1. Easy (1.24 stars, 75 notes)
2. Insane (4.15 stars, 308 notes)
3. Karia's Hard (3.29 stars, 265 notes)
4. Normal (2.15 stars, 151 notes)

Thank you Ringating for the BG !

because I really want this to be ranked owo

No Dap wrote:

nice BG 10/10

No Dap wrote:

nice BG 10/10

No Dap wrote:

nice BG 10/10

Arphimigon wrote:

From #modreq
(This is for Insane, I might do Hard another time)

00:02:375 (3,4,5) - This is a not-so-nice looking overlap. Since it is an insane i would suggest taking Combo 3 slider and placing it higher. Also the slider after is a -tad- awkward to play considering flow, but that should be fine. i need a second opinion on this coz it looks OK for me.

00:03:060 (5,3) - Pixel overlap! need second opinion

00:04:603 (1) - Maybe make this slider so it points directly towards 00:04:260 (5) - ? (move up 7/8 small grid spaces for that) and then make 00:05:118 (2) - follow the line after. Fixed

00:06:318 (6) - Distance snap on notes before and after this should preferably be the same (1-ish or 1.1-ish instead of both) Fixed

00:11:289 (1,3) - Should be symmetrical. Use CTRL-J here. Also after that you can move all 00:11:289 (1,2,3) - to make a diamond with the center note and flip again for the other side. Like this:

Diamond

Fixed

00:12:832 (2,3,4) - Same distance snap again please! Fixed

00:19:346 (1,2) - Pixel overlap, looks eh. need second opinion

00:19:689 (2,3,4) - Again, same distance snap (close though) Fixed

00:23:632 (6) - Doesn't follow the burst-stream line. Move 4/5 spaces to the right (small grid size) Fixed

00:28:431 (9) - ...this overlap isn't nice either. On that note, this slider doesn't even need to be so close to the stack anyway! Fixed

00:35:974 (6) - Perhaps blanket that with 00:36:317 (7) - like this:

Blanket

Fixed

00:36:660 (1,2,3) - Flow is real awkward here. I'd change that part completely. Changed. not sure if this flow is better tho.

(00:37:174 (3) - Could be blanketed with the Combo 1 slider.) changed the flow so i couldn't be blanketed now.

00:38:888 (8) - Same as 00:28:431 (9) Fixed

00:46:088 (2) - Move down 8/9 small grid pixels to complete blanket~ Fixed

00:54:316 (3) - Move down 1 space to be in line with sliders. Fixed

01:01:859 (1,2) - These shouldn't be on EXACTLY the same place as 01:00:487 (1,2) , consider moving 1/2 pixels up and left (respectively). Fixed

01:04:773 (5) - Move down 7 pixels for line with 01:04:430 (4) Fixed

01:04:945 (6) - Move up 5 pixels for line with 01:05:116 (7) Fixed

01:07:345 (5) - This overlap is okay, but i was -suggest- changing it if possible. (by moving all 01:07:345 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - over more to the right) Moved a little to the right

01:12:830 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:01:859 (1,2) Fixed

BG is 10/10 though~

Asfano wrote:

normal:

move 01:23:802 (4) - so slider ends hit 01:22:773 (2) - Fixed
I think 01:00:487 (1,2) - should be similar to 01:01:859 (3,4) - and pair 01:02:545 (4,1) - but pair 3 and 4 instead. It looks OK for me, needs second opinion

hard:

01:22:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this combo is pretty long maybe nc at 7 Fixed

insane:

move 00:07:004 (10) - to x= 304 like the two previous notesFixed, wow i didn't see that.
01:22:431 (10) - ^ Fixed

Hitorikko wrote:

]normal:

I think 01:00:487 (1,2) - should be similar to 01:01:859 (3,4) - and pair 01:02:545 (4,1) - but pair 3 and 4 instead. It looks OK for me, needs second opinion

Setz wrote:

also i might take a look at this when you finish all the diffs to give you some general pointers.

jloughman14 wrote:

Yes! Love this song, so happy someone is trying to make a standard difficulty map for it.

General

Different combo colors I will change the color soon, but atm i dunno how to

Normal

00:24:146 (3,4,5,2,3,4) - Spread these a bit more just because no other triples are this close in the song. Fixed
00:39:574 (5) - Perhaps don't stack this, up to you.Changed

Hard

HP 5.5-5.7 Changed into 5.5
00:16:603 (1,2,3) - These don't need to be sliders. Fixed
00:48:145 (1,2,3,4) - When I played it, this part feels really odd, consider not stacking them. Maybe do this. Changed

Insane

00:06:832 (8,9) - Delete these. it doesn't feel complete without the triple. needs second opinion
00:15:141 and 00:15:832 - Add a circle here. needs second opinion
00:17:374 (5,6) - Delete these. Deleted

Awesome beatmap! Good luck on the rankings, take my stars! haha

Thank you for modding and for shooting stars

Hitorikko wrote:

I will change the color soon, but atm i dunno how to

1. and now, the lowest diff star rating is 2.18. you must have diff lower than 2.00. it`s unrankable
2. check unnecessary letterbox during breaks from now on. remove this plz

1. 00:11:289 (7) - recommend add finish at last point
2. 00:17:632 (6) - add clap here?
3. 00:33:403 (4) - ^
4. 00:39:575 (5) - move up a little. it`s more playable i think :3
   
   Box

   
5. 01:09:746 (3) - ^^

1. 00:02:375 (3,4,5) - how about make this anti-jump to just normal jump? now little confusing
2. 00:12:489 (8) - same easy and add NC here
3. 00:31:175 (1,2) - recommend combine both to slider
4. 01:13:860 (4) - add clap at front
5. 01:17:803 (3,4,5) - same 00:02:375 (3,4,5)

1. 00:06:832 (8,9,10) - put distance to 00:06:660 (7). now quite confusing
2. 00:12:489 (1) - same other diff
3. 00:15:146 - add circle here?
4. 00:15:832 - ^
5. 00:16:518 - ^
6. 00:33:918 (10) - add NC here :3
7. 01:03:232 (9,1) - switch NC

jloughman14 wrote:

Song Setup> Colours> Click the colours you want.
Also, are you planning on adding a video behind it?

