shanedro wrote:

Here's a very short mod for Extra:
Since you already did sliders, make this a very big stream: 01:59:378 I understand your point, but I can't make a giant stream out of nowhere and without any apparent reason. As it is now it keeps consistency with the rest of the map
02:14:378 (2) - Make this a triplet rather than a return slider Clicking such a triplet is a bit of a pain there imo, but if someone else mentions this I'll provide to change it
02:17:300 (3) - Make this a quadruplet (?) (Make it circles rather than a return slider) I preferred to increase spacing here and keep the tapping to a minimum just to make things a bit more different from the rest but without doing anything exceptional
02:30:547 This could be a kiai AND the biggest stream in the map If I set that part as a kiai time I would have to remove all the other kiais I have right now, so nope :/ As for the stream part: even if this is the most difficult diff it doesn't mean I have to put streams everywhere for the sake of difficulty xD
Sorry this mod was short. It doesn't have much problems, but it does need much more streams because it's the hardest diff in the mapset. If I were to rank this map, I would give it a 9.5. Have a nice day, sir/ma'am Thanks :3~

AsakuraNe wrote:

waefwerf wrote:

Just a bunch of nitpicking. Hopefully it can be of some use

[Extra]
00:36:196 (4) - Pretty sure this is 1/4, not 1/6. Checked multiple times at 25% and it looks like 1/6 for me
00:37:073 (2) - What is this mapping to? To nothing, but I need it to keep consistency with the other patterns. Also, changing pattern there would be a pain, since I should change a lot of other patterns too
00:47:885 (2) - This would be better off as a slidertail rather than a hitcircle since this beat is "weaker" in the music than the following notes which are part of the melody. That's part of the above reasoning. Basically I had to overmap some parts to increase a bit the difficulty. It isn't such a problem anyways, since I played it few times to ensure it was fine
00:54:573 (3) - No triplet notes here, only a blue tick note. It's 1/6 again
00:55:774 (2) - Likewise here: There's nothing on the yellow 1/8 tick. Here there is another 1/6 note I skipped tho
01:05:612 (5) - IMHO it makes more sense to have this pointing downwards, both in terms of the melody and in terms of pointing toward 01:05:807 (1,2,3,4,5) I use that slider as a kick slider, which means I use its "bumping" to go to the next note
01:32:885 (1,1,1) - Wouldn't rising slider velocity fit the rising pitch of the melody better? But the song is getting calmer, so nope
01:41:456 (1,2,3,4) - That's a big increase in spacing when we can barely even hear the bass drum of the build-up. I suggest decreasing it and perhaps upping the spacing on the rest of this build-up. Both the volume increase and the build-up are clearly audible from my point of view tho xD Could it be I misunderstood something?

waefwerf wrote:

Just a bunch of nitpicking. Hopefully it can be of some use

[AsaNe's Easy]
Some really long combos in this. Most of them seem OK, but the following really should be changed: -It's fine. It follows the violin and it's consistent because I NC every 2 beats
00:33:664 (3) - Maybe add NC? -Following the 2 beats NC pattern
00:36:781 (1) - remove NC and add NC at 00:38:339 (3) - we're moving to an entirely new section here, no reason for there not to be a NC. -Oh yeah~ Checked it and It wasn't in the 2 beats pattern. Fixed~

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01:06:975 (188,189) - ctrl+G , sound jadi lebih fit
01:27:430 - add d ? suaranya masih berkelanjutan
01:29:378 - d ?
01:33:664 (303,304) - ctrl+G , biar ga monoton
01:35:222 - add d ? biar ga berasa kosong aja
02:09:898 - d

02:10:287 -
jadikan karna disini 01:07:949 - punya strim kecil juga

02:18:469 - terlalu monoton disini petar
02:27:138 - add d or k, punya strim kayak di 02:25:482 -
02:38:339 - d , sound sama kyak 02:39:898 -
02:39:703 - move 02:39:508 -

00:21:586 (14,15) - ctrl+G ,suara jadi lebih bagus
00:30:644 - d ? suara biolanya low
00:51:975 - d sama 00:52:170 (185,186) - ctrl+G , dibagian ini 00:52:170 - suaranya k (high)
00:59:768 - and 01:00:547 - diantara kedua itu coba salah satunya dibuat d ,rasanya monoton

