1. 00:02:627 (3) - This note can be emphasised more than the other notes 1,2 since it's the finish.
2. 00:12:435 (5) - Remove the drum beat from this note. It's not heard in the music.
3. 00:14:935 (1,2,5) - I don't see the reason for such harsh SV changes here. The music only loses a little bit of intensity, but you've lowered the SV too much compared to what the music believes. I recommend putting the SV to something more sensible.
4. 00:21:665 (3) - Can you remove the drum sampleset from this whole slider? It causes a hitsound inconsistency with the other sliders.
5. 00:48:685 - Similar thing here. The music only gains a slight bit of intensity, but all of a sudden the SV changes drastically. Please note that these may apply to other difficulties

1. I don't think you've hitsounded this difficulty yet. Double check your difficulty please.
2. 01:07:627 (3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing here conflicts with 01:06:858 (11,12,13) - , as they're both similarly spaced but on different rhythms. I recommend you change up the patterns from this combo so it doesn't suggest that.
3. 01:29:165 (7,10) - These kicksliders don't need to be here. The instruments follow a very basic 1/2 rhythm here, not 1/4

1. 00:11:473 (1) - I hope you realise that you can just have 3 anchors to make a perfectly curved slider. Adding more just makes it look wonky.
2. 00:12:242 (3) - Speaking of wonky, this slider is awkwardly squished. You should stick to using regular shapes to keep the flow continuous.
3. 00:14:935 (1) - I don't really know what this spinner is mapped to, since the melody here still plays out where you can maps with circles. There's not a continuing sound here that follows the spinner.
4. 01:22:627 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I believe this pattern is too dense for the difficulty it sits at. Too much spamming could potentially wear the player out at this level.

DahplA wrote:

[Level 6]

SPOILER

1. 00:02:627 (3) - This note can be emphasised more than the other notes 1,2 since it's the finish. changed
2. 00:12:435 (5) - Remove the drum beat from this note. It's not heard in the music. yeah, was a mistake
3. 00:14:935 (1,2,5) - I don't see the reason for such harsh SV changes here. The music only loses a little bit of intensity, but you've lowered the SV too much compared to what the music believes. I recommend putting the SV to something more sensible. increased SV
4. 00:21:665 (3) - Can you remove the drum sampleset from this whole slider? It causes a hitsound inconsistency with the other sliders. yup
5. 00:48:685 - Similar thing here. The music only gains a slight bit of intensity, but all of a sudden the SV changes drastically. Please note that these may apply to other difficulties increased SV before this

[Level 4]

SPOILER

1. I don't think you've hitsounded this difficulty yet. Double check your difficulty please. yes i only did the last one
2. 01:07:627 (3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing here conflicts with 01:06:858 (11,12,13) - , as they're both similarly spaced but on different rhythms. I recommend you change up the patterns from this combo so it doesn't suggest that. changed, should be more easy to follow
3. 01:29:165 (7,10) - These kicksliders don't need to be here. The instruments follow a very basic 1/2 rhythm here, not 1/4 but..but..my creativity!!! - changed

[Level 3]

SPOILER

1. 00:11:473 (1) - I hope you realise that you can just have 3 anchors to make a perfectly curved slider. Adding more just makes it look wonky. you look wonky =( changed
2. 00:12:242 (3) - Speaking of wonky, this slider is awkwardly squished. You should stick to using regular shapes to keep the flow continuous. changed to straight
3. 00:14:935 (1) - I don't really know what this spinner is mapped to, since the melody here still plays out where you can maps with circles. There's not a continuing sound here that follows the spinner. mapped through it
4. 01:22:627 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I believe this pattern is too dense for the difficulty it sits at. Too much spamming could potentially wear the player out at this level. changed rhythm

-

The rest is nice. Lovely song choice, I like it. Good luck. thanks a lot

Xbox wrote:

hue

[Level 6]

SPOILER

1. 00:01:089 (1,2) - I though it'd be much cooler if you CTRL+J these two. ok... maybe
2. 00:06:281 (6) - Nothing really odd except THE FACT THAT THERE IS SO MUCH ANCHOR POINTS AT THE SLIDER END LOL. i like anchor points f u :^)
3. 00:16:089 (3) - I suggest you move this note a little farther away from the slider end because players will become confused that since it's in close proximity, they will assume this note is on the blue tick. moved a little
4. 00:16:281 (4,5) - What happened to mapping to the start of the instrument between these two notes here? This part is rhythmically confusing; move the slider to the previous red tick and fill in the space. a mistake was made while changing SV
5. 00:24:935 (3) - Lower this slider slightly diagonally left so the spacing is more even between the previous two sliders. Also pattern suggestion? The flow you had going on is a bit jarring. changed slightly
   Leave the 4th slide the same.
6. 00:29:742 (6) - Move this slightly to the left? So it flows a lot easier for the upcoming triple. think its fine
7. 00:51:665 (1) - This slider is aesthetically displeasing to my eyes xdd you are aesthetically displeasing
8. 01:01:089 (4,6) - Have these two be the same slider? they are
9. 01:01:858 (6) - Weird, i'm not hearing a finish at the start of the slider. misclick, changed
10. 01:03:781 (1,2,3) - Move this triple up and make it more between 01:03:589 (6,4) -. I think it looks a lot neater this way. changed, should flow better now.
11. Very nice jump patterns at the last kiai; represents the intensity of the music quite well. same
12. 01:35:127 (1) - I would move this note more to the bottom of the screen to indicate there is a pause between this note and the previous note. should be fine, the rhythm in the song is pretty clear imo.

Aihuro wrote:

Hi! Requested from my queue. (Instead of making a GD you also said I could mod your map.)
Well, here goes nothing.

General:

1. Please enable "Widescreen Support" since you don't have a SB.
2. I suggest you add a soft-sliderslide to your song folder to get rid of those annoying sounds. Here: http://puu.sh/lV1vz/812f9f7aaf.wav
   thank you very much for this
3. I think you can lower the volume a bit since it is 100% at the moment! It is too loud imo. it shouldnt be at 100, hmm..
4. In AiMod, it says there are tag conflicts with DavidEd's diff. Please fix that as soon as possible.

