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Ciyus Miapah
oh yeah since materialize is new diff i think i can say something important for this map

[Materialize]
  1. 00:26:897 (2,3,1) - kinda hard to believe sudden jumpin here i think, just put 1/1 pattern on this slow part is better
  2. almost parts looks really good with jumps and streams, i like it
  3. 01:38:320 (2,3) - fix this overlap can make visual more good, move 01:38:666 (3) - to 92|296 can make this jump more stable without any overlap
  4. 01:59:666 (9,10,11,12,1) - well this 1/4 slider can be moved a bit to make sure some flow readed properly (move 01:59:897 (11) - to 336|244 and move 02:00:012 (12) - to 244|184 to provide some straight curve flow at 01:59:897 (11,12,1) - and make some zigzag pattern at 01:59:782 (10,11) - become better.)
  5. 02:14:897 (1,2,3) - im sure your pattern you used is swapped, it will be better if you CTRL+G the pattern
  6. 02:29:205 (9,10,11,12,1) - try this pattern placement http://puu.sh/lbkgf/6abd00e5ec.jpg (best circular style for this map)
  7. 03:19:859 (2) - looks this can be better if you stack this circle to 03:19:512 (1) - slider end like 03:22:282 (5,6) - (and because it has vocal too, maybe put jump to slider can make that pattern more interesting
  8. 03:47:090 (2) - the jumps on 03:47:205 (1,2) - directly can make some missreading on that pattern, this should be fixed by moving 03:47:090 (2) - to 160|336 to make sure players can read 03:47:205 (1,2) - this 1/1 pattern properly, yeah slightly increasing players reactions on anti jump pattern
  9. 04:30:581 - dam son this epic parts !!
  10. 05:32:369 (14,1) - looks this spacing a little bit to high, you can put 0.70x as distance for that pattern
  11. 05:55:620 (2,1) - not sure if people can reach this on first look (but idk how to make ideal flow here, im trying this jump pattern and looks it can be good i guess http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3921682, code thing:
    156,49,355043,2,0,P|108:23|39:27,1,95,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    54,232,355273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    81,118,355389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    146,275,355504,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    355,210,355620,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    296,352,355735,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    340,132,355851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    384,300,355966,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    216,316,356082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    248,140,356197,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    436,224,356312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    (this one can be good zigzag + a bit square flow i guess
  12. 06:24:120 - im sure 90% players press esc button on this part (slow part meme lol)
  13. 06:19:389 - put notes in here, support drum patterning
  14. epic slow parts, inb4 got miss :lol:

sorry if this mod too short, because i think this map can be ready to go, im really sure of it
please rank this map
see ya later o/
Topic Starter
Sangzin

Fort wrote:

oh yeah since materialize is new diff i think i can say something important for this map

[Materialize]
  1. 00:26:897 (2,3,1) - kinda hard to believe sudden jumpin here i think, just put 1/1 pattern on this slow part is better - alight
  2. almost parts looks really good with jumps and streams, i like it - waaaaa thanks!!
  3. 01:38:320 (2,3) - fix this overlap can make visual more good, move 01:38:666 (3) - to 92|296 can make this jump more stable without any overlap - Fixed
  4. 01:59:666 (9,10,11,12,1) - well this 1/4 slider can be moved a bit to make sure some flow readed properly (move 01:59:897 (11) - to 336|244 and move 02:00:012 (12) - to 244|184 to provide some straight curve flow at 01:59:897 (11,12,1) - and make some zigzag pattern at 01:59:782 (10,11) - become better.) - Sounds good.
  5. 02:14:897 (1,2,3) - im sure your pattern you used is swapped, it will be better if you CTRL+G the pattern - Hmm...I want to make this pattern slider first.
  6. 02:29:205 (9,10,11,12,1) - try this pattern placement http://puu.sh/lbkgf/6abd00e5ec.jpg (best circular style for this map) - Prefer this pattern now.
  7. 03:19:859 (2) - looks this can be better if you stack this circle to 03:19:512 (1) - slider end like 03:22:282 (5,6) - (and because it has vocal too, maybe put jump to slider can make that pattern more interesting - Fixed
  8. 03:47:090 (2) - the jumps on 03:47:205 (1,2) - directly can make some missreading on that pattern, this should be fixed by moving 03:47:090 (2) - to 160|336 to make sure players can read 03:47:205 (1,2) - this 1/1 pattern properly, yeah slightly increasing players reactions on anti jump pattern - I'm not sure this can be missreaded, but this place looks good.
  9. 04:30:581 - dam son this epic parts !!
  10. 05:32:369 (14,1) - looks this spacing a little bit to high, you can put 0.70x as distance for that pattern - Yep
  11. 05:55:620 (2,1) - not sure if people can reach this on first look (but idk how to make ideal flow here, im trying this jump pattern and looks it can be good i guess http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3921682, code thing: -
    THIS
    IS
    AWESOME!!!!!!
    156,49,355043,2,0,P|108:23|39:27,1,95,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    54,232,355273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    81,118,355389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    146,275,355504,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    355,210,355620,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    296,352,355735,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    340,132,355851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    384,300,355966,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    216,316,356082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    248,140,356197,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    436,224,356312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    (this one can be good zigzag + a bit square flow i guess
  12. 06:24:120 - im sure 90% players press esc button on this part (slow part meme lol) - then let thew press esc! wtf?!
  13. 06:19:389 - put notes in here, support drum patterning - It looks hard to read if I place anywhere imo.
  14. epic slow parts, inb4 got miss :lol: - :o but I want to maintain this slow part

