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Luvdic
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sieg
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Gonzvlo
Ay pero que horrible. Te dejo una estrella por pena :(
jesse1412
SPOILER
2015-06-06 20:21 jesus1412: no wonder I was confused
2015-06-06 20:21 jesus1412: I opened the wrong song in edit
2015-06-06 20:21 Xanandra: hahahaha
2015-06-06 20:21 jesus1412: spent a good minute looking for sections
2015-06-06 20:21 jesus1412: 01:19:125 (8) -
2015-06-06 20:22 jesus1412: move that 1 more tick along the time line
2015-06-06 20:22 jesus1412: and maybe redesign the parts after it to make that work better
2015-06-06 20:22 Xanandra: you mean to move it to 01:19:240 - ?
2015-06-06 20:22 jesus1412: yep
2015-06-06 20:23 jesus1412: 01:49:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - this stream is really awkward
2015-06-06 20:23 jesus1412: might want to redesign it
2015-06-06 20:23 Xanandra: hmm
2015-06-06 20:23 jesus1412: maybe start out coming more to the right side
2015-06-06 20:23 jesus1412: rather than up
2015-06-06 20:24 Xanandra: Oh
2015-06-06 20:24 Xanandra: Thats kinda my style, going in the wrong direction with the patterns :(
2015-06-06 20:24 Xanandra: But interesting thing you said about (8)
2015-06-06 20:24 jesus1412: seemed to sound okay when you moved it along too
2015-06-06 20:24 jesus1412: and it would play better
2015-06-06 20:24 jesus1412: well that's my opinion
2015-06-06 20:24 jesus1412: 01:52:228 (2,3,4) -
2015-06-06 20:25 jesus1412: these triples
2015-06-06 20:25 jesus1412: I'm sure you can spot them all yourself
2015-06-06 20:25 jesus1412: but imo you should make it so that they flow into the next slider rather than out of the first
2015-06-06 20:25 jesus1412: hard to describe
2015-06-06 20:25 jesus1412: ie instead of this http://jesse1412.s-ul.eu/jmJS9AUn
2015-06-06 20:26 Xanandra: hi jesse :$:$:$:$:$:
2015-06-06 20:26 jesus1412: make it more like this http://jesse1412.s-ul.eu/whUA61wV
2015-06-06 20:26 jesus1412: (without the shitty re-shaping)
2015-06-06 20:26 Xanandra: okay
2015-06-06 20:27 Xanandra: I also was doubting about that
2015-06-06 20:27 Xanandra: I think Ill probably do what youre suggesting xD
2015-06-06 20:27 jesus1412: sure sure
2015-06-06 20:27 jesus1412: 02:19:470 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-06-06 20:27 Xanandra: Noooo not those jumps
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: I'd recommend ctrl+G on every pair of the 2nd set
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: for instance gtrl G these 02:19:470 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: oops
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: 02:19:987 (1,2) - these*
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: and these 02:20:332 (3,4) -
2015-06-06 20:28 jesus1412: and these 02:20:677 (5,1) -
2015-06-06 20:29 jesus1412: I'm not sure if it would fix it
2015-06-06 20:29 jesus1412: but the first set were really awkward because I didn't know the rhythm
2015-06-06 20:29 Xanandra: Those, Ill think about it
2015-06-06 20:29 Xanandra: I really like it the way it is
2015-06-06 20:29 jesus1412: so it's ideal to find a way to make it more obvious for at least the first set of them
2015-06-06 20:29 jesus1412: maybe smaller jumps even
2015-06-06 20:29 Xanandra: Yeah, but at a second play, it woulld be fine
2015-06-06 20:30 jesus1412: heh no one likes having to remember stuff but that's up to you
2015-06-06 20:30 jesus1412: 02:56:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
2015-06-06 20:30 Xanandra: in fact, my maps usually has quite a the repetitive rhythms hahaha
2015-06-06 20:30 jesus1412: that stream is just unfollowable for me
2015-06-06 20:30 jesus1412: maybe you need someone better to give it a shot
2015-06-06 20:30 Xanandra: noioooooo not those streams
2015-06-06 20:30 Xanandra: Hahahah
2015-06-06 20:30 jesus1412: rest is okay
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Okoratu
wait what how did this end up being a vote LOL
Topic Starter
Luvdic

Okoratu wrote:

wait what how did this end up being a vote LOL
So you prefer Alma Echeregay, interesting girl, too bad she became nuts later on
Okoratu
It's been long since i have been this confused
Topic Starter
Luvdic
Its okay, my bad. Its just that the polls have been up for a very long time, and no one voted so far, until you posted here. I just assumed it was you. Sorry for assuming things incorrectly.

Have a nice day.

:)

pd. have a kudosu for all the inconveniences I have caused.
pd2. Yes, I know I shouldn't, but I cant help it.
pd3. Please be merciful with me if Im to get punished
pd4. I love confusing people
Okoratu
You're somewhat awesome, will this be completed anytime soon?
Spork Lover
From #modhelp :) Glad I could help!

