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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 2. September 2015 at 04:38:46

Artist: Liz Triangle
Title: The Starry true
Source: SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags: KONAMI BEMANI sdvx 聖徳伝説 ~ True Administrator stage 6 Boss theme 東方神霊廟 ~ Ten Desires 東方Project ZUN lily-an kaztora azuki reunion Comiket 81 C81
BPM: 153
Filesize: 5316kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED Lv.7 - 4Key (2,03 stars, 502 notes)
  2. EXHAUST Lv.12 - 4Key (2,69 stars, 687 notes)
  3. NOVICE Lv.4 - 4Key (1,46 stars, 321 notes)
Download: Liz Triangle - The Starry true
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2nd Ranked Map!
BG Source
This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone post this Song!
by Spy
by Kuo Kyoka

  1. NOVICE Lv.2 by Me 100% Hitsound 100%
  2. ADVANCED Lv.7 by Me 100% Hitsound 100%
  3. EXHAUST Lv.12 by Me 100% Hitsound 100%
Standard Special Difficulty
  1. Oko vs Feru's Exhaust by Okoratu & Feerum


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_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ for Mod & 1 Star
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Crono for 1 Star
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Kuo Kyoka for Mod & 1 Star
Okoratu

Feerum wrote:

This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone posts it!
Zetera
This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone post this Song!
Starry-

Feerum wrote:

This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone post this Song!
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Bad Apple

Sala- wrote:

This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone post this Song!
IamBaum

- Bad Apple - wrote:

Sala- wrote:

This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone post this Song!
IamBaum
So here is a short mod for ya, i couldn't find alot :)

All Diffs:
01:29:243 - I'd suggest to add 1 more note to the End and let the Song end 1 Note later.

You should add 1 more Time Point, cause the notes get off-synch between 00:47:731 - until 00:53:165 -


The Inherited Point of 1.02 will remove the Speed change if u want to do that (although u will probably not feel a BPM change of 3) :)

NOVICE Lv.2
I'm especially proud of the length for this diff.
01:01:792 - Add a note here, cause the "Stair sounds" are already in progress here.

ADVANCED Lv.7
00:17:199 - Maybe turn this into a chord.
01:18:753 (78753|1) - I suggest to place this note 1 bar below to 01:18:655 - . The note isn't "wrong" there, but i think you might be able to get the first "heavier sound" and the "stair sounds" into a stronger focus this way.
01:21:008 (81008|3,81204|2,81302|1,81400|0,81400|3) - You missed one of the "stair notes", so you should add a note and change your pattern -> Example: http://puu.sh/iCNbB.jpg

EXHAUST Lv.12
00:29:356 (29356|0,29356|2) - Maybe remove the Jack here.
00:54:733 (54733|2,54733|3,54929|1,54929|0,55125|3,55125|1,55321|0,55321|2) - This sounds, like you could do 4 jacks here.
00:58:655 (58655|3) - Remove this note, the only thing you can hear here, is a "LN sound" that started 2 bars before.
01:01:596 (61596|1,61596|3,61792|2,61988|1,61988|0,62184|3,62184|1,62380|2,62478|1,62576|3,62576|0,62576|2) - I'd suggest to remap that section into something like this http://puu.sh/iCQGJ.jpg, cause there is a clear "stair pattern sound" during this part, but your current mapping doesn't feel anything like it.
01:23:557 (83557|1,83753|3) - Place them into the same Column, cause they sound the same.

Sry for the double post... i thought i was on "Editing" my old... my fault :)

Good luck with this map
Topic Starter
Feerum

IamBaum wrote:

So here is a short mod for ya, i couldn't find alot :)

All Diffs:
01:29:243 - I'd suggest to add 1 more note to the End and let the Song end 1 Note later. Alright

You should add 1 more Time Point, cause the notes get off-synch between 00:47:731 - until 00:53:165 -


The Inherited Point of 1.02 will remove the Speed change if u want to do that (although u will probably not feel a BPM change of 3) :) Hm, i'm not sure about this timing Point. In the Orginal SDVX there is no 150 BPM timing Point so i will leave it how it is, but i will let check this!

NOVICE Lv.2
I'm especially proud of the length for this diff.
01:01:792 - Add a note here, cause the "Stair sounds" are already in progress here. Done!

ADVANCED Lv.7
00:17:199 - Maybe turn this into a chord. Not this one. I only Chord here the really loud drum :3
01:18:753 (78753|1) - I suggest to place this note 1 bar below to 01:18:655 - . The note isn't "wrong" there, but i think you might be able to get the first "heavier sound" and the "stair sounds" into a stronger focus this way. Uhm, here i want to Map the fast drums with only one Note because it's still only the Advance, then with a Finish with Chords! :)
01:21:008 (81008|3,81204|2,81302|1,81400|0,81400|3) - You missed one of the "stair notes", so you should add a note and change your pattern -> Example: http://puu.sh/iCNbB.jpg Oh my fail. You'r right. Thanks :)

