1. Easy (2,41 stars, 124 notes)
2. Hard (4,49 stars, 189 notes)
3. Normal (3,57 stars, 146 notes)

• 1. BPM 160 , Offset 24490

soradg123 wrote:

osu! Timing Help!

• 1. BPM 160 , Offset 24490

Starred~!

shabao_pig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Hard

remove countdown

00:26:927(4,5,6) they make player confused. you'd better put slider 6 apart
00:33:490(7) extend to 00:33:865
00:34:052(8) extend to 00:34:427
00:36:490(4) extend to 00:37:615
00:38:927(4) end at 00:39:115
00:40:146(6) start at 00:40:052
00:40:708(7) start at 00:40:615 and end at 00:41:365
00:56:740(9) make it and 7(00:55:990) symmetric
01:01:052(3) I suggest you not stack it with (1,2)
01:14:177(6) remove this circle and extend slider 5 to here
01:20:740(4,5) make them farther apart
01:29:740(6,7) separate them
01:37:521(2,3) spacing. distance should be consistent between (1,2,3)
01:42:115(7,8) spacing


Normal

remove countdown

00:28:990 insert break time?
00:51:865 add a note?
00:54:865 ^
01:00:490(1,2) separate them


Easy

remove countdown
reduce slider velocity

00:24:490(1) end at 00:25:615 or 00:25:990
00:28:990 insert break time?
00:30:490(1) end at 00:31:615 or 00:31:990
00:35:927(1,2) stacking them seems unfriendly in this diff
00:36:490(2) end at 00:37:615 or 00:37:990
00:38:365(1) spacing
00:44:365(3,4,5) too far away from that slider.it's a diff for beginners so avoid even a little jump
00:48:490(1) spacing
00:49:052(1,2) avoid this in Easy
00:58:990(5) end at 01:00:115
01:00:490(1,2) separate them
01:07:802(2) change it to anything other. also avoid fast repeat slider in Easy
01:18:490(1) extend to 01:18:865
01:19:052(2) end at 01:19:427
01:37:240(1) spacing

that's all

wmfchris wrote:

Cut the unused mp3? Is it necessarily? :<

[hard]
0:31:240 (3)right 1 grid
0:32:927 (4,5,6,...) left 1 grid
0:38:365 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
0:54:490 (2,3,4,5) right 1 grid
1:06:490 (1,2) stack their ending together
1:34:615 (5,6,7) right 2 grids

[Normal]
0:50:365 (5,6) left 1 grid
0:52:240 (3) right 1 grid
0:55:900 (5,6,7) (5,6) right 1 grid, (7) right+up 1 grid
1:35:740 (5) left 1 grid
1:40:990 (4) stack properly on ending of (3)

[Easy] fine.

Joon wrote:

hi

my modding

[General]
Audio volume 10 -> 7 all diff

[Easy]

00:27:490 (3) - add finish and volume 4
00:52:990 (3) - add whistle
01:01:802 (3) - add finish and volume 4
01:03:115 (1) - Start and End Notes add finish
01:04:802 (3) - add finsih
01:09:490 (3) - ^
01:11:552 (5) - ^
01:13:802 (3) - ^
01:15:490 (1) - ^
01:16:802 (4) - ^
01:19:802 (3) - ^
01:21:115 (4) - Start and End Notes add finish
01:22:990 (3) - add finish
01:27:490 (1) - ^
01:33:115 (1) - Start and End Notes add finish
01:34:990 (3) - add whistle
01:39:490 (1) - add finish

[Normal]

00:27:490 (4) - same Easy
00:34:615 (6) - add whistle
00:40:615 (5) - ^
00:50:365 (5) - ^
00:52:615 (4) - ^
00:52:990 (5) - add finish
01:00:490 (1) - Start Notes add finish
01:01:802 (4) - add finish
01:03:115 (1) - Start and End Notes add finish
01:04:802 (4) - Start Notes add finsih
01:06:490 (1) - ^
01:09:115 (1) - End Notes add finish
01:11:552 (6) - add finish
01:12:490 (1) - Start Notes add finish
01:13:802 (4) - add finish
01:15:115 (1) - Start and End Notes add finish
01:16:802 (5) - add finish
01:18:490 (1) - Start Notes add finish
01:19:802 (3) - ^
01:21:115 (4) - End Notes add finish
01:22:802 (3) - add finish
01:24:115 (7) - ^
01:27:490 (1) - ^
01:33:115 (1) - Start and End Notes add finish
01:34:615 (3) - Middle Notes add finish
01:39:490 (1) - add finish
01:42:677 (1) - 01:43:802 End here

