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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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Ay pero que horrible. Te dejo una estrella por pena :(
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2015-06-06 20:21 jesus1412: no wonder I was confused
2015-06-06 20:21 jesus1412: I opened the wrong song in edit
2015-06-06 20:21 Xanandra: hahahaha
2015-06-06 20:21 jesus1412: spent a good minute looking for sections
2015-06-06 20:21 jesus1412: 01:19:125 (8) -
2015-06-06 20:22 jesus1412: move that 1 more tick along the time line
2015-06-06 20:22 jesus1412: and maybe redesign the parts after it to make that work better
2015-06-06 20:22 Xanandra: you mean to move it to 01:19:240 - ?
2015-06-06 20:22 jesus1412: yep
2015-06-06 20:23 jesus1412: 01:49:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - this stream is really awkward
2015-06-06 20:23 jesus1412: might want to redesign it
2015-06-06 20:23 Xanandra: hmm
2015-06-06 20:23 jesus1412: maybe start out coming more to the right side
2015-06-06 20:23 jesus1412: rather than up
2015-06-06 20:24 Xanandra: Oh
2015-06-06 20:24 Xanandra: Thats kinda my style, going in the wrong direction with the patterns :(
2015-06-06 20:24 Xanandra: But interesting thing you said about (8)
2015-06-06 20:24 jesus1412: seemed to sound okay when you moved it along too
2015-06-06 20:24 jesus1412: and it would play better
2015-06-06 20:24 jesus1412: well that's my opinion
2015-06-06 20:24 jesus1412: 01:52:228 (2,3,4) -
2015-06-06 20:25 jesus1412: these triples
2015-06-06 20:25 jesus1412: I'm sure you can spot them all yourself
2015-06-06 20:25 jesus1412: but imo you should make it so that they flow into the next slider rather than out of the first
2015-06-06 20:25 jesus1412: hard to describe
2015-06-06 20:25 jesus1412: ie instead of this http://jesse1412.s-ul.eu/jmJS9AUn
2015-06-06 20:26 Xanandra: hi jesse :$:$:$:$:$:
2015-06-06 20:26 jesus1412: make it more like this http://jesse1412.s-ul.eu/whUA61wV
2015-06-06 20:26 jesus1412: (without the shitty re-shaping)
2015-06-06 20:26 Xanandra: okay
2015-06-06 20:27 Xanandra: I also was doubting about that
2015-06-06 20:27 Xanandra: I think Ill probably do what youre suggesting xD
2015-06-06 20:27 jesus1412: sure sure
2015-06-06 20:27 jesus1412: 02:19:470 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-06-06 20:27 Xanandra: Noooo not those jumps
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: I'd recommend ctrl+G on every pair of the 2nd set
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: for instance gtrl G these 02:19:470 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: oops
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: 02:19:987 (1,2) - these*
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: and these 02:20:332 (3,4) -
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: and these 02:20:677 (5,1) -
2015-06-06 20:29 jesus1412: I'm not sure if it would fix it
2015-06-06 20:29 jesus1412: but the first set were really awkward because I didn't know the rhythm
2015-06-06 20:29 Xanandra: Those, Ill think about it
2015-06-06 20:29 Xanandra: I really like it the way it is
2015-06-06 20:29 jesus1412: so it's ideal to find a way to make it more obvious for at least the first set of them
2015-06-06 20:29 jesus1412: maybe smaller jumps even
2015-06-06 20:29 Xanandra: Yeah, but at a second play, it woulld be fine
2015-06-06 20:30 jesus1412: heh no one likes having to remember stuff but that's up to you
2015-06-06 20:30 jesus1412: 02:56:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
2015-06-06 20:30 Xanandra: in fact, my maps usually has quite a the repetitive rhythms hahaha
2015-06-06 20:30 jesus1412: that stream is just unfollowable for me
2015-06-06 20:30 jesus1412: maybe you need someone better to give it a shot
2015-06-06 20:30 Xanandra: noioooooo not those streams
2015-06-06 20:30 Xanandra: Hahahah
2015-06-06 20:30 jesus1412: rest is okay
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wait what how did this end up being a vote LOL
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Okoratu wrote:

wait what how did this end up being a vote LOL


So you prefer Alma Echeregay, interesting girl, too bad she became nuts later on
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It's been long since i have been this confused
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Its okay, my bad. Its just that the polls have been up for a very long time, and no one voted so far, until you posted here. I just assumed it was you. Sorry for assuming things incorrectly.

