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Topic Starter
_handholding
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Xethora
I really like it so far, I'm not a modder so I don't know what really needs fixing but I'm sure you'll figure it out.
Topic Starter
_handholding
Ah thanx alot. I'm really glad that I know at least one person has played this map so far :)
Mao
Please just give Kudosu to mods.
Topic Starter
_handholding
yh will do, i misclicked it the first time and it wouldnt let me undo it
Xethora
Okay I lied about not modding haha.


[Hard]
00:09:677 (1) - I feel like the spinner is just a bit too long. It would probably be best if it ended at around 00:12:109 and filled the time between it and the next note with break time.
00:17:298 (1) - The spinner there is a little unnecessary and I think it could be removed, however with the long break you might wanna keep it. If you do I would suggest shortening it as well, maybe to about 00:18:758
From 00:25:731 to 00:29:460 - The break there seems a little too empty, you might wanna try putting some notes and even ending that empty area with a spinner.
00:35:298 (2) - Due to the long period without a note, the drain of the song could easily cause someone to fail... so, you may want to replace that note with a slider.
00:36:433 (4) - Same as above, but that one isn't as bad so its your call.
00:37:731 (7) - Definitely make this one a slider, way too much empty drain time between notes 7 and 8.
00:48:109 (4) - I think that you'd be better off making a long slider than the way it is now, it doesn't flow with the music very well.
00:54:758 (13) - You should definitely extend that slider a bit more, for both the sake of the music and the sake of the song's drain.
00:59:947 (13) - Like before, drain time is a bit of a gap so maybe make this one a slider. It would flow well with the music too. But it's your call here again.
01:04:001 (1) - Maybe make a long slider too, doesn't flow well with the music.
01:04:650 (2) - Same as above, doesn't flow well.
01:05:298 (3) - Same as above
01:05:947 (4) - Same as above
01:10:325 (13) - Should be made a slider, almost definitely but your call
01:27:352 - Consider ending the song with a spinner :)


I like the rest of the map. Hopefully I did a decent job modding, my first time doing it :)
Topic Starter
_handholding
Thnx alot for your suggestions :) it was a big help
Xethora
Alright so there's a few things I wanna go over on the hard difficulty before I jump to the other two (since you may still be working on them idk, you might see some issues along the road and fix them,) and I promise I'll do the other two soon.


General:

1. Not sure if it's just my osu! client or not but it seems like your song background disappeared. I've tried redownloading twice and I still only see my default menu background.. I would honestly suggest changing the background again.

2. I would HONESTLY suggest lowering the BPM by 5 (to 180.) I did this and I thought it flowed better with the Nightcore mod. This is your call completely though, 5 BPM isn't a huge difference just a personal opinion.

3. The song quality is VERY poor. You should consider purchasing the song from somewhere (if possible) to ensure the highest quality. It probably won't be expensive and it'd be very worth it because people would find your map more desirable.
If you can't find anywhere to purchase it from, try finding a better MP3 rip of it or something, it might even be possible to make your own.



[Hard]
From about 00:26:025 to 00:29:755 - For some reason that I can't put my finger on, I found playing in that area awkward. Maybe you can figure out what's wrong with it? idk :c
00:30:241 to 00:30:890 and 00:31:538 to 00:32:187 seem a bit off as well... maybe adjust those a bit.
I would greatly suggest extending the slider at 00:40:133 (3) to 00:40:133 and get rid of the circle (1.) That would make the map coordinate with the song a bit more.
Consider making 00:44:187 (4) a slider and extending over to 00:44:349 and getting rid of circle number (5.)
Like above, consider making 00:44:998 (7) a slider until 00:45:160 and getting rid of (8.)



Hope I helped you a little bit, I didn't really see any more un-rankable issues other than maybe the first 2 I suggested, other 3 are just small little suggestions to make the map a little more desirable. I'll have the other 2 difficulty mods up in a day or two, good luck!
DreaM117er
From #modreqs

No KD please

[General]

  1. Artist: イリス・フレイア(CV:日高里菜)、物部深月(CV:沼倉愛美)
  2. Remove Title " (TV Size)", and then add "tv size" on Tags
  3. Source: 銃皇無尽のファフニール
  4. Tag: Juuou Mujin no Fafnir ending ed 園田智也 Sonoda Tomoya tv size

    ※You can "check" this same map to do your best: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/635743

    • Just some mapping skill:
      In Compose, you can use "g" to change grid size. (I always use "Tiny" size to make diffs)


    In Compose, hole "Alt" and you can change Distance Snap Space on top and right game window.
  5. You don't make Easy diff, Normal diff must under 2.0 star (And I saw your Normal diff, you must make Easy diff. Too hard)
  6. In hard diff, you miss this: http://puu.sh/gJckk/431723a93d.png
  7. Normal diff: Slider Velocity change to 1.1 (yours too high)
  8. Easy diff have slider velocity issue too
  9. Don't you use custom sounds??