Trick Box's Level 1:

SPOILER

1. 00:05:319 (2,1) - I think you should stack them instead of overlapping. I would also copy and paste these two sliders: 00:05:704 (3,1) - . It will look better and also neater imo. this doesn't overlap. the sliders are identical
2. 00:15:320 (1,2) - This rhythm will be hard to follow for newbies, since it is the easiest diff. Why not end (1) here: 00:15:896 - (Remember to remove (2)) It will be much easier to follow the rhythm imo and it isn't really a big change so why not? i am confident that anyone with fingers can click 1/1 beats.
3. 00:16:665 (4) - Remove this note and start the spinner here instead. i don't think this is necessary, since the spinner is pretty long. some one said to add a note instead of using the spinner as the note a while ago too.
4. 00:32:627 (4,5) - I'm not really a fan in these. In general it's maybe aloud but imo it looks rather nazi. Why not blanket them instead? yup
5. 00:39:550 (3) - Uhm why is there a clap here when there isn't here: 00:38:012 (2) - and here: 00:41:089 (4) - and here: 00:42:627 (5) - . It sounds really out of place so remove the clap please. havent actually hitsounded yet, will be changed.
6. 00:44:935 (1,2) - This looks really ugly and nazi. Just turn (2) into a curved slider then turn him anti-clockwise. Place it here: X: 440 Y: 180. changed
7. 00:52:627 (5,6) - Why not turn him into a curved slider? Then you can blanket them! slightly blanketed
8. 00:52:627 (5,1) - I highly suggest you stack them. ok
9. 00:55:512 (2,3) - I have a better rhythm you can use instead. Just let (2) start here: 00:55:319 - and ends here: 00:55:704 - then add a note here: 00:56:089 - (I can hear a strong beat) then just move 00:56:281 (3) - here: 00:56:473 - . It improves the flow, and also plays better. yes, this is a good suggestion
10. 00:57:627 (5,2) - They aren't stacked properly. Please fix that. they aren't on the screen at the same time, and it messes up distance snap a lot.
11. 01:01:089 (3) - I think a slider will fit better since there are a strong beat here: 01:01:473 - (Where you can end your slider!) changed
12. 01:04:935 (2,4) - This is a really ugly overlap, please stack them to avoid that. changed angle
13. 01:10:127 (1) - I think you should start the spinner here: 01:10:319 - where the beat is. yup
14. 01:13:396 (1,3) - Stack (3) better on (1)'s tail. Then after you've done that, just stack 01:15:319 (3,2) - they are both stacked...?
15. 01:26:858 (3,2) - ^ Same as above. Stack. ^
16. 01:34:550 (6,1) - Again, I highly suggest you ignore those 1/2 sliders in the easiest diffs! Just lengthen 01:34:550 (6) - till here: 01:34:935 - Then just start the spinner here: 01:35:127 - . i think 1 is fine.
17. Okay, the diff seems general fine but still needs more mods.

I think I will stop here for now.
If you have any questions just ask me in-game or PM.
Good Luck with this mapset of yours~

Momizi wrote:

hi,mod from my queue,sry for so long
[Lv6]
00:13:973 (4,5) - I think here don use stack,use jump instead of it，for example move 5 to 184,177 i like these
music form here 00:30:319 (1) - to 00:53:973 (10) - is light，I think dont use big jump is better，you can use big jump other where nerfed some jumps
00:52:435 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - use same disatance or offset distance yeah
00:53:589 (8,9,10) - here is too Radom，how abort copy 00:52:819 (4,5) - and paste in same place instead of 8 9 changed
00:59:165 (2) - dont let 2 touch the slider in left changed
01:16:473 (5,6,7,8) - you can use ctrl+C ctrl+V，and then use ctrl+shift+R to place tese notes as petal i don't understand this, it looks fine in my opinion
01:35:127 (1) - finish
[LV4]
00:09:358 (8) - maybe can use nc
00:23:012 (7) - dont use drum souns better
00:48:781 (5) - delete it，have more strong rhythm
^ all changed
01:29:935 (10) - although its not stack，but its also dangerous ：D i like it cuz same sound in song twice
[LV3]
00:22:242 (4) - I dont like slier under another slider's body its not look well not much i can do about it
00:58:396 (3) - same here changed

easy and normal look fine
GOOD LUCK:D

top kek m8 wrote:

hey man, bloody like this song. hope it gets ranked!

To me the offset was a little off, try 1,049

Level 1

SPOILER

00:14:935 new combo instead of the note after it
00:33:356 NC
00:42:587 NC
00:46:433 NC
00:52:202 NC
01:01:049 NC
01:01:049 maybe just one slider, instead of a quick tap. i know it sounds the same as the music but just a thought should be fine
01:07:202 NC
01:10:279 this spinners ends at a weird time (probably because it's an audible sound), maybe make it silent yeah
01:15:664 no NC make it the note after
01:17:587 add a note here for consistency ok
01:27:972 no NC make it the note after

Level 2

SPOILER

The CS is pretty big, try making it a bit smaller.

00:03:164 NC
00:10:087 his combo seems a bit weird, try something like this good idea
00:14:510 put just one note this is fine i think
00:17:972 NC
00:27:587 NC
00:33:549 get rid of 6 and put 5 at 00:33:741, of course you'll have to move it good idea
00:39:895 NC
00:47:587 too many repeats here, try double repeat and then a circle at 00:48:356 i think the way it is is ok
00:52:587 this is weird as well, try getting rid of 4. probably fine
00:58:164 NC
01:01:049 NC
01:18:741 put a slider that last for 1 beat here possibly? good idea
01:28:741 consistency, so the same as 01:22:587 that would involve changing the rhythm entirely, i think it's fine.

i've probably mis-done a few things or missed some stuff here and there, so don't worry about ignoring a few.