EXHAUST Lv.12
00:29:356 (29356|0,29356|2) - Maybe remove the Jack here. Yeah done :D
00:54:733 (54733|2,54733|3,54929|1,54929|0,55125|3,55125|1,55321|0,55321|2) - This sounds, like you could do 4 jacks here. Of course i could jack this but i just think it dont fit to this song :(
00:58:655 (58655|3) - Remove this note, the only thing you can hear here, is a "LN sound" that started 2 bars before. I can hear there a sound :o
01:01:596 (61596|1,61596|3,61792|2,61988|1,61988|0,62184|3,62184|1,62380|2,62478|1,62576|3,62576|0,62576|2) - I'd suggest to remap that section into something like this http://puu.sh/iCQGJ.jpg, cause there is a clear "stair pattern sound" during this part, but your current mapping doesn't feel anything like it. This one i would like to keep too, i can understand what you mean but here i have the Chords for the Stairsound and the finish a little stair (for drums) with Chord for Finish
01:23:557 (83557|1,83753|3) - Place them into the same Column, cause they sound the same. Again i think a jack just dont fit to this calm song. :c

Sry for the double post... i thought i was on "Editing" my old... my fault :)

Good luck with this map
Thank you for your Mod baum :)
-SoraGami-
Hi Feerum! ^^

here's my mod you'd requested to me through PM xD
1|2|3|4

[NOVICE Lv.2]
HP = 7?
00:25:042 (25042|3) - move to 3 for better balance
00:45:004 - add note? same sound with 00:43:186 (43186|3,43186|2) - and the others
01:26:106 - add note, cymbals
01:28:263 (88263|1) - move to 1 for balance
[ADVANCED Lv.7]
00:48:943 (48943|1) - move to 1 for balance
01:03:557 (63557|1,63949|0) - switch columns for better balance and flow with the next and previous note
01:20:714 - add note to 2, i hear a sound that also with the stream sound so 01:20:812 (80812|1) - move to 3 for balance
[EXHAUST Lv.12]
00:25:826 (25826|1) - move to 3 for balance
00:27:395 - add note for consistency, like you did here 00:28:963 (28963|3,28963|1,29356|3,29356|0,29748|3,29748|2) - and the others

this is all i can find xD
Good Luck dude with this map :)
^o^)/**
Topic Starter
Feerum

-SoraGami- wrote:

Hi Feerum! ^^

here's my mod you'd requested to me through PM xD
1|2|3|4

[NOVICE Lv.2]
HP = 7? Okay!
00:25:042 (25042|3) - move to 3 for better balance Done
00:45:004 - add note? same sound with 00:43:186 (43186|3,43186|2) - and the others Oh yeah your right
01:26:106 - add note, cymbals Whoops, thanks!
01:28:263 (88263|1) - move to 1 for balance Done!
[ADVANCED Lv.7]
00:48:943 (48943|1) - move to 1 for balance Okay!
01:03:557 (63557|1,63949|0) - switch columns for better balance and flow with the next and previous note Done :)
01:20:714 - add note to 2, i hear a sound that also with the stream sound so 01:20:812 (80812|1) - move to 3 for balance Done. Thanks :)
[EXHAUST Lv.12]
00:25:826 (25826|1) - move to 3 for balance No, same Pianosound and these notes are Keysounded. Would be wired to play :3
00:27:395 - add note for consistency, like you did here 00:28:963 (28963|3,28963|1,29356|3,29356|0,29748|3,29748|2) - and the others Done. :)

this is all i can find xD
Good Luck dude with this map :)
^o^)/**
Thanks for the Mod and the Star's Sora ^_^/
Spy
Hello, the mod by request.

[General]
You can just add Touhou into tags.

[NOVICE Lv.2]
00:17:395 - You can add one here for this due to it is one part of the rhythm in 00:17:199 (17199|1,17591|3) - .
00:17:983 (17983|1) - I don't know what this LN for actually, according to 00:17:199 (17199|1,17591|3) - , I'll choose to keep following, so I think I'll remove the LN, and add notes on 00:17:983 - 00:18:179 - 00:18:571 - .
00:23:669 - Same as first one I said.
01:08:066 (68066|0,68263|3) - Actually both sound are same, so personally I'll make it in same column, but honestly it is a little quiet, so I may suggest you to remove it.
No matter what you followed in 01:15:125 - part, I think 01:16:302 (76302|3,77674|1) - will be better to remove.
01:19:047 (79047|1) - Shouldn't it move to 01:18:851 - ? Feel weird.
01:20:027 (80027|3,80223|2,80419|1,80615|0,80812|1,81008|2,81204|3) - About such pattern, 01:21:008 (81008|2,81204|3) - I think it is not belong to this part, so this pattern is not bad, but when it turn to last 2 notes, it feels weird, so I'll suggest you Ctrl + G that, and rearrange 01:21:400 (81400|2,81400|0) - . It feel better !
01:29:047 (89047|1,89243|0) - It should be removed, I can only hear until 01:28:851 - . And the hitsound is too loud there, also I dislike the hitsound for that. Hmm, I don't know how to explain, but if you want to know more about details, just contact me then. :)

[ADVANCED Lv.7]
00:12:493 - I don't really mind you make same as EXHAUST Lv.12 here, I mean, you can still add in 1/2, currently it makes me a little confused.
00:17:003 (17003|1) - Personally I may remove it if I map this song (?)
00:17:787 (17787|1) - Actually it is hihat, and I may not follow it here I think, feel weird for me.
00:18:375 (18375|1) - Any long sound here ? I only feel it on 00:18:571 - .
00:24:062 (24062|2) - As third point I mentioned.
00:39:552 (39552|0) - Any sound here ? In 3 diffs, only this diff add the note here.
00:40:140 - You can just add one here. Maybe you know what I mean.
00:59:439 (59439|0) - Feel nothing here, prefer remove it.
01:06:596 (66596|2) - Same, I feel nothing here, prefer remove it ?
01:07:968 - You can add a note here on 4 ? It will be better here since I get the "feel" here. :D
01:08:263 (68263|3) - Same ? I may remove it, but it is still fine to remain it.
01:11:988 (71988|1) - Better remove it I think, give it a "pause" is not bad.
01:29:047 (89047|1,89243|0) - Same as I mentioned in NOVICE Lv.2.

