1. Chuunin (2,96 stars, 219 notes)
2. Genin (1,94 stars, 130 notes)
3. Jonin (3,69 stars, 250 notes)
4. Kage (4,32 stars, 307 notes)

Hammish wrote:

00:34:535 (4,5,6,7,8) - I like this pattern, I think you should start a new combo on 4, it would make the pattern stand out more. Try making slider 5 curved like slider seven, then the pattern would have a cool symettry.

Hammish wrote:

00:44:251 (1) - I would either take the Kiai time that starts here and combine it with the next one, or just get rid of this one completely and leave the second one as it is.

You requested a mod on our modding queue, so ClickNoise and me are going to mod your map~ :3 (Collab)
Remember, I'm just expressing my opinion, so don't be offended when I criticize something, thanks~

General

Insane

1. 00:24:819 (6) - Try not to overlap.
2. 00:25:842 (1,2) - Please stack them.
3. 00:26:183 (2,3) - Overlap.
4. 00:27:205 (3,4) - Stack them.
5. 00:27:546 (4,5) - Overlap.
6. 00:28:569 (5,6) - Stack them too.
7. 00:38:796 (1,2) - ^
8. 00:39:819 (3,4) - ^
9. 00:40:842 (5,6) - ^
10. 00:43:569 (1,2) - Try to do a perfect blanket with these Silders.
11. 01:13:910 (3,4) - Please improve the blanket c:
12. 01:22:433 (1,2) - Stack them..
13. 01:23:626 (3,4) - Please remove this overlap.

1. 00:01:296 (2,3,4) - Please improve this blanket.
2. 00:04:023 (2,3,4) - ^
3. 00:04:876 (5,6) - Stack them perfectly.
4. 00:18:512 (5,6) - Improve this blanket too.
5. 00:35:387 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:36:751 (5,6,7) - ^
7. 00:36:922 (6,7) - Overlapping
8. 00:39:478 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Improve this blanket
9. 00:41:524 (1,2) - ^
10. 00:52:433 (1,2,3,4) - ^
11. 00:58:569 (2,3,4) - ^
12. 01:01:296 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
13. 01:03:342 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
14. 01:04:535 (5,6) - Slightly overlapping.
15. 01:08:796 (1,3) - Overlapping..

I hope i could help you

1. 00:02:660 - delete green line.
   this point is don't need change BPM for Normal diff (All points)
2. 00:08:115 - same as above
3. 00:10:842 (10,1) - use DS1.0x
4. 00:30:274 (1) - umm not fitting spinner.
   idea:
   
   delete spinner

1. 00:08:115 (8) - I think not fitting Reverse slider.
   hitting back sound is here -> 00:08:115 - 00:08:285 - 00:08:455 -
2. 00:10:160 (1,2,3,4) - this jump slider is difficult for Hard diff.
3. 00:25:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You if you should be a little more neatly arranged
4. 00:37:433 (7,8,9) - nice arranged
5. 00:54:308 - add note

1. 00:16:893 (6) - umm. move at 00:16:808 -
   this point not hitting sound x_x
2. 00:19:279 (7) - same as above
   move at 00:19:194 -
3. 00:29:933 (1) - end at 00:31:978 -
   
   I think many not fitting stream
   ex)00:32:660 (1,2,3) - 00:35:899 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:38:796 (1,2,3) -

litoluna wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:02:660 - delete green line. ✓ fixed
   this point is don't need change BPM for Normal diff (All points) ✓ all fixed
2. 00:08:115 - same as above ✓ fixed
3. 00:10:842 (10,1) - use DS1.0x do you mean distance snap? ✓ fixed? i guess?
4. 00:30:274 (1) - umm not fitting spinner. ✘ i think this spinner is the correct way to change between voice and drums so... i'll leave it as is
   idea:
   
   delete spinner

[Hard]

1. 00:08:115 (8) - I think not fitting Reverse slider. ? not sure about this... i'll leave as is for now.
   hitting back sound is here -> 00:08:115 - 00:08:285 - 00:08:455 -
2. 00:10:160 (1,2,3,4) - this jump slider is difficult for Hard diff. ✘ well... i think it should be a consistency beetween difficulties, since insane is much more difficult than hard, i think the hard diff should be a little difficult too.
3. 00:25:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You if you should be a little more neatly arranged ? will see what can i do...
4. 00:37:433 (7,8,9) - nice arranged
5. 00:54:308 - add note ✓ done

[Insane]

1. 00:16:893 (6) - umm. move at 00:16:808 - ? not sure about this... I think is good, but at the same time i think is a little weird, so idk
   this point not hitting sound x_x
2. 00:19:279 (7) - same as above
   move at 00:19:194 -
3. 00:29:933 (1) - end at 00:31:978 - ✓ fixed
   
   I think many not fitting stream
   ex)00:32:660 (1,2,3) - 00:35:899 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:38:796 (1,2,3) - ✘ I think they're ok

I think this normal diff and hard diff is need more other mod yeah... i think the same xD
gl! naruto!

DahplA wrote:

Insane

1. 00:02:490 (3) - Move the two red anchor points to the left slightly more, to create a more centralised transition here. Right now it's slightly off to the right. ✓ fixed
2. 00:04:535 (1) - Reconsider the positioning of this. Firstly, because of the way it bends, it looks very close to 00:04:365 (4) - . It also overlaps slightly with 00:05:217 (3) - , so moving it upwards and to the right slightly would be the best option. While you're at it, why not make 00:04:535 (1,2) - These two the exact same shape with copy paste and some rotation. ✓ fixed
3. 00:05:899 (7,1) - If it were me, I'd change this pattern a little. You could turn this into a set of jumps containing of two alternating sets of circles. The picture explains it better. It makes more sense, as the player is able to get a good idea of where the circle will appear, and not be confused with odd positioning. ✓ I slightly changed the pattern... idk if it's better now xD
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
4. 00:10:501 Slider velocity decrease is very unnecessary and is not called for in the song. Most likely won't get past Qualified if the QATs see this. Also very confusing to read, since it looks exactly like a 1/2 slider. Remove this, and others if there are any more.
5. 00:11:183 Same issue as above (I'll stop mentioning this now).
   