sorry if this mod too short, because i think this map can be ready to go, im really sure of it
please rank this map
see ya later o/
Thanks for your mod! :) I'll rank this map asap!
F D Flourite
Hi, from your forum pm request.
Yes, I want to do M4M, and I'll pm you my map to mod.
Since your map is pretty good and kinda ready, forgive me from being picky and personal.

[Materialize]
  1. Disable Widescreen Support.
  2. A bit disappointed that most of hitsound you used in the passionate part is hitnormal. Kinda plain and boring for me.
  3. 01:01:282 (7,8,9,10) - This Zig-Zag makes me feel uncomfortable. Maybe you should try to move 8 upward and 9 downward to make the flow smoother.
  4. 01:03:820 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - The rhythm here actually varies. Even you want to use 1/4, try to make something different to distinguish the actual rhythm. For example, two 1/4 sliders to replace 01:04:282 (1,2,3,4) - .
  5. 01:05:955 - And you left a noise blank here. Try to cover it?
  6. 01:18:243 (7,8,9) - Move 8 a bit rightward will make the flow better.
  7. 02:08:551 (5) - The slider tail is out of the mapping area and definitely touch the HP bar. You can use Ctrl+G to check the coordinate.
  8. 02:57:128 (7,3) - Not perfectly stacked :p
  9. 03:32:320 (6) - Maybe it is better to stack this on 5? I want a jump from 6 to 1.
  10. 03:46:628 (2,1) - I'm not pretty sure about the flow here. The angle is big and the distance is short. Maybe swap 03:46:743 (1,2) - and then swap 03:46:974 (1,2) - to make flow like Zig-Zag? Or at least I would recommend you to move 03:46:743 (1) - a bit leftward.
  11. 04:23:889 (4) - Move it rightward to make the distance between 04:23:889 (4,1) - is larger? That will be more good-looking.
  12. 04:56:197 (4,5) - Try to improve the blanket?
  13. 05:40:735 (5,7) - Embarassing overlap. Just make the overlap part more or disappear.
  14. 06:05:427 (3,1) - blanket
  15. 06:28:749 (1) - Strongly recommend you use a mute sliderslide this part. The current sliderslide hitsound really doesn't fit the music.


Overall it is definitely a good map. Good luck on ranking it! :)
Topic Starter
Sangzin

F D Flourite wrote:

Hi, from your forum pm request.
Yes, I want to do M4M, and I'll pm you my map to mod.
Since your map is pretty good and kinda ready, forgive me from being picky and personal.

