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ISHIDA YOKO - COLORFUL BOX

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Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
前天就说好要跟你再摸一次的，拖拖拖就拖到现在了。。这病看来是治不好了。。。

General

  1. 可以考虑加一、两套音效，分别把slidertick换成你的whistle和clap。当你在Easy、Normal使用长滑条，中间节奏空了的时候，加两根绿线，让slidertick的音效来填补之。听起来会比较舒服。
  2. 虽然我并不反对复杂滑条，但很久以前有人跟我说过，Normal难度滑条弧度用一样的会比较好看。（这点对Easy同样适用）
  3. 关于你在低潮用默认clap这点，我个人观点是：默认音效比现有的SC1更突出，这样显得低潮反而比高潮更响，不太合适。
  4. 调整所有的Preview Point，使它们压在kiai的开头上。

Easy

  1. 我比较看重前后节奏一致的。相同的音乐（节奏）就要用相同（至少相似）的节奏下法。所以像00:15:990到00:30:711中的这几个部分，相近的音乐，物件节奏相差这么大，显然是不合适的。
  2. 很久
  3. 00:40:587 (2) - 换成finish？（应用于全难度）
  4. 00:48:785 (1) - 同上。也可以选择不改，但所有难度相同位置的音效请统一。
  5. 00:48:785 (1,2) - 像这种，长滑条零距离包裹一个圈，会不会太难看了。
  6. 00:51:767 (1) - 不推荐spinner，这个转盘有点短，easy的话反应稍微慢点就gg了。
  7. 00:56:239 (3,4) - 如果是我的话折返会放在单点的前面，用折返点去压重音是比较常见的用法。就像00:59:221 (3) - 一样。
  8. 01:01:457 (2,3,4) - 这个节奏的话，中间那个圈会不会比较难读？
  9. 01:15:059 (4) - 这里的尾上应该是finish？
  10. 01:20:090 (3) - Finish?

Normal

  1. 00:30:898 (1) - 头上finish？
  2. 00:48:786 (1,2) - 记得我第一篇mod有写过：这里的节奏最好填满，用1/2。
  3. 00:51:767 (1) - 同Easy。这里也填满的比较好。
  4. 00:56:239 (4,5) - 同Easy，折返点压重音。
  5. 01:10:215 (1,2,3) - 作为Normal我觉得这里密过头了。

Hard

  1. 00:44:314 (8) - 折返一下，听起来会比较丰满。
  2. 00:48:785 - 确定这里的绿线没有用错？应该是SC1吧
  3. 00:48:786 (1) - finish?
  4. 01:19:158 (1,2) - 建议单点在滑条前，这里vocal没说是不用尾压重音就不能跟吧。。。
  5. 01:22:699 (5,6) - 强调重音没问题，但同时反flow和拉大间距，多少还是有些卡手的。
  6. 00:51:767 (2) - finish
  7. 在我看来hard没什么大碍。

Insane

  1. 00:03:320 (2,3) - 我个人不喜欢这个叠。建议把滑条换个跟1垂直的方向，不叠。会比较爽。
    SPOILER
  2. 00:10:774 (3,4,5,1) - 试试把三个单点连着滑条头做成三角，感觉你现在的flow挺合适这么做。（其实这算是抄的梗啦）
    SPOILER
  3. 00:48:786 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 一个十字可以，连续两个感觉略单调。我觉得可以跟hard一样，在前4个滑条结束和加个圈，然后后4根滑条跟电钢琴。
    SPOILER
  4. 00:54:749 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 虽然我不讨厌，但连续8根1/2。想着都不太合适吧。
    jonathan刚刚rank掉的https://osu.ppy.sh/b/543814 这张图，就是张堆了大量1/2节奏的图。想不出梗的话可以稍微看看。
    Insane完成度比较高了，感觉也没什么特别的毛病了。