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13:21 Xanandra: hello
13:21 Xanandra: also, if whether I should make alma harder or not to make the spread more even :(
13:21 Xanandra: Im asking because the star ratings could be wrong sometimes :(
13:21 Spork Lover: Erm
13:22 Spork Lover: In 3/4's in the azaak diff some sections SHOULD be more spaced imo :3
13:22 Spork Lover: 02:31:022 (6,7,8,9,10,1) -
13:22 Spork Lover: I'm talking about sections like this one
13:22 Spork Lover: 02:33:780 (6,7,8,9,10,1) -
13:22 Xanandra: Oh...
13:23 Xanandra: I tried before, and it made star ratings jump to 3.8 hahaha
13:23 Xanandra: so I stacked them instead
13:23 Spork Lover: Either space the section itself a bit more, or space the notes a bit :p
13:23 Spork Lover: But everything before that is crazy to space more
13:24 Spork Lover: I think it'd make it way too hard to play for a typical hard/light insane player
13:24 Xanandra: wait
13:24 Xanandra: could you elaborate a little bit more on what you mean with spacing more?
13:24 Spork Lover: Since you work with doubles a lot
13:24 Spork Lover: Erm
13:24 Spork Lover: Distance between
13:24 Xanandra: I dont think I am thinking it the same way as you lol
13:24 Spork Lover: 02:33:780 (6,7) -
13:25 Spork Lover: And 02:34:125 (8,9,10) -
13:25 Spork Lover: Is low
13:25 Spork Lover: Either that, or split the triple to add jumps instead
13:25 Spork Lover: Like a triangle pattern or something :D
13:25 Spork Lover: Lemme send a pic
13:26 Xanandra: but... as I said... those sections I cant touch because it will skyrocket the star ratings to 3.8 stars
13:26 Xanandra: and a GD of 4 stars is coming up
13:26 Spork Lover: Oh :o
13:26 Spork Lover: Erm
13:26 Xanandra: it will make spread even less even
13:26 Xanandra: I also has problem with the Alma diff
13:27 Xanandra: where the star ratings diff between alma and julie is a mere 0.4 stars
13:27 Spork Lover: Lemme send a screenshot: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4609924
13:27 Xanandra: But somehow I still feel that alma is way more harder than julie, yet the star ratings are saying otherwise
13:27 Spork Lover: This was a pattern, but if you don't want it to be 3,7-ish stars I think the diff is fine as it is
13:27 Xanandra: thus Im asking if I should increase the alma diff a little, and probably azaak too while at that but not that much
13:28 Spork Lover: That one pattern made it go up to 3,38 instead of 3,33 btw
13:28 Xanandra: yeah, that pattern will make the star ratings skyrokect to 3.8 :(
13:29 Spork Lover: Yeah
13:29 Xanandra: yeah but only changed it in one place
13:29 Spork Lover: Yeah I get ya
13:29 Xanandra: make the change in the whole section and it will add up
13:29 Spork Lover: Alma?
13:29 Spork Lover: Is the next one?
13:32 Xanandra: and its not only in the kiai, ill have to do something like that too on to keep consistency
13:32 Xanandra: yeah alma
13:32 Xanandra: but youll have to compare it with julie too
13:32 Spork Lover: Erm
13:32 Spork Lover: The spacing is very high already
13:32 Spork Lover: So adding a bit more notes would be the way to go
13:32 Xanandra: So you agree that I shou8ld make Alma harder?
13:33 Spork Lover: In some sections yes
13:33 Spork Lover: 02:19:987 (7,8) -
13:33 Spork Lover: After slider 8 should be a single tap imo
13:33 Spork Lover: It feels a bit empty imo
13:34 Spork Lover: Occurs a few times
13:34 Spork Lover: Lemme check before kiai if there are sections where you can allow to add more stuff
13:34 Xanandra: But... have you even checked Julie yet....?
13:35 Spork Lover: Nope 1 sec
13:36 Xanandra: My doubts lies more within if the current diffs is spread evenly
13:36 Xanandra: Not how to make them harder....
13:36 Spork Lover: Yeah Julie has lower spacing, but more spaced single taps
13:36 Spork Lover: Which is why it's fairly close to Alma's diff
13:36 Spork Lover: :p
13:36 Spork Lover: *-wise
13:37 Spork Lover: 'Cause you make a few stacks on Alma, which you make spaced taps on Julie
13:37 Spork Lover: If you either remove the stacks, or add stacks on the same spots as on the conresponding difficulty, I think the spread will feel more natural
13:38 Spork Lover: corresponding*
13:38 Spork Lover: 01:12:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
13:38 Spork Lover: On Julie, this stack is one of the diff boosters
13:39 Xanandra: oh...
13:39 Xanandra: all those circles...
13:39 Xanandra: how come I didnt see them before...
13:39 Spork Lover: Yeah consider either stacking a bit or make a slider
13:39 Spork Lover: If that's what you wanna do :)
13:41 Xanandra: okay
13:41 Xanandra: thanks
13:41 Xanandra: have to go for now
13:41 Xanandra: sorry
13:41 Xanandra: and thanks for your time
13:41 Xanandra: feel free to post in the forums
13:41 Xanandra: Ill give you kudosu when I come back
13:41 Spork Lover: Aight np man
Ireiisu
Hi , here's a mod for M4M

La Regalada
  1. AIMod:01:26:022 (1) - Offscreen
  2. AR 1 seems too low for a 1.49 star map
  3. add a circle on 02:20:504 and 02:26:022
  4. overlap 02:42:918 (1) on 02:44:987 (4) and the straighten out the triangle ( or if you don't want to overlap it , make 02:44:297 (3,4) on the same x-axis and leave 02:42:918 (1) as it is)
La Complicada
  1. Check AiMod - a lot of ends not snapped
  2. 01:53:263 (5) - NC
  3. 01:53:608 (6,7) - seems to be a bit more closer than the others (01:52:228 (2,3) etc )
  4. 01:54:642 (9) - NC (01:58:780 (5) - 02:00:160 (9) - should be NC)
  5. It feels empty , put more on 1/2 ticks or more sliders , you seem to just follow the instrument more then the vocals , same goes to some other difficulties , try and have more circles on 1/2 especially for 3 stars and above
  6. 03:04:815 (6) - NC , 03:04:987 (1) - remove NC ,03:05:332 (2) - NC (not really important)
  7. 03:09:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern seems a bit plain , maybe rotate 03:09:125 (1,2) - a bit

La Dulce Mery
  1. Some jumps are really really extreme and doesn't really fit with the rest of the map , either make the map harder or tone down some jumps :
    02:04:815 (4,5) - the first part its just close single taps but then there's a sudden jump , followed by some small jumps.
  2. 01:58:091 (5) - this should be a NC; the pattern is slider then 1/3 circles then another set(nc)
    02:00:849 (1) - the NC here is a bit weird ^
Sorry the mod is a bit short
Most of the map should be fine , its pretty unique actually
good luck ^^
Topic Starter
Luvdic

shadowneko_1 wrote:

Hi , here's a mod for M4M

La Regalada
  1. AIMod:01:26:022 (1) - Offscreen Changed
  2. AR 1 seems too low for a 1.49 star map Will consider it
  3. add a circle on 02:20:504 and 02:26:022 Goes against the rhythm I want to implement in this part
  4. overlap 02:42:918 (1) on 02:44:987 (4) and the straighten out the triangle ( or if you don't want to overlap it , make 02:44:297 (3,4) on the same x-axis and leave 02:42:918 (1) as it is) Intentional


La Complicada
  1. Check AiMod - a lot of ends not snapped Ah, I thought I fixed it already, thanks!
  2. 01:53:263 (5) - NC
  3. 01:53:608 (6,7) - seems to be a bit more closer than the others (01:52:228 (2,3) etc ) Hmm but it isnt... haha Visuall effects
  4. 01:54:642 (9) - NC (01:58:780 (5) - 02:00:160 (9) - should be NC)
  5. It feels empty , put more on 1/2 ticks or more sliders , you seem to just follow the instrument more then the vocals , same goes to some other difficulties , try and have more circles on 1/2 especially for 3 stars and above
  6. 03:04:815 (6) - NC , 03:04:987 (1) - remove NC ,03:05:332 (2) - NC (not really important)
  7. 03:09:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern seems a bit plain , maybe rotate 03:09:125 (1,2) - a bit Intentional
All NC stuff done, I think

