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Kraster - Desire?

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Topic Starter
Kurai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on samedi 19 février 2011 at 16:49:17

Artist: Kraster
Title: Desire?
Source: Touhou
Tags: Keine Kamishirasawa Ne;on Fight69 omegaflo comiket 77 C77
BPM: 152
Filesize: 7085kb
Play Time: 03:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fight69's Hard (4,99 stars, 469 notes)
  2. Lunatic (5 stars, 620 notes)
  3. Normal (2,79 stars, 238 notes)
  4. Omegaflo's Taiko Oni (4,83 stars, 901 notes)
Download: Kraster - Desire?
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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First Touhou map and 7th map :3
Thank omegaflo and Fight69 for their guest diff :>

(Thanks Kite >o<)
Myu-jikaru
Dude, are you going to make an easy or normal mode soon? :?
I can't get past a few minutes of it! :o
Fight69
Keine-sensei ! *w*
Topic Starter
Kurai

Myu-jikaru wrote:

Dude, are you going to make an easy or normal mode soon? :?
I can't get past a few minutes of it! :o
I've not finish that yet, I must finish the hard diff before do an normal diff :/
[DBF]
[Overall]
HP rate in Hard: -3.
Overall difficulty in Hard: -1.

00:33:988 (5,1,2,3) - i dont understand new combo like this.
00:56:095 - KIAI Time start.
01:02:016 - KIAI end.
01:02:410 - and start (for KIAI fountan).
01:08:726 - ^
01:15:042 - ^

Nice mapset, i'll edit this post for next modding, see you later.

Star~
_llkey_18
STAR+
Topic Starter
Kurai
Thanks _llkey :3'
Ekoro
J'aime trop la map !

Star :D
h3k1ru
Nice :)
Topic Starter
Kurai

h3k1ru wrote:

Nice :)
:)
Ekoro
Laisse moi deviner... J'ferais pas de guest diff? ;_;
Attagen
Cool map&song =)
ZeTia
:)
Melpomena
interesting song and nice map :D
Topic Starter
Kurai
Thanks All
Vass_Bass
Hi~ ^^
Cool map, i like it and didn't find smth wrong..(sorry)
Star :)
Topic Starter
Kurai
Thanks :3
wiedz
nice map ^^ one of the best Kraster's songs ~ >w<
Dusty
[Easy]
maybe add some finishes? Only claps gets boring
00:27:674 (1) - finish at the start?
00:33:989 (1) - ^?
00:38:726 (3) - finish at the end?
00:56:095 (2) - finish?
01:02:410 (1) - finish at the start?
01:06:358 (6) - finish at the end?
01:08:331 (1) - ^?
01:15:042 (1) - finish?

[Fight59's Hard]
01:56:884 (4) - wow, crazy jumps! Maybe add New Combo here?

[Insane]
01:56:489 (1,2,3) - not stacked properly

Nice maps! *
Tatsuo
Hai, sorry for the long wait x.x
My mouse is partially broken, so it's hard to mod.
ANYWAY, here's your mod

[Overall]
Scraping by with the three star difficulty requirement.
Just a note: Your easy difficulty needs to be the same length as the other difficulties.
So many Kiai star fountains makes me go blah.


[Easy]
Quick look, only complaint is for you to map to the end of the other difficulties.

[Fight69's Hard]
This is good.

[Lunatic]
Jumpy and streamy. Though I do suggest to raise the HP drain a bit since the difficulty name is called [Lunatic]

*star*
Topic Starter
Kurai
Thanks :33
Sidramon
star^^
Nyadesudesu
gogo , though i would like hard to be a bit more complex ^_^'
threenash
J'aime *.* <3~
:)
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey.

-Remove the Countdown and add a lead-in (the countdown isnt even showing.)

[Easy]
HP Drain Rate: -1
Check AIMOD (spacing)
00:24:516 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 00:27:081
00:52:937 (3) - remove this note and put the spinner to start here and end it at 00:54:516 (Its not even on a tick!...neither is the timing section)
02:02:410 (3) - ^ same thing here...
02:56:095 (x) - add a spinner here that ends at 02:57:674 (the break is not needed)


[Fight69's Normal]
Check AIMOD (spacing...doesnt apply to jumps)
Seems fine.

