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Luvdic

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Luvdic 2015-02-08T21:16:05+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Last edited by Luvdic 2017-02-17T10:56:52+00:00, edited 174 times in total.

Sieg

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Sieg 2015-03-08T22:09:26+00:00

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Gonzvlo

osu! Alumni

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Gonzvlo 2015-05-18T06:55:45+00:00

Ay pero que horrible. Te dejo una estrella por pena

jesse1412

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Joined January 2010

jesse1412 2015-06-06T19:34:51+00:00

SPOILER

2015-06-06 20:21 jesus1412: no wonder I was confused
2015-06-06 20:21 jesus1412: I opened the wrong song in edit
2015-06-06 20:21 Xanandra: hahahaha
2015-06-06 20:21 jesus1412: spent a good minute looking for sections
2015-06-06 20:21 jesus1412: 01:19:125 (8) -
2015-06-06 20:22 jesus1412: move that 1 more tick along the time line
2015-06-06 20:22 jesus1412: and maybe redesign the parts after it to make that work better
2015-06-06 20:22 Xanandra: you mean to move it to 01:19:240 - ?
2015-06-06 20:22 jesus1412: yep
2015-06-06 20:23 jesus1412: 01:49:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - this stream is really awkward
2015-06-06 20:23 jesus1412: might want to redesign it
2015-06-06 20:23 Xanandra: hmm
2015-06-06 20:23 jesus1412: maybe start out coming more to the right side
2015-06-06 20:23 jesus1412: rather than up
2015-06-06 20:24 Xanandra: Oh
2015-06-06 20:24 Xanandra: Thats kinda my style, going in the wrong direction with the patterns

2015-06-06 20:24 Xanandra: But interesting thing you said about (8)
2015-06-06 20:24 jesus1412: seemed to sound okay when you moved it along too
2015-06-06 20:24 jesus1412: and it would play better
2015-06-06 20:24 jesus1412: well that's my opinion
2015-06-06 20:24 jesus1412: 01:52:228 (2,3,4) -
2015-06-06 20:25 jesus1412: these triples
2015-06-06 20:25 jesus1412: I'm sure you can spot them all yourself
2015-06-06 20:25 jesus1412: but imo you should make it so that they flow into the next slider rather than out of the first
2015-06-06 20:25 jesus1412: hard to describe
2015-06-06 20:25 jesus1412: ie instead of this http://jesse1412.s-ul.eu/jmJS9AUn
2015-06-06 20:26 Xanandra: hi jesse :$:$:$:$:$:
2015-06-06 20:26 jesus1412: make it more like this http://jesse1412.s-ul.eu/whUA61wV
2015-06-06 20:26 jesus1412: (without the shitty re-shaping)
2015-06-06 20:26 Xanandra: okay
2015-06-06 20:27 Xanandra: I also was doubting about that
2015-06-06 20:27 Xanandra: I think Ill probably do what youre suggesting xD
2015-06-06 20:27 jesus1412: sure sure
2015-06-06 20:27 jesus1412: 02:19:470 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-06-06 20:27 Xanandra: Noooo not those jumps
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: I'd recommend ctrl+G on every pair of the 2nd set
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: for instance gtrl G these 02:19:470 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: oops
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: 02:19:987 (1,2) - these*
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: and these 02:20:332 (3,4) -
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: and these 02:20:677 (5,1) -
2015-06-06 20:29 jesus1412: I'm not sure if it would fix it
2015-06-06 20:29 jesus1412: but the first set were really awkward because I didn't know the rhythm
2015-06-06 20:29 Xanandra: Those, Ill think about it
2015-06-06 20:29 Xanandra: I really like it the way it is
2015-06-06 20:29 jesus1412: so it's ideal to find a way to make it more obvious for at least the first set of them
2015-06-06 20:29 jesus1412: maybe smaller jumps even
2015-06-06 20:29 Xanandra: Yeah, but at a second play, it woulld be fine
2015-06-06 20:30 jesus1412: heh no one likes having to remember stuff but that's up to you
2015-06-06 20:30 jesus1412: 02:56:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
2015-06-06 20:30 Xanandra: in fact, my maps usually has quite a the repetitive rhythms hahaha
2015-06-06 20:30 jesus1412: that stream is just unfollowable for me
2015-06-06 20:30 jesus1412: maybe you need someone better to give it a shot
2015-06-06 20:30 Xanandra: noioooooo not those streams
2015-06-06 20:30 Xanandra: Hahahah
2015-06-06 20:30 jesus1412: rest is okay

pkhg

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pkhg 2015-06-21T18:10:24+00:00

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Okoayu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

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Okoayu 2016-02-21T00:14:29+00:00

wait what how did this end up being a vote LOL

Luvdic

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Luvdic 2016-02-21T03:01:10+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
wait what how did this end up being a vote LOL

So you prefer Alma Echeregay, interesting girl, too bad she became nuts later on

Okoayu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

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Okoayu 2016-02-22T01:31:14+00:00

It's been long since i have been this confused

Luvdic

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Luvdic 2016-02-22T01:38:29+00:00

Its okay, my bad. Its just that the polls have been up for a very long time, and no one voted so far, until you posted here. I just assumed it was you. Sorry for assuming things incorrectly.

Have a nice day.

pd. have a kudosu for all the inconveniences I have caused.
pd2. Yes, I know I shouldn't, but I cant help it.
pd3. Please be merciful with me if Im to get punished
pd4. I love confusing people

Okoayu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

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Okoayu 2016-02-22T01:44:24+00:00

You're somewhat awesome, will this be completed anytime soon?

Spork Lover

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Spork Lover 2016-02-26T12:45:50+00:00

From #modhelp

Glad I could help!

irc

13:21 Xanandra: hello
13:21 Xanandra: also, if whether I should make alma harder or not to make the spread more even

13:21 Xanandra: Im asking because the star ratings could be wrong sometimes

13:21 Spork Lover: Erm
13:22 Spork Lover: In 3/4's in the azaak diff some sections SHOULD be more spaced imo :3
13:22 Spork Lover: 02:31:022 (6,7,8,9,10,1) -
13:22 Spork Lover: I'm talking about sections like this one
13:22 Spork Lover: 02:33:780 (6,7,8,9,10,1) -
13:22 Xanandra: Oh...
13:23 Xanandra: I tried before, and it made star ratings jump to 3.8 hahaha
13:23 Xanandra: so I stacked them instead
13:23 Spork Lover: Either space the section itself a bit more, or space the notes a bit :p
13:23 Spork Lover: But everything before that is crazy to space more
13:24 Spork Lover: I think it'd make it way too hard to play for a typical hard/light insane player
13:24 Xanandra: wait
13:24 Xanandra: could you elaborate a little bit more on what you mean with spacing more?
13:24 Spork Lover: Since you work with doubles a lot
13:24 Spork Lover: Erm
13:24 Spork Lover: Distance between
13:24 Xanandra: I dont think I am thinking it the same way as you lol
13:24 Spork Lover: 02:33:780 (6,7) -
13:25 Spork Lover: And 02:34:125 (8,9,10) -
13:25 Spork Lover: Is low
13:25 Spork Lover: Either that, or split the triple to add jumps instead
13:25 Spork Lover: Like a triangle pattern or something

13:25 Spork Lover: Lemme send a pic
13:26 Xanandra: but... as I said... those sections I cant touch because it will skyrocket the star ratings to 3.8 stars
13:26 Xanandra: and a GD of 4 stars is coming up
13:26 Spork Lover: Oh

13:26 Spork Lover: Erm
13:26 Xanandra: it will make spread even less even
13:26 Xanandra: I also has problem with the Alma diff
13:27 Xanandra: where the star ratings diff between alma and julie is a mere 0.4 stars
13:27 Spork Lover: Lemme send a screenshot: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4609924
13:27 Xanandra: But somehow I still feel that alma is way more harder than julie, yet the star ratings are saying otherwise
13:27 Spork Lover: This was a pattern, but if you don't want it to be 3,7-ish stars I think the diff is fine as it is
13:27 Xanandra: thus Im asking if I should increase the alma diff a little, and probably azaak too while at that but not that much
13:28 Spork Lover: That one pattern made it go up to 3,38 instead of 3,33 btw
13:28 Xanandra: yeah, that pattern will make the star ratings skyrokect to 3.8

13:29 Spork Lover: Yeah
13:29 Xanandra: yeah but only changed it in one place
13:29 Spork Lover: Yeah I get ya
13:29 Xanandra: make the change in the whole section and it will add up
13:29 Spork Lover: Alma?
13:29 Spork Lover: Is the next one?
13:32 Xanandra: and its not only in the kiai, ill have to do something like that too on to keep consistency
13:32 Xanandra: yeah alma
13:32 Xanandra: but youll have to compare it with julie too
13:32 Spork Lover: Erm
13:32 Spork Lover: The spacing is very high already
13:32 Spork Lover: So adding a bit more notes would be the way to go
13:32 Xanandra: So you agree that I shou8ld make Alma harder?
13:33 Spork Lover: In some sections yes
13:33 Spork Lover: 02:19:987 (7,8) -
13:33 Spork Lover: After slider 8 should be a single tap imo
13:33 Spork Lover: It feels a bit empty imo
13:34 Spork Lover: Occurs a few times
13:34 Spork Lover: Lemme check before kiai if there are sections where you can allow to add more stuff
13:34 Xanandra: But... have you even checked Julie yet....?
13:35 Spork Lover: Nope 1 sec
13:36 Xanandra: My doubts lies more within if the current diffs is spread evenly
13:36 Xanandra: Not how to make them harder....
13:36 Spork Lover: Yeah Julie has lower spacing, but more spaced single taps
13:36 Spork Lover: Which is why it's fairly close to Alma's diff
13:36 Spork Lover: :p
13:36 Spork Lover: *-wise
13:37 Spork Lover: 'Cause you make a few stacks on Alma, which you make spaced taps on Julie
13:37 Spork Lover: If you either remove the stacks, or add stacks on the same spots as on the conresponding difficulty, I think the spread will feel more natural
13:38 Spork Lover: corresponding*
13:38 Spork Lover: 01:12:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
13:38 Spork Lover: On Julie, this stack is one of the diff boosters
13:39 Xanandra: oh...
13:39 Xanandra: all those circles...
13:39 Xanandra: how come I didnt see them before...
13:39 Spork Lover: Yeah consider either stacking a bit or make a slider
13:39 Spork Lover: If that's what you wanna do