[Hard]
timing point resnap

00:51:490 (3) - add whistle
01:01:802 (5) - add finish
01:03:115 (1) - ^
01:03:490 (3) - ^
01:04:802 (7) - Start Notes add finish
01:06:490 (1) - ^
01:09:490 (3) - add finish
01:11:552 (9) - ^
01:12:490 (1) - ^
01:13:802 (5) - Start Notes add finish
01:15:115 (1) - add finish
01:15:490 (3) - ^
01:18:490 (1) - ^
01:19:802 (4) - Start Notes add finish
01:21:490 (7) - add finish
01:27:490 (1) - ^
01:33:115 (1) - ^
01:33:490 (3) - ^
01:34:990 (7) - ^
01:39:490 (1) - Start Notes add finish
01:42:677 (1) - same Normal

Done~ Thanks

adron zhero wrote:

[*]Change?
[>]Change!

Hard:
>40:146 Seems a little late. Start at 40:052 and end at 40:427
*41:740 Add circle?

adron zhero wrote:

Map thil end?

Good map.

Hmm... Don't want long map
Thank you a lot

EvianBubble wrote:

Hello!

General
Offset feels a bit off to me ... but I'm no pro timer

Easy
Turn up volume a bit :S ok~
00:33:490 (3 - 5) - Add whistle, whistle, finish? finish is very hard sound to be there, i think :< so whistle, whistle, whistle
00:38:365 (1): Inconsistent spacing with beginning of song, move 2 grids down fixed
00:39:490 (2 - 4) - Hmm, maybe finish, whistle, finish? maybe finish (4 volume), whistle, whistle?
00:44:740 - Yo, your spacing is changing everywhere. Compare (4, 5) to (5, 6) for example. Please go through your map and fix spacing (you can just eyeball it, but it's clearly different here - in fact, it confused me on my playthrough orz) oh, ok
00:45:490 (1) - Uhm ... long note =/= 0.5xBPM O_O This doesn't feel right to me :S
You need ... more hitsounds IMO :S oh, what about spinner with finish hitsound there? :3
00:48:490 (1) - Whistle at the beginning
00:51:115 (1) - Whistle beginning and end. Add finish on (3) (remove whistle)
00:54:490 (2, 4, 5, 7) - Add whistle. Also I think combining (5 - 7) into a reverse slider would be nice (in that case add whistle to beginning adn end)
00:57:490 (1, 3) - Whistle all done~
01:00:490 - Use this pattern? (Remember to fix spacing depending on what you want) Yay! Your version is much better~

SPOILER

01:03:115 - I like this combo XD haha, thanks xD
01:09:490 (3) - New combo
01:11:927 (5) - Change whistle to finish?
01:13:052 (2) - Turn into a slider until the next red tick?
01:28:990 (2 - 5) - Whistle, whistle, finish, finish?
01:36:115 (5) - Add whistle all done :3

Ugh sorry I gtg eat dinner, but I WILL finish modding this! Just ... wait a while please :S

Fix spacing in other diffs as well! Will star later

ok, I will check my spacing :3
Also, in [Hard] there is some small jumps
I'm waiting~

Bon appetite~

DjUmywalka wrote:

yay! my first mod!

[GENERAL]

-Work harder with AIMod
-Half of mp3 is empty. Fill it.
[EASY]-That is Easy diff. Set BPM to 0,5x no :<
00:45:490 [1] - Change it to slider. b-b-but i just change it to spinner

[NORMAL]
01:15:677 [2] | 01:40:992 [4] - Hidden note. Move it. fixed

[HARD]01:02:177 [6] - Rotate 180
01:18:490 [1] - Hidden note
01:42:302 [8,9,10] - Change to slider all fixed~

Thank you

DjUmywalka wrote:

-Work harder with AIMod
-Half of mp3 is empty. Fill it.
[EASY]-That is Easy diff. Set BPM to 0,5x

EvianBubble wrote:

Hi hi, it's me! I'm back! XD Yay! Hi~

Easy
00:55:615 (4) - This is really picky but it's not equidistant from (3) and (5). Turn off grid snap and move this slightly to the left fixed :3
01:12:490 - I don't think you need to restart Kiai here, just have it run straight through
01:37:240 (1) - Move one or two grids down
Coolio, seems much better Yeah~ all fixed, thankee!