01:01:229 - i dun like dis, jaraknya ga fit tapi kalo ditambahin note jadi ga ada pause duno what must doing
suggesti kalo no pause = dari 01:01:131 - d kkk
ini juga kan kiai time

01:45:839 (497,499) - delete ? terlalu hard buat oni prepare kkkk
01:51:391 - d
01:56:651 - ^

01:59:378 - nice strim petar tapi setelah gw tesplay , 02:00:060 (584,585) - duo kk ini alternatenya susah banget jadi
02:00:060 (584,585,586) - ctrl+G
02:01:229 (596,597,598) - ctrl+G
suaranya juga jadi lebih bagus , gw sangat rekomendasikan

02:05:027 - d
02:09:508 - ^
02:46:521 - add note, samakan 02:43:501 -
02:49:638 - ^

ronald wrote:

[Oni]
00:21:586 (14,15) - ctrl+G ,suara jadi lebih bagus k k instead
00:30:644 - d ? suara biolanya low di gw sih agak enakan k, hmm yappari
00:51:975 - d sama 00:52:170 (185,186) - ctrl+G , dibagian ini 00:52:170 - suaranya k (high) suaranya gk enak buat gw wakawkwakakwokawokaowkoakoakwodak 1o23k1o23k1ok :V:V:V:V:;v;v:V:V:
00:59:768 - and 01:00:547 - diantara kedua itu coba salah satunya dibuat d ,rasanya monoton alesannya sama kyk yg atas^. my style btw:^)

01:01:229 - i dun like dis, jaraknya ga fit tapi kalo ditambahin note jadi ga ada pause duno what must doing
suggesti kalo no pause = dari 01:01:131 - d kkk kan suara instrumentnya itu, jngan kyk si aesa dong :V:VV:V:V sedih aku kak :'v:'v:V"v;:V
ini juga kan kiai time

01:45:839 (497,499) - delete ? terlalu hard buat oni prepare kkkk nope
01:51:391 - d
01:56:651 - ^

01:59:378 - nice strim petar tapi setelah gw tesplay , 02:00:060 (584,585) - duo kk ini alternatenya susah banget jadi
02:00:060 (584,585,586) - ctrl+G
02:01:229 (596,597,598) - ctrl+G 02:01:327 (597,598,599,600,601) - jadi kdkdk instead]
suaranya juga jadi lebih bagus , gw sangat rekomendasikan

02:05:027 - d
02:09:508 - ^
02:46:521 - add note, samakan 02:43:501 - [b]kyknya beda klo buat konsistensi imo
02:49:638 - ^ ^


[Muzukashii]
01:06:975 (188,189) - ctrl+G , sound jadi lebih fit mungkin gk soalnya sinkron sama oni
01:27:430 - add d ? suaranya masih berkelanjutan my style kat kat katkatk
01:29:378 - d ? gw rubah sebagian not dibagian sana
01:33:664 (303,304) - ctrl+G , biar ga monoton
01:35:222 - add d ? biar ga berasa kosong aja oh iya kat instead
02:09:898 - d

02:10:287 - Image
jadikan Image karna disini 01:07:949 - punya strim kecil juga that's why, gw taro k ddd kkk gitu gitu :v

02:18:469 - terlalu monoton disini petar
02:27:138 - add d or k, punya strim kayak di 02:25:482 -
02:38:339 - d , sound sama kyak 02:39:898 -
02:39:703 - move 02:39:508 -

baraatje123 wrote:

Are you giving up on this?
Please don't
This should get ranked :3 (Call me if you want to keep working and ranking it etc.)

1. 00:19:833 (2) - Remove? There is no real sound here in the music. However, if you do hear something, then set it to d (so either d or nothing, not k)
2. 00:20:417 (4,5,6) - ddk or dkk feel best here, At least k the final one, as it's the highest pitched of the 3
3. 00:26:651 (30,31,32,33,34) - kdkdk feels better, as the first ones have different pitches
4. 00:30:742 (47) - Remove, no sound here
5. 00:31:326 (49,50) - k both, because of the claps in the song
6. 00:34:248 (59,60,61) - Feels overmapped, remove the middle one, there is no need for a triplet here
7. 00:37:170 (69,70,71) - kdd for pitches
8. 00:38:144 (73,74,75) - Please no colorchanging in triplets in muzu, make it ddd, or d D
9. 00:45:742 (103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111) - A bit to much k, why not do this k kkk d d k k (Remove 00:46:618 (109) - for no sound)
10. 00:55:872 - Consider adding a note here (d prefered, k is also fine) for the beat (which feels really missing here ;w;)
11. 01:31:034 (291) - Move to 01:30:644 to better follow the violin
12. 01:38:729 (318) - d, this feels lower pitched then the rest
13. 01:54:800 (381) - Remove, no sound, If you keep it, make the triple one color as well (ddd preferred)
14. 02:22:755 (498,499,500,501) - Consider adding some finishes here
15. 02:25:677 (509) - d for one color
16. 02:25:872 (510) - Finish?
17. 02:27:040 (514,517) - ^^
18. 02:28:209 (520) - Finish?
19. 02:28:988 (523) - Finish?
20. 02:34:053 (546) - d