[EXHAUST Lv.12]
00:18:179 (18179|1,18277|2,18375|3,18473|0,18571|1,18669|2) - Aw, the hitsound, I think I'll prefer you use original one. I mean, use soft or other quiet hitsounds.
00:20:042 (20042|3,20140|2,20238|1) - Same as above.
00:36:414 - Ah, some 1/4 sounds here seems too quiet, I can't hear some of them well. :/ But it seems fine.
00:53:165 - The hitsound here same as I mentioned, I'll suggest you use other hitsound for that ?
01:04:929 (64929|1) - Give it a "pause" will be better, remove it ?
01:11:204 (71204|2) - Same as above.
01:29:047 (89047|1,89243|0) - Same as other diffs I've mentioned.

Nice map, here is a star for you. :D
Topic Starter
Feerum

Spy wrote:

Hello, the mod by request.

[General]
You can just add Touhou into tags.

[NOVICE Lv.2]
00:17:395 - You can add one here for this due to it is one part of the rhythm in 00:17:199 (17199|1,17591|3) - . Your right, done!
00:17:983 (17983|1) - I don't know what this LN for actually, according to 00:17:199 (17199|1,17591|3) - , I'll choose to keep following, so I think I'll remove the LN, and add notes on 00:17:983 - 00:18:179 - 00:18:571 - . The LN has a sound which it follows but i accept this but i have add 4 Notes :3
00:23:669 - Same as first one I said. Done
01:08:066 (68066|0,68263|3) - Actually both sound are same, so personally I'll make it in same column, but honestly it is a little quiet, so I may suggest you to remove it. Here i follow the Stairsound which is good audible :3
No matter what you followed in 01:15:125 - part, I think 01:16:302 (76302|3,77674|1) - will be better to remove. Well here i follow the Drum's. Everytime 3 Notes for the Drum, will keep it for consistency :)
01:19:047 (79047|1) - Shouldn't it move to 01:18:851 - ? Feel weird. Yeah your right, done !
01:20:027 (80027|3,80223|2,80419|1,80615|0,80812|1,81008|2,81204|3) - About such pattern, 01:21:008 (81008|2,81204|3) - I think it is not belong to this part, so this pattern is not bad, but when it turn to last 2 notes, it feels weird, so I'll suggest you Ctrl + G that, and rearrange 01:21:400 (81400|2,81400|0) - . It feel better ! Aye! Done! Feels great!
01:29:047 (89047|1,89243|0) - It should be removed, I can only hear until 01:28:851 - . And the hitsound is too loud there, also I dislike the hitsound for that. Hmm, I don't know how to explain, but if you want to know more about details, just contact me then. :) This part is kinda a little problem. I hear there 3 Sounds, some other hear 4 and you hear 2. Well.. i will add your suggestion here.
Hitsound really to loud? :c I dont know if Volume under 10% is rankable and i dont want to change this hitsound because i really use it in the whole song :x

[ADVANCED Lv.7]
00:12:493 - I don't really mind you make same as EXHAUST Lv.12 here, I mean, you can still add in 1/2, currently it makes me a little confused. This one i would like to keep how it is.
00:17:003 (17003|1) - Personally I may remove it if I map this song (?) Yeah feels better :3
00:17:787 (17787|1) - Actually it is hihat, and I may not follow it here I think, feel weird for me. Well, okay
00:18:375 (18375|1) - Any long sound here ? I only feel it on 00:18:571 - . This LN follows the 1/4 Stair sound here
00:24:062 (24062|2) - As third point I mentioned. Done
00:39:552 (39552|0) - Any sound here ? In 3 diffs, only this diff add the note here. Whoops. My Fail :D
00:40:140 - You can just add one here. Maybe you know what I mean. For Drum, yeah! Done
00:59:439 (59439|0) - Feel nothing here, prefer remove it. Done and rearrange some notes
01:06:596 (66596|2) - Same, I feel nothing here, prefer remove it ? Here it's for the 1/4 Drum :)
01:07:968 - You can add a note here on 4 ? It will be better here since I get the "feel" here. :D Done!
01:08:263 (68263|3) - Same ? I may remove it, but it is still fine to remain it. But i want to keep this for the 1/4 Drum, feels very nice while play :3
01:11:988 (71988|1) - Better remove it I think, give it a "pause" is not bad. Yeah also for consistency
01:29:047 (89047|1,89243|0) - Same as I mentioned in NOVICE Lv.2. Done!