Have a nice day.

:)

pd. have a kudosu for all the inconveniences I have caused.
pd2. Yes, I know I shouldn't, but I cant help it.
pd3. Please be merciful with me if Im to get punished
pd4. I love confusing people
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You're somewhat awesome, will this be completed anytime soon?
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From #modhelp :) Glad I could help!

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13:21 Xanandra: hello
13:21 Xanandra: also, if whether I should make alma harder or not to make the spread more even :(
13:21 Xanandra: Im asking because the star ratings could be wrong sometimes :(
13:21 Spork Lover: Erm
13:22 Spork Lover: In 3/4's in the azaak diff some sections SHOULD be more spaced imo :3
13:22 Spork Lover: 02:31:022 (6,7,8,9,10,1) -
13:22 Spork Lover: I'm talking about sections like this one
13:22 Spork Lover: 02:33:780 (6,7,8,9,10,1) -
13:22 Xanandra: Oh...
13:23 Xanandra: I tried before, and it made star ratings jump to 3.8 hahaha
13:23 Xanandra: so I stacked them instead
13:23 Spork Lover: Either space the section itself a bit more, or space the notes a bit :p
13:23 Spork Lover: But everything before that is crazy to space more
13:24 Spork Lover: I think it'd make it way too hard to play for a typical hard/light insane player
13:24 Xanandra: wait
13:24 Xanandra: could you elaborate a little bit more on what you mean with spacing more?
13:24 Spork Lover: Since you work with doubles a lot
13:24 Spork Lover: Erm
13:24 Spork Lover: Distance between
13:24 Xanandra: I dont think I am thinking it the same way as you lol
13:24 Spork Lover: 02:33:780 (6,7) -
13:25 Spork Lover: And 02:34:125 (8,9,10) -
13:25 Spork Lover: Is low
13:25 Spork Lover: Either that, or split the triple to add jumps instead
13:25 Spork Lover: Like a triangle pattern or something :D
13:25 Spork Lover: Lemme send a pic
13:26 Xanandra: but... as I said... those sections I cant touch because it will skyrocket the star ratings to 3.8 stars
13:26 Xanandra: and a GD of 4 stars is coming up
13:26 Spork Lover: Oh :o
13:26 Spork Lover: Erm
13:26 Xanandra: it will make spread even less even
13:26 Xanandra: I also has problem with the Alma diff
13:27 Xanandra: where the star ratings diff between alma and julie is a mere 0.4 stars
13:27 Spork Lover: Lemme send a screenshot: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4609924
13:27 Xanandra: But somehow I still feel that alma is way more harder than julie, yet the star ratings are saying otherwise
13:27 Spork Lover: This was a pattern, but if you don't want it to be 3,7-ish stars I think the diff is fine as it is
13:27 Xanandra: thus Im asking if I should increase the alma diff a little, and probably azaak too while at that but not that much
13:28 Spork Lover: That one pattern made it go up to 3,38 instead of 3,33 btw
13:28 Xanandra: yeah, that pattern will make the star ratings skyrokect to 3.8 :(
13:29 Spork Lover: Yeah
13:29 Xanandra: yeah but only changed it in one place
13:29 Spork Lover: Yeah I get ya
13:29 Xanandra: make the change in the whole section and it will add up
13:29 Spork Lover: Alma?
13:29 Spork Lover: Is the next one?
13:32 Xanandra: and its not only in the kiai, ill have to do something like that too on to keep consistency
13:32 Xanandra: yeah alma
13:32 Xanandra: but youll have to compare it with julie too
13:32 Spork Lover: Erm
13:32 Spork Lover: The spacing is very high already
13:32 Spork Lover: So adding a bit more notes would be the way to go
13:32 Xanandra: So you agree that I shou8ld make Alma harder?
13:33 Spork Lover: In some sections yes
13:33 Spork Lover: 02:19:987 (7,8) -
13:33 Spork Lover: After slider 8 should be a single tap imo
13:33 Spork Lover: It feels a bit empty imo
13:34 Spork Lover: Occurs a few times
13:34 Spork Lover: Lemme check before kiai if there are sections where you can allow to add more stuff
13:34 Xanandra: But... have you even checked Julie yet....?
13:35 Spork Lover: Nope 1 sec
13:36 Xanandra: My doubts lies more within if the current diffs is spread evenly
13:36 Xanandra: Not how to make them harder....
13:36 Spork Lover: Yeah Julie has lower spacing, but more spaced single taps
13:36 Spork Lover: Which is why it's fairly close to Alma's diff
13:36 Spork Lover: :p
13:36 Spork Lover: *-wise
13:37 Spork Lover: 'Cause you make a few stacks on Alma, which you make spaced taps on Julie
13:37 Spork Lover: If you either remove the stacks, or add stacks on the same spots as on the conresponding difficulty, I think the spread will feel more natural
13:38 Spork Lover: corresponding*
13:38 Spork Lover: 01:12:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
13:38 Spork Lover: On Julie, this stack is one of the diff boosters
13:39 Xanandra: oh...
13:39 Xanandra: all those circles...
13:39 Xanandra: how come I didnt see them before...
13:39 Spork Lover: Yeah consider either stacking a bit or make a slider
13:39 Spork Lover: If that's what you wanna do :)
13:41 Xanandra: okay
13:41 Xanandra: thanks
13:41 Xanandra: have to go for now
13:41 Xanandra: sorry
13:41 Xanandra: and thanks for your time
13:41 Xanandra: feel free to post in the forums
13:41 Xanandra: Ill give you kudosu when I come back
13:41 Spork Lover: Aight np man
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Hi , here's a mod for M4M