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

General

1. all kiai section lines in all diffs are unsnapped. fixed

Level 6

SPOILER

1. 00:01:856 (3,4,5,6,1) - recommend you do ctrl+g to this, which plays a bit more nature. i like nature, nice and leafy
2. 00:16:663 (5) - some kind of same as above. seems better for now
3. 00:26:854 (10) - here same as above as well, just try it, i can say it feels better. changed slider shapes
4. 00:33:200 (1,3) - maybe swap nc setting here. put it on (4) instead
5. 00:40:892 (4) - maybe do nc here to spread ds shifting before and after this note. okay
6. tbh, this map is good in the thoughts of placement. all jumps and their distance almost expressed the music very well. the lack of the map itself is like unpolished structures, which you maybe didn't care that much currently. well, anyway, i think this map is nice to me whatever it seems like a mature one, have a star. thou, pls ask more mods to your map to give some improvement, and watch out what you've got here to be cared in the next mapping work you may put effort in.

DavidEd's Level 5

SPOILER

1. 01:10:314 (1) - and 01:22:621 (1) - unsnapped.
2. 00:16:278 (5,1) - larger this 1/2 jump for you have similar distance at 00:16:086 (4,5) - with 1/4 gap. and also, 00:16:663 (1) - may be end at 00:17:047.
3. general stuff are fine to me, some jumps seems weird but well, they plays fine :3

Level 4

SPOILER

1. 00:01:087 (1,4) - maybe avoid overlap like this next time lol... changed (1,2)
2. 00:16:278 (4,5) - larger volume here to fit the heavy downbeats in drum track lol think it's fine...
3. 01:05:506 (7) - maybe avoid ds pattern here, try 458,377. 457,377
4. 01:07:237 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's a bit sudden you put ds patterns like this... i recommend you just spread them orz... OTL changed
5. well, same feeling as top diff offers... you really need to do some hardworking in composing orzzz

Level 3

SPOILER

1. 00:40:315 (4) - this overmap is not that necessary imo. changed
2. 00:53:968 (5,6,7,8,9) - ds here shall be consistent. it shall
3. 00:57:045 (5) - missed some hitsound? dont think so - added finish anyway
4. 01:34:543 (5,6) - shorter the ds for you have 1/2 jump with similar ds at 01:34:735 (6,1) - . ok
5. same to top diff as well.

Level 2

SPOILER

1. 00:47:623 (3) - repeating sliders like this shall be avoid in lower diffs. edited to slider stream
2. antiflow like 01:21:852 (2,3,1) - is not recommended to be set in lower diffs as well. unavoidable, cursor can sit on the slider anyway

Trick Box's Level 1

1. 01:16:467 (2,3) - this pattern is too hard to noobs imo... replace it with another one which is easier to be read pls.
2. this diff contains some antiflow as well... maybe avoid them next time you map easy level maps, too.

thou not bad in general, maybe better if you do some more work (in next map maybe) Triggered

good luck

Battle wrote:

i've ultimately decided to try to mod the things i like in my modding q so there's a lot to mod rn lol

[General]
Snap kiais

[1] all changes made

SPOILER

00:05:702 (3) - .05 ds difference is a lot tbh
00:05:702 (3,1) - Point 3 downwards to that way it at least feels like it leads into 1
00:31:854 (3,4,5) - Would kinda look smoother if sth like this
00:55:314 (2,3,4,5) - Flow jagged here, try to make smoother
01:01:083 (3,4) - 1/2 in easy? no
01:10:314 (1,1) - Need a whole downbeat of recovery time unrankable
01:16:467 (2,3) - Stack in normal is kinda no, too hard for beginners
01:34:159 (5,1) - Overlap in easy is no, too hard for beginners to read, too confusing

[2]

SPOILER

00:11:471 (1,3) - too close fix pls changed
00:13:778 (4) - Like the very edge of it goes off screen, relocate unrankable moved up a px or two
00:17:240 (1,1) - Small overlap here fixed
00:19:162 (2,4) - Same me too thanks
00:35:123 (7,2) - This just looks messy, too crowded changed to sliders, looks better
00:35:892 - Fix flow in this section, it's so crowded and there's like, nothing that leads into anything ^
00:38:777 (5) - Point downward for flow to 6 moved 6, changed angle for 5
00:43:392 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - Consider adding some curve sliders, too blocky k
00:52:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This in a normal? Waaaaaaay too hard, nerf it irelia'd
00:53:199 (5,1) - Fix overlap fix
01:27:620 (2,4) - ^ ^

[3]

SPOILER

00:04:548 (3,4) - Blanket fix ???
00:05:702 (3,4) - Why stack here, you don't on 00:12:240 - changed
00:12:240 (3,4,5,6) - make 5 more left to improve visuals 5 now in middle
00:14:163 (10,1) - Overlap looks bad changed to overlap entirely
00:18:778 (3,4,5) - Same
00:41:277 (6,7,8) - messy
00:46:853 (7,8) - Stack kinda feels out of place because there's only two instances where you stacked, and the previous instance was a red tick before downbeat, but this doesn't make much sense 8 removed
01:04:929 (4,6) - Why not stack? stack
01:10:314 - Why not map here when level 2, easier level, is mapped? oops
01:26:467 (3,4,5,6) - I disagree with having it stack so much as well as the fact that the 1,2,3 string is pretty cluttered, try making it clearer changed, different patterns

[4]

SPOILER

00:14:932 (1,2) - maybe flip 2 so it leads into 3 more changed a little
00:22:624 (6) - Nc 7 nc
00:25:701 (5) - ^
00:38:777 - You should make the claps clickable for this section i tried to follow the claps in the song, i think the rhythm makes sense, hitsounding is separate from that
00:40:315 - ^ kinda a waste to have it as the end of a repeat slider ^
00:43:007 (4,5,6) - Flow is kinda more for 4 -> 6 instead of 5 ctrl-g 5 and 6
01:01:660 - Why is this not nc'd when 00:55:507 (1) - is? oops
There was a pretty big diff spike towards the end , try to clean up patterns tho, for example 01:21:275 (8,9,10,11) - can be a little confusing since it has to go back and for from 7-8-9 then forward, so it may be pretty ambiguous play-wise changed most of ending patterns

[5]

SPOILER

00:38:585 (3) - try to make clap clickable
00:41:854 - ^ same
00:43:007 (2,3,4,5,6) - 5,6 kinda feel awkward, maybe re-arrange for better flow
00:43:969 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ kinda same, it just feels smoother because I play things on right side smoother lol
01:00:891 (6,1) - Spacing kinda lackluster since 1 is a strong beat

I'm gonna just gonna be content with modding 5 diffs lol gl on 6th one tho Thanks.

