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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年4月17日 at 7:49:35

Artist: Qu Jin Nan
Title: Xia Guang
Source: 精灵世纪
BPM: 124.99
Filesize: 6494kb
Play Time: 02:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.44 stars, 114 notes)
  2. Normal (1.96 stars, 210 notes)


Download: Qu Jin Nan - Xia Guang
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posted
MP3音量有点低
[Normal]
00:48:532 (3) - blanket
00:51:412 (2) - blanket
这sv感觉像是hard
[easy]
00:15:890 (1) - blanket
在easy里用这么多遮挡没问题吗
posted

z1085684963 wrote:

SPOILER
MP3音量有点低
[Normal]
00:48:532 (3) - blanket 改了
00:51:412 (2) - blanket 加了点弧度
这sv感觉像是hard wwwww
[easy]
00:15:890 (1) - blanket 不行啊,因为ds的原因包不了
在easy里用这么多遮挡没问题吗 也许吧
谢谢~
posted
[General]
  1. 配色应该冷色,背景图都是冷色,歌声应该也是冷色,所以青蓝紫会比较好
  2. 音效声音太大了,主歌音量30,副歌50就够了,最后一段20
  3. soft-whistle用默认的好


[Normal]
  1. 00:23:090 (3,4) - 然而flow并不好,而且也不建议这样短时间内叠,前后调整下http://puu.sh/gGHHq.jpg
  2. 00:41:332 (3,1) - 头碰头的话flow会比较好,但是尾对尾就不好了,勉强这样试试http://puu.sh/gGI5H.jpg
  3. 00:48:052 (2,3) - 这是逼死强迫症
  4. 00:58:613 (3,4) - 最好不要擦到
  5. 01:06:294 (1,2,3) - 前后调整下http://puu.sh/gGI1f.jpg
  6. 02:27:900 - 圈,转盘这里开始02:28:380 -


[Easy]
  1. 00:25:010 - 加break
  2. 00:36:051 (2,1) - 可以设计个blanket
  3. 00:39:893 (3,1) - 这种其实真的不好
  4. 01:15:894 - 加break
  5. 01:39:416 (1,2) - 不要擦边
  6. 02:28:380 - 转盘这里开始
posted

liangv587 wrote:

SPOILER
[General]
  1. 配色应该冷色,背景图都是冷色,歌声应该也是冷色,所以青蓝紫会比较好 印象中不能太接近底图颜色,暂时保持
  2. 音效声音太大了,主歌音量30,副歌50就够了,最后一段20
  3. soft-whistle用默认的好


[Normal]
  1. 00:23:090 (3,4) - 然而flow并不好,而且也不建议这样短时间内叠,前后调整下http://puu.sh/gGHHq.jpg
  2. 00:41:332 (3,1) - 头碰头的话flow会比较好,但是尾对尾就不好了,勉强这样试试http://puu.sh/gGI5H.jpg
  3. 00:48:052 (2,3) - 这是逼死强迫症
  4. 00:58:613 (3,4) - 最好不要擦到
  5. 01:06:294 (1,2,3) - 前后调整下http://puu.sh/gGI1f.jpg
  6. 02:27:900 - 圈,转盘这里开始02:28:380 - 神改!


然而我看不了puush图。。。
[Easy]
  1. 00:25:010 - 加break
  2. 00:36:051 (2,1) - 可以设计个blanket 我试试
  3. 00:39:893 (3,1) - 这种其实真的不好
  4. 01:15:894 - 加break
  5. 01:39:416 (1,2) - 不要擦边
  6. 02:28:380 - 转盘这里开始
thx~
update
posted
Hey there! Raiden from my mod queue :3

Easy
  1. 00:40:373 (1) - Change the form of the slider? To something like http://puu.sh/gJoW3.jpg
  2. 00:51:894 (1) - Change form of slider?
  3. 00:57:654 (1) - ^
  4. 01:09:175 (1) - ^
  5. 01:27:896 (1) - ^
  6. 01:36:536 (1) - ^
  7. 01:52:377 (3) - ^
  8. 02:19:740 (1) - ^