就这样啦。虽然当时说好的是重点看N和H，但我个人觉得至少手感上没什么问题了，指出的问题也就比较少。
虽然远远不及你在我图上投入的精力，但还是希望能帮上点什么。

祝你好运~
Silky
767 posts
Joined October 2014
Silky
Hi from my queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:42:077 (1) - This slider is not suitable for Easy diff, should be fix
  2. 01:03:693 (1) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:48:786 (1) - Remove NC
  2. 01:09:282 (4,5) - Change to 1/2 slider
  3. 01:12:264 (5,6) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:810 (2,3) - try blanket
  2. 00:35:929 (2) - Ctrl+G? better flow
  3. 01:07:792 (4) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:066 (1) - Ctrl+G
  2. 00:25:494 (1) - Remove NC
  3. 00:34:438 (1) - ^
  4. 00:35:183 (1) - ^
  5. 00:35:928 (1) - ^
  6. 00:54:189 - 00:54:282 - Add note / 00:54:376 (3,4) - change to 1/2slider? sounds better
GL~
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
zj0924
Thank you adol and fuyuyu-
fixed some small problems :)
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,485 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
IRC modded in Insane diff, Here is the log:
SPOILER
2015-03-15 21:19 Fycho: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/635861 Ishida Youko - COLORFUL BOX [Insane]]
2015-03-15 21:19 zj0924: 好的
2015-03-15 21:20 Fycho: 我的网络不够好 很有可能中途掉线
2015-03-15 21:20 zj0924: 没事的
2015-03-15 21:22 Fycho: .
2015-03-15 21:22 Fycho: 用AR8.7或者ar9？
2015-03-15 21:22 zj0924: 额
2015-03-15 21:22 Fycho: 中间有些跳还是蛮大
2015-03-15 21:22 zj0924: 之前是这样想的
2015-03-15 21:22 zj0924: 我是ar9
2015-03-15 21:22 zj0924: 然后有modder说改到8.7
2015-03-15 21:22 zj0924: 我也改了
2015-03-15 21:22 zj0924: 感觉不错
2015-03-15 21:23 Fycho: 你现在是8.5
2015-03-15 21:23 zj0924: 然后nodap说改到8.0-8.5
2015-03-15 21:23 zj0924: 我只能改了
2015-03-15 21:23 zj0924: 现在觉得好像是有点慢了
2015-03-15 21:23 zj0924: 嗯
2015-03-15 21:24 zj0924: 8.5是最低底线了
2015-03-15 21:24 zj0924: 我这方面不是很懂
2015-03-15 21:24 Fycho: 我建议8.8
2015-03-15 21:24 Fycho: 8或者.7
2015-03-15 21:24 Fycho: 或者8.7
2015-03-15 21:24 zj0924: 好的
2015-03-15 21:24 zj0924: 8.7
2015-03-15 21:24 zj0924: 改
2015-03-15 21:25 Fycho: 00:06:674 (3) - clap？
2015-03-15 21:25 Fycho: 把whistle去掉
2015-03-15 21:26 Fycho: 00:19:531 (2) - 去whistle
2015-03-15 21:26 zj0924: 稍等
2015-03-15 21:26 zj0924: thx
2015-03-15 21:26 zj0924: 不过我觉得whistle也行
2015-03-15 21:26 zj0924: 先don da 再da don
2015-03-15 21:26 Fycho: 00:19:531 (2) - 去whistle
2015-03-15 21:27 zj0924: 嗯
2015-03-15 21:27 zj0924: 00:22:513 (2) - 这个要去吗？
2015-03-15 21:27 Fycho: 去
2015-03-15 21:27 Fycho: 类似的一并
2015-03-15 21:27 Fycho: 因为曲子里不是地鼓音
2015-03-15 21:27 zj0924: 嗯好的
2015-03-15 21:28 zj0924: 是的
2015-03-15 21:28 Fycho: 00:35:183 (4) - add nc
2015-03-15 21:29 Fycho: 00:37:233 (2,4) - clap
2015-03-15 21:30 zj0924: 00:31:457 (2) - 这个也去掉了
2015-03-15 21:30 zj0924: clap修复
2015-03-15 21:30 zj0924: 请问为什么要nc
2015-03-15 21:30 zj0924: 好的
2015-03-15 21:30 Fycho: 因为一根大白线nc一次啊
2015-03-15 21:31 zj0924: 对哦……我现在这个滑条开头没在打白线上……疏忽了
2015-03-15 21:31 zj0924: THX
2015-03-15 21:32 Fycho: 这倒没必要
2015-03-15 21:32 Fycho: 反正是跟人声
2015-03-15 21:32 zj0924: 好的
2015-03-15 21:33 Fycho: 00:39:097 (1) - nc去掉
2015-03-15 21:33 Fycho: 加在00:39:842 (3) - 
2015-03-15 21:34 zj0924: 想问一下一定要一直跟着大白线吗
2015-03-15 21:34 Fycho: 00:40:587 (1) - nc去掉
2015-03-15 21:34 Fycho: 对
2015-03-15 21:34 zj0924: 可不可以根据vocal来nc呢
2015-03-15 21:34 Fycho: nc跟着大白线来
2015-03-15 21:34 Fycho: 人声的话具有随机性
2015-03-15 21:34 zj0924: 就是无脑全根大白鲜？
2015-03-15 21:34 zj0924: 那我看到很多图里面是不是因为读图梗加了nc？
2015-03-15 21:34 zj0924: 我nc比较弱
2015-03-15 21:35 zj0924: 之前完全是跟vocal
2015-03-15 21:35 zj0924: 其实我这里有个对称
2015-03-15 21:35 zj0924: 为了读图所以就这样下了
2015-03-15 21:36 zj0924: 如果nc感觉怪怪的看上去
2015-03-15 21:37 Fycho: 因为NC是跟着韵律乐理来的
2015-03-15 21:37 Fycho: 歌词 vocal是随机的
2015-03-15 21:37 zj0924: 好吧既然这么说那我后面一串都得改了
2015-03-15 21:38 Fycho: 00:39:841 - 这歌为是finish
2015-03-15 21:38 Fycho: 这个位置*
2015-03-15 21:38 Fycho: 也不是无脑全是大白线
2015-03-15 21:38 Fycho: 具体的地方具体看阿爸
2015-03-15 21:38 Fycho: 看吧*
2015-03-15 21:38 zj0924: 00:44:314 (3) - 那这里要不要nc？
2015-03-15 21:38 zj0924: 我觉得nc会很怪
2015-03-15 21:39 zj0924: 我是这么想的，这是整首歌比较低潮的地方
2015-03-15 21:39 zj0924: 鼓声不明显所以vocal占主导
2015-03-15 21:39 Fycho: 00:43:941 (1) - add clap
2015-03-15 21:39 zj0924: 00:09:841 (1) - 像这里就不是大白线下nc
2015-03-15 21:40 Fycho: 虽然不明显 但是节奏还在
2015-03-15 21:40 Fycho: 鼓点的规律性
2015-03-15 21:40 zj0924: 好吧
2015-03-15 21:40 zj0924: 00:43:941 (1) - 这里为什么要clap，我是隔两拍下clap
2015-03-15 21:41 Fycho: 那个clap没必要 音乐里反正也没
2015-03-15 21:41 zj0924: 00:43:196 (2,5) -
2015-03-15 21:41 zj0924: 00:43:196 (2) - 00:44:686 (5) - 这里有clap了所以我没下
2015-03-15 21:41 Fycho: 00:54:376 (3) - 最好加个nc
2015-03-15 21:42 Fycho: 这里容易误读
2015-03-15 21:42 Fycho: 00:54:003 (2,3,4) - 这个间距
2015-03-15 21:42 zj0924: 间距是不是有些问题呢？
2015-03-15 21:43 zj0924: nc我加了XD
2015-03-15 21:43 Fycho: 01:03:226 - 这里可以加个circle
2015-03-15 21:43 Fycho: 做个压滑条尾的三连
2015-03-15 21:43 Fycho: 音乐里有音
2015-03-15 21:46 zj0924: 有道理
2015-03-15 21:46 zj0924: 稍等
2015-03-15 21:46 zj0924: 这样？http://puu.sh/gBdHQ/b9e6074741.jpg
2015-03-15 21:46 zj0924: 等下我知道了
2015-03-15 21:46 zj0924: 错了……
2015-03-15 21:47 zj0924: http://puu.sh/gBdOn/256c4ef8b7.jpg是这样吗压滑条尾？
2015-03-15 21:47 zj0924: 其实吧我觉得如果要三连不如把这里填满了http://puu.sh/gBdRl/5311e2b5f7.jpg
2015-03-15 21:54 Fycho: 三连
2015-03-15 21:55 Fycho: 后面不用
2015-03-15 21:55 zj0924: 好的
2015-03-15 21:55 zj0924: 刚才这样试了下确实有点急
2015-03-15 21:55 Fycho: 01:03:413 - 这里不要加东西
2015-03-15 21:56 zj0924: 嗯
2015-03-15 21:56 Fycho: 01:06:487 (1) - 去nc
2015-03-15 21:56 zj0924: 我一开始觉得包围圈一下子距离不一样了想着全填满了……
2015-03-15 21:56 Fycho: 01:11:519 (2) - clap
2015-03-15 21:57 Fycho: 01:18:226 (3,4) - clap加这两
2015-03-15 21:59 zj0924: 好的
2015-03-15 21:59 zj0924: 全部修复了
2015-03-15 21:59 zj0924: 01:12:264 (1) - 这里要clap吗？
2015-03-15 21:59 Fycho: 要
2015-03-15 21:59 Fycho: kiai里鼓点音效别断
2015-03-15 21:59 Fycho: 2,4clap
2015-03-15 21:59 zj0924: 嗯已经加了
2015-03-15 22:00 zj0924: 哪个2,4？
2015-03-15 22:01 Fycho: 第二根白线和第四根白线上的clap
2015-03-15 22:02 zj0924: 呃具体时间……
2015-03-15 22:02 zj0924: 不是很明白XD
2015-03-15 22:04 Fycho: 大白线是第一跟白线的话
2015-03-15 22:04 Fycho: 那么第二根就是大白线后面那根
2015-03-15 22:04 Fycho: 四根白线一小节
2015-03-15 22:04 Fycho: 每小节第一根白线是大白线
2015-03-15 22:04 Fycho: 也是长白线
2015-03-15 22:05 Fycho: 01:11:519 (2) - 这里是第二根白线 clap就别空着
2015-03-15 22:05 zj0924: 噢噢我知道了是指整首歌所有的2,4都clap是吗？
2015-03-15 22:08 Fycho: 对
2015-03-15 22:09 zj0924: 好的
2015-03-15 22:09 zj0924: 那低潮部分我只在2下clap4不下clap可以吗因为没有音
2015-03-15 22:10 zj0924: 嗯
2015-03-15 22:20 Fycho: 01:18:226 (3) - clap
2015-03-15 22:20 Fycho: 01:23:444 (2) - 头上clap
2015-03-15 22:20 Fycho: 主要是为了配合曲子里的鼓
2015-03-15 22:20 zj0924: 稍等
2015-03-15 22:21 zj0924: allfixed XD
2015-03-15 22:21 zj0924: 其实我音效问题还挺多的XD
2015-03-15 22:23 Fycho: 不是大问题
2015-03-15 22:23 zj0924: 嗯(⊙_⊙)
2015-03-15 22:23 Fycho: 都是小问题 可以锦上添花
2015-03-15 22:23 zj0924: 谢谢
2015-03-15 22:35 Fycho: 今天懒了 其他diff我明天写forum上去
2015-03-15 22:36 zj0924: 好的好的
2015-03-15 22:36 zj0924: 我给kdXD
2015-03-15 22:36 zj0924: 我把hard类似的nc也修复了
2015-03-15 22:36 zj0924: 多谢