    I tell rules about mapping, you must notice: (If you want to rank this map)

    Easy diff:
    1. HP Drain: 4 or less
    2. Circle Size: 2 or 3
    3. Approach Rate: 4 or less
    4. Overall Difficulty: 4 or less

    Normal diff:
    1. HP Drain Rate: 5 or below
    2. Circle Size: 3 or 4
    3. Approach Rate: 5 or below
    4. Overall Difficulty: 5 or below

    Hard diff: (below 3.75 star)
    1. HP Drain Rate: between 6 to 8
    2. Circle Size: between 3 to 4
    3. Approach Rate: between 6 to 7
    4. Overall Difficulty: between 6 to 7

    Insane diff: (below 5.25 star)
    1. HP Drain Rate: between 6 to 9
    2. Approach Rate: between 6 to 9 (this map can use AR9)
    3. Overall Difficulty: between 6 to 9
    Easy, Normal diff must follow Distance snap to run (For all note in same spacing. From rule)

    Hard diff follow DS too, but this diff can do some jumps :)

    Insane no limit.

That's all.
After you fix your map again, you can call me in any method
I will back to give you a nice mod :)


Edit:

Why you not fix General, it's very important.

[Easy]
Please re-set hit sounds, because you set on all sliders' body. It's wrong, please set on head or tail.
Then you just follow lyric, not follow sounds. Try follow some sound in Easy diff to let it dull.

00:00:728 (1,2,3) - let circles not to stack together.
00:03:322 (1,2,3) - ^
00:04:295 (4) - make it reverse here?? 00:04:782 -
00:06:241 (1,2) - Try this rhythm, hope you like: http://puu.sh/gMn3E/43ec778183.jpg
00:08:025 (3) - make a reverse to end 00:09:322 -
00:12:728 (1) - remove this circle, it's unrankable in Easy diff
00:17:268 (1,1) - unrankable, or try let 00:12:728 - to 00:19:376 - empty
00:35:430 (1,2,3) - same as first notes 00:00:728 (1,2,3) -
00:44:511 (1) - use this?? http://puu.sh/gMnpU/ab6db154ec.jpg
00:50:349 - how about make a slider start 00:50:349 - end 00:50:673 - ??
01:02:349 (2) - No hiding please
01:03:971 (4,5,6,7) - Normal set, not to use in Easy diff
01:11:755 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:15:971 (1,2,3) - no stacking too much, same as 00:00:728 (1,2,3)
01:18:565 (1,2,3) - ^

[Normal]
You must re-set slider velocity. MUST.

00:03:322 (1) - no hiding
00:05:268 (5) - Slider end 00:05:917 -
...I can't continue to mod...

Please fix all General problem (about slider velocity)
Then,
Still you can call me again...Please after you fix done...
DahplA
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.
General
  1. Tags conflict
  2. Blue ticks aren't snapped
  3. NCs could be improved


Insane
  1. HP: 6
  2. 00:02:673 (1) - What is this slider. Curve this out better
  3. 00:04:295 (4) - Make this an S slider
  4. 00:05:268 (6) - ^
  5. 00:08:025 (9) - Fix these sliders. They don't need that many points
  6. 00:08:673 (11) - ^
  7. 00:14:673 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - A little more creativity could go into this
  8. 00:19:376 (8) - Make sure this is symmetrical
  9. 00:20:349 (2) - Blanket
  10. 00:25:700 (4) - Space this out a little more
  11. 00:29:755 (8) - Make this straight
  12. 00:34:457 (14,15) - Space this out a little more
  13. 00:44:349 (2) - Straighten this out
  14. 00:50:998 Kiai time
  15. 00:55:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - Could be mapped better
  16. 01:05:917 (5) - How about only one reverse and a circle
  17. 01:12:403 (1,1,1) - Spaced too far, also don't need NCs here
  18. 01:15:971 (1,1,1) - Don't need NCs
  19. 01:17:916 (1) - Fix this slider
  20. 01:19:538 (4) - ^
  21. 01:20:511 (6) - ^
  22. 01:25:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Could be mapped better


