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Go Ichinose - Champion Daigo [Osu|CatchTheBeat]

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Bara-
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Bara-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on zaterdag 31 oktober 2015 at 21:07:02

Artist: Go Ichinose
Title: Champion Daigo
Source: ポケットモンスター オメガルビー・アルファサファイア
Tags: Steven Pokemon Pokémon Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire Shota Kageyama GAME FREAK - Magic Bomb - A Mystery Irreversible
BPM: 141
Filesize: 5178kb
Play Time: 01:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. A Mystery's Hard (3,06 stars, 190 notes)
  2. Easy (1,42 stars, 59 notes)
  3. Extra (4,94 stars, 283 notes)
  4. Insane (3,94 stars, 236 notes)
  5. Irre's Extra (5,5 stars, 245 notes)
  6. MBomb's Heavy Rain (4,46 stars, 257 notes)
  7. Normal (1,97 stars, 101 notes)
Download: Go Ichinose - Champion Daigo
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
With SB made by me (and help by Irre)
redl before 10-10-2015, new BG, SB sprites etc.

And another pokémon map
Champion Steven's Theme
Redownload as of 9-8-2015, New Metadata (Thanks Gamu!)

Easy: 100%
Normal: 100%
A Mystery's Hard: 100% (GD by A Mystery)
Insane: 100%
Extra (Champion): 100%
Irre's Extra (CS 7 <3): 100% (GD by Irreversible)
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MBomb's Heavy Rain: 100% (CtB GD by - Magic Bomb -)
Last edited by Bara- , edited 45 times in total.
Intelli
842 posts
Joined July 2014
Intelli
Pokemon map again = rank again?

also first
Bara-
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Joined April 2013
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Bara-
I hope so
A Mystery
868 posts
Joined April 2013
A Mystery
This time I'll think about the GD (to return a favor), however, I really think the streams in the champion diff are not snapped correctly to the song (and if it is, it's mapped to something extremely soft, making the streams quite an unnecessary peak in the difficulty curve)
Also the bpm should be halved, the song might sound complex on the rhythm part, but 282 really doesn't make much sense.
Bara-
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Bara-
Well, 1/4 (or 1/8 in 141 bpm) is too fast, so I made it 1/3 (or 1/6 in 141)
Also, there's a clap every 2nd beat now, so 282 is actually correct
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Bara-
Well, 1/4 (or 1/8 in 141 bpm) is too fast, so I made it 1/3 (or 1/6 in 141)
Also, there's a clap every 2nd beat now, so 282 is actually correct
A Mystery
868 posts
Joined April 2013
A Mystery

baraatje123 wrote:

Well, 1/4 (or 1/8 in 141 bpm) is too fast, so I made it 1/3 (or 1/6 in 141)
Also, there's a clap every 2nd beat now, so 282 is actually correct
I can tell there isn't, also just making it '1/3' because 1/4 is too fast doesn't seem like a solution at all. Have you tried using 1/4 (or 1/2 with your current bpm). It will match up the flute that is playing
Bara-
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Bara-
Got confirmation
1/3 is indeed incorrect
Time to redo those parts
Bara-
11,978 posts
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Bara-
Updated witg mew meta-data
Also, I fixed the 1/3 (but the are certainly a few 1/3 in it)
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,316 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
Gogo!
Bara-
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Bara-

Irreversible wrote:

Gogo!
Yeshh
Mortem
695 posts
Joined July 2013
Mortem
hi.

Normal:
• Why don't you map the part between 00:02:235 (1,1) - ? You've mapped it everywhere, but why not here?
• 00:47:341 (5,1) - Blanket?

AM's Hard:
• 00:02:022 (6,4,5,6) - Not stacked properly.
• 00:02:022 (6,1) - Stack?

Insane:
• 01:01:383 (3,4,5) - Stack these three. It's uncomfortable to play it like it is now.

i don't even bother to check the extra diffs, because i would fxxk it up more than it is. osu for ants. yay. .-.

Hope that helps.
Good Luck!
A Mystery
868 posts
Joined April 2013
A Mystery
No change
The stack is not visible at all when playing, so it's not worth moving.
Also I like the 2 objects not-stacked more
Moeruattack
763 posts
Joined June 2014
Moeruattack
M4M Request o/

Generic
Disable Widescreen Support
Disable Letterbox During Breaks
Disable Countdown Either, because this one has no value of starting up the countdown.

Easy
Speed one is 1.1x DS while the slower part is 1.3x DS hmm...
I prefer if you stick all slider speed to 1.0x while all distance constant, but this is just head-ups. Probably other will mention about it.

00:17:554 (1,2,3) - Move a bit lower, so it makes the 1 snapped to the 1.3x. 2 and 3 need to selected to. Use DS 1.3x.
00:27:766 (1) - I`m not sure if this is a Circle of C (Undefined?) . I prefer if you do a bit circle shaped one, like here, or do a bit shaped C one.

00:44:788 (1,2,3) - Similar to the 00:17:554 (1,2,3), and this one a bit out of grid, make it lower a bit while using DS 1.3x.
01:00:958 (3) - Move to x:296 y:104 or similar ( down a bit )

Surprisingly this is nice Easy map :)

Normal
00:09:043 - I think about the red points, move a bit to x388 y:340, but not sure though.
00:25:639 and 00:27:341 - Seems this part need to add notes here, there`s a sound here though, but might mostly miss on this part. But depends on your preference.
00:44:372 - A bit up to x:260 y:32
00:57:554 (1,2,3) - I think try to move this slider alongside with notes to up here, like this image, to make a smooth curved for 2 and 3 notes, or no change :)

Hard seems fine here :D

Great mapset, good luck for ranking o/
Bara-
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Bara-

Pjecoo wrote:

hi.

Normal:
• Why don't you map the part between 00:02:235 (1,1) - ? You've mapped it everywhere, but why not here?
• 00:47:341 (5,1) - Blanket? Not intended to be one

AM's Hard:
• 00:02:022 (6,4,5,6) - Not stacked properly.
• 00:02:022 (6,1) - Stack?

Insane:
• 01:01:383 (3,4,5) - Stack these three. It's uncomfortable to play it like it is now. Did something else here

i don't even bother to check the extra diffs, because i would fxxk it up more than it is. osu for ants. yay. .-.

Hope that helps.
Good Luck!

murutattack wrote:

M4M Request o/

Generic
Disable Widescreen Support
Disable Letterbox During Breaks
Disable Countdown Either, because this one has no value of starting up the countdown.

Easy
Speed one is 1.1x DS while the slower part is 1.3x DS hmm...
I prefer if you stick all slider speed to 1.0x while all distance constant, but this is just head-ups. Probably other will mention about it. They can/should all see it's because of the SV changes (1.2-->0.8) Thid DS makes it so the slowdown isn't that much

00:17:554 (1,2,3) - Move a bit lower, so it makes the 1 snapped to the 1.3x. 2 and 3 need to selected to. Use DS 1.3x. Uhm, this is aesthetical DS, even though the DS is not the same (1.7) is still looks like proper distance, because of BPM/SV change
00:27:766 (1) - I`m not sure if this is a Circle of C (Undefined?) . I prefer if you do a bit circle shaped one, like here, or do a bit shaped C one. I prefer the smooth curve more then that the red node is visible

00:44:788 (1,2,3) - Similar to the 00:17:554 (1,2,3), and this one a bit out of grid, make it lower a bit while using DS 1.3x. Uhm, this is aesthetical DS, even though the DS is not the same (1.7) is still looks like proper distance, because of BPM/SV change
01:00:958 (3) - Move to x:296 y:104 or similar ( down a bit )

Surprisingly this is nice Easy map :)

Normal
00:09:043 - I think about the red points, move a bit to x388 y:340, but not sure though.
00:25:639 and 00:27:341 - Seems this part need to add notes here, there`s a sound here though, but might mostly miss on this part. But depends on your preference. Only following the strong sounds to prevent overmapping
00:44:372 - A bit up to x:260 y:32
00:57:554 (1,2,3) - I think try to move this slider alongside with notes to up here, like this image, to make a smooth curved for 2 and 3 notes, or no change :) I really dislike such overlaps (with (1,1), thus I'm keeping it this way

Hard seems fine here :D

Great mapset, good luck for ranking o/
Thanks!!
No reply means fixed
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,325 posts
Joined November 2013
Chaoslitz
M4M

[General]
  1. Combo colour: The green colour don't really match the background
  2. Hitsound volume: Please set it
[Easy]
  1. 00:46:065 (2) - Unsnapped circle
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:703 - I don't really suggest you skip this sound, try to add some object in here, same for sliders like 00:09:894 (5), 00:13:298 (5) and so on
[A Mystery's Hard]
  1. 00:15:426 (5,6) - Better to follow the same pattern you did in 00:12:022 (5,6) for consistence
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:448 (2) - 00:09:363 (1) - 00:09:682 (1) - 00:27:980 (2) - 00:34:363 (2) - 00:55:214 (2) - Unsnapped slider
  2. 00:04:788 (4,5,1) - Flow here is quite weird, I would recommend a curve flow instead the of the current one with a vertical movement
  3. 00:12:447 (1,1,1) - Give these some rotate, horizontal and vertical don't really play well
  4. 00:17:554 (1,2) - Weird stack here =3=
  5. 00:24:362 (1,2,3) - 00:25:852 (6,7) - The spacing here is too large which contradict the music, which is soft in here
  6. 00:31:915 (4,6) - Untidy stacking
  7. 00:35:426 (5) - Strange flow here... as 00:35:213 (3,4,5) provide vertical movement, sharp turn in 00:35:426 (5) is not suitable to place here, players may not be react well to hit it
  8. 00:40:320 (1,2) - Increase DS here, it is close compare to other same patterns
  9. 00:44:788 (1,2) - Same as 00:17:554 (1,2)
  10. 00:52:341 (2,3) - 00:53:085 (1,2,4,5) - 00:54:788 (8,9,1) - Same as 00:24:362 (1,2,3)
[Champion]
  1. 00:07:129 (2) - 00:07:980 (2) - 00:27:980 (2) - 00:28:406 (4) - 00:35:214 (2) - 00:35:746 (4) - 00:51:916 (2) 00:55:640 (4) - Unsnapped slider
  2. 00:29:682 (3) - Unsnapped circle
  3. 01:01:383 (5,7) - In my opinion stacking affects readability a lot
[Irre's Extra]
  1. 00:13:937 (1) - I would suggest you to rotate it anti-clockwisely for a bit, when 00:13:724 (4,5,1) and 00:13:937 (1,1) contain sharp turn between, it really affects playability in these high spacing patterns, rotating it can provide a smoother flow
  2. 00:22:660 (8) - NC here, the combo here is quite long
  3. 00:41:171 (1) - Same as 00:13:937 (1)
  4. 00:49:894 (8) - Same as 00:22:660 (8)

Good luck!
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Bara-

Chaoslitz wrote:

M4M

[General]
  1. Combo colour: The green colour don't really match the background
  2. Hitsound volume: Please set it
[Easy]
  1. 00:46:065 (2) - Unsnapped circle It's snapped here O.o
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:703 - I don't really suggest you skip this sound, try to add some object in here, same for sliders like 00:09:894 (5), 00:13:298 (5) and so on IMO, doing that requires me to do it every time for consistency, but then it'll feel way too hard. I know it's already fairly hard for a normal, so I don't want to up it even more
[A Mystery's Hard]
  1. 00:15:426 (5,6) - Better to follow the same pattern you did in 00:12:022 (5,6) for consistence
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:448 (2) - 00:09:363 (1) - 00:09:682 (1) - 00:27:980 (2) - 00:34:363 (2) - 00:55:214 (2) - Unsnapped slider
  2. 00:04:788 (4,5,1) - Flow here is quite weird, I would recommend a curve flow instead the of the current one with a vertical movement
  3. 00:12:447 (1,1,1) - Give these some rotate, horizontal and vertical don't really play well
  4. 00:17:554 (1,2) - Weird stack here =3= It's not even stacked O.o
  5. 00:24:362 (1,2,3) - 00:25:852 (6,7) - The spacing here is too large which contradict the music, which is soft in here
  6. 00:31:915 (4,6) - Untidy stacking
  7. 00:35:426 (5) - Strange flow here... as 00:35:213 (3,4,5) provide vertical movement, sharp turn in 00:35:426 (5) is not suitable to place here, players may not be react well to hit it It's a selfblanketing lider ;-;
  8. 00:40:320 (1,2) - Increase DS here, it is close compare to other same patterns
  9. 00:44:788 (1,2) - Same as 00:17:554 (1,2) <--
  10. 00:52:341 (2,3) - 00:53:085 (1,2,4,5) - 00:54:788 (8,9,1) - Same as 00:24:362 (1,2,3)
[Champion]
  1. 00:07:129 (2) - 00:07:980 (2) - 00:27:980 (2) - 00:28:406 (4) - 00:35:214 (2) - 00:35:746 (4) - 00:51:916 (2) 00:55:640 (4) - Unsnapped slider
  2. 00:29:682 (3) - Unsnapped circle
  3. 01:01:383 (5,7) - In my opinion stacking affects readability a lot
[Irre's Extra]
  1. 00:13:937 (1) - I would suggest you to rotate it anti-clockwisely for a bit, when 00:13:724 (4,5,1) and 00:13:937 (1,1) contain sharp turn between, it really affects playability in these high spacing patterns, rotating it can provide a smoother flow
  2. 00:22:660 (8) - NC here, the combo here is quite long
  3. 00:41:171 (1) - Same as 00:13:937 (1)
  4. 00:49:894 (8) - Same as 00:22:660 (8)

Good luck!
Thanks
No reply means fixed
Also did the colors on both Mystery's and Irre diffs, so that's the reason they have an update
A Mystery
868 posts
Joined April 2013
A Mystery

Chaoslitz wrote:

M4M

[A Mystery's Hard]
  1. 00:15:426 (5,6) - Better to follow the same pattern you did in 00:12:022 (5,6) for consistence - But variety :( Also that would mean I would have to move a lot of things to keep the spacing right, I don't think it's worth it. But I see your point.

Good luck!
Thanks for the suggestion!
Ipas
806 posts
Joined September 2013
Ipas
Just found this one, Hello~

[General]
  1. Adjust the volume more clearly . You still use the same volume even at the lowest part of this song
[Easy]
  1. I'm really not sure that SV changes with high amount is allowed . Better to not to do it asked with monstrata tho
  2. 00:44:788 (1) - It's really touching HP bar . You need to lower the placement at least until it doesn't touch it again
[Normal]
  1. 00:39:681 (4) - Move the last anchor point a grid to the upper side so it will creates the same straight with the 00:40:532 (5) -
  2. 00:47:341 (5) - You may lower the placement it a bit since it's touched HP bar a bit too
[A Mystery's Hard]
  1. 00:23:192 (7) - This slider plays awkwardly since there is a rhythm that capable to be clicked or emphasized on 00:23:298 - . Just make this slider into a 1/2 slider then add a circle on 00:23:511 - so the following pattern will looks like this
    SPOILER
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:915 (1,2) - I see no point why you'd to lowered its SV . The music part still intense and lowering SV doesn't plays really well . *This mod affect to another part with the same issues too*
  2. 00:23:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Because of its density, maybe it's hard to be clicked . Rearrange and place it more clearly . *This mod affect to another part with the same issues too*
  3. 00:55:426 (3) - Slightly touching the HP bar . Lower it a bit
[Champion]
  1. 00:06:915 (1,2) - Same as above, I see no reason why you put this on lower SV amount
  2. 00:19:894 (4) - Place this slider correctly follows the previous placement (Move it to 400|276)
  3. 00:30:213 (4,1) - You can put a jump between this two . You put it on 00:29:788 (4,1) - so it won't be problem if you put it on this two too because 00:30:320 (1) - have more bigger sound than the previous which you put the jump
[]
Good Luck~
A Mystery
868 posts
Joined April 2013
A Mystery
@Ipas fixed
Thanks for modding!

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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 111 Champion Steven.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 31171
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Champion Steven
TitleUnicode:Champion Steven
Artist:Go Ichinose
ArtistUnicode:Go Ichinose
Creator:baraatje123
Version:A Mystery's Hard
Source:Pokémon Omega Ruby & Alpha Sapphire
Tags:Shota Kageyama GAME FREAK -Magic_Bomb_- - Magic Bomb - A_Mystery A Mystery Irreversible
BeatmapID:722133
BeatmapSetID:319636

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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2235,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,0
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17554,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
31171,-90.9090909090909,4,1,1,80,0,1
44788,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 61,112,131
Combo2 : 64,0,128
Combo3 : 255,0,128
Combo4 : 255,0,0
Combo5 : 0,128,192

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Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Bara-

Ipas wrote:

Just found this one, Hello~

[General]
  1. Adjust the volume more clearly . You still use the same volume even at the lowest part of this song As they are all custom samples, I kept them, as the soft samples are softer then the normal samples
[Easy]
  1. I'm really not sure that SV changes with high amount is allowed . Better to not to do it asked with monstrata tho It is allowed, and I'll never forget it It was one of the wrong statements I made which made me not enter BNG a few months ago
  2. 00:44:788 (1) - It's really touching HP bar . You need to lower the placement at least until it doesn't touch it again
[Normal]
  1. 00:39:681 (4) - Move the last anchor point a grid to the upper side so it will creates the same straight with the 00:40:532 (5) -
  2. 00:47:341 (5) - You may lower the placement it a bit since it's touched HP bar a bit too
[A Mystery's Hard]
  1. 00:23:192 (7) - This slider plays awkwardly since there is a rhythm that capable to be clicked or emphasized on 00:23:298 - . Just make this slider into a 1/2 slider then add a circle on 00:23:511 - so the following pattern will looks like this
    SPOILER
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:915 (1,2) - I see no point why you'd to lowered its SV . The music part still intense and lowering SV doesn't plays really well . *This mod affect to another part with the same issues too* It's intended, to give more emphasis to the next part which is the start of a new stanza
  2. 00:23:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Because of its density, maybe it's hard to be clicked . Rearrange and place it more clearly . *This mod affect to another part with the same issues too* Because it's a stream, this spacing is fine
  3. 00:55:426 (3) - Slightly touching the HP bar . Lower it a bit
[Champion]
  1. 00:06:915 (1,2) - Same as above, I see no reason why you put this on lower SV amount It's intended, to give more emphasis to the next part which is the start of a new stanza
  2. 00:19:894 (4) - Place this slider correctly follows the previous placement (Move it to 400|276)
  3. 00:30:213 (4,1) - You can put a jump between this two . You put it on 00:29:788 (4,1) - so it won't be problem if you put it on this two too because 00:30:320 (1) - have more bigger sound than the previous which you put the jump
[]
Good Luck~
Thanks!
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Also updated Mystery's diff
Equim
335 posts
Joined June 2014
Equim
Hi! (M4M request, thanks: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329280)
[MBomb's Heavy Rain]
I think AR9 and OD9 is better for this diff.
00:06:490 (4) - This pathern seems a little strange. How about change the pathern like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3434164
00:17:235 (8) - x:0?
00:28:777 (2,3) - x:152 and x:112?
How about move 00:33:724 (4) - to 00:34:149 - and move 00:34:149 (5) - to 00:33:724 - (exchange the position)? And move 00:34:469 (6) - to x:232. In this way it may flow better.
00:43:511 (3) - move to x:72? I don't think here it needs a HDash.
MBomb
MBomb

Equim wrote:

Hi! (M4M request, thanks: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329280)
[MBomb's Heavy Rain]
I think AR9 and OD9 is better for this diff.
00:06:490 (4) - This pathern seems a little strange. How about change the pathern like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3434164
00:17:235 (8) - x:0?
00:28:777 (2,3) - x:152 and x:112?
How about move 00:33:724 (4) - to 00:34:149 - and move 00:34:149 (5) - to 00:33:724 - (exchange the position)? And move 00:34:469 (6) - to x:232. In this way it may flow better.
00:43:511 (3) - move to x:72? I don't think here it needs a HDash.
Computer is broken right now, I'll hopefully have it fixed tomorrow, but whilst I'm fine with doing it, could you ask me for m4m before doing the mod in future? Thanks xD I'll apply when computer's fixed, sorry about delay baraatje123.
Bara-
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Bara-
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MBomb
MBomb

Equim wrote:

Hi! (M4M request, thanks: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329280)
[MBomb's Heavy Rain]
I think AR9 and OD9 is better for this diff. - Because of this mostly being mapped in 1/2 with very little 1/4, I feel AR8.8 works better.
00:06:490 (4) - This pathern seems a little strange. How about change the pathern like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3434164 - I like this, done.
00:17:235 (8) - x:0? - This curve was intentional, I feel it plays nicely.
00:28:777 (2,3) - x:152 and x:112? - This flows fine how it is. to me.
How about move 00:33:724 (4) - to 00:34:149 - and move 00:34:149 (5) - to 00:33:724 - (exchange the position)? And move 00:34:469 (6) - to x:232. In this way it may flow better. - I don't like the HDash from 3 to 4, 4 is quite a weak note.
00:43:511 (3) - move to x:72? I don't think here it needs a HDash. - I moved to x:96, but yeah, got rid of HDash.
Thanks for the mod!

Rain
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 111 Champion Steven.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 31171
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 63511
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Champion Steven
TitleUnicode:Champion Steven
Artist:Go Ichinose
ArtistUnicode:Go Ichinose
Creator:baraatje123
Version:MBomb's Heavy Rain
Source:Pokémon Omega Ruby & Alpha Sapphire
Tags:Shota Kageyama GAME FREAK -Magic_Bomb_- - Magic Bomb - A_Mystery A Mystery Irreversible
BeatmapID:740055
BeatmapSetID:319636

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.8
ApproachRate:8.8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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CrystilonZ
1,559 posts
Joined January 2013
CrystilonZ
SP mod from my queue :)

[General]
Are you sure about BPM ?
[Easy]
00:09:043 (1) - definitely off grid (red points).
00:22:660 (3,1) - are you intended to blanket them ?
00:25:639 (2,1) -
00:27:341 (2,1) - nazi - make the distance between tail - circle and circle - head equal
00:46:490 (3,1) - blanket?