Normal
Volume up :3
Use 1 slider tick rate? D:
00:33:115 (end of 3, 4) - Whistle
00:36:115 (2, 4) - Add whistle
00:36:490 (4) - I'm really not feeling the slow down here :S Well your call I suppose because without 0,5x this slider is sooo zetta long and big ;D
00:38:365 (1) - Whistle? Also on repeat of (2)?
00:42:490 - Meh, personal choice I suppose. I won't pick on these anymore fixed
00:45:490 - Whistle on this spinner
00:49:990 (4) - Whistle
00:51:302 (1) - Use whistle on repeat and end?
00:55:615 (4, 5) - Make a slider out of these? Also use whistle on (2, 4, 5) (which would be beginning and end of (4) if you made it a slider) then finish on (6)
00:57:490 (1, 3, 5) - Whistle (on beginning of 5 only) all done :3
01:04:802 (4, 1, 2) - If I had to pick one set of slow down sliders to change, it'd be these. There's no indication of change (in music or otherwise), not to mention (1, 2) are the same length in time but look completely different (if you get my meaning). I mean the previous one (5 of yellow combo) I kind of get since it's like slowing down before Kiai, which OK, sure. These? ... No. Oh, ok, I fixed it
... I think I just kind of ranted there. Sorry. Seriously though, I don't see the use of many 0.5xBPM sliders you used o_O
01:10:052 (3, 4) - Whistle. Finish on repeat and end of (5)? Might be too much finish though, but I think it fits
01:12:490 - Get rid of this fountain stream, have Kiai go straight through. Also, this is the same pattern you used at the beginning of Kiai. Maybe do something like this? (look at timeline) made one slider

SPOILER

Wait, I just realised that it's almost the same as the suggestion for Easy. Feel free to change it, but I think it should be different
01:17:177 (wow a lot of 1s and 7s lol) - Add a slider until 1:17:740, or make a half beat slider and make it repeat until there (does that make sense? :S) made reverse slider until 1:17:927 :3
01:28:615 (3) - Add whistle beginning and end and on 5. Finish on end of (6)?
01:36:490 (end of 6) - Whistle here
01:40:615 (3, 4, 6, 8) - Whistle
a~all fixed!

Hard
Slider tick rate 1 ... ;D
Your TIMING SECTIONS (green lines) are not snapped, fix them ok
Well, mostly, the thing that bugged me most was the half time sliders (again!). They were kind of ... random. I mean, sometimes I'd expect one and it didn't happen, and other times I was like ... woah, what? ... Yea
00:25:802 - Add a note here with whistle
00:31:240 (3) - Make into a slider until 00:31:802 (one and a half beats)
00:33:115 (5, 6, beginning of 7) - Whistle
00:39:490 (beginning of 5) - Add whistle
00:44:740 (3) - Whistle
00:50:552 (6) - Delete this and make (5) a slider to where this ended. Add whistle to (3, 4, end of 5)
01:00:490 (1) - Finish
01:07:77 - Unneeded timing section, delete it
01:10:990 (7) - Finish
01:12:490 - Kiai time goes through pl0xorz
Done!

All right. Fix those, call me back, and you'll probably get a star
... This post ended up much longer than I anticipated OTL

EvianBubble wrote:

Lalalalalala, guess who it is

Easy
01:37:240 (1) - Move one or two grids down (unless you already did ... but I updated it and it wasn't changed lol) Eeh, really? Fixed once more

Normal
Feels way better, great job Thanks :3

Hard
00:31:240 (3) - Can you align the ending of this slider with (1)? It's pretty picky, I know
00:40:615 (7) - Curve this so it looks prettier XD Umm... don't know how This slider is so big and doesn't fit into a screen
00:54:490 (2, 4) - Whistle (no clue why I didn't say this last time lol)
01:41:365 (5, 6) - Maybe make these into a slider?
All fixed

Awesome, I think all the diffs have really improved! Great job and good luck

+1 star

karenying wrote:

