck!
_handholding
3,109 posts
Joined April 2014
_handholding
reply to mods pls
Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
3,089 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nao Tomori

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

hi from my modding queue

[easyconsider these all done]
SPOILER
00:03:396 (4) - I think this would be a better rhythm
00:07:242 (1) - ^
Anyways because that the string instrument starts on the downbeat it would be better to have a clickable object on the downbeat as well imo
00:12:627 (1,3) - 2/1 sliders seem to break up the flow. Use 1/1 rhythm instead?
00:16:858 (1) - start at 00:16:473 and finish at 00:18:012
00:44:935 (2) -
01:00:704 - add a ntoe here
01:02:242 (3) - delete this note
01:03:781 (5) - this many reverses in a slider doesnt play well
01:19:165 (4) - Dont stack this note behind a slider in an easy diff
01:25:319 (4,5) - swap these ntoes around on the timline
01:35:127 (1) - extend to 01:39:742 and add a timing point with soft hitsounds and 5% audio as shown in the box below
[normal]
00:05:319 (3) - add a note -done
00:05:704 (3) - extend to 00:06:665 yes thanks
00:08:396 (5) - add a note done
00:29:165 (7,8) - hiding these sliders behind others doesnt look pretty blame distance snap, fixed
00:45:319 (4) - add a note done
01:11:858 - All the gaps past this point really disrupt the flow, Consider add more notes. thanks for the advice, should be better now.

In general I think your histounds should be lowered, theyre kinda overpowering in contrast to the song. yes.
I also think you should change your comob solours so they look prettier.
Well tthats all from me. I hope this mod was helpful. GL!

Prismetical wrote:

Guten Tag! :P

Easy
00:18:204 - really? a break in a 1.41min map? wasted space... :P
00:52:627 (5) - shape it better to (4)
01:01:858 (2,3) - remove stack
01:15:319 (3,2) - move them onto each other correctly (stack them better)
considered done
Normal
- slider velocity too fast
- check distance snap
00:15:319 (7,8,9,10) - too crowded alright, changed.
00:29:935 (8) - slider end is placed wrong i agree, thanks.

Good luck!

Hanczer wrote:

From our modding queue!

[General]

01:39:742 - You can silence spinner's end
I think you should decrease volume to about 70%, also set different volume levels to slower parts and kiai.
---should be better now
[Insanao]
SPOILER
00:06:281 (6) - I would turn it into a 1/2 slider
00:06:665 (1,3) - overlap
00:21:089 (1) - Please fix this shape ;-;
NC 00:30:319 (4) - here insted of 00:29:935 (1) -
00:14:935 (4) - ^
00:30:319 (4) - ^
00:16:665 (8) - This slider seems a bit off-beat. I would end it 00:17:050 - here and place a note 00:17:242 - here. (You can even silence slider's end)
00:26:473 (9,10) - blanket
You can shorten some combos by placing new ones, for example: 00:22:435 (5) - 00:25:704 (5) - 00:28:589 (8) - (this also applies to other diffs)
00:58:204 (9) - blanket
01:19:358 (1,2,3,4) - Constant DS here!
01:21:858 (1) - blanket
01:27:627 (8,10) - I dont like this overlap - I do, but changed cuz I see it hard to read
mostly changed
[Hard] all done from here down
SPOILER
00:05:319 (1) - blanket
00:07:050 (1) - ^
00:10:127 (2) - Turn it into a 1/2 slider
00:56:281 (1) - ^
00:13:012 (9,10) - make them parallel
00:15:512 (2,3) - unnecessary overlap
00:19:742 (2,3,4,5,6) - this part is so messy and hard to read mostly because of overlap >.< all changed
00:41:473 (5) - I think you can delete this note
01:00:704 (1) - blanket
01:05:896 (1) - ^
01:16:473 (1) - ^
01:17:819 (5) - Place it further
01:19:550 (1,2,3,4) - Constant DS here! Also you should copy sliders instead of trying to make them similar - these were copied...
01:32:627 (6,7) - Trun it into a blanket