Hard
  1. 00:02:187 (1,2,3) - Space these out equally
  2. 00:24:241 (4) - Blanket
  3. 00:24:890 (6) - Fix this slider
  4. 00:30:728 (3) - ^
  5. 00:39:322 (1) - This is meant to be a triple
  6. 00:40:133 (3) - Fix this slider
  7. 00:54:728 (13) - ^
  8. 01:10:295 (13) - ^


Normal
  1. The distance spacing needs to be consistent and have no jumps. I won't mod this, because it needs to be fixed first.
DreaM117er
Please reply all modders' mod, let us know what you change and what you don't change.

[General]
  1. No problem.

[Easy]

  1. Slider Velocity still too fast, why you just add slow down greenline instead fix Timing?? :?
  2. And are you using Tiny size grid to make diff?? I think you are not.
    00:01:052 (2) - DS
    00:01:701 (4) - Slider end here 00:02:187 - and DS fix distance
    00:08:025 (3) - add reverse slider?? I think it's good
  3. You are not using same DS space to make diff. I can't catch your spacing. :?
    00:13:376 (1,2) - Fix DS

    0.8x
    00:21:160 (3) - DS
    00:21:809 (4) - ^
    00:23:106 (2) - ^
    00:30:890 (2) - ^
    00:34:133 (6) - Make like this: http://puu.sh/gRjyk/3a74680414.jpg Don't hiding 00:36:079 (3,4) -
    00:35:755 (2) - I think no need this circle, del it
    00:50:349 (1) - del this slider?? unrankable, make like this: 00:09:484 (1,1) - give spinner and next note 4 white line space
    00:50:998 - remove whistle, add finish
    00:56:187 - finish, 00:56:187 (1) - Ctrl+H??
    00:58:133 (3) - DS fix
    00:58:782 (4) - remove all finish, same 01:00:079 (6) -
    01:01:376 - remove clap, add finish
    01:06:565 - add finish
    01:12:403 (2,3) - remove all finish
    01:16:944 - and 01:17:917 - add finish
    01:20:511 (5) - ^, remove whistle
    01:24:565 - spinner start here

[Normal]

  1. Slider Velocity still too fast, why you just add slow down greenline instead fix Timing?? :?
  2. And are you using Tiny size grid to make diff?? I think you are not.
  3. Use 1/2 to make Normal diff
    00:08:025 (3) - Slider end white line. Same 00:08:673 (4) -
    00:10:782 (1,2,3,4) - Are your sure this is right rhythm?? Same 00:15:322 (3) -
    00:15:971 (1,2) - this is very hard for newbie, please reduce to use this set.
    00:17:755 (2) - slider start 00:17:917 - ??
    00:20:836 - why this part empty?? keep to make. Same 00:31:863 -
    00:25:052 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Follow drum or voice, not guitar please, it's very hard to play and listen
    00:40:133 (1) - End red line please
    00:46:214 - End white line, Same 00:46:295 (7) -
    00:46:782 (8) - Slider end 00:47:430 - and add circle 00:47:755 - ??
    00:57:160 (2) - DS
    00:58:133 (4) - ^

    01:05:268 (1,1) - All object must follow DS in Normal diff, it's very important
    01:14:673 (2,3) - make like 01:09:484 (8) -
    01:17:917 (4,1) - This is good flow, keeping
    01:24:728 - spinner start here

[Hard]

  • 00:02:511 (3) - Del circle??
    00:05:106 (4) - ^
    00:24:890 (6) - remove all finish
    00:26:673 - add circle??
    00:29:268 - ^
    00:49:700 (2) - Hiding on 00:48:079 (1) - 's tail
    00:50:917 - where is finish??
    01:11:755 - ^, add NC
    01:17:755 (3) - del circle
    01:20:349 (4) - ^
    01:21:484 (6,7) - please let them not to be covered by 01:20:511 (5) -
    01:22:457 (2,3) - too close, fix distance
    01:24:646 - spinner start here

    ※Perfectly follow lyric. Next time you can try follow lyric and sounds.

