I wasn't able to play this because it's really cold here and 260bpm is 2fast4me so can't confirm playability on some sections
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00:36:128 (1) - This would make more sense imo if it was stacked over 00:36:590 (2) - since it's a different vocal sound and it would be cool to have movement there over to the slider instead of having a jump upward.
- Keep this. I have same pattern on Realize diff, and I don't like stacking like that 00:43:513 (1) - Maybe consider moving to x:376 y:200. Would have 2.0 spacing still and sort of be blanketted by 00:41:666 (3) -
- I want to this circles on upwards.00:56:897 (3,4) - Looks like it flows awkwardly. As mentioned above I can't really test this cuz it's sooo coooold here but you take a circular flow from 00:56:436 (1,2,3) - and then suddenly snap to 4 which isn't following this flow. Doesn't feel right and nothing in the song really sounds like a flow break would make sense at least not to me. Can't really think of an easy fix that doesn't require moving the next combo around a bit. But as I said I couldn't test this myself to see how it felt so maybe get a few playtests see how that looks.
- Try other pattern. 02:18:243 (2,3) - It would play so nicely if it was if you did a pattern like
this. The reason is because with this pattern your fingers do a tapping pattern like
this which is okay but it could be better imo. The tapping pattern from the change I made is like
this gives it like a doubles tapping rhythm which compliments the violin a bit better. It doesn't have to look like the first screenshot though that was just a quick example.
- Nice suggestion. Fixed03:31:974 (5,6) - Maybe i'm spoiled by scorpiours version but this would be better following the drums in the downbeat by changing this to two 1/2 sliders :/
- Well...I don't think that timing is good.03:57:128 (1) - Should have whistle on end not in head like 03:49:974 (1,2,3,4) - which is the same area in the rhythm. Plus the piano at 03:57:358 - is much stronger than the one at the red tick anyway.
- It's true, but I put whistle with violin sound. Although I also put whistle on piano sound, If i put that whistle, It sounds weird and it's secondary I put whistle on piano sounds.04:09:128 (1) - Remove whistle from the body at 04:09:358 - like 04:10:051 (3) - Sounds better too because the piano sound there is very low so not as strong as to be emphasized.
- Agree. Fixed04:25:043 (1,2) - Not sure why this is stacked but the other three at 04:23:197 (1,2) - 04:26:889 (1,2) - 04:28:735 (1,2) - aren't. Could easily use 1.0x snap and move it like
this and it flow better too.
- Nice pointing. Fixed04:49:735 (3) - Move the middle red node a little so the wavy slider looks
better. Moved 3 one tick to the right after so you might need to move 04:50:427 (5) - as well to keep the stack but nothing too hard.
- Okay, Fixed06:50:969 - I wish you had mapped that piano outro seeing as you decided to map the beginning of it anyway
- Just understand me ;w; It's my private taste.Pretty good map. Wish I could play it xD maybe later when its not 15 degrees :v