I already tried it but the color didn't change i'm not sure about the video but i'm planning to make a SB.

Ranger wrote:

yup o/
from m4m request

[General]

1. and now, the lowest diff star rating is 2.18. you must have diff lower than 2.00. it`s unrankable
2. check unnecessary letterbox during breaks from now on. remove this plz Fixed

[Normal]

i`m not recommend use change of speed slider for normal diff. but it`s your mind
and recommend ar-1, because it's most easy diff. Changed to AR4

1. 00:11:289 (7) - recommend add finish at last point Added
2. 00:17:632 (6) - add clap here? Added
3. 00:33:403 (4) - ^ hmmm. i think clap here isn't needed
4. 00:39:575 (5) - move up a little. it`s more playable i think :3 Fixed
   
   Box

   
5. 01:09:746 (3) - ^^it's fine

[Hard]

1. 00:02:375 (3,4,5) - how about make this anti-jump to just normal jump? now little confusing It looks fine for me. I need a second opinion on this
2. 00:12:489 (8) - same easy and add NC here Fixed
3. 00:31:175 (1,2) - recommend combine both to slider
4. 01:13:860 (4) - add clap at front Added
5. 01:17:803 (3,4,5) - same 00:02:375 (3,4,5) hmmm..

[Insane]

only this diff uncheck widescreen support

1. 00:06:832 (8,9,10) - put distance to 00:06:660 (7). now quite confusing Fixed
2. 00:12:489 (1) - same other diff Fixed
3. 00:15:146 - add circle here? need 3rd opinion.
4. 00:15:832 - ^ ^
5. 00:16:518 - ^ ^
6. 00:33:918 (10) - add NC here :3 Added
7. 01:03:232 (9,1) - switch NC Switched

GL~ :3

wendao wrote:

hello, quick mod from #modreqs

[General]

1. nice bg you got there
2. somehow your custom combo colour didn't fit well with the bg, how about Combo colour changed ! Finally figured out what went wrong when I failed to change the combo colour (Ignore all beatmap skin = ON )
   
   this

   
3. delete (TV Size) from title? TV Size removed
4. how about change the source to ゆるゆり instead of Yuru Yuri?, you can move yuru yuri to tags, well you already didChanged

[Insane]

• 
  well... your Insane had many weird antijump, especially at vocal part

1. 00:01:518 (1,2) - I prefer it to be like Fixed
   
   this

   
   
   
2. 00:02:375 (3,4) - no no no no.... bad overlap, better change those sliders Fixed
   
3. 00:03:060 (5,3) - also this Fixed
   
4. 00:16:432 (1,2) - how about make it consistent with previous object? (move 1 grid to right) Fixed
   
5. 00:19:346 (1,2) - aww... this is not good, seriously Fixed
   
6. 00:22:775 (5) - New Combo here Fixed
   
7. 00:32:889 - add object here? or simply make previous slider a repeat Fixed
   
8. 00:38:718 - also here Fixed
   
9. 00:49:518 - move the spinner here Fixed
   
10. 00:51:403 (1) - blanket (red node move to 300,128 || next node to 336,144 || next node to 360,176 || last node to 356,224), you can move (2) afterward Fixed
    
11. 00:52:260 (4) - New Combo here Fixed
    
12. 01:07:346 (5,6,7) - instead of make it bad, try Fixed
    
    this

    

Thanks for modding. Insane looks much better now

wendao wrote:

<3 have a star

Keada wrote:

your request!

• General

1. 00:51:403 (1) - Set the preview point here on all diffs Nice

• Easy
  Tell me if you want help with this diff

• Normal

1. Go through the whole map with the distance snap again, found a few parts where its not snapped correctly, but its only a little bit. Not a big deal. AIbot detects nothing so i guess it's fine :3
2. Found nothing else, nicely done (im not that good with modding easy/normal anyways D: )

• Hard

1. 00:31:175 (1) - not a good place for that note, try placing it somewhere else. For example: x:208 - y:192 Fixed
2. 00:39:403 (1,2,3) - place these perfectly on the slider, looks more nice Fixed
3. 00:55:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - try placing a note between those for more flow in the map Fixed
   Like this
   
4. 01:26:375 (4) - place this directly on the slider, looks better. Fixed
5. 01:27:575 (7) - same with this one

Fixed

• Insane

1. 00:01:518 (1) - place this at x:256 y:192 Fixed
2. 00:19:003 (4) - you can do a fast reverse slider here Fixed
   
3. 00:29:803 (6) - same with this one Not sure with this one.
4. 00:31:689 (4,5) - use the same distance spacing on these two (1,0) Fixed

The Guest Difficulty :3

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Yuru.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 146
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 24660
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Yuriyurarararayuruyuri Daijiken (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ゆりゆららららゆるゆり大事件 (TV Size)
Artist:Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu
ArtistUnicode:七森中☆ごらく部
Creator:Hitorikko
Version:Keada's Yuri
Source:Yuru Yuri
Tags:Yuru Yuri OP Opening ゆるゆり ken iijima pierre mikami shiori ootsubo yuka tsuda minami ookubo rumi momo taketatsu ayana
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9.3
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