[Normal]
00:04:788 (3,4) - blanket them ?
00:09:043 (4,5) - fix that blanket
00:15:852 (4,5) - You should make (5) curved to fit with 4
00:30:320 (2,1) - fix that blanket
00:32:022 (3,4,5) - fix the triangle shape at the heads

[Insane]
00:02:235 (1,2,3,4) - fix the DS between 00:02:447 (2,4) -
00:17:554 (1,2,3) - huh? the spacing is quite weird
00:28:192 (3) - off screen
00:44:788 (1,2,3) - ^^
00:44:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - almost all are copied from the earlier part. -- also in Irre's diff

Good luck ! :)
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Bara-

CrystilonZ wrote:

SP mod from my queue :)

[General]
Are you sure about BPM ? I am
[Easy]
00:09:043 (1) - definitely off grid (red points). Doesn't matter, it's not offscreen at 4:3
00:22:660 (3,1) - are you intended to blanket them ? Yeah
00:25:639 (2,1) - ??
00:27:341 (2,1) - nazi - make the distance between tail - circle and circle - head equal This flows better
00:46:490 (3,1) - blanket?

[Normal]
00:04:788 (3,4) - blanket them ? Not a blanket
00:09:043 (4,5) - fix that blanket IT's fine
00:15:852 (4,5) - You should make (5) curved to fit with 4 Did something different
00:30:320 (2,1) - fix that blanket
00:32:022 (3,4,5) - fix the triangle shape at the heads Not a triangle

[Insane]
00:02:235 (1,2,3,4) - fix the DS between 00:02:447 (2,4) - It's fine
00:17:554 (1,2,3) - huh? the spacing is quite weird Nope
00:28:192 (3) - off screen It's not (at 4:3)
00:44:788 (1,2,3) - ^^
00:44:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - almost all are copied from the earlier part. -- also in Irre's diff

Good luck ! :)
Thanks!
No reply means fixed
Rilene
2,105 posts
Joined April 2014
Rilene
From Sirade's Modding Queue


Concerned : (?)
Suggestion : (*)
Recommended : (**)
Highly Recommended : (***)
Problem : (!)
Probably a Problem : (!?)
Unrankable Problem : (!!)

Since you renamed from Champion to Extra...
I'll mod Extra.

Extra
------------------------

00:10:000 (2,1) - (?) Bit too far?

00:43:086 (1) - (*) Move this to "X:347 / Y: 75" to make it look more like a triangle patterned.

00:29:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - (?) Quite unsure since the jumps are well... Kinda extreme spaced and not sure can player quickly change their speed to deal with this pattern, it is different with 00:44:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - where spacing is constant.

00:37:554 (1,2,3) - (*) Turn to something like this? It would give a feel of a strong hitsound it had there, also applies to similar sounds like 00:06:915 (1,2) - 00:10:320 (1,2,3) -

00:20:958 (1,1) - (**) Too curved? Try make it curved something like this.

Good luck on getting ranked. :D
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
ProfessionalBox
Hello! M4M from your que ~

Easy

00:05:213 - 00:08:618 - 00:12:022 - 00:15:426 - The fact that there aren't any notes here is obviously on purpose but still it feels like there should be something to play. Why not make the circles before the breaks sliders so that they end on these points in time?
00:32:873 (1,1) - Why not make a better blanket here by making the short slider a bit more curvy?

Solid Easy, nothing else caught my eye

Normal

00:00:532 (1) - Try moving this to around X:204 Y:36 for a better flow
00:00:745 (2,3,4) - Distances here are not the same
00:15:852 (4,5) - These would look better if you moved the (5) to around X:326 y:349

A Mystery's Hard

00:32:341 (5,6) - These aren't stacked properly
01:00:107 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I think this would look cooler if you took all the notes and rotated them by -2 and centered them so that the first slider is at X:310 Y:126 so that it's "symmetrical with the map" I'll leave a pic below to show you what I mean
Picture

Insane

00:03:937 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off
00:06:703 (1,1) - The SV change is a bit weird since the distance is so big but the velocity gets lower, consider moving them closer to eachother
00:17:128 (2,3,4) - Ahh I think this might be a bit too "hard". Consider making this a repeat slider instead, but then again I could be wrong
00:17:341 (5,1) - Again such a drastic SV change with a big (lol) gap. You know what to do ;)
00:44:362 (2,3,4) - Same as mentioned before

Extra

Looks just fine to me

Irre's Extra

Oh another one of these huh (fml)? Can't see anything that bothers me so good job here :D

That's it for the mod! Hope that some of it helps and in case this is not enough for you to mod my map just forum pm me and I'll mod some of your other maps! :)
Sidetail
1,268 posts
Joined October 2012
Sidetail
For M4M!

[Easy]
- 00:03:937 (1) - Can be more symmetrical like this 00:10:745 (1)
- 00:07:341 (1) - This as well. I think it looks nicer when sides are even!
- 00:17:554 - Isn't the slider velocity change too much on Easy? 1.2x -> 0.8x
- 00:44:575 (2) - DS not even
- 00:44:788 - ^
- 00:48:192 (1) - Fix blanket
- 00:52:873 (2) - DS not even

I think Easy diff should have constant SV rather than emphasizing kiai. (Or atleast thats how I feel about it!)


[Normal]
- 00:27:766 (1) - Making this as 1/1 sliders feels better (matchs 00:29:469 (1,2) well)
- 00:15:852 (4) - Moved red tick to make "blanketing" better [urlhttp://puu.sh/jtnzJ/8cc25672d9.jpg](IMG)[/url]
- 00:47:341 (5,6) - I always have known that any objects touch default skin's health bar is DQ


[A Mystery's Hard]
00:12:022 (5,6,1) - Isn't this too hard for Hard difficulty?

I think this difficulty is closer to Light insane. With all those quite high-paced SV, hidden notes, double reverse sliders, and flows in general.


[Insane]
- 00:17:128 (2,3,4) - That is extremely fast
- 00:18:405 (2) - Slight overlap
- 00:27:660 (7) - Different distance from circle #6 and slider #1
- 00:32:766 (6) - Different spacing
- 00:42:022 (3,4,5) - How about this: (THIS)
- 00:44:362 (2,3,4) - Too fast, I wonder 00:44:575 (5) can be easily reachable after that triple.
- 00:45:639 (2) - Slight overlap

I wonder if 00:09:043 (1,1,1,2,1,1) are okay. They look good at aesthetics point, but they will have impact on how health regulation.


[Extra]
- 00:10:000 (2) - Doesn't seem like a good spot. Maybe move it somewhere around half way of before & after sliders?
- 00:17:128 (2,3) - Isn't single circle good enough?
- 00:30:639 (5) - Move to (X:336, Y:32)??

I am weak on high star maps like this for modding :(


[Irre's Extra]
Osu for ants!
- 00:20:107 (4,5) - Suggestion: (THIS)
- 00:25:958 (6) - One tick down (X: 152, Y:100)
- 00:47:341 (4,5) - If you did the first one!


Quite nice mapset for people who like challenging maps! I like where this is going! Good luck!!
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Bara-
Because if huge lags, I can't properly reply with what I fixed and whatnot
Most things are fixed, excecpt nearly everything for Insane/Extra
Also, NEVER Judge distance by numbers if there is an SV change!
My easy uses a "jump" of DS 1.6, which is actually 1.1 if you remove the SV change (1,2-->0,8)
Oh, such SV changes are fine tho
A Mystery
868 posts
Joined April 2013
A Mystery
@PB Fixed your suggestions (moved the last pattern a little up though, but centered it)
@Betastar how so? The map is full of 1/2 gaps so I don't think this is any harder than the rest. And I think it's a great step towards the insane, which has even higher 1/2 spacing and harder-to-read patterns.

Thanks for modding!

gfd
osu file format v14

[General]
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TitleUnicode:Champion Steven
Artist:Go Ichinose
ArtistUnicode:Go Ichinose
Creator:Baraatje123
Version:A Mystery's Hard
Source:Pokémon Omega Ruby & Alpha Sapphire
Tags:Shota Kageyama GAME FREAK -Magic_Bomb_- - Magic Bomb - A_Mystery A Mystery Irreversible
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Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Milan-
general
-offset is way too late try like 520 or so
-halved bpm makes more sense. By just listening to the drums you can say it is 141. If you want another reason, listen to when the music "reset", downbeat will always land on these resets or new rhythms which is the way you set bpms most of the time.

easy
-The overall sliders shapes are really discouraged for this level. They are way too inappropriate due to the lots of readabilities issues they have. Also, some of them modify the slider velocity like 00:02:235 (1) - or 00:03:937 (1) -
-Changing SV from 1.2 to 0.8 is not good for this level. You should really reconsider using a more subtle speed.
-00:49:894 (3,4,1) - you shouldn't be doing this kind of pattern with this low AR. It's hard for newbies to read it properly.
-00:58:511 (1,1) - slider's aproach circle appears too early before spinner finishes. I suggest you to remove the spinner because, in addition, it'd feel more natural if there were some rhythm there

normal
-00:09:043 (4) - the way this slider play is a bit too awkward for this speed. Track isn't clear enough and in addition you added a repeat to it. Same with similars like 00:15:852 (4) -
-01:00:958 - weird that you decided to ignore downbeat when you map it in like the whole map.
-00:29:469 (1,2,1) - i guess spacing should be more even visually like you did here 00:43:937 (5,6,1) - . Altho i dont agree with such big sv difference..

a mystery
-it's fine, just dumb suggestions lmao:
-00:15:852 (1,2,3) - intensity is lost by using this rhythm ;w; try to make a more "continuous" rhythm. Like adding a repeat to (2) for instance
-00:23:192 (7,8) - 00:50:426 (3,4) - these are the only 2 parts wehre the dstance is different. It looks a bit weird on the map context.
-when are u going to change your name?

insane
-00:06:915 (1,2,1) - vs 00:10:320 (1,2,1) - Try to be more constant here. The music is exactly the same.
-00:19:681 (1) - this should be 1/4. Music clearly has 3 beats from white to red. Here too 00:23:511 (3) - 00:46:915 (6) - 00:50:745 (3) - . There's no reason to use bad snapping on those spots. If you want to make a simple pattern just ignore the 1/4 sound and just map 1/2
-00:31:915 (4) - this note doesnt seem to be very important for what you're mapping here and it's kinda weird that you didnt map it on the first kiai either
-00:54:149 (5,7) - little overlap looks ugly ingame ;w;
-00:30:320 (1,2,3) - try this instead http://puu.sh/jyxGk/d62ffd15f5.jpg It covers that sound you're trying to map much better. same 00:57:979 (2,3) -
-00:17:554 (1,2,3) - why distance is so different even tho it has the same gap rhythmically

extra
-00:05:639 (1,1) - why distance suddenly became this small?
-00:14:149 (1) - red nodes contract way too much. It modifies the velocity of the slider. 00:03:937 (1) - this probably too.
-00:19:681 (1,2,3) - same as insane and all other instance including 00:28:618 (1,2,3) - , it has 3 beats from red to white... And even if you want to keep them, switching between 1/4 and 1/6 so fast and without a pattern that tells you it's going to happen, isn't the best tbh.
-00:23:298 - you mapped this part even on insane..
-00:29:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this pattern is really annoying and doesn't have good flow either. Imagine hanzer doubles but way more spaced and with jerky movement. It's not really well done
-00:58:405 (1) - i'd move it to the other side, like x365y24. flow would be better that way
-01:00:958 - there's no reason to ignore this beat. Specially when you map 01:01:064 (3) - which is a derived sound from the downbeat.
-00:27:554 (7,1) - you lose so much momentum by using this small distance.
-00:42:554 (4,5,6,1) - movement is really awkward to follow. Going back and forth at this speed is really annoying
-00:43:724 (1,2,1) - distance doesnt represent the music at its higher expression. Jumps should lead towards the stronger beats
-The big concern i have with this diff and insane is the way they play. If you want to make something this fast, patterns and flow should be much better. Even small things like this 00:51:383 (6,7,1) - matters. In addition that spacing sometimes seems too random and not consistent at all. All these suggestions are from my point of view so feel free to say that i suck lmao.

