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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Prince Altoid
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_handholding
Ah thanx alot. I'm really glad that I know at least one person has played this map so far :)
Mao
Please just give Kudosu to mods.
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_handholding
yh will do, i misclicked it the first time and it wouldnt let me undo it
Prince Altoid
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Thnx alot for your suggestions :) it was a big help
Prince Altoid
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DreaM117er
From #modreqs

No KD please

[General]
  1. Artist: イリス・フレイア(CV:日高里菜)、物部深月(CV:沼倉愛美)
  2. Remove Title " (TV Size)", and then add "tv size" on Tags
  3. Source: 銃皇無尽のファフニール
  4. Tag: Juuou Mujin no Fafnir ending ed 園田智也 Sonoda Tomoya tv size

    ※You can "check" this same map to do your best: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/635743

    Little helper1
    • Just some mapping skill:
      In Compose, you can use "g" to change grid size. (I always use "Tiny" size to make diffs)
    In Compose, hole "Alt" and you can change Distance Snap Space on top and right game window.
  5. You don't make Easy diff, Normal diff must under 2.0 star (And I saw your Normal diff, you must make Easy diff. Too hard)
  6. In hard diff, you miss this: http://puu.sh/gJckk/431723a93d.png
  7. Normal diff: Slider Velocity change to 1.1 (yours too high)
  8. Easy diff have slider velocity issue too
  9. Don't you use custom sounds??

    Little helper2
    I tell rules about mapping, you must notice: (If you want to rank this map)

    Easy diff:
    1. HP Drain: 4 or less
    2. Circle Size: 2 or 3
    3. Approach Rate: 4 or less
    4. Overall Difficulty: 4 or less

    Normal diff:
    1. HP Drain Rate: 5 or below
    2. Circle Size: 3 or 4
    3. Approach Rate: 5 or below
    4. Overall Difficulty: 5 or below

    Hard diff: (below 3.75 star)
    1. HP Drain Rate: between 6 to 8
    2. Circle Size: between 3 to 4
    3. Approach Rate: between 6 to 7
    4. Overall Difficulty: between 6 to 7

    Insane diff: (below 5.25 star)
    1. HP Drain Rate: between 6 to 9
    2. Approach Rate: between 6 to 9 (this map can use AR9)
    3. Overall Difficulty: between 6 to 9

    Little Helper3
    Easy, Normal diff must follow Distance snap to run (For all note in same spacing. From rule)

    Hard diff follow DS too, but this diff can do some jumps :)

    Insane no limit.

That's all.
After you fix your map again, you can call me in any method
I will back to give you a nice mod :)


Edit:

Why you not fix General, it's very important.

[Easy]
Please re-set hit sounds, because you set on all sliders' body. It's wrong, please set on head or tail.
Then you just follow lyric, not follow sounds. Try follow some sound in Easy diff to let it dull.

00:00:728 (1,2,3) - let circles not to stack together.
00:03:322 (1,2,3) - ^
00:04:295 (4) - make it reverse here?? 00:04:782 -
00:06:241 (1,2) - Try this rhythm, hope you like: http://puu.sh/gMn3E/43ec778183.jpg
00:08:025 (3) - make a reverse to end 00:09:322 -
00:12:728 (1) - remove this circle, it's unrankable in Easy diff
00:17:268 (1,1) - unrankable, or try let 00:12:728 - to 00:19:376 - empty
00:35:430 (1,2,3) - same as first notes 00:00:728 (1,2,3) -
00:44:511 (1) - use this?? http://puu.sh/gMnpU/ab6db154ec.jpg
00:50:349 - how about make a slider start 00:50:349 - end 00:50:673 - ??
01:02:349 (2) - No hiding please
01:03:971 (4,5,6,7) - Normal set, not to use in Easy diff
01:11:755 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:15:971 (1,2,3) - no stacking too much, same as 00:00:728 (1,2,3)
01:18:565 (1,2,3) - ^

[Normal]
You must re-set slider velocity. MUST.

00:03:322 (1) - no hiding
00:05:268 (5) - Slider end 00:05:917 -
...I can't continue to mod...

Please fix all General problem (about slider velocity)
Then,
Still you can call me again...Please after you fix done...
DahplA
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General
  1. Tags conflict
  2. Blue ticks aren't snapped
  3. NCs could be improved
Insane
  1. HP: 6
  2. 00:02:673 (1) - What is this slider. Curve this out better
  3. 00:04:295 (4) - Make this an S slider
  4. 00:05:268 (6) - ^
  5. 00:08:025 (9) - Fix these sliders. They don't need that many points
  6. 00:08:673 (11) - ^
  7. 00:14:673 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - A little more creativity could go into this
  8. 00:19:376 (8) - Make sure this is symmetrical
  9. 00:20:349 (2) - Blanket
  10. 00:25:700 (4) - Space this out a little more
  11. 00:29:755 (8) - Make this straight
  12. 00:34:457 (14,15) - Space this out a little more
  13. 00:44:349 (2) - Straighten this out
  14. 00:50:998 Kiai time
  15. 00:55:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - Could be mapped better
  16. 01:05:917 (5) - How about only one reverse and a circle
  17. 01:12:403 (1,1,1) - Spaced too far, also don't need NCs here
  18. 01:15:971 (1,1,1) - Don't need NCs
  19. 01:17:916 (1) - Fix this slider
  20. 01:19:538 (4) - ^
  21. 01:20:511 (6) - ^
  22. 01:25:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Could be mapped better
Hard
  1. 00:02:187 (1,2,3) - Space these out equally
  2. 00:24:241 (4) - Blanket
  3. 00:24:890 (6) - Fix this slider
  4. 00:30:728 (3) - ^
  5. 00:39:322 (1) - This is meant to be a triple
  6. 00:40:133 (3) - Fix this slider
  7. 00:54:728 (13) - ^
  8. 01:10:295 (13) - ^
Normal
  1. The distance spacing needs to be consistent and have no jumps. I won't mod this, because it needs to be fixed first.
DreaM117er
Please reply all modders' mod, let us know what you change and what you don't change.

[General]
  1. No problem.

[Easy]

  1. Slider Velocity still too fast, why you just add slow down greenline instead fix Timing?? :?
  2. And are you using Tiny size grid to make diff?? I think you are not.
    00:01:052 (2) - DS
    00:01:701 (4) - Slider end here 00:02:187 - and DS fix distance
    00:08:025 (3) - add reverse slider?? I think it's good
  3. You are not using same DS space to make diff. I can't catch your spacing. :?
    00:13:376 (1,2) - Fix DS

    0.8x
    00:21:160 (3) - DS
    00:21:809 (4) - ^
    00:23:106 (2) - ^
    00:30:890 (2) - ^
    00:34:133 (6) - Make like this: http://puu.sh/gRjyk/3a74680414.jpg Don't hiding 00:36:079 (3,4) -
    00:35:755 (2) - I think no need this circle, del it
    00:50:349 (1) - del this slider?? unrankable, make like this: 00:09:484 (1,1) - give spinner and next note 4 white line space
    00:50:998 - remove whistle, add finish
    00:56:187 - finish, 00:56:187 (1) - Ctrl+H??
    00:58:133 (3) - DS fix
    00:58:782 (4) - remove all finish, same 01:00:079 (6) -
    01:01:376 - remove clap, add finish
    01:06:565 - add finish
    01:12:403 (2,3) - remove all finish
    01:16:944 - and 01:17:917 - add finish
    01:20:511 (5) - ^, remove whistle
    01:24:565 - spinner start here

