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Hwayobi - Bye Bye Bye

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Sunny Holic
787 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 8월 15일 일요일 at 오전 4:40:13

Artist: Hwayobi
Title: Bye Bye Bye
Tags: _llkey_18
BPM: 82
Filesize: 4685kb
Play Time: 02:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.24 stars, 291 notes)
  2. Insane (4.49 stars, 316 notes)
  3. llkey's Normal (2.74 stars, 194 notes)
Download: Hwayobi - Bye Bye Bye
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I'm in love with you forever
I'm in love with you forever
Bye bye bye good bye
Last edited by Sunny Holic , edited 13 times in total.
_llkey_18
199 posts
Joined September 2009
_llkey_18
done hope you like it ^^
pls fix this part :P
insane : 00:20:263 - make it start there 00:20:446 and finish 00:20:812
00:28:861 - how about add note there?
01:18:251 - how about add note there , slider sounds too weird on blue tick
hard
00:20:355 - why start on blue tick? sound too weird
Just suggetion feel free to ignore it
but the slider start on blue tick Q_Q make me cry lol
well cute map and amazing song like it ^_^

Download: Hwayobi - Bye Bye Bye (Sunny Holic) [llkey's Normal].osu
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Hello :D
I think timing is a bit fast...
All my suggestion
Hard
00:56:483 (1) finish to 00:58:495 (white tick)?
01:43:861 (5) new combo?
01:44:593 (9) ^
01:45:324 (12) ^
01:54:837 (1) finish to 01:57:032 (white tick)?
02:32:885 (n) break?
02:44:593 (1) finish to 02:46:788 (white tick)?
Insane
00:58:495 (n) add note?
01:21:910 (7) new combo?
01:26:849 (n) add note?
01:35:629 (n) ^
01:37:276 (5) new combo?
01:38:556 (n) add note?
01:43:861 (5) new combo?
01:44:593 (9) ^
01:45:324 (14) ^
01:57:032 (n) add note?
02:32:885 (n) break?
02:46:788 (n) add note?

nicemap~
star & gl ;)
Sunny Holic
787 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

banvi wrote:

Hello :D
I think timing is a bit fast...
All my suggestion
Hard
00:56:483 (1) finish to 00:58:495 (white tick)?
01:43:861 (5) new combo?
01:44:593 (9) ^
01:45:324 (12) ^
01:54:837 (1) finish to 01:57:032 (white tick)?
02:32:885 (n) break?
02:44:593 (1) finish to 02:46:788 (white tick)?
Insane
00:58:495 (n) add note?
01:21:910 (7) new combo?
01:26:849 (n) add note?
01:35:629 (n) ^
01:37:276 (5) new combo?
01:38:556 (n) add note?
01:43:861 (5) new combo?
01:44:593 (9) ^
01:45:324 (14) ^
01:57:032 (n) add note?
02:32:885 (n) break?
02:46:788 (n) add note?

nicemap~
star & gl ;)

sooooooooo fast~ thank you very much~
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
hi~

[normal]
00:20:092 (4,5) - 3 grids up
00:24:122 (1) - 1 grid left
01:19:816 (1) - do it simmetrical
01:32:885 (3) - ^
01:54:105 I think it's better

02:28:129 (2) - 1 grid down, 1 grid left

[hard]
kiai mod must be in one time with other difficultes i think
00:15:324 (1) - 1 grid up?
00:36:727 (5) - spacing
00:39:654 (6) - ^
00:58:495 (1) - new combo?
02:25:568 (3) - 1 grid up
02:26:300 (4) - spacing
02:46:788 (1) - new combo?

[insane]
00:36:727 (5) - 4 grid down
00:47:519 (1) - down by 1 end point
00:51:178 (2) - ^
00:55:568 (4,5) - 1 or 2 grid up
01:37:276 (6) - new combo
01:57:032 (1) - ^
02:25:568 (3) - 1 grid down
02:46:788 (1) - new combo

star
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
Hi, sorry for the delay, was having monitor issues :(

[normal]
02:56:300 (1) - no new combo?

[hard]
00:54:837 (3) - kinda in the hp bar

nice map ;)
Sunny Holic
787 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

roflninja wrote:

Hi, sorry for the delay, was having monitor issues :(

[normal]
02:56:300 (1) - no new combo?

