1. Easy (1.35 stars, 149 notes)
2. Hard (2.85 stars, 286 notes)
3. Insane (3.39 stars, 388 notes)
4. Normal (1.84 stars, 204 notes)

pinataman wrote:

Hi. From mod request. Don't give kudosu until I mod the whole mapset. Sorry if sound like a jerk.

[Insane]

Right now, 01:00:258 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) – are all the same, which I feel contradicts this flow when they both have the same rhythm 01:03:720 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - . I suggest doing Ctrl + H on 01:01:874 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so that it feels a little more distinct from the previous combo and then making it fit the map again (so that this and the next combo don't have the same clockwise flow), though you could change the latter pattern to match the former (in that it is one pattern repeating 4 times).

Right now 01:07:412 (1,2,1,2) – is a rest pattern because the background beat is very low. At 01:11:104 (1) - , the background beat rises in pitch, so this is a good place to stop the rest and go back into the normal flow. So 01:11:104 (1) – imo should be three circles and not a slider. If you agree, then I suggest changing the flow to something like http://puu.sh/i2JIk/f99222eca9.jpg


01:33:720 (2,3) – Consider making this a slider instead to match the vocals nicely like at 00:19:874 (2) -

01:38:335 (1) – Remove NC

The following places are where I suggest you change the direction of the circular flow from clockwise to CounterClockwise or vice-versa because the melody feels different, so a change in direction helps reflect that:

00:04:643 (1,2) – (so the suggestion is do CTRL + G on each and then make the pattern fit again)
00:07:412 (5) -
00:10:181 (1,2) -
00:19:412 (1,2,3,4,5) – (ctrl + J on this pattern)
00:26:797 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:36:027 (1,2,3) -
00:39:720 (1,2) – (something like http://puu.sh/i2IgZ/ac10dc0a6a.jpg)
00:41:566 (1) – Ctrl + H maybe?
00:44:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – (Ctrl + G)
01:14:797 (1,2,3,4,5) –
01:20:335 (1,2,3,4) – Break up the flow in the middle, maybe with a symmetrical pattern like this http://puu.sh/i2Kma/352e62e98b.jpg
01:33:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -(Ctrl + H, 45 degree clockwise rotation)
01:36:489 (5,6) – This one isn't as important, but if you want to emphasize this part, you can make something like http://puu.sh/i2KEh/1f74ca6a95.jpg. I do think though that 01:36:489 (5,6) – and 01:36:951 (1) – should not both have clockwise flow.

I'm really sorry to do this, but it's a lot easier for me to explain the flow suggestion if I send you the code instead of doing complicated flips and switches. This is assuming you haven't changed the previous part and the dist of the jumps might need to be adjusted:

244,186,98104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,186,98220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,185,98335,2,0,L|323:193,1,80,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,340,98797,6,0,L|285:333,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,178,99258,2,0,L|244:186,1,80,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,291,99720,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,108,99951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,108,100066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,108,100181,2,0,P|329:72|291:66,1,80,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,193,100643,6,0,P|232:229|270:235,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,43,101104,2,0,P|174:64|154:99,1,80,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,290,101566,2,0,P|236:268|256:233,1,80,2|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,49,102027,1,8,1:0:0:0:
305,43,102258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,207,102489,5,2,0:0:0:0:
202,290,102720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,132,102951,1,8,1:0:0:0:
304,215,103182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,115,103412,1,2,0:0:0:0:
351,132,103643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,132,103758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,132,103874,1,8,1:0:0:0:

01:48:027 (1) – This pattern needs to feel more distinct from the previous one, so I think a rotation instead of a flow switch is good. Then the rest of the pattern might look something like http://puu.sh/i2MyU/b1c1d7f5a3.jpg ?

01:50:335 (3,4) – Ctrl + J
01:55:412 (1,2,3,4,5) – Ctrl + J , rotate ~45 degress clockwise, move to 304, 284

Chaoslitz wrote:

[General]

1. 
   Combo 3 colour is not really match with the background, suggest to use a pink colour which suits more
   

   R:255 G:128 B:255

   I actually kinda like my colours :c
2. Audio bitrate is higher than oh wow, thank you SO MUCH for this!
   Use this mp3 file with 192kbps instead

[Easy]

1. 00:27:720 (3,4) - May consider switching in timeline since 00:28:643 is a downbeat, which is not good to place a slider end here, instead a note or slider head can emphasis more hmm.. downbeat doesn't really feel like it has any special emphasize :c
2. 01:05:566 (3) - Rotate it anti-clockwisely a bit to avoid a sharp turn between 01:05:566 (3,4) which is decease playability in easier diffs done
3. 01:39:720 (5) - I would suggest you to curve this up instead to avoid sharp turn as well turn doesn't feel super sharp, and a LITTLE sharp-ness actually feels appropriate because the vocals have a peak here. Guess I'll be changing this up if a BN feels bad about these
4. Nice diff

[Normal]

1. 01:04:643 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - In my opinion this pattern is difficult as players have to keep hitting 3 single notes in 1/4, it is not suitable to map in a Normal diff, you may change some notes into sliders which is a lot more easier to play replaced two if these with repeat slider for a less dense pattern. Also looks neater I think c:

[Hard & Insane]

1. No problem

A mapset with high quality.
Good luck on ranking!