[Materialize]
  1. Disable Widescreen Support. - Oops Fixed
  2. A bit disappointed that most of hitsound you used in the passionate part is hitnormal. Kinda plain and boring for me.
  3. 01:01:282 (7,8,9,10) - This Zig-Zag makes me feel uncomfortable. Maybe you should try to move 8 upward and 9 downward to make the flow smoother. - Okay
  4. 01:03:820 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - The rhythm here actually varies. Even you want to use 1/4, try to make something different to distinguish the actual rhythm. For example, two 1/4 sliders to replace 01:04:282 (1,2,3,4) - . - No. Prefer now.
  5. 01:05:955 - And you left a noise blank here. Try to cover it? - underbeat again....Fixed
  6. 01:18:243 (7,8,9) - Move 8 a bit rightward will make the flow better. - Okay
  7. 02:08:551 (5) - The slider tail is out of the mapping area and definitely touch the HP bar. You can use Ctrl+G to check the coordinate. - Fixed my own way
  8. 02:57:128 (7,3) - Not perfectly stacked :p - Fixed
  9. 03:32:320 (6) - Maybe it is better to stack this on 5? I want a jump from 6 to 1. Sweet jump XD
  10. 03:46:628 (2,1) - I'm not pretty sure about the flow here. The angle is big and the distance is short. Maybe swap 03:46:743 (1,2) - and 03:46:974 (1,2) - to make flow like Zig-Zag? Or at least I would recommend you to move 03:46:743 (1) - a bit leftward. - swapping looks make too big jump, so I moved that one for now.
  11. 04:23:889 (4) - Move it rightward to make the distance between 04:23:889 (4,1) - is larger? That will be more good-looking. - Nice
  12. 04:56:197 (4,5) - Try to improve the blanket? - Nah, I'll keep this
  13. 05:40:735 (5,7) - Embarassing overlap. Just make the overlap part more or disappear. - Yep
  14. 06:05:427 (3,1) - blanket - okay
  15. 06:28:749 (1) - Strongly recommend you use a mute sliderslide this part. The current sliderslide hitsound really doesn't fit the music.- - Gonna put silent one.


Overall it is definitely a good map. Good luck on ranking it! :)
Thanks~ I'll mod yours soon! :)
Reillia
[마테리얼라이즈]

01:17:436 (3,6,8,9) - 8을 3꼬리에 9를 6꼬리에 스택시키면 좀더 치기 편할듯
01:37:051 (6,7) - 갑자기 흐름이 끊긴다는 느낌이 드는데 배치가 7을 8꼬리에 스택시키는건 어떨까요?
03:19:512 (1,2) - 위랑 비슷하게 끊긴다는 느낌이 듬 03:19:974 (3) - 얘를 컨 g로 뒤집고 꼬리에 2를 스택시켜보는건?
03:39:128 (2) - 배치는 이게더 이쁠듯 X: 107 Y: 192
04:41:197 (5,6) - 6번슬라를 그냥 5번을 180도 돌린모양으로 잡는게 이뻐보일듯
04:56:197 (4,5) - 담요해주시면 이쁠듯
05:20:889 (8,1) - 꼬리에 담요상태가?
Topic Starter
Sangzin

[C u r i] wrote:

[마테리얼라이즈]

01:17:436 (3,6,8,9) - 8을 3꼬리에 9를 6꼬리에 스택시키면 좀더 치기 편할듯 - 둘다 언스택노린거라 냅두겠습니다
01:37:051 (6,7) - 갑자기 흐름이 끊긴다는 느낌이 드는데 배치가 7을 8꼬리에 스택시키는건 어떨까요? - 디스턴스도 좀 그렇고, 이맵에서는 서클 후 슬라이더끝으로 스택시키는건 좀 그러니 냅두겠습니다
03:19:512 (1,2) - 위랑 비슷하게 끊긴다는 느낌이 듬 03:19:974 (3) - 얘를 컨 g로 뒤집고 꼬리에 2를 스택시켜보는건? - 아까랑 같습니다
03:39:128 (2) - 배치는 이게더 이쁠듯 X: 107 Y: 192 - 굳
04:41:197 (5,6) - 6번슬라를 그냥 5번을 180도 돌린모양으로 잡는게 이뻐보일듯 - 그렇긴 하겠네요 수정
04:56:197 (4,5) - 담요해주시면 이쁠듯 - 이건 위의 모딩에서도 언급했는데 그냥 안하는게 좋네요
05:20:889 (8,1) - 꼬리에 담요상태가? - 히익
모딩 감사합니다~
그리고 쿠도스는 이미 확정됬습니다
이시점에서 이미 쿠도스 확정 ㅋㅅㅋ
sammish
Yo hey just dropping a mod here (sorry for nitpicking)

