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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 2. September 2015 at 04:38:46

Artist: Liz Triangle
Title: The Starry true
Source: SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags: KONAMI BEMANI sdvx 聖徳伝説 ~ True Administrator stage 6 Boss theme 東方神霊廟 ~ Ten Desires 東方Project ZUN lily-an kaztora azuki reunion Comiket 81 C81
BPM: 153
Filesize: 5316kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED Lv.7 - 4Key (2,03 stars, 502 notes)
  2. EXHAUST Lv.12 - 4Key (2,69 stars, 687 notes)
  3. NOVICE Lv.4 - 4Key (1,46 stars, 321 notes)
Download: Liz Triangle - The Starry true
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2nd Ranked Map!
BG Source
This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone post this Song!
by Spy
by Kuo Kyoka

  1. NOVICE Lv.2 by Me 100% Hitsound 100%
  2. ADVANCED Lv.7 by Me 100% Hitsound 100%
  3. EXHAUST Lv.12 by Me 100% Hitsound 100%
Standard Special Difficulty
  1. Oko vs Feru's Exhaust by Okoratu & Feerum


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_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ for Mod & 1 Star
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Crono for 1 Star
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Kuo Kyoka for Mod & 1 Star
Okoratu

Feerum wrote:

This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone posts it!
Zetera
This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone post this Song!
Starry-

Feerum wrote:

This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone post this Song!
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Bad Apple

Sala- wrote:

This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone post this Song!
IamBaum

- Bad Apple - wrote:

Sala- wrote:

This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone post this Song!
IamBaum
So here is a short mod for ya, i couldn't find alot :)

All Diffs:
01:29:243 - I'd suggest to add 1 more note to the End and let the Song end 1 Note later.

You should add 1 more Time Point, cause the notes get off-synch between 00:47:731 - until 00:53:165 -


The Inherited Point of 1.02 will remove the Speed change if u want to do that (although u will probably not feel a BPM change of 3) :)

NOVICE Lv.2
I'm especially proud of the length for this diff.
01:01:792 - Add a note here, cause the "Stair sounds" are already in progress here.

ADVANCED Lv.7
00:17:199 - Maybe turn this into a chord.
01:18:753 (78753|1) - I suggest to place this note 1 bar below to 01:18:655 - . The note isn't "wrong" there, but i think you might be able to get the first "heavier sound" and the "stair sounds" into a stronger focus this way.
01:21:008 (81008|3,81204|2,81302|1,81400|0,81400|3) - You missed one of the "stair notes", so you should add a note and change your pattern -> Example: http://puu.sh/iCNbB.jpg

EXHAUST Lv.12
00:29:356 (29356|0,29356|2) - Maybe remove the Jack here.
00:54:733 (54733|2,54733|3,54929|1,54929|0,55125|3,55125|1,55321|0,55321|2) - This sounds, like you could do 4 jacks here.
00:58:655 (58655|3) - Remove this note, the only thing you can hear here, is a "LN sound" that started 2 bars before.
01:01:596 (61596|1,61596|3,61792|2,61988|1,61988|0,62184|3,62184|1,62380|2,62478|1,62576|3,62576|0,62576|2) - I'd suggest to remap that section into something like this http://puu.sh/iCQGJ.jpg, cause there is a clear "stair pattern sound" during this part, but your current mapping doesn't feel anything like it.
01:23:557 (83557|1,83753|3) - Place them into the same Column, cause they sound the same.

Sry for the double post... i thought i was on "Editing" my old... my fault :)

Good luck with this map
Topic Starter
Feerum

IamBaum wrote:

So here is a short mod for ya, i couldn't find alot :)

All Diffs:
01:29:243 - I'd suggest to add 1 more note to the End and let the Song end 1 Note later. Alright

You should add 1 more Time Point, cause the notes get off-synch between 00:47:731 - until 00:53:165 -


The Inherited Point of 1.02 will remove the Speed change if u want to do that (although u will probably not feel a BPM change of 3) :) Hm, i'm not sure about this timing Point. In the Orginal SDVX there is no 150 BPM timing Point so i will leave it how it is, but i will let check this!

NOVICE Lv.2
I'm especially proud of the length for this diff.
01:01:792 - Add a note here, cause the "Stair sounds" are already in progress here. Done!