[Insane]
  1. Hard set in Insane diff, you can follow more things, not just follow voice :?
  2. I said you can "check" this diff and add something in your Insane: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/635743, Don't be afraid
  3. I want to see Hard and Insane have different set.
ohad1881
hi there!
from my m4m reverse queue!
general-wtf is this artist remove what is in the ()
fix DS in easy and normal you have a lot of problems... see this - http://prntscr.com/6lwsn7 and this http://prntscr.com/6lwsps -the prev and the next should be closer as 0-3 to each other.
easy
i cant mod this- this is to weird
fix DS and call me back
normal
i cant mod this either call me back after u fix DS
hard
00:04:782 (2,3,4) - make them DS
00:12:079 (1,2,3,4) - this jumps are to far from each other to hard diff
00:30:728 (3) - if u want to make a roundy slider do it like this http://prntscr.com/6lwtus
00:40:133 (3) - ^^
00:48:079 (1) - ugly overlap
00:49:700 (2) - ^^
01:05:917 (4) - make it away from 3
01:14:025 (8) - stack it
insane- ar 8 pls
00:01:701 (4,1,6) - if u want to make a wave do it like this http://prntscr.com/6lwum3
00:08:025 (9) - wtf..
00:08:673 (11) - ^^
00:29:755 (8) - so uglyyy
00:41:755 (2) - what the
01:10:295 (5) - pls
USE DS TO MAKE THINGS LOOK GOOD
well, i see you are a new mapper, witch is ok- but ur map has to many problems and you should really read guide for beginners...
ill send you my map that you should mod in pm!
gl!
Topic Starter
_handholding

m1223961117 wrote:

Please reply all modders' mod, let us know what you change and what you don't change.

[General]
  1. No problem.

[Easy]

  1. Slider Velocity still too fast, why you just add slow down greenline instead fix Timing?? :?
  2. And are you using Tiny size grid to make diff?? I think you are not.
    00:01:052 (2) - DS
    00:01:701 (4) - Slider end here 00:02:187 - and DS fix distance fixed slider
    00:08:025 (3) - add reverse slider?? I think it's good I decided against the reverse slider
  3. You are not using same DS space to make diff. I can't catch your spacing. :?
    00:13:376 (1,2) - Fix DS
    I remapped every DS with a much lower slider velocity
    0.8x
    00:21:160 (3) - DS
    00:21:809 (4) - ^
    00:23:106 (2) - ^
    00:30:890 (2) - ^
    00:34:133 (6) - Make like this: http://puu.sh/gRjyk/3a74680414.jpg Don't hiding 00:36:079 (3,4) - fixed
    00:35:755 (2) - I think no need this circle, del it deleted
    00:50:349 (1) - del this slider?? unrankable, make like this: 00:09:484 (1,1) - give spinner and next note 4 white line space fixed
    00:50:998 - remove whistle, add finish done
    00:56:187 - finish, 00:56:187 (1) - Ctrl+H?? done
    00:58:133 (3) - DS fix
    00:58:782 (4) - remove all finish, same 01:00:079 (6) - done
    01:01:376 - remove clap, add finish done
    01:06:565 - add finish done
    01:12:403 (2,3) - remove all finish done
    01:16:944 - and 01:17:917 - add finish done
    01:20:511 (5) - ^, remove whistle done
    01:24:565 - spinner start here
done

[Normal]

  1. Slider Velocity still too fast, why you just add slow down greenline instead fix Timing?? :?
  2. And are you using Tiny size grid to make diff?? I think you are not.
  3. Use 1/2 to make Normal diff
    00:08:025 (3) - Slider end white line. Same 00:08:673 (4) - fixed
    00:10:782 (1,2,3,4) - Are your sure this is right rhythm?? Same 00:15:322 (3) - remmapped
    00:15:971 (1,2) - this is very hard for newbie, please reduce to use this set. fixed
    00:17:755 (2) - slider start 00:17:917 - ?? fixed
    00:20:836 - why this part empty?? keep to make. Same 00:31:863 - Mapped them
    00:25:052 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Follow drum or voice, not guitar please, it's very hard to play and listen remapped comepletly
    00:40:133 (1) - End red line please done
    00:46:214 - End white line, Same 00:46:295 (7) - done
    00:46:782 (8) - Slider end 00:47:430 - and add circle 00:47:755 - ?? done
    00:57:160 (2) - DS
    00:58:133 (4) - ^

