1. Easy (1.24 stars, 75 notes)
2. Insane (4.15 stars, 308 notes)
3. Karia's Hard (3.29 stars, 265 notes)
4. Normal (2.15 stars, 151 notes)

Thank you Ringating for the BG !

because I really want this to be ranked owo

No Dap wrote:

nice BG 10/10

No Dap wrote:

nice BG 10/10

No Dap wrote:

nice BG 10/10

Arphimigon wrote:

From #modreq
(This is for Insane, I might do Hard another time)

00:02:375 (3,4,5) - This is a not-so-nice looking overlap. Since it is an insane i would suggest taking Combo 3 slider and placing it higher. Also the slider after is a -tad- awkward to play considering flow, but that should be fine. i need a second opinion on this coz it looks OK for me.

00:03:060 (5,3) - Pixel overlap! need second opinion

00:04:603 (1) - Maybe make this slider so it points directly towards 00:04:260 (5) - ? (move up 7/8 small grid spaces for that) and then make 00:05:118 (2) - follow the line after. Fixed

00:06:318 (6) - Distance snap on notes before and after this should preferably be the same (1-ish or 1.1-ish instead of both) Fixed

00:11:289 (1,3) - Should be symmetrical. Use CTRL-J here. Also after that you can move all 00:11:289 (1,2,3) - to make a diamond with the center note and flip again for the other side. Like this:

Diamond

Fixed

00:12:832 (2,3,4) - Same distance snap again please! Fixed

00:19:346 (1,2) - Pixel overlap, looks eh. need second opinion

00:19:689 (2,3,4) - Again, same distance snap (close though) Fixed

00:23:632 (6) - Doesn't follow the burst-stream line. Move 4/5 spaces to the right (small grid size) Fixed

00:28:431 (9) - ...this overlap isn't nice either. On that note, this slider doesn't even need to be so close to the stack anyway! Fixed

00:35:974 (6) - Perhaps blanket that with 00:36:317 (7) - like this:

Blanket

Fixed

00:36:660 (1,2,3) - Flow is real awkward here. I'd change that part completely. Changed. not sure if this flow is better tho.

(00:37:174 (3) - Could be blanketed with the Combo 1 slider.) changed the flow so i couldn't be blanketed now.

00:38:888 (8) - Same as 00:28:431 (9) Fixed

00:46:088 (2) - Move down 8/9 small grid pixels to complete blanket~ Fixed

00:54:316 (3) - Move down 1 space to be in line with sliders. Fixed

01:01:859 (1,2) - These shouldn't be on EXACTLY the same place as 01:00:487 (1,2) , consider moving 1/2 pixels up and left (respectively). Fixed

01:04:773 (5) - Move down 7 pixels for line with 01:04:430 (4) Fixed

01:04:945 (6) - Move up 5 pixels for line with 01:05:116 (7) Fixed

01:07:345 (5) - This overlap is okay, but i was -suggest- changing it if possible. (by moving all 01:07:345 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - over more to the right) Moved a little to the right

01:12:830 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:01:859 (1,2) Fixed

BG is 10/10 though~

Asfano wrote:

normal:

move 01:23:802 (4) - so slider ends hit 01:22:773 (2) - Fixed
I think 01:00:487 (1,2) - should be similar to 01:01:859 (3,4) - and pair 01:02:545 (4,1) - but pair 3 and 4 instead. It looks OK for me, needs second opinion

hard:

01:22:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this combo is pretty long maybe nc at 7 Fixed

insane:

move 00:07:004 (10) - to x= 304 like the two previous notesFixed, wow i didn't see that.
01:22:431 (10) - ^ Fixed

Hitorikko wrote:

]normal:

I think 01:00:487 (1,2) - should be similar to 01:01:859 (3,4) - and pair 01:02:545 (4,1) - but pair 3 and 4 instead. It looks OK for me, needs second opinion

Setz wrote:

also i might take a look at this when you finish all the diffs to give you some general pointers.

jloughman14 wrote:

Yes! Love this song, so happy someone is trying to make a standard difficulty map for it.

General

Different combo colors I will change the color soon, but atm i dunno how to

Normal

00:24:146 (3,4,5,2,3,4) - Spread these a bit more just because no other triples are this close in the song. Fixed
00:39:574 (5) - Perhaps don't stack this, up to you.Changed

Hard

HP 5.5-5.7 Changed into 5.5
00:16:603 (1,2,3) - These don't need to be sliders. Fixed
00:48:145 (1,2,3,4) - When I played it, this part feels really odd, consider not stacking them. Maybe do this. Changed

Insane

00:06:832 (8,9) - Delete these. it doesn't feel complete without the triple. needs second opinion
00:15:141 and 00:15:832 - Add a circle here. needs second opinion
00:17:374 (5,6) - Delete these. Deleted

Awesome beatmap! Good luck on the rankings, take my stars! haha

Thank you for modding and for shooting stars

Hitorikko wrote:

I will change the color soon, but atm i dunno how to

1. and now, the lowest diff star rating is 2.18. you must have diff lower than 2.00. it`s unrankable
2. check unnecessary letterbox during breaks from now on. remove this plz

1. 00:11:289 (7) - recommend add finish at last point
2. 00:17:632 (6) - add clap here?
3. 00:33:403 (4) - ^
4. 00:39:575 (5) - move up a little. it`s more playable i think :3
   
   Box

   
5. 01:09:746 (3) - ^^

1. 00:02:375 (3,4,5) - how about make this anti-jump to just normal jump? now little confusing
2. 00:12:489 (8) - same easy and add NC here
3. 00:31:175 (1,2) - recommend combine both to slider
4. 01:13:860 (4) - add clap at front
5. 01:17:803 (3,4,5) - same 00:02:375 (3,4,5)

1. 00:06:832 (8,9,10) - put distance to 00:06:660 (7). now quite confusing
2. 00:12:489 (1) - same other diff
3. 00:15:146 - add circle here?
4. 00:15:832 - ^
5. 00:16:518 - ^
6. 00:33:918 (10) - add NC here :3
7. 01:03:232 (9,1) - switch NC

jloughman14 wrote:

Song Setup> Colours> Click the colours you want.
Also, are you planning on adding a video behind it?

I already tried it but the color didn't change i'm not sure about the video but i'm planning to make a SB.

Ranger wrote:

yup o/
from m4m request

[General]

1. and now, the lowest diff star rating is 2.18. you must have diff lower than 2.00. it`s unrankable
2. check unnecessary letterbox during breaks from now on. remove this plz Fixed

[Normal]

i`m not recommend use change of speed slider for normal diff. but it`s your mind
and recommend ar-1, because it's most easy diff. Changed to AR4

1. 00:11:289 (7) - recommend add finish at last point Added
2. 00:17:632 (6) - add clap here? Added
3. 00:33:403 (4) - ^ hmmm. i think clap here isn't needed
4. 00:39:575 (5) - move up a little. it`s more playable i think :3 Fixed
   
   Box

   
5. 01:09:746 (3) - ^^it's fine

[Hard]

1. 00:02:375 (3,4,5) - how about make this anti-jump to just normal jump? now little confusing It looks fine for me. I need a second opinion on this
2. 00:12:489 (8) - same easy and add NC here Fixed
3. 00:31:175 (1,2) - recommend combine both to slider
4. 01:13:860 (4) - add clap at front Added
5. 01:17:803 (3,4,5) - same 00:02:375 (3,4,5) hmmm..

[Insane]

only this diff uncheck widescreen support

1. 00:06:832 (8,9,10) - put distance to 00:06:660 (7). now quite confusing Fixed
2. 00:12:489 (1) - same other diff Fixed
3. 00:15:146 - add circle here? need 3rd opinion.
4. 00:15:832 - ^ ^
5. 00:16:518 - ^ ^
6. 00:33:918 (10) - add NC here :3 Added
7. 01:03:232 (9,1) - switch NC Switched

GL~ :3

wendao wrote:

hello, quick mod from #modreqs

[General]

1. nice bg you got there
2. somehow your custom combo colour didn't fit well with the bg, how about Combo colour changed ! Finally figured out what went wrong when I failed to change the combo colour (Ignore all beatmap skin = ON )
   
   this

   
3. delete (TV Size) from title? TV Size removed
4. how about change the source to ゆるゆり instead of Yuru Yuri?, you can move yuru yuri to tags, well you already didChanged

[Insane]

• 
  well... your Insane had many weird antijump, especially at vocal part

1. 00:01:518 (1,2) - I prefer it to be like Fixed
   
   this

   
   
   
2. 00:02:375 (3,4) - no no no no.... bad overlap, better change those sliders Fixed
   
3. 00:03:060 (5,3) - also this Fixed
   
4. 00:16:432 (1,2) - how about make it consistent with previous object? (move 1 grid to right) Fixed
   
5. 00:19:346 (1,2) - aww... this is not good, seriously Fixed
   
6. 00:22:775 (5) - New Combo here Fixed
   
7. 00:32:889 - add object here? or simply make previous slider a repeat Fixed
   
8. 00:38:718 - also here Fixed
   
9. 00:49:518 - move the spinner here Fixed
   
10. 00:51:403 (1) - blanket (red node move to 300,128 || next node to 336,144 || next node to 360,176 || last node to 356,224), you can move (2) afterward Fixed
    
11. 00:52:260 (4) - New Combo here Fixed
    
12. 01:07:346 (5,6,7) - instead of make it bad, try Fixed
    
    this

    

Thanks for modding. Insane looks much better now

wendao wrote:

<3 have a star

Keada wrote:

your request!