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348,140,34432,2,0,B|300:112|300:112|240:124,1,101.999996887207
254,121,34689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,121,34775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,220,34946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,280,35118,6,0,B|328:304|328:304|384:296,1,101.999996887207,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,144,35460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,100,35632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35803,2,0,B|176:296|176:296|128:320,2,101.999996887207
120,116,36318,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,60,36489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,180,36660,6,0,P|340:236|360:288,1,101.999996887207,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,188,37003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,280,37175,2,0,P|112:224|96:172,1,101.999996887207,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,72,37518,2,0,P|268:84|320:64,1,101.999996887207,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,180,37860,2,0,P|405:229|417:278,1,101.999996887207,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,300,38203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,184,38375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,232,38546,6,0,P|312:164|292:128,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,40,38889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,188,39060,2,0,P|208:268|184:296,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,184,39403,1,12,0:0:0:0:
92,176,39575,1,12,0:0:0:0:
104,168,39746,1,12,0:0:0:0:
232,64,39918,6,0,P|280:68|320:92,1,85
224,248,40432,2,0,P|192:272|164:328,1,85
240,260,40946,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,104,41289,2,0,P|336:76|388:64,1,85
320,120,41803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,204,41975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,256,42146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,228,42318,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,56,42660,6,0,P|152:52|184:72,1,85
252,280,43175,2,0,P|300:292|340:284,1,85
252,260,43689,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,164,44032,2,0,P|92:184|88:208,2,42.5
216,76,44546,2,0,P|260:76|304:104,1,85
212,96,45060,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,264,45403,6,0,P|224:288|264:288,1,85
272,108,45918,2,0,P|308:100|356:112,1,85
272,128,46432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,272,46775,2,0,P|384:280|400:292,2,42.5
160,204,47289,2,0,P|132:200|112:204,2,42.5
172,204,47718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,204,47803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,124,47975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,60,48146,5,0,3:0:0:0:
388,92,48232,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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380,244,48489,1,0,3:0:0:0:
248,284,48660,1,0,3:0:0:0:
112,184,48832,1,0,3:0:0:0:
204,44,49003,1,0,3:0:0:0:
368,96,49175,1,0,3:0:0:0:
244,212,49346,1,0,3:0:0:0:
84,268,49518,6,0,P|40:312|32:340,2,85
152,132,50032,2,0,B|196:84|196:84|228:120|272:104|272:104|284:180,1,212.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,204,51403,2,0,L|212:228,2,42.5
280,120,51918,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,104,52089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,152,52260,6,0,B|396:248|396:248|336:204|256:276,1,220.999989883423,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,216,52775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,72,52946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,80,53118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,212,53289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,4,53460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,40,53632,6,0,B|400:88|400:88|408:152|408:152|476:208,1,220.999989883423,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,54146,2,0,P|192:228|160:268,2,110.499994941712
444,84,54660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,32,54832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,192,55003,2,0,B|96:248|96:248|144:272,1,110.499994941712,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,228,55346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,84,55518,6,0,L|224:120,1,55.2499974708558
156,156,55689,2,0,B|132:104|132:104|132:40,1,110.499994941712
296,68,56032,2,0,B|328:120|328:120|372:140|408:136,1,110.499994941712
396,300,56375,2,0,B|328:240|328:240|252:292|172:212,1,220.999989883423,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,104,56889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,68,57060,2,0,B|340:84|288:160|404:172,1,165.749992412568
424,244,57403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,284,57575,5,8,0:0:0:0:
220,272,57660,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,256,57746,2,0,B|140:208|140:208|128:144,1,110.499994941712
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436,108,58775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,248,58946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,288,59803,2,0,B|251:233|195:317|131:269,1,165.749992412568,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,220,60146,1,4,0:0:0:0:
140,88,60318,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,72,60403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,248,60832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,104,61003,6,0,B|316:84|356:152|228:128|228:128|184:156,1,220.999989883423
120,280,61518,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,276,61689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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332,172,62203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,160,62375,6,0,B|196:112|196:112|264:80|264:80,1,110.499994941712
288,88,62632,1,0,3:0:0:0:
328,108,62718,1,0,3:0:0:0:
360,144,62803,1,0,3:0:0:0:
376,196,62889,1,0,3:0:0:0:
356,252,62975,1,0,3:0:0:0:
304,292,63060,1,0,3:0:0:0:
232,292,63146,1,0,3:0:0:0:
164,272,63232,6,0,B|104:212|104:212|128:164|104:72,1,220.999989883423,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,48,63746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,188,63918,2,0,P|244:244|288:272,1,110.499994941712
288,128,64260,2,0,P|248:84|260:16,1,110.499994941712
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280,168,65118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,168,65203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,168,65289,2,0,B|260:108|184:176|192:84,1,110.499994941712
68,188,65632,2,0,B|116:168|120:268|192:200,1,110.499994941712
256,332,65975,6,0,B|328:276|328:276|292:200|400:152,1,220.999989883423,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,68,66489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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448,292,67860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,292,68032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,72,68203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,76,68375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,268,68546,5,0,3:0:0:0:
312,296,68632,1,0,3:0:0:0:
268,320,68718,2,0,L|136:320,1,110.499994941712,0|0,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
184,276,68975,1,0,3:0:0:0:
236,260,69060,2,0,L|360:260,1,110.499994941712,0|0,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
316,220,69318,1,0,3:0:0:0:
272,196,69403,2,0,L|152:196,1,110.499994941712,0|0,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
192,156,69660,1,0,3:0:0:0:
236,132,69746,2,0,L|356:132,1,110.499994941712,0|0,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
324,88,70003,1,0,3:0:0:0:
284,60,70089,6,0,P|208:48|128:116,1,165.749992412568
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292,284,71118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,140,71289,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,140,71375,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,140,71460,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,120,71632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,284,71803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,316,71975,6,0,B|496:256|316:204|476:148,1,220.999989883423
324,64,72489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,72660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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68,84,73346,2,0,P|120:60|184:68,1,110.499994941712
212,84,73603,5,0,3:0:0:0:
244,112,73689,1,0,3:0:0:0:
276,144,73775,1,0,3:0:0:0:
308,176,73860,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,208,73946,1,0,3:0:0:0:
364,240,74032,1,0,3:0:0:0:
396,272,74118,1,0,3:0:0:0:
428,308,74203,6,0,P|468:236|416:132,2,170,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,75232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,76,75575,2,0,P|44:148|96:252,2,170,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,68,76432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,76603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,76775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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476,172,77289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,296,77460,2,0,P|300:288|264:312,1,85
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208,144,79003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,216,79175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,79346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,128,79518,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,79689,6,0,P|280:292|336:288,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,80032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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344,100,80546,2,0,P|308:68|236:68,1,85
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236,100,81575,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,272,81746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,108,81918,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,280,82089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,116,82260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,288,82432,6,0,P|436:240|424:200,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,80,82775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,82946,2,0,P|164:256|136:260,1,85
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340,208,83632,2,0,P|384:224|408:260,1,85
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72,127,84489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
127,62,84660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,96,84832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,180,85003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,292,85175,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,64,85518,1,4,0:0:0:0:
112,228,85860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,248,86032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,192,86375,1,0,3:0:0:0:
424,192,86546,1,0,3:0:0:0:
276,104,86718,1,0,3:0:0:0:
232,268,86889,1,0,3:0:0:0:
84,184,87060,2,0,P|104:128|140:104,1,85,0|0,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
152,100,87489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,92,87575,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Good luck in the future! <3

tm1209 wrote:

