Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
puxtu
thanks for mods! 80% applied
Lunatic Raccoon
Nice song www kudosu shot :^)
YunoFanatic
u dum asshat
SpectorDG
Yo. (MOD Req for PM)
00:38:280 (38280|3) - Move 3
00:38:355 (38355|0) - Move 2
00:38:505 (38505|2) - Move 3

00:41:730 (41730|3) - Move 3
00:41:880 (41880|2) - Move 2
00:42:030 (42030|3) - Move 3

00:42:255 (42255|2) - Move 4
00:47:205 (47205|1) - Move 1
00:47:355 (47355|0) - Move 2

01:25:755 (85755|0,86505|1,86505|2) - Focus in Mid add LN (Ups noise)
01:46:155 (106155|3,106155|0) - Merge

02:15:391 (135391|3,135391|1,135391|0,137341|1,137341|2) - Again, Focus in Mid and add LN
03:06:316 (186316|3) - Move 3
03:06:391 (186391|0) - Move 2
03:06:466 (186466|2) - Move 1 (Listen, it's ok trust me)

HD MOD END. #Vocaloid Awful Guitar XD <3 I love this
Goodluck ~ :)
Kamikaze
the fuck I forced you to do you dipshit
Topic Starter
puxtu
fuck off u scrub
Kamikaze
suck my dick
Topic Starter
puxtu
No u
Koneko-
here's my suggesion.

02:15:391 ~ 02:17:202 - make LN?
02:54:991 - make LN?
00:01:455 - add?
00:03:705 - ^
00:06:255 - ^
00:07:155 - ^
00:07:305 - ^
00:08:505 - ^

02:08:791 (128791|0) - move 3
02:09:091 (129091|2) - move 0
02:11:191 (131191|1) - move 2
02:11:341 (131341|1,131491|3) - move 0, 0
02:12:241 (132241|0) - move 3
02:12:541 (132541|3) - move 0
02:13:591 (133591|2) - move 1
02:13:891 (133891|0) - move 2
00:37:530 (37530|1,37605|2) - move 2, 3?
00:38:430 (38430|3) - move 2?
01:26:955 - make one LN?
01:27:105 (87105|1,87255|2) - remove?
01:29:355 - make one LN?
01:29:655 (89655|1) - remove?
01:31:755 - make one LN?
01:31:905 (91905|2,92055|1) - remove?
01:34:155 - make one LN?
01:34:455 (94455|2) - remove?
01:26:955 ~ 01:34:455 - follow NM difficult mod style?
02:57:541 ~ 03:04:741 - i think this part overuse 1/4 note. try this style.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3382404
00:29:505 ~ 00:36:705 / 02:57:541 ~ 03:04:741 - same reason, recommend rearrange. (follow SC difficult.)
00:47:655 ~ 00:48:480 - it's really hard and unnecessary use 2 notes.

00:57:405 ~ 00:57:705 - make (01)(23) trills.
01:36:855 ~ 01:37:230 - make trills. other parts are trills.

02:08:791 (128791|0) - move 3
02:08:941 (128941|3) - move 1
02:09:241 (129241|1) - move 3
02:11:191 (131191|1) - move 2
02:11:191 (131191|2) - move 1
02:11:491 (131491|0) - move 2
02:13:591 (133591|0) - move 2
02:13:891 (133891|3) - move 1

/////////////////////////////////////////////////////
02:37:741 ~ 02:38:191 / 02:38:791 ~ 02:39:241 - if really want use jack, make this.
02:37:891 (157891|2) - move 1
02:38:941 (158941|1) - move 2
02:39:241 (159241|2) - move 1


shouldn't follow my mods. GL~
(i wonder correct write @_@)

i think some notes are make LN cuz some part too simple.
Hydria

I only make banners just for you~ as you're the only one that requests mods from me anymore. Woops that became invalid since last night. Also this is like a day late WOOPS...