1. 00:29:475 (60) - Remove, no sound. And 4-plets are terrible unless it's 1/3 xD
2. 00:36:294 - Add note?
3. 01:28:794 (403,404,405,406) - Feels very overmapped imo, remove these 4
4. 01:36:294 (446) - Move to 01:36:488
   
5. 01:46:326 (501,502,503,504) - Perhaps too fast for oni? Consider making it 1/4
6. 01:59:378 (577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584,585,586,587,588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600,601) - I have never seen such a long stream in any oni diff ever. Please make the parts consist of 7 notes at max
7. 02:02:690 (607,608,609,610,611,612,613,614,615,616,617,618,619,620,621) - ^^
8. 02:05:612 (631,632,633,634,635,636,637,638,639,640,641,642,643,644,645,646,647,648,649,650,651,652,653,654,655,656,657,658,659,660,661,662,663) - ^^
9. 02:43:501 (898) - Remove, it feels to dense for such calm part
10. 02:48:859 (923,924,925) - ddk feels better
11. 03:05:904 (3) - k? Feels better with pitch

Baraatje123 wrote:

Okay
Because you asked so politely

[Muzukashii]
Note: The whole mod is made without removing stuff. So first apply the mod, then look at the notes that could be removed or you'll lilely get confused (I have experience ;w;)

1. 00:19:833 (2) - Remove? There is no real sound here in the music. However, if you do hear something, then set it to d (so either d or nothing, not k)
2. 00:20:417 (4,5,6) - ddk or dkk feel best here, At least k the final one, as it's the highest pitched of the 3
3. 00:26:651 (30,31,32,33,34) - kdkdk feels better, as the first ones have different pitches
4. 00:30:742 (47) - Remove, no sound here
5. 00:31:326 (49,50) - k both, because of the claps in the song
6. 00:34:248 (59,60,61) - Feels overmapped, remove the middle one, there is no need for a triplet here
7. 00:37:170 (69,70,71) - kdd for pitches
8. 00:38:144 (73,74,75) - Please no colorchanging in triplets in muzu, make it ddd, or d D
9. 00:45:742 (103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111) - A bit to much k, why not do this k kkk d d k k (Remove 00:46:618 (109) - for no sound)
10. 00:55:872 - Consider adding a note here (d prefered, k is also fine) for the beat (which feels really missing here ;w;)
11. 01:31:034 (291) - Move to 01:30:644 to better follow the violin
12. 01:38:729 (318) - d, this feels lower pitched then the rest
13. 01:54:800 (381) - Remove, no sound, If you keep it, make the triple one color as well (ddd preferred)
14. 02:22:755 (498,499,500,501) - Consider adding some finishes here
15. 02:25:677 (509) - d for one color
16. 02:25:872 (510) - Finish?
17. 02:27:040 (514,517) - ^^
18. 02:28:209 (520) - Finish?
19. 02:28:988 (523) - Finish?
20. 02:34:053 (546) - d

[Oni]

1. 00:29:475 (60) - Remove, no sound. And 4-plets are terrible unless it's 1/3 xD well, i will kept this, if i remove that note some flows will gone imo
2. 00:36:294 - Add note? same kept, i'd like to get single tap on this section
3. 01:28:794 (403,404,405,406) - Feels very overmapped imo, remove these 4
4. 01:36:294 (446) - Move to 01:36:488
   