ADVANCED Lv.7
00:17:199 - Maybe turn this into a chord. Not this one. I only Chord here the really loud drum :3
01:18:753 (78753|1) - I suggest to place this note 1 bar below to 01:18:655 - . The note isn't "wrong" there, but i think you might be able to get the first "heavier sound" and the "stair sounds" into a stronger focus this way. Uhm, here i want to Map the fast drums with only one Note because it's still only the Advance, then with a Finish with Chords! :)
01:21:008 (81008|3,81204|2,81302|1,81400|0,81400|3) - You missed one of the "stair notes", so you should add a note and change your pattern -> Example: http://puu.sh/iCNbB.jpg Oh my fail. You'r right. Thanks :)

EXHAUST Lv.12
00:29:356 (29356|0,29356|2) - Maybe remove the Jack here. Yeah done :D
00:54:733 (54733|2,54733|3,54929|1,54929|0,55125|3,55125|1,55321|0,55321|2) - This sounds, like you could do 4 jacks here. Of course i could jack this but i just think it dont fit to this song :(
00:58:655 (58655|3) - Remove this note, the only thing you can hear here, is a "LN sound" that started 2 bars before. I can hear there a sound :o
01:01:596 (61596|1,61596|3,61792|2,61988|1,61988|0,62184|3,62184|1,62380|2,62478|1,62576|3,62576|0,62576|2) - I'd suggest to remap that section into something like this http://puu.sh/iCQGJ.jpg, cause there is a clear "stair pattern sound" during this part, but your current mapping doesn't feel anything like it. This one i would like to keep too, i can understand what you mean but here i have the Chords for the Stairsound and the finish a little stair (for drums) with Chord for Finish
01:23:557 (83557|1,83753|3) - Place them into the same Column, cause they sound the same. Again i think a jack just dont fit to this calm song. :c

Sry for the double post... i thought i was on "Editing" my old... my fault :)

Good luck with this map
Thank you for your Mod baum :)
-SoraGami-
Hi Feerum! ^^

here's my mod you'd requested to me through PM xD
1|2|3|4

[NOVICE Lv.2]
HP = 7?
00:25:042 (25042|3) - move to 3 for better balance
00:45:004 - add note? same sound with 00:43:186 (43186|3,43186|2) - and the others
01:26:106 - add note, cymbals
01:28:263 (88263|1) - move to 1 for balance
[ADVANCED Lv.7]
00:48:943 (48943|1) - move to 1 for balance
01:03:557 (63557|1,63949|0) - switch columns for better balance and flow with the next and previous note
01:20:714 - add note to 2, i hear a sound that also with the stream sound so 01:20:812 (80812|1) - move to 3 for balance
[EXHAUST Lv.12]
00:25:826 (25826|1) - move to 3 for balance
00:27:395 - add note for consistency, like you did here 00:28:963 (28963|3,28963|1,29356|3,29356|0,29748|3,29748|2) - and the others

this is all i can find xD
Good Luck dude with this map :)
^o^)/**
Topic Starter
Feerum

-SoraGami- wrote:

Hi Feerum! ^^

here's my mod you'd requested to me through PM xD
1|2|3|4

[NOVICE Lv.2]
HP = 7? Okay!
00:25:042 (25042|3) - move to 3 for better balance Done
00:45:004 - add note? same sound with 00:43:186 (43186|3,43186|2) - and the others Oh yeah your right
01:26:106 - add note, cymbals Whoops, thanks!
01:28:263 (88263|1) - move to 1 for balance Done!
[ADVANCED Lv.7]
00:48:943 (48943|1) - move to 1 for balance Okay!
01:03:557 (63557|1,63949|0) - switch columns for better balance and flow with the next and previous note Done :)
01:20:714 - add note to 2, i hear a sound that also with the stream sound so 01:20:812 (80812|1) - move to 3 for balance Done. Thanks :)
[EXHAUST Lv.12]
00:25:826 (25826|1) - move to 3 for balance No, same Pianosound and these notes are Keysounded. Would be wired to play :3
00:27:395 - add note for consistency, like you did here 00:28:963 (28963|3,28963|1,29356|3,29356|0,29748|3,29748|2) - and the others Done. :)

this is all i can find xD
Good Luck dude with this map :)
^o^)/**
Thanks for the Mod and the Star's Sora ^_^/
Spy
Hello, the mod by request.

[General]
You can just add Touhou into tags.

[NOVICE Lv.2]
00:17:395 - You can add one here for this due to it is one part of the rhythm in 00:17:199 (17199|1,17591|3) - .
00:17:983 (17983|1) - I don't know what this LN for actually, according to 00:17:199 (17199|1,17591|3) - , I'll choose to keep following, so I think I'll remove the LN, and add notes on 00:17:983 - 00:18:179 - 00:18:571 - .
00:23:669 - Same as first one I said.
01:08:066 (68066|0,68263|3) - Actually both sound are same, so personally I'll make it in same column, but honestly it is a little quiet, so I may suggest you to remove it.
No matter what you followed in 01:15:125 - part, I think 01:16:302 (76302|3,77674|1) - will be better to remove.
01:19:047 (79047|1) - Shouldn't it move to 01:18:851 - ? Feel weird.
01:20:027 (80027|3,80223|2,80419|1,80615|0,80812|1,81008|2,81204|3) - About such pattern, 01:21:008 (81008|2,81204|3) - I think it is not belong to this part, so this pattern is not bad, but when it turn to last 2 notes, it feels weird, so I'll suggest you Ctrl + G that, and rearrange 01:21:400 (81400|2,81400|0) - . It feel better !
01:29:047 (89047|1,89243|0) - It should be removed, I can only hear until 01:28:851 - . And the hitsound is too loud there, also I dislike the hitsound for that. Hmm, I don't know how to explain, but if you want to know more about details, just contact me then. :)