    01:05:268 (1,1) - All object must follow DS in Normal diff, it's very important
    01:14:673 (2,3) - make like 01:09:484 (8) - done
    01:17:917 (4,1) - This is good flow, keeping
    01:24:728 - spinner start here
Remapped all DS with a much lower slider velocity

[Hard]

  • 00:02:511 (3) - Del circle?? done
    00:05:106 (4) - ^ done
    00:24:890 (6) - remove all finish done
    00:26:673 - add circle?? done
    00:29:268 - ^ done
    00:49:700 (2) - Hiding on 00:48:079 (1) - 's tail fixed
    00:50:917 - where is finish?? done
    01:17:755 (3) - del circle done
    01:20:349 (4) - ^ done
    01:21:484 (6,7) - please let them not to be covered by 01:20:511 (5) - fixed
    01:22:457 (2,3) - too close, fix distance fixed
    01:24:646 - spinner start here done

    ※Perfectly follow lyric. Next time you can try follow lyric and sounds. I remapped some parts to follow the drum

[Insane]
  1. Hard set in Insane diff, you can follow more things, not just follow voice :?
  2. I said you can "check" this diff and add something in your Insane: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/635743, Don't be afraid
  3. I want to see Hard and Insane have different set.
Thnx alot for your input, I appreciate the big effort :)
Topic Starter
_handholding

ohad1881 wrote:

hi there!
from my m4m reverse queue!
general-wtf is this artist remove what is in the ()
fix DS in easy and normal you have a lot of problems... see this - http://prntscr.com/6lwsn7 and this http://prntscr.com/6lwsps -the prev and the next should be closer as 0-3 to each other.
easy
i cant mod this- this is to weird
fix DS and call me back
normal
i cant mod this either call me back after u fix DS
hard
00:04:782 (2,3,4) - make them DS remapped
00:12:079 (1,2,3,4) - this jumps are to far from each other to hard diff fixed
00:30:728 (3) - if u want to make a roundy slider do it like this http://prntscr.com/6lwtus fixed
00:40:133 (3) - ^^ fixed
00:48:079 (1) - ugly overlap fixed
00:49:700 (2) - ^^ fixed
01:05:917 (4) - make it away from 3 dont know what you meant by that
01:14:025 (8) - stack it done
insane- ar 8 pls
00:01:701 (4,1,6) - if u want to make a wave do it like this http://prntscr.com/6lwum3
00:08:025 (9) - wtf.. fixed
00:08:673 (11) - ^^ fixed
00:29:755 (8) - so uglyyy fixed
00:41:755 (2) - what the kept
01:10:295 (5) - pls kept
USE DS TO MAKE THINGS LOOK GOOD
well, i see you are a new mapper, witch is ok- but ur map has to many problems and you should really read guide for beginners...
ill send you my map that you should mod in pm!
gl!
thnx for your input!
gorgonzoler
i m busy at exam at time.
i give you this post show i m not forget the M4M
i may mod your map when i finish em
haha5957
oh fuck my hour of mods are gone due to shitty browser error =.=

I'll make it really short i guess ;w; let's take a look at [insane] difficulty.


for example, 00:32:673 (2,3,4) - this part here, overlaps eachother really bad. I would suggest you to completely avoid this kind of pattern for now, but anyways

Your current pattern : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945091
only small adjustments and looks much better : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945097


other example : 00:34:619 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) -

your current pattern :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945144
another small adjustments and looks better : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945149

your map currently "plays" ok but the appearance of map is honestly very poor overall. This can be fixed by making very small adjustments like i did above.
use view->grid level->4 since it makes it much easier to do that..

sorry I'm too lazy to redo the hour long mod again orz but mainly your map currently suffers too much from poor appearance!


good luck!

http://osu.ppy.sh/b/129734
Here's a good example of how "pretty map" looks like.. see how he used overlaps and placed circles? the rhythm isn't too different from yours, but looks much nicer due to small differences..
Topic Starter
_handholding

haha5957 wrote:

oh fuck my hour of mods are gone due to shitty browser error =.=

I'll make it really short i guess ;w; let's take a look at [insane] difficulty.