5. 01:46:326 (501,502,503,504) - Perhaps too fast for oni? Consider making it 1/4 nope, oni can use 1/6 too because i don't map Inner Oni one, so this will okay
6. 01:59:378 (577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584,585,586,587,588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600,601) - I have never seen such a long stream in any oni diff ever. Please make the parts consist of 7 notes at max nope, it would be okay if the stream have a solid colours
7. 02:02:690 (607,608,609,610,611,612,613,614,615,616,617,618,619,620,621) - ^^ ^
8. 02:05:612 (631,632,633,634,635,636,637,638,639,640,641,642,643,644,645,646,647,648,649,650,651,652,653,654,655,656,657,658,659,660,661,662,663) - ^^ ^
9. 02:43:501 (898) - Remove, it feels to dense for such calm part hmmm, i want keep this, because flow
10. 02:48:859 (923,924,925) - ddk feels better nope, for me it broke the emphasis
11. 03:05:904 (3) - k? Feels better with pitch

I like the oni a lot <3

Call me back
Am I seriosuly giving a drum before I give a circle to a map, despite I focus more on standard O.o

Drum'd

PatZar wrote:

MikasaSerket wrote:

SPOILER

15:57 MikasaSerket: Hi may I help you with your beatmap?
15:57 MikasaSerket: I know my rank is really low
15:58 MikasaSerket: But I have mapping skills
15:58 MrSergio: If you can, sure :3
15:59 MikasaSerket: Oh thank you ^^
16:00 MikasaSerket: 00:25:549 -
16:00 MrSergio: Ah, if you need a mod too, let me know
16:00 MikasaSerket: I am checking hard diffuculty
16:00 MikasaSerket: Ah, thank you
16:00 MikasaSerket: This is no problem rite here
16:01 MikasaSerket: But the slider is slightly off the grid
16:01 MrSergio: Hard?
16:01 MikasaSerket: Like, if it were me, I would have no problem with that, but the people who qualify maps are pretty strict
16:01 MikasaSerket: Yes, hard mode
16:01 MikasaSerket: I assume you don't need to fix it
16:02 MrSergio: Oh, that's fine. I checked it already few times to make sure
16:02 MikasaSerket: Oh good, I was worried, few ;-;
16:02 MikasaSerket: I really like the timing on your map
16:02 MikasaSerket: It sounds really nice
16:02 MrSergio: Only 1/3 of the slider end is "out", thecnically
16:02 MrSergio: Thanks you
16:02 MikasaSerket: I see, so I will assume that is rankable
16:02 MrSergio: dawh, typo
16:02 MikasaSerket: No problem
16:02 MrSergio: Thank*'
16:02 MikasaSerket: Lol
16:03 MikasaSerket: Really well put hit sounds
16:03 MrSergio: I had a hard time with those
16:03 MikasaSerket: Lol, I can tell
16:03 MikasaSerket: Hit sounds are a pain
16:06 MikasaSerket: Okay, over all with the hard diffuculty, it seems nothing is really wrong with it
16:07 MikasaSerket: The Hp drain is a little low, although there is no particular problem with that
16:07 MikasaSerket: If you wanna make it harder, I would just suggest increase the hp drain by one and increase the ar up to 6-8
16:07 MikasaSerket: You don't have to
16:08 MrSergio: I have to keep under certain values, since the HP for the Extra is a bit lower than normal
16:09 MikasaSerket: I see, that is good
16:09 MikasaSerket: I don't wanna mod easy because I am assuming it is a guest diffuculty, unless that is fine with you
16:10 MrSergio: The mapper is actually offline since 20 days ago
16:10 MikasaSerket: Yeah... That is sorta why
16:12 MikasaSerket: I have barely any knowledge of expert diffuculties as I am not the fastest player
16:12 MikasaSerket: But
16:12 MikasaSerket: 01:59:281 -
16:12 MikasaSerket: I really like that part
16:12 MrSergio: Wehere? On the Extra?
16:12 MikasaSerket: The slider jumps are interesting and give and overall good challenge
16:13 MikasaSerket: 01:59:281 -
16:15 MikasaSerket: The insane diffuculty is nice also, Very good for more advanced players but not too expert
16:15 MikasaSerket: The jumps in the harder levels hard-insane are really nice
16:17 MikasaSerket: Overall, I really liked the standard diffuculties, This will be easily ranked for sure
16:17 MikasaSerket: I cannot mod the other mods like Taiko, because I am not an expert at that
16:17 MrSergio: I was waiting for BN check since 10 minutes ago tbh lol
16:17 MikasaSerket: XD
16:18 MrSergio: But they backed down
16:18 MrSergio: So I have to find a new one
16:18 MikasaSerket: Awh that sucks
16:18 MrSergio: Nah, I was expecting it
16:19 MikasaSerket: Well, let me know if you need anything else, I really liked it ^^'=
16:19 MrSergio: BN these days are always busy and stuff
16:19 MrSergio: Sure
16:20 MikasaSerket: True

Helladyx wrote:

A beautiful slow, yet exciting map with the beautiful cover, lovely autumn/spring (think?) colours, motion of the beatmap is purely relaxing.