Realize
00:10:282 (1) - A bit too curved/contorted, makes it look ugly imo
00:17:666 (1) - ^ (Maybe make each curve/angle more pronounced and use less curves)
01:20:089 (6,7,8) - Personally feel that the slight jump is unnecessary, liked 01:12:589 (5,6,7,8) - more
01:22:051 (7) - I think it would look better like this,

01:33:589 (1,2,3) - switch 2 and 3
03:18:012 (2,3,4) - Its a bit sharp, I feel this flows better

03:40:512 (4) - move this to the left, so it's in line with 5
04:35:889 (8) - Maybe move this up so that it transitions to the 9 nicer
04:40:504 (3) - Moving left can avoid the overlap
04:45:697 (2) - I think this looks nicer flipped upside down
05:30:581 (1) - Slider arrow shouldn't be shorter than its bow, looks ugly and you can't see the end
05:48:927 (10,11) - Equal distance to the slider pls, shift down and left seems to help
06:09:235 (6,1) - you could turn this into a sliderbow
06:39:825 (1) - ^
06:43:979 (3,4) - This feels nicer as a repeat slider, adds variation

Materialize
I can't mod 6*, sorry

EDIT: Overall it plays really well, I enjoyed it :) Good luck on ranking this are you doing m4m?
Topic Starter
Sangzin

Sammish wrote:

Yo hey just dropping a mod here (sorry for nitpicking)

Realize
00:10:282 (1) - A bit too curved/contorted, makes it look ugly imo
00:17:666 (1) - ^ (Maybe make each curve/angle more pronounced and use less curves) - I don't think so...
01:20:089 (6,7,8) - Personally feel that the slight jump is unnecessary, liked 01:12:589 (5,6,7,8) - more - It emphasizes guitar sound, so I think it's necessary
01:22:051 (7) - I think it would look better like this, - Okay

01:33:589 (1,2,3) - switch 2 and 3 - Keep for now, because flows looks bad imo
03:18:012 (2,3,4) - Its a bit sharp, I feel this flows better - good

03:40:512 (4) - move this to the left, so it's in line with 5 - yep
04:35:889 (8) - Maybe move this up so that it transitions to the 9 nicer - It has danger of touch HP bar, I downed this
04:40:504 (3) - Moving left can avoid the overlap - This overlap is intended.
04:45:697 (2) - I think this looks nicer flipped upside down - I think not
05:30:581 (1) - Slider arrow shouldn't be shorter than its bow, looks ugly and you can't see the end - k changed pattern
05:48:927 (10,11) - Equal distance to the slider pls, shift down and left seems to help - What the....................
06:09:235 (6,1) - you could turn this into a sliderbow
06:39:825 (1) - ^ - no. Keep this
06:43:979 (3,4) - This feels nicer as a repeat slider, adds variation - I want to make them equal timing

Materialize
I can't mod 6*, sorry
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

EDIT: Overall it plays really well, I enjoyed it :) Good luck on ranking this are you doing m4m?
PM me XD
Thanks for your mod~
Monstrata
[Materialize]