usual 1|2|3|4

00:07:005 (7005|3) - either change that into an L or add notes, you've just got 2 bars left blank.
00:40:680 (40680|0) - why is that there? would make more sense in column 4.
01:17:805 (77805|3,77955|0,78105|2,78405|1,78555|3,78855|0,79005|2,79605|1,79905|1,80205|0,80355|3,80655|1,80805|3,80955|2,82605|0,82755|1,82905|3,83205|2,83355|1,83655|3,83805|0,84405|2,84705|2,85005|1,85155|3,85455|2,85605|1,85755|0) - Vocals have lengths. Don't just map them all as single notes, you have this massive gap of 5 bars with nothing that should have a 3 bar LN in it.
01:33:105 (93105|0,93105|3,93180|2,93255|1,93255|3,93330|2,93405|3,93405|0,93480|2,93555|1,93555|3,93630|0,93705|1,93705|3,93780|2,93855|3,93855|0,93930|1,94005|0,94005|3,94005|2,94080|1,94155|0,94155|3,94230|2,94305|1,94305|3,94380|2,94455|3,94455|0,94530|2,94605|3,94605|1,94680|0,94755|2,94755|3,94830|1,94905|3,94905|0,94980|2,95055|1,95055|3,95130|2,95205|1,95205|3,95280|0,95355|2,95355|3,95430|1,95505|3,95505|0) - looks quite right hand biased, try and balance out the pattern a bit more so both hands are used the same, definitely since there seemms to be 17 notes 1/2 spaced in a row in the 4th column.
01:34:230 (94230|2,94305|3,94305|1,94380|2) - there's no actual beat here so there are just ghost notes. Seems weird to put an LN in the middle of a JS but that's what follows the music.
01:45:855 (105855|1) - should be a note somewhere here, there's a vocal line and no notes.
02:15:391 (135391|3,135391|1,135391|0) - should be LNs
02:26:791 (146791|3) - drum beat here, add a note.
02:28:966 (148966|1) - ^, rearrange to avoid jacking
02:33:766 (153766|1) - ^

From 02:46:891 (166891|1) - to 02:50:191 (170191|2,170191|1) - there is a drum beat on the 2nd blue line in each 3rd bar which should have a note on it

02:57:541 (177541|3,177541|1,177616|2,177691|1,177691|0,177766|3,177841|1,177841|2,177916|3,177991|2,177991|0,178066|3,178141|0,178141|1,178216|2,178291|0,178291|3,178366|1,178441|3,178441|0,178516|1,178591|2,178591|3,178666|1,178741|0,178741|2,178816|3,178891|2,178891|0,178966|1,179041|0,179041|3,179116|2,179191|0,179191|1,179266|2,179341|0,179341|3,179416|1,179491|2,179491|3,179566|0,179641|1,179641|2,179716|3,179791|0,179791|1,179866|2,179941|3,179941|0,180016|1,180091|0,180091|3,180166|2,180241|0,180241|1,180316|3,180391|1,180391|2,180466|3,180541|0,180541|2,180616|1,180691|3,180691|0,180766|2,180841|1,180841|0,180916|3,180991|0,180991|1,181066|2,181141|3,181141|1,181216|0,181291|1,181291|3,181366|2,181441|3,181441|0,181516|2,181591|1,181591|0,181666|2,181741|0,181741|3,181816|2,181891|3,181891|1,181966|0,182041|2,182041|1,182116|3,182191|0,182191|2,182266|1,182341|2,182341|3,182416|1,182491|0,182491|2,182566|3,182641|0,182641|1,182716|2,182791|0,182791|3,182866|2,182941|3,182941|1,183016|0,183091|3,183091|1,183166|2,183241|0,183241|3,183316|1,183391|3,183391|0,183466|1,183541|3,183541|2,183616|0,183691|1,183691|3,183766|0,183841|2,183841|1,183916|3,183991|0,183991|1,184066|3,184141|2,184141|1,184216|0,184291|1,184291|2,184366|3,184441|2,184441|0,184516|1,184591|0,184591|3,184666|2,184741|0,184741|1,184741|3) - is overmapped. Please make sure that your notes are actually following the drum/vocal pattern provided.

Overall, a semi-decent chart, but please put LNs where there deserves to be LNs. Don't just leave areas blank to keep the LN count down. That's not how maps get ranked.

Ok, before I go on, please, puxtu, LNs exist for a reason. You can't have a full chart set that only has 7 LNs per difficulty. You're just leaving gaps everywhere and the vocal lines aren't making sense. Double check everything in there and add some LNs. I wont be mentioning their placements in the next few diffs.




No. See previous post for changes.



If it's possibly DQable for 2, it'll be DQable for 4.