   I don't know about this... because

   Hammish wrote:

   Nice use with changing the slider velocity, it was done well

   so... now I'm confused xD
   
6. 00:57:376 Remove clap ✓ fixed
7. 00:57:717 ^✓ fixed

Hard

1. 00:23:115 (1,4) - Just to polish it up, move 3,4 over to the left slightly so it doesn't overlap. ✓ fixed
2. 00:46:808 (8) - I feel it's a bad idea to have a sliderend placed on a downbeat. It doesn't give the best audio feedback. I recommend changing it to 2 circles, that way you can get a clickable object on the most important beat. ✓ fixed
3. 00:49:535 (8) - ^ ✓ fixed
4. 00:57:717 (8) - ^ ✓ fixed
5. 01:00:444 (8) - ^ ✓ fixed
6. 00:47:319 and 00:50:046 Just want to draw your attention to these two timing points. On the first one, you've applied NC, however you skip it on the second point and NC on its next object. It's best to keep it consistent and have the NCs where they are meant to be (which in this case would be 00:50:046 (9) - ) ✓ fixed
7. 01:09:990 (4) - Since you have to hold the sliderball in the middle section for a bit, it falls under Slider Manipulation which is considered unrankable.
   ✓ fixed
8. 01:23:967 (4) - This slider could be mapped better. If you're looking to map to the vocals, then remove this and place other sliders. If you're attempting to map to the drums, then turn this into a 1/4 instead of a 1/2✓ fixed

Normal

1. 00:06:069 (1) - Fix blanket ✓ fixed
2. 00:11:524 (1) - Inconsistent distance spacing ✓ fixed
3. 00:20:387 (1) - ^ ✓ fixed
4. 00:22:774 (2) - ^ ✓ fixed
5. 00:38:115 (4) - ^ ✓ fixed
6. 01:13:910 (3) - Stacking a note directly under another slider like this is questionable. I'd remove it, as it may be harder for new players to read
   ? - I have a problem with this, because if I dont stack the notes, they make bad overlaps... so idk (anyways I changed it a bit).

Kyle Y wrote:

#modding queue
[Insane]