for example, 00:32:673 (2,3,4) - this part here, overlaps eachother really bad. I would suggest you to completely avoid this kind of pattern for now, but anyways

Your current pattern : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945091
only small adjustments and looks much better : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945097


other example : 00:34:619 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) -

your current pattern :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945144
another small adjustments and looks better : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945149

your map currently "plays" ok but the appearance of map is honestly very poor overall. This can be fixed by making very small adjustments like i did above.
use view->grid level->4 since it makes it much easier to do that..

sorry I'm too lazy to redo the hour long mod again orz but mainly your map currently suffers too much from poor appearance!


good luck!

http://osu.ppy.sh/b/129734
Here's a good example of how "pretty map" looks like.. see how he used overlaps and placed circles? the rhythm isn't too different from yours, but looks much nicer due to small differences..
Thnx for your mod. Those small suggestions actually made me think alot about my hit placements :)
Sorry about your hour mod being gone, that sucks
Khora
Hello , how are you today ? So , i am going to mod the Insane diff pf ur ur map :P .

Overall toughts ( on things that u need to improve )

- So , first thing that i noticed was that the slider speed is too slow . Yes , there are some situations that slow sliders are better , but not in the style that u mapped / song / diff . It would take some time to fix everything , but i think that this is a crucial mistake on ur map :( .
- Some sliders arent in with a good shape
- The end looks kinda rushed , you should work on that .

Open
Insane
00:01:701 (4,5,6,1) - I didnt like the sliders ( the first one isnt bad , but needs some work i think , but the second one just doesnt fit the situation ) . Try this http://puu.sh/gTOHy/2d2428d0c0.jpg
00:03:321 - shouldnt be a NC
00:05:268 (8) - make the curves a bit smaller
00:06:403 (2) - move this just a tiny bit to the right ( so it gets more flow )
00:07:619 (7,8,9,1,2) - this little stream doesnt fit this part of the song . U can add 2 circles instead on the stream ( with the regular 1/4 )
00:09:321 (7,8,9) - change these for a slider
00:11:267 (10) - move a bit to the right so it wont be flat
00:13:375 (8) - make the curve smaller
00:15:971 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - distance not symetrical , try to work on that
00:19:051 (8) - i think you should remove this slider and put a circle on 00:19:051 and 00:19:375 ( yes , remove the another slider )
00:19:862 put a slider from there to here 00:20:024 , and make it NC ( then remove the NC from 00:20:187 (1) - )
00:25:051 (1,2,3,4) - make a little curve/another thing with the circles , but do not do a line :p
00:25:700 - toooo slow
00:26:349 (6,7,8,9,10) - this part is a bit strange , try to make it full of 1/4 sliders / circles
00:29:430 (9,10) - i dont like these small sliders , i think that they shouldn't be here . Put another type of sliders / circles that u thing that would fit well
00:34:375 (7) - wrong place xD , put it in 00:34:457
00:37:700 - make the spinner start there and end here 00:38:997
00:39:321 this part shouldnt be on the spinner , since now it will be empty , fill it with little jumps , sliders , whatever you want .
00:47:267 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is a bit pointless , try to continue the same style of 00:43:214 (1,2,3)
00:52:294 something MUST start here ( and its on the middle of a slider D: ) . Do this : http://puu.sh/gTPHd/b7d747c1c8.jpg ( the position is up to you )
00:54:889 same mistake around here . do this : http://puu.sh/gTPCI/42bd649c58.jpg
00:57:321 (7) - remove it
00:58:781 (1) - make it a bit bigger till it reaches the red thing
01:00:240 Make this "5" slider end here
01:01:700 (2,3,4,5,6) - remove all this and make something with the previous style ( of 0:50 ~ )
01:08:511 (2) - collapsed with the previous notes . try to bring it up a bit
01:20:186 (7) - make a little curve with this slider
01:27:321 make the spinner end here

Well , I think thats it . Anything you need , you can pm me . Good luck :D
Topic Starter
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Khora wrote:

Hello , how are you today ? So , i am going to mod the Insane diff pf ur ur map :P .

Overall toughts ( on things that u need to improve )

- So , first thing that i noticed was that the slider speed is too slow . Yes , there are some situations that slow sliders are better , but not in the style that u mapped / song / diff . It would take some time to fix everything , but i think that this is a crucial mistake on ur map :( .
- Some sliders arent in with a good shape
- The end looks kinda rushed , you should work on that .