Term Akatski wrote:

from my queue

lvl3
00:01:856 (5) - bring this down a bit k
00:05:894 (4) - move to x:112 y:260 moved
00:11:471 (1) - shorten this slider into a 1/2 slider and add a hit circle at 00:11:855 this would make it look kind of ugly imo
00:20:509 (3) - move to x:192 y:324 because this jump is too much ok
00:45:700 (4,5,6) - turn to sliders the circles are nice and calm

lvl4
00:14:932 (1,2) - blanket is changed
00:23:008 (7) - NC
00:58:391 (3) - turn into a hit circle then add a 1/1 slider on 00:58:584 and remove 00:58:968 (4) good suggestion
01:05:891 (8) - NC
01:24:736 (8) - NC

lvl5
00:06:279 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:08:202 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:21:855 (3,1) - fix blanket
00:54:545 (7) - NC

good luck on getting it rank

-Tochi wrote:

• 
  

  Level 6

1. 00:11:086 (7) - This slider is a bit awkward imo, it should be straight like: http://puu.sh/m77zi/ef14f32186.png changed
2. 00:12:047 (4) - Rotate a bit for better flow: http://puu.sh/m77AA/1f9b6de373.png changed
3. 00:16:663 (5,6) - Please avoid this tiny overlap. moved 1 px
4. 00:58:584 (10) - Ctrl +G? changed
5. 01:16:467 (5) - The red anchor point isn't necessary, since u didn't do it with the other sliders. now they all have red anchor point

SPOILER

• 
  

  DavidEd's Level 5

1. 00:43:392 (4,6) - Too close to each other unlike 00:43:200 (3,5) - it looks kinda random, so i recommend to space it more.
2. 00:44:738 (4,6) - Same as above, unlike 00:44:546 (3,5) -

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  Feedback

  
  Nice map good luck

Lasse wrote:

oh I wrote 5 instead of 6
if I mod GD I normally write the name of the person
that mod wasn't for your diff, sorry for that
it was meant for the level 6 diff
also I didn't mean to offend anyone, lol
keep in mind that those are suggestions (even if they weren't for you) that I can't and won't force anyone to apply

Lasse wrote:

m4m reply from my queue

Level 6

SPOILER

1. 00:05:509 (2,3,4,5) - the way you overlap 3-5 and the left is stacked feels a bit sloppy, sth like this http://i.imgur.com/POTdd4s.jpg (1-3-5 equal spacing) would look much cleaner and play fine changed
2. 00:07:625 - according to how you mapped the sounds here and according to the music this really needs to be clickable, it feels really weird to have this high melody sound clickable the whole time since it seems to be your main focus and then you put it on a sliderend changed
3. 00:09:355 (1,2,3,4) - this doesnt only happen here, but it's a good example. It is very unclear what you try to follow, 00:09:355 (1,2) - say "I want to follow the high melody" with 2 ending on a strong drum and all but then 4 says "well I gues the drums are nice too" 00:09:932 (3) - changing those on the middle of this feels so confusing and makes it hard to focus on what should be tapped (as a player) removed (3), (2) is now repeat slider
4. 00:14:932 (1,3) - similar here, drum on sldierend, drum clickable,,,, follows the trumpet sound, not the drums here
5. 00:17:336 - ignoring this 1/4 feels like such a waste yeah
6. 00:24:162 (1) - they are way too curved (and weirdly too) for their length, take them back to 2010 and get some nicer ones idea was to reduce slider length without decreasing SV, it looks fine to me
7. 00:26:277 (8,9) - no reason to stack, makes no sense musically, they are both strong and stopping feels wrong here moved (8) to slider tail
8. 00:34:739 (1,2,3,1,2) - if you are going to place overlaps like that, at least bring some structure into them, like same spacing or whatever, atm it looks like they are just there with no further reasoning "idk where to put them" i think its fine, changed rhythm here to follow song better
9. 00:42:431 (3,4,5,6) - making an actual square and rotating a bit instead of just breaking it on the last note would look so nice and play really well http://i.imgur.com/dhPu55d.jpg changed to square
10. 00:50:507 (7,9) - not having those unnecessary miniscule overlaps takes barely any time and looks much cleaner, 00:59:930 (6,1) - 01:27:620 (3,5) -
11. 00:51:661 (1) - uhh this looks like it came straight from a 2007 map. Use a normal curve or a nice shape, but this just looks straight up bad and unfitting (also the slider should not end on that sound, that should be clickable)
    => could try sth like this http://i.imgur.com/lzYReMJ.jpg with a muted sliderend should be better now
12. barely the only time this happens, but a ncie example. considering how strong the violin (?) and drum on the end are it should really be clickable, also if you listen closely you should realize that that violin sound on the end "belongs" to 00:58:584 (10) -, so try sth like making the end here clickable and stacking it on 10 i think it plays fine
13. 01:00:122 (7,1) - really confusing as you use nearly half ds so it looks more like higher spaced 1/2, try either stacking/overlapping or moving them further, there are spots/songs/patterns where this might be fine, but this is definitely not one of those i think it's fine here, they are stacked...
14. 01:03:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - again a good example where you seemingly switch focus on sounds the whole time this follows the bass the entire time, and the trumpet mimics it.
15. 01:04:160 (4,5,7,8) - also those are clearly different musical patterns/sounds /4-5 and 7-8) so both stacks shouldnt be on the same spot and they most likely should also not both be stacked they're actually the same note for the trumpet, which is why i stacked them all in the first place
16. 01:30:313 (1,2,3,4) - easy there hw, lol. if you actually think those fit, then at least make them symmetrical or sth they are symmetrical, like 1,2 and 3,4 are ctrl-h
17. start the spinner 01:35:312 (1) - on the blue tick already, makes that awkward empty spot smaller i think it's fine as it is.