La Regalada
  1. AIMod:01:26:022 (1) - Offscreen
  2. AR 1 seems too low for a 1.49 star map
  3. add a circle on 02:20:504 and 02:26:022
  4. overlap 02:42:918 (1) on 02:44:987 (4) and the straighten out the triangle ( or if you don't want to overlap it , make 02:44:297 (3,4) on the same x-axis and leave 02:42:918 (1) as it is)


La Complicada
  1. Check AiMod - a lot of ends not snapped
  2. 01:53:263 (5) - NC
  3. 01:53:608 (6,7) - seems to be a bit more closer than the others (01:52:228 (2,3) etc )
  4. 01:54:642 (9) - NC (01:58:780 (5) - 02:00:160 (9) - should be NC)
  5. It feels empty , put more on 1/2 ticks or more sliders , you seem to just follow the instrument more then the vocals , same goes to some other difficulties , try and have more circles on 1/2 especially for 3 stars and above
  6. 03:04:815 (6) - NC , 03:04:987 (1) - remove NC ,03:05:332 (2) - NC (not really important)
  7. 03:09:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern seems a bit plain , maybe rotate 03:09:125 (1,2) - a bit



La Dulce Mery
  1. Some jumps are really really extreme and doesn't really fit with the rest of the map , either make the map harder or tone down some jumps :
    02:04:815 (4,5) - the first part its just close single taps but then there's a sudden jump , followed by some small jumps.
  2. 01:58:091 (5) - this should be a NC; the pattern is slider then 1/3 circles then another set(nc)
    02:00:849 (1) - the NC here is a bit weird ^


Sorry the mod is a bit short
Most of the map should be fine , its pretty unique actually
good luck ^^
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shadowneko_1 wrote:

Hi , here's a mod for M4M

La Regalada
  1. AIMod:01:26:022 (1) - Offscreen Changed
  2. AR 1 seems too low for a 1.49 star map Will consider it
  3. add a circle on 02:20:504 and 02:26:022 Goes against the rhythm I want to implement in this part
  4. overlap 02:42:918 (1) on 02:44:987 (4) and the straighten out the triangle ( or if you don't want to overlap it , make 02:44:297 (3,4) on the same x-axis and leave 02:42:918 (1) as it is) Intentional


La Complicada
  1. Check AiMod - a lot of ends not snapped Ah, I thought I fixed it already, thanks!
  2. 01:53:263 (5) - NC
  3. 01:53:608 (6,7) - seems to be a bit more closer than the others (01:52:228 (2,3) etc ) Hmm but it isnt... haha Visuall effects
  4. 01:54:642 (9) - NC (01:58:780 (5) - 02:00:160 (9) - should be NC)
  5. It feels empty , put more on 1/2 ticks or more sliders , you seem to just follow the instrument more then the vocals , same goes to some other difficulties , try and have more circles on 1/2 especially for 3 stars and above
  6. 03:04:815 (6) - NC , 03:04:987 (1) - remove NC ,03:05:332 (2) - NC (not really important)
  7. 03:09:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern seems a bit plain , maybe rotate 03:09:125 (1,2) - a bit Intentional

All NC stuff done, I think

La Dulce Mery
  1. Some jumps are really really extreme and doesn't really fit with the rest of the map , either make the map harder or tone down some jumps : Intentional
    02:04:815 (4,5) - the first part its just close single taps but then there's a sudden jump , followed by some small jumps. Intentional
  2. 01:58:091 (5) - this should be a NC; the pattern is slider then 1/3 circles then another set(nc)
    02:00:849 (1) - the NC here is a bit weird ^ Already discussed about this in a previous mod, and I agreed with him, thus the way it currently is


Sorry the mod is a bit short
Most of the map should be fine , its pretty unique actually
good luck ^^


Thanks a lot!
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Sabes que siempre me gustó este mapa y canción <3
Ahí te dejo una estrella!
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Hello! My end of the m4m

General

  1. BG resolution isn't supported. Change it to 1366x768 or 1066x768
  2. Conflicting countdown and timing points in CSLM diff

La Regalda

  1. 00:30:504 (1,2,3,4) - Consider turning these into 2 sliders instead for variety, since the part has only circles at the moment
  2. 01:20:160 (6) - New combo
  3. 01:21:539 (1) - Remove new combo

La Simpatica

  1. 01:04:987 (4) - New combo
  2. 01:13:263 (5) - New combo
  3. 01:14:642 (9) - New combo
  4. 01:16:022 (1) - Remove NC, you might want to go through the difficulty yourself to see if there are any other since they are so easy to fix. I won't point these out anymore
  5. 01:39:470 (1,2) - Spacing inconsistency

La Caphricosa

  1. Good job here, couldn't find anything to point out

La Complicada

  1. 01:07:746 (7) - Consider adding a NC to avoid such high combo numbers
  2. 01:10:504 (7) - Here aswell (I hate how this is turning into a NC mod but goddamn your style is so clean)
  3. 01:16:251 (5) - ^
  4. 01:39:470 (8) - ^
  5. 02:37:228 (10) - You should definetly stack this on top of 02:37:401 (1) - instead for consistency

La Dura CLSM

  1. 01:31:192 (1) - I think you could improve this slider a bit by doing this
  2. 01:39:468 (9) - Consider NC since the combo is getting past 10 here
  3. 01:39:123 (8,9,10,11,12) - The same slider improvement can be done to all of these
  4. 01:50:675 (2,3,4) - Remake the entire rhythm of this section into this to fit the guitar much better.
  5. 02:58:433 (9) - Consider NC here aswell
  6. 03:01:192 (9) - ^