will do others tomorrow.
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
zj0924
多谢fycho大大 :) :)
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
MirinH
m4m
对不起来晚了
[Easy]
  1. 我觉得preview time 位置莫名听着难受，00:54:748 如何
  2. 00:39:841 应该是一个音乐的分界点才对，你这里为什么有滑条尾，跟vocal也不要跟着跟着打击感都美丽
  3. 01:07:047 (2) - 你前面这里是1/1，这里是2/1。。
  4. 01:15:990 (1) - 我觉得这里2/1的意义不明，既不是大白线bgm里面也没有
  5. 01:18:600 (1,2) - ^节奏不明，这里bgm里面有bass音你可以选择跟一下
[Normal]
  1. 00:27:916 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - 会不会太长
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:954 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太密，建议加一些1/1
  2. 00:50:090 (1,1,1,1) - hard这样没问题？
[Insane]
  1. 00:32:202 (1,2,3,4) - 难受，建议四方
  2. 00:38:164 这个绿线是不是有问题
  3. 00:38:165 (1) - 我觉得这里应该blanket 00:37:978 (4) - flow会更舒服
  4. 01:03:226 (6) - 反正我肯定会打错
  5. 01:11:146 (1,2,3) - 突然降低密度玩家肯定不适应
  6. 01:27:544 (1) - 01:27:450开始
done
祝早日qua
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
zj0924

Alex Li wrote:

m4m
对不起来晚了
[Easy]
  1. 我觉得preview time 位置莫名听着难受，00:54:748 如何 Adol也让我kial头上，一开始我只是想直接听到vocal所以才这么放的，既然都觉得违和就改吧XD
  2. 00:39:841 应该是一个音乐的分界点才对，你这里为什么有滑条尾，跟vocal也不要跟着跟着打击感都美丽 说的没错，重音神马的尽量放滑条头或者单点。可这是EZ，个人觉得很难调配，没有1/2节拍，既要表现出这个音，又要放头上……我觉得有些难改
  3. 01:07:047 (2) - 你前面这里是1/1，这里是2/1。。嘘，竟然被发现了，我以为没人注意到的呢，那就统一下吧XD等下，我这么做是有原因的，因为01:06:674 (1) - 没有vocal所以才故意这样的，新手也是会注意vocal的，还是不改了
  4. 01:15:990 (1) - 我觉得这里2/1的意义不明，既不是大白线bgm里面也没有 跟vocal但是不允许1/2节奏，出此下策只能用滑条带过，请理解这是ez难度，有些时候比nm还难做……
  5. 01:18:600 (1,2) - ^节奏不明，这里bgm里面有bass音你可以选择跟一下你的想法不错，可是这样clap就听不见了。我觉得两个都可以，避免一改动全身就算了吧
[Normal]
  1. 00:27:916 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - 会不会太长不是很懂，怎么长了？XD
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:954 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太密，建议加一些1/1 确实密了，调整了间距但还是保持1/2滑条
  2. 00:50:090 (1,1,1,1) - hard这样没问题？如果影响rank的话改就是了，但是可以的话希望做一个梗
[Insane]
  1. 00:32:202 (1,2,3,4) - 难受，建议四方没有打算四方，打算滑条尾之后以一个极小的角度来接下一个滑条，修正了
  2. 00:38:164 这个绿线是不是有问题oops，确实有点问题，不应该在这里减速
  3. 00:38:165 (1) - 我觉得这里应该blanket 00:37:978 (4) - flow会更舒服 嗯，之前右边是左右相反的，这个滑条忘记改回来了，多谢
  4. 01:03:226 (6) - 反正我肯定会打错 其实一开始不是这样的，fycho让我改成这样，其实我也会打错，那就任性一回改回来XD
  5. 01:11:146 (1,2,3) - 突然降低密度玩家肯定不适应 那试着拉远一点，我想给玩家之后地三角形拉大的感觉。由于这里是remap之前的部分，有些还留着，所以很难改
  6. 01:27:544 (1) - 01:27:450开始这个感觉影响不大XD
done
祝早日qua THX
很厉害啊，其实我自己都找不出什么问题了……谢谢你的mod :)
Fycho
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2,485 posts
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Fycho
Another IRC modding, fixed offset and gave some hitsounds/placement/ suggestions on each diff.
SPOILER
2015-03-17 12:23 Fycho: Insane 00:39:842 (1) - finish head
2015-03-17 12:23 Fycho: 00:39:469 (7) - whistle head
2015-03-17 12:23 Fycho: 00:45:804 (5) - finish hea
2015-03-17 12:23 Fycho: d
2015-03-17 12:23 zj0924: 之前改了下metadata，gamu说是ISHIDA YOKO,然后就重新传了XD
2015-03-17 12:23 zj0924: ok我看下
2015-03-17 12:23 Fycho: general东西我没看，就我所知offset有问题
2015-03-17 12:23 Fycho: 需要+10
2015-03-17 12:24 zj0924: 真的吗……
2015-03-17 12:25 zj0924: 音效修复了
2015-03-17 12:25 Fycho: 加6吧
2015-03-17 12:25 Fycho: offset
2015-03-17 12:25 zj0924: ok
2015-03-17 12:25 Fycho: offset1090，所有绿线+红线一起+6
2015-03-17 12:26 zj0924: 话说offset怎么才能测准……我是ctrl+d单点然后看左上角偏移来调的感觉就是调不准
2015-03-17 12:26 Fycho: 01:03:232 - 这里没加circle？
2015-03-17 12:26 Fycho: offset靠耳朵听
2015-03-17 12:27 zj0924: 是这样的这里比较难动……如果按之前的三连我觉得打起来很违和
2015-03-17 12:27 Fycho: 01:22:890 (1) - 
2015-03-17 12:27 Fycho: 这里结尾应该在红线上
2015-03-17 12:27 Fycho: 不是蓝线
2015-03-17 12:28 Fycho: 01:23:915 (2) - 这个去掉？overmap了
2015-03-17 12:29 zj0924: 我知道是overmap但是这里整体性比较强不大方便改XD
2015-03-17 12:29 zj0924: 稍等我先调下offset
2015-03-17 12:29 Fycho:  所有diff都要调
2015-03-17 12:29 Fycho: 调完告诉我再继续
2015-03-17 12:31 zj0924: 好的稍等片刻
2015-03-17 12:33 Fycho: gamu有说大写的理由吗
2015-03-17 12:33 zj0924: 稍等
2015-03-17 12:36 zj0924: 那个有没有快一点的方法调整绿线的offset，我现在是一个一个加6感觉会失误……
2015-03-17 12:36 Fycho: 当然有啊
2015-03-17 12:36 Fycho: F6
2015-03-17 12:36 Fycho: 选中所有绿线
2015-03-17 12:37 Fycho: 就像选择文件一样，先点第一个，再按住shift点最后一个
2015-03-17 12:37 zj0924: en
2015-03-17 12:37 Fycho: 红线绿线可以一起选，然后左边填6
2015-03-17 12:37 zj0924: 我ctrl+a了
2015-03-17 12:37 Fycho: 别忘记点move
2015-03-17 12:38 zj0924: zhongwenshurufa meile dengxia
2015-03-17 12:40 zj0924: 回来了
2015-03-17 12:40 zj0924: 超赞啊！这方法感谢感谢XD
2015-03-17 12:41 zj0924: ok全部调整完毕
2015-03-17 12:41 Fycho: hard
2015-03-17 12:41 zj0924: ok
2015-03-17 12:41 Fycho: 00:07:606 (2,3) - 这跳在hard太突然了
2015-03-17 12:42 zj0924: 是吗
2015-03-17 12:42 zj0924: 那我只能放弃对称了咯？
2015-03-17 12:42 Fycho: 00:07:792 (3) - 放到236，276
2015-03-17 12:42 Fycho: 或者别跳 正常摆一个
2015-03-17 12:43 Fycho: 00:08:351 (4) - 也要相应的移动一下
2015-03-17 12:43 zj0924: 好滴
2015-03-17 12:44 zj0924: 我把00:08:357 (4) - 放00:07:053 (1) - 滑条尾怎么样
2015-03-17 12:44 Fycho: 00:35:743 (1) - 这个叠在00:35:929 (2) - 的头上?
2015-03-17 12:45 Fycho: 随意
2015-03-17 12:45 zj0924: 稍等
2015-03-17 12:46 zj0924: 嗯不错
2015-03-17 12:51 Fycho: 00:50:835 (1) - 00:51:208 (1) - 
2015-03-17 12:51 zj0924: 00:39:475 (6) - 这里要whistle吗？
2015-03-17 12:51 Fycho: 这种滑条头被滑条身体完全重叠遮挡是unrankable的
2015-03-17 12:52 zj0924: 好吧……
2015-03-17 12:52 zj0924: 我想做个梗的失败了……
2015-03-17 12:53 Fycho: 这种还unreadable
SPOILER
hard
00:51:581 (2,1) - 
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:08:04 
跳太大
zj0924 13:08:1zj0924 13:09:01 
51：581？
zj0924 13:09:23 
是那两个滑条吗？
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:09:44 
Hard AR7.5或者8
zj0924 13:09:44 
椭圆flow我觉得挺好啊应该不会来不及？
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:09:52 
有些跳 间距 低AR比较难读
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:10:13 