[Normal]

  1. Slider Velocity still too fast, why you just add slow down greenline instead fix Timing?? :?
  2. And are you using Tiny size grid to make diff?? I think you are not.
  3. Use 1/2 to make Normal diff
    00:08:025 (3) - Slider end white line. Same 00:08:673 (4) -
    00:10:782 (1,2,3,4) - Are your sure this is right rhythm?? Same 00:15:322 (3) -
    00:15:971 (1,2) - this is very hard for newbie, please reduce to use this set.
    00:17:755 (2) - slider start 00:17:917 - ??
    00:20:836 - why this part empty?? keep to make. Same 00:31:863 -
    00:25:052 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Follow drum or voice, not guitar please, it's very hard to play and listen
    00:40:133 (1) - End red line please
    00:46:214 - End white line, Same 00:46:295 (7) -
    00:46:782 (8) - Slider end 00:47:430 - and add circle 00:47:755 - ??
    00:57:160 (2) - DS
    00:58:133 (4) - ^

    01:05:268 (1,1) - All object must follow DS in Normal diff, it's very important
    01:14:673 (2,3) - make like 01:09:484 (8) -
    01:17:917 (4,1) - This is good flow, keeping
    01:24:728 - spinner start here

[Hard]

  • 00:02:511 (3) - Del circle??
    00:05:106 (4) - ^
    00:24:890 (6) - remove all finish
    00:26:673 - add circle??
    00:29:268 - ^
    00:49:700 (2) - Hiding on 00:48:079 (1) - 's tail
    00:50:917 - where is finish??
    01:11:755 - ^, add NC
    01:17:755 (3) - del circle
    01:20:349 (4) - ^
    01:21:484 (6,7) - please let them not to be covered by 01:20:511 (5) -
    01:22:457 (2,3) - too close, fix distance
    01:24:646 - spinner start here

    ※Perfectly follow lyric. Next time you can try follow lyric and sounds.

[Insane]
  1. Hard set in Insane diff, you can follow more things, not just follow voice :?
  2. I said you can "check" this diff and add something in your Insane: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/635743, Don't be afraid
  3. I want to see Hard and Insane have different set.
Shushan
hi there!
from my m4m reverse queue!
general-wtf is this artist remove what is in the ()
fix DS in easy and normal you have a lot of problems... see this - http://prntscr.com/6lwsn7 and this http://prntscr.com/6lwsps -the prev and the next should be closer as 0-3 to each other.
easy
i cant mod this- this is to weird
fix DS and call me back
normal
i cant mod this either call me back after u fix DS
hard
00:04:782 (2,3,4) - make them DS
00:12:079 (1,2,3,4) - this jumps are to far from each other to hard diff
00:30:728 (3) - if u want to make a roundy slider do it like this http://prntscr.com/6lwtus
00:40:133 (3) - ^^
00:48:079 (1) - ugly overlap
00:49:700 (2) - ^^
01:05:917 (4) - make it away from 3
01:14:025 (8) - stack it
insane- ar 8 pls
00:01:701 (4,1,6) - if u want to make a wave do it like this http://prntscr.com/6lwum3
00:08:025 (9) - wtf..
00:08:673 (11) - ^^
00:29:755 (8) - so uglyyy
00:41:755 (2) - what the
01:10:295 (5) - pls
USE DS TO MAKE THINGS LOOK GOOD
well, i see you are a new mapper, witch is ok- but ur map has to many problems and you should really read guide for beginners...
ill send you my map that you should mod in pm!
gl!
Topic Starter
_handholding

m1223961117 wrote:

Please reply all modders' mod, let us know what you change and what you don't change.

[General]
  1. No problem.

[Easy]

  1. Slider Velocity still too fast, why you just add slow down greenline instead fix Timing?? :?
  2. And are you using Tiny size grid to make diff?? I think you are not.
    00:01:052 (2) - DS
    00:01:701 (4) - Slider end here 00:02:187 - and DS fix distance fixed slider
    00:08:025 (3) - add reverse slider?? I think it's good I decided against the reverse slider
  3. You are not using same DS space to make diff. I can't catch your spacing. :?
    00:13:376 (1,2) - Fix DS
    I remapped every DS with a much lower slider velocity
    0.8x
    00:21:160 (3) - DS
    00:21:809 (4) - ^
    00:23:106 (2) - ^
    00:30:890 (2) - ^
    00:34:133 (6) - Make like this: http://puu.sh/gRjyk/3a74680414.jpg Don't hiding 00:36:079 (3,4) - fixed
    00:35:755 (2) - I think no need this circle, del it deleted
    00:50:349 (1) - del this slider?? unrankable, make like this: 00:09:484 (1,1) - give spinner and next note 4 white line space fixed
    00:50:998 - remove whistle, add finish done
    00:56:187 - finish, 00:56:187 (1) - Ctrl+H?? done
    00:58:133 (3) - DS fix
    00:58:782 (4) - remove all finish, same 01:00:079 (6) - done
    01:01:376 - remove clap, add finish done
    01:06:565 - add finish done
    01:12:403 (2,3) - remove all finish done
    01:16:944 - and 01:17:917 - add finish done
    01:20:511 (5) - ^, remove whistle done
    01:24:565 - spinner start here
done

[Normal]

  1. Slider Velocity still too fast, why you just add slow down greenline instead fix Timing?? :?
  2. And are you using Tiny size grid to make diff?? I think you are not.
  3. Use 1/2 to make Normal diff
    00:08:025 (3) - Slider end white line. Same 00:08:673 (4) - fixed
    00:10:782 (1,2,3,4) - Are your sure this is right rhythm?? Same 00:15:322 (3) - remmapped
    00:15:971 (1,2) - this is very hard for newbie, please reduce to use this set. fixed
    00:17:755 (2) - slider start 00:17:917 - ?? fixed
    00:20:836 - why this part empty?? keep to make. Same 00:31:863 - Mapped them
    00:25:052 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Follow drum or voice, not guitar please, it's very hard to play and listen remapped comepletly
    00:40:133 (1) - End red line please done
    00:46:214 - End white line, Same 00:46:295 (7) - done
    00:46:782 (8) - Slider end 00:47:430 - and add circle 00:47:755 - ?? done
    00:57:160 (2) - DS
    00:58:133 (4) - ^

    01:05:268 (1,1) - All object must follow DS in Normal diff, it's very important
    01:14:673 (2,3) - make like 01:09:484 (8) - done
    01:17:917 (4,1) - This is good flow, keeping
    01:24:728 - spinner start here
Remapped all DS with a much lower slider velocity

[Hard]

  • 00:02:511 (3) - Del circle?? done
    00:05:106 (4) - ^ done
    00:24:890 (6) - remove all finish done
    00:26:673 - add circle?? done
    00:29:268 - ^ done
    00:49:700 (2) - Hiding on 00:48:079 (1) - 's tail fixed
    00:50:917 - where is finish?? done
    01:17:755 (3) - del circle done
    01:20:349 (4) - ^ done
    01:21:484 (6,7) - please let them not to be covered by 01:20:511 (5) - fixed
    01:22:457 (2,3) - too close, fix distance fixed
    01:24:646 - spinner start here done

