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Trevor Something - Summer Love

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YellowManul
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 19 августа 2015 г. at 16:05:58

Artist: Trevor Something
Title: Summer Love
Tags: 80s alternative electronic indie dance indie pop new wave shoegaze synthpop synthwave Miami does not exist
BPM: 108
Filesize: 7441kb
Play Time: 03:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2,79 stars, 447 notes)
  2. Normal (1,64 stars, 219 notes)
Download: Trevor Something - Summer Love
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You can be my, my summer love
You can be my, my summer lover ♥

My #6 map. To my summer love.

I hope you'll enjoy it as I did. Have fun.


Thank you box!~
Bakari. Only you. Because of still motivating me to map. You're really special.
riffy
I stopped my inexistence just to appreciate the beauty of the song and the map. <3
Kobold84
You can be my, my summer love~
You can be my, my summer lover~

Хреновый мод, сразу скажу.

Рекомендую понизить од на харде до 6 (или 6.5), как и хп.

[Нормал]
00:37:291 (4,5,6,7) - вот этот паттерн сложно играется, может для 6 и 7 сделать ctrl+g? Ну и комбо бы новое с шестёрки начать, да.
00:49:791 (2,3,4,5,6) - зря паузы между ними, читать сложновато.

Ну и вообще с паузами в нормале переборщил, по-моему.

[Хард]
00:28:957 (1,2) - вот это как-то неудобно играется, предлагаю перевернуть второй слайдер.
00:34:513 (4,5,6) - вот тут только начало, а уже такой спейсинг. Поменьше, может?
01:17:291 (4) - вот тут не уверен, что стоило его направлять в правую сторону. Возможно, разместить его где-нибудь правее, но и перевернуть, чтобы конец был направлен влево?
01:23:124 (2,3,4) - по-моему, тут нет тройки. Я её не слышу, по крайней мере.
01:54:513 (1,2,3) - и тут.
01:55:624 (1) - вот тут не знаю, зачем сделал новое комбо, отодвинь его до 01:56:457 (2) - этой ноты.
01:58:957 (1) - а тут поздно начал новое комбо, начни его лучше 01:58:679 (9) - тут.
Topic Starter
YellowManul

Kobold84 wrote:

You can be my, my summer love~
You can be my, my summer lover~

Хреновый мод, сразу скажу.

Рекомендую понизить од на харде до 6 (или 6.5), как и хп.

[Нормал]
00:37:291 (4,5,6,7) - вот этот паттерн сложно играется, может для 6 и 7 сделать ctrl+g? Ну и комбо бы новое с шестёрки начать, да.
00:49:791 (2,3,4,5,6) - зря паузы между ними, читать сложновато.

Ну и вообще с паузами в нормале переборщил, по-моему.

[Хард]
00:28:957 (1,2) - вот это как-то неудобно играется, предлагаю перевернуть второй слайдер.
00:34:513 (4,5,6) - вот тут только начало, а уже такой спейсинг. Поменьше, может?
01:17:291 (4) - вот тут не уверен, что стоило его направлять в правую сторону. Возможно, разместить его где-нибудь правее, но и перевернуть, чтобы конец был направлен влево?
01:23:124 (2,3,4) - по-моему, тут нет тройки. Я её не слышу, по крайней мере.
01:54:513 (1,2,3) - и тут.
01:55:624 (1) - вот тут не знаю, зачем сделал новое комбо, отодвинь его до 01:56:457 (2) - этой ноты.
01:58:957 (1) - а тут поздно начал новое комбо, начни его лучше 01:58:679 (9) - тут.
все принял, спасибо :3
Namki
(>õwõ)>Manul<(õwõ<)
Good song <3
Topic Starter
YellowManul

Namki wrote:

(>õwõ)>Manul<(õwõ<)
Good song <3

ty
Marmowka
Ку

[Normal]

01:07:568 (5,1,2) - Поправь

[Hard]

00:25:068 (2) - Ритм можно и так , хз без разницы
00:28:957 (1,2) - Флоу мона
00:34:513 (4,5,6) - Не вижу смысла триплета
00:37:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - СЛОЖНААААААА
00:43:957 (5,6) - Тоже , можно продолжить так же по спейсингу
01:08:957 (1,2) - Флоу
03:17:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - А вот тут не СЛОЖНА :lol:

Уда44444444444444444и
Topic Starter
YellowManul

Marmowka wrote:

Ку

[Normal]

01:07:568 (5,1,2) - Поправь

[Hard]

00:25:068 (2) - Ритм можно и так , хз без разницы
00:28:957 (1,2) - Флоу мона
00:34:513 (4,5,6) - Не вижу смысла триплета
00:37:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - СЛОЖНААААААА
00:43:957 (5,6) - Тоже , можно продолжить так же по спейсингу
01:08:957 (1,2) - Флоу
03:17:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - А вот тут не СЛОЖНА :lol:

Уда44444444444444444и
поправил флоу, триплет там по бассу о3о
там где сложна - бит другой же о3о

спасибо за мод! :3
Mortem
Be my summer lover >//<
I'm simply not there.

General:
• You have a little inconsistency in Kiais. Consider fixing them.