[EXHAUST Lv.12]
00:18:179 (18179|1,18277|2,18375|3,18473|0,18571|1,18669|2) - Aw, the hitsound, I think I'll prefer you use original one. I mean, use soft or other quiet hitsounds. YES! 1000 Times YES! I talkt yesterday with a Friend and told him i totally dislike THIS Hitsound here. I still search for one who fit here great. But i dont want to use default Hitsound :D I will change this when i find one
00:20:042 (20042|3,20140|2,20238|1) - Same as above. Yeah Yeah. ^ Same :D
00:36:414 - Ah, some 1/4 sounds here seems too quiet, I can't hear some of them well. :/ But it seems fine. I know its kinda quiet here but i can hear the 1/4 drum so i keep this :3
00:53:165 - The hitsound here same as I mentioned, I'll suggest you use other hitsound for that ? ^ Same xD
01:04:929 (64929|1) - Give it a "pause" will be better, remove it ? Yeah was thinking about that, done.
01:11:204 (71204|2) - Same as above. Yeah. Done
01:29:047 (89047|1,89243|0) - Same as other diffs I've mentioned. Done!

Nice map, here is a star for you. :D
Thank you so much for your Mod Spy, it was really helpfull. About the Hitsound in the EXH i change it when i find some that fit better :3
Also thanks for the Star ^_^/ <3
Frim4503

col:1|2|3|4|5|6|7

General
idk why but for me it's same like https://osu.ppy.sh/b/388433 and idk if this song from sdvx -_-

NOVICE Lv.2
00:55:321 (55321|1) - move to 1 for more impact IMO
00:55:517 (55517|2) - ^4

ADVANCED Lv.7
00:38:277 - why not add note in here ?
^if you apply above then move 00:37:983 (37983|0) - to 1 and 00:38:179 (38179|1) - to 2

00:53:557 (53557|2,53753|3) - why not make it double ? same sound as 00:54:733 (54733|0,54733|1,54929|3,54929|2) -
01:02:576 (62576|3,62576|2) - make this tripple. you did it in 00:56:302 (56302|3,56302|0,56302|1) - and 01:07:086 (67086|0,67086|3,67086|2) -

EXHAUST Lv.12
00:18:179 (18179|1,18277|2,18375|3,18473|0,18571|1,18669|2) - i suggest to change this hs, cuz i think is not fit the song IMO
00:20:042 (20042|3,20140|2,20238|1) - ^
00:53:165 - 00:54:733 - ^

just pionting out some issues
idk if this help you or not
Topic Starter
Feerum

Frim4503 wrote:


col:1|2|3|4|5|6|7

General
idk why but for me it's same like https://osu.ppy.sh/b/388433 and idk if this song from sdvx -_-
It's the SDVX Vers of the Song
Source: https://remywiki.com/The_Starry_true

NOVICE Lv.2
00:55:321 (55321|1) - move to 1 for more impact IMO Yeah
00:55:517 (55517|2) - ^4 Thats nice, both accepted :3

ADVANCED Lv.7
00:38:277 - why not add note in here ?
^if you apply above then move 00:37:983 (37983|0) - to 1 and 00:38:179 (38179|1) - to 2 Accepted :)

00:53:557 (53557|2,53753|3) - why not make it double ? same sound as 00:54:733 (54733|0,54733|1,54929|3,54929|2) - i know but i want to catch here the Stair, not the strong Drum :)
01:02:576 (62576|3,62576|2) - make this tripple. you did it in 00:56:302 (56302|3,56302|0,56302|1) - and 01:07:086 (67086|0,67086|3,67086|2) - Not here. it is previous 1/4 Mapped and with a 3Chord Finish it could be a little bit to hard to play for this Diff

EXHAUST Lv.12
00:18:179 (18179|1,18277|2,18375|3,18473|0,18571|1,18669|2) - i suggest to change this hs, cuz i think is not fit the song IMO
00:20:042 (20042|3,20140|2,20238|1) - ^
00:53:165 - 00:54:733 - ^ Yes to all! xD I just search the last days for a better hitsound but cant find! I Change it when i find one :3

just pionting out some issues
idk if this help you or not
Thanks for your Mod it helps :)
Aruel
MARK >.<

Mod will arrive tomorrow :)

I'm not KFC I'm Mr.C LOL
Bad Apple
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IT'S TIME TO MO-MO-MOD!

Everything mentioned in my Mods is subjective and should be treated as a suggestion. If I find an UNRANKABLE issue, it'll be marked red.
When replying to the Mod, please consider telling me whether or not you've applied parts of the Mod and why you did/didn't.
If you have any further questions, feel free to ask me here or ingame.

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HEY THERE MY FRIEND!
Here is your mod, I hope it helps!
If it doesn't, doesnt matter! Just don't forget my kudo! Kappa :^)
Anyways, lets get started!

- General -
- Looks good! "This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone post this Song!" Please rank this, this is genius xD

- ADV -
- HP 6 / OD 9 seems a bit off, I would suggest changing it to Hp 7 / OD 8
- 00:04:258 (4258|1) - move to 1 for balance
- 00:10:924 (10924|2) - move to 4 ^
- 00:24:258 - you could add a LN here to map the "SHHHHH" sound coming in. (would end here 00:25:042 -) I think that would make a nice addition.
- 01:02:576 - this should be a 3-chord, you've always used 3 notes for kick+cymbal
- 01:08:753 - there's a snare sound here that you haven't mapped, I would suggest something like this.
- 01:21:400 - should be a 3-chord aswell
- 01:26:106 - ^
- 01:26:498 - I would add a second note for the snare, for consistency.
- 01:27:282 - Add something for the snare drum. You've mapped it the entire song, it felt strange to play it without a note there.
- 01:28:066 - same here, I think this pattern is kinda nice for what were searching for.
- 01:28:851 - (OPTIONAL) Second note for the snare? It's very silent, though.