La Dulce Mery

  1. 00:38:780 (2,3) - Are you sure you stacked this the way you wanted to? It's a bit different from the other stacks so just making sure
  2. 02:19:815 - I feel like the empty space here is eats away the fun intensitivity that this part is supposed to bring. Even though the melody isnt on this tick there is still the drum and therefore you should add a circle here.
  3. 02:22:573 - ^
  4. 02:25:332 - ^
That's it for the mod. Hope it helped and good luck with the set :)
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ProfessionalBox wrote:

Hello! My end of the m4m

General

  1. BG resolution isn't supported. Change it to 1366x768 or 1066x768 It is alright, it is supported, osu! just adds letterboxing/crops for which is fine for me
  2. Conflicting countdown and timing points in CSLM diff Ill leave this to CSLM discretion to change it or not. Its fine for me to have it differently

La Regalda

  1. 00:30:504 (1,2,3,4) - Consider turning these into 2 sliders instead for variety, since the part has only circles at the moment Intentional, youll see that starting at 00:41:539 - are pure sliders
  2. 01:20:160 (6) - New combo
  3. 01:21:539 (1) - Remove new combo

La Simpatica

  1. 01:04:987 (4) - New combo
  2. 01:13:263 (5) - New combo
  3. 01:14:642 (9) - New combo
  4. 01:16:022 (1) - Remove NC, you might want to go through the difficulty yourself to see if there are any other since they are so easy to fix. I won't point these out anymore Noooooo, those are my weakness! I depend on mods to fix them! :(
  5. 01:39:470 (1,2) - Spacing inconsistency Nice catch

La Caphricosa

  1. Good job here, couldn't find anything to point out

La Complicada

  1. 01:07:746 (7) - Consider adding a NC to avoid such high combo numbers
  2. 01:10:504 (7) - Here aswell (I hate how this is turning into a NC mod but goddamn your style is so clean)
  3. 01:16:251 (5) - ^
  4. 01:39:470 (8) - ^
  5. 02:37:228 (10) - You should definetly stack this on top of 02:37:401 (1) - instead for consistency Youll see that these triple stacked replaces the repeat sliders like 02:20:389 (9) - and youll see that everything makes sense when compared to the previous chorus, as in the equivalent of this triple is 02:25:849 (9) - and it is not stacked to 02:26:366 (1) -

La Dulce Mery

  1. 00:38:780 (2,3) - Are you sure you stacked this the way you wanted to? It's a bit different from the other stacks so just making sure Yes, it is as intended
  2. 02:19:815 - I feel like the empty space here is eats away the fun intensitivity that this part is supposed to bring. Even though the melody isnt on this tick there is still the drum and therefore you should add a circle here.
  3. 02:22:573 - ^
  4. 02:25:332 - ^ It's like the calm before actually going nuts. I don't know, it's how I wanted to express this part. Hope you understand
That's it for the mod. Hope it helped and good luck with the set :)


All NC suggestions applied

Thanks for the mod!
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Hey Xanandra,

my m4m:

[La Dura CSLM]

General things:

You should check AImod on not snapped objects! And compare your timing to the other diffs.
I think you should talk to Xanandra about the timing issue.


In my opinion it's kinda weird that you put a break at the point where the other diffs just started. But I guess it's ok tho.

Mod:
For the whole 1/3 part, I recommend to keep 00:16:251 (8,9) - these "semi stacks" consistant. By that I mean changing 00:14:527 (2,3) - all of the 1/3 jumps into 1/3 "semi stacks". I liked hitting those a lot while playing!

00:02:886 (1) - What about using a sv increase on all these very strong flute sounds? It would provide more emphasis and would be pretty fun to play too!
Examples: 00:05:677 (1) - 00:00:160 (1) - 00:02:886 (1) - 00:13:953 (1) - 00:16:711 (1) -

00:00:160 (1,3) - I highly recommend you to go through the entire map, check every blanket you made and to fix them if necassary.