Normal:
• 00:38:402 (1,2) - A slider like this 00:39:513 (3) - would fit here more, than two circles.
• 02:14:235 (2,3) - How about this pattern? It fits more to the song and the lyrics.
• 03:00:068 (1) - Remove NC due to inconsistency with previous combos.
• 03:07:568 (2,3) - Same as 02:14:235 (2,3) -
• 03:17:568 - Add a note here.

Hard:
• 00:33:679 (2,8) - What about stacking these two together?
• 00:45:068 (2,3,4) - How about moving the (3,4) little bit down. You would make a beautiful triangle pattern + blanket. Example.
• 00:50:068 (3,4) - Blanket is off.
• 00:56:735 (3,4,5) - This spacing looks really weird. Consider making it constant for better play.
• 01:31:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - You forgot hitsounds or is it for a purpose?
• 01:48:957 (1,2) - Move (2) little bit up and to the left for making a perfect blanket.
• 02:13:263 - You missed a note here.
• 02:47:846 (5,6) - Blanket seems to be little bit off.
• 02:49:235 (2,3) - ^
• 02:54:513 (3,4) - ^ (Not a little but totally off)
• 03:04:235 (1,2,3) - These blankets are little bit off. Consider moving the (2) little bit down and (3) little bit to the right. Example.
• 03:06:735 (1) - What about place it likethis?

Hope that helps.
Good luck. c:
Topic Starter
YellowManul

Mortem wrote:

Be my summer lover >//< ok o3o
I'm simply not there.

General:
• You have a little inconsistency in Kiais. Consider fixing them.

Normal:
• 00:38:402 (1,2) - A slider like this 00:39:513 (3) - would fit here more, than two circles.
• 02:14:235 (2,3) - How about this pattern? It fits more to the song and the lyrics.
• 03:00:068 (1) - Remove NC due to inconsistency with previous combos.
• 03:07:568 (2,3) - Same as 02:14:235 (2,3) -
• 03:17:568 - Add a note here.

Hard:
• 00:33:679 (2,8) - What about stacking these two together?
• 00:45:068 (2,3,4) - How about moving the (3,4) little bit down. You would make a beautiful triangle pattern + blanket. Example.
• 00:50:068 (3,4) - Blanket is off.
• 00:56:735 (3,4,5) - This spacing looks really weird. Consider making it constant for better play.
• 01:31:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - You forgot hitsounds or is it for a purpose?
• 01:48:957 (1,2) - Move (2) little bit up and to the left for making a perfect blanket.
• 02:13:263 - You missed a note here.
• 02:47:846 (5,6) - Blanket seems to be little bit off.
• 02:49:235 (2,3) - ^
• 02:54:513 (3,4) - ^ (Not a little but totally off)
• 03:04:235 (1,2,3) - These blankets are little bit off. Consider moving the (2) little bit down and (3) little bit to the right. Example.
• 03:06:735 (1) - What about place it likethis?

Hope that helps.
Good luck. c:
applied your suggestions, thanks~
-Kanzaki
Hey
General :
General
I found these tags on https://trevorsomething.bandcamp.com/tr ... ove-single : tags: 80s alternative electronic indie dance indie pop new wave shoegaze synthpop synthwave Miami

Hard :


  • 00:53:957 (2,3) - I don't like this flow. (It is an actual problem but as i can see you didnt break the flow that much on any other part of the song so)

    00:59:791 (5,6) - 01:00:068 (6,7) - They are closer than usual.

    01:13:124 (6,1) - Well as i can see you didn't follow the vocal with 1 but you did with 6. After 6 pressing 1 is kinda feels weird i cant really explain it. Well just try this : Delete 1 and extend 6 try here :

    01:24:235 (5,6,1) - I find this fits better triplet here feels weird :

    01:47:846 (3,4,5) - 01:50:068 (3,4,5) - 02:21:179 (3,4,5) - 03:03:402 (3,4,5) - I would use reverse slider here cause i find here isnt that much strong for three taps.( Note : As i can see you did it on these : 02:14:513 (3,3) , why not you didn't on the other which i said)

    02:10:485 - I hear something here. Here isnt empty. Add a circle and make that triplet a five stream, i think.

    02:32:568 - Make that 1/4 reverse slider here too.


Normal :


  • 00:27:846 (2) - Ctrl + G and put it up a littble for DS.(Its for better flow since its normal diff.)

    00:48:124 (4) - Well it feels too weird, 00:47:846 (4,5) - add circles to white ticks instead.

    00:50:902 (3) - Weird so this slider : 00:51:179 (4) - should start on 00:50:902 - but you put that 3 there feels awkward maybe put 3 to white tick and start sldier on red tick.

    02:20:624 (4,5) - I dont think stacking is a good idea on the easiest difficulty cause newbies dont know how to handle them.

    02:56:735 (4) - Changed this to this for better flow :

    03:10:068 (6) -


You could be my summer love manul lol
Topic Starter
YellowManul

-Kanzaki wrote:

Hey
General :
General
I found these tags on https://trevorsomething.bandcamp.com/tr ... ove-single : tags: 80s alternative electronic indie dance indie pop new wave shoegaze synthpop synthwave Miami

Hard :


  • 00:53:957 (2,3) - I don't like this flow. (It is an actual problem but as i can see you didnt break the flow that much on any other part of the song so)

    00:59:791 (5,6) - 01:00:068 (6,7) - They are closer than usual.