La Dulce Mery
  1. Some jumps are really really extreme and doesn't really fit with the rest of the map , either make the map harder or tone down some jumps : Intentional
    02:04:815 (4,5) - the first part its just close single taps but then there's a sudden jump , followed by some small jumps. Intentional
  2. 01:58:091 (5) - this should be a NC; the pattern is slider then 1/3 circles then another set(nc)
    02:00:849 (1) - the NC here is a bit weird ^ Already discussed about this in a previous mod, and I agreed with him, thus the way it currently is
Sorry the mod is a bit short
Most of the map should be fine , its pretty unique actually
good luck ^^
Thanks a lot!
[Yue]
Sabes que siempre me gustó este mapa y canción <3
Ahí te dejo una estrella!
ProfessionalBox
Hello! My end of the m4m


General

  1. BG resolution isn't supported. Change it to 1366x768 or 1066x768
  2. Conflicting countdown and timing points in CSLM diff



La Regalda

  1. 00:30:504 (1,2,3,4) - Consider turning these into 2 sliders instead for variety, since the part has only circles at the moment
  2. 01:20:160 (6) - New combo
  3. 01:21:539 (1) - Remove new combo

La Simpatica

  1. 01:04:987 (4) - New combo
  2. 01:13:263 (5) - New combo
  3. 01:14:642 (9) - New combo
  4. 01:16:022 (1) - Remove NC, you might want to go through the difficulty yourself to see if there are any other since they are so easy to fix. I won't point these out anymore
  5. 01:39:470 (1,2) - Spacing inconsistency

La Caphricosa

  1. Good job here, couldn't find anything to point out

La Complicada

  1. 01:07:746 (7) - Consider adding a NC to avoid such high combo numbers
  2. 01:10:504 (7) - Here aswell (I hate how this is turning into a NC mod but goddamn your style is so clean)
  3. 01:16:251 (5) - ^
  4. 01:39:470 (8) - ^
  5. 02:37:228 (10) - You should definetly stack this on top of 02:37:401 (1) - instead for consistency

La Dura CLSM

  1. 01:31:192 (1) - I think you could improve this slider a bit by doing this
  2. 01:39:468 (9) - Consider NC since the combo is getting past 10 here
  3. 01:39:123 (8,9,10,11,12) - The same slider improvement can be done to all of these
  4. 01:50:675 (2,3,4) - Remake the entire rhythm of this section into this to fit the guitar much better.
  5. 02:58:433 (9) - Consider NC here aswell
  6. 03:01:192 (9) - ^

La Dulce Mery

  1. 00:38:780 (2,3) - Are you sure you stacked this the way you wanted to? It's a bit different from the other stacks so just making sure
  2. 02:19:815 - I feel like the empty space here is eats away the fun intensitivity that this part is supposed to bring. Even though the melody isnt on this tick there is still the drum and therefore you should add a circle here.
  3. 02:22:573 - ^
  4. 02:25:332 - ^

That's it for the mod. Hope it helped and good luck with the set :)
Topic Starter
Luvdic

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Hello! My end of the m4m

General

  1. BG resolution isn't supported. Change it to 1366x768 or 1066x768 It is alright, it is supported, osu! just adds letterboxing/crops for which is fine for me
  2. Conflicting countdown and timing points in CSLM diff Ill leave this to CSLM discretion to change it or not. Its fine for me to have it differently

La Regalda

  1. 00:30:504 (1,2,3,4) - Consider turning these into 2 sliders instead for variety, since the part has only circles at the moment Intentional, youll see that starting at 00:41:539 - are pure sliders
  2. 01:20:160 (6) - New combo
  3. 01:21:539 (1) - Remove new combo

La Simpatica

  1. 01:04:987 (4) - New combo
  2. 01:13:263 (5) - New combo
  3. 01:14:642 (9) - New combo
  4. 01:16:022 (1) - Remove NC, you might want to go through the difficulty yourself to see if there are any other since they are so easy to fix. I won't point these out anymore Noooooo, those are my weakness! I depend on mods to fix them! :(
  5. 01:39:470 (1,2) - Spacing inconsistency Nice catch

La Caphricosa

  1. Good job here, couldn't find anything to point out

La Complicada

  1. 01:07:746 (7) - Consider adding a NC to avoid such high combo numbers
  2. 01:10:504 (7) - Here aswell (I hate how this is turning into a NC mod but goddamn your style is so clean)
  3. 01:16:251 (5) - ^
  4. 01:39:470 (8) - ^
  5. 02:37:228 (10) - You should definetly stack this on top of 02:37:401 (1) - instead for consistency Youll see that these triple stacked replaces the repeat sliders like 02:20:389 (9) - and youll see that everything makes sense when compared to the previous chorus, as in the equivalent of this triple is 02:25:849 (9) - and it is not stacked to 02:26:366 (1) -

La Dulce Mery

  1. 00:38:780 (2,3) - Are you sure you stacked this the way you wanted to? It's a bit different from the other stacks so just making sure Yes, it is as intended
  2. 02:19:815 - I feel like the empty space here is eats away the fun intensitivity that this part is supposed to bring. Even though the melody isnt on this tick there is still the drum and therefore you should add a circle here.
  3. 02:22:573 - ^
  4. 02:25:332 - ^ It's like the calm before actually going nuts. I don't know, it's how I wanted to express this part. Hope you understand

That's it for the mod. Hope it helped and good luck with the set :)
All NC suggestions applied

Thanks for the mod!
-M4x
Hey Xanandra,

my m4m:

[La Dura CSLM]

General things:

You should check AImod on not snapped objects! And compare your timing to the other diffs.
I think you should talk to Xanandra about the timing issue.


In my opinion it's kinda weird that you put a break at the point where the other diffs just started. But I guess it's ok tho.

Mod:

For the whole 1/3 part, I recommend to keep 00:16:251 (8,9) - these "semi stacks" consistant. By that I mean changing 00:14:527 (2,3) - all of the 1/3 jumps into 1/3 "semi stacks". I liked hitting those a lot while playing!

00:02:886 (1) - What about using a sv increase on all these very strong flute sounds? It would provide more emphasis and would be pretty fun to play too!
Examples: 00:05:677 (1) - 00:00:160 (1) - 00:02:886 (1) - 00:13:953 (1) - 00:16:711 (1) -

00:00:160 (1,3) - I highly recommend you to go through the entire map, check every blanket you made and to fix them if necassary.

01:50:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this rhyhtm would be much easier to read and fit the guitar even more. http://puu.sh/p10Zb/06160d2fff.jpg

01:53:261 (1) - Why didn't you map a 1/3 reverseslider here? o: Would have been reasonable if you did: http://puu.sh/p114s/3c8386f9db.jpg

02:09:640 (9,1) - That antijump makes no sense here, since you want to emphasise the downbeat!

02:29:640 (3) - I think you could improve this slider a little! Example: http://puu.sh/p11la/2817df6650.jpg

02:40:158 (1,2) - Since you stacked these, you maybe want to stack 02:40:847 (3,4) - too.

03:07:399 (1) - Remove NC here? It is stacked so you dont see any difference anyways.