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Peach!!! How are you? I'm here because of you. ^^/ So, let's get this ranked asap. ahhhh! You found a really nice song. It's kind of addictive. xD Alsoit has an incredible but awesome background. It's so coloful. What about making a storyboard of this map? Maybe you can start by putting the lyrics into a box. The preview point was put in the most proper place. D: Good job! Anything wrong with this map. Congratulations! Oh, remember I'm not a good modder so, if you don't agree it's fine. I'm constantly learning. how do storyboards work? lmoa I suck ;w;

Easy

This is a decent diff. Everything is so blanket and the map's flow is awesome. You've done a great job in this Diff. So, what I'm going to suggest are more like suggestions that might help.

• 
  
  Rhythm of the hit objects

  1. 1. 01:18:489 (1,2,3,4) What about replacing those 4 consecutive sliders in two sliders? I suggest you this because is so weird to find like a circle consistency in Easy diffs. I get your idea. There are 3 very distinct sounds on 3 of these white ticks though, which I wanted to map. The last one just kinda...felt into place because of this. Will consider changing this if need be, though I think a pattern that is a little more dense doesn't hurt with a bpm this low
        
        or in two circles and one slider?
        
     2. 02:04:643 (3,4,5,6) ^
     3. 00:12:027 (1) In this part of the song seems to be a different flow, and maybe a slider doesn't fit as well, because the sounds feels to be loud and faster, so I'd suggest you to replace it by a spinner. 2/1 room after this spinner wouldnt be enough room :c
     4. 00:32:335 (3) Here, I think would fit better a slider than a circle. current rythm seems fine
  
  
  Blanket's stuffs

  1. 02:08:335 (3,4) Fix this blanket. Maybe this circle looks better in the middle of these two sliders. 02:08:335 (3,4,1) this wasn't supposed to blanket C:
  
  
  Hitsounds

  1. 00:23:104 (1) Remote the Whistle sound of the head of the slider and replace it by a finish.
  2. 00:37:874 (1) ^
  3. 01:36:951 (1) ^
  4. 01:51:720 (1) ^
     
     there is no finish in the song for either of these :c

Normal

Another decent Diff of peachtrees. o.o/ It's kind of simple but fun to play. n.n Although, it's kind of boring if you use the same pattern for the whole song. (slider shape)

Rhythm of the hit objects

1. 00:25:874 (6,7,8) This is so intuitive. What about replacing them by a 1/2 slider and one repetition. will give this some thought, though I kinda think that this'd make the whole thing a little to 1/2 heavy, and seeing as though the current rythm works well, I'd like to wait for further omdding until changing this
2. 01:19:643 Add a note here. Seems to be a beat here because of the vocals.
3. 01:21:027 ^
4. 01:31:181 ^ If you listen to 50% seem to be a beat here because of the song.
5. 01:33:027 ^
   
   There's stuff on nearly every red tick that could be mapped out, doing that though would end up making the patterns waaay too 1/2 heavy.
   
6. 01:37:874 (3) I think here would fit more a 1/2 slider which repeats once. feels a little too fast :c
7. 00:12:027 (1,2,3) Same as in the Easy diff, I think a spinner whould fit better here. Did somethin that'll make this look a lot nicer c:

Blanket's stuffs

1. 00:11:104 (6) What about changing the shape of this slider for this? did something nice to this c:
   
2. 00:59:104 (6) At least a slider shape different form the other ones. XD Make it more curve. mkay

Hard

The best hard I could have played with DT in my life. n.n7 thank you!