IRC modding

19:38 Kyle Y: hi
19:39 Archangel: hi
19:39 Kyle Y: I received you modding request
19:39 Kyle Y: first of all, Language refer to the song, not for the language for modding
19:40 Kyle Y: um... are you free to have a IRC modding?
19:40 Kyle Y: as you are new in mapping
19:40 Archangel: irc?
19:40 Archangel: idk what is that
19:40 Archangel: xD
19:40 Kyle Y: I mod it while you edit it
19:41 Kyle Y: Internet Relay Cha
19:41 Kyle Y: chat
19:41 Archangel: ah
19:43 Kyle Y: then let's have IRC modding?
19:44 Archangel: it's ok for me
19:45 Kyle Y: okay.
19:45 Kyle Y: btw, can you play with your insane without fail?
19:46 Archangel: I dont think so xD
19:47 Archangel: maybe in a few retrys
19:47 Kyle Y: becasue I fail on it also
19:47 Archangel: do you mean fc?
19:47 Kyle Y: my rank is #43___
19:47 Kyle Y: no
19:47 Kyle Y: just pass
19:47 Kyle Y: #43XXX
19:47 Kyle Y: I can't play this 4.46 star song
19:47 Archangel: ah... yeah i can pass it
19:48 Archangel: will try
19:49 Kyle Y: then maybe I just mod Insane with you?
19:49 Kyle Y: <3 stars hard a little bit hard for me
19:51 Archangel: less than 3 stars?
19:51 Kyle Y: 2.76 <3
19:51 Kyle Y: hard for modding
19:51 Kyle Y: not for play
19:52 *Kyle Y is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725733 NICO Touches the Walls - Broken Youth (TV Size) [Insane]]
19:52 Archangel: I see
19:52 Kyle Y: let's start, as I need to bath later on
19:52 Archangel: ok
19:52 Kyle Y: have you ever read the post about slider drawing and the flowing
19:53 Kyle Y: do you know what blanket is?
19:53 Archangel: yeah
19:53 Kyle Y: then I just directly tell you which is poor flowing is okay
19:53 Kyle Y: 00:01:126 (2,3) - poor flowing
19:53 Kyle Y: 00:03:001 (4,1) - blanket
19:54 Kyle Y: 00:05:217 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - poor looking, try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3396178
19:55 Kyle Y: I just draw very briefly
19:55 Kyle Y: 00:07:092 (1,2) - poor flowing
19:55 Kyle Y: 00:07:944 - missing
19:55 Kyle Y: 00:08:967 (8) - constant ds from (7) and to (1)
19:56 Kyle Y: 00:10:501 (3) - why suddent change SV (slider velocity)
19:56 Archangel: ds means distance snap?
19:56 Kyle Y: yup
19:57 Kyle Y: 00:09:563 (5,7) - sorry I cannot here any sound here, del it
19:58 Kyle Y: 00:13:740 - missing
19:58 Kyle Y: 00:12:887 (6) - 1/2 slider+ circle
19:58 Kyle Y: 00:12:887 (6) - 00:12:887 (6) - missing
19:58 Kyle Y: 00:16:211 (2) - no sound for 1/4, del
19:59 Kyle Y: 00:15:615 (4) - no sound for 1/4, use 1/2 beat slider
19:59 Kyle Y: 00:16:893 (6) - move to 00:16:808 -
19:59 Kyle Y: I think you should listen to 1/4 sound
19:59 Kyle Y: 00:17:660 - missing
20:00 Kyle Y: 00:18:853 - missing
20:00 Archangel: what to do with 00:16:893 (5) - ?
20:00 Kyle Y: 00:19:194 - missing and del 00:19:279 (7) - becasue no 1/4 soudn
20:00 Archangel: delete?
20:00 Kyle Y: move to 00:16:808 -
20:00 Kyle Y: 00:19:620 - missing
20:01 Kyle Y: btw, your offset seems a little bit error
20:01 Kyle Y: about 1/16 beat or 3/32 beat error
20:01 Kyle Y: I check for you later on
20:02 Kyle Y: 00:20:217 - missing
20:02 Kyle Y: 00:21:069 (5) - no 1/4, use 1/2 slider
20:02 Kyle Y: 00:21:836 (9) - no 1/4
20:02 Kyle Y: 00:21:921 (1,2) - ctrl+g
20:03 Kyle Y: 00:22:944 - missing
20:03 Kyle Y: 00:23:967 - you miss the bea here
20:03 Kyle Y: 00:24:649 - 00:24:990 - missing
20:03 Kyle Y: 00:25:671 - 00:26:012 - missing
20:04 Kyle Y: 00:26:524 - miss the big tick here
20:04 Kyle Y: 00:27:376 - missing
20:04 Kyle Y: 00:27:887 - same
20:04 Kyle Y: btw, I don't think SV change here 00:25:501 -
20:04 Kyle Y: del it
20:05 Kyle Y: 00:29:933 (1) - spinner not suitable, use circle and slider replace it please
20:05 Kyle Y: 00:32:745 (2,5,7) - no 1/4 sound
20:05 Kyle Y: if you can hear when you use 25%, then you can map it, otherwise it is overmap
20:06 Archangel: 25% of what?
20:07 Kyle Y: playback rate
20:07 Kyle Y: 00:42:546 (1) - not suitable for using spinner
20:07 Kyle Y: 00:42:546 (1) - missing
20:08 Kyle Y: 00:42:546 (1) - missing
20:08 Kyle Y: 00:41:524 - I think you should use slider for this part, as it is really... too much circle
20:08 Kyle Y: 00:43:654 (2) - not 1/4 soudn
20:09 Kyle Y: 00:53:115 (6) - just mind on your blanketing, pattern is not the focus for this modding
20:10 Kyle Y: 00:54:052 (1,4,6,8,10,12) - no 1/4
20:10 Kyle Y: 00:54:052 (1,4,6,8,10,12) - hey.. you skip it
20:10 Kyle Y: 01:01:808 - missing
20:10 Kyle Y: 01:02:063 (2,4) - not 1/4 sound
20:11 Kyle Y: 01:02:063 (2,4) - missing
20:11 Kyle Y: sorry
20:11 Kyle Y: 01:02:490 - missing
20:11 Kyle Y: 01:02:745 (6,8) - no 1/4 sound
20:11 Kyle Y: 01:03:001 - use slider on 01:03:001 -
20:11 Kyle Y: 01:04:705 - sldier
20:12 Kyle Y: 01:05:132 (2,5,7) - no 1/4 sound again
20:12 Kyle Y: 01:05:899 - missing
20:12 Kyle Y: 01:06:240 - missing
20:12 Kyle Y: 01:06:580 - missing
20:12 Kyle Y: 01:07:007 - missing
20:12 Kyle Y: 01:07:347 (7) - no 1/4 sound
20:13 Kyle Y: 01:07:433 (8) - missing beat on 01:07:603 - ,01:07:774 - 01:07:944 -
20:13 Kyle Y: 01:08:626 - missing
20:13 Kyle Y: 01:08:967 - missing
20:14 Kyle Y: 01:10:671 (7,8) - don't use that curve slider in Insane, unless it is emphasising sth
20:14 Kyle Y: 01:09:989 (5,6,7,8) - move 1/2 beat later, and add circle at 01:09:819 -
20:15 Kyle Y: 01:12:717 - missing
20:15 Kyle Y: 01:14:592 (1) - start at 01:14:336 -
20:16 Kyle Y: end at 01:17:319 -
20:16 Kyle Y: 01:16:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - I don;t think it is good
20:17 Kyle Y: 01:19:535 - 01:19:620 - missing
20:17 Kyle Y: 01:19:961 - 01:20:132 - 01:20:302 - missing
20:17 Kyle Y: 01:20:643 - missing
20:18 Kyle Y: 01:20:984 - missing 01:21:154 - missing
20:18 Kyle Y: 01:21:495 - missing
20:18 Kyle Y: 01:21:666 - missing
20:18 Kyle Y: 01:21:750 (4) - slider
20:18 Kyle Y: 01:21:750 (4) - missing
20:18 Kyle Y: 01:22:774 - 01:22:859 - missing
20:19 Kyle Y: 01:22:688 - missing
20:19 Kyle Y: 01:23:115 - 01:23:200 - missing
20:19 Kyle Y: 01:23:370 - 01:23:455 - 01:23:541 - 01:23:711 - missing
20:19 Kyle Y: 01:23:796 - slider
20:19 Kyle Y: A lot of 1/4 sound here
20:20 Kyle Y: of course you no need to follow also, just base of the pattern and your mapping
20:20 Kyle Y: If xxx_xxx sounds better than xxxxxxx (stream), then use xxx_xxx
20:21 Archangel: yeah
20:21 Kyle Y: 01:24:819 (2) - 1/2 beat slider and 01:23:626 (5) - 1/2 beat slider 01:25:330 (1) - start at 01:25:416 -
20:21 Archangel: maybe the streams
20:21 Archangel: are a little weird
20:21 Kyle Y: end at 01:27:887 -
20:22 Kyle Y: for the nc(s),
20:22 Kyle Y: every four beat per one nc for >= Hard diff and 8 beat for NM and EZ
20:22 Kyle Y: new combo
20:23 Kyle Y: also, every SV change use one nc
20:23 Archangel: do you think the sv change is ok?
20:23 Kyle Y: not quite
20:24 Archangel: for example
20:24 Archangel: this
20:24 Archangel: 00:10:501 (3) -
20:24 Archangel: is it ok?
20:24 Kyle Y: this one not okay for me
20:24 Archangel: or i have to change it
20:26 Kyle Y: yup
20:26 Archangel: 00:11:183 (1) -
20:26 Archangel: is it ok?
20:26 Kyle Y: del it
20:26 Kyle Y: 00:22:433 (3) - this also, del the green line
20:27 Archangel: yeah
20:27 Archangel: i'm on it
20:27 Kyle Y: 00:10:160 - I will just x0.75 here
20:28 Kyle Y: 00:16:978 - until here use back x1.9
20:28 Kyle Y: 1.0
20:28 Archangel: and delete the other green lines?
20:29 Kyle Y: 00:33:342 - 0.75 here again
20:29 Kyle Y: 00:43:569 - x 1.0
20:29 Kyle Y: 00:44:251 - x 1.2
20:29 Kyle Y: 01:06:069 - x.10
20:30 Kyle Y: 1.0
20:30 Kyle Y: 01:22:433 - 0.75 or 0.5
20:31 Kyle Y: I just leave for a while,
20:31 Kyle Y: come back in 10 minutes
20:31 Archangel: ok
20:31 Archangel: i'll do some change
20:31 Archangel: changes*
20:43 Kyle Y: back
20:43 Kyle Y: then I post this log to forum