• General

1. 00:51:403 (1) - Set the preview point here on all diffs Nice

• Easy
  Tell me if you want help with this diff

• Normal

1. Go through the whole map with the distance snap again, found a few parts where its not snapped correctly, but its only a little bit. Not a big deal. AIbot detects nothing so i guess it's fine :3
2. Found nothing else, nicely done (im not that good with modding easy/normal anyways D: )

• Hard

1. 00:31:175 (1) - not a good place for that note, try placing it somewhere else. For example: x:208 - y:192 Fixed
2. 00:39:403 (1,2,3) - place these perfectly on the slider, looks more nice Fixed
3. 00:55:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - try placing a note between those for more flow in the map Fixed
   Like this
   
4. 01:26:375 (4) - place this directly on the slider, looks better. Fixed
5. 01:27:575 (7) - same with this one

Fixed

• Insane

1. 00:01:518 (1) - place this at x:256 y:192 Fixed
2. 00:19:003 (4) - you can do a fast reverse slider here Fixed
   
3. 00:29:803 (6) - same with this one Not sure with this one.
4. 00:31:689 (4,5) - use the same distance spacing on these two (1,0) Fixed

The Guest Difficulty :3

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Yuru.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 146
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 24660
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Yuriyurarararayuruyuri Daijiken (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ゆりゆららららゆるゆり大事件 (TV Size)
Artist:Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu
ArtistUnicode:七森中☆ごらく部
Creator:Hitorikko
Version:Keada's Yuri
Source:Yuru Yuri
Tags:Yuru Yuri OP Opening ゆるゆり ken iijima pierre mikami shiori ootsubo yuka tsuda minami ookubo rumi momo taketatsu ayana
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9.3
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

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348,140,34432,2,0,B|300:112|300:112|240:124,1,101.999996887207
254,121,34689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,121,34775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,220,34946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,280,35118,6,0,B|328:304|328:304|384:296,1,101.999996887207,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,144,35460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,100,35632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,35803,2,0,B|176:296|176:296|128:320,2,101.999996887207
120,116,36318,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,60,36489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,180,36660,6,0,P|340:236|360:288,1,101.999996887207,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,188,37003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,280,37175,2,0,P|112:224|96:172,1,101.999996887207,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,72,37518,2,0,P|268:84|320:64,1,101.999996887207,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,180,37860,2,0,P|405:229|417:278,1,101.999996887207,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,300,38203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,184,38375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,232,38546,6,0,P|312:164|292:128,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,40,38889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,188,39060,2,0,P|208:268|184:296,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,184,39403,1,12,0:0:0:0:
92,176,39575,1,12,0:0:0:0:
104,168,39746,1,12,0:0:0:0:
232,64,39918,6,0,P|280:68|320:92,1,85
224,248,40432,2,0,P|192:272|164:328,1,85
240,260,40946,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,104,41289,2,0,P|336:76|388:64,1,85
320,120,41803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,204,41975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,256,42146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,228,42318,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,56,42660,6,0,P|152:52|184:72,1,85
252,280,43175,2,0,P|300:292|340:284,1,85
252,260,43689,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,164,44032,2,0,P|92:184|88:208,2,42.5
216,76,44546,2,0,P|260:76|304:104,1,85
212,96,45060,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,264,45403,6,0,P|224:288|264:288,1,85
272,108,45918,2,0,P|308:100|356:112,1,85
272,128,46432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,272,46775,2,0,P|384:280|400:292,2,42.5
160,204,47289,2,0,P|132:200|112:204,2,42.5
172,204,47718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,204,47803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,124,47975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,60,48146,5,0,3:0:0:0:
388,92,48232,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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380,244,48489,1,0,3:0:0:0:
248,284,48660,1,0,3:0:0:0:
112,184,48832,1,0,3:0:0:0:
204,44,49003,1,0,3:0:0:0:
368,96,49175,1,0,3:0:0:0:
244,212,49346,1,0,3:0:0:0:
84,268,49518,6,0,P|40:312|32:340,2,85
152,132,50032,2,0,B|196:84|196:84|228:120|272:104|272:104|284:180,1,212.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,204,51403,2,0,L|212:228,2,42.5
280,120,51918,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,104,52089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,152,52260,6,0,B|396:248|396:248|336:204|256:276,1,220.999989883423,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,216,52775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,72,52946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,80,53118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,212,53289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,4,53460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,40,53632,6,0,B|400:88|400:88|408:152|408:152|476:208,1,220.999989883423,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,54146,2,0,P|192:228|160:268,2,110.499994941712
444,84,54660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,32,54832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,192,55003,2,0,B|96:248|96:248|144:272,1,110.499994941712,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,228,55346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,84,55518,6,0,L|224:120,1,55.2499974708558
156,156,55689,2,0,B|132:104|132:104|132:40,1,110.499994941712
296,68,56032,2,0,B|328:120|328:120|372:140|408:136,1,110.499994941712
396,300,56375,2,0,B|328:240|328:240|252:292|172:212,1,220.999989883423,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,104,56889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,68,57060,2,0,B|340:84|288:160|404:172,1,165.749992412568
424,244,57403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,284,57575,5,8,0:0:0:0:
220,272,57660,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,256,57746,2,0,B|140:208|140:208|128:144,1,110.499994941712
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436,108,58775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,248,58946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,288,59803,2,0,B|251:233|195:317|131:269,1,165.749992412568,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,220,60146,1,4,0:0:0:0:
140,88,60318,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,72,60403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,248,60832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,104,61003,6,0,B|316:84|356:152|228:128|228:128|184:156,1,220.999989883423
120,280,61518,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,276,61689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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332,172,62203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,160,62375,6,0,B|196:112|196:112|264:80|264:80,1,110.499994941712
288,88,62632,1,0,3:0:0:0:
328,108,62718,1,0,3:0:0:0:
360,144,62803,1,0,3:0:0:0:
376,196,62889,1,0,3:0:0:0:
356,252,62975,1,0,3:0:0:0:
304,292,63060,1,0,3:0:0:0:
232,292,63146,1,0,3:0:0:0:
164,272,63232,6,0,B|104:212|104:212|128:164|104:72,1,220.999989883423,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,48,63746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,188,63918,2,0,P|244:244|288:272,1,110.499994941712
288,128,64260,2,0,P|248:84|260:16,1,110.499994941712
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280,168,65118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,168,65203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,168,65289,2,0,B|260:108|184:176|192:84,1,110.499994941712
68,188,65632,2,0,B|116:168|120:268|192:200,1,110.499994941712
256,332,65975,6,0,B|328:276|328:276|292:200|400:152,1,220.999989883423,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,68,66489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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448,292,67860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,292,68032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,72,68203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,76,68375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,268,68546,5,0,3:0:0:0:
312,296,68632,1,0,3:0:0:0:
268,320,68718,2,0,L|136:320,1,110.499994941712,0|0,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
184,276,68975,1,0,3:0:0:0:
236,260,69060,2,0,L|360:260,1,110.499994941712,0|0,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
316,220,69318,1,0,3:0:0:0:
272,196,69403,2,0,L|152:196,1,110.499994941712,0|0,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
192,156,69660,1,0,3:0:0:0:
236,132,69746,2,0,L|356:132,1,110.499994941712,0|0,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
324,88,70003,1,0,3:0:0:0:
284,60,70089,6,0,P|208:48|128:116,1,165.749992412568
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292,284,71118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,140,71289,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,140,71375,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,140,71460,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,120,71632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,284,71803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,316,71975,6,0,B|496:256|316:204|476:148,1,220.999989883423
324,64,72489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,72660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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68,84,73346,2,0,P|120:60|184:68,1,110.499994941712
212,84,73603,5,0,3:0:0:0:
244,112,73689,1,0,3:0:0:0:
276,144,73775,1,0,3:0:0:0:
308,176,73860,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,208,73946,1,0,3:0:0:0:
364,240,74032,1,0,3:0:0:0:
396,272,74118,1,0,3:0:0:0:
428,308,74203,6,0,P|468:236|416:132,2,170,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,75232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,76,75575,2,0,P|44:148|96:252,2,170,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,68,76432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,76603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,76775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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476,172,77289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,296,77460,2,0,P|300:288|264:312,1,85
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208,144,79003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,216,79175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,79346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,128,79518,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,79689,6,0,P|280:292|336:288,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,80032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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344,100,80546,2,0,P|308:68|236:68,1,85
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236,100,81575,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,272,81746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,108,81918,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,280,82089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,116,82260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,288,82432,6,0,P|436:240|424:200,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,80,82775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,82946,2,0,P|164:256|136:260,1,85
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340,208,83632,2,0,P|384:224|408:260,1,85
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72,127,84489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
127,62,84660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,96,84832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,180,85003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,292,85175,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,64,85518,1,4,0:0:0:0:
112,228,85860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,248,86032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,192,86375,1,0,3:0:0:0:
424,192,86546,1,0,3:0:0:0:
276,104,86718,1,0,3:0:0:0:
232,268,86889,1,0,3:0:0:0:
84,184,87060,2,0,P|104:128|140:104,1,85,0|0,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
152,100,87489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,92,87575,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Good luck in the future! <3

tm1209 wrote:

[General]


Why Easy harder than Normal ? OMG Easy = WIP


[Insane]


00:12:489 (1) - What about move to (256,320) ? It may looking better. it's fine

00:15:746 (1,2) - 00:16:432 (1,2) - I think you can make a change there . If I were you , I will increase 00:15:746 (1,2) - and 00:16:432 (1,2) - DS , and increase 00:15:918 (2) - this slider's speed to 1.25x , 00:16:603 (2) - this slider's speed to 1.5x . this is a good idea. but I need a second opinion because right now it is ok for me.

00:21:232 (1,2,3) - 00:21:918 (1,2,3) - I think you can increase DS , for example i will adjust those to 1.25x and 1.5x .

00:23:975 (3) - 00:25:346 (4) - This slider's speed changed a lot , I will use NC here . I don't think NC is needed here

00:23:460 (6,1,2,3) - 00:24:832 (1,2,3,4) - These two groups of notes are similar , but you make that different even NC . I think you should move 00:24:832 (1) - to (168,229) , move 00:25:003 (2) - to (144,320) , move 00:25:175 (3) - to (296,224) . And change 00:25:346 (4) - this slider's speed and make a change in the second group of notes to make the map become more interesting . Fixed

00:27:918 (7) - I think you should use NC here . NC Added

00:39:918 (4) - This slider's speed changed a lot , I will use NC here . NC Added

00:56:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - Five-pointed star is not perfect . Fixed



[Hard]


00:23:975 (7,3) - This slider's speed changed a lot , I will use NC here . It's fine :3

00:28:432 (8) - I think you should use NC here . ^

00:34:689 - This place should add a circle beacuse here have a tone obviously . ^

00:35:975 (2) - What about ctrl+G ? ^

01:27:575 (7) - What about use NC ? NC Added



Sorry I'm so noob .