[hard]
00:54:837 (3) - kinda in the hp bar

nice map ;)
Done~ thx~
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[Hard]:
  1. the KIAI part is not necessary imo, or KIAI 02:35:812~02:53:007
  2. 00:59:227 (2) - new combo?
  3. 01:57:763 (2) - ^
  4. 02:47:519 (2) - ^
  5. OD +1
[Insane]:
  1. 00:20:263 (8) - separate it into 1 note and 1 slider, the slider start at 00:20:446, only suggestion
  2. 01:21:910 (7,8) - make them closer, the jump and the distance now is confusing when players find 01:22:276 (9,10,11) are 3 combo. and about:
  3. 01:22:276 (9,10,11) - stack them can be better to read.
  4. 01:37:276 (6) - new combo
  5. 01:45:416, 01:45:599 (T) - add notes here
  6. 01:57:763 (2) - new combo
  7. 02:47:519 (2) - ^
  8. 00:59:227 (2) - ^
  9. same KIAI suggestion in this diff :P
Insane and Hard are alike imo. but still a nice work.
Sunny Holic
787 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]:
  1. the KIAI part is not necessary imo, or KIAI 02:35:812~02:53:007
  2. 00:59:227 (2) - new combo?
  3. 01:57:763 (2) - ^
  4. 02:47:519 (2) - ^
    :arrow: thx~ it's good
  5. OD +1
[Insane]:
  1. 00:20:263 (8) - separate it into 1 note and 1 slider, the slider start at 00:20:446, only suggestion
    :arrow: it's hard to do(because of distance).. i'll consider
  2. 01:21:910 (7,8) - make them closer, the jump and the distance now is confusing when players find 01:22:276 (9,10,11) are 3 combo. and about:
    :arrow: fixed~
  3. 01:22:276 (9,10,11) - stack them can be better to read.
  4. 01:37:276 (6) - new combo
  5. 01:45:416, 01:45:599 (T) - add notes here
    :arrow: i want fallow inst.. no sound no notes :)
  6. 01:57:763 (2) - new combo
  7. 02:47:519 (2) - ^
  8. 00:59:227 (2) - ^
    :arrow: thx~ it's good
  9. same KIAI suggestion in this diff :P
Insane and Hard are alike imo. but still a nice work.
kiai time.. i'll consider~
thank you~ helpful modding~ :)
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
*Star*
mekadon_old
mekadon_old
Hi~~~

[normal]
01:32:885 (3) - Make it a catmull slider if you don't want to change it
02:39:471 (2,3,4,5,6) - Kinda overstacked
02:56:300 (2) - Silent the hitsound of the endpoint and repeat till 02:57:763
02:57:946 - Place slider here

[hard]
01:51:178 (4) - Place it as the same as (2)
01:51:910 (1,2) - Nice one xD
02:27:032 (1,3) - Linear slider shaped this way isn't interesting to look at =[
02:38:007 (5) - Not aligned properly eith (3)
02:38:373 (6) - Not aligned with properly (4)

[insane]
00:39:654 (6) - Try not placing it too low
02:27:032 (1,3) - Same as Normal
02:59:227 (1) - Add a jump

I'll upload all diffs with some timing change inside (actually suggestions), upon request
star
Sunny Holic
787 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

mekadon95 wrote:

Hi~~~

[normal]
01:32:885 (3) - Make it a catmull slider if you don't want to change it
:arrow: looks better :)
02:39:471 (2,3,4,5,6) - Kinda overstacked
:arrow: no? only 2 notes are stacked
02:56:300 (2) - Silent the hitsound of the endpoint and repeat till 02:57:763
02:57:946 - Place slider here

[hard]
01:51:178 (4) - Place it as the same as (2)
01:51:910 (1,2) - Nice one xD
02:27:032 (1,3) - Linear slider shaped this way isn't interesting to look at =[
:arrow: fixed :)
02:38:007 (5) - Not aligned properly eith (3)
02:38:373 (6) - Not aligned with properly (4)

[insane]
00:39:654 (6) - Try not placing it too low
02:27:032 (1,3) - Same as Normal
02:59:227 (1) - Add a jump

I'll upload all diffs with some timing change inside (actually suggestions), upon request
star
thank you >_<
Shana
748 posts
Joined June 2010
Shana
I think this song is good :)
[Exit]
312 posts
Joined February 2009
[Exit]
박자감 좀 어렵네영

중간중간에 난해한 요소가 있삼

인세인이 별4.5인게 좀 이상했는데

어엌ㅋㅋㅋ 낚였긔

-------------------------------------

hard to play...but anyway, It is good :)

here is a STAR

catch it XD
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Mianki
Didn't found any problems, have a star~
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Nice~
Star :3
Sunny Holic
787 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic
Mianki, Astom

thanks~!
weixiaootaku
16 posts
Joined August 2009
weixiaootaku
perfect :)
Skyblue_old_1
743 posts
Joined July 2009
Skyblue_old_1
잘 만드셨습니다. 깔끔하네요..
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
ehh

[Hard]
02:08:739 (3) - 사소한 거지만 끝나는 지점이 4 바로 옆에 있도록 방향을 바꾸시는게 어떨지?

[Insane]
02:08:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 과하다고 생각됩니다만. 물론 개인적인 의견이지만요 lol
Sunny Holic
787 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic

minyeob wrote:

ehh

[Hard]
02:08:739 (3) - 사소한 거지만 끝나는 지점이 4 바로 옆에 있도록 방향을 바꾸시는게 어떨지?

[Insane]
02:08:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 과하다고 생각됩니다만. 물론 개인적인 의견이지만요 lol
:)
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
:)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
;)

Ranked~
Sunny Holic
787 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Sunny Holic
_llkey_18,banvi,Vass_Bass,roflninja,Colin Hou,kokoroanime,mekadon,[JPSNS]Shana,[Exit],Mianki,Astom,weixiaootaku,skyble,minyeob,osuplayer111

thank you!!
javiskefka
1 post
Joined June 2010
javiskefka
This beatmap should definitely be categorized as hip hop. Have you looked at the rhythm at all??? I almost overlooked it as yet another kpop song, but I tried it out, and it is sick sick sick to play a song that is not simple 4/4 straight beats. :) :) :)
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