This is just unacceptable.
Topic Starter
puxtu

Hydria wrote:


I only make banners just for you~ as you're the only one that requests mods from me anymore. Woops that became invalid since last night. Also this is like a day late WOOPS...


usual 1|2|3|4

00:07:005 (7005|3) - either change that into an L or add notes, you've just got 2 bars left blank.
00:40:680 (40680|0) - why is that there? would make more sense in column 4.
01:17:805 (77805|3,77955|0,78105|2,78405|1,78555|3,78855|0,79005|2,79605|1,79905|1,80205|0,80355|3,80655|1,80805|3,80955|2,82605|0,82755|1,82905|3,83205|2,83355|1,83655|3,83805|0,84405|2,84705|2,85005|1,85155|3,85455|2,85605|1,85755|0) - Vocals have lengths. Don't just map them all as single notes, you have this massive gap of 5 bars with nothing that should have a 3 bar LN in it.
01:33:105 (93105|0,93105|3,93180|2,93255|1,93255|3,93330|2,93405|3,93405|0,93480|2,93555|1,93555|3,93630|0,93705|1,93705|3,93780|2,93855|3,93855|0,93930|1,94005|0,94005|3,94005|2,94080|1,94155|0,94155|3,94230|2,94305|1,94305|3,94380|2,94455|3,94455|0,94530|2,94605|3,94605|1,94680|0,94755|2,94755|3,94830|1,94905|3,94905|0,94980|2,95055|1,95055|3,95130|2,95205|1,95205|3,95280|0,95355|2,95355|3,95430|1,95505|3,95505|0) - looks quite right hand biased, try and balance out the pattern a bit more so both hands are used the same, definitely since there seemms to be 17 notes 1/2 spaced in a row in the 4th column.
01:34:230 (94230|2,94305|3,94305|1,94380|2) - there's no actual beat here so there are just ghost notes. Seems weird to put an LN in the middle of a JS but that's what follows the music.
01:45:855 (105855|1) - should be a note somewhere here, there's a vocal line and no notes.
02:15:391 (135391|3,135391|1,135391|0) - should be LNs
02:26:791 (146791|3) - drum beat here, add a note.
02:28:966 (148966|1) - ^, rearrange to avoid jacking
02:33:766 (153766|1) - ^

From 02:46:891 (166891|1) - to 02:50:191 (170191|2,170191|1) - there is a drum beat on the 2nd blue line in each 3rd bar which should have a note on it

02:57:541 (177541|3,177541|1,177616|2,177691|1,177691|0,177766|3,177841|1,177841|2,177916|3,177991|2,177991|0,178066|3,178141|0,178141|1,178216|2,178291|0,178291|3,178366|1,178441|3,178441|0,178516|1,178591|2,178591|3,178666|1,178741|0,178741|2,178816|3,178891|2,178891|0,178966|1,179041|0,179041|3,179116|2,179191|0,179191|1,179266|2,179341|0,179341|3,179416|1,179491|2,179491|3,179566|0,179641|1,179641|2,179716|3,179791|0,179791|1,179866|2,179941|3,179941|0,180016|1,180091|0,180091|3,180166|2,180241|0,180241|1,180316|3,180391|1,180391|2,180466|3,180541|0,180541|2,180616|1,180691|3,180691|0,180766|2,180841|1,180841|0,180916|3,180991|0,180991|1,181066|2,181141|3,181141|1,181216|0,181291|1,181291|3,181366|2,181441|3,181441|0,181516|2,181591|1,181591|0,181666|2,181741|0,181741|3,181816|2,181891|3,181891|1,181966|0,182041|2,182041|1,182116|3,182191|0,182191|2,182266|1,182341|2,182341|3,182416|1,182491|0,182491|2,182566|3,182641|0,182641|1,182716|2,182791|0,182791|3,182866|2,182941|3,182941|1,183016|0,183091|3,183091|1,183166|2,183241|0,183241|3,183316|1,183391|3,183391|0,183466|1,183541|3,183541|2,183616|0,183691|1,183691|3,183766|0,183841|2,183841|1,183916|3,183991|0,183991|1,184066|3,184141|2,184141|1,184216|0,184291|1,184291|2,184366|3,184441|2,184441|0,184516|1,184591|0,184591|3,184666|2,184741|0,184741|1,184741|3) - is overmapped. Please make sure that your notes are actually following the drum/vocal pattern provided.

Overall, a semi-decent chart, but please put LNs where there deserves to be LNs. Don't just leave areas blank to keep the LN count down. That's not how maps get ranked.

Ok, before I go on, please, puxtu, LNs exist for a reason. You can't have a full chart set that only has 7 LNs per difficulty. You're just leaving gaps everywhere and the vocal lines aren't making sense. Double check everything in there and add some LNs. I wont be mentioning their placements in the next few diffs.