irre
-just, why 1/6 sliders when the music is actually 1/4.
-00:09:043 (1,2,3) - these pattern could look better if you manually stack them, auto stack make them look not so neat

There are cool stuff here, but overall still need more work to me.. ;w;
A Mystery
868 posts
Joined April 2013
A Mystery

Milan- wrote:

a mystery
-it's fine, just dumb suggestions lmao:
-00:15:852 (1,2,3) - intensity is lost by using this rhythm ;w; try to make a more "continuous" rhythm. Like adding a repeat to (2) for instance - Did something else which makes more sense rhythm-wise
-00:23:192 (7,8) - 00:50:426 (3,4) - these are the only 2 parts wehre the dstance is different. It looks a bit weird on the map context. - Because I'm retarded
-when are u going to change your name? - That remains a mystery
Thanks for modding!
I agree about the offset being too late. Something like 522 would work out a lot better. I definitely agree about the bpm, it should be halved (but I told baraatje already)

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150,56,14575,1,2,0:0:0:0:
62,186,14788,2,0,P|65:235|72:250,1,60.5000018463135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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299,285,15426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,157,15639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,311,15852,6,0,P|334:356|276:360,1,121.000003692627,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,285,16171,1,6,0:0:0:0:
299,285,16277,2,0,P|327:247|354:235,1,60.5000018463135
414,221,16490,1,14,0:0:0:0:
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125,206,19043,2,0,L|120:146,1,55,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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50,183,20107,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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114,332,20532,1,8,0:0:0:0:
239,263,20745,2,0,P|288:258|314:269,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,251,20958,6,0,B|403:225|389:168|389:168|424:137|411:82,2,165,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,109,21809,2,0,P|370:42|466:49,1,165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,38,22235,1,8,0:0:0:0:
503,171,22447,2,0,P|497:227|475:251,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,269,22660,2,0,B|372:260|333:250|333:250|302:248|269:256,1,165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,265,23086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
207,265,23192,2,0,P|135:222|133:167,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,130,23511,1,6,0:0:0:0:
269,145,23724,6,0,P|295:159|335:167,2,55,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,185,24043,2,0,P|203:116|240:80,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,80,24362,2,0,P|364:99|418:11,1,165,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,25,24788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,159,25000,2,0,P|294:209|305:233,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,274,25213,2,0,P|312:330|256:352,2,110,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,259,25852,2,0,P|130:251|106:259,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,219,26064,6,0,P|31:139|94:85,1,165,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,155,26490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,259,26703,2,0,P|189:302|178:338,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,349,26915,2,0,P|303:343|368:330,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,214,27341,2,0,P|384:203|330:197,1,110,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,300,27766,5,12,0:0:0:0:
370,169,27979,2,0,P|363:111|371:90,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,48,28192,2,0,B|299:40|299:40|260:48|260:48|215:36,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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270,332,29469,6,0,P|199:358|143:326,1,110,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,305,29788,2,0,L|99:143,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,123,30107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,129,30320,2,0,B|297:135|297:135|366:117,1,110,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,173,30639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
406,173,30745,2,0,P|407:210|400:245,2,55,12|8|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,294,31171,6,0,P|234:314|182:206,1,181.500005538941,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,239,31596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
333,103,31809,2,0,P|395:98|417:107,1,60.5000018463135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,174,32022,2,0,P|313:184|254:120,1,121.000003692627,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,76,32341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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283,260,33511,2,0,P|315:309|302:366,1,121.000003692627,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,367,33937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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492,204,35852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,332,36064,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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109,86,40745,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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378,82,41383,6,0,P|456:73|495:184,1,181.500005538941,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,148,41809,1,2,0:0:0:0:
301,245,42022,2,0,P|299:297|310:325,1,60.5000018463135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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172,202,42873,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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54,71,43724,1,14,0:0:0:0:
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219,192,46277,2,0,P|171:195|151:188,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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184,52,47341,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,52,47447,2,0,P|241:84|311:62,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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449,141,47979,2,0,P|456:198|452:225,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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258,139,50320,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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422,133,50745,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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133,211,52022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,183,52234,2,0,P|275:155|268:129,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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271,287,53724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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368,110,55000,5,14,0:0:0:0:
284,227,55213,2,0,P|280:255|285:282,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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492,174,55852,2,0,B|460:182|460:182|421:174|421:174|384:182,1,110,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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195,235,57341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,316,57554,2,0,B|367:327|367:327|437:306,1,110,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,246,57873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,246,57979,2,0,P|434:178|423:164,2,55,12|8|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,58511,12,0,59681,0:0:0:0:
310,121,60107,6,0,P|240:136|182:97,1,110,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,182,60426,2,0,P|215:234|211:303,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,274,60745,2,0,P|312:205|375:175,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,67,61171,1,8,0:0:0:0:
151,161,61383,2,0,P|97:160|75:148,3,55,2|0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,108,61809,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61915,12,0,63511,0:0:0:0:
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Bara-

Milan- wrote:

general
-offset is way too late try like 520 or so
-halved bpm makes more sense. By just listening to the drums you can say it is 141. If you want another reason, listen to when the music "reset", downbeat will always land on these resets or new rhythms which is the way you set bpms most of the time.
Fixed both
easy
-The overall sliders shapes are really discouraged for this level. They are way too inappropriate due to the lots of readabilities issues they have. Also, some of them modify the slider velocity like 00:02:235 (1) - or 00:03:937 (1) -
-Changing SV from 1.2 to 0.8 is not good for this level. You should really reconsider using a more subtle speed. I honestly think this is fine. I'll reconsider more (and redo) if more people say so though
-00:49:894 (3,4,1) - you shouldn't be doing this kind of pattern with this low AR. It's hard for newbies to read it properly.
-00:58:511 (1,1) - slider's aproach circle appears too early before spinner finishes. I suggest you to remove the spinner because, in addition, it'd feel more natural if there were some rhythm there Kept spinner, as I have it in all diffs, it feels better for me

normal
-00:09:043 (4) - the way this slider play is a bit too awkward for this speed. Track isn't clear enough and in addition you added a repeat to it. Same with similars like 00:15:852 (4) - O.o. I'm using them for god know how long and this is the firts time anyone says something about it. No change, I really like these sldiers
-01:00:958 - weird that you decided to ignore downbeat when you map it in like the whole map. It's probably the weakest sound in the whole part (due to incorrect BPM it's even worse
-00:29:469 (1,2,1) - i guess spacing should be more even visually like you did here 00:43:937 (5,6,1) - . Altho i dont agree with such big sv difference..

a mystery
-it's fine, just dumb suggestions lmao:
-00:15:852 (1,2,3) - intensity is lost by using this rhythm ;w; try to make a more "continuous" rhythm. Like adding a repeat to (2) for instance
-00:23:192 (7,8) - 00:50:426 (3,4) - these are the only 2 parts wehre the dstance is different. It looks a bit weird on the map context.
-when are u going to change your name?

insane
-00:06:915 (1,2,1) - vs 00:10:320 (1,2,1) - Try to be more constant here. The music is exactly the same.
-00:19:681 (1) - this should be 1/4. Music clearly has 3 beats from white to red. Here too 00:23:511 (3) - 00:46:915 (6) - 00:50:745 (3) - . There's no reason to use bad snapping on those spots. If you want to make a simple pattern just ignore the 1/4 sound and just map 1/2 MNope, the sounds are actually 3 notes snapped to 1/3-1/6
-00:31:915 (4) - this note doesnt seem to be very important for what you're mapping here and it's kinda weird that you didnt map it on the first kiai either
-00:54:149 (5,7) - little overlap looks ugly ingame ;w;
-00:30:320 (1,2,3) - try this instead http://puu.sh/jyxGk/d62ffd15f5.jpg It covers that sound you're trying to map much better. same 00:57:979 (2,3) -
-00:17:554 (1,2,3) - why distance is so different even tho it has the same gap rhythmically

extra
-00:05:639 (1,1) - why distance suddenly became this small? For more ffect on the sliders themselves
-00:14:149 (1) - red nodes contract way too much. It modifies the velocity of the slider. 00:03:937 (1) - this probably too. Such sliders are commonly used for strong "scratchy sounds"
-00:19:681 (1,2,3) - same as insane and all other instance including 00:28:618 (1,2,3) - , it has 3 beats from red to white... And even if you want to keep them, switching between 1/4 and 1/6 so fast and without a pattern that tells you it's going to happen, isn't the best tbh. It's fine
-00:23:298 - you mapped this part even on insane..
-00:29:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this pattern is really annoying and doesn't have good flow either. Imagine hanzer doubles but way more spaced and with jerky movement. It's not really well done
-00:58:405 (1) - i'd move it to the other side, like x365y24. flow would be better that way
-01:00:958 - there's no reason to ignore this beat. Specially when you map 01:01:064 (3) - which is a derived sound from the downbeat. Not a strongbeat
-00:27:554 (7,1) - you lose so much momentum by using this small distance.
-00:42:554 (4,5,6,1) - movement is really awkward to follow. Going back and forth at this speed is really annoying
-00:43:724 (1,2,1) - distance doesnt represent the music at its higher expression. Jumps should lead towards the stronger beats
-The big concern i have with this diff and insane is the way they play. If you want to make something this fast, patterns and flow should be much better. Even small things like this 00:51:383 (6,7,1) - matters. In addition that spacing sometimes seems too random and not consistent at all. All these suggestions are from my point of view so feel free to say that i suck lmao.

irre
-just, why 1/6 sliders when the music is actually 1/4.
-00:09:043 (1,2,3) - these pattern could look better if you manually stack them, auto stack make them look not so neat

There are cool stuff here, but overall still need more work to me.. ;w;
TY
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Bara-
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Topic Starter
Bara-
To all next modders
Don't look to the Difficulty at the site
It seems incorrect
Champion Diff is harder then Irre's
Champion is 5.61, Irre's is 5.5 (as you can see in-game/Forum)
autofanboy
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Mod Requested by Baraatje123

[ General]

  • AIMod
  1. Check AIMod through all the difficulties. Basically unsnapped objects in the intro. (I don't know whether it is intended or not)

    Background Image
  2. Resize to the resolution of 1366x768.

[ MBomb's Heavy Rain]

  • Difficulty Settings
  1. Slider velocity of 3.60 is not a big deal, but some sliders are really too quick that requires dashing to catch the tails of the sliders. Some of the examples are listed below.
  2. Increase AR to 9? AR8.8 seems to be too slow for such kind of 'heavy' rain and the 3.60 slider velocity.

    Gameplay
  3. 00:01:480 (5) - Slider requires dashing to catch the tail which is not too recommended. Make it less inclined to the right.
  4. 00:02:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The stream is basically fine but (4,5) is too static in movement, which the players can just stand to catch them. Therefore it is better to move (4) away from (5). In this case you can rotate this pattern a bit or rework the stream.
  5. 00:10:628 (9,1) - A bit hard to catch (1) as it is curved to (9). Better change the position of (1,2).
  6. 00:15:842 (1,2,3) - Quite inconsistent in the HDash patterning, since there are all HDashes in 00:05:629 (1,2,3) and 00:09:033 (1,2,3) etc.
  7. 00:17:118 (6,7,8,9,1) - The movements here are quite intense as a Rain.
  8. 00:34:459 (6,1) - Too hard to catch (1)'s tail as the HDash at (6,1) might cause overshooting and the players have to dash in order to catch tail of (1). Maybe it is better to incline (1) less.
  9. 00:37:756 (7,1) - ^

Good luck ranking the mapset!
MBomb
MBomb
;)

alienflybot wrote:



Mod Requested by Baraatje123

[ General]

  • AIMod
  1. Check AIMod through all the difficulties. Basically unsnapped objects in the intro. (I don't know whether it is intended or not)

    Background Image
  2. Resize to the resolution of 1366x768.