Good luck~
Electoz
1,886 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
I think I deserve 445 kds because it's an IRC with 4 hours - 45 mins
16:20 Electoz: you don't have to post in a queue
16:20 Electoz: yag
16:20 Electoz: *yah
16:21 Electoz: so you fixed some mods right?
16:21 Electoz: lemme check you thread first
16:22 -Nao Tomori-: i have fixed all of them with trick i believe
16:23 Electoz: I'll go with Easy first
16:24 Electoz: Does trick experienced in mapping?
16:24 Electoz: Or just starting like you?
16:25 -Nao Tomori-: same as me
16:25 -Nao Tomori-: i believe
16:25 Electoz: hmm
16:25 Electoz: I guess I'll mod yours first to make things easier
16:27 Electoz: lol why ds in Normal is so inconsistent
16:27 Electoz: did you use distance snap?
16:27 -Nao Tomori-: yes
16:28 Electoz: did you use it on every objects?
16:28 -Nao Tomori-: uh
16:28 -Nao Tomori-: yes 
16:29 -Nao Tomori-: no i made it .2 bigger near the end i believe
16:29 Electoz: does aimod tell you anything about wrong spacing in distance snap?
16:29 -Nao Tomori-: well yes on one half or the other depending on what it is set to
16:30 Electoz: http://puu.sh/lOlKs/e377aa4085.jpg
16:30 Electoz: at least this is what I see from my side
16:31 Electoz: let's get through this slowly
16:31 -Nao Tomori-: ok i see problem
16:31 Electoz: how much did you set for your ds
16:31 Electoz: ?
16:31 -Nao Tomori-: 1.3 
16:31 -Nao Tomori-: but i made it a little more for every time i remapped a section
16:31 -Nao Tomori-: let me fix that 
16:32 Electoz: try to use the same amount of ds through out the map
16:32 -Nao Tomori-: yeah 
16:32 -Nao Tomori-: but the thing is
16:32 -Nao Tomori-: i didnt want sliders to overlap
16:32 Electoz: where?
16:32 -Nao Tomori-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4098083 this is what happens on 1.3 ds
16:32 -Nao Tomori-: for example
16:34 Electoz: if you don't want them to overlap
16:34 Electoz: then just increase ds
16:34 -Nao Tomori-: i did
16:34 -Nao Tomori-: now it is inconsistent cuz i didnt go back and change every single other note
16:35 Electoz: because it's such a pain? lol
16:35 -Nao Tomori-: no i just forgot 
16:35 -Nao Tomori-: im doing that now 
16:38 Electoz: ok, tell me you're done fixing and updating that
16:49 -Nao Tomori-: well i fixed it and now it is 2.3 stars =_=
16:50 Electoz: can't be helped because you increased the ds
16:50 -Nao Tomori-: yeah 
16:50 Electoz: you want to nerf it?
16:50 -Nao Tomori-: i'll make CS 2.5 later maybe 
16:50 -Nao Tomori-: whatever
16:51 Electoz: make cs bigger might cause overlap lol
16:51 Electoz: ok lemme check this out
16:51 -Nao Tomori-: i guess i just nerf pattern then
16:51 Electoz: not yet
16:52 Electoz: well, you gotta get mad with ds
16:52 -Nao Tomori-: huh
16:52 Electoz: did you increase/decrease ds specifically in some parts in the map?
16:53 -Nao Tomori-: should not
16:53 -Nao Tomori-: on that update
16:53 Electoz: alright
16:53 Electoz: here's the problem, I'll give you an example
16:54 Electoz: 00:03:204 (1) -
16:54 Electoz: remove nc here
16:54 Electoz: and check with aimod again
16:54 -Nao Tomori-: says too close
16:54 -Nao Tomori-: by a lot
16:54 Electoz: yeah
16:54 -Nao Tomori-: but it should be NC there 
16:55 Electoz: nope
16:55 Electoz: the point is not to remove nc
16:55 Electoz: it's about that "too close" thing
16:55 Electoz: removing nc cause AImod to recalculate it
16:55 -Nao Tomori-: oh
16:56 Electoz: because AImod won't calcualate any spacing from anything to 1 and 1 > 2
16:56 -Nao Tomori-: ok there are a few of those
16:56 -Nao Tomori-: if i make everything the same color
16:56 Electoz: every spacing on AImod based on 1 > 2 in each combo
16:56 Electoz: yes
16:56 Electoz: that's right
16:56 Electoz: if you remove all ncs in the map, you'll know all of them
16:57 -Nao Tomori-: ok
16:57 Electoz: tell me if you're done fixing that lol
16:58 -Nao Tomori-: uhh problem is now that DS makes some jumps way too big 
16:59 Electoz: where?
16:59 -Nao Tomori-: nvm it is all done
17:00 Electoz: ok
17:00 -Nao Tomori-: ok i ill put in NC and then tell you
17:16 Electoz: tell me when you're done lol
17:16 -Nao Tomori-: sorry i was trying to play with my pinky and thumb
17:16 Electoz: nvm
17:16 Electoz: I'm not rushing
17:16 -Nao Tomori-: ima nerf patterns anyway
17:16 -Nao Tomori-: gimme a bit
17:17 Electoz: just modding others while IRC with you at the same time
17:26 -Nao Tomori-:  ok
17:26 -Nao Tomori-: it is done
17:27 Electoz: ok, lemme check it
17:29 Electoz: I'll remove nc and I'll point you out if I found sth wrong with ds
17:29 Electoz: this ds thing is such a pain lol
17:29 -Nao Tomori-: ds is stupid -_-
17:30 Electoz: AImod on my side
17:30 Electoz: is getting drunk
17:30 Electoz: I guess I'll check by hand lol, gonna take a bit longer
17:31 -Nao Tomori-: how do you mean drunk
17:31 -Nao Tomori-: there should be only one thing with kiai time
17:31 Electoz: aimod sometimes completely drunk when it comes to ds
17:32 -Nao Tomori-: maybe its a sign that DS is useless 
17:32 Electoz: sometimes it report a ds error with 0.01 difference
17:32 Electoz: LOL
17:32 Electoz: w8 a bit then
17:34 Electoz: in terms of ds seems all clear now
17:34 Electoz: but you forgot to put an nc on spinners lol
17:34 -Nao Tomori-: wat
17:34 -Nao Tomori-: is that a thing
17:35 -Nao Tomori-: ok fixed
17:35 Electoz: well. if you remove nc by ctrl+a
17:35 Electoz: It will remove it also
17:35 Electoz: yah
17:35 Electoz: just a small issue
17:35 Electoz: I'll take a look at the map now
