Tenseki wrote:

Attention plz GMT

It is just Fun comment, I will change to real modding when i come to my computer

BG Character request

[General]
로리가 너무 못생겻어요. 초등학생 쓰지말져.
전 중학생이 좋음 ^~^ 교복물은 필수 ^^
[Hair]
전 단발에 금색이나 은색이좋음 흑발도환영 ^^

[Body]
왠만하면 바스트는 B컵으로 ^^

[Legs]
날씬한거 아니면 로리라고 할수없음 ㅋㅋ
짧은 교복치마 필수 ^^
[Etc]
안경도 있으면 귀여울듯 ㅋㅋ

Real Modding

Euny wrote:

• General

1. 노답님 말씀대로라면, artist가 touyama nao아닌가요? 가상 아이돌 앨범 수록곡이라서 아니에요
   
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2. source는 원래 없어용?? 앨범은 소스에 들어가지 않아서

• Easy

1. 00:14:311 (3) - ctrl*2 번 해주세요! 이뻐지기위해!
   
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2. 00:50:311 (3) - ^
3. 01:07:911 (1) - ^ 이런건 안해도 괜찮아서 ㅋㅋ..
4. 00:27:911 (1) - 이 슬라이더 00:25:911 (2) - 이거 잔상에 맞춰보시는거 어떠세요? 하신다면 00:28:711 (2) - 이거 x144 y64로만 옮겨주시면 다음콤보까지 맞는거같아요! 수정

• Normal

1. 00:05:511 (1) - 오예 또있어요! ctrl*2번 해주세요!
   
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2. 00:06:311 (3) - ^
3. 00:24:711 (1) - ^
4. 00:43:511 (6) - ^
5. 01:18:911 (4) - ^
6. 01:25:311 (4) - ^
7. 01:31:511 (3) - ^
   이쯤이면 저를 위해 그냥 두신거같다는 생각이 듦니다 :3헤헷..

• Hard

1. 00:09:511 (3) - 이거 13도정도 돌려보시겠어요? 다음 콤보로 이어지는 흐름이 더 좋은거같아요! 네
2. 00:35:111 (3) - 15도정도 돌려보시는건 어떠세요? 역시나 다음으로 이어지는 흐름이 더 괜찮아지는거같은데.. 현재 흐름이 더 좋은거같아요. 1/1 박 빈공간이 있고 흐름은 그다지 상관 없을듯
3. 00:37:511 (1) - 13도 돌려서 00:38:311 (3) - 이거랑 안겹치게 조금만 위에 두시는것도 콤보 치는데 큰 문제없을거같아요! 일부러 겹친거라서 :3
   
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4. 01:06:711 (2) - 이 콤보, 01:05:111 (2) - 이거 잔상에 오버랩되게 해보시는건 어떠세요? 물론 옆에 01:06:911 (3) - 이 콤보도 살짝만 오른쪽으로 당겨주시면 좋구요! 지금 흐름이 마음에 들어서 ㅠㅠ

• Kawaii

1. 00:07:911 (3) - 이거 x268 y320으로 옮겨서 00:06:111 (2) - 랑 오버랩되게 두는게 제 생각엔 뭔가 더 깔끔해보여요! 스택하면 흐름이 맘에 안들어서 ㅠㅠ
2. 00:09:511 (3) - 13도정도 돌려보세요. 다음 콤보랑 담요느낌 살아나면서 흐름도 더 괜찮아지는거같아요! 음 여긴 리매핑했어요
3. 01:02:311 (4) - 이 슬라이더 조금만 더 둥글게 해서 01:03:911 (4) - 이 슬라이더 머리에 오버랩되게 두어보시는거 어떠세요? 수정
   
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기회를 주시니 항상 감사드립니다 xD

Sekai-nyan wrote:

I think the artist should be like this instead: KANON NAKAGAWA starring Nao Toyama

Uncoded artist: 中川かのん starring 東山奈央

From the CD cover o.o

No kd ofc baka Dap o3o/

1. spread between Hard and Normal diff seems a little large...i think set hp5 and ar6 in Hard will make that better...

1. 00:29:511 (3) - move the last anchor point to right a little or reverse selection this slider twice to make it in the mapping filed
2. 00:55:111 (1,3) - consider to make a blanket to make here looks nicer?