13:41 Xanandra: okay
13:41 Xanandra: thanks
13:41 Xanandra: have to go for now
13:41 Xanandra: sorry
13:41 Xanandra: and thanks for your time
13:41 Xanandra: feel free to post in the forums
13:41 Xanandra: Ill give you kudosu when I come back
13:41 Spork Lover: Aight np man

Ireiisu

90 posts

Joined November 2014

Ireiisu 2016-05-20T11:28:22+00:00

Hi , here's a mod for M4M

La Regalada

AIMod:01:26:022 (1) - Offscreen
AR 1 seems too low for a 1.49 star map
add a circle on 02:20:504 and 02:26:022
overlap 02:42:918 (1) on 02:44:987 (4) and the straighten out the triangle ( or if you don't want to overlap it , make 02:44:297 (3,4) on the same x-axis and leave 02:42:918 (1) as it is)

La Complicada

Check AiMod - a lot of ends not snapped
01:53:263 (5) - NC
01:53:608 (6,7) - seems to be a bit more closer than the others (01:52:228 (2,3) etc )
01:54:642 (9) - NC (01:58:780 (5) - 02:00:160 (9) - should be NC)
It feels empty , put more on 1/2 ticks or more sliders , you seem to just follow the instrument more then the vocals , same goes to some other difficulties , try and have more circles on 1/2 especially for 3 stars and above
03:04:815 (6) - NC , 03:04:987 (1) - remove NC ,03:05:332 (2) - NC (not really important)
03:09:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern seems a bit plain , maybe rotate 03:09:125 (1,2) - a bit

La Dulce Mery

Some jumps are really really extreme and doesn't really fit with the rest of the map , either make the map harder or tone down some jumps :
02:04:815 (4,5) - the first part its just close single taps but then there's a sudden jump , followed by some small jumps.
01:58:091 (5) - this should be a NC; the pattern is slider then 1/3 circles then another set(nc)
02:00:849 (1) - the NC here is a bit weird ^

Sorry the mod is a bit short
Most of the map should be fine , its pretty unique actually
good luck ^^

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2016-05-20T12:23:05+00:00

shadowneko_1 wrote:
Hi , here's a mod for M4M

La Regalada
AIMod:01:26:022 (1) - Offscreen Changed
AR 1 seems too low for a 1.49 star map Will consider it
add a circle on 02:20:504 and 02:26:022 Goes against the rhythm I want to implement in this part
overlap 02:42:918 (1) on 02:44:987 (4) and the straighten out the triangle ( or if you don't want to overlap it , make 02:44:297 (3,4) on the same x-axis and leave 02:42:918 (1) as it is) Intentional

La Complicada
Check AiMod - a lot of ends not snapped Ah, I thought I fixed it already, thanks!
01:53:263 (5) - NC
01:53:608 (6,7) - seems to be a bit more closer than the others (01:52:228 (2,3) etc ) Hmm but it isnt... haha Visuall effects
01:54:642 (9) - NC (01:58:780 (5) - 02:00:160 (9) - should be NC)
It feels empty , put more on 1/2 ticks or more sliders , you seem to just follow the instrument more then the vocals , same goes to some other difficulties , try and have more circles on 1/2 especially for 3 stars and above
03:04:815 (6) - NC , 03:04:987 (1) - remove NC ,03:05:332 (2) - NC (not really important)
03:09:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern seems a bit plain , maybe rotate 03:09:125 (1,2) - a bit Intentional
All NC stuff done, I think

La Dulce Mery
Some jumps are really really extreme and doesn't really fit with the rest of the map , either make the map harder or tone down some jumps : Intentional
02:04:815 (4,5) - the first part its just close single taps but then there's a sudden jump , followed by some small jumps. Intentional
01:58:091 (5) - this should be a NC; the pattern is slider then 1/3 circles then another set(nc)
02:00:849 (1) - the NC here is a bit weird ^ Already discussed about this in a previous mod, and I agreed with him, thus the way it currently is
Sorry the mod is a bit short
Most of the map should be fine , its pretty unique actually
good luck ^^

Thanks a lot!

[Yue]

1,643 posts

Joined January 2011

[Yue] 2016-05-21T17:45:00+00:00

Sabes que siempre me gustó este mapa y canción <3
Ahí te dejo una estrella!

ProfessionalBox

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

771 posts

Joined September 2013

ProfessionalBox 2016-05-21T19:52:28+00:00

Hello! My end of the m4m

General

BG resolution isn't supported. Change it to 1366x768 or 1066x768
Conflicting countdown and timing points in CSLM diff

La Regalda

00:30:504 (1,2,3,4) - Consider turning these into 2 sliders instead for variety, since the part has only circles at the moment
01:20:160 (6) - New combo
01:21:539 (1) - Remove new combo

La Simpatica

01:04:987 (4) - New combo
01:13:263 (5) - New combo
01:14:642 (9) - New combo
01:16:022 (1) - Remove NC, you might want to go through the difficulty yourself to see if there are any other since they are so easy to fix. I won't point these out anymore
01:39:470 (1,2) - Spacing inconsistency

La Caphricosa

Good job here, couldn't find anything to point out

La Complicada

01:07:746 (7) - Consider adding a NC to avoid such high combo numbers
01:10:504 (7) - Here aswell (I hate how this is turning into a NC mod but goddamn your style is so clean)
01:16:251 (5) - ^
01:39:470 (8) - ^
02:37:228 (10) - You should definetly stack this on top of 02:37:401 (1) - instead for consistency

La Dura CLSM

01:31:192 (1) - I think you could improve this slider a bit by doing this
Example
01:39:468 (9) - Consider NC since the combo is getting past 10 here
01:39:123 (8,9,10,11,12) - The same slider improvement can be done to all of these
01:50:675 (2,3,4) - Remake the entire rhythm of this section into this to fit the guitar much better.
Example
02:58:433 (9) - Consider NC here aswell
03:01:192 (9) - ^

La Dulce Mery

00:38:780 (2,3) - Are you sure you stacked this the way you wanted to? It's a bit different from the other stacks so just making sure
02:19:815 - I feel like the empty space here is eats away the fun intensitivity that this part is supposed to bring. Even though the melody isnt on this tick there is still the drum and therefore you should add a circle here.
02:22:573 - ^
02:25:332 - ^

That's it for the mod. Hope it helped and good luck with the set

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2016-05-22T09:28:18+00:00

ProfessionalBox wrote:
Hello! My end of the m4m
General
BG resolution isn't supported. Change it to 1366x768 or 1066x768 It is alright, it is supported, osu! just adds letterboxing/crops for which is fine for me
Conflicting countdown and timing points in CSLM diff Ill leave this to CSLM discretion to change it or not. Its fine for me to have it differently

La Regalda
00:30:504 (1,2,3,4) - Consider turning these into 2 sliders instead for variety, since the part has only circles at the moment Intentional, youll see that starting at 00:41:539 - are pure sliders
01:20:160 (6) - New combo
01:21:539 (1) - Remove new combo

La Simpatica
01:04:987 (4) - New combo
01:13:263 (5) - New combo
01:14:642 (9) - New combo
01:16:022 (1) - Remove NC, you might want to go through the difficulty yourself to see if there are any other since they are so easy to fix. I won't point these out anymore Noooooo, those are my weakness! I depend on mods to fix them!
01:39:470 (1,2) - Spacing inconsistency Nice catch

La Caphricosa
Good job here, couldn't find anything to point out

La Complicada
01:07:746 (7) - Consider adding a NC to avoid such high combo numbers
01:10:504 (7) - Here aswell (I hate how this is turning into a NC mod but goddamn your style is so clean)
01:16:251 (5) - ^
01:39:470 (8) - ^
02:37:228 (10) - You should definetly stack this on top of 02:37:401 (1) - instead for consistency Youll see that these triple stacked replaces the repeat sliders like 02:20:389 (9) - and youll see that everything makes sense when compared to the previous chorus, as in the equivalent of this triple is 02:25:849 (9) - and it is not stacked to 02:26:366 (1) -

La Dulce Mery
00:38:780 (2,3) - Are you sure you stacked this the way you wanted to? It's a bit different from the other stacks so just making sure Yes, it is as intended
02:19:815 - I feel like the empty space here is eats away the fun intensitivity that this part is supposed to bring. Even though the melody isnt on this tick there is still the drum and therefore you should add a circle here.
02:22:573 - ^
02:25:332 - ^ It's like the calm before actually going nuts. I don't know, it's how I wanted to express this part. Hope you understand

That's it for the mod. Hope it helped and good luck with the set

All NC suggestions applied

Thanks for the mod!

-M4x

296 posts

Joined July 2014

-M4x 2016-05-22T13:49:59+00:00

Hey Xanandra,

my m4m:

[La Dura CSLM]

General things:

You should check AImod on not snapped objects! And compare your timing to the other diffs.
I think you should talk to Xanandra about the timing issue.

In my opinion it's kinda weird that you put a break at the point where the other diffs just started. But I guess it's ok tho.

Mod:

For the whole 1/3 part, I recommend to keep 00:16:251 (8,9) - these "semi stacks" consistant. By that I mean changing 00:14:527 (2,3) - all of the 1/3 jumps into 1/3 "semi stacks". I liked hitting those a lot while playing!