Thank you for modding!

1. Generally... You're following the song TOO much pre-Chorus. Like parts (From Insane) at 00:13:698, or 00:31:003, etc. Mostly from following the lyrics too much, which, IMO, give that Lacking Feeling.

1. 00:12:832 (1) - Add Clap. It compliments the succeeding claps.
2. 00:13:860 (5) - ^ Same but with the end of the Slider
3. 00:16:946 (4,5,6) - Add claps here. I mean, you were already going with the rhythm so why stop there? It really gives that "excitement" feeling because of the lyrics
4. 00:17:975 (1) - Adjust the end tick to about x:376 y:280. IMO it looks better this way with the flow and all
5. 00:18:660 (2) - Add clap
6. 00:20:032 (5) - Add clap just at the beginning of the slider
7. 00:21:060 (2) - Add clap. What we're doing here is mimicking the earlier part.
8. 00:22:089 (5,6) - Still mimicking the previous part, Add claps to both ends of note 5, The first end of 6, And remove the clap at the last end. Leaving end of 6 blank makes it sound just like an extra beat, which would be better than forcing it as an included beat.
9. 00:33:746 (5,6) - Wouldn't it be better to just be a double note? Considering the next part which is 00:39:232, Doing triple parts here is gonna feel weird. Unless you switch them around.
10. 00:59:118 (5,6,7) - It may be just me because I'm an old player, but IMO this pattern is more appropriate for a hard diff than a normal diff. Maybe removing 6 and making 7 a repeating slider would be better. It may just be me though.
11. 01:25:175 (1,2,3) - Again it may just be me, But yeah IMO its gonna be better off when you just make 1 and 2 a 1/2 slider and leaving a gap.

1. Isn't the SV a bit too fast? (Again it may just be me)
2. IMO its better to use AR 7 here. (Yet again it may just be me)
3. 00:02:375 (3,4,5) - Better to just stack it at 6 than give a bad flow
4. 00:12:489 (1) - This is when we have to be consistent with hitsounds. I don't mean that you need to copy the exact hitsounds from previews diffs but at least just the essence of what you wanted. So if you did Normal, Add a clap at the end of the slider
5. 00:13:175 (4) - Add clap to both ends
6. 00:14:546 (3) - ^ Same
7. 00:15:575 (4,8) - Add claps m8
8. 00:16:946 (2,3,4) - Add claps as well
9. 00:17:957 (1) - Add clap to end
10. 00:18:660 (3) - Addingly adding a clap
11. 00:20:032 (3) - ^ Exactly the same. Also I'm kinda weirded out by the construction of the sliders here. I'm not sure how I would deal with it though but yeah I'm weirded out
12. 00:27:918 (6,7) - I am also weirded out with how both of these notes are placed. Its almost covered by 4 and gives a bad flow to Slider 8.
    
13. Regadring my General Statement, you followed the lyrics too much here resulting in some weird and a bit boring patterns. A prime example for this is 00:30:146 (4,5,6,7,8) - It's like you just forced yourself to do this since you're out of ideas on how to deal with this part. It'd be up to you if you still want to adjust it.
    
    Genrally it would be best if you switch between the lyrics and the background music at the right time. The same area where I have a problem with if a good area of what I mean. Transitioning from Lyrics to Background music would be the best Solution for this IMO. It gets rid of that barren area where you stop playing, and it might give you better map flow if placed correctly
    
    You did good sticking to the lyrics from 00:39:918 to 00:48:146. Though its because that the lyrics and the beat match.
    
14. 00:36:318 (3) - With the way you were mapping earlier, this jump would come up weird.
15. 00:46:775 (1,2,3) - Stack > Bad flow all day everyday
16. I'm not gonna comment on the whistle sounds anymore, since its not that weird. But Considering the claps, adding one at the end of 00:57:060 (8) - would help
17. 01:17:803 (3,4,5) - Again with the stacking thing

1. By now you should know what I mean with the Hitsounds. So to prevent more long arse posting I'm gonna leave the hitsounding to you
2. 00:02:718 (4) - isn't this a bit of a weird jump considering the next note?
3. 00:07:860 (2,3,4) - Instead of making it a straight horizontal pattern, Try making it a straight diagonal pattern that follows the direction of slider 1
4. 00:15:575 - 00:16:260 - So much barren areas
5. 00:21:060 - 00:21:746 - 00:22:603 - Really really barren
6. 01:00:489 - 01:03:322 - Last Hitsound comment, You forgot to add here
7. 00:16:946 (1) - IMO it would look better stacked

ohad1881 wrote:

HI!
m4m reverse here!
easy
WTF IS THIS???? Easy = WIP
normal
00:13:175-this triple is to hard for normal diff consider stacking them I thought this is ok. Needs second opinion
00:14:546-^^ ^
00:24:146-^^ ^
00:25:518-^^ ^
00:26:203 1,2,3,4,5-this jumps are to hard for a normal diff consider making some sliders btw Fixed
00:29:632-this is not spaced like 1,2(in distance snap) It's fine
00:31:003-over lap with 3(00:29:632) Not noticeable when playing tho. so i guess it's fine ?!
00:35:803-overlap with 1(00:34:432) ^
00:56:375-overlap with 1 ^
01:02:546-overlap with 2 ^
hard
00:09:746-overlap ugly with 00:08:889 Not noticeable
00:13:003-NC? nope :3
00:27:918 1,2 stack with 4 Fixed
00:38:375-stack with 3(00:37:689) It's fine
00:46:775-1,2,3,4 stack Fixed
00:51:9180-this blanket is bad fix it Fixed
insane
00:01:860-stack i think this is called anti-jump
00:06:318-NC Fixed
00:13:689-put a circle here otherwise it will be boring I am just following the music in this part, so a note here doesn't fit.
00:34:260-NC and then 00:34:603 remove it Fixed
01:17:289-stack with 1 Anti-jump
01:21:746-NC Fixed
GL!

Tsukasa wrote:

Ok as requested

General:

1. Generally... You're following the song TOO much pre-Chorus. Like parts (From Insane) at 00:13:698, or 00:31:003, etc. Mostly from following the lyrics too much, which, IMO, give that Lacking Feeling.

Normal:

1. 00:12:832 (1) - Add Clap. It compliments the succeeding claps. Fixed
2. 00:13:860 (5) - ^ Same but with the end of the Slider Fixed
3. 00:16:946 (4,5,6) - Add claps here. I mean, you were already going with the rhythm so why stop there? It really gives that "excitement" feeling because of the lyrics Fixed
4. 00:17:975 (1) - Adjust the end tick to about x:376 y:280. IMO it looks better this way with the flow and all Fixed
5. 00:18:660 (2) - Add clap Fixed
6. 00:20:032 (5) - Add clap just at the beginning of the slider Fixed
7. 00:21:060 (2) - Add clap. What we're doing here is mimicking the earlier part. Fixed
8. 00:22:089 (5,6) - Still mimicking the previous part, Add claps to both ends of note 5, The first end of 6, And remove the clap at the last end. Leaving end of 6 blank makes it sound just like an extra beat, which would be better than forcing it as an included beat. Fixed
9. 00:33:746 (5,6) - Wouldn't it be better to just be a double note? Considering the next part which is 00:39:232, Doing triple parts here is gonna feel weird. Unless you switch them around. Fixed
10. 00:59:118 (5,6,7) - It may be just me because I'm an old player, but IMO this pattern is more appropriate for a hard diff than a normal diff. Maybe removing 6 and making 7 a repeating slider would be better. It may just be me though. Changed
11. 01:25:175 (1,2,3) - Again it may just be me, But yeah IMO its gonna be better off when you just make 1 and 2 a 1/2 slider and leaving a gap. Changed

Hard:

1. Isn't the SV a bit too fast? (Again it may just be me)
2. IMO its better to use AR 7 here. (Yet again it may just be me) Changed into ar7
3. 00:02:375 (3,4,5) - Better to just stack it at 6 than give a bad flow Fixed
4. 00:12:489 (1) - This is when we have to be consistent with hitsounds. I don't mean that you need to copy the exact hitsounds from previews diffs but at least just the essence of what you wanted. So if you did Normal, Add a clap at the end of the slider Fixed
5. 00:13:175 (4) - Add clap to both ends Added
6. 00:14:546 (3) - ^ Same Added
7. 00:15:575 (4,8) - Add claps m8 Added
8. 00:16:946 (2,3,4) - Add claps as well Added
9. 00:17:957 (1) - Add clap to end Added
10. 00:18:660 (3) - Addingly adding a clap Added
11. 00:20:032 (3) - ^ Exactly the same. Also I'm kinda weirded out by the construction of the sliders here. I'm not sure how I would deal with it though but yeah I'm weirded out Added.
12. 00:27:918 (6,7) - I am also weirded out with how both of these notes are placed. Its almost covered by 4 and gives a bad flow to Slider 8. Fixed
    
13. Regadring my General Statement, you followed the lyrics too much here resulting in some weird and a bit boring patterns. A prime example for this is 00:30:146 (4,5,6,7,8) - It's like you just forced yourself to do this since you're out of ideas on how to deal with this part. It'd be up to you if you still want to adjust it. Changed
    
    Genrally it would be best if you switch between the lyrics and the background music at the right time. The same area where I have a problem with if a good area of what I mean. Transitioning from Lyrics to Background music would be the best Solution for this IMO. It gets rid of that barren area where you stop playing, and it might give you better map flow if placed correctly
    
    You did good sticking to the lyrics from 00:39:918 to 00:48:146. Though its because that the lyrics and the beat match.
    