[ADVANCED Lv.7]
00:12:493 - I don't really mind you make same as EXHAUST Lv.12 here, I mean, you can still add in 1/2, currently it makes me a little confused.
00:17:003 (17003|1) - Personally I may remove it if I map this song (?)
00:17:787 (17787|1) - Actually it is hihat, and I may not follow it here I think, feel weird for me.
00:18:375 (18375|1) - Any long sound here ? I only feel it on 00:18:571 - .
00:24:062 (24062|2) - As third point I mentioned.
00:39:552 (39552|0) - Any sound here ? In 3 diffs, only this diff add the note here.
00:40:140 - You can just add one here. Maybe you know what I mean.
00:59:439 (59439|0) - Feel nothing here, prefer remove it.
01:06:596 (66596|2) - Same, I feel nothing here, prefer remove it ?
01:07:968 - You can add a note here on 4 ? It will be better here since I get the "feel" here. :D
01:08:263 (68263|3) - Same ? I may remove it, but it is still fine to remain it.
01:11:988 (71988|1) - Better remove it I think, give it a "pause" is not bad.
01:29:047 (89047|1,89243|0) - Same as I mentioned in NOVICE Lv.2.

[EXHAUST Lv.12]
00:18:179 (18179|1,18277|2,18375|3,18473|0,18571|1,18669|2) - Aw, the hitsound, I think I'll prefer you use original one. I mean, use soft or other quiet hitsounds.
00:20:042 (20042|3,20140|2,20238|1) - Same as above.
00:36:414 - Ah, some 1/4 sounds here seems too quiet, I can't hear some of them well. :/ But it seems fine.
00:53:165 - The hitsound here same as I mentioned, I'll suggest you use other hitsound for that ?
01:04:929 (64929|1) - Give it a "pause" will be better, remove it ?
01:11:204 (71204|2) - Same as above.
01:29:047 (89047|1,89243|0) - Same as other diffs I've mentioned.

Nice map, here is a star for you. :D
Topic Starter
Feerum

Spy wrote:

Hello, the mod by request.

[General]
You can just add Touhou into tags.

[NOVICE Lv.2]
00:17:395 - You can add one here for this due to it is one part of the rhythm in 00:17:199 (17199|1,17591|3) - . Your right, done!
00:17:983 (17983|1) - I don't know what this LN for actually, according to 00:17:199 (17199|1,17591|3) - , I'll choose to keep following, so I think I'll remove the LN, and add notes on 00:17:983 - 00:18:179 - 00:18:571 - . The LN has a sound which it follows but i accept this but i have add 4 Notes :3
00:23:669 - Same as first one I said. Done
01:08:066 (68066|0,68263|3) - Actually both sound are same, so personally I'll make it in same column, but honestly it is a little quiet, so I may suggest you to remove it. Here i follow the Stairsound which is good audible :3
No matter what you followed in 01:15:125 - part, I think 01:16:302 (76302|3,77674|1) - will be better to remove. Well here i follow the Drum's. Everytime 3 Notes for the Drum, will keep it for consistency :)
01:19:047 (79047|1) - Shouldn't it move to 01:18:851 - ? Feel weird. Yeah your right, done !
01:20:027 (80027|3,80223|2,80419|1,80615|0,80812|1,81008|2,81204|3) - About such pattern, 01:21:008 (81008|2,81204|3) - I think it is not belong to this part, so this pattern is not bad, but when it turn to last 2 notes, it feels weird, so I'll suggest you Ctrl + G that, and rearrange 01:21:400 (81400|2,81400|0) - . It feel better ! Aye! Done! Feels great!
01:29:047 (89047|1,89243|0) - It should be removed, I can only hear until 01:28:851 - . And the hitsound is too loud there, also I dislike the hitsound for that. Hmm, I don't know how to explain, but if you want to know more about details, just contact me then. :) This part is kinda a little problem. I hear there 3 Sounds, some other hear 4 and you hear 2. Well.. i will add your suggestion here.
Hitsound really to loud? :c I dont know if Volume under 10% is rankable and i dont want to change this hitsound because i really use it in the whole song :x

