Hello, Mod4Mod as we agreed.
Easy- 00:01:203 (1) - Remove two of the slider points in the first curve of this slider just so it looks a little smoother.
- 00:45:647 (3,4) - It would be slightly better flow if 4 followed from above 3 in my opinion.
- 01:17:499 (2,3) - Also a minor flow thing which I can think could be improved, either by moving 3 or rotating 2.
Normal- 00:04:165 (1) - Perhaps rearrange this slider so the visual flow from 1-2 is a bit better, since at the moment it looks as if it's pointing down-left where 2 is up-left.
- 00:21:202 (3,1) - Personally I wouldn't recommend this sort of flow in a Normal. (Also a minor note is that the spacing between these is slightly larger than normal.)
- 00:24:165 (3) - This double-reverse slider is difficult to read since you don't see the second reverse arrow in time so most players will see it as a single-repeat slider. I would suggest changing the type of rhythm you use here. I'd say the same goes for Easy aswell actually, since having mroe than one repeat in a short slider in Easy is fairly unintuitive for beginners.
- 00:25:091 (1,2,3,4) - Stacks can be tricky for beginner players to read. It's up to you whether you keep them though; they match the music just fine.
- 01:20:832 (3,1,2) - I find the timing of this fairly trick to read. The reasons for this is because firstly you have 01:20:832 (3) which is a slider ending on a downbeat (the large white tick). This downbeat at 01:21:202 should be mapped with a stronger note (such as a circle or new slider) since this is a new line in the vocals, as indicate by the downbeat. You then follow up with 01:21:573 (1,2) which uses a white-red 1/2 tapping pattern, which feels like it comes out of nothing since you previously used 1/1 sliders and then a 1/1 gap between notes before going into these with a new combo. tl;dr is place a hard note at 01:21:202 as a NC, which may or may not fix this issue (it doesn't hurt to play around to see if there's anything you like better though).
Advanced- 00:10:091 (1) - Put this below 00:09:721 (5) so that it follows the same sort of flow as 4-5.
- 00:34:350 (4) - I'd make this a slider so that it matches the vocals a little better and to make the rhythm a little easier to follow (i.e. not on red-tick polarity).
- 00:43:054 - Note here to match the vocals and an easier rhythm.
- 00:56:017 (1) - Kind of an unusual slider where the slider points appear to be placed arbitrarily. Try and aim for a smoother shape if you can.
- 00:57:128 (3) - Small tip for these sort of sliders; try and centre the grey slider points to the middle of the curve for a more even looking curve.
- 01:09:350 (1,2,3) - Slightly uneven spacing here.
- 01:10:091 (3) - I think pointing this slider in the direction of the flow looks a little better.
Hard- 00:01:573 (2) - Simplify this curve, since having so many slider points makes it looks unusual.
- 00:10:091 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm may be a bit trick to play since you leave a 3/2 gap here, starting 2 on a red tick making it less intuitive to play. I would incorporate sliders to make the rhythm a little easier to play.
- 00:11:943 (1,2,3) - Same kind of thing.
- 00:31:943 (5,2) - Either stack these or avoid the overlap.
- 00:38:054 (5,1) - Is there a reason these are spaced to the point that they are touching?
- 00:45:369 (7) - This triple feels unecessary since I feel it isn't mapped to anything significant.
- 00:47:128 (1,3) - This stack on the star made me misread on my first playtest. It might just be me though. You can leave it if you want.
- 00:57:869 (3,5) - Avoid this sort of overlap since it doesn't look good in my opinion.
- 01:18:610 (2,3,1) - These notes all have a similar sort of physical spacing, but they're all at different timings to eachother, which makes it somewhat confusing to read.
- 01:20:832 (5) - I'd make this a slider to match the held vocal note and to map the gap so there's a constant flow in the rhythm.
Bijuu- 00:02:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm personally not a fan of this flow for the jump pattern. I would personally arrange it in a cyclic sort of pattern so that it is easier to follow. It's up to you how you want to do it though (or just ignore me, you can do that too if you want.)
- 00:10:091 (1,2) - Same thing as Hard. It might be fine though.
- 00:11:017 - I think adding a circle here with the drum hitsound would accompany the other drum notes quite well, as well as it mapping the vocal note.
- 00:21:202 (5) - I know you're making a rotational pattern with 00:21:758 (1) with the shape, but I feel that the way this slider is pointed from the flow from 00:21:017 (4) is kind of unusual.
- 00:41:017 (6,7,1) - I misread this triple because of the stack from 00:40:276 (3), since I saw the NC and went for that instead. It might just be me though. Do what you want with it.
- 01:06:202 (6,1,2) - This flow could be improved in my opinion, since at the moment the movement has you jumping through slider 01:06:387 (1) just to follow it back down again.
Good luck