1. 00:06:911 (4) - here's rhythm looks a little weird imo, i suggest to use a 1/1 slider instead this, to follow the heavy beat at
2. 00:07:111 - like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2733035. i think a Normal diff with clear rhythm will more suit for a new player to play...
3. 00:10:111 (4) - ^ constant notes is not good in a Normal diff imo, just empty some light sound will be better
4. 00:29:511 (4) - make a blanket? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2733045
5. 00:32:711 (1,2,3) - 3 circles with 3/2 gap is not suitable in a Normal diff i think. consider to use some slider to instead of them?
6. 01:22:111 (4,1,2,3) - crowd here, consider ctrl+g this slider 01:23:911 (1) - , ctrl+j these 01:24:511 (2,3,4) - and adjust spacing here?

1. 00:06:311 (3,1) - try this will make here looks nicer? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2733089
2. 00:14:311 (5,1,2) - make a blanket?
3. 00:31:711 (2) - 00:32:511 (4,1) - move them a little right will make flow better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2733093
4. 01:11:711 (3,1) - overlap here is ugly...consider to move them away?
5. 01:33:711 - start the spinner from here will make here easier to play?

1. 00:06:111 (2) - move to 110 174 will make here plays better? stack made here flow bad
2. 00:11:511 (4) - reverse selection will also make here plays better imo
3. 00:22:711 - a little jump will fit the music here well like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2733111
4. 01:29:911 (5,6) - use a 1/2 slider instead them will more fit the music because sound here 01:30:111 - is soft, or remove the whistle will make here sounds better

1. I suggest removing the green color combo since there's nothing green in the background, I suggest that you make it brown/orange/yellow or remove it

1. - 00:11:111 (3) - Move it a little bit up to avoid overlap with (2)'s reverse
2. - 00:22:711 (2) - Move this to 384, 184 to avoid overlap with (1)
3. - 00:41:511 (2) - Move this to 164, 16 to make a better flow with (1)
4. - 00:50:311 (3) - Make this a little curvy ?
5. Suggest adding more curvy sliders huehuehuehue

1. - 00:06:311 (2) - Copy this and pasted at 00:05:511 (1) to make a better flow
2. - 00:12:711 (3) - ^

1. - 00:08:311 (6) - Improve blanket with (1)'s end tail
2. - 01:12:511 (1) - Move to 16, 104 to avoid overlap with (3)'s slider

1. - 00:07:911 (3) - Stack this with (3) ?
2. - 00:37:511 (1) - Make this curvy like 00:36:711 (3) for a better flow

1. add " colours " to tags since colors = colours imo , not sure is it necessary ?
2. In song folder, add blank hitsound for sliderslide3 ?

1. 00:07:111 (1) - Ctrl+G here ? flow pretty nice imo
2. 00:13:511 - Whistle ?
3. 00:21:311 - Why use 5% here when you use blank hitsound for sliderslide1
4. 00:21:711 (1,2) - The spacing here is at bit low here compare to 00:20:911 (3,1) - imo , I suggest you move (2) a bit further like move to x376 y152 for consistent spacing with 00:20:911 (3,1) - since I find that (2) sound emphasized like (3)
5. 00:29:111 (5,1) - Aesthetic - this looks really like blanket I suggest if you didn't intend to blanket maybe curve (1) a bit downward well just for a bit aesthetic not really affect flow much imo

1. 00:13:511 - Whistle ?
2. 00:21:311 - Same as insane
3. 00:29:111 (4) - Ctrl+G ? I think the jumps here 00:28:711 (3,4,1) - might a bit too much for hard imo
4. 00:38:311 (3) - How about this rhythm ?
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   It play a bit nice here imo

1. 00:13:511 - Whistle ?
2. 00:27:311 (6) - Ctrl+G ? flow better imo
3. 00:50:311 (4,5,6) - How about this ?
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   sound a bit better imo
4. 00:56:511 (4,5) - Stack properly , x+1 at (5)
5. 01:21:511 (3) - x+1 for nice stack here 01:21:311 (2,3) -
6. 01:23:111 (6) - y+1 for this one ( better stack here 01:22:911 (5,6) - )
7. 01:26:311 (6) - This one x+1 y+1 for nice stack here 01:26:111 (5,6) -
   I notice the stack problem from aimod since it said those notes are too close to each others I'm lazy at checking stack manually lol

1. 00:13:511 - Whistle ?
2. 00:15:711 (2) - Ctrl+G this so it make the pattern here 00:15:111 (1,2,3) - variate a bit
3. 00:18:311 (1,2,3) - ^same , it's up to you ( I'm just not a fan of using same pattern like that )

