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Ke$ha - Dinosaur

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ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, August 12, 2010 at 5:51:55 PM

Artist: Ke$ha
Title: Dinosaur
Tags: Rasyad95 Kesha Animal
BPM: 128
Filesize: 2853kb
Play Time: 02:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Baby Dino (2.58 stars, 166 notes)
  2. Rasyad95's Dino (4.93 stars, 496 notes)
  3. T-Rex (4.74 stars, 438 notes)
Download: Ke$ha - Dinosaur
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first Beatmap ever.Yay!
Anyway DI-NO-SA-UR a dinosaur
Rawr!!!
Bump to Arusha for the timing.
Bump to Rasyad95 for the guest diff.

[BG changed , Re-download required]
Last edited by ayey , edited 59 times in total.
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Arusha Shuna
BPM and offset is fine
spacing fix as requested

Download: Ke$ha - Dinosaur (ayey) [T-Rex].osu
download this file -> save file, replace the T-Rex diff with this one
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Thanks Arusha :)
Rasyad95
224 posts
Joined August 2009
Rasyad95
Here's my Diff , still need some modding, though...

Download: Ke$ha - Dinosaur (ayey) [Rasyad95's Dino].osu
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Thank you Rasyad :)
Rasyad95
224 posts
Joined August 2009
Rasyad95
Sorry, i didn't realize that i've update the Beatmap, ayey, please check my BM. Are they the latest version of my diff? The latest version is 100% complete (all part of the song)
Rasyad95
224 posts
Joined August 2009
Rasyad95
Ayey, can you make the Baby dino diff become more easier? Dont put a hitcircle in upbeat, in easy, the'll easy to get 100 or 50 if they don't know the song well...
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey

Rasyad95 wrote:

Ayey, can you make the Baby dino diff become more easier? Dont put a hitcircle in upbeat, in easy, the'll easy to get 100 or 50 if they don't know the song well...
Ok i'll try to make it easier.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
APA KABAR

[General]
1) "Animal" is a album, delete "Animal" at Source, because Album is not belong in Source
2) Delete "ayey" in tags, since that word in Beatmap Creator
3) Soft sound is not fit! Use Normal sound!

[File]
Delete .osb and full submit

[Baby Dino]
00:08:473 (5) - New combo
00:15:856 (B) - You have to map this breaks, because the breaks is too much
00:30:739 (4) - New combo?
00:33:786 (1) - Remove new combo
00:34:723 (3) - New combo
00:48:903 (7) - Perhaps cut short this slider to blue tick to match the vocal??
01:06:598 (B) - You have to map this breaks, because the breaks is too much
01:30:270 (1) - Remove new combo
01:45:973 (B) - You have to map this breaks, because the breaks is too much
01:53:473 (1) - Too horid for that. This object is really difficult for begginer player, IMO
02:08:473 (B) - You have to map this breaks, because the breaks is too much

[T-Rex]
Ugh, unsnapped all *sigh*! You have resnap the notes (Timing -> Resnap all notes -> Yes). And, lots of spacing error. Open AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) and make sure the distance snap is on

00:27:222 (8) - New combo
00:28:393 (1) - Remove new combo
00:32:143 (1) - ^
00:33:083 (4) - New combo
00:35:661 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:37:065 (6) - New combo?
00:45:973 (6) - ^
01:12:223 (4) - New combo
01:15:973 (5) - ^
01:19:723 (5) - ^
02:25:348 (7) - ^
02:29:098 (5) - ^
02:32:848 (7) - ^
02:36:598 (5) - ^

[Rasyad95's Dino]
Please open AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) because there's some spacing issue and make sure the distance snap is on

00:41:989 ~ 00:49:606 (K) - This kiai doesn't fit at all
01:00:973 (10) - New combo
01:01:911 (14) - ^
01:04:957 (5) - ^
01:10:114 (6) - ^
01:44:098 (6) - ^
02:06:832 (6) - ^
02:12:223 (12) - ^
02:18:434 (12) - PLEASE REPLACE THIS SLIDER TO OBJECT AT 02:18:551
02:25:348 (5) - New combo
02:27:223 (11) - ^
02:30:973 (8) - ^
02:32:848 (10) - ^

Well, this beatmap need more work
Nice song
STAR for ayey not Rasyad
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done
Thanks Leo :)
Last edited by ayey , edited 1 time in total.
asmaya_old
2 posts
Joined September 2009
asmaya_old
Cool BeatMap
:)
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
Hey!