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Normal

1. 00:08:796 - que piensas de agregar un nuevo combo aqui? ya que desde 00:08:796 - hasta 00:11:183 - me parece un combo muy largo y en 00:08:796 - hay un sonido un poquito mas alto ✓
2. 00:10:160 (9,10,1) - me parecen muy rigidos, no estoy en contra de los sliders rectos pero poner muchos sliders rectos juntos si se ve mal, considera darle algo de forma a algunos como venias haciendo en todo el mapa✓
3. 00:25:501 - elimina esa linea verde, no esta permitido ponerle cambios de velocidad a normales/easys✓
4. 00:39:137 (2) - esta perfecto para hacer un blanquet con 00:38:115 (4) - ✓
5. 00:52:433 (1) - porque este slider le da la espalda a 00:51:751 (5) - ? ✓
6. 00:43:569 (1) - porque empieza tan abajo? el cambio de arriba para abajo puede ser muy confuso para los jugadores✓
7. 01:03:001 (1) - no me parece poner un spin ahi sigue mas el sonido y ritmo de la musica, no solo el vocal.✓
8. compara desde 01:00:615 - hasta 01:05:387 - y desde 00:49:705 - hasta 00:52:433 - tienen practicamente el mismo instrumental pero esta mapeado tan diferente :O
9. 00:36:751 (2,3) - muy pegado a mi parecer, en comparacion a lo que hicistes en otro lado, 00:53:796 (4,5)✓ -

Hard

1. 00:08:115 (8) - no es necesario exagerar, en slider de ida y vuelta en 1/2 es suficiente✓
2. 00:21:751 (4,1) - porque no hacer un blanquet aqui? ya que 00:22:092 (1) - se ve muy mal ubicado?✓
3. te aconsejo que ah 00:26:183 (2) - 00:27:546 (4) - 00:28:910 (6) - le des una mejor forma ✓
4. 00:39:478 (2,3) - que paso con ese pequeño blanquet? tarta de hacerlo mejor como venias haciendo✓
5. 00:43:058 (1) - no es necesario u.u creo que poniendo notas ahi se veria mejor✓
6. cuida mucho la distancia entre notas, veo que estas usando 1.1 pero tienes partes mapeada con 1.2 o hasta con 1.3 y se ve mal, ajusta toda tus notas manteniendo el mismo espacio, ejemplo: 00:47:660 (1) - no es la misma distancia que tiene con 00:46:978 (10) - que con 00:47:660 (1) - , same with this 00:48:171 (3) -

Espero que te vaya bien en este proyecto, mucha suerte

iYiyo wrote:

Hola, vengo de #spanish modding q, y este es mi primer mod así que siéntete afortunado(?