  1. 00:28:743 (1,2) - something like this would flow nicely. slow section anyways so good flow is always nice
  2. 00:36:590 (2) - If you could make the head-part of the slider (loop) look less squarish that'd be nice!
  3. 00:57:128 (4,1,2) - Fix this spacing here? 4>1 could be bigger or equal in ds
  4. 01:05:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm feels weird for me xP I would just stick with the 5-stream rhythm you have going because musically not a lot changes here, but you've picked an entirely new rhythm
  5. 01:08:436 (4) - NC here? Would fit your pattern well
  6. 01:17:666 (4,5,6) - Weird to stack them when you usually make these 1/2's jumps. Since they aren't really prominent 1/2's i would just use like normal 1.00 DS
  7. 01:28:281 (2) - NC'ing would help with the rhythm so players know the stream begins on a white tick not a blue one.
  8. 02:00:474 (2,3) - This flow is really sharp when you consider the circular flow you had going with 1>2
  9. 02:14:897 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+G the rhythm it makes a lot more sense since you can clearly hear another drum hit on 02:15:012 - but not on 02:15:243 - Applies to everything here.
  10. 02:59:205 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - This section was surprisingly simple despite the clear drum beats. You can keep i guess, but it just felt simple haha.
  11. 03:00:820 (5,6) - These two drums are different if you listen, they sound much stronger. You can capture this with a larger jump, or even NC'ing those two.
  12. 03:21:243 (9,1) - Visually this doesn't really flow well because after 9 you are going downward, but slider 1 is pointed upward initially
  13. 03:46:628 (2,1) - I would make this jump even bigger. Generally people expect the jump onto a new NC to be bigger, it would create more emphasis anyways and i think it fits nicely here.
  14. 03:53:436 (2,1,2) - Not really liking the spacing here
  15. 04:16:480 (1,1,1) - I would go with sliders instead. with spinners you can spin really fast and because players are inclined to spin really fast, it doesn't really fit the section. You want players to play something really slow. Which is why the extremely slow sliders on the ranked version of this song fit so well.
  16. 04:34:273 (1,2,3) - Pretty random switch to 1/2 rhythm here...
  17. 05:09:120 (7,1) - Could make this jump a lot bigger imo. Hold sliders are treated like 1/2 gaps anyways.
  18. 06:17:543 - There's a note here too if you want to map that.


[Realize]

  1. 00:56:436 (1,2,3) - You use 1.1x spacing here, but 1.00 for the rest
  2. 01:08:205 (3) - I would make this a 1/2 slider so you can have another circle beginning on the downbeat.
  3. 02:14:897 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Niiiiice
  4. 02:17:666 (1) - I think this is too simple though. same with 02:21:359 (5,6) -
  5. 03:29:666 (4,5,6,7) - If you could fix the overlaps they would look realy nice!
  6. 04:44:658 (5) - I would make this 1/2 too, and make 04:44:889 - a circle.
  7. 04:58:966 (7,8,9) - This triplet was really sudden for me D: i would have prefered just 1/2 rhythm since this isn't Kiai.


Good luck Sangzin!
Topic Starter
Sangzin

monstrata wrote:

[Materialize]

  1. 00:28:743 (1,2) - something like this would flow nicely. slow section anyways so good flow is always nice - Okay
  2. 00:36:590 (2) - If you could make the head-part of the slider (loop) look less squarish that'd be nice! - I hope this is what you want.
  3. 00:57:128 (4,1,2) - Fix this spacing here? 4>1 could be bigger or equal in ds - Yep
  4. 01:05:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm feels weird for me xP I would just stick with the 5-stream rhythm you have going because musically not a lot changes here, but you've picked an entirely new rhythm - I have the time to think about this part...
  5. 01:08:436 (4) - NC here? Would fit your pattern well - This NC looks inconsistent
  6. 01:17:666 (4,5,6) - Weird to stack them when you usually make these 1/2's jumps. Since they aren't really prominent 1/2's i would just use like normal 1.00 DS - Not for me. It fits with drum and guitar sounds imo.
  7. 01:28:281 (2) - NC'ing would help with the rhythm so players know the stream begins on a white tick not a blue one. - Okay
  8. 02:00:474 (2,3) - This flow is really sharp when you consider the circular flow you had going with 1>2 - try it
  9. 02:14:897 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+G the rhythm it makes a lot more sense since you can clearly hear another drum hit on 02:15:012 - but not on 02:15:243 - Applies to everything here. - I'm not sure this rhythm makes more sense. Also, I mapped this part similar to Realize diff. And lastly, it helps to emphasize hitsound on 02:15:359 (1) - part
  10. 02:59:205 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - This section was surprisingly simple despite the clear drum beats. You can keep i guess, but it just felt simple haha. - Sadly, This part have no 1/4 beats :(
  11. 03:00:820 (5,6) - These two drums are different if you listen, they sound much stronger. You can capture this with a larger jump, or even NC'ing those two. - Yep. Fixed
  12. 03:21:243 (9,1) - Visually this doesn't really flow well because after 9 you are going downward, but slider 1 is pointed upward initially - Fixed this a little bit
  13. 03:46:628 (2,1) - I would make this jump even bigger. Generally people expect the jump onto a new NC to be bigger, it would create more emphasis anyways and i think it fits nicely here. - Consider it. I can't decide now.
  14. 03:53:436 (2,1,2) - Not really liking the spacing here - changed spacing
  15. 04:16:480 (1,1,1) - I would go with sliders instead. with spinners you can spin really fast and because players are inclined to spin really fast, it doesn't really fit the section. You want players to play something really slow. Which is why the extremely slow sliders on the ranked version of this song fit so well.
    - Hmm...Sliders can work maybe, but I don't think slider can work properly. Also, I want to make difference with ranked version, but if someone point this thing, I may change this part.
  16. 04:34:273 (1,2,3) - Pretty random switch to 1/2 rhythm here... - I don't think so....
  17. 05:09:120 (7,1) - Could make this jump a lot bigger imo. Hold sliders are treated like 1/2 gaps anyways. - I think players can play this part.
  18. 06:17:543 - There's a note here too if you want to map that. - Fixed