00:02:886 (1) - What about using a sv increase on all these very strong flute sounds? It would provide more emphasis and would be pretty fun to play too!
Examples: 00:05:677 (1) - 00:00:160 (1) - 00:02:886 (1) - 00:13:953 (1) - 00:16:711 (1) -

00:00:160 (1,3) - I highly recommend you to go through the entire map, check every blanket you made and to fix them if necassary.

01:50:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this rhyhtm would be much easier to read and fit the guitar even more. http://puu.sh/p10Zb/06160d2fff.jpg

01:53:261 (1) - Why didn't you map a 1/3 reverseslider here? o: Would have been reasonable if you did: http://puu.sh/p114s/3c8386f9db.jpg

02:09:640 (9,1) - That antijump makes no sense here, since you want to emphasise the downbeat!

02:29:640 (3) - I think you could improve this slider a little! Example: http://puu.sh/p11la/2817df6650.jpg

02:40:158 (1,2) - Since you stacked these, you maybe want to stack 02:40:847 (3,4) - too.

03:07:399 (1) - Remove NC here? It is stacked so you dont see any difference anyways.

I like the 1/2 part a lot! Good work here. But I suggest to work on the 1/3 parts a bit

Overall this mapset is one of the best 1/3 sets I played so far. I love the kinda dancing flow in the highest diff!

Good Luck with the map guys!!

CSLM

1,058 posts

Joined May 2013

CSLM 2016-06-12T20:13:15+00:00

ProfessionalBox wrote:
Hello! My end of the m4m

La Dura CLSM
01:31:192 (1) - I think you could improve this slider a bit by doing this Done, but not too much
Example
01:39:468 (9) - Consider NC since the combo is getting past 10 here
01:39:123 (8,9,10,11,12) - The same slider improvement can be done to all of these Again, done but not too much
01:50:675 (2,3,4) - Remake the entire rhythm of this section into this to fit the guitar much better. No because the entire section is not 1/4, is 1/6
Example
02:58:433 (9) - Consider NC here aswell
03:01:192 (9) - ^

That's it for the mod. Hope it helped and good luck with the set

-M4x wrote:
Hey Xanandra,

my m4m:

[La Dura CSLM]

General things:

You should check AImod on not snapped objects! And compare your timing to the other diffs.
I think you should talk to Xanandra about the timing issue.

In my opinion it's kinda weird that you put a break at the point where the other diffs just started. But I guess it's ok tho. I felt that part deserves a break but i think Xana aren't agree with me u.u

Mod:

For the whole 1/3 part, I recommend to keep 00:16:251 (8,9) - these "semi stacks" consistant. By that I mean changing 00:14:527 (2,3) - all of the 1/3 jumps into 1/3 "semi stacks". I liked hitting those a lot while playing!

00:02:886 (1) - What about using a sv increase on all these very strong flute sounds? It would provide more emphasis and would be pretty fun to play too!
Examples: 00:05:677 (1) - 00:00:160 (1) - 00:02:886 (1) - 00:13:953 (1) - 00:16:711 (1) - No, i don't think it neccesary, besides the flute part is calm, even with strong flute sounds

00:00:160 (1,3) - I highly recommend you to go through the entire map, check every blanket you made and to fix them if necassary. I make my blankets of that way (most of them)

01:50:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this rhyhtm would be much easier to read and fit the guitar even more. http://puu.sh/p10Zb/06160d2fff.jpg It's 1/6

01:53:261 (1) - Why didn't you map a 1/3 reverseslider here? o: Would have been reasonable if you did: http://puu.sh/p114s/3c8386f9db.jpg Variation

02:09:640 (9,1) - That antijump makes no sense here, since you want to emphasise the downbeat! Who says that i want to emphatizate it?

02:29:640 (3) - I think you could improve this slider a little! Example: http://puu.sh/p11la/2817df6650.jpg

02:40:158 (1,2) - Since you stacked these, you maybe want to stack 02:40:847 (3,4) - too. It would make and NC inconsistency

03:07:399 (1) - Remove NC here? It is stacked so you dont see any difference anyways. I add a NC very canticle

I like the 1/2 part a lot! Good work here. But I suggest to work on the 1/3 parts a bit

Overall this mapset is one of the best 1/3 sets I played so far. I love the kinda dancing flow in the highest diff!

Good Luck with the map guys!!

Update 2

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 08. La viuda de O`Brian.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 137918
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[Metadata]
Title:La viuda de O'Brian
TitleUnicode:La viuda de O'Brian
Artist:Mago de Oz
ArtistUnicode:Mägo de Oz
Creator:Xanandra
Version:La Dura CSLM
Source:
Tags:
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Hokichi

831 posts

Joined June 2015

Hokichi 2016-07-24T08:22:40+00:00

Hey! Sorry for being late

Here we go

La Regalada

I suggest use higher DS. And use constent DS too. DS change is not allowed in and Easy diff

00:33:263 (1,2,3,4) - Either turn them into a square or place them symmetrically
00:45:677 (2,1) - Blanket
01:16:022 - Place a note here
01:51:884 (2) - NC
01:53:263 (3,1) - Stack these
02:24:987 (3,1) - Wrong DS
02:26:022 - Place a note here too
02:30:160- ^
02:33:221- ^ There are more, but please fix it yourself
02:44:987 (4) - Turn it into something like 02:48:091 (2) -
02:53:953 (1,2) - Blanket

La Simpatica

Some part have inconsistent DS. You should fix those

00:45:677 (3,4) - Improve blanket
01:17:401 (1) - Move this down a bit to make a good 90 degree angle
02:10:504 (2,1) - Overlapped ;;-;;
02:19:470 (5) - Place a note at the end of this slider
02:22:228 (4) - ^
02:24:987 (4) - ^
02:50:504 (3,1) - Blanket?

La Simpatica

01:11:884 (9) - NC from here
01:15:332 (3,2,3) - Overlap doesn't look nice
01:37:056 (2,4) - ^
02:48:780 (2,3) - There's no reason to stack these

La Complicada

00:27:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'll not stack these if I were you. It's hard to read
01:50:504 (1,2,3,4) - Turn these into 1/3 slider, it would sound better
02:20:389 (9) - Move this a bit forward so the start and the end lay on red ticks
02:55:849 (3,1) - Overlapped

Well, that's it from me. Good luck with ranking

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2016-07-24T10:05:22+00:00

Hokichi wrote:
Hey! Sorry for being late

Here we go

La Regalada

I suggest use higher DS. And use constent DS too. DS change is not allowed in and Easy diff
They are fine... DS rule is in there to make absolutely sure that easy diffs has no jumps and confusing DS usage, I believe this does not apply here

00:33:263 (1,2,3,4) - Either turn them into a square or place them symmetrically Dont see the need for this, and the way it is, its my intention
00:45:677 (2,1) - Blanket Not my intention
01:16:022 - Place a note here I prefer the way it is
01:51:884 (2) - NC Done
01:53:263 (3,1) - Stack these Not sure why I would want that....?
02:24:987 (3,1) - Wrong DS Dont see anything wrong with this...
02:26:022 - Place a note here too
02:30:160- ^
02:33:221- ^ There are more, but please fix it yourself They are as intended
02:44:987 (4) - Turn it into something like 02:48:091 (2) - I dont understand what you mean here...
02:53:953 (1,2) - Blanket Not my intention

La Simpatica

Some part have inconsistent DS. You should fix those
I cant see them, if you could specify which parts has DS problems that are causing problems...

00:45:677 (3,4) - Improve blanket I... dont do blankets?
01:17:401 (1) - Move this down a bit to make a good 90 degree angle It is as intended
02:10:504 (2,1) - Overlapped ;;-;;
02:19:470 (5) - Place a note at the end of this slider
02:22:228 (4) - ^
02:24:987 (4) - ^I dont understand these add notes? You mean to take out the repeat and replace it with a circle?
02:50:504 (3,1) - Blanket?

La Simpatica

01:11:884 (9) - NC from here Done
01:15:332 (3,2,3) - Overlap doesn't look nice
01:37:056 (2,4) - ^ Hmm, will wait for more opinions
02:48:780 (2,3) - There's no reason to stack these Same way theres no reason to not stack these

La Complicada

00:27:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'll not stack these if I were you. It's hard to read Will wait for more opinions
01:50:504 (1,2,3,4) - Turn these into 1/3 slider, it would sound better Hahaha I have it this way on Dulce Mery, guess I did it to make this part "easier" but okay, changed
02:20:389 (9) - Move this a bit forward so the start and the end lay on red ticks My mistake, thanks
02:55:849 (3,1) - Overlapped Will wait for more opinions

Well, that's it from me. Good luck with ranking

Thanks for the mod!

CaffeAmericano

615 posts

Joined January 2015

CaffeAmericano 2016-07-24T18:19:16+00:00

Hi Xanandra! M4M~

I bet you’re aware that the tags are missing :3

Also, widescreen support is on in all diffs except La Dura CSLM

La Dulce Mery

00:55:907 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You gave different DS based on the drum beat at 00:46:596 (7,8) - 00:54:872 (7,8) - . Can we do the same here? If you’d rather keep same distance, I think you can still emphasize strong drums (00:56:366 (6,3,7) - ) by doing control+g on 00:56:941 (2,3) - and 00:57:631 (6,7) - .

00:58:665 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

01:19:010 (7,8) - I think this should be more like 00:46:596 (7,8) - than 00:54:872 (7,8) -

02:19:815 - 02:22:573 - 02:25:332 - I think it’s better to map these tick, they a strong drum beat. It’s also confusing to play when a pattern is repeated, but a beat is skipped

La Dura CLSM

My main concern for this diff is that larger gap in clicking doesn’t match with larger distance. For example, 00:47:399 (2,3) - are 1/3 beats apart and has large jump (DS 5.13), while 00:47:744 (3,4) - are 2/3 beats apart and has smaller jump (DS 1.79). I think vocal actually is even stronger at 00:48:318 - . Few other examples: 00:53:951 (4) - 00:56:020 (3) - 00:57:399 (7) - 01:07:054 (3) - . At least I found the kiai part way easier than earlier part because of this DS inconsistency.