[Lunatic]
02:02:509 (1) - move forward 1/4 to the red tick and end it at the same spot it was. (seems better to start off here)
Seems fine.

~STAR
Topic Starter
Kurai

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Hey. Hey :3

-Remove the Countdown and add a lead-in (the countdown isnt even showing.)

[Easy]
HP Drain Rate: -1 k'
Check AIMOD (spacing) k'
00:24:516 (1) - extend this spinner to end at 00:27:081 k'
00:52:937 (3) - remove this note and put the spinner to start here and end it at 00:54:516 (Its not even on a tick!...neither is the timing section) No, That's on a blue tick
02:02:410 (3) - ^ same thing here... ^
02:56:095 (x) - add a spinner here that ends at 02:57:674 (the break is not needed) k'


[Fight69's Normal]
Check AIMOD (spacing...doesnt apply to jumps)
Seems fine.

[Lunatic]
02:02:509 (1) - move forward 1/4 to the red tick and end it at the same spot it was. (seems better to start off here) No
Seems fine.

~STAR
Thanks :3
Louis Cyphre
Let's see

Must
Should
Suggestion
Strange


May be add Audio-Lead in 1 second or half second?
E I I (I) <-- not good.

[Lunatic]

00:14:845 - one grid right (perfect pentagon)
00:24:516 - remove break and spinner and add beats
01:02:016 - mark Kiai style in this timing section, cz it breaks Kiai or you did that especially? O_o
01:14:647 - ^
02:11:489 - ^
02:17:805 - ^
02:24:121 - ^
03:05:174 - ^
03:11:193 - ^

01:02:410 - add finish hitsound in the start of slider
01:08:726 - add finish

01:15:042 - ^
01:24:516 - add finish at start of slider
01:48:989 - add finish
02:05:568 - ^
02:18:200 - finish at start of slider
02:23:331 - remove clap, hmmm or put there Clap and Finish? Oo

02:43:463 - finish at start of slider
02:44:055 - one grid left
02:44:253 - hmm no simmetry. Try to copy this slider 02:43:463 (don't forget to remove finish) --> remove slider at 02:44:253 and paste there --> Horisontal Flip (Ctrl + H)
Must be like this
02:46:621 - Make Streams! :DDD
03:05:568 - finish at start of slider
03:11:884 - finish ._.
03:24:516 - ^
03:24:614 - remove this timing section
Also, I think there are more parts than you need to put Finish sound, please check that

[Hard]
Well this is "hard", try to do less jumps
00:01:621 - finish
00:03:792 - new combo
00:07:345 - ^
00:10:108 - ^
00:13:660 - ^
00:16:818 - ^

00:21:358 - finish
00:26:687 - new combo
00:27:674 - finish at start
00:40:305 - finis.... well, check the whole map and put finish hitsoundS
00:50:568 - new combo
01:02:016 - same sections with Kiai break.
02:30:831 - finish kiai there
02:57:772 -remove this timing section
02:58:463 - ^

03:03:200 - new combo
03:24:614 - remove this timing section
Need to recheck all map, i think there will be more useless timing sections ._.

[Easy]
There are too much useless timing sections, delete them all =_=
00:53:035 - i don't like this stuff, remove note before spinner, or put spinner there 00:53:134
Well this is easy, right? May be finish the map there 01:21:358? Or there 02:30:831?

I can't play mod taiko maps, sorry. I don't understand what to mod.

a big mod ._. Star~
Topic Starter
Kurai

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Let's see

Must
Should
Suggestion
Strange


May be add Audio-Lead in 1 second or half second?
E I I (I) <-- not good.

[Lunatic]

00:14:845 - one grid right (perfect pentagon) k
00:24:516 - remove break and spinner and add beats no
01:02:016 - mark Kiai style in this timing section, cz it breaks Kiai or you did that especially? O_o I've do that for the kiai fountain
01:14:647 - ^
02:11:489 - ^
02:17:805 - ^
02:24:121 - ^
03:05:174 - ^
03:11:193 - ^