14. 00:36:318 (3) - With the way you were mapping earlier, this jump would come up weird.[color=#FF0000 ]Fixed [/color]
15. 00:46:775 (1,2,3) - Stack > Bad flow all day everyday Fixed
16. I'm not gonna comment on the whistle sounds anymore, since its not that weird. But Considering the claps, adding one at the end of 00:57:060 (8) - would help Fixed
17. 01:17:803 (3,4,5) - Again with the stacking thing Fixed

Insane:

1. By now you should know what I mean with the Hitsounds. So to prevent more long arse posting I'm gonna leave the hitsounding to you
2. 00:02:718 (4) - isn't this a bit of a weird jump considering the next note? Fixed
3. 00:07:860 (2,3,4) - Instead of making it a straight horizontal pattern, Try making it a straight diagonal pattern that follows the direction of slider 1 Fixed
4. 00:15:575 - 00:16:260 - So much barren areas i'm not sure about this because for me it is fine
5. 00:21:060 - 00:21:746 - 00:22:603 - Really really barren ^
6. 01:00:489 - 01:03:322 - Last Hitsound comment, You forgot to add here Fixed
7. 00:16:946 (1) - IMO it would look better stacked Fixed

And that's pretty much it

Yato3o wrote:

Hello~

[Normal]

00:13:175 (2,3,4) It's fine
00:14:546 (6,7,8) ^
00:24:146 (3,4,5) - Change it to Sliders or Reverse?? let give them triples at chorus like 01:12:146 (2,3,4,6,7,8)


[Hard]

01:05:975 (1,2,3) - wag mo po ipatong. ^

01:15:918 , 01:16:260 , 01:16:432 , 01:16:603 , 01:16:775 - Add notes here = Sounds nice too note added 01:26:460 -

[Insane]

Thumbs up bro. thanks

Add-on here. You can use it if necessary
http://puu.sh/goPVB/68b3ce9115.png <- Try that Comboburst Tell me If the image size doesn't fit
http://puu.sh/goQ8t/8fdd8e59b6.wav <- Finish Hitsound
http://puu.sh/goQhG/a0e839e44f.rar <- Cursors (It is from SODA.)

sukiNathan wrote:

IRC Mod

20:03 sukiNathan: hi
20:03 Hitorikko: yo~
20:03 sukiNathan: so you asked me for a mod
20:03 sukiNathan: can I just point out some things through irc
20:04 Hitorikko: yes I did. yeah sure. :)
20:04 sukiNathan: so first thing is
20:04 sukiNathan: the jump from normal to hard
20:04 sukiNathan: is pretty ridiculous
20:04 sukiNathan: comparing hard to insane
20:04 sukiNathan: normal=148 objects
20:05 sukiNathan: hard=251
20:05 sukiNathan: insane is only 29 more than hard
20:05 sukiNathan: you'd probably have to tone down the rhythm density in hard for the spread to be rankable
20:05 sukiNathan: ok just some suggestions now
20:06 Hitorikko: i see.
20:06 sukiNathan: on hard
20:06 sukiNathan: 00:11:975 (5,6,7) - you could probably NC here
20:06 sukiNathan:  for the spacing increase
20:06 sukiNathan: and the pitch increase
20:07 sukiNathan: 00:34:260 (2,3,4,5) - this looks like a 1/4 stack
20:07 sukiNathan: you should probably spread them out a bit more
20:08 sukiNathan: it'll throw off some players
20:09 sukiNathan: 01:17:288 (2) - unsnapped D:
20:10 sukiNathan: 00:39:918 - volume should probably decreased a bit here
20:10 sukiNathan: the claps are pretty loud
20:10 sukiNathan: maybe 65%~?
20:11 sukiNathan: also for a hard
20:11 sukiNathan: the sv is really high
20:11 sukiNathan: and it should definitely not be the same as insane
20:12 sukiNathan: uh am I going too fast ;w;
20:12 Hitorikko: wait i sec
20:12 Hitorikko: 01:17:289 (2) - this one
20:13 Hitorikko: how is it unsnapped ?
20:13 sukiNathan: the end is
20:13 Hitorikko: it is on the white tick.
20:14 sukiNathan: the end is 2 milliseconds off the white tick
20:14 sukiNathan: check aimod
20:14 Hitorikko: http://puu.sh/gpKts/25919198b5.jpg
20:15 sukiNathan:  http://puu.sh/gpKw9/7a6dbcc25a.jpg
20:15 sukiNathan: that's weird
20:15 sukiNathan: your version is different from mine I guess
20:15 Hitorikko: yep. i did an update yesterday
20:16 sukiNathan: ah
20:16 sukiNathan: also for the ar on this
20:16 sukiNathan: it should be 7.5-8
20:17 sukiNathan: ar 7 for a 175 bpm song is too slow imo
20:17 sukiNathan: plus it's not very balanced with insane
20:18 Hitorikko: ok I will change it to 7.5
20:18 sukiNathan: normal's settings should also probably be buffed
20:18 sukiNathan: not quite sure what values though
20:19 sukiNathan: if you want to nerf hard you would probably have to get rid of the 1/4 notes
20:19 sukiNathan: and a bit of 1/2
20:20 sukiNathan: the way it is right now
20:20 sukiNathan: insane is basically the same thing as hard
20:20 sukiNathan: with just increased spacing
20:20 sukiNathan: and a bit more dense
20:20 sukiNathan: although for issues like this you're probably better asking a bn/qat for advice
20:21 sukiNathan: ill take a look at insane now
20:21 Hitorikko: ok
20:23 sukiNathan: 00:33:918 (1,2,1,2) - increase the spacing a bit here
20:23 sukiNathan: it shouldn't be the same spacing as 00:34:603 (3,4,5) - 
20:23 sukiNathan: since one stack is 1/2 while the other is 1/4
20:23 sukiNathan: kind of confusing
20:25 sukiNathan: widescreen support should be disabled for all difficulties
20:26 sukiNathan: since there's no storyboard
20:27 sukiNathan: your background should either be 1366x768
20:27 sukiNathan: or 1024x768
20:27 sukiNathan: one sec ill check if theres a different size version of your current one
20:29 sukiNathan: ah nvm
20:29 sukiNathan: you'll have to find a different size bg
20:29 sukiNathan: otherwise the only way to make this 1366x768
20:29 sukiNathan: is by screwing up the ratio of the pic
20:30 Hitorikko: i tried that. the result is bad
20:30 sukiNathan: yeah
20:30 sukiNathan: just find another pic
20:30 sukiNathan: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/191777/start=0&&hilit=ringating
20:30 sukiNathan: or you can ask this guy for help
20:31 Hitorikko: i will ask him to make this pic 1366x768 ?
20:31 Hitorikko: or 1024x768 ?
20:32 sukiNathan: I think he can add stuff to the pic
20:32 sukiNathan: to make it 1366
20:32 sukiNathan: but tbh finding another pic
20:32 sukiNathan: is probably easier
20:32 sukiNathan: and les wait
20:32 sukiNathan: less*
20:33 sukiNathan: 00:23:975 (3,4) - the flow could be improved here
20:33 sukiNathan: if you make the sliders curved
20:33 sukiNathan: 00:23:803 (2,3) - for example here
20:33 sukiNathan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2858431
20:34 sukiNathan: having it curved like that
20:34 sukiNathan: would carry on more momentum from 00:23:803 (2) - 
20:34 sukiNathan: instead of just doing a jagged movement with a straight slider
20:34 sukiNathan: you can also make a blanket if you curve these
20:35 sukiNathan: Alright that's all I have I guess
20:36 sukiNathan: I'll post this log on your beatmap thread
20:37 Hitorikko: umm. the hard diff. do I have to remap it or i'll just have to remove some notes ?
20:37 sukiNathan: ah well
20:37 sukiNathan: you don't have to remap it I think
20:37 Hitorikko: ok thanks.
20:37 sukiNathan: you'll need to remove quite a bit though
20:37 sukiNathan: it's probably best to ask a bn for help
20:38 sukiNathan: ok posting
20:38 Hitorikko: ok. i'll try aking one

Pointed out some spacing/readability issues, general things, and the difficulty spread

Thank you for modding !

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:

I added white space to the top of the image (in order to get it to a 16:9 aspect ratio), then sprinkled some hearts in that new empty space to make it look like it's supposed to be that way. then resized to 1366x768 and saved as lossless png.

bg

png is pretty efficient in this image due to all the solid white

no kds

Thanks a lot ! BG is so Kawaii.

Estellia- wrote:

Ooo short song~

[Easy]
00:01:518 (1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Fix all blankets here. Also, you messed up pretty bad
00:28:946 (1,2) - blanket
00:41:289 (2,2) - stack?
00:44:032 (2,1) - blanket
00:46:775 (2,1) - ^
01:00:489 (1,1) - Maybe make sure they don't touch, it looks ugly
01:05:975 (1,2) - blanket
01:10:089 (3,1) - ^
01:11:460 (1,2) - ^
01:12:832 (2,1) - Make this a nicer circle, right now it looks very lopsided
01:17:632 (2,3) - blanket
01:25:175 (1,2) - ^

Very basic Easy. Nothing special. All you need to do is fix the blankets and it'll be fine. Major suggestion is to increase the difficulty (to ~1.3-1.5) to make the difficulty curve a bit better.

All Fixed

[Normal]
00:02:203 (3,4) - blanket
00:06:318 (5,1) - ^
00:07:689 (3,4) - ^
00:08:375 (4,5) - ^
00:08:375 (4,6) - Maybe make sure they don't intersect, it looks ugly
00:17:975 (1) - You don't have to make a weird slider here, you can retain a straight slider, the map will still play the same
00:18:660 (2,4,5) - Maybe rotate 4 counter clockwise to you can stack 2 and 5?
00:21:746 (4,5) - blanket
00:24:489 (5,1) - ^
00:25:860 (4,5) - ^
00:28:089 (8) - why empty? ?
00:29:632 (3,4) - blanket
00:31:346 (6,2,3) - Shift 2 closer to 3 so 3 and 6 can stack
00:33:060 (3,4,5,6,1) - You can try a polygon shape here it's fine
00:35:118 (2,3) - blanket
00:39:918 (1) - There should be no SV changes in a Normal, that's unrankable, please remove this SV change
00:53:632 (3,4) - blanket
(I'll stop pointing out blanket issues here)
00:57:746 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't fit the music at all, change them to just 1 slider each/1 hitcircle each
01:14:203 (1) - SV change, unrankable

One thing to note when you map is the rhythm. I notice some rhythmic patterns that were added at random which doesn't fit the music. Stuff like 00:14:546 (6,7,8) - 00:25:518 (2,3,4) - which doesn't particularly follow anything in the music. I highly suggest you recheck your diff on this.