 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:10:18 
下面这个绿色的2
zj0924 13:10:37 
好的7.5了
zj0924 13:11:03 
这个啊
zj0924 13:11:09 
我连同之前一起改了
zj0924 13:11:12 
我给你看下
zj0924 13:11:27 
行吗
zj0924 13:15:10 
稍等一下我去买个中饭……
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:16:02 
00:51:581 (2) - 和00:52:326 (2) - 滑条头叠在一起
zj0924 13:20:02 
来了
zj0924 13:20:44 
是的我已经这样改了XD
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:22:52 
Hard提高AR
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:22:56 
7.5或者8
zj0924 13:23:17 
改了
zj0924 13:23:19 
7.5
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:23:22 
下面到normal
zj0924 13:23:25 
好的
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:23:27 
CS改3.5
zj0924 13:24:41 
果然我这方面一窍不通……已改
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:27:17 
Normal的NC
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:27:19 
两根大白线一次
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:27:34 
如果按照人声来的话00:48:041 (1,2,1) - 这里的NC就不平均了
zj0924 13:28:06 
好吧
zj0924 13:28:15 
那就果断大白线法则
zj0924 13:29:35 
好了类似nc问题全部修复
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:29:46 
01:09:656 (6) - finish头上
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:29:52 
别忘记 先加finish再改这个nv
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:29:54 
nc
zj0924 13:31:56 
01:12:643 (1) - 这里也改了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:33:02 
Easy01:00:339 (4) - 滑条尾巴finish
zj0924 13:33:43 
稍等
zj0924 13:35:08 
ok
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:35:18 
Easy就这一个
zj0924 13:35:26 
刚才把预览线整体调了一下
zj0924 13:35:30 
嗯谢谢！
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:35:48 
改了offset后预览线也要snap
zj0924 13:36:18 
是的……我刚才就忘了突然想起来了双击查看原图
zj0924 13:36:46 
想问个问题
zj0924 13:36:54 
这些有用吗
zj0924 13:37:02 
什么时候会用到
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:37:19 
我没用过
zj0924 13:37:44 
好吧
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:37:46 
下面是general/metadata check
zj0924 13:37:59 
我以为偏移的时候会用到
zj0924 13:38:06 
搞错了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:38:41 
改了offset后所有物件全选，在时间轴上snap下
zj0924 13:39:23 
嗯这个我之前改过了
zj0924 13:39:37 
全选之后移动对齐了XD
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:39:53 
这是白箱op1还是op2
zj0924 13:40:02 
op1
zj0924 13:40:11 
我知道了改成op1对吧？
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:40:24 
不用
zj0924 13:40:33 
好吧
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:42:34 
上传吧
zj0924 13:42:42 
好嘞
(*･ω･)杏璃 14:02:07 
Insane 00:38:822 (3) - 去掉？
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:02:56 
insane 这两根绿线有1ms误差
zj0924 14:03:21 
其实这里也是我overmap的部分不知道要紧吗
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:03:26 
我觉得这第一根绿线可以去掉 没用
zj0924 14:03:35 
如果去掉了的话中间会很卡手的
zj0924 14:04:07 
为了提升一点难度所以这里还有结尾那里加了点overmap的部分
zj0924 14:04:12 
XD
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:04:45 
不要紧是不要紧
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:04:50 
就是节奏有点违和感
zj0924 14:05:11 
真的吗……我觉得挺好
zj0924 14:05:18 
四下鼓很带感
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:13:49 
话说
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:13:55 
还有想改的地方？
zj0924 14:14:05 
额暂时没了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:14:21 
把insane几个unsnapped的绿线改了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:14:25 
有1ms误差的
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:14:50 
然后 点的timing里面的全部重新对齐
zj0924 14:14:54 
因为这张图还保留着remap之前的很多元素，虽然我还不是很满意但动起来有点难
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:14:55 
然后保存 再上传
zj0924 14:14:59 
好的
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:15:56 
所有diff都这样
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:16:19 
insane有很多绿线都差1ms
zj0924 14:16:23 
好的
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:16:26 
比如
zj0924 14:16:29 
我再好好核查一下
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:16:37 
00:33:698 - 
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:16:45 
所有diff的每一根绿线 都不要差1ms

About Artist:

Gamu wrote:

About Metadata:
Her official blog and official website are using "YOKO ISHIDA", but i gave priority to "ISHIDA YOKO" of this CD jacket. Also alacat is agreed with me.
CD jacket
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zj0924
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Topic Starter
zj0924

Fycho wrote:

Another IRC modding, fixed offset and gave some hitsounds/placement/ suggestions on each diff.
SPOILER
2015-03-17 12:23 Fycho: Insane 00:39:842 (1) - finish head
2015-03-17 12:23 Fycho: 00:39:469 (7) - whistle head
2015-03-17 12:23 Fycho: 00:45:804 (5) - finish hea
2015-03-17 12:23 Fycho: d
2015-03-17 12:23 zj0924: 之前改了下metadata，gamu说是ISHIDA YOKO,然后就重新传了XD
2015-03-17 12:23 zj0924: ok我看下
2015-03-17 12:23 Fycho: general东西我没看，就我所知offset有问题
2015-03-17 12:23 Fycho: 需要+10
2015-03-17 12:24 zj0924: 真的吗……
2015-03-17 12:25 zj0924: 音效修复了
2015-03-17 12:25 Fycho: 加6吧
2015-03-17 12:25 Fycho: offset
2015-03-17 12:25 zj0924: ok
2015-03-17 12:25 Fycho: offset1090，所有绿线+红线一起+6
2015-03-17 12:26 zj0924: 话说offset怎么才能测准……我是ctrl+d单点然后看左上角偏移来调的感觉就是调不准
2015-03-17 12:26 Fycho: 01:03:232 - 这里没加circle？
2015-03-17 12:26 Fycho: offset靠耳朵听
2015-03-17 12:27 zj0924: 是这样的这里比较难动……如果按之前的三连我觉得打起来很违和
2015-03-17 12:27 Fycho: 01:22:890 (1) - 
2015-03-17 12:27 Fycho: 这里结尾应该在红线上
2015-03-17 12:27 Fycho: 不是蓝线
2015-03-17 12:28 Fycho: 01:23:915 (2) - 这个去掉？overmap了
2015-03-17 12:29 zj0924: 我知道是overmap但是这里整体性比较强不大方便改XD
2015-03-17 12:29 zj0924: 稍等我先调下offset
2015-03-17 12:29 Fycho:  所有diff都要调
2015-03-17 12:29 Fycho: 调完告诉我再继续
2015-03-17 12:31 zj0924: 好的稍等片刻
2015-03-17 12:33 Fycho: gamu有说大写的理由吗
2015-03-17 12:33 zj0924: 稍等
2015-03-17 12:36 zj0924: 那个有没有快一点的方法调整绿线的offset，我现在是一个一个加6感觉会失误……
2015-03-17 12:36 Fycho: 当然有啊
2015-03-17 12:36 Fycho: F6
2015-03-17 12:36 Fycho: 选中所有绿线
2015-03-17 12:37 Fycho: 就像选择文件一样，先点第一个，再按住shift点最后一个
2015-03-17 12:37 zj0924: en
2015-03-17 12:37 Fycho: 红线绿线可以一起选，然后左边填6
2015-03-17 12:37 zj0924: 我ctrl+a了
2015-03-17 12:37 Fycho: 别忘记点move
2015-03-17 12:38 zj0924: zhongwenshurufa meile dengxia
2015-03-17 12:40 zj0924: 回来了
2015-03-17 12:40 zj0924: 超赞啊！这方法感谢感谢XD
2015-03-17 12:41 zj0924: ok全部调整完毕
2015-03-17 12:41 Fycho: hard
2015-03-17 12:41 zj0924: ok
2015-03-17 12:41 Fycho: 00:07:606 (2,3) - 这跳在hard太突然了
2015-03-17 12:42 zj0924: 是吗
2015-03-17 12:42 zj0924: 那我只能放弃对称了咯？
2015-03-17 12:42 Fycho: 00:07:792 (3) - 放到236，276
2015-03-17 12:42 Fycho: 或者别跳 正常摆一个
2015-03-17 12:43 Fycho: 00:08:351 (4) - 也要相应的移动一下
2015-03-17 12:43 zj0924: 好滴
2015-03-17 12:44 zj0924: 我把00:08:357 (4) - 放00:07:053 (1) - 滑条尾怎么样
2015-03-17 12:44 Fycho: 00:35:743 (1) - 这个叠在00:35:929 (2) - 的头上?
2015-03-17 12:45 Fycho: 随意
2015-03-17 12:45 zj0924: 稍等
2015-03-17 12:46 zj0924: 嗯不错
2015-03-17 12:51 Fycho: 00:50:835 (1) - 00:51:208 (1) - 
2015-03-17 12:51 zj0924: 00:39:475 (6) - 这里要whistle吗？
2015-03-17 12:51 Fycho: 这种滑条头被滑条身体完全重叠遮挡是unrankable的
2015-03-17 12:52 zj0924: 好吧……
2015-03-17 12:52 zj0924: 我想做个梗的失败了……
2015-03-17 12:53 Fycho: 这种还unreadable
SPOILER
hard
00:51:581 (2,1) - 
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:08:04 
跳太大
zj0924 13:08:1zj0924 13:09:01 
51：581？
zj0924 13:09:23 
是那两个滑条吗？
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:09:44 
Hard AR7.5或者8
zj0924 13:09:44 
椭圆flow我觉得挺好啊应该不会来不及？
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:09:52 
有些跳 间距 低AR比较难读
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:10:13 