00:27:744 (9) - NC?

01:56:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Is it intentional that this has NC but 01:44:985 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - has not? Since 01:56:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - is not difficult to read, I am assuming NC is meant to highlight 01:56:709 (1) -, and if that’s the case, I think 01:45:675 (6) - should also have NC

La Compilcada

01:00:734 - I think capturing this drum beat will be an interesting break from the same rhythm you’ve been following since 00:55:332 - until 01:03:263 - . The drum is pretty loud too. I bet something similar to 01:30:160 (4,5,6) - will work

01:44:987 (1,2,3) - 01:56:022 (1,2,3) - I think this rhythm might capture the music better ( http://puu.sh/qcUt4/1215776fee.jpg ). Tail of second slider have fairly strong beat, so it feels more intuitive for it to be clickable… at least for me xD

02:14:987 (5,2) - Maybe this overlap can be avoided

02:42:228 (3) - I suppose almost touching health bar is fine…? But could be safer to move it down a few grids.

03:07:228 (1) - I am grumpy that the loud “hey” sound is buried in the slider tail

Best of luck!

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2016-07-25T12:07:13+00:00

CaffeAmericano wrote:
Hi Xanandra! M4M~

I bet you’re aware that the tags are missing :3 Oops, forgot to add CSLM to tags

La Dulce Mery
00:55:907 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You gave different DS based on the drum beat at 00:46:596 (7,8) - 00:54:872 (7,8) - . Can we do the same here? If you’d rather keep same distance, I think you can still emphasize strong drums (00:56:366 (6,3,7) - ) by doing control+g on 00:56:941 (2,3) - and 00:57:631 (6,7) - .
Cant see the relation between the two parts you mentioned, they are rhythmically different to me.

00:58:665 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

01:19:010 (7,8) - I think this should be more like 00:46:596 (7,8) - than 00:54:872 (7,8) - They are working as intended

02:19:815 - 02:22:573 - 02:25:332 - I think it’s better to map these tick, they a strong drum beat. It’s also confusing to play when a pattern is repeated, but a beat is skipped
I dont know what pattern youre talking about, in fatc, my pattern for the whole chorus is precisely to skip this beat

La Compilcada
01:00:734 - I think capturing this drum beat will be an interesting break from the same rhythm you’ve been following since 00:55:332 - until 01:03:263 - . The drum is pretty loud too. I bet something similar to 01:30:160 (4,5,6) - will work
Added!

01:44:987 (1,2,3) - 01:56:022 (1,2,3) - I think this rhythm might capture the music better ( http://puu.sh/qcUt4/1215776fee.jpg ). Tail of second slider have fairly strong beat, so it feels more intuitive for it to be clickable… at least for me xD
Will wait for more opinions

02:14:987 (5,2) - Maybe this overlap can be avoided
It is fine for me :<

02:42:228 (3) - I suppose almost touching health bar is fine…? But could be safer to move it down a few grids.
It is fine for me :<

03:07:228 (1) - I am grumpy that the loud “hey” sound is buried in the slider tail
Will wait for more opinions
Best of luck!

Thanks a lot for the mod!

Venix

Global Moderator

1,937 posts

Joined February 2015

Venix 2016-07-25T12:38:58+00:00

random mod

La Dulce Mary

00:34:642 (1) - Make this slider longer (to 1/4 point)
00:34:987 (2) - to close with first slider i think
00:36:022 (2,3) 00:36:711 (1,2) etc. - stack is better
02:04:297 (1,2,3,4) - move that pattern
02:33:953 (3,4,5,6) - too big pattern make this smaller

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2016-07-29T08:36:36+00:00

VenixPL wrote:
random mod I so Random LovE¿

La Dulce Mary
00:34:642 (1) - Make this slider longer (to 1/4 point) Hmm I am following the instruments in 1/3 rather than the vocals
00:34:987 (2) - to close with first slider i think Adjusted a bit
00:36:022 (2,3) 00:36:711 (1,2) etc. - stack is better Hmm, I wanted to give the feeling of... a playful mapping... I think I kinda achieved with this way
02:04:297 (1,2,3,4) - move that pattern What do you mean exactly?
02:33:953 (3,4,5,6) - too big pattern make this smaller Moved 0.3x closer

Thanks a lot for your random mod!

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2016-08-29T07:39:58+00:00

self reminder

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2016-10-03T14:06:47+00:00

[cslm]
03:06:537 (4) - 03:09:296 (4) - Consider a NC. It will divide the objects afterwards along 03:04:640 (1,2,3) - 03:05:330 (1,2,3) - 03:06:020 (1,2,3) more effectively, and will show your selected patterns better.
Good diff.
[Mery]
01:03:951 - Is the clap missing?
02:00:045 (3) - Spacing error I guess.
02:08:608 (2,3,4) - The flow here being all the same didn't felt nice in emphasis whatever you intended imo.

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2016-10-04T11:10:56+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
[Mery]
01:03:951 - Is the clap missing?
I dont think so...

02:00:045 (3) - Spacing error I guess.
Nice catch

02:08:608 (2,3,4) - The flow here being all the same didn't felt nice in emphasis whatever you intended imo.
I didnt really understand what you mean with "the flow being all the time" lol.

Thanks

Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2016-12-26T15:47:20+00:00

[general]
no other tags? album name or things like that?
metadata reference?

normal-hitfinish3 is a bit "weird" http://i.imgur.com/xBTrElO.jpg
normal-hitwhistle2 has 6ms of delay http://i.imgur.com/781hVM4.jpg
normal/drum-hitfinish2/soft-hitfinish aredelayed and much louder on right side http://i.imgur.com/pFHnQ1b.jpg
=> http://puu.sh/t1xLp/05110a63cb.zip should fix all that

I think your own diffs could use a bit more volume in some parts, right now it's all 50%, which fits the slower parts (though maybe a bit lower would be nicer there), but seems too low in the more intense ones
and the gd could use a bit less, would suggest reducing the 90% points to 80-85%

[mery]
02:58:002 (8,1,4,5) - my main issue with this difficulty. stream and spacing seem alright, but the movement here is just way too harsh. you could rearrange some things here to keep the idea with nicer transitions, like for example http://i.imgur.com/2KvEwd4.jpg
02:59:727 (4,5) - this could also be adjusted a bit to sth like http://i.imgur.com/6acwjoJ.jpg
01:40:847 - 01:49:123 - really unsure about the 1/4 snapping here as the guitars seems so unclear to me. but it makes sense as simplification in gameplay so idk
01:51:882 (1) - sliders in this part sound like they should all be snapped to 2/3 and not 3/4
01:52:227 (2) - should probably have nc to be consistent with the comboing of the following things // 01:57:744 - or not, seems you just don't want 1 object combos, so I guess it's okay
02:00:158 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this one seems unintentional though comboing wise
02:32:916 (4) - seems weird to break flow on this with how you usually utilize movement, how about ctrlg on 02:32:571 (3) - so the movement changes there instead? would make more sense considering things like 02:34:640 (1,2,3,4) -

pretty enjoyable, liked the way you utilize angles and momentum

[cslm]
00:00:160 - red/green line use different sampleset here, just make them both S or S:C1
00:01:907 (8) - 00:07:456 (7) - I don't think 1/6 triples are suitable for this level of difficulty and they seem a bit much for this part
01:51:709 (5,6) - would be better to not have 1/4 here as everything before is 1/3 and 1/6 and the music is same so it's hard to play corretctly. could simply map 1/2
02:56:709 - 03:04:985 - would look into comboing for this part again, it seems a bit messy to me

[complicada]
00:52:227 (1,2) - could be spaced more to make the 1/2 easier to read
01:40:847 (1) - you snapped these to the 2/3 drums on higher, so why not here too? 1/2 kinda seems to work with the guitarm but the 2/3 is more clear I think
actually having this part more like cslm did would probably fit better than 1/2 slider spam
01:50:502 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think you need 1/6 buzzsliders on such a simple difficulty

[caprichosa]
seems fine

[simpatica]
ar seems a bit low ~³ would be nice
02:04:296 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - can you use more than only the center of the screen for so long lol
in general I think this difficulty could make more use of the playfield as it feels extremely focused on the center most of the time

[regalada]
ar/od setting seems a bit weird would at least increase ar and maybe lower od
01:40:847 (1) - using .5ds after this seems bit low for readability as suddenly your 2/1 looks just like the 1/1 looked before, would suggest using like 0.7-0.8x?
02:04:296 (1) - should probably be spaced a bit more too

[]

gap between the highest diffs seems a bit edgy with the difference between 5 note streams => 89 note streams and maybe also the jump pattern/spacing usage, not quite sure about that so idk what to do here for now

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2016-12-26T15:55:14+00:00

@Lasse: had a quick look at your mod, and I agree with almost everything. Going to sleep for now, so Ill reply tomorrow!

And thanks a lot for the mod, i love you :$

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2016-12-27T06:24:19+00:00

Lasse wrote:
[general]
no other tags? album name or things like that?
metadata reference?
Album name added, really have no idea what other references I could add to help people find this song (assuming that anyone wants to search this song lol)

normal-hitfinish3 is a bit "weird" http://i.imgur.com/xBTrElO.jpg
normal-hitwhistle2 has 6ms of delay http://i.imgur.com/781hVM4.jpg
normal/drum-hitfinish2/soft-hitfinish aredelayed and much louder on right side http://i.imgur.com/pFHnQ1b.jpg
=> http://puu.sh/t1xLp/05110a63cb.zip should fix all that
I love you so much, have a hug!