17:36 Electoz: 00:11:473 (1,3) - don't do this lol
17:36 Electoz: kinda weird overlap imo
17:38 Electoz: well, acutally fixing that is kinda pain, because you have to worry about those ds things
17:38 Electoz: I guess I'll spam what I see that could be improved then
17:38 -Nao Tomori-: i fixed it 
17:38 -Nao Tomori-: with val0108 slider
17:39 Electoz: lol
17:39 Electoz: 00:05:319 (1,2,3) - the flow here should be improved
17:40 Electoz: it doesn't flow smoothly from 00:06:089 (2,3)
17:41 -Nao Tomori-: i put 3 90 degrees below instead 
17:41 -Nao Tomori-: to fix it
17:41 -Nao Tomori-: i mean i stacked
17:41 -Nao Tomori-: but it goes straight down
17:48 Electoz: shet
17:48 Electoz: sry
17:48 Electoz: my pc
17:49 -Nao Tomori-: nah that was bancho
17:49 Electoz: crashed beautifully
17:49 -Nao Tomori-: bancho died for like 5 minutes right then
17:49 Electoz: lol
17:49 Electoz: my pc
17:49 Electoz: died right at the same time with bancho
17:49 Electoz: fantastic
17:49 -Nao Tomori-: good timing
17:49 -Nao Tomori-: =D
17:49 Electoz: and my pc took like
17:49 Electoz: 5 mins to restart again
17:49 -Nao Tomori-: oof
17:49 -Nao Tomori-: this is why i get laptop
17:50 Electoz: lol
17:50 Electoz: so did you fixed that overlap?
17:50 -Nao Tomori-: uh
17:50 -Nao Tomori-: overlap?
17:50 -Nao Tomori-: yeah 
17:50 -Nao Tomori-: 00:13:012 (3) -  this?
17:51 Electoz: nope
17:51 Electoz: I mean
17:51 Electoz: 00:13:781 (4,1) - this
17:51 -Nao Tomori-: yes that section is fine
17:51 -Nao Tomori-: wait do you mean
17:51 Electoz: alright
17:51 Electoz: let's move on
17:51 -Nao Tomori-: 00:14:742 (6,1) - 
17:51 Electoz: hm?
17:51 -Nao Tomori-: cuz this is supposed to be stacked
17:52 Electoz: nope
17:52 Electoz: it's not that
17:52 Electoz: how should I say here
17:52 -Nao Tomori-: ok then it is fine
17:52 Electoz: w8 a sec
17:53 Electoz: http://puu.sh/lOrPF/26a17c2a43.JPG
17:53 -Nao Tomori-: yea that is changed
17:53 Electoz: alright
17:54 -Nao Tomori-: oh that screenshot reminds me to change colors a little
17:54 -Nao Tomori-: thanks
17:54 Electoz: wtf
17:54 Electoz: lol
17:54 -Nao Tomori-: cuz gray and gray combo
17:55 Electoz: 00:18:396 (4) - the shape feels weird
17:55 Electoz: you have 4 sliders in that part
17:55 Electoz: copy+paste all of them will give a good symmetry
17:56 -Nao Tomori-: they are all copy pasted
17:56 -Nao Tomori-: you mean put them on top of each other?
17:56 Electoz: nope
17:56 Electoz: that'd be funny lol
17:56 Electoz: I mean
17:56 Electoz: make 4 sliders' shape exactly the same
17:56 -Nao Tomori-: they are =(
17:57 Electoz: lol, it's not imo
17:57 -Nao Tomori-: ok fixed
17:57 -Nao Tomori-: one of them was not
17:58 Electoz: 00:20:704 (7,2) - weird overlap, can you avoid that?
18:00 -Nao Tomori-: `ok i make them end on same place
18:01 Electoz: 00:47:627 (3) - lol I thought you did ask me this once before
18:01 -Nao Tomori-: i decided to keep it 
18:01 Electoz: not sure if it's rankable maybe you can try to keep it
18:01 Electoz: yeah
18:01 -Nao Tomori-: cuz it is better than making it a bunch of notes
18:01 Electoz: lol
18:01 Electoz: yeah
18:01 Electoz: true
18:02 Electoz: 00:48:781 (1,1) - why put spinners here?
18:02 Electoz: I want to know, just my curiosity
18:02 -Nao Tomori-: uh
18:02 -Nao Tomori-: it is slow part with no big instrument
18:02 -Nao Tomori-: and i didnt want actual break
18:03 Electoz: Have anyone complained about this?
18:03 -Nao Tomori-: not to my knowledge
18:04 -Nao Tomori-: someone did say not to put a break in the easy though
18:04 Electoz: lel
18:04 Electoz: then I guess you might keep this as it is since no one's complaining about that
18:04 -Nao Tomori-: yeah
18:04 -Nao Tomori-: ugh.
18:04 -Nao Tomori-: i have to go for like 30 minutes, sorry
18:04 Electoz: I got a hunch that some BNs might tell you to map this part though
18:04 Electoz: just take a note
18:04 Electoz: alright
18:04 -Nao Tomori-: can we resume this in a little?
18:04 Electoz: it's fine, tell me when you're back
18:04 Electoz: yeah
18:04 -Nao Tomori-: yeah i will consider 
18:04 -Nao Tomori-: ok 
18:04 -Nao Tomori-: o/
18:05 Electoz: \o
18:45 -Nao Tomori-: ?
18:45 Electoz: you came back?
18:45 -Nao Tomori-: yea
18:46 Electoz: osu! site crasjed
18:46 Electoz: so sad
18:46 Electoz: wanna continue now or later?
18:46 -Nao Tomori-: rjp
18:47 -Nao Tomori-: whenever you want
18:49 Electoz: YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
18:49 Electoz: I JUST PASSED this with hidden
18:49 Electoz: let me scream for a while lol
18:49 *Electoz is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/742975 Project Grimoire - Caliburne ~Story of the Legendary sword~]
18:49 -Nao Tomori-: what
18:49 -Nao Tomori-: dude thats so hard to do
18:49 -Nao Tomori-: i dont think i could do that
18:50 Electoz: alright, I finished hyping myself lol
18:50 Electoz: let's continue this
18:50 -Nao Tomori-: i cant even pass this
18:50 -Nao Tomori-: ...
18:52 Electoz: 00:57:627 (3,6) - overlap here
18:52 Electoz: can you move that?
18:53 -Nao Tomori-: ye
18:53 -Nao Tomori-: 01:09:550 (1,2,3) - i changed this a little too
18:53 -Nao Tomori-: not the rhythm tho
18:54 Electoz: you mean the positioning?
18:54 -Nao Tomori-: yea
18:55 -Nao Tomori-: i wish there was a way to see where star rating comes fromm
18:55 -Nao Tomori-: so i can find the pattern to nerf
18:56 Electoz: 01:07:819 (2,1) - how about make them stacked
18:56 Electoz: ?
18:56 Electoz: put tails on tails
18:57 -Nao Tomori-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4098720 like this?