- EXH -
- OD 9 seems a bit over the top, since the map only has 2,7*.. maybe change to OD 8? :3
- 00:04:650 (4650|0) - move to 4? plays a little better in my opinion
- 00:06:414 (6414|1) - move to 1?
- 00:19:356 (19356|3) - little balancing idea here, move this to 3 and this; 00:19:552 (19552|0) - to 4? I liked how that plays
- 00:23:865 (23865|2) - move to 1? that way, you have both minijacks before the LN :) (like here 00:22:297 -)
- 00:24:650 (24650|2,24846|3) - Strg + G (is a little bit more boring to play, but BALANCE MAN, THE BALANCE)
- 00:31:513 - I would have some suggestion for the chords here, to even them out a little bit, like this.
- 00:36:022 - Add one for le cymbal (on 4)
- 00:54:341 - I would also rearrange those chords, like this.
- 00:57:282 - add one for the kick-drum?
- 01:16:106 (76106|2,76302|1) - Strg + Left? That would fix the few jacks on 2/3, makes it a little bit more fluent to play :3
- 01:27:282 - yet again, I would add something here
- 01:28:066 - ^

That's just about everything I found without changing your style, balance-whores find everything...
Best of luck with getting this ranked my friend, this mapset looks very very good! :3
Greetings
Apple
Aruel


Hi Feerum~ Modding from Voltexers modding queue~ (Before Chicken's modding queue)

Nice. SDVX map Where is Starry lol

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[General]

[Wide screen support] Only turn on in NOVICE. please turn off

[MP3 File]

Your mp3 kbps is 0 In my computer. I don't know It's a error or something. Please check this on your computer. (Please forgive my Korean computer ;_;)

[Overall difficulty and HP Drain Rate]

NOVICE has OD:8 HP:7 Yeah. It's fine but. ADVANCED has OD:9 HP:6. ADV is easy then NOV about HP. Please check this again.

[NOVICE Lv.2]

00:19:944 - Same pitch with 00:16:807 - But you're using different note. :p

00:35:630 (35630|1) - I suggest remove this. Because Same pitch with 00:35:826 - Here. and for more good balance.

01:25:321 - Missed note? If you will add one note. I suggest add to 1 col.

[ADVANCED Lv.7]


00:37:983 - Add one? like 00:35:630 - This pattern.

01:17:674 - Add one. All same sound has three note. like 01:15:125 and 01:08:851 - This part.

01:22:772 - Same reason :p

01:24:537 - :3

01:26:106 - Yes. Same XD

01:27:870 (87870|2,87870|3,88263|1,88263|0) - I guess. Two notes are unnecessary. So quite sounds.

[EXHAUST Lv.12]

00:10:728 (10728|1) - Move to 4? For balance? Or is this for pitch?

00:15:238 - Why this part using only one note? Check this part. Same sounds. 00:15:630 , 00:16:022 -

00:17:591 - Same reason :)

00:25:826 (25826|1) - Move to 1. Not same pitch. So It looks unnecessary.

00:31:513 (31513|3,31513|0,31709|3,31709|1,31905|2,31905|0,32101|1,32101|3,32297|1,32297|2) - Amm... I don't know what sounds you followed. and If you follow "beep-" Sounds. You should be use 2 notes in other parts :p

01:14:243 (74243|2) - Is this has sound? I guess It isn't sound It's a drum lingering imagery.

01:27:282 - Add. has drum sound :p

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Feerum

- Bad Apple - wrote:

-
IT'S TIME TO MO-MO-MOD!

Everything mentioned in my Mods is subjective and should be treated as a suggestion. If I find an UNRANKABLE issue, it'll be marked red.
When replying to the Mod, please consider telling me whether or not you've applied parts of the Mod and why you did/didn't.
If you have any further questions, feel free to ask me here or ingame.

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
-

HEY THERE MY FRIEND!
Here is your mod, I hope it helps!
If it doesn't, doesnt matter! Just don't forget my kudo! Kappa :^)
Anyways, lets get started!

- General -
- Looks good! "This song was Mapped ONLY to Highlight Starry- everytime when someone post this Song!" Please rank this, this is genius xD

- ADV -
- HP 6 / OD 9 seems a bit off, I would suggest changing it to Hp 7 / OD 8 Alright
- 00:04:258 (4258|1) - move to 1 for balance Done and rearrange some more pattern
- 00:10:924 (10924|2) - move to 4 ^ Again done and little bit rearrange
- 00:24:258 - you could add a LN here to map the "SHHHHH" sound coming in. (would end here 00:25:042 -) I think that would make a nice addition. Hm, like in the Exhaust? First i dont want to add there a ln, but your not the first who say that.. so i add the LN
- 01:02:576 - this should be a 3-chord, you've always used 3 notes for kick+cymbal Not here, like in previous Mods mention in the previous 3 Chords are no 1/4 Parts before the chord. I think 1/4 and a 3Chord would be too much for this
- 01:08:753 - there's a snare sound here that you haven't mapped, I would suggest something like this. No thanks. I like how it is, First the 1/4 Drums and at the end the 1/2 Stair sound, finish with a 3 Chord here.
- 01:21:400 - should be a 3-chord aswell Same reason, 1/4 + 3 Chord too mucho
- 01:26:106 - ^ Okay here added because only 1/2 Part
- 01:26:498 - I would add a second note for the snare, for consistency. Nope. I catch that sound that gets higher here with that 1/2 Stair (i think its the Piano lol)
- 01:27:282 - Add something for the snare drum. You've mapped it the entire song, it felt strange to play it without a note there. Again nope. I try to map the Piano only for end.
- 01:28:066 - same here, I think this pattern is kinda nice for what were searching for. Again no because piano only.
- 01:28:851 - (OPTIONAL) Second note for the snare? It's very silent, though. Again no because only Piano :)