    ※Perfectly follow lyric. Next time you can try follow lyric and sounds. I remapped some parts to follow the drum

[Insane]
  1. Hard set in Insane diff, you can follow more things, not just follow voice :?
  2. I said you can "check" this diff and add something in your Insane: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/635743, Don't be afraid
  3. I want to see Hard and Insane have different set.
Thnx alot for your input, I appreciate the big effort :)
Topic Starter
_handholding

ohad1881 wrote:

hi there!
from my m4m reverse queue!
general-wtf is this artist remove what is in the ()
fix DS in easy and normal you have a lot of problems... see this - http://prntscr.com/6lwsn7 and this http://prntscr.com/6lwsps -the prev and the next should be closer as 0-3 to each other.
easy
i cant mod this- this is to weird
fix DS and call me back
normal
i cant mod this either call me back after u fix DS
hard
00:04:782 (2,3,4) - make them DS remapped
00:12:079 (1,2,3,4) - this jumps are to far from each other to hard diff fixed
00:30:728 (3) - if u want to make a roundy slider do it like this http://prntscr.com/6lwtus fixed
00:40:133 (3) - ^^ fixed
00:48:079 (1) - ugly overlap fixed
00:49:700 (2) - ^^ fixed
01:05:917 (4) - make it away from 3 dont know what you meant by that
01:14:025 (8) - stack it done
insane- ar 8 pls
00:01:701 (4,1,6) - if u want to make a wave do it like this http://prntscr.com/6lwum3
00:08:025 (9) - wtf.. fixed
00:08:673 (11) - ^^ fixed
00:29:755 (8) - so uglyyy fixed
00:41:755 (2) - what the kept
01:10:295 (5) - pls kept
USE DS TO MAKE THINGS LOOK GOOD
well, i see you are a new mapper, witch is ok- but ur map has to many problems and you should really read guide for beginners...
ill send you my map that you should mod in pm!
gl!
thnx for your input!
gorgonzoler
i m busy at exam at time.
i give you this post show i m not forget the M4M
i may mod your map when i finish em
haha5957
oh fuck my hour of mods are gone due to shitty browser error =.=

I'll make it really short i guess ;w; let's take a look at [insane] difficulty.


for example, 00:32:673 (2,3,4) - this part here, overlaps eachother really bad. I would suggest you to completely avoid this kind of pattern for now, but anyways

Your current pattern : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945091
only small adjustments and looks much better : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945097


other example : 00:34:619 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) -

your current pattern :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945144
another small adjustments and looks better : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945149

your map currently "plays" ok but the appearance of map is honestly very poor overall. This can be fixed by making very small adjustments like i did above.
use view->grid level->4 since it makes it much easier to do that..

sorry I'm too lazy to redo the hour long mod again orz but mainly your map currently suffers too much from poor appearance!


good luck!

http://osu.ppy.sh/b/129734
Here's a good example of how "pretty map" looks like.. see how he used overlaps and placed circles? the rhythm isn't too different from yours, but looks much nicer due to small differences..
Topic Starter
_handholding

haha5957 wrote:

oh fuck my hour of mods are gone due to shitty browser error =.=

I'll make it really short i guess ;w; let's take a look at [insane] difficulty.


for example, 00:32:673 (2,3,4) - this part here, overlaps eachother really bad. I would suggest you to completely avoid this kind of pattern for now, but anyways

Your current pattern : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945091
only small adjustments and looks much better : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945097


other example : 00:34:619 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) -

your current pattern :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945144
another small adjustments and looks better : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945149

your map currently "plays" ok but the appearance of map is honestly very poor overall. This can be fixed by making very small adjustments like i did above.
use view->grid level->4 since it makes it much easier to do that..

sorry I'm too lazy to redo the hour long mod again orz but mainly your map currently suffers too much from poor appearance!


good luck!

http://osu.ppy.sh/b/129734
Here's a good example of how "pretty map" looks like.. see how he used overlaps and placed circles? the rhythm isn't too different from yours, but looks much nicer due to small differences..
Thnx for your mod. Those small suggestions actually made me think alot about my hit placements :)
Sorry about your hour mod being gone, that sucks
Khora
Hello , how are you today ? So , i am going to mod the Insane diff pf ur ur map :P .

Overall toughts ( on things that u need to improve )

- So , first thing that i noticed was that the slider speed is too slow . Yes , there are some situations that slow sliders are better , but not in the style that u mapped / song / diff . It would take some time to fix everything , but i think that this is a crucial mistake on ur map :( .
- Some sliders arent in with a good shape
- The end looks kinda rushed , you should work on that .

Open
Insane
00:01:701 (4,5,6,1) - I didnt like the sliders ( the first one isnt bad , but needs some work i think , but the second one just doesnt fit the situation ) . Try this http://puu.sh/gTOHy/2d2428d0c0.jpg
00:03:321 - shouldnt be a NC
00:05:268 (8) - make the curves a bit smaller
00:06:403 (2) - move this just a tiny bit to the right ( so it gets more flow )
00:07:619 (7,8,9,1,2) - this little stream doesnt fit this part of the song . U can add 2 circles instead on the stream ( with the regular 1/4 )
00:09:321 (7,8,9) - change these for a slider
00:11:267 (10) - move a bit to the right so it wont be flat
00:13:375 (8) - make the curve smaller
00:15:971 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - distance not symetrical , try to work on that
00:19:051 (8) - i think you should remove this slider and put a circle on 00:19:051 and 00:19:375 ( yes , remove the another slider )
00:19:862 put a slider from there to here 00:20:024 , and make it NC ( then remove the NC from 00:20:187 (1) - )
00:25:051 (1,2,3,4) - make a little curve/another thing with the circles , but do not do a line :p
00:25:700 - toooo slow
00:26:349 (6,7,8,9,10) - this part is a bit strange , try to make it full of 1/4 sliders / circles
00:29:430 (9,10) - i dont like these small sliders , i think that they shouldn't be here . Put another type of sliders / circles that u thing that would fit well
00:34:375 (7) - wrong place xD , put it in 00:34:457
00:37:700 - make the spinner start there and end here 00:38:997
00:39:321 this part shouldnt be on the spinner , since now it will be empty , fill it with little jumps , sliders , whatever you want .
00:47:267 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is a bit pointless , try to continue the same style of 00:43:214 (1,2,3)
00:52:294 something MUST start here ( and its on the middle of a slider D: ) . Do this : http://puu.sh/gTPHd/b7d747c1c8.jpg ( the position is up to you )
00:54:889 same mistake around here . do this : http://puu.sh/gTPCI/42bd649c58.jpg
00:57:321 (7) - remove it
00:58:781 (1) - make it a bit bigger till it reaches the red thing
01:00:240 Make this "5" slider end here
01:01:700 (2,3,4,5,6) - remove all this and make something with the previous style ( of 0:50 ~ )
01:08:511 (2) - collapsed with the previous notes . try to bring it up a bit
01:20:186 (7) - make a little curve with this slider
01:27:321 make the spinner end here

Well , I think thats it . Anything you need , you can pm me . Good luck :D
Topic Starter
_handholding

Khora wrote:

Hello , how are you today ? So , i am going to mod the Insane diff pf ur ur map :P .