[Normal]
00:21:751 (1) - Agregaría un slider con reverse al igual que este 00:20:387 (1) - borraría 00:22:774 (2) - y agregaría un slider de 1/4 acá 00:22:433 -✓

00:23:796 (4) - Acortaría este slider a 1/4 y le agregaria una nota en 00:24:478 - como para que tuviera sentido con lo que venía antes✓

En Hard pusiste un spinner en 00:30:103 - y en Insane en 00:29:933 - por lo que te recomendaría que (aparte de que estuvieran en el mismo tiempo) en esta dificultad también pongas un spinner, o simplemente quitárselos a las otras diffs.✓
01:13:910 (4) - Encuentro que la velocidad de este slider es muy lento, además que cambia mucho con respecto a lo que venía y eso no es recomendable para una normal. Además que en Hard e Insane pusiste un spinner en 01:14:251 - (ambas difieren un poco en el tiempo, así que te recomendaría que los ajustaras al mismo), por lo que acomodaría un poco acá, y pondría un spinner.✓
01:19:024 (1) - Si haces lo anterior tendrías que sacar este spinner ✓

[Hard]
00:08:796 (1,2,3) - y 00:09:478 (4,5,6) - Encuentro que queda mejor si le haces ctrl+g a esos.✓
00:15:955 (6) - Mejorar blanket✓
00:45:444 (5,6) - Creo que quedaría mejor si usas snap aquí.✓
01:13:058 (6) - Mejorar blanket✓

[Insane]
00:08:796 (6) - Agrega NC ✓
00:09:137 (1) - Borra NC✓
00:12:887 (5) - Agrega NC✓
00:13:228 (6) - Creo que se vería mejor si no estuviesen stackeadas.✘
00:13:569 (1) - Borra NC✓
00:14:251 (4) - Agrega NC✓
00:14:592 (6,1) - Creo que deberías acerca estas dos notas a las dos anterior, así le das más énfasis a la nota que viene con un mini jump✓
00:14:762 (1) - Borra NC✓
00:15:615 (4) - Agrega NC. (Básicamente es poner un nuevo combo en los ticks blancos más grandes)✓
00:25:842 (1) - Encuentro que 0,5x es muy lento, considera aumentarle la velocidad, porque el cambio es muy drástico, le pondría 0,8x o 0,75x✓
00:41:865 (2,3) - Me gustó el jump, solo que para el nivel de la canción puede ser muy grande, considera achicarlo un poco si lo encuentras necesario.✓
00:42:717 (1) - Nuevamente 0,5x lo encuentro muy lento Considera aumentarlo un poquito.✘
00:54:308 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Esto es personal, pero encuentro que quedaría mejor si no "apretaras" tanto este stream, quizás poner la primera nota un poquito más abajo, así va escalando mejor encuentro.✘
01:00:103 (8,1) - Creo que deberías distanciar un poco acá.✘
01:02:490 - Podrías agregar una nota acá✘
01:03:171 - ^✓
01:23:967 (6,7) - Podrías hacer de estas dos notas un slider, suena mejor imo.✘

Espero que te haya ayudado en algo
Suerte con la canción!

Crimmi wrote:

Hey~!

General (Metadata, Timing, etc.)

_________________________________________________________

1. Place "NARUTO -ナルト- " as the source and you can put Shippūden (Or Shippuden) in the tags.✓
2. Maybe add an audio lead-in of 1000 or 2000?✓ to be fair i put it in 1500
3. Try an offset of 630.✓ ok

Normal

1. 00:14:251 (5,1) - Maybe remove the NC from (1) and place it on (5) instead?✓
2. 00:57:902 (6) - Add an NC here.✓
3. 00:59:948 (1) - Remove NC.✓
4. 01:11:539 (1,2,3) - Suggestion.✓

Hard

1. 00:07:262 (x) - Maybe add a note here?✘i think that note would break my pattern slightly
2. 00:20:899 (3) - Suggestion 1 | Suggestion 2✓ i took the second one.
3. 00:57:887 (10) - Add a new combo here and remove the NC from 00:58:569 (1).✓
4. 01:25:245 (1) - If you an accurate location to start your spinner, it should be here when the guitar hits.✓ now it starts at 01:25:175 (1) -

Insane

1. 00:08:455 (5) - Maybe shorten this back to the red tick, it sounded odd when listening to it.✘hmm... not sure about this one... i really like the rhythm here
2. 00:12:887 (1) - ^ Same as above, it doesn't really fit in with the music.✓ I changed that part
3. 00:15:615 (1) - ^✘same as the first one
4. 00:18:001 (2) - ^✓also changed this part
5. 00:19:194 (6) - This sounds a bit better on the red tick imo.✓ ok
6. 00:20:899 (5,6) - Here you should delete (5), bring (6) in it's place and lengthen it. Example.✓ changed

Crimmi wrote:

The map just needs a bit more polishing out before it can get ranked, keep it up.

WildCry wrote:

Escuche la cancion y se me hizo un poco bajo el volumen,asi que se lo aumente con un programa, aqui esta si la quieres:http://puu.sh/jDqF9/e052be85ef.mp3

No tienes que modificar nada ,solamente pegarla en la carpeta de el mapa y remplazar el archivo ,despues actualizas y listo.
O cierto si en vez de que te salga una descarga te abre una ventana con el mp3 reproduciendose ,dale click derecho y le das guardar video(ami me dice haci aunque no es un video).

WildCry wrote:

Aqui mi mod lo quise hacer solo por ayudar,nada en especial o bueno sera la cancion XD.