The following post only give you suggestions. No need to change what I ask you to here.

[Baby Dino]

00:42:223 (1) 1 Grid up?

[T-Rex]

This looks fine to me. I don't want to nazi all grid stuff. Because it would be cruel :<

[Rasyad95's Dino]

00:45:739 (4) One grid left, then one up? It looks so ugly to me right now.
1:28:746 (15) Delete this note.
2:14:098 (4) Make this slider smaller by one tick. Then delete the 2 notes coming after it and make let it go reverse 2 times? It sounds better.

2:23:590 (2) Delete this note and let the slider(3) begin here? And, end the slider at 2:23:942. Add a note at the place it ends before you change it. Same as above, this sounds better.

This is all..

I'm not a fan of Kesha songs to be honest. Her voice annoys me :?

Anyways, star*
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
[General]
Please set a preview time for the 3 diff.
seems the hitsound is too loud for me, I think 70% is enough.
the map can be better if you make the slider more symmetric and rounded.

[Baby Dino]
00:09:879 (5,6) check spacing
00:11:286 (7,8) ^
01:12:340 (3,4,5,6) ^
ADD Kiai at 49,592,like waht you did in the [T-Rex]?

[T-Rex]
00:49:59 Delete the red timing section and resnap all notes (Unless you think the sound are off without this red line.)
00:57:912 (6,7) check spacing
01:46:779 (5,1) ^, it confused me.
02:43:849 (2,1) ^

[Rasyad95's Dino]
00:11:520 (8,9,10) spacing
00:15:036 (4,5,6,7,8) ^
00:21:832 (3,4,5) ^
00:34:231 (1 to 11) ^
...
please recheck all the 1/4 combos using distance snap.. I can't point out all of them.
01:00:270 (7) a bit out of screen.
01:01:676 (4) ^
02:47:114 seems you need a 2x warning.

not bad, Get my star~
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done
Thanks Teras and Vikon :)
Rasyad95
224 posts
Joined August 2009
Rasyad95
@Teras & Vikon : Done!
Thx for the modding...
Starred!

Download: Ke$ha - Dinosaur (ayey) [Rasyad95's Dino].osu
Neethime
168 posts
Joined May 2010
Neethime
:D Nice map
Asutarotto
119 posts
Joined April 2009
Asutarotto
Hello!

Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions
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[General]

Delete the Ke$ha - Dinosaur (ayey).osb and full upload it.
Delete "Dinosaur" in tags of all difficulties since it's already in title.


[Baby Dino]

Is this a Easy?If so,turn down HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty to 2-3(minimum is 0),5 may be too high for a Easy diff.
And also, Slider Velocity 1.4 may be too fast,try to make it below 1.0.You can keep it if you don't want to change,but remember to do it in your next Easy.
The second and third timing point don't change bpm,so select Inherit previous timing settings.
00:36:598 (3,4,5) - spacing


[T-Rex]

Delete second timing point(red line) at 00:49:59 and resnap all notes (in menu-Timing)
Overall Difficulty -1？
02:41:286 (7,8,9) - spacing


[Rasyad95]

I didn't find obvious problem,but just add more hitsound?It may sound boring if you don't add enough hitsound.
(So many death streams!I can't full combo it……lol)


Nice map.
+Star :)
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey

Neethime wrote:

:D Nice map
Thanks

no-7 wrote:

Hello!

Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions
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[General]

Delete the Ke$ha - Dinosaur (ayey).osb and full upload it.
Delete "Dinosaur" in tags of all difficulties since it's already in title.


