1. Easy (1.16 stars, 182 notes)
2. Normal (1.56 stars, 239 notes)
3. Nwolf's Muzukashii (2.05 stars, 399 notes)
4. Nwolf's Oni (2.52 stars, 583 notes)

SKAIII wrote:

Hello, M4M

Awasaswesome song

Easy:

00:28:110 (2) - i would make it curvy like this http://prntscr.com/6zmyqy that little bump between 2 and 3 doesn't feel as nice to play :c
00:58:843 (2) - i feel like there should be a note in there, it's not REALLY needed but i expected it when i played it ^^ I'll consider adding this should more people point it out, though I will say that I think that fully mapping out the vocals here might not be a good idea
02:22:362 (1,3,3,3) - in my opinion it would be more cool if some of them were shaped differently, just to vary a bit will do the same thing as ^, though I feel like these roundish sliders are bootifull :c

the rest seems pretty ok to me, sorry if it's not much :p

Normal:

00:20:879 (1) - a blanket would look nicer http://prntscr.com/6zn326 rather have this without a blanket for a nicer transition into the next slider. things don't always have to blanket
00:26:664 (1) - same here ^^ ok I agree on this one
00:38:234 (1) - here again (there are some more but i won't point out every one of them) actually was a blanket, just an ugly one lol
01:09:689 (4) - a circle here would be cool feels a bit overdone ><
02:33:931 (1) - try a shape like this? http://prntscr.com/6zn931 o god yes
02:39:716 (1) - maybe this one here? http://prntscr.com/6zn9qc did something similar c:

again not much but except some blankets it seems perfectly fine to me added a few blankets, though I will say that I don't really think everything has to blanket

good luck with your beatmap man !

soelsoel wrote:

Hello... Peachtrees from random #modreqs
I'm new to mod but I'll try my best

wow...impressive...your map look very good so I have few mod

SPOILER

[General]
Are you sure that you enable countdown in this song ?

oops

[Easy]
00:32:449 (1) - parallel with 00:33:895 (2) ? I think this was a tiny bit off? fixed it just to make sure
00:49:804 (1) - it seem not in grid snap doesnt have to be c:
02:20:916 (3) - could it move down a bit ? changed it up a little, though it was mostly about the 'blanket' with the next slider
02:57:071 (1,2) - is it parallel ? if not try make it parallel it is!

[Normal]
02:33:931 (1) - could you make ball hit red angle point at 02:35:016

current one feels fine :c

May be you should find modder who better than me.
I hope your map gat ranked in someday.

ps.Could you mod my map? here if you want to.

1. I really liked the song. I don't know where did you dinf it, but it's awesome. You found a great song to map so I'll do my best to support this map when you need. But with all of that means you have really good likes. o3o
2. The hitsounds are just awesome. They really flow with the song. o3o
3. You've done a great job by mapping the whole diffs with that slow BPM . So, I just can say Congratulations!
4. Well I wish this map will get ranked soon. So keep working on it! and never give up. Good luck. n.n7

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hi! Peachtrees. AS you know I love this song, so I'm modding it. This is my sixth mod. I'm not a good modder. So if you don't agree with my mod, it's fine. I'm constantly learning.

SOME PERSONAL COMMENTS

1. I really liked the song. I don't know where did you dinf it, but it's awesome. You found a great song to map so I'll do my best to support this map when you need. But with all of that means you have really good likes. o3o aaah thank you <3
2. The hitsounds are just awesome. They really flow with the song. o3o >< thanks! i'm usually sucker for hitsounds
3. You've done a great job by mapping the whole diffs with that slow BPM . So, I just can say Congratulations!
4. Well I wish this map will get ranked soon. So keep working on it! and never give up. neva give uuupGood luck. n.n7