All fixed except..

[Hard]
CS+1 maybe?
00:17:975 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Slider shapes are very awkward
00:22:432 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - You can choose to make this symmetrical, centralize 5 and make 12345 a horizontal flip from 4
00:23:460 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - May be hard to read
00:27:918 (6,7,8) - ^
00:33:746 (10) - There is a strong beat here, I suggest you add a note
00:34:260 (2,3,4,5) - Looks hard to read
00:37:003 (1,2,3,4) - This formation looks unsightly, I suggest you change it, but its fine if you don't
00:48:146 (1,2,3,4) - Looks hard to read
01:13:860 (4,1) - Make sure they don't touch, it looks ugly

This Hard seems difficult compared to other Hards I've seen, but its structured rather well, so its fine.

remapping. . .

[Insane]
00:56:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can try a perfect star here Fixed
01:06:660 (3,5) - Maybe make sure they don't touch It's fine

Main suggestions for this map is to adjust your flow a little bit. Areas like 00:37:175 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:31:860 (5,6) - 00:52:260 (1,2,3,4) - have sliders that don't exactly transition well with each other, but its just something to keep in mind and isn't a critical fault in your map.

EN may need more working on, HI is kinda nice. Good luck~

Thank you for visiting my queue~

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Insane

1. You should reconsider where you've placed your NC. Ideally, you should place a NC on or after every 4 beats (the taller white lines on the timeline). Examples include 00:04:280 (5) - 00:05:823 (1) - 00:07:023 (5) - . In the case of 00:02:909 (5) - Just place the NC on the next note. Fixed
2. 00:09:766 (1,2) - If you're trying to go for the symmetrical look of the map, I'd suggest moving one/both of these to appropriate positions. Fixed by moving the notes
3. 00:10:452 (3) - Replace this with 2 circles for better flow.
4. 00:13:538 (5) - I suggest having a 1/2 slider rather than a gap here.
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:15:595 (3) - Add circle for better flow.
6. 00:16:280 (3) - ^
7. 00:20:909 (3) - Extend to a 1/2 slider for better flow. Fixed
8. 00:21:595 (3) - ^ Fixed
9. 00:34:280 (1,2) - Read note above regarding NCs Fixed
10. 00:37:880 (5) - Reposition so the sliderend does not touch with 00:37:195 (3) - Fixed
11. 00:39:938 (1) - From this green tick to the next, you've been placing circles/sliders with relation to the vocals. Changing suddenly to align with the drum/beat is a bit strange. Consider remapping this part to the vocals.
12. 01:07:366 (5) - Stack under 01:06:680 (3) - sliderend.

Hard

1. 00:34:623 (3,4,5) - Change this. why?
2. 00:37:023 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
3. 01:01:880 (1) - You can remove the first red point without interrupting the slider. Fixed
4. 01:06:509 (2) - Distance spacing issue. Move further away. Fixed

Normal

1. 00:41:309 (2) - Maybe a different slider shape considering the difficulty. Fixed
2. 01:18:338 (4) - Is not stacked properly with 01:16:966 (1) - x: 252 y: 136 Fixed
3. 01:23:823 (4) - ^ x: 284 y: 188 Fixed

General

1. Since this is TV size, consider including a video. I will if I find one

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3953827 I got offset 1550

domSaur wrote:

some random nitpicking

[Insane]
00:15:092 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - maybe make these progress upwards to the left(or alt updown)
00:38:921 (8) - nvm this make this into two notes?

idk, it's jumpy and not jumpy at the same time..

Makoa wrote:

i dont speak japanese but i'm pretty sure this song was named by a tiger smashing its paw on a keyboard.

[EAsY PP free MOnEY]
00:09:778 (1) - not a accent in song here so you might want to try to change the reverse slider to something that can fit the music better
00:20:750 (1,2,3,4) - am i listening to childporn?
00:33:092 (2,1,2,3) - Not sure is the whole song is off but atleast here, the hit circle timing is definetly lagging behind the mp3
yeah nevermind for the rest of the song it sounds fine
01:04:635 (2) - careful with them playboundaries
nothing wrong with this diff but spend some time checking those timing sections for the whole song

[norman]
ok, I think the timing offset should be around 1522 just to make a suggestion but Look into these timings because they feel very wrong (change this in all diffs)
00:55:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - could shorten this combo Fixed
solid shit

[hard ready for action]
seems like nothing is out of place

[insain]
00:19:721 (2,3,4) - dont have to stack as much Fixed
01:03:264 (1,2) - maybe change this to a longer slider because the syncopation is unexpected. the rest of the map follows accented downbeats Doesn't sound right to me


This felt like a really unproductive mod, sorry. hope your map get where you want it to go.

Aura893 wrote:

From my queue!

[Normal]- This normal mode was very solid! Everything was on time, hitsounds are correctly placed, I played through it quite a few times to find something, but I couldn't! This is a very good beatmap, and I hope for the best for it!

Prophecy wrote:

[Easy]
No Problem Here~

[Normal]
00:13:378 - Clap?
00:14:750 - Clap?
01:12:350 - Clap?
01:13:721 - Clap?

jloughman14 wrote:

Have another star

1. 00:01:550 (1) - I find this placement a bit odd. If you're going to stick it out~ stick it out or alternatively just place it on top of the (2) slider.
2. 00:02:750 (5,6) - Flow between here I found awkward. I'm going to summarise this with AWK.
3. 00:04:292 (1) - I don't think the a NC should start here. In the little pause between this note and the next, I'm hanging my cursor on (2) waiting.
4. 00:05:321 (5,6,7) - Uneven spacing between all three singles~ confusing play for accuracy. I'm going to summarise/abbreviate this with DS.
5. 00:05:835 (8) - AWK. From (7) you're making my cursor aim northwest and then I have to follow the slider towards the right. Some people I guess don't mind this, but I consider it awkward to play.
6. 00:06:864 (3,4,1) - Do a 1.00 spacing with previous note for neatness (since the note before it is also 1.00 from the end slider of (1).
7. 00:08:750 (7,8,9) - AWK
   
   _____________
   
   If the following notes were creating some sort of pattern (like stars) then I guess you can ignore the spacing rule between singles. But they're not patterns (or at least not in my eyes anyway).
8. 00:09:778 (1,2,3) - DS. If you don't want them all equal, make the (2) Even DS from Next and Prev. Atm it's 1.31 // 1.16. Makes no sense for it to be different on both sides when it's equally between beats (1) and (3).
9. 00:10:978 (4) - Whatever DS you made for the above suggestion make this note the same DS with its previous note (00:10:464 (3))
   Just so you understand what I mean with the previous 2 suggestions~ what you did here 00:12:178 (8) - is 'correct'. It's even DS with spacing of 1.25/1.26 (relatively the same).
10. 00:08:921 (8) - Same deal. Or instead of doing even DS with this note, you could place this 1.00 Next to slider (9) to match with (7) being 1.00 Prev to slider (6). R
11. 00:17:321 (4) - DS
12. 00:23:835 (2) - DS. Or do the same with R suggestion.
13. 00:14:921 (5,1) - AWK
14. 00:30:178 (7,8,9,10) - All different spacing when they're on the same beat.
15. 00:30:178 (7) - NC. (Or I'm hovering my cursor on 7 again waiting - up to you how you judge that I guess though).
16. 00:31:207 (1,2,3,4,5) - ??? DS. You're even on 1, 2, 3 and then completely go off on 4 when again- they're on the same beat.
17. Pretty good from here on till
18. 01:00:521 (1) - AWK
19. 01:01:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - We're getting very linear here (I'm not one to like linear movement). Maybe make the stream flow in a curve?
20. 01:14:064 (5) - This slider plays weird. I think a single-single works much better here.
21. 01:14:064 (5) - Repeated the beginning?

Aura893 wrote:

From my queue!

[Normal]- This normal mode was very solid! Everything was on time, hitsounds are correctly placed, I played through it quite a few times to find something, but I couldn't! This is a very good beatmap, and I hope for the best for it!

Vertify wrote:

~From my Mod Queue~

[General]
Spacings and Awkward play are my two things here =)
Since it's my first time modding you- I'd like to state that these are MY suggestions and opinions.
Just hittin' the Insane for now =)

[Insane]
You've got a good beat (sliders and singles)~ though there's some awkward flow in a few areas and so most of my 'mods' here will be suggestions. And of course they are MY opinions. =)

1. 00:01:550 (1) - I find this placement a bit odd. If you're going to stick it out~ stick it out or alternatively just place it on top of the (2) slider.
2. 00:02:750 (5,6) - Flow between here I found awkward. I'm going to summarise this with AWK.
3. 00:04:292 (1) - I don't think the a NC should start here. In the little pause between this note and the next, I'm hanging my cursor on (2) waiting.
4. 00:05:321 (5,6,7) - Uneven spacing between all three singles~ confusing play for accuracy. I'm going to summarise/abbreviate this with DS.
5. 00:05:835 (8) - AWK. From (7) you're making my cursor aim northwest and then I have to follow the slider towards the right. Some people I guess don't mind this, but I consider it awkward to play.
6. 00:06:864 (3,4,1) - Do a 1.00 spacing with previous note for neatness (since the note before it is also 1.00 from the end slider of (1).
7. 00:08:750 (7,8,9) - AWK
   
   _____________
   
   If the following notes were creating some sort of pattern (like stars) then I guess you can ignore the spacing rule between singles. But they're not patterns (or at least not in my eyes anyway).
8. 00:09:778 (1,2,3) - DS. If you don't want them all equal, make the (2) Even DS from Next and Prev. Atm it's 1.31 // 1.16. Makes no sense for it to be different on both sides when it's equally between beats (1) and (3).
9. 00:10:978 (4) - Whatever DS you made for the above suggestion make this note the same DS with its previous note (00:10:464 (3))
   Just so you understand what I mean with the previous 2 suggestions~ what you did here 00:12:178 (8) - is 'correct'. It's even DS with spacing of 1.25/1.26 (relatively the same).
10. 00:08:921 (8) - Same deal. Or instead of doing even DS with this note, you could place this 1.00 Next to slider (9) to match with (7) being 1.00 Prev to slider (6). R
11. 00:17:321 (4) - DS
12. 00:23:835 (2) - DS. Or do the same with R suggestion.
13. 00:14:921 (5,1) - AWK
14. 00:30:178 (7,8,9,10) - All different spacing when they're on the same beat.
15. 00:30:178 (7) - NC. (Or I'm hovering my cursor on 7 again waiting - up to you how you judge that I guess though).
16. 00:31:207 (1,2,3,4,5) - ??? DS. You're even on 1, 2, 3 and then completely go off on 4 when again- they're on the same beat.
17. Pretty good from here on till
18. 01:00:521 (1) - AWK
19. 01:01:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - We're getting very linear here (I'm not one to like linear movement). Maybe make the stream flow in a curve?
20. 01:14:064 (5) - This slider plays weird. I think a single-single works much better here.
21. 01:14:064 (5) - Repeated the beginning?