[Baby Dino]

Is this a Easy?If so,turn down HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty to 2-3(minimum is 0),5 may be too high for a Easy diff.
And also, Slider Velocity 1.4 may be too fast,try to make it below 1.0.You can keep it if you don't want to change,but remember to do it in your next Easy.
The second and third timing point don't change bpm,so select Inherit previous timing settings.
00:36:598 (3,4,5) - spacing


[T-Rex]

Delete second timing point(red line) at 00:49:59 and resnap all notes (in menu-Timing)
Overall Difficulty -1？
02:41:286 (7,8,9) - spacing


[Rasyad95]

I didn't find obvious problem,but just add more hitsound?It may sound boring if you don't add enough hitsound.
(So many death streams!I can't full combo it……lol)


Nice map.
+Star :)
Done,ty :)
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request...

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Sorry, tapi nyed harus jujur. Diff ayey sedikit membosankan ;__; Nyed terpaksa ngomong kek gini. Ayey mesti perbaiki semuanya atau map ini bakal jadi map biasa yang gak ada istimewanya. Mungkin bisa tambahkan beberapa pattern yang menarik, SB, atau mungkin tambahkan skin.
2. Diff Rasyad overmapped ;__; Ketika membuat sebuah map atau diff, jangan prioritaskan kesusahannya. Itu cuma bakal membuat map atau diff-nya hancur. Coba perbaiki, rasyad.
3. Kenapa gak ubah background-nya menjadi gambar kartun dinosaurus? LOL mungkin berlebihan. Tapi kalau itu dipadukan dengan skin bertemakan dinosaurus, pasti bakal lebih keren.
4. Tolong set preview time-nya yah. [!]

[Baby Dino]
-- Jangan menggunakan hitsound secara spam atau acak-acakan. Kalau bisa buat mereka in-pattern.
-- Kamu harus lebih banyak belajar untuk membuat diff easy. Coba lihat diff easy map orang lain yang udah di rank. Mungkin bisa jadi inspirasi.
-- Penempatan kiai time sangat tidak konsisten. Fix that.
-- Paling tidak, buat diff ini berhenti di 01:21:598.
-- Spacing-nya susah dibaca apalagi ketika ada note di tick merah.

00:48:668 (2) - Wow, jangan taruh note di tick biru. It's forbidden for easy diff.

[T-Rex]
-- Penempatan kiai time sangat tidak konsisten. Fix that.
-- Well, diff ini sudah lebih bagus dari diff easy.
-- Break-nya terlalu sedikit untuk ukuran diff berdurasi 3 menit.

01:47:028 - Add a note here.
01:49:254 (1,2) - Delete them.
02:21:598 (5) - New combo.
02:14:098 (4) - ^
02:53:708 (1,1,2) - Silence them. It will be a good idea.

[Rasyad45's Dino]
-- Seperti yang nyed bilang tadi, overmapped. Tolong di fix yah.
-- Warna combo kuning sama hijau gak cocok kalau digabung sama hitam dan abu-abu.
-- Aduh, ada beberapa jump yang terlalu tiba-tiba. Spacing berubah-ubah terus jadi bingung mainnya.

00:19:313 (6) - Delete this.
00:25:348 (9) - New combo.
00:25:348 (9,10,12,13) - Spacing tiba-tiba berubah dari jump menjadi normal di waktu yang tidak tepat.
00:44:332 (1) - Move it farther from (12).
00:49:723 (1) - Kalau kamu suka dengan stream panjang, slider ini kan bisa digantikan stream.
01:29:742 - Kenapa tiba-tiba disini hitsound-nya berubah? Gak pantas kalau berubahnya disini.
01:51:129 (7) - Slider ini gak cocok dibuat jadi 0,5x.
Star untuk motivasinya deh. Haha.
Last edited by Vanmonky , edited 1 time in total.
Rasyad95
224 posts
Joined August 2009
Rasyad95
Thx van
00:19:313 (6) - Delete this.
Done
00:25:348 (9) - New combo.
Done
00:25:348 (9,10,12,13) - Spacing tiba-tiba berubah dari jump menjadi normal di waktu yang tidak tepat.
I just wanna keep that, it has a special meaning to me...
00:44:332 (1) - Move it farther from (12).
Done
00:49:723 (1) - Kalau kamu suka dengan stream panjang, slider ini kan bisa digantikan stream. Kalau bahasa hokkiennya
Istirahat dulu, biar ada kesempatan bisa nge-pause, soalnya inetku suka mati, jadinya aku buat slider ini supaya bisa nyalain inet lagi...
01:29:742 - Kenapa tiba-tiba disini hitsound-nya berubah? Gak pantas kalau berubahnya disini.
Done
01:51:129 (7) - Slider ini gak cocok dibuat jadi 0,5x.
Done
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey

Rasyad95 wrote:

00:25:348 (9,10,12,13) - Spacing tiba-tiba berubah dari jump menjadi normal di waktu yang tidak tepat.
I just wanna keep that, it has a special meaning to me...
Ehem.... :P



TY Van for the suggestion
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky

Rasyad95 wrote:

00:25:348 (9,10,12,13) - Spacing tiba-tiba berubah dari jump menjadi normal di waktu yang tidak tepat.
I just wanna keep that, it has a special meaning to me...
But it ruins the diff...

Rasyad95 wrote:

00:49:723 (1) - Kalau kamu suka dengan stream panjang, slider ini kan bisa digantikan stream. Kalau bahasa hokkiennya
Istirahat dulu, biar ada kesempatan bisa nge-pause, soalnya inetku suka mati, jadinya aku buat slider ini supaya bisa nyalain inet lagi...
Walah, masaq karena masalah pribadi jadi harus mengorbankan diff?
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Ok ayo mulai :)

[General]
- Ok pertama2 set preview point, menurutku di 00:51:364 bagus
- Wa masih dapet osb filenya, hapus terus full submit lagi
- Combo color 1 ama 2 terlihat sama ganti atau hapus

[Baby Dino]
- Wa setuju ama Van, map diff ini sampe 01:21:598
- Kiai timenya taruh di chorus cocok nih
00:48:083 (1,2,3) - Note di blue tick agak membingungkan mungkin di ganti long slider aja

[T-Rex]
- hapus break antara 01:39:411 (4) ~ 01:41:520 (1)
01:51:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wa ga terlalu suka ama ini, tapi karena ini hard jd gpp maalah personal taste aja sih

[Rasyad45's Dino]
Stream map :o (g terlalu jago stream wa)
00:24:879 (7,8,9,10) - seperti yg van bilang lagi spacing tiba2 kembali ke normal g terlalu bagus
02:18:785 (10) - break yg terlalu tiba2 lyricnya masih lanjut lho (kalau ngikutin lyric)

Yap masih harus di betulin lagi coba cari modder buat ngemod
OK Good Luck :)
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Real1
Ohi!

[General]
Idk what album this is from, but put the album title in the tags field if there is any!

[Baby Dino]
Lower the HP drain! This is an Easy!! :o
00:30:739 (1) - Opinion: Sounds better if it ends at the next white tick.

[T-rex]
Is fine!

[Rasyad45]
00:19:254 (5,6) - Why 1/8 beats?
00:18:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - We want some spicey sound effects!
From 00:51:598 (1) - to 02:48:316 (5) - - There are absolutely no hitsounds. That's almost 2 minutes. There is a change in sampleset, but still, no hitsounds in all of this section!!
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Baby;
00:16:676 (1) - I feel like there should be something before here; at 00:15:973, perhaps?
00:48:083 (1,2,3) - This is hard to read, and I don't like the 1/4s.
Map this diff to 01:21:598.

T-Rex;
00:23:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - LESS WHISTLES PLEASE
00:49:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:25:348 (1) - to 01:29:801 (4) - ^
01:51:598 (1) - to 01:53:473 (1) - ^

Dino;
00:19:313 (6) - This has no reason to be.
00:46:325 (2) - 1/4 later.
00:46:676 (3) - 1/4 earlier.
There's a lot of spacing I wouldn't be happy with here...