18:57 -Nao Tomori-: i was just gonna make them more parallel
18:57 Electoz: btw
18:57 Electoz: does puush site working?
18:57 -Nao Tomori-: uhh, maybe
18:58 Electoz: because the page won't dl on my side
18:58 -Nao Tomori-: apparently no
18:58 -Nao Tomori-: http://puu.sh/lOvRy/904a3589bb.jpg
18:58 -Nao Tomori-: do you see this
18:58 -Nao Tomori-: it is working
18:58 -Nao Tomori-: yea
18:58 Electoz: working now
18:58 Electoz: w8
19:00 Electoz: what I meant is this > http://puu.sh/lOw0o/1645b12ddf.jpg
19:00 -Nao Tomori-: ahh
19:02 -Nao Tomori-: yeah good idea
19:03 Electoz: 01:30:319 (3,4) - feels weird here
19:04 Electoz: for me, 01:31:089 (4) - should have been rotated
19:05 -Nao Tomori-: yeah
19:05 -Nao Tomori-: ok
19:06 Electoz: strongly recommended to stack 01:33:204 (4)  under 01:31:858 (1)  .
19:06 Electoz: shit timestamps
19:06 Electoz: 01:33:204 (4) -
19:06 Electoz: here, stack it under
19:06 Electoz: 01:31:858 (1) -
19:08 -Nao Tomori-: this looks like this now https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4098756
19:09 Electoz: the page won't dl on my side
19:09 -Nao Tomori-: uh
19:09 Electoz: server connection timed out lol
19:09 Electoz: it says like that
19:09 -Nao Tomori-: it is fixed 
19:09 -Nao Tomori-: dw
19:09 Electoz: wp peppy
19:10 -Nao Tomori-: think he is updating stuff cuz there was a giant post about his servers and stuff
19:10 Electoz: maybe it depends on the region? I dunno
19:10 Electoz: a giant post?
19:10 Electoz: where?
19:10 -Nao Tomori-: i think at least
19:10 Electoz: lemme see it
19:11 -Nao Tomori-: nope nvm
19:11 -Nao Tomori-: no idea
19:11 Electoz: your normal
19:12 Electoz: probably because the last kiai is the reason why star goes up
19:12 -Nao Tomori-: its ok i have 1.5 star so i can get a 2.3 star normal past the spread requirement
19:12 Electoz: anyway we can keep that for now, not too important
19:13 Electoz: yeah
19:13 Electoz: btw
19:13 Electoz: use hitsounds please
19:13 Electoz: that whitsle finish clap thing
19:13 -Nao Tomori-: yeah i didnt do that yet
19:13 -Nao Tomori-:  xd
19:13 Electoz: lol
19:13 -Nao Tomori-: that part is boring so i just didnt do it yet
19:13 Electoz: lol
19:13 -Nao Tomori-: cuz i want to fix the notes placement first
19:14 Electoz: placement seems moddable now
19:14 Electoz: if the maps get better, more errors will come up
19:15 Electoz: btw
19:15 Electoz: who will fix the easy diff?
19:16 Electoz: is it trick himself or you>
19:16 Electoz: *?
19:16 -Nao Tomori-: i will 
19:16 Electoz: hmmm
19:16 Electoz: alright, I will go with easy next
19:16 -Nao Tomori-: it isnt like easy is super complex patterns and rhythm choice so 
19:16 -Nao Tomori-: not a big difference i think
19:18 Electoz: ds looks better than Normal
19:18 Electoz: there's still some of flaws showing in AImod though
19:22 -Nao Tomori-: all fixed
19:22 Electoz: shet
19:22 Electoz: can you update the beatmap?
19:22 Electoz: I mean,
19:22 Electoz: bancho's goind weird lol
19:22 Electoz: *going
19:23 -Nao Tomori-: k i updated 
19:24 Electoz: http://puu.sh/lOxko/9679b151a3.jpg < I'm stucking with this
19:24 -Nao Tomori-: yea whats wrong with that
19:24 -Nao Tomori-: ohh
19:24 -Nao Tomori-: thats awkward
19:24 Electoz: ds fix is so important that I need to update it first, what a shame
19:25 Electoz: guess I'll do less hard
19:25 -Nao Tomori-: i fixed all the DS tho =)
19:26 Electoz: 00:06:089 (5,7) - Overlap stuff
19:26 Electoz: as usual
19:26 -Nao Tomori-: yea i see
19:27 Electoz: I guess I won't spam overlaps anymore
19:27 Electoz: btw, about here 00:06:089 (5,6,7) -
19:28 Electoz: can you make 00:06:858 (7) - blanket with 00:06:473 (6) - ?
19:28 Electoz: that will be much more neat imo
19:28 -Nao Tomori-: yeah i did that
19:28 Electoz: alright
19:29 Electoz: 00:10:127 (2) - the shape is so weird lol
19:29 Electoz: I mean, it's not that curvy nor edgy
19:30 Electoz: 00:13:012 (5) - how about curve this slider?
19:30 Electoz: all sliders in that combo are curved though
19:30 -Nao Tomori-: it does not need a curve
19:30 -Nao Tomori-: because you are going on the slider on the way from 4 to 6
19:30 Electoz: alright
19:31 Electoz: this is just my opinion, but I think 00:16:281 (1) - should be removed
19:31 Electoz: because clicking on notes on the red tick after a spinner's kinda hard
19:31 Electoz: in terms of rhythm
19:31 -Nao Tomori-: i will make spinner a little shorter then
19:31 -Nao Tomori-: cuz that is a big note
19:32 Electoz: hmmm
19:32 Electoz: alright I guess
19:33 Electoz: 00:21:473 (6,1) - *overlap spams*
19:33 Electoz: this is the big one so I spam it
19:33 Electoz: 00:23:589 (7,8,1) - how about making these all the same shape?
19:33 -Nao Tomori-: i like that overlap =(
19:33 -Nao Tomori-: yeah all those should be the same dunno why not
19:34 Electoz: lel
19:34 Electoz: those overlaps
19:34 Electoz: you can keep it if you want
19:34 Electoz: you'll see that some mods later might have a different opinion from me
19:35 Electoz: 00:22:627 (2,3,4,5,6) - now this part here
19:35 Electoz: is very hard for whoever that never heard this song before
19:35 Electoz: maybe repositioning them or put some hitsounds later
19:35 -Nao Tomori-: its literally just 1/2 notes tho
19:36 Electoz: lol
19:36 Electoz: 00:31:089 (7,1,2) - kinda messy imo
19:36 Electoz: mainly because of 00:31:473 (1) -
19:41 Electoz: 00:42:050 (8,1,2) - reminds me of sandwich
19:41 -Nao Tomori-: huh
19:41 -Nao Tomori-: what does that mean
19:42 Electoz: you put 00:42:050 (8) - on top of 00:42:242 (1) -