No. See previous post for changes.



If it's possibly DQable for 2, it'll be DQable for 4.

This is just unacceptable.
ok my bad, sorry pls don't eat me ;^)
XeoStyle
Helloooow !

 ___ ___ ___ ___
| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | (4K)

My personal suggestions :

00:30:255 (30255|0) - move to 1 or 2

00:31:455 (31455|1) - move to 2 or 3

(kiai 1)

00:55:305 (55305|1,55455|2) - maybe better with 1 then 2

00:53:805 (53805|0) - move to 2

(endkiai 1)

01:25:005 (85005|1,85605|1) - move the 2 notes to 2 (or 3, but meh)

01:33:705 (93705|1,94005|2) - 2 then 1

01:37:305 I think from this part to the kiai there is too much "upper" patterns (going to 0 -> 3), feel free to change somes patterns or not. :)

(kiai 2)

01:56:505 (116505|2,116655|1) - 1 then 2

02:00:255 (120255|3) - move to 2

02:04:638 (124638|3,124638|2,125013|1,125013|0,125441|1,125441|2,125941|0,125941|1) - imo LN + simple note are a little bit too hard for beginners players, so maybe remove simple notes ?

(endkiai2)

02:35:791 (155791|3) - move to 2

(kiai3)

02:44:641 (164641|1) - move to 0

02:48:241 (168241|3) - move to 2

02:51:391 (171391|2) - move to 3

02:52:591 (172591|1) - move to 0

(endkiai 3)

03:01:591 (181591|1) - move to 0

03:05:791 (185791|0) - maybe to 1 ?

Gonna edit my post for the NM (and maybe more) when I have the time.
I PM you when it's ok ! ;)

Great song btw ^_^

edit:
LET DO DIS :

00:11:205 (11205|2) - move to 3

00:12:705 (12705|3) - move to 2

00:26:355 (26355|3) - move to 2

00:36:255 (36255|2) - move to 1

00:44:355 (44355|0,44505|2,44655|0,44805|2) - maybe change this pattern to 0303 (or another one ^^) because it's almost the same as the previous.

(kiai1)

00:51:555 (51555|3) - - move to 2

00:53:205 (53205|3) - maybe move to 2 because of the next pattern

01:04:455 (64455|2,64605|3,64755|0,64905|2,65055|1,65205|3) - change the whole pattern, it's almost the same as the previous :s

(endkiai1)

01:13:755 (73755|1) - move to 2

01:20:955 (80955|2) - pls I know you hate LNs, but this is a good example of good location to place one (The vocal is perfect and it's a big hole without it :/ )

01:25:755 (85755|0) - ^

01:27:255 maybe add one note at 0 here ? (because of the kick)

01:29:655 ^ at 0 ot 3

01:32:055 ^ with 01:32:205 (92205|0,92355|1,92505|2,92655|0,92805|1,92955|2) - double 0 1 2 is meh... hum maybe more like this ? : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3394404

01:34:455 ^ at 1 or 3

01:38:655 (98655|3) - move to 2

(kiai2)

01:55:305 (115305|2) - move to 0

02:00:255 (120255|3) - maybe move to 2 ?

(endkiai2)

02:08:491 (128491|2,128941|1) - 1 then 2 (if you do this move 02:09:841 (129841|2) - to 1)

02:11:491 (131491|3) - move to 0

02:15:391 (135391|0,135391|1) - DO YOU SMELL THE GUD LN ? :lol:

02:29:041 (149041|3) - move to 2

02:33:691 (153691|0) - move to 3 (if you do this move 02:33:841 (153841|3) - to 2)

(kiai3)

02:50:041 (170041|3,170041|1,170191|2,170191|0) - wouldn't it be a little bit to hard to have this pattern for NM players ? Feel free to change it or not.
02:51:091 (171091|1) - ? I would've put this to 0, huuum.