[ADVANCED Lv.7]
00:12:493 - I don't really mind you make same as EXHAUST Lv.12 here, I mean, you can still add in 1/2, currently it makes me a little confused. This one i would like to keep how it is.
00:17:003 (17003|1) - Personally I may remove it if I map this song (?) Yeah feels better :3
00:17:787 (17787|1) - Actually it is hihat, and I may not follow it here I think, feel weird for me. Well, okay
00:18:375 (18375|1) - Any long sound here ? I only feel it on 00:18:571 - . This LN follows the 1/4 Stair sound here
00:24:062 (24062|2) - As third point I mentioned. Done
00:39:552 (39552|0) - Any sound here ? In 3 diffs, only this diff add the note here. Whoops. My Fail :D
00:40:140 - You can just add one here. Maybe you know what I mean. For Drum, yeah! Done
00:59:439 (59439|0) - Feel nothing here, prefer remove it. Done and rearrange some notes
01:06:596 (66596|2) - Same, I feel nothing here, prefer remove it ? Here it's for the 1/4 Drum :)
01:07:968 - You can add a note here on 4 ? It will be better here since I get the "feel" here. :D Done!
01:08:263 (68263|3) - Same ? I may remove it, but it is still fine to remain it. But i want to keep this for the 1/4 Drum, feels very nice while play :3
01:11:988 (71988|1) - Better remove it I think, give it a "pause" is not bad. Yeah also for consistency
01:29:047 (89047|1,89243|0) - Same as I mentioned in NOVICE Lv.2. Done!

[EXHAUST Lv.12]
00:18:179 (18179|1,18277|2,18375|3,18473|0,18571|1,18669|2) - Aw, the hitsound, I think I'll prefer you use original one. I mean, use soft or other quiet hitsounds. YES! 1000 Times YES! I talkt yesterday with a Friend and told him i totally dislike THIS Hitsound here. I still search for one who fit here great. But i dont want to use default Hitsound :D I will change this when i find one
00:20:042 (20042|3,20140|2,20238|1) - Same as above. Yeah Yeah. ^ Same :D
00:36:414 - Ah, some 1/4 sounds here seems too quiet, I can't hear some of them well. :/ But it seems fine. I know its kinda quiet here but i can hear the 1/4 drum so i keep this :3
00:53:165 - The hitsound here same as I mentioned, I'll suggest you use other hitsound for that ? ^ Same xD
01:04:929 (64929|1) - Give it a "pause" will be better, remove it ? Yeah was thinking about that, done.
01:11:204 (71204|2) - Same as above. Yeah. Done
01:29:047 (89047|1,89243|0) - Same as other diffs I've mentioned. Done!

Nice map, here is a star for you. :D
Thank you so much for your Mod Spy, it was really helpfull. About the Hitsound in the EXH i change it when i find some that fit better :3
Also thanks for the Star ^_^/ <3
Frim4503

col:1|2|3|4|5|6|7

General
idk why but for me it's same like https://osu.ppy.sh/b/388433 and idk if this song from sdvx -_-

NOVICE Lv.2
00:55:321 (55321|1) - move to 1 for more impact IMO
00:55:517 (55517|2) - ^4

ADVANCED Lv.7
00:38:277 - why not add note in here ?
^if you apply above then move 00:37:983 (37983|0) - to 1 and 00:38:179 (38179|1) - to 2

00:53:557 (53557|2,53753|3) - why not make it double ? same sound as 00:54:733 (54733|0,54733|1,54929|3,54929|2) -
01:02:576 (62576|3,62576|2) - make this tripple. you did it in 00:56:302 (56302|3,56302|0,56302|1) - and 01:07:086 (67086|0,67086|3,67086|2) -

EXHAUST Lv.12
00:18:179 (18179|1,18277|2,18375|3,18473|0,18571|1,18669|2) - i suggest to change this hs, cuz i think is not fit the song IMO
00:20:042 (20042|3,20140|2,20238|1) - ^
00:53:165 - 00:54:733 - ^

just pionting out some issues
idk if this help you or not
Topic Starter
Feerum

Frim4503 wrote:


col:1|2|3|4|5|6|7

General
idk why but for me it's same like https://osu.ppy.sh/b/388433 and idk if this song from sdvx -_-
It's the SDVX Vers of the Song
Source: https://remywiki.com/The_Starry_true

NOVICE Lv.2
00:55:321 (55321|1) - move to 1 for more impact IMO Yeah
00:55:517 (55517|2) - ^4 Thats nice, both accepted :3

ADVANCED Lv.7
00:38:277 - why not add note in here ?
^if you apply above then move 00:37:983 (37983|0) - to 1 and 00:38:179 (38179|1) - to 2 Accepted :)