I like the 1/2 part a lot! Good work here. But I suggest to work on the 1/3 parts a bit :)

Overall this mapset is one of the best 1/3 sets I played so far. I love the kinda dancing flow in the highest diff!

Good Luck with the map guys!! :)
CSLM

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Hello! My end of the m4m

La Dura CLSM

  1. 01:31:192 (1) - I think you could improve this slider a bit by doing this :arrow: Done, but not too much
  2. 01:39:468 (9) - Consider NC since the combo is getting past 10 here
  3. 01:39:123 (8,9,10,11,12) - The same slider improvement can be done to all of these :arrow: Again, done but not too much
  4. 01:50:675 (2,3,4) - Remake the entire rhythm of this section into this to fit the guitar much better. :arrow: No because the entire section is not 1/4, is 1/6
  5. 02:58:433 (9) - Consider NC here aswell
  6. 03:01:192 (9) - ^

That's it for the mod. Hope it helped and good luck with the set :)

-M4x wrote:

Hey Xanandra,

my m4m:

[La Dura CSLM]

General things:

You should check AImod on not snapped objects! And compare your timing to the other diffs.
I think you should talk to Xanandra about the timing issue.


In my opinion it's kinda weird that you put a break at the point where the other diffs just started. But I guess it's ok tho. :arrow: I felt that part deserves a break but i think Xana aren't agree with me u.u

Mod:

For the whole 1/3 part, I recommend to keep 00:16:251 (8,9) - these "semi stacks" consistant. By that I mean changing 00:14:527 (2,3) - all of the 1/3 jumps into 1/3 "semi stacks". I liked hitting those a lot while playing!

00:02:886 (1) - What about using a sv increase on all these very strong flute sounds? It would provide more emphasis and would be pretty fun to play too!
Examples: 00:05:677 (1) - 00:00:160 (1) - 00:02:886 (1) - 00:13:953 (1) - 00:16:711 (1) - :arrow: No, i don't think it neccesary, besides the flute part is calm, even with strong flute sounds

00:00:160 (1,3) - I highly recommend you to go through the entire map, check every blanket you made and to fix them if necassary. :arrow: I make my blankets of that way (most of them)

01:50:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this rhyhtm would be much easier to read and fit the guitar even more. http://puu.sh/p10Zb/06160d2fff.jpg :arrow: It's 1/6

01:53:261 (1) - Why didn't you map a 1/3 reverseslider here? o: Would have been reasonable if you did: http://puu.sh/p114s/3c8386f9db.jpg :arrow: Variation

02:09:640 (9,1) - That antijump makes no sense here, since you want to emphasise the downbeat! :arrow: Who says that i want to emphatizate it?

02:29:640 (3) - I think you could improve this slider a little! Example: http://puu.sh/p11la/2817df6650.jpg

02:40:158 (1,2) - Since you stacked these, you maybe want to stack 02:40:847 (3,4) - too. :arrow: It would make and NC inconsistency

03:07:399 (1) - Remove NC here? It is stacked so you dont see any difference anyways. :arrow: I add a NC very canticle

I like the 1/2 part a lot! Good work here. But I suggest to work on the 1/3 parts a bit :)

Overall this mapset is one of the best 1/3 sets I played so far. I love the kinda dancing flow in the highest diff!

Good Luck with the map guys!! :)
Update 2
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Hokichi
Hey! Sorry for being late :(

Here we go

La Regalada


I suggest use higher DS. And use constent DS too. DS change is not allowed in and Easy diff

00:33:263 (1,2,3,4) - Either turn them into a square or place them symmetrically
00:45:677 (2,1) - Blanket
01:16:022 - Place a note here
01:51:884 (2) - NC
01:53:263 (3,1) - Stack these
02:24:987 (3,1) - Wrong DS
02:26:022 - Place a note here too
02:30:160- ^
02:33:221- ^ There are more, but please fix it yourself
02:44:987 (4) - Turn it into something like 02:48:091 (2) -
02:53:953 (1,2) - Blanket

La Simpatica


Some part have inconsistent DS. You should fix those

00:45:677 (3,4) - Improve blanket
01:17:401 (1) - Move this down a bit to make a good 90 degree angle
02:10:504 (2,1) - Overlapped ;;-;;
02:19:470 (5) - Place a note at the end of this slider
02:22:228 (4) - ^
02:24:987 (4) - ^
02:50:504 (3,1) - Blanket?

La Simpatica



01:11:884 (9) - NC from here
01:15:332 (3,2,3) - Overlap doesn't look nice
01:37:056 (2,4) - ^
02:48:780 (2,3) - There's no reason to stack these

La Complicada


00:27:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'll not stack these if I were you. It's hard to read
01:50:504 (1,2,3,4) - Turn these into 1/3 slider, it would sound better
02:20:389 (9) - Move this a bit forward so the start and the end lay on red ticks
02:55:849 (3,1) - Overlapped

Well, that's it from me. Good luck with ranking :)
Topic Starter
Luvdic

Hokichi wrote:

Hey! Sorry for being late :(

Here we go

La Regalada


I suggest use higher DS. And use constent DS too. DS change is not allowed in and Easy diff
They are fine... DS rule is in there to make absolutely sure that easy diffs has no jumps and confusing DS usage, I believe this does not apply here

00:33:263 (1,2,3,4) - Either turn them into a square or place them symmetrically Dont see the need for this, and the way it is, its my intention
00:45:677 (2,1) - Blanket Not my intention
01:16:022 - Place a note here I prefer the way it is
01:51:884 (2) - NC Done
01:53:263 (3,1) - Stack these Not sure why I would want that....?
02:24:987 (3,1) - Wrong DS Dont see anything wrong with this...
02:26:022 - Place a note here too
02:30:160- ^
02:33:221- ^ There are more, but please fix it yourself They are as intended
02:44:987 (4) - Turn it into something like 02:48:091 (2) - I dont understand what you mean here...
02:53:953 (1,2) - Blanket Not my intention

La Simpatica


Some part have inconsistent DS. You should fix those
I cant see them, if you could specify which parts has DS problems that are causing problems...

00:45:677 (3,4) - Improve blanket I... dont do blankets?
01:17:401 (1) - Move this down a bit to make a good 90 degree angle It is as intended
02:10:504 (2,1) - Overlapped ;;-;;
02:19:470 (5) - Place a note at the end of this slider
02:22:228 (4) - ^
02:24:987 (4) - ^I dont understand these add notes? You mean to take out the repeat and replace it with a circle?
02:50:504 (3,1) - Blanket?

