Kodora wrote:

Sorry for my blindness, I swear other one was pending when I've checked qwq

Let's wait until kankun's one will moved out of qualified first :v

xxdeathx wrote:

I will check this map soon as I owe you an M4M from my queue, please be patient.

Fycho wrote:

To next bn, don't qualify this until https://osu.ppy.sh/s/244028 goes out of qualified category, and there is a map nearly being qualified that needs to be noticed: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/245906

1. Maybe you can add 500-1000 ms audio lead-in.

1. 00:15:065 (3) - Try angling it between both circles:
   
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1. 00:19:535 (2) - unsnapped
2. 00:23:637 (2) - 00:24:382 (4) - consider ctrl-G for each for each of these for easier play
3. 00:48:606 (4,1) - It's bad flow for slider to point against the direction it came from, so I recommend changing the circles more like
   
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4. 01:22:146 (2,3) - Since this is a slow part, it fits better to lower the object density, by deleting 01:22:518 (3) - and extending the slider to 01:22:518 since the current slider end doesn't sound good in the slow part.

Fycho wrote:

Mapper changed a few patterns & hitsounds, bubble repaired.

Flower wrote:

If xxdeathx qualified your map then please keep a ticket in mind so that I can come at any time. Otherwise I will be responsible to rank the map.

xxdeathx wrote:

OK

[General]

1. Maybe you can add 500-1000 ms audio lead-in.Sure,1000ms is fine for me.I failed to add "audio lead in"in song setup until I opened.osu file and finally find it lol

Easy and Normal are fine, but imo Normal is a little harder than it needs to be because it uses a lot of 1/2 rhythms while Easy is all 1/1 or 2/1. I don't think spread is unacceptable though.Thx for reminding me that but it's really troublesome to rearrange these things.I 'll pay attention to this problem in the future.

[Hard]

1. 00:15:065 (3) - Try angling it between both circles:Sure,fixed
   
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[Insane]

1. 00:19:535 (2) - unsnapped Oops,my fault,fixed~
2. 00:23:637 (2) - 00:24:382 (4) - consider ctrl-G for each for each of these for easier play I struggled for a long time here.Oval flow can make a smooth feeling,but I feel kinda crowded cuz 00:22:658 (4,5) - flows kinda fast and if ctrl+g the oval flow00:23:031 (1,2) - is very slow imo.That doesn't fit.Eventually, I decide to ctrl+g00:24:149 (4) - only,that's fine for me,thx for your suggestion.
3. 00:48:606 (4,1) - It's bad flow for slider to point against the direction it came from, so I recommend changing the circles more like AWESOME!I LIKE IT~THX
   
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4. 01:22:146 (2,3) - Since this is a slow part, it fits better to lower the object density, by deleting 01:22:518 (3) - and extending the slider to 01:22:518 since the current slider end doesn't sound good in the slow part.You've got a point there.I think your method is very reasonable here.Using a 1/1slider is more suitable for slowing down,Well Done!

Poke Fycho to repair the bubble, poke me to rank when the other map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/244028 gets ranked or DQed and be careful of https://osu.ppy.sh/s/245906
OK,but at the moment, I want to improve my map again and again in order to reach the acme of perfection.Since it is my first map,speed ranking makes no sense for me.I'm really thankful to DQ because it gave me another opportunity to improve my map.
By the way,Adol is my friend and he will be afk for half a year from Easter,He is badly in need of ranking his map in order not to leave any regret.If our maps get ready to rank at the same time,plz rank his first
Anyway,THX for modding.Your suggestions are so useful that I have to accept all of them. I'll keep moving and develop my mapping skill in order to make a better map.

Adol Christin wrote:

谢谢你能给我这次机会，一定好好把握。
这次如果被dq就要坟好久了，想想都可怕。。。

SoGa wrote:

咦，泡了，，祝早日Rank。吐血

1. 00:36:634 (1) - I guess you can add a finish here
2. 00:45:018 (2,3,4) - These three circles seems a messy, could you please rearrange them like: http://puu.sh/gOttg/88d66e42c3.jpg; 00:46:508 (2,3,4) - as well, the smaller spacing makes them looks not good.
3. 00:45:577 (5) - seems you miss the finish on head, don't forget to apply this to other diffs too.
4. 01:25:732 (7,1) - not sure if this spacing is on purpose, it's better to keep 1.2x here like 01:25:453 (4,5,6) -

1. 00:25:267 (2) - miss whistle on tail imo
2. 00:25:640 (3) - whistle on head
3. 00:49:863 (1,2,3,4) - could you make a parallelogram here? the shape are kinda random now, which looks not good when playing.

Fycho wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:36:634 (1) - I guess you can add a finish here Hesitated for a while,finally decided to add finish and adjusted vol to 50%,fine now~
2. 00:45:018 (2,3,4) - These three circles seems a messy, could you please rearrange them like: http://puu.sh/gOttg/88d66e42c3.jpg; 00:46:508 (2,3,4) - as well, the smaller spacing makes them looks not good.Of course,rearranged it already and ctrl+g 00:45:018 (2,3) -~
3. 00:45:577 (5) - seems you miss the finish on head, don't forget to apply this to other diffs too.oops,cuz I remapped this part and forgot to add finish XD,Fixed hard as well
4. 01:25:732 (7,1) - not sure if this spacing is on purpose, it's better to keep 1.2x here like 01:25:453 (4,5,6) - In fact,I did this on purpose in order that player will adapt for the flow speed of previous slider.At last,I found the distance between 01:25:081 (3,4) - is a bit far.I adjust the distance and keep 1.2x,looks fine now

[Hard]

1. 00:25:267 (2) - miss whistle on tail imo
2. 00:25:640 (3) - whistle on headsure,all fixed
3. 00:49:863 (1,2,3,4) - could you make a parallelogram here? the shape are kinda random now, which looks not good when playing.OK,It seems that I was a little casual that time.Fixed

There are still some unsnapped green lines like 00:36:633 - 00:37:937 - etc by 1ms, please check them and fix.Damn it...I swear I fixed them all and checked many times.However,the fact proves that I was so careless...THX~All fixed~
Thanks Fycho （飞球）for helping to improve my map again.Really appreciate it
still need to wait a week due to: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/245906 qualified.

Kodora wrote:

why so many people mapping this omg

Fycho wrote:

rechecked and everything is fine to me, here we go.

Mei wrote:

congratz
where is ed2

Adol Christin wrote:

终于正式rank了，久等了。恭喜~

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

正好看到起飞了，恭喜=w=

Xinely wrote:

恭喜 :3

Pururut wrote:

恭喜重新起飞

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

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