01:02:410 - add finish hitsound in the start of slider "._. this is a circle
01:08:726 - add finish
ok
01:15:042 - ^ ok
01:24:516 - add finish at start of slider k
01:48:989 - add finish k
02:05:568 - ^
02:18:200 - finish at start of slider no
02:23:331 - remove clap, hmmm or put there Clap and Finish? Oo[/color] no o_o
02:43:463 - finish at start of slider k
02:44:055 - one grid left k
02:44:253 - hmm no simmetry. Try to copy this slider 02:43:463 (don't forget to remove finish) --> remove slider at 02:44:253 and paste there --> Horisontal Flip (Ctrl + H) k
Must be like this
02:46:621 - Make Streams! :DDD No :DDD
03:05:568 - finish at start of slider k
03:11:884 - finish ._. k
03:24:516 - ^ k
03:24:614 - remove this timing section No
Also, I think there are more parts than you need to put Finish sound, please check that

[Hard]
Well this is "hard", try to do less jumps
00:01:621 - finish
00:03:792 - new combo
00:07:345 - ^
00:10:108 - ^
00:13:660 - ^
00:16:818 - ^

00:21:358 - finish
00:26:687 - new combo
00:27:674 - finish at start
00:40:305 - finis.... well, check the whole map and put finish hitsoundS
00:50:568 - new combo
01:02:016 - same sections with Kiai break.
02:30:831 - finish kiai there
02:57:772 -remove this timing section
02:58:463 - ^

03:03:200 - new combo
03:24:614 - remove this timing section
Need to recheck all map, i think there will be more useless timing sections ._.

[Easy]
There are too much useless timing sections, delete them all =_= k
00:53:035 - i don't like this stuff, remove note before spinner, or put spinner there 00:53:134 no :>
Well this is easy, right? May be finish the map there 01:21:358? Or there 02:30:831? All diff must have the same lenght now ...

I can't play mod taiko maps, sorry. I don't understand what to mod.

a big mod ._. Star~
Louis Cyphre
All diff must have the same lenght now ...
O_o What? Lie
Kert
[Easy]
Needs lead-in.
It's more Normal, than Easy. Even this page says that. I suggest renaming.

[Lunatic]
My eye noticed this thing - 00:20:765 (3,4)

01:02:213 - I suggest to add here a note with the same position as this one 01:02:410 (1)
Same for hard ^

Star!
Topic Starter
Kurai

CracK wrote:

[Easy]
Needs lead-in. oK
It's more Normal, than Easy. Even this page says that. I suggest renaming. If you want ~

[Lunatic]
My eye noticed this thing - 00:20:765 (3,4)

01:02:213 - I suggest to add here a note with the same position as this one 01:02:410 (1) Nop
Same for hard ^

Star!
Ty
omegaflo
Fight69
Ptit truc.

Je regarde les tags et je vois

"keine kamishirasawa ne;on fight69 omegaflo"

ne;on ?

C'est quoi ca ne;on ?
Topic Starter
Kurai

Fight69 wrote:

Ptit truc.

Je regarde les tags et je vois

"keine kamishirasawa ne;on fight69 omegaflo"

ne;on ?

C'est quoi ca ne;on ?
Un Ponay :3
wmfchris
random mod X3

[taiko]
nice, try to use repeating patterns to emphasize the refrain part?
~delete the unused 0.5x timing point

[lunatic]
1:01:226 (3) down 1 grid

nice mapping and song, star~
Topic Starter
Kurai

wmfchris wrote:

random mod X3

[taiko]
nice, try to use repeating patterns to emphasize the refrain part? Just omegaflo can do that :>
~delete the unused 0.5x timing point Yes sure :D

[lunatic]
1:01:226 (3) down 1 grid Hum.. no

nice mapping and song, star~
:3
Natteke
oo
Mafiamaster
[Easy]
03:10:305 (1) - Too short for an easy difficulty.

[Fight69]
00:15:042 (1) - Add finish at the beginning like in Lunatic.
02:57:772 - Unused timing section.
03:10:996 - ^

[Lunatic]
00:08:726 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning. Also move the timing section 1/4 of a tick back.
00:11:095 - Move timing section 1/4 of a tick back.
00:17:410 - ^ and all the rest of the slow sliders throughout the difficulty.
00:15:041 (5) - New combo.
00:15:238 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:24:516 (1) - Spinner ends at an awkward location. You can either end it at 00:26:095 or 00:27:279.
00:31:423 (4) - New combo because this is a start of a jump.
01:13:266 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:13:463 (7) - Then add a new combo on this because of the jump.
01:42:279 (5) - ^
02:57:575 (1) - Unrankable spinner.