00:53:557 (53557|2,53753|3) - why not make it double ? same sound as 00:54:733 (54733|0,54733|1,54929|3,54929|2) - i know but i want to catch here the Stair, not the strong Drum :)
01:02:576 (62576|3,62576|2) - make this tripple. you did it in 00:56:302 (56302|3,56302|0,56302|1) - and 01:07:086 (67086|0,67086|3,67086|2) - Not here. it is previous 1/4 Mapped and with a 3Chord Finish it could be a little bit to hard to play for this Diff

EXHAUST Lv.12
00:18:179 (18179|1,18277|2,18375|3,18473|0,18571|1,18669|2) - i suggest to change this hs, cuz i think is not fit the song IMO
00:20:042 (20042|3,20140|2,20238|1) - ^
00:53:165 - 00:54:733 - ^ Yes to all! xD I just search the last days for a better hitsound but cant find! I Change it when i find one :3

just pionting out some issues
idk if this help you or not
Thanks for your Mod it helps :)
Aruel
MARK >.<

Mod will arrive tomorrow :)

I'm not KFC I'm Mr.C LOL
Bad Apple
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IT'S TIME TO MO-MO-MOD!

Everything mentioned in my Mods is subjective and should be treated as a suggestion. If I find an UNRANKABLE issue, it'll be marked red.
When replying to the Mod, please consider telling me whether or not you've applied parts of the Mod and why you did/didn't.
If you have any further questions, feel free to ask me here or ingame.

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HEY THERE MY FRIEND!
Here is your mod, I hope it helps!
If it doesn't, doesnt matter! Just don't forget my kudo! Kappa :^)
Anyways, lets get started!

- General -
- Looks good! "This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone post this Song!" Please rank this, this is genius xD

- ADV -
- HP 6 / OD 9 seems a bit off, I would suggest changing it to Hp 7 / OD 8
- 00:04:258 (4258|1) - move to 1 for balance
- 00:10:924 (10924|2) - move to 4 ^
- 00:24:258 - you could add a LN here to map the "SHHHHH" sound coming in. (would end here 00:25:042 -) I think that would make a nice addition.
- 01:02:576 - this should be a 3-chord, you've always used 3 notes for kick+cymbal
- 01:08:753 - there's a snare sound here that you haven't mapped, I would suggest something like this.
- 01:21:400 - should be a 3-chord aswell
- 01:26:106 - ^
- 01:26:498 - I would add a second note for the snare, for consistency.
- 01:27:282 - Add something for the snare drum. You've mapped it the entire song, it felt strange to play it without a note there.
- 01:28:066 - same here, I think this pattern is kinda nice for what were searching for.
- 01:28:851 - (OPTIONAL) Second note for the snare? It's very silent, though.

- EXH -
- OD 9 seems a bit over the top, since the map only has 2,7*.. maybe change to OD 8? :3
- 00:04:650 (4650|0) - move to 4? plays a little better in my opinion
- 00:06:414 (6414|1) - move to 1?
- 00:19:356 (19356|3) - little balancing idea here, move this to 3 and this; 00:19:552 (19552|0) - to 4? I liked how that plays
- 00:23:865 (23865|2) - move to 1? that way, you have both minijacks before the LN :) (like here 00:22:297 -)
- 00:24:650 (24650|2,24846|3) - Strg + G (is a little bit more boring to play, but BALANCE MAN, THE BALANCE)
- 00:31:513 - I would have some suggestion for the chords here, to even them out a little bit, like this.
- 00:36:022 - Add one for le cymbal (on 4)
- 00:54:341 - I would also rearrange those chords, like this.
- 00:57:282 - add one for the kick-drum?
- 01:16:106 (76106|2,76302|1) - Strg + Left? That would fix the few jacks on 2/3, makes it a little bit more fluent to play :3
- 01:27:282 - yet again, I would add something here
- 01:28:066 - ^

That's just about everything I found without changing your style, balance-whores find everything...
Best of luck with getting this ranked my friend, this mapset looks very very good! :3
Greetings
Apple
Aruel


Hi Feerum~ Modding from Voltexers modding queue~ (Before Chicken's modding queue)

Nice. SDVX map Where is Starry lol

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[General]

[Wide screen support] Only turn on in NOVICE. please turn off

[MP3 File]

Your mp3 kbps is 0 In my computer. I don't know It's a error or something. Please check this on your computer. (Please forgive my Korean computer ;_;)

[Overall difficulty and HP Drain Rate]

NOVICE has OD:8 HP:7 Yeah. It's fine but. ADVANCED has OD:9 HP:6. ADV is easy then NOV about HP. Please check this again.

[NOVICE Lv.2]

00:19:944 - Same pitch with 00:16:807 - But you're using different note. :p

00:35:630 (35630|1) - I suggest remove this. Because Same pitch with 00:35:826 - Here. and for more good balance.