La Simpatica



01:11:884 (9) - NC from here Done
01:15:332 (3,2,3) - Overlap doesn't look nice
01:37:056 (2,4) - ^ Hmm, will wait for more opinions
02:48:780 (2,3) - There's no reason to stack these Same way theres no reason to not stack these

La Complicada


00:27:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'll not stack these if I were you. It's hard to read Will wait for more opinions
01:50:504 (1,2,3,4) - Turn these into 1/3 slider, it would sound better Hahaha I have it this way on Dulce Mery, guess I did it to make this part "easier" but okay, changed
02:20:389 (9) - Move this a bit forward so the start and the end lay on red ticks My mistake, thanks
02:55:849 (3,1) - Overlapped Will wait for more opinions

Well, that's it from me. Good luck with ranking :)
Thanks for the mod!
CaffeAmericano
Hi Xanandra! M4M~

I bet you’re aware that the tags are missing :3

Also, widescreen support is on in all diffs except La Dura CSLM


La Dulce Mery

  • 00:55:907 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You gave different DS based on the drum beat at 00:46:596 (7,8) - 00:54:872 (7,8) - . Can we do the same here? If you’d rather keep same distance, I think you can still emphasize strong drums (00:56:366 (6,3,7) - ) by doing control+g on 00:56:941 (2,3) - and 00:57:631 (6,7) - .

    00:58:665 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

    01:19:010 (7,8) - I think this should be more like 00:46:596 (7,8) - than 00:54:872 (7,8) -

    02:19:815 - 02:22:573 - 02:25:332 - I think it’s better to map these tick, they a strong drum beat. It’s also confusing to play when a pattern is repeated, but a beat is skipped
La Dura CLSM

  • My main concern for this diff is that larger gap in clicking doesn’t match with larger distance. For example, 00:47:399 (2,3) - are 1/3 beats apart and has large jump (DS 5.13), while 00:47:744 (3,4) - are 2/3 beats apart and has smaller jump (DS 1.79). I think vocal actually is even stronger at 00:48:318 - . Few other examples: 00:53:951 (4) - 00:56:020 (3) - 00:57:399 (7) - 01:07:054 (3) - . At least I found the kiai part way easier than earlier part because of this DS inconsistency.

    00:27:744 (9) - NC?

    01:56:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Is it intentional that this has NC but 01:44:985 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - has not? Since 01:56:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - is not difficult to read, I am assuming NC is meant to highlight 01:56:709 (1) -, and if that’s the case, I think 01:45:675 (6) - should also have NC
La Compilcada

  • 01:00:734 - I think capturing this drum beat will be an interesting break from the same rhythm you’ve been following since 00:55:332 - until 01:03:263 - . The drum is pretty loud too. I bet something similar to 01:30:160 (4,5,6) - will work

    01:44:987 (1,2,3) - 01:56:022 (1,2,3) - I think this rhythm might capture the music better ( http://puu.sh/qcUt4/1215776fee.jpg ). Tail of second slider have fairly strong beat, so it feels more intuitive for it to be clickable… at least for me xD

    02:14:987 (5,2) - Maybe this overlap can be avoided

    02:42:228 (3) - I suppose almost touching health bar is fine…? But could be safer to move it down a few grids.

    03:07:228 (1) - I am grumpy that the loud “hey” sound is buried in the slider tail
Best of luck!
Topic Starter
Luvdic

CaffeAmericano wrote:

Hi Xanandra! M4M~

I bet you’re aware that the tags are missing :3 Oops, forgot to add CSLM to tags

La Dulce Mery

  • 00:55:907 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You gave different DS based on the drum beat at 00:46:596 (7,8) - 00:54:872 (7,8) - . Can we do the same here? If you’d rather keep same distance, I think you can still emphasize strong drums (00:56:366 (6,3,7) - ) by doing control+g on 00:56:941 (2,3) - and 00:57:631 (6,7) - .
    Cant see the relation between the two parts you mentioned, they are rhythmically different to me.

    00:58:665 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

    01:19:010 (7,8) - I think this should be more like 00:46:596 (7,8) - than 00:54:872 (7,8) - They are working as intended

    02:19:815 - 02:22:573 - 02:25:332 - I think it’s better to map these tick, they a strong drum beat. It’s also confusing to play when a pattern is repeated, but a beat is skipped
    I dont know what pattern youre talking about, in fatc, my pattern for the whole chorus is precisely to skip this beat

La Compilcada

  • 01:00:734 - I think capturing this drum beat will be an interesting break from the same rhythm you’ve been following since 00:55:332 - until 01:03:263 - . The drum is pretty loud too. I bet something similar to 01:30:160 (4,5,6) - will work
    Added!

    01:44:987 (1,2,3) - 01:56:022 (1,2,3) - I think this rhythm might capture the music better ( http://puu.sh/qcUt4/1215776fee.jpg ). Tail of second slider have fairly strong beat, so it feels more intuitive for it to be clickable… at least for me xD
    Will wait for more opinions

    02:14:987 (5,2) - Maybe this overlap can be avoided
    It is fine for me :<

    02:42:228 (3) - I suppose almost touching health bar is fine…? But could be safer to move it down a few grids.
    It is fine for me :<

    03:07:228 (1) - I am grumpy that the loud “hey” sound is buried in the slider tail
    Will wait for more opinions
Best of luck!
Thanks a lot for the mod!
Venix
random mod :D
La Dulce Mary
00:34:642 (1) - Make this slider longer (to 1/4 point)
00:34:987 (2) - to close with first slider i think
00:36:022 (2,3) 00:36:711 (1,2) etc. - stack is better
02:04:297 (1,2,3,4) - move that pattern
02:33:953 (3,4,5,6) - too big pattern make this smaller
Topic Starter
Luvdic

VenixPL wrote:

random mod :D I so Random LovE¿

La Dulce Mary
00:34:642 (1) - Make this slider longer (to 1/4 point) Hmm I am following the instruments in 1/3 rather than the vocals
00:34:987 (2) - to close with first slider i think Adjusted a bit
00:36:022 (2,3) 00:36:711 (1,2) etc. - stack is better Hmm, I wanted to give the feeling of... a playful mapping... I think I kinda achieved with this way
02:04:297 (1,2,3,4) - move that pattern What do you mean exactly?
02:33:953 (3,4,5,6) - too big pattern make this smaller Moved 0.3x closer
Thanks a lot for your random mod!
Sieg
self reminder
Sonnyc
[cslm]
03:06:537 (4) - 03:09:296 (4) - Consider a NC. It will divide the objects afterwards along 03:04:640 (1,2,3) - 03:05:330 (1,2,3) - 03:06:020 (1,2,3) more effectively, and will show your selected patterns better.
Good diff.
[Mery]
01:03:951 - Is the clap missing?
02:00:045 (3) - Spacing error I guess.
02:08:608 (2,3,4) - The flow here being all the same didn't felt nice in emphasis whatever you intended imo.
Topic Starter
Luvdic

Sonnyc wrote:

[Mery]
01:03:951 - Is the clap missing?
I dont think so...