    01:13:124 (6,1) - Well as i can see you didn't follow the vocal with 1 but you did with 6. After 6 pressing 1 is kinda feels weird i cant really explain it. Well just try this : Delete 1 and extend 6 try here :

    01:24:235 (5,6,1) - I find this fits better triplet here feels weird :

    01:47:846 (3,4,5) - 01:50:068 (3,4,5) - 02:21:179 (3,4,5) - 03:03:402 (3,4,5) - I would use reverse slider here cause i find here isnt that much strong for three taps.( Note : As i can see you did it on these : 02:14:513 (3,3) , why not you didn't on the other which i said)

    02:10:485 - I hear something here. Here isnt empty. Add a circle and make that triplet a five stream, i think.

    02:32:568 - Make that 1/4 reverse slider here too.


Normal :


  • 00:27:846 (2) - Ctrl + G and put it up a littble for DS.(Its for better flow since its normal diff.)

    00:48:124 (4) - Well it feels too weird, 00:47:846 (4,5) - add circles to white ticks instead.

    00:50:902 (3) - Weird so this slider : 00:51:179 (4) - should start on 00:50:902 - but you put that 3 there feels awkward maybe put 3 to white tick and start sldier on red tick.

    02:20:624 (4,5) - I dont think stacking is a good idea on the easiest difficulty cause newbies dont know how to handle them.

    02:56:735 (4) - Changed this to this for better flow :

    03:10:068 (6) -


You could be my summer love manul lol
applied almost everything


-Kanzaki wrote:

You could be my summer love manul lol
>//////////<
Secretpipe


[Normal]
  1. 00:27:846 (2) - It may be a little bit offscreen! I'd suggest you to move it down!
  2. 00:29:791 (4,5,1) - In my opinion you could have a better flow like that imo :
  3. 00:36:457 (3) - Maybe you can try to rotate it by 55 degress with selection centre to get a nice flow w/ 00:37:291 (4) - !
  4. 00:40:068 (1,2) - the flow between these objects could be improved imo! Maybe you can do something like that :
  5. 01:05:624 (4,5,1) - That triangle could be more polished!
  6. 01:48:679 (5) - you never use red anchor for your sliders in your map! I'd suggest you make a basic curved slider to keep your diff consistent!
  7. 02:08:957 (1,2,3) - The slider 02:09:791 (2) - 's return arrow is weirdly placed Maybe you can make the pattern like that o: :
  8. 02:55:346 (2) - It's be awesome if you can add some small curves c: like that
  9. rly gud!


[Hard]
  1. 00:32:013 (2) - Little blanket to fix!
  2. 00:36:735 (3) - It'd be weird to have a straight slider here because of 00:36:179 (2) - just before. The flow between 00:36:179 (2,3) - isn't good either o: I'd suggest you to curve one more slider or try another pattern!
  3. 00:39:513 (6) - Same here! Flow between this and 00:38:957 (5) - is kinda weird. I'd suggest you to rotate 00:39:513 (6) - by 50 degrees w/ selection centre! It is more enjoyable imo!
  4. 00:40:902 (3,1) - Small overlap! Be careful!
  5. 01:09:791 (2) - I'd suggest you to move that object at 491|102 for a better aestetic effect with 01:08:957 (1) - ! It'll also make a smooth jump w/ 01:10:068 (3,4,5) -
  6. 01:32:846 (1) - I'd suggest a NC here to emphasize the little stream!
  7. 02:13:124 (5,6,1) - That triple is kinda weird. Why don't you make a triple like those awesome things ? → 02:04:235 (6,7,1) -
  8. 02:26:179 (7) - I'd suggest a NC here aswell for the same reason!
  9. 02:43:402 (3) - ♥
  10. 02:43:679 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - You shape could be really better here! c:
  11. 02:49:513 (3,4,5) - ♥
  12. 02:58:957 (3) - This is a well placed note but I feel like you could improve that pattern like that :o :

    Also , you'll get a smooth jump between 02:58:957 (3,4) - who would fits w/ the vocals here!
  13. 03:14:235 (2) - The little blanket has to be fixed here 8-)
  14. rly rly gud


One word : Beautiful and chilling mapset! (:
You can call me agani whever you have enough stars! The mapset is truly brilliant!
Topic Starter
YellowManul

Secretpipe wrote:



[Normal]
  1. 00:27:846 (2) - It may be a little bit offscreen! I'd suggest you to move it down!
  2. 00:29:791 (4,5,1) - In my opinion you could have a better flow like that imo :
  3. 00:36:457 (3) - Maybe you can try to rotate it by 55 degress with selection centre to get a nice flow w/ 00:37:291 (4) - !
  4. 00:40:068 (1,2) - the flow between these objects could be improved imo! Maybe you can do something like that :
  5. 01:05:624 (4,5,1) - That triangle could be more polished!
  6. 01:48:679 (5) - you never use red anchor for your sliders in your map! I'd suggest you make a basic curved slider to keep your diff consistent!
  7. 02:08:957 (1,2,3) - The slider 02:09:791 (2) - 's return arrow is weirdly placed Maybe you can make the pattern like that o: :
  8. 02:55:346 (2) - It's be awesome if you can add some small curves c: like that
  9. rly gud!