Overall toughts ( on things that u need to improve )

- So , first thing that i noticed was that the slider speed is too slow . Yes , there are some situations that slow sliders are better , but not in the style that u mapped / song / diff . It would take some time to fix everything , but i think that this is a crucial mistake on ur map :( .
- Some sliders arent in with a good shape
- The end looks kinda rushed , you should work on that .

Open
[box=]Insane
00:01:701 (4,5,6,1) - I didnt like the sliders ( the first one isnt bad , but needs some work i think , but the second one just doesnt fit the situation ) . Try this http://puu.sh/gTOHy/2d2428d0c0.jpg
00:03:321 - shouldnt be a NC
00:05:268 (8) - make the curves a bit smaller
00:06:403 (2) - move this just a tiny bit to the right ( so it gets more flow )
00:07:619 (7,8,9,1,2) - this little stream doesnt fit this part of the song . U can add 2 circles instead on the stream ( with the regular 1/4 )
00:09:321 (7,8,9) - change these for a slider
00:11:267 (10) - move a bit to the right so it wont be flat
00:13:375 (8) - make the curve smaller
00:15:971 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - distance not symetrical , try to work on that
00:19:051 (8) - i think you should remove this slider and put a circle on 00:19:051 and 00:19:375 ( yes , remove the another slider )
00:19:862 put a slider from there to here 00:20:024 , and make it NC ( then remove the NC from 00:20:187 (1) - )
00:25:051 (1,2,3,4) - make a little curve/another thing with the circles , but do not do a line :p
00:25:700 - toooo slow
00:26:349 (6,7,8,9,10) - this part is a bit strange , try to make it full of 1/4 sliders / circles
00:29:430 (9,10) - i dont like these small sliders , i think that they shouldn't be here . Put another type of sliders / circles that u thing that would fit well
00:34:375 (7) - wrong place xD , put it in 00:34:457
00:37:700 - make the spinner start there and end here 00:38:997
00:39:321 this part shouldnt be on the spinner , since now it will be empty , fill it with little jumps , sliders , whatever you want .
00:47:267 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is a bit pointless , try to continue the same style of 00:43:214 (1,2,3)
00:52:294 something MUST start here ( and its on the middle of a slider D: ) . Do this : http://puu.sh/gTPHd/b7d747c1c8.jpg ( the position is up to you )
00:54:889 same mistake around here . do this : http://puu.sh/gTPCI/42bd649c58.jpg
00:57:321 (7) - remove it
00:58:781 (1) - make it a bit bigger till it reaches the red thing
01:00:240 Make this "5" slider end here
01:01:700 (2,3,4,5,6) - remove all this and make something with the previous style ( of 0:50 ~ )
01:08:511 (2) - collapsed with the previous notes . try to bring it up a bit
01:20:186 (7) - make a little curve with this slider
01:27:321 make the spinner end here

Well , I think thats it . Anything you need , you can pm me . Good luck :D
[/box]Ah ty for your input. I'll make the changes along with the person above you tonight and what I've changed. Ty for your time :)
bigfrog
hello, m4m from queue

General
fix these 2 problem then it fine.
Easy
how about using grid4 for constant distance? (view→grid level→4)
00:08:025 (3) - make it reverse to 00:09:321?
00:15:971 (2) - it'll be better to avoid overlap in easy
00:16:619~00:19:862 - suggest not to let them be blank, the rhythm there is close than 00:13:375 (1) - to 00:15:971 (2) - , isn't it?
00:25:052 (5) - NC

overall, just suggest not to overlap in easy...it might unrank.
Normal
00:02:673 (5) - slide to 00:03:321 fit better i think
00:05:268 (4) - ^same as above
00:19:376 (1) - "Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds", so this slider is unranked.
00:21:159 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - every slider should start at red point to follow the vocal, it'll be better to hit
00:29:592 (4) - same as 00:19:376 (1)

the placement of NC can be improve...
Hard
00:06:240 (1) - change to slider&circle? it might not so easy to confused
00:33:646 (8) - delete? since the rhythm here might so dense
01:05:268 (3,4) - try this to looks more neat :

same as normal, some NC is not really need, plz consider it.
Insane
hmm...suggest not only think to put object to filled the rhythm and increase the diff star but also make them comfortable to hit.
some stream is not fit but overmap, some object shouldn't exist...recommend to learn more mapping skill through watching some ranked map, since i'm still nobody...i just can mod something for you.

00:47:754 - add a note here
00:58:781 (1) - slide to 00:58:943
01:23:754 (6,7) - blanket better

that all i can mod,
Good Luck~!!
GIDZ
Hi from my M4M queue:

General:
~Ai mod check pls http://puu.sh/gTXdL/5626e17209.jpg
~I suggest mapping music instead of vocals in Easy and Normals because there shouldn't be so many notes packed together as it may be too hard for beginners. Although I think this is a necessity for Easy diffs.

Easy:
00:02:673 (5) - Make 00:01:701 (4) blanket it. Then DS the notes behind after change.
00:04:295 (4) - Is this shape really necessary? I think a normal 3 points slider will do, dun need the red points imo.
00:08:024 (3) - Sudden rhythm change is bad for playing and flow for Easy diff. Move it to 00:08:186 .
00:24:403 (4) - This is off the grid. Keep every note and slider in grid for Easy pls.
00:25:052 (5) - Overlapping with previous slider is not neat and looks ugly, place it away with the DS so that it does not overlap.
00:30:241 (1) - Overlapping with previous slider stuff again.
00:36:079 (2,3,4,5) - Dun stack notes together in Easy, it might be too hard for beginners to read imo so DS it away.
00:41:917 (3,4) - ^
00:46:295 (2) - I dun really recommend a 1/2 beat note in Easy diff, beginners will get confused.
01:00:079 (6) - Move this down a little with the DS to avoid overlap.
01:13:052 (3) - Overlapping
01:16:619 (2,3) - Stacks~
01:19:214 (2,3) - ^
01:23:268 (3) - Make this carpet 01:22:782 (2) also snap it 1/2 beat forward. http://puu.sh/gTXTB/de33d2e58e.jpg
01:24:727 (1) - Spinner starts 01:24:727 ends at 01:27:159 .

Normal:
00:14:673 (1,2) - AR too fast to stack it like this in Normal. Move 00:14:835 (2) 1/2 beat forward.
00:16:132 (2) - ^
00:19:376 (1) - Weird shape, what rhythm are u trying to emphasis? I dun really think is necessary though.
00:29:592 (4) - ^
00:34:132 (7) - ^
00:37:700 (4) - ^
00:45:809 (6,7) - ^
01:12:403 (1,1,1) - No need all the NCs here. Remove pls.

Hard:
00:06:240 (1) - Dun recommend double reverse arrows in this SV.
00:20:998 (2) - DS this properly.
00:24:889 (6) - The loop shape can be improved. Read this for better slider t/37194 .
00:33:160 (5,6,7,8) - Doesn't flow well so I dun recommend stacking.
00:39:322 (1) - No need reverse arrow, the music says so.
~Not bad lel.