01:25:321 - Missed note? If you will add one note. I suggest add to 1 col.

[ADVANCED Lv.7]


00:37:983 - Add one? like 00:35:630 - This pattern.

01:17:674 - Add one. All same sound has three note. like 01:15:125 and 01:08:851 - This part.

01:22:772 - Same reason :p

01:24:537 - :3

01:26:106 - Yes. Same XD

01:27:870 (87870|2,87870|3,88263|1,88263|0) - I guess. Two notes are unnecessary. So quite sounds.

[EXHAUST Lv.12]

00:10:728 (10728|1) - Move to 4? For balance? Or is this for pitch?

00:15:238 - Why this part using only one note? Check this part. Same sounds. 00:15:630 , 00:16:022 -

00:17:591 - Same reason :)

00:25:826 (25826|1) - Move to 1. Not same pitch. So It looks unnecessary.

00:31:513 (31513|3,31513|0,31709|3,31709|1,31905|2,31905|0,32101|1,32101|3,32297|1,32297|2) - Amm... I don't know what sounds you followed. and If you follow "beep-" Sounds. You should be use 2 notes in other parts :p

01:14:243 (74243|2) - Is this has sound? I guess It isn't sound It's a drum lingering imagery.

01:27:282 - Add. has drum sound :p

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Feerum

- Bad Apple - wrote:

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IT'S TIME TO MO-MO-MOD!

Everything mentioned in my Mods is subjective and should be treated as a suggestion. If I find an UNRANKABLE issue, it'll be marked red.
When replying to the Mod, please consider telling me whether or not you've applied parts of the Mod and why you did/didn't.
If you have any further questions, feel free to ask me here or ingame.

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
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HEY THERE MY FRIEND!
Here is your mod, I hope it helps!
If it doesn't, doesnt matter! Just don't forget my kudo! Kappa :^)
Anyways, lets get started!

- General -
- Looks good! "This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone post this Song!" Please rank this, this is genius xD

- ADV -
- HP 6 / OD 9 seems a bit off, I would suggest changing it to Hp 7 / OD 8 Alright
- 00:04:258 (4258|1) - move to 1 for balance Done and rearrange some more pattern
- 00:10:924 (10924|2) - move to 4 ^ Again done and little bit rearrange
- 00:24:258 - you could add a LN here to map the "SHHHHH" sound coming in. (would end here 00:25:042 -) I think that would make a nice addition. Hm, like in the Exhaust? First i dont want to add there a ln, but your not the first who say that.. so i add the LN
- 01:02:576 - this should be a 3-chord, you've always used 3 notes for kick+cymbal Not here, like in previous Mods mention in the previous 3 Chords are no 1/4 Parts before the chord. I think 1/4 and a 3Chord would be too much for this
- 01:08:753 - there's a snare sound here that you haven't mapped, I would suggest something like this. No thanks. I like how it is, First the 1/4 Drums and at the end the 1/2 Stair sound, finish with a 3 Chord here.
- 01:21:400 - should be a 3-chord aswell Same reason, 1/4 + 3 Chord too mucho
- 01:26:106 - ^ Okay here added because only 1/2 Part
- 01:26:498 - I would add a second note for the snare, for consistency. Nope. I catch that sound that gets higher here with that 1/2 Stair (i think its the Piano lol)
- 01:27:282 - Add something for the snare drum. You've mapped it the entire song, it felt strange to play it without a note there. Again nope. I try to map the Piano only for end.
- 01:28:066 - same here, I think this pattern is kinda nice for what were searching for. Again no because piano only.
- 01:28:851 - (OPTIONAL) Second note for the snare? It's very silent, though. Again no because only Piano :)

- EXH -
- OD 9 seems a bit over the top, since the map only has 2,7*.. maybe change to OD 8? :3 Mh, well, okay.
- 00:04:650 (4650|0) - move to 4? plays a little better in my opinion Okay
- 00:06:414 (6414|1) - move to 1? Nice
- 00:19:356 (19356|3) - little balancing idea here, move this to 3 and this; 00:19:552 (19552|0) - to 4? I liked how that plays Looks good, accepted
- 00:23:865 (23865|2) - move to 1? that way, you have both minijacks before the LN :) (like here 00:22:297 -) Yeah sure, accepted
- 00:24:650 (24650|2,24846|3) - Strg + G (is a little bit more boring to play, but BALANCE MAN, THE BALANCE) No sorry dont want this :(
- 00:31:513 - I would have some suggestion for the chords here, to even them out a little bit, like this. Nice, accepted
- 00:36:022 - Add one for le cymbal (on 4) Oh yeah, thanks. Done
- 00:54:341 - I would also rearrange those chords, like this. Accepted. Looks very nice
- 00:57:282 - add one for the kick-drum? Not here :)
- 01:16:106 (76106|2,76302|1) - Strg + Left? That would fix the few jacks on 2/3, makes it a little bit more fluent to play :3 Okay!
- 01:27:282 - yet again, I would add something here Nope, same reason like Advance
- 01:28:066 - ^ Same reason like Advance