✿ General ✿

GENERAL STUFFS BEFORE MODDING

1. GENERAL Overall it's pretty good mapped. Congratulations.
2. HARD DIFF I don't know ut I'll love if you map a hard diff of this map. It's just a suggestion. You already complaned at me about this stuffs. (/u\) nooo I didn't mean to complain I just wasn't sure if this supported a real Hard Diff ;A; will wait for more opinions on this
3. SPREAD I don't think that there's a difference between the easy and normal map. They have almost the same stars and some equal patterns. This is just a suggestion. I don't know pretty well about this ranking criteria stuff. I tried to make the Normal Normal+ish to and clearly distinguish it from the Easy, since I had to use 1/2 for both :c

✿ Difficulties avalable ✿

Normal

1. GENERAL Pretty good mapped.
2. 00:20:156 (4,1) Fix this blanket. This wasn't supposed to blanket in the first place ;A;
3. 01:35:721 Note missing? I know there's a vocal here but maybe you can add it. changed up the rythm slightly to have this covered
4. 02:15:131 (2,1) Fix this blanket. The red slider is so close of the blue one. o.o remapped this part entirely uwu
5. 02:39:716 (1) Fix this moustache shape. I like my moustaches >:C
6. 03:28:888 (1) Remove Nc?aii

Easy

1. 01:07:158 (1) This object isn't well placed on the grind. Eh kinda moved that pattern to be less off-screen
2. 01:53:437 (1) Make this slider rounded or curve as you did with this one 00:55:589 (1) did somthing like that c:
3. 02:06:454 (2,3) Fix this blanket. wasn't supposed to blanket >>
4. 03:02:856 (1) Same as the first point. did something to make this less-offscreen ~

1. 00:23:772 (1,2,3,4) - how about you play with the volume here a bit? it becomes a lot louder so maybe do something with this. that makes the map a lot more interesting. i suggest you add inheriting sections at 00:25:218 - with volume 35 and 00:25:941 - (it's okay that it becomes quieter afterwards because it becomes that in the song too) maybe also add a hitfinish on the beginnings of 00:25:218 (3,4) - (a soft one)
2. 00:44:019 (1,2,3) - this looks a bit sloppy made, tbh. maybe make a line out of this
3. 01:04:266 (1,2) - this plays weird. i suggest you delete 01:05:712 (2) - and just put a circle at 01:06:074 - and only map the vocals to emphasize them a bit
4. 01:27:044 - i think you should add a circle here. you're suddenly changing what you're mapping and there's vocal AND guitar here.
5. not much to find here, though. it's okay i guess. take a star

1. 00:17:987 (4) - i think you should add a nc here (I rarely mod nc's but i think this is really important here because the drums are starting at this point and the thing before is something like a prelude and this should show somehow)
2. 00:23:049 (2,3) - make a straight line here for looks
3. 00:25:218 (4,5) - place 5 a bit more down so it looks like it's an extension of the slider before
4. 01:29:937 (6) - maybe move this one down?
5. okay. there's nothing wrong with this diff. and at this point i wont point out the little beauty-issues you got because i'm no fan of nazi modding. good luck with that map.

Hard wrote:

yo.

[Normal]

1. 00:23:772 (1,2,3,4) - how about you play with the volume here a bit? it becomes a lot louder so maybe do something with this. that makes the map a lot more interesting. i suggest you add inheriting sections at 00:25:218 - with volume 35 and 00:25:941 - (it's okay that it becomes quieter afterwards because it becomes that in the song too) maybe also add a hitfinish on the beginnings of 00:25:218 (3,4) - (a soft one)
   
   pretty sweet idea, I like it
   
2. 00:44:019 (1,2,3) - this looks a bit sloppy made, tbh. maybe make a line out of this
   
   straightened this out a bit
   
3. 01:04:266 (1,2) - this plays weird. i suggest you delete 01:05:712 (2) - and just put a circle at 01:06:074 - and only map the vocals to emphasize them a bit
   
   done. did the same thing with every kiai
   
4. 01:27:044 - i think you should add a circle here. you're suddenly changing what you're mapping and there's vocal AND guitar here. (Y)
5. not much to find here, though. it's okay i guess. take a star

[Easy]

1. 00:17:987 (4) - i think you should add a nc here (I rarely mod nc's but i think this is really important here because the drums are starting at this point and the thing before is something like a prelude and this should show somehow) works for me
2. 00:23:049 (2,3) - make a straight line here for looks hmm did something similar
3. 00:25:218 (4,5) - place 5 a bit more down so it looks like it's an extension of the slider before aight
4. 01:29:937 (6) - maybe move this one down? moved down a liiitle
5. okay. there's nothing wrong with this diff. and at this point i wont point out the little beauty-issues you got because i'm no fan of nazi modding. good luck with that map.