(endkiai3)

That's it, GL bro c:
Topic Starter
puxtu
all mods applied except about the lns loll
thanks!
YunoFanatic
Pucboi ha
Harbyter
no kudo

[SC]

00:20:355 (20355|1) - col 4

00:20:430 (20430|2,20505|1) - ctrl h

00:20:580 (20580|2) - 1

00:21:705 (21705|2) - 4

00:21:780 (21780|3,21855|2,21930|1) - 1 col left

00:21:855 (21855|0) - 4

00:22:005 (22005|0) - 2

00:27:105 (27105|1) - 4

00:27:180 (27180|3) - 2

just those xd
Topic Starter
puxtu
ayy
NlHIL
why not, I don't know
そうボクいないよ ボクいないよ 投げ捨てられて
帰る場所すら何処にも 無いんだよ
pls delete EZ~SC and make SHD's home

正直者は何を見る? 正直者は馬鹿を見る!
正直者は何を見る? 正直者は馬鹿を見る!
your maps are too honest to be modded!
become more rude and shit!

puxtu wrote:

- 7K diff by Zenx
- std by RLC
- taiko by Beautiful
what are you seeing? idiot!

煮え立ったデイズで 命火を裁つ
誰だっていいのさ 代わりになれば
you must ignore me and others will mod here instead of me...
Rudalek
puxtu sent me here

01:38:805 (98805|1) - move to 1
01:40:005 (100005|1,100155|2) - move one of these to 4
01:40:905 (100905|2,101055|1,101205|2) - move one of them to 4
01:42:405 (102405|1) - move to 1
02:17:341 (137341|2,137491|1,137641|2,137791|3) - i'm going to assume you left 1st empty on purpose, same goes for the rest..
00:19:005 (19005|3,19080|2,19155|0,19230|1) - make these a stair?
00:29:205 (29205|1) - move to 1
00:37:455 (37455|0) - move to 2
00:38:205 (38205|1,38280|3,38355|0,38430|2) - make these a stair? hard to play
00:39:555 (39555|1) - move to 1
00:47:655 (47655|3,47730|2,47805|0,47880|1,47955|3,48030|2,48105|1,48180|0,48255|2,48330|3,48405|1,48480|0) - looks hard to play for a NM diff
00:56:655 (56655|2) - move to 4 (4th column seems empty)
02:26:941 (146941|2) - move to 4
02:27:091 (147091|1) - move to 1 (if you did ^)
02:27:241 (147241|2) - move to 4 ^
02:27:391 (147391|3) - move to 2 ^
02:31:741 (151741|1,151891|2,152041|1,152191|3,152191|0) - something like ^
02:35:341 (155341|0,155416|1,155491|3,155566|2) - make these a stair
02:38:641 (158641|1) - move to 1
02:39:841 (159841|2) - move to 4
02:41:041 (161041|2) - move to 1
02:43:441 (163441|2) - i'd put this at 1, but you'd have to rearrange stuff
02:44:641 (164641|2) - move to 4
00:39:405 (39405|2,39555|2) - kind of hard to play for HD diff
00:40:605 (40605|2,40755|2) - same goes for this
00:47:805 (47805|0,47880|2,47955|1,48030|3,48105|0,48180|2,48255|1,48330|3) - imo this is quite a hard pattern for HD since you have HD+
01:07:305 (67305|2) - i would move this to 4
01:07:455 (67455|3) - and move this to 3 if you did ^
01:12:555 (72555|2,72630|1,72705|2,72705|3,72780|1,72855|2,72930|3) - feels too heavy on the right
01:29:505 (89505|2,89580|1,89655|3,89730|2,89805|1,89880|3,89955|1,90030|2) - 1st column is so empty, rearrange?
01:35:430 (95430|1,95580|1,95730|1,95880|1) - that's alot of notes on the 2nd column, rearrange?

02:22:441 (142441|3,142441|0,142591|3,142591|0) - don't make this happen on the HD+ diff? it's somewhat hard to play, it'd put this for MX and harder diffs
02:32:041 (152041|3,152041|1,152191|3,152191|1) - same goes for this
make it so they play like this
02:17:641 (137641|2,137641|1,137791|2) -
02:27:241 (147241|2,147241|1,147391|2) -
02:36:391 (156391|2,156391|0,156541|0) -
i'm bad at explaining patterns

hard stuff but cool
00:19:905 (19905|0) - to 00:29:505 (29505|0) -
00:39:255 (39255|2,39330|1,39405|0,39480|3,39555|2,39630|1) - rearrange this to make it harder? it's a MX diff :D
00:42:855 (42855|1,42930|2,43005|0,43080|1,43155|3,43230|2) - ^
00:44:055 (44055|0,44130|1,44205|2,44280|1,44355|2,44430|3) - ^
00:46:455 (46455|2,46530|1,46605|0,46680|2,46755|1,46830|3) - ^
01:36:855 (96855|0,96930|3,97005|0,97080|3,97155|0,97230|3) - all of a sudden thrills?
00:41:655 (41655|1,41655|0,41805|0,41805|1,41955|1,41955|0,42105|1,42105|0) - lots of [12]
02:17:341 (137341|2,137341|1,137491|2,137491|1,137641|2,137641|1,137791|0,137791|2,137791|3) - for these patterns, try [12] or [34] for parts like this 02:17:341 (137341|1,137341|2) -
BilliumMoto
blargh