I think your own diffs could use a bit more volume in some parts, right now it's all 50%, which fits the slower parts (though maybe a bit lower would be nicer there), but seems too low in the more intense ones
and the gd could use a bit less, would suggest reducing the 90% points to 80-85%
This is more of a own decision thing. I like to use lots of hitsounds, but I dont like them to overtake a map's sounds, thats why I tend to use lots of them at low volume. Anyways, increased to 60% mid map, anything more, and my ears will start to bleed ;(

[mery]
02:58:002 (8,1,4,5) - my main issue with this difficulty. stream and spacing seem alright, but the movement here is just way too harsh. you could rearrange some things here to keep the idea with nicer transitions, like for example http://i.imgur.com/2KvEwd4.jpg
02:59:727 (4,5) - this could also be adjusted a bit to sth like http://i.imgur.com/6acwjoJ.jpg
Rearranged!
01:40:847 - 01:49:123 - really unsure about the 1/4 snapping here as the guitars seems so unclear to me. but it makes sense as simplification in gameplay so idk
Yes, simplification, and yes, guitars are unclear ;(

01:51:882 (1) - sliders in this part sound like they should all be snapped to 2/3 and not 3/4
Why the hell I had them as 3/4 to begin with?

01:52:227 (2) - should probably have nc to be consistent with the comboing of the following things // 01:57:744 - or not, seems you just don't want 1 object combos, so I guess it's okay
Yep...
02:00:158 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this one seems unintentional though comboing wise
Fixed
02:32:916 (4) - seems weird to break flow on this with how you usually utilize movement, how about ctrlg on 02:32:571 (3) - so the movement changes there instead? would make more sense considering things like 02:34:640 (1,2,3,4) -
Changed some additional stuff (ctrl+g the two previous sliders and swap position)

pretty enjoyable, liked the way you utilize angles and momentum
Thanks!

[complicada]
00:52:227 (1,2) - could be spaced more to make the 1/2 easier to read
01:40:847 (1) - you snapped these to the 2/3 drums on higher, so why not here too? 1/2 kinda seems to work with the guitarm but the 2/3 is more clear I think
actually having this part more like cslm did would probably fit better than 1/2 slider spam
01:50:502 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think you need 1/6 buzzsliders on such a simple difficulty
Changed all except the 1/6 sliders. I think they are simple enough

[simpatica]
ar seems a bit low ~³ would be nice
02:04:296 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - can you use more than only the center of the screen for so long lol
in general I think this difficulty could make more use of the playfield as it feels extremely focused on the center most of the time
Changed all. The centering thing was also annoying me for a long time too, but since no one commented about it, I never bothered hahaha

[regalada]
ar/od setting seems a bit weird would at least increase ar and maybe lower od
01:40:847 (1) - using .5ds after this seems bit low for readability as suddenly your 2/1 looks just like the 1/1 looked before, would suggest using like 0.7-0.8x?
02:04:296 (1) - should probably be spaced a bit more too
All done

[]

gap between the highest diffs seems a bit edgy with the difference between 5 note streams => 89 note streams and maybe also the jump pattern/spacing usage, not quite sure about that so idk what to do here for now
Nooooo, and here I was thinking about not having ENHIXXXXXXXXXXX. Okay, wait for me then! Please?

CSLM

1,058 posts

Joined May 2013

CSLM 2016-12-28T01:34:21+00:00

CaffeAmericano wrote:
La Dura CLSM

My main concern for this diff is that larger gap in clicking doesn’t match with larger distance. For example, 00:47:399 (2,3) - are 1/3 beats apart and has large jump (DS 5.13), while 00:47:744 (3,4) - are 2/3 beats apart and has smaller jump (DS 1.79). I think vocal actually is even stronger at 00:48:318 - . Few other examples: 00:53:951 (4) - This one doesn't plays so bad since the sliders are closer 00:56:020 (3) - 00:57:399 (7) - 01:07:054 (3) - . At least I found the kiai part way easier than earlier part because of this DS inconsistency.

00:27:744 (9) - NC? I want to leave 00:41:537 - in red :3

01:56:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Is it intentional that this has NC but 01:44:985 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - has not? Since 01:56:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - is not difficult to read, I am assuming NC is meant to highlight 01:56:709 (1) -, and if that’s the case, I think 01:45:675 (6) - should also have NC

Everything from Sonnyc and Lasse are fixed
Thx everyone for modding! :3

Aqui tienes a La Dura >:3

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CrystilonZ

1,559 posts

Joined January 2013

CrystilonZ 2017-01-08T08:54:39+00:00

as requested~

[Bipolar something]

00:40:847 (2,3) - tbh this feels somehow out of place. imo something like this may be better because it rhymes with 00:37:399 (1,2) - and emphasizes the section's end.. somehow
01:08:089 (7) - I know that you're following the flute in this part but, as it is now, it's hard to perceive. My suggestion would be something like this rhythm cuz (7) is the only slider with no flute on the head.
01:10:847 (6) - ^
etc etc
01:15:675 (5) - imo something like this fits better with the vocal. right now it's kinda unbalanced with 01:17:629 (4,5,6,7) - which are purely vocals.
01:54:181 - kinda sad that this on the slider end but if you want to keep the 1/4 gap consistent, this is fine too.
01:56:020 (1,2,3,4) - would be 200% more cooler if they were all circles xd. The map right now is kinda underwhelming considering the intensity imo.
02:01:537 (1,2,3,4) - I have a feeling that these aren't correctly snapped. Listen to this really really closely one more time
02:12:399 (2) - ctrl H this for a straight flow might be better imo. both aesthetics wise and gameplay wise
02:14:813 (1,2,3,4) - idk stacking is not the best idea. try something like this. It's better imo and is more consistent with 02:17:399 (3,4,5,6,7) -
03:06:364 (1,2,1,2,1) - this is really underwhelming relatively speaking xd. should be something equivalent or more intense than the previous pattern.
03:09:468 (1,2) - imo make these curvy instead of edgy so they transition into 03:09:813 (1) - more nicely.

good luck~

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2017-01-08T09:13:37+00:00

CrystilonZ wrote:
as requested~

[Bipolar something]
01:08:089 (7) - I know that you're following the flute in this part but, as it is now, it's hard to perceive. My suggestion would be something like this rhythm cuz (7) is the only slider with no flute on the head.
01:10:847 (6) - ^
etc etc
Hmm, not exactly the flute that I was following. My intention was to keep the 1/3 rhythm constantly
01:15:675 (5) - imo something like this fits better with the vocal. right now it's kinda unbalanced with 01:17:629 (4,5,6,7) - which are purely vocals.
Both rhythms seems good to me (your suggestion and my current) But I am keeping it this way for sake of consistency with my harder diff
01:54:181 - kinda sad that this on the slider end but if you want to keep the 1/4 gap consistent, this is fine too.
I know, but I didnt wanted to end the slider 1/4 before for this part :<
01:56:020 (1,2,3,4) - would be 200% more cooler if they were all circles xd. The map right now is kinda underwhelming considering the intensity imo.
Hahaha, but then it would be harder than my harder diff, wanted to avoid that xD
02:01:537 (1,2,3,4) - I have a feeling that these aren't correctly snapped. Listen to this really really closely one more time
What the hell was I thinking...? Thanks!

good luck~

Thank you!

The other parts are for gero!

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,061 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2017-01-15T09:54:39+00:00

hola, soy bakari

[General]

Check metadata with a BN who speaks Spanish? What I've found on the official website kind of disagrees with your metadata.
Artist/Romanised artist: appear to be correct as they are
Title/Romanised title: La viuda de Obrian
Any reason for CSLM's difficulty to have the intro mapped and ignore it in every other difficulty? That sort of breaks consistency and alienates this difficulty from the set.
Collab difficulty is the only one to have letterboxes disabled. It doesn't really matter since there are no breaks, but keeping values consistent would be a safer option.
Adding spinners would bring a bit more competition into the difficulties as spinners add some diversity into scores. Otherwise, we'll end up having a number of SS plays with the same score sharing the first place, which quite upsetting for some players.

[La Regalada]

00:27:744 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - the thing about consecutive circles is that the more of them you use, the harder it is to hit them accurately. Hence, using them in the intro in such a number is likely to trouble begnners. Consider adding a few sliders to spice things up and simplify rhythm.
00:44:296 (1) - the slider gets overlapped with score-metre. Consider placing the pattern higher to prevent that? minor
Note: 00:58:089 (1) - 03:02:227 (1) - same here
01:49:123 (1,1) - all the other circles with similar gapswere unstackde, any reason to use a stack specifically here? I'd either add a break or unstack to help players read the pattern.

Looks cool!

[La Simpatica]

01:38:433 (4,1,2) - any reason to lower spacing here? It is still readable but could cause a bit of confusion, so I'd stick to consistent DS values.
01:50:502 (2,3) - how about removing these two and using a break as what you have now feels like you ignore the guitar solo and map only the last stanza of it. ? Alternatively, you can map the whole part
02:30:502 (3,4) - try to use this kind of stacks in both parts of the kiai, rather than introducing them only on the second half of the kiai. This way it will feel much more consistent.
02:47:744 (3,4) - this felt pretty confusing given that there was a ton of 1/2 stacks before. Keep things simple and unstack for better readability?
Note: 03:07:399 (4) - and then you might want to unstack this one as well for consistency purposes.
03:04:985 (1,2) - minor - looks like you intended to make (2) blanket (1)'s tail. If that is so, it can be done in a neater way.

Well-polished difficulty. I like the way it follows the song while still being somewhat beginner-friendly.

[La Caprichosa]

01:18:433 - the drum here feels very strong, hence it would be quite a good idea to map it. Besides, the tail 01:18:548 - has no strong beat on it, so, ignoring the drum to have 01:18:548 - mapped feels quite weird.
01:37:744 (3) - overlapping with the scroe-metre. Moving it higher would prevent that.
01:41:364 (2,2,2) - try removing these, so there will be just sliders representing strong drums (1)s. This way you'll be able to give players a break from consistent tapping and work better with the drums.
02:02:916 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the spacing contrast is too intense, it would be better to use sliders at first, as it would be easier to read them. example
02:14:640 (1,2,3,4) - spacing changes of this kind within the same combo make your snapping hard to understand. Try to stick to regular DS within the same combo. After all, this is an [Advanced]/[Light Hard]
03:04:813 - die to the very strong drum beat here the 03:04:640 (2,3) - double feels quite confusing. Perhaps you could replace it with a 1/2 beat.