[Taiko]
03:07:741 (44) - Unsnapped.
Where's the preview time? Add it at 27279ms.

I saw no SB elements so delete the osb file. Unless you forgot to full submit maybe?
Topic Starter
Kurai
All done
Mafiamaster
Bubbled.
Dragvon
Rank DAT
Mafiamaster
Oops, 320kbps mp3 file is unrankable. Please encode it to 256kbps or lower.
James2250 caught it. Popped for now.

Edit: Rebubbled
mrtn
offset +9ms.

[omegaflo taiko]
00:38:756 (1,1) - those spinners are too short. There are a lot of other examples but I can't be bothered to name them all, check for yourself.
A lot the 1/4s aren't even mapped to the drums ==> they are retarded, it's purposely overmapping. And in the parts where the drums ARE that fast you don't map to it.

[fight69's hard]
Quite a lot of the 1/4s make no sense. SOME do, but a lot are pointless and only added for the sake of making the map harder/higher score.

[lunatic]
This diff has A LOT of unintuitive jumps
Also the 1/4 stuff from [hard] goes for this diff aswell, albeit to a lesser extent.
Topic Starter
Kurai

mrtn wrote:

offset +9ms. Sure :)

[lunatic]
This diff has A LOT of unintuitive jumps
Also the 1/4 stuff from [hard] goes for this diff aswell, albeit to a lesser extent.
I prefer change nothing. I like it as it is.
Fight69
I've deleted some lolstreams and some few 1/4

Thank you for your mod

Download: Kraster - Desire (KuraiPettan) [Fight69's Hard].osu
omegaflo
Spinners fix'd Thanks for modding =)

I've tried my best for this "overmapping", hope it will be enough =x

and finally mapped this break o.o

PS : snapped inherit sections too =o

Thanks again =)

Download: Kraster - Desire (KuraiPettan) [Omegaflo's Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
Kurai
All done :)
Sakura
[General]
I'm not sure about the tag Ne;on
use 2000ms lead-in on all diffs for consistency?
Crop the mp3 to the part that you have mapped, it is a pretty long mp3 after all.
The kiai fountain at the end is anti-climatic

[Lunatic]
24 Unsnapped notes.
Jumps and regular spacing are very similar and it's hard to tell apart.
00:08:766 (1) - No hint on slowdown
00:14:885 (4,1,2,3) - 2 grids right to make it look better, then 00:15:082 (1) - 1 grid right.
00:51:398 (2) - No hint on slowdown, i recommend you set tick rate 2 on all diffs to fix.
01:48:240 (1) - This spinner is too short, even if it gets +2000 i think you should replace this with a slider.
02:00:872 (6) - No hint on slowdown.
02:49:720 (1) - Spinner's too short.
02:51:891 (1) - ^
02:57:516 (1) - ^

[Fight69's Hard]
02:14:489 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing, and it doesn't appear to be intentional.

From reading your reply to mrtn i dont think you'll ever change those spinners anyways, but i don't support adding spinners for difficulty rather than for making the map fun, so i'm sorry but unless that changes you won't get a bubble from me
Fight69

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Fight69's Hard]
02:14:489 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing, and it doesn't appear to be intentional.
Should be fine now.

Thank you for your mod :)

Download: Kraster - Desire (KuraiPettan) [Fight69's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Kurai

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
I'm not sure about the tag Ne;on I'm sure
use 2000ms lead-in on all diffs for consistency? ok
Crop the mp3 to the part that you have mapped, it is a pretty long mp3 after all. I'll try
The kiai fountain at the end is anti-climatic what is anti-climatic ? xD Removed

[Lunatic]
24 Unsnapped notes. ok
Jumps and regular spacing are very similar and it's hard to tell apart. D;
00:08:766 (1) - No hint on slowdown This don't really need a hint.
00:14:885 (4,1,2,3) - 2 grids right to make it look better, then 00:15:082 (1) - 1 grid right. Humm... nope
00:51:398 (2) - No hint on slowdown, i recommend you set tick rate 2 on all diffs to fix. slider tick 2 sounds weird :/
01:48:240 (1) - This spinner is too short, even if it gets +2000 i think you should replace this with a slider. ok
02:00:872 (6) - No hint on slowdown.
02:49:720 (1) - Spinner's too short. ok
02:51:891 (1) - ^ ok
02:57:516 (1) - ^ ok

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