Blanket's stuffs

1. 01:24:951 (3) The shape of this slider is kind of simple. what about making it like this current slider-shape flows very well I think ;w;
   
2. 01:49:874 (1,2,3) Organize the blanket here. tried making this a bit better ;w;

New Combos

1. 01:48:027 (6) NC oops

Insane

Rhythm of the hit objects

1. 00:07:181 (4) Move it closer to the Three 00:06:951 (3) to make a symmetric jump here. isn't this already symmetric?
2. 00:12:027 (1,2,1) As I have pointed at in the rest of the difficulties, in this part you can do a challenging part. As this is an "insane" that look more like a hardish diff, a tiny stream would fit awesomely here because of the song provide a drum section here. You can try to put a spinner and streams or only streams. I don't think there is any 1/4 in the music though? additionally, the song kinda slows down a little, so a stream would be overdone I think
   
3. 00:22:874 Missing note? nop, gap is intentional
4. 00:59:104 (6) The shape of this slider doesn't look good. :/ Here I leave some example of the slider I think would fit here. Or, you just can put a tiny stream here which doesn't hurt anybody. n.n hmm..this is a though one...I kinda like the shape but...aaah I can't make any of these shapes
   
   Of course this one should look more symmetric.
   

Euny wrote:

m4m as your request!♥ via irc.

• General

1. for metadata : add tags (from ranked map) + Kiriko Takemura Caroline Charonplop Full Control Tokyo dun c:
   
2. i cant found information for ' (Short Ver.) ' you need to ask other BN or QAT about this correctly title. will wait for a BN to check this to see what's the deal with this
3. offset bit early. i recommend to audio lead in + 1000ms how?;w; + is it really THAT early?

• Easy

1. looks really nice to me.

• Normal

1. 00:17:566 (4,5) - i think its bit awkward to rhythm hope you try this timeline. I've used the same rythm for the next vocals too, I think they do a better job of emphasizing the song :c
   

• Hard

1. 00:13:874 (3) - add nc cause your insane do that. also, hard is not low diff. so i think its correct to similar with insane. nice catch
2. 01:07:412 (1,2) - make these like 01:04:643 (4,5,6) - or, 01:05:566 (1,2) - its more fit for music imo. hmm I'm not sure about these. I think they do a decent job of switching from background music to vocals without being to confusing or anything, + I did the same thing in the Insane. Will wait for a BN to check this
3. 01:42:489 (4) - this is nc spot follow your insane dun c:

• Insane

1. 00:23:104 (1) - finish more fit for this head imo. ( if you apply this, change for all diffs. ) feels a little to weak for a finish
2. 00:37:643 - maybe you can hear tempo. well, add note for here. done!
3. 00:59:104 (6) - nc for here cause new melody start. sure c:
4. 01:51:258 (5) - i think, drum sample set maybe more fit for this did something very nice to this (across all diffs)
5. 01:57:258 (1,5) - make perfect stack done!

that's it
hope this is helpful...

-Tochi wrote:

M4M

• 
  

  General

1. Please fix these:
   fixed during a previous mod
2. You can use this site to compress the audio to 192kbps

^

• 
  

  Insane

1. 00:23:104 (1) - Blanket better: done c:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:22:874 - Add a circle here? And move 00:22:412 (4,5,6) - it to x:237 y:232, and stack the new circle with 00:23:104 (1) 's head for better flow like: did something nice here
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:57:720 (3,4) - Move 3 Tiny grids to the left or right for better reading like: I'd like to keep this stacked to be more consistent with my mapping in this Diff :c + does this really improve the reading by a lot?
   
   SPOILER

   

• 
  

  Hard

1. 00:04:643 (1,3) - Improve the 2nd slider like: done c:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:07:412 (1) - It points out to the above, but the next object is below, so maybe reshape it for better flow like: I think this is fine due to slider leniency
   
   SPOILER

   

• 
  

  Feedback

  
  Nice map! Idk why, but i love the song so much xD
  I couldn't mod the easier diffs because i think they are fine :3 Take my star ^^
  //shoots star Thank you o3o

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Requested in my modding queue !
[This mod has been done with both hitsounds and music volume set to 100%]
 
 

       General

1. Mostly hitsound modding, your placement and combo colours are mostly fine!
   
2. You know what you could do to make this map much more enjoyable? Add taiko hitsounds to cover those drums in the background in the middle section of the song. dunno if I'm doing something wrong, but this just feel so silent, almost inaudible? I like the drum finishes :c
   I uploaded it for you, and those are the points in which you want to add them in the song:
   
   01:03:720
   01:05:566
   01:06:951 This and the next one are a little softer, so I suggest lowering the volume a little
   01:07:412
   01:11:104
   01:13:412
   01:18:489
   01:20:335
   01:21:720
   
   Try this out and see how the new hitsounds do togheter!
   