Insane:
00:25:700 (5) - I dun get why the SV changes here. Unecessary.
00:32:024 (8) - ^
00:47:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - These are 1/3 rhythms, pls snap them to the 1/3 scale. I recommed to also add 4 more notes and then move the spinner to start at 00:48:186 and end at 00:49:700 . http://puu.sh/gU0J4/9dff20257c.jpg .
01:02:349 (6) - DS not consistent with the combo.
01:03:970 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - U can make them jumps further away. Its ok to ignore DS in insane, it's hard to read them close.
01:05:267 (1) - NC here.
01:24:727 (1) - Spinner end not snapped. Ends at 01:27:105 .

GL.
Topic Starter
_handholding

bigfrog wrote:

hello, m4m from queue

General
fix these 2 problem then it fine.
Easy
how about using grid4 for constant distance? (view→grid level→4)
00:08:025 (3) - make it reverse to 00:09:321? I prefer it as the way it is
00:15:971 (2) - it'll be better to avoid overlap in easy
00:16:619~00:19:862 - suggest not to let them be blank, the rhythm there is close than 00:13:375 (1) - to 00:15:971 (2) - , isn't it?
00:25:052 (5) - NC

overall, just suggest not to overlap in easy...it might unrank.
Normal
00:02:673 (5) - slide to 00:03:321 fit better i think
00:05:268 (4) - ^same as above
00:19:376 (1) - "Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds", so this slider is unranked.
00:21:159 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - every slider should start at red point to follow the vocal, it'll be better to hit
00:29:592 (4) - same as 00:19:376 (1)

the placement of NC can be improve...
Hard
00:06:240 (1) - change to slider&circle? it might not so easy to confused
00:33:646 (8) - delete? since the rhythm here might so dense
01:05:268 (3,4) - try this to looks more neat : [box=]

same as normal, some NC is not really need, plz consider it.
Insane
hmm...suggest not only think to put object to filled the rhythm and increase the diff star but also make them comfortable to hit.
some stream is not fit but overmap, some object shouldn't exist...recommend to learn more mapping skill through watching some ranked map, since i'm still nobody...i just can mod something for you.

00:47:754 - add a note here
00:58:781 (1) - slide to 00:58:943
01:23:754 (6,7) - blanket better

that all i can mod,
Good Luck~!![/box]
I used all of your suggestions apart from the one stated. Ty for your time and effort :)
Topic Starter
_handholding

- G I D Z - wrote:

Hi from my M4M queue:

General:
~Ai mod check pls http://puu.sh/gTXdL/5626e17209.jpg
~I suggest mapping music instead of vocals in Easy and Normals because there shouldn't be so many notes packed together as it may be too hard for beginners. Although I think this is a necessity for Easy diffs.

Easy:
00:02:673 (5) - Make 00:01:701 (4) blanket it. Then DS the notes behind after change.
00:04:295 (4) - Is this shape really necessary? I think a normal 3 points slider will do, dun need the red points imo.
00:08:024 (3) - Sudden rhythm change is bad for playing and flow for Easy diff. Move it to 00:08:186 .
00:24:403 (4) - This is off the grid. Keep every note and slider in grid for Easy pls.
00:25:052 (5) - Overlapping with previous slider is not neat and looks ugly, place it away with the DS so that it does not overlap.
00:30:241 (1) - Overlapping with previous slider stuff again.
00:36:079 (2,3,4,5) - Dun stack notes together in Easy, it might be too hard for beginners to read imo so DS it away.
00:41:917 (3,4) - ^
00:46:295 (2) - I dun really recommend a 1/2 beat note in Easy diff, beginners will get confused.
01:00:079 (6) - Move this down a little with the DS to avoid overlap.
01:13:052 (3) - Overlapping
01:16:619 (2,3) - Stacks~
01:19:214 (2,3) - ^
01:23:268 (3) - Make this carpet 01:22:782 (2) also snap it 1/2 beat forward. http://puu.sh/gTXTB/de33d2e58e.jpg
01:24:727 (1) - Spinner starts 01:24:727 ends at 01:27:159
.
^ Fixed all
Normal:
00:14:673 (1,2) - AR too fast to stack it like this in Normal. Move 00:14:835 (2) 1/2 beat forward.
00:16:132 (2) - ^
00:19:376 (1) - Weird shape, what rhythm are u trying to emphasis? I dun really think is necessary though.
00:29:592 (4) - ^
00:34:132 (7) - ^
00:37:700 (4) - ^
00:45:809 (6,7) - ^
01:12:403 (1,1,1) - No need all the NCs here. Remove pls.
^ Fixed all and reworked sliders
Hard:
00:06:240 (1) - Dun recommend double reverse arrows in this SV. taken out
00:20:998 (2) - DS this properly. Done
00:24:889 (6) - The loop shape can be improved. Read this for better slider I think the loop is as good as it can be (given the timeline constraints) t/37194 .
00:33:160 (5,6,7,8) - Doesn't flow well so I dun recommend stacking.
00:39:322 (1) - No need reverse arrow, the music says so Im going to keep it for now.

~Not bad lel.

Insane:
00:25:700 (5) - I dun get why the SV changes here. Unecessary. I like it and I've decided to keep it for now. If someone else picks up on it I'll take it out
00:32:024 (8) - ^ I removed this one :)
00:47:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - These are 1/3 rhythms, pls snap them to the 1/3 scale. I recommed to also add 4 more notes and then move the spinner to start at 00:48:186 and end at 00:49:700 ty For picking up on that :) fixed it. http://puu.sh/gU0J4/9dff20257c.jpg .
01:02:349 (6) - DS not consistent with the combo. remapped it
01:03:970 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - U can make them jumps further away. Its ok to ignore DS in insane, it's hard to read them close. remapped it
01:05:267 (1) - NC here. done
01:24:727 (1) - Spinner end not snapped. Ends at 01:27:105 .
GL.
Ty for your time and effort. Much appreciated :)
Setsurei

as requested, Easy, Hard and Insane
[Easy]
00:22:457 (1) - too edgy, the path is unclear (try not to crash the head and tail)
00:27:646 (2) - rotate it a bit so the flow with 00:30:241 (1) - is not obstructed
00:36:403 (3) - better to curve the opposite for a better flow
01:03:971 (3,4,5) - the loop was too small, widen them by curving 01:04:619 (4) -
01:12:403 (2,3) - too edgy, curve 01:13:052 (3) -
01:16:944 (3) - lenghten this slider, so the reverse will be 01:17:430 - and ends 01:17:916 - || 01:17:916 (4) - delete this, and add hitcircle 01:18:565 -
[Hard]
00:02:186 (5,6) - tbh I hate the circle behind slider since it will cut the flow (also applies on the other objects similar to this)
00:30:565 (2,3) - overlaps with the tail, don't do this
00:36:079 (3,4) - flow cut, curve (4) the opposite direction
00:40:133 (3) - same reason as 00:30:565 (2,3) -
00:59:106 (4,5,6) - confusing gap
[Insane]
tbh very uncomfortable to play this, a sudden singletap jumps
try mapping with a normal DS first, and then decide to create jumps on some parts.
00:15:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is tiring, circular single tap jumps makes people often miss
00:25:700 (5) - changing the slider velocity (multiplier) needs NC
00:41:754 (5) - curve shape like this is not recommended
01:01:700 (2,3,4,5) - people will think this is a 1/4 stream if you put them like that
01:15:484 (5) - NC

still need more improvements
good luck
Topic Starter
_handholding

Setsurei wrote:


as requested, Easy, Hard and Insane
[Easy]
00:22:457 (1) - too edgy, the path is unclear (try not to crash the head and tail)
00:27:646 (2) - rotate it a bit so the flow with 00:30:241 (1) - is not obstructed
00:36:403 (3) - better to curve the opposite for a better flow
01:03:971 (3,4,5) - the loop was too small, widen them by curving 01:04:619 (4) -
01:12:403 (2,3) - too edgy, curve 01:13:052 (3) -
01:16:944 (3) - lenghten this slider, so the reverse will be 01:17:430 - and ends 01:17:916 - || 01:17:916 (4) - delete this, and add hitcircle 01:18:565 -