That's just about everything I found without changing your style, balance-whores find everything...
Best of luck with getting this ranked my friend, this mapset looks very very good! :3
Greetings
Apple

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:



Hi Feerum~ Modding from Voltexers modding queue~ (Before Chicken's modding queue)

Nice. SDVX map Where is Starry lol

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[General]

[Wide screen support] Only turn on in NOVICE. please turn off Done

[MP3 File]

Your mp3 kbps is 0 In my computer. I don't know It's a error or something. Please check this on your computer. (Please forgive my Korean computer ;_;) i will check this later!

[Overall difficulty and HP Drain Rate]

NOVICE has OD:8 HP:7 Yeah. It's fine but. ADVANCED has OD:9 HP:6. ADV is easy then NOV about HP. Please check this again. Done in previous Mod :)

[NOVICE Lv.2]

00:19:944 - Same pitch with 00:16:807 - But you're using different note. :p Oops, my fail, done!

00:35:630 (35630|1) - I suggest remove this. Because Same pitch with 00:35:826 - Here. and for more good balance. Yeah done!

01:25:321 - Missed note? If you will add one note. I suggest add to 1 col. Not here, i like that little break :)

[ADVANCED Lv.7]


00:37:983 - Add one? like 00:35:630 - This pattern. Added

01:17:674 - Add one. All same sound has three note. like 01:15:125 and 01:08:851 - This part. Added for Finish

01:22:772 - Same reason :p Here added because Finish :D

01:24:537 - :3 Added for Finish

01:26:106 - Yes. Same XD For Finish.. yeah.. xD

01:27:870 (87870|2,87870|3,88263|1,88263|0) - I guess. Two notes are unnecessary. So quite sounds. Dont think so, i keep :3

[EXHAUST Lv.12]

00:10:728 (10728|1) - Move to 4? For balance? Or is this for pitch? Done

00:15:238 - Why this part using only one note? Check this part. Same sounds. 00:15:630 , 00:16:022 - ooops. Fixed'

00:17:591 - Same reason :) Fixed'

00:25:826 (25826|1) - Move to 1. Not same pitch. So It looks unnecessary. It.. is.. same pitch?

00:31:513 (31513|3,31513|0,31709|3,31709|1,31905|2,31905|0,32101|1,32101|3,32297|1,32297|2) - Amm... I don't know what sounds you followed. and If you follow "beep-" Sounds. You should be use 2 notes in other parts :p For me these looks good, i follow the Stair "beep-" sound with two chords yeah. But in which parts you mean?

01:14:243 (74243|2) - Is this has sound? I guess It isn't sound It's a drum lingering imagery. goddamned Ghostnote, fixed' thanks xD

01:27:282 - Add. has drum sound :p Nope, only follow the Piano! :)

Good luck :)
Thanks Bad Apple and Mr.KFC for the Mod and Chicken for the Star too :)

really helpfull! ^_^/
[ A v a l o n ]
the map is already nice and awesome to play . . .
good luck for qualify :3 /
Topic Starter
Feerum

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

the map is already nice and awesome to play . . .
good luck for qualify :3 /
Thank you ^_^/
And thanks for the Stars :3
Myxo
Rank it please
Okoratu

Desperate-kun wrote:

HL Starry- please
-[ AmiShici ]-
Hiii Feerum o/

From Star_Lenz's Mania Team Queues

4K = |1|2|3|4|
little mod from me
[NOVICE] 00:37:787 (37787|0,37983|1,38179|2,38375|3,38571|0,38767|1,38963|2,39160|3) - actually this pitch is reserve but idk. lel. suggest re-arrange it
01:01:792 (61792|1) - delete? for consistency pattern like as 01:00:419 (60419|2,60615|3,60812|1) - ; 00:59:635 (59635|2,59831|1,60027|0) - ; 00:58:851 (58851|0,59047|1,59243|3) - ; etc
01:06:498 (66498|1,66890|2) - ^
01:14:341 (74341|0) - ^
01:23:165 - ~ 01:26:106 - i don't know what are you following here :o

[ADVANCED]00:24:062 (24062|2) - i think this LN started from 00:23:865 -
00:47:731 - add note for cymbal or bell like as 00:45:913 (45913|1,45913|0,45913|2) -
01:05:714 (65714|2) - delete. reason same as on NOVICE diff
01:13:557 (73557|0) - ^
01:07:282 (67282|1) - delete? what are you following here?
01:14:341 (74341|1) - delete
01:17:478 (77478|2) - delete?