[General]


Why Easy harder than Normal ? OMG Easy = WIP


[Insane]


00:12:489 (1) - What about move to (256,320) ? It may looking better. it's fine

00:15:746 (1,2) - 00:16:432 (1,2) - I think you can make a change there . If I were you , I will increase 00:15:746 (1,2) - and 00:16:432 (1,2) - DS , and increase 00:15:918 (2) - this slider's speed to 1.25x , 00:16:603 (2) - this slider's speed to 1.5x . this is a good idea. but I need a second opinion because right now it is ok for me.

00:21:232 (1,2,3) - 00:21:918 (1,2,3) - I think you can increase DS , for example i will adjust those to 1.25x and 1.5x .

00:23:975 (3) - 00:25:346 (4) - This slider's speed changed a lot , I will use NC here . I don't think NC is needed here

00:23:460 (6,1,2,3) - 00:24:832 (1,2,3,4) - These two groups of notes are similar , but you make that different even NC . I think you should move 00:24:832 (1) - to (168,229) , move 00:25:003 (2) - to (144,320) , move 00:25:175 (3) - to (296,224) . And change 00:25:346 (4) - this slider's speed and make a change in the second group of notes to make the map become more interesting . Fixed

00:27:918 (7) - I think you should use NC here . NC Added

00:39:918 (4) - This slider's speed changed a lot , I will use NC here . NC Added

00:56:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - Five-pointed star is not perfect . Fixed



[Hard]


00:23:975 (7,3) - This slider's speed changed a lot , I will use NC here . It's fine :3

00:28:432 (8) - I think you should use NC here . ^

00:34:689 - This place should add a circle beacuse here have a tone obviously . ^

00:35:975 (2) - What about ctrl+G ? ^

01:27:575 (7) - What about use NC ? NC Added



Sorry I'm so noob .

Thank you for modding!

1. Generally... You're following the song TOO much pre-Chorus. Like parts (From Insane) at 00:13:698, or 00:31:003, etc. Mostly from following the lyrics too much, which, IMO, give that Lacking Feeling.

1. 00:12:832 (1) - Add Clap. It compliments the succeeding claps.
2. 00:13:860 (5) - ^ Same but with the end of the Slider
3. 00:16:946 (4,5,6) - Add claps here. I mean, you were already going with the rhythm so why stop there? It really gives that "excitement" feeling because of the lyrics
4. 00:17:975 (1) - Adjust the end tick to about x:376 y:280. IMO it looks better this way with the flow and all
5. 00:18:660 (2) - Add clap
6. 00:20:032 (5) - Add clap just at the beginning of the slider
7. 00:21:060 (2) - Add clap. What we're doing here is mimicking the earlier part.
8. 00:22:089 (5,6) - Still mimicking the previous part, Add claps to both ends of note 5, The first end of 6, And remove the clap at the last end. Leaving end of 6 blank makes it sound just like an extra beat, which would be better than forcing it as an included beat.
9. 00:33:746 (5,6) - Wouldn't it be better to just be a double note? Considering the next part which is 00:39:232, Doing triple parts here is gonna feel weird. Unless you switch them around.
10. 00:59:118 (5,6,7) - It may be just me because I'm an old player, but IMO this pattern is more appropriate for a hard diff than a normal diff. Maybe removing 6 and making 7 a repeating slider would be better. It may just be me though.
11. 01:25:175 (1,2,3) - Again it may just be me, But yeah IMO its gonna be better off when you just make 1 and 2 a 1/2 slider and leaving a gap.

1. Isn't the SV a bit too fast? (Again it may just be me)
2. IMO its better to use AR 7 here. (Yet again it may just be me)
3. 00:02:375 (3,4,5) - Better to just stack it at 6 than give a bad flow
4. 00:12:489 (1) - This is when we have to be consistent with hitsounds. I don't mean that you need to copy the exact hitsounds from previews diffs but at least just the essence of what you wanted. So if you did Normal, Add a clap at the end of the slider
5. 00:13:175 (4) - Add clap to both ends
6. 00:14:546 (3) - ^ Same
7. 00:15:575 (4,8) - Add claps m8
8. 00:16:946 (2,3,4) - Add claps as well
9. 00:17:957 (1) - Add clap to end
10. 00:18:660 (3) - Addingly adding a clap
11. 00:20:032 (3) - ^ Exactly the same. Also I'm kinda weirded out by the construction of the sliders here. I'm not sure how I would deal with it though but yeah I'm weirded out
12. 00:27:918 (6,7) - I am also weirded out with how both of these notes are placed. Its almost covered by 4 and gives a bad flow to Slider 8.
    
13. Regadring my General Statement, you followed the lyrics too much here resulting in some weird and a bit boring patterns. A prime example for this is 00:30:146 (4,5,6,7,8) - It's like you just forced yourself to do this since you're out of ideas on how to deal with this part. It'd be up to you if you still want to adjust it.
    
    Genrally it would be best if you switch between the lyrics and the background music at the right time. The same area where I have a problem with if a good area of what I mean. Transitioning from Lyrics to Background music would be the best Solution for this IMO. It gets rid of that barren area where you stop playing, and it might give you better map flow if placed correctly
    
    You did good sticking to the lyrics from 00:39:918 to 00:48:146. Though its because that the lyrics and the beat match.
    