Tried making quite a few cosmetic changes to the map, following your suggestions. Minor ones for the most part but I feel like they overall helped improve the map

hope i could help you at least a bit. there's really not much to do wrong with an easy + normal mapset and that's why i can't find much. hope i still could at least find some little things. well. good luck with that set ~

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Easy

00:55:589 (1) Is it really necessary that the slider is so long? I know the guitar comes in, but i dont think that such a long slider is necessary or fits. Let it repeat here 00:56:312 and add another slider like that

it also does a decent job of emphasizing the vocals. I kinda like the slider, so I'll need more opinions before touching it

00:59:204 (1,2,3) This can be pretty tough for beginners, its okay to use it in a normal, but not in an Easy pls feels ok for a song this slow, especially since the vocals feel very nice and easy to follow, plus the pattern is designed in a very simple way too. It's consistent everytime throughout the kiais so the player will not get caught off guard by different rythms or patterns

01:50:545 (4) Move this slider's tail to 56/240. I think it looks pretty nice aight

01:57:053 (1,2,3) Same reason as 00:59:204 (1,2,3) ^

02:28:147 (4) Add NC since 02:22:362 (1) this has a NC too (Or you just delete the NC at 02:22:362 (1) if you do, ignore the below ) uuh yeah I guess

02:33:931 (4) ^ ^

02:39:716 (4) ^ ^

03:06:471 (1,2,3) Same reason as 00:59:204 (1,2,3) ^

03:23:103 (4) How about you make this one straight like 03:20:210 (1) works for me

Btw, the same with the Newcombos 03:08:641 - 03:54:920 here


Normal

CS 3,5 cs 4 feels fine, willl consider changing this if pointed out more often

00:41:126 (1,3) It looks nice, but i think they are too close to each other which looks weird eh increased distance

00:46:911 (1,3,1) Same here and (3,1) are overlaping increased distance slightly, but it does not overlap. Don't use CS 3.5 when modding

01:17:282 (2,1) They are overlaping. Move teh second slidertick too 104/228 and the 3rd too 192/272 and the 4th too 252/204. Its not perfect, but it looks better. ^



Thats it, nice mapset~ :3 Good luck

Kazuya wrote:

Hello.

It's only suggestions! I know, it's boring nazi mod, but I couldn't find any rhythm problems. A note: Please, create a Hard difficulty!

Hard Diff: I was trying to make the Normal a Normal+ ish slowed down Hard kind of Diff, with cs4, rather spaced out and a rather high ar. Right now, I'm afraid that a Hard Diff would just end up being exactly like the Normal Diff with slightly higher SV slammed onto the map. I know that there are some 1/4 in the map, but I honestly just think that the song feels rather slow 90% of the time so mapping these doesn't feel like a good idea. Will wait for more input on this, though I'm not convinced that this neccessarily calls for a Hard Diff

[Normal]