   
   

   Easy

   
   
3. 00:41:566 (1) - Add a soft-whistle to this whole slider? Sounds good along with the vocals. (Even normal whistle is alright, but a little unfitting) eeh having these for only a few slider feels rather odd
4. 01:11:104 (1) - This clap doesn't sound to good, I suggest removing it added some green lines to tune down the volume a little to make the clap feels less noisy c:
5. 01:25:412 (3) - ^ ^
   
   
   

   Normal

   
   
6. 00:10:181 (4) - Add a new combo here, since you repeated the same pattern but how does repeating a pattern affect the combo?
7. 00:11:104 (6) - Nazi suggestion here, but is there any need to have such a shape when no other slider in the map has it? Not that it really matters, but it breaks the consistency a little hmm I see what you're saying, though I think the beginning of the song is kinda unique so I guess this kinda warrants for a unique slider? I mean it's not like this is outstandingly weird or anything
8. 00:30:027 (5) - Remove clap, add whistle. It fits better with the noise you hear in the background whistle doesn't feel like it catches the sharpness of the song :c
9. 01:00:951 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This pattern is repeating 4 times in a row, I suggest finding a new one to change it up a little, it's quite noticeable when playng ye did something nice to this part
10. 01:43:874 (5) - Remove clap, add whistle. Same reasoning as 00:30:027 (5) commented above
    
    
    

    Hard

    
    
11. This diff looks good to me, the only thing I have something to say about is 02:15:835 (1) this last spinner, there's really no need for it to be there since the song soes not change and thus having a unique one fits better. will keep this one for the sole reason that it is easy to fix inc ase it needs any adjustment.
    
    
    

    Insane

    
    
12. 01:06:950 (4) - There's no need for a clap here why not?:c
13. 01:12:951 (1) - I'm worried about this spacing beeing a little counter-intuitive, thus I suggest a different pattern feels very intuitive imo, not sure how changing this would end up improving anything
14. 01:43:874 (8) - Remove clap, add whistle again, I don't feel like this catches the sharpness of the song. a custom hitsound would probably be the way to go, how 2 find smthing fitting though ;w;

Good luck!

1. unused hitsound

2. Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.

   if you could show actual metadata that would be good

1. lower ar makes more sense
2. 00:22:181 (3) - 00:29:566 (3) - 00:36:951 (3) - better with higher spacing leading into these objects. more appropriate with what you've been emphasizing up til this point (and 2nd kiai puts jumps on all of these)
3. 01:06:027 (2,4) - should have spacing similar to 01:13:412 (3,5) - ,. same superdrum stuff
4. 01:10:874 (3) - weird to have an object here when you leave it as a gap everywhere else
5. 02:04:643 (1,1) - one object combo is pretty unnecessary. would be fine to just have it as one combo lol
6. 02:12:489 (2) - seems weird not to have any 1/4 here since it's the exact same

1. 02:10:643 (2,3) - a lot more fitting to have the 1/4 rhythm then the 1/2 rhythm. waht you've got now is opposite of what the music supports
2. 02:12:489 (2) - could also work as a 1/4repeat

1. 01:00:258 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - for the first half you're exclusively following the 1/2 thing, then the second half you're exclusively following the vocals. the change in music so drastic as to support the entire structure changing. it would be a lot better to follow the same thing throughout the section

pishifat wrote:

surprise ogod


[general]

1. unused hitsound oops

2. Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.

   if you could show actual metadata that would be good cool I removed this from the title but WHERE DO I PUT IT or do i just leave it out at and pretend that this is the full version

[insane]

1. lower ar makes more sense lowered by 0.5
2. 00:22:181 (3) - 00:29:566 (3) - 00:36:951 (3) - better with higher spacing leading into these objects. more appropriate with what you've been emphasizing up til this point (and 2nd kiai puts jumps on all of these) increased the spacing on all of these to like ~2.8
3. 01:06:027 (2,4) - should have spacing similar to 01:13:412 (3,5) - ,. same superdrum stuff mkay
4. 01:10:874 (3) - weird to have an object here when you leave it as a gap everywhere else rip circle you did well
5. 02:04:643 (1,1) - one object combo is pretty unnecessary. would be fine to just have it as one combo lol umm yeah you're right
6. 02:12:489 (2) - seems weird not to have any 1/4 here since it's the exact same ya

[hard]

1. 02:10:643 (2,3) - a lot more fitting to have the 1/4 rhythm then the 1/2 rhythm. waht you've got now is opposite of what the music supports there's like this sound on it that is the same as the previous 1/1 so I thought that umm...w.e. it looks prettier now and it actually supports the song
2. 02:12:489 (2) - could also work as a 1/4repeat ynot

[normal]

1. 01:00:258 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - for the first half you're exclusively following the 1/2 thing, then the second half you're exclusively following the vocals. the change in music so drastic as to support the entire structure changing. it would be a lot better to follow the same thing throughout the section mapped this to follow the three du du du sounds in the song as I feel like they're qute unique so not following them would be a shame (also I think I do this in all Diffs so ya)

easy is k again ez..literally
if you want someone to bub whenever you're ready then... ya know... okay cool bye

i just used my ticket to get a mod from nathan, I'll see what he has to say and then bother you again AIGHT

1. I'm not sure about this title whether it's okay, because it is shorter song than normal. However, you can wait or ask someone to check about this.