I took all of your suggestions ty, especially with the rhythm change at 1:17 :)
[Hard]
00:02:186 (5,6) - tbh I hate the circle behind slider since it will cut the flow (also applies on the other objects similar to this)
00:30:565 (2,3) - overlaps with the tail, don't do this fixed
00:36:079 (3,4) - flow cut, curve (4) the opposite direction fixed ty
00:40:133 (3) - same reason as 00:30:565 (2,3) - ^
00:59:106 (4,5,6) - confusing gap remapped
[Insane]
tbh very uncomfortable to play this, a sudden singletap jumps
try mapping with a normal DS first, and then decide to create jumps on some parts. Whilst thats a fair comment I did map it for it to be an 'Insane'. There are maps like this and people can still alternate tap, I've done it a few times
00:15:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is tiring, circular single tap jumps makes people often miss keeping it for this reason ^
00:25:700 (5) - changing the slider velocity (multiplier) needs NC added
00:41:754 (5) - curve shape like this is not recommended remapped
01:01:700 (2,3,4,5) - people will think this is a 1/4 stream if you put them like that I really like the design of that part so I'll keep it for now. If someone else picks up on it though I'll go ahead and change it
01:15:484 (5) - NC added

still need more improvements
good luck
thanx alot for your time and effort :) the mod was really helpful especially on the 'easy' dif
Iceskulls
[General]
  1. イリス・フレイア(CV:日高里菜)、物部深月(CV:沼倉愛美) << add this to artist field
  2. uncheck widescreen support , I don't think it even worth checking here sine you didn't use sb
  3. maybe use cutom hitsound for this map , I don't think osu! hitsound really suitable for this song
  4. your bg is 960x768 which is not really good quality , I suggest you go find new bg that can be able to resize to 1366x768 res
  5. I suggest you place preview point here 00:50:267 - , it sound better imo
  6. I suggest you add audioleadin around 1300-1400 so it make the player can have more time to prepare the song
  7. you need to make sv for each diffs a bit different , use same sv on every diff is bad , need some variation
[insane]
  • nc is pretty messy here, I suggest you to nc every downbeat (big white tick ) so it will somehow more consistent
  1. 00:06:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend you use consistent spacing here so the flow will be a bit consistent
  2. 00:10:781 (6,7,8) - I don't know what you follow at 1/4 beat here but tbh this triplet and the others triplet that you use here is not really fit the song there so I recommend rework rhythm on those triplet a bit
  3. 00:15:321 - this can be emphasized more
  4. 00:16:620 (5,6,7,8) - I prefer 2 slider here instead , circles is just feeling weird , I'd use circles only when the instrument feel really intense
  5. 00:17:917 (3,4,5) - consistent spacing for better flow
  6. 00:20:187 (1) - this can be emphasized more
  7. 00:23:754 (1,2,3) - , 00:24:403 (5,6,7) - see my mods about triplet above
  8. 00:25:700 (1) - sv change here is not really feel good , you should delete this I don't really see anything worth changing sv
  9. 00:26:673 - , 00:26:997 - don't ignore these beat , they play nice if you map them
  10. 00:29:592 - ,00:29:916 - ^
  11. 00:34:862 (11) - if you delete this the rhythm might play better imo
  12. 00:38:025 (1) - end this spinner here 00:40:132 - , sound better
  13. 00:41:592 (4,5) - , 00:42:402 (6,7) - stack would make these play better just like what you did here 00:44:186 (4,5,6,7) -
  14. 00:47:213 (4) - I think this note is a bit overmapped , suggest delete it
  15. 00:58:619 (1) - end this slider here 00:58:781 - so the rhythm play better
  16. 01:00:402 (6) - end this slider here 01:00:565 - so the rhythm play better
  17. 01:01:700 (2,3,4,5,6) - anti-jumps play not really good here , make sure that the beat is emphasized a lots when you want to use anti-jumps
  18. 01:15:484 (1) - same as 00:25:700 (1) -
  19. 01:23:267 (1,2,3) - nazi blanket better
  20. 01:27:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pls delete these , they clearly overmapped

    need to work more on flow , spacing , rhythm and a bit aesthetic
[hard]
  • nc is pretty messy here, I suggest you to nc every downbeat (big white tick ) so it will somehow more consistent
  1. 00:30:565 (2,3) - stack play better here imo
  2. 00:31:863 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:36:079 (3,6) - fix stack
  4. 00:49:700 (2) - place this other place in looks not really good when you put it here
  5. 00:54:728 (4) - only 1 node is ok , this looks bad imo
  6. 01:10:295 (12) - ^
  7. 01:17:916 (5) - ^ (pls don't make slider like that you need to make it curve beautiful so it looks good )
  8. 01:23:268 (5,6,7) - fix blanket

    same comment as insane , you can use more 1/2 in hard
[normal]
  • nc is pretty messy here, I suggest you to nc every 2 downbeat (big white tick ) so it will somehow more consistent
  1. 00:14:673 (1,2) - stack play better
  2. 00:15:971 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:21:159 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - maybe add some variation to the rhythm this looks pretty boring imo
  4. 00:31:375 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  5. 01:00:728 (5,6) - unstack these and they would play better imo

    same comment as insane , you might need to rework rhythm a bit here tho
[easy]
  • nc is pretty messy here, I suggest you to nc every 2 downbeat (big white tick ) so it will somehow more consistent
  1. 00:25:051 (1,2) - beginners might confuse here , try make slider shape more simple
  2. 01:14:673 - add a note here so the rhythm will sound better
  3. 01:20:511 (3) - end this slider here 01:21:159 - sound better

    the best diff in this mapset but you can make the spacing between notes a bit more far a little alos a bit more work at flow and rhythm is not bad
need a lots of work here , try take a look at some ranked maps and you might get some ideas about how each diffs work

good luck :)
kunka
From Modding Queues~
I saw mainly the "Rhythm of Easy diff"

- Easy -
00:08:024 (3) - move please.00:07:862 and 00:08:673 (4) - add 3/2 slider.I think this is better.


00:33:808 - Please add the circle because flow is lonely.

00:40:619 (1,2,3,1,1) - Here also I feel a little lonely.How about this?
(1) 00:41:592 (2) - add circle.
(2) 00:41:917 (3,4) - change 2/1 slider.
(3) 00:44:186 (2) - add circle.



00:51:970 - Please add the circle because flow is lonely.