19:42 -Nao Tomori-: oh
19:42 Electoz: and put 00:42:627 (2) - under that kickslider again
19:42 Electoz: kinda too hard for less hard imo
19:42 -Nao Tomori-: yeah i changed it
19:42 -Nao Tomori-: it is just awkward pattern lol
19:44 Electoz: lol
19:44 Electoz: some sliders
19:44 Electoz: have 2 kicks
19:44 -Nao Tomori-: yeah i put those there a long time ago when i made this
19:44 -Nao Tomori-: now it sounds bad
19:44 Electoz: and I have to watch out them all when playing
19:45 Electoz: it's not completely 100% neat here but it looked decent at least
19:46 Electoz: btw
19:46 Electoz: I feel the density in this diff is so high
19:46 -Nao Tomori-: ar 7.5 then
19:46 Electoz: yeah
19:46 -Nao Tomori-: i dunno about density cuz like i only play ar 10 and 9.3+ maps lol
19:46 Electoz: OD also
19:47 Electoz: I would increase it
19:47 Electoz: lol
19:47 -Nao Tomori-: od 7 seems too high
19:47 Electoz: maybe 6?
19:47 Electoz: 6 seems better for now
19:48 -Nao Tomori-: k
19:48 Electoz: banchobot on my side is back on track
19:48 Electoz: I'll go with easy now
19:50 Electoz: a fews of ds is still of tho
19:50 Electoz: 00:53:781 (6,1) - here
19:51 Electoz: 01:32:627 (7,1) - and here
19:51 Electoz: the rest seems fine now
19:51 Electoz: *still off
19:52 -Nao Tomori-: aight
19:55 Electoz: can you update that again?
19:55 Electoz: just want to ensure everything with ds is settled before doing a mod
19:56 -Nao Tomori-: is update
19:58 Electoz: 00:12:627 (1,2,3) - looks weird imo
19:58 Electoz: flow's not completely smooth here
19:59 Electoz: tch, I tried to fix that but I couldnt lol
20:00 -Nao Tomori-: i fixed it
20:00 Electoz: 00:33:396 (5) - Not sure about this tho
20:00 -Nao Tomori-: should be fine cuz its on 1/1
20:00 Electoz: even it's very easy I'm not sure if someone would say this as unrankable
20:01 Electoz: yeah, maybe you can keep it for now
20:01 -Nao Tomori-: i'll see 
20:01 -Nao Tomori-: i think making it different notes is more awkward cuz there are no new sounds
20:02 Electoz: 00:42:627 (6) - I would make this slider a straight one, up to you.
20:02 -Nao Tomori-: some guy told me to blanket it with 1
20:02 -Nao Tomori-: so i left it curved
20:03 Electoz: blanket is kinda pain though
20:03 Electoz: because of the ds
20:03 -Nao Tomori-: lol
20:03 -Nao Tomori-: well its blanketed 
20:04 Electoz: lol
20:04 Electoz: you amazed me
20:04 Electoz: alright, moving on
20:04 Electoz: 00:46:473 (3) - wait
20:04 Electoz: is this slider supposed to be a straight one or curved?
20:04 -Nao Tomori-: yea this is straight
20:04 -Nao Tomori-: i fixed it with a red point
20:05 Electoz: lel
20:06 Electoz: 00:52:627 (5) - this is not exactly the same shape compared to 00:58:012 (6) -
20:06 -Nao Tomori-: and?
20:07 Electoz: dunno
20:07 -Nao Tomori-: nobody will notice -_-
20:07 Electoz: I mean
20:07 -Nao Tomori-: i mean you noticed
20:07 -Nao Tomori-: but its an easy 
20:07 -Nao Tomori-: nobody will notice
20:07 Electoz: LOLOLOLOL
20:07 Electoz: ok
20:07 Electoz: moving on
20:07 Electoz: LOL
20:07 -Nao Tomori-: fixed anyway
20:08 Electoz: 01:22:242 (7) - I would stack this under the tail of 01:19:550 (5) -
20:09 -Nao Tomori-: yeah
20:10 Electoz: 01:22:627 (1) - I would tweak it's tail
20:10 Electoz: so it will support the flow to 01:23:781 (2) -
20:10 -Nao Tomori-: yea
20:11 Electoz: probably that's all for Easy, I didn't spams those notes that are kinda close to each other
20:11 Electoz: I will left that to the mods later if it's needed to fix
20:11 -Nao Tomori-:  ha you didnt mention the one overlap
20:11 Electoz: *later mods
20:11 Electoz: yeah
20:12 Electoz: I skipped it
20:12 Electoz: kinda pain lol
20:12 Electoz: I mean
20:12 Electoz: you would have know it already
20:12 -Nao Tomori-: its ok 
20:12 -Nao Tomori-: i got it 
20:12 -Nao Tomori-: =D
20:12 Electoz: why hard is 3.95?
20:13 -Nao Tomori-: cuz spread
20:13 Electoz: lol
20:13 Electoz: so you intended?
20:13 -Nao Tomori-: 1.5 - 2.3 - 3.0 - 3.9 - 4.9
20:13 -Nao Tomori-: this looks good 
20:13 -Nao Tomori-: cuz its like .8 .8 .9 1 or so
20:13 Electoz: I never seen hard with 3.9* before
20:14 Electoz: some mods might suggest you
20:14 Electoz: to rename less hard as hard
20:14 Electoz: and hard as insane lol
20:14 *-Nao Tomori- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/563828 Morimori Atsushi - PUPA]
20:14 *-Nao Tomori- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/147728 S.S.H. - Intersect Thunderbolt-Remix]
20:14 *-Nao Tomori- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/86902 Shiraishi - Shinsekai]
20:14 Electoz: ok
20:14 Electoz: I apologize
20:14 Electoz: sumimasen
20:14 -Nao Tomori-: :^)
20:14 Electoz: hontou ni gomenassai
20:14 Electoz: HAHAHAHAHAHA
20:14 -Nao Tomori-: only 1 S normally
20:14 -Nao Tomori-: like "gomenasai"
20:15 Electoz: no
20:15 Electoz: I just
20:15 -Nao Tomori-: really
20:15 Electoz: mistyped it
20:15 -Nao Tomori-: also isnt it sunimasen
20:15 -Nao Tomori-: nope its sumimasen
Hpocks
444 posts
Joined January 2015
Hpocks
Trick Box Easy
The kaias are placed wierdly... not asking to change, but just saying
No hitsounds?
There are so many perfectly straight sliders. Maybe curve a few more?
00:09:550 (4,5,6) - Is this pattern not confusing? Seriosuly wondering XD
00:05:704 (6,1) - 6 looks slightly overlapped with 1, and it doesnt look so fancy like that
00:12:627 (1,2,3) - I think 3 should be placed at 236 140. Just my opinion (move everything else after that over ofc)
01:08:973 - This seems hard to hit. Newbies will hit too early