1. 00:12:027 (1) - You may make this slider like this picture. When some player play DT mode, this pattern would couse flow better than.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:797 (2) - These notes may unnecessary for Easy diff because it's follow vocal, which may make this diff too untidy.
   
3. 00:43:412 (3,4) - If you don't want add any note at 00:44:797 - you can use 1/1 slider and 2/1 slider like this picture may be better.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:06:951 (4) - This hitsound should change is drum-finish like slider repeat of 01:05:566 (3). It look more fit than.
   
5. 01:11:104 (1) - ^
   
6. 01:51:258 (4) - Change addition from drum is auto. It's weird sound.

1. 00:15:489 (5,1) - Please try don't stack because these are different combo. You can observe from different colours, which it may other player confused.
   
2. 00:25:874 (6,7) - Change both circles is 1/2 slider instead would be better. Although this combo can have 8 notes, but it would be easier.
   
3. 01:06:489 (2) - Use drum-finish instead of normal-clap hitsound in slider tail. It would more fit with rhythm than.
   
4. 01:11:104 (1) - Use drum-finish like previous suggestion.
   
5. 01:12:951 (7) - This combo more than 8 notes. So please add NC here.
   
6. 01:15:489 (2) - Remove this circle. I thought it don't fit with any rhythm or vocal.
   
7. 01:47:797 (7,1) - Same with 00:15:489 (5,1) -
   
8. 01:51:258 (4) - Change addition from drum is auto. It's weird sound
   
9. 02:09:951 (7,1) - Same with 00:15:489 (5,1) -
   
10. 02:13:066 (1) - Start this spinner add 02:13:181 - This diff still cannot start it in blue line.
    
11. Some part, I thoght it may so difficult for normal diff such as triple circles like 01:00:951 (3,4,5) - or 01:04:643 (2,3,4) - etc. You can fix by may use slider to make this, which would cause to be easier.

1. 01:06:951 (4) - Use drum-finish instead of normal-clap hitsound.
   
2. 01:07:412 (1) - You may make this pattern like this picture. It may look flow better.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:28:643 (1) - Use soft-whistle hitsound would fit with vocal.
   
4. 01:50:797 (3) - Change addition from drum is auto in slider tail. It's weird sound
   
5. 02:12:489 (2) - Use 3 circles instead of slider would be better?

1. 00:03:720 (5) - Add NC here to reduce confusion in reading and playing.
   
2. 00:22:874 (7) - If you want this is more fun, you can move this circle to x:280 y:192.
   
3. 01:06:950 (4) - Use drum-finish instead of normal-clap hitsound, and resnap to 01:06:951 - if you could it.
   
4. 01:11:104 (1) - This, too. Use drum-finish instead in slider head.
   
5. 01:28:643 (1) - Use soft-whistle hitsound would fit with vocal.
   
6. 01:51:258 (5) - Change addition from drum is auto. It's weird sound.
   
7. 02:05:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I want you make this part is more fit with rhythm and melody than by may make like this picture.
   
   SPOILER

   

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi :3
from #modreqs

[General]

1. I'm not sure about this title whether it's okay, because it is shorter song than normal. However, you can wait or ask someone to check about this. I can ask a BN for a metadata check if this ends up being a big problem, I'm very confused about this ;w;

[Easy]

1. 00:12:027 (1) - You may make this slider like this picture. When some player play DT mode, this pattern would couse flow better than. I like how this currently looks, so I tried making the transition look less awkward while keeping the slider.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:797 (2) - These notes may unnecessary for Easy diff because it's follow vocal, which may make this diff too untidy. huh, not mapping vocals here feels rather weird
   
3. 00:43:412 (3,4) - If you don't want add any note at 00:44:797 - you can use 1/1 slider and 2/1 slider like this picture may be better. current rythm feels fine to me c:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:06:951 (4) - This hitsound should change is drum-finish like slider repeat of 01:05:566 (3). It look more fit than. ya
   
5. 01:11:104 (1) - ^ ya too
   
6. 01:51:258 (4) - Change addition from drum is auto. It's weird sound. hmm was giving that one a try, only added it recently. removed

[Normal]

1. 00:15:489 (5,1) - Please try don't stack because these are different combo. You can observe from different colours, which it may other player confused. I've been using similar patterns for my last two rankeds so I honestly think that using this is pretty ok
   
2. 00:25:874 (6,7) - Change both circles is 1/2 slider instead would be better. Although this combo can have 8 notes, but it would be easier. three circles feels more intuitive to play :c
   
3. 01:06:489 (2) - Use drum-finish instead of normal-clap hitsound in slider tail. It would more fit with rhythm than. done!
   