[Realize]

  1. 00:56:436 (1,2,3) - You use 1.1x spacing here, but 1.00 for the rest - Fixed
  2. 01:08:205 (3) - I would make this a 1/2 slider so you can have another circle beginning on the downbeat. - Yep
  3. 02:14:897 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Niiiiice - Thaaaaanks!
  4. 02:17:666 (1) - I think this is too simple though. same with 02:21:359 (5,6) - - Okay
  5. 03:29:666 (4,5,6,7) - If you could fix the overlaps they would look realy nice! - Okay
  6. 04:44:658 (5) - I would make this 1/2 too, and make 04:44:889 - a circle. - I don't find the reason why i mapped.
  7. 04:58:966 (7,8,9) - This triplet was really sudden for me D: i would have prefered just 1/2 rhythm since this isn't Kiai. - 1/4 reapeat slider instead. I want 1/4 beats :3


Good luck Sangzin!
I thinks I reject many thing on materialize diff. But what i accept is really cool! Thanks for your mod! :)
hanyuu_nanodesu
Okay, maybe I'll try...
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[Realize]
  1. 00:13:513 feel kinda weird without anything here... maybe add a note would be better
  2. 00:29:666 (3) - Why don't you make this point more to the next note? .-. http://puu.sh/ll3xh/edf8da84ff.jpg or maybe move the next note so it would form a direct flow with this slider
  3. 00:40:743 (2) - Maybe you could mirror (1) and make it like this http://puu.sh/ll3Bc/aa5e312320.jpg then move 00:41:666 (1,2) - so it would be placed at the center. It should give a nice symmetry feeling -w-
  4. 01:07:397 (3) - Give it a little jump to the next slider to indicate the SV change... Maybe like this http://puu.sh/ll3GD/548a777f69.jpg
  5. 02:29:205 (3) - Uhh, maybe make this the same distance as (1) to (2)... placing it too close to (2) don't really make sense :/
  6. 03:57:128 (1) - Following the violin? .-. maybe at least make a red anchor here 03:57:358 to support the piano
  7. 04:03:820 (1,2,3) - I think the rhythm would be better like this http://puu.sh/ll42u/58bea9939a.jpg
  8. 04:19:025 (1) - Use higher beat snap divisor (I think 1/8 should be sufficient) so this spinner would last longer, since currently the sound still goes on after the spinner end
  9. 02:59:205 (1,2) - I think this kind of stack would be pretty confusing after a 1/4 pattern... I suggest to just unstack them. BTW the rhythm is not that nice either, at big white tick, the violin goes long so it would be better to start a slider http://puu.sh/ll4lV/273ecddd65.jpg after that maybe you can stack the circles
  10. 03:02:782 (1,2) - this kinda feel weird... I like it like this better http://puu.sh/ll4oP/7276a6c8a4.jpg pretty (too) basic maybe...
  11. 03:46:974 (4) - The SV reduce here don't really make sense for me. Actually the music stay the same so it's better to keep SV the same. And suddenly it goes slower, it's alright because the music does that, it would make the map more dynamic. And make it more tricky too -w-
  12. Even with 9.2, the AR still feel pretty slow :/ but I think it's alright, no need to increase it since it might hurt the diff spread