00:55:589 (1) - Move bit right: x: 68 y: 289 barely noticeable, doesn't hurt doing this though I guess
01:14:389 (3) - Better flow: http://imagerz.com/QBUTDUtvAwMMB11JRQVR aight
01:22:344 (1) - Curve slider? Better than linear. http://imagerz.com/QBUTDUtvAwMMB11JRAVR curved, but made the next to straight since I don't want the whole pattern to look to monotonous
01:24:513 (1) - Same as: http://imagerz.com/QBUTDUtvAwMMB11JRwVR use similar^
01:30:298 (1) - same as. Use http://imagerz.com/QBUTDUtvAwMMB11IEQVR. Flow is better current one feels fine
01:33:190 (1,2) - ^ http://imagerz.com/QBUTDUtvAwMMB11IEAVR or use red point: http://imagerz.com/QBUTDUtvAwMMB11IEwVR curved ones feel nice c:
01:35:360 (4,1) - Use this similar: http://imagerz.com/QBUTDUtvAwMMB11IEgVR did smthing to this c:
01:49:099 (2) - Maybe this: http://imagerz.com/QBUTDUtvAwMMB11IFQVR kewl
02:02:115 (1) - Add red point? http://imagerz.com/QBUTDUtvAwMMB11IFAVR works for me c:
02:44:055 (4) - Move slider end point to: x: 274 y: 52 hmm barely noticeable improvement =w=
03:08:641 (1,2,3) - Use his similar: http://imagerz.com/QBUTDUtvAwMMB11IFwVR Flow is better! did something to these sliders, not sure if this'll hold up.
03:43:350 (1) - Better flow: http://imagerz.com/QBUTDUtvAwMMB11IFgVR I'd like to keep this drop c: slightly altered the sliders orientation though for nicer flow

[Easy]

Hmm. Easy is harder than Normal, because more 1/2 circle, slider, 1/2 part. Are you sure this is easy? Currently normal easier than Easy difficulty. I think, remap this difficulty, pleae, delete some 1/2 circle, and slider pair, and use simple 1/1 slider.

using 1/2 for a song this slow for an Easy honestly feels appropriate. I'm willing to make the usage of 1/2 as predictable and easy to hit as possible, but I don't think that simply getting rid of them is a good idea, it makes the whole thing boring to play, which honestly doesn't do the song justice.

Examples:

- 00:17:625 (3) - Delete
- 00:20:156 (2,3) - Delete circle pair, and use 1/2 slider, or delete 00:20:518 (3) - circle It's bit hard for Easy.
- 00:25:218 (4,5) - Use 1/1 slider
- 00:29:194 (3) - Delete
- 00:59:204 (1,2,3) - This part very hard. Don't use this technique.
- 01:04:266 (3,4,5,6,1) - Same as ^Extremely hard for Easy. Don't use this technique.

... and the rest.

Don't use 1/2 circle, and 1/2 slider pair.It's Easy difficulty. not Hard and Normal!

00:55:589 (1,2) - Flow is not good here. It's better flow: http://imagerz.com/QBUTDUtvAwMMB11IGQVR feels fine to me, it looks/plays more interesting to me :c
02:12:238 (2) - CTRL + G. Flow is better replaced with circles, feels nicer ><

Good Luck

Euny wrote:

thanks for mod.♥ m4m as your request.!

• General

1. add ' Nwolf ' in tag. cause your gd mapper. oops owo

• Easy

1. 00:17:625 (3) - its right tempo. but i recommend remove this note for make same tempo with 00:15:094 (1,2) - these. cause its start part. hope you dont ignore it xD sure, I'm always willing to make the rythm as easy to follow as possible
2. 00:36:788 (5) - seems to you missed finish at this back. cause you already do that your normal diffso many finishes in the song ;A;

• Normal

1. 00:27:749 (2) - add notex241y172 it makes better tempo imo. works for me
2. 02:45:501 (1) - single combo doesn't looks fine to low diffs. if you accept, remove nc and your easy do it too. hmm..I guess
3. 03:04:302 (2) - i heard little finish sound from this tail (not for reverse). so, how about add finish at this back? yeah..it's in the Easy Diff too D:
4. 03:36:119 (2) - how about changing that note to 1/2 slider? i think, its really fit for vocal. not too sure about this one..was trying to have it consistent with different patterns. I guess changing things up a bit wont hurt. Will add this for now
   

that's it
hope this is helpful...

Taeyang wrote:

• General

1. Use same KIAI time
   
   
   inconsistencies between GD's are fine
   
2. Need setting colours
   Recommend coloues
   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 124,197,35
   Combo2 : 208,172,49
   Combo3 : 66,139,221
   Combo4 : 189,87,198
   
   will think about adding custom ones, though I kinda like the default ones :c
   

• Easy

1. 00:29:557 (4) - add whistle dun
2. 00:36:788 (5) - remove finish no, there's a finish in the song
3. 01:15:836 (3) - add whistle donje
4. 02:16:577 (1) - suggest Did something similar with a red anchor. though I feel like the shape had a few to many bumps
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:21:458 (4) - unused greenline
   oops

• Normal

1. 00:59:927 - suggest use reverse slide? I actually want this to be 1/2 heavy, so I'll leave this as circles
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:05:712 (2) - change slide a single circle feels nicer
3. 01:30:298 (1) - sorry, but I like the simpler shape more :c I don't feel like th song calls for anything fancy
   
   SPOILER

   

George wrote:

---General---
I would highly recommend a hard difficulty so its a rankable spread

I feel like a Hard Diff for this would feel a tad bit forced, just like a Normal Diff with slightly higher SV slapped onto it :c I tried making the Normal a Normal+/slowed down Hard to make up for that

---Easy---
IMO I would increase the ds a bit so there isnt such a big overlap on the 1/2's overlaps are fine, spaced out AND 1/2 heavy for an easy would be to much
01:07:158 (1,2,3) - The DS here seems a bit screwed up, I would suggest moving 01:09:328 (2) left a bit DS is fine?
01:58:861 - idk why but I would suggest a circle here or turning 01:58:499 (3) into a slider pattern is already very 1/2 heavy, so I'd rather not add one
02:44:778 (4) - The greens surrounding this circle are no longer needed, just use the Sampleset box to change it to drum aight
03:54:920 (1) - I would make this spinner end on his voice or the end of the song that'd make the spinner to short I'm afraid :/

---Normal---
01:06:074 - I would add a circle here to sync with the "S" sound in "reason" I actually like little gap here, adding a circle sounds a tad bit awkward >< I'm willing to play around with this a little though so we'll see how this pattern changes with future mods
02:44:055 (4) - Once again I would use sampleset aight

I can't mod taiko

glhf sorry for a shitty mod

jloughman14 wrote:

Hello from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team! This song brings me back to my middle school years.

Knock Knock

General

Tags: Post-grunge
Source: The Reason

Normal

Damn this is a fine looking normal. I couldn't find much that seemed like it should be changed just cause of my personal preference.

I seen what you were saying about the Hard diff, would you want a hard gd? Also, take a star
no kds

Nwolf wrote:

source cannot be the album

00:26:664 - D
00:29:557 - d
00:31:003 - d
00:32:449 - d
00:33:534 - k
00:36:607 (44,45) - kdk
00:42:573 - d
00:44:380 - k
00:48:177 (78,79) - dkk
00:54:142 - d
00:58:120 - d (can add it or not)
01:40:060 - k
01:40:421 - d
01:42:229 - d
01:55:968 - k
01:59:584 - d
02:55:082 (12,13) - dd (can change it or not)
03:03:750 (36,37) - dd (can change it or not)
03:09:183 - delete ?
03:55:281 - 04:00:343 - can add spinner or not

Snaggletooth wrote:

It's amazing how this song envokes a feeling of sickness in my stomache.
I've heard it on the radio so many times that it acctually makes me physically sick.

oh god that sounds so brutal D: I'm sorry ;w;

[Easy]

1. Rhythmical Issues:
   1. 01:01:012 - This needs to be hittable. The vocals of the chours start here with a quit signiffican
      key-change. Personally, I'd rather stretch the slider 01:01:373 (1) to this point to match the vocals
      perfectly. I also understand tho that this would miss an equally important part - Kiai Start.
      How about this?
      
      
      Timeline

      
   2. 01:58:861 - ^
   3. 03:08:279 - ^

Hmm I can kinda see what you were saying, this is actually a really close to the rythm I orignially used for this section. I switched the 1/2 slider and the circle because it felt better the other way around

[Normal]

1. Placement Issues:
   1. 01:01:012 (5,1) - You should consider/try to unstack these. This hurts the flow a lot,
      esspecially before a Kiai where it's supposed to be a build-up. The stopping-motion takes
      everything out of the climax here.
      
      
      Pattern

      
      you'd need to rearrange the following pattern(s) accordingly ofc.
   2. 01:58:861 (3,1) - ^
   3. 03:08:279 (5,1) - ^
      
      I kinda want to stack these as the vocals feel a little more drawn out here, like starting on the red tick and then ending on the white tick, and I'd like to try and emphasize this by stacking them :c Will see what others have to say, though I don't neccessarily think it hurts the flow
      
   4. 02:33:931 (1) - Just a little thing that I noticed. I'd be a lot nicer to listen to if the corner of the slider
      would hit the drums correctly like you did with 02:39:716 (1)
   tried being creative with this one
   

Nice Set ;A; Love your maps <3 Take my star! starring me eventhough my map makes you sick! WOW thanks!

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello~ M4M as we discussed!

[> General <]

1. - It's probably minor, but remove the unused .osb file to lessen the beatmap folder's size. done
2. - Try to add more on the tags for players to find this map easier instead of just one genre, for example: "Alternative", "Island", or anything related. umm I'm horrible with this >< added some more though to make sure the map will be a tad bit easier to find
3. - Inconsistent combo colours, please check through all STD diffs to avoid this. oops
4. - The rest are fine for now.

[> Easy <]

1. 00:43:296 (5,1) - The pattern/spacing is fine, but i think this is a tiny complex for beginners to notice a 1/2 beat. How about curving (5)? or change the sliding position for the player's cursor move smoothly. lined them up more smoothly
2. 01:12:943 (1,2) - Idk, but maybe recorrect blanket? sure c: blanket might still not be 100% due to the sliders mild curve, but it's as good as it'll get I think
3. 01:22:344 (1) - I think you should remove this NC, because the previous combo was just too short... since you were adding one NC each two new tracks ofc. fine
4. 01:59:222 (1) - This is quite much above, nearby the healthbar. Maybe you should move this slider down a little. lined up with he previous 1/2. also re-arranged the following patterns a bit
5. 02:37:547 (1,2,3) - Well, i guess you should differ the rhythm here, since similar rhythms repeated would bore few players. umm I replaced this with a 1/2 slider since I don't really know how else I could differ the rythm here without making it too 1/2 heavy or unfitting :c
6. - Great mapping anyway! I didn't find much. cool! I tried making it a bit umm 'dirtier' than my usual Easy Diffs, so I'm glad this worked out

[> Normal <]

1. 00:17:987 (1,2,3) - The spacing here is quite weird to me, since (2) is kinda pretty far just for stacking. Spacing looks much important than stack imo. huh pretty weird.it's a tad bit close to the previous slider now (1.26 I think, which is honestly not noticeable) but has the right amount of Distance to the next circle
2. 00:34:618 (2) - This is probably okay, but i prefer filling out the rhythm by replacing this into a 1/2 slider, as you've done on other parts previously. filled this with a circle as I felt like it did a better job of covering the vocals too
3. 00:41:126 (1,2,3) - Almost the same spacing issue as 00:17:987 (1,2,3) - I don't really understand this one :c The spacing here seems fine to me
4. - There might be more like above mod, but i'm not sure lol check the map for other stack heavy patterns or inconsistencies with the DS and the only thing I found that was slightly inconsistent was 1.26 for on instance which was honestly just not noticeable as it didn't hrut the flow or anything
5. 00:59:927 (2,3,4,5) - This is likely overclicking, maybe you should replace one of them into 1/2 sliders as done before to emphasize much to the song track. replaced the last two with a slider
6. 01:32:467 (2) - Almost the same as 00:34:618 (2) - again, filled up with a circle
7. 02:19:469 (4,1) - Uhmm, why not swapping these NC? The new track just made a hit on (4), and not (1). honestly just a mistake
8. 02:33:208 (4,1) - Try to recorrect (1)'s first curve for one perfect blanket over slider (4)'s tail. made a minor adjustment :c
9. 03:07:195 (2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:59:927 (2,3,4,5) -, how about the rhythm you made on 01:57:776 (2,3) - ? Would be a little nicer on this part as well. used a 1/2 repeat here too, though I kept the first 3 circles I think there are a lot of different ways to properly map this, and I tried using different ways for each kiai
10. 03:17:318 (1,1) - It's not really close enough not overlapping, but try to split these two and parallel both, just as you did on 03:23:103 (1,1) - this kinda feel into place anyways while changing the start of the kiai haha
11. - Same comment as the previous diff, but there are few rhythms need a pretty pretty small check~

Really good map! You want this beautiful "" placed on your map? Ehheheh call me back when done :333

tutuhaha wrote:

[Easy]
04:03:597 (x) - spinner end at there? sureee

[Normal]
unified your comb color for both diff 0.0?
remember to click "Enable Custom Colours" >< completely forgot about this. It should be fixed now!
02:33:931 (1) - 02:39:716 (1) - use same shape but for 02:39:716 (1) - ctrl+j _(:зゝ∠)_ kewl
04:03:597 (x) - spinner end at there? sure c:

call me back when you ready_(:зゝ∠)_

HappyRocket88 wrote:

General

Well. First at all, I just have to say that I'm surpised with a hard diff of this slow map (because of the slow BPM) and here it is. Good job! Although, there are some issues that I'm going to point at because they're based on Ranking Criteria rules. So here's a minor list.

1. There's a huge tag conflics with the Jlough's hard and the other diffs. All the mapset should have the same in the tags and in the source. So please, fix this. It's a minor issue tbut it can be a trouble sometimes.
2. I think this diff is missing a lot of hitsounds and I guess this is the most important now. Mostly hard diffs have hitsounds which provide the players feel comfortable while he/she plays. Moreover, you're follwing the drums here, so keep in your mind to emphasize the strong beats I'm gonna expand this in the mod then.
3. You're using almost the same pattern for the whole song. There such as variety of flows you can use to make your map more enjoyable.

Jlough's Hard

Rhythm of the hit objects

1. 00:24:856 (3,4,5) This looks readable but kind of ugly. You can blanket them or trying something like this
2. 00:48:538 (5,6,7) This plays good, but seem to be so intuitive. What about making the 00:49:442 (7) more lineal.
3. 01:29:936 (6,7,8,1) Kind of confusing.
4. 01:33:552 (7) This could be more lineal, please.
5. 01:37:167 (8) ^
6. 02:03:199 (7) ^
7. 02:12:238 (3) Here fits better a 1/2 slider that repeats one.
8. 01:45:122 (2,3,4) ^
9. 02:26:339 (8,1,2) Stack them please.
10. 03:43:712 (5,6,7) ^
11. 02:31:039 (3,4,5,6) what are you following at this part? It's readable but I don't see the sense to put a 1/1 slider in every blue tick.
12. 02:59:602 (7) There's no reason to put a downbeat here. I think here fits better a 3 notes to emphasize the lyrics and the drums.
13. 03:34:311 (4,5) Weird pattern make sure the end of the sliders ends in the same place.

Blanket's stuffs

1. 00:58:843 (1,2) Blanket please.
2. 01:15:474 (5) Move it a little bit to the right to fix the spacing between the three and the five.
3. 01:50:906 (7,8,1) Move the circle a little bit more to down
4. 01:57:053 (1,2,3) Blaket this please.

Awkward Overlaps or Stacks

1. 03:02:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) Weird overlap. I don't know if this is intentional, but look weird. Don't you think this will look better if you just replace it by 1/2 sliders?

Hitsounds

1. 00:22:326 (5) - 00:23:772 (8) - 00:28:110 (1,2,3) - 00:43:838 (3,4) - 01:02:458 (7,8,1,2) - 01:18:367 (2,3,4) - 01:21:259 (2,3,4,5,6) - Set these as Drum (sampleset)
2. 00:46:550 (8) - Set htese as Drum (slampset) and add a clap.
3. 00:55:589 (5,6,7,8) - 01:53:437 (4,5,6,7,8) - Set these with whistles.
4. 03:09:364 (1) - Set as claps