Normal
Again, no hitsounds?
Again, sliders seem almost always straight
00:05:319 - 00:16:858 - It goes with the song, but it seems wierd to hit. probably just me
00:47:819 - I can easily see a noob pulling away early
00:53:204 - WOAH! This gives the player like 0 time to hit the next note with the spinner. You really should change this. Serious issue
01:27:435 (5,6,7,8) - Is this pattern ok?

I dont feel like I can safely mod anything harder than this XD
Good luck!
Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
3,089 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nao Tomori

Xpockets wrote:

Trick Box Easy
SPOILER
The kaias are placed wierdly... not asking to change, but just saying
No hitsounds? - yea yea will do it eventually
There are so many perfectly straight sliders. Maybe curve a few more? straight is lyfe
00:09:550 (4,5,6) - Is this pattern not confusing? Seriosuly wondering XD i think it's fine, not a easy player though
00:05:704 (6,1) - 6 looks slightly overlapped with 1, and it doesnt look so fancy like that this is changed i think
00:12:627 (1,2,3) - I think 3 should be placed at 236 140. Just my opinion (move everything else after that over ofc) yes this was a mistake
01:08:973 - This seems hard to hit. Newbies will hit too early sucks for them, it follows the song and putting more notes in makes weird overlaps
Normal
SPOILER
Again, no hitsounds?
Again, sliders seem almost always straight
00:05:319 - 00:16:858 - It goes with the song, but it seems wierd to hit. probably just me i think these notes are distinct enough
00:47:819 - I can easily see a noob pulling away early yes this is questionable but keeping it for now
00:53:204 - WOAH! This gives the player like 0 time to hit the next note with the spinner. You really should change this. Serious issue remapped
01:27:435 (5,6,7,8) - Is this pattern ok? just a basic pattern, should be fine...
I dont feel like I can safely mod anything harder than this XD
Good luck! you too
Flanchan
122 posts
Joined April 2013
Flanchan
hi from my queue
Level 8
00:02:146 (8) - Maybe remove this? there isn't a beat there
00:08:204 (5) - NC
00:22:627 (2) - maybe remove this? there isn't a beat there in the music
00:24:165 (1,2,3,4) - Make these identical?
00:28:396 (1) - Remove NC to make it the same as the pattern before
00:31:281 (1,2) - Make these identical
00:33:204 (1) - Remove NC and put it 00:33:589 (2)
00:50:704 (8) - NC?
00:54:550 (4,5,6,7,8) - Form this stream by CTRL+SHIFT+F on a slider? just makes it look nicer is all
01:10:319 (6,7,8,9) - Make these by copy and pasting
01:16:473 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:22:627 (5) - NC
01:31:473 (4) - Make this by CRTL+H on 01:31:089 (3)
01:30:704 (2) - Make this by CTRL+H on 01:30:319 (1)
01:35:127 (1) - Maybe change to this?
Level 6
00:01:858 (5,6,7) - Use the same distance snap for this
00:21:089 (7) - NC
00:21:858 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:896 (6,7,8) - Make these identical (copy-paste)
00:28:589 (1,2) - ^
00:33:204 (1) - Maybe put NC 00:33:781 (2) instead of here?
00:34:742 (1,2) - Make these identical
00:46:089 (7) - NC
01:25:704 (1,2,3) - Make these identical
01:35:127 (1) - Maybe change to this?
Level 4
00:01:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use CTRL+SHIFT+D to make this more smooth?
00:10:127 (2) - Maybe change to this?
00:12:435 - There is a beat here, maybe change this slider?
00:21:088 (5) - NC?
00:22:242 (1) - Remove NC?
00:30:319 (5) - NC
00:36:473 (7) - Put NC here instead of 00:37:050 (1)
00:41:281 (6) - Maybe move this further away from 00:40:704 (5)
01:03:781 (1,2) - make these identical
01:23:396 (1,2,3,4) - Make this by copy and pasting 01:22:627 (1,2,3,4)
01:27:050 (6) - Maybe extend this to 01:27:435
Level 2
Make the combo colours the same as the other maps in the set?
01:09:550 (1) - Remove NC?
01:10:319 (3) - NC?
01:21:089 (1) - End this spinner at 01:22:242?
Good luck on getting it ranked!
SPOILER
for m4m could you please mod https://osu.ppy.sh/s/367377 (Extra difficulty)
sorry for late response
Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
3,089 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nao Tomori