4. 01:11:104 (1) - Use drum-finish like previous suggestion. done!
   
5. 01:12:951 (7) - This combo more than 8 notes. So please add NC here. hmm aight
   
6. 01:15:489 (2) - Remove this circle. I thought it don't fit with any rhythm or vocal. it's following the melody in the background, the same melody the following 1/2's are covering :c
   
7. 01:47:797 (7,1) - Same with 00:15:489 (5,1) - yeah same reasoning, I'm pretty sure these are ok, especially since the rythm feels very predictable
   
8. 01:51:258 (4) - Change addition from drum is auto. It's weird sound done
   
9. 02:09:951 (7,1) - Same with 00:15:489 (5,1) - ^
   
10. 02:13:066 (1) - Start this spinner add 02:13:181 - This diff still cannot start it in blue line. hmm fine
    
11. Some part, I thoght it may so difficult for normal diff such as triple circles like 01:00:951 (3,4,5) - or 01:04:643 (2,3,4) - etc. You can fix by may use slider to make this, which would cause to be easier. I don't really think this is too hard or anything, especially since the bpm is rather low. The flow is ver smooth (atleast that's what it's supposed to be like) for most of the map so there is no harsh movement going along with any of the dense patterns, making them easier to hit too.

[Hard]

1. 01:06:951 (4) - Use drum-finish instead of normal-clap hitsound. yus
   
2. 01:07:412 (1) - You may make this pattern like this picture. It may look flow better. I think that'd be a huge downgrade visually + I think the flow is pretty gud
   
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3. 01:28:643 (1) - Use soft-whistle hitsound would fit with vocal. done!
   
4. 01:50:797 (3) - Change addition from drum is auto in slider tail. It's weird sound yup
   
5. 02:12:489 (2) - Use 3 circles instead of slider would be better? recently changed this according to a BN's suggestion, so I'd like to think that this is umm ok

[Insane]

1. 00:03:720 (5) - Add NC here to reduce confusion in reading and playing. how does this affect readability? wouldn't an inconsistency like this confuse the player rather than help him?
   
2. 00:22:874 (7) - If you want this is more fun, you can move this circle to x:280 y:192. kinda like the idea. lets give it a shot!
   
3. 01:06:950 (4) - Use drum-finish instead of normal-clap hitsound, and resnap to 01:06:951 - if you could it. done c:
   
4. 01:11:104 (1) - This, too. Use drum-finish instead in slider head. yaaaa
   
5. 01:28:643 (1) - Use soft-whistle hitsound would fit with vocal. done!
   
6. 01:51:258 (5) - Change addition from drum is auto. It's weird sound. mkay
   
7. 02:05:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I want you make this part is more fit with rhythm and melody than by may make like this picture. but there's continous 1/4 in the music, why would skipping any of that make it more fitting?:c
   
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This your map is almost okay, just may want to mod about hitsound and some note that have little problem. I give a star and good luck :3

KuroSenpai112 wrote:

Hi there from queue!

[General]
Here is a file that should silence the slider and put more emphasis on the music. It's kinda annoying having to listen to that every 5 sec. You might need to rename this file btw. I kinda like the sliderslide :c there's constant music in the song and I feel like the subtle slide goes along decently well with this. mhmm I guess I'll be willing to add this should it be pointed out again
http://puu.sh/i7xrN/a891bac90e.wav

[Insane + Hard]
No issues here.

[Normal]
00:52:643 (1) - Move this slider slightly back (x:108 y: 260) It just looks better as it leads into (2) and (3). made a slight adjustment c:

[Easy]
00:17:566 (4) - Adjust the slider tail so it points directly at (5). This is just for the looks! oki

Overall this is mapped very well. It's just a few very minor things.
Good luck!