    I'm saying this because in an Easy difficulty, a newbie player shouldn't have reading problems, and these sliders can give some trouble in my opinion ^^'
Normal
  1. Overall: change CS to 3,0?
  2. 01:25:015 (1) - Change form of slider?
  3. 01:39:416 (1) - ^
posted

Raiden wrote:

Hey there! Raiden from my mod queue :3

Easy
  1. 00:40:373 (1) - Change the form of the slider? To something like http://puu.sh/gJoW3.jpg
  2. 00:51:894 (1) - Change form of slider?
  3. 00:57:654 (1) - ^ done
  4. 01:09:175 (1) - ^
  5. 01:27:896 (1) - ^
  6. 01:36:536 (1) - ^
  7. 01:52:377 (3) - ^
  8. 02:19:740 (1) - ^

    I'm saying this because in an Easy difficulty, a newbie player shouldn't have reading problems, and these sliders can give some trouble in my opinion ^^'
Normal
  1. Overall: change CS to 3,0? hummm, want keep
  2. 01:25:015 (1) - Change form of slider?
  3. 01:39:416 (1) - ^
thank you! will check later
update
posted
[Easy]
  1. 00:37:492 (1,2) - Suggest you to put 00:38:931 (2) above to have better flow
  2. 00:38:931 (2) - Avoid stack like this in an Easy diff
  3. 00:47:573 (2) - Curve up instead? Since you curved down in 00:46:133 (1)
  4. 00:57:654 (1) - Move out tail a little bit
  5. 01:01:493 (2,3) - Same as 00:38:931 (2)
  6. 01:04:855 (2,1) - ^
  7. 01:25:015 (1,2,3,1) - ^
  8. 01:30:777 (1,2) - ^ x.x
  9. 01:38:936 (3,1) - ^
  10. 01:43:737 (2) - Try another shape instead? as it overlapped with 01:42:297 (1)
  11. 01:49:017 (2,3) - Remove stack
  12. 01:50:937 (1,3) - ^
  13. 02:01:498 (3,1) - ^
  14. 02:25:500 (1) - Curve up?


[Normal]
  1. Use CS 3/3.5 instead
  2. 00:23:090 (3,4) - Same as Easy, remove stack, still it is not suggested to use in Normal diff
  3. 00:33:171 (1) - Remove NC
  4. 00:41:332 (3,1,2) - This pattern may mislead players to hit 00:42:772 (2) instead of 00:42:292 (1)
  5. 00:59:093 (4) - curve up a bit, nearly touch 00:58:613 (3)
  6. 01:16:855 (3,4) - remove stack
  7. 01:37:976 (4,5) - Try this?:
  8. 01:40:856 (4,1) - overlapped
  9. 01:50:937 (1,2) - Not suggested to use this pattern
  10. 02:01:018 (4,5) - Same as 01:37:976 (4,5)
  11. 02:16:859 (1,2,3) - flow here looks weird
good luck :3
posted

Chaoslitz wrote:

SPOILER
[Easy]
  1. 00:37:492 (1,2) - Suggest you to put 00:38:931 (2) above to have better flow will try. orz
  2. 00:38:931 (2) - Avoid stack like this in an Easy diff keep temporary if BN say not
  3. 00:47:573 (2) - Curve up instead? Since you curved down in 00:46:133 (1) done
  4. 00:57:654 (1) - Move out tail a little bit done
  5. 01:01:493 (2,3) - Same as 00:38:931 (2)
  6. 01:04:855 (2,1) - ^
  7. 01:25:015 (1,2,3,1) - ^
  8. 01:30:777 (1,2) - ^ x.x QAQ
  9. 01:38:936 (3,1) - ^
  10. 01:43:737 (2) - Try another shape instead? as it overlapped with 01:42:297 (1) keep
  11. 01:49:017 (2,3) - Remove stack
  12. 01:50:937 (1,3) - ^
  13. 02:01:498 (3,1) - ^
  14. 02:25:500 (1) - Curve up?done