I feel uncomfortable with the spacing stuff, probably it would be better to leave it for harder difficulties. Apart from that it is a neat one.

[La Complicada]

01:50:502 (1,2,3,4) - there is no visible indications of these sliders having two reverses. How about something more readable? Example
02:24:985 (6,7) - they would feel a lot better if they weren' stacked with (5). This way, the strong sound on (6) would have some extra movement to it. So, either move the double or (5) somewhere.
Note: 02:36:882 (8,9,10) - same here. Since most of the stacks are doubles these triplets definitely don't fit in tht well.
03:01:537 (5) - minor - gets overlapped with the HP Bar.

Good job!

[La Dura CSLM]

00:14:525 (2,3) - 00:16:249 (8,9) - this kind of stacks can be misread as 1/6, hence you should either replace the 1/6 stack on 00:07:399 (6,7,8) - with a slider or avoid low spacing on the 1/3 patterns.
00:17:399 (3,4) - minor - any reason to introcude this kind of slidercurve specifically here? 00:19:468 (1) - or maybe you could explain this one? 00:21:537 (7) - 00:21:192 (6) - the music has no specific changes nor any vocalr or anything else that could justify these shape changes, it feels like you are running out of ideas and try to place sliders of random shapes, which gives a rather unpleasant impression. Stick to some certain shapes and follow through the whole part?
00:44:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - any specific reason to alter the spacing here? 00:47:744 (3,4,5,6,7) - or here? At first it seemed like the intensity of jumps was correlating with drums, for example 00:44:640 (2,3) - here, yet, you used practically regular DS on 00:45:675 (5,6) - and a very weak jump on 00:47:054 (1,2) - which didn't seem to fit with the idea. Is there some logic I fail to understand? If so, please explain. If there is no any reason, arranging the jumps to emphasize lyrics/drums better would be a good idea.
Note: 01:39:468 (1,2,3,4) - more slider spacing inconsistencies.
01:42:227 (3) - consider adding new combo as to separate this drum part from the previous one? Sounds like it is a completely new combo, actually.
Note: 01:44:985 (3) - 01:47:744 (3) - same.
02:56:020 (7) - add a new combo to give some extra warning about the antijumps used here? It should fit well with the drums as well as with the patterning.

Looks quite alright, though I felt like some patterns were quite random at times. Perhaps it's just a misunderstanding and you will clear it up. Though I'd recommend checking things once again with another modder

[La Bipolar Xanero]
Please mention that this a collab somewhere, the diffnames keep confusing me more and more, as I look through the editor and don't get to see the actual starrating. Something like commenting on the actual difficulty level of each and every difficulty in mapset somewhere in the creator's word would really help out.

00:39:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - shouldn't these be snapped to 1/6. There are a plenty of beats that are snapped off, yet, they use 1/3 or 1/6 in other difficulties. a picture. This goes for the whole part of the difficulty, which I believe to be mapped by Gero.
Note: same goes for the other parts. I am not really sure of why snapping went that way as I hear music snapped to 1/6 and 1/3 and the objects feel somewhat off.
01:09:698 (3) - how about shortening the slider and starting it on the white tick with the drums? example
Note: 01:12:456 (3) - the same would apply here.
01:40:847 (1,2) - try to avoid stacking these as previously you have used these stacks for 1/3 snapped beats and this could confuse it.
02:53:951 (1) - that was pretty much the only slider of that kind in the entire difficulty. That was rathre random than tricky or interesting. I'd try some more simplistic shape.
03:02:140 (4,1) - skins differ, with that in mind, it would be preferable to keep the reverse arrow clearly visible completely, as to ensure that every player will be able to read it.
03:04:640 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - lower the DS on these jumps and increas it on 03:06:364 (1,2,1,2,1) - as these are supported with drumns, unlike the previous one? Basically, it's the very simple scheme: louder music = bigger DS, quiter music = smaller DS.

And that is about it. I am still quite puzzled with snapping as I really don't get the reason why it was this way in the mentioned parts, apart from that it was quite alright. To be completely honest, I've liked the way your styles work together so much I've got a couple of ideas to try in my own maps.

[La Dulce Mary]

01:43:951 (2,3,4) - to contrast with the collab better this difficulty could have introduced the streams here. Remember, that to keep the difficulty progression you should make patterns harder throughout the set. this way longer streams following later (on 01:48:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) )will also feel a lot easier as well as players will be ready and even warmed up.
01:51:537 (4,1) - move them apart more just to keep the jumpy pattern you had on 01:50:502 (1,2,3,4).
02:20:675 (5,1) - perhaps you should place (1) somewhat closer, as it looks exactly like 02:19:640 (2,1) - so players will not misread it as a 1/1 gap.
Note: 02:23:433 (5,1) - 02:26:192 (5,1) - same here.
02:30:158 (4) - just to be consistent with the previous patterns try to Ctrl+G this slider. It will improve your flow.

I just tlove the kiai. Great job, I enjoyed it a lot!

What else could I expect? Maping classics, well done and with a good deal of effort and love put in it. Could be a bit more polished here and there, but there is nothing that would ruin the fun. Impressive.

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Best of luck!

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2017-01-15T11:32:59+00:00

Bakari wrote:
hola, soy bakari

[General]
Check metadata with a BN who speaks Spanish? What I've found on the official website kind of disagrees with your metadata.
Artist/Romanised artist: appear to be correct as they are
Title/Romanised title: La viuda de Obrian
In that same webpage, further down, it also state the song with the apostrophe.
From the back of the CD it also contains the apostrophe: https://puu.sh/tn038/c8c9b791cc.png sorry not so good quality
Any reason for CSLM's difficulty to have the intro mapped and ignore it in every other difficulty? That sort of breaks consistency and alienates this difficulty from the set.
To be honest, I tend to use a similar structure as CSLM (map the instrumental intro, add a break at first verses). But I didn't because initially I was too lazy to time the intro correctly, and then when I had a proper timing for it, I was too lazy to change the structure to my classical one
Collab difficulty is the only one to have letterboxes disabled. It doesn't really matter since there are no breaks, but keeping values consistent would be a safer option.
Oops, enabled now
Adding spinners would bring a bit more competition into the difficulties as spinners add some diversity into scores. Otherwise, we'll end up having a number of SS plays with the same score sharing the first place, which quite upsetting for some players.
I dont really like forcing my spinners ;(
[La Regalada]
00:27:744 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - the thing about consecutive circles is that the more of them you use, the harder it is to hit them accurately. Hence, using them in the intro in such a number is likely to trouble begnners. Consider adding a few sliders to spice things up and simplify rhythm.
Youre right, added a few sliders
00:44:296 (1) - the slider gets overlapped with score-metre. Consider placing the pattern higher to prevent that? minor
Note: 00:58:089 (1) - 03:02:227 (1) - same here
Moved them up a bit
01:49:123 (1,1) - all the other circles with similar gapswere unstackde, any reason to use a stack specifically here? I'd either add a break or unstack to help players read the pattern.
Hmm... unstacked

Looks cool!
[La Simpatica]
01:38:433 (4,1,2) - any reason to lower spacing here? It is still readable but could cause a bit of confusion, so I'd stick to consistent DS values.
My mistake, fixed
01:50:502 (2,3) - how about removing these two and using a break as what you have now feels like you ignore the guitar solo and map only the last stanza of it. ? Alternatively, you can map the whole part
But I like the way it currently is :<
02:30:502 (3,4) - try to use this kind of stacks in both parts of the kiai, rather than introducing them only on the second half of the kiai. This way it will feel much more consistent.
All my diffs I have tried to make the second kiai a bit different, guess this diff is way too different. Hope its okay enough for you
02:47:744 (3,4) - this felt pretty confusing given that there was a ton of 1/2 stacks before. Keep things simple and unstack for better readability?
Note: 03:07:399 (4) - and then you might want to unstack this one as well for consistency purposes.
Okay, unstacked
03:04:985 (1,2) - minor - looks like you intended to make (2) blanket (1)'s tail. If that is so, it can be done in a neater way.
I never do blankets... ;(

Well-polished difficulty. I like the way it follows the song while still being somewhat beginner-friendly.
[La Caprichosa]
01:18:433 - the drum here feels very strong, hence it would be quite a good idea to map it. Besides, the tail 01:18:548 - has no strong beat on it, so, ignoring the drum to have 01:18:548 - mapped feels quite weird.
Hmm, I wanted to keep the consistency with the harder diffs of following vocals. If I were to map the drums, I feel like it would be even more confusing
01:37:744 (3) - overlapping with the scroe-metre. Moving it higher would prevent that.
Okay
01:41:364 (2,2,2) - try removing these, so there will be just sliders representing strong drums (1)s. This way you'll be able to give players a break from consistent tapping and work better with the drums.
Removed!!
02:02:916 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the spacing contrast is too intense, it would be better to use sliders at first, as it would be easier to read them. example

02:14:640 (1,2,3,4) - spacing changes of this kind within the same combo make your snapping hard to understand. Try to stick to regular DS within the same combo. After all, this is an [Advanced]/[Light Hard]
Didnt used the same DS, but did lower, as the main reason I suddenly changed the DS was to avoid too many overlaps
03:04:813 - die to the very strong drum beat here the 03:04:640 (2,3) - double feels quite confusing. Perhaps you could replace it with a 1/2 beat.
Added a circle

I feel uncomfortable with the spacing stuff, probably it would be better to leave it for harder difficulties. Apart from that it is a neat one.
Yet it is only 0.3 stars higher than previous diff lol
[La Complicada]
01:50:502 (1,2,3,4) - there is no visible indications of these sliders having two reverses. How about something more readable? Example
Okay
02:24:985 (6,7) - they would feel a lot better if they weren' stacked with (5). This way, the strong sound on (6) would have some extra movement to it. So, either move the double or (5) somewhere.
Note: 02:36:882 (8,9,10) - same here. Since most of the stacks are doubles these triplets definitely don't fit in tht well.
Hmm keeping it the way it currently is, like it this way
03:01:537 (5) - minor - gets overlapped with the HP Bar.
Moved

Good job!