Tell me when you've got that done and I'll give ya a star.
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done
Rasyad95
224 posts
Joined August 2009
Rasyad95

VanMoNky wrote:

Rasyad95 wrote:

00:49:723 (1) - Kalau kamu suka dengan stream panjang, slider ini kan bisa digantikan stream. Kalau bahasa hokkiennya
Istirahat dulu, biar ada kesempatan bisa nge-pause, soalnya inetku suka mati, jadinya aku buat slider ini supaya bisa nyalain inet lagi...
Walah, masaq karena masalah pribadi jadi harus mengorbankan diff?
Aku ga suka map yg terlalu banyak Stream, ingat waktu kubilang Miracle gumiracle-mu? Aku kurang suka yg Insane di situ, terlalu byk stream...
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted
!WALL OF TEXT ALERT!

SPOILER
General
you're using too many clap hitsounds. standard no hitsounds sometimes OFTEN sounds better that claps/whistles
delete Dinosaur from Rasayd95's diff (you don't need a permission from the diff maker to add or delete tags/source in a GD)
Baby Dino
00:10:817 (7,8) - move 1 Lv2 grid to the right (turn off dist snap)
00:18:786 (3) - spacing issue, suggestion : stack with (2)
00:37:536 (5) - move 1 Lv3 grid to the right
00:41:286 (4) - move 1 Lv2 grid to the right
00:42:926 (x) - add a note
00:45:973 (7) - reverse selection this (select this then Ctrl+R), also add new combo
00:47:379 (8) - move this above (7)'s slider start
01:05:192 (3) - move 1 Lv3 grid down
01:05:661 (4) - move 1 Lv2 grid to the left
01:08:473 (3) - add new combo
01:12:223 (3,4,5,6) - stack them, it's a little too much for an easy diff
T-Rex
00:06:833 (1,2) - move 1 Lv3 grid to the right (turn off dist. snap)
00:31:208 (2) - spacing issue, also fix (3)'s spacing after fixing this one
00:38:004 (x) - add a note?
00:45:153 (4) - align this slider with (3)'s slider then...
00:45:504 (5) - put this slider between (3) and (4)
00:57:458 (4) - add a new combo
01:36:832 (2) - move this to the next white tick
01:37:536 (3) - spacing issue
01:39:411 (4) - ^
add something between 01:40:114 - 01:41:285
01:56:754 (6) - move 1 Lv3 grid down
01:59:801 (7) - move 1 Lv3 grid left
02:09:879 (6) - move 2 lv3 grid to the left then move 2 Lv3 grid up
02:10:817 (2) - align this with (1)
02:53:708 (1,1,2) - put them ALL in the center (turn off dist snap)
Rasyad95's Dino
00:16:676 (4) - spacing issue
00:18:083 (1,2,3,4) - they doesn't sound very good, change them
00:25:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is a big NO, yes you MAY think this spacing is good, but a rankable map should be readable by others not just by yourself, in short, CHANGE THEM
00:28:395 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - they doesn't sound very good, change them
00:31:207 (2) - spacing issue
00:33:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - i KNOW you like streams, but they don't fit well with the music. Not with any instrument in it. In short, CHANGE THEM!
00:42:223 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 prefer a normal 5-note stream rather than to be placed like this
00:57:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is a big NO, yes you MAY think this spacing is good, but a rankable map should be readable by others not just by yourself, in short, CHANGE THEM
01:01:676 (4) - spacing issue
01:02:965 (x) - add a note
01:04:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - i KNOW you like streams, but they don't fit well with the music. Not with any instrument in it. In short, CHANGE THEM!
01:25:348 (1-15,1-14) - ...do i have to say it again?
01:34:489 (11) - i prefer this note to be changed into a 1 beat ling slider (to the next red tick), delete 01:34:957 (12) afterwards
01:40:817 (5) - delete this note
01:40:934 (6,7) - move 1/4 beat earlier
01:44:098 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - the beat placement are very bad, remap this part and try to follow the music more
02:06:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ...you know the drill
02:09:879 (x)- add a new note
02:10:113 (5) - new combo
02:16:676 (5,6) - move 1 Lv2 grid right
02:17:848 (7) - add a new combo
02:18:785 (B) - why break time?
02:27:223 (7) - add a new combo
02:27:926 (1) - remove new combo
02:33:317 (3,4,5,6,7) - the stream seems clustered, place them better using Lv3 Grid snapping
02:42:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no no no