01:50:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this rhyhtm would be much easier to read and fit the guitar even more. http://puu.sh/p10Zb/06160d2fff.jpg

01:53:261 (1) - Why didn't you map a 1/3 reverseslider here? o: Would have been reasonable if you did: http://puu.sh/p114s/3c8386f9db.jpg

02:09:640 (9,1) - That antijump makes no sense here, since you want to emphasise the downbeat!

02:29:640 (3) - I think you could improve this slider a little! Example: http://puu.sh/p11la/2817df6650.jpg

02:40:158 (1,2) - Since you stacked these, you maybe want to stack 02:40:847 (3,4) - too.

03:07:399 (1) - Remove NC here? It is stacked so you dont see any difference anyways.

I like the 1/2 part a lot! Good work here. But I suggest to work on the 1/3 parts a bit :)
Overall this mapset is one of the best 1/3 sets I played so far. I love the kinda dancing flow in the highest diff!

Good Luck with the map guys!! :)
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ProfessionalBox wrote:

Hello! My end of the m4m

La Dura CLSM

  1. 01:31:192 (1) - I think you could improve this slider a bit by doing this :arrow:Done, but not too much
  2. 01:39:468 (9) - Consider NC since the combo is getting past 10 here
  3. 01:39:123 (8,9,10,11,12) - The same slider improvement can be done to all of these :arrow:Again, done but not too much
  4. 01:50:675 (2,3,4) - Remake the entire rhythm of this section into this to fit the guitar much better. :arrow:No because the entire section is not 1/4, is 1/6
  5. 02:58:433 (9) - Consider NC here aswell
  6. 03:01:192 (9) - ^
That's it for the mod. Hope it helped and good luck with the set :)

-M4x wrote:

Hey Xanandra,

my m4m:

[La Dura CSLM]

General things:

You should check AImod on not snapped objects! And compare your timing to the other diffs.
I think you should talk to Xanandra about the timing issue.


In my opinion it's kinda weird that you put a break at the point where the other diffs just started. But I guess it's ok tho. :arrow:I felt that part deserves a break but i think Xana aren't agree with me u.u

Mod:
For the whole 1/3 part, I recommend to keep 00:16:251 (8,9) - these "semi stacks" consistant. By that I mean changing 00:14:527 (2,3) - all of the 1/3 jumps into 1/3 "semi stacks". I liked hitting those a lot while playing!

00:02:886 (1) - What about using a sv increase on all these very strong flute sounds? It would provide more emphasis and would be pretty fun to play too!
Examples: 00:05:677 (1) - 00:00:160 (1) - 00:02:886 (1) - 00:13:953 (1) - 00:16:711 (1) - :arrow:No, i don't think it neccesary, besides the flute part is calm, even with strong flute sounds

00:00:160 (1,3) - I highly recommend you to go through the entire map, check every blanket you made and to fix them if necassary. :arrow:I make my blankets of that way (most of them)

01:50:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this rhyhtm would be much easier to read and fit the guitar even more. http://puu.sh/p10Zb/06160d2fff.jpg :arrow:It's 1/6

01:53:261 (1) - Why didn't you map a 1/3 reverseslider here? o: Would have been reasonable if you did: http://puu.sh/p114s/3c8386f9db.jpg :arrow:Variation

02:09:640 (9,1) - That antijump makes no sense here, since you want to emphasise the downbeat! :arrow:Who says that i want to emphatizate it?

02:29:640 (3) - I think you could improve this slider a little! Example: http://puu.sh/p11la/2817df6650.jpg

02:40:158 (1,2) - Since you stacked these, you maybe want to stack 02:40:847 (3,4) - too. :arrow:It would make and NC inconsistency

03:07:399 (1) - Remove NC here? It is stacked so you dont see any difference anyways. :arrow:I add a NC very canticle

I like the 1/2 part a lot! Good work here. But I suggest to work on the 1/3 parts a bit :)
Overall this mapset is one of the best 1/3 sets I played so far. I love the kinda dancing flow in the highest diff!