[La Bipolar Xanero]
Please mention that this a collab somewhere, the diffnames keep confusing me more and more, as I look through the editor and don't get to see the actual starrating. Something like commenting on the actual difficulty level of each and every difficulty in mapset somewhere in the creator's word would really help out.
Lol, okay, will make it more obvious on map's description.

00:39:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - shouldn't these be snapped to 1/6. There are a plenty of beats that are snapped off, yet, they use 1/3 or 1/6 in other difficulties. a picture. This goes for the whole part of the difficulty, which I believe to be mapped by Gero.
Note: same goes for the other parts. I am not really sure of why snapping went that way as I hear music snapped to 1/6 and 1/3 and the objects feel somewhat off.
Not my part, but Lol? Could this explain why I get so many 100s at these?

01:09:698 (3) - how about shortening the slider and starting it on the white tick with the drums? example
Note: 01:12:456 (3) - the same would apply here.
I like it the way it currently is better, I wanted to give a feeling as if it is dragging something...
01:40:847 (1,2) - try to avoid stacking these as previously you have used these stacks for 1/3 snapped beats and this could confuse it.
I believe this to be a high enough diff to actually pay attention to approach circles, so I think its fine

And that is about it. I am still quite puzzled with snapping as I really don't get the reason why it was this way in the mentioned parts, apart from that it was quite alright. To be completely honest, I've liked the way your styles work together so much I've got a couple of ideas to try in my own maps.
And thats why its a bipolar diff! Okno. ;<
[La Dulce Mary]
01:43:951 (2,3,4) - to contrast with the collab better this difficulty could have introduced the streams here. Remember, that to keep the difficulty progression you should make patterns harder throughout the set. this way longer streams following later (on 01:48:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) )will also feel a lot easier as well as players will be ready and even warmed up.
Your are right, this was something I have been pondering too. This happened because the collab was a late comer (This diff was finishe 2 years ago, and the collab just a week ago lol) So yeah, changed!
01:51:537 (4,1) - move them apart more just to keep the jumpy pattern you had on 01:50:502 (1,2,3,4).
Done!
02:20:675 (5,1) - perhaps you should place (1) somewhat closer, as it looks exactly like 02:19:640 (2,1) - so players will not misread it as a 1/1 gap.
Note: 02:23:433 (5,1) - 02:26:192 (5,1) - same here.
They were intentional!
02:30:158 (4) - just to be consistent with the previous patterns try to Ctrl+G this slider. It will improve your flow.
I like it the way it is :<

I just tlove the kiai. Great job, I enjoyed it a lot!
What else could I expect? Maping classics, well done and with a good deal of effort and love put in it. Could be a bit more polished here and there, but there is nothing that would ruin the fun. Impressive.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Thanks! Glad you liked it! ;D!

direday

188 posts

Joined February 2013

direday 2017-01-16T21:23:41+00:00

Hello! From my Queue.
Great song, kind of reminds me of Korpiklaani since both are folk rock

La Dulce Meryl

01:51:537 (4) - slider is broken here
Not much actually left to correct here so I'll just say my general thoughts:

01:07:054 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think this is too boring and can be changed to something more interesting and less linear
02:48:433 (1,3) - make those blanket 02:48:951 (2) - ?
Didn't find more =\

La Bipolar Xanero

There are tons of unsnapped objects here.

00:31:429 - Circle
00:32:808 - Circle
00:34:533 - Circle
00:35:912 - Circle
00:39:360 - Circle
00:39:705 - Circle
00:40:050 - Circle
00:40:395 - Circle
00:42:808 - Circle
00:45:222 - Circle
00:46:257 - Circle
00:47:291 - Circle
00:47:636 - Circle
00:47:981 - Circle
00:48:326 - Circle
00:50:050 - Circle
00:51:084 - Circle
00:52:808 - Circle
00:54:188 - Circle
01:20:739 - Circle
01:22:464 - Circle
01:22:808 - Circle
01:23:498 - Circle
01:25:222 - Circle
01:25:567 - Circle
01:27:291 - Circle
01:28:326 - Circle
01:29:705 - Circle
01:31:429 - Circle
01:32:808 - Circle
01:33:153 - Circle
01:34:188 - Circle
01:34:533 - Circle
01:35:912 - Circle
01:36:602 - Circle
01:39:015 - Circle
01:39:360 - Circle

I think Bakari already wrote about it so yeah, they should be snapped.

Also what's up with those red timing points in the begining of the song?

00:44:123 (7) - Why hold slider? Music has nothing to make you want to map it like this.
00:53:606 (5) - ^
01:06:939 (4) - This should start at white tick if you map vocals here.
01:09:698 (3) - ^
01:12:456 (3) - ^ etc, you get the point.

La Dura CSLM

Best diff stylistically.

00:50:387 (2,4) - are those needed?
01:06:249 (10) - make this overlap with slider like 01:05:905 (8,9) - cos' they sound the same.
01:17:284 (10,1) - ^
01:29:813 (5) - bad placement. Try to rearrange combo a bit to make space for the circle
01:40:847 (1,2) - I almost went deaf here cos' of volume contrast. Your hitsounds are already loud enough and you put them to 70%. Consider lowering volume here.
02:13:951 (7) - NC?
02:22:744 (7,8) - change those into circles like 02:20:158 (7,8,9,10) - ? Also NCs are inconsistent in this part.
02:50:502 (9) - make it look at (8)?

Didn't find anything in other diffs.
Also your diffs have diffent ending time, but only slightly so guess it's ok.

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2017-01-17T01:47:20+00:00

direday wrote:
Hello! From my Queue.
Great song, kind of reminds me of Korpiklaani since both are folk rock
Ah! Glad you liked it!

La Dulce Meryl

01:51:537 (4) - slider is broken here
Ahh oops!

Not much actually left to correct here so I'll just say my general thoughts:
01:07:054 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think this is too boring and can be changed to something more interesting and less linear
Its okay, I like it the way it is now
02:48:433 (1,3) - make those blanket 02:48:951 (2) - ?
Was not really aiming for a blanket

Didn't find more =\

La Bipolar Xanero

Also what's up with those red timing points in the begining of the song?
Unstable timing at the beginning, thats why I was too lazy to map the intro originally xD
01:06:939 (4) - This should start at white tick if you map vocals here.
01:09:698 (3) - ^
01:12:456 (3) - ^ etc, you get the point.
Was really going for the flutes, and a "dragging" feeling

Didn't find anything in other diffs.
Also your diffs have diffent ending time, but only slightly so guess it's ok.

Thank you so much!

Zallies

499 posts

Joined April 2015

Zallies 2017-01-17T10:03:49+00:00

M4M
~thanks for remembering XD i now to make a mods
sorry im a beginner modder, so ill do my best to mod
also dont be mad at my modding skills zzz

[General]

widescreen -> only need for SB. so uncheck
do you really need the letterbox during breaks? just sayin
i know theres more in the tags not just gd's name

[La Bipolar Xanero]

00:38:433 (1,2) - i feel this is a new pattern, you did only make a pattern, copy paste and 180* but this song its a new sound (like i mean the music change and the pattern is still the same af) and i know its emphasis but the flow is bad
00:41:537 - and this part isnt the same from the other part. well idk you map XD
00:46:364 (4) - the last beat was hit-clap, so its important to click this part. dont let the BN modders do the same mods xx
00:53:606 (5,6) - this is really weird, suddenly click the other circle
00:55:675 (2,3) - this too are close ds, but 00:56:365 (4,1) - this arent so close
00:59:122 (4,1) - idk ^
01:00:502 (8) - last is clickable
01:06:939 (4) - SO WEIRD, do you have a good reason about this? AND so on
the last part is really 01:17:859 (5) - clickable
01:38:089 (1,2) - too close eh
02:39:985 (4,1) - i gotta say this, the line of my next circle is weird
02:41:882 - THE IMPORTANT BEAT, please dont ignore the hit-clap
03:01:450 (4,1) - idk is this really good?

[La Dura CSLM]

00:01:506 (6) - nc or not? and so on
00:17:399 (3,4) -
00:17:284 (2,3,2,3,2,3,4,5,1,2) - just make sure ALL the ds are good
00:59:123 (4) - y not straight instead?
01:28:433 (1,2,3,4,5) - not the same on 2,3,4. 5 is not good
02:26:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - good pattern or not? (sorry for rude mod)
02:31:020 (7) - well everyone has the high ds, but this isnt.
02:38:433 (4,5) - making sure that all the stacked (not stacked) are ds'ed

[La Regalada]

Must check the Distance Snap

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2017-01-18T10:07:57+00:00

Zallies wrote:
M4M
~thanks for remembering XD i now to make a mods
sorry im a beginner modder, so ill do my best to mod
also dont be mad at my modding skills zzz

[General]
widescreen -> only need for SB. so uncheck
Ahh it doesnt really matter really. I was told to activate them all before, so... yeah.
do you really need the letterbox during breaks? just sayin
Samewise as above
i know theres more in the tags not just gd's name
Hmm... didnt understand what you mean?
[La Bipolar Xanero]
00:55:675 (2,3) - this too are close ds, but 00:56:365 (4,1) - this arent so close
00:59:122 (4,1) - idk ^
I dont see whats the problem with them being too close, my intention was to give some very relaxed part before the higher spaced doubles
01:00:502 (8) - last is clickable
And whats wrong with using a slider end?
01:06:939 (4) - SO WEIRD, do you have a good reason about this? AND so on
Yep! Intentional!
the last part is really 01:17:859 (5) - clickable
Same as prior comment
02:39:985 (4,1) - i gotta say this, the line of my next circle is weird
Hmm... what line?
02:41:882 - THE IMPORTANT BEAT, please dont ignore the hit-clap
Its fine the way it is.
[La Regalada]
Must check the Distance Snap
Only found one issue that was off by 0.02x, Fixed...