[Hard]
  1. 00:32:013 (2) - Little blanket to fix!
  2. 00:36:735 (3) - It'd be weird to have a straight slider here because of 00:36:179 (2) - just before. The flow between 00:36:179 (2,3) - isn't good either o: I'd suggest you to curve one more slider or try another pattern!
  3. 00:39:513 (6) - Same here! Flow between this and 00:38:957 (5) - is kinda weird. I'd suggest you to rotate 00:39:513 (6) - by 50 degrees w/ selection centre! It is more enjoyable imo!
  4. 00:40:902 (3,1) - Small overlap! Be careful!
  5. 01:09:791 (2) - I'd suggest you to move that object at 491|102 for a better aestetic effect with 01:08:957 (1) - ! It'll also make a smooth jump w/ 01:10:068 (3,4,5) -
  6. 01:32:846 (1) - I'd suggest a NC here to emphasize the little stream!
  7. 02:13:124 (5,6,1) - That triple is kinda weird. Why don't you make a triple like those awesome things ? → 02:04:235 (6,7,1) -
  8. 02:26:179 (7) - I'd suggest a NC here aswell for the same reason!
  9. 02:43:402 (3) - ♥
  10. 02:43:679 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - You shape could be really better here! c:
  11. 02:49:513 (3,4,5) - ♥
  12. 02:58:957 (3) - This is a well placed note but I feel like you could improve that pattern like that :o :

    Also , you'll get a smooth jump between 02:58:957 (3,4) - who would fits w/ the vocals here!
  13. 03:14:235 (2) - The little blanket has to be fixed here 8-)
  14. rly rly gud


One word : Beautiful and chilling mapset! (:
You can call me agani whever you have enough stars! The mapset is truly brilliant!
applied all.

thanks, sp <33
Shiguri
hlo waifu
how do i mod LIKE I JUST FOUND 1 THING
Hard
02:15:624 (1) - (Turn off Grid Snap) x288 y74

i cant mod pro maps, okok...
Topic Starter
YellowManul

Shiguri wrote:

hlo waifu
how do i mod LIKE I JUST FOUND 1 THING
Hard
02:15:624 (1) - (Turn off Grid Snap) x288 y74

i cant mod pro maps, okok...
hi boy
i accept this, thanks
Cancel

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General

  1. Offset 22280 sounds better imo. Move all timing points (and move sliders/beats ofc) by -11. When changed, replace the preview point so that it snaps to the timeline.
  2. I reccomend using custom hitsounds and a blank sliderslide.wav . I bundled them here.

Normal

  1. 00:22:835 (2) - Make a better blanket:
  2. 00:31:168 (1) - Needs to be a better blanket with the approachcircle (viewed from 00:31:724 - ):
  3. 00:36:446 (3,4,5) - Make these look like a line:
  4. 00:38:113 (1,2) - Make these both be returnsliders (), and then move 00:38:113 (1) - to , and 00:39:224 (2) - to :
  5. 00:49:780 (2,4) - make 00:50:891 (4) - a blanket with the sliderfollowcircle:
  6. 00:57:835 (1,2) - This looks better imo:
  7. 01:00:613 (5) - Remove NC
  8. 01:01:168 (6) - NC
  9. 01:02:002 (7) - Move to and move 01:02:835 (8) - to , since it'll look more organized:
  10. 01:08:668 (2) - Move to (1 pixel up)
  11. 01:13:946 (3,4,5,1) - Make this look like an actual square:


    01:13:946 (1) - =
    01:14:502 (2) - =
    01:15:057 (3) - =
    01:15:613 (1) - =

    (Also, move 01:16:168 (2) - to )
  12. 01:23:113 (2) - move to and make 01:23:946 (3) - a slider for better flow:
  13. 01:28:946 (1) - Move endpoint to for a better looking blanket:
  14. 01:34:502 (2) - Change the sliderstyle from bent to straight:
  15. 01:36:724 (5) - NC
  16. 01:37:557 (1) - Remove NC
  17. 01:48:668 (5,6) - This doesn't look good in my eyes, but idk how to fix it without it looking bad, so I'll just suggest this:
  18. 01:52:280 (2) - Something like this looks way better:
  19. 01:56:724 (4) - NC
  20. 01:57:557 (1) - Remove NC
  21. 02:01:168 (6) - NC
  22. 02:02:002 (1) - Rem. NC
  23. 02:08:946 (4) - Make it look semi-symmetrical with 02:07:835 (2) - :


    ofc also NC 02:08:946 (4) - , and make sure 02:09:780 (5) - is correctly spaced with 02:10:613 (6) - .
  24. 02:18:946 (2) - Blanket with 02:19:780 (3) - :
  25. 02:53:113 (7) - Make a blanket with the sliderend of 02:52:002 (5) - :