[ MBomb's Heavy Rain]

  • Difficulty Settings
  1. Slider velocity of 3.60 is not a big deal, but some sliders are really too quick that requires dashing to catch the tails of the sliders. Some of the examples are listed below.
  2. Increase AR to 9? AR8.8 seems to be too slow for such kind of 'heavy' rain and the 3.60 slider velocity. - I feel the AR8.8 fits the song fine because of the moderately low bpm, and the low use of 1/8.

    Gameplay
  3. 00:01:480 (5) - Slider requires dashing to catch the tail which is not too recommended. Make it less inclined to the right. - Done.
  4. 00:02:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The stream is basically fine but (4,5) is too static in movement, which the players can just stand to catch them. Therefore it is better to move (4) away from (5). In this case you can rotate this pattern a bit or rework the stream. - I feel this movement makes the curve more smooth. You can stand still for it, but keeping a fluent movement makes it easier to play imo, and so most players would do this instead.
  5. 00:10:628 (9,1) - A bit hard to catch (1) as it is curved to (9). Better change the position of (1,2). I ctrl+Hed 1 instead, this plays better in my opinion.
  6. 00:15:842 (1,2,3) - Quite inconsistent in the HDash patterning, since there are all HDashes in 00:05:629 (1,2,3) and 00:09:033 (1,2,3) etc. - Fixed.
  7. 00:17:118 (6,7,8,9,1) - The movements here are quite intense as a Rain. -I think this is fine because you can just hold dash for the 8, 9, 1 pattern.
  8. 00:34:459 (6,1) - Too hard to catch (1)'s tail as the HDash at (6,1) might cause overshooting and the players have to dash in order to catch tail of (1). Maybe it is better to incline (1) less. - Done.
  9. 00:37:756 (7,1) - ^ - Done.

Good luck ranking the mapset!
Thanks for the mod!

Rain
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 111 Champion Steven.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 31171
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 63511
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Champion Steven
TitleUnicode:チャンピオンダイゴ
Artist:Go Ichinose
ArtistUnicode:一之瀬剛
Creator:Baraatje123
Version:Mbomb's Heavy Rain
Source:ポケットモンスター オメガルビー・アルファサファイア
Tags:Pokémon Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire Shota Kageyama GAME FREAK -Magic_Bomb_- - Magic Bomb - A_Mystery A Mystery Irreversible
BeatmapID:740055
BeatmapSetID:319636

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.8
ApproachRate:8.8
SliderMultiplier:3.6
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Razor Sharp
1,167 posts
Joined October 2013
Razor Sharp
From my Razor' Sharpened Mod Queue


MBomb's Heavy Rain

00:07:969 (2) - These are ok, but not for rain tho. The flow here is not the best either. Would suggest to change this.
00:17:118 (6,7,8) - Would suggest to move (9) closer to this (and remove hyper) as this can be a little hard for someone to read. This fits overdose better.
00:21:905 (4,5) - This hyper does not follow anything! Pleace change.
00:28:608 (1,2,3) - What about having the 1/8 straight? Makes a better flow, and looks nicer.
00:35:203 (2) - Same as the first one i mentioned.
00:44:352 (7,8,9,10) - Yeah, (10) should be closer to the 1/8's here.
00:46:905 (3) - Even tho this plays nice, i would suggest to straighten it more.
01:01:373 (6,7) - Moving (7) to around x32 would make this awesome for the ending. THink about it.

Not much, but the rain is very clean imo.
Good luck with ranking!
Razor Sharp
1,167 posts
Joined October 2013
Razor Sharp
Doubleposted for some reason lol
MBomb
MBomb

Razor Sharp wrote:

From my Razor' Sharpened Mod Queue


MBomb's Heavy Rain

00:07:969 (2) - These are ok, but not for rain tho. The flow here is not the best either. Would suggest to change this. - Didn't really change much, but I moved it a bit more to the left.
00:17:118 (6,7,8) - Would suggest to move (9) closer to this (and remove hyper) as this can be a little hard for someone to read. This fits overdose better. - I feel because you can still hit this by simply holding dash, it's fine.
00:21:905 (4,5) - This hyper does not follow anything! Pleace change. - HDash is for the very strong drum beat here, emphasised even more by the clap hitsound.
00:28:608 (1,2,3) - What about having the 1/8 straight? Makes a better flow, and looks nicer. - I think the curve movement here feels nicer to play.
00:35:203 (2) - Same as the first one i mentioned. - Same as then.
00:44:352 (7,8,9,10) - Yeah, (10) should be closer to the 1/8's here. - Done.
00:46:905 (3) - Even tho this plays nice, i would suggest to straighten it more. - I think I did... Either way it plays better.
01:01:373 (6,7) - Moving (7) to around x32 would make this awesome for the ending. THink about it. - Done, but increased the slant of 7 to make sure it flows quite well.

Not much, but the rain is very clean imo.
Good luck with ranking!
Thanks for the mod!

Rain
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 31171
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Champion Steven
TitleUnicode:チャンピオンダイゴ
Artist:Go Ichinose
ArtistUnicode:一之瀬剛
Creator:Baraatje123
Version:Mbomb's Heavy Rain
Source:ポケットモンスター オメガルビー・アルファサファイア
Tags:Pokémon Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire Shota Kageyama GAME FREAK -Magic_Bomb_- - Magic Bomb - A_Mystery A Mystery Irreversible
BeatmapID:740055
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Absolute Zero
Featured Artist
595 posts
Joined August 2014
Absolute Zero
Requested on skypu.
It's really good! I only have a few comments. (sorry CtB modder)

MB's whatever
00:17:544 (1) - Move (1) further away from (9) to make more of a pronounced hyper?
00:28:767 (2,3) - Maybe don't add (3)?
00:47:650 (6) - Maybe make (6) flow better by moving it further right than (7)?
Shushan
627 posts
Joined November 2013
Shushan
hi there!
m4m from your queue p/4475927#p4475927
[easy]
00:49:459 (2,3) - fix blanket
[normal]
00:00:522 (1) - unsnapped
00:19:246 (3) - nc?
[a mystery hard]
00:31:161 (1,2) - fix blanket
[insane]
00:08:927 (5) - 253 270?
00:57:118 (3,1) - unstacked
00:58:288 missed a beat here?
[irre's extra]
00:08:501 (4) - ctrl g?
00:21:693 missed a beat here?
00:23:076 (9) - nc here or 00:22:650 (8) - ?
00:24:139 (1) - remove nc?
00:31:054 the slider should end here mb?
00:51:373 (1) - remove nc?
[champion]
00:29:459 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - kinda overmapped :/ mb make the first square less spacey
00:35:735 (4,1) - unstacked
00:43:395 (1) - ctrl g?
gl!
MBomb
MBomb

Absolute Zero wrote:

Requested on skypu.
It's really good! I only have a few comments. (sorry CtB modder)

MB's whatever
00:17:544 (1) - Move (1) further away from (9) to make more of a pronounced hyper? - Done.
00:28:767 (2,3) - Maybe don't add (3)? - There is a note here.
00:47:650 (6) - Maybe make (6) flow better by moving it further right than (7)? - Leftwards movement here feels more natural to me.
Thanks for the mod!

Rain
osu file format v14

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Title:Champion Steven
TitleUnicode:チャンピオンダイゴ
Artist:Go Ichinose
ArtistUnicode:一之瀬剛
Creator:Baraatje123
Version:Mbomb's Heavy Rain
Source:ポケットモンスター オメガルビー・アルファサファイア
Tags:Pokémon Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire Shota Kageyama GAME FREAK -Magic_Bomb_- - Magic Bomb - A_Mystery A Mystery Irreversible
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192,192,32012,2,0,P|24:80|24:32,1,270
256,192,32650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,192,32863,5,6,0:0:0:0:
24,192,33182,1,6,0:0:0:0:
440,192,33501,1,14,0:0:0:0:
360,192,33714,2,0,L|440:152,2,90,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,192,34139,2,0,L|8:152,2,90,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,34459,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,192,34565,6,0,L|16:24,1,360,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,35203,2,0,L|88:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,192,35416,2,0,P|384:176|480:64,1,270,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,36054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36267,5,6,0:0:0:0:
16,192,36586,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36905,1,14,0:0:0:0:
320,192,37118,2,0,L|400:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,37331,2,0,L|400:152,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,37544,2,0,L|208:152,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,192,37756,2,0,L|207:152,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,37969,6,0,L|48:64,1,360,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,38608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,38820,2,0,P|496:144|368:64,1,270,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,39246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,39352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,39459,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,39565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,39671,6,0,L|504:80,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,39990,2,0,L|176:80,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,40310,2,0,L|504:80,1,180,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,40629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,40735,2,0,L|272:152,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,40948,2,0,L|272:152,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,41161,2,0,L|112:152,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,41373,6,0,B|368:168|368:168|128:32,1,360,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,42012,2,0,L|80:128,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,42225,2,0,L|496:64,1,270,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,42650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,42863,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,192,43076,5,6,0:0:0:0:
16,192,43395,1,6,0:0:0:0:
96,192,43501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,43714,2,0,L|160:104,1,180,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,192,44033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,44139,2,0,L|88:136,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,44405,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,44459,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,192,44565,2,0,L|48:152,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44778,6,0,B|496:64,1,270,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,45416,2,0,L|160:104,1,180,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,45735,2,0,L|16:128,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,46267,2,0,L|272:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,46480,5,4,0:0:0:0:
208,192,46693,2,0,L|128:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,46905,2,0,L|248:168,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,47118,2,0,L|48:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,47331,2,0,L|224:152,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,47650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,47756,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,192,47969,2,0,L|448:128,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,48182,6,0,L|168:128,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,48501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,48820,2,0,L|128:128,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,49033,2,0,L|384:152,2,90,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,49352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,49459,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,49671,2,0,L|360:136,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,49884,6,0,L|16:104,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,50203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,50310,2,0,L|240:152,2,90,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,50629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,50735,1,4,0:0:0:0:
88,192,50788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,50842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,50948,2,0,L|208:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,51161,2,0,L|224:152,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,51373,2,0,L|48:152,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,51586,6,0,L|480:104,1,270,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,52012,2,0,L|480:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,52225,2,0,L|144:104,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,192,52544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,52650,2,0,L|216:136,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,192,52863,2,0,L|64:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,53076,2,0,L|216:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,53288,6,0,L|32:104,1,270,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,53714,2,0,L|32:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,53927,2,0,L|368:104,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,192,54246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,54352,2,0,L|296:136,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,192,54565,2,0,L|448:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,54778,2,0,L|296:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,54990,5,14,0:0:0:0:
16,192,55203,2,0,L|96:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,55416,2,0,L|256:152,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,55629,2,0,L|256:152,2,90,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,55948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,56001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56054,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,192,56161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,192,56267,2,0,L|400:152,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56480,2,0,L|400:152,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,56693,6,0,L|112:152,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,192,56905,2,0,L|111:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57118,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57331,2,0,L|272:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,57490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,57544,6,0,L|272:152,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,57703,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,57756,1,12,0:0:0:0:
160,192,57863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,57969,1,12,0:0:0:0:
160,192,58076,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,192,58182,1,12,0:0:0:0:
384,192,58395,6,0,P|480:96|328:72,1,360,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,59033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,59246,2,0,L|256:40,1,270,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,59671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,59884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60097,6,0,L|0:128,2,90,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60416,2,0,L|320:128,2,90,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60735,2,0,L|128:128,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60948,2,0,L|128:128,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,61161,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,192,61373,2,0,L|400:136,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,61586,2,0,L|304:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61799,12,0,63501,0:0:0:0:
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Bara-