Well done so far~ KIU.

DahplA wrote:

Best mod 2k15

Vertify wrote:

If you're remapping- I wouldn't remap completely. You had a good beat with the singles and sliders; I'd just reposition them all rather than starting from scratch.
(I do this A LOT).

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ From my modding queue~

Easy

• Seems to need some better beat changes. ( AR + 1 )

1. 00:12:506 (1) - doesn't sound right for me
2. 00:13:877 (2) - ~ 00:26:220 (3) - Move to 00:13:535 (2) - ~ 00:25:877 (3) - Here ( Hitsound Change ) i don't understand.
3. 00:27:592 (4) - Add Circle note here is not needed
4. 00:28:963 (1) - doesn't sound right for me
5. 00:30:335 (2) - ~ 00:48:849 (2) - Move to 00:29:992 (2) - ~ 00:48:506 (2) - Here ( Hitsound Change ) i don't understand.
6. 00:49:192 (3) - Add Circle nope
7. 00:52:277 (1) - nope
8. 00:53:649 (2) - ~ 01:12:849 (2) - Move to 00:53:306 (2) - ~ 01:12:506 (2) - Here ( Hitsound Change ) i don't understand.
9. 01:16:963 (1) - ~ 01:24:506 (4) - Move to 01:17:306 (1) - ~ 01:24:849 (4) - Here ( Hitsound Change ) i don't understand.
10. 01:26:563 (2) - Move to 01:26:392 (2) - Here and slider end 01:27:592 (3) - Here

doesn't fit the song

Normal

1. 00:23:820 (2) - Add Clap Fixed
2. 00:24:849 (1) - Add Clap ( Slider end ) Fixed
3. 00:26:220 (5,6) - Same Fixed
4. 00:27:592 (7) - Swap Clap to Whistle replaced clap with a FINISH
5. 00:28:963 (1) - Delete Clap no
6. 00:33:420 (4,5) - Swap Clap ^
7. 00:39:935 (1,2) - Add Clap ( Slider end ) Fixed
8. 00:48:506 (2,4) - Add Clap Fixed
9. 00:58:449 (2) - Delete Clap Fixed
10. 00:59:135 - 00:59:820 - 01:00:506 - Delete Clap Fixed
11. 01:09:763 (3) - Add Clap Fixed
12. 01:10:792 (5) - Slider Head ( Delete Clap ) Fixed
13. 01:11:477 (1) - Slider End ( Add Clap ) Fixed
14. 01:12:849 (5) - Same

Hard CS + 1 i don't think so

GL~

[Rei-tan] wrote:

Hello! Modder from my Queue - p/3951220#p3951220

Easy

I can't see any problems with this

Normal

I CAN'T SEE ANY MISTAKESSSS!!! *WAILS ON THE FLOOR, SOBBING LOUDLY.*

Hard

00:04:106 (8) - Start new combo here NC not needed here
00:05:135 - 00:05:820 (2,3,4) - Move this a little lower and a little closer to each other they're kinda too far for the player's reaction time.. ?
00:07:877 - 00:08:563 (2,3,4) - avoid stacking in this part. Fixed
00:13:877 (4) - Start new combo here Fixed
00:17:992 (5) - Start new combo here ^
00:17:990 (5) - move this up a little higher. nope
00:19:363 (7) - start new combo here Fixed
00:20:735 (12) - start new combo here nope
00:31:192 (6) - start new combo here Fixed
00:46:792 (1) - Remove this note so that instead of triples, it would be doubles. It messes up the player's reaction time I wanna keep this, and double feels a little awkward
00:49:535 (5) - Remove this note, the player won't be able to react on time for the spinner in 00:49:706 It's fine
01:00:163 (4) - start new combo here Fixed
01:00:420 (5) - if possible, remove note here nope
01:11:477 (1) - move this to the west a bit. It's fine
01:20:563 - 01:21:249 (2,3,4) - Move this a little lower and a little closer to each other they're kinda too far for the player's reaction time.. (again)

Insane

General :

> Make the HP Drain 5 instead of 6. nope
> AR 8.0 instead of 9 ^

00:57:420 (10) - move this a little to the east because if you don't, the jump would look kinda awkward

Eh crappy modder here

blueloniess wrote:

Hi ,coming to modding your map
hope you can mod my map too !https://osu.ppy.sh/s/287561
Here are my personal opinion :

INSANE

00:11:135 - suggest you put a stream here ,like this I wanna keep this.
00:16:620 (1,2,3,4) - I think put them at the corner are more better it's fine
00:23:992 (8) - when you want to use new slider speed ,please set a new combo Fixed
00:25:363 (3) - ↑ Fixed
01:02:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - humm add some short slider ? nope, stream here is perfect IMO
01:13:535 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - same ,add some short slider ,and make them little far ,like this :i wanna keep this stream. I hate kick slider

hard

00:17:649 (4) - feel strange at here ... Fixed
00:17:992 (5) - - set a new combo ？
00:23:992 (3,3) - if you need change the slider speed ,please set a new combo
your hard is better than insane .cuz the insane diff's distance make me feel not good .....but when I see your hard diff I feel really good
hard is really good nearly no problem

Other

NM :
00:13:192 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - ehhh change it like a reverse slider reverse here will mess up the flow
00:13:192 - 00:17:992 - why not copy it and put it at 00:17:992 - 00:23:135 - ?or add at 00:18:677 (2,3) -
00:24:163 (3,4,5,2,3,4) - ↑
EZ：good seems no problems
XD

A good map ,~~~~:D
hope it can be ranked soon !
good luck

No Dap wrote:

nice BG 10/10

-Nanaka- wrote:

hi
from My Modding Queues

Short Mod


red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue,Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.

Hard

1. 00:18:506 - add Note Note added
2. 00:19:363 (1,2) - Inconsistent rhythm Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:20:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm suggestion I want to keep my pattern here, coz it it goes well with the next pattern
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:23:992 (1,1) - Such shifting SV, should be avoided Fixed
5. 00:37:020 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overlap Fixed
6. 00:38:563 (6) - NC 00:39:420 (1) - Remove NC 00:39:935 (4) - NC Fixed
7. 00:47:992 - add Note Note added
8. 00:52:277 (3) - NC Fixed
9. 01:07:192 - Circle 01:07:363 - 1/2 slider Fixed
10. 01:11:135 (4,1,2,3) - try Vocal rhythm Fixed
    
    SPOILER

    

Insane

1. AR9 recommended AR slow to 175BPM ar9
2. 00:01:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Seem to get no pattern to me Fixed
3. 00:09:763 (1) - Missing Finish & Remove Clap Fixed
4. 00:11:306 (5,6,7) - rhythm suggestion Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:12:849 - Remove Finish & add Clap Fixed
6. 00:13:192 (3) - Remove Clap & add whistle Fixed
7. 00:13:363 - Remove Clap, Body Clap Fixed
8. 00:13:877 - add whistle Fixed
9. 00:14:563 (3) - Remove Clap & add whistle Fixed
10. 00:14:735 (4) - Remove Clap Fixed
11. 00:15:249 - add whistle Fixed
12. 00:15:935 - add whistle. during this section, the whistle should be on the first and Three beat. Fixed
13. 00:18:335 - Missing Clap Fixed
14. 00:18:677 - 00:18:849 - Remove Clap Fixed
15. 00:27:592 (10) - Missing Finish & Fixed
16. whistle 00:27:592 (10,1) - swap NC Fixed
17. 00:28:620 (4) - add Finish?Well a matter of taste clap sounds better here IMO
18. 00:29:992 - Very puzzling.If you ignore the individual beat should be a 00:29:820 - 1/1 slider Fixed
19. 00:30:677 (8) - add reverse Fixed
20. 00:33:077 (6,7) - swap rhythm Fixed
21. 00:34:449 (4,5) - ^ Fixed
22. 00:35:477 - add Note nope
23. 00:36:849 - ^ nope
24. 00:39:935 - during this section, I think I'm whistle than Clap Fixed
25. 00:48:163 - 00:48:849 - whistle Fixed
26. 00:48:506 - 00:49:192 (4,5) - Clap Fixed
27. 00:49:535 (6) - RemClap add Finish Fixed
28. 00:49:706 (1) - ^ Fixed
29. 00:52:277 - ^ & add NC Fixed
30. 01:03:249 - add Finish Fixed
31. 01:03:763 (2,3) - swap rhythm Fixed
32. 01:04:449 (4,5,6) - Ctrl+G rhythm Fixed
33. 01:14:220 (1,2) - Missing Finish & Remove Clap 01:15:592 (2) - add NC Fixed
34. 01:25:192 (1) - Missing Finish & Remove Clap Fixed
35. 01:26:735 (6,7) - Ctrl+G, better flow nope, I wanna keep this.
36. 01:26:392 (4) - NC Fixed
37. 01:27:592 (9) - ^

Fixed

There is a need to review the hit sound
for example

SPOILER

fit where also the basic okay
Please try various

gl　☆

Thank you for this awesome mod

Fort wrote:

so you want to remap insane?