    (and also move 02:54:502 (1) - to when applied.)
  26. 03:00:057 (3,4,5) - Move 03:01:168 (4) - To , and then move 03:02:002 (5) - to for good ds:
  27. 03:03:391 (3) - Make it symmetrical with 03:04:224 (4) - by Copy/Pasting, and ctrl+< three times. After that, move (3) to the correct spot, and then this:
    03:03:391 (3) - =
    03:04:224 (4) - =
    03:05:057 (5) - =

  28. 03:08:946 (4) - Make a blanket with the sliderend of 03:08:391 (3) - , and (if needed, ) move 03:09:780 (5) - to , and also, make 03:07:557 (2) - blanket with the sliderend of (1):

  29. 03:11:168 (1) - Move to for blanket with 03:10:057 (6) - , and then move 03:12:280 (2) - to to snap with ds:
  30. 03:17:557 (4) - It would be better to end with a 1/2 slider and then a spinner:

    Hitsounds are pretty off on this difficulty, so pm me whenever applied to discuss it. Other than that, decent difficulty. Mostly ninja's, and like I said, the hitsounding.
-breakpoint- wip mod srry this diff took way too long to mod lol continued lol

Hard

  1. 00:22:291 (1) - Make it a little more bent:
  2. 00:24:513 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a square and then move 00:25:624 (4,5,6,7) - to be alligned correctly:

  3. 00:29:513 (2) - Make this a blanket with the sliderfollow of 00:28:957 (1) - , and then move 00:30:346 (3) - to :
  4. 00:34:513 (4,5,6) - I don't here a triple there, lol, so remove 00:34:652 (5) - and place a beat at 00:34:929 (6) - , since you CAN here a semi-triple beat there.
  5. 00:36:179 (2) - Do this:
  6. 00:42:013 (1) - Move to
  7. 00:47:846 (3) - Move to so that it looks better.
  8. 00:50:068 (3,4) - This plays better imo:

    btw move the sliderend from 00:50:902 (5) - to x356 y316 for a better blanket
  9. 00:53:957 (2) - Move to
  10. 01:00:068 (6) - NC
  11. 01:03:402 (3,4) - Make these more bent and NC 01:04:513 (5) - :
  12. 01:14:235 (2,3) - Move to
  13. 01:16:735 (3) - Move to
  14. 01:48:957 (1) - Move sliderend to x112 y316
  15. 02:01:735 (4) - Move to
  16. 02:09:791 (3,4,5,6,7) - This sounds overmapped lol. Maybe something like this:
  17. 02:47:846 (5) - NC
  18. 02:51:179 (1) - Move sliderend to x212 y324
  19. 03:13:402 (5) - Make it look symmetrical with 03:14:235 (6) - :

    Thats it. I don't know what kind of mappingstyle this diff follows, but I only could find a few mistakes on it.
Good luck~!

(Also, if you applied my mod, please rate it. It'll help me out alot. Thanks~!)
Topic Starter
YellowManul

Cancel wrote:


(requested ingame)



General

  1. Offset 22280 sounds better imo. Move all timing points (and move sliders/beats ofc) by -11. When changed, replace the preview point so that it snaps to the timeline.
  2. I reccomend using custom hitsounds and a blank sliderslide.wav . I bundled them here.

Normal

  1. 00:22:835 (2) - Make a better blanket:
  2. 00:31:168 (1) - Needs to be a better blanket with the approachcircle (viewed from 00:31:724 - ):
  3. 00:36:446 (3,4,5) - Make these look like a line:
  4. 00:38:113 (1,2) - Make these both be returnsliders (), and then move 00:38:113 (1) - to , and 00:39:224 (2) - to :
  5. 00:49:780 (2,4) - make 00:50:891 (4) - a blanket with the sliderfollowcircle:
  6. 00:57:835 (1,2) - This looks better imo:
  7. 01:00:613 (5) - Remove NC
  8. 01:01:168 (6) - NC
  9. 01:02:002 (7) - Move to and move 01:02:835 (8) - to , since it'll look more organized:
  10. 01:08:668 (2) - Move to (1 pixel up)
  11. 01:13:946 (3,4,5,1) - Make this look like an actual square:


    01:13:946 (1) - =
    01:14:502 (2) - =
    01:15:057 (3) - =
    01:15:613 (1) - =

    (Also, move 01:16:168 (2) - to )
  12. 01:23:113 (2) - move to and make 01:23:946 (3) - a slider for better flow:
  13. 01:28:946 (1) - Move endpoint to for a better looking blanket:
  14. 01:34:502 (2) - Change the sliderstyle from bent to straight:
  15. 01:36:724 (5) - NC
  16. 01:37:557 (1) - Remove NC
  17. 01:48:668 (5,6) - This doesn't look good in my eyes, but idk how to fix it without it looking bad, so I'll just suggest this:
  18. 01:52:280 (2) - Something like this looks way better:
  19. 01:56:724 (4) - NC
  20. 01:57:557 (1) - Remove NC
  21. 02:01:168 (6) - NC
  22. 02:02:002 (1) - Rem. NC
  23. 02:08:946 (4) - Make it look semi-symmetrical with 02:07:835 (2) - :


    ofc also NC 02:08:946 (4) - , and make sure 02:09:780 (5) - is correctly spaced with 02:10:613 (6) - .
  24. 02:18:946 (2) - Blanket with 02:19:780 (3) - :
  25. 02:53:113 (7) - Make a blanket with the sliderend of 02:52:002 (5) - :