1. I suggest you change the slider tickrate to 2. it fits the music much better, imo
2. 00:37:412 (4) - how about you add some fun/cute hitsound here? a normal-whistle or a soft whistle. something to emphasize this note because there's this weirdo sound in the background and it would really fit, imo
3. 00:56:335 (1) - how about you make this slider a bit... more symmetrical? more in the middle? so that sliderstart and end are on the same height. like this:
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4. nice diff

1. again maybe tickrate of 2? to get the high-hat
2. 01:45:720 (4,5,6,7,1) - i'm not sure about this because this pattern lacks consistency. first you don't map all the vocals and then you suddenly do it. consider changing that.
3. I am not really good with normals and yours looks fine as i can see so yeah... didn't find much. hope i could still help

1. tickrate? :>
2. 00:04:643 (1) - the same as i once said in easy. how about placing this slider in the middle so the end and start are on the same y
3. 00:45:027 - maybe you should add a beat here. the uhm... synth ? is really strong here and it plays nice
4. 01:50:797 (3) - i think you should stick with the back-and forth motion from 1 and two. maybe also add a little jump. they are okay if set rare into hards and liven it up a bit. this would fit really good, imo.
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1. tick... you know...
2. 00:11:104 (3,4,1) - this flows not very good, imo. because you somehow break the flow here and it just could be made smoother and triangle-like if you have to put 00:12:027 (1) - above 00:11:797 (4) - to make this play a lot better. like this:
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3. 00:16:643 (3) - how about you place this a bit more to the right to get some back-and forth motion into this again? would play a bit better. this jump-angle is a bit weird
4. 00:18:027 (2,3,4,5,6) - those first straight lines that suddenly change to a jump seldom play good. in this case it also doesn't play very well so i suggest you curve this a bit. the straight motion forces the player to slow down a bit and kinda predict the motion... hope i explained it okay... you know... i dont know... hope this helped
5. 00:59:104 (1) - for a cool and fun effect you could make this slider end 1/4 before and then put a circle on 01:00:027 - so you can actually play the start of the new combo. the latter pattern you have also benefits from this idea
6. that end is gold

Hard wrote:

Yo. Mod from my queue Please rate my mod when you finished: t/326019/start=0&view=viewpoll

[Easy]

1. I suggest you change the slider tickrate to 2. it fits the music much better, imo will give this a try. Changed for all the other Diffs too
2. 00:37:412 (4) - how about you add some fun/cute hitsound here? a normal-whistle or a soft whistle. something to emphasize this note because there's this weirdo sound in the background and it would really fit, imo I don't have any, and my one and only try ended up sounding weird :c
3. 00:56:335 (1) - how about you make this slider a bit... more symmetrical? more in the middle? so that sliderstart and end are on the same height. like this sure, why not:
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4. nice diff

[Normal]

1. again maybe tickrate of 2? to get the high-hat
2. 01:45:720 (4,5,6,7,1) - i'm not sure about this because this pattern lacks consistency. first you don't map all the vocals and then you suddenly do it. consider changing that. this is following vocals for both of these though?:c
3. I am not really good with normals and yours looks fine as i can see so yeah... didn't find much. hope i could still help

[Hard]

1. tickrate? :>
2. 00:04:643 (1) - the same as i once said in easy. how about placing this slider in the middle so the end and start are on the same y eh I guess
3. 00:45:027 - maybe you should add a beat here. the uhm... synth ? is really strong here and it plays nice I guess you're right about this. done!
4. 01:50:797 (3) - i think you should stick with the back-and forth motion from 1 and two. maybe also add a little jump. they are okay if set rare into hards and liven it up a bit. this would fit really good, imo. implementing this for the sole reason that I kinda thought the original pattern looked a bit awkward haha
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[Insane]

1. tick... you know...
2. 00:11:104 (3,4,1) - this flows not very good, imo. because you somehow break the flow here and it just could be made smoother and triangle-like if you have to put 00:12:027 (1) - above 00:11:797 (4) - to make this play a lot better. like this: there's this...eerie piano sound on the white tick, which I'd like to emphasize with this
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3. 00:16:643 (3) - how about you place this a bit more to the right to get some back-and forth motion into this again? would play a bit better. this jump-angle is a bit weird slight adjustment
4. 00:18:027 (2,3,4,5,6) - those first straight lines that suddenly change to a jump seldom play good. in this case it also doesn't play very well so i suggest you curve this a bit. the straight motion forces the player to slow down a bit and kinda predict the motion... hope i explained it okay... you know... i dont know... hope this helped i get your idea. Made another symmetrical jump pattern out of this, since curving this ended up creating ugly overlaps :c
5. 00:59:104 (1) - for a cool and fun effect you could make this slider end 1/4 before and then put a circle on 01:00:027 - so you can actually play the start of the new combo. the latter pattern you have also benefits from this idea feels a bit too sudden :c
6. that end is gold

I really enjoyed your map so I give you a star. thank you!

Hope my mod helped.