remap = nofun :/

Insane:
AR8 didnt help for this map, increase AR to AR8.7 pls ar9 now

oh yeah i cant tell everything about this map but yeah! nice work
00:02:220 (3,4,5) - nudge this to 00:02:392 - ,its follow vocal (probably you need to fix pattern there and some pattern who similiar like this) Fixed
00:23:992 (1,1) - ouw sv changes. Fixed
where is the hitsounding llike ..... whistle and finish? you only just use clap in this map, very awkward sound i guess since you add some clap on downbeat. but i think this map just only lacks of whistle and finish

No Dap wrote:

nice BG 10/10

later :3

PhoniexPvP wrote:

#Modreq

HARD!
1: Hards have to be 5-6 circle size not 3 xD
2: 00:16:620 Please seperate them using distance snap there too close together. they're separated properly.
3: 00:47;992 Please snap the distance from the green to the next green circle its too close together
4: 01:00:335 Distance a bit off there like a inch to put together but you can keep if you absolutely need to. it's fine
5: 01:01:706 distance snap the red slider away from the yellow one so there isn't a confusion when they tap it, Because most of the new skins have no middle for the sliders xD. u don't like my sliders ?
6: Add spinner to end. not needed

I only can edit hards as of right now. I still need to work on my insanes and normal/easy's so this is all I can mod for you hopefully it pleases you.
-PhoniexPvP #NekoNation

-H a y a- wrote:

from my queue XD~

[Easy]
00:57:763 (1,2,3,4) - add finish? added
01:08:735 (1,2) - add finish? ^
00:33:077 (2,2) - make it like it's fine

SPOILER

?

[Normal]
00:54:335 (4),01:02:563 (4),01:05:306 (4) - - remove clap at start? nope

[Hard]
00:17:649 (4) - how about add finish? Added
00:34:620 (3,4) - replace with a reverse slider? I wanna keep this

[Insane]
00:29:135 (2) - replace with reverse slider or 1/4? it's fine
00:34:706,00:48:402 - add a note here? nope
and just a suggestion,ar8.5 rather than 9 is better?(since there aren't many random jump in insane )

-Nanaka- wrote:

AR9 recommended AR slow to 175BPM

nice mapset,good luck~

1. 00:17:992 (1,2) - You could make these blankets a bit better
2. 00:35:820 (3) - Maybe change the angle of this a little bit so that it flows into the next note better
3. 00:41:306 (2,1) - Make this blanket better (i know it's not touching the follow circle but it's still technically blanketed)
4. 00:42:677 (1,2) - And this one could be better too
5. 00:57:763 (1,2,3,4) - Grab each of these and hold down shift when you have DS and grid snap on and it'll lock them into a perfect square, what you have right now is a little off

1. 00:02:220 (3,5) - Maybe move 5 a little, these are really close together and eh I don't like the look of it
2. 00:05:649 (4,2) - These are close enough on the timeline that the tiny overlap is noticeable while playing and it makes it look messy
3. 00:06:335 (5,1) - Fix the blanket on these
4. 00:07:706 (3,4) - and these could blanket better
5. 00:09:763 (1) - the first curve in this isn't a perfect circle, try using a note as a template
6. 00:08:392 (4,1) - And these overlap a lot, maybe too much for a normal
7. 00:09:763 (1) - To me this whistle sounds not that great, I'd put it on the head on or tail
8. 00:13:192 (2,3,4) - If you turn of grid snap you can make this into a smoother curve (if that was what you were going for)
9. 00:16:620 (3,4,5,6) - I'm not a big fan of the back and forth overlapping like this in a normal, I get why you did it but I think it's something that should be saved for a higher diff
10. 00:24:506 (5,1) - This blanket could be fixed some
11. 00:28:277 - Maybe add something here, it feels too empty to me
12. 00:29:649 (3,5) - You should move the 5 so that the overlap isn't there, tiny overlaps like this that look unintentional
13. 00:31:706 (1,2) - These aren't parallel so I'd change the angle on 1 some
14. 00:34:449 (1,3) - I'd make the 3's tail underneath the 1's tail
15. 00:35:820 (3,4) - These don't flow into eachother very well
16. 00:39:935 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - All of these sets of 2 sliders are slightly different shapes, I'd just copy the first of each pair so that they're the same shape
17. 00:46:792 (2,4) - These overlap some and feel messy
18. 00:53:649 (3,4) - This blanket's off
19. 00:53:649 (3,1) - These are a bit too close together
20. 00:55:020 (1,3) - Same with this overlap
21. 00:59:135 (4) - I'm not a big fan of 1/1 sliders that repeat more than once, it honestly imo is an older mapping style that isn't used much anymore
22. 01:12:849 (5,1) - I'd make these tails overlap eachother
23. The kiai time feels kind of bland because 90% of it is 1/2 sliders, I'd add some more circles to help mix it up some
24. 01:21:763 (5,1) - You could fix this blanket
25. 01:23:820 (4,5) - And this one

1. 00:03:763 (7,1) - Maybe make these not overlap
2. 00:07:877 (2,3,4) - Having these slightly spaced when 00:02:392 (3,4,5) - are perfectly stacks makes it not too consistent
3. 00:11:306 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - These might be better as some kind of shape instead of straight lines
4. 00:24:849 (1,2,3) - The copy paste is kinda meh, I'd at least flip it and make it symterical or something
5. 00:29:906 - Skipping the white tick makes playing it feel awkward imo
6. 00:36:335 (3,4) - You could fix this blanket some
7. 00:38:563 (1,2) - And this one
8. 00:46:792 (1,2,3,4) - I think stacking these doesn't fit the music very much, maybe make a pattern?
9. 00:52:620 (2,3) - Having the 2 kinda flow into the 3 but not really makes it play weird, I'd change it so it flowed better
10. 00:56:220 (4,5) - You can make this blanket better
11. 00:56:392 (5,7) - This overlap doesn't look too great
12. 01:00:163 (1,4) - And this overlap too
13. 01:06:677 (3,5) - Ehhh, this one too
14. 01:13:877 (4,1) - And this one
15. 01:16:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,1,1) - Copying and pasted the beginning isn't too good imo, I'd use the same rythym but make a new layout

1. 00:02:392 (4,5) - I'd say to keep Ds on here, no real reason for a jump
2. Your DS is all over the place for no real reason, I'd say to keep DS on unless the song sounds differently
3. 00:07:020 (1,2) - This overlap isn't very nice looking
4. 00:11:306 (5,6,7) - here is an example of a place you could use jumps since the song pitch changes a bit
5. 00:23:992 (1,1) - I'd NC these because of the drastic change in SV
6. 00:27:592 (1) - You could probably make this jump a bit bigger than the other ones in order to emphasis it
7. 00:35:135 (7) - Ctrl+G this
8. 00:38:563 (6,9) - These overlap some
9. 00:48:163 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is a good place where you could add some jumps
10. 00:56:735 (6,7,8,9,10) - I dunno if this jump fits
11. 01:01:363 (3,5) - This overlap is eh, I'd change it
12. 01:03:763 (2,4,5,7) - You could make these look like a pattern more
13. 01:15:050 - I'd map here and 01:16:277 - here, leaving it blank makes the note density not that great since it's an insane
14. 01:16:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Same thing as the hard about copying and pasting

Setz wrote:

No Dap wrote:

nice BG 10/10

also i might take a look at this when you finish all the diffs to give you some general pointers.

1. hitsounds still need alot of work. specially the claps, they seem random for most of the map. Here is something that will help you
   
   SPOILER

   
   Ok, so look at this image, the white lines correspond to the small white lines on the timeline. you want to place claps where the X's are. so, Using the insane as an example 00:12:849 (2,4) - clap head of first slider, clap the reverse of the second one, and just repeat the pattern. there are exceptions such as 00:33:935 (1,2,3) - , claps on all these sounds nice, which is what you already have.
   Anyway, try to apply this for the claps in all the diffs, this would be a good start.

1. try some rhythm variety for this diff, as it stands, it is very boring with the same rhythm throughout the entire map. an example of what you could do would be 00:23:477 (1,2) -
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:28:963 (1) - finish on head, do this for all diffs
3. 00:34:449 (1) - ^
4. 00:39:935 (1) - ^
5. 00:52:277 (1) - ^
6. 01:03:249 (1) - ^
7. 01:00:506 (1) - this is kind of random. it doesnt really follow anything in the music. reconsider this slider, maybe use the same rhythm as the rest of the map since it actually fits here. for example 00:55:020 (1,2) -

1. 00:09:763 (1) - remove whistle from slider body
2. 00:13:192 (2,3,4) - I would reconsider every single spot where you used this rhythm. you have 1/1 rhythms with 1/2 gaps for alot of the map ,which is very easy to play, but then randomly you have these 3 1/2 circles which is actually much harder to play, and for no good reason, the beats you are mapping with these arent particularly important in the music. a spot where this would actually make sense would be 00:33:763 (5,6) - but even then, I still would not do it.
3. 00:39:935 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - uhh, I really don't understand why you made this part easier in the Normal than in easy o.O
4. 01:26:392 (4) - really shouldn't do this. the slider is too short for a beginner to be able to read the second reverse, not to mention it is at the very end of the map. maybe do something like this instead
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:11:306 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - you should use some sliders here, or at the very least, keep the spacing consistent for all of these. this is incredibly awkward to play.
2. 00:48:163 (1,2,3,4) - again, something to reconsider, overlaps like this are more suited for insane and over.
3. 01:13:877 (4,1) - ugly overlap, move 1 away so the tail doesnt touch 4

1. 00:29:135 (2) - another point I want to make, you want to avoid passive sliders such as this unless they fit, because these are very awkward to play. by passive slider, I mean 1/2 slider that starts on red tick, end on white. you should use a triple here instead to fit the vocals.
2. 00:34:706 - same here, triple for vocals
3. 00:57:592 - aaaaa add notes here for the drums please, this is an insane diff, you shouldn't be ignoring beats like these.
4. 01:00:420 - ^
5. 01:08:563 - ^

Xellie wrote:

Modding because I can~

[General]
I'd change the offset +2 (1537) It sounds a lot better to me

[Easy]