Thanks for the mod!

Zallies

499 posts

Joined April 2015

Zallies 2017-01-19T08:36:15+00:00

im the bez modder

CSLM

1,058 posts

Joined May 2013

CSLM 2017-01-20T22:11:21+00:00

Bakari wrote:
hola, soy bakari Lo se, hola Bakari

[La Dura CSLM]
00:14:525 (2,3) - 00:16:249 (8,9) - this kind of stacks can be misread as 1/6, hence you should either replace the 1/6 stack on 00:07:399 (6,7,8) - with a slider or avoid low spacing on the 1/3 patterns.
00:17:399 (3,4) - minor - any reason to introcude this kind of slidercurve specifically here? 00:19:468 (1) - or maybe you could explain this one? 00:21:537 (7) - 00:21:192 (6) - the music has no specific changes nor any vocalr or anything else that could justify these shape changes, it feels like you are running out of ideas and try to place sliders of random shapes, which gives a rather unpleasant impression. Stick to some certain shapes and follow through the whole part? 00:17:399 (3,4) - have a change of sound, that makes a nice effect to the shape. 00:19:468 (1) - no, but 00:19:813 - has a abrupt change of pitch that makes the shape plays fine. And 00:21:192 (6,7,8) - you're completly right, run out of ideas and make random shapes lel. Fixed~
00:44:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - any specific reason to alter the spacing here? 00:47:744 (3,4,5,6,7) - or here? At first it seemed like the intensity of jumps was correlating with drums, for example 00:44:640 (2,3) - here, yet, you used practically regular DS on 00:45:675 (5,6) - and a very weak jump on 00:47:054 (1,2) - which didn't seem to fit with the idea. Is there some logic I fail to understand? If so, please explain. If there is no any reason, arranging the jumps to emphasize lyrics/drums better would be a good idea.
Note: 01:39:468 (1,2,3,4) - more slider spacing inconsistencies. Following the flute's intensity, so it's fine for me
01:42:227 (3) - consider adding new combo as to separate this drum part from the previous one? Sounds like it is a completely new combo, actually.
Note: 01:44:985 (3) - 01:47:744 (3) - same.
02:56:020 (7) - add a new combo to give some extra warning about the antijumps used here? It should fit well with the drums as well as with the patterning. No, I don't want NC unconsistency

Looks quite alright, though I felt like some patterns were quite random at times. Perhaps it's just a misunderstanding and you will clear it up. Though I'd recommend checking things once again with another modder
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

direday wrote:
Hello! From my Queue.
Great song, kind of reminds me of Korpiklaani since both are folk rock

La Dura CSLM

Best diff stylistically.
00:50:387 (2,4) - are those needed?
01:06:249 (10) - make this overlap with slider like 01:05:905 (8,9) - cos' they sound the same. I want them with no overlap, for variation
01:17:284 (10,1) - ^ Same
01:29:813 (5) - bad placement. Try to rearrange combo a bit to make space for the circle The overlap it's on purpose, for the flute's intensity
01:40:847 (1,2) - I almost went deaf here cos' of volume contrast. Your hitsounds are already loud enough and you put them to 70%. Consider lowering volume here.
02:13:951 (7) - NC? The combo it's not so big, so, adding a NC would make unconsistency
02:22:744 (7,8) - change those into circles like 02:20:158 (7,8,9,10) - ? Also NCs are inconsistent in this part.
02:50:502 (9) - make it look at (8)? No, it seems totally for me

Didn't find anything in other diffs.
Also your diffs have diffent ending time, but only slightly so guess it's ok.

Zallies wrote:
M4M
~thanks for remembering XD i now to make a mods
sorry im a beginner modder, so ill do my best to mod
also dont be mad at my modding skills zzz

[La Dura CSLM]
00:01:506 (6) - nc or not? and so on Nop, it would make unconsistency
00:17:399 (3,4) -
00:17:284 (2,3,2,3,2,3,4,5,1,2) - just make sure ALL the ds are good
00:59:123 (4) - y not straight instead?
01:28:433 (1,2,3,4,5) - not the same on 2,3,4. 5 is not good Flute uwu
02:26:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - good pattern or not? (sorry for rude mod) Really good one if you ask me
02:31:020 (7) - well everyone has the high ds, but this isnt.
02:38:433 (4,5) - making sure that all the stacked (not stacked) are ds'ed

no reply = y'know
Thanks everyone for modding!

Una que esta muy dura

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Halliday

181 posts

Joined July 2015

Halliday 2017-02-17T02:11:27+00:00

Hola o/

Adoro este mapa, y quiero poner mi granito de arena (en forma de mod) para ayudar.

La Regalada
Reconsidera los NC's, yo digo que quedarían mejor si los pones como lo hiciste en La Simpatica, NCs cada 8 beats o así.
01:02:916 (1) - Que tal si haces esto en lugar de ese slider?

Algo así como lo hiciste en 02:26:364 -
01:17:054 (1) - Remplazalo por dos circulos?

La Simpatica
Muy buena diff <3
Quizas solo cambia el aspecto de este slider 03:05:675 (2) - ? Luce raro con respecto al anterior

La Caprichosa
02:21:537 (3,1,2) - Que no se solapen?
No encontré ninguna otra cosa objetable, está muy cool xD

La Complicada
01:20:158 (1) - Yo digo que se vería mejor si lo movieras justo arriba de 7, así:

La Dulce Mery
Escuché la cancion de aqui 01:42:571 - a aca 01:42:916 - con atención y oigo que la guitarra solo toca una nota larga al principio, así que creo que deberías hacer un pequeño corte en el stream en esa parte.
Esto funcionaría:

Lo mismo para 01:41:192 - , 01:43:951 -, 01:46:709 - y 01:48:089 - . Me parece que las primeras cuatro notas de esas series de streams están sobremapeadas.
02:34:123 (4,5) - El angulo de este salto talvez sea demasiado ancho, podrías mejor darle ctrl+G a 02:34:296 (5,6) - , acomodarlo un poquito, y quedaría más comodo. Me refiero a algo como:

02:31:364 (4,5) - Lo mismo aca, unos saltos en zigzag invirtiendo 5 y 6 serían más comodos xD

La Bipolar Xanero
Ese estilo curvadito/simetrico de Gero asdfghj

Inconfundible <3
No encontré nada pero quería decir eso xD

Suerte! Y que no se vaya a graveyard!

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Luvdic

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Luvdic 2017-02-17T10:58:31+00:00

HallidayASR wrote:
Hola o/

Adoro este mapa, y quiero poner mi granito de arena (en forma de mod) para ayudar.

La Regalada
Reconsidera los NC's, yo digo que quedarían mejor si los pones como lo hiciste en La Simpatica, NCs cada 8 beats o así.
Lo dejare asi por ahora :<

01:02:916 (1) - Que tal si haces esto en lugar de ese slider?

Algo así como lo hiciste en 02:26:364 -
Lo dejare asi por ahora, ese ritmo que me recomiendas lo quiero es para despues

01:17:054 (1) - Remplazalo por dos circulos?
Ok!

La Simpatica
Muy buena diff <3
Quizas solo cambia el aspecto de este slider 03:05:675 (2) - ? Luce raro con respecto al anterior
Las dos deberian ser copias y pegas, pero igual los suavice un poquito!

La Caprichosa
02:21:537 (3,1,2) - Que no se solapen?
Ok!
No encontré ninguna otra cosa objetable, está muy cool xD

La Complicada
01:20:158 (1) - Yo digo que se vería mejor si lo movieras justo arriba de 7, así:

No exactamente arriba, pero si lo movi un poquito

La Dulce Mery
Escuché la cancion de aqui 01:42:571 - a aca 01:42:916 - con atención y oigo que la guitarra solo toca una nota larga al principio, así que creo que deberías hacer un pequeño corte en el stream en esa parte.
Esto funcionaría:

Si bien es cierto lo que dices, lo hice como esta ahora para simplificar los ritmos. A este map, a pesar de ser 1/3 y 1/4, no queria enfocarlo en ritmos complicados sino mas bien en patrones que van para alla y para aca, no se si me entiendas, pero es mi forma de expresar lo loca que esta mery

Lo mismo para 01:41:192 - , 01:43:951 -, 01:46:709 - y 01:48:089 - . Me parece que las primeras cuatro notas de esas series de streams están sobremapeadas.
02:34:123 (4,5) - El angulo de este salto talvez sea demasiado ancho, podrías mejor darle ctrl+G a 02:34:296 (5,6) - , acomodarlo un poquito, y quedaría más comodo. Me refiero a algo como:

02:31:364 (4,5) - Lo mismo aca, unos saltos en zigzag invirtiendo 5 y 6 serían más comodos xD
Los dejare asi, son adredes

La Dulce Mery
Ese estilo curvadito/simetrico de Gero asdfghj

Inconfundible <3
No encontré nada pero quería decir eso xD
Y algo caracteristico de mi estilo? :<?

Suerte! Y que no se vaya a graveyard!

Intentare que no se vaya al grave! Y muchisimas gracias por el mod!

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2017-04-10T11:08:52+00:00

Espera, ¿Qué?

Gonzvlo

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Joined January 2010

Gonzvlo 2017-06-14T09:49:26+00:00

Xanandra wrote:
Intentare que no se vaya al grave! Y muchisimas gracias por el mod!

Luvdic

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Topic Starter

Luvdic 2017-06-14T09:56:05+00:00

Gonzvlo wrote:
Xanandra wrote:
Intentare que no se vaya al grave! Y muchisimas gracias por el mod!

Xanandra wrote:
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Halliday

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Halliday 2017-06-15T20:31:45+00:00

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