OTL
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Baby Dino - Finished (100%)

T-Rex - Finished (100%)

Rasyad95's Dino - WIP (90%) Finished (100%)

Thanks Arusha for the suggestion :)
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Check some of that spelling on the SB, other than that, fine.
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey

DiamondCrash wrote:

Check some of that spelling on the SB, other than that, fine.
Ummmm.....Which part exactly?
I think , i know which part
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banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Hello~

mod
SPOILER
Baby Dino
01:20:426 (4,5) spacing error. I think best (4) move to center.
T-Rex
00:42:692 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 1 grid up?(nazi)(grid lv3)
00:49:137 (6) 1 grid down (spacing error)
02:20:661 (4) 1 grid up (^)
02:41:754 (9) 1 grid down (^)
Rasyad95's
00:25:114 (1) remove new combo
00:25:348 (2) new combo
00:58:864 (1) remove new combo
00:59:098 (2) new combo
01:28:395 (1) remove new combo
01:57:926 (3) 1 grid up?(grid lv2)

nicemap~
star & gl ;)
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey

banvi wrote:

Hello~

mod
SPOILER
Baby Dino
01:20:426 (4,5) spacing error. I think best (4) move to center.
T-Rex
00:42:692 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 1 grid up?(nazi)(grid lv3)
00:49:137 (6) 1 grid down (spacing error)
02:20:661 (4) 1 grid up (^)
02:41:754 (9) 1 grid down (^)
Rasyad95's
00:25:114 (1) remove new combo
00:25:348 (2) new combo
00:58:864 (1) remove new combo
00:59:098 (2) new combo
01:28:395 (1) remove new combo
01:57:926 (3) 1 grid up?(grid lv2)

nicemap~
star & gl ;)
Done ty :)
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[SB]
4.png is awesome.

[General]
The Black color combo is hard to see. Try going with a darker gray.

[babby]
00:51:598 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner for an easy.
For some reason when the notes finish up, the skip button isn't showing up for me. :/

[Rex]
02:38:473 (1) - The overlap here is pretty bad. Try moving this somewhere else.

[Dino]
00:58:864 (8) - Spacing?
02:49:957 (2,3) - Spacing.
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
Hai, sorry for the long wait.
Here's my mod~

[Overall]
Could you map [Baby Dino] to full length?
You... Need to fix 4.png. What is that? >_>

[Baby Dino]
Fine.

[T-Rex]
Fine.

[Rasyad95's Dino]
Why is there no preview point for this difficulty?
Other than that, fine.

*star*
Good job.
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done
and yeah my mistake on 4.png :P
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
General
That lyrics SB is horrible. At least get all the grammar and lyrics right, find them online. Also, make the lyric lines fade in instead of just appearing.

Don't use completely black and white circles, they look horrible. Make them dark/light grey.

Baby Dino
00:48:903 (2) - Start a tick before
Map to the end, shortened easy diffs are lazy :/

T-Rex
Those streams :/
01:36:832 (2) - move back a tick
01:51:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This isn't nearly as sexy as your last stream