 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:10:18 
下面这个绿色的2
zj0924 13:10:37 
好的7.5了
zj0924 13:11:03 
这个啊
zj0924 13:11:09 
我连同之前一起改了
zj0924 13:11:12 
我给你看下
zj0924 13:11:27 
行吗
zj0924 13:15:10 
稍等一下我去买个中饭……
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:16:02 
00:51:581 (2) - 和00:52:326 (2) - 滑条头叠在一起
zj0924 13:20:02 
来了
zj0924 13:20:44 
是的我已经这样改了XD
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:22:52 
Hard提高AR
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:22:56 
7.5或者8
zj0924 13:23:17 
改了
zj0924 13:23:19 
7.5
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:23:22 
下面到normal
zj0924 13:23:25 
好的
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:23:27 
CS改3.5
zj0924 13:24:41 
果然我这方面一窍不通……已改
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:27:17 
Normal的NC
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:27:19 
两根大白线一次
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:27:34 
如果按照人声来的话00:48:041 (1,2,1) - 这里的NC就不平均了
zj0924 13:28:06 
好吧
zj0924 13:28:15 
那就果断大白线法则
zj0924 13:29:35 
好了类似nc问题全部修复
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:29:46 
01:09:656 (6) - finish头上
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:29:52 
别忘记 先加finish再改这个nv
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:29:54 
nc
zj0924 13:31:56 
01:12:643 (1) - 这里也改了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:33:02 
Easy01:00:339 (4) - 滑条尾巴finish
zj0924 13:33:43 
稍等
zj0924 13:35:08 
ok
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:35:18 
Easy就这一个
zj0924 13:35:26 
刚才把预览线整体调了一下
zj0924 13:35:30 
嗯谢谢！
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:35:48 
改了offset后预览线也要snap
zj0924 13:36:18 
是的……我刚才就忘了突然想起来了双击查看原图
zj0924 13:36:46 
想问个问题
zj0924 13:36:54 
这些有用吗
zj0924 13:37:02 
什么时候会用到
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:37:19 
我没用过
zj0924 13:37:44 
好吧
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:37:46 
下面是general/metadata check
zj0924 13:37:59 
我以为偏移的时候会用到
zj0924 13:38:06 
搞错了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:38:41 
改了offset后所有物件全选，在时间轴上snap下
zj0924 13:39:23 
嗯这个我之前改过了
zj0924 13:39:37 
全选之后移动对齐了XD
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:39:53 
这是白箱op1还是op2
zj0924 13:40:02 
op1
zj0924 13:40:11 
我知道了改成op1对吧？
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:40:24 
不用
zj0924 13:40:33 
好吧
 (*･ω･)杏璃 13:42:34 
上传吧
zj0924 13:42:42 
好嘞
(*･ω･)杏璃 14:02:07 
Insane 00:38:822 (3) - 去掉？
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:02:56 
insane 这两根绿线有1ms误差
zj0924 14:03:21 
其实这里也是我overmap的部分不知道要紧吗
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:03:26 
我觉得这第一根绿线可以去掉 没用
zj0924 14:03:35 
如果去掉了的话中间会很卡手的
zj0924 14:04:07 
为了提升一点难度所以这里还有结尾那里加了点overmap的部分
zj0924 14:04:12 
XD
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:04:45 
不要紧是不要紧
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:04:50 
就是节奏有点违和感
zj0924 14:05:11 
真的吗……我觉得挺好
zj0924 14:05:18 
四下鼓很带感
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:13:49 
话说
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:13:55 
还有想改的地方？
zj0924 14:14:05 
额暂时没了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:14:21 
把insane几个unsnapped的绿线改了
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:14:25 
有1ms误差的
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:14:50 
然后 点的timing里面的全部重新对齐
zj0924 14:14:54 
因为这张图还保留着remap之前的很多元素，虽然我还不是很满意但动起来有点难
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:14:55 
然后保存 再上传
zj0924 14:14:59 
好的
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:15:56 
所有diff都这样
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:16:19 
insane有很多绿线都差1ms
zj0924 14:16:23 
好的
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:16:26 
比如
zj0924 14:16:29 
我再好好核查一下
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:16:37 
00:33:698 - 
 (*･ω･)杏璃 14:16:45 
所有diff的每一根绿线 都不要差1ms