Taeyang wrote:

• General

1. Audio Lead-In up 500~1000? how?;w; + is this really neccessary here?

• Easy

1. 00:00:951 (1) - here head add soft finish sound? no finish in the song
2. 00:28:181 - clickable no, there is no significance to this downbeat
   
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3. 00:41:566 (1,2,3,4) - suggest makes the curve between 1 2 and 3 look awkward :C
   
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4. 01:14:335 - 01:20:797 - 01:21:720 (6) - add finish? hmm I can see why, but I think that these sounds are very very subtle and I honestly would like to keep the hitsounds consistent for the most part as to not mess with the player to much
5. 01:39:720 (5) - flow flow is fine. made a small adjustment, though that didnt not require changing this up
   
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6. 01:56:797 (4,5,6) - symmetry you can be better huh? symmetry is perfect

• Normal

1. i think this map stack so many what's wrong with that though ;w;
2. 00:13:874 (3) - care this note take hp bar doesn't touch the hp bar, and touching the hp bar apparantly isn't unrankable either
3. 01:00:258 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - i will recommend same finish sound at easy commented on this above
4. 01:22:874 (2) - you map almost instrument rhythm , move here 01:23:104 (2) - and cut 01:23:566 - I don't understand ;w; I made a slight adjustment though because it felt sorta odd
5. 01:49:412 (2,3) - just like this? current pattern looks fine
   
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• Hard

1. 00:13:874 (1,2) - NC change? mkay
2. 00:27:489 (2) - x240y136 00:27:720 (3) - x293y210 flow better nop, messes with the DS. made a small adjustment
3. 00:36:027 (4) - NC mkay
4. 00:43:412 (3,1) - NC change? juist use downbeat NC significant change in the song that I'd like to highlight with this
5. 01:35:104 (3) - 01:57:258 (3) - ^ mkay
6. 01:59:566 (2,3,4) - ? there's barely any change, current one feels fine c:
   
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• Insane

1. 00:13:874 (1,2) - try stack? 00:13:874 (1,2) - change NC and here jump than hard a little close didn't stack these on purpose. Jump doesn't really feel exaggerated, though I'm not 100& sure that's waht you meant ;w;
2. 02:05:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - suggest I'd rather keep the stream, i don't thing the song really calls for a sudden change like this
   
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3. 02:16:758 (1) - why dont add finish sound? oops

nice mapset good luck

• Nothing wrong here, just lacks some variety for a song that can have it imo.

1. 00:52:643 - How about making this section into long sliders? Like this: http://puu.sh/idjiU/f4892372ba.jpg To change from the 1/1 patterns

1. 02:11:797 - Maybe add a circle here? Just to stay consistent.
   NiCe

1. 00:30:027 - It would be VERY nice if this beat was clickable and wasn't the end o a slider, to give it more emphasis. Make 00:29:566 (3) - shorter and add a circle.
2. 01:13:643 (3) - I don't think this warrants a circle, consider changing 2 into a 1/2 slider.

1. 01:36:258 (4,5) - I was expecting a triple like the previous kiai, try adding it for consistency
2. 01:50:797 (4,5) - ^ A triple really fits here.
3. 01:56:797 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - A small suggestion, how about moving 01:57:720 (3,4) - and stack the 4 with 01:56:797 (4) - ? It would look better and (imo) flow better. then reposition following notes blah: http://puu.sh/idk3f/59b8eae975.jpg

Atsuro wrote:

Hi, mod as requested on my queue:

[Easy]

• Nothing wrong here, just lacks some variety for a song that can have it imo. feels like there is a lot that is being skipped over when using long sliders :c

1. 00:52:643 - How about making this section into long sliders? Like this: http://puu.sh/idjiU/f4892372ba.jpg To change from the 1/1 patterns changed the first slider but kept the second one

[Normal]

1. 02:11:797 - Maybe add a circle here? Just to stay consistent. mkay
   NiCe

[Hard]

1. 00:30:027 - It would be VERY nice if this beat was clickable and wasn't the end o a slider, to give it more emphasis. Make 00:29:566 (3) - shorter and add a circle. I guess. Ended up changing this because I found something that looked a little nicer c:
2. 01:13:643 (3) - I don't think this warrants a circle, consider changing 2 into a 1/2 slider. very distinct sounds in the song + the song picks up in tempo, so I do think this calls for two circles

[Insane]

1. 01:36:258 (4,5) - I was expecting a triple like the previous kiai, try adding it for consistency mkay
2. 01:50:797 (4,5) - ^ A triple really fits here. oh yeah this one was very obvious
3. 01:56:797 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - A small suggestion, how about moving 01:57:720 (3,4) - and stack the 4 with 01:56:797 (4) - ? It would look better and (imo) flow better. then reposition following notes blah: applied the gist of your idea, and then turned 5+6 into a slider because the jump between 6 and the stream ended up being too big http://puu.sh/idk3f/59b8eae975.jpg

That's all, i hope this short mod helps you.
Good luck!