02:00:045 (3) - Spacing error I guess.
Nice catch

02:08:608 (2,3,4) - The flow here being all the same didn't felt nice in emphasis whatever you intended imo.
I didnt really understand what you mean with "the flow being all the time" lol. :x

Thanks ;)
Lasse
[general]
no other tags? album name or things like that?
metadata reference?

normal-hitfinish3 is a bit "weird" http://i.imgur.com/xBTrElO.jpg
normal-hitwhistle2 has 6ms of delay http://i.imgur.com/781hVM4.jpg
normal/drum-hitfinish2/soft-hitfinish aredelayed and much louder on right side http://i.imgur.com/pFHnQ1b.jpg
=> http://puu.sh/t1xLp/05110a63cb.zip should fix all that

I think your own diffs could use a bit more volume in some parts, right now it's all 50%, which fits the slower parts (though maybe a bit lower would be nicer there), but seems too low in the more intense ones
and the gd could use a bit less, would suggest reducing the 90% points to 80-85%

[mery]
02:58:002 (8,1,4,5) - my main issue with this difficulty. stream and spacing seem alright, but the movement here is just way too harsh. you could rearrange some things here to keep the idea with nicer transitions, like for example http://i.imgur.com/2KvEwd4.jpg
02:59:727 (4,5) - this could also be adjusted a bit to sth like http://i.imgur.com/6acwjoJ.jpg
01:40:847 - 01:49:123 - really unsure about the 1/4 snapping here as the guitars seems so unclear to me. but it makes sense as simplification in gameplay so idk
01:51:882 (1) - sliders in this part sound like they should all be snapped to 2/3 and not 3/4
01:52:227 (2) - should probably have nc to be consistent with the comboing of the following things // 01:57:744 - or not, seems you just don't want 1 object combos, so I guess it's okay
02:00:158 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this one seems unintentional though comboing wise
02:32:916 (4) - seems weird to break flow on this with how you usually utilize movement, how about ctrlg on 02:32:571 (3) - so the movement changes there instead? would make more sense considering things like 02:34:640 (1,2,3,4) -

pretty enjoyable, liked the way you utilize angles and momentum

[cslm]
00:00:160 - red/green line use different sampleset here, just make them both S or S:C1
00:01:907 (8) - 00:07:456 (7) - I don't think 1/6 triples are suitable for this level of difficulty and they seem a bit much for this part
01:51:709 (5,6) - would be better to not have 1/4 here as everything before is 1/3 and 1/6 and the music is same so it's hard to play corretctly. could simply map 1/2
02:56:709 - 03:04:985 - would look into comboing for this part again, it seems a bit messy to me

[complicada]
00:52:227 (1,2) - could be spaced more to make the 1/2 easier to read
01:40:847 (1) - you snapped these to the 2/3 drums on higher, so why not here too? 1/2 kinda seems to work with the guitarm but the 2/3 is more clear I think
actually having this part more like cslm did would probably fit better than 1/2 slider spam
01:50:502 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think you need 1/6 buzzsliders on such a simple difficulty

[caprichosa]
seems fine


[simpatica]
ar seems a bit low ~³ would be nice
02:04:296 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - can you use more than only the center of the screen for so long lol
in general I think this difficulty could make more use of the playfield as it feels extremely focused on the center most of the time

[regalada]
ar/od setting seems a bit weird would at least increase ar and maybe lower od
01:40:847 (1) - using .5ds after this seems bit low for readability as suddenly your 2/1 looks just like the 1/1 looked before, would suggest using like 0.7-0.8x?
02:04:296 (1) - should probably be spaced a bit more too

[]

gap between the highest diffs seems a bit edgy with the difference between 5 note streams => 89 note streams and maybe also the jump pattern/spacing usage, not quite sure about that so idk what to do here for now
Topic Starter
Luvdic
@Lasse: had a quick look at your mod, and I agree with almost everything. Going to sleep for now, so Ill reply tomorrow!

And thanks a lot for the mod, i love you :$
Topic Starter
Luvdic

Lasse wrote:

[general]
no other tags? album name or things like that?
metadata reference?
Album name added, really have no idea what other references I could add to help people find this song (assuming that anyone wants to search this song lol)

normal-hitfinish3 is a bit "weird" http://i.imgur.com/xBTrElO.jpg
normal-hitwhistle2 has 6ms of delay http://i.imgur.com/781hVM4.jpg
normal/drum-hitfinish2/soft-hitfinish aredelayed and much louder on right side http://i.imgur.com/pFHnQ1b.jpg
=> http://puu.sh/t1xLp/05110a63cb.zip should fix all that
I love you so much, have a hug!

I think your own diffs could use a bit more volume in some parts, right now it's all 50%, which fits the slower parts (though maybe a bit lower would be nicer there), but seems too low in the more intense ones
and the gd could use a bit less, would suggest reducing the 90% points to 80-85%
This is more of a own decision thing. I like to use lots of hitsounds, but I dont like them to overtake a map's sounds, thats why I tend to use lots of them at low volume. Anyways, increased to 60% mid map, anything more, and my ears will start to bleed ;(


[mery]
02:58:002 (8,1,4,5) - my main issue with this difficulty. stream and spacing seem alright, but the movement here is just way too harsh. you could rearrange some things here to keep the idea with nicer transitions, like for example http://i.imgur.com/2KvEwd4.jpg
02:59:727 (4,5) - this could also be adjusted a bit to sth like http://i.imgur.com/6acwjoJ.jpg
Rearranged!
01:40:847 - 01:49:123 - really unsure about the 1/4 snapping here as the guitars seems so unclear to me. but it makes sense as simplification in gameplay so idk
Yes, simplification, and yes, guitars are unclear ;(

01:51:882 (1) - sliders in this part sound like they should all be snapped to 2/3 and not 3/4
Why the hell I had them as 3/4 to begin with?

01:52:227 (2) - should probably have nc to be consistent with the comboing of the following things // 01:57:744 - or not, seems you just don't want 1 object combos, so I guess it's okay
Yep...
02:00:158 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this one seems unintentional though comboing wise
Fixed
02:32:916 (4) - seems weird to break flow on this with how you usually utilize movement, how about ctrlg on 02:32:571 (3) - so the movement changes there instead? would make more sense considering things like 02:34:640 (1,2,3,4) -
Changed some additional stuff (ctrl+g the two previous sliders and swap position)

pretty enjoyable, liked the way you utilize angles and momentum
Thanks!