14. 00:36:318 (3) - With the way you were mapping earlier, this jump would come up weird.
15. 00:46:775 (1,2,3) - Stack > Bad flow all day everyday
16. I'm not gonna comment on the whistle sounds anymore, since its not that weird. But Considering the claps, adding one at the end of 00:57:060 (8) - would help
17. 01:17:803 (3,4,5) - Again with the stacking thing

1. By now you should know what I mean with the Hitsounds. So to prevent more long arse posting I'm gonna leave the hitsounding to you
2. 00:02:718 (4) - isn't this a bit of a weird jump considering the next note?
3. 00:07:860 (2,3,4) - Instead of making it a straight horizontal pattern, Try making it a straight diagonal pattern that follows the direction of slider 1
4. 00:15:575 - 00:16:260 - So much barren areas
5. 00:21:060 - 00:21:746 - 00:22:603 - Really really barren
6. 01:00:489 - 01:03:322 - Last Hitsound comment, You forgot to add here
7. 00:16:946 (1) - IMO it would look better stacked

ohad1881 wrote:

HI!
m4m reverse here!
easy
WTF IS THIS???? Easy = WIP
normal
00:13:175-this triple is to hard for normal diff consider stacking them I thought this is ok. Needs second opinion
00:14:546-^^ ^
00:24:146-^^ ^
00:25:518-^^ ^
00:26:203 1,2,3,4,5-this jumps are to hard for a normal diff consider making some sliders btw Fixed
00:29:632-this is not spaced like 1,2(in distance snap) It's fine
00:31:003-over lap with 3(00:29:632) Not noticeable when playing tho. so i guess it's fine ?!
00:35:803-overlap with 1(00:34:432) ^
00:56:375-overlap with 1 ^
01:02:546-overlap with 2 ^
hard
00:09:746-overlap ugly with 00:08:889 Not noticeable
00:13:003-NC? nope :3
00:27:918 1,2 stack with 4 Fixed
00:38:375-stack with 3(00:37:689) It's fine
00:46:775-1,2,3,4 stack Fixed
00:51:9180-this blanket is bad fix it Fixed
insane
00:01:860-stack i think this is called anti-jump
00:06:318-NC Fixed
00:13:689-put a circle here otherwise it will be boring I am just following the music in this part, so a note here doesn't fit.
00:34:260-NC and then 00:34:603 remove it Fixed
01:17:289-stack with 1 Anti-jump
01:21:746-NC Fixed
GL!

Tsukasa wrote:

Ok as requested

General:

1. Generally... You're following the song TOO much pre-Chorus. Like parts (From Insane) at 00:13:698, or 00:31:003, etc. Mostly from following the lyrics too much, which, IMO, give that Lacking Feeling.

Normal:

1. 00:12:832 (1) - Add Clap. It compliments the succeeding claps. Fixed
2. 00:13:860 (5) - ^ Same but with the end of the Slider Fixed
3. 00:16:946 (4,5,6) - Add claps here. I mean, you were already going with the rhythm so why stop there? It really gives that "excitement" feeling because of the lyrics Fixed
4. 00:17:975 (1) - Adjust the end tick to about x:376 y:280. IMO it looks better this way with the flow and all Fixed
5. 00:18:660 (2) - Add clap Fixed
6. 00:20:032 (5) - Add clap just at the beginning of the slider Fixed
7. 00:21:060 (2) - Add clap. What we're doing here is mimicking the earlier part. Fixed
8. 00:22:089 (5,6) - Still mimicking the previous part, Add claps to both ends of note 5, The first end of 6, And remove the clap at the last end. Leaving end of 6 blank makes it sound just like an extra beat, which would be better than forcing it as an included beat. Fixed
9. 00:33:746 (5,6) - Wouldn't it be better to just be a double note? Considering the next part which is 00:39:232, Doing triple parts here is gonna feel weird. Unless you switch them around. Fixed
10. 00:59:118 (5,6,7) - It may be just me because I'm an old player, but IMO this pattern is more appropriate for a hard diff than a normal diff. Maybe removing 6 and making 7 a repeating slider would be better. It may just be me though. Changed
11. 01:25:175 (1,2,3) - Again it may just be me, But yeah IMO its gonna be better off when you just make 1 and 2 a 1/2 slider and leaving a gap. Changed

Hard:

1. Isn't the SV a bit too fast? (Again it may just be me)
2. IMO its better to use AR 7 here. (Yet again it may just be me) Changed into ar7
3. 00:02:375 (3,4,5) - Better to just stack it at 6 than give a bad flow Fixed
4. 00:12:489 (1) - This is when we have to be consistent with hitsounds. I don't mean that you need to copy the exact hitsounds from previews diffs but at least just the essence of what you wanted. So if you did Normal, Add a clap at the end of the slider Fixed
5. 00:13:175 (4) - Add clap to both ends Added
6. 00:14:546 (3) - ^ Same Added
7. 00:15:575 (4,8) - Add claps m8 Added
8. 00:16:946 (2,3,4) - Add claps as well Added
9. 00:17:957 (1) - Add clap to end Added
10. 00:18:660 (3) - Addingly adding a clap Added
11. 00:20:032 (3) - ^ Exactly the same. Also I'm kinda weirded out by the construction of the sliders here. I'm not sure how I would deal with it though but yeah I'm weirded out Added.
12. 00:27:918 (6,7) - I am also weirded out with how both of these notes are placed. Its almost covered by 4 and gives a bad flow to Slider 8. Fixed
    
13. Regadring my General Statement, you followed the lyrics too much here resulting in some weird and a bit boring patterns. A prime example for this is 00:30:146 (4,5,6,7,8) - It's like you just forced yourself to do this since you're out of ideas on how to deal with this part. It'd be up to you if you still want to adjust it. Changed
    
    Genrally it would be best if you switch between the lyrics and the background music at the right time. The same area where I have a problem with if a good area of what I mean. Transitioning from Lyrics to Background music would be the best Solution for this IMO. It gets rid of that barren area where you stop playing, and it might give you better map flow if placed correctly
    
    You did good sticking to the lyrics from 00:39:918 to 00:48:146. Though its because that the lyrics and the beat match.
    