    (and also move 02:54:502 (1) - to when applied.)
  26. 03:00:057 (3,4,5) - Move 03:01:168 (4) - To , and then move 03:02:002 (5) - to for good ds:
  27. 03:03:391 (3) - Make it symmetrical with 03:04:224 (4) - by Copy/Pasting, and ctrl+< three times. After that, move (3) to the correct spot, and then this:
    03:03:391 (3) - =
    03:04:224 (4) - =
    03:05:057 (5) - =

  28. 03:08:946 (4) - Make a blanket with the sliderend of 03:08:391 (3) - , and (if needed, ) move 03:09:780 (5) - to , and also, make 03:07:557 (2) - blanket with the sliderend of (1):

  29. 03:11:168 (1) - Move to for blanket with 03:10:057 (6) - , and then move 03:12:280 (2) - to to snap with ds:
  30. 03:17:557 (4) - It would be better to end with a 1/2 slider and then a spinner:

    Hitsounds are pretty off on this difficulty, so pm me whenever applied to discuss it. Other than that, decent difficulty. Mostly ninja's, and like I said, the hitsounding.
-breakpoint- wip mod srry this diff took way too long to mod lol continued lol

Hard

  1. 00:22:291 (1) - Make it a little more bent:
  2. 00:24:513 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a square and then move 00:25:624 (4,5,6,7) - to be alligned correctly:

  3. 00:29:513 (2) - Make this a blanket with the sliderfollow of 00:28:957 (1) - , and then move 00:30:346 (3) - to :
  4. 00:34:513 (4,5,6) - I don't here a triple there, lol, so remove 00:34:652 (5) - and place a beat at 00:34:929 (6) - , since you CAN here a semi-triple beat there.
  5. 00:36:179 (2) - Do this:
  6. 00:42:013 (1) - Move to
  7. 00:47:846 (3) - Move to so that it looks better.
  8. 00:50:068 (3,4) - This plays better imo:

    btw move the sliderend from 00:50:902 (5) - to x356 y316 for a better blanket
  9. 00:53:957 (2) - Move to
  10. 01:00:068 (6) - NC
  11. 01:03:402 (3,4) - Make these more bent and NC 01:04:513 (5) - :
  12. 01:14:235 (2,3) - Move to
  13. 01:16:735 (3) - Move to
  14. 01:48:957 (1) - Move sliderend to x112 y316
  15. 02:01:735 (4) - Move to
  16. 02:09:791 (3,4,5,6,7) - This sounds overmapped lol. Maybe something like this:
  17. 02:47:846 (5) - NC
  18. 02:51:179 (1) - Move sliderend to x212 y324
  19. 03:13:402 (5) - Make it look symmetrical with 03:14:235 (6) - :

    Thats it. I don't know what kind of mappingstyle this diff follows, but I only could find a few mistakes on it.
Good luck~!

