Hi~! For M4M (> w <)/
(O w o)/ Moe song <3
(O w o)/ Moe song <3
General
Change the green combo colour into another softer colour? I think green colour is unnecessary for the background or for the song. Change it into the pink colour would be great <3
Pretty fine here~!
Pretty fine here~!
Easy
00:06:711 (2,3) Make this sliders into the blanket would be nice
00:07:111 (3) This repeated slider feels a bit weird since you reversed it at 00:07:711 (red tick) and in my opinion, this repeated slider doesn't follow both the song or the singer's vocal. Split this slider into two 1/1 sliders will be better. First slider is from 00:07:111 ~ 00:07:511. And the second slider is from 00:07:911 ~ 00:08:311
00:15:711 (2) Ctrl + G this slider for better flow
00:15:111 (1) Add finish at this slider's head to emphasize the hitsound. Anyway, the music strongly suggests it
00:15:711 (2) Here too ^
00:16:311 (3) Here as well ^
00:18:311 (1) Same ^
00:18:911 (2) Same goes here ^
00:19:511 (3) Here too ^
00:18:911 (2) Also ctrl + G this slider for better flow
00:27:911 (1) Make this slider into the same shape like the next slider -> 00:28:711 (2)
01:18:711 (2,3) Ummm..... Blanket this sliders?
01:23:911 (1) Move this slider to x:132 y:12 to make this slider symmetrical with this slider -> 01:23:111 (3) . After that, fix the DS
01:27:711 (2) Ctrl + G this slider for better flow
01:27:111 (1) Add finish at this slider's head. The music strongly suggests it
01:27:711 (2) Here too ^
01:28:311 (3) Here as well ^
01:30:311 (1) Also do that ^ for this part
01:30:911 (2) Same goes here ^
01:31:511 (3) Here too ^
01:30:911 (2) Ctrl + G this slider for better flow
00:07:111 (3) This repeated slider feels a bit weird since you reversed it at 00:07:711 (red tick) and in my opinion, this repeated slider doesn't follow both the song or the singer's vocal. Split this slider into two 1/1 sliders will be better. First slider is from 00:07:111 ~ 00:07:511. And the second slider is from 00:07:911 ~ 00:08:311
00:15:711 (2) Ctrl + G this slider for better flow
00:15:111 (1) Add finish at this slider's head to emphasize the hitsound. Anyway, the music strongly suggests it
00:15:711 (2) Here too ^
00:16:311 (3) Here as well ^
00:18:311 (1) Same ^
00:18:911 (2) Same goes here ^
00:19:511 (3) Here too ^
00:18:911 (2) Also ctrl + G this slider for better flow
00:27:911 (1) Make this slider into the same shape like the next slider -> 00:28:711 (2)
01:18:711 (2,3) Ummm..... Blanket this sliders?
01:23:911 (1) Move this slider to x:132 y:12 to make this slider symmetrical with this slider -> 01:23:111 (3) . After that, fix the DS
01:27:711 (2) Ctrl + G this slider for better flow
01:27:111 (1) Add finish at this slider's head. The music strongly suggests it
01:27:711 (2) Here too ^
01:28:311 (3) Here as well ^
01:30:311 (1) Also do that ^ for this part
01:30:911 (2) Same goes here ^
01:31:511 (3) Here too ^
01:30:911 (2) Ctrl + G this slider for better flow
Normal
Ummm..... Why CS 3.3? CS 3.5 is better I think
There are few DS problem (AiMod). Please fix this :
00:42:611 -> Object is too far from the previous object
00:56:611 -> Object is too close to the previous object
01:21:411 -> Object is too close to the previous object
01:23:011 -> Object is too close to the previous object
01:26:211 -> Object is too close to the previous object
00:15:111 (1) Add finish at this slider's head would be nice
00:15:711 (2) Here too ^
00:16:311 (3) Here as well ^
00:18:311 (1) Same ^
00:18:911 (2) Same for this part ^
00:19:511 (3) Same ^
00:34:711 (1,2) Blanket this sliders
00:37:111 (5,1) ^
01:01:111 (5,1) ^
01:14:311 (1) I think this spinner should end at 01:16:111 (red tick) instead of 01:15:911 (big white tick)
01:27:111 (1) Add finish at this slider's head would be great
01:27:711 (2) Here too ^
01:28:311 (3) Here as well ^
01:30:311 (1) Same ^
01:30:911 (2) Same goes here ^
01:31:511 (3) Same ^
I can't find anything wrong more at this diff. Nice diff
There are few DS problem (AiMod). Please fix this :
