SC00:07:005 (7005|3) - either change that into an L or add notes, you've just got 2 bars left blank.
00:40:680 (40680|0) - why is that there? would make more sense in column 4.
01:17:805 (77805|3,77955|0,78105|2,78405|1,78555|3,78855|0,79005|2,79605|1,79905|1,80205|0,80355|3,80655|1,80805|3,80955|2,82605|0,82755|1,82905|3,83205|2,83355|1,83655|3,83805|0,84405|2,84705|2,85005|1,85155|3,85455|2,85605|1,85755|0) - Vocals have lengths. Don't just map them all as single notes, you have this massive gap of 5 bars with nothing that should have a 3 bar LN in it.
01:33:105 (93105|0,93105|3,93180|2,93255|1,93255|3,93330|2,93405|3,93405|0,93480|2,93555|1,93555|3,93630|0,93705|1,93705|3,93780|2,93855|3,93855|0,93930|1,94005|0,94005|3,94005|2,94080|1,94155|0,94155|3,94230|2,94305|1,94305|3,94380|2,94455|3,94455|0,94530|2,94605|3,94605|1,94680|0,94755|2,94755|3,94830|1,94905|3,94905|0,94980|2,95055|1,95055|3,95130|2,95205|1,95205|3,95280|0,95355|2,95355|3,95430|1,95505|3,95505|0) - looks quite right hand biased, try and balance out the pattern a bit more so both hands are used the same, definitely since there seemms to be 17 notes 1/2 spaced in a row in the 4th column.
01:34:230 (94230|2,94305|3,94305|1,94380|2) - there's no actual beat here so there are just ghost notes. Seems weird to put an LN in the middle of a JS but that's what follows the music.
01:45:855 (105855|1) - should be a note somewhere here, there's a vocal line and no notes.
02:15:391 (135391|3,135391|1,135391|0) - should be LNs
02:26:791 (146791|3) - drum beat here, add a note.
02:28:966 (148966|1) - ^, rearrange to avoid jacking
02:33:766 (153766|1) - ^
From 02:46:891 (166891|1) - to 02:50:191 (170191|2,170191|1) - there is a drum beat on the 2nd blue line in each 3rd bar which should have a note on it
02:57:541 (177541|3,177541|1,177616|2,177691|1,177691|0,177766|3,177841|1,177841|2,177916|3,177991|2,177991|0,178066|3,178141|0,178141|1,178216|2,178291|0,178291|3,178366|1,178441|3,178441|0,178516|1,178591|2,178591|3,178666|1,178741|0,178741|2,178816|3,178891|2,178891|0,178966|1,179041|0,179041|3,179116|2,179191|0,179191|1,179266|2,179341|0,179341|3,179416|1,179491|2,179491|3,179566|0,179641|1,179641|2,179716|3,179791|0,179791|1,179866|2,179941|3,179941|0,180016|1,180091|0,180091|3,180166|2,180241|0,180241|1,180316|3,180391|1,180391|2,180466|3,180541|0,180541|2,180616|1,180691|3,180691|0,180766|2,180841|1,180841|0,180916|3,180991|0,180991|1,181066|2,181141|3,181141|1,181216|0,181291|1,181291|3,181366|2,181441|3,181441|0,181516|2,181591|1,181591|0,181666|2,181741|0,181741|3,181816|2,181891|3,181891|1,181966|0,182041|2,182041|1,182116|3,182191|0,182191|2,182266|1,182341|2,182341|3,182416|1,182491|0,182491|2,182566|3,182641|0,182641|1,182716|2,182791|0,182791|3,182866|2,182941|3,182941|1,183016|0,183091|3,183091|1,183166|2,183241|0,183241|3,183316|1,183391|3,183391|0,183466|1,183541|3,183541|2,183616|0,183691|1,183691|3,183766|0,183841|2,183841|1,183916|3,183991|0,183991|1,184066|3,184141|2,184141|1,184216|0,184291|1,184291|2,184366|3,184441|2,184441|0,184516|1,184591|0,184591|3,184666|2,184741|0,184741|1,184741|3) - is overmapped. Please make sure that your notes are actually following the drum/vocal pattern provided.
Overall, a semi-decent chart, but please put LNs where there deserves to be LNs. Don't just leave areas blank to keep the LN count down. That's not how maps get ranked.
If it's possibly DQable for 2, it'll be DQable for 4.
This is just unacceptable.