Flanchan wrote:

hi from my queue
Level 8
00:02:146 (8) - Maybe remove this? there isn't a beat there it makes it an awkward rhythm to play without it.
00:08:204 (5) - NC
00:22:627 (2) - maybe remove this? there isn't a beat there in the music there is, it is faint and it makes an awkward pause without this note imo.
00:24:165 (1,2,3,4) - Make these identical?
00:28:396 (1) - Remove NC to make it the same as the pattern before think combo is too long without NC
00:31:281 (1,2) - Make these identical
00:33:204 (1) - Remove NC and put it 00:33:589 (2)
00:50:704 (8) - NC?
00:54:550 (4,5,6,7,8) - Form this stream by CTRL+SHIFT+F on a slider? just makes it look nicer is all i did that originally.
01:10:319 (6,7,8,9) - Make these by copy and pasting the "outside" sliders are identical, the "inside" sliders are identical
01:16:473 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:22:627 (5) - NC
01:31:473 (4) - Make this by CRTL+H on 01:31:089 (3)
01:30:704 (2) - Make this by CTRL+H on 01:30:319 (1)
01:35:127 (1) - Maybe change to this? yup good idea


Level 6
00:01:858 (5,6,7) - Use the same distance snap for this yes, was mistake
00:21:089 (7) - NC
00:21:858 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:896 (6,7,8) - Make these identical (copy-paste)
00:28:589 (1,2) - ^
00:33:204 (1) - Maybe put NC 00:33:781 (2) instead of here?
00:34:742 (1,2) - Make these identical
00:46:089 (7) - NC
01:25:704 (1,2,3) - Make these identical
01:35:127 (1) - Maybe change to this? changed, good idea.


Level 4
00:01:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use CTRL+SHIFT+D to make this more smooth?
00:10:127 (2) - Maybe change to this?
00:12:435 - There is a beat here, maybe change this slider? changed rhythm to fit song better
00:21:088 (5) - NC?
00:22:242 (1) - Remove NC?
00:30:319 (5) - NC
00:36:473 (7) - Put NC here instead of 00:37:050 (1)
00:41:281 (6) - Maybe move this further away from 00:40:704 (5)
01:03:781 (1,2) - make these identical
01:23:396 (1,2,3,4) - Make this by copy and pasting 01:22:627 (1,2,3,4)
01:27:050 (6) - Maybe extend this to 01:27:435
all changed, thanks.