1. I'm pretty unsure, is "KANON NAKAGAWA" need to be capitalize ?

1. 00:08:111 (4) - NC here for different snap ?
2. 00:11:511 (4) - Ctrl+G would make here 00:11:111 (3,4) - a bit better imo
3. 00:14:211 (3) - Delete whistle ? sound a bit not right for me
4. 00:21:311 - Increase volume a bit here around 20% sound a bit better for me here
5. 00:20:911 (3,1) - Try this rhythm ?
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   sound bettter imo , it kinda feel a bit awkward for me here since you intend to use slider end on downbeat here 00:21:511 -
6. 00:42:711 - Hitsound volume 30% ?
7. 00:45:511 - the hitsound volume is a bit low here , try increase a bit to around 35-40% would be good , just to be safe here
8. 00:46:311 - ^
9. 00:51:911 (1,4) - I recommend end these on 1/2 because it make the rhythm here play a bit better for me the 1/4 sound pretty a bit not need to be map that much imo since the way you use 1/4 spacing at slider end doesn't feel right to me somehow but it's up to you here
10. 00:55:111 (1,1,4) - ^
11. 01:14:311 - Hitsound volume 40% sound nice here
    copy-paste hitsound mods to other diffs

1. 00:08:211 (5) - Delete this ? since the beat is 1/6 here , 1/4 not sound like 1/6 that much imo
2. 01:00:511 (3) - 1/2 normal slider sound a bit better here imo
3. 01:20:211 (6) - Same as 00:08:211 (5) -

1. 01:06:711 (5) - Add clap at head and use whistle at tail instead ?
2. 01:03:111 (4) - Whistle at head ?

2. 00:07:111 (3,1) - Sound a bit weird here , try this ?
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   you have to do something with the slidertick sound here too if you fix

CelsiusLK wrote:

recheck, no kds

[General]

1. I'm pretty unsure, is "KANON NAKAGAWA" need to be capitalize ?

[Kawaii]

1. 00:08:111 (4) - NC here for different snap ? it think its not needed
2. 00:11:511 (4) - Ctrl+G would make here 00:11:111 (3,4) - a bit better imo i like the current flow
3. 00:14:211 (3) - Delete whistle ? sound a bit not right for me i think its fine
4. 00:21:311 - Increase volume a bit here around 20% sound a bit better for me here ok
5. 00:20:911 (3,1) - Try this rhythm ?
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   sound bettter imo , it kinda feel a bit awkward for me here since you intend to use slider end on downbeat here 00:21:511 - nah its fine imo
6. 00:42:711 - Hitsound volume 30% ? 20% is fine
7. 00:45:511 - the hitsound volume is a bit low here , try increase a bit to around 35-40% would be good , just to be safe here 20% is fine
8. 00:46:311 - ^ ^
9. 00:51:911 (1,4) - I recommend end these on 1/2 because it make the rhythm here play a bit better for me the 1/4 sound pretty a bit not need to be map that much imo since the way you use 1/4 spacing at slider end doesn't feel right to me somehow but it's up to you here i think it fits
10. 00:55:111 (1,1,4) - ^ ^
11. 01:14:311 - Hitsound volume 40% sound nice here it's fine imo
    copy-paste hitsound mods to other diffs

[Hard]

1. 00:08:211 (5) - Delete this ? since the beat is 1/6 here , 1/4 not sound like 1/6 that much imo yea
2. 01:00:511 (3) - 1/2 normal slider sound a bit better here imo i think it's fine
3. 01:20:211 (6) - Same as 00:08:211 (5) - ok

[Normal]

1. 01:06:711 (5) - Add clap at head and use whistle at tail instead ? yeah fixed
2. 01:03:111 (4) - Whistle at head ? i think it will be too much

[Easy]

2. 00:07:111 (3,1) - Sound a bit weird here , try this ? mapping 00:07:711 -
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   you have to do something with the slidertick sound here too if you fix

Call me back
for recheck

NolanM wrote:

Kawaii =^_^=

I think 8.5 approach rate is better im not sure... hm..
00:14:211 (3) is too far from 00:13:911 (2) I think. This jump is too hard comparing it with the rest of the song. ok
00:32:511 (4,1,2,3,4) - This group has big jumps, but 00:32:711 (1,2) are too close together. Maybe you can move 00:32:911 (2) to x:176 y:246. Isee that you're trying to stack it with the slider before, but when played, it doesn't feel like it flows that much. did something here
00:33:911 (5) - Maybe you can stack this on top of 00:33:311 (4) . that anti jump seems a bit harsh for me
01:28:911 (1) - If you want to, stack on top of 01:27:911 (2) ? i think its fine
01:31:802 - Move this a little bit further away from 01:31:511 (1), because I have the urgency to tap it a little earlier the way it is. sure