About Artist:

Gamu wrote:

About Metadata:
Her official blog and official website are using "YOKO ISHIDA", but i gave priority to "ISHIDA YOKO" of this CD jacket. Also alacat is agreed with me.
CD jacket
Bubbled.
I'm Really thankful for your attentive suggestions and great patience :)
THX for bubble!
Kodora
Kodora
Please change OD to 6.5 on Hard and CS to 4.0 on Normal for more balanced settings

Let me know~
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
zj0924

Kodora wrote:

Please change OD to 6.5 on Hard and CS to 4.0 on Normal for more balanced settings

Let me know~
Ok~Changed
OD:6.5 HD
CS:4.0 NM
All fixed~ :)
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
提前恭喜qualify~
Kodora
Kodora
All fine now. Qualified!
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Abe Nana
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/244028

rest in peace
Karen
2,864 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
rip kodora……
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
zj0924
Waiting for DQ :cry:
DeletedUser_3044645
DeletedUser_3044645

-Chata- wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/244028

rest in peace
rip....

but anyways gratz!
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Sorry, have to disqualify due to same songs in qualified Q.Q ( about 20 mins ago) https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3970127

Never mind ... :(
Kodora
Kodora
Sorry for my blindness, I swear other one was pending when I've checked qwq

Let's wait until kankun's one will moved out of qualified first :v
Nwolf
2,607 posts
Joined September 2012
Nwolf

Kodora wrote:

Sorry for my blindness, I swear other one was pending when I've checked qwq

Let's wait until kankun's one will moved out of qualified first :v
proof why we need faster automated qualified section again and not "hur you are not supposed to play qualified maps the moment they get qualified"-system with ~1 hour delay
Shad0w1and
1,586 posts
Joined April 2011
Shad0w1and
真是个伤心的故事。
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
一个星期后又是一条好汉！
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,485 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
Rip...

Restore a bubble icon here.

To next bn, don't qualify this until https://osu.ppy.sh/s/244028 goes out of qualified category, and there is a map nearly being qualified that needs to be noticed: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/245906
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
I will check this map soon as I owe you an M4M from my queue, please be patient.
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
zj0924

xxdeathx wrote:

I will check this map soon as I owe you an M4M from my queue, please be patient.
Thx death~
Updated!
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,485 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
Mapper changed a few patterns & hitsounds, bubble repaired.

Fycho wrote:

To next bn, don't qualify this until https://osu.ppy.sh/s/244028 goes out of qualified category, and there is a map nearly being qualified that needs to be noticed: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/245906
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
If xxdeathx qualified your map then please keep a ticket in mind so that I can come at any time. Otherwise I will be responsible to rank the map.
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
OK

[General]
  1. Maybe you can add 500-1000 ms audio lead-in.
Easy and Normal are fine, but imo Normal is a little harder than it needs to be because it uses a lot of 1/2 rhythms while Easy is all 1/1 or 2/1. I don't think spread is unacceptable though.

[Hard]
  1. 00:15:065 (3) - Try angling it between both circles:
    SPOILER
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:535 (2) - unsnapped
  2. 00:23:637 (2) - 00:24:382 (4) - consider ctrl-G for each for each of these for easier play
  3. 00:48:606 (4,1) - It's bad flow for slider to point against the direction it came from, so I recommend changing the circles more like
    SPOILER
  4. 01:22:146 (2,3) - Since this is a slow part, it fits better to lower the object density, by deleting 01:22:518 (3) - and extending the slider to 01:22:518 since the current slider end doesn't sound good in the slow part.
Poke Fycho to repair the bubble, poke me to rank when the other map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/244028 gets ranked or DQed and be careful of https://osu.ppy.sh/s/245906
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
zj0924

Fycho wrote:

Mapper changed a few patterns & hitsounds, bubble repaired.
Sorry,Fycho.I have to pop the bubble due to the low quality mp3.Well,death already popped it XD.
Kodora reminded me that a 128kbps may potentially get DQ so I replaced with Adol‘s mp3(with his permission)
I adjusted the offset(video included),Timing&Inherited&Preview points and resnapped all of the notes.Meanwhile,the problems mentioned by death have been fixed mostly.Sorry for bubbling over and over again.Such foolish thing could be avoided if I considered carefully.
I'll ask you for rebubble when I think it's fine and plz recheck my map whether there still exists some problems before rebubble.THX~

Flower wrote:

If xxdeathx qualified your map then please keep a ticket in mind so that I can come at any time. Otherwise I will be responsible to rank the map.
THX,Flower~plz keep in mind that I owe you one,too.If you need some mods,don't hesitate to ask me for help and I'll try my best :)

xxdeathx wrote:

OK

[General]
  1. Maybe you can add 500-1000 ms audio lead-in.Sure,1000ms is fine for me.I failed to add "audio lead in"in song setup until I opened.osu file and finally find it lol
Easy and Normal are fine, but imo Normal is a little harder than it needs to be because it uses a lot of 1/2 rhythms while Easy is all 1/1 or 2/1. I don't think spread is unacceptable though.Thx for reminding me that but it's really troublesome to rearrange these things.I 'll pay attention to this problem in the future.

[Hard]
  1. 00:15:065 (3) - Try angling it between both circles:Sure,fixed
    SPOILER
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:535 (2) - unsnapped Oops,my fault,fixed~
  2. 00:23:637 (2) - 00:24:382 (4) - consider ctrl-G for each for each of these for easier play I struggled for a long time here.Oval flow can make a smooth feeling,but I feel kinda crowded cuz 00:22:658 (4,5) - flows kinda fast and if ctrl+g the oval flow00:23:031 (1,2) - is very slow imo.That doesn't fit.Eventually, I decide to ctrl+g00:24:149 (4) - only,that's fine for me,thx for your suggestion.
  3. 00:48:606 (4,1) - It's bad flow for slider to point against the direction it came from, so I recommend changing the circles more like AWESOME!I LIKE IT~THX :)
    SPOILER
  4. 01:22:146 (2,3) - Since this is a slow part, it fits better to lower the object density, by deleting 01:22:518 (3) - and extending the slider to 01:22:518 since the current slider end doesn't sound good in the slow part.You've got a point there.I think your method is very reasonable here.Using a 1/1slider is more suitable for slowing down,Well Done!
Poke Fycho to repair the bubble, poke me to rank when the other map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/244028 gets ranked or DQed and be careful of https://osu.ppy.sh/s/245906
OK,but at the moment, I want to improve my map again and again in order to reach the acme of perfection.Since it is my first map,speed ranking makes no sense for me.I'm really thankful to DQ because it gave me another opportunity to improve my map.
By the way,Adol is my friend and he will be afk for half a year from Easter,He is badly in need of ranking his map in order not to leave any regret.If our maps get ready to rank at the same time,plz rank his first :D
Anyway,THX for modding.Your suggestions are so useful that I have to accept all of them. I'll keep moving and develop my mapping skill in order to make a better map. :)
Updated~replaced with new mp3 and improved some flows&patterns in insane diff :)
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
谢谢你能给我这次机会，一定好好把握。
这次如果被dq就要坟好久了，想想都可怕。。。
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
zj0924