Applied everything, thanks~
Lama Poluna
модик озо

SPOILER
21:10 Lama Poluna: Го
21:10 Lama Poluna: Счас
21:11 *Lama Poluna is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/759399 Trevor Something - Summer Love [Normal]]
21:12 Lama Poluna: ну.
21:12 YellowManul: ну, я жду о3о
21:12 Lama Poluna: Ааа
21:12 Lama Poluna: Осу долго обновлял.
21:12 Lama Poluna: 00:22:835 (2) -
21:13 Lama Poluna: Фолоу.
21:13 YellowManul: м?
21:13 Lama Poluna: бл, я забыл.
21:13 Lama Poluna: Как называется когда ноту слайдер обвивает.
21:13 Lama Poluna: :с
21:14 YellowManul: бланкет?
21:14 Lama Poluna: ДАДАДА
21:14 Lama Poluna: Спасибо.
21:14 YellowManul: :3
21:14 YellowManul: так он вроде норм
21:14 Lama Poluna: 00:28:668 (3,4) -
21:14 Lama Poluna: НЕ НОРМ
21:15 YellowManul: че те не нрав
21:15 YellowManul: ((9
21:15 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/jxDax/7abfd7926b.jpg
21:15 Lama Poluna: Го так?
21:15 YellowManul: го о3о
21:15 Lama Poluna: 00:43:391 (3) - вот тут норм бланкет.
21:16 YellowManul: спс.
21:17 Lama Poluna: 01:31:168 -
21:17 Lama Poluna: 01:32:280 -
21:17 Lama Poluna: Не знаю плохо ли это - сильные биты пропускать.
21:17 YellowManul: Хм.
21:18 YellowManul: Да вроде нормально звучит, это ж все таки нормал
21:18 Lama Poluna: 01:35:335 (3,4) - Ты можешь в таких местах стакать конец слайдера и ноту.
21:18 Lama Poluna: Что бы как то разнообразить.
21:18 YellowManul: стакать в нормалах? о3о
21:18 YellowManul: это же самая легкая диффа тут
21:18 YellowManul: стакать is not allowed
21:18 Lama Poluna: ._.
21:18 YellowManul: (99
21:18 YellowManul: рли я не шучу
21:18 Lama Poluna: Я не разбираюсь в нормалах и изи и т.д
21:18 YellowManul: тип
21:19 YellowManul: новички запутаются
21:19 YellowManul: блаблабла
21:19 Lama Poluna: ну бля, каким надо быть дауном что бы не заметить.
21:19 YellowManul: супер дауном
21:19 Lama Poluna: Ебаная осу и ее система ранков.
21:19 YellowManul: лайк
21:19 Lama Poluna: Я как Hanzer.
21:19 Lama Poluna: озо
21:19 YellowManul: ханзер хороший о3о
21:19 Lama Poluna: Я знаю
21:20 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/jxDrQ/caaee99f80.png
21:20 YellowManul: и я.
21:20 YellowManul: :(
21:20 Lama Poluna: 01:53:113 (3) -
21:20 Lama Poluna: Он мне не нравиться.
21:21 Lama Poluna: Можешь как то лучше поставить слайдер?
21:21 YellowManul: что делат.
21:21 YellowManul: как.
21:21 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/jxDwQ/954e41b8bf.jpg
21:21 Lama Poluna: Так
21:21 Lama Poluna: Не?
21:21 YellowManul: там бланкет
21:21 YellowManul: о3о
21:21 Lama Poluna: ОН ТАМ НЕ НУЖЕН
21:21 Lama Poluna: Не красиво
21:21 YellowManul: но он даже не тян(99
21:22 Lama Poluna: :с
21:22 YellowManul: окей, исправил
21:22 Lama Poluna: 01:53:946 (4) -
21:22 Lama Poluna: И это подпраь
21:22 Lama Poluna: Если изменил
21:23 Lama Poluna: 02:07:835 (2,3,4) -
21:24 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/jxDGX/90875eb483.jpg
21:24 Lama Poluna: Го так?
21:24 Lama Poluna: Ровненько и симетрия :3
21:24 Lama Poluna: 02:09:780 (5) - и это подправь если фиксить будешь.
21:25 YellowManul: я за сырком ходил о3о
21:26 Lama Poluna: Ну как.
21:26 Lama Poluna: 02:19:780 (3) -
21:27 Lama Poluna: Не по дистанции.
21:27 Lama Poluna: озо
21:27 YellowManul: Хорошо сходил о3о
21:27 YellowManul: поправил
21:27 Lama Poluna: Фикси давай
21:28 Lama Poluna: 03:03:391 (3,4) -
21:28 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/jxDYk/e116c50629.jpg
21:29 YellowManul: несогласин
21:29 YellowManul: о3о
21:29 Lama Poluna: Почему :с
21:29 YellowManul: ну
21:29 YellowManul: мне мое нравится!
21:29 Lama Poluna: ТАТОЕ?
21:29 *Lama Poluna is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/758871 Trevor Something - Summer Love [Hard]]
21:29 YellowManul: мииро
21:32 Lama Poluna: 00:50:891 (5) -
21:32 Lama Poluna: Блункет
21:32 Lama Poluna: 00:54:502 (3,4,5,6) -
21:32 Lama Poluna: Ваша дистанция - какашка
21:33 YellowManul: ну не может мой манул быть таким кривожопым
21:33 YellowManul: а нет, может
21:33 Lama Poluna: 01:26:724 (1,2) - Сделай их одинаковыми.
21:33 Lama Poluna: Удали 2
21:33 Lama Poluna: И скопируй перывй
21:33 Lama Poluna: И покрути крч
21:34 YellowManul: все
21:34 YellowManul: :3
21:37 YellowManul: ты где там о3о
21:38 Lama Poluna: Я СМОТРЮ
21:38 Lama Poluna: 02:51:168 (1) - бланкет
21:38 YellowManul: fixed
21:39 Lama Poluna: Все
21:39 Lama Poluna: Больше нечего озо
21:42 YellowManul: o3o
21:42 YellowManul: пост плс
Topic Starter
YellowManul

Lama Poluna wrote:

модик озо

SPOILER
21:10 Lama Poluna: Го
21:10 Lama Poluna: Счас
21:11 *Lama Poluna is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/759399 Trevor Something - Summer Love [Normal]]
21:12 Lama Poluna: ну.
21:12 YellowManul: ну, я жду о3о
21:12 Lama Poluna: Ааа
21:12 Lama Poluna: Осу долго обновлял.
21:12 Lama Poluna: 00:22:835 (2) -
21:13 Lama Poluna: Фолоу.
21:13 YellowManul: м?
21:13 Lama Poluna: бл, я забыл.
21:13 Lama Poluna: Как называется когда ноту слайдер обвивает. :lol:
21:13 Lama Poluna: :с
21:14 YellowManul: бланкет?
21:14 Lama Poluna: ДАДАДА
21:14 Lama Poluna: Спасибо.
21:14 YellowManul: :3
21:14 YellowManul: так он вроде норм
21:14 Lama Poluna: 00:28:668 (3,4) -
21:14 Lama Poluna: НЕ НОРМ
21:15 YellowManul: че те не нрав
21:15 YellowManul: ((9
21:15 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/jxDax/7abfd7926b.jpg
21:15 Lama Poluna: Го так?
21:15 YellowManul: го о3о
21:15 Lama Poluna: 00:43:391 (3) - вот тут норм бланкет.
21:16 YellowManul: спс.
21:17 Lama Poluna: 01:31:168 -
21:17 Lama Poluna: 01:32:280 -
21:17 Lama Poluna: Не знаю плохо ли это - сильные биты пропускать.
21:17 YellowManul: Хм.
21:18 YellowManul: Да вроде нормально звучит, это ж все таки нормал
21:18 Lama Poluna: 01:35:335 (3,4) - Ты можешь в таких местах стакать конец слайдера и ноту.
21:18 Lama Poluna: Что бы как то разнообразить.
21:18 YellowManul: стакать в нормалах? о3о
21:18 YellowManul: это же самая легкая диффа тут
21:18 YellowManul: стакать is not allowed
21:18 Lama Poluna: ._.
21:18 YellowManul: (99
21:18 YellowManul: рли я не шучу
21:18 Lama Poluna: Я не разбираюсь в нормалах и изи и т.д
21:18 YellowManul: тип
21:19 YellowManul: новички запутаются
21:19 YellowManul: блаблабла
21:19 Lama Poluna: ну бля, каким надо быть дауном что бы не заметить.
21:19 YellowManul: супер дауном
21:19 Lama Poluna: Ебаная осу и ее система ранков.
21:19 YellowManul: лайк
21:19 Lama Poluna: Я как Hanzer.
21:19 Lama Poluna: озо
21:19 YellowManul: ханзер хороший о3о
21:19 Lama Poluna: Я знаю
21:20 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/jxDrQ/caaee99f80.png
21:20 YellowManul: и я.
21:20 YellowManul: :(
21:20 Lama Poluna: 01:53:113 (3) -
21:20 Lama Poluna: Он мне не нравиться.
21:21 Lama Poluna: Можешь как то лучше поставить слайдер?
21:21 YellowManul: что делат.
21:21 YellowManul: как.
21:21 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/jxDwQ/954e41b8bf.jpg
21:21 Lama Poluna: Так
21:21 Lama Poluna: Не?
21:21 YellowManul: там бланкет
21:21 YellowManul: о3о
21:21 Lama Poluna: ОН ТАМ НЕ НУЖЕН
21:21 Lama Poluna: Не красиво
21:21 YellowManul: но он даже не тян(99
21:22 Lama Poluna: :с
21:22 YellowManul: окей, исправил
21:22 Lama Poluna: 01:53:946 (4) -
21:22 Lama Poluna: И это подпраь
21:22 Lama Poluna: Если изменил
21:23 Lama Poluna: 02:07:835 (2,3,4) -
21:24 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/jxDGX/90875eb483.jpg
21:24 Lama Poluna: Го так?
21:24 Lama Poluna: Ровненько и симетрия :3
21:24 Lama Poluna: 02:09:780 (5) - и это подправь если фиксить будешь.
21:25 YellowManul: я за сырком ходил о3о
21:26 Lama Poluna: Ну как.
21:26 Lama Poluna: 02:19:780 (3) -
21:27 Lama Poluna: Не по дистанции.
21:27 Lama Poluna: озо
21:27 YellowManul: Хорошо сходил о3о
21:27 YellowManul: поправил
21:27 Lama Poluna: Фикси давай
21:28 Lama Poluna: 03:03:391 (3,4) -
21:28 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/jxDYk/e116c50629.jpg
21:29 YellowManul: несогласин
21:29 YellowManul: о3о
21:29 Lama Poluna: Почему :с
21:29 YellowManul: ну
21:29 YellowManul: мне мое нравится!
21:29 Lama Poluna: ТАТОЕ?
21:29 *Lama Poluna is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/758871 Trevor Something - Summer Love [Hard]]
21:29 YellowManul: мииро
21:32 Lama Poluna: 00:50:891 (5) -
21:32 Lama Poluna: Блункет
21:32 Lama Poluna: 00:54:502 (3,4,5,6) -
21:32 Lama Poluna: Ваша дистанция - какашка
21:33 YellowManul: ну не может мой манул быть таким кривожопым
21:33 YellowManul: а нет, может
21:33 Lama Poluna: 01:26:724 (1,2) - Сделай их одинаковыми.
21:33 Lama Poluna: Удали 2
21:33 Lama Poluna: И скопируй перывй
21:33 Lama Poluna: И покрути крч
21:34 YellowManul: все
21:34 YellowManul: :3
21:37 YellowManul: ты где там о3о
21:38 Lama Poluna: Я СМОТРЮ
21:38 Lama Poluna: 02:51:168 (1) - бланкет
21:38 YellowManul: fixed
21:39 Lama Poluna: Все
21:39 Lama Poluna: Больше нечего озо
21:42 YellowManul: o3o
21:42 YellowManul: пост плс
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