mmkay
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- [SHD]
HUGE improvement from the previous version of SHD, can't seem to find any noticeable errors. Patterns flow really well, and are nice to hit.
Suggestions?
- 00:38:955 (38955|0,38955|2,38955|1,38955|3) - good stuff, love how you use webs and brackets for these guitar chugs
- 01:16:905 (76905|3,76905|0,76905|1,77055|0,77055|2,77055|3,77205|3,77205|1,77205|0,77355|0,77355|2,77355|3) - http://puu.sh/jhvfd/a2bcf0c65d.jpg this placement matches the music IMO
- 01:17:505 (77505|1) - Starting from this note, the chords are bit bland, since this is SHD, you can make that more exciting by adding a triple chord on every marimba sound eg. 01:17:805 (77805|0) - , 01:19:005 (79005|1) - , 01:20:205 (80205|2) - etc.
- [SC]
O.O the less dense version of SHD
Jumpstreams patterns clear~
- 00:47:655 (47655|1) - lovely
- 00:57:705 (57705|0) - add 2
- 00:57:780 (57780|3) - add 3 (trill pattern galore \o/ )
- 01:55:005 (115005|2,115005|3) - same goes with here, see pic for suggestion http://puu.sh/jhwrA/764f97545d.jpg
- 02:45:841 (165841|3,165841|2) - ^
- 01:07:605 (67605|0,67680|1,67755|2,67830|3) - intentional? I dunno but it is different to what you used in the beginning
- [MX]
No obvious errors here, but there is a part that I dislike
- 01:17:805 (77805|0) - you mapped vocals instead of the music, which makes it kind of bland.
I suggest: - 01:17:805 (77805|0) - place 1,2,3
- 01:18:105 (78105|2) - place 3
- 01:18:405 (78405|2) - place 3
- 01:18:555 (78555|1,78555|0,78855|3) - - leave it there (also gives a taste of the vocals if you want it there)
- 01:19:005 (79005|0) - place 1,2,4
- 01:19:305 (79305|2) - place 2
- 01:19:605 (79605|2) - place 2
and so on... carrying on - 02:15:391 (135391|0,135391|2,135391|3) - Long note here for emphasis?
- 02:47:041 (167041|0,167041|1,167041|3) - this part me gusta
- [HD+]
O.o the streamy version of MX
- 01:17:805 (77805|3) - same concept with MX, I absolutely dislike that you only mapped the vocals, try incorporating the marimbas in the background if you can
- 02:46:891 (166891|1) - this is similar to that lovely part in MX, makes me wonder if these patterns are suitable for HD difficulty
otherwise, gj
- [HD]
- 00:43:155 (43155|0,43230|1,43305|0,43305|2) - gluey pattern is gluey, doesn't flow as well as your previous patterns, try staircasing this like the notes previously?
- 01:17:805 (77805|1) - ok you love your vocals ._.
- 02:15:391 (135391|3,135391|0) - intentional non-LNs? I'm confuzzled now
- [NM]
Great choice of instruments to map, perfect for normal diff.
- 01:26:655 (86655|0) - remove this note to prevent LN catastrophe
- 01:55:005 (115005|3) - for this part, I think this pattern will fit the music more, it looks kinda weird, play around with it http://puu.sh/jhyYN/417b43da2a.jpg
- 02:15:391 (135391|1,135391|0) - ok.
- 02:56:941 (176941|0) - same as first suggestion
- [EZ]
Like when vocals come in handy of EZ diff patterns
- 01:17:805 (77805|3) - C'mon this is a perfect place to emphasise the marimbas, double chord the marimba sounds. Tbh I cannot follow the notes you placed in this section
- 02:11:791 (131791|2,131791|0) - beautiful.
Here's some duct tape to fix your broken heart. <3