When you fixed EvianBubble 's post, PM me, I will edit this post

OK Let's go~
General
Oh,do you cut the mp3? I didn't re DL just change it
Delete .osb


Easy
00:34:615(3) - move to next blue line
00:40:615(4) - ^
00:36:490(2) - little spacing
01:38:365(3,4,5) - separate them
01:42:677(1) - too short for easy diff ,try to make it longer

Normal
00:33:302(x) - add a circle?
00:34:615(6) - move to next blue line
00:40:615(5) - ^
00:36:490(4) - sudden 0.5x , maybe hard for Normal diff ?
00:58:990(5) - ^
01:42:677(1) - same of Easy

Hard
00:49:240(2) - shorten to 00:49:521
01:13:802(5) - spacing,maybe move it down

nice song あまね<3

a~all fixed! Thank you a lot!!

BattorA wrote:

Привет. Спасибо за звезду.
Отличный выбор песни для маппинга.
Итак, мой моддинг.
[Easy]

Привет :3 Спасибо

00:33:490 (3) - Твой Distance Snap (0,8х) не позволяет сюда ставить circle.=> 00:34:052 (4,5) - Тоже расставлены неверно.
00:34:708 (5) - Смена ритма в [Easy] недопустима. => Circle должен стоять здесь - 00:34:615 (5) .
^ Всё вместе это должно получиться как-то так - http://puu.sh/pd1 .
О дальнейших битах (00:35:927 (1,2) - и т.д.) заботься сама, ибо их нужно будет поправлять с твоим заданным для сложности Distance Snap`ом.
На сложностях [Easy] и [Normal] категорически запрещено отключать Distance snap.
Запомни это для дальнейших удачных битмапов. ^
00:40:708 (4) - Тоже самое,что и в 00:34:708 (5).
00:42:490 (1) - Distance Snap опять же. => 00:44:365 (2,3,4,5) - тоже.
00:57:490 (1) - ^ => перепроверяй остальные биты,после изменения расположение неправильно расставленного circle`a до 01:24:490.
00:58:240 (3,4) - Не очень красиво. Может быть вот так - http://puu.sh/pd9 ? Если же не нравится вариант,то поэксперементируй сама. [Easy] должно быть не только играбельное,но и красивое. Это ведь сложность в основном для новичков.
Со слайдерами ты посторалась, молодец.
01:23:365, 01:23:740 - Я бы тут circle`ы поставил.Красивей будет звучать, да и пустоту займёт. http://puu.sh/pdc - мой вариант. Если не понравится, то поэксперементируй сама. Добейся максимального удобства и того, чтобы новичку было приятно играть и его затянуло в игру, если же эта карта будет одной из его первых.
^ - В этом и кроется максимальное число оценок "10 stars" и меньшее число оценок "1stars".
01:27:490 (1,2) - пустовато. :/
01:28:990 (2,3) - ^
^ Это уже на твоё усмотрение,но мне кажется что хотя бы одного-двух битов не хватает.
Мда уж, вижу Distance Snap ты не слушала и дальше. Перепроверяй все биты и исправляй.
01:40:240 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Вот тут правильно сделала,но опять же не очень красиво смотрится. :/
01:42:677 (1) - Вместо finish`a лучше убрать звук на спинере вообще.
Ошибок в "New Combo" в этой сложности я у тебя не заметил.
Исправила. И с дистанцией поработала

[Normal]


00:24:490 (1) - и остальные длинные слайдеры сделаны замечательно,но я бы сделал на этом моменте ,а тоесть от Оффсета до 00:45:490 (1) - этого спинера 0,5х, но это моё мнение. Просто подумай над этим, так тоже весьма неплохо. нет, пусть будут обычные :3
00:34:708 (6) - перенести на 00:34:615 (6). => Поправить с Distance Snap`ом. => Следующие 1-2 объекта тоже.
00:40:708 (5) - ^
00:57:490 (1) - ^ Тут уже не один-два придётся поправлять. : Остальные у тебя тоже съедут. съехали, поправила =з=
Вообщем, в этой сложности я больше про Distance Snap упоминать не буду. Просто перепроверь [Normal] всю с ним и исправь недочёты,а у тебя их будет не один десяток.
01:18:115 - может быть здесь circle поставить? Вот так - http://puu.sh/pdj нет :с
Ошибок в "New Combo" и в этой сложности я у тебя не заметил.
01:42:677 (1) - тоже самое что и в [Easy].
остальное все пофиксила :3