[EXHAUST]00:14:650 (14650|2) - this LN should be end on 00:14:846 -
00:20:924 (20924|1) - ^ on 00:21:120 -
00:40:532 (40532|2,40532|0,40532|3) - idk what are you doing here? why you add triple while this 00:39:944 (39944|1,39944|3,40924|3,40924|2,41905|0,41905|2) - you use double. suggest delete one note
00:53:165 - add note? like as 00:51:367 (51367|3,51367|0,51367|2) -

Well. Good Luck. Have a nice day \=D/
Topic Starter
Feerum

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hiii Feerum o/

From Star_Lenz's Mania Team Queues

4K = |1|2|3|4|
little mod from me
[NOVICE] 00:37:787 (37787|0,37983|1,38179|2,38375|3,38571|0,38767|1,38963|2,39160|3) - actually this pitch is reserve but idk. lel. suggest re-arrange it I keep mine. I think it should be fine for Novice Diff :)
01:01:792 (61792|1) - delete? for consistency pattern like as 01:00:419 (60419|2,60615|3,60812|1) - ; 00:59:635 (59635|2,59831|1,60027|0) - ; 00:58:851 (58851|0,59047|1,59243|3) - ; etc Nice catch
01:06:498 (66498|1,66890|2) - ^ Not here, for drums :)
01:14:341 (74341|0) - ^ Done and rearrange a little bit :3
01:23:165 - ~ 01:26:106 - i don't know what are you following here :o Snare+Drums :)

[ADVANCED]00:24:062 (24062|2) - i think this LN started from 00:23:865 - For me the LN looks fine.. :o
00:47:731 - add note for cymbal or bell like as 00:45:913 (45913|1,45913|0,45913|2) - Okay done, also in the next
01:05:714 (65714|2) - delete. reason same as on NOVICE diff Not here, follow snare
01:13:557 (73557|0) - ^ okay
01:07:282 (67282|1) - delete? what are you following here? Done
01:14:341 (74341|1) - delete Not here
01:17:478 (77478|2) - delete? Nope, because drum

[EXHAUST]00:14:650 (14650|2) - this LN should be end on 00:14:846 - Was never sure about this LN, i keep but i will ask some other people too
00:20:924 (20924|1) - ^ on 00:21:120 - Same like above
00:40:532 (40532|2,40532|0,40532|3) - idk what are you doing here? why you add triple while this 00:39:944 (39944|1,39944|3,40924|3,40924|2,41905|0,41905|2) - you use double. suggest delete one noteNope. You didnt hear the Finish? :c
00:53:165 - add note? like as 00:51:367 (51367|3,51367|0,51367|2) - Well not here :/ The 3 Chords mostly used for finish.. here's no finish :c

Well. Good Luck. Have a nice day \=D/
Thanks for your Mod. It helps :)
AlisceaSparku
Hi~!
From AlisceaSparku's Modding Queue :D
Very late mod I'm sorry :'(
Columns: |1|2|3|4|

EXHAUST
00:30:924 (30924|2) - move to 1, putting a vacant column between 2 notes will emphasize the sound
00:31:120 (31120|0) - move to 2, to avoid ^
00:31:316 (31316|1) - move to 4, to avoid ^
00:32:493 (32493|2) - move to 1, to emphasize the beat
00:34:062 (34062|2) - ^
00:34:258 (34258|0) - move to 3, to avoid the note above
00:34:454 (34454|2) - move to 1, to avoid ^
00:33:669 (33669|0) - move to 3, small beat
00:33:865 (33865|2) - move to 2, to avoid ^
00:45:610 - make this 3 notes. add note to 3
00:45:913 (45913|2) - move to 1, putting a vacant column inbetween differentiates it from 00:45:610
01:08:557 (68557|3,68655|1,68655|2,68753|0) - this is confusing for me. the sound of 01:08:557 is louder than 01:08:655. How about trying this http://puu.sh/iMToN/be81adb266.jpg

these are optional.
01:10:027 - this beat is weaker than 01:10:223.
- move 01:10:027 (70027|0) to 2
- move 01:10:223 (70223|2) to 1

ADVANCED
00:14:062 - add note for cymbal? ( optional ) so that it's the same with 00:20:336
00:42:297 - add note for cymbal
NOVICE
00:20:336 (20336|1) - move this to 4, it is a different sound than 00:19:944 so we'll make it look different
00:20:728 (20728|3,20924|2) - move to the left by one column if you apply ^
00:32:885 (32885|1) - move to 4, different sound than 00:32:493
00:33:277 (33277|3,33669|2) - move to the left by one column if you apply ^
00:34:454 (34454|1,34846|2) - move to the right by one column
01:25:321 - missing note?
Hope these help :D
Good luck with your map! :D
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