ohad1881 wrote:

hi there!
m4m from your queue https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4475927#p4475927
[easy]
00:49:459 (2,3) - fix blanket
[normal]
00:00:522 (1) - unsnapped
00:19:246 (3) - nc? no, breaks NC pattern
[a mystery hard]
00:31:161 (1,2) - fix blanket I checked it and this is already a perfect blanket O.o
[insane]
00:08:927 (5) - 253 270?
00:57:118 (3,1) - unstacked I prefer stack
00:58:288 missed a beat here?
Kinda remapped Insane, to make it much better
[irre's extra]
00:08:501 (4) - ctrl g?
00:21:693 missed a beat here?
00:23:076 (9) - nc here or 00:22:650 (8) - ?
00:24:139 (1) - remove nc?
00:31:054 the slider should end here mb?
00:51:373 (1) - remove nc?
[champion]
00:29:459 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - kinda overmapped :/ mb make the first square less spacey Nop
00:35:735 (4,1) - unstacked Why?
00:43:395 (1) - ctrl g? Doesn't flow well
gl!
Thanks!!
Buffed both Insane (added more 1/4 sliders, too bad SR doesn't change a ccording to that)
Also buffed Champion for more consistency in 2 2nd part, and "removed" undermapping, as they quiet part lacked a lot of 1/4 notes
Also update MBomb's diff and updated with newerMetadata (Gamu, ty)
Spayyce
693 posts
Joined December 2013
Spayyce
hey m4m c:

[General]

AiMod:
  • Fix these within AiMod
Folder:
  • Picture
  1. Dimensions: Good
  2. Conflict with combos: Nope c:
  3. Conflict with SB: N/A
  • Audio
  1. Bitrate: 187kbps. Good
  2. Amplification: Fine
  3. Conflict with hitsounds: None
BPM & Offset:
  1. Fine
[Easy]

00:03:927 (1) - Moving the red anchor here would create for a more consistent slider in terms of when the slider turns#

Slider

00:04:778 (4) - I would make these a 3/4 slider for the fact there is an audiable beat heard on the blue tick

00:05:629 (1) - Moving the last two anchors to these points would make the slider mirror correctly

x:216 y:256
and
x:248 y:292

00:08:182 (2) - ^^

00:09:033 (1) - Moving the two last anchors to these points for the same reason as mentioned above

x:52 y:228
and
x:72 y:264

00:11:586 (2) - ^^

An example of what you can do c:

00:14:990 (2) - ^

00:27:756 (1) - You could have a spinner here, the music sort of emphasised something along the lines of a spinner, rather than a single plain slider

00:51:586 (1) - I think this slider would better follow the music and would also play nicer in terms of flowing

Slider

00:53:288 (3) - ^, I would use the same slider here because the music doesn't really permit and significant change in regards to a slider

[Normal]

Your SV is a little high in some places, giving that it's a normal it may be harder for new players to keep up, I recommend lowering it to a more newbie friendly speed.

00:01:480 (4) - Have this as the same slider type as previous, it would play nice and give your map better aesthetics as well as following the pattern of the music more

00:02:863 - Why have you missed out such an emphasised beat, map this out please.

00:13:288 (5) - I would curve this the other way round so the borders of the slider blanket the previous one

00:14:990 (3) - Make this the same as slider 4 for better consistency

00:31:161 (1) - Would this note play better with the blanket you've done for better consistency

Blanket

00:52:437 (2,2) - These are inconsistenct, you didn't use them before, and the music played exactly the same. I recommend adding these in the previous part.

[A Mystery's Hard]

00:22:650 (5) - I believe this will play better with the previous sliders you've had, and I think it looks better aswell

Slider

00:46:480 (1) - I would strongly recommend a blanket here, you've blanketed so much things before and it just feels wrong without one now XD

[Insane]

00:01:480 (3) - Remove the extra white anchor on the curve, it's unneeded and makes it play funny

00:11:586 (4) - Move the first white anchor after the red anchor to these co-ords to make a better flow in the curve

x:416 y:232

00:14:990 (4) - Move the first white anchor after the red anchor two grid spaces down (on tiny) for the same reasons above

00:38:820 (4) - (same anchor location as above)

x:508 y:200

00:42:224 (4) - This curve doesn't really play well in terms of blanketing, try using these anchors


Grid points for reference on the anchors after the red anchor
X:112 Y:148
X:60 Y:188
X:48 Y:260
X:124 Y:312

[Irre's Extra]

Your map makes me laugh in a good way, I like it c: It sounds cool

[Champion]

00:29:459 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Considering I can FC all of the previous parts, when it comes to this I instantly fail. I believe it is due to the high difficulty jump 2 square jumps present one after the other, emphasised by the fact they place on 1/4 divisor

00:35:416 (3) - make this a circular flow with the next slider

00:56:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^^

Nice map, good luck on rank
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Bara-

[ Space ] wrote:

hey m4m c:

[General]

AiMod:
  • Fix these within AiMod
Folder:
  • Picture
  1. Dimensions: Good
  2. Conflict with combos: Nope c:
  3. Conflict with SB: N/A
  • Audio
  1. Bitrate: 187kbps. Good
  2. Amplification: Fine
  3. Conflict with hitsounds: None
BPM & Offset:
  1. Fine
[Easy]

00:03:927 (1) - Moving the red anchor here would create for a more consistent slider in terms of when the slider turns#

Slider

00:04:778 (4) - I would make these a 3/4 slider for the fact there is an audiable beat heard on the blue tick Would be too hard for easy. Denied for all similar things as well

00:05:629 (1) - Moving the last two anchors to these points would make the slider mirror correctly

x:216 y:256
and
x:248 y:292

00:08:182 (2) - ^^

00:09:033 (1) - Moving the two last anchors to these points for the same reason as mentioned above

x:52 y:228
and
x:72 y:264

00:11:586 (2) - ^^

An example of what you can do c:

00:14:990 (2) - ^

00:27:756 (1) - You could have a spinner here, the music sort of emphasised something along the lines of a spinner, rather than a single plain slider

00:51:586 (1) - I think this slider would better follow the music and would also play nicer in terms of flowing

Slider

00:53:288 (3) - ^, I would use the same slider here because the music doesn't really permit and significant change in regards to a slider

[Normal]

Your SV is a little high in some places, giving that it's a normal it may be harder for new players to keep up, I recommend lowering it to a more newbie friendly speed. I like 1.60SV for normals (Your Lavender Town map has it too :P)

00:01:480 (4) - Have this as the same slider type as previous, it would play nice and give your map better aesthetics as well as following the pattern of the music more

00:02:863 - Why have you missed out such an emphasised beat, map this out please.

00:13:288 (5) - I would curve this the other way round so the borders of the slider blanket the previous one

00:14:990 (3) - Make this the same as slider 4 for better consistency

00:31:161 (1) - Would this note play better with the blanket you've done for better consistency I don't really think that looks great, keeping current

Blanket

00:52:437 (2,2) - These are inconsistenct, you didn't use them before, and the music played exactly the same. I recommend adding these in the previous part.

[A Mystery's Hard]

00:22:650 (5) - I believe this will play better with the previous sliders you've had, and I think it looks better aswell

Slider

00:46:480 (1) - I would strongly recommend a blanket here, you've blanketed so much things before and it just feels wrong without one now XD

[Insane]

00:01:480 (3) - Remove the extra white anchor on the curve, it's unneeded and makes it play funny

00:11:586 (4) - Move the first white anchor after the red anchor to these co-ords to make a better flow in the curve

x:416 y:232

00:14:990 (4) - Move the first white anchor after the red anchor two grid spaces down (on tiny) for the same reasons above

00:38:820 (4) - (same anchor location as above)

x:508 y:200

00:42:224 (4) - This curve doesn't really play well in terms of blanketing, try using these anchors


Grid points for reference on the anchors after the red anchor
X:112 Y:148
X:60 Y:188
X:48 Y:260
X:124 Y:312

[Irre's Extra]

Your map makes me laugh in a good way, I like it c: It sounds cool

[Champion]

00:29:459 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Considering I can FC all of the previous parts, when it comes to this I instantly fail. I believe it is due to the high difficulty jump 2 square jumps present one after the other, emphasised by the fact they place on 1/4 divisor Toned down a little (same for below)

00:35:416 (3) - make this a circular flow with the next slider It already does O.o

00:56:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^^

Nice map, good luck on rank
Thanks!!
No reply means fixed
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,316 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
helped the champion diff, can show the log if interested
A Mystery
868 posts
Joined April 2013
A Mystery
well uhm didn't really fix anything as the sliders look fine as they are so
Tyrell
425 posts
Joined July 2014
Tyrell
Random Rain Mod!

Rain
00:19:884 (6) - This slider going the opposite direction just feels awkward although i know you're going for anti-flow, would consider changing this.
00:30:310 (1) - Feel like this would flow better facing the left. Feels weird as it is now
00:57:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I just find this part impossible to really read without replaying multiple times. I feel as if it's just too much wiggles going on. I would go for a simpler curve pattern into the hyper at the end.

Overall this is a good map and a fun one but I feel the overall slider droplets need to be arced differently as well. I am not good with sliders so I can't make many suggestions but good luck with ranking this rain.

That's it :)
MBomb
MBomb

Tyrell wrote:

Random Rain Mod!

Rain
00:19:884 (6) - This slider going the opposite direction just feels awkward although i know you're going for anti-flow, would consider changing this. - Moved it a bit closer, still antiflow though.
00:30:310 (1) - Feel like this would flow better facing the left. Feels weird as it is now - Feels fine to me.
00:57:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I just find this part impossible to really read without replaying multiple times. I feel as if it's just too much wiggles going on. I would go for a simpler curve pattern into the hyper at the end. - This is fine, in my opinion, a bit difficult, but that's what I was aiming for, for the end of the map.

Overall this is a good map and a fun one but I feel the overall slider droplets need to be arced differently as well. I am not good with sliders so I can't make many suggestions but good luck with ranking this rain.

That's it :)
Thanks for the mod!

Rain
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 111 Champion Steven.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 31171
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0
SamplesMatchPlaybackRate: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 63511
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Champion Daigo
TitleUnicode:チャンピオンダイゴ
Artist:Go Ichinose
ArtistUnicode:一之瀬剛
Creator:Baraatje123
Version:Mbomb's Heavy Rain
Source:ポケットモンスター オメガルビー・アルファサファイア
Tags:Steven Pokémon Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire Shota Kageyama GAME FREAK -Magic_Bomb_- - Magic Bomb - A_Mystery A Mystery Irreversible
BeatmapID:740055
BeatmapSetID:319636

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.8
ApproachRate:8.8
SliderMultiplier:3.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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2225,-100,4,2,1,100,0,0
3927,-100,4,1,1,100,0,1
17544,-100,4,2,1,100,0,0
31161,-100,4,1,1,100,0,1
44778,-100,4,2,1,100,0,0


[Colours]
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Combo2 : 64,0,128
Combo3 : 255,0,128
Combo4 : 255,0,0
Combo5 : 0,128,192
Combo6 : 61,112,131

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Raiden
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Raiden
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JBHyperion
osu!catch Paragon
3,885 posts
Joined September 2014
JBHyperion
Told Bara I would mod the CtB diff when I got back, so this is that.