22:22 puxtu: sup dawg
22:22 BilliumMoto: not much lol, just seizing the rare opportunity to play
22:22 BilliumMoto: hows it been for you
22:22 puxtu: alive
22:23 puxtu: can you check my map :D
22:26 puxtu: nope
22:26 puxtu: ttb one
22:26 puxtu: n[
22:26 *puxtu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736930 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear]
22:27 *BilliumMoto is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/736931 Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear]
22:27 puxtu: nice
22:27 BilliumMoto: oh snap no more SHD?
22:27 puxtu: ye
22:28 puxtu: shd is retardly overmapped
22:28 puxtu: ppl dont really like it
22:28 BilliumMoto: knowing kami, not surprised at all lol
22:28 BilliumMoto: playing now
22:28 puxtu: lol
22:32 puxtu: :D:D:D:D
22:32 puxtu: mod plls
22:32 puxtu: ;w;
22:36 BilliumMoto: mind doing a quick irc mod right now?
22:36 puxtu: suree
22:36 puxtu: let's do it
22:36 BilliumMoto: aight here we go
22:36 BilliumMoto: only one thing really stuck out to me on this MX diff
22:37 BilliumMoto: 02:28:891 (148891|3) - should be a note at the 1/4 after this
22:37 BilliumMoto: you also missed this in the SC diff
22:38 BilliumMoto: 02:33:691 (153691|3) - happens again here
22:38 puxtu: lol thanks
22:38 puxtu: for pointing that out
22:38 puxtu: XD
22:39 BilliumMoto: npnp
22:39 BilliumMoto: there's probably other stuff to work on in the MX
22:39 BilliumMoto: i honestly suggest making some of the patterns slightly harder
22:39 BilliumMoto: but moving on to the SC
22:40 puxtu: ok
22:40 BilliumMoto: 00:01:305 (1305|3) - forgot a note after this one?
22:40 BilliumMoto: for the bass
22:40 BilliumMoto: i know you're trying to encompass the vocal and the bassline at the same time but it feels a little empty here
22:41 BilliumMoto: and throughout the intro
22:41 BilliumMoto: 00:07:005 (7005|3) - especially after this note
22:42 BilliumMoto: 00:18:255 (18255|1) - missed a note on the 1/4 after this one
22:42 puxtu: wait
22:43 puxtu: hold your horses
22:43 BilliumMoto: i would actually jack it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413895
22:43 BilliumMoto: lol aight
22:43 puxtu: about the intro
22:43 puxtu: i only follow the vocal
22:43 BilliumMoto: 00:01:155 (1155|1) - ?
22:44 BilliumMoto: 00:02:355 (2355|0,2505|3,2655|1) - no vocals here so i assumed you were also following the bass to some degree
22:44 puxtu: bcause the bass is inaudible
22:45 puxtu: ok i'll add
22:45 puxtu: lol
22:46 BilliumMoto: lol
22:46 puxtu: added the 1/4 btw
22:46 BilliumMoto: :D
22:46 BilliumMoto: i like minijacks that make sense
22:46 puxtu: :D
22:46 BilliumMoto: 00:19:905 (19905|3) - im pondering the stream starting here
22:46 BilliumMoto: this is really fun as it is and serves a very good purpose
22:47 BilliumMoto: but i cant help but feel maybe something like truplets on the 1/1 and 1/4 everywhere else would be more fitting
22:48 BilliumMoto: basically what you have in MX but add one note every 1/1
22:48 BilliumMoto: actually, don't do that
22:48 BilliumMoto: that would make the stream more boring
22:48 BilliumMoto: but if wnyone else points it out, you should change it
22:48 BilliumMoto: *anyone
22:48 puxtu: oh
22:49 puxtu: add a triplet every 1/1?
22:49 puxtu: that's sounds great
22:49 BilliumMoto: as in three notes at a time, yea