Normal

00:09:152 (2) - Podrias hacer esta nota igual a esta? 00:10:175 (4) - (ctrl v copias, ctrl c pegas,luego ctrl J despues ctrl H y la posicionas bien)✓ ok
01:05:743 (10) - Te recomendaria quitar esta nota y poner un slider de aqui 01:05:573 - hasta 01:05:914 - pon la distancia que consideres.✓ ok
01:24:152 (4) - Pon recto este slider.✓ no me había dado cuenta de que no estaba recto xD

Hard

00:46:993 (10) - Mejora el blanket.✓
00:52:448 (1,2,3) - Porque no haces algo como esto?✓ hecho

SPOILER

Sube un poco la nota cuatro y la cinco si haces esto podras hacer un blanket con la nota 3.
01:03:357 (1,2,3) - Podrias hacer esto...✓ hecho

SPOILER

Si haces eso mueve la nota 4 un poco a la izquierda,ademas de reposicionar la nota 5 para que vuelva a ser un blanket.
Si tambien deseas hacer un blanket con este slider 01:04:039 (3) - lo pudes hacer facilmete.
01:10:005 (1,2,3) - Mejora estos blankets.✓ k

Buena difficultad la hice a la primera sin ni un solo fallo

Insane

00:46:652 (4) - Separa esta nota un poco de esta 00:46:993 (1) - ✓ k
00:58:584 (3) - Blanket.✓
01:23:300 (4,5,6,7) - Podrias ajustar estas notas para dejar esto 01:24:493 (1,2) - en el centro,quedaria perfecto.✓

WildCry wrote:

Eso es todo, buen mapa sigue asi, si necesitas algo no dudes en avisarme, Gracias!

Archangel wrote:

Gracias por el mod, seguiré trabajando en el mapa ^^

WildCry wrote:

Archangel wrote:

Gracias por el mod, seguiré trabajando en el mapa ^^

00:52:448 (1) - Esta nota es al reves ctrl g.

HKrecords_ wrote:

Hi! I ve got some small ideas for your map.

Kage

from here 00:25:857 (1) to here 00:28:925 (6) - Did you try to Ctrl+G all sliders? Also 3rd slider looks strange. I think something like this will be good for me: http://prntscr.com/86wsmw✘the sliders are fine imo, i think this part is for relaxing a little, so ds is ok

00:43:840 (2) - This circle isn't necessity. 5-circles stream is good enough. Also connect stream to the slider.✓ ok

00:54:408 (4) - Same here. Connect stream to the slider.✓ ok

01:07:022 - Add circle here.✓ ok

01:23:982 (6) - Unbounce this slider.✘i think is good as is, anyways i slightly changed that part

01:29:266 - Make this hitsound very quite (like 5%)✓ done

Jonin

00:09:493 (6) - Think that two circles are enough.✘it's fine imo

From here to here 00:25:857 (1) to here 00:28:925 (6) - Bigger DS will be good.✘same as kage xD

00:43:925 (3) - This slider should start at white tick. ✘it starts in a white tick D:

01:04:891 (1,2,3,4,5) - I dont know about this part. ✘it looks fine xD

01:23:982 (6) - If you are mapping vocal, unbounce this slider.✘not sure of this D: , i think is fine

01:29:266 - Same as in Kage✓ done

Chuunin

00:12:902 - Circle here.✘it doesn't fit the rhythm imo

00:32:675 (1) - You can do two 1/2 sliders.✘nah, it's fine xD

01:29:266 - Same as Kage✓ ok

• 
  
  00:01:141 (2) - Well flow here is a bit weird, try rotating it -120º will look better
  
  00:01:482 (3,4,1) - This flow is not good uhh, don't place circles in a line, it's hard to get, and this diff is not insane/extra
  
  00:05:232 (3,5) - Fix this tiny overlap
  
  00:09:152 (3,4,5) - Remove this, it's very overmapped
  
  00:09:493 (6) - As well
  
  00:16:311 (1,2) - Too
  
  Don't place sliders starting on the red snap (almost all are mapped this way) it doesn't follow the music, it's much better when starting on the White tick, please this is very importante
  
  00:19:720 (4) - This shape is very odd and doesn't follow the rhythm or vocals
  
  00:21:766 (3,4) - Overmapped
  
  00:25:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why sudden change to vocals here? The drums are very Strong
  
  00:52:618 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
  
  00:54:067 (9,1) - Too, in fact completely overmapped here
  
  01:05:061 (2,3,4,5) - Again..
  
  01:08:811 (1) - There's no need for this shape, it's a bit weird and doesn't follow either vocals or drums
  
  01:22:448 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sudden change to vocals feels odd and doesn't play well

Lumael wrote:

Hello! M4M on queue

[Jonin]

• 
  
  00:01:141 (2) - Well flow here is a bit weird, try rotating it -120º will look better✓ ok
  
  00:01:482 (3,4,1) - This flow is not good uhh, don't place circles in a line, it's hard to get, and this diff is not insane/extra✓ ok
  
  00:05:232 (3,5) - Fix this tiny overlap✓ ok
  
  00:09:152 (3,4,5) - Remove this, it's very overmapped✘ i know all those "overmapped" parts aren't in the background music.. but i think it stills follow the rhythm and its ok for me
  
  00:09:493 (6) - As well✘
  
  00:16:311 (1,2) - Too✘
  
  Don't place sliders starting on the red snap (almost all are mapped this way) it doesn't follow the music, it's much better when starting on the White tick, please this is very importante ✘i don't know how this could be bad... i like to have the snare of drum at the end of slider lol
  
  00:19:720 (4) - This shape is very odd and doesn't follow the rhythm or vocals✓ ok
  
  00:21:766 (3,4) - Overmapped✘
  
  00:25:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why sudden change to vocals here? The drums are very Strong✘ i like to have a "pause" in the beatmap with that slow part
  
  00:52:618 (2,3,4) - Overmapped✘
  
  00:54:067 (9,1) - Too, in fact completely overmapped here✘
  
  01:05:061 (2,3,4,5) - Again..✘
  
  01:08:811 (1) - There's no need for this shape, it's a bit weird and doesn't follow either vocals or drums✓ ok
  