[complicada]
00:52:227 (1,2) - could be spaced more to make the 1/2 easier to read
01:40:847 (1) - you snapped these to the 2/3 drums on higher, so why not here too? 1/2 kinda seems to work with the guitarm but the 2/3 is more clear I think
actually having this part more like cslm did would probably fit better than 1/2 slider spam
01:50:502 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think you need 1/6 buzzsliders on such a simple difficulty
Changed all except the 1/6 sliders. I think they are simple enough

[simpatica]
ar seems a bit low ~³ would be nice
02:04:296 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - can you use more than only the center of the screen for so long lol
in general I think this difficulty could make more use of the playfield as it feels extremely focused on the center most of the time
Changed all. The centering thing was also annoying me for a long time too, but since no one commented about it, I never bothered hahaha

[regalada]
ar/od setting seems a bit weird would at least increase ar and maybe lower od
01:40:847 (1) - using .5ds after this seems bit low for readability as suddenly your 2/1 looks just like the 1/1 looked before, would suggest using like 0.7-0.8x?
02:04:296 (1) - should probably be spaced a bit more too
All done

[]

gap between the highest diffs seems a bit edgy with the difference between 5 note streams => 89 note streams and maybe also the jump pattern/spacing usage, not quite sure about that so idk what to do here for now
Nooooo, and here I was thinking about not having ENHIXXXXXXXXXXX. Okay, wait for me then! Please?
CSLM

CaffeAmericano wrote:

La Dura CLSM

My main concern for this diff is that larger gap in clicking doesn’t match with larger distance. For example, 00:47:399 (2,3) - are 1/3 beats apart and has large jump (DS 5.13), while 00:47:744 (3,4) - are 2/3 beats apart and has smaller jump (DS 1.79). I think vocal actually is even stronger at 00:48:318 - . Few other examples: 00:53:951 (4) - :arrow: This one doesn't plays so bad since the sliders are closer 00:56:020 (3) - 00:57:399 (7) - 01:07:054 (3) - . At least I found the kiai part way easier than earlier part because of this DS inconsistency.

00:27:744 (9) - NC? :arrow: I want to leave 00:41:537 - in red :3

01:56:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Is it intentional that this has NC but 01:44:985 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - has not? Since 01:56:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - is not difficult to read, I am assuming NC is meant to highlight 01:56:709 (1) -, and if that’s the case, I think 01:45:675 (6) - should also have NC
Everything from Sonnyc and Lasse are fixed
Thx everyone for modding! :3
Aqui tienes a La Dura >:3
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:La viuda de O'Brian
Artist:Mago de Oz
ArtistUnicode:Mägo de Oz
Creator:Xanandra
Version:La Dura CSLM
Source:
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CrystilonZ
as requested~

[Bipolar something]
  1. 00:40:847 (2,3) - tbh this feels somehow out of place. imo something like this may be better because it rhymes with 00:37:399 (1,2) - and emphasizes the section's end.. somehow
  2. 01:08:089 (7) - I know that you're following the flute in this part but, as it is now, it's hard to perceive. My suggestion would be something like this rhythm cuz (7) is the only slider with no flute on the head.
  3. 01:10:847 (6) - ^
    etc etc
  4. 01:15:675 (5) - imo something like this fits better with the vocal. right now it's kinda unbalanced with 01:17:629 (4,5,6,7) - which are purely vocals.
  5. 01:54:181 - kinda sad that this on the slider end but if you want to keep the 1/4 gap consistent, this is fine too.
  6. 01:56:020 (1,2,3,4) - would be 200% more cooler if they were all circles xd. The map right now is kinda underwhelming considering the intensity imo.
  7. 02:01:537 (1,2,3,4) - I have a feeling that these aren't correctly snapped. Listen to this really really closely one more time
  8. 02:12:399 (2) - ctrl H this for a straight flow might be better imo. both aesthetics wise and gameplay wise
  9. 02:14:813 (1,2,3,4) - idk stacking is not the best idea. try something like this. It's better imo and is more consistent with 02:17:399 (3,4,5,6,7) -
  10. 03:06:364 (1,2,1,2,1) - this is really underwhelming relatively speaking xd. should be something equivalent or more intense than the previous pattern.
  11. 03:09:468 (1,2) - imo make these curvy instead of edgy so they transition into 03:09:813 (1) - more nicely.

good luck~
Topic Starter
Luvdic

CrystilonZ wrote:

as requested~

[Bipolar something]
  1. 01:08:089 (7) - I know that you're following the flute in this part but, as it is now, it's hard to perceive. My suggestion would be something like this rhythm cuz (7) is the only slider with no flute on the head.
  2. 01:10:847 (6) - ^
    etc etc
    Hmm, not exactly the flute that I was following. My intention was to keep the 1/3 rhythm constantly
  3. 01:15:675 (5) - imo something like this fits better with the vocal. right now it's kinda unbalanced with 01:17:629 (4,5,6,7) - which are purely vocals.
    Both rhythms seems good to me (your suggestion and my current) But I am keeping it this way for sake of consistency with my harder diff
  4. 01:54:181 - kinda sad that this on the slider end but if you want to keep the 1/4 gap consistent, this is fine too.
    I know, but I didnt wanted to end the slider 1/4 before for this part :<
  5. 01:56:020 (1,2,3,4) - would be 200% more cooler if they were all circles xd. The map right now is kinda underwhelming considering the intensity imo.
    Hahaha, but then it would be harder than my harder diff, wanted to avoid that xD
  6. 02:01:537 (1,2,3,4) - I have a feeling that these aren't correctly snapped. Listen to this really really closely one more time
    What the hell was I thinking...? Thanks!

good luck~
Thank you!

The other parts are for gero!
riffy
hola, soy bakari

[General]
  1. Check metadata with a BN who speaks Spanish? What I've found on the official website kind of disagrees with your metadata.
    Artist/Romanised artist: appear to be correct as they are
    Title/Romanised title: La viuda de Obrian
  2. Any reason for CSLM's difficulty to have the intro mapped and ignore it in every other difficulty? That sort of breaks consistency and alienates this difficulty from the set.
  3. Collab difficulty is the only one to have letterboxes disabled. It doesn't really matter since there are no breaks, but keeping values consistent would be a safer option.
  4. Adding spinners would bring a bit more competition into the difficulties as spinners add some diversity into scores. Otherwise, we'll end up having a number of SS plays with the same score sharing the first place, which quite upsetting for some players.
[La Regalada]
  1. 00:27:744 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - the thing about consecutive circles is that the more of them you use, the harder it is to hit them accurately. Hence, using them in the intro in such a number is likely to trouble begnners. Consider adding a few sliders to spice things up and simplify rhythm.
  2. 00:44:296 (1) - the slider gets overlapped with score-metre. Consider placing the pattern higher to prevent that? minor
    Note: 00:58:089 (1) - 03:02:227 (1) - same here
  3. 01:49:123 (1,1) - all the other circles with similar gapswere unstackde, any reason to use a stack specifically here? I'd either add a break or unstack to help players read the pattern.

    Looks cool!
[La Simpatica]
  1. 01:38:433 (4,1,2) - any reason to lower spacing here? It is still readable but could cause a bit of confusion, so I'd stick to consistent DS values.
  2. 01:50:502 (2,3) - how about removing these two and using a break as what you have now feels like you ignore the guitar solo and map only the last stanza of it. ? Alternatively, you can map the whole part
  3. 02:30:502 (3,4) - try to use this kind of stacks in both parts of the kiai, rather than introducing them only on the second half of the kiai. This way it will feel much more consistent.
  4. 02:47:744 (3,4) - this felt pretty confusing given that there was a ton of 1/2 stacks before. Keep things simple and unstack for better readability?
    Note: 03:07:399 (4) - and then you might want to unstack this one as well for consistency purposes.
  5. 03:04:985 (1,2) - minor - looks like you intended to make (2) blanket (1)'s tail. If that is so, it can be done in a neater way.