Rasyad95's Dino
This diff has no preview point that I can see
00:22:536 - Add beat?
00:30:739 (1,2) - Remove a repeat from 1,Move 2 out of the way.
00:46:442 - Add beat?
01:42:457 (1,2,3) - Spaaaaccinnngg
01:51:129 (7) - Move under previous stack
01:53:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really awkward. Remap to the music pwease
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. I wanna complain about the BG and the circle color, they doen't fit at all
  2. 00:49:489 inheret this section in all your difss.
  3. Rasyad95 should be added to all diffs' tags
[Baby Dino]:
  • 01:05:661 (4,5) - switch to grid level 3 (ctrl+1) and move them 1 grid left
  1. placing note by lyrics makes this diff hard to play for me, really
[T-Rex]:
  1. 00:36:598 (5) - new combo
  2. 00:46:676 (T) - add a note here
  3. 01:51:833 (3) - 1 grid right
[Rasyad95's Dino]:
  1. 00:28:864 (4,5,6) - spacing
  2. 00:30:739 (1,2) - place (2) exactly on (1) plz
  3. 00:58:395 (6,7,8) - spacing
  4. 01:01:442 (3,4,1) - ^
  5. 01:50:778 (4,5,6,7) - stack all of them plz
suggest remap the Baby Dino diff :/

star for your first try, it's not that bad.
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
[quote="RandomJibberish"]General
That lyrics SB is horrible. At least get all the grammar and lyrics right, find them online. Also, make the lyric lines fade in instead of just appearing.

Don't use completely black and white circles, they look horrible. Make them dark/light grey./quote]
That. And Text4... really?

Baby Dino
00:11:286 (8) - Spacing
00:49:723 (1) - Big spinners can't adjust to the next beat quickly, either move the beats or replace this with a slider or something.
01:00:036 (2) - Move 1/2 back and maybe extend by 1/2
Map to the enders

T-Rex
Dem streams suck ridiculous ones don't belong in a Hard
02:39:176 (2) - Use (1) but flipped

Blah
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Ok then i'll just delete the SB
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
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[General]

  • • The SB images contains unnecessary trasparency.
    • Add "Rasyad95" into Tags (tags should be the same on all diffs)

[Baby Dino]

  • • 00:07:067 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:10:583 (6,7) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)
    • 00:13:161 (2,3) - Move 1/2 earlier
    • 00:14:333 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:18:317 (x) - ^
    • 00:30:739 (1,2) - Spacing
    • 00:39:879 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:49:489 (red timing section) - Inherit previous timing setting
    • 00:53:942 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:56:286 (3,4) - Move 1/2 earlier
    • 00:57:458 (x) - Add a circle
    • 01:00:036 (2) - Move 1/2 earlier
    • 01:01:208 (x) - Add a circle
    • 01:02:848 (1) - Add a repetition
    • 01:09:176 (2) - Move 1/2 later
[T-Rex]

  • • Overall Difficulty: 8
    • 00:49:489 (red timing section) - Inherit previous timing setting
    • 01:03:317 (4) - Add a repetition
    • 01:04:254 (x) - Add a circle
    • 01:04:723 (x) - ^
    • 01:37:536 (3) - Add a repetition
    • 01:43:629 8x) - Add a circle
    • 02:06:598 (x) - ^
    • 02:36:129 (x) - ^
[Rasyad95's Dino]

  • • Add a preview point
    • 00:16:911 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:17:379 (x) - ^
    • 00:17:848 (x) - ^
    • 00:46:442 (x) - ^
    • 01:03:786 (x) - ^
    • 01:04:254 (x) - ^
    • 01:04:723 (x) - ^
    • 01:24:645 (x) - ^
    • 01:24:879 (x) - ^
    • 01:25:114 (x) - ^
    • 02:05:660 (x) - ^
    • 02:06:129 (x) - ^
    • 02:06:598 (x) - ^
    • 02:13:629 (x) - ^
    • 02:17:379 (x) - ^
    • 02:24:879 (x) - ^
    • 02:28:629 (x) - ^
    • 02:32:379 (x) - ^
    • 02:36:129 (x) - ^
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done
Thanks xxheroxx
It looks great now :D
jmaeshawn
170 posts
Joined May 2008
jmaeshawn
Wow, this has to be the best first map I've seen, great job! :D

I only picked out a couple of things that would would make your map play better:

T-Rex - 02:53:708 (1,1,2) I'd take out these last three notes, as they aren't intuitive for the player to hit, since there's no beat during that section.