  01:22:448 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sudden change to vocals feels odd and doesn't play well✘ pretty boring for me to follow the same rhythm, and it's the song's ending so it's ok for me

Good luck!

pkhg wrote:

holi

[General]
00:25:857 - esta parte la dejaste sin hitsounds lol✓ ahora le agregue los claps que faltaban xD

[Genin]

00:09:834 (3) - se te olvido un clap ahi✓ ok
00:20:061 (6,1) - intercambia el newcombo✓ ok
00:24:493 (5) - se te olvido un whistle xd✓ agregado
00:24:834 (6) - ponle clap en la cabeza y cola ay que suena raro en español D:✓ hecho xD
00:29:948 (1,1) - la distancia de tiempo entre el final del spinner y el slider es muy poca, podrias borrar este slider 00:32:675 (1) - asi quedaria bien✓ borré el slider
01:04:039 (3,4,5) - siendo la diff mas facil es mejor que evites hacer esos patterns complicados, intenta esto http://puu.sh/jMTc1/0e306c8576.jpg✓ hecho
01:08:130 (5,6) - dale ctrl+g http://puu.sh/jMTuA/ecba1c4a9a.jpg se siente mejor asi, ademas le puedes poner el newcombo a 01:08:811 - en lugar del 01:09:152 -✓ ok
01:25:175 - pon un circulo aca :3✘ esto no se... no quise poner un circulo ahi porque encuentro que esta muy cerca del spinner que viene y podría ser un poco dificil para los principiantes xD

[Chuunin]

00:46:993 (10,1) - intercambia el newcombo✓ ok

[Jonin]

00:43:755 (2) - es mejor que no le bajes la velocidad al slider, apenas se ve la flechita de la reversa ;w;✓ todos los sliders los deje en 0,75
00:54:493 (1) - este tambien ^ y todos en los que hiciste lo mismo, o almenos no le bajes tanto :3✓ ^
00:46:311 - se siente raro que no hayas mapeado este beat ✘se supone que sigue la guitarra (?) xD
00:57:220 - ^ pero parece que estas mapeando mas la bateria que la voz, asi que esta bien✘ ^
01:05:232 (4,5) - separalos un poco mas para que se note que estan a 1/2✓ ok

[Kage]

00:16:823 (7,8) - esos no estan bien stakeados✓ deberia verse mejor ahora xD

aynosequemodear

suerte!

1. tienes que sacar el audio de tu video, eso lo haces con programas para editar videos. ocupa google xd
2. acorde al Ranking Criteria, si puedes ocupar esos tipos de diff names pero como no indican bien que dificultad es deberias cambiarlo un poco. Por ejemplo añadir entre parentisis insane o lo que sea "Kage (Insane)" como aca https://osu.ppy.sh/b/672041

1. Ahi algunos lugares donde ocupas offbeat sliders (sliders que comienzan en la tick roja) que suenan mal por el hecho de que la cola tiene un sonido mas fuerte que la cabeza, como aca 00:01:141 (2) - deberias ocupar ctrl g a este ritmo 00:01:141 (2,3) - para que suene mejor; 00:12:391 (3,4) - 00:13:414 (3,4) - seria mejor seguir las vocales enn mi opinion; 00:16:482 (6) - ; 00:18:186 (3,4) - ; y otros mas que deberias verlos por ti mismo. Pero a la misma vez ahi partes donde los usas bien, pero ademas podrias usarlo en otros lugar como aca 00:19:209 (6,7) - , si el slider comenzara en la linea roja seguiria las vocales mucho mas bien (ya que tu mapeas alreadedor de vocales, creo).
2. En adicion, intenta no mapear el downbeat o platillos con las colas de los sliders. O sea, 00:09:834 (1) - esto no deberia pasar, algo asi suena mejor para mi(sacando el overmap igual) http://puu.sh/jSq2Y/9069904bdf.jpg ; algo similar pasa aca 00:11:198 (4) - , podrias acortar el slider en 1/2 y añadir un circulo por ejemplo.
3. 00:08:470 (5) - suena mal como 3/4 xd intenta hacerlo 1/2 en vez para que termine en algo mas audible. lo mismo aca 00:15:630 (1) -
4. Algunas partas se siente y se escuchan sobremapeadas. Añades notas donde no hay nada que lo acompañe o que simule que haya algo. No puedes añadir notas solo por que se siente aburrido con puros 1/2 ritmos. Como estas 00:09:237 (4,7,9) - 00:32:760 (2) - 00:54:578 (2,4) - 01:05:147 (3,6,8) - 01:07:362 (8) -
5. 00:14:948 - la pausa aca queda mal... seria mejor si la pausa fuera aca 00:15:118 - . Osea, mueve 00:15:118 (5) - 1/2 atras para que siga la guitarra mejor, que es lo que sobre sale mas aca, y ademas para que quede en un upbeat. Similar aca 00:17:675 -
6. Igual hay ciertas pausas que se sienten no tan natural al jugar por el tema que aun hay eco, vocales y/o drums. Como acá 00:24:664 - 00:26:027 - 00:42:220 - 00:40:005 - 00:42:561 - 00:51:595 - 01:00:459 - 01:05:914 - 01:06:595 -
   