    Well-polished difficulty. I like the way it follows the song while still being somewhat beginner-friendly.
[La Caprichosa]
  1. 01:18:433 - the drum here feels very strong, hence it would be quite a good idea to map it. Besides, the tail 01:18:548 - has no strong beat on it, so, ignoring the drum to have 01:18:548 - mapped feels quite weird.
  2. 01:37:744 (3) - overlapping with the scroe-metre. Moving it higher would prevent that.
  3. 01:41:364 (2,2,2) - try removing these, so there will be just sliders representing strong drums (1)s. This way you'll be able to give players a break from consistent tapping and work better with the drums.
  4. 02:02:916 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the spacing contrast is too intense, it would be better to use sliders at first, as it would be easier to read them. example
  5. 02:14:640 (1,2,3,4) - spacing changes of this kind within the same combo make your snapping hard to understand. Try to stick to regular DS within the same combo. After all, this is an [Advanced]/[Light Hard]
  6. 03:04:813 - die to the very strong drum beat here the 03:04:640 (2,3) - double feels quite confusing. Perhaps you could replace it with a 1/2 beat.

    I feel uncomfortable with the spacing stuff, probably it would be better to leave it for harder difficulties. Apart from that it is a neat one.
[La Complicada]
  1. 01:50:502 (1,2,3,4) - there is no visible indications of these sliders having two reverses. How about something more readable? Example
  2. 02:24:985 (6,7) - they would feel a lot better if they weren' stacked with (5). This way, the strong sound on (6) would have some extra movement to it. So, either move the double or (5) somewhere.
    Note: 02:36:882 (8,9,10) - same here. Since most of the stacks are doubles these triplets definitely don't fit in tht well.
  3. 03:01:537 (5) - minor - gets overlapped with the HP Bar.

    Good job!
[La Dura CSLM]
  1. 00:14:525 (2,3) - 00:16:249 (8,9) - this kind of stacks can be misread as 1/6, hence you should either replace the 1/6 stack on 00:07:399 (6,7,8) - with a slider or avoid low spacing on the 1/3 patterns.
  2. 00:17:399 (3,4) - minor - any reason to introcude this kind of slidercurve specifically here? 00:19:468 (1) - or maybe you could explain this one? 00:21:537 (7) - 00:21:192 (6) - the music has no specific changes nor any vocalr or anything else that could justify these shape changes, it feels like you are running out of ideas and try to place sliders of random shapes, which gives a rather unpleasant impression. Stick to some certain shapes and follow through the whole part?
  3. 00:44:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - any specific reason to alter the spacing here? 00:47:744 (3,4,5,6,7) - or here? At first it seemed like the intensity of jumps was correlating with drums, for example 00:44:640 (2,3) - here, yet, you used practically regular DS on 00:45:675 (5,6) - and a very weak jump on 00:47:054 (1,2) - which didn't seem to fit with the idea. Is there some logic I fail to understand? If so, please explain. If there is no any reason, arranging the jumps to emphasize lyrics/drums better would be a good idea.
    Note: 01:39:468 (1,2,3,4) - more slider spacing inconsistencies.
  4. 01:42:227 (3) - consider adding new combo as to separate this drum part from the previous one? Sounds like it is a completely new combo, actually.
    Note: 01:44:985 (3) - 01:47:744 (3) - same.
  5. 02:56:020 (7) - add a new combo to give some extra warning about the antijumps used here? It should fit well with the drums as well as with the patterning.

    Looks quite alright, though I felt like some patterns were quite random at times. Perhaps it's just a misunderstanding and you will clear it up. Though I'd recommend checking things once again with another modder
[La Bipolar Xanero]
Please mention that this a collab somewhere, the diffnames keep confusing me more and more, as I look through the editor and don't get to see the actual starrating. Something like commenting on the actual difficulty level of each and every difficulty in mapset somewhere in the creator's word would really help out.
  1. 00:39:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - shouldn't these be snapped to 1/6. There are a plenty of beats that are snapped off, yet, they use 1/3 or 1/6 in other difficulties. a picture. This goes for the whole part of the difficulty, which I believe to be mapped by Gero.
    Note: same goes for the other parts. I am not really sure of why snapping went that way as I hear music snapped to 1/6 and 1/3 and the objects feel somewhat off.
  2. 01:09:698 (3) - how about shortening the slider and starting it on the white tick with the drums? example
    Note: 01:12:456 (3) - the same would apply here.
  3. 01:40:847 (1,2) - try to avoid stacking these as previously you have used these stacks for 1/3 snapped beats and this could confuse it.
  4. 02:53:951 (1) - that was pretty much the only slider of that kind in the entire difficulty. That was rathre random than tricky or interesting. I'd try some more simplistic shape.
  5. 03:02:140 (4,1) - skins differ, with that in mind, it would be preferable to keep the reverse arrow clearly visible completely, as to ensure that every player will be able to read it.
  6. 03:04:640 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - lower the DS on these jumps and increas it on 03:06:364 (1,2,1,2,1) - as these are supported with drumns, unlike the previous one? Basically, it's the very simple scheme: louder music = bigger DS, quiter music = smaller DS.

    And that is about it. I am still quite puzzled with snapping as I really don't get the reason why it was this way in the mentioned parts, apart from that it was quite alright. To be completely honest, I've liked the way your styles work together so much I've got a couple of ideas to try in my own maps.
[La Dulce Mary]
  1. 01:43:951 (2,3,4) - to contrast with the collab better this difficulty could have introduced the streams here. Remember, that to keep the difficulty progression you should make patterns harder throughout the set. this way longer streams following later (on 01:48:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) )will also feel a lot easier as well as players will be ready and even warmed up.
  2. 01:51:537 (4,1) - move them apart more just to keep the jumpy pattern you had on 01:50:502 (1,2,3,4).
  3. 02:20:675 (5,1) - perhaps you should place (1) somewhat closer, as it looks exactly like 02:19:640 (2,1) - so players will not misread it as a 1/1 gap.
    Note: 02:23:433 (5,1) - 02:26:192 (5,1) - same here.
  4. 02:30:158 (4) - just to be consistent with the previous patterns try to Ctrl+G this slider. It will improve your flow.

    I just tlove the kiai. Great job, I enjoyed it a lot!
What else could I expect? Maping classics, well done and with a good deal of effort and love put in it. Could be a bit more polished here and there, but there is nothing that would ruin the fun. Impressive.

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Best of luck!
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