Adol Christin wrote:

谢谢你能给我这次机会，一定好好把握。
这次如果被dq就要坟好久了，想想都可怕。。。
不客气。只要没原则性问题，不会被dq的。另外，丑话说前头，如果kunka的图出狱了，你的图还没泡或者没有准备好rank，我就不客气地去找BN rank了……
所以请你尽快吧 :D
Kodora
Kodora
bubble fix
SoGa
236 posts
Joined June 2013
SoGa
咦，泡了，，祝早日Rank。吐血
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
zj0924

SoGa wrote:

咦，泡了，，祝早日Rank。吐血
谢了~其实之前已经q了，但是有人做一样的歌比我先rank了，所以无奈被dq :o
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,485 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
[Insane]
  1. 00:36:634 (1) - I guess you can add a finish here
  2. 00:45:018 (2,3,4) - These three circles seems a messy, could you please rearrange them like: http://puu.sh/gOttg/88d66e42c3.jpg; 00:46:508 (2,3,4) - as well, the smaller spacing makes them looks not good.
  3. 00:45:577 (5) - seems you miss the finish on head, don't forget to apply this to other diffs too.
  4. 01:25:732 (7,1) - not sure if this spacing is on purpose, it's better to keep 1.2x here like 01:25:453 (4,5,6) -
[Hard]
  1. 00:25:267 (2) - miss whistle on tail imo
  2. 00:25:640 (3) - whistle on head
  3. 00:49:863 (1,2,3,4) - could you make a parallelogram here? the shape are kinda random now, which looks not good when playing.
There are still some unsnapped green lines like 00:36:633 - 00:37:937 - etc by 1ms, please check them and fix.
still need to wait a week due to: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/245906 qualified.
Kodora
Kodora
why so many people mapping this omg
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
zj0924

Fycho wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:36:634 (1) - I guess you can add a finish here Hesitated for a while,finally decided to add finish and adjusted vol to 50%,fine now~
  2. 00:45:018 (2,3,4) - These three circles seems a messy, could you please rearrange them like: http://puu.sh/gOttg/88d66e42c3.jpg; 00:46:508 (2,3,4) - as well, the smaller spacing makes them looks not good.Of course,rearranged it already and ctrl+g 00:45:018 (2,3) -~
  3. 00:45:577 (5) - seems you miss the finish on head, don't forget to apply this to other diffs too.oops,cuz I remapped this part and forgot to add finish XD,Fixed hard as well
  4. 01:25:732 (7,1) - not sure if this spacing is on purpose, it's better to keep 1.2x here like 01:25:453 (4,5,6) - In fact,I did this on purpose in order that player will adapt for the flow speed of previous slider.At last,I found the distance between 01:25:081 (3,4) - is a bit far.I adjust the distance and keep 1.2x,looks fine now
[Hard]
  1. 00:25:267 (2) - miss whistle on tail imo
  2. 00:25:640 (3) - whistle on headsure,all fixed
  3. 00:49:863 (1,2,3,4) - could you make a parallelogram here? the shape are kinda random now, which looks not good when playing.OK,It seems that I was a little casual that time.Fixed
There are still some unsnapped green lines like 00:36:633 - 00:37:937 - etc by 1ms, please check them and fix.Damn it...I swear I fixed them all and checked many times.However,the fact proves that I was so careless...THX~All fixed~
Thanks Fycho （飞球）for helping to improve my map again.Really appreciate it :)
still need to wait a week due to: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/245906 qualified.

Kodora wrote:

why so many people mapping this omg
Never mind Kodora.I fixed some minor problems that Fycho mentioned above :D
Updated~
Kodora
Kodora
Since we have to wait AGAIN, bubble fix #2

I really hope that other BNs wanna give some priority to this map, since it had to be ranked first.
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,485 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
rechecked and everything is fine to me, here we go.
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
congratz
where is ed2 :( :(
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
zj0924

Fycho wrote:

rechecked and everything is fine to me, here we go.
谢飞球~

Mei wrote:

congratz
where is ed2 :( :(
Thx~现在在做第二张图……如果有大神gd的话，会考虑开个白箱全集的，一个人做完所有难度比较累 :D
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
终于正式rank了，久等了。恭喜~
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
zj0924

Adol Christin wrote:

终于正式rank了，久等了。恭喜~
thx~你现在是afk了吗？游戏里都不见人影，以后私信联系 :D
Kamio Misuzu
580 posts
Joined November 2012
Kamio Misuzu
正好看到起飞了，恭喜=w=
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
恭喜 :3
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
zj0924

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

正好看到起飞了，恭喜=w=
Thx~Misuzu桑 :)

Xinely wrote:

恭喜 :3
谢啦Xinely~ :)
Pururut
490 posts
Joined March 2012
Pururut
恭喜重新起飞 :P
DraciuZ
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Joined November 2013
DraciuZ
d(>_<)b
kunka
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Joined July 2012
kunka
★゜・。。・゜゜・。。・゜☆゜・。。・゜゜・。。・゜G r a t z ゜・。。・゜゜・。。・゜☆゜・。。・゜゜・。。・゜★
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
zj0924

Pururut wrote:

恭喜重新起飞 :P
谢前辈~

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

★゜・。。・゜゜・。。・゜☆゜・。。・゜゜・。。・゜G r a t z ゜・。。・゜゜・。。・゜☆゜・。。・゜゜・。。・゜★
ありがとう！kunkaさん～
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
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Joined November 2013
Chaoslitz
gratz :3
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