pretty much everything I mentioned doesn't only occur once but carries on throughou the whole thing and will most likely also be the case for lower diffs

• 
  00:01:089 - snap to 00:01:087
  00:17:339 - snap to 00:17:432
  00:54:935 - snap to 00:54:930
  01:10:319 - snap to 01:10:314
  01:22:627 - snap to 01:22:621
  01:34:935 - snap to 01:34:928
  01:39:646 - snap to 01:39:735

• 
  00:17:339 - snap to 00:17:336
  00:31:185 - snap to 00:31:181
  00:48:685 - snap to 00:48:680
  01:39:646 - snap to 01:39:639

• 
  00:15:191 - snap to 00:15:220
  00:15:255 - snap to 00:15:317
  00:15:768 - snap to 00:15:797
  00:15:832 - snap to 00:15:893
  00:17:339 - snap to 00:17:336
  00:31:185 - snap to 00:31:181
  00:48:685 - snap to 00:48:680
  01:39:646 - snap to 01:39:639

• 
  00:17:339 - snap to 00:17:336
  00:31:185 - snap to 00:31:181
  00:48:685 - snap to 00:48:680
  01:39:646 - snap to 01:39:639

• 
  00:02:627 - snap to 00:02:625

• 
  00:17:339 - snap to 00:17:336
  00:31:185 - snap to 00:31:181
  00:48:685 - snap to 00:48:680
  01:30:223 - snap to 01:30:216

-Nao Tomori- wrote:

Technically it is a first map, but it is SP +28 so... at least decent by now I think.

1. 00:02:625 (2,3) - This gap is quite confusing due to the DS you have used. Such a short distance for a long gap, you should consider atleast stacking it to improve the readability.
2. I would really recommend you to map all the drums that the song has, you seemed to skip them to map the other instrument (i don't know the name uuh :p) and it's a bit weird to have drums unmapped in a song like this.
3. About NC, you should use it on the downbeats (big white ticks) in order to make them consistent, at the moment they're quite consistent, but they're a bit bad positioned imo.
4. 00:14:932 (1,2) - This kind of gap is really confusing, it does look like a normal 1/2 gap but it's 1/3 one, Maybe a lower spacing to the (2) would make all the difference here. This spacing really mislead to a 1/2 pattern.
5. For this difficulty these are all the points I have to comment, but apart from this, polishing is really necessary here, the map lacks a lot of quality itself due to overlaps, missleading patterns and bad shaped sliders :/

1. For this difficulty I can say barely the same of "Level 3". Overlaps, bad readability and weird NCing. I'm not saying the difficult itself is bad, it looks ok, the rhythm is more or less good, but you should pay more attention to the feeling of the patterns. And besides, undermapping an Insane is completely awful in my opinion. In this difficulty we can find the same gaps where there are drums but not the other instrument that you're following. Let me explain this better. This other instrument is just a complement to the drums, and the drums are what you really should focus in this kind of song without any vocals.

1. Round off BPM: 156.008 > 156
2. 00:01:087 - Move Kiai time to 00:02:625. It blends with the finish well.

1. 00:12:240 (1) - Add clap
2. 00:15:317 (1) - 1/2 sliders are too short for an Ez map and changing rthythm for 00:15:317 (1,2,3,4) is a bit complicated. Same goes as 01:34:543 (6,1)

1. The third combo color on this diff is different from others. It is 128,128,128 instead of 92,92,92
2. This diff is somewhat difficult for me to FC because of the greatly distanced objects. You can adjust SV to 1.7 and DS to 1.3x. Btw, why the default SV multiplier for this diff is 0.75x. Should it be 1.0x?
3. 00:04:548 (7) - Make it into a 1/2 repeating slider.
4. 00:13:778 (4) - Move to 00:13:586 and adjust clap.
5. 00:21:470 (1) - Remove clap to have consistency.
6. 00:43:969 (3) - Make it to a single hitcircle
7. 00:44:546 (1,2) - Make it a 2 1/2 circle then a hitcircle.
8. 00:48:776 (1) - Replace with hitobjects. This part don't signal a spinner, imo.
9. 01:17:044 (2,4) - Remove. this part is difficult for some, imo. Same as 01:23:198 (2,4) and 01:26:274

1. 00:15:220 - Green timing lines here are unsnapped.
2. 00:28:970 (1) - A part of slider is out of the editing screen. Same as 00:43:584 (6)
3. 01:25:697 (1,2,3) - Make this more distant.

1. 01:22:621 (1,2) - Sliderend here is unsnapped (this needs to be fixed)

UndeadCapulet wrote:

From my queue:

Big Wall of Text About Pretty Much Everything

SPOILER

Only going to look at the highest difficulty, basically everything I say can be applied to lower difficulties. (I didn't look at the GD's, but David's can't be too bad xd )

Why is there kiai in the beginning? It's the same intensity as the section at 00:54:930 (8) - . I think you should just let the ending have kiai since it's the most intense part of the song. mhm

Your hitsounding is inconsistent and disconnected from the song. It sounds pretty dreadful. There's a bit too much to explain in one mod post, so I'll just direct you to this handy guide where you can read up on the basics. I would agree, but I tried to just follow the hitsounds provided by the cytus mapper. So, claps where there are claps in the song, finishes on finishes, and whatnot.

There are also a lot of visual/aesthetic issues, but I'm probably the last person to be talking about that.

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Good luck in your future mapping!