Good Luck with the map guys!! :)
Update 2
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I suggest use higher DS. And use constent DS too. DS change is not allowed in and Easy diff

00:33:263 (1,2,3,4) - Either turn them into a square or place them symmetrically
00:45:677 (2,1) - Blanket
01:16:022 - Place a note here
01:51:884 (2) - NC
01:53:263 (3,1) - Stack these
02:24:987 (3,1) - Wrong DS
02:26:022 - Place a note here too
02:30:160- ^
02:33:221- ^ There are more, but please fix it yourself
02:44:987 (4) - Turn it into something like 02:48:091 (2) -
02:53:953 (1,2) - Blanket

La Simpatica


Some part have inconsistent DS. You should fix those

00:45:677 (3,4) - Improve blanket
01:17:401 (1) - Move this down a bit to make a good 90 degree angle
02:10:504 (2,1) - Overlapped ;;-;;
02:19:470 (5) - Place a note at the end of this slider
02:22:228 (4) - ^
02:24:987 (4) - ^
02:50:504 (3,1) - Blanket?

La Simpatica



01:11:884 (9) - NC from here
01:15:332 (3,2,3) - Overlap doesn't look nice
01:37:056 (2,4) - ^
02:48:780 (2,3) - There's no reason to stack these

La Complicada


00:27:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'll not stack these if I were you. It's hard to read
01:50:504 (1,2,3,4) - Turn these into 1/3 slider, it would sound better
02:20:389 (9) - Move this a bit forward so the start and the end lay on red ticks
02:55:849 (3,1) - Overlapped

Well, that's it from me. Good luck with ranking :)
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Hokichi wrote:

Hey! Sorry for being late :(

Here we go

La Regalada


I suggest use higher DS. And use constent DS too. DS change is not allowed in and Easy diff
They are fine... DS rule is in there to make absolutely sure that easy diffs has no jumps and confusing DS usage, I believe this does not apply here

00:33:263 (1,2,3,4) - Either turn them into a square or place them symmetrically Dont see the need for this, and the way it is, its my intention
00:45:677 (2,1) - Blanket Not my intention
01:16:022 - Place a note here I prefer the way it is
01:51:884 (2) - NC Done
01:53:263 (3,1) - Stack these Not sure why I would want that....?
02:24:987 (3,1) - Wrong DS Dont see anything wrong with this...
02:26:022 - Place a note here too
02:30:160- ^
02:33:221- ^ There are more, but please fix it yourself They are as intended
02:44:987 (4) - Turn it into something like 02:48:091 (2) - I dont understand what you mean here...
02:53:953 (1,2) - Blanket Not my intention

La Simpatica


Some part have inconsistent DS. You should fix those
I cant see them, if you could specify which parts has DS problems that are causing problems...

00:45:677 (3,4) - Improve blanket I... dont do blankets?
01:17:401 (1) - Move this down a bit to make a good 90 degree angle It is as intended
02:10:504 (2,1) - Overlapped ;;-;;
02:19:470 (5) - Place a note at the end of this slider
02:22:228 (4) - ^
02:24:987 (4) - ^I dont understand these add notes? You mean to take out the repeat and replace it with a circle?
02:50:504 (3,1) - Blanket?

La Simpatica



01:11:884 (9) - NC from here Done
01:15:332 (3,2,3) - Overlap doesn't look nice
01:37:056 (2,4) - ^ Hmm, will wait for more opinions
02:48:780 (2,3) - There's no reason to stack these Same way theres no reason to not stack these

La Complicada


00:27:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'll not stack these if I were you. It's hard to read Will wait for more opinions
01:50:504 (1,2,3,4) - Turn these into 1/3 slider, it would sound better Hahaha I have it this way on Dulce Mery, guess I did it to make this part "easier" but okay, changed
02:20:389 (9) - Move this a bit forward so the start and the end lay on red ticks My mistake, thanks
02:55:849 (3,1) - Overlapped Will wait for more opinions

Well, that's it from me. Good luck with ranking :)


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