00:53:592 (1,2,3,4) - I think that it is monotonous.How about this?
Changes to 00:54:078 (5) - slider and 00:55:538 (6) - slider.


00:57:159 - Please add the circle because flow is lonely.

00:57:484 (3,4) - Please change 2/1 slider.I think this is better.

01:01:051 - Please add the circle because flow is lonely.

01:03:971 (3,4,5,6) - This is I think difficult.Please 4note → 2note(2/1 slider × 2).
start 01:03:971 - end 01:04:619 and start 01:05:268 - end 01:05:916

01:09:484 - Please add the circle because flow is lonely.

01:09:809 (6,7) - Please change 2/1 slider.I think this is better.

01:11:106 (8) - Please change 1/1 slider.I think this is better.

01:23:267 (6) - move please.01:23:105 (6) and 01:23:916 (7) - add 3/2 slider.I think this is better.


Good luck :)
Topic Starter
_handholding

CelsiusLK wrote:

[General]
  1. イリス・フレイア(CV:日高里菜)、物部深月(CV:沼倉愛美) << add this to artist field
  2. uncheck widescreen support , I don't think it even worth checking here sine you didn't use sb
  3. maybe use cutom hitsound for this map , I don't think osu! hitsound really suitable for this song
  4. your bg is 960x768 which is not really good quality , I suggest you go find new bg that can be able to resize to 1366x768 res
  5. I suggest you place preview point here 00:50:267 - , it sound better imo
  6. I suggest you add audioleadin around 1300-1400 so it make the player can have more time to prepare the song
  7. you need to make sv for each diffs a bit different , use same sv on every diff is bad , need some variation
[insane]
  • nc is pretty messy here, I suggest you to nc every downbeat (big white tick ) so it will somehow more consistent
  1. 00:06:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend you use consistent spacing here so the flow will be a bit consistent
  2. 00:10:781 (6,7,8) - I don't know what you follow at 1/4 beat here but tbh this triplet and the others triplet that you use here is not really fit the song there so I recommend rework rhythm on those triplet a bit
  3. 00:15:321 - this can be emphasized more kept
  4. 00:16:620 (5,6,7,8) - I prefer 2 slider here instead , circles is just feeling weird , I'd use circles only when the instrument feel really intense
  5. 00:17:917 (3,4,5) - consistent spacing for better flow
  6. 00:20:187 (1) - this can be emphasized more
  7. 00:23:754 (1,2,3) - , 00:24:403 (5,6,7) - see my mods about triplet above
  8. 00:25:700 (1) - sv change here is not really feel good , you should delete this I don't really see anything worth changing sv
  9. 00:26:673 - , 00:26:997 - don't ignore these beat , they play nice if you map them
  10. 00:29:592 - ,00:29:916 - ^
  11. 00:34:862 (11) - if you delete this the rhythm might play better imo kept
  12. 00:38:025 (1) - end this spinner here 00:40:132 - , sound better
  13. 00:41:592 (4,5) - , 00:42:402 (6,7) - stack would make these play better just like what you did here 00:44:186 (4,5,6,7) -
  14. 00:47:213 (4) - I think this note is a bit overmapped , suggest delete it
  15. 00:58:619 (1) - end this slider here 00:58:781 - so the rhythm play better
  16. 01:00:402 (6) - end this slider here 01:00:565 - so the rhythm play better
  17. 01:01:700 (2,3,4,5,6) - anti-jumps play not really good here , make sure that the beat is emphasized a lots when you want to use anti-jumps
  18. 01:15:484 (1) - same as 00:25:700 (1) -
  19. 01:23:267 (1,2,3) - nazi blanket better
  20. 01:27:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pls delete these , they clearly overmapped I dont know how that got there :/

    need to work more on flow , spacing , rhythm and a bit aesthetic
[hard]
  • nc is pretty messy here, I suggest you to nc every downbeat (big white tick ) so it will somehow more consistent
  1. 00:30:565 (2,3) - stack play better here imo
  2. 00:31:863 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:36:079 (3,6) - fix stack
  4. 00:49:700 (2) - place this other place in looks not really good when you put it here
  5. 00:54:728 (4) - only 1 node is ok , this looks bad imo
  6. 01:10:295 (12) - ^
  7. 01:17:916 (5) - ^ (pls don't make slider like that you need to make it curve beautiful so it looks good )
  8. 01:23:268 (5,6,7) - fix blanket

    same comment as insane , you can use more 1/2 in hard
[normal]
  • nc is pretty messy here, I suggest you to nc every 2 downbeat (big white tick ) so it will somehow more consistent
  1. 00:14:673 (1,2) - stack play better
  2. 00:15:971 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:21:159 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - maybe add some variation to the rhythm this looks pretty boring imo kept
  4. 00:31:375 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  5. 01:00:728 (5,6) - unstack these and they would play better imo decided against it

    same comment as insane , you might need to rework rhythm a bit here tho
[easy]
  • nc is pretty messy here, I suggest you to nc every 2 downbeat (big white tick ) so it will somehow more consistent
  1. 00:25:051 (1,2) - beginners might confuse here , try make slider shape more simple I really like ttese sliders. !REALLY REALLY like them and they're the prettiest things in my mapset so Ive decided to keep them.
  2. 01:14:673 - add a note here so the rhythm will sound better
  3. 01:20:511 (3) - end this slider here 01:21:159 - sound better

    the best diff in this mapset but you can make the spacing between notes a bit more far a little alos a bit more work at flow and rhythm is not bad
need a lots of work here , try take a look at some ranked maps and you might get some ideas about how each diffs work

good luck :)
Ty for your massive mod, aswell as your time and effort :) I took all your suggestions apart from the stuff listed in green. I stilll need to update the general though
Topic Starter
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kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

From Modding Queues~
I saw mainly the "Rhythm of Easy diff"

- Easy -
00:08:024 (3) - move please.00:07:862 and 00:08:673 (4) - add 3/2 slider.I think this is better. I didnt like your way but I changed it


00:33:808 - Please add the circle because flow is lonely. done

00:40:619 (1,2,3,1,1) - Here also I feel a little lonely.How about this? done
(1) 00:41:592 (2) - add circle. done
(2) 00:41:917 (3,4) - change 2/1 slider. done
(3) 00:44:186 (2) - add circle. done



00:51:970 - Please add the circle because flow is lonely. done

00:53:592 (1,2,3,4) - I think that it is monotonous.How about this? Remapped
Changes to 00:54:078 (5) - slider and 00:55:538 (6) - slider. done


00:57:159 - Please add the circle because flow is lonely. done

00:57:484 (3,4) - Please change 2/1 slider.I think this is better. No change

01:01:051 - Please add the circle because flow is lonely. done

01:03:971 (3,4,5,6) - This is I think difficult.Please 4note → 2note(2/1 slider × 2). Remapped
start 01:03:971 - end 01:04:619 and start 01:05:268 - end 01:05:916

01:09:484 - Please add the circle because flow is lonely. done

01:09:809 (6,7) - Please change 2/1 slider.I think this is better. remapped/color]

01:11:106 (8) - Please change 1/1 slider.I think this is better.