Lumael wrote:

Hello! M4M here from my queue

SPOILER

Level 3

1. 00:02:625 (2,3) - This gap is quite confusing due to the DS you have used. Such a short distance for a long gap, you should consider atleast stacking it to improve the readability. changed
2. I would really recommend you to map all the drums that the song has, you seemed to skip them to map the other instrument (i don't know the name uuh :p) and it's a bit weird to have drums unmapped in a song like this. I thought that following the trumpet would be more interesting, but a lot of people said to just stick to drums. So i guess that will happen.
3. About NC, you should use it on the downbeats (big white ticks) in order to make them consistent, at the moment they're quite consistent, but they're a bit bad positioned imo. reworking NC, thanks
4. 00:14:932 (1,2) - This kind of gap is really confusing, it does look like a normal 1/2 gap but it's 1/3 one, Maybe a lower spacing to the (2) would make all the difference here. This spacing really mislead to a 1/2 pattern. changed
5. For this difficulty these are all the points I have to comment, but apart from this, polishing is really necessary here, the map lacks a lot of quality itself due to overlaps, missleading patterns and bad shaped sliders :/ yeah, i need to work on this. first map and all that.

Level 4

1. For this difficulty I can say barely the same of "Level 3". Overlaps, bad readability and weird NCing. I'm not saying the difficult itself is bad, it looks ok, the rhythm is more or less good, but you should pay more attention to the feeling of the patterns. And besides, undermapping an Insane is completely awful in my opinion. In this difficulty we can find the same gaps where there are drums but not the other instrument that you're following. Let me explain this better. This other instrument is just a complement to the drums, and the drums are what you really should focus in this kind of song without any vocals.

Well, I'm sorry for the long wait and short mod, but I'm not feeling so good these days and the song was quite horrible to my tastes, I really don't like this kind of song. This may not be an excuse for such a long wait, but well.. I'm sorry :/

Neil Leo wrote:

Hi, ordinary modding from my queue.

SPOILER

[Overall]

1. Round off BPM: 156.008 > 156 i like my .008 it makes my map quirky and unique
2. 00:01:087 - Move Kiai time to 00:02:625. It blends with the finish well. this kiai was actually removed

[Trick Box's Level 1]

1. 00:12:240 (1) - Add clap
2. 00:15:317 (1) - 1/2 sliders are too short for an Ez map and changing rthythm for 00:15:317 (1,2,3,4) is a bit complicated. Same goes as 01:34:543 (6,1)

[Level 2]

1. The third combo color on this diff is different from others. It is 128,128,128 instead of 92,92,92
2. This diff is somewhat difficult for me to FC because of the greatly distanced objects. You can adjust SV to 1.7 and DS to 1.3x. Btw, why the default SV multiplier for this diff is 0.75x. Should it be 1.0x?
3. 00:04:548 (7) - Make it into a 1/2 repeating slider. i would do this but it would seriously screw up everything. i'm probably going to end up chucking this diff out the window anyway.
4. 00:13:778 (4) - Move to 00:13:586 and adjust clap. k
5. 00:21:470 (1) - Remove clap to have consistency. k
6. 00:43:969 (3) - Make it to a single hitcircle this would make a large pause in the song which i want to avoid
7. 00:44:546 (1,2) - Make it a 2 1/2 circle then a hitcircle. good rhythm choice
8. 00:48:776 (1) - Replace with hitobjects. This part don't signal a spinner, imo. i agree, that was just there cuz i was bored of making a 2 star map t b h
9. 01:17:044 (2,4) - Remove. this part is difficult for some, imo. Same as 01:23:198 (2,4) and 01:26:274
   i need that diff spike for mad PP gains mate, no can do

[Level 3]

1. 00:15:220 - Green timing lines here are unsnapped. it silences the slider end.
2. 00:28:970 (1) - A part of slider is out of the editing screen. fixed Same as 00:43:584 (6) i think this one is fine, we'll see.
3. 01:25:697 (1,2,3) - Make this more distant. distanced

[Level 6]

1. 01:22:621 (1,2) - Sliderend here is unsnapped (this needs to be fixed)

I can't mod the harder diffs, sry for that

That's all, good luck on mapping! Thanks for the mod

Wyatt wrote:

Level 4

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00:07:048 (1,2) - You use this double tap quite frequently and its not really timed with any specific sound. (00:13:201 (1,2) - ) (00:27:239 (1,2) -) (00:59:353 (1,2) -) (01:24:159 (1,2) - ) (01:30:313 (1,2) -) There is nothing wrong just the double
all of these are on points where the violin / trumpet / whatever i followed there does not change notes. since it doesn't change notes, why put a jump?

00:14:932 (2,3) - This does not read like a well. You are changing slider vilo as you make your first 3 tick slider. Also with how you have it placed it does not read like they are one tick apart. Either have it stack or change to a 4 tick slider. stacked 00:51:661 (5,1) - seems fine, 01:03:391 (5,1) - same here this one is also stacked
00:15:509 (1,2) - This needs to be re-timed.[color=#BF400] why?[/color]

00:16:663 (4,1,2,3) - Its very strange to have 3 notes under a slider, along with this slider being 5 ticks its a odd pattern. I would move them closer again because they don't read like they are streaming off the slider. (00:28:585 (7,1) -) same here
this rhythm follows the music the closest
00:19:355 (7,1) - These flow together weird. Id move (00:19:739 (1) -) to (00:20:124 (3) - ) and remap from there.
this functions as a back-and-forth since people dont normally follow sliders all the way through. i think it's fine

00:22:239 (6,7) - Fix this spacing

00:22:432 (7,1) - odd number tick sliders should be used with caution and i think this one is just a little random. Make it 2 tick and a 2 note stream or a 4 tick slider.
changed
00:23:778 (6,7,8) - Angle there slightly more to the left so it leads more naturally into the next jump.
stacked the triple a little mor instead
00:41:854 (1) - This should be the same combo as (00:41:661 (3) - ) changed

00:42:238 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This should not go to 10 combo. Add a new color here (00:43:392 (8) - ) probably
goes to 9 now =P
01:07:237 (1,2,1,2) - This should be re-timed.
i dunno why you hate 3/4 sliders so much, but this pattern was there earlier too. i think it's fine.
01:08:968 (4,1,2,3) - Make this 6 ticks into 2 notes.
that would put the first piano note on a slider end
01:16:083 (7) - Shorten this leave a tick between it and the slider.
there's a note on the blue tick though
01:18:967 (5) - This should be the combo color change not this (01:19:544 (1) -) having the combo change in the jump is harder to read.
(1) is clearly the start of a new phrase in the song, doesn't make sense to nc somewhere else
01:19:929 (3,4,5,6,7) - This section is weird to hit. Id consider changing it if others mention it.