1. 00:17:992 (1,2) - You could make these blankets a bit better Fixed
2. 00:35:820 (3) - Maybe change the angle of this a little bit so that it flows into the next note better it's fine
3. 00:41:306 (2,1) - Make this blanket better (i know it's not touching the follow circle but it's still technically blanketed) ^
4. 00:42:677 (1,2) - And this one could be better too Fixed
5. 00:57:763 (1,2,3,4) - Grab each of these and hold down shift when you have DS and grid snap on and it'll lock them into a perfect square, what you have right now is a little off

[Normal]

1. 00:02:220 (3,5) - Maybe move 5 a little, these are really close together and eh I don't like the look of it Fixed
2. 00:05:649 (4,2) - These are close enough on the timeline that the tiny overlap is noticeable while playing and it makes it look messy Fixed
3. 00:06:335 (5,1) - Fix the blanket on these Fixed
4. 00:07:706 (3,4) - and these could blanket better Fixed
5. 00:09:763 (1) - the first curve in this isn't a perfect circle, try using a note as a template looks OK for me
6. 00:08:392 (4,1) - And these overlap a lot, maybe too much for a normal it's fine
7. 00:09:763 (1) - To me this whistle sounds not that great, I'd put it on the head on or tail Fixed
8. 00:13:192 (2,3,4) - If you turn of grid snap you can make this into a smoother curve (if that was what you were going for) i'm keeping the DS
9. 00:16:620 (3,4,5,6) - I'm not a big fan of the back and forth overlapping like this in a normal, I get why you did it but I think it's something that should be saved for a higher diff It's fine, since it's not that hard to read this stacks plus this is a normal difficulty.
10. 00:24:506 (5,1) - This blanket could be fixed some Fixed
11. 00:28:277 - Maybe add something here, it feels too empty to me not needed
12. 00:29:649 (3,5) - You should move the 5 so that the overlap isn't there, tiny overlaps like this that look unintentional Fixed
13. 00:31:706 (1,2) - These aren't parallel so I'd change the angle on 1 some it's parallel :v
14. 00:34:449 (1,3) - I'd make the 3's tail underneath the 1's tail Fixed
15. 00:35:820 (3,4) - These don't flow into eachother very well fixed
16. 00:39:935 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - All of these sets of 2 sliders are slightly different shapes, I'd just copy the first of each pair so that they're the same shape wut ? but that is what I did
17. 00:46:792 (2,4) - These overlap some and feel messy not recognizable when playing
18. 00:53:649 (3,4) - This blanket's off Fixed
19. 00:53:649 (3,1) - These are a bit too close together ^
20. 00:55:020 (1,3) - Same with this overlap ^
21. 00:59:135 (4) - I'm not a big fan of 1/1 sliders that repeat more than once, it honestly imo is an older mapping style that isn't used much anymore wut? but it kinda fits into the song
22. 01:12:849 (5,1) - I'd make these tails overlap eachother u mean stack ? it's fine since it's not recognizable when playing
23. The kiai time feels kind of bland because 90% of it is 1/2 sliders, I'd add some more circles to help mix it up some
24. 01:21:763 (5,1) - You could fix this blanket
25. 01:23:820 (4,5) - And this one

[Hard]

1. 00:03:763 (7,1) - Maybe make these not overlap It's fine
2. 00:07:877 (2,3,4) - Having these slightly spaced when 00:02:392 (3,4,5) - are perfectly stacks makes it not too consistent ^
3. 00:11:306 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - These might be better as some kind of shape instead of straight lines I want to keep this
4. 00:24:849 (1,2,3) - The copy paste is kinda meh, I'd at least flip it and make it symterical or something it's ok for me
5. 00:29:906 - Skipping the white tick makes playing it feel awkward imo it's fine for me, and I am following the voice here so there is no note in white tick
6. 00:36:335 (3,4) - You could fix this blanket some Fixed
7. 00:38:563 (1,2) - And this one ^
8. 00:46:792 (1,2,3,4) - I think stacking these doesn't fit the music very much, maybe make a pattern? it's fine
9. 00:52:620 (2,3) - Having the 2 kinda flow into the 3 but not really makes it play weird, I'd change it so it flowed better ^
10. 00:56:220 (4,5) - You can make this blanket better I wanna keep this
11. 00:56:392 (5,7) - This overlap doesn't look too great it's fine
12. 01:00:163 (1,4) - And this overlap too ^
13. 01:06:677 (3,5) - Ehhh, this one too ^
14. 01:13:877 (4,1) - And this one you don't like my overlaps ?
15. 01:16:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,1,1) - Copying and pasted the beginning isn't too good imo, I'd use the same rythym but make a new layout ehh ? the intro and outro's rhythm is the same so I think copy-pasting the intro and ctrl+H is good enough.

[Insane]

1. 00:02:392 (4,5) - I'd say to keep Ds on here, no real reason for a jump
2. Your DS is all over the place for no real reason, I'd say to keep DS on unless the song sounds differently eh
3. 00:07:020 (1,2) - This overlap isn't very nice looking it's fine
4. 00:11:306 (5,6,7) - here is an example of a place you could use jumps since the song pitch changes a bit
5. 00:23:992 (1,1) - I'd NC these because of the drastic change in SV Fixed
6. 00:27:592 (1) - You could probably make this jump a bit bigger than the other ones in order to emphasis it nope, same DS is good here
7. 00:35:135 (7) - Ctrl+G this nope
8. 00:38:563 (6,9) - These overlap some
9. 00:48:163 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is a good place where you could add some jumps
10. 00:56:735 (6,7,8,9,10) - I dunno if this jump fits It fits for me
11. 01:01:363 (3,5) - This overlap is eh, I'd change it it's fine since it is not recognizable when playing
12. 01:03:763 (2,4,5,7) - You could make these look like a pattern more
13. 01:15:050 - I'd map here and 01:16:277 - here, leaving it blank makes the note density not that great since it's an insane
14. 01:16:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Same thing as the hard about copying and pastingthe intro and outro's rhythm is the same so I think copy-pasting the intro and ctrl+H is good enough

Sorry if it seems like a lot, I mean it in order to help >< Good luck getting it ranked

Setz wrote:

uhhh, yeah anyway, as promised, im going to give you some general tips on how you can improve the map as a whole. I don't want to point out every single thing because I don't want to type a huge wall of text. I am sure you can spot some of the issues on your own after looking over this.

[General]

1. hitsounds still need alot of work. specially the claps, they seem random for most of the map. Here is something that will help you
   
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   Ok, so look at this image, the white lines correspond to the small white lines on the timeline. you want to place claps where the X's are. so, Using the insane as an example 00:12:849 (2,4) - clap head of first slider, clap the reverse of the second one, and just repeat the pattern. there are exceptions such as 00:33:935 (1,2,3) - , claps on all these sounds nice, which is what you already have.
   Anyway, try to apply this for the claps in all the diffs, this would be a good start.

[Easy]

1. try some rhythm variety for this diff, as it stands, it is very boring with the same rhythm throughout the entire map. an example of what you could do would be 00:23:477 (1,2) -
   
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2. 00:28:963 (1) - finish on head, do this for all diffs Added
3. 00:34:449 (1) - ^ ^
4. 00:39:935 (1) - ^ ^
5. 00:52:277 (1) - ^ ^
6. 01:03:249 (1) - ^ ^
7. 01:00:506 (1) - this is kind of random. it doesnt really follow anything in the music. reconsider this slider, maybe use the same rhythm as the rest of the map since it actually fits here. for example 00:55:020 (1,2) - it's ok for me.

[Normal]

1. 00:09:763 (1) - remove whistle from slider body Fixed
2. 00:13:192 (2,3,4) - I would reconsider every single spot where you used this rhythm. you have 1/1 rhythms with 1/2 gaps for alot of the map ,which is very easy to play, but then randomly you have these 3 1/2 circles which is actually much harder to play, and for no good reason, the beats you are mapping with these arent particularly important in the music. a spot where this would actually make sense would be 00:33:763 (5,6) - but even then, I still would not do it. but IMO it is ok.
3. 00:39:935 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - uhh, I really don't understand why you made this part easier in the Normal than in easy o.O but I like this sliders in normal. i wanna keep this
4. 01:26:392 (4) - really shouldn't do this. the slider is too short for a beginner to be able to read the second reverse, not to mention it is at the very end of the map. maybe do something like this instead
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   it looks OK for me, but I might change it. needs second opinion for this

[Hard]

1. 00:11:306 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - you should use some sliders here, or at the very least, keep the spacing consistent for all of these. this is incredibly awkward to play. It's not awkward for me. and same DS for all the notes is boring
2. 00:48:163 (1,2,3,4) - again, something to reconsider, overlaps like this are more suited for insane and over. needs second opinion
3. 01:13:877 (4,1) - ugly overlap, move 1 away so the tail doesnt touch 4

[Insane]

1. 00:29:135 (2) - another point I want to make, you want to avoid passive sliders such as this unless they fit, because these are very awkward to play. by passive slider, I mean 1/2 slider that starts on red tick, end on white. you should use a triple here instead to fit the vocals. the slider fits here IMO
2. 00:34:706 - same here, triple for vocals ?
3. 00:57:592 - aaaaa add notes here for the drums please, this is an insane diff, you shouldn't be ignoring beats like these. not needed IMO
4. 01:00:420 - ^ ^
5. 01:08:563 - ^ ^

Anyway, this should be enough to help you find some issues on your own. the set as a whole needs a lot of work still, what i would suggest you do is look other people's ranked maps, to see what kinds of things they do, specially for your lower diffs, they can still use improvement.

Good luck with the map, <3 yuru yuri

Alarido wrote:

[General]
* Some improvement on hitsounding might be welcome.
* Make sure the metadata (source, artist and title) are the correct.
* According DiffGap.exe (screenshot here), diff spread feels nice.
[Insane]
♥ Nice

[Hard]
♥ Nice

[Normal]
♥ 00:09:763 (1,2) - Good slider art ♥
01:13:535 (6,7,8,1) - Needs some care here, because of it cause some misleading while playing, specially for newbies. Fixed

[Easy]
♥ Well made ♥

That's all :3

Att.

Thanks for the Star Icon !