- EXH -
- OD 9 seems a bit over the top, since the map only has 2,7*.. maybe change to OD 8? :3 Mh, well, okay.
- 00:04:650 (4650|0) - move to 4? plays a little better in my opinion Okay
- 00:06:414 (6414|1) - move to 1? Nice
- 00:19:356 (19356|3) - little balancing idea here, move this to 3 and this; 00:19:552 (19552|0) - to 4? I liked how that plays Looks good, accepted
- 00:23:865 (23865|2) - move to 1? that way, you have both minijacks before the LN :) (like here 00:22:297 -) Yeah sure, accepted
- 00:24:650 (24650|2,24846|3) - Strg + G (is a little bit more boring to play, but BALANCE MAN, THE BALANCE) No sorry dont want this :(
- 00:31:513 - I would have some suggestion for the chords here, to even them out a little bit, like this. Nice, accepted
- 00:36:022 - Add one for le cymbal (on 4) Oh yeah, thanks. Done
- 00:54:341 - I would also rearrange those chords, like this. Accepted. Looks very nice
- 00:57:282 - add one for the kick-drum? Not here :)
- 01:16:106 (76106|2,76302|1) - Strg + Left? That would fix the few jacks on 2/3, makes it a little bit more fluent to play :3 Okay!
- 01:27:282 - yet again, I would add something here Nope, same reason like Advance
- 01:28:066 - ^ Same reason like Advance

That's just about everything I found without changing your style, balance-whores find everything...
Best of luck with getting this ranked my friend, this mapset looks very very good! :3
Greetings
Apple

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:



Hi Feerum~ Modding from Voltexers modding queue~ (Before Chicken's modding queue)

Nice. SDVX map Where is Starry lol

|1|2|3|4|

[General]

[Wide screen support] Only turn on in NOVICE. please turn off Done

[MP3 File]

Your mp3 kbps is 0 In my computer. I don't know It's a error or something. Please check this on your computer. (Please forgive my Korean computer ;_;) i will check this later!

[Overall difficulty and HP Drain Rate]

NOVICE has OD:8 HP:7 Yeah. It's fine but. ADVANCED has OD:9 HP:6. ADV is easy then NOV about HP. Please check this again. Done in previous Mod :)

[NOVICE Lv.2]

00:19:944 - Same pitch with 00:16:807 - But you're using different note. :p Oops, my fail, done!

00:35:630 (35630|1) - I suggest remove this. Because Same pitch with 00:35:826 - Here. and for more good balance. Yeah done!

01:25:321 - Missed note? If you will add one note. I suggest add to 1 col. Not here, i like that little break :)

[ADVANCED Lv.7]


00:37:983 - Add one? like 00:35:630 - This pattern. Added

01:17:674 - Add one. All same sound has three note. like 01:15:125 and 01:08:851 - This part. Added for Finish

01:22:772 - Same reason :p Here added because Finish :D

01:24:537 - :3 Added for Finish

01:26:106 - Yes. Same XD For Finish.. yeah.. xD

01:27:870 (87870|2,87870|3,88263|1,88263|0) - I guess. Two notes are unnecessary. So quite sounds. Dont think so, i keep :3

[EXHAUST Lv.12]

00:10:728 (10728|1) - Move to 4? For balance? Or is this for pitch? Done

00:15:238 - Why this part using only one note? Check this part. Same sounds. 00:15:630 , 00:16:022 - ooops. Fixed'

00:17:591 - Same reason :) Fixed'

00:25:826 (25826|1) - Move to 1. Not same pitch. So It looks unnecessary. It.. is.. same pitch?

00:31:513 (31513|3,31513|0,31709|3,31709|1,31905|2,31905|0,32101|1,32101|3,32297|1,32297|2) - Amm... I don't know what sounds you followed. and If you follow "beep-" Sounds. You should be use 2 notes in other parts :p For me these looks good, i follow the Stair "beep-" sound with two chords yeah. But in which parts you mean?

01:14:243 (74243|2) - Is this has sound? I guess It isn't sound It's a drum lingering imagery. goddamned Ghostnote, fixed' thanks xD

01:27:282 - Add. has drum sound :p Nope, only follow the Piano! :)

Good luck :)
Thanks Bad Apple and Mr.KFC for the Mod and Chicken for the Star too :)

really helpfull! ^_^/
[ A v a l o n ]
the map is already nice and awesome to play . . .
good luck for qualify :3 /
Topic Starter
Feerum

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

the map is already nice and awesome to play . . .
good luck for qualify :3 /
Thank you ^_^/
And thanks for the Stars :3
Myxo
Rank it please
Okoratu

Desperate-kun wrote:

HL Starry- please
-[ AmiShici ]-
Hiii Feerum o/

From Star_Lenz's Mania Team Queues

4K = |1|2|3|4|
little mod from me
[NOVICE] 00:37:787 (37787|0,37983|1,38179|2,38375|3,38571|0,38767|1,38963|2,39160|3) - actually this pitch is reserve but idk. lel. suggest re-arrange it
01:01:792 (61792|1) - delete? for consistency pattern like as 01:00:419 (60419|2,60615|3,60812|1) - ; 00:59:635 (59635|2,59831|1,60027|0) - ; 00:58:851 (58851|0,59047|1,59243|3) - ; etc
01:06:498 (66498|1,66890|2) - ^
01:14:341 (74341|0) - ^
01:23:165 - ~ 01:26:106 - i don't know what are you following here :o

[ADVANCED]00:24:062 (24062|2) - i think this LN started from 00:23:865 -
00:47:731 - add note for cymbal or bell like as 00:45:913 (45913|1,45913|0,45913|2) -
01:05:714 (65714|2) - delete. reason same as on NOVICE diff
01:13:557 (73557|0) - ^
01:07:282 (67282|1) - delete? what are you following here?
01:14:341 (74341|1) - delete
01:17:478 (77478|2) - delete?

[EXHAUST]00:14:650 (14650|2) - this LN should be end on 00:14:846 -
00:20:924 (20924|1) - ^ on 00:21:120 -
00:40:532 (40532|2,40532|0,40532|3) - idk what are you doing here? why you add triple while this 00:39:944 (39944|1,39944|3,40924|3,40924|2,41905|0,41905|2) - you use double. suggest delete one note
00:53:165 - add note? like as 00:51:367 (51367|3,51367|0,51367|2) -

Well. Good Luck. Have a nice day \=D/
Topic Starter
Feerum

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hiii Feerum o/

From Star_Lenz's Mania Team Queues

4K = |1|2|3|4|
little mod from me
[NOVICE] 00:37:787 (37787|0,37983|1,38179|2,38375|3,38571|0,38767|1,38963|2,39160|3) - actually this pitch is reserve but idk. lel. suggest re-arrange it I keep mine. I think it should be fine for Novice Diff :)
01:01:792 (61792|1) - delete? for consistency pattern like as 01:00:419 (60419|2,60615|3,60812|1) - ; 00:59:635 (59635|2,59831|1,60027|0) - ; 00:58:851 (58851|0,59047|1,59243|3) - ; etc Nice catch
01:06:498 (66498|1,66890|2) - ^ Not here, for drums :)
01:14:341 (74341|0) - ^ Done and rearrange a little bit :3
01:23:165 - ~ 01:26:106 - i don't know what are you following here :o Snare+Drums :)

[ADVANCED]00:24:062 (24062|2) - i think this LN started from 00:23:865 - For me the LN looks fine.. :o
00:47:731 - add note for cymbal or bell like as 00:45:913 (45913|1,45913|0,45913|2) - Okay done, also in the next
01:05:714 (65714|2) - delete. reason same as on NOVICE diff Not here, follow snare
01:13:557 (73557|0) - ^ okay
01:07:282 (67282|1) - delete? what are you following here? Done
01:14:341 (74341|1) - delete Not here
01:17:478 (77478|2) - delete? Nope, because drum

[EXHAUST]00:14:650 (14650|2) - this LN should be end on 00:14:846 - Was never sure about this LN, i keep but i will ask some other people too
00:20:924 (20924|1) - ^ on 00:21:120 - Same like above
00:40:532 (40532|2,40532|0,40532|3) - idk what are you doing here? why you add triple while this 00:39:944 (39944|1,39944|3,40924|3,40924|2,41905|0,41905|2) - you use double. suggest delete one noteNope. You didnt hear the Finish? :c
00:53:165 - add note? like as 00:51:367 (51367|3,51367|0,51367|2) - Well not here :/ The 3 Chords mostly used for finish.. here's no finish :c

Well. Good Luck. Have a nice day \=D/
Thanks for your Mod. It helps :)
AlisceaSparku
Hi~!
From AlisceaSparku's Modding Queue :D
Very late mod I'm sorry :'(
Columns: |1|2|3|4|

EXHAUST
00:30:924 (30924|2) - move to 1, putting a vacant column between 2 notes will emphasize the sound
00:31:120 (31120|0) - move to 2, to avoid ^
00:31:316 (31316|1) - move to 4, to avoid ^
00:32:493 (32493|2) - move to 1, to emphasize the beat
00:34:062 (34062|2) - ^
00:34:258 (34258|0) - move to 3, to avoid the note above
00:34:454 (34454|2) - move to 1, to avoid ^
00:33:669 (33669|0) - move to 3, small beat
00:33:865 (33865|2) - move to 2, to avoid ^
00:45:610 - make this 3 notes. add note to 3
00:45:913 (45913|2) - move to 1, putting a vacant column inbetween differentiates it from 00:45:610
01:08:557 (68557|3,68655|1,68655|2,68753|0) - this is confusing for me. the sound of 01:08:557 is louder than 01:08:655. How about trying this http://puu.sh/iMToN/be81adb266.jpg

these are optional.
01:10:027 - this beat is weaker than 01:10:223.
- move 01:10:027 (70027|0) to 2
- move 01:10:223 (70223|2) to 1