01:27:620 (1,2,3,4) - Distance space these.
the increase in DS is on purpose
01:33:582 (1) - Move this one far away or right underneath. Same here 01:35:120 (1) -
i dont see why, makes it kind of harder to read. point is to have no motion, or very little, doesn't need to be perfectly stacked.
Final thoughts. Just patterns are nice. They could flow together better but are by no means bad as they stand. The map is overall very readable and feels nice, A few timing issues, and pasterns which iv mentioned could be changed or altered to play better. I think this difficulty still need a few more mods before its rankable.

level 3

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Slider vilo is way to high.
=(
00:08:202 (1,2,3) - Distance space these.
they are spaced just fine? 1.4~ for all of them
00:14:547 (5,6,7) - Bring this down.
it isnt offscreen, i think. it should be fine
00:24:162 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Time this whole section with the organ.
i dont see a reason why its mapped wrong atm.
00:38:969 (5) - Consider cutting this.
there's a note there, it would be weird to ignore it even if i'm following mostly bass guitar / drums
00:50:699 (1,2,3,4) - This might be spaced to far for the rest of this difficulty.
same spacing as the rest of it lol
00:51:468 (5) - Weird placement.
idea was to put a sharp angle since its a drum hit and it deserves recognition
00:52:238 (1,2,3,1,2) - Not sure what rhythm you are following with this. retime
the violin is pretty clear to me
00:54:545 (1,2,3,4,1) - 5 stack probably to hard for this diff. 3 stack should be fine. 01:16:083 (5,6,7,8,1) - same here
there are 5 notes though, having a slider would be ultra weird imo
00:57:237 (4,1) - Distance space this or have them stack. This goes for all big spaces like this.
moved a bit to the left, close enough
01:01:853 (6) - Have this slider be as long as this one. 01:01:853 (6) -
?_? assuming you mean 1/1 slider, there's a loud drum hit on the white tick so i dont want to put it under the sliderend
01:15:313 (1,2,3,4) - This might be to hard for this dif. 01:27:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - same again.
the diff needs something to define the diff right? if i remove everything remotely hard might as well call it a normal and be done with it.
Final thoughts. This difficulty seems really weird. Its ar7 but almost 4 stars. I think it would be really easy to just drop slider velocity, bring the spacing down between 1.1 and 1.3 and make this a hard map. With it sitting between a 4.2 and a 1.4 it should probably be around 3.2-3.5 star. Once you do this it will require quite a bit of remaping but as it is now it seems like a weird difficulty.
there will be another diff, but this one's ar will have to be raised as well

Level 1

I know very little about easy maps. But everything seems to be timed well. No overlapping. Flows well and everything seems to be distance snapped.

Level 5

This is great. Patterning is lovely, Spaced well. My only concern is that the star rating is very close to level 4. Although that could change since level 4 need to be modded quite a bit.
As a side note I think these part would work better as new combos for ease of readability. 00:57:622 (5) - , 01:00:506 (4) - , 01:03:776 (5) -

This was a mod for mod with Nao Tomori. Please look at this map if you haven't already. https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1003844

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

Hi, from my queue~

Level 4

I'd say overall just tone down the jumps in the start, they dont feel very fun. Also just PLEASEEE fix any sliders that end on blue ticks.
00:01:856 (5,6,1) - Move this over 1, spacing doesn't match previous 2 circles moved left
00:05:702 (3,4,5) - Space out 5 a little bit, feels awkward i wanted the repetition here since the song repeats the same, maybe the overlap is problematic..
00:21:855 (4,5,6) - Shorten the distance on these it's the same spacing as other similarly intense parts, it just looks a bit bigger cuz obutse angle
00:24:355 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make 2 and 3 overlap 6 and 7 k
00:27:239 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix distance on these, they kinda jump out at you from nowhere here, i think the increase in spacing matches the increase in volume and pitch of the song
00:28:585 (7,1) - Get rid of 1 and extend 7 to where 1 would be theres a beat where one is, i don't want it to be under a slider end. muted 7 end instead.
00:49:161 (2,3,4,5) - Move 2 up so it doesn't overlap with 5. 2 and 5 arent visible on the screen at the same time and it would cause some weird spacing if i shifted it up
00:51:661 (5,1) - Remove 1, extend 5 explained at 28s
01:03:391 (5,1) - ^ ^
01:07:237 (1,2,1) - Don't end sliders on blue ticks why should i not end sliders on blue ticks? if there is a beat on the white tick, i will put a circle on the white tick.
01:08:968 (4,1,2,3) - Do this instead https://i.gyazo.com/a346439392c5d3ba6ef ... 1a00b9.png no.
01:15:890 (5,6,7) - End 7 on the red tick no.
01:27:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nerf this jump, this feels completely out of nowhere jump status = nerfed

Good luck!