Pretty good -w-
Good luck ^^
Topic Starter
Sangzin

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Okay, maybe I'll try...
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[Realize]
  1. 00:13:513 feel kinda weird without anything here... maybe add a note would be better - okay
  2. 00:29:666 (3) - Why don't you make this point more to the next note? .-. http://puu.sh/ll3xh/edf8da84ff.jpg or maybe move the next note so it would form a direct flow with this slider - nice
  3. 00:40:743 (2) - Maybe you could mirror (1) and make it like this http://puu.sh/ll3Bc/aa5e312320.jpg then move 00:41:666 (1,2) - so it would be placed at the center. It should give a nice symmetry feeling -w- - yep
  4. 01:07:397 (3) - Give it a little jump to the next slider to indicate the SV change... Maybe like this http://puu.sh/ll3GD/548a777f69.jpg - okay
  5. 02:29:205 (3) - Uhh, maybe make this the same distance as (1) to (2)... placing it too close to (2) don't really make sense :/ - Uh....What i gonna say is
    Holy s*nope*
  6. 03:57:128 (1) - Following the violin? .-. maybe at least make a red anchor here 03:57:358 to support the piano - I think it's fine
  7. 04:03:820 (1,2,3) - I think the rhythm would be better like this http://puu.sh/ll42u/58bea9939a.jpg - Prefer this one.
  8. 04:19:025 (1) - Use higher beat snap divisor (I think 1/8 should be sufficient) so this spinner would last longer, since currently the sound still goes on after the spinner end - okay
  9. 02:59:205 (1,2) - I think this kind of stack would be pretty confusing after a 1/4 pattern... I suggest to just unstack them. BTW the rhythm is not that nice either, at big white tick, the violin goes long so it would be better to start a slider http://puu.sh/ll4lV/273ecddd65.jpg after that maybe you can stack the circles - Fixed
  10. 03:02:782 (1,2) - this kinda feel weird... I like it like this better http://puu.sh/ll4oP/7276a6c8a4.jpg pretty (too) basic maybe... - nice
  11. 03:46:974 (4) - The SV reduce here don't really make sense for me. Actually the music stay the same so it's better to keep SV the same. And suddenly it goes slower, it's alright because the music does that, it would make the map more dynamic. And make it more tricky too -w- - well...ok Fix for now.
  12. Even with 9.2, the AR still feel pretty slow :/ but I think it's alright, no need to increase it since it might hurt the diff spread - maybe it's because of BPM issues. and changing of AR doesn't affect star diff

Pretty good -w- XD Thanks!
Good luck ^^
Thanks for your mod!
Minato Yukina
http://puu.sh/lnp8e/a4a7400d21.zip 새로 가이드라인 개정되려고 하길래 그거 맞춰서 좀 고쳤습니다
Kloyd
hi

  • Materialize

  1. 01:45:589 (2) - try curve more http://puu.sh/lnwMC/82cf2a3913.jpg
  2. 02:04:512 (3) - better path is here http://puu.sh/lnwQg/2f93d528c0.jpg
  3. 02:06:474 - obviously there is a sound. recommend u to put a note here. i'd put a stack and put NC to make sure there is flowchange. http://puu.sh/lnwVm/d48350abde.jpg
  4. 02:23:666 (3,4) - if this isn't deliberate overlap, try to make this separated. http://puu.sh/lnwXT/1a3b1927e7.jpg.
  5. 03:12:128 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this pattern lacks of the efficiency of NC. try remove NC then u can get more playability / visibility to understand there is some changes.
  6. 03:14:897 (5) - same.
  7. 03:31:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - based on my personal taste so u can ignore this. try this pattern. http://puu.sh/lnx9J/17f47ccd45.jpg http://puu.sh/lnxa4/a182f029cb.jpg
  8. 03:33:705 (6,7,8) - i think ctrl_ging is better http://puu.sh/lnxbx/4168dcfc16.jpg
  9. 03:46:166 (6) - try move this like this http://puu.sh/lnxe7/4e0967afe8.jpg
  10. 03:47:205 (1) - http://puu.sh/lnxh0/c760757b92.jpg
  11. 04:53:773 (2) - http://puu.sh/lnxlA/4c464879dd.jpg or http://puu.sh/lnxlM/c81aa56628.jpg
  12. 04:57:697 (2) - u could do better with this http://puu.sh/lnxn2/04890110ad.jpg
  13. 04:58:735 (5) - for better flow http://puu.sh/lnxoi/8f76dd9adc.jpg or if u want to move that stuff that much, try this http://puu.sh/lnxpI/572dbff651.jpg
  14. 06:42:595 (1) - considering the next note, this can be better http://puu.sh/lnxwj/5f60a181a7.jpg