22:49 BilliumMoto: but that with the doubles on 1/2 might make it a bit too hard
22:51 BilliumMoto: 00:48:705 (48705|2) - the chorus here feels awfully underwhelming to play compared everything that came after it
22:51 puxtu: hmmm
22:51 puxtu: yea what should i do with that
22:52 BilliumMoto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413921my personal suggestion
22:52 BilliumMoto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413921
22:52 puxtu: oh lns
22:53 BilliumMoto: that should be enough to make it feel more climactic
22:54 BilliumMoto: oh yea, i noticed there are very very few LNs in this map
22:54 BilliumMoto: this should fix that lol
22:54 puxtu: hmmmmm
22:54 BilliumMoto: 01:07:680 (67680|1,67830|3) - im not hearing these in the music
22:54 puxtu: are you sure
22:54 puxtu: about the lns
22:54 puxtu: that's for guitar
22:54 BilliumMoto: there is that synth line in the background you could follow with the LNs
22:55 puxtu: ok then
22:56 BilliumMoto: 01:31:830 (91830|2,91905|1,91905|0,91980|3) - there's nothing here really
22:56 puxtu: removed
22:56 BilliumMoto: 01:34:230 (94230|2,94305|3,94305|0,94380|1) - these too
22:56 BilliumMoto: 01:34:005 (94005|2) - and i would move this note to the 1/2 beat after it
22:57 BilliumMoto: 01:45:405 (105405|0,105405|3,105405|1) - good SVs :D
22:57 puxtu: :D
22:57 BilliumMoto: 01:46:155 (106155|2) - just a reminder to do whatever you did to the other chorus to this chorus as well
22:58 puxtu: all done
22:58 puxtu: just need some lns on chorus
22:58 puxtu: ye lol
22:58 puxtu: ik that
22:58 BilliumMoto: lol ofc
22:58 BilliumMoto: i just always get the uncontrollable urge to remind people to do that tho
22:59 BilliumMoto: 02:15:391 (135391|3) - long LN here maybe?
22:59 puxtu: xD
22:59 puxtu: nah
22:59 puxtu: i'll give player some rest
22:59 BilliumMoto: fair enough
23:00 BilliumMoto: 02:18:091 (138091|2) - this part also feels a little underwhelming
23:00 BilliumMoto: considering the dude is screaming their lungs out here lol
23:00 BilliumMoto: maybe add doubles every time there is a kick?
23:00 BilliumMoto: a kick drum
23:00 puxtu: okay
23:01 BilliumMoto: 02:28:891 (148891|0) - you missed a note here, but i already said this for the MX diff
23:01 BilliumMoto: please make it a jack too
23:01 BilliumMoto: i would love a jack here if you couldnt tell
23:01 BilliumMoto: 02:31:366 (151366|1) - here too
23:01 BilliumMoto: 02:33:691 (153691|0) - and here
23:02 BilliumMoto: and the rest of the map looks good to me
23:02 puxtu: fixed
23:02 puxtu: http://puu.sh/j5Dfj/293d29b9d5.png like this?
23:03 BilliumMoto: YES
23:03 BilliumMoto: that is perfect
23:03 puxtu: lol okay
23:04 puxtu: idk adding lns will be a good idea
23:04 BilliumMoto: 02:54:766 (174766|0,174916|2) - not hearing these
23:04 puxtu: but i'll try it
23:04 BilliumMoto: hey it's all up to you
23:04 puxtu: remove that 1/4s
23:05 BilliumMoto: and ofc add doubles where you need them in order to keep the intensity of the map right at the end
23:06 puxtu: roger that
23:07 BilliumMoto: welp anything else i see would just be pointless nitpicking of extraneous detail, so that's all lol
23:07 BilliumMoto: uhh
23:07 BilliumMoto: make sure your metadata is ok
23:07 BilliumMoto: everything is snapped
23:07 BilliumMoto: bg not nsfw
23:07 BilliumMoto: blahblah
Topic Starter
puxtu