• [DavidEd's Level 5]

1. delete the timing point at 00:00:000 XD
2. 00:08:202 (4) - NC for emphasized the music would look nice
3. 00:08:778 (1,2,3) - any reason for the spacing changed? well the pitch got changed but you didnt change the spacing 00:10:124 (1,2,3,4) - tho so i think you need to keep the spacing for consistent, ups to you
4. 00:14:932 (1) - this should be more emphasized, try to make spacing larger
5. actually you can make the spacing larger 00:14:932 - 00:16:663 - , as you can hear the pitch is the highest here which means this part is really intense compared with other previous part, so the larger spacing pretty make sense here, especially 00:16:086 (4,5) - these 2 notes should got more emphasized
6. 00:33:777 (6) - NC on here would be better cuz the music change at here
7. 00:44:353 (2) - i would NC at here instead of 00:43:969 (1) - for consistent with 00:45:315 (7) -
8. 00:56:276 (1,2) - not perfect stack~
9. 01:01:083 (4) - NC here, like waht youve did at 00:08:778 (1) - , like these two part got the same music so maybe you need to check for some NC for consistent with these two part, is not hard
10. 01:11:467 (5,6,1,2) - man the flow is suck here =w=, i know you want to keep the shape but do some fix would make this diff better
11. 01:24:736 (3) - try to put the sliderend in the middle of 01:24:159 (1,2) - would look much nicer, try 403 143, same 01:23:775 (5) - for this note, and ofc move 01:25:313 (4) - a bit farther
12. 01:33:774 (2,3,4) - this flow isnt good either, try this , used the blanket and put 2 in the middle of 01:33:197 (1,4) - and make 3 have the spacing blanket spacing with 2
13. 01:34:735 (9) - should be more emphasized imo, and NC either

• [Level 4]

1. 00:14:932 (2,1) - try to mute the sliderend, sound really weird cuz there was no music to support, 00:16:663 (4) - 00:22:432 (7) - same
2. 00:27:239 (1,2,3,4,5) - lol wat is this XD, like this is really hard to play, try make a better flow, you can do sth like this ( i used AR0 so you can have a better look )
3. 00:42:046 - there was a clear violin sound here why do you didnt map here lol?
4. 00:41:854 (4,1,2,3) - suggest to make the spacing equal here, would look much nicer
5. 00:48:007 (3,4,5,6) - another bad flow, try ctrl + g on 00:48:392 (5,6) - since 5 need more emphasized either
6. 00:59:545 (2) - delete this note would sound much better
7. 01:04:545 (4,6) - are you trying to stack or not ?
8. 01:11:852 (1,2) - highly suggest not to stack like this in intense part, i mean this stack is fine in previous part cuz is quite calm, but not here for sure, and same 01:18:006 (1,2) - 01:24:159 (1,2) - 01:30:313 (1,2) -
9. 01:15:121 (1,5,6,7) - are you trying to stack or not ?

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

oky lets do the M4M first :3

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• [DavidEd's Level 5]

1. delete the timing point at 00:00:000 XD
2. 00:08:202 (4) - NC for emphasized the music would look nice
3. 00:08:778 (1,2,3) - any reason for the spacing changed? well the pitch got changed but you didnt change the spacing 00:10:124 (1,2,3,4) - tho so i think you need to keep the spacing for consistent, ups to you
4. 00:14:932 (1) - this should be more emphasized, try to make spacing larger
5. actually you can make the spacing larger 00:14:932 - 00:16:663 - , as you can hear the pitch is the highest here which means this part is really intense compared with other previous part, so the larger spacing pretty make sense here, especially 00:16:086 (4,5) - these 2 notes should got more emphasized
6. 00:33:777 (6) - NC on here would be better cuz the music change at here
7. 00:44:353 (2) - i would NC at here instead of 00:43:969 (1) - for consistent with 00:45:315 (7) -
8. 00:56:276 (1,2) - not perfect stack~
9. 01:01:083 (4) - NC here, like waht youve did at 00:08:778 (1) - , like these two part got the same music so maybe you need to check for some NC for consistent with these two part, is not hard
10. 01:11:467 (5,6,1,2) - man the flow is suck here =w=, i know you want to keep the shape but do some fix would make this diff better
11. 01:24:736 (3) - try to put the sliderend in the middle of 01:24:159 (1,2) - would look much nicer, try 403 143, same 01:23:775 (5) - for this note, and ofc move 01:25:313 (4) - a bit farther
12. 01:33:774 (2,3,4) - this flow isnt good either, try this , used the blanket and put 2 in the middle of 01:33:197 (1,4) - and make 3 have the spacing blanket spacing with 2
13. 01:34:735 (9) - should be more emphasized imo, and NC either

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• [Level 4]

1. 00:14:932 (2,1) - try to mute the sliderend, sound really weird cuz there was no music to support, 00:16:663 (4) - 00:22:432 (7) - same ya muted
2. 00:27:239 (1,2,3,4,5) - lol wat is this XD, like this is really hard to play, try make a better flow, you can do sth like this ( i used AR0 so you can have a better look ) nice suggestion, did something like that
3. 00:42:046 - there was a clear violin sound here why do you didnt map here lol? this part, it was following the low guitar sound which stops on that timing. so putting a note there might be awkward to play.
4. 00:41:854 (4,1,2,3) - suggest to make the spacing equal here, would look much nicer yes
5. 00:48:007 (3,4,5,6) - another bad flow, try ctrl + g on 00:48:392 (5,6) - since 5 need more emphasized either i think it is not that bad, its a sharp angle from 4 to 5. ctrl g makes it a bit too big of a jump and 5 already has higher spacing, in a slow section no need for a large jump like that imo.
6. 00:59:545 (2) - delete this note would sound much better low guitar has 2 notes, so i think 2 circles is better
7. 01:04:545 (4,6) - are you trying to stack or not ? 4 is stacked on end of 6
8. 01:11:852 (1,2) - highly suggest not to stack like this in intense part, i mean this stack is fine in previous part cuz is quite calm, but not here for sure, and same 01:18:006 (1,2) - 01:24:159 (1,2) - 01:30:313 (1,2) -
9. 01:15:121 (1,5,6,7) - are you trying to stack or not ?
   same here 1 is stacked on 5

most of my flow mod is modded as a player, i mean it's totally fine and rankable if you dont change it, but just let ppl think that this map isnt good to play
GL~

mod this mapu : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/456795 (if you think the drain time isnt fair then send me another map cuz i cant mod sth below hard so sry about it )