01:23:267 (6) - move please.01:23:105 (6) and 01:23:916 (7) - add 3/2 slider.I think this is better. I changed it differently


Good luck :)
I made alot of changes. Ty for your time and effort :)
kakifly
hi. my mod will be mostly general advice since i feel you still require some experience in mapping, sorry

general

-add in more audio lead in, recommended 200ms, while u currently have only around 700ms

hitsounds

-applies to all diffs, what i am going to say
you're hitsounds are all over the place, they're quite random and follow no pattern, usually for claps would be on the offbeats, every 2nd & 4th beat in a measure of 4/4, whistles would be on the first/ third beat, this hitsounding technique creates the effect you hear in most songs, even this one (listen to the chorus for example) . finishes are self explanatory for they go on emphasized sounds like 00:01:700 - 00:08:024 - and more, for example. of course you dont have to follow this pattern completely at places like 00:04:781 - where the drum doesnt exactly follow the pattern. but this applies for most cases

insane

-00:02:511 - it'd be better to remove this, theres no note on this beat in the music unlike places like 00:02:348 - , by doing what you currently have you lose the emphasis of the drum
-00:05:754 - better to follow drum here?
-00:09:484 - you ended this slider tail on a strong beat, which doesnt feel good since its not clickable and its really emphasized in the music better to make it clickable like a slider head or circle
-00:15:159 (3) - passive sliders arent always bad, but you chose a bad place to put one. since the emphasis of the piano is right on the tail, making this slider sound awkward
-00:17:754 (2) - should actually start at 00:17:835 - if you pay attention to the drums, yes this blue tick would be awkward to click so trying something like this would be appropriate here http://puu.sh/gWYak/8215b471e4.jpg
-00:19:051 (8,9) - this is a bad usage of spacing, its hard to tell they are 1/1 apart, try stacking instead
-00:26:997 - missing this beat is just awkward, you were following it before then you randomly stop, same with places like 00:26:511 - , 00:29:105 - ,00:29:592 - and more, it drives the player off guard
-00:47:321 (4,5,6,7,8) - a 1/3 stream is really unexpected, players will think this is 1/4 just out of habit, 1/3 repeat sliders would be better imo
-01:11:755 (1,1,1,1) - whats with all these nc's? i dont get the point of these since they don't really fit here for me

hard

-just a quick tip but usually 1/2 in hard aren't spaced like 1/4's in hard, its confusing because especially in the beginning & end, players may interpret your 1/2 notes as 1/4
-00:26:024 - for these notes i'd suggest mapping the instrumental instead of the beat since the instrumentals are most dominant here, even though you're following the beat it feels off not following the dominant sound
-00:39:321 - this shouldnt be 1/4, if you listen to the music at 25% theres definetely no triplet here
-00:45:809 (1,2,3) - equal spacing please
-01:03:971 (1,2,3,4) - ^ distance snap works nicely for these parts hinthint

normal

-i disagree with your usage of 1/2, they all aren't used ''correctly'' i mean, for music theres always going to be a base beat, usually weak ticks on 1/2, but you use your 1/2 rhythm to follow those instead of the actual instruments playing in the song, doesnt play in a rational way imo
-also remember to use distance throughout the whole song, with little to no exceptions, i noticed at parts like 00:17:754 (2,3) - 00:14:673 (1,2) - 00:15:971 (1,2) - you turned it off, dont do that please, you can use a higher grid if you have trouble stacking
-keep your new combo's consistent, stick to one pattern (id suggest 1 nc every second measure) stuff like 01:03:971 (1,1,1,1) - shouldnt really be in normal

easy

-keep distance snap consistent throughout the map, and i'd suggest a distance that wont make notes 1/1 apart overlap each other, you can easily notice spacing inconsistencies in parts like 00:50:998 (1,2,3) - (and many more throughout the map)
-00:25:051 (1,2) - pathway isnt very clear, may be questionable to some qats i dunno

remember i only gave you general points/ tips stuff, my mod isnt really a 'reply line by line' i hope you will take in these and actually fix stuff throughout the map if you want to improve it,looking at recently ranked maps to see how they are constructed is a good idea too like celsius said
well good luck

EDIT: sorry dont mind the stacks stuff i forgot to enable stacking
EDIT 2 : for audio lead in i made a typo, supposed to say "2000" not "200" lol
Topic Starter
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kakifly wrote:

hi. my mod will be mostly general advice since i feel you still require some experience in mapping, sorry

general

-add in more audio lead in, recommended 200ms, while u currently have only around 700ms

hitsounds

-applies to all diffs, what i am going to say
you're hitsounds are all over the place, they're quite random and follow no pattern, usually for claps would be on the offbeats, every 2nd & 4th beat in a measure of 4/4, whistles would be on the first/ third beat, this hitsounding technique creates the effect you hear in most songs, even this one (listen to the chorus for example) . finishes are self explanatory for they go on emphasized sounds like 00:01:700 - 00:08:024 - and more, for example. of course you dont have to follow this pattern completely at places like 00:04:781 - where the drum doesnt exactly follow the pattern. but this applies for most cases

remember i only gave you general points/ tips stuff, my mod isnt really a 'reply line by line' i hope you will take in these and actually fix stuff throughout the map if you want to improve it,looking at recently ranked maps to see how they are constructed is a good idea too like celsius said
well good luck

EDIT: sorry dont mind the stacks stuff i forgot to enable stacking
Thnx for your time and effort. I've change the status to 'Works in Progress'. I made alot of changes to my rhythm and still working on it, I'm also working on setting up my custom hitsounds and sorting out the hitsound afterwards. Thnx alot for your post, it's given me alot of food for thought :)
CrystilonZ
Mod from my M4M queue

[General]
Hitsound needs a big improvement, try finding hitsound experts
There's NC problem in all diffs, try using a constant pattern like, every 4 or 8 beats etc.

[Easy]
00:04:295 (4) - overlapping and check the DS
00:17:430 - You should map here, it's a TV size map so I think it needs no break
00:45:808 (1) - Make this slider more curvy and more dynamic
00:57:159 (2) - Overlap
01:15:970 (1,2) - Overlap

[Normal]
00:08:025 (3,4,5,6) - too crowded for normal
00:21:159 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^
00:31:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:50:349 (1,2,3) - I don't think this kind of stack is good in normal
00:50:997 (3) - NC, start of kiai
01:18:565 (1,2,3) - DS

[Hard]
00:03:321 (6) - Use your usual DS here, it's not a 1/4
00:34:457 (5,1,2) - try to use a 3-point slider here, it would be more beautiful
00:50:997 - In the 'whole' kiai, you really should map more. Notes are more crowded outside kiai which is weird
00:19:862 (1,2,1,2) - DS, misleading
00:29:267 (6,7,8,1,2) - ^
00:31:538 (1) - ^
You should add some triples(1/4) to hard

[Insane]
00:34:781 (10) - start the stream here 00:34:619 (8,9) - is overmapped
00:55:538 (1) - use the usual distance, misleading
00:20:349 (2) - use a three point slider, blanket more properly
00:50:997 (3) - NC, kiai start
01:15:159 (4,1) - weird overlapping
01:17:916 (3) - try making this slider's curve less sharp
01:24:321 - add circle
01:24:402 - add slider, end at 01:24:565
01:24:402 (1) - start at 01:24:727

That's all GL ! :)
BTW here's my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/293048
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