Level 2
Make the combo colours the same as the other maps in the set?
01:09:550 (1) - Remove NC?
01:10:319 (3) - NC? yup
01:21:089 (1) - End this spinner at 01:22:242? need 2 ticks before a note after a spinner i believe.
Good luck on getting it ranked!
SPOILER
for m4m could you please mod https://osu.ppy.sh/s/367377 (Extra difficulty)
sorry for late response
nbd
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
General

  1. 00:02:627 - The Kiai begins here
  2. 00:18:012 - The kiai ends here
  3. 01:35:127 - Finish the kiai here
  4. Remove "instrumental" tags, it will be added when qualified
  5. Remove "Cytus" tags, you've got him in Source
  6. Ask a BN if the name of the difficulties are allowed


Easy

  1. 00:11:089 (6,1) - DS error i quess
  2. 00:14:935 (4) - NC
  3. 00:18:012 - you could map this pause and stop here 00:30:319 -
  4. 00:36:089 (1,2) - Snap NC
  5. 00:36:473 (2,3) - This is really ugly and difficult for beginners
  6. 00:42:627 (6,1) - Snap NC
  7. 00:56:281 (3) - What was it here?It has nothing to map in 1/2 here
  8. 00:58:012 (6) - NC
  9. 01:03:781 (5) - ^
  10. 01:08:973 (2) - This is not allowed in Easy difficulty, finish that slider in 1/1
  11. 01:09:935 (1) - Begin this spin here 01:10:319 -
  12. 01:16:473 (2,3) - This is not allowed on easy difficulty
  13. 01:19:550 (5) - NC
  14. 01:29:550 (3,4) - This is ugly, I advise you to change it


Normal

  1. 00:10:127 (5) - NC
  2. 00:13:781 (4) - Ungly slider
  3. 00:19:165 (5) - NC
  4. 00:23:781 (5) - This is not allowed
  5. 00:18:396 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - 00:24:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This seems slow jumps, then it is not allowed
  6. 00:52:627 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is very confusing, even to me o.O
  7. 01:16:281 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - this is very intense
  8. 01:21:089 (1) - This spin is too small for this difficulty
  9. 01:22:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Intense
  10. 01:27:435 (5) - NC
Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
3,089 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nao Tomori

Marianna wrote:

General

  1. 00:02:627 - The Kiai begins here
  2. 00:18:012 - The kiai ends here
  3. 01:35:127 - Finish the kiai here
  4. Remove "instrumental" tags, it will be added when qualified
  5. Remove "Cytus" tags, you've got him in Source
  6. Ask a BN if the name of the difficulties are allowed


Easy

  1. 00:11:089 (6,1) - DS error i quess
  2. 00:14:935 (4) - NC
  3. 00:18:012 - you could map this pause and stop here 00:30:319 -
  4. 00:36:089 (1,2) - Snap NC
  5. 00:36:473 (2,3) - This is really ugly and difficult for beginners
  6. 00:42:627 (6,1) - Snap NC
  7. 00:56:281 (3) - What was it here?It has nothing to map in 1/2 here
  8. 00:58:012 (6) - NC
  9. 01:03:781 (5) - ^
  10. 01:08:973 (2) - This is not allowed in Easy difficulty, finish that slider in 1/1
  11. 01:09:935 (1) - Begin this spin here 01:10:319 -
  12. 01:16:473 (2,3) - This is not allowed on easy difficulty
  13. 01:19:550 (5) - NC
  14. 01:29:550 (3,4) - This is ugly, I advise you to change it

will be changed shortly.


Normal

SPOILER
[*]00:10:127 (5) - NC
[*]00:13:781 (4) - Ungly slider
[*]00:19:165 (5) - NC
[*]00:23:781 (5) - This is not allowed changed
[*]00:18:396 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - 00:24:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This seems slow jumps, then it is not allowed seems fine to me? follows DS
[*]00:52:627 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is very confusing, even to me o.O changed to same combo, that may help
[*]01:16:281 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - this is very intense it is the most intense part of the song
[*]01:21:089 (1) - This spin is too small for this difficulty changed
[*] 01:22:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Intense same as above
[*]01:27:435 (5) - NC
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
Hello. As per your request: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/393945

  1. Artist: KillerBlood
  2. Title: The Black Case
  3. Source: Cytus
<Reference>
  1. http://puu.sh/lToGh/c0a791b01b.jpg
  2. http://puu.sh/lToQ0/54e9486e9f.jpg
  3. http://puu.sh/lToWB/8c99034b61.png
The current metadata is fine!
But, please remove "cytus" of Tags because it is used in Source. Also you should add "Trick Box" to Tags because Trick Box is guest mapper.

Good luck~ :3
Qiyana
1,585 posts
Joined April 2014
Qiyana
As you only modded 1 diff, i'll mod 1 too
Level 1
00:03:396 (4) - NC this.
00:09:550 (4) - NC this.
00:09:550 (4,5,6) - Keep the 4 away from the 6.
00:15:320 (5) - NC this.
00:36:473 (2,3,4,5) - You shouldn't have repeat sliders like that when they don't match earlier patterns.
00:49:165 (1) - This wouldn't go well.
00:52:627 (5) - NC this.
00:55:512 (2,3) - Put in a full slider.
00:58:012 (6) - NC this.
01:03:781 (5) - NC this.
01:03:781 (5,6,7) - Don't use the same slider patterns over and over like that.
01:26:089 (5) - NC this.
01:31:858 (6) - NC this.
That's all.
Wishmaker980
238 posts
Joined October 2013
Wishmaker980
Hello! From my NM Queue~

Level 8

00:28:589 (2,3) - Fix blanket
00:30:704 (3,1) - Blanket
00:51:665 (5) - This slider though, might wanna change it to a more interesting slider art
00:57:242 (5,7) - Blanket
01:10:319 (6,7) - Fix distance, the distance seems smaller between the notes compared to 01:11:089 (8,9) -
01:21:858 (1,2,3,4) - Fix blanket, looks so compact lol
01:22:627 (5) - NC here
01:27:242 (6) - ^
01:28:781 (5) - ^
01:31:858 (5) - ^

That's all from me!Good luck with your map!
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