ADVANCED
00:14:062 - add note for cymbal? ( optional ) so that it's the same with 00:20:336
00:42:297 - add note for cymbal
NOVICE
00:20:336 (20336|1) - move this to 4, it is a different sound than 00:19:944 so we'll make it look different
00:20:728 (20728|3,20924|2) - move to the left by one column if you apply ^
00:32:885 (32885|1) - move to 4, different sound than 00:32:493
00:33:277 (33277|3,33669|2) - move to the left by one column if you apply ^
00:34:454 (34454|1,34846|2) - move to the right by one column
01:25:321 - missing note?
Hope these help :D
Good luck with your map! :D
Topic Starter
Feerum

AlisceaSparku wrote:

Hi~!
From AlisceaSparku's Modding Queue :D
Very late mod I'm sorry :'(
Columns: |1|2|3|4|

EXHAUST
00:30:924 (30924|2) - move to 1, putting a vacant column between 2 notes will emphasize the sound
00:31:120 (31120|0) - move to 2, to avoid ^
00:31:316 (31316|1) - move to 4, to avoid ^
00:32:493 (32493|2) - move to 1, to emphasize the beat
00:34:062 (34062|2) - ^
00:34:258 (34258|0) - move to 3, to avoid the note above
00:34:454 (34454|2) - move to 1, to avoid ^
00:33:669 (33669|0) - move to 3, small beat
00:33:865 (33865|2) - move to 2, to avoid ^ until here all accepted! Dude thats really great!
00:45:610 - make this 3 notes. add note to 3 Here not, i only mapped the finish sound with a 3Chord :)
00:45:913 (45913|2) - move to 1, putting a vacant column inbetween differentiates it from 00:45:610 Accepted and done ^_^
01:08:557 (68557|3,68655|1,68655|2,68753|0) - this is confusing for me. the sound of 01:08:557 is louder than 01:08:655. How about trying this http://puu.sh/iMToN/be81adb266.jpg i really like this! Accepted!

these are optional.
01:10:027 - this beat is weaker than 01:10:223.
- move 01:10:027 (70027|0) to 2
- move 01:10:223 (70223|2) to 1 Accepted!

ADVANCED
00:14:062 - add note for cymbal? ( optional ) so that it's the same with 00:20:336 No i think a 3 Chord would be too much here
00:42:297 - add note for cymbal i knowi could but everywhere wheres 1/4 part before the finish i only have a 2Chord.. 3Chord would be too much after 1/4 for this diff i think :)
NOVICE
00:20:336 (20336|1) - move this to 4, it is a different sound than 00:19:944 so we'll make it look different
00:20:728 (20728|3,20924|2) - move to the left by one column if you apply ^ both accepted. I like :)
00:32:885 (32885|1) - move to 4, different sound than 00:32:493
00:33:277 (33277|3,33669|2) - move to the left by one column if you apply ^ Again both accepted :)
00:34:454 (34454|1,34846|2) - move to the right by one column looks nice!
01:25:321 - missing note? No, its a little break :3
Hope these help :D
Good luck with your map! :D
Thanks for your Mod! It was really helpfull! ^_^
Crono
The only possible problem for some people I can find is at 01:25:321 on NOVICE Lv.2 diff

I'd say missing note, but I like it. It will be quite favorable for any new players we get that are completely new to Vertical Scrolling Rhythm games (aka VSR games) like osu!mania.

Can't mod so have a star instead (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Feerum
Thank you, yeah that little break in the NOVICE is nice to play i think :3

And thanks for the Star <3
YatsuKaori
hi from my queue :)
sorry for the late mod request


My 4K key : |1|2|3|4|

NOVICE
00:57:674 (57674|1) - should delete? no sound. if it's your pitch don't delete it
01:07:478 (67478|3,67674|2,67870|1,68066|0) - make different? ctrl + H?
01:08:263 (68263|2,68459|1,68655|0) - ctrl + H and move 01:08:655 (68655|3) - to 2
01:19:635 add note here in 4
01:21:988 (81988|2) - add note here in column 1/3 (uh i forget it where i must put ==")
01:22:772 (82772|2) - ^

Sorry Only NOVICE i can mod, too hard mod ADVANCE and EXHAUST, maybe other modder can help you :)
GoodLuck ~~
Topic Starter
Feerum

YatsuKaori wrote:

hi from my queue :)
sorry for the late mod request ~ No problem, happy that you dont forget me c:


My 4K key : |1|2|3|4|

NOVICE
00:57:674 (57674|1) - should delete? no sound. if it's your pitch don't delete it Ne delete because drum sound c:
01:07:478 (67478|3,67674|2,67870|1,68066|0) - make different? ctrl + H? No because of pitch :)
01:08:263 (68263|2,68459|1,68655|0) - ctrl + H and move 01:08:655 (68655|3) - to 2 You put wrong timing. This dont mark any notes :(
01:19:635 add note here in 4 Oh a Finish that i miss, thank you, added c:
01:21:988 (81988|2) - add note here in column 1/3 (uh i forget it where i must put ==") Added because finish
01:22:772 (82772|2) - ^ Added again because finish c:

Sorry Only NOVICE i can mod, too hard mod ADVANCE and EXHAUST, maybe other modder can help you :) No problem!
GoodLuck ~~
Thanks for your Mod. Helps me :)
Topic Starter
Feerum
Waiting for BN Check :3
Spy
You deserve it.
[ A v a l o n ]
yayy . . . finally bubbled
wait, is that you Spy ? :'^)

ayy XD
Akasha-
Spy's drunk lol

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