14. 00:36:318 (3) - With the way you were mapping earlier, this jump would come up weird.[color=#FF0000 ]Fixed [/color]
15. 00:46:775 (1,2,3) - Stack > Bad flow all day everyday Fixed
16. I'm not gonna comment on the whistle sounds anymore, since its not that weird. But Considering the claps, adding one at the end of 00:57:060 (8) - would help Fixed
17. 01:17:803 (3,4,5) - Again with the stacking thing Fixed

Insane:

1. By now you should know what I mean with the Hitsounds. So to prevent more long arse posting I'm gonna leave the hitsounding to you
2. 00:02:718 (4) - isn't this a bit of a weird jump considering the next note? Fixed
3. 00:07:860 (2,3,4) - Instead of making it a straight horizontal pattern, Try making it a straight diagonal pattern that follows the direction of slider 1 Fixed
4. 00:15:575 - 00:16:260 - So much barren areas i'm not sure about this because for me it is fine
5. 00:21:060 - 00:21:746 - 00:22:603 - Really really barren ^
6. 01:00:489 - 01:03:322 - Last Hitsound comment, You forgot to add here Fixed
7. 00:16:946 (1) - IMO it would look better stacked Fixed

And that's pretty much it

Yato3o wrote:

Hello~

[Normal]

00:13:175 (2,3,4) It's fine
00:14:546 (6,7,8) ^
00:24:146 (3,4,5) - Change it to Sliders or Reverse?? let give them triples at chorus like 01:12:146 (2,3,4,6,7,8)


[Hard]

01:05:975 (1,2,3) - wag mo po ipatong. ^

01:15:918 , 01:16:260 , 01:16:432 , 01:16:603 , 01:16:775 - Add notes here = Sounds nice too note added 01:26:460 -

[Insane]

Thumbs up bro. thanks

Add-on here. You can use it if necessary
http://puu.sh/goPVB/68b3ce9115.png <- Try that Comboburst Tell me If the image size doesn't fit
http://puu.sh/goQ8t/8fdd8e59b6.wav <- Finish Hitsound
http://puu.sh/goQhG/a0e839e44f.rar <- Cursors (It is from SODA.)

sukiNathan wrote:

IRC Mod

20:03 sukiNathan: hi
20:03 Hitorikko: yo~
20:03 sukiNathan: so you asked me for a mod
20:03 sukiNathan: can I just point out some things through irc
20:04 Hitorikko: yes I did. yeah sure. :)
20:04 sukiNathan: so first thing is
20:04 sukiNathan: the jump from normal to hard
20:04 sukiNathan: is pretty ridiculous
20:04 sukiNathan: comparing hard to insane
20:04 sukiNathan: normal=148 objects
20:05 sukiNathan: hard=251
20:05 sukiNathan: insane is only 29 more than hard
20:05 sukiNathan: you'd probably have to tone down the rhythm density in hard for the spread to be rankable
20:05 sukiNathan: ok just some suggestions now
20:06 Hitorikko: i see.
20:06 sukiNathan: on hard
20:06 sukiNathan: 00:11:975 (5,6,7) - you could probably NC here
20:06 sukiNathan:  for the spacing increase
20:06 sukiNathan: and the pitch increase
20:07 sukiNathan: 00:34:260 (2,3,4,5) - this looks like a 1/4 stack
20:07 sukiNathan: you should probably spread them out a bit more
20:08 sukiNathan: it'll throw off some players
20:09 sukiNathan: 01:17:288 (2) - unsnapped D:
20:10 sukiNathan: 00:39:918 - volume should probably decreased a bit here
20:10 sukiNathan: the claps are pretty loud
20:10 sukiNathan: maybe 65%~?
20:11 sukiNathan: also for a hard
20:11 sukiNathan: the sv is really high
20:11 sukiNathan: and it should definitely not be the same as insane
20:12 sukiNathan: uh am I going too fast ;w;
20:12 Hitorikko: wait i sec
20:12 Hitorikko: 01:17:289 (2) - this one
20:13 Hitorikko: how is it unsnapped ?
20:13 sukiNathan: the end is
20:13 Hitorikko: it is on the white tick.
20:14 sukiNathan: the end is 2 milliseconds off the white tick
20:14 sukiNathan: check aimod
20:14 Hitorikko: http://puu.sh/gpKts/25919198b5.jpg
20:15 sukiNathan:  http://puu.sh/gpKw9/7a6dbcc25a.jpg
20:15 sukiNathan: that's weird
20:15 sukiNathan: your version is different from mine I guess
20:15 Hitorikko: yep. i did an update yesterday
20:16 sukiNathan: ah
20:16 sukiNathan: also for the ar on this
20:16 sukiNathan: it should be 7.5-8
20:17 sukiNathan: ar 7 for a 175 bpm song is too slow imo
20:17 sukiNathan: plus it's not very balanced with insane
20:18 Hitorikko: ok I will change it to 7.5
20:18 sukiNathan: normal's settings should also probably be buffed
20:18 sukiNathan: not quite sure what values though
20:19 sukiNathan: if you want to nerf hard you would probably have to get rid of the 1/4 notes
20:19 sukiNathan: and a bit of 1/2
20:20 sukiNathan: the way it is right now
20:20 sukiNathan: insane is basically the same thing as hard
20:20 sukiNathan: with just increased spacing
20:20 sukiNathan: and a bit more dense
20:20 sukiNathan: although for issues like this you're probably better asking a bn/qat for advice
20:21 sukiNathan: ill take a look at insane now
20:21 Hitorikko: ok
20:23 sukiNathan: 00:33:918 (1,2,1,2) - increase the spacing a bit here
20:23 sukiNathan: it shouldn't be the same spacing as 00:34:603 (3,4,5) - 
20:23 sukiNathan: since one stack is 1/2 while the other is 1/4
20:23 sukiNathan: kind of confusing
20:25 sukiNathan: widescreen support should be disabled for all difficulties
20:26 sukiNathan: since there's no storyboard
20:27 sukiNathan: your background should either be 1366x768
20:27 sukiNathan: or 1024x768
20:27 sukiNathan: one sec ill check if theres a different size version of your current one
20:29 sukiNathan: ah nvm
20:29 sukiNathan: you'll have to find a different size bg
20:29 sukiNathan: otherwise the only way to make this 1366x768
20:29 sukiNathan: is by screwing up the ratio of the pic
20:30 Hitorikko: i tried that. the result is bad
20:30 sukiNathan: yeah
20:30 sukiNathan: just find another pic
20:30 sukiNathan: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/191777/start=0&&hilit=ringating
20:30 sukiNathan: or you can ask this guy for help
20:31 Hitorikko: i will ask him to make this pic 1366x768 ?
20:31 Hitorikko: or 1024x768 ?
20:32 sukiNathan: I think he can add stuff to the pic
20:32 sukiNathan: to make it 1366
20:32 sukiNathan: but tbh finding another pic
20:32 sukiNathan: is probably easier
20:32 sukiNathan: and les wait
20:32 sukiNathan: less*
20:33 sukiNathan: 00:23:975 (3,4) - the flow could be improved here
20:33 sukiNathan: if you make the sliders curved
20:33 sukiNathan: 00:23:803 (2,3) - for example here
20:33 sukiNathan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2858431
20:34 sukiNathan: having it curved like that
20:34 sukiNathan: would carry on more momentum from 00:23:803 (2) - 
20:34 sukiNathan: instead of just doing a jagged movement with a straight slider
20:34 sukiNathan: you can also make a blanket if you curve these
20:35 sukiNathan: Alright that's all I have I guess
20:36 sukiNathan: I'll post this log on your beatmap thread
20:37 Hitorikko: umm. the hard diff. do I have to remap it or i'll just have to remove some notes ?
20:37 sukiNathan: ah well
20:37 sukiNathan: you don't have to remap it I think
20:37 Hitorikko: ok thanks.
20:37 sukiNathan: you'll need to remove quite a bit though
20:37 sukiNathan: it's probably best to ask a bn for help
20:38 sukiNathan: ok posting
20:38 Hitorikko: ok. i'll try aking one