goodluck
CelegaS
I'm sad, can't play ctb's diff correctly because too high ar :'(
Topic Starter
Sangzin

Kloyd wrote:

hi

  • Materialize

  1. 01:45:589 (2) - try curve more http://puu.sh/lnwMC/82cf2a3913.jpg - k
  2. 02:04:512 (3) - better path is here http://puu.sh/lnwQg/2f93d528c0.jpg - k
  3. 02:06:474 - obviously there is a sound. recommend u to put a note here. i'd put a stack and put NC to make sure there is flowchange. http://puu.sh/lnwVm/d48350abde.jpg - Actually there has a sound, but I think it's small enough to ignore.
  4. 02:23:666 (3,4) - if this isn't deliberate overlap, try to make this separated. http://puu.sh/lnwXT/1a3b1927e7.jpg. - Fixed
  5. 03:12:128 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this pattern lacks of the efficiency of NC. try remove NC then u can get more playability / visibility to understand there is some changes. - Okay
  6. 03:14:897 (5) - same. - ^
  7. 03:31:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - based on my personal taste so u can ignore this. try this pattern. http://puu.sh/lnx9J/17f47ccd45.jpg http://puu.sh/lnxa4/a182f029cb.jpg - make similar thing first one.
  8. 03:33:705 (6,7,8) - i think ctrl_ging is better http://puu.sh/lnxbx/4168dcfc16.jpg - Only (6) Fixed
  9. 03:46:166 (6) - try move this like this http://puu.sh/lnxe7/4e0967afe8.jpg - Fixed
  10. 03:47:205 (1) - http://puu.sh/lnxh0/c760757b92.jpg - Alight
  11. 04:53:773 (2) - http://puu.sh/lnxlA/4c464879dd.jpg or http://puu.sh/lnxlM/c81aa56628.jpg - Used second one.
  12. 04:57:697 (2) - u could do better with this http://puu.sh/lnxn2/04890110ad.jpg - Fixed
  13. 04:58:735 (5) - for better flow http://puu.sh/lnxoi/8f76dd9adc.jpg or if u want to move that stuff that much, try this http://puu.sh/lnxpI/572dbff651.jpg - I want to keep this one.
  14. 06:42:595 (1) - considering the next note, this can be better http://puu.sh/lnxwj/5f60a181a7.jpg - fixed

goodluck
Sorry for late response. I have no time to fix
Thanks for your mod! :)

CLSW wrote:

http://puu.sh/lnp8e/a4a7400d21.zip 새로 가이드라인 개정되려고 하길래 그거 맞춰서 좀 고쳤습니다
업뎃 완료했습니다.
SYAHME
Ranked it, CtB.
Minato Yukina
http://puu.sh/lx1K5/eeaf72ab1b.zip 오버매핑된 부분이 있는것 같아 수정.
Topic Starter
Sangzin

CLSW wrote:

http://puu.sh/lx1K5/eeaf72ab1b.zip 오버매핑된 부분이 있는것 같아 수정.
업뎃 완료했습니다.
Krah
I just don't get why Scorpiour used "<Version 0>" (probably because of that) but it's not how the song is supposed to be called in the MATERIAL album.

Please refer to http://www.konamistyle.jp/sp/tatsh_material/index.html
Unicode Title: "IMAGE -MATERIAL-(新曲)"
Title : "IMAGE -MATERIAL-(Shinkyoku)"

Note that I'm not that good in japanese and that you should confirm the romanization by someone else.
Edit: +/- had it confirmed Shinkyoku seems to be correct.
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