7. 00:42:732 (1,2) - prueba algo asi? http://puu.sh/jSqj8/fe540d1a33.jpg Asi cubres las vocales y los drums mas bien.
8. 01:07:277 (7,8,9) - el slider deberia empezar desde 01:07:277 - en vez, como esto quizas http://puu.sh/jSqAq/f4a71c4db7.jpg
9. 01:19:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - esta parte no se siente nada bien a mi parecer >< Por que ahi un monton de drums que ignoras, incluyendo streams, y las mismas vocals que es lo que se basa el pattern. Me gustaria que escucharas mas los drums y no lo ignores por completo, pero con que cubras las vocales mejor seria suficiente supongo.
10. 00:25:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - este tipo de ritmo se siente como si fuera para Normal o algo asi la verdad xd. si quieres mantener un ritmo facil, almenos trata algo asi http://puu.sh/jSqRX/7a5c5bdd62.jpg
11. 00:29:948 (1) - se siente super raro donde empieza, ya que el aaaaaaaaa empieza desde 00:30:630 - basicamente, also asi suena mejor creo http://puu.sh/jSqUM/68bf2ca58f.jpg

1. Ahi algunos sliders que no sigen un flujo (flow) muy bueno por mi punto de vista. Los que como que quiebran o cambian de direccion drasticamente. Por ejemplo 00:03:868 (2,3,4,1) - , desde 00:03:357 (1) - el cursor se mueve hacia la derecha pero llegado a (3) el cursor tiene que moverse de manera extraña/no natural cambiando la direccion de manera no tan confortable y peor aun cuando (4) y (1) hacen lo mismo. Algo similar pasa acá 00:34:550 (4,5,6) - 00:47:504 (2,3,4,1) - 01:09:322 (2,3) -
2. 00:17:845 (1,2,3) - la distancia se siente extraña, seria mejor si fuera igual para las 3 notas
3. 00:21:936 (10,11,1) - el angulo en que haces esto es demasiado agudo a mi ver. Moviendo 00:22:277 (11) - mas abajo se sentiria mejor, como x256y231
4. 00:26:198 (2,3) - 00:27:561 (4,5) - el salto entre estas notas se siente raro por el hecho que tu mapa no tiene saltos muy grandes, achicalo un poco mas para que no sea tan random por asi decirlo. 01:03:016 (4,1) - lo mismo
5. 00:34:209 (3,5) - este overlap se ve algo feo ;w; prueba haciendo un blanket por ejemplo http://puu.sh/jSroL/61397a6f57.jpg
6. 00:35:914 (4,5,6) - por que la distancia se hizo tan pequeña aca? se siente raro y aleatoreamente hecho
7. 00:40:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - aunque se ve bonito y todo, como que no tiene nada que ver con le mapa/musica. Uhm los primeros 4 circulos estan bien, quizas cambia 00:40:857 (5,6) - a un slider o algo asi. Ya que derepente añadir 9 circulos seguidos se siente extraño por el mapa en general.
8. 01:00:118 (8,1) - seria mejor no hacer un overlap aca tan feo.. quizas dejarlo mas cerca para que paresca anti-jump funcionaria mejor
9. otra cosa que podrias hacer, es incrementar la distancia/ hacer un salto para cuando suenan los platillos como aca 00:38:811 (4) - 00:53:641 (8) - etc, no se siente tan bien mantener la distancia constante para esos sonidos la verdad.
10. New Combos en general se ven bastante aletorios. Una manera facil y que casi todos ocupan es agregar NC cada downbeat (la linea blanca mas grande) en insane, y para las otras diffs cada 2 lineas. Algunas veces haces esto, pero otras veces se ve aleatoreamente puestos.

1. AR 7 es suficiente. OD y HP -1 seria mejor igual, por el tema de balance entre todas las diffs
2. nose que difultad se supone que seria esto xd creo que es hard, asi que lo tratare como hard. Ya que Jonin es demasiado dificil para ser hard. k.
3. Pasa cosas similares que en Kage la verdad, como pausas que se sienten mal (00:02:675 - , aunque la mayoria estan bien porque es hard xd), colas de sliders que tienen los sonidos mas fuertes (00:04:380 (4) - ), ritmos que se pueden mejorar en general (00:10:005 - añade una nota o comienza el slider aca pls). Los ritmos estan bien en el sentido que tienen pausas y no sobre usas 1/2, pero algunas veces suenan mal por motivos similar que lo que dije arriba. (esto aplica a "jonin" igual!).
4. Como esto es Hard, altiro te digo que el SV (slider velocity) es un poco muy alto xd. Mira tu spreed Normal, 1.0, ahora tu insane o lo que sea que le siga, 1.6,. Tu hard es 1.5, no hay balance, yo lo cambiaria a 1.3 con CS 4, porque 3.5 se ve todo muy amontonado
5. otra cosa que no deberias hacer en este nivel son jumps un poco muy grandes, que duplican tu DS normal. como aca 00:10:175 (1,2,3,4) -
6. 00:56:368 (5,6,7) - este tipo de flow es super molestoso de jugar ;w;. 01:03:698 (2,3,4,5) - la forma que cambias de clockwise a anticlockwise se siente mal
7. 01:16:993 - la forma en que incrementas tu SV, es demasiado drastica. Ni siquiera lo haces en tu insane, deberias mantenerte en 1.0x

1. AR 4 o incluso 4.5 es suficiente
2. 00:10:005 - deberias empezar el slider desde aca. Ya que esto es un normal (creo, deberia ser supongo), esta bien empezarlo desde la linea roja. 00:53:641 - similar
3. 00:42:391 (2,1) - flow y distancia se ven raro. intenta utilizar distancia mas constante y un flow mas.. liso(?
4. 01:04:891 (4,5) - preferiria que ocuparas un slider para este tipo de cosas
5. 01:25:175 - añade una nota? o comienza el spinner desde aca almenos

Milan- wrote:

Se ve bien.. pero podria mejorar facilmente. Cualquier cosa me preguntas no ma