Pointed out some spacing/readability issues, general things, and the difficulty spread

Thank you for modding !

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:

I added white space to the top of the image (in order to get it to a 16:9 aspect ratio), then sprinkled some hearts in that new empty space to make it look like it's supposed to be that way. then resized to 1366x768 and saved as lossless png.

bg

png is pretty efficient in this image due to all the solid white

no kds

Thanks a lot ! BG is so Kawaii.

Estellia- wrote:

Ooo short song~

[Easy]
00:01:518 (1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Fix all blankets here. Also, you messed up pretty bad
00:28:946 (1,2) - blanket
00:41:289 (2,2) - stack?
00:44:032 (2,1) - blanket
00:46:775 (2,1) - ^
01:00:489 (1,1) - Maybe make sure they don't touch, it looks ugly
01:05:975 (1,2) - blanket
01:10:089 (3,1) - ^
01:11:460 (1,2) - ^
01:12:832 (2,1) - Make this a nicer circle, right now it looks very lopsided
01:17:632 (2,3) - blanket
01:25:175 (1,2) - ^

Very basic Easy. Nothing special. All you need to do is fix the blankets and it'll be fine. Major suggestion is to increase the difficulty (to ~1.3-1.5) to make the difficulty curve a bit better.

All Fixed

[Normal]
00:02:203 (3,4) - blanket
00:06:318 (5,1) - ^
00:07:689 (3,4) - ^
00:08:375 (4,5) - ^
00:08:375 (4,6) - Maybe make sure they don't intersect, it looks ugly
00:17:975 (1) - You don't have to make a weird slider here, you can retain a straight slider, the map will still play the same
00:18:660 (2,4,5) - Maybe rotate 4 counter clockwise to you can stack 2 and 5?
00:21:746 (4,5) - blanket
00:24:489 (5,1) - ^
00:25:860 (4,5) - ^
00:28:089 (8) - why empty? ?
00:29:632 (3,4) - blanket
00:31:346 (6,2,3) - Shift 2 closer to 3 so 3 and 6 can stack
00:33:060 (3,4,5,6,1) - You can try a polygon shape here it's fine
00:35:118 (2,3) - blanket
00:39:918 (1) - There should be no SV changes in a Normal, that's unrankable, please remove this SV change
00:53:632 (3,4) - blanket
(I'll stop pointing out blanket issues here)
00:57:746 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't fit the music at all, change them to just 1 slider each/1 hitcircle each
01:14:203 (1) - SV change, unrankable

One thing to note when you map is the rhythm. I notice some rhythmic patterns that were added at random which doesn't fit the music. Stuff like 00:14:546 (6,7,8) - 00:25:518 (2,3,4) - which doesn't particularly follow anything in the music. I highly suggest you recheck your diff on this.

All fixed except..

[Hard]
CS+1 maybe?
00:17:975 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Slider shapes are very awkward
00:22:432 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - You can choose to make this symmetrical, centralize 5 and make 12345 a horizontal flip from 4
00:23:460 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - May be hard to read
00:27:918 (6,7,8) - ^
00:33:746 (10) - There is a strong beat here, I suggest you add a note
00:34:260 (2,3,4,5) - Looks hard to read
00:37:003 (1,2,3,4) - This formation looks unsightly, I suggest you change it, but its fine if you don't
00:48:146 (1,2,3,4) - Looks hard to read
01:13:860 (4,1) - Make sure they don't touch, it looks ugly

This Hard seems difficult compared to other Hards I've seen, but its structured rather well, so its fine.

remapping. . .

[Insane]
00:56:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can try a perfect star here Fixed
01:06:660 (3,5) - Maybe make sure they don't touch It's fine

Main suggestions for this map is to adjust your flow a little bit. Areas like 00:37:175 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:31:860 (5,6) - 00:52:260 (1,2,3,4) - have sliders that don't exactly transition well with each other, but its just something to keep in mind and isn't a critical fault in your map.