Rasyad95's Dino - 02:53:707 (1,2,3) Same as above.

*Starred because this map is very good and deserves ranking soon :)
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done ~
Thanks :)
Niva
Global Moderator
3,188 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Modding request via in-game PM.
sorry tadi keasyikan main jadi lupa :P

[Baby Dino]
Add "Rasyad95" to the tags on this difficulty.
00:18:317 (3,4) - The spacing shocked me... Jumps on easy difficulty is not a good idea
00:26:286 (4) - Make it symmetrical? (use lv3 grid, delete the second waypoint, and adjust)
00:27:223 (1) - Finish at end?
00:30:739 (1) - Make it symmetrical? (lv3 grid, move the first waypoint one grid right and two or three grid up)
00:38:473 (1) - Make it symmetrical?
00:48:083 (1,2) - I think it's better like this... but I don't know if 3/4 notes are allowed for an Easy or not
SPOILER
00:55:348 (2,3) - I personally don't like the jump here

[T-Rex]
00:16:442 (3) - Add a repeat on this note, and adjust 00:17:145 (4,5).This is just my pattern suggestion, just use our creativity.
SPOILER
00:30:036 (6) - For a perfect triangle, (maybe) one grid down. I'm not sure.
01:20:426 (4) - Vertical flip and make it symmetrical?
01:28:629 (7) - Add finish?
02:19:254 (9) - Make it wave? Slider yang "tanggung" begini nggak enak dilihatnya :P
02:34:254 (6) - ^
02:38:473 (1) - Shift into triangle pattern?

[Rasyad95's Dino]
Tested. Nothing really wrong about the spacing or patterns, but this map is quite overmapped... An Insane doesn't have to be overmapped with lots of streams. For example, see Shuna's Insane on my map, it doesn't have too much streams but still fun to play.

Star!

Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
•Overall•
Offset : 4.250 ~ Resnap All Notes.
Remove the .osb file in the song's folder and then Full Submit.

•T-Rex•
00:43:629 (8) - 1 grid down?
01:25:348 (1,2) - 1 grid down?
02:06:833 (1) - Jump? :(
02:17:848 (5) - New combo?
02:48:786 (4) - 1 grid left?
02:50:426 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:51:129 (1) - Remove new combo.

•Baby Dino•
00:14:333 (4) - Distance error.
00:18:786 (4) - ^
00:56:051 (3) - ^

•Rasyad95's Dino•
Fix the offset (red timing section) in this difficulty.
00:43:278 (8) - New combo.
01:04:254 (7) - ^
01:04:957 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:348 (1) - This slider should start 1/2 later.
01:25:113 (12) - Distance error.
01:49:957 (1) - Move this note on the centre-grid.
02:52:770 (1) - ^

+Star
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done
Thanks for starring~ Nivalis and Kecco :)
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
If my mod was helpful, feed me with kudosu.

[General]
You need a Normal Difficulty from my point of wiev.

[Baby]
Can you tell me which Distance spacing ahve you used? there's no one okay in this map D:
00:04:723 (1) - Using grid level 3, make this more symmetrical.
00:15:973 (6,1) - Switch combos.

[Rasyad]
00:07:653 (5) - Delete.
00:52:418 (4) - ^.
01:58:746 (6) - ^.
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Hello.

[General]
Combo colours..they're just bad.Well,nvm.

[Baby Dino]
00:12:926 (2) - Jump on easy? No way.
00:14:333 (4) - Fix distance.
00:27:223 (1) - ^
01:01:911 (4) - ^

[Hard]
Some jumps are confusing,like this:
01:45:973 (1) - Like this,yeah.
Well,I think it fits,wait for BAT's final word then.
But you better fix this:
02:06:598 (7) - Ugh..put closer to 02:06:833 (1) then.It's way too confusing.

[Rasyad95's Dino]
00:21:364 (1) - Fix distance.
02:24:879 (4) - ^.It should be somewhere in the middle between 02:24:410 (3) and 02:25:348 (1),otherwise it's confusing.
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done~
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