Open
Insane
00:01:701 (4,5,6,1) - I didnt like the sliders ( the first one isnt bad , but needs some work i think , but the second one just doesnt fit the situation ) . Try this http://puu.sh/gTOHy/2d2428d0c0.jpg
00:03:321 - shouldnt be a NC
00:05:268 (8) - make the curves a bit smaller
00:06:403 (2) - move this just a tiny bit to the right ( so it gets more flow )
00:07:619 (7,8,9,1,2) - this little stream doesnt fit this part of the song . U can add 2 circles instead on the stream ( with the regular 1/4 )
00:09:321 (7,8,9) - change these for a slider
00:11:267 (10) - move a bit to the right so it wont be flat
00:13:375 (8) - make the curve smaller
00:15:971 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - distance not symetrical , try to work on that
00:19:051 (8) - i think you should remove this slider and put a circle on 00:19:051 and 00:19:375 ( yes , remove the another slider )
00:19:862 put a slider from there to here 00:20:024 , and make it NC ( then remove the NC from 00:20:187 (1) - )
00:25:051 (1,2,3,4) - make a little curve/another thing with the circles , but do not do a line :p
00:25:700 - toooo slow
00:26:349 (6,7,8,9,10) - this part is a bit strange , try to make it full of 1/4 sliders / circles
00:29:430 (9,10) - i dont like these small sliders , i think that they shouldn't be here . Put another type of sliders / circles that u thing that would fit well
00:34:375 (7) - wrong place xD , put it in 00:34:457
00:37:700 - make the spinner start there and end here 00:38:997
00:39:321 this part shouldnt be on the spinner , since now it will be empty , fill it with little jumps , sliders , whatever you want .
00:47:267 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is a bit pointless , try to continue the same style of 00:43:214 (1,2,3)
00:52:294 something MUST start here ( and its on the middle of a slider D: ) . Do this : http://puu.sh/gTPHd/b7d747c1c8.jpg ( the position is up to you )
00:54:889 same mistake around here . do this : http://puu.sh/gTPCI/42bd649c58.jpg
00:57:321 (7) - remove it
00:58:781 (1) - make it a bit bigger till it reaches the red thing
01:00:240 Make this "5" slider end here
01:01:700 (2,3,4,5,6) - remove all this and make something with the previous style ( of 0:50 ~ )
01:08:511 (2) - collapsed with the previous notes . try to bring it up a bit
01:20:186 (7) - make a little curve with this slider
01:27:321 make the spinner end here

Well , I think thats it . Anything you need , you can pm me . Good luck :D
[/box]Ah ty for your input. I'll make the changes along with the person above you tonight and what I've changed. Ty for your time :)
bigfrog
hello, m4m from queue

General
fix these 2 problem then it fine.
Easy
how about using grid4 for constant distance? (view→grid level→4)
00:08:025 (3) - make it reverse to 00:09:321?
00:15:971 (2) - it'll be better to avoid overlap in easy
00:16:619~00:19:862 - suggest not to let them be blank, the rhythm there is close than 00:13:375 (1) - to 00:15:971 (2) - , isn't it?
00:25:052 (5) - NC

overall, just suggest not to overlap in easy...it might unrank.
Normal
00:02:673 (5) - slide to 00:03:321 fit better i think
00:05:268 (4) - ^same as above
00:19:376 (1) - "Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds", so this slider is unranked.
00:21:159 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - every slider should start at red point to follow the vocal, it'll be better to hit
00:29:592 (4) - same as 00:19:376 (1)

the placement of NC can be improve...
Hard
00:06:240 (1) - change to slider&circle? it might not so easy to confused
00:33:646 (8) - delete? since the rhythm here might so dense
01:05:268 (3,4) - try this to looks more neat :

same as normal, some NC is not really need, plz consider it.
Insane
hmm...suggest not only think to put object to filled the rhythm and increase the diff star but also make them comfortable to hit.
some stream is not fit but overmap, some object shouldn't exist...recommend to learn more mapping skill through watching some ranked map, since i'm still nobody...i just can mod something for you.

00:47:754 - add a note here
00:58:781 (1) - slide to 00:58:943
01:23:754 (6,7) - blanket better

that all i can mod,
Good Luck~!!
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