[Normal]
  1. Use CS 3/3.5 instead hmmm, keep
  2. 00:23:090 (3,4) - Same as Easy, remove stack, still it is not suggested to use in Normal diff QAQ
  3. 00:33:171 (1) - Remove NC
  4. 00:41:332 (3,1,2) - This pattern may mislead players to hit 00:42:772 (2) instead of 00:42:292 (1) fixed
  5. 00:59:093 (4) - curve up a bit, nearly touch 00:58:613 (3)
  6. 01:16:855 (3,4) - remove stack
  7. 01:37:976 (4,5) - Try this?:
    keep
  8. 01:40:856 (4,1) - overlapped fixed
  9. 01:50:937 (1,2) - Not suggested to use this pattern
  10. 02:01:018 (4,5) - Same as 01:37:976 (4,5)
  11. 02:16:859 (1,2,3) - flow here looks weird QAQ
good luck :3
thanks!
update
posted
我草我小时候看过这个 疯狂循环这歌
posted
射了就跑,就是拉么刺激
posted
from #modreqs

[Easy]
  1. 00:39:892 (3,1) - Probably shouldn't stack like this in an easy
  2. 00:43:253 (1) - You could ctrl+g here to change up flow and emphasize the vocals a bit more
  3. 00:54:774 (1) - Flip the curve for flow change and accentuate vocals again
  4. 01:01:493 (2,3) - Avoid stacks like this
  5. 01:04:855 (2,1) - ^
  6. 01:25:015 (1,2) - ^
    yeah you probably get my point with these stacks lol
  7. 01:33:656 (1) - imo a ctrl+j would play better here, the angle of movement from the previous slider feels kind of tight


[Normal]
  • Try CS 3.7~ it's already quite a big jump from the easy difficulty
    Also don't forget those stacks ;w;
  1. 00:59:093 (4) - A larger curve would look much nicer like in 01:00:533 (1)
  2. 02:00:058 (2,3) - Try to move these so the tail of (2) isn't so close


Nice map, not much to say
posted

sukiNathan wrote:

SPOILER
from #modreqs

[Easy]
  1. 00:39:892 (3,1) - Probably shouldn't stack like this in an easy about this stack, arranged for the time being
  2. 00:43:253 (1) - You could ctrl+g here to change up flow and emphasize the vocals a bit more
  3. 00:54:774 (1) - Flip the curve for flow change and accentuate vocals again
  4. 01:01:493 (2,3) - Avoid stacks like this
  5. 01:04:855 (2,1) - ^
  6. 01:25:015 (1,2) - ^
    yeah you probably get my point with these stacks lol ORZ....
  7. 01:33:656 (1) - imo a ctrl+j would play better here, the angle of movement from the previous slider feels kind of tight keep because the stack...


[Normal]
  • Try CS 3.7~ it's already quite a big jump from the easy difficulty
    Also don't forget those stacks ;w; i know...
  1. 00:59:093 (4) - A larger curve would look much nicer like in 01:00:533 (1) keep for better flow
  2. 02:00:058 (2,3) - Try to move these so the tail of (2) isn't so close done


Nice map, not much to say
Thank you! Nate
will check later :)
posted
晚來了~~

這張圖我好像之前有載過,不過沒有認真去看

[Easy]
  1. 聲音好小聲...還是我的聽力有問題 :? (要不要把所有難度的聲音提高10%,沒辦法合音樂的話就算了)
  2. 我只有抓到比較危險的幾個地方: 01:27:896 (1) - 01:52:377 (3) - 02:13:979 (1) -

    這三條Slider靠右側的那個我想應該沒問題,我拉過Slider去貼他只超出點陣圖的一格...
    剩下兩個尾巴有點低,能不能往上調一下??
[Normal]

  • 00:23:570 (4) - 沒跟DS沒關係嗎?? 這裡也是01:18:295 (4) - 01:47:337 (4) -
    00:49:972 (3) - 我自己會改成Circle,我的Mapping直覺告訴我要這樣作 (無視掉沒差)
    01:23:095 (3) - ^

  1. 後面音量太小要憑感覺打了....
就這樣,抱歉這麼晚才過來
今天沉澱一下心情準備摸大量的圖,這是第一張
這張我看已經可以找BN了,星星送你祝你一臂之力
早日Rank :)
posted

m1223961117 wrote:

SPOILER
晚來了~~

這張圖我好像之前有載過,不過沒有認真去看

[Easy]
  1. 聲音好小聲...還是我的聽力有問題 :? (要不要把所有難度的聲音提高10%,沒辦法合音樂的話就算了)
  2. 我只有抓到比較危險的幾個地方: 01:27:896 (1) - 01:52:377 (3) - 02:13:979 (1) -

    這三條Slider靠右側的那個我想應該沒問題,我拉過Slider去貼他只超出點陣圖的一格...
    剩下兩個尾巴有點低,能不能往上調一下??