Hard :O

00:40:311 (4) - I think this is too hard to read for hard players, because it's also similar to something you used in Insane too :3 Maybe you can just move it to the side a little, so it's not stacked on top of 00:40:311 (4) . ok
Is it allowed for 7.5 AR? If so, I think it's better with 7.5 AR :3 raised it a little
00:46:311 (2) - Fix DS more i dont see whats wrong

Normal :3

01:10:711 (5,6) - You can make this a stack would be confusing imo
01:14:311 (1) - Why does normal have a spinner when hard/insane does not? same as easy

Easy

01:14:311 (1) - Same thing, why does normal and easy have a spinner here and other difficulties do not? because I think it fits for a short spinner
01:31:511 (3) - I think other mods will say that this is not easy enough for easy, but I think it's fine. Plus, what can you replace it with?? i changed to something easier

Sorry, this mod wasn't that detailed. When you mod my map, feel free only to make it as descriptive as this mod was, if you want :3
Good luck! This song is hawt :3 And I <3 dat background

1. how is this diff name even relevant to the song
2. 01:12:511 (1) - i feel this nc isn't too necessary
3. 00:21:311 - i think we've discussed about this before? what did u end up unsilencing that for the other map? do the same here

1. 00:07:911 (4,5,6) - dude u even used 1/6 on ur insane diff.
   01:20:111 (5,6) - ^
2. 00:30:911 (4,1) - why does this look so off
3. 00:35:911 - the head could use some hitsounds?
   00:39:111 (1) - ^
   

1. 00:35:711 (3,4) - a double circle like this is good for emphasizing stuff that sound alike, but here its a vocal then instrument. so u could switch to slider instead
2. 00:51:911 (1,2) - here u can try 1/2 repeats instead i think it would be fitting towards the instruments that stand out here
   00:58:311 (1,2) - ^

1. 00:34:311 (1,2) - ew /me runs
2. 01:06:311 (2) - this part just feels a bit weird >> u could try this
   
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Kibbleru wrote:

general

kawaii

1. how is this diff name even relevant to the song reported
2. 01:12:511 (1) - i feel this nc isn't too necessary ya
3. 00:21:311 - i think we've discussed about this before? what did u end up unsilencing that for the other map? do the same here haven't touched this diff since that discussion. fixed from previous mod anyway

hard

1. 00:07:911 (4,5,6) - dude u even used 1/6 on ur insane diff. already fixed from previous mods
   01:20:111 (5,6) - ^ ^
2. 00:30:911 (4,1) - why does this look so off what
3. 00:35:911 - the head could use some hitsounds? rip hitsound copier
   00:39:111 (1) - ^ ^

normal

1. 00:35:711 (3,4) - a double circle like this is good for emphasizing stuff that sound alike, but here its a vocal then instrument. so u could switch to slider instead i think it's fine
2. 00:51:911 (1,2) - here u can try 1/2 repeats instead i think it would be fitting towards the instruments that stand out here nah i'd rather have them like this
   00:58:311 (1,2) - ^

easy

1. 00:34:311 (1,2) - ew /me runs reported
2. 01:06:311 (2) - this part just feels a bit weird >> u could try this changed to something else
   
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1. use 60% volume here 01:17:311 - ? so the hitsound volume will somehow consistent with hard and insane
2. 01:06:711 - Why no whistle here too ? , just like hard and insane

1. 00:21:311 - aw yea , you should delete this green timing point since you don't want to use low volume for this tick now in insane <_<

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Call me after you get Celsius' bubble =3=/

CelsiusLK wrote:

easy and normal

1. use 60% volume here 01:17:311 - ? so the hitsound volume will somehow consistent with hard and insane
2. 01:06:711 - Why no whistle here too ? , just like hard and insane

hard

1. 00:21:311 - aw yea , you should delete this green timing point since you don't want to use low volume for this tick now in insane <_<

oh you nerfed easy ? there is no 1/2 slider here now 00:15:111 - , 00:18:311 -

Call me back <_<

Kibbleru wrote:

IM RANKING THIS NO NINJA PLS

Setz wrote:

SAMMA BOIIIIIIIIII

No Dap wrote:

rip

Lust wrote:

Howdy No Dap, I spoke to you in game over this:

I will have to disqualify this mapset due to the very quiet hitsounds around 00:45:511 - in the hard and insane difficulties. Players need to have the feedback, especially considering one of the quiet hitsounds is located on a clickable object. +10 - 15% should do the trick.

The BNG will handle this mapet from now on. Should be a quick requalification. Good luck!