00:42:611 -> Object is too far from the previous object
00:56:611 -> Object is too close to the previous object
01:21:411 -> Object is too close to the previous object
01:23:011 -> Object is too close to the previous object
01:26:211 -> Object is too close to the previous object
00:15:111 (1) Add finish at this slider's head would be nice
00:15:711 (2) Here too ^
00:16:311 (3) Here as well ^
00:18:311 (1) Same ^
00:18:911 (2) Same for this part ^
00:19:511 (3) Same ^
00:34:711 (1,2) Blanket this sliders
00:37:111 (5,1) ^
01:01:111 (5,1) ^
01:14:311 (1) I think this spinner should end at 01:16:111 (red tick) instead of 01:15:911 (big white tick)
01:27:111 (1) Add finish at this slider's head would be great
01:27:711 (2) Here too ^
01:28:311 (3) Here as well ^
01:30:311 (1) Same ^
01:30:911 (2) Same goes here ^
01:31:511 (3) Same ^
I can't find anything wrong more at this diff. Nice diff
Hard
00:06:511 (3) Fix the blanket from this slider with 00:06:911 (1)
00:15:111 (1) Add finish at this note. The music strongly suggests it
00:15:711 (1) Here too ^
00:16:311 (1) Here as well ^
00:18:311 (1) Same goes for this note ^
00:18:911 (1) Same ^
00:19:511 (1) Same here~ ^
00:27:711 (4,1) This blanket feels a bit off. Please fix this
00:29:111 (4) Ctrl + G this slider
00:37:911 (1,2) Fix this blanket
00:52:511 (2) Move this note to x:236 y:244 to make a good triangle-shaped flow
01:00:911 (4) Ctrl + G this slider
01:05:711 (4,5) Blanket this slider and note
01:19:311 (1,2) This blanket can be improved
01:24:311 (1) Stack this slider's tail with the head of this slider -> 01:24:711 (3) to avoid overlap
01:27:111 (1) Add finish at this note. The music strongly suggests it
01:27:711 (1) Here too ^
01:28:311 (1) Here a well ^
01:30:311 (1) Same ^
01:30:911 (1) Same here ^
00:15:111 (1) Add finish at this note. The music strongly suggests it
00:15:711 (1) Here too ^
00:16:311 (1) Here as well ^
00:18:311 (1) Same goes for this note ^
00:18:911 (1) Same ^
00:19:511 (1) Same here~ ^
00:27:711 (4,1) This blanket feels a bit off. Please fix this
00:29:111 (4) Ctrl + G this slider
00:37:911 (1,2) Fix this blanket
00:52:511 (2) Move this note to x:236 y:244 to make a good triangle-shaped flow
01:00:911 (4) Ctrl + G this slider
01:05:711 (4,5) Blanket this slider and note
01:19:311 (1,2) This blanket can be improved
01:24:311 (1) Stack this slider's tail with the head of this slider -> 01:24:711 (3) to avoid overlap
01:27:111 (1) Add finish at this note. The music strongly suggests it
01:27:711 (1) Here too ^
01:28:311 (1) Here a well ^
01:30:311 (1) Same ^
01:30:911 (1) Same here ^
Kawaii
That's all~! Good Luck for Rank! (> w <)00:11:911 (1) Add finish at this slider's head
00:15:111 (1) Do that ^ for this note
00:15:711 (1) Here too ^
00:16:311 (1) Here as well~! ^
00:18:311 (1) Same ^
00:18:911 (1) Same goes for this note ^
00:19:511 (1) And this note as well ^
00:21:511 (3,1) Fix this blanket. This slider -> 00:20:911 (3) is too curvy to form a blanket with this note 00:21:711 (1)
00:27:911 (1) Add finish at this note please~!
00:34:311 ~ 00:40:611 Make the SV into 0.7 instead of 0.85 would be nice
00:45:111 (6) Add clap in drum additions at this slider's head
01:27:111 (1) Add finish at this note. The music strongly suggests it
01:27:711 (1) ^
01:28:311 (1) ^
01:30:311 (1) ^
01:30:911 (1) ^
01:31:511 (1) ^
00:15:111 (1) Do that ^ for this note
00:15:711 (1) Here too ^
00:16:311 (1) Here as well~! ^
00:18:311 (1) Same ^
00:18:911 (1) Same goes for this note ^
00:19:511 (1) And this note as well ^
00:21:511 (3,1) Fix this blanket. This slider -> 00:20:911 (3) is too curvy to form a blanket with this note 00:21:711 (1)
00:27:911 (1) Add finish at this note please~!
00:34:311 ~ 00:40:611 Make the SV into 0.7 instead of 0.85 would be nice
00:45:111 (6) Add clap in drum additions at this slider's head
01:27:111 (1) Add finish at this note. The music strongly suggests it
01:27:711 (1) ^
01:28:311 (1) ^
01:30:311 (1) ^
01:30:911 (1) ^
01:31:511 (1) ^