EN may need more working on, HI is kinda nice. Good luck~

Thank you for visiting my queue~

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Insane

1. You should reconsider where you've placed your NC. Ideally, you should place a NC on or after every 4 beats (the taller white lines on the timeline). Examples include 00:04:280 (5) - 00:05:823 (1) - 00:07:023 (5) - . In the case of 00:02:909 (5) - Just place the NC on the next note. Fixed
2. 00:09:766 (1,2) - If you're trying to go for the symmetrical look of the map, I'd suggest moving one/both of these to appropriate positions. Fixed by moving the notes
3. 00:10:452 (3) - Replace this with 2 circles for better flow.
4. 00:13:538 (5) - I suggest having a 1/2 slider rather than a gap here.
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:15:595 (3) - Add circle for better flow.
6. 00:16:280 (3) - ^
7. 00:20:909 (3) - Extend to a 1/2 slider for better flow. Fixed
8. 00:21:595 (3) - ^ Fixed
9. 00:34:280 (1,2) - Read note above regarding NCs Fixed
10. 00:37:880 (5) - Reposition so the sliderend does not touch with 00:37:195 (3) - Fixed
11. 00:39:938 (1) - From this green tick to the next, you've been placing circles/sliders with relation to the vocals. Changing suddenly to align with the drum/beat is a bit strange. Consider remapping this part to the vocals.
12. 01:07:366 (5) - Stack under 01:06:680 (3) - sliderend.

Hard

1. 00:34:623 (3,4,5) - Change this. why?
2. 00:37:023 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
3. 01:01:880 (1) - You can remove the first red point without interrupting the slider. Fixed
4. 01:06:509 (2) - Distance spacing issue. Move further away. Fixed

Normal

1. 00:41:309 (2) - Maybe a different slider shape considering the difficulty. Fixed
2. 01:18:338 (4) - Is not stacked properly with 01:16:966 (1) - x: 252 y: 136 Fixed
3. 01:23:823 (4) - ^ x: 284 y: 188 Fixed

General

1. Since this is TV size, consider including a video. I will if I find one

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3953827 I got offset 1550

domSaur wrote:

some random nitpicking

[Insane]
00:15:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - maybe make these progress upwards to the left(or alt updown)
00:38:921 (8) - nvm this make this into two notes?

idk, it's jumpy and not jumpy at the same time..

Makoa wrote:

i dont speak japanese but i'm pretty sure this song was named by a tiger smashing its paw on a keyboard.

[EAsY PP free MOnEY]
00:09:778 (1) - not a accent in song here so you might want to try to change the reverse slider to something that can fit the music better
00:20:750 (1,2,3,4) - am i listening to childporn?
00:33:092 (2,1,2,3) - Not sure is the whole song is off but atleast here, the hit circle timing is definetly lagging behind the mp3
yeah nevermind for the rest of the song it sounds fine
01:04:635 (2) - careful with them playboundaries
nothing wrong with this diff but spend some time checking those timing sections for the whole song

[norman]
ok, I think the timing offset should be around 1522 just to make a suggestion but Look into these timings because they feel very wrong (change this in all diffs)
00:55:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - could shorten this combo Fixed
solid shit

[hard ready for action]
seems like nothing is out of place

[insain]
00:19:721 (2,3,4) - dont have to stack as much Fixed
01:03:264 (1,2) - maybe change this to a longer slider because the syncopation is unexpected. the rest of the map follows accented downbeats Doesn't sound right to me


This felt like a really unproductive mod, sorry. hope your map get where you want it to go.

Aura893 wrote:

From my queue!

[Normal]- This normal mode was very solid! Everything was on time, hitsounds are correctly placed, I played through it quite a few times to find something, but I couldn't! This is a very good beatmap, and I hope for the best for it!

Prophecy wrote:

[Easy]
No Problem Here~

[Normal]
00:13:378 - Clap?
00:14:750 - Clap?
01:12:350 - Clap?
01:13:721 - Clap?

jloughman14 wrote:

Have another star

1. 00:01:550 (1) - I find this placement a bit odd. If you're going to stick it out~ stick it out or alternatively just place it on top of the (2) slider.
2. 00:02:750 (5,6) - Flow between here I found awkward. I'm going to summarise this with AWK.
3. 00:04:292 (1) - I don't think the a NC should start here. In the little pause between this note and the next, I'm hanging my cursor on (2) waiting.
4. 00:05:321 (5,6,7) - Uneven spacing between all three singles~ confusing play for accuracy. I'm going to summarise/abbreviate this with DS.
5. 00:05:835 (8) - AWK. From (7) you're making my cursor aim northwest and then I have to follow the slider towards the right. Some people I guess don't mind this, but I consider it awkward to play.
6. 00:06:864 (3,4,1) - Do a 1.00 spacing with previous note for neatness (since the note before it is also 1.00 from the end slider of (1).
7. 00:08:750 (7,8,9) - AWK
   
   _____________
   
   If the following notes were creating some sort of pattern (like stars) then I guess you can ignore the spacing rule between singles. But they're not patterns (or at least not in my eyes anyway).
8. 00:09:778 (1,2,3) - DS. If you don't want them all equal, make the (2) Even DS from Next and Prev. Atm it's 1.31 // 1.16. Makes no sense for it to be different on both sides when it's equally between beats (1) and (3).
9. 00:10:978 (4) - Whatever DS you made for the above suggestion make this note the same DS with its previous note (00:10:464 (3))
   Just so you understand what I mean with the previous 2 suggestions~ what you did here 00:12:178 (8) - is 'correct'. It's even DS with spacing of 1.25/1.26 (relatively the same).
10. 00:08:921 (8) - Same deal. Or instead of doing even DS with this note, you could place this 1.00 Next to slider (9) to match with (7) being 1.00 Prev to slider (6). R
11. 00:17:321 (4) - DS
12. 00:23:835 (2) - DS. Or do the same with R suggestion.
13. 00:14:921 (5,1) - AWK
14. 00:30:178 (7,8,9,10) - All different spacing when they're on the same beat.
15. 00:30:178 (7) - NC. (Or I'm hovering my cursor on 7 again waiting - up to you how you judge that I guess though).
16. 00:31:207 (1,2,3,4,5) - ??? DS. You're even on 1, 2, 3 and then completely go off on 4 when again- they're on the same beat.
17. Pretty good from here on till
18. 01:00:521 (1) - AWK
19. 01:01:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - We're getting very linear here (I'm not one to like linear movement). Maybe make the stream flow in a curve?
20. 01:14:064 (5) - This slider plays weird. I think a single-single works much better here.
21. 01:14:064 (5) - Repeated the beginning?