[Hard]


00:31:240 (3) - убери "Grid Snap"и поправь так, чтобы чётко конец 00:31:240 (3) был на месте 00:30:490 (1) . - http://puu.sh/pdl .
В сложности [Hard] уже не очень красиво смотрятся огромные слайдеры, хоть и ровные и симпатичные. Придумай что-нибудь.
Distance Snap пора уж поменять, а то во всех сложностях одинаковый. Всего 4,45 сложность и Sсore за него мало.
01:02:177 (6) - так же убери Grid snap и поставь начало слайдера на 01:01:052 (3). Должно получиться как-то так - http://puu.sh/pdp .
01:14:365 (6) - не ровно.
Дальше я значительных ошибок не вижу, но...
[Hard] слишком простой. Сделай ритм более точным, добавив битов, и значительно много! Так же можно сделать пару Jump`ов. (При этом Distance Snap не используется.) Покажу пример на 01:30:115 (7,8,9,10,11) - http://puu.sh/pds .
Соедини играбельность, красоту, приятноиграемость и профессиональность (в плане Нitsound`ов). И у тебя обязательно всё получится.
И, вот ещё что. - "song setup" -> "Colours" -> "Background Colour" - подбери его под свой Background (к примеру коричневый).
Слайдеры не стала менять. Твой вариант джампа добавила, сенк :3
Ну,вот так.
Удачи тебе в твоём нелёгком деле и держи звезду.

Спасибо большое за моддинг и звезду~

Vass_Bass wrote:

привет

Easy
00:33:490 (3,4,5) - спусти на 2 клетки вниз
00:35:927 (1,2) - может быть неправильно, но такой быстрый переход сложноват для изи, мне кажется достаточно сюда 00:35:927 кружок добавить и будет нормально, но это уже тебе решать
00:38:365 (1) - опять же просто для более лучшего звучания можно удлинить этот слайдер до 00:39:115
01:10:990 (2) - думаю лучше сделать новое комбо

Normal
00:24:490 (1) - продли этот слайдер до белой черточки. можно из него какую-нибудь фигурку сделать необычную (это просто предложение)
00:30:490 (1) - ^
00:51:115 (1) - на 1 клетку вниз
01:03:115 (1,2,3,4) - сделай их так же как в предыдущем комбо по расположению,а то смотрится не очень

Hard
00:24:490 (1,2,3) - может заменить их на такие же как тут 00:30:490 (1,2,3)?
01:37:802 (3,4,6) - сделай их друг под другом

держи звезду~

lepidopodus wrote:

Easy
00:27:865 (X) - As HP drain is low, I think you don't need to put this short break in here. (Click break period with right button of mouse.)
00:44:365 (2,3,4) - This is Easy, so it's for real beginners. I think this stacked triple circle would be to hard for them.
01:22:615 (1,2,3) - ^
01:24:865 (X) - Same as 00:27:865 (X).
01:42:677 (1) - This one suddenly gets quiet and I think that's not good. How about using fade out?

Normal
00:24:490 (1) - I think the end of this slider sound somewhat weird. Extend it by 1/2?
00:27:865 (X) - Same as Easy.
00:30:490 (1) - Same as 00:24:490 (1).
01:24:865 (X) - Same as Easy.
01:42:677 (1) - Same as Easy.

Hard
00:40:615 (7) - How about this shape? Yes!

SPOILER

[attachment=0:0d5b9]a.jpg[/attachment:0d5b9]

00:42:490 (1) - I think whistle in the slider body isn't suit well with this quiet part.
01:00:490 (1~6) - Inconsistant spacing...? Personally I don't support that.
01:03:677 (4,5,6,7) - You can keep a jump between 6 - 7, but I think it's better to keep distances between 4 - 5 and 5 - 6 same.
01:15:677 (4,5) - I think it would be better to keep distance same...?
01:33:490 (3,4) - Distance between here it too short.