NlHIL wrote:

why not, I don't know
そうボクいないよ ボクいないよ 投げ捨てられて
帰る場所すら何処にも 無いんだよ
pls delete EZ~SC and make SHD's home

正直者は何を見る? 正直者は馬鹿を見る!
正直者は何を見る? 正直者は馬鹿を見る!
your maps are too honest to be modded!
become more rude and shit!

puxtu wrote:

- 7K diff by Zenx
- std by RLC
- taiko by Beautiful
what are you seeing? idiot!

煮え立ったデイズで 命火を裁つ
誰だっていいのさ 代わりになれば
you must ignore me and others will mod here instead of me...
high nlhil is high.

Rudalek wrote:

puxtu sent me here awang sent me to you

[EZ]01:38:805 (98805|1) - move to 1
01:40:005 (100005|1,100155|2) - move one of these to 4
01:40:905 (100905|2,101055|1,101205|2) - move one of them to 4
01:42:405 (102405|1) - move to 1
02:17:341 (137341|2,137491|1,137641|2,137791|3) - i'm going to assume you left 1st empty on purpose, same goes for the rest..

[NM]00:19:005 (19005|3,19080|2,19155|0,19230|1) - make these a stair?
00:29:205 (29205|1) - move to 1
00:37:455 (37455|0) - move to 2
00:38:205 (38205|1,38280|3,38355|0,38430|2) - make these a stair? hard to play
00:39:555 (39555|1) - move to 1
00:47:655 (47655|3,47730|2,47805|0,47880|1,47955|3,48030|2,48105|1,48180|0,48255|2,48330|3,48405|1,48480|0) - looks hard to play for a NM diff
00:56:655 (56655|2) - move to 4 (4th column seems empty)
02:26:941 (146941|2) - move to 4
02:27:091 (147091|1) - move to 1 (if you did ^)
02:27:241 (147241|2) - move to 4 ^
02:27:391 (147391|3) - move to 2 ^
02:31:741 (151741|1,151891|2,152041|1,152191|3,152191|0) - something like ^
02:35:341 (155341|0,155416|1,155491|3,155566|2) - make these a stair
02:38:641 (158641|1) - move to 1
02:39:841 (159841|2) - move to 4
02:41:041 (161041|2) - move to 1
02:43:441 (163441|2) - i'd put this at 1, but you'd have to rearrange stuff
02:44:641 (164641|2) - move to 4
all ok

[HD]00:39:405 (39405|2,39555|2) - kind of hard to play for HD diff
00:40:605 (40605|2,40755|2) - same goes for this
00:47:805 (47805|0,47880|2,47955|1,48030|3,48105|0,48180|2,48255|1,48330|3) - imo this is quite a hard pattern for HD since you have HD+
01:07:305 (67305|2) - i would move this to 4
01:07:455 (67455|3) - and move this to 3 if you did ^
all re-arranged


[HD+]01:12:555 (72555|2,72630|1,72705|2,72705|3,72780|1,72855|2,72930|3) - feels too heavy on the right fixed
01:29:505 (89505|2,89580|1,89655|3,89730|2,89805|1,89880|3,89955|1,90030|2) - 1st column is so empty, rearrange? re-arranged
01:35:430 (95430|1,95580|1,95730|1,95880|1) - that's alot of notes on the 2nd column, rearrange? ok

02:22:441 (142441|3,142441|0,142591|3,142591|0) - don't make this happen on the HD+ diff? it's somewhat hard to play, it'd put this for MX and harder diffs ok
02:32:041 (152041|3,152041|1,152191|3,152191|1) - same goes for this
make it so they play like this
02:17:641 (137641|2,137641|1,137791|2) -
02:27:241 (147241|2,147241|1,147391|2) -
02:36:391 (156391|2,156391|0,156541|0) -
i'm bad at explaining patterns

hard stuff but cool
00:19:905 (19905|0) - to 00:29:505 (29505|0) - cool

[MX]00:39:255 (39255|2,39330|1,39405|0,39480|3,39555|2,39630|1) - rearrange this to make it harder? it's a MX diff :D
00:42:855 (42855|1,42930|2,43005|0,43080|1,43155|3,43230|2) - ^
00:44:055 (44055|0,44130|1,44205|2,44280|1,44355|2,44430|3) - ^
00:46:455 (46455|2,46530|1,46605|0,46680|2,46755|1,46830|3) - ^
01:36:855 (96855|0,96930|3,97005|0,97080|3,97155|0,97230|3) - all of a sudden thrills?
all re-arranged

[SC]00:41:655 (41655|1,41655|0,41805|0,41805|1,41955|1,41955|0,42105|1,42105|0) - lots of [12] re-arranged
02:17:341 (137341|2,137341|1,137491|2,137491|1,137641|2,137641|1,137791|0,137791|2,137791|3) - for these patterns, try [12] or [34] for parts like this 02:17:341 (137341|1,137341|2) -nah, my hammer is too solid
thx for mods!
you too bill :D
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