General Comments:
  1. Song Folder: No issues
  2. Song Setup: No issues
  3. Metadata: No issues
  4. Timing: No issues
  5. Hitsounds: Significant delay on normal-hitnormal, normal-hitfinish and soft-hitclap (~10ms). The waveform isn't quite "null", but it's practically inaudible - consider trimming these down to give better hitsound response. Also, I feel 80% volume on the custom samplesets is quite overbearing, and seems to be "fighting" against the sounds in the music, rather than complimenting them - something like 50-60% sounds better to me, but ofc this is just personal preference
  6. AImod: No issues
Mbomb's Heavy Rain:
  1. Isn't the first "b" in "Mbomb" usually capitalized for your GDs? It makes no difference when searching, obviously, but it just seemed a bit weird to me
  2. Hitsound volume 100% throughout is crazy overbearing and drowns out the actual song lol - I feel 50-60% is better as suggested in General, but at the very least reduce to 80% to be consistent with the other custom-hitsounded diffs (assuming they aren't reduced)
  1. 00:12:756 (2,3) - This movement creates stoppage in flow that's slightly uncomfortable to play - perhaps move 00:12:969 (3,4,5,6) to x-344?
  2. 00:17:118 (6,7,8,9,1) - This isn't uncomfortable to play, but the slight variation in spacing leaves it looking a little odd to me - I'd consider a slightly higher spacing between 00:17:331 (9,1) to emphasise the downbeat if possible
  3. 00:19:884 (6,7) - Perhaps reduce the distance a little here? It's a little tricky to change direction whilst streaming dash, and I don't think (7) is that prominent
  4. 00:23:714 (7,8,9) - Up the spacing a little here please, it's so tempting to stream dash and overshoot
  5. 00:26:054 (4) - Consider NC here for consistency, almost all your other combos are 4 beats and the sharp curvature of the sliders really requires a NC to me. (I can excuse 00:27:756 (1) etc. due to the density, difficulty and the fact it builds up into the kiai)
  6. 00:28:395 (4,1) - Why such a low spacing here when the head of (1) is so prominent? I'd rotate these by 120 degrees clockwise and 90 degrees anticlockwise respectively to create a flowing hdash between them. Alternatively, reduce the spacing to a a regular dash to be more consistent with 00:29:246 (6,1)
  7. 00:43:076 (1,2,4) - Same deal here, the spacing is deceptively low and it just breaks the flow for me. A suggestion you could try would be (2) to x-368, (3) to x-296, Ctrl+H (4) and move to x-112 and finally (5) to x-208 - ends up something like this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3697446
  8. 00:55:948 (1) - NC here to divide up this dense section - you did at 00:28:608 (1) and this is the same rhythm so consistency suggests you NC here too
Same as I said to you when I first testplayed, I still find the SV quite uncomfortable, but it's part of the map's style I guess so yolo. Any questions, feel free to ask.

Good luck! (:
MBomb
MBomb

JBHyperion wrote:

Told Bara I would mod the CtB diff when I got back, so this is that.



General Comments:
  1. Song Folder: No issues
  2. Song Setup: No issues
  3. Metadata: No issues
  4. Timing: No issues
  5. Hitsounds: Significant delay on normal-hitnormal, normal-hitfinish and soft-hitclap (~10ms). The waveform isn't quite "null", but it's practically inaudible - consider trimming these down to give better hitsound response. Also, I feel 80% volume on the custom samplesets is quite overbearing, and seems to be "fighting" against the sounds in the music, rather than complimenting them - something like 50-60% sounds better to me, but ofc this is just personal preference
  6. AImod: No issues
Mbomb's Heavy Rain:
  1. Isn't the first "b" in "Mbomb" usually capitalized for your GDs? It makes no difference when searching, obviously, but it just seemed a bit weird to me - How did no one, even myself, not notice this lmao.
  2. Hitsound volume 100% throughout is crazy overbearing and drowns out the actual song lol - I feel 50-60% is better as suggested in General, but at the very least reduce to 80% to be consistent with the other custom-hitsounded diffs (assuming they aren't reduced) - Up to bara, he did hitsounding.
  1. 00:12:756 (2,3) - This movement creates stoppage in flow that's slightly uncomfortable to play - perhaps move 00:12:969 (3,4,5,6) to x-344? - Letting go of dash here feels natural to me, and this flows nicely without a dash here in my opinion.
  2. 00:17:118 (6,7,8,9,1) - This isn't uncomfortable to play, but the slight variation in spacing leaves it looking a little odd to me - I'd consider a slightly higher spacing between 00:17:331 (9,1) to emphasise the downbeat if possible - Did this as much as I could without changing the patterns too much.
  3. 00:19:884 (6,7) - Perhaps reduce the distance a little here? It's a little tricky to change direction whilst streaming dash, and I don't think (7) is that prominent - Changed a bit due to popular demand but tbh I still think this was fine.
  4. 00:23:714 (7,8,9) - Up the spacing a little here please, it's so tempting to stream dash and overshoot - Fixed.
  5. 00:26:054 (4) - Consider NC here for consistency, almost all your other combos are 4 beats and the sharp curvature of the sliders really requires a NC to me. (I can excuse 00:27:756 (1) etc. due to the density, difficulty and the fact it builds up into the kiai) - Done.
  6. 00:28:395 (4,1) - Why such a low spacing here when the head of (1) is so prominent? I'd rotate these by 120 degrees clockwise and 90 degrees anticlockwise respectively to create a flowing hdash between them. Alternatively, reduce the spacing to a a regular dash to be more consistent with 00:29:246 (6,1) - This is not very prominent, to be honest. (You may be getting fooled by the hitsound blending in with the music here).
  7. 00:43:076 (1,2,4) - Same deal here, the spacing is deceptively low and it just breaks the flow for me. A suggestion you could try would be (2) to x-368, (3) to x-296, Ctrl+H (4) and move to x-112 and finally (5) to x-208 - ends up something like this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3697446 Same as above, the hitsound makes the note sound stronger than it is.
  8. 00:55:948 (1) - NC here to divide up this dense section - you did at 00:28:608 (1) and this is the same rhythm so consistency suggests you NC here too - Done.
Same as I said to you when I first testplayed, I still find the SV quite uncomfortable, but it's part of the map's style I guess so yolo. Any questions, feel free to ask.

Good luck! (:
Thanks for the mod!

rain
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:チャンピオンダイゴ
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Creator:Baraatje123
Version:MBomb's Heavy Rain
Source:ポケットモンスター オメガルビー・アルファサファイア
Tags:Steven Pokémon Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire Shota Kageyama GAME FREAK -Magic_Bomb_- - Magic Bomb - A_Mystery A Mystery Irreversible
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JBHyperion
osu!catch Paragon
3,885 posts
Joined September 2014
JBHyperion

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

  1. 00:28:395 (4,1) - Why such a low spacing here when the head of (1) is so prominent? I'd rotate these by 120 degrees clockwise and 90 degrees anticlockwise respectively to create a flowing hdash between them. Alternatively, reduce the spacing to a a regular dash to be more consistent with 00:29:246 (6,1) - This is not very prominent, to be honest. (You may be getting fooled by the hitsound blending in with the music here).
  2. 00:43:076 (1,2,4) - Same deal here, the spacing is deceptively low and it just breaks the flow for me. A suggestion you could try would be (2) to x-368, (3) to x-296, Ctrl+H (4) and move to x-112 and finally (5) to x-208 - ends up something like this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3697446 Same as above, the hitsound makes the note sound stronger than it is.
Thanks for the mod!
I guess your own response right now suggests I was right about the hitsounding being too loud ;)
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Bara-
Updated
Lowered volume to 80% on MBomb's diff
Thanks!
KASUM1
336 posts
Joined December 2013
KASUM1
Hello~!

Easy

00:03:927 (1) - I think this breaks the flow here's the reason http://puu.sh/kuS3V/f965c5e982.PNG hard for beginners to react , maybe curving the slider down looks better and better flow something like that http://puu.sh/kuS66/0657f57223.jpg
00:10:735 (1) - ^
00:14:990 (2,3) - spacing error


I like this map ♥
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Bara-
Fixed all^^
autofanboy
Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion
1,591 posts
Joined January 2011
autofanboy
ayy

[ General]

  • Tags
  1. Remove '-Magic_Bomb_-'. There is already '- Magic Bomb - ' and it is enough.
  2. Remove 'A_Mystery' as well.
  3. Add 'Pokemon' for easier recognize, since most of the people don't type 'Pokémon' but 'Pokemon'.

    Background Image
  4. Change the resolution to 1366x768 instead of 1280x720.

[ MBomb's Heavy Rain]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:15:842 (1,2,3) - Add hyperdashes to them as you did the same at 00:05:629 (1,2,3)
  2. 00:43:076 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  3. 00:53:076 (7,1) - Add a hyperdash since you did the same before like 00:25:842 (3,1)

Good luck!
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Bara-
Okay!
Fixed all in General!
Thanks!
MBomb
MBomb

alienflybot wrote:

ayy

[ MBomb's Heavy Rain]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:15:842 (1,2,3) - Add hyperdashes to them as you did the same at 00:05:629 (1,2,3) - Done.
  2. 00:43:076 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - Done.
  3. 00:53:076 (7,1) - Add a hyperdash since you did the same before like 00:25:842 (3,1) - Done.