MrSergio wrote:

MikasaSerket wrote:

SPOILER

15:57 MikasaSerket: Hi may I help you with your beatmap?
15:57 MikasaSerket: I know my rank is really low
15:58 MikasaSerket: But I have mapping skills
15:58 MrSergio: If you can, sure :3
15:59 MikasaSerket: Oh thank you ^^
16:00 MikasaSerket: 00:25:549 -
16:00 MrSergio: Ah, if you need a mod too, let me know
16:00 MikasaSerket: I am checking hard diffuculty
16:00 MikasaSerket: Ah, thank you
16:00 MikasaSerket: This is no problem rite here
16:01 MikasaSerket: But the slider is slightly off the grid
16:01 MrSergio: Hard?
16:01 MikasaSerket: Like, if it were me, I would have no problem with that, but the people who qualify maps are pretty strict
16:01 MikasaSerket: Yes, hard mode
16:01 MikasaSerket: I assume you don't need to fix it
16:02 MrSergio: Oh, that's fine. I checked it already few times to make sure
16:02 MikasaSerket: Oh good, I was worried, few ;-;
16:02 MikasaSerket: I really like the timing on your map
16:02 MikasaSerket: It sounds really nice
16:02 MrSergio: Only 1/3 of the slider end is "out", thecnically
16:02 MrSergio: Thanks you
16:02 MikasaSerket: I see, so I will assume that is rankable
16:02 MrSergio: dawh, typo
16:02 MikasaSerket: No problem
16:02 MrSergio: Thank*'
16:02 MikasaSerket: Lol
16:03 MikasaSerket: Really well put hit sounds
16:03 MrSergio: I had a hard time with those
16:03 MikasaSerket: Lol, I can tell
16:03 MikasaSerket: Hit sounds are a pain
16:06 MikasaSerket: Okay, over all with the hard diffuculty, it seems nothing is really wrong with it
16:07 MikasaSerket: The Hp drain is a little low, although there is no particular problem with that
16:07 MikasaSerket: If you wanna make it harder, I would just suggest increase the hp drain by one and increase the ar up to 6-8
16:07 MikasaSerket: You don't have to
16:08 MrSergio: I have to keep under certain values, since the HP for the Extra is a bit lower than normal
16:09 MikasaSerket: I see, that is good
16:09 MikasaSerket: I don't wanna mod easy because I am assuming it is a guest diffuculty, unless that is fine with you
16:10 MrSergio: The mapper is actually offline since 20 days ago
16:10 MikasaSerket: Yeah... That is sorta why
16:12 MikasaSerket: I have barely any knowledge of expert diffuculties as I am not the fastest player
16:12 MikasaSerket: But
16:12 MikasaSerket: 01:59:281 -
16:12 MikasaSerket: I really like that part
16:12 MrSergio: Wehere? On the Extra?
16:12 MikasaSerket: The slider jumps are interesting and give and overall good challenge
16:13 MikasaSerket: 01:59:281 -
16:15 MikasaSerket: The insane diffuculty is nice also, Very good for more advanced players but not too expert
16:15 MikasaSerket: The jumps in the harder levels hard-insane are really nice
16:17 MikasaSerket: Overall, I really liked the standard diffuculties, This will be easily ranked for sure
16:17 MikasaSerket: I cannot mod the other mods like Taiko, because I am not an expert at that
16:17 MrSergio: I was waiting for BN check since 10 minutes ago tbh lol
16:17 MikasaSerket: XD
16:18 MrSergio: But they backed down
16:18 MrSergio: So I have to find a new one
16:18 MikasaSerket: Awh that sucks
16:18 MrSergio: Nah, I was expecting it
16:19 MikasaSerket: Well, let me know if you need anything else, I really liked it ^^'=
16:19 MrSergio: BN these days are always busy and stuff
16:19 MrSergio: Sure
16:20 MikasaSerket: True

Unfortunately I can't award this post with a kudosu since there wasn't any actual modding, beside that sldier end which looked a bit off the screen :/
Thank you for your time anyways