Ok, that's all. I hope it would be helpful...

jericho2442 wrote:

you BG is 1094x768, it really needs to be 1024x768, please re size it Done

i dont like how 23% of this map has nothing but intro, i do advise you to start mapping abit earlier But then I would need new offset. And I'm not good in timing

Easy

01:21:115 (4) - newcombo here, i think it just looks better since it dont "feel" like it should be connected to the pattern before it

01:22:240 - add a note here, it feels better to play because its the first note of the lead what you follow from here on, so without it feels abit odd, it also becomes consistant with the pattern at 01:27:490 (1,2,3)
Fixed!
Normal

01:04:802 (4) - this slider sounds to end too early, it plays much better if you make it longer and end it at 01:06:115 - (white tick) Oh, I think that ending in my version is more compatible with the music. There is a note there, listen :3

Hard

00:25:240 (3) - the timing on this slider is REALLY bad :/, it end too soon to follow the music, if you make it end on 00:25:990 (white tick) insted it sounds MUCH better ;D
00:31:240 (3) - again same here, the slider being this way just really dont sound right :/

00:58:990 (3) - since this is a jump pattern it feels weird for the last note of it to not be a jump, i advise to reverse this slider
01:42:302 (7) - i adivise to move this a bit ferther away from (6), it plays better spacing wise that way
All fixed~
--------------------------------

hmm i like this set, fix up the stuff i posted and i will 100% star

Thank you a lot for modding, yay!

KuraiPettan wrote:

[Easy]
00:34:615 (5) - Move 1/2 later
01:24:302 (6) - Too hard to read for an easy diff
01:42:302 (7) - ^

[Normal]
00:34:615 (6) - Move 1/2 earlier


[Hard]
01:11:552 (9) - New combo
01:31:052 (10) - ^

Hum... Nice map, that's all I can find I guess...
Star

Soaprman wrote:

Lookin' good!

If you need a new offset, just use the mouse wheel to move to the point where you want to start and note the time there. This works because the mouse wheel always jumps to the next tick on the timeline at the top. If your current offset and BPM are fine, this will work perfectly. This also assumes the BPM stays constant throughout the section.

12,490 might make a fine point to begin at if you decide you want to start the map earlier.

Thank you! Done!

Odaril wrote:

General
Why is there "beatmario" in the tags ? because he is singer

Easy
There are parts completely blank of notes, it makes breaks that feel weird imo.
00:15:490 (1,2) - This kind of stack might be confusing for a new player because of the rythm: unstack ?
01:37:240 (1,2) - (2) is too close to (1)

Normal
Same comment as for Easy.
00:58:990 (5) - About slowdowns: they shouldn't be used to represent a note being held in a vocal like you do here. Regular speed sliders are fine. Imo it's just a way to avoid having to make long sliders which are a lot harder to do than short ones. Slow downs should only be used when the song is clearly slower, and even then, avoid using 0,5x speed as it's really awkward to play. Same goes for speed ups (you didn't use any, but while I'm at it), and don't go up to 2,0x, it plays bad. To represent held notes, you can also use a spinner. And last but not least, speed changes are cofusing, avoid using them in a Normal/Easy diff.

all fixed~

Hard
Same comment as the two other diffs.
00:27:490 (6) - See Normal's comment about slider speed changes.
00:45:490 (6) - ^
00:58:990 (3) - ^
01:19:802 (4) - ^

But this is hard, i think that i can use it in hard diff

Overall it wasn't bad, although the many blanks make the map a bit weird.

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kino77 wrote:

Hi~Sorry for delay...

[Easy]
00:12:490 (1) - Volume 70% like [Hard]
01:01:708 - Remove these 2 timing section for its not necessary?
01:03:115 (1) - Remove finish?
01:21:115 (1) - ^
01:24:865 - Add note round here?
01:30:490 - Finish?
01:33:115 (1) - Remove finish?

[Normal]
00:12:490 (1) - Volume 70% like [Hard]
00:40:990 (1) - stack with 5?
00:41:740 (2) - stack with 00:39:490 (3)?
01:11:927 (7) - Finish?
01:15:115(1) - Remove finish?
01:22:802 (3) - ^
01:25:240 - Add note round here?
01:33:115 (1) - Remove finish?
01:34:802 - ^

[Hard]
00:53:740 - Add note?
01:06:490 (1,2) - This jump is too much > <
01:15:115 (1) - Remove finish?
01:31:990 - Add note round here?

Star nice voice~!

Fixed. Thank you!