Good luck!
Thanks for the mod!

rain
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TitleUnicode:チャンピオンダイゴ
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ArtistUnicode:一之瀬剛
Creator:Baraatje123
Version:MBomb's Heavy Rain
Source:ポケットモンスター オメガルビー・アルファサファイア
Tags:Steven Pokemon Pokémon Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire Shota Kageyama GAME FREAK - Magic Bomb - A Mystery Irreversible
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384,192,29671,2,0,L|304:152,2,90,0|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,29990,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,30097,2,0,L|304:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,30310,6,0,L|304:152,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,30629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,30735,1,12,0:0:0:0:
112,192,30842,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,30948,1,12,0:0:0:0:
368,192,31161,6,0,P|480:112|336:88,1,360,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,31799,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,32012,2,0,P|24:80|24:32,1,270
256,192,32650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,192,32863,5,6,0:0:0:0:
24,192,33182,1,6,0:0:0:0:
440,192,33501,1,14,0:0:0:0:
360,192,33714,2,0,L|440:152,2,90,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,192,34139,2,0,L|8:152,2,90,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,34459,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,192,34565,6,0,L|16:24,1,360,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,35203,2,0,L|88:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,192,35416,2,0,P|384:176|480:64,1,270,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,36054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36267,5,6,0:0:0:0:
16,192,36586,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,192,36905,1,14,0:0:0:0:
320,192,37118,2,0,L|400:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,37331,2,0,L|400:152,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,37544,2,0,L|208:152,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,192,37756,2,0,L|207:152,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,37969,6,0,L|48:64,1,360,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,38608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,38820,2,0,P|496:144|368:64,1,270,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,39246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,39352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,39459,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,39565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,39671,6,0,L|504:80,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,39990,2,0,L|176:80,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,40310,2,0,L|504:80,1,180,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,40629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,40735,2,0,L|272:152,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,40948,2,0,L|272:152,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,41161,2,0,L|112:152,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,41373,6,0,B|368:168|368:168|128:32,1,360,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,42012,2,0,L|80:128,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,42225,2,0,L|496:64,1,270
400,192,42650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,42863,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,43076,5,6,0:0:0:0:
480,192,43395,1,6,0:0:0:0:
480,192,43501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,43714,2,0,L|160:104,1,180,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,192,44033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,44139,2,0,L|88:136,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,44405,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,44459,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,192,44565,2,0,L|48:152,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44778,6,0,B|496:64,1,270,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,45416,2,0,L|160:104,1,180,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,45735,2,0,L|16:128,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,46267,2,0,L|272:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,46480,5,4,0:0:0:0:
208,192,46693,2,0,L|128:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,46905,2,0,L|248:168,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,47118,2,0,L|48:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,47331,2,0,L|224:152,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,47650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,47756,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,192,47969,2,0,L|448:128,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,48182,6,0,L|168:128,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,48501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,48820,2,0,L|128:128,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,49033,2,0,L|384:152,2,90,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,49352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,49459,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,49671,2,0,L|360:136,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,49884,6,0,L|16:104,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,50203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,50310,2,0,L|240:152,2,90,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,50629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,50735,1,4,0:0:0:0:
88,192,50788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,50842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,50948,2,0,L|208:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,51161,2,0,L|224:152,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,51373,2,0,L|48:152,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,51586,6,0,L|480:104,1,270,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,52012,2,0,L|480:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,52225,2,0,L|144:104,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,192,52544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,52650,2,0,L|216:136,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,192,52863,2,0,L|64:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,53076,2,0,L|216:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,53288,6,0,L|184:8,1,270,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,53714,2,0,L|32:152,1,90
208,192,53927,2,0,L|368:104,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,192,54246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,54352,2,0,L|296:136,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,192,54565,2,0,L|448:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,54778,2,0,L|296:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,54990,5,14,0:0:0:0:
16,192,55203,2,0,L|96:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,55416,2,0,L|256:152,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,55629,2,0,L|256:152,2,90,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,55948,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,56001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56054,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,192,56161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,192,56267,2,0,L|400:152,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56480,2,0,L|400:152,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,56693,6,0,L|112:152,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,192,56905,2,0,L|111:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57118,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57331,2,0,L|272:152,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,57490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,57544,6,0,L|272:152,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,57703,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,57756,1,12,0:0:0:0:
160,192,57863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,57969,1,12,0:0:0:0:
160,192,58076,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,192,58182,1,12,0:0:0:0:
384,192,58395,6,0,P|480:96|328:72,1,360,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,59033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,59246,2,0,L|256:40,1,270,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,59671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,59884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60097,6,0,L|0:128,2,90,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60416,2,0,L|320:128,2,90,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60735,2,0,L|128:128,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60948,2,0,L|128:128,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,61161,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,192,61373,2,0,L|400:136,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,61586,2,0,L|304:136,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61799,12,0,63501,0:0:0:0:
Bara-
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Bara-
Updated
autofanboy
Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion
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autofanboy
yo

Appled
Bara-
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Bara-
Thanks!!!!!!
Bara-
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Topic Starter
Bara-
Update:
Added SB
Redownload for it
It has both diffspecific as normal SB things

Also, it seems as if it's misaligned in the editor
When playing, it looks normally!
lit120
3,272 posts
Joined August 2013
lit120
hi

[General]
  1. AiMod
[Easy]
  1. 00:26:054 (1) - remove clap
  2. 00:27:756 (1) - finish
  3. 00:52:863 (2) - this one touches the HP Bar on my 800x600 view. lower it
[Normal]
  1. AiMod told me that Background.png is missing
  2. 00:03:927 (1) - DS
  3. 00:37:118 (5,1) - better fix this blanket
  4. 00:39:671 (4,5) - ^
[A Mystery's Hard]
  1. 00:10:735 (1,2) - almost neat blanket for me
  2. 00:14:139 (1,2) - well this... almost perfect blanket here
  3. 00:20:948 (1,2) - small fix on this blanket
  4. 00:24:352 (3,4) - almost neat blanket here
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:735 (1,2) - try to do 2 blankets rather than having 1 blanket only
  2. 00:41:373 (1,4) - it looks like this blanket is almost neat
[Extra]
  1. 00:01:480 (4) - random slider whistle
  2. 00:11:373 (2,3) - almost neat blanket here
  3. 00:37:225 (2,1) - ^
  4. 00:38:608 (2,3) - ^
[Evil guy with CS7 on it]
  1. RIP me, i can't pass this LOL
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
Bara-

-Hakurei- wrote:

hi

[General]
  1. AiMod
[Easy]
  1. 00:26:054 (1) - remove clap
  2. 00:27:756 (1) - finish
  3. 00:52:863 (2) - this one touches the HP Bar on my 800x600 view. lower it
[Normal]
  1. AiMod told me that Background.png is missing
  2. 00:03:927 (1) - DS SV change, it's fine
  3. 00:37:118 (5,1) - better fix this blanket
  4. 00:39:671 (4,5) - ^
[A Mystery's Hard]
  1. 00:10:735 (1,2) - almost neat blanket for me
  2. 00:14:139 (1,2) - well this... almost perfect blanket here
  3. 00:20:948 (1,2) - small fix on this blanket
  4. 00:24:352 (3,4) - almost neat blanket here
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:735 (1,2) - try to do 2 blankets rather than having 1 blanket only
  2. 00:41:373 (1,4) - it looks like this blanket is almost neat Due to fading this blanket can't be seen ,thus not required
[Extra]
  1. 00:01:480 (4) - random slider whistle
  2. 00:11:373 (2,3) - almost neat blanket here
  3. 00:37:225 (2,1) - ^
  4. 00:38:608 (2,3) - ^
[Evil guy with CS7 on it]
  1. RIP me, i can't pass this LOL
Thanks!
Fixed almost all!

Also, had I read AiMod, I would fix the SB immediately
I had wrong names (BG.jpg=/=Background.jpg)
Bluekrait
203 posts
Joined March 2014
Bluekrait
Hey Baraatje!

Really digging your style here, especially the extra. It looks like you already got quite a few mods, so I'm doing my best to point out whatever's left. Not going to bother with new combos or blankets unless it's something big.

[Easy]
  1. 00:17:331 (2) and 00:44:565 (2) - Are circles placed on red ticks like these ok for Easy difficulty?
[Normal]
  1. 00:02:225 (1,2,3) - The way these are not exactly parallel kind of irks me. Make them exactly parallel or stagger them a little more.
  2. 00:03:714 (4,1) - Increase DS between these two (they're practically touching.
[A Mystery's Hard]
  • Other than blanketing issues, I'm going to make a suggestion for a new flow pattern that you've used throughout this whole diff. Be weary, this is just my opinion and you don't need to make the change if you disagree.
  1. 00:03:927 (1,2,3) - This one right here. This first one is actually quite nice. The cursor travels the whole length of slider 1, then goes to 2, then 3 in a somewhat circular motion.
  2. 00:07:331 (1,2,3) - This one is a bit odd. You're not making full use of slider 1 because of where slider 3 is placed Here's a flow pic. The red circle I drew denotes a dead hold, meaning players will just hover their cursor around there for the duration of the slider before moving to circle 2. I found it a bit awkward to play in accordance with the music, but again, subjective.
  3. 00:10:735 (1,2,3) - Here's another one I'm not too fond of. Picture. The way the music plays out, I want to be able to go through the full length of slider one and smoothly transfer to 2, then 3. Here's a possible option. I took advantage of the double reverse slider to change the flow direction. With this, we keep the cursor moving in a constant circular motion with the 3 acting as either a dead hold or for cursor dancing enthusiasts, I've made an orange path they will most likely follow.
  4. 00:14:139 (1,2,3) - I like this. Don't think I need to paint anymore cursor paths for you since hopefully at this point, you can predict what it will look like.
  5. 00:26:054 (1,2) - The only blanket that bothered me on my first playthrough.
  6. 00:31:161 (1,2,3) - This is pretty much the same as the second pattern we just went over.
  7. 00:34:565 (1,2,3) - Out of all the 1,2,3 combos, this one is my favorite.
  8. 00:37:969 (1,2,3) - Same thing again...
  9. 00:41:373 (1,2,3) - This one is drastically better, playing much smoother because all you did was changed the direction of slider 3. So the first movement is clockwise through slider 1, then a larger counterclockwise movement through slider 3.
  10. 00:53:288 (1,2,3) - This one is meh.
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:990 (2) - Maybe tuck this under 00:09:671 (1) - instead of 00:09:352 (1) -
  2. 00:23:501 (3,4,5) and 00:50:735 (3,4,5) - were a bit hard to read, especially the second one since it's a dark purple color.
  3. 00:44:778 (1,2) - Increase DS between these two.
[Extra]
  • Honestly, nothing big here. I'm just being super picky.
  1. 00:30:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Was hard to read for me on the first couple plays (thought it was a continuous stream with huge spacing near the end).
  2. 00:57:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above
  3. 01:01:373 (1,2,3,4,1) - I totally butchered this a few times lol.
[Irre's Extra]
  • While I really am not a fan of such small circles, I will try to be as objective as possible.
  1. The first thing I noticed was that the majority of the last half of the song felt like the beginning except flipped upside down. To me, this seems like just laziness.
  2. 00:07:331 (1,2,1,2) - I played this as just a 1/8 stream because the notes overlap in such a way making the next kind of hard to read. If that wasn't the intention, maybe consider changing the direction of the slider ends while keeping the starts in the same or similar positions kind of like 00:10:735 (1,2,3,4)
  3. 00:14:139 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above.
  4. 00:27:810 (1,1) - I think there should be a note on the blue tick in between the spinner end and circle 1.
  5. 00:34:565 (1,2,1,2) - Here is where I noticed things are familiar to what I just played. 00:36:267 (1,2,3) - Confirms my suspicions. While I'd prefer if you remapped it, I know time is valuable and people hate being told to remap things. If you originally intended the last half to have the same patterns as the beginning, you can just ignore this and my first comment. In my opinion however, it plays dull because you just copied the exact same positions from the beginning and flipped them.
That's it! Baraatje, I really enjoyed playing your diffs, especially the extra.
Last edited by Bluekrait , edited 1 time in total.
A Mystery
868 posts
Joined April 2013
A Mystery
You're somewhat right about these flow issues, but as this map of mine is pretty old, and it would require to move pretty much everything around it I don't think it's worth it at all. Also, the slider you hit after the circle in the blanket should not really affect flow that much, there's still a 1/1 gap and you are definitely not forced to play the sliders in the way you visualized it.

Baraatje can you fix that little blanket for me
Bluekrait
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Joined March 2014
Bluekrait
A Mystery
868 posts
Joined April 2013
A Mystery
Well ripperoonies then
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
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Akasha-
rank please :D
MBomb
MBomb
Welp rip ;w;

Might do my own set, but it's a shame that the standard diffs wouldn't be rankable with that set unless I found other mappers (Though if the other gders want to, I would be happy to take their diffs).

If you don't want me to do this, bara, just tell me in pm.
neuro
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neuro
love the extra diff!!!
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