    其实这几个地方超界反倒是次要,要改就要重下取消重叠了,总之先改超界
[Normal]

  • 00:23:570 (4) - 沒跟DS沒關係嗎?? 這裡也是01:18:295 (4) - 01:47:337 (4) - 小程度大约0.1左右误差可以归为ds的
    00:49:972 (3) - 我自己會改成Circle,我的Mapping直覺告訴我要這樣作 (無視掉沒差)
    01:23:095 (3) - ^

  1. 後面音量太小要憑感覺打了....
就這樣,抱歉這麼晚才過來
今天沉澱一下心情準備摸大量的圖,這是第一張
這張我看已經可以找BN了,星星送你祝你一臂之力
早日Rank :)
谢谢啦,晚些再看
update
posted
Hello! Ticket used from my queue!

I found this map quite great! So ... ~
[> General <]
  1. - Timing Check: I think the BPM is actually 125BPM, it'd still be the same as you've made.
  2. - Just Easy and Normal? Nothing harder?
  3. - I don't think soft-hitclap and soft-hitfinish sounds fitting to the song like this one. But maybe you could try another softer custom hitsounds unlike this one.


[> Easy <]
  1. 00:30:291 (2,1,2) - Are you planning to make a blanket here? or not?
  2. 00:38:931 (2,1) - Is this overlap on purpose?
  3. 00:47:573 (2,3) - Maybe you should try another pattern than this one, sth like blanket or circularize.
  4. 01:35:096 (2,1) - Same as 00:38:931 (2,1) -
  5. 01:59:578 (1,3) - A little recorrect blanket.
  6. 02:04:378 (3,1) - I think you could make a double blanket here a bit?
  7. - Some overlaps doesn't like okay to me, but most i found are quite amazing!


[> Normal <]
  1. 00:57:173 (5,2) - Stack or sth?
  2. 01:14:934 (1,3,4) - ^
  3. 02:03:418 (3,4) - Recorrect blanket or sth?
  4. - Perfection.
Get me back when you're done! B)
posted

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello! Ticket used from my queue!

I found this map quite great! So ... ~
[> General <]
  1. - Timing Check: I think the BPM is actually 125BPM, it'd still be the same as you've made. 124.990 more appropriate imo ;w;
  2. - Just Easy and Normal? Nothing harder?cant make hard for this song Orz
  3. - I don't think soft-hitclap and soft-hitfinish sounds fitting to the song like this one. But maybe you could try another softer custom hitsounds unlike this one.


[> Easy <]
  1. 00:30:291 (2,1,2) - Are you planning to make a blanket here? or not? done
  2. 00:38:931 (2,1) - Is this overlap on purpose? fixed
  3. 00:47:573 (2,3) - Maybe you should try another pattern than this one, sth like blanket or circularize. done
  4. 01:35:096 (2,1) - Same as 00:38:931 (2,1) - fixed
  5. 01:59:578 (1,3) - A little recorrect blanket. done
  6. 02:04:378 (3,1) - I think you could make a double blanket here a bit?
  7. - Some overlaps doesn't like okay to me, but most i found are quite amazing!


[> Normal <]
  1. 00:57:173 (5,2) - Stack or sth? fixed stack
  2. 01:14:934 (1,3,4) - ^
  3. 02:03:418 (3,4) - Recorrect blanket or sth? done
  4. - Perfection.
Get me back when you're done! B)
thanks!update
posted
Checked everything, i'm not sure if this Easy diff you have is fine with those slider-border overlapping and few stacks. I hope it's not a big deal...

Normal is fine, less the same reason with Easy. But i feel this map is